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shukriyaWonderful story. Waiting for next update.
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Jabardast update bhai.UPDATE - 4
Karan aram se apna nasta kar ne me lga tha es baat se anjaan ki koi use dur se ghure jaa raha hai or ghurte hue uske paas aa kar bola
Ruhi - good morning karan how r you
Karan - very good morning ji mein thik hu aap batao aap kaisi ho
Ruhi - mein thik hu bus tumhe dekh kar yaha chali aayi mera naam to jaante ho na tum ( muskura kar karan ko dekhte hue boli )
abhi karan kuch jawaab de us se pehle hi sheela waha aayi or jaise hi ruhi ko doodh dene lagi to uski saree ka pallu niche gir gya jis se uske 2 amrit kalash apni ghaati sahit karan ki ankho ko garma ne lage jise sheela ne bhi mehsoos kiya or jaldi se apna pallu sahi karte hue ruhi se boli
Sheela - ruhi ye kya tarika hai beta bade bhai se baat kar ne ka hmm chalo maafi maango karan se
Karan - are chodo bhi chachi waise bhi itna bada nahi hu mein
Sheela - jitne bade ho utna kafi maafi maang ne ke liye ruhi tum abhi tak chup chaap khadi ho sunayi nahi diya maine kya kaha
Ruhi - ok mother teressa maangti hu maafi per sirf abhi ke liye or mein koi bhai wai nahi bol ne karan is cool name hai na karan ( hotho ko pichka ke boli)
Sheela - ruhi nahi beta ye galat hai bade bhai ka naam nahi lete
Karan - tu baith ruhi or nasta kar or chachi aap doodh le aao or
doodh bolte waqt na jaane kyu karan ki nazar sheela ke mote doodh per chali gayi jise sheela ne dekha or mann me sochte hue kitchen me chali gayi doodh laane
Ruhi - tum sach me bahut cool ho achi pat ne wali hai hum dono ki kyu( karan ki taraf dekhte hue boli )
Happy birthday Ruhi ke piche se aati hui Aarti boli to karan ne bhi ruhi ko wish kiya or bola
Karan - phir to aaj party banti hai vo bhi badhiya wali
Ruhi - badhiya wali kya bus shaam ko maa paneer or kheer puri banayegi or mann gya birthday har saal yahi to hota aaya hai
Aarti - ruhi bachhe tum ko pta hai na gaon ke halato ke baare me phir bhi tum har bar ki tarah wahi baate kar ne lagi agar chachi sunegi to phir se dategi(ruhi ko bade pyar se dekhte hue boli)
Karan to apni didi ke hotho ki thirkan dekh raha tha kitni masoomiyat bhari thi us sapaat chahre me jo aise mahool me reh ne ke baad har waqt sab ko khush rakh ne me lagi rehti thi ek maa or dost ki tarah jise dekh kar karan apni pyari didi se bola
Karan - apko pta hai aap bahut sweet ho or beautiful to pehle se bhi jayda ho gayi ho to tension mat liya karo kyuki face per sadness suit nahi karti aap to gulaab ho khili khili raha karo
karan ki baate sunkar Aarti ne muskura kar sharam se sir jhuka liya or phir dheere se boli
Aarti - thanks per mein itni bhi sweet nahi hu samjhe tum dur rahe ho na esliye mere gusse se wakif nahi ho black belt hu mein mere pyare bhai
Karan - per mujhe to sweet hi lagti ho aap yakeen na ho to aayine me dekh lo or pta hai apko jab aap ke ye baal apke gaalo per aate hai to bus pucho mat or bhi haseen lagte hai
