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Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

Asif khan

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF RAAZ APNE SAARE SAATHIYON KO WORLD DOORS KE THROUGH KISI DUSRE WORLDS ME BHEJ DETA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF USSE PATA CHALTA HAI KI ASMODEUS USSE GUIDE KARNE WAALA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-3


(THE SACRIFICE & THE PERFECT EPILOGUE)



UPDATE-159



PLANET- THE LAND


PLACE-THE LAND






WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS PLACE...????





RAAZ dwara khole WORLD DOOR se hote hue uske dusri taraf jab MAHI pahunchi toh us world ko dekh uski aankhein hadh se zyada badi ho gayi...

THE LAND...woh planet jahan MAHI pahunchi thi..

ek ajeebogarib PLANET.... ek aisa planet jahan oxygen tha,rivers the jinme drinkable water flow hote the, but still human existence naa toh filhal wahan tha aur naahi jaisa wahan ki condition thi,aage panapne waala tha...

REASON...

us jagah ka MAGNETIC FIELD jo normal LIFE SUSTAINING planets ka aadha hi tha..

sirf apni shaktiyon ki wajah se MAHI is planet ke zamin par khadi reh paa rahi thi..

aur dusra tha upar ka nazara...

jahan aakash nahi balki neeche ki hi tarah zamin hi thi...

ji haan,zamin...is adhbhudh jagah ko dekh hi kahi thi ye baat MAHI ne jiske baad..


MAHI-wow..."DO YOU TRUST ME"...

ofcourse i trust you RAAZ but bharosa woh statement cover nahi karta jisse mujhe pata chale ki what do you want me to achieve here....???


YE PLANET FILHAL INCOMPLETE HAI...TUMHE ISSE PURA KARNA HAI...


ye thi meri awaaz jo MAHI ko apne andar sunayi di jisse sun pehle toh woh chownki par phir shaant hote hue..


MAHI-RAAZ..are you bodily connected with me...kyunki i can not only hear u,but also feel you...

MAI-ab kya kahun...ek se DEVINE POWERS hone ke side effects hain ye...

anyways,listen...

half magnetic field... apne neeche biche zamin ka ye sach toh jaan hi gayi hogi tum...

thik waisa hi half magnetic field upar akash me bane zamin par bhi laga hua hai...

ye do lands is planet ke woh adhure hisse hain jinhe ek karne ke baad hi inke magnetic fields complete honge aur ye planet future human residence ke liye suitable ho paayega...

aur aisa karne ki zimmedari tumhe di gayi hai MAHI...so do the needful....

jahan ye bol meri awaaz aur mujhe feel karna MAHI ne band kar diya wahin jo maine kaha tha,jo task maine uski taraf feka tha,usse sun..


MAHI-oh boy.... that's one hell of a challenge...

ye bol khudke chith aur dil ke andar jahan aseem shakti ka pravah lagatar ho raha tha,jhaanka MAHI ne aur phir sabse pehle is THE LAND naamak PLANET ki earth power ko feel karne ke liye woh neeche baith gayi aur aisa kar usne apne dono haathon ki ungliyan us hari bhari grass ke andar dhasa di...

aisa kar man hi man...


MAHI-

VIRTAH SHAKTIYEM...

FEEL THE POWER....


aur is SPELL ke saath MAHI ka challenge me participation shuru ho chuka tha...




PLANET-GOLETH


PLACE-THE EDGE




WOOOOO..YE KAISI JAGAH TRANSFER HO GAYA HAMARA GUYZZZZ....

THIS PLACE IS PURE IS SHIT...


THE GOLETH naam ke us PLANET ke edge par jahan WORLD DOOR se hokar pahunche the ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY, HIDA,MABEL aur SHOWHI,aage ke nazare ko dekhte hue kahi thi ye baat ACCHUTA ne..

THE GOLETH..ek without SUN dark world par KAALI SHAKTIYON se bane AAG ki chamak se lagatar ujwalit tha uska har hissa...

jahan tak nazar jaaye,kaale banzar zamin jinhe dekh aisa lag raha tha jaise sadiyon se akaal grast hai ye puri jagah...

door door tak humans toh chhodo,kisi parinde tak ka naamo nishan nahi dikh raha kisiko..

aur uske upar wahan ka mousam jisme ek ajeeb si negetivity ki heat faili hui thi jo us jagah ke manhoos hone ka praman de rahi thi...

yahi sab dekh aur mehsoos kar kahi thi ACCHUTA ne woh baat jisse sun...


SHOWHI-SHOWHI aap sabko batana chahega ki agar MAHABALI RAAZ ne hum sabko yahan bheja hai toh zaroor uske piche koi mahatvpurn kaaran hoga..

ACCHUTA-hain..hume toh pata hi nahi tha...hume toh laga ki hamare wapas theek hone ki khushi me hamare dost ne hume 2 din 3 raaton ka holiday pakage gift kiya hai...

SHOWHI-SHOWHI aapko batana chahega ki aapko galatfehmi hui hai..aisa kuch bhi nahi hai..

ACCHUTA-abbe lapadjhandas,mai mazak kar raha tha..


ACCHUTA ki baat sun usse ghur kar dekha SHOWHI ne aur...


SHOWHI-SHOWHI aapko batana chahega ki SHOWHI aapko behosh dekh bohot dukhi tha..

par SHOWHI ko lagta hai ki aap waise hi theek the... SHOWHI ka aapko hosh me bardasht karna thoda mushkil hai...

ACCHUTA-aag paida kar deta hun...kood jaana usme... tention khatm..

SHOWHI-SHOWHI chaahega ki SHOWHI ko diya sujhav pehle aap khudpar aazmaayen...


ek taraf SHOWHI ke replies se ACCHUTA chidhe jaa raha tha wahin dusri taraf SHOWHI aur ACCHUTA ke beech ki nok jhonk ko dekh aur sun baaki sab dheere dheere hase jaa rahe the aur issi beech MABEL dheere se ALFREEN ke kaano me..


MABEL-kya ye dono hamesha aise hi jhagda karte rehte hain..??

ALFREEN-hamesha..

MABEL-baat karne ka tarika weirdly cute hai iska,naa.

ALFREEN-directly bol..MR SHOWHI,meri friend MABEL aapse kuch kehna chahti hai...??


SHOWHI se ACCHUTA kuch kehne hi waala tha ki tabhi ALFREEN ne apni baat kahi jisse sun uska mooh band ho gaya..

wahin ALFREEN ki baat sun..


SHOWHI-SHOWHI aapko batana chahega ki aapki friend SHOWHI ki bhi friend hai... isiliye MISS MABEL,aap SHOWHI se kuch bhi keh sakti hain...

MABEL-aapke bolne ka tarika bohot cute hai MISTER SHOWHI and so are you..???


MABEL ki baat sun blush karne laga SHOWHI aur phir..


SHOWHI-SHOWHI miss MABEL ko batana chahega ki MISS MABEL bhi bohot achi hain aur saath hi bohot zyada beautiful bhi...

MABEL-awww..so sweet..thank you...


SHOWHI aur MABEL ki convo sun SHOWHI koj dekh yaa phir ye kahun ki usse ghur dheere aur khudse..


ACCHUTA- BHO***KE...meri maal par line maar raha hai...

ghante ka RIGHTOUS MONASTIC PRAJAATI...

saala,banda kisi bhi planet ka kyun naa ho,tharkipan is jaat me har jagah koot koot kar bhara hi hota hai..


ACCHUTA ki baat uske baaju me khade SLUNDER ne sun ki thi jispar muskurate hue..


SLUNDER-is ganit ke hisaab se toh tu bhi tharki hi hua naa..agar male species me ginta hai khudko toh..!!!


SLUNDER ko ghur kar dekha ACCHUTA ne lekin phir ek nazar MABEL ke muskurate face ko dekh..


ACCHUTA-humne ishq kiya hai,aiyashi nahi...

SLUNDER-LU*D kiya hai tune...saale, propose karna toh door, bhul gaya,MABEL ko lagatar ignore maarta aaya tha tu..

ACCHUTA-woh bhi toh propose kar sakti hai.m

SLUNDER-haan mere MR UNIVERSE.... tujhe toh har planet ki bandi propose karne ke liye mar rahi hai naa..

ACCHUTA-har bandi se kya matlab apne ko...!!!?aur rahi baat MR UNIVERSE hone ki,toh woh toh mujhe banana hi hai but sabki nazaron me nahi,bas iski nazaron me..


MABEL ko dekh kahi ye baat ACCHUTA ne..

is beech jahan ek taraf MABEL aur SHOWHI ek dusre se baat kar rahe the, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ek dusre se,wahin ALFREEN ne apne palkon ko kayi baar jhapka kar jaise kuch confirm sa kiya jiske baad..


ALFREEN-guyzzz,kya tum sabki palke bhi weirdly bhari hain...

SLUNDER-meri toh hain...


SLUNDER ki tarah baaki sabne bhi uski baat se ittafaq rakha jiske baad...


ACCHUTA-shayad is jagah par jo ye nonsensical heat hai,uski wajah se...

ALFREEN-shayad...

YAA SHAYAD NAHI...

TUM SABKI PALKE ISILIYE BHAARI HAIN KYUNKI IS WAQT TUM SABKI AANKHEN EK SAATH DO LOGON KO SAAMNE KA DRISHYA DIKHA RAHI HAIN.

EK APNE OWNER KO,AUR DUSRA MUJHE...


ye thi meri awaaz jisse sun chownk aur excited dono ho gaye woh sabhi jiske baad..


ALFREEN-BHAI...

MAI-yup...meri aankhen tum sabki aankhon se connected hain..i can see what you all are seeing...

MABEL-toh ab tak chup kyun the tum...???

MAI-itni interesting convos chal rahi thi,khaas kar ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke beech,toh disturb karna sahi nahi laga mujhe..


jahan meri baat baaki sab ko toh samajh me aayi nahi wahin SLUNDER aur khaaskar ACCHUTA thode jhemp se gaye aur isse pehle ki koi unko convo ka topic puchta..


ACCHUTA-thank GOD,indirectly hi sahi,tu hain toh sahi yahan bhai...ye jagah, yahan ka environment kuch zyada hi depressing hai..

MAI-aisa yahan ho rahe kaam ki wajah se hai...

HIDA-aisa kya ho raha hai yahan...!!!!

MAI-ALFREEN will lead you...jahan tum sabko jaana hai,usne woh jagah dekh li hai...

BRAWNY-tum dono bhai behen ka sahi hai bhai..sab kuch dekhne ki kaabiliyat rakhte ho...

MAI-POWER HOLDERS nahi balki OWNERS ho tum sab ab...divya drishti ki kaabiliyat ab tum sabme bhi hai..

par uske activate karne ke liye chahiye focus joki dimag se kiya jaata hai,dil se nahi..

dil ki heartbeat aur usse jude bhaavnaon ko ginane aur samajhne se fursat mile toh dimag waale area ka bhi istamal karkar dekh lena...


meri baat sun jahan baaki sab has diye wahi SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA pehle jhemp se gaye but phir woh dono, MABEL, BRAWNY aur HIDA me saath mil apne dimag ke drishti bindu par focus karne lag gaye aur jab unhone aisa kiya toh agle hi pal un sabki anakhon me sirf saamne ka hi nahi balki pure GOLETH planet ka view dikhne laga..

apni divya drishti ko jaagrut hota dekh pehle toh woh paanchon behadh khush hue but phir ek scene ko dekh unki aankhen badi ho gayi...

darasal jahan woh sab the,usse kareeb 1000 km door tha is planet ka mid point...

aur us mid point par chale rahe scene ko dekh hi un sabki aankhein badi ho gayi thi...

us point par kaale dhuen se bana hua tha ek gigantic hurricane jisse KAALI SHAKTI ka pravah kisi lehrate paani ki tarah hote hue upar aasman par jaa raha tha..

aur upar aasman me bane the anginat WORLD DOORS jinse hote hue woh dhuan un anginat realms me jaa raha tha...

us gigantic hurricane ke ird gird waise toh bohot se kaali shakti ke numainde bhare pade the but wahan kuch khaas log bhi the jinme se do chehron ko ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur saath hi saath ALFREEN bhi pehchaante the...

ye do faces the DORIAN aur GASTON ke...

unke saath khade the baaki dono primes as in UBEL aur TRISTEN...

saath hi saath us bade se DARK HURRICANE ki dusri taraf bana tha ek throne jo filhal khaali hi tha..

khair,is scene ko dekh hi woh sab hairan hue the but isse pehle ki koi uske baare me kuch puche.


ALFREEN-jo jagah dekh tum sab hairan ho rahe ho,usse DOUBLE D kehte hain..

as in DARK DIFFUSION...

pure bramhand me jo kaali shakti failti hai aur wahan se humans ke through AMPLIFY hokar wapas louththi hai,ye dono hi kaam is DARK DIFFUSION ke through hi hote hain...

HIDA-toh kya hum yahan is DARK DIFFUSION ko nasht karne aaye hain..???

ALFREEN-nahi...kaali shakti living PLANETS ka ek abhin ang hai..

jaise humans bina oxygen ke nahi jee sakte,the waise hi aaj ki duniya me woh sab bina kisi na kisi tarah se paap kiye bina bhi survive nahi kar sakte..

aur us paap ki shakti ko khudme channelize karna,ye hakh hai BLACK ENERGY ka jo usse khud GOD se mila hai...

but ek sharth ke saath... BLACK ENERGY apne hisaab se khudki manupaltive taakat ko sab sansaaro me nahi release kar sakti..

woh humans ko paap karne ke liye bound nahi kar sakti...HUMANS apni marzi se jo paap karte hain,unse bani shakti hi BLACK ENERGY consume karti hai..

but VIDEOUS ne is sharth ko partial aur indirectly harm kiya hai..

woh KAALI SHAKTIYON ke is distributer DARK DIFFUSION ka galat istemal kar raha hai..

woh iske zariye thode zyada maatra me kaali shaktiyon ki taakat ko pure bramhand me faila raha hai..

ye kaam woh har guzarte pal me badh rahe paapon ki aad me kar raha hai taaki uspar koi ungli naa utha sake...

but hai toh ye galat jisse hume theek karna hai...

hume us DARK DIFFUSION se nikal rahi extra shakti ke pravah ko dobara neutralize karna hai...

garv ki baat hai ye doston kyunki aise kaam GOD yaa unke dono putr apne sabse loyal WARRIORS ko dete hain par is baar ye kaam hume mila hai...


apne sir ko uncha kar kahi ye baat ALFREEN ne jiske baad baaki sabka sir bhi khushi aur garv se upar uth chuka tha...

wahin ALFREEN ki baat sun..


