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Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

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vj4u said:
AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI THE GREAT HALL ME APNE DOSTON SE MIL UNHE APNE AUR RAAZ KE SAFAR KE BAARE ME BATATI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ KI MULAKAT USKE SABSE BADE COMPETITOR VIRAAZ SE HOTI HAI....


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-3


(THE DEVIL'S HAVEN,THE SACRIFICE & THE PERFECT EPILOGUE)



UPDATE-137



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-THE GREAT HALL






VIRAAZ........



ACCHUTA ke muh se is naye SOVEREIGN ka naam ko sun us naam ko dohraya MAHI ne par woh aage kuch kehti ki tabhi...


ROARRR........


ek behadh hi tez dahadh se pura GREAT HALL hil gaya..

us dahadh ko sun jahan ek taraf us HALL ne moujud sabhi dar gaye the wahin MAHI ke face par ek smile aa gayi aur...


MAHI-relax guyzz...ye WOOGER ki dahad hai.. WOOGER RAAZ ki urja se bana WOLF aur TIGER ka CROSS BREED hai...

woh bas RAAZ ke wapas aane ki suchna de raha hai...


MAHI ki baat sun wahan moujud sahi wapas se relaxed hue jiske baad...


MAHI-guyz.. RAAZ aane waala hai..jo bataya tha,woh yaad rakhna... khudse RAAZ ke paas jaakar uske body contact me mat aana...

ACCHUTA-nahi MAHI..agar RAAZ wakayi hume maarna chahega toh hum khushi khushi uske haathon mar jaayenge...

waise bhi,bina sach jaane humne uske saath us din jo kiya,uske liye hume saza milni bhi chahiye..

apne hi mom dad ko maarne ke gum aur sadme me tha woh,aur hum,uske so called dost,uske us NEGETIVE situation me saath dena chhod,ulta usse maarne nikle the...

nahi MAHI,agar RAAZ ke haathon taklif paana yaa phir mar jaana hi hamari niyati hai, toh hum apni us niyati se door nahi bhaagenge...

SLUNDER-sahi bol raha hai yaar... waise bhi,yahan har din zillat bhari maar toh hum khaate hi hain,agar uske haathon mare jisne hume taakatwar hone ka,khaas hone ke ehsaas dilwaya tha,toh acha hi hai naa...!!!!


ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki baat sun MAHI ne unhe baari baari se hug kiya aur...


MAHI-ab samajh me aa raha hai ki kyun tum sabko is kahani me bhumika mili...

RAAZ ki asli taakat naa toh uske andar locked hui taakat hai aur naahi koi aloukik shakti..

woh taakat tum sab ho...bas itni request hai yaar,agar RAAZ kuch negetive ya kadwa bole,toh dil par mat lena...

ACCHUTA-arre fikar not..itne dino se maar kha khakar self respect ki pehle hi waat lag chuki hai..

rahi sahi kasar in do manhuso (SLUNDER,BRAWNY) ki shakal dekhne se puri ho gayi..

toh dil me lene ke liye kuch bacha hi nahi..


jahan apne purane form me aate hue ACCHUTA ne light hearted baat ki wahin uski baat sun SLUNDER aur BRAWNY usse ghurne lage aur...


BRAWNY/SLUNDER-kya bola be...???

ACCHUTA-lo,ab gidadh sher ko darayenge...


apni taraf un dono ko badhta dekh ACCHUTA ne ye baat kahi aur jhat se NAOMI ke jo ab ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ko bhi apna beta hi maanti thi,uske peeche jaakar chhup gaya..

aur is beech wahan moujud sabhi ACCHUTA ke mazak par has diye the..

muskurahat toh MAHI ke face par bhi aayi thi par phir usse kuch yaad aaya aur..


MAHI-ek second...guys... where's ALFREEN & MABEL...???dono hi yahan nahi dikh rahi....!!!


MAHI ke is sawal par saare muskurate chehre turant hi serious ho gaye .


aur ACCHUTA,jisne masti ki shuruat ki thi,MABEL ka zikr sun uske chehre par dard dikhne laga tha...

khair,MAHI ke sawal ko sun..


SLUNDER-pata nahi yaar..hum sabne un dono ko hi khojne ki bohot koshish ki,par woh kahin nahi mile...

infact,jis din se tum aur RAAZ yahan se gaye the,ussi din se MABEL aur ALFREEN bhi gayab hain..

MABEL ke parents bhi nahi dikhe...


MAHI-strange...


saari possibilities ke baare me sochte hue kahi thi ye baat MAHI ne..

ALFREEN RAAZ ki sister thi..uski hidden capabilities se toh anjaan thi MAHI par itna usse yakin tha ki ALFREEN bhi khaas hi hogi aur shayad kisi tarah usse use karne ke liye VIDEOUS ne usse hide kiya hoga..

par MABEL....!!!woh kyun gayab hui...???uska kya role hai..???

ALFREEN ke saath hi gayab hui hai woh,iska matlab kirdaar uska bhi strong hi hai...

par hai kahan woh dono...!!!!

ye saari baat ghum chuki thi MAHI ke brain me par usse pata tha ki jawab usse future me hi milega aur filhal ke liye ye mudda bhi ek RAAZ hi hai...





BACK TO RAAZ:-





RENAISS,ANGIS,ANNJAYA,ZEAL...IN SHORT....RAAZ.....

NICE ACRONYM....


pehli baar apna mooh khola tha VIRAAZ ne aur aisa hote hi usne mera naam aur woh naam kaise bana,iske baare me baat ki jispar muskura bhar diya mai jisse dekh...

chalo,tumhe THE GREAT HALL tak chhod dun....


MAI-VIDEOUS ne tumhe GUIDE ka kaam de rakha hai...!!!!


aage ki taraf kadam badhate hue kahi ye baat maine jispar mere saath chalte hue...

HAHAHA.....

meri baat sun mere hi andaz me hasa VIRAAZ aur..


VIRAAZ-ek tarah se dekhen toh haan...tumhare personal guide ke taur par oppoint kiya gaya tha mujhe...

zindagi ke raaste se hokar tumhe maut ke darwaze par chhodkar aane ki duty thi meri...

kaafi excited bhi tha mai is kaam ko anjaam dene ke liye..

par ab nahi...tumhe saamne dekh meri puri excitement chali gayi....

i can see through you RAAZ...pehle si baat nahi feel kar paa raha hun mai...

ek weakness feel ho rahi hai mujhe tumhare andar..aise me tumhe maarne ka maza nahi aayega...

MAI-aisi hi kuch soch tumhare maalik ki bhi thi...par jitne baar saamna hua,bechare ko haar hi mili....

VIRAAZ-really RAAZ..tumhe wakayi lagta hai ki tumme VIDEOUS ko maarne ka dum hai...

jitni baar bhi tumhara unse saamna hua hai,woh jaanbujh kar haare hain...

aur us haar ka hi natija mere roop me unki sabse badi jeet bankar tumhare saamne khadi hai...

woh ab tak bas khelte aaye hain tumhare saath...

MAI-jaanta hun....khel tha tabhi toh sirf haraya,warna khatm nahi kar deta...

haan ye sach hai ki uski sabse badi rachna tum ho,par tum ye kaise bhul rahe ho,ki us rachna ka zariya mai hun...

mujhse tum bane ho,tumse mai nahi...aur baccha kitna hi bada kyun naa ho jaaye,baap se chota hi rehta hai...

VIRAAZ-bohot badbole ho yaar.. ghamand bhi koot koot kar bhara hai..

man toh kar raha hai ki abhi issi waat khatm kar dun tumhe lekin nahi...

aise nahi...

tumhe khatm karne se pehle tumhare us ghamand ko chur chur karne me zyada maza aayega..

tum CHOSENS VIDEOUS ko khatm karne aaye the,par issi zamin ke neeche kabr banegi tumhari...

aur ye kaam hum nahi,hamare bacche hi kar denge...

MAI-matlab mere pote....kamaal hai,jawani thik se aayi nahi,baccha saamne khada ho gaya hai...shaadi hui nahi,wahi baccha pote ki dhamki de raha hai...

pata nahi is CHOSENS me aur kya kya chutiyapa dekhna padega...

VIRAAZ-DEVIL'S HAVEN....ab ye CHOSENS sirf ek raasta hai jiski manzil hai DEVIL'S HAVEN....

aur mai us DEVIL'S HAVEN ka SOVEREIGN hun jisse hokar hi tum VIDEOUS tak pahunch sakte ho...

but mujhtak pahunchne se pehle tumhe DEVIL'S HAVEN me kadam rakhkar dikhana hoga...

yahi tumhari chunouti hai...aur yakin maano,tum is chunouti ko pura nahi kar paaoge....

MAI-milawat waale maal ki yahi kharabi hoti hai...asar bhi milawat waala hi hota hai..

agar mera purest form hote tum toh ye jaante ki jab jab kisi chunouti aur RAAZ ka aamna samna hua hai,toh dum RAAZ ka nahi chunouti ka hi nikla hai...