Aarti - ab bus bahut hua chup chaap nasta karo bade aaye taarif kar ne wale(balo ko side kar ke karan ko dekhte hue boli )
Ruhi - o hello mere birthday kaha gayab kar diya aap dono ne apni baato me
Sheela - bola tha na shaam kheer or paneer bana dungi lo aarti beta chai piyo tum bhi
Karan - per maine to aap ko doodh laane ko bola tha na chachi
doodh sun kar sheela ko karan ka uski chaati ko dekh na yaad aa gya or es hadbadaht me ek baar phir se uska daman ka uska sath chhod gya or uski gehri ghaati ek bar phir se apni abha bikher ne lagi jis sheela ki aankhe sharam se jhuk gayi
jaha sheela ye sab soch rahi thi to wahi karan ka dhyaan ruhi ki baato per tha per sheela ko samjh nahi aa raha tha ki ye sab kaise ho gya dhyaan bhang hua Aarti ki awaaz se
Aarti - are chachi kaha kho gayi lao chai do mujhe
Aarti ki awaaz sun kar sheela hosh me aayi or nazar utha kar karan ko dekha to uska dhyaan us per nahi tha vo to ruhi ke sath masti kar raha tha jise dekh kar sheela ko khud per sharam aayi ki vo kitna galat samjh rahi thi
Sheela - mein kitna galat soch rahi thi karan ke baare me jabki vo bechara to mujhe dekh hi nahi raha tha us waqt bhi shayad galti se nazar pad gayi hogi bechare ki or mein pta nahi kya soch ne lagi thi uske baare me ( saree ka pallu bina thik kiye karan ko dekhte hue mann me boli )
Karan -to phir ready ho jao sab aaj hum sab bhai behan sehar jayenge or dher saari shopping karenge or phir ek badhiya sa cake laayenge jise ruhi sab ke sath kaategi kyu ruhi
Ruhi - kya sach me hum haweli se bahar jaa sakenge karan sach bolo kahi ye mazaak to nahi hai na
karan kuch kahe us se pehle hi raghuvir singh andar aate hue bole
Raghuvir - ye kya bol rahe ho karan tum jaante ho na mahool kya
karan - mahool thik hai dada ji or phir kab tak meri behne yu kaidi ki zindagi jiyengi
Raghuvir- tum samjh nahi rahe mere bachhe es haweli me khidkiyo se aane wali hawa bhi durgandh hi laati hai or kuch nahi ( khidki se bahar jhaank te hue bole )
Karan - agar aisi baat hai to mein hawao me itr ghol dunga dada ji jiski mehak se ye ghar kya ye pura gaon mehak uthega bus aap thoda bharosha rakhiye mujh per
Raghuvir - tum per pura bharosha hai bete per us talli or uske bete arjun per nahi jo giddo si nazar gadaye baithe hai hamare gaon per
Karan - giddh ki nazar baaz se tez nahi hoti dada ji aap bus mujhe paise to mujhe aaj gaadi bhi laani hai to ye sab bhi ghum aayengi es baha ne se plz dada ji
Raghuvir - tum khule maidaan me khana ban chah rahe ho karan or sath me apni behno ko bhi paros rahe ho ye sab jaante hue bhi hum kaise tumhe izzazat de bete kaise ( fikr karte hue )
Karan - ye aap ke bhitar ka pyaar hai jo aap ko dar ne ke liye majbur kar raha hai per aap ye mat bhulo ki aap ka pauta 100 per bhari hai or rahi baat meri behno ki to unki parchayi ko chuu ne ka haq to maine hawao ko bhi nahi diya