MABEL-toh phir der kis baat ki....chalo,batate hain in sabko ki GOD ke KARAAR ke saath chhed chaad kar kitni BEKAAR harkat ki hai inhone..

ALFREEN-bilkul..ek hisaab bhi pura karna hai yahan...

jis taakat ka ghamand hai in sabko,chalo,dikhate hain inhe ki asli taakat kya hoti hai...??


ALFREEN ki baat sun sabki aankhen ek saath chamki aur agle hi pal SHOWHI jisse ALFREEN ne apne saath upar utha liya tha,woh aur baaki sabne ek challang maari..

aisa karte waqt un sabke pairon ke neeche un sabki shaktiyon ke rays generate ho chuke the..

yahi wajah thi ki naa toh woh jump normal thi aur naahi un sabke landing se hua impact...

ek jhatke ne hi un sabne us 1000 kms ki doori tay kar li thi aur aisa kar jab woh sab us DARK DIFFUSION se bas kuch 50 metres door land hue toh..


BHHHHHHHHHH..

aas paas ki puri dharti hil gayi thi..

yahan tak ki DARK DELUSION se nikal raha smoke bhi kuch zyada hi zor se float hone lag gaya tha..

DORIAN,GASTON, TRISTEN,UBEL aur wahan moujud baaki sabhi DARK WARRIORS us earth shake ki wajah se ladkhada aur saath hi saath hadbada bhi gaye the.

aur iske saath un sabko WHITE ENERGIES ke behadh strong power owners ki strength bhi feel ho chuki thi aur isiliye us aa rahi energy flow ki direction joki un chaaron ke piche ki thi,usse mehsoos kar woh sab ek jhatke me piche moode aur aisa hote hi kuch jaane pehchaane chehron ko apne saamne dekh un sabki aankhen hairat se badi ho chuki thi..

wahin ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, HIDA, BRAWNY, MABEL aur SHOWHI aakhon me chamak liye un sabko dekh rahe the but ALFREEN..

uski nazar sirf aur sirf DORIAN aur GASTON par hi teeki hui thi...

woh do log jinhone FORBIDDEN FOREST ki sarhad par uske bhai ko jaan se maarne ki koshish ki thi..

us scene ko yaad kar ankhen dehek gayi thi ALFREEN ki aur...


ALFREEN- DARK DIFFUSION se ho rahe BLACK ENERGY ka zaroorat se zyada pravah GOD aur BLACK ENERGY ke beech hue karaar ko tod raha hai...

aur iske liye tum sab dand ke paatra ho...

lekin phir bhi,ek mouka deti hun tum sabko...is atyadhik bahav ko roko,tum dand se bach jaaoge...

aur haan, tum dono, DORIAN aur GASTON...tum dono par ye sharth laagu nahi hoti..

jis din tum dono ne RAAZ par apne VADIN astra se waar kiya tha, tumhare paapon ko ghada ussi waqt bhar gaya tha..

isiliye,tum dono ko aaj aur abhi marna hoga...


HAHAHAHAHAHA


ALFREEN ki baaton ko jo usne bade hi sard awaaz me kahi thi,hasne lage the DORIAN, GASTON aur baaki sabhi DARK WARRIORS..

waise un sabki hasi dekh ek smile ALFREEN ke face par bhi aa gayi thi..

fark sirf itna tha ki jahan ek taraf DORIAN & party ki hasi ALFREEN ke statement ki khilli udaane waali thi wahin ALFREEN ki smile is khilli ki gilli udaane waali...




PLANET-COURIOUS


PLACE-UNDER THE MOTHER TREE






TUMHARA MARGDARSHAN TUMHARE DIMAG ME UTH RAHE SAWALON SE SHURU KARTE HAIN...

BUT KEEP IT LIMITED AND TO THE POINT...


kuch der mujhe yaa phir ye kahun ki mere is purn roop ko dekhte rehne ke baad ye pehla sentence tha jo ASMODEUS ke mooh se nikla tha jispar...


MAI-why me...????


limit ke aakhri hadh ko chhute hue bas do lafzon me apne saare sawalon ko samet liya tha maine jisse sun ek smile naach uthi ASMODEUS ke chehre par aur...


ASMODEUS-the perfect question...

jawab toh bohot hain,but let me also keep it in one line and near to perfect..

tum mere aur VIKRAM ke woh modified shade ho jo hamare PITAH ke kisi waqt liye faisle ke ATTITUDE ko define karta hai...


ASMODEUS ka jawab puri tarah samajh nahi aaya mujhe aur woh questionable bhaav mere face par read kar liya tha ASMODEUS ne aur isiliye....


ASMODEUS-let me tell you a story..a story which led to your creation.. but the story starts with a question...

toh batao RAAZ....!!!!

do you know what is the true difference between an ANGEL,A DEMON & A DEVIL...???

MAI-ANGEL woh jo burayi me bhi acchayi dhund nikaale..

DEMON woh jo acchayi me bhi burayi talaashe....

aur jo acchayi se burayi ko kheench kar bahar nikaale,aur phir us burayi ko saza de,woh hota a ek TRUE DEVIL...

ASMODEUS-once again brilliant answer..

aaj se millions of year pehle jab meri utpatti nahi hui thi,
tab mere pitah ne banaya tha universe ke pehle HUMAN RACE ko...

MAI-wait what...???par according to the legend, actually your legend,GOD ne humans aapki utpatti ke baad aap ke hi roop me banaye the...


meri baat sun ASMODEUS ek rahasyamayi tareeke se muskraya aur...


ASMODEUS-kaafi waqt tak mujhe bhi yahi lagta tha aur woh isiliye ki mujhe bhi aisa dikhaya aur bataya gaya tha...

mere saamne hi mere PITAH GOD ne HUMANS ko banaya tha,aur us waqt kyunki universe me HUMAN RACE kahin thi hi nahi, isiliye mujhe laga ki ye sab mere saamne hi shuru ho raha hai,but aisa tha nahi...

meri uttpatti se laakhon saalon pehle hi GOD ne first human race ko create kiya tha but kuch samay baad they all were brutally slaughtered...

aur ye kiya tha khud GOD ne aur jis chiz se unhone ye kiya tha,is waqt woh chiz tumhare haathon me hai..

THE WRATH OF GOD jo issi SWORD se kiya gaya tha...


ab ye wakayi ek super shocking revelation tha jo mujh jaise bring it on bande ko bhi andar se hila dene ke liye kaafi tha..

raichaita hi vinaashak tha aur woh bhi us prajati ka jisse woh behadh pyar karta tha,ye choti baat toh kahin se bhi nahi thi..

mujhe yun sochta dekh us soch ki neev ko samajh...


ASMODEUS-jab mere PITAH ne hume ye baat batayi thi,toh mujhe aur saath hi VIKRAM ko bhi jhatka laga tha...

khair, ab aate hain KYUN par..

GOD chaahte the pure bramhand me ek species ke thrive hone ki jo unke hi tarah apni vanshaj se(HOLY SPIRITS)pyaar kare aur is anthhin aur dark universe ko purity ki light se paas laate hue jagmaga de...

aur isiliye unhone kul 10 life giving planets ka nirman kiya aur unhe ek dusre se linked karke ek hi star system ka bhaagidaar banaya...

GOD ko vishwas tha ki un saare planets ke vaasi ek dusre se mil kar naye naye culture ki neev rakhte hue khushi khushi sachayi ke path par chalte hue rahenge...

par aisa hua nahi... HUMANS ke saath ek aur chiz ka janm hua..

paap ka,swarth ka jo unke dimag aur dilon se hote hue har taraf failne lagi...

aur ye baat mere PITAH ko bohot buri lagi...unhe aghaat pahuncha...

humans universe me unke pehle selfless creation the aur unhone hi GOD ko cheat kiya aur isiliye GOD unse naraaz ho gaye..

aur us naarazgi se janm hua is SWORD ka jiske sirf ek hi swing se bramhand ke un pehle 10 life giving planets ka har hissa tukdo me bant gaya..

SWORD ke POMMEL par ye jo red diamond laga hua hai,andaza lagao ki ye kya hai...???

MAI-how would i know..bas itna pata hai ki SWORD ke aantarik hisse ka jahan ek SPEAR basi hui hai,ussika part hai ye..

ASMODEUS-jab GOD ne is SWORD ko swing kiya,toh us swing se create hue wave se jo energy nikli,woh WHITE ENERGY hone ke baad bhi GOD ke rage ki wajah se unstable ho gayi thi aur saath hi saath kuch zyada hi strong bhi..

SWORD ne us energy ko khudme sameta par us energy me RAGE PARTICLES hone ki wajah se woh isse apne andar directly store nahi kar sakti thi...

aur isiliye isne nirman kiya SPEAR ka aur SPEAR ne us RAGING PARTICLES ke har hisse ko saath laate hue ek jagah par ikkatha kiya..

aur aisa hone par nirman hua is RED DIAMOND ka...

khair,us PLANET & MASS destruction ke baad GOD kayi sadiyon tak udaas rahe the..

par phir GODS MESSENGERS aur THE HOLY SPIRITS ke atti aagrah par unhone apni urja se mera nirman kiya...

meri utpatti hi woh zariya bana jisse GOD matlab ke mere FATHER ki udaasi kam hui aur aisa hote hi GOD ko ye realization bhi hua ki unhone jo kadam humans ke liye liya tha,woh puri tarah naitik aur sahi nahi tha..

aur isiliye unhone punah HUMAN species ko create karne ka faisla kiya par ek modification ke saath.

sirf isiliye taaki humans puri tarah swatantra rahen, isiliye unhone pure bramhand ke har living planet ko banane ke baad unhe ek WORLD TREE se jodne ka socha..

ek aisi WORLD TREE jiske branches universe ke har living planet se connected honge..

aisa unhone isiliye kiya kyunki us WORLD TREE me woh taaqat ho jisse woh human species ko reproduce kar sake aur aise humans GOD ke creation hone ke baawjud sirf unse bandhe naa reh jaayen...

MAI-WORLD TREE...jiska root EARTH hai...aur isiliye hi...

ASMODEOUS-haan,isliye hi...


muskurate hue kahi ye baat ASMODEUS ne jiska matlab sirf mai jaanta tha but kyun,iska jawab nahi pata tha mujhe aur shayad filhal usse jaanane ka samay aaya bhi nahi tha..

khair, apni baat ko aage badhate hue...


ASMODEUS-aage badhne se pehle ek baar piche chalte hain..

jab GOD ne un 10 HUMAN LIVING PLANETS ko destroy kiya tha,toh jo power GOD ke through release hui aur saath hi jo powers un planet's me pehle se thi,woh merge hokar ek ho gayi..

aisa hote hi chote chote bhaag me bate universe me un saare planets ke kan ek jagah par ikattha ho gaye aur aisa hote hi ek naye planet ka nirman hone laga...

aur us PLANET ka naam pada ALIUM jiska arth hota hai DIFFERENT....

different hi toh tha us planet ka creation aur saath hi bohot zyada khataranak bhi aur woh isiliye kyunki usme WRATH OF GOD ki shakti ke kan the.

ye woh pehla PLANET tha jo GOD ne nahi banaya tha..

is PLANET me life ke sources hone waale the jiska natija bhayankar hone waala tha..

aur GOD khud us naye ban rahe planet ko khatm bhi nahi kar sakte the kyunki jis ANGEL/DEVIL mixed shakti se unhone us planet ki neev matlab un 10 planets ko unhone khatm kiya tha,woh us shakti ko dobara generate nahi kar sakte the...

aur agar us shakti ko generate kiya bina GOD ALIUM ko khatm karte,toh us planet se ek aisi vinaashak shakti bahar nikalti jo pure universe ko apne andar BLACK HOLE jaisi sthithi banate hue sama leti..

aisa hote hi pure universe se GOD ka shaashan hi khatm ho jaata...

aur isiliye GOD ne ek nayi yukti khoji...GOD ne SWORD ke andar nihit SPEAR ki shakti se us ALIUM planet ko hi uske puri shakti ke saath baandhte hue uski hi jagah par uske pure asar ke saath gayab kar diya....

but is kaam ko karte waqt SWORD ne apni shakti ka 90 pratishat bhaag kho diya...

woh saari shakti ab bhi ALIUM ki dharti ko gayab rakhne me aur uske asar se bramhand ko bachane me lagi hui hai...

MAI-WOW...


ASMODEUS ke ab tak ke history revelation ko sun sabse pehle yahi shabd nikla jiske baad mere face ko dekh muskurate hue...


ASMODEUS-i hope ki tumhe WHY ME ka jawab mil chuka hai...

MAI-shayad...jis shakti se GOD ne un 10 planets ko khatm kiya tha,wo dono shakti ek hi waqt me ab mere paas hai jisse mujhe sword ki madad se us ALIUM PLANET ko khatm karna hai...

ASMODEUS-apne kartavya ke baare me sahi ho tum,apne baare me nahi...

RAAZ, tum koi shakti nahi ho,balki usse bohot upar ho...

tum woh ho jiski wajah se mai HEAVEN se nikala gaya tha,tum woh ho jiski wajah se mujhe bachane ke liye VIKRAM ki uttpatti hui thi..

tum woh ho jiski wajah se mujhe aur VIKRAM, dono ko PARMESHWAR PUTR kehlaane ka vardaan mila hai...



tum woh ho jiski wajah se sir jhuk jaate hain jab bhi UNSE SAAMNA HO...

jo har koi apno ke liye mehsoos karta hai,tum woh KAAMNA HO....

khudko sirf ek nirjeev urja maante aaye the tum...par asal me,

sirf hamari shakti nahi,humans ke liye jo GOD feel karte hain,tum woh BHAAVNA HO.....
















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....
















AAPKA APNA V....J....
Very good very interesting update
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI WORLD DOOR KE THROUGH THE LAND NAAM KE PLANET ME PAHUNCHTI HAI,DUSRI TARAF ALFREEN & PARTY THE GOLETH PLANET ME HAI WAHIN TEESRI TARAF ASMODEUS RAAZ SE APNE PITAH KA EK ANCIENT SECRET SHARE KARTA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-3


(THE SACRIFICE & THE PERFECT EPILOGUE)



UPDATE-160



PLANET- THE LAND


PLACE-THE LAND





JWADIHAGAM

MERGE


aankhen band kar apne haathon ko neeche zamin me dhasate hue man me bola ye SPELL MAHI ne aur uske aisa karte hi uske neeche nane planet ki puri dharti shake karne lagi..

ye dekh pehle toh MAHI bohot khush hui..usse laga ki neeche ki dharti khudko uthate hue upar akash ki jagah bane LAND ki taraf badhne waali hai but kuch hi palon me uski ye galatfehmi door ho gayi..

aur woh isiliye kyunki MAHI ke SPELL ke asar se THE LAND ki dharti par cracks aane lage..

uske vibrations se wahan moujud paani ke har shroth me baadh aane lagi...

in short,THE LAND naam ke planet ka LAND collapse ki raah me badh chala tha aur ye dekh MAHI ne turant apne SPELL ke pravah aur asar ko rok diya...

uske aisa karte hi jab kuch der baad wahan sab back to normal hua toh..