VIRAAZ-sahi kaha tha VIDEOUS ne... taakat ho naa ho,ATTITUDE tumhara kamal ka hai..

now,if i may,kya mai tumhe tumhari chunoutiyon ke naam aur pehli chunouti ka maarg dikha sakta hun....


apna ek haath mere sir ke paas karte hue kahi ye baat VIRAAZ ne...

ab tak hum THE GREAT HALL ke saamne aa chuke the jisse dekh mai samajh chuka tha ki VIRAAZ ki escort service yahi tak thi..

khair,VIRAAZ ka haath mere sir ke paas aane par bhi jab mai shaant hi raha toh us shaanti ko meri haami maan usne apne us haath ka index finger mere mathe par rakh diya...

aur jab aisa hua toh meri aankhen band hoti chali gayi...

mere band aankhon ke aage DEVIL'S HAVEN ke baare me jo baatein ACCHUTA and company ne
MAHI ko batayi thi,woh sab baatein process hone lagi aur saath hi saath INFERIOR LEVEL joki meri pehli chunouti thi,us tak pahunchne ka maarg joki aadha hi bataya gaya tha,dikhne laga..

jitni abhi ke liye zaroori thi,utni baatein jaan chuka tha mai jiske naad meri aankhen khul gayi par aisa hoti hi maine paaya ki VIRAAZ jaa chuka tha..

par uske saath saath WOOGER bhi gayab tha...

abhi maine ye baat realise kiya hi tha ki tabhi....


FIKR MAT KARO RAAZ...TUMHARA WOOGER,MAHI KI GRIFFIN AUR WOH PAKSHI,TEENO TUMHARI PEHLI CHUNOUTI KO AGAR TUM PAAR KARNE ME KAAMIYAB HUE,TOH USSI JAGAH PAR MIL JAAYENGE...


VIRAAZ ki ye awaaz sirf mere kaano aur dimag me gunji thi.

kuch pal rookne ke baad ek lambi saans chhod mere kadam THE GREAT HALL ki taraf badh gaye...




THE GREAT HALL:-


GRIFFIN...ANZU.....


ALFREEN aur MABEL ki soch me mashgul thi MAHI isiliye uska turant toh dhyan gaya nahi par phir kuch der baad jab usse GRIFFIN aur ANZU ki energy paas me feel hona band hua tak uski nazar pehle apne kandhe jahan ANZU thi,aur us taraf jagah GRIFFIN khadi thi,ghumi ..

par dono hi jagahon se ANZU aur GRIFFIN nadarad the aur ye dekh hi nikla tha MAHI ke mooh se unka naam...

unka naam lene ke baad uski nazar pure HALL me ghum gayi par woh dono hote toh dikhte..

MAHI ki hi tarah baaki sab bhi. ANZU aur GRIFFIN ko yahan wahan dekhne lage par woh kisiko nazar nahi aayi...


MAHI-kahan hain ye dono...inki energies bhi feel nahi kar paa rahi hun mai..

thode zor se par khudse kahi ye baat MAHI ne jispar...


INTERIOR LEVEL....TEENO WAHIN HAIN....


saamne hall ke darwaze se aayi ye awaaz jisse sun MAHI aur baaki sabki nazar us taraf ghum gayi jahan is waqt mai khada tha...

aur mujhe dekh hadh se zyada khush ho gaye mere X dost...

wahin mai araam se chalte hue andar ki taraf aa hi raha tha ki tabhi woh sab tezi se meri taraf badhe..

aisa hote dekh MAHI man hi man ghabra gayi par phir bhi woh apni jagah par shaant hi khadi rahi..

wahin ACCHUTA joki sabse aage tha,wahi sabse pehle mere saamne aaya..

mujhse bas aadhe feet ki doori par aakar woh rook gaya aur aankhon me khushi ke aansu lekar mujhe dekhne laga...

yahi haal uske just peeche khade baaki sabka bhi tha...

wahin ACCHUTA ko apne saamne dekh uski gardan pakad uthane ke iraade se maine apna haath uski taraf badhane ki sochi...

sirf sochi...kyunki isse zyada kuch kar nahi paaya mai...

ERRAPEL ne mere haath ko aage badhne se rok liya tha...

par ACCHUTA ne mere haath me ho rahi hulchul ko dekh liya aur shayad meri mansha bhi samajh gaya aur isiliye woh muskurate hue thoda aur age aaya aur khud mere haathon ko pakad liya...

uske aisa karte hi ERRAPEL ne mere haath se control hata liya..

par aisa hone ke baad isse pehle ki mai ACCHUTA ki gardan pakadta, ACCHUTA ne khud mere haath ko utha apne gale par rakh diya aur..


ACCHUTA-maar de yaar..tere haathon se marne ka koi dukh nahi hoga mujhe...

waise bhi,mere aur SLUNDER ke mom dad ko mukt kar,mujhe aur usse apne hi mom dad ki mout ka zimmedar feel karne ke guilt se bachaya hai tune...

itna hakh toh tera banta hi hai...aneko ehsaan hai tere humpar,agar apni mout se hum un ehsaano ko chuka sake,toh yahi sahi...


ACCHUTA ki baat sun ek pal usse dekh use gale se haath hatane ko hua mai aur ye feel kar ACCHUTA muskurane laga tha par tabhi...

mere haathon ki grip kas gayi uske gale me..

ye grip itni strong thi ki ek second me hi saans rukne lagi thi ACCHUTA ki..

wahin aisa hote dekh SLUNDER aur baaki sab kaafi dar gaye the par koi apni jagah se hila nahi...

kuch hi seconds me ACCHUTA ki aankhen halki halki palatne lagi thi aur aisa hote hi maine ek jhatke me uske gale ko chhod diya..

kisi kate pedh ki tarah lehrate hue neeche girte chala gaya tha ACCHUTA...

kuch seconds neeche murde ki tarah pade rehne ke baad..


KHONNN,KHONNNN....


lagatar ho rahi khaansi ke beech lambi lambi saansein le raha tha ACCHUTA...

aur phir jab uski saansein kuch sahi hui aur woh wapas khada hua toh..


MAI-tu tay karega ki RAAZ ko kya karna hai aur kya nahi... teri saansein sirf isiliye chal rahi hain kyunki tujhe maar tujhe mukt kar mai tujhe tere mom dad ke paas jaane ke sukh ka kaaran nahi banana chahta...

tu bolta hai naa ki bohot ehsaan hain mere tujhpar..

ek ehsaan aur kiya tujhpar...hisaab rakhta jaa...wasooli ke waqt kaam aayega....


abhi maine apni baat puri hi ki thi ki tabhi mere naak me silan ki smell aane lagi..

aur phir THE GREAT HALL ka pura drishya ajeeb ho gaya...

chhat par bade bade jaale lag gaye,floor jami hui mitti se bhar si gayi...

diwaar joki abtak white the,unme bhi barso saaf naa karne par jo halka kaalapan aa jaata hai,woh dikhne laga...

in short ek pal me hi pura GREAT HALL barson se band pade kisi haweli me badal chuka tha..

mere aur MAHI ke liye toh ye sab naya tha par wahan reh rahe baaki sab ke liye toh ye roz ki baat thi aur isiliye woh sab turant pure HALL ki safayi me lag chuke the..

ek pal mujhe dekh, ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA bhi palat gaye aur woh
sab bhi safayi me lagne ko hue par tabhi...


MAHI-sab rook jaaiye.. koi kuch nahi karega..jaise ab tak the,waise hi relaxed rahiye...

NAOMI-par beta,3 ghanton ke baad woh log aayenge, aur agar ye HALL saaf nahi hua toh..

MAHI-kuch nahi kar paayenge woh...aap sab completely relaxed rahiye...


MAHI ki baat sun NAOMI, SHALTON aur baaki parents toh abhi bhi thode tention me dikh rahe the..

WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS jinhone shuru me un kaale labadon se dhake logon se ladhne ki koshish ki thi par puri tarah haare the,unhe bhi halki halki tention thi lekin in sabse ulat ACCHUTA,SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA kaafi excited dikhne lage the..

mujhe aur MAHI ko dekh woh jaan gaye the ki zindagi ka chakka wapas ghum chuka tha..

bhale hi mai un sabke liye negetive tha,par woh ye bhi jaante the ki sabse zyada agar mai kisike liye negetive hun toh woh hai VIDEOUS..

aur ab us negetiveness ki list me ek aur naam top par jaa chuka tha..VIRAAZ...

aur jo log yahan aane waale the,woh ussi VIRAAZ ke log the...

inhi wajahon se jahan ab tak woh un logon ke naa aane ki dua karte the,wahin aaj woh sab behadh besabri se VIRAAZ ke numayendo ka wait kar rahe the.

wahin in sab baaton se koi matlab naa rakhte hue mai aage ki taraf jahan ek arm chair rakha hua tha,jo shayad in sabne khud banaya tha,mai uski taraf badha aur wahan pahunch us chair par sir tikakar baiththe hue apni aankhen band kar li...