Raghuvir - tum hamesha se aise hi ho karan apni baat manwa kar hi maante ho per ek baat yaad rakhna bete ki tum hamare vansh ki akhiri kiran ho use bujh ne mat dena or samay se wapas aa na samjhe or tum log jao ghum aao dekh lo kitna kuch badal gya itne saalo me( apni pautiyo ko muskura kar dekhte hue bole)
Dada ji izazat milte hi ruhi khushi se uchalti hui apne room ki taraf bhaag gayi taiyaar hone jabki Aarti karan se surbhi ko bulane ke liye bol kar apni maa ke paas chali gayi jab ki sheela apne room me khadi karan ke baare me sochti hui aisi khoyi ki glass ke doodh ko apne doodh se milaate hue mann me boli
Sheela - hey bhagwaan mujhe kya ho raha hai akhir kyu mein karan ki vo nazre bhula nahi paa rahi jab ki us ne to dobara mujhe dekha tak nahi kya ab mujh me vo akarshan nahi raha chhii chhii ye kya soch ne lagi mein vo mera beta hai bhale sga na sahi
yahi sab sochte hue vo bathroom me ghus gayi or pta nahi kitni der thande pani me padi hui apne badan me uthti chingari ko bujhane ki nakaam kosish kar ne lagi wahi dusri taraf karan jab surbhi ke room me pahucha to samne ka nazara dekh kar uski aankhe fati reh gayi pehle bua or ab surbhi ka ye tarasa badan jo bra penty me kisi heere se chamak raha tha jise dekh kar vishwamitr ki tapasya bhi bhang ho jaye to ye to bechara ek jawaan ladka tha jis ke jiwan me ye pal pehli baar aaye the
un palo me khoya vo surbhi ko dekhe jaa raha tha jo apni bra ko azaad kar ne ke baad apne peticoat ko niche khiska rahi thi jis se uske gore nitumb dekh kar karan ki ankho me na chahte hue bhi chamak aa gyi vo hat na chahta tha per hat nahi paa raha tha
es waqt agar surbhi use dekh leti to uska to pta nahi kya reaction deti per jo reaction aaj pehli bar karan ke musal ne diya tha use sehna karan ke bus me nahi tha jis ke chalte khud ba khud uska hath uske mote musal per kab pahucha ye bhi pta na chala
karan apne khayalo me aisa gum tha ki surbhi ne kab kapde peh ne ye bhi yaad nahi raha yaad tab lauti jab surbhi boli
Surbhi - oye hero yaha kya kar raha hai or kab aaya tu haa ( karan ko gor se dekhte hue boli )
Karan- ku kuch nahi mein to apko bula ne aaya tha ki jaldi se taiyaar ho jao hum sehar jaa rahe hai ghum ne
Surbhi - koi or nahi mila subah se taang khich ne ke liye jo meri khich rahe ho sehar chodo dada ji haweli ki chhat per bhi na chadd ne de
Karan - ready ho gaye ho to niche chal kar khud dekh lo jaa rahe hai
karan ki baat sunkar surbhi ko bahut khush hui or khikkhilate hue boli
surbhi - o my god matlab tum sach keh rahe ho uuu sapna sa lag raha hai
Karan - to chalo apne sapne ko haqiqat me badal te hue bhi dekh lo
Surbhi - bus 2 min me aayi
karan ko 2 min ka bol kar surbhi fatafat bathroom se ready ho aayi jis ke baad dono niche aaye to Aarti ne sidha sawaal kiya
Aarti - itni der kyu lga di aaa
Surbhi - kaha der hui didi dekho ftafat to aa gayi mein es ke kehte hi
Aarti -pura aadhe ghanta ho gya ise tumhe bula ne ke liye
Surbhi - kya adha ghanta ( eska matlab es ne kahi mujhe us halat me to nahi dekh liya )
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shukriya bhaiJabardast update bhai.