MAHI-oh boy...ye jagah toh mere SPELL ki energy ko jhel hi nahi paa rahi hai..

zyada pressure se iska core bhi blast ho sakta hai...

ab karun toh karun kya...???


JHARNE KA PAANI JAB EK CERTAIN HIGHT SE NEECHE GIRTA HAI TOH USKI MANSHA RAASTE PAR KHADE CHATTANO KO TODNE KI NAHI HOTI..

WOH BAS APNA KAAM KARTA HAI...BEHTE HUE NEECHE GIRTA HAI...

PAR US PROCESS ME WOH PAANI JISKI DHAAR SE INSAAN KA SKIN TAK NAHI FATHTHI,CHATTAN TAK TOOT JAATE HAIN...

ZAROORAT HOTI HAI TOH BAS USSI JHARNE SE NIKALTE PAANI KE PRAVAH KI...EK HI LAY AUR GATI ME NIRANTAR PRAVAH KI..

NAA KAM,NAA, ZYADA...

UMMID HAI UDAHARAN KAAM AAYEGA....



ye thi meri awaaz jo MAHI ke andar gunj uthi aur jisse sun uske face par jahan ab tak bas chinta ki rekhayen thi,wahan ab smile naach uthi thi..

ek baar phir neeche baith zamin par apne haath ko dhasaate hue uski aankhein band ho chuki thi aur..


KODHAUYEN....

COMPLETE CONNECTION....





PLANET- GOLETH


PLACE- THE DARK DIFFUSION





JWALAM RADAHAM

BURN TO ASHES


apne ek haath ko ALFREEN ki taraf kar man hi man uccharit kiya is SPELL ko DORIAN ne jiske baad uske haathon se ek kaale dhuen ki ray nikal tezi se ALFREEN ki taraf badh gayi..

wahin ALFREEN jiske face par waise bhi ek evil smile naach rahi thi, DORIAN ki black ray woh smile thodi aur gehri ho gayi.

apni taraf aati us ray ko dekhte hue ALFREEN ke aankhon ki putliyan halki aur kaali ho gayi aur aisa hote hi...

us ray me ek kampan hona shuru ho gaya aur dekhte hi dekhte woh ray solid shape lete hue toot kar bikhar gayi...

is scene ko dekh DORIAN aur uske sabhi saathi hairan toh hue hi par saath hi saath un sabke man me ALFREEN ko lekar halki si ghabrahat bhi bhar chuki thi..

aur iska reason us ray ka hasr tha..

ray se bachna,yaa usse kaatna ek baat hoti hai par jo us ray ke saath ALFREEN ne kiye tha,us POWER DISMANTLING karna kehte hain..

ye ek tarika hota hai jiske through saamne khada opponent batata hai ki he or she is beyond any competition...

aur ab ALFREEN ka ye message un saare DEMONS aur DARK WARRIORS ko saaf mil chuka tha..

halke nervousness ke baad us dar ko shrug out karte hue DORIAN aur uske saath is baar GASTON ne bhi saath milkar ALFREEN par humla karne ka socha but isse pehle ki woh dono kuch karte...


FFFFOOOFOOOOFOOOOO..


chaaron taraf tez aandhi chalne lagi thi...kyunki DARK DIFFUSION ek DARK SACRED CONSTANT RITUAL ki tarah hai, isiliye usse toh ys aandhi se fark nahi pada par aisa wahan moujud kisi bhi DARK WARRIOR ke liye nahi kaha jaa sakta tha..

us aandhi me ek immensely strong push power thi jiske aggressive touch se saare DARK WARRIORS ke pair ladkhadate hue piche hone lag gaye the...

DORIAN,GASTON,UBEL aur TRISTEN toh waise apni jagah par bane hue the par woh sab us chal rahi aandhi ke strong push power ki force achi tarah apne in out, dono jagahon par feel kar paa rahe the..

ALFREEN jiski aankhon ki putliyan is waqt lagatar flip hoti hyi kabhi black aur kabhi white ho rahi thi,woh paida kar rahi thi ye aandhi jiske asar ki wajah se DORIAN aur GASTON koi bhi aakramak SPELL use nahi kar sakte the..

bohot kam palon me aur bina kisi aggressive attack ke hi ALFREEN ne un sabko bata diya tha ki woh kitni powerful hai..

is waqt ALFREEN ki har pal badalti aankhon ki putliyon ko dekh aur uski taakat ke ek chote se namune ko feel kar DORIAN aur GASTON ki haalat kharab ho chuki thi...

wahin unke saath khade UBEL aur TRISTEN bhi ALFREEN ki shakti pradarshan se kaafi shock toh the hi par GASTON aur DORIAN se ulat,woh dare nahi balki ghussa the..

ALFREEN unhi ke territory me aakar unke hi saathiyon ki haalat kharab kar rahi thi,ye unki ehem par chot thi aur isiliye..


TRISTEN-

GANDANEMAH VAAYUYEM

REVERSE THE WIND

UBEL-

VAAYUYEM ANGAM KHANDAM

WIND BLADE BODY CUTS


ALFREEN ke banaye tufaan ki hawa ko ussiki taraf modne ka spell uccharit kiya tha TRISTEN ne..

aisa kar woh ALFREEN ko apni takaat ka namuna dikhana chahta tha..

wahin TRISTEN ke SPELL ki shakti ko hi use karte hue apna SPELL uccharan kiya tha UBEL ne..

TRISTEN ke spell se jo wind ka bahav wapas ALFREEN ki taraf mudne waala tha, UBEL ussi wind ko chote chote invisible blades me badalte hue ALFREEN ke body ko pieces me cut karma chahta tha..

khair, dono ke SPELL uccharan karne ke baad jo hua,usse dekh TRISTEN aur UBEL, dono ke hi faces par smile naach uthi thi...

kyunki jaisa TRISTEN ne chaha tha,wahi hua..

woh tufaan jo ab tak sirf unke aur unke saathiyon ki taraf thi,ab uska rookh badalte hue ALFREEN ki taraf ho chuka tha...

tezi se badhta hua woh tufaan ab ALFREEN ke kareeb pahunch chuka tha..

wahin jab aisa hua toh UBEL ka SPELL bhi kaam me aane laga..

us tufaan me ghum rahe wind ne bohot se invisible blades ban gaye jo apne tez dhaar ke saath ALFREEN ke sharir ko cheerne faadne ke liye badh chuke the..

aur ALFREEN,in sabke dauran woh bilkul shaant khadi thi..

par jaise hi woh tufaan aur usme chuppe invisible blades uske paas pahunche toh flying kiss dene ki tarah apne ek haath ko apne honthon ke paas laaya usne aur aisa kar ek tez phoonk maari ALFREEN ne...

ye fhoonk asal me ALFREEN ki pure BLACK ki WILD ANIMOSITY POWER thi jo jaise hi bahar nikli,toh apne swabhav ke tahat saamne dikh rahe ek maatr opponent joki woh tufaan tha,usse khudme lapet liye us power ne..

uske aisa karte hi us tufaan me chuppe woh saare invisible blades ek jhatke me toot chuke the..

par woh ANIMOSITY POWER yahin nahi rooki..ek pal ke duswe hisse me woh shakti us tufaan ko liye TRISTEN, UBEL,GASTON aur DORIAN ke paas pahunch chuki thi aur isse pehle ki woh sab kuch samajh paate, woh us tufaan ki giraft me lapete jaa chuke the..

ek second me hi woh chaaron hawa me us tufaan ke andar fase idhar udhar ghum rahe the..

khudko niyantrit kar woh chaaron us tufaan se bahar aane ki koshish karne lage par ALFREEN ki ANIMOSITY POWER ne unhe aisa karne se rok diya..

un chaaron ki saari taakat jaise baandh si di thi ALFREEN ne..

aur isiliye sirf kuch hi der me un chaaron ko chakkar aane laga..

wahin apne superiors ko yun fase dekh wahan moujud 100s of dark WARRIORS ALFREEN par waar karne ko hue par tabhi....


SOOBHHHH......


un sabko apne ird gird bhi ek tez tufaan uththa feel hua..

par fark ye tha ki woh tufaan unhe khudme lapete hue nahi tha,balki unke ird gird ek circle bana unhe gherte hua ghum raha tha lekin woh sab ye bhi feel kar rahe the ki woh ghera har guzarte pal ke saath chota hote hue unke kareeb aate jaa raha tha aur tabhi...


KHACCHHHH.....

is ek saamuhik awaaz ke ek saath darjan bhar DARK WARRIORS ka sir kaththe hue neeche zamin par gir chuka tha..

aur is scene ko dekh baaki ke ab tak sahi salamat bache DARK WARRIORS ki aankhen fath si gayi thi...

kuch dikha toh tha hi nahi un sabko..

par jab kuch seconds ke shock ke baad woh sab back to normal hone lage tab gayi un sabki nazar saamne jahan is waqt khada tha BRAWNY..

uske haath me thi WHITE ENERGY se bani tez chamakti hui ek badi si knife jiske edge se is waqt khoon tapak raha tha joki obviously kate sir liye mare pade DARK WARRIORS ka tha...

wahin us tapak rahe khoon ko jhatak blade saaf karte hue..


BRAWNY-dikh nahi raha tha kya ki hamari friend tumhare chaar fathers ke saath busy hai..

ladhne ka shouk hai toh hum hai naa...


BRAWNY ki baat aur apne saathiyon ko mara pada dekh ghusse we dahak gayi baaki saare DARK WARRIORS ki aankhen par woh sab kuch karte ki tabhi...


KHACCHHHH..KHACCHHHHH..KHACCHHHHH....

ek ke baad ek half of a second ke antaral me ye awaaz kayi baar ubhri aur jab woh awaaz rooki toh BRAWNY ke baaju me khade the HIDA, ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur MABEL jinke haathon me bhi BRAWNY ki hi tarah WHITE ENERGY se bani knife thi aur jiske edge se BRAWNY ke knife ki tarah khoon tapak raha tha...

wahin ab tak SHOWHI bhi araam se chalta hua un sake paas aa chuka tha..

khair,un sabne bhi apne knife ko jhatakte hue usme laga khoon usse alag kiya aur nazar saamne ki taraf ki jahan is waqt woh saare 100s of DARK WARRIORS joki kuch der pehle tak unpar has rahe the,unki laash padi hui thi...

aur dekhte hi dekhte un saare laashon me jaisa ki DARK WARRIORS ke saath unke marne ke baad hota hai,aag lag gayi..

kuch hi palon me woh saari laashen raakh me badal chuki thi aur ye dekh..


ACCHUTA-arre yaaron,inke saath ladhne ke liye toh hum hain par hamare saath ladne ke liye toh ye bache hi nahi...


ACCHUTA ki baat sun sabhi muskurate hue piche palte jahan is waqt DORIAN,GASTON,UBEL aur TRISTEN us bhavar me fase behoshi ki godh me jaane hi waale the par tabhi..

ALFREEN ne apna haath uthaya aur uske waisa karte hi woh tufaan ekdum se khatm hi gaya aur..


DHAAPPPP....

woh chaaron neeche zamin par gir chuke the...

aankhein band kar lambi lambi saansein lete hue un chaaron ko kuch waqt laga normal hone me par normal hote hi jaise woh sab uthe aur ek nazar ALFREEN ko dar aur ghusse ke mile jule bhaav ke saath dekhne ke baad jab unki aankhein chaaron taraf ghumi toh woh dar aur ghussa next level tak badh chuka tha..

unke sabhi followers raakh ban zamin par pade jo hue the...

is scene ko dekh ghusse se kamkapate hue woh un sabhi laashon ke aage khade un DARK WARRIORS ke hatyare matlab ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY, HIDA, MABEL aur SHOWHI ko ghurne lage jispar..


ACCHUTA-kya look hai..saalon,gaa**d fati padi hai par akad nahi gayi.. koi naa,jaan ke saath saath akad bhi nikal hi jaayegi...

TRISTAN-hamare WARRIORS ko maarkar tujhe lagta hai ki tu,maamuli mortal hume maar sakega.... sirf mujh akele ko hi ek pal lagega tujhe aur tere saathiyon ko khatm karenge..

ACCHUTA-aisa..try karle phir...


KRRRRRRRRRR..

ACCHUTA ki baat puri hui hi thi ki tabhi TRISTEN ke haathon se ek death ray nikal bijli ki gati se uski taraf badh chuka tha par isse pehle ki woh ray ACCHUTA ko touch bhi kar paata..

ek adrishya kawach se joki ACCHUTA ke theek aage laga tha,usse takrakar woh ray wahin rook gaya..

ye dekh pehle toh bohot zyada shock hua TRISTEN par phir agle hi pal usne dobara 10 times zyada intensity ke saath death ray nahi balki death beam se ACCHUTA par waar kar diya par natija..

same....

woh death beam ACCHUTA ke saamne lage kawach se takrakar wahin rook chuki thi aur ye dekh jahan ek taraf TRISTEN hadh se zyada chakit reh gaya tha,wahin apne saathi ko fail hote dekh UBEL, GASTON aur DORIAN ne bhi apne apne haathon ko aage kar death beams se ACCHUTA par attack kar diya...

par natija..same...un chaaron ki bhi beams ACCHUTA ke theek aage aakar rook chuki thi...

apni puri taakat lagane ke baad bhi woh chaaron us SHIELD ko jab pierce karne me naakamiyab rahe toh waise hi apne apne haathon ko aage kar beams release karte hue woh sab ACCHUTA ko dekhne lage jispar muskurate hue..


ACCHUTA-chehre par ghussa par aankhon ne taarif..waise mai is taarif ka hakdar nahi hun,ye mere baaju me khada mera bhai hai..

SLUNDER..

issine mere aage apni shakti se bani SHIELD lagayi hai..

aur tum chaaron chaaho toh saalon tak apni puri GAA*D tak ka zor lagalo,phir bhi is SHIELD ko penetrate karna toh door,isme ek crack tak nahi kar paaoge...

HIDA-par hum bohot kuch kar sakte hain..