AFTER 3 HOURS:-





ARRE DEKHO TOH KAUN AAYA HAI...!!!AAKHIR FIRSE MULAKAT HO HI GAYI...



mere kaano me ye awaaz gunji jisse sun aankhen khol di maine..

mere saamne kul 5 DARK WARRIORS khade the..kaale labadon aur waise hi facial mask ki wajah se unke face nahi dikh rahe the..

khair,us DARK WARRIOR ki baat sunane ke baad bhi jab maine kuch kaha nahi toh...


1ST-kya hua...???the great RAAZ ke paas humare liye koi clue nahi hai...!!!

MAI-clue..!!tum jaise fisaddiyon ke liye mai clue rakhun,itni aukaad nahi hai tumhari...

FORBIDDEN FOREST me jo haalat ki thi maine tum sabki,uske baad normally kisiko bhi samajh aajaana chahiye ki kisse ulajhna chahiye aur kisse nahi...

par tum saale kutte ki doom,abhi bhi tedhi hi ho...


meri baat sun unki ek matra dikh rahi chiz,unki aankhein hairat se faile gayi..

woh samajh gaye ki maine unhe pehchaan liya tha..

aur isiliye un paanchon ne khud apna apna face open kar diya jisse dekh ACCHUTA SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA chownk gaye..

REASON..

kyunki ye paanchon aur koi nahi balki ANWIR ke wahi dost the jinhe FORBIDDEN FOREST me saza di thi maine...

ek aur baat hi bhi hairani ho rahi thi mere X doston ko...aur woh thi un paanchon ke sharir se nikal raha AURA jo unki shaktiyan bayan kar raha tha..

woh shakti pehle ke mukable 10 guna tak zyada thi...

khair,meri baat ko sun woh paanchon mujhe kuch der ghurte rahe par phir baaki logon ki taraf palat...


1ST-tum logon ko kya laga ki ye wapas aa gaya hai toh tum sab tumhe diye kaam se azaad ho gaye....

nahi...ulta ab toh tumhara kaam aur usse naa karne par saza aur badh gayi hai..

aur us saza ki shuruwat hogi abhi...


apni baat bol woh DARK WARRIOR apne haath ko ek bande ki taraf kiya hi tha ki tabhi us bande ke aage aakar khadi ho gayi MAHI jisse dekh....


1ST-apne number ki itni bhi kya jaldi hai MAHI...

MAHI-beta number mera nahi tera aur tere in sabhi sathiyon ka lagne waala hai...


apni baat bolte hue hi MAHI ne tezi se apne ek haath ko aage ki taraf dhakka sa diya....



VIDHIKA BALAM

PALM FORCE



yahi SPELL tha jo apne saare AMPLIFICATION modes ki power ke saath man hi man uccharit kiya tha MAHI ne aur aisa kar usne apna haath aage kiya tha..

aur uske aisa karte hi ek behadh strong energy force uske palm se generate hui aur us first DARK WARRIOR ko jaakar hit hui..

aisa hote hi halka piche ki taraf udta hua woh WARRIOR jaakar gira par girte hi woh turant wapas khada ho chuka tha...

hall ke farsh par jame dhool ki wajah se us DARK WARRIOR ke kapde gande ho chuke the jisse jhadate hue woh MAHI ko ghurta raha par phir....

MAHI ko apne piche ek strong magic feel hua aur aisa feel hote hi usne khudke body ko chhupane ki tarah pose kiya..

MAHI ke aisa karte hi uske chaaron taraf ek impenetrable barrier ban gaya jiske baad...

BHOOOBBB...

ek invisible wall ki shakal liye uski taraf aa raha force us barrier se takraya...

is collision se woh barrier aur woh force dono khatm ho gaye..

par jahan apne waar ko khaali jaata dekh woh DARK WARRIOR thoda jhunjla gaya wahin bina SPELL uccharit kiye hue usne jo waar kiya tha,usse dekh MAHI man hi man chownk gayi thi..

MAHI jaan chuki thi ki woh DARK WARRIOR kuch zyada hi powerful hai...

par MAHI ke potential ko us DARK WARRIOR ke saathiyon ne bhi dekha aur usse zyada chance naa dene ka faisla kar unme se do DARK WARRIORS aage aaye..



MASA SVATI...

BLACK SWORD

VATALI KHADAGAM

HURRICANE BLADE

JIHIMI VINASHAKAM

LAZER DESTRUCTION



teeno DARK WARRIORS ne ek ek SPELL man hi man socha jiske baad ek ke haathon me kaali shaktiyon se bhari hui sword chamakne lagi..

dusre ke haath me ek bada sa blade aa gaya jiske chaaron taraf ek chota par utna hi powerful chakrawaat bana hua tha...

aur teesre DARK WARRIOR ki aankhen red hone lagi jinse ab nikalne waala the deadly ray....

jahan un teeno ne SPELL bolkar apna apna astra shashtra ready kar liya tha wahin...



MAHI- VAZUNDHATE HANIYEM

THUNDER HALTER




apne ANGELS FORM POWER SOURCE ko jo ab halka sa khisak chuka tha, dekhte hue man hi man uccharit kiya is SPELL ko MAHI ne jiske baad uske sharir ke chaaron taraf ek invisible thunder paida ho gaya jo hone waale har waar par double power se rok lagane waala tha...

wahin apne SPELL bol woh teeno DARK WARRIORS bijli ki tezi se MAHI ki taraf badhe aur uske paas pahunch jahan ek taraf SWORD aur BLADE waalon apne apne hathiyar MAHI par chalana shuru kar diya wahin dusri taraf teesre WARRIOR ne MAHI par apni aankhon se LAZER ray chhodne shuru kar diye..

waaron ki speed itni zyada thi ki wahan moujud SAVENTS, WHIZZDERS aur WHIZZES, parents,koi unhe dekh tak nahi paa raha tha..

par MAHI ke chaaron taraf bane THUNDER HALTER un saare waaron ko naa sirf rok rahe the par saath hi saath un waaron ko wapas un teeno WARRIORS par dhakel bhi rahe the..

aisa hone ki wajah se un teeno ko beech beech me hault lena pad raha tha jiska faayda uthate hue MAHI apne THUNDER HALTER se thodi thodi energy extract karte hue un teeno par waar bhi kar rahi thi..

lekin un teeno ki speed bhi kaabile taarif thi..woh MAHI ke attacks se kisi tarah khud ko bachaye hue the..

but haan,woh teeno milkar bhi MAHI ko koi nuksaan nahi pahuncha paa rahe the..

MAHI ki speed adhbhudh thi jisse dekh wahan moujud sabki aankhon me uske liye taarif thi..

meri bhi nazar ek baar MAHI ki taraf gayi thi aur uski raftaar aur ladhne ka tarika dekh mai bhi man hi man usse impressed hua tha..

sirf ANGEL aur HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE ke trigger bhar hone se MAHI ki taakat me jo izaafa hua tha,usse dekh bas imagine hi kiya jaa sakta tha ki jab woh dono power source ek ho jaayenge yaa phir ek dusre ke paas bhi aa jaayenge toh uski taakat ka aalam kya hoga..???!!!!

khair,jab un teeno ne dekha ki woh milkar bhi MAHI ka kuch bigaad nahi paa rahe the hain toh man hi man unhone apne baaki dono saathiyon ko kuch kaha jiske baad..

AHHHHHHH.....

ye dard bhari awaaz nikli thi NAOMI ke mooh se..

reason...

us fourth WARRIOR ne ek hunter prakat kiya aur usse NAOMI par chala diya..

NAOMI ki dard bhari aah sun SHALTON aur BRAWNY turant uski taraf badhe par tabhi..


SATAAKKHH....SATAAKHHHHH....

fifth WARRIOR ne apna hunter un dono ke pairon par chala diya jiske baad woh dono mooh ke bal gir gaye...

apne friend aur uncle, aunty ko maar khata dekh ACCHUTA,HIDA aur SLUNDER bhi unki taraf badhe par abhi un teeno ne do kadam bhi aage nahi badhaya tha ki tabhi unpar bhi kode barasne shuru ho gaye jiske baad woh teeno bhi cheekhte hue neeche gir gaye..

in teeno ke baad same haalat SAPIUS, REGIS aur EDWINA ka bhi hua...

ab woh sab zamin par the aur aisa hote hi woh chownthe aur paanchwe DARK WARRIOR bijli se bhi tez gati se un sabke chaaron taraf ghumne lage aur apne hunter se unki chamdi udhedne lage..

par jahan ek taraf mai wapas aakhen band kar chill kar raha tha wahin MAHI apne doston ki haalat dekh distract hone lagi thi..

waise ab tak uspar koi waar laga nahi tha,par speed uski pehle ke mukable kaafi kam ho chuki thi...

yahi reason tha ki kuch aur der battle karne ke baad...