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Bahut shandaar, aapne ab sahi plot chuna he, ab tak k dono update padh kar laga ki aapki lekhni aur soch me bahut sudhar hua he. Aapki lekhni dekh kar maturity ka abhas hua he uparwale se yahi dua h ki itani badhiya tarike se likhte raho.UPDATE - 2
Karan ki baat maante hue munsi ji ghar ke kitchen me jaa kar jab sabko karan ke aane ki khabar sunayi to kuch ke chahre khil uthe jabki roti banati uski maa ke dil me tees si uth gayi or vo un 12 saalo ke chupe dard ki shard lehar uske pure jism me daud gayi jise mehsoos karti vo khud ko bahut kamjor sa mehsoos kar ne lagi or dil hi dil me kos ne lagi ki kaas us raat vo kaali raat aati hi na to use apne bachhe se dur nahi rehna padta bua yahi sochti vo hall me aayi or karan ko dekh kar use jhuti daat lagate hue boli
sakshi- tum kyu aaye ho yaha tumhe pta bhi hai kaisa mahool hai yaha akhir 12 saal baad yaha aane ki aisi kya jarurat pad gayi tujhe bolta kyu nahi hai
karan- mahool kaisa hai ye soch kar kya mein apne pariwar se na milu or kitna dur rakhogi mujhe khud se maa kya aap ke dil me mere liye jra bhi pyar nahi hai pta bhi hai aap logo ke bina ye 12 saal kis tarah guzaare hai maine or aaj jab mein aap ke paas hu to aap mujhe gale laga ne ki bajaye mujhe mahool ki duhayi de rahi hai kyu
Sakshi - kyuki mein nahi chahti ki tumhe kuch ho ab or kuch kho ne ki himmat nahi bachi hai mujh me maut ko apni baahe failate mehsoos kiya hai maine jo es pure pariwaar ko apne me sama lena chahti hai esliye mein nahi chahti ki jaise us phool se rahul ko un hathiyaro ne jinda jala daala waisa hi kuch mere bachhe ke sath ho samjhe tum esliye jaise aaye ho waise hi raat ke sannate me wapas chale jao mein shera ko bulati hu
Karan - nahi maa ab or nahi ab agar maut bhi likhi hai naseeb me to vo bhi aap sab ke sath hi kabool hogi akele reh kar to mujhe duniya bhar ki daulat bhi ganwaara nahi hai esliye ab aap mujhe khana do subah se khuch nahi khaaya hai
karan ki do tuk baat sunkar sakshi ko aane wale khatre ka dar sata ne lga tha per samne se Durjan singh ji ko aata dekh chup rasoi ghar me chali gayi or karan ke liye chapaati seik ne lagi apne dil me lagi aag ko apne jhute gusse me dabaye jab ki karan ke aane ki khadar sunkar Aarti khushi se uske paas aate hue boli
Aarti - babu aa gaye tum or mujhe mile bhi nahi kya bhool gayi apni didi ko
Karan - suraj ugna bhool sakta hai nadi beh na per mein aap ko bhool jau ye kabhi nahi ho sakta didi vo to mujhe bukh lagi thi joro ki esliye khana khaa ne lga aaiye aap bhi khaiye na
Karan ki masumiyat se bhare jawaab se Aarti ki ankhe bhar aayi use aaj apna bhai wahi 12 saal pehle wala masoom sa bachha lga jo apni masoom baato se hamesha aarti ko hasata rehta tha per bite kuch saalo me ye masomiyat kahi kho gayi thi jise aaj phir se karan ko dekh kar Aarti ko yaad aane lagi jis me khoti vo pyar se aage badhi or karan ko gale lagate hue boli
Aarti - ohhh mere bhai mein taras gayi thi teri ye pyari si awaaz sun ne ke liye aaj sakoon mila hai mujhe ab to kahi nahi jayega na tu humein chhod kar
Karan - bilkul nahi didi ab to mein aap ke pas rahunga hamesha esliye ab aap ye roni shakal mat banao or ye mithai khao mere aane ki khushi me samjhi aap baki sab tension bhool jao
Dono bhai behan baat kar hi rahe the ki munshi ji bich me bol pade
Munshi- chote maalik aap ke dada or papa ji apko apne aaram garah me bula rahe hai