HIDA ne apni baat bolte hue hi pehle ek jhatke me hi GASTON,UBEL, DORIAN aur TRISTEN ki beams ko cut kar diya aur aisa hote hi woh chaaron ladhkhada se gaye...

aur ussi ladkhadahat ka faayda uthate hue HIDA, SLUNDER, MABEL aur BRAWNY ne apne haath aage kar DESTRUCTION RAYS un chaaron par release kar diye..

jab tak TRISTEN, UBEL, GASTON aur DORIAN sambhal paate,woh chaaron destruction rays untak pahunch chuki thi..

un chaaron ko hi apna anth dikhne laga tha par tabhi..


GADGADGADGAD.....DHAAPPPP..


un chaaron ke theek saamne ek zordar lightning shower hui jisne unki taraf badh rahe rays ko khatm kar diya aur aisa hote hi us lightning shower ke theek beecho beech un chaaron ki taraf mooh kiye aasman se neeche jump kiya ek naye KAALI SHAKTI ke numainde ne..

kaale labadon me dhaka woh naya shaksh sir me bhi hoodie pehne un chaaron ki taraf mooh kiye khada tha...

khair, jaise hi woh shaksh TRISTEN, UBEL, GASTON aur DORIAN ke saamne prakat hua toh uske agle hi pal woh chaaron uske samman me apne apne ghutno par aa chuke the...

wahin peeche se aur side se is nayi entry ko dekh ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY, HIDA, MABEL, ALFREEN aur SHOWHI kaafi hairan hue the..

saath hi saath jis tarah se usne un sabke release kiye destruction rays ko khatm kiya tha,usse unhe uski shakti ka andaza bhi ho chuka tha..

kuch seconds usse piche se ghurte rehne ke baad..


ACCHUTA-ab ye kaun chaman aaya hamare bahar me..


ACCHUTA ki baat par koi kuch kehta ki tabhi us naye shaksh ne hoodie ko neeche kiya aur aisa kar woh dheere se palatne laga and while in this turning process...


MERE DARK WARRIORS,MERE FOLLOWERS MUJHE "GAFFER"KEHKAR RESPECT DETE HAIN PAR TUM SAB MUJHE KISI AUR NAAM SE JAANTE HO..


ye baat bolte hue woh unknown shaksh ACCHUTA & company ki taraf palat gaya tha aur uske aisa karte hi un sabka mooh puri tarah khul chuka tha.

wahin un sabke expressions ka maza lekar muskurate hue..


UNKNOWN-yes....your's truly...VALDIS......





PLANET-COURIOUS


PLACE-THE MOTHER TREE






ENOUGH HAVE WE TALKED..NOW,LESSON TIME..


ALIUM planet aur uske banane ka disclosure karne ke baad ab baari thi us kaam ki jiske liye ASMODEUS yahan aaya tha aur isiliye aage kya hoga,ye batane ke baad continue karte hue...


ASMODEUS-ANALIA,BHUVIKA....


ASMODEUS ke naam lete hi mere just piche ANALIA aur BHUVIKA prakat ho chuke the jiske baad..


ASMODEUS-ye dono apne life se judi ek bohot important baat tumse share karenge..

woh baat jo tumhe bas ek kahani ke taur par upari dhang se maalum hai,but now you should know that exact part with all the inside news...

haan,is process me tumhe do naye secrets bhi pata chalne waala hai...

anyways,tumhare next stop ALIUM ke liye ANALIA aur BHUVIKA ki story aur usse create hua lesson bohot important hai...

samjho,sikho, apply karo..

aur kyunki tum THE CHOSEN ONE ho, isiliye ye learning process instant aur fast hone waala hai...

abse theek 1 ghante ke baad mai tumhara test lunga..

and trust me,you will fail..and then,will try again and again and again..

tab tak jab tak tum kaamiyab nahi ho jaate...

jitna waqt lena chaaho,le sakte ho but yaad rahe,tumne apne friends ko jahan bheja hai,wahan woh excel toh kar sakte hain but sirf ek certain time period ke liye..

after that,they will suffer...aur isiliye ALIUM planet ke wajud ko khatm kar tumhe unke paas sahi time me pahunchna hi padega warna this time,you will lose your friends and with them your sister for always...


ASMODEUS ki baat sun mere aankhon ne ek chingari si dehek gayi thi jiske baad..


MAI-ASMODEUS.. GOD'S SON...tum meri behen ki nahi,apne universe ki chinta karo..

kyunki agar meri behen ko kuch hua toh is bramhaand ko khatra VIDEOUS se nahi,mujhse hoga..

isiliye,never and i mean never warn me of anything.. because i don't give a crap...


jahan ASMODEUS jisse unchi awaaz me toh door ki baat hai,koi nazar uthakar bhi baat nahi karta,usse ki gayi meri baat sun ANALIA aur BHUVIKA dono hi kaafi ghabra gaye the wahin ASMODEUS halka muskura diya aur theek mere saamne pahunch..


ASMODEUS-listen kid... bramhaand ko kisse khatra ho sakta hai aur kisse nahi,ye tum mujhe mat batao...

haan,tum ho mere FATHER GOD ke SUCCESSOR but i am ASMODEUS...

unka ansh..aur jo sanak tumme hai,woh meri wajah se hi hai..

but ek fark hai..tumme paagalpan hai par paagalpan khud mujhse hai..

I created it...so you should take all the crap, especially when ASMODEUS gives it...

1 ghanta..learn...


SHHHWHHHH...

is baat aur waqt ka ultimetam dete hue ASMODEUS gayab ho chuka tha jiske baad jab maine piche palat ANALIA aur BHUVIKA ko dekha toh...


ANALIA-wow.. tum ab bhi zinda ho...aadhi jung toh yahin jeet gaye tum...

MAI-cut the bullshit and let's begin,shall we...???


meri baat sun ek lambi saans chhod...


BHUVIKA-hamari kahani ka woh bhaag toh yaad hi hoga tumhe jab LORD OF ANGELS ne mujhe bachane ke liye ANALIA ke andar daal diya tha...

MAI-hmm...

ANALIA-ye bhi pata hoga tumhe ki alag alag points me kabhi SPEAR ke madhyam se toh kabhi COURIN fruit ke maadhyam se dono lords ek dusre se aage ke plans share karte the..

unhi plans me se ek me tha meri behen ka mere andar samavesh karana...

par ye aasan nahi tha.. aur woh isiliye kyunki mai COURIOUS WAASI hun..

one of the PUREST SOULS of this universe..

aur BHUVIKA us waqt kaali shakti se grast thi...

aur isiliye

HIRO BHAVATI aur SIRO BHAVATI..

ye do behadh hi strong spells ko mix kar LORD OF ANGELS ne ek naya SPELL banaya..

HISIRO BHAVATI...

aur is SPELL ki madad se unhone BHUVIKA ko mere andar chuppa diya...

MAI-hang on a sec...HIRO BHAVATI,SIRO BHAVATI...???kya mai jo soch raha hun,ye dono wahi SPELLS hai...

ANALIA-bilkul...

HIRO BHAVATI...matlab HIDE SPELL..

aur SIRO BHAVATI....matlab SHOW SPELL...


LORD ne BHUVIKA ke andar nihit kaali shakti ko in dono SPELLS ke mishran se naa sirf chuppa diya balki SHOW SPELL ke mile hone ki wajah se unhone meri body me behti WHITE ENERGY ko ye dikhaya ki BHUVIKA me bhi WHITE ENERGY hai...

MAI-mera sawal ye tha hi nahi...???MIRO waasi inhi do shaktiyon mese kisi ek ke saath paida hote hain...

aisa kyun..???

BHUVIKA-uske liye tumhe aage ki kahani janani hogi...

kya woh drishya spasht yaad hai tumhe jab maine BEELZEBUB ko jab woh ek pure DEVIL tha,maara tha..


haan me sir hilaya maine jiske baad..


BHUVIKA-us waqt mai dikh zaroor sampurn rahi thi,par asal me thi nahi...

meri behen ke andar rehne ki wajah se mera sharir ek COURIOUS WAASI ke roop me toh pura ho chuka tha,par kaali shakti tab bhi mere andar moujud thi jisse bas LORD ke HIDE/SHOW spell ne mere andar behte WHITE ENERGY ko dikhne aur mehsoos karne se roka hua tha...

mujhe usse khudse completely nikalna zaroori tha...aur ye zimma uthaya BEELZEBUB ne...

jab maine usse maara toh aisa karte waqt maine apne andar beh rahi kaali shakti bhi usme transfer kar diya...

mujhe laga tha ki woh mujhe aisa karne se rokega par usne saharsh meri taklif khudme samet li..

uska ye sacrifice hi woh kaaran tha jiski wajah se GOD ne usse maaf karte hue THE HEIR OF WHITE ENERGY ke khitaab se nawaza tha..

khair,mai azaad toh ho gayi par jaisi meri journey rahi thi,jis tarah mere andar WHITE ENERGY ka pravah shuru hua tha, kyunki woh normal nahi tha, isiliye mujhme side effects laazmi the aur woh aaye bhi..

COURIOUS WAASIYON ki shakti peace ke liye hoti hai aur isiliye shaant hoti hai par meri WHITE ENERGY vinaashak thi...

jab bhi meri shakti unstable hoti thi toh pura COURIOUS hil jaaya karta tha..

sirf ANALIA ka sparsh hi tha jo meri shaktiyon ko shaant kar paata tha...

aur isiliye taaki meri shakti stable ho jaaye,baaki COURIOUS WAASIYON ki tarah shaant ho jaaye,LORD OF ANGELS ne ek yukti sochi..

MAI-let me guess..unhone tumhari UNSTABLE POWERS se banaya ek naya aur COURIOUS se milta julta PLANET..naam,MIRO...

aur kyunki woh planet ek COURIOUS WAASI se ban raha tha, isiliye wahan ke logon ko bhi ussi chiz se shakti mil sakti thi jisse ek COURIOUS WAASI ko milti hai..

THE COURIN FRUIT...abaadi bhi tum dono ke planets ki ek si hi hai..iska bhi same hi reason hai..right...!!!

ANALIA-bilkul sahi...ab aate hain us mudde par jo tumhare liye hamara lesson hai...

HISIRO BHAVATI...woh SPELL jisse meri behen mere andar kaali shakti hone ke baad bhi araam se reh rahi thi..

itna hi nahi,uski body bhi WHITE ENERGY se recover ho rahi thi...

tumhe bhi ussi SPELL ko use me laate hue apni SWORD ko apne andar chuppana hai..

and at the same time,tumhe us PLANET ko SWORD ki shakti jitni hi powerful khudki shakti ko SHOW karna hai..

matlab tumhe khudko itna powerful show karna hai jitni ki tumhari SWORD hai...

is process me wahan tum inside out check kiye jaaoge and let me tell you,woh checking out tumhare liye unbearable pain bhi laayega aur tumhare SHOW/HIDE SPELL ki taakat aur asar bhi last limit tak check karega...

aur us haalat me tumhe apne andar ghum rahe us jagah ke unwanted power ko kheench kar bahar nikalna hai..

tumhare aisa karte hi us PLANET ka guard kuch palon ke liye kamzor ho jaayega..

aisa hote hi SWORD apni woh shakti jo us jagah ki dharti par kaid hai,usse resurrect kar legi...

jab tumhe SWORD ki real taakat feel hone lage toh turant usse nikaalte hue ALIUM ki dharti par apni puri taakat lagate hue gaad dena...

woh planet destroy ho jaayega..

ab shuru karo... paused CEREBRATION me baith HISIRO BHAVATI SPELL ko man hi man uccharit karte hue uski shakti ko apne chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes, REFINER POWERS,BLACK ENERGY, HELL'S BLAZING FIRE AURA, ERRAPEL ki energy and most importantly apni ALOUKIK SHAKTIYON ke saath jodna shuru karo...

MAI-ek sawal reh gaya...and i think the most important question...tumhare planet ki aabadi 10000 hai par MIRO ki abaadi 10001..

LORD OF ANGELS jis kaam me shaamil hain,jisme woh COURIOUS ka ek identical planet banate hain aur woh bhi COURIOUS ke MOTHER TREE se link karkar..

aise me ye ek extra bande ka difference coincidence nahi ho sakta.

am i right aur am i right...???


meri baat sun ek pal ke liye ANALIA aur BHUVIKA ki nazaren mili jiske baad wapas mujhe dekh..


BHUVIKA-tum wakayi THE CHOSEN ONE ho RAAZ...choti se choti baat bhi kitni important ho sakti hai,tumhe andaza rehta hai is baat ka...???

MAI-sirf taarif ho karogi yaa phir mujhe mere puche sawal ka jawab bhi milega...

BHUVIKA-perfect balance sirf identical planets banane se nahi hota...

uske liye un dono planets ke beech ek strong connection ki zaroorat hai...

waisa connection jaisa MOTHER TREE ka uske fruits se hota hai...

MAI-aur is case me woh connection hai SHOWHI.... right...???

isiliye woh 10000 ke baad paida hone waala 1 hai...

isiliye hi woh dono SHOW aur HIDE shaktiyon ka eklouta owner hai...

SHOW/HIDE..inhi dono shaktiyon se naam bhi bana hai uska...

but the main question is, SHOWHI woh connection bana kaise...???

BHUVIKA-mere dwara...jab MIRO naya bana toh meri unstability usse ek curse ki tarah mili..

wahan lagatar bhukamp aane lage...waise condition me wahan life form karna impossible tha...

isiliye us curse ko mitane ke liye zaroorat thi usse banane waale ke ek sacrifice ki...mere sacrifice ki...

jis MOTHER TREE ke neeche hum is waqt hain aur jiske roots MIRO se jude hue hain,maine inke aage ek waada kiya...

aur mere aisa karte hi inhone MIRO me ho rahe constant earth quakes temporarily band kar diye..

sacrifice kya hoga,ye bhi inhone mere dreams ke through mujhe bata diya tha aur sahi waqt aane par maine BEELZEBUB ki madad se woh sacrifice de diya...

MAI-kya sacrifice aur us sacrifice se SHOWHI ka kya lena dena..???


BHUVIKA-



har bada kaam KURBAANI LETA HAI....

MIRO ne meri us kurbaani ko khudme SAMETA HAI....

woh RAAZ jisse khudse door rakhna pada mujhe...

SHOWHI.......mere aur BEELZEBUB ka BETA HAI...

















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....


