AHHHHH...

second DARK WARRIOR ka hurricane blade MAHI ke thunder halt ko halka sa kaaththe hue MAHI ke shoulder me lag gaya...

blade ki wajah se MAHI ka haath halka kat gaya aur thunder ray ki wajah se ek tez karah ke beech woh udte hue piche jaakar giri..

wahin jaise hi MAHI aur mere friends taklif me aaye,toh mere andar basi ERRAPEL ki shakti ne mere powers ko release kar diya...

mere powers azaad the jinhe feel kar mai muskura utha...

mai jaanta tha ki ERRAPEL ne aisa mere doston ko bachane ke liye kiya tha par jab woh mere hisaab ne nahi chalti toh mera uski khawahish pura karne ka sawal hi nahi uththa tha...

mai araam se sir ko peeche rakh aankhen band kar leta hi raha..

wahin is beech un teeno me se do DARK WARRIORS ne MAHI ke gale me apne apne hathiyar tika diye the..

chaahte toh woh usse ab zakhmi toh kar hi sakte the par woh chahte the ki MAHI jinke liye unse bheedi thi,unki buri gath hote hue dekhe..

aur aisa ho bhi raha tha..baaki ke dono WARRIORS behadh tezi se mere doston, WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS aur NAOMI, SHALTON ki chamdi udhedh rahe the par aisa karte hue..


4TH WARRIOR-kya laga tha..!!!ye dono aa gaye toh tum mile hue hukm ki naafarmaani kar sakte ho...

SATAAKHHH.....

bilkul nahi...yahan sirf hum DARK WARRIORS ka hukm chalta tha,hai aur hamesha rahega...

SATAAKHHHHH.......

jaisa hum kahenge,tumhe karna hoga..tum sabko...

SATAKKKHHHH....

ye tumhare SHAILA, MOKALSAR, AKSHAANT KA CHOSENS nahi,THE DEVIL'S HAVEN hai....

yahan ke SOVEREIGN hain PRINCE VIRAAZ aur ye duniya hai hamare LORD VIDEOUS ki.....


VIDEOUS......

bas ye naam nahi lena chahiye tha usse...

ek jhatke me aankh khuli meri jiske baad....

MAHI ke gardan par jis DARK WARRIOR ne talwar tikayi thi,usne pehle apne piche aur phir apne ussi haath me kuch super strong power ko feel kiya par jab tak woh kuch samajh paata....

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.........

ek hriday vidarak cheekh joki beech me hi atak gayi,padi uske aur baaki sabhi ke kaano par..

ye cheekh thi ussi DARK WARRIOR ki jisne kuch seconds pehle VIDEOUS ka naam bola tha..

uski taraf nazar padte hi jahan MAHI ke paas khade WARRIORS ki aankhein hairani aur dar, dono ke maare badi ho gayi wahin saamne waala DARK WARRIOR toh hadbadate hue neeche hi gir gaya tha..

reason....

jisne VIDEOUS ke naam se ding maari thi,uska sharir beech se kaaththe hue do bhaagon me bath neeche gir chuka tha..

aur usse kaata tha maine jo uske paas khada hadbadate hue neeche gir chuke WARRIOR ko dekh raha tha...

mere haathon me thi wahi kaali sword jo mere haathon me aane ke baad safedh ho chuki thi...

par filhal woh safedh nahi,us WARRIOR ke khoon se san laal dikh rahi chuki thi...

is scene ko dekh neeche gire hue mere dost, WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS, parents bhi kaamp gaye the...

wahin us talwar par lage khoon ko apne index finger se saaf karte hue....


MAI-koi bhi jagah sirf tak VIDEOUS ki hai jab tak wahan RAAZ nahi aa jaata...

aur meri jagah par khade hokar usse kisi aur ka batana jurm hai jiski saza sirf mout hai...


baat khatm hote hote mai ek baar phir hila...

atleast itna hi dikh paaya sabko aur iske baad ka jo scene baaki sabko dikha, woh unhe andar tak kaampne par majboor karne ke liye kaafi tha...

woh DARK WARRIOR jo hadbadakar neeche gir gaya tha,uske paas pahunch uske mooh me upar waale daant ke section me sword ghussa diya tha maine jiske baad uske zubaan ke saath uske jabde aur phir tounsil neeche gir chuka tha...

bina awaaz ke chattpatata hua woh DARK WARRIOR neeche gir chuka tha jiske baad apne haathon me pakde SWORD ko uski taraf kar jhatka diya maine...

mere aisa karte hi us SWORD me laga khoon chithtakte hue us DARK WARRIOR ke sharir par pada aur jab aisa hua toh..

woh khoon AAG me badal gaya jo bas ek hi second me uske pure sharir me faile chuka tha...

tadapte aur ab jalte hue us DARK WARRIOR ki saansein band ho chuki thi...

un do DARK WARRIORS ka kaam khatm kar maine MAHI ke saamne khade baaki ke teeno WARRIORS ki taraf apni nazarein ki aur mere aisa karte hi un teeno ki jaan unke gale par aakar atak gayi..

pehle se kayi guna zyada taakatwar the woh teeno,par jis tarah maine un teeno ke saathiyon ko kaata tha,usse dekh unhe mere aage apni aukaad ka andaza ho chuka tha..

turant bhaagne ki niyat se woh teeno dhuen me badalne lage par tabhi...

first WARRIOR ke chaaron taraf WHITE ENERGY ki ek barrier ban gayi jiski wajah se woh uske beech kaid hokar reh gaya..

wahin DUSRA DARK WARRIOR jisne kuch der pehle MAHI par HURRICANE BLADE se waar kiya tha,uske dhuen banane se pehle hi uske chaaron taraf WHITE ENERGY se bana ek hurricane utha jisne naa sirf usse form badalne se rok liya balki agle hi pal...

AHHHHHHH......

us WARRIOR ki cheekh har taraf gunj uthi..

REASON..

is hurricane ne uske sharir ki pehle chamdi aur phir uske haddiyon ko galana shuru kar diya tha...

kuch palon me hi bina aag ke hi chita jal chuki thi uski..


LAZER DESTRUCTION....

woh astra jisse woh THIRD WARRIOR MAHI par waar kar raha tha..

achanak se hi usse pehle uski aankhon me jalan feel hui par phir...

AHHHHHHHHH....

uski bhi cheekh har taraf gunjne lagi...

REASON...

uski aankhon se jo kuch der pehle tak lazer nikal raha tha,is waqt wahi
lazer uske aankhon se hote hue uske pure andruni chehre ko jala raha tha..

par woh lazer wahin nahi rooka...chehre ke baad woh uske puri body me fail gaya jiske baad..

BOOM...

fath gaya uska sharir..

ia scene ko dekh waise toh sabhi dar gaye the,par sabse zyada buri haalat thi us aakhri bache DARK WARRIOR ki..

thartharate hue woh aankhon me rehem ki guhaar liye mujhe dekh raha tha..

ab mere jaisa rehemdil bhala uski guhaar kyun nahi sunta..

isiliye uske pass pahunch uske kandhe par haath rakha maine aur...


MAI-dar kyun raha hai..??? tujhe kya lagta hai,mai itna bereham hun ki tujhe maar dunga...??hmm!!!


meri baat me jo sardpan jhalak raha tha,usse sun us so called super strong DARK WARRIOR ke pasine chhutne lage the...

aur waise hi kaampte hue apne andar jhaanka usne aur...



SWATMANVADHA

PAINLESS SUICIDE



man hi man is SPELL ko uccharit kiya us DARK WARRIOR ne jiske baad mai muskura utha..

mai jaan chuka tha ki usne abhi kya kiya hai....

par isse pehle ki uska SPELL asar karta,maine uske chaaron taraf faila WHITE ENERGY usme daal diya jiske baad woh painless death ka SPELL painful death me badal gaya..

aankh,kaan,naak,mooh sabse khoon nikalne laga uske aur phir...

BOOM....

uska sharir bhi fath gaya..

jahan uss DARK WARRIOR ke khoon se naha chuka tha mai wahin mera ye kroor roop jisne us DARK WARRIOR aur uske saathiyon ko khatm kiya tha,usse dekh wahan moujud har koi stabdh reh gaya tha..

pin drop silence ke beech chalta hua mai thoda aage badha aur upar dekhte hue..



MAI-



jiski dushmani bhi YAARI LAGE....
WOH RAAZ HAI..

jiske aage har cheez BECHAARI LAGE...
WOH RAAZ HAI....

zinda rehne ke liye kya kuch nahi karte hain log....

par jiske saamne MOUT ZINDAGI se bhi PYAARI LAGE....

WOH RAAZ HAI.....
















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......

