Karan - aap chaliye kaka mein aata hu abhi or haa shera bhaiya ko bhi bulwao mujhe milna hai unse or kuch din ke liye chota rasta band karwa do jab tak mein khol ne ko na kahu
Munshi - ji chote malik jaisa aap kahe mein abhi shera ko bulwata hu or chota rasta bhi band karwane ka intzaam karta hu
chote raste ka naam sunte hi Aarti ki ankhein hairat se fail gayi or ankh khole ek tak karan ko dekhte hue boli
Aarti - keh do ki ye jhut hai keh do ki tum us manhoos raste se nahi aaye bolo karan kuch puch rahi hu mein
Karan - ye sach hai didi or manhoos koi rasta nahi hota manhoos hote hai us per kabza kar ne wale or aap itna hairaan ho kar mat dekho ab aap bhai aa gya hai sab thik ho jayega
Aarti - tujhe nahi pta mere bhai pichle kuch saalo me kitna kuch jhela hai hum sab ne es haweli ki chaar diwaari ke siwa humein to bahar ka kuch bhi yaad nahi hai har raat ke anjaani cheekh lekar aati hai jo garmi me bhi jism ko thanda kar jaati hai ruh kaanp uthati hai
Karan - ha ha haha kya didi aap bhi na kab se itna dar ne lagi bhool gayi bachpan me mein jab dar jaata tha tab aap hi mujhe samjhati thi or aaj khud aisi baate kar rahi ho or aap ko dekh kar to nahi lagta ki aap ko thand lag rahi hai dekho jra kitna paseena aa raha apko
Aarti ki gardan se chaati ki taraf badhti paseene ki boondo ko dekh kar muskurate hue bola jaha Aarti ke unnat or unchue urooj apni abha ki halki halki chamak bikher rahe the
Ek pal ko to Aarti ghabra hi gayi jab us ne karan ki batai jagah per dhyaan per jald hi sambhalte hue boli
Aarti - tu sach me bahut badal gya bhai per mein teri didi hu esliye meri baat maan us raste per phir kabhi mat jaana vo rasta ab chota nahi raha balki zindagi se khel ne wala yumraaj ban gya hai hum to dada ji ko bhi samjhate hai ki yaha se dur chalte hai kahi per vo maane tab na
Karan - rasta wahi hai didi jis per na jaane kitni baar gir kar chal na seekha hai hum sab ne fark hai to kisi ki gandi nazar ka jise mein har haal me utaar kar rahunga waise yaad aaya chachi surbhi or ruhi kaha hai dikh nahi rahi
karan ne itna kaha hi tha ki rasoighar se sakshi ko shant kara kar karan ke gaal per pyaar se hath firate hue sheela boli
Sheela - sab yahi hai mere bachhe teri bua ke kamre me abhi pta nahi hai na unko subah mil lena didi dekho to kitna bada ho gya hamara karan or aap ho ki roye jaa rahi ho
apni maa ki rone ki baat suni to karan khada ho kar apni maa ke paas gya jo karan ko apne pas mehsoos karte hi rote hue uske gale lag gayi or boli
Sakshi - mere bachhe mujhe maaf kar de maine tujhe aate hi daat diya ye bhi nahi pucha ki kaisa hai tu
Karan - maafi maang kar mujhe paap ka bhaagi mat banao maa mujhe pta hai apko meri fikr hai esliye aap ne mujh per gussa hui per sach maano ab sab thik ho jayega bilkul pehle ki tarah yakeen karo mera
Sakshi - tujh per yakeen hai mere bachhe per un hathiyaro ka nahi jinke liye kisi nirdosh ki jaan ki koi keemat hai esliye tu apne dada se baat kar na ki vo sehar chal ne ko maan jaaye yaha ka sab kuch bech kar
Karan - nahi maa mein aisa nahi karunga or aap ek baat batao hum kyu jaaye yaha se akhir ye humara gaon hai kayi meeti yaadein judi hai yaha hamare bachpan or phir maan lo agar hum yaha se chale bhi gaye to kya hoga kya waha koi gunda nahi hoga to kya hum hamesha bhaagte rahenge bolo nahi na esliye ab aap mast ho jaiye samjhi aap mein jab tak dada or papa ji mil leta hu ok