AAPKA APNA V...J....
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI WORLD DOOR KE THROUGH THE LAND NAAM KE PLANET ME PAHUNCHTI HAI,DUSRI TARAF ALFREEN & PARTY THE GOLETH PLANET ME HAI WAHIN TEESRI TARAF ASMODEUS RAAZ SE APNE PITAH KA EK ANCIENT SECRET SHARE KARTA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-3


(THE SACRIFICE & THE PERFECT EPILOGUE)



UPDATE-160



PLANET- THE LAND


PLACE-THE LAND





JWADIHAGAM

MERGE


aankhen band kar apne haathon ko neeche zamin me dhasate hue man me bola ye SPELL MAHI ne aur uske aisa karte hi uske neeche nane planet ki puri dharti shake karne lagi..

ye dekh pehle toh MAHI bohot khush hui..usse laga ki neeche ki dharti khudko uthate hue upar akash ki jagah bane LAND ki taraf badhne waali hai but kuch hi palon me uski ye galatfehmi door ho gayi..

aur woh isiliye kyunki MAHI ke SPELL ke asar se THE LAND ki dharti par cracks aane lage..

uske vibrations se wahan moujud paani ke har shroth me baadh aane lagi...

in short,THE LAND naam ke planet ka LAND collapse ki raah me badh chala tha aur ye dekh MAHI ne turant apne SPELL ke pravah aur asar ko rok diya...

uske aisa karte hi jab kuch der baad wahan sab back to normal hua toh..


MAHI-oh boy...ye jagah toh mere SPELL ki energy ko jhel hi nahi paa rahi hai..

zyada pressure se iska core bhi blast ho sakta hai...

ab karun toh karun kya...???


JHARNE KA PAANI JAB EK CERTAIN HIGHT SE NEECHE GIRTA HAI TOH USKI MANSHA RAASTE PAR KHADE CHATTANO KO TODNE KI NAHI HOTI..

WOH BAS APNA KAAM KARTA HAI...BEHTE HUE NEECHE GIRTA HAI...

PAR US PROCESS ME WOH PAANI JISKI DHAAR SE INSAAN KA SKIN TAK NAHI FATHTHI,CHATTAN TAK TOOT JAATE HAIN...

ZAROORAT HOTI HAI TOH BAS USSI JHARNE SE NIKALTE PAANI KE PRAVAH KI...EK HI LAY AUR GATI ME NIRANTAR PRAVAH KI..

NAA KAM,NAA, ZYADA...

UMMID HAI UDAHARAN KAAM AAYEGA....



ye thi meri awaaz jo MAHI ke andar gunj uthi aur jisse sun uske face par jahan ab tak bas chinta ki rekhayen thi,wahan ab smile naach uthi thi..

ek baar phir neeche baith zamin par apne haath ko dhasaate hue uski aankhein band ho chuki thi aur..


KODHAUYEN....

COMPLETE CONNECTION....





PLANET- GOLETH


PLACE- THE DARK DIFFUSION





JWALAM RADAHAM

BURN TO ASHES


apne ek haath ko ALFREEN ki taraf kar man hi man uccharit kiya is SPELL ko DORIAN ne jiske baad uske haathon se ek kaale dhuen ki ray nikal tezi se ALFREEN ki taraf badh gayi..

wahin ALFREEN jiske face par waise bhi ek evil smile naach rahi thi, DORIAN ki black ray woh smile thodi aur gehri ho gayi.

apni taraf aati us ray ko dekhte hue ALFREEN ke aankhon ki putliyan halki aur kaali ho gayi aur aisa hote hi...

us ray me ek kampan hona shuru ho gaya aur dekhte hi dekhte woh ray solid shape lete hue toot kar bikhar gayi...

is scene ko dekh DORIAN aur uske sabhi saathi hairan toh hue hi par saath hi saath un sabke man me ALFREEN ko lekar halki si ghabrahat bhi bhar chuki thi..

aur iska reason us ray ka hasr tha..

ray se bachna,yaa usse kaatna ek baat hoti hai par jo us ray ke saath ALFREEN ne kiye tha,us POWER DISMANTLING karna kehte hain..

ye ek tarika hota hai jiske through saamne khada opponent batata hai ki he or she is beyond any competition...

aur ab ALFREEN ka ye message un saare DEMONS aur DARK WARRIORS ko saaf mil chuka tha..

halke nervousness ke baad us dar ko shrug out karte hue DORIAN aur uske saath is baar GASTON ne bhi saath milkar ALFREEN par humla karne ka socha but isse pehle ki woh dono kuch karte...


FFFFOOOFOOOOFOOOOO..


chaaron taraf tez aandhi chalne lagi thi...kyunki DARK DIFFUSION ek DARK SACRED CONSTANT RITUAL ki tarah hai, isiliye usse toh ys aandhi se fark nahi pada par aisa wahan moujud kisi bhi DARK WARRIOR ke liye nahi kaha jaa sakta tha..

us aandhi me ek immensely strong push power thi jiske aggressive touch se saare DARK WARRIORS ke pair ladkhadate hue piche hone lag gaye the...

DORIAN,GASTON,UBEL aur TRISTEN toh waise apni jagah par bane hue the par woh sab us chal rahi aandhi ke strong push power ki force achi tarah apne in out, dono jagahon par feel kar paa rahe the..

ALFREEN jiski aankhon ki putliyan is waqt lagatar flip hoti hyi kabhi black aur kabhi white ho rahi thi,woh paida kar rahi thi ye aandhi jiske asar ki wajah se DORIAN aur GASTON koi bhi aakramak SPELL use nahi kar sakte the..

bohot kam palon me aur bina kisi aggressive attack ke hi ALFREEN ne un sabko bata diya tha ki woh kitni powerful hai..

is waqt ALFREEN ki har pal badalti aankhon ki putliyon ko dekh aur uski taakat ke ek chote se namune ko feel kar DORIAN aur GASTON ki haalat kharab ho chuki thi...

wahin unke saath khade UBEL aur TRISTEN bhi ALFREEN ki shakti pradarshan se kaafi shock toh the hi par GASTON aur DORIAN se ulat,woh dare nahi balki ghussa the..

ALFREEN unhi ke territory me aakar unke hi saathiyon ki haalat kharab kar rahi thi,ye unki ehem par chot thi aur isiliye..


TRISTEN-

GANDANEMAH VAAYUYEM

REVERSE THE WIND

UBEL-

VAAYUYEM ANGAM KHANDAM

WIND BLADE BODY CUTS


ALFREEN ke banaye tufaan ki hawa ko ussiki taraf modne ka spell uccharit kiya tha TRISTEN ne..

aisa kar woh ALFREEN ko apni takaat ka namuna dikhana chahta tha..

wahin TRISTEN ke SPELL ki shakti ko hi use karte hue apna SPELL uccharan kiya tha UBEL ne..

TRISTEN ke spell se jo wind ka bahav wapas ALFREEN ki taraf mudne waala tha, UBEL ussi wind ko chote chote invisible blades me badalte hue ALFREEN ke body ko pieces me cut karma chahta tha..

khair, dono ke SPELL uccharan karne ke baad jo hua,usse dekh TRISTEN aur UBEL, dono ke hi faces par smile naach uthi thi...

kyunki jaisa TRISTEN ne chaha tha,wahi hua..

woh tufaan jo ab tak sirf unke aur unke saathiyon ki taraf thi,ab uska rookh badalte hue ALFREEN ki taraf ho chuka tha...

tezi se badhta hua woh tufaan ab ALFREEN ke kareeb pahunch chuka tha..

wahin jab aisa hua toh UBEL ka SPELL bhi kaam me aane laga..

us tufaan me ghum rahe wind ne bohot se invisible blades ban gaye jo apne tez dhaar ke saath ALFREEN ke sharir ko cheerne faadne ke liye badh chuke the..

aur ALFREEN,in sabke dauran woh bilkul shaant khadi thi..

par jaise hi woh tufaan aur usme chuppe invisible blades uske paas pahunche toh flying kiss dene ki tarah apne ek haath ko apne honthon ke paas laaya usne aur aisa kar ek tez phoonk maari ALFREEN ne...

ye fhoonk asal me ALFREEN ki pure BLACK ki WILD ANIMOSITY POWER thi jo jaise hi bahar nikli,toh apne swabhav ke tahat saamne dikh rahe ek maatr opponent joki woh tufaan tha,usse khudme lapet liye us power ne..

uske aisa karte hi us tufaan me chuppe woh saare invisible blades ek jhatke me toot chuke the..

par woh ANIMOSITY POWER yahin nahi rooki..ek pal ke duswe hisse me woh shakti us tufaan ko liye TRISTEN, UBEL,GASTON aur DORIAN ke paas pahunch chuki thi aur isse pehle ki woh sab kuch samajh paate, woh us tufaan ki giraft me lapete jaa chuke the..

ek second me hi woh chaaron hawa me us tufaan ke andar fase idhar udhar ghum rahe the..

khudko niyantrit kar woh chaaron us tufaan se bahar aane ki koshish karne lage par ALFREEN ki ANIMOSITY POWER ne unhe aisa karne se rok diya..

un chaaron ki saari taakat jaise baandh si di thi ALFREEN ne..

aur isiliye sirf kuch hi der me un chaaron ko chakkar aane laga..

wahin apne superiors ko yun fase dekh wahan moujud 100s of dark WARRIORS ALFREEN par waar karne ko hue par tabhi....


SOOBHHHH......


un sabko apne ird gird bhi ek tez tufaan uththa feel hua..

par fark ye tha ki woh tufaan unhe khudme lapete hue nahi tha,balki unke ird gird ek circle bana unhe gherte hua ghum raha tha lekin woh sab ye bhi feel kar rahe the ki woh ghera har guzarte pal ke saath chota hote hue unke kareeb aate jaa raha tha aur tabhi...


KHACCHHHH.....

is ek saamuhik awaaz ke ek saath darjan bhar DARK WARRIORS ka sir kaththe hue neeche zamin par gir chuka tha..

aur is scene ko dekh baaki ke ab tak sahi salamat bache DARK WARRIORS ki aankhen fath si gayi thi...

kuch dikha toh tha hi nahi un sabko..

par jab kuch seconds ke shock ke baad woh sab back to normal hone lage tab gayi un sabki nazar saamne jahan is waqt khada tha BRAWNY..

uske haath me thi WHITE ENERGY se bani tez chamakti hui ek badi si knife jiske edge se is waqt khoon tapak raha tha joki obviously kate sir liye mare pade DARK WARRIORS ka tha...

wahin us tapak rahe khoon ko jhatak blade saaf karte hue..


BRAWNY-dikh nahi raha tha kya ki hamari friend tumhare chaar fathers ke saath busy hai..

ladhne ka shouk hai toh hum hai naa...


BRAWNY ki baat aur apne saathiyon ko mara pada dekh ghusse we dahak gayi baaki saare DARK WARRIORS ki aankhen par woh sab kuch karte ki tabhi...


KHACCHHHH..KHACCHHHHH..KHACCHHHHH....

ek ke baad ek half of a second ke antaral me ye awaaz kayi baar ubhri aur jab woh awaaz rooki toh BRAWNY ke baaju me khade the HIDA, ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur MABEL jinke haathon me bhi BRAWNY ki hi tarah WHITE ENERGY se bani knife thi aur jiske edge se BRAWNY ke knife ki tarah khoon tapak raha tha...

wahin ab tak SHOWHI bhi araam se chalta hua un sake paas aa chuka tha..

khair,un sabne bhi apne knife ko jhatakte hue usme laga khoon usse alag kiya aur nazar saamne ki taraf ki jahan is waqt woh saare 100s of DARK WARRIORS joki kuch der pehle tak unpar has rahe the,unki laash padi hui thi...

aur dekhte hi dekhte un saare laashon me jaisa ki DARK WARRIORS ke saath unke marne ke baad hota hai,aag lag gayi..

kuch hi palon me woh saari laashen raakh me badal chuki thi aur ye dekh..


ACCHUTA-arre yaaron,inke saath ladhne ke liye toh hum hain par hamare saath ladne ke liye toh ye bache hi nahi...


ACCHUTA ki baat sun sabhi muskurate hue piche palte jahan is waqt DORIAN,GASTON,UBEL aur TRISTEN us bhavar me fase behoshi ki godh me jaane hi waale the par tabhi..

ALFREEN ne apna haath uthaya aur uske waisa karte hi woh tufaan ekdum se khatm hi gaya aur..


DHAAPPPP....

woh chaaron neeche zamin par gir chuke the...

aankhein band kar lambi lambi saansein lete hue un chaaron ko kuch waqt laga normal hone me par normal hote hi jaise woh sab uthe aur ek nazar ALFREEN ko dar aur ghusse ke mile jule bhaav ke saath dekhne ke baad jab unki aankhein chaaron taraf ghumi toh woh dar aur ghussa next level tak badh chuka tha..

unke sabhi followers raakh ban zamin par pade jo hue the...

is scene ko dekh ghusse se kamkapate hue woh un sabhi laashon ke aage khade un DARK WARRIORS ke hatyare matlab ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY, HIDA, MABEL aur SHOWHI ko ghurne lage jispar..


ACCHUTA-kya look hai..saalon,gaa**d fati padi hai par akad nahi gayi.. koi naa,jaan ke saath saath akad bhi nikal hi jaayegi...

TRISTAN-hamare WARRIORS ko maarkar tujhe lagta hai ki tu,maamuli mortal hume maar sakega.... sirf mujh akele ko hi ek pal lagega tujhe aur tere saathiyon ko khatm karenge..

ACCHUTA-aisa..try karle phir...


KRRRRRRRRRR..

ACCHUTA ki baat puri hui hi thi ki tabhi TRISTEN ke haathon se ek death ray nikal bijli ki gati se uski taraf badh chuka tha par isse pehle ki woh ray ACCHUTA ko touch bhi kar paata..

ek adrishya kawach se joki ACCHUTA ke theek aage laga tha,usse takrakar woh ray wahin rook gaya..

ye dekh pehle toh bohot zyada shock hua TRISTEN par phir agle hi pal usne dobara 10 times zyada intensity ke saath death ray nahi balki death beam se ACCHUTA par waar kar diya par natija..

same....

woh death beam ACCHUTA ke saamne lage kawach se takrakar wahin rook chuki thi aur ye dekh jahan ek taraf TRISTEN hadh se zyada chakit reh gaya tha,wahin apne saathi ko fail hote dekh UBEL, GASTON aur DORIAN ne bhi apne apne haathon ko aage kar death beams se ACCHUTA par attack kar diya...

par natija..same...un chaaron ki bhi beams ACCHUTA ke theek aage aakar rook chuki thi...

apni puri taakat lagane ke baad bhi woh chaaron us SHIELD ko jab pierce karne me naakamiyab rahe toh waise hi apne apne haathon ko aage kar beams release karte hue woh sab ACCHUTA ko dekhne lage jispar muskurate hue..


ACCHUTA-chehre par ghussa par aankhon ne taarif..waise mai is taarif ka hakdar nahi hun,ye mere baaju me khada mera bhai hai..