AAPKA APNA V....J....
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI THE GREAT HALL ME APNE DOSTON SE MIL UNHE APNE AUR RAAZ KE SAFAR KE BAARE ME BATATI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ KI MULAKAT USKE SABSE BADE COMPETITOR VIRAAZ SE HOTI HAI....


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-3


(THE DEVIL'S HAVEN,THE SACRIFICE & THE PERFECT EPILOGUE)



UPDATE-137



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-THE GREAT HALL






VIRAAZ........



ACCHUTA ke muh se is naye SOVEREIGN ka naam ko sun us naam ko dohraya MAHI ne par woh aage kuch kehti ki tabhi...


ROARRR........


ek behadh hi tez dahadh se pura GREAT HALL hil gaya..

us dahadh ko sun jahan ek taraf us HALL ne moujud sabhi dar gaye the wahin MAHI ke face par ek smile aa gayi aur...


MAHI-relax guyzz...ye WOOGER ki dahad hai.. WOOGER RAAZ ki urja se bana WOLF aur TIGER ka CROSS BREED hai...

woh bas RAAZ ke wapas aane ki suchna de raha hai...


MAHI ki baat sun wahan moujud sahi wapas se relaxed hue jiske baad...


MAHI-guyz.. RAAZ aane waala hai..jo bataya tha,woh yaad rakhna... khudse RAAZ ke paas jaakar uske body contact me mat aana...

ACCHUTA-nahi MAHI..agar RAAZ wakayi hume maarna chahega toh hum khushi khushi uske haathon mar jaayenge...

waise bhi,bina sach jaane humne uske saath us din jo kiya,uske liye hume saza milni bhi chahiye..

apne hi mom dad ko maarne ke gum aur sadme me tha woh,aur hum,uske so called dost,uske us NEGETIVE situation me saath dena chhod,ulta usse maarne nikle the...

nahi MAHI,agar RAAZ ke haathon taklif paana yaa phir mar jaana hi hamari niyati hai, toh hum apni us niyati se door nahi bhaagenge...

SLUNDER-sahi bol raha hai yaar... waise bhi,yahan har din zillat bhari maar toh hum khaate hi hain,agar uske haathon mare jisne hume taakatwar hone ka,khaas hone ke ehsaas dilwaya tha,toh acha hi hai naa...!!!!


ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki baat sun MAHI ne unhe baari baari se hug kiya aur...


MAHI-ab samajh me aa raha hai ki kyun tum sabko is kahani me bhumika mili...

RAAZ ki asli taakat naa toh uske andar locked hui taakat hai aur naahi koi aloukik shakti..

woh taakat tum sab ho...bas itni request hai yaar,agar RAAZ kuch negetive ya kadwa bole,toh dil par mat lena...

ACCHUTA-arre fikar not..itne dino se maar kha khakar self respect ki pehle hi waat lag chuki hai..

rahi sahi kasar in do manhuso (SLUNDER,BRAWNY) ki shakal dekhne se puri ho gayi..

toh dil me lene ke liye kuch bacha hi nahi..


jahan apne purane form me aate hue ACCHUTA ne light hearted baat ki wahin uski baat sun SLUNDER aur BRAWNY usse ghurne lage aur...


BRAWNY/SLUNDER-kya bola be...???

ACCHUTA-lo,ab gidadh sher ko darayenge...


apni taraf un dono ko badhta dekh ACCHUTA ne ye baat kahi aur jhat se NAOMI ke jo ab ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ko bhi apna beta hi maanti thi,uske peeche jaakar chhup gaya..

aur is beech wahan moujud sabhi ACCHUTA ke mazak par has diye the..

muskurahat toh MAHI ke face par bhi aayi thi par phir usse kuch yaad aaya aur..


MAHI-ek second...guys... where's ALFREEN & MABEL...???dono hi yahan nahi dikh rahi....!!!


MAHI ke is sawal par saare muskurate chehre turant hi serious ho gaye .


aur ACCHUTA,jisne masti ki shuruat ki thi,MABEL ka zikr sun uske chehre par dard dikhne laga tha...

khair,MAHI ke sawal ko sun..


SLUNDER-pata nahi yaar..hum sabne un dono ko hi khojne ki bohot koshish ki,par woh kahin nahi mile...

infact,jis din se tum aur RAAZ yahan se gaye the,ussi din se MABEL aur ALFREEN bhi gayab hain..

MABEL ke parents bhi nahi dikhe...


MAHI-strange...


saari possibilities ke baare me sochte hue kahi thi ye baat MAHI ne..

ALFREEN RAAZ ki sister thi..uski hidden capabilities se toh anjaan thi MAHI par itna usse yakin tha ki ALFREEN bhi khaas hi hogi aur shayad kisi tarah usse use karne ke liye VIDEOUS ne usse hide kiya hoga..

par MABEL....!!!woh kyun gayab hui...???uska kya role hai..???

ALFREEN ke saath hi gayab hui hai woh,iska matlab kirdaar uska bhi strong hi hai...

par hai kahan woh dono...!!!!

ye saari baat ghum chuki thi MAHI ke brain me par usse pata tha ki jawab usse future me hi milega aur filhal ke liye ye mudda bhi ek RAAZ hi hai...





BACK TO RAAZ:-





RENAISS,ANGIS,ANNJAYA,ZEAL...IN SHORT....RAAZ.....

NICE ACRONYM....


pehli baar apna mooh khola tha VIRAAZ ne aur aisa hote hi usne mera naam aur woh naam kaise bana,iske baare me baat ki jispar muskura bhar diya mai jisse dekh...

chalo,tumhe THE GREAT HALL tak chhod dun....


MAI-VIDEOUS ne tumhe GUIDE ka kaam de rakha hai...!!!!


aage ki taraf kadam badhate hue kahi ye baat maine jispar mere saath chalte hue...

HAHAHA.....

meri baat sun mere hi andaz me hasa VIRAAZ aur..


VIRAAZ-ek tarah se dekhen toh haan...tumhare personal guide ke taur par oppoint kiya gaya tha mujhe...

zindagi ke raaste se hokar tumhe maut ke darwaze par chhodkar aane ki duty thi meri...

kaafi excited bhi tha mai is kaam ko anjaam dene ke liye..

par ab nahi...tumhe saamne dekh meri puri excitement chali gayi....

i can see through you RAAZ...pehle si baat nahi feel kar paa raha hun mai...

ek weakness feel ho rahi hai mujhe tumhare andar..aise me tumhe maarne ka maza nahi aayega...

MAI-aisi hi kuch soch tumhare maalik ki bhi thi...par jitne baar saamna hua,bechare ko haar hi mili....

VIRAAZ-really RAAZ..tumhe wakayi lagta hai ki tumme VIDEOUS ko maarne ka dum hai...

jitni baar bhi tumhara unse saamna hua hai,woh jaanbujh kar haare hain...

aur us haar ka hi natija mere roop me unki sabse badi jeet bankar tumhare saamne khadi hai...

woh ab tak bas khelte aaye hain tumhare saath...

MAI-jaanta hun....khel tha tabhi toh sirf haraya,warna khatm nahi kar deta...

haan ye sach hai ki uski sabse badi rachna tum ho,par tum ye kaise bhul rahe ho,ki us rachna ka zariya mai hun...

mujhse tum bane ho,tumse mai nahi...aur baccha kitna hi bada kyun naa ho jaaye,baap se chota hi rehta hai...

VIRAAZ-bohot badbole ho yaar.. ghamand bhi koot koot kar bhara hai..

man toh kar raha hai ki abhi issi waat khatm kar dun tumhe lekin nahi...

aise nahi...

tumhe khatm karne se pehle tumhare us ghamand ko chur chur karne me zyada maza aayega..

tum CHOSENS VIDEOUS ko khatm karne aaye the,par issi zamin ke neeche kabr banegi tumhari...

aur ye kaam hum nahi,hamare bacche hi kar denge...

MAI-matlab mere pote....kamaal hai,jawani thik se aayi nahi,baccha saamne khada ho gaya hai...shaadi hui nahi,wahi baccha pote ki dhamki de raha hai...

pata nahi is CHOSENS me aur kya kya chutiyapa dekhna padega...

VIRAAZ-DEVIL'S HAVEN....ab ye CHOSENS sirf ek raasta hai jiski manzil hai DEVIL'S HAVEN....

aur mai us DEVIL'S HAVEN ka SOVEREIGN hun jisse hokar hi tum VIDEOUS tak pahunch sakte ho...

but mujhtak pahunchne se pehle tumhe DEVIL'S HAVEN me kadam rakhkar dikhana hoga...

yahi tumhari chunouti hai...aur yakin maano,tum is chunouti ko pura nahi kar paaoge....

MAI-milawat waale maal ki yahi kharabi hoti hai...asar bhi milawat waala hi hota hai..

agar mera purest form hote tum toh ye jaante ki jab jab kisi chunouti aur RAAZ ka aamna samna hua hai,toh dum RAAZ ka nahi chunouti ka hi nikla hai...