karan ki baaho lipat kar mano dar kahi hawa sa ho gya tha sakshi ke dil se esliye karan ko or joro se chipak gayi
Karan - ab aap log bhi aaram karo subah milta hu or haa ye roni si shakal nahi chahiye mujhe subah kisi ki bhi taklif hoti hai mujhe aise dekh kar so plz smile good night
Apni maa didi or chachi se vida lekar muskurate hue bola or chal diya Raghuvir ji ke kamre ki taraf
mast hathi ki tarah tehalta hua kamre pahuch kar apne pita partap ji milne ke baad wahi per rakhi kurshi per jaa kar baith te hue bola
Karan - to dada ji kya baat kar ni thi aap ko jo raat me hi bulwa liya aap ne mujhe or munshi ji shera bhaiya kaha hai
Munshi - ji aa raha hai bus
Durjan singh - dekho karan beta tum hamare vansh ka akhiri chirag ho esliye hum chahte hai ki agar tumhe jra bhi shaq ho ki tumhari jaan ko khatra hai to tum wapas sehar chale jao or bahu or bachho ko bhi le jao hum to waise bhi apni umar ke akhiri padaav per hai or chahte hai ki hum apni akhiri saans apni janmbhumi per hi le
Karan - ye jaan bhi aap ki di huyi dada ji or rahi baat apki umar ki to abhi to aap jawaan hue ho or phir abhi mere 12 saal ka bachpan bhi to jeena hai aap ko mere sath kyu pita ji
Partap - bilkul mere bachhe bhagwaan tujhe aise hi hasta muskurata rakhe per bete baat utni bhi saral nahi jitni tum samjh rahe ho or maine suna hai tum bahut kuch kar ke aaye ho chote raste per
apne pita ki baat sunkar karan dheere se muskuraya or phir ek rahshya muskaan dekar bola
Karan - purane nisaan mita kar hi naye kadamo ki nisaani chhodi jaati hai pita ji bus wahi kar ke aaya hu or aap befikr rahe halki cheezo ka shok mujhe aaj bhi nahi esliye ab sab mujh per chhod dijiye ab mein khud dekhunga sab or haa dada ji mujhe ek car leni hai kal to paise nikal kar rakhiyega
Durjan singh - ho jayega beta ab hum chalte hai raat bahut ho gayi hai tum bhi aaram karo
Karan - ji bus shera bhaiya se baat kar ke jaa raha hu aap nischit ho kar so jaiye
apne dada ko vishram ka keh kar karan kuch der shera se baat kar ne ke baad haveli ki chhat per tehal ne chala gya jaha ghupp andhera tha jise chand ki roshni kam kar ne ki kosish kar rahi thi jiski roshni me ek aksh chalte hue karan ke paas aa kar uske gale lag gya jise karan ne bhi baaho me bhara or use mehsoos kar ne lga
yaha chandi raat mein jaha shanti chhayi thi to wahi xxxxpur me arjun ke samne uske admiyo ki laashe padi thi jinhe dekh ne arjun ghar me bane parangan me pahucha or un sab ko dekh ne lga jise dekh kar uske chahre per kutil muskaan aa gayi jise dekh kar sudarshan sharma chidte hue bole
Sudarshan - us munshi ke pille shera ne hamare itne admiyo ko maar daala or tum has rahe ho sharam nahi aati itne saalo se ek chote se gaon per kabza nahi kar paaye tum
Arjun- apko kya lagta hai ye us shera ka kaam hai to sharma ji aap buddhe ho gaye ho are uski to itni bhi himmat nahi ki vo akela hamare itne admiyo ki laashe bicha de nahi bilkul nahi
Sudharshan - to phir ye naya dushman kon paida ho gya
Arjun - ye naya nahi hai purana hi hai or es ka haal bhi mein wo hi karunga jo Arjun ne mahabharat me k......
Sudharshan - karan singh per vo to mar chuka tha
bich me hi Arjun ko rokte hue bola
Arjun - mar gya hota to mein kab ka us gaon ko khatam kar chuka hota sharma ji or waise bhi mujhe es ka hi intzaar tha asli mja to ab aayega kheil ka ab marega vo buddha Durjan singh vo bhi uski ankho ke samne jise vo apna ( Asli Haqdaar ) kehta phirta hai
Ek shaitaani muskaan hotho per laate hue