SLUNDER..

issine mere aage apni shakti se bani SHIELD lagayi hai..

aur tum chaaron chaaho toh saalon tak apni puri GAA*D tak ka zor lagalo,phir bhi is SHIELD ko penetrate karna toh door,isme ek crack tak nahi kar paaoge...

HIDA-par hum bohot kuch kar sakte hain..


HIDA ne apni baat bolte hue hi pehle ek jhatke me hi GASTON,UBEL, DORIAN aur TRISTEN ki beams ko cut kar diya aur aisa hote hi woh chaaron ladhkhada se gaye...

aur ussi ladkhadahat ka faayda uthate hue HIDA, SLUNDER, MABEL aur BRAWNY ne apne haath aage kar DESTRUCTION RAYS un chaaron par release kar diye..

jab tak TRISTEN, UBEL, GASTON aur DORIAN sambhal paate,woh chaaron destruction rays untak pahunch chuki thi..

un chaaron ko hi apna anth dikhne laga tha par tabhi..


GADGADGADGAD.....DHAAPPPP..


un chaaron ke theek saamne ek zordar lightning shower hui jisne unki taraf badh rahe rays ko khatm kar diya aur aisa hote hi us lightning shower ke theek beecho beech un chaaron ki taraf mooh kiye aasman se neeche jump kiya ek naye KAALI SHAKTI ke numainde ne..

kaale labadon me dhaka woh naya shaksh sir me bhi hoodie pehne un chaaron ki taraf mooh kiye khada tha...

khair, jaise hi woh shaksh TRISTEN, UBEL, GASTON aur DORIAN ke saamne prakat hua toh uske agle hi pal woh chaaron uske samman me apne apne ghutno par aa chuke the...

wahin peeche se aur side se is nayi entry ko dekh ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY, HIDA, MABEL, ALFREEN aur SHOWHI kaafi hairan hue the..

saath hi saath jis tarah se usne un sabke release kiye destruction rays ko khatm kiya tha,usse unhe uski shakti ka andaza bhi ho chuka tha..

kuch seconds usse piche se ghurte rehne ke baad..


ACCHUTA-ab ye kaun chaman aaya hamare bahar me..


ACCHUTA ki baat par koi kuch kehta ki tabhi us naye shaksh ne hoodie ko neeche kiya aur aisa kar woh dheere se palatne laga and while in this turning process...


MERE DARK WARRIORS,MERE FOLLOWERS MUJHE "GAFFER"KEHKAR RESPECT DETE HAIN PAR TUM SAB MUJHE KISI AUR NAAM SE JAANTE HO..


ye baat bolte hue woh unknown shaksh ACCHUTA & company ki taraf palat gaya tha aur uske aisa karte hi un sabka mooh puri tarah khul chuka tha.

wahin un sabke expressions ka maza lekar muskurate hue..


UNKNOWN-yes....your's truly...VALDIS......





PLANET-COURIOUS


PLACE-THE MOTHER TREE






ENOUGH HAVE WE TALKED..NOW,LESSON TIME..


ALIUM planet aur uske banane ka disclosure karne ke baad ab baari thi us kaam ki jiske liye ASMODEUS yahan aaya tha aur isiliye aage kya hoga,ye batane ke baad continue karte hue...


ASMODEUS-ANALIA,BHUVIKA....


ASMODEUS ke naam lete hi mere just piche ANALIA aur BHUVIKA prakat ho chuke the jiske baad..


ASMODEUS-ye dono apne life se judi ek bohot important baat tumse share karenge..

woh baat jo tumhe bas ek kahani ke taur par upari dhang se maalum hai,but now you should know that exact part with all the inside news...

haan,is process me tumhe do naye secrets bhi pata chalne waala hai...

anyways,tumhare next stop ALIUM ke liye ANALIA aur BHUVIKA ki story aur usse create hua lesson bohot important hai...

samjho,sikho, apply karo..

aur kyunki tum THE CHOSEN ONE ho, isiliye ye learning process instant aur fast hone waala hai...

abse theek 1 ghante ke baad mai tumhara test lunga..

and trust me,you will fail..and then,will try again and again and again..

tab tak jab tak tum kaamiyab nahi ho jaate...

jitna waqt lena chaaho,le sakte ho but yaad rahe,tumne apne friends ko jahan bheja hai,wahan woh excel toh kar sakte hain but sirf ek certain time period ke liye..

after that,they will suffer...aur isiliye ALIUM planet ke wajud ko khatm kar tumhe unke paas sahi time me pahunchna hi padega warna this time,you will lose your friends and with them your sister for always...


ASMODEUS ki baat sun mere aankhon ne ek chingari si dehek gayi thi jiske baad..


MAI-ASMODEUS.. GOD'S SON...tum meri behen ki nahi,apne universe ki chinta karo..

kyunki agar meri behen ko kuch hua toh is bramhaand ko khatra VIDEOUS se nahi,mujhse hoga..

isiliye,never and i mean never warn me of anything.. because i don't give a crap...


jahan ASMODEUS jisse unchi awaaz me toh door ki baat hai,koi nazar uthakar bhi baat nahi karta,usse ki gayi meri baat sun ANALIA aur BHUVIKA dono hi kaafi ghabra gaye the wahin ASMODEUS halka muskura diya aur theek mere saamne pahunch..


ASMODEUS-listen kid... bramhaand ko kisse khatra ho sakta hai aur kisse nahi,ye tum mujhe mat batao...

haan,tum ho mere FATHER GOD ke SUCCESSOR but i am ASMODEUS...

unka ansh..aur jo sanak tumme hai,woh meri wajah se hi hai..

but ek fark hai..tumme paagalpan hai par paagalpan khud mujhse hai..

I created it...so you should take all the crap, especially when ASMODEUS gives it...

1 ghanta..learn...


SHHHWHHHH...

is baat aur waqt ka ultimetam dete hue ASMODEUS gayab ho chuka tha jiske baad jab maine piche palat ANALIA aur BHUVIKA ko dekha toh...


ANALIA-wow.. tum ab bhi zinda ho...aadhi jung toh yahin jeet gaye tum...

MAI-cut the bullshit and let's begin,shall we...???


meri baat sun ek lambi saans chhod...


BHUVIKA-hamari kahani ka woh bhaag toh yaad hi hoga tumhe jab LORD OF ANGELS ne mujhe bachane ke liye ANALIA ke andar daal diya tha...

MAI-hmm...

ANALIA-ye bhi pata hoga tumhe ki alag alag points me kabhi SPEAR ke madhyam se toh kabhi COURIN fruit ke maadhyam se dono lords ek dusre se aage ke plans share karte the..

unhi plans me se ek me tha meri behen ka mere andar samavesh karana...

par ye aasan nahi tha.. aur woh isiliye kyunki mai COURIOUS WAASI hun..

one of the PUREST SOULS of this universe..

aur BHUVIKA us waqt kaali shakti se grast thi...

aur isiliye

HIRO BHAVATI aur SIRO BHAVATI..

ye do behadh hi strong spells ko mix kar LORD OF ANGELS ne ek naya SPELL banaya..

HISIRO BHAVATI...

aur is SPELL ki madad se unhone BHUVIKA ko mere andar chuppa diya...

MAI-hang on a sec...HIRO BHAVATI,SIRO BHAVATI...???kya mai jo soch raha hun,ye dono wahi SPELLS hai...

ANALIA-bilkul...

HIRO BHAVATI...matlab HIDE SPELL..

aur SIRO BHAVATI....matlab SHOW SPELL...


LORD ne BHUVIKA ke andar nihit kaali shakti ko in dono SPELLS ke mishran se naa sirf chuppa diya balki SHOW SPELL ke mile hone ki wajah se unhone meri body me behti WHITE ENERGY ko ye dikhaya ki BHUVIKA me bhi WHITE ENERGY hai...

MAI-mera sawal ye tha hi nahi...???MIRO waasi inhi do shaktiyon mese kisi ek ke saath paida hote hain...

aisa kyun..???

BHUVIKA-uske liye tumhe aage ki kahani janani hogi...

kya woh drishya spasht yaad hai tumhe jab maine BEELZEBUB ko jab woh ek pure DEVIL tha,maara tha..


haan me sir hilaya maine jiske baad..


BHUVIKA-us waqt mai dikh zaroor sampurn rahi thi,par asal me thi nahi...

meri behen ke andar rehne ki wajah se mera sharir ek COURIOUS WAASI ke roop me toh pura ho chuka tha,par kaali shakti tab bhi mere andar moujud thi jisse bas LORD ke HIDE/SHOW spell ne mere andar behte WHITE ENERGY ko dikhne aur mehsoos karne se roka hua tha...

mujhe usse khudse completely nikalna zaroori tha...aur ye zimma uthaya BEELZEBUB ne...

jab maine usse maara toh aisa karte waqt maine apne andar beh rahi kaali shakti bhi usme transfer kar diya...

mujhe laga tha ki woh mujhe aisa karne se rokega par usne saharsh meri taklif khudme samet li..

uska ye sacrifice hi woh kaaran tha jiski wajah se GOD ne usse maaf karte hue THE HEIR OF WHITE ENERGY ke khitaab se nawaza tha..

khair,mai azaad toh ho gayi par jaisi meri journey rahi thi,jis tarah mere andar WHITE ENERGY ka pravah shuru hua tha, kyunki woh normal nahi tha, isiliye mujhme side effects laazmi the aur woh aaye bhi..

COURIOUS WAASIYON ki shakti peace ke liye hoti hai aur isiliye shaant hoti hai par meri WHITE ENERGY vinaashak thi...

jab bhi meri shakti unstable hoti thi toh pura COURIOUS hil jaaya karta tha..

sirf ANALIA ka sparsh hi tha jo meri shaktiyon ko shaant kar paata tha...

aur isiliye taaki meri shakti stable ho jaaye,baaki COURIOUS WAASIYON ki tarah shaant ho jaaye,LORD OF ANGELS ne ek yukti sochi..

MAI-let me guess..unhone tumhari UNSTABLE POWERS se banaya ek naya aur COURIOUS se milta julta PLANET..naam,MIRO...

aur kyunki woh planet ek COURIOUS WAASI se ban raha tha, isiliye wahan ke logon ko bhi ussi chiz se shakti mil sakti thi jisse ek COURIOUS WAASI ko milti hai..

THE COURIN FRUIT...abaadi bhi tum dono ke planets ki ek si hi hai..iska bhi same hi reason hai..right...!!!

ANALIA-bilkul sahi...ab aate hain us mudde par jo tumhare liye hamara lesson hai...

HISIRO BHAVATI...woh SPELL jisse meri behen mere andar kaali shakti hone ke baad bhi araam se reh rahi thi..

itna hi nahi,uski body bhi WHITE ENERGY se recover ho rahi thi...

tumhe bhi ussi SPELL ko use me laate hue apni SWORD ko apne andar chuppana hai..

and at the same time,tumhe us PLANET ko SWORD ki shakti jitni hi powerful khudki shakti ko SHOW karna hai..

matlab tumhe khudko itna powerful show karna hai jitni ki tumhari SWORD hai...

is process me wahan tum inside out check kiye jaaoge and let me tell you,woh checking out tumhare liye unbearable pain bhi laayega aur tumhare SHOW/HIDE SPELL ki taakat aur asar bhi last limit tak check karega...

aur us haalat me tumhe apne andar ghum rahe us jagah ke unwanted power ko kheench kar bahar nikalna hai..

tumhare aisa karte hi us PLANET ka guard kuch palon ke liye kamzor ho jaayega..

aisa hote hi SWORD apni woh shakti jo us jagah ki dharti par kaid hai,usse resurrect kar legi...

jab tumhe SWORD ki real taakat feel hone lage toh turant usse nikaalte hue ALIUM ki dharti par apni puri taakat lagate hue gaad dena...

woh planet destroy ho jaayega..

ab shuru karo... paused CEREBRATION me baith HISIRO BHAVATI SPELL ko man hi man uccharit karte hue uski shakti ko apne chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes, REFINER POWERS,BLACK ENERGY, HELL'S BLAZING FIRE AURA, ERRAPEL ki energy and most importantly apni ALOUKIK SHAKTIYON ke saath jodna shuru karo...

MAI-ek sawal reh gaya...and i think the most important question...tumhare planet ki aabadi 10000 hai par MIRO ki abaadi 10001..

LORD OF ANGELS jis kaam me shaamil hain,jisme woh COURIOUS ka ek identical planet banate hain aur woh bhi COURIOUS ke MOTHER TREE se link karkar..

aise me ye ek extra bande ka difference coincidence nahi ho sakta.

am i right aur am i right...???


meri baat sun ek pal ke liye ANALIA aur BHUVIKA ki nazaren mili jiske baad wapas mujhe dekh..


BHUVIKA-tum wakayi THE CHOSEN ONE ho RAAZ...choti se choti baat bhi kitni important ho sakti hai,tumhe andaza rehta hai is baat ka...???

MAI-sirf taarif ho karogi yaa phir mujhe mere puche sawal ka jawab bhi milega...

BHUVIKA-perfect balance sirf identical planets banane se nahi hota...

uske liye un dono planets ke beech ek strong connection ki zaroorat hai...

waisa connection jaisa MOTHER TREE ka uske fruits se hota hai...

MAI-aur is case me woh connection hai SHOWHI.... right...???

isiliye woh 10000 ke baad paida hone waala 1 hai...

isiliye hi woh dono SHOW aur HIDE shaktiyon ka eklouta owner hai...

SHOW/HIDE..inhi dono shaktiyon se naam bhi bana hai uska...

but the main question is, SHOWHI woh connection bana kaise...???

BHUVIKA-mere dwara...jab MIRO naya bana toh meri unstability usse ek curse ki tarah mili..

wahan lagatar bhukamp aane lage...waise condition me wahan life form karna impossible tha...

isiliye us curse ko mitane ke liye zaroorat thi usse banane waale ke ek sacrifice ki...mere sacrifice ki...

jis MOTHER TREE ke neeche hum is waqt hain aur jiske roots MIRO se jude hue hain,maine inke aage ek waada kiya...

aur mere aisa karte hi inhone MIRO me ho rahe constant earth quakes temporarily band kar diye..

sacrifice kya hoga,ye bhi inhone mere dreams ke through mujhe bata diya tha aur sahi waqt aane par maine BEELZEBUB ki madad se woh sacrifice de diya...

MAI-kya sacrifice aur us sacrifice se SHOWHI ka kya lena dena..???


BHUVIKA-



har bada kaam KURBAANI LETA HAI....

MIRO ne meri us kurbaani ko khudme SAMETA HAI....

woh RAAZ jisse khudse door rakhna pada mujhe...

SHOWHI.......mere aur BEELZEBUB ka BETA HAI...

















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....


















AAPKA APNA V...J....
O Teri ye showhai belzubab or bhuvika ka beta
 

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ASMODEUS-listen kid... bramhaand ko kisse khatra ho sakta hai aur kisse nahi,ye tum mujhe mat batao...

haan,tum ho mere FATHER GOD ke SUCCESSOR but i am ASMODEUS...

unka ansh..aur jo sanak tumme hai,woh meri wajah se hi hai..

but ek fark hai..tumme paagalpan hai par paagalpan khud mujhse hai..

I created it...so you should take all the crap, especially when ASMODEUS gives it...


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Aaj k 2 shock hila diya pure dimag ko koi soch b nhi skta tha esa b kuch ho skta tha

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI WORLD DOOR KE THROUGH THE LAND NAAM KE PLANET ME PAHUNCHTI HAI,DUSRI TARAF ALFREEN & PARTY THE GOLETH PLANET ME HAI WAHIN TEESRI TARAF ASMODEUS RAAZ SE APNE PITAH KA EK ANCIENT SECRET SHARE KARTA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-3


(THE SACRIFICE & THE PERFECT EPILOGUE)



UPDATE-160



PLANET- THE LAND


PLACE-THE LAND





JWADIHAGAM

MERGE


aankhen band kar apne haathon ko neeche zamin me dhasate hue man me bola ye SPELL MAHI ne aur uske aisa karte hi uske neeche nane planet ki puri dharti shake karne lagi..

ye dekh pehle toh MAHI bohot khush hui..usse laga ki neeche ki dharti khudko uthate hue upar akash ki jagah bane LAND ki taraf badhne waali hai but kuch hi palon me uski ye galatfehmi door ho gayi..

aur woh isiliye kyunki MAHI ke SPELL ke asar se THE LAND ki dharti par cracks aane lage..

uske vibrations se wahan moujud paani ke har shroth me baadh aane lagi...

in short,THE LAND naam ke planet ka LAND collapse ki raah me badh chala tha aur ye dekh MAHI ne turant apne SPELL ke pravah aur asar ko rok diya...

uske aisa karte hi jab kuch der baad wahan sab back to normal hua toh..


MAHI-oh boy...ye jagah toh mere SPELL ki energy ko jhel hi nahi paa rahi hai..

zyada pressure se iska core bhi blast ho sakta hai...

ab karun toh karun kya...???


JHARNE KA PAANI JAB EK CERTAIN HIGHT SE NEECHE GIRTA HAI TOH USKI MANSHA RAASTE PAR KHADE CHATTANO KO TODNE KI NAHI HOTI..

WOH BAS APNA KAAM KARTA HAI...BEHTE HUE NEECHE GIRTA HAI...

PAR US PROCESS ME WOH PAANI JISKI DHAAR SE INSAAN KA SKIN TAK NAHI FATHTHI,CHATTAN TAK TOOT JAATE HAIN...

ZAROORAT HOTI HAI TOH BAS USSI JHARNE SE NIKALTE PAANI KE PRAVAH KI...EK HI LAY AUR GATI ME NIRANTAR PRAVAH KI..

NAA KAM,NAA, ZYADA...

UMMID HAI UDAHARAN KAAM AAYEGA....



ye thi meri awaaz jo MAHI ke andar gunj uthi aur jisse sun uske face par jahan ab tak bas chinta ki rekhayen thi,wahan ab smile naach uthi thi..

ek baar phir neeche baith zamin par apne haath ko dhasaate hue uski aankhein band ho chuki thi aur..


KODHAUYEN....

COMPLETE CONNECTION....





PLANET- GOLETH


PLACE- THE DARK DIFFUSION





JWALAM RADAHAM

BURN TO ASHES


apne ek haath ko ALFREEN ki taraf kar man hi man uccharit kiya is SPELL ko DORIAN ne jiske baad uske haathon se ek kaale dhuen ki ray nikal tezi se ALFREEN ki taraf badh gayi..

wahin ALFREEN jiske face par waise bhi ek evil smile naach rahi thi, DORIAN ki black ray woh smile thodi aur gehri ho gayi.

apni taraf aati us ray ko dekhte hue ALFREEN ke aankhon ki putliyan halki aur kaali ho gayi aur aisa hote hi...

us ray me ek kampan hona shuru ho gaya aur dekhte hi dekhte woh ray solid shape lete hue toot kar bikhar gayi...

is scene ko dekh DORIAN aur uske sabhi saathi hairan toh hue hi par saath hi saath un sabke man me ALFREEN ko lekar halki si ghabrahat bhi bhar chuki thi..

aur iska reason us ray ka hasr tha..

ray se bachna,yaa usse kaatna ek baat hoti hai par jo us ray ke saath ALFREEN ne kiye tha,us POWER DISMANTLING karna kehte hain..

ye ek tarika hota hai jiske through saamne khada opponent batata hai ki he or she is beyond any competition...

aur ab ALFREEN ka ye message un saare DEMONS aur DARK WARRIORS ko saaf mil chuka tha..

halke nervousness ke baad us dar ko shrug out karte hue DORIAN aur uske saath is baar GASTON ne bhi saath milkar ALFREEN par humla karne ka socha but isse pehle ki woh dono kuch karte...


FFFFOOOFOOOOFOOOOO..


chaaron taraf tez aandhi chalne lagi thi...kyunki DARK DIFFUSION ek DARK SACRED CONSTANT RITUAL ki tarah hai, isiliye usse toh ys aandhi se fark nahi pada par aisa wahan moujud kisi bhi DARK WARRIOR ke liye nahi kaha jaa sakta tha..

us aandhi me ek immensely strong push power thi jiske aggressive touch se saare DARK WARRIORS ke pair ladkhadate hue piche hone lag gaye the...

DORIAN,GASTON,UBEL aur TRISTEN toh waise apni jagah par bane hue the par woh sab us chal rahi aandhi ke strong push power ki force achi tarah apne in out, dono jagahon par feel kar paa rahe the..

ALFREEN jiski aankhon ki putliyan is waqt lagatar flip hoti hyi kabhi black aur kabhi white ho rahi thi,woh paida kar rahi thi ye aandhi jiske asar ki wajah se DORIAN aur GASTON koi bhi aakramak SPELL use nahi kar sakte the..

bohot kam palon me aur bina kisi aggressive attack ke hi ALFREEN ne un sabko bata diya tha ki woh kitni powerful hai..

is waqt ALFREEN ki har pal badalti aankhon ki putliyon ko dekh aur uski taakat ke ek chote se namune ko feel kar DORIAN aur GASTON ki haalat kharab ho chuki thi...

wahin unke saath khade UBEL aur TRISTEN bhi ALFREEN ki shakti pradarshan se kaafi shock toh the hi par GASTON aur DORIAN se ulat,woh dare nahi balki ghussa the..

ALFREEN unhi ke territory me aakar unke hi saathiyon ki haalat kharab kar rahi thi,ye unki ehem par chot thi aur isiliye..


TRISTEN-

GANDANEMAH VAAYUYEM

REVERSE THE WIND

UBEL-

VAAYUYEM ANGAM KHANDAM

WIND BLADE BODY CUTS


ALFREEN ke banaye tufaan ki hawa ko ussiki taraf modne ka spell uccharit kiya tha TRISTEN ne..

aisa kar woh ALFREEN ko apni takaat ka namuna dikhana chahta tha..

wahin TRISTEN ke SPELL ki shakti ko hi use karte hue apna SPELL uccharan kiya tha UBEL ne..

TRISTEN ke spell se jo wind ka bahav wapas ALFREEN ki taraf mudne waala tha, UBEL ussi wind ko chote chote invisible blades me badalte hue ALFREEN ke body ko pieces me cut karma chahta tha..

khair, dono ke SPELL uccharan karne ke baad jo hua,usse dekh TRISTEN aur UBEL, dono ke hi faces par smile naach uthi thi...

kyunki jaisa TRISTEN ne chaha tha,wahi hua..

woh tufaan jo ab tak sirf unke aur unke saathiyon ki taraf thi,ab uska rookh badalte hue ALFREEN ki taraf ho chuka tha...

tezi se badhta hua woh tufaan ab ALFREEN ke kareeb pahunch chuka tha..

wahin jab aisa hua toh UBEL ka SPELL bhi kaam me aane laga..

us tufaan me ghum rahe wind ne bohot se invisible blades ban gaye jo apne tez dhaar ke saath ALFREEN ke sharir ko cheerne faadne ke liye badh chuke the..

aur ALFREEN,in sabke dauran woh bilkul shaant khadi thi..

par jaise hi woh tufaan aur usme chuppe invisible blades uske paas pahunche toh flying kiss dene ki tarah apne ek haath ko apne honthon ke paas laaya usne aur aisa kar ek tez phoonk maari ALFREEN ne...

ye fhoonk asal me ALFREEN ki pure BLACK ki WILD ANIMOSITY POWER thi jo jaise hi bahar nikli,toh apne swabhav ke tahat saamne dikh rahe ek maatr opponent joki woh tufaan tha,usse khudme lapet liye us power ne..

uske aisa karte hi us tufaan me chuppe woh saare invisible blades ek jhatke me toot chuke the..

par woh ANIMOSITY POWER yahin nahi rooki..ek pal ke duswe hisse me woh shakti us tufaan ko liye TRISTEN, UBEL,GASTON aur DORIAN ke paas pahunch chuki thi aur isse pehle ki woh sab kuch samajh paate, woh us tufaan ki giraft me lapete jaa chuke the..

ek second me hi woh chaaron hawa me us tufaan ke andar fase idhar udhar ghum rahe the..

khudko niyantrit kar woh chaaron us tufaan se bahar aane ki koshish karne lage par ALFREEN ki ANIMOSITY POWER ne unhe aisa karne se rok diya..

un chaaron ki saari taakat jaise baandh si di thi ALFREEN ne..

aur isiliye sirf kuch hi der me un chaaron ko chakkar aane laga..

wahin apne superiors ko yun fase dekh wahan moujud 100s of dark WARRIORS ALFREEN par waar karne ko hue par tabhi....


SOOBHHHH......


un sabko apne ird gird bhi ek tez tufaan uththa feel hua..

par fark ye tha ki woh tufaan unhe khudme lapete hue nahi tha,balki unke ird gird ek circle bana unhe gherte hua ghum raha tha lekin woh sab ye bhi feel kar rahe the ki woh ghera har guzarte pal ke saath chota hote hue unke kareeb aate jaa raha tha aur tabhi...


KHACCHHHH.....

is ek saamuhik awaaz ke ek saath darjan bhar DARK WARRIORS ka sir kaththe hue neeche zamin par gir chuka tha..

aur is scene ko dekh baaki ke ab tak sahi salamat bache DARK WARRIORS ki aankhen fath si gayi thi...

kuch dikha toh tha hi nahi un sabko..

par jab kuch seconds ke shock ke baad woh sab back to normal hone lage tab gayi un sabki nazar saamne jahan is waqt khada tha BRAWNY..

uske haath me thi WHITE ENERGY se bani tez chamakti hui ek badi si knife jiske edge se is waqt khoon tapak raha tha joki obviously kate sir liye mare pade DARK WARRIORS ka tha...

wahin us tapak rahe khoon ko jhatak blade saaf karte hue..


BRAWNY-dikh nahi raha tha kya ki hamari friend tumhare chaar fathers ke saath busy hai..

ladhne ka shouk hai toh hum hai naa...


BRAWNY ki baat aur apne saathiyon ko mara pada dekh ghusse we dahak gayi baaki saare DARK WARRIORS ki aankhen par woh sab kuch karte ki tabhi...


KHACCHHHH..KHACCHHHHH..KHACCHHHHH....

ek ke baad ek half of a second ke antaral me ye awaaz kayi baar ubhri aur jab woh awaaz rooki toh BRAWNY ke baaju me khade the HIDA, ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur MABEL jinke haathon me bhi BRAWNY ki hi tarah WHITE ENERGY se bani knife thi aur jiske edge se BRAWNY ke knife ki tarah khoon tapak raha tha...

wahin ab tak SHOWHI bhi araam se chalta hua un sake paas aa chuka tha..

khair,un sabne bhi apne knife ko jhatakte hue usme laga khoon usse alag kiya aur nazar saamne ki taraf ki jahan is waqt woh saare 100s of DARK WARRIORS joki kuch der pehle tak unpar has rahe the,unki laash padi hui thi...

aur dekhte hi dekhte un saare laashon me jaisa ki DARK WARRIORS ke saath unke marne ke baad hota hai,aag lag gayi..

kuch hi palon me woh saari laashen raakh me badal chuki thi aur ye dekh..


ACCHUTA-arre yaaron,inke saath ladhne ke liye toh hum hain par hamare saath ladne ke liye toh ye bache hi nahi...


ACCHUTA ki baat sun sabhi muskurate hue piche palte jahan is waqt DORIAN,GASTON,UBEL aur TRISTEN us bhavar me fase behoshi ki godh me jaane hi waale the par tabhi..

ALFREEN ne apna haath uthaya aur uske waisa karte hi woh tufaan ekdum se khatm hi gaya aur..


DHAAPPPP....

woh chaaron neeche zamin par gir chuke the...

aankhein band kar lambi lambi saansein lete hue un chaaron ko kuch waqt laga normal hone me par normal hote hi jaise woh sab uthe aur ek nazar ALFREEN ko dar aur ghusse ke mile jule bhaav ke saath dekhne ke baad jab unki aankhein chaaron taraf ghumi toh woh dar aur ghussa next level tak badh chuka tha..

unke sabhi followers raakh ban zamin par pade jo hue the...

is scene ko dekh ghusse se kamkapate hue woh un sabhi laashon ke aage khade un DARK WARRIORS ke hatyare matlab ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY, HIDA, MABEL aur SHOWHI ko ghurne lage jispar..


ACCHUTA-kya look hai..saalon,gaa**d fati padi hai par akad nahi gayi.. koi naa,jaan ke saath saath akad bhi nikal hi jaayegi...

TRISTAN-hamare WARRIORS ko maarkar tujhe lagta hai ki tu,maamuli mortal hume maar sakega.... sirf mujh akele ko hi ek pal lagega tujhe aur tere saathiyon ko khatm karenge..

ACCHUTA-aisa..try karle phir...


KRRRRRRRRRR..

ACCHUTA ki baat puri hui hi thi ki tabhi TRISTEN ke haathon se ek death ray nikal bijli ki gati se uski taraf badh chuka tha par isse pehle ki woh ray ACCHUTA ko touch bhi kar paata..

ek adrishya kawach se joki ACCHUTA ke theek aage laga tha,usse takrakar woh ray wahin rook gaya..

ye dekh pehle toh bohot zyada shock hua TRISTEN par phir agle hi pal usne dobara 10 times zyada intensity ke saath death ray nahi balki death beam se ACCHUTA par waar kar diya par natija..

same....

woh death beam ACCHUTA ke saamne lage kawach se takrakar wahin rook chuki thi aur ye dekh jahan ek taraf TRISTEN hadh se zyada chakit reh gaya tha,wahin apne saathi ko fail hote dekh UBEL, GASTON aur DORIAN ne bhi apne apne haathon ko aage kar death beams se ACCHUTA par attack kar diya...

par natija..same...un chaaron ki bhi beams ACCHUTA ke theek aage aakar rook chuki thi...

apni puri taakat lagane ke baad bhi woh chaaron us SHIELD ko jab pierce karne me naakamiyab rahe toh waise hi apne apne haathon ko aage kar beams release karte hue woh sab ACCHUTA ko dekhne lage jispar muskurate hue..


ACCHUTA-chehre par ghussa par aankhon ne taarif..waise mai is taarif ka hakdar nahi hun,ye mere baaju me khada mera bhai hai..

SLUNDER..

issine mere aage apni shakti se bani SHIELD lagayi hai..

aur tum chaaron chaaho toh saalon tak apni puri GAA*D tak ka zor lagalo,phir bhi is SHIELD ko penetrate karna toh door,isme ek crack tak nahi kar paaoge...

HIDA-par hum bohot kuch kar sakte hain..


HIDA ne apni baat bolte hue hi pehle ek jhatke me hi GASTON,UBEL, DORIAN aur TRISTEN ki beams ko cut kar diya aur aisa hote hi woh chaaron ladhkhada se gaye...

aur ussi ladkhadahat ka faayda uthate hue HIDA, SLUNDER, MABEL aur BRAWNY ne apne haath aage kar DESTRUCTION RAYS un chaaron par release kar diye..

jab tak TRISTEN, UBEL, GASTON aur DORIAN sambhal paate,woh chaaron destruction rays untak pahunch chuki thi..

un chaaron ko hi apna anth dikhne laga tha par tabhi..


GADGADGADGAD.....DHAAPPPP..


un chaaron ke theek saamne ek zordar lightning shower hui jisne unki taraf badh rahe rays ko khatm kar diya aur aisa hote hi us lightning shower ke theek beecho beech un chaaron ki taraf mooh kiye aasman se neeche jump kiya ek naye KAALI SHAKTI ke numainde ne..

kaale labadon me dhaka woh naya shaksh sir me bhi hoodie pehne un chaaron ki taraf mooh kiye khada tha...

khair, jaise hi woh shaksh TRISTEN, UBEL, GASTON aur DORIAN ke saamne prakat hua toh uske agle hi pal woh chaaron uske samman me apne apne ghutno par aa chuke the...

wahin peeche se aur side se is nayi entry ko dekh ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY, HIDA, MABEL, ALFREEN aur SHOWHI kaafi hairan hue the..

saath hi saath jis tarah se usne un sabke release kiye destruction rays ko khatm kiya tha,usse unhe uski shakti ka andaza bhi ho chuka tha..

kuch seconds usse piche se ghurte rehne ke baad..


ACCHUTA-ab ye kaun chaman aaya hamare bahar me..


ACCHUTA ki baat par koi kuch kehta ki tabhi us naye shaksh ne hoodie ko neeche kiya aur aisa kar woh dheere se palatne laga and while in this turning process...


MERE DARK WARRIORS,MERE FOLLOWERS MUJHE "GAFFER"KEHKAR RESPECT DETE HAIN PAR TUM SAB MUJHE KISI AUR NAAM SE JAANTE HO..


ye baat bolte hue woh unknown shaksh ACCHUTA & company ki taraf palat gaya tha aur uske aisa karte hi un sabka mooh puri tarah khul chuka tha.

wahin un sabke expressions ka maza lekar muskurate hue..


UNKNOWN-yes....your's truly...VALDIS......





PLANET-COURIOUS


PLACE-THE MOTHER TREE






ENOUGH HAVE WE TALKED..NOW,LESSON TIME..


ALIUM planet aur uske banane ka disclosure karne ke baad ab baari thi us kaam ki jiske liye ASMODEUS yahan aaya tha aur isiliye aage kya hoga,ye batane ke baad continue karte hue...


ASMODEUS-ANALIA,BHUVIKA....


ASMODEUS ke naam lete hi mere just piche ANALIA aur BHUVIKA prakat ho chuke the jiske baad..


ASMODEUS-ye dono apne life se judi ek bohot important baat tumse share karenge..

woh baat jo tumhe bas ek kahani ke taur par upari dhang se maalum hai,but now you should know that exact part with all the inside news...

haan,is process me tumhe do naye secrets bhi pata chalne waala hai...

anyways,tumhare next stop ALIUM ke liye ANALIA aur BHUVIKA ki story aur usse create hua lesson bohot important hai...

samjho,sikho, apply karo..

aur kyunki tum THE CHOSEN ONE ho, isiliye ye learning process instant aur fast hone waala hai...

abse theek 1 ghante ke baad mai tumhara test lunga..

and trust me,you will fail..and then,will try again and again and again..

tab tak jab tak tum kaamiyab nahi ho jaate...

jitna waqt lena chaaho,le sakte ho but yaad rahe,tumne apne friends ko jahan bheja hai,wahan woh excel toh kar sakte hain but sirf ek certain time period ke liye..

after that,they will suffer...aur isiliye ALIUM planet ke wajud ko khatm kar tumhe unke paas sahi time me pahunchna hi padega warna this time,you will lose your friends and with them your sister for always...


ASMODEUS ki baat sun mere aankhon ne ek chingari si dehek gayi thi jiske baad..


MAI-ASMODEUS.. GOD'S SON...tum meri behen ki nahi,apne universe ki chinta karo..

kyunki agar meri behen ko kuch hua toh is bramhaand ko khatra VIDEOUS se nahi,mujhse hoga..

isiliye,never and i mean never warn me of anything.. because i don't give a crap...


jahan ASMODEUS jisse unchi awaaz me toh door ki baat hai,koi nazar uthakar bhi baat nahi karta,usse ki gayi meri baat sun ANALIA aur BHUVIKA dono hi kaafi ghabra gaye the wahin ASMODEUS halka muskura diya aur theek mere saamne pahunch..


ASMODEUS-listen kid... bramhaand ko kisse khatra ho sakta hai aur kisse nahi,ye tum mujhe mat batao...

haan,tum ho mere FATHER GOD ke SUCCESSOR but i am ASMODEUS...

unka ansh..aur jo sanak tumme hai,woh meri wajah se hi hai..

but ek fark hai..tumme paagalpan hai par paagalpan khud mujhse hai..

I created it...so you should take all the crap, especially when ASMODEUS gives it...

1 ghanta..learn...


SHHHWHHHH...

is baat aur waqt ka ultimetam dete hue ASMODEUS gayab ho chuka tha jiske baad jab maine piche palat ANALIA aur BHUVIKA ko dekha toh...


ANALIA-wow.. tum ab bhi zinda ho...aadhi jung toh yahin jeet gaye tum...

MAI-cut the bullshit and let's begin,shall we...???


meri baat sun ek lambi saans chhod...


BHUVIKA-hamari kahani ka woh bhaag toh yaad hi hoga tumhe jab LORD OF ANGELS ne mujhe bachane ke liye ANALIA ke andar daal diya tha...

MAI-hmm...

ANALIA-ye bhi pata hoga tumhe ki alag alag points me kabhi SPEAR ke madhyam se toh kabhi COURIN fruit ke maadhyam se dono lords ek dusre se aage ke plans share karte the..

unhi plans me se ek me tha meri behen ka mere andar samavesh karana...

par ye aasan nahi tha.. aur woh isiliye kyunki mai COURIOUS WAASI hun..

one of the PUREST SOULS of this universe..

aur BHUVIKA us waqt kaali shakti se grast thi...

aur isiliye

HIRO BHAVATI aur SIRO BHAVATI..

ye do behadh hi strong spells ko mix kar LORD OF ANGELS ne ek naya SPELL banaya..

HISIRO BHAVATI...

aur is SPELL ki madad se unhone BHUVIKA ko mere andar chuppa diya...

MAI-hang on a sec...HIRO BHAVATI,SIRO BHAVATI...???kya mai jo soch raha hun,ye dono wahi SPELLS hai...

ANALIA-bilkul...

HIRO BHAVATI...matlab HIDE SPELL..

aur SIRO BHAVATI....matlab SHOW SPELL...


LORD ne BHUVIKA ke andar nihit kaali shakti ko in dono SPELLS ke mishran se naa sirf chuppa diya balki SHOW SPELL ke mile hone ki wajah se unhone meri body me behti WHITE ENERGY ko ye dikhaya ki BHUVIKA me bhi WHITE ENERGY hai...

MAI-mera sawal ye tha hi nahi...???MIRO waasi inhi do shaktiyon mese kisi ek ke saath paida hote hain...

aisa kyun..???

BHUVIKA-uske liye tumhe aage ki kahani janani hogi...

kya woh drishya spasht yaad hai tumhe jab maine BEELZEBUB ko jab woh ek pure DEVIL tha,maara tha..


haan me sir hilaya maine jiske baad..


BHUVIKA-us waqt mai dikh zaroor sampurn rahi thi,par asal me thi nahi...

meri behen ke andar rehne ki wajah se mera sharir ek COURIOUS WAASI ke roop me toh pura ho chuka tha,par kaali shakti tab bhi mere andar moujud thi jisse bas LORD ke HIDE/SHOW spell ne mere andar behte WHITE ENERGY ko dikhne aur mehsoos karne se roka hua tha...

mujhe usse khudse completely nikalna zaroori tha...aur ye zimma uthaya BEELZEBUB ne...

jab maine usse maara toh aisa karte waqt maine apne andar beh rahi kaali shakti bhi usme transfer kar diya...

mujhe laga tha ki woh mujhe aisa karne se rokega par usne saharsh meri taklif khudme samet li..

uska ye sacrifice hi woh kaaran tha jiski wajah se GOD ne usse maaf karte hue THE HEIR OF WHITE ENERGY ke khitaab se nawaza tha..

khair,mai azaad toh ho gayi par jaisi meri journey rahi thi,jis tarah mere andar WHITE ENERGY ka pravah shuru hua tha, kyunki woh normal nahi tha, isiliye mujhme side effects laazmi the aur woh aaye bhi..

COURIOUS WAASIYON ki shakti peace ke liye hoti hai aur isiliye shaant hoti hai par meri WHITE ENERGY vinaashak thi...

jab bhi meri shakti unstable hoti thi toh pura COURIOUS hil jaaya karta tha..

sirf ANALIA ka sparsh hi tha jo meri shaktiyon ko shaant kar paata tha...

aur isiliye taaki meri shakti stable ho jaaye,baaki COURIOUS WAASIYON ki tarah shaant ho jaaye,LORD OF ANGELS ne ek yukti sochi..

MAI-let me guess..unhone tumhari UNSTABLE POWERS se banaya ek naya aur COURIOUS se milta julta PLANET..naam,MIRO...

aur kyunki woh planet ek COURIOUS WAASI se ban raha tha, isiliye wahan ke logon ko bhi ussi chiz se shakti mil sakti thi jisse ek COURIOUS WAASI ko milti hai..

THE COURIN FRUIT...abaadi bhi tum dono ke planets ki ek si hi hai..iska bhi same hi reason hai..right...!!!

ANALIA-bilkul sahi...ab aate hain us mudde par jo tumhare liye hamara lesson hai...

HISIRO BHAVATI...woh SPELL jisse meri behen mere andar kaali shakti hone ke baad bhi araam se reh rahi thi..

itna hi nahi,uski body bhi WHITE ENERGY se recover ho rahi thi...

tumhe bhi ussi SPELL ko use me laate hue apni SWORD ko apne andar chuppana hai..

and at the same time,tumhe us PLANET ko SWORD ki shakti jitni hi powerful khudki shakti ko SHOW karna hai..

matlab tumhe khudko itna powerful show karna hai jitni ki tumhari SWORD hai...

is process me wahan tum inside out check kiye jaaoge and let me tell you,woh checking out tumhare liye unbearable pain bhi laayega aur tumhare SHOW/HIDE SPELL ki taakat aur asar bhi last limit tak check karega...

aur us haalat me tumhe apne andar ghum rahe us jagah ke unwanted power ko kheench kar bahar nikalna hai..

tumhare aisa karte hi us PLANET ka guard kuch palon ke liye kamzor ho jaayega..

aisa hote hi SWORD apni woh shakti jo us jagah ki dharti par kaid hai,usse resurrect kar legi...

jab tumhe SWORD ki real taakat feel hone lage toh turant usse nikaalte hue ALIUM ki dharti par apni puri taakat lagate hue gaad dena...

woh planet destroy ho jaayega..

ab shuru karo... paused CEREBRATION me baith HISIRO BHAVATI SPELL ko man hi man uccharit karte hue uski shakti ko apne chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes, REFINER POWERS,BLACK ENERGY, HELL'S BLAZING FIRE AURA, ERRAPEL ki energy and most importantly apni ALOUKIK SHAKTIYON ke saath jodna shuru karo...

MAI-ek sawal reh gaya...and i think the most important question...tumhare planet ki aabadi 10000 hai par MIRO ki abaadi 10001..

LORD OF ANGELS jis kaam me shaamil hain,jisme woh COURIOUS ka ek identical planet banate hain aur woh bhi COURIOUS ke MOTHER TREE se link karkar..

aise me ye ek extra bande ka difference coincidence nahi ho sakta.

am i right aur am i right...???


meri baat sun ek pal ke liye ANALIA aur BHUVIKA ki nazaren mili jiske baad wapas mujhe dekh..


BHUVIKA-tum wakayi THE CHOSEN ONE ho RAAZ...choti se choti baat bhi kitni important ho sakti hai,tumhe andaza rehta hai is baat ka...???

MAI-sirf taarif ho karogi yaa phir mujhe mere puche sawal ka jawab bhi milega...

BHUVIKA-perfect balance sirf identical planets banane se nahi hota...

uske liye un dono planets ke beech ek strong connection ki zaroorat hai...

waisa connection jaisa MOTHER TREE ka uske fruits se hota hai...

MAI-aur is case me woh connection hai SHOWHI.... right...???

isiliye woh 10000 ke baad paida hone waala 1 hai...

isiliye hi woh dono SHOW aur HIDE shaktiyon ka eklouta owner hai...

SHOW/HIDE..inhi dono shaktiyon se naam bhi bana hai uska...

but the main question is, SHOWHI woh connection bana kaise...???

BHUVIