Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

[A.B.KING]

likh liya h but bahar hun..shaam ko post kar dunga

Ok bro waiting

 

[bd sharkar]

Waiting..

 

[Vikram Bhosle]

 

[Chinturocky]

Waiting

 

[vj4u]

what the fuck
bhut hi umda lekhni ka pradrasn VJ bhai
phle mabel ka samne aana or uske baad
uske maa - pita ki maut ki sacchai
videous ke 4 ansho ka truth revel hona
haltis ki tdp or unke muh se nikle blood
or phir blood se related sacchai jiska andaza kisi haltiz ko bhi ab tk na tha use revel krna
or phir unke blood ki madad se apne creator GOD's son se mulakat or
apne taqt or apni milkiyat apni sword se judi sacchai ko jaan jha raaz ka bhi dimag ghuma
whi apne wo dost jinhe log ab tk mra hua smjh rhe the
unhe wapas unki swans lautane ka tarika bhi maloom chla jo ki usi ki sword se hokar jata h
let's see aage kya hota h

thanks for appreciating brother...saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

सोचता हूँ हर कागज पे तेरी तारीफ करु, फिर ख्याल आया कहीँ पढ़ने वाला भी तेरा दीवाना ना हो जाए।



एक लाइन में क्या तेरी तारीफ़ लिखू
पानी भी जो देखे तुझे तो प्यासा हो जाये



बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई

thanks brother... yunhi saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

O bhai ye kya tha
Vj bhai
Abtak ka sabse bade
RAAZ
Se parda hata he bhai

Vj bhai
Man gaye apko
story kese ghumni he koi apse sikhe


vj bhai


Dil
Dehla dene wala update
Osam or kya kya likhu samj nai araha vj bhai

kya solid story ko apne en
Waqt pe ghumaye he
Dil
Baher
Hone ko hogaya tha

sala
Ye banda esi soch kaha se lata he bhai
Jo
Mari huwi lash me jaan funk de
Bhai tarif karuga to likh ne ke liye ek
Update banjayga vj bhai

aapki soch or apke likhe ke huwe words ko dil se salam bhai

Vj the grate man​

thanks for appreciating brother...yunhi saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

Vjy bhai kya agla padao earth h ?

nope.. padhte jaaiye..

 

[vj4u]

WRATH OF GOD .... Hell blazing fire jiska ek ansh Raaz ke andr bhi h jiski madad se usne apni powers ko nurture kiya h... To kya hell blazing fire us sword ki asli power ko us tak pahuchane ka jriya bnegi🗡🗡🗡🗡
Aaj to bahut hi ghanghor dhamake hue h... Videous jo phle se hi khtrnaak tha uska ab aur bhi jyada bahut hi jyada shaktishali bn jaana...fir raaz ko malum pdna ki wo to usse bhi kahin jyada shaktishali bn skta h sword ke jriye. .ab kaise aur kyu aur akhir wo god ki sword ka successor kaise bn gya ye sb use jb clear ho jayega to wo jaan jayega ye sab bhi ki aakhir wohi kyu...vikram kyu nhi ..
Wahin dusre dhamake..haltizas ke blood me god particles ka hona...mabel ke mom dad ki maut ka usi din hona jis din raaz ne apne mata pita ko mara... Aur fir videoua aur uske 3 nye ansho ko ek sath hi khatam krne ka logic...agr ek ek krke mara gya to videous ko marna lgbhg ashambhav karya bn jaayega...kul milakar ye update blockbuster tha...
Wahin ek aur comdey scene raaz ke deemag me chl rhi ek thinking equality wali ki brawny ke maa baap bch gye hmare sbke ludhakwa diye ek pure game ne aisa pakshpaat kyu......
Khair jo bhi tha pura . gjb ka update tha ye...to ab dekhte h aage kya hota h aur Raaz kaise sword ko dhund nikalta h...🗡🗡🗡🗡
Waiting brother

aage aur maza aane waala hai brother... yunhi saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

For Videous, it is like a game, brings joy by hurting the feelings of others and the cause of death of both Raaz and Mabel's parents is Videous, now he should be punished otherwise he will do again something wrong. The dark comedy scene was very funny.
Vikram and Asmodeus helped and directed Raaz and he is the owner of Sword whose Vikram was the only holder, wow... Means, now Raaz can use it but first he has to be found and friends can be healed with the help of that sword. Now Videous has become more powerful than before and to kill him, we have to kill the four together, which seemed impossible to see the current situation but now the hope has returned.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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thanks for appreciating brother..yunhi saath bane rahiye