VIRAAZ-sahi kaha tha VIDEOUS ne... taakat ho naa ho,ATTITUDE tumhara kamal ka hai..

now,if i may,kya mai tumhe tumhari chunoutiyon ke naam aur pehli chunouti ka maarg dikha sakta hun....


apna ek haath mere sir ke paas karte hue kahi ye baat VIRAAZ ne...

ab tak hum THE GREAT HALL ke saamne aa chuke the jisse dekh mai samajh chuka tha ki VIRAAZ ki escort service yahi tak thi..

khair,VIRAAZ ka haath mere sir ke paas aane par bhi jab mai shaant hi raha toh us shaanti ko meri haami maan usne apne us haath ka index finger mere mathe par rakh diya...

aur jab aisa hua toh meri aankhen band hoti chali gayi...

mere band aankhon ke aage DEVIL'S HAVEN ke baare me jo baatein ACCHUTA and company ne
MAHI ko batayi thi,woh sab baatein process hone lagi aur saath hi saath INFERIOR LEVEL joki meri pehli chunouti thi,us tak pahunchne ka maarg joki aadha hi bataya gaya tha,dikhne laga..

jitni abhi ke liye zaroori thi,utni baatein jaan chuka tha mai jiske naad meri aankhen khul gayi par aisa hoti hi maine paaya ki VIRAAZ jaa chuka tha..

par uske saath saath WOOGER bhi gayab tha...

abhi maine ye baat realise kiya hi tha ki tabhi....


FIKR MAT KARO RAAZ...TUMHARA WOOGER,MAHI KI GRIFFIN AUR WOH PAKSHI,TEENO TUMHARI PEHLI CHUNOUTI KO AGAR TUM PAAR KARNE ME KAAMIYAB HUE,TOH USSI JAGAH PAR MIL JAAYENGE...


VIRAAZ ki ye awaaz sirf mere kaano aur dimag me gunji thi.

kuch pal rookne ke baad ek lambi saans chhod mere kadam THE GREAT HALL ki taraf badh gaye...




THE GREAT HALL:-


GRIFFIN...ANZU.....


ALFREEN aur MABEL ki soch me mashgul thi MAHI isiliye uska turant toh dhyan gaya nahi par phir kuch der baad jab usse GRIFFIN aur ANZU ki energy paas me feel hona band hua tak uski nazar pehle apne kandhe jahan ANZU thi,aur us taraf jagah GRIFFIN khadi thi,ghumi ..

par dono hi jagahon se ANZU aur GRIFFIN nadarad the aur ye dekh hi nikla tha MAHI ke mooh se unka naam...

unka naam lene ke baad uski nazar pure HALL me ghum gayi par woh dono hote toh dikhte..

MAHI ki hi tarah baaki sab bhi. ANZU aur GRIFFIN ko yahan wahan dekhne lage par woh kisiko nazar nahi aayi...


MAHI-kahan hain ye dono...inki energies bhi feel nahi kar paa rahi hun mai..

thode zor se par khudse kahi ye baat MAHI ne jispar...


INTERIOR LEVEL....TEENO WAHIN HAIN....


saamne hall ke darwaze se aayi ye awaaz jisse sun MAHI aur baaki sabki nazar us taraf ghum gayi jahan is waqt mai khada tha...

aur mujhe dekh hadh se zyada khush ho gaye mere X dost...

wahin mai araam se chalte hue andar ki taraf aa hi raha tha ki tabhi woh sab tezi se meri taraf badhe..

aisa hote dekh MAHI man hi man ghabra gayi par phir bhi woh apni jagah par shaant hi khadi rahi..

wahin ACCHUTA joki sabse aage tha,wahi sabse pehle mere saamne aaya..

mujhse bas aadhe feet ki doori par aakar woh rook gaya aur aankhon me khushi ke aansu lekar mujhe dekhne laga...

yahi haal uske just peeche khade baaki sabka bhi tha...

wahin ACCHUTA ko apne saamne dekh uski gardan pakad uthane ke iraade se maine apna haath uski taraf badhane ki sochi...

sirf sochi...kyunki isse zyada kuch kar nahi paaya mai...

ERRAPEL ne mere haath ko aage badhne se rok liya tha...

par ACCHUTA ne mere haath me ho rahi hulchul ko dekh liya aur shayad meri mansha bhi samajh gaya aur isiliye woh muskurate hue thoda aur age aaya aur khud mere haathon ko pakad liya...

uske aisa karte hi ERRAPEL ne mere haath se control hata liya..

par aisa hone ke baad isse pehle ki mai ACCHUTA ki gardan pakadta, ACCHUTA ne khud mere haath ko utha apne gale par rakh diya aur..


ACCHUTA-maar de yaar..tere haathon se marne ka koi dukh nahi hoga mujhe...

waise bhi,mere aur SLUNDER ke mom dad ko mukt kar,mujhe aur usse apne hi mom dad ki mout ka zimmedar feel karne ke guilt se bachaya hai tune...

itna hakh toh tera banta hi hai...aneko ehsaan hai tere humpar,agar apni mout se hum un ehsaano ko chuka sake,toh yahi sahi...


ACCHUTA ki baat sun ek pal usse dekh use gale se haath hatane ko hua mai aur ye feel kar ACCHUTA muskurane laga tha par tabhi...

mere haathon ki grip kas gayi uske gale me..

ye grip itni strong thi ki ek second me hi saans rukne lagi thi ACCHUTA ki..

wahin aisa hote dekh SLUNDER aur baaki sab kaafi dar gaye the par koi apni jagah se hila nahi...

kuch hi seconds me ACCHUTA ki aankhen halki halki palatne lagi thi aur aisa hote hi maine ek jhatke me uske gale ko chhod diya..

kisi kate pedh ki tarah lehrate hue neeche girte chala gaya tha ACCHUTA...

kuch seconds neeche murde ki tarah pade rehne ke baad..


KHONNN,KHONNNN....


lagatar ho rahi khaansi ke beech lambi lambi saansein le raha tha ACCHUTA...

aur phir jab uski saansein kuch sahi hui aur woh wapas khada hua toh..


MAI-tu tay karega ki RAAZ ko kya karna hai aur kya nahi... teri saansein sirf isiliye chal rahi hain kyunki tujhe maar tujhe mukt kar mai tujhe tere mom dad ke paas jaane ke sukh ka kaaran nahi banana chahta...

tu bolta hai naa ki bohot ehsaan hain mere tujhpar..

ek ehsaan aur kiya tujhpar...hisaab rakhta jaa...wasooli ke waqt kaam aayega....


abhi maine apni baat puri hi ki thi ki tabhi mere naak me silan ki smell aane lagi..

aur phir THE GREAT HALL ka pura drishya ajeeb ho gaya...

chhat par bade bade jaale lag gaye,floor jami hui mitti se bhar si gayi...

diwaar joki abtak white the,unme bhi barso saaf naa karne par jo halka kaalapan aa jaata hai,woh dikhne laga...

in short ek pal me hi pura GREAT HALL barson se band pade kisi haweli me badal chuka tha..

mere aur MAHI ke liye toh ye sab naya tha par wahan reh rahe baaki sab ke liye toh ye roz ki baat thi aur isiliye woh sab turant pure HALL ki safayi me lag chuke the..

ek pal mujhe dekh, ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA bhi palat gaye aur woh
sab bhi safayi me lagne ko hue par tabhi...


MAHI-sab rook jaaiye.. koi kuch nahi karega..jaise ab tak the,waise hi relaxed rahiye...

NAOMI-par beta,3 ghanton ke baad woh log aayenge, aur agar ye HALL saaf nahi hua toh..

MAHI-kuch nahi kar paayenge woh...aap sab completely relaxed rahiye...


MAHI ki baat sun NAOMI, SHALTON aur baaki parents toh abhi bhi thode tention me dikh rahe the..

WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS jinhone shuru me un kaale labadon se dhake logon se ladhne ki koshish ki thi par puri tarah haare the,unhe bhi halki halki tention thi lekin in sabse ulat ACCHUTA,SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA kaafi excited dikhne lage the..

mujhe aur MAHI ko dekh woh jaan gaye the ki zindagi ka chakka wapas ghum chuka tha..

bhale hi mai un sabke liye negetive tha,par woh ye bhi jaante the ki sabse zyada agar mai kisike liye negetive hun toh woh hai VIDEOUS..

aur ab us negetiveness ki list me ek aur naam top par jaa chuka tha..VIRAAZ...

aur jo log yahan aane waale the,woh ussi VIRAAZ ke log the...

inhi wajahon se jahan ab tak woh un logon ke naa aane ki dua karte the,wahin aaj woh sab behadh besabri se VIRAAZ ke numayendo ka wait kar rahe the.

wahin in sab baaton se koi matlab naa rakhte hue mai aage ki taraf jahan ek arm chair rakha hua tha,jo shayad in sabne khud banaya tha,mai uski taraf badha aur wahan pahunch us chair par sir tikakar baiththe hue apni aankhen band kar li...






AFTER 3 HOURS:-





ARRE DEKHO TOH KAUN AAYA HAI...!!!AAKHIR FIRSE MULAKAT HO HI GAYI...



mere kaano me ye awaaz gunji jisse sun aankhen khol di maine..

mere saamne kul 5 DARK WARRIORS khade the..kaale labadon aur waise hi facial mask ki wajah se unke face nahi dikh rahe the..

khair,us DARK WARRIOR ki baat sunane ke baad bhi jab maine kuch kaha nahi toh...


1ST-kya hua...???the great RAAZ ke paas humare liye koi clue nahi hai...!!!

MAI-clue..!!tum jaise fisaddiyon ke liye mai clue rakhun,itni aukaad nahi hai tumhari...

FORBIDDEN FOREST me jo haalat ki thi maine tum sabki,uske baad normally kisiko bhi samajh aajaana chahiye ki kisse ulajhna chahiye aur kisse nahi...

par tum saale kutte ki doom,abhi bhi tedhi hi ho...


meri baat sun unki ek matra dikh rahi chiz,unki aankhein hairat se faile gayi..

woh samajh gaye ki maine unhe pehchaan liya tha..

aur isiliye un paanchon ne khud apna apna face open kar diya jisse dekh ACCHUTA SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA chownk gaye..

REASON..

kyunki ye paanchon aur koi nahi balki ANWIR ke wahi dost the jinhe FORBIDDEN FOREST me saza di thi maine...

ek aur baat hi bhi hairani ho rahi thi mere X doston ko...aur woh thi un paanchon ke sharir se nikal raha AURA jo unki shaktiyan bayan kar raha tha..

woh shakti pehle ke mukable 10 guna tak zyada thi...

khair,meri baat ko sun woh paanchon mujhe kuch der ghurte rahe par phir baaki logon ki taraf palat...


1ST-tum logon ko kya laga ki ye wapas aa gaya hai toh tum sab tumhe diye kaam se azaad ho gaye....

nahi...ulta ab toh tumhara kaam aur usse naa karne par saza aur badh gayi hai..

aur us saza ki shuruwat hogi abhi...


apni baat bol woh DARK WARRIOR apne haath ko ek bande ki taraf kiya hi tha ki tabhi us bande ke aage aakar khadi ho gayi MAHI jisse dekh....


1ST-apne number ki itni bhi kya jaldi hai MAHI...

MAHI-beta number mera nahi tera aur tere in sabhi sathiyon ka lagne waala hai...


apni baat bolte hue hi MAHI ne tezi se apne ek haath ko aage ki taraf dhakka sa diya....



VIDHIKA BALAM

PALM FORCE



yahi SPELL tha jo apne saare AMPLIFICATION modes ki power ke saath man hi man uccharit kiya tha MAHI ne aur aisa kar usne apna haath aage kiya tha..

aur uske aisa karte hi ek behadh strong energy force uske palm se generate hui aur us first DARK WARRIOR ko jaakar hit hui..

aisa hote hi halka piche ki taraf udta hua woh WARRIOR jaakar gira par girte hi woh turant wapas khada ho chuka tha...

hall ke farsh par jame dhool ki wajah se us DARK WARRIOR ke kapde gande ho chuke the jisse jhadate hue woh MAHI ko ghurta raha par phir....

MAHI ko apne piche ek strong magic feel hua aur aisa feel hote hi usne khudke body ko chhupane ki tarah pose kiya..

MAHI ke aisa karte hi uske chaaron taraf ek impenetrable barrier ban gaya jiske baad...

BHOOOBBB...

ek invisible wall ki shakal liye uski taraf aa raha force us barrier se takraya...

is collision se woh barrier aur woh force dono khatm ho gaye..

par jahan apne waar ko khaali jaata dekh woh DARK WARRIOR thoda jhunjla gaya wahin bina SPELL uccharit kiye hue usne jo waar kiya tha,usse dekh MAHI man hi man chownk gayi thi..

MAHI jaan chuki thi ki woh DARK WARRIOR kuch zyada hi powerful hai...

par MAHI ke potential ko us DARK WARRIOR ke saathiyon ne bhi dekha aur usse zyada chance naa dene ka faisla kar unme se do DARK WARRIORS aage aaye..



MASA SVATI...

BLACK SWORD

VATALI KHADAGAM

HURRICANE BLADE

JIHIMI VINASHAKAM

LAZER DESTRUCTION



teeno DARK WARRIORS ne ek ek SPELL man hi man socha jiske baad ek ke haathon me kaali shaktiyon se bhari hui sword chamakne lagi..

dusre ke haath me ek bada sa blade aa gaya jiske chaaron taraf ek chota par utna hi powerful chakrawaat bana hua tha...

aur teesre DARK WARRIOR ki aankhen red hone lagi jinse ab nikalne waala the deadly ray....

jahan un teeno ne SPELL bolkar apna apna astra shashtra ready kar liya tha wahin...



MAHI- VAZUNDHATE HANIYEM

THUNDER HALTER




apne ANGELS FORM POWER SOURCE ko jo ab halka sa khisak chuka tha, dekhte hue man hi man uccharit kiya is SPELL ko MAHI ne jiske baad uske sharir ke chaaron taraf ek invisible thunder paida ho gaya jo hone waale har waar par double power se rok lagane waala tha...

wahin apne SPELL bol woh teeno DARK WARRIORS bijli ki tezi se MAHI ki taraf badhe aur uske paas pahunch jahan ek taraf SWORD aur BLADE waalon apne apne hathiyar MAHI par chalana shuru kar diya wahin dusri taraf teesre WARRIOR ne MAHI par apni aankhon se LAZER ray chhodne shuru kar diye..

waaron ki speed itni zyada thi ki wahan moujud SAVENTS, WHIZZDERS aur WHIZZES, parents,koi unhe dekh tak nahi paa raha tha..

par MAHI ke chaaron taraf bane THUNDER HALTER un saare waaron ko naa sirf rok rahe the par saath hi saath un waaron ko wapas un teeno WARRIORS par dhakel bhi rahe the..

aisa hone ki wajah se un teeno ko beech beech me hault lena pad raha tha jiska faayda uthate hue MAHI apne THUNDER HALTER se thodi thodi energy extract karte hue un teeno par waar bhi kar rahi thi..

lekin un teeno ki speed bhi kaabile taarif thi..woh MAHI ke attacks se kisi tarah khud ko bachaye hue the..

but haan,woh teeno milkar bhi MAHI ko koi nuksaan nahi pahuncha paa rahe the..

MAHI ki speed adhbhudh thi jisse dekh wahan moujud sabki aankhon me uske liye taarif thi..

meri bhi nazar ek baar MAHI ki taraf gayi thi aur uski raftaar aur ladhne ka tarika dekh mai bhi man hi man usse impressed hua tha..

sirf ANGEL aur HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE ke trigger bhar hone se MAHI ki taakat me jo izaafa hua tha,usse dekh bas imagine hi kiya jaa sakta tha ki jab woh dono power source ek ho jaayenge yaa phir ek dusre ke paas bhi aa jaayenge toh uski taakat ka aalam kya hoga..???!!!!

khair,jab un teeno ne dekha ki woh milkar bhi MAHI ka kuch bigaad nahi paa rahe the hain toh man hi man unhone apne baaki dono saathiyon ko kuch kaha jiske baad..

AHHHHHHH.....

ye dard bhari awaaz nikli thi NAOMI ke mooh se..

reason...

us fourth WARRIOR ne ek hunter prakat kiya aur usse NAOMI par chala diya..

NAOMI ki dard bhari aah sun SHALTON aur BRAWNY turant uski taraf badhe par tabhi..


SATAAKKHH....SATAAKHHHHH....

fifth WARRIOR ne apna hunter un dono ke pairon par chala diya jiske baad woh dono mooh ke bal gir gaye...

apne friend aur uncle, aunty ko maar khata dekh ACCHUTA,HIDA aur SLUNDER bhi unki taraf badhe par abhi un teeno ne do kadam bhi aage nahi badhaya tha ki tabhi unpar bhi kode barasne shuru ho gaye jiske baad woh teeno bhi cheekhte hue neeche gir gaye..

in teeno ke baad same haalat SAPIUS, REGIS aur EDWINA ka bhi hua...

ab woh sab zamin par the aur aisa hote hi woh chownthe aur paanchwe DARK WARRIOR bijli se bhi tez gati se un sabke chaaron taraf ghumne lage aur apne hunter se unki chamdi udhedne lage..

par jahan ek taraf mai wapas aakhen band kar chill kar raha tha wahin MAHI apne doston ki haalat dekh distract hone lagi thi..

waise ab tak uspar koi waar laga nahi tha,par speed uski pehle ke mukable kaafi kam ho chuki thi...

yahi reason tha ki kuch aur der battle karne ke baad...

AHHHHH...

second DARK WARRIOR ka hurricane blade MAHI ke thunder halt ko halka sa kaaththe hue MAHI ke shoulder me lag gaya...

blade ki wajah se MAHI ka haath halka kat gaya aur thunder ray ki wajah se ek tez karah ke beech woh udte hue piche jaakar giri..

wahin jaise hi MAHI aur mere friends taklif me aaye,toh mere andar basi ERRAPEL ki shakti ne mere powers ko release kar diya...

mere powers azaad the jinhe feel kar mai muskura utha...

mai jaanta tha ki ERRAPEL ne aisa mere doston ko bachane ke liye kiya tha par jab woh mere hisaab ne nahi chalti toh mera uski khawahish pura karne ka sawal hi nahi uththa tha...

mai araam se sir ko peeche rakh aankhen band kar leta hi raha..

wahin is beech un teeno me se do DARK WARRIORS ne MAHI ke gale me apne apne hathiyar tika diye the..

chaahte toh woh usse ab zakhmi toh kar hi sakte the par woh chahte the ki MAHI jinke liye unse bheedi thi,unki buri gath hote hue dekhe..

aur aisa ho bhi raha tha..baaki ke dono WARRIORS behadh tezi se mere doston, WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS aur NAOMI, SHALTON ki chamdi udhedh rahe the par aisa karte hue..


4TH WARRIOR-kya laga tha..!!!ye dono aa gaye toh tum mile hue hukm ki naafarmaani kar sakte ho...

SATAAKHHH.....

bilkul nahi...yahan sirf hum DARK WARRIORS ka hukm chalta tha,hai aur hamesha rahega...

SATAAKHHHHH.......

jaisa hum kahenge,tumhe karna hoga..tum sabko...

SATAKKKHHHH....

ye tumhare SHAILA, MOKALSAR, AKSHAANT KA CHOSENS nahi,THE DEVIL'S HAVEN hai....

yahan ke SOVEREIGN hain PRINCE VIRAAZ aur ye duniya hai hamare LORD VIDEOUS ki.....


VIDEOUS......

bas ye naam nahi lena chahiye tha usse...

ek jhatke me aankh khuli meri jiske baad....

MAHI ke gardan par jis DARK WARRIOR ne talwar tikayi thi,usne pehle apne piche aur phir apne ussi haath me kuch super strong power ko feel kiya par jab tak woh kuch samajh paata....

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.........

ek hriday vidarak cheekh joki beech me hi atak gayi,padi uske aur baaki sabhi ke kaano par..

ye cheekh thi ussi DARK WARRIOR ki jisne kuch seconds pehle VIDEOUS ka naam bola tha..

uski taraf nazar padte hi jahan MAHI ke paas khade WARRIORS ki aankhein hairani aur dar, dono ke maare badi ho gayi wahin saamne waala DARK WARRIOR toh hadbadate hue neeche hi gir gaya tha..

reason....

jisne VIDEOUS ke naam se ding maari thi,uska sharir beech se kaaththe hue do bhaagon me bath neeche gir chuka tha..

aur usse kaata tha maine jo uske paas khada hadbadate hue neeche gir chuke WARRIOR ko dekh raha tha...

mere haathon me thi wahi kaali sword jo mere haathon me aane ke baad safedh ho chuki thi...

par filhal woh safedh nahi,us WARRIOR ke khoon se san laal dikh rahi chuki thi...

is scene ko dekh neeche gire hue mere dost, WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS, parents bhi kaamp gaye the...

wahin us talwar par lage khoon ko apne index finger se saaf karte hue....


MAI-koi bhi jagah sirf tak VIDEOUS ki hai jab tak wahan RAAZ nahi aa jaata...

aur meri jagah par khade hokar usse kisi aur ka batana jurm hai jiski saza sirf mout hai...


baat khatm hote hote mai ek baar phir hila...

atleast itna hi dikh paaya sabko aur iske baad ka jo scene baaki sabko dikha, woh unhe andar tak kaampne par majboor karne ke liye kaafi tha...

woh DARK WARRIOR jo hadbadakar neeche gir gaya tha,uske paas pahunch uske mooh me upar waale daant ke section me sword ghussa diya tha maine jiske baad uske zubaan ke saath uske jabde aur phir tounsil neeche gir chuka tha...

bina awaaz ke chattpatata hua woh DARK WARRIOR neeche gir chuka tha jiske baad apne haathon me pakde SWORD ko uski taraf kar jhatka diya maine...

mere aisa karte hi us SWORD me laga khoon chithtakte hue us DARK WARRIOR ke sharir par pada aur jab aisa hua toh..

woh khoon AAG me badal gaya jo bas ek hi second me uske pure sharir me faile chuka tha...

tadapte aur ab jalte hue us DARK WARRIOR ki saansein band ho chuki thi...

un do DARK WARRIORS ka kaam khatm kar maine MAHI ke saamne khade baaki ke teeno WARRIORS ki taraf apni nazarein ki aur mere aisa karte hi un teeno ki jaan unke gale par aakar atak gayi..

pehle se kayi guna zyada taakatwar the woh teeno,par jis tarah maine un teeno ke saathiyon ko kaata tha,usse dekh unhe mere aage apni aukaad ka andaza ho chuka tha..

turant bhaagne ki niyat se woh teeno dhuen me badalne lage par tabhi...

first WARRIOR ke chaaron taraf WHITE ENERGY ki ek barrier ban gayi jiski wajah se woh uske beech kaid hokar reh gaya..

wahin DUSRA DARK WARRIOR jisne kuch der pehle MAHI par HURRICANE BLADE se waar kiya tha,uske dhuen banane se pehle hi uske chaaron taraf WHITE ENERGY se bana ek hurricane utha jisne naa sirf usse form badalne se rok liya balki agle hi pal...

AHHHHHHH......

us WARRIOR ki cheekh har taraf gunj uthi..

REASON..

is hurricane ne uske sharir ki pehle chamdi aur phir uske haddiyon ko galana shuru kar diya tha...

kuch palon me hi bina aag ke hi chita jal chuki thi uski..


LAZER DESTRUCTION....

woh astra jisse woh THIRD WARRIOR MAHI par waar kar raha tha..

achanak se hi usse pehle uski aankhon me jalan feel hui par phir...

AHHHHHHHHH....

uski bhi cheekh har taraf gunjne lagi...

REASON...

uski aankhon se jo kuch der pehle tak lazer nikal raha tha,is waqt wahi
lazer uske aankhon se hote hue uske pure andruni chehre ko jala raha tha..

par woh lazer wahin nahi rooka...chehre ke baad woh uske puri body me fail gaya jiske baad..

BOOM...

fath gaya uska sharir..

ia scene ko dekh waise toh sabhi dar gaye the,par sabse zyada buri haalat thi us aakhri bache DARK WARRIOR ki..

thartharate hue woh aankhon me rehem ki guhaar liye mujhe dekh raha tha..

ab mere jaisa rehemdil bhala uski guhaar kyun nahi sunta..

isiliye uske pass pahunch uske kandhe par haath rakha maine aur...


MAI-dar kyun raha hai..??? tujhe kya lagta hai,mai itna bereham hun ki tujhe maar dunga...??hmm!!!


meri baat me jo sardpan jhalak raha tha,usse sun us so called super strong DARK WARRIOR ke pasine chhutne lage the...

aur waise hi kaampte hue apne andar jhaanka usne aur...



SWATMANVADHA

PAINLESS SUICIDE



man hi man is SPELL ko uccharit kiya us DARK WARRIOR ne jiske baad mai muskura utha..

mai jaan chuka tha ki usne abhi kya kiya hai....

par isse pehle ki uska SPELL asar karta,maine uske chaaron taraf faila WHITE ENERGY usme daal diya jiske baad woh painless death ka SPELL painful death me badal gaya..

aankh,kaan,naak,mooh sabse khoon nikalne laga uske aur phir...

BOOM....

uska sharir bhi fath gaya..

jahan uss DARK WARRIOR ke khoon se naha chuka tha mai wahin mera ye kroor roop jisne us DARK WARRIOR aur uske saathiyon ko khatm kiya tha,usse dekh wahan moujud har koi stabdh reh gaya tha..

pin drop silence ke beech chalta hua mai thoda aage badha aur upar dekhte hue..



MAI-



jiski dushmani bhi YAARI LAGE....
WOH RAAZ HAI..

jiske aage har cheez BECHAARI LAGE...
WOH RAAZ HAI....

zinda rehne ke liye kya kuch nahi karte hain log....

par jiske saamne MOUT ZINDAGI se bhi PYAARI LAGE....

WOH RAAZ HAI.....
















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AAPKA APNA V....J....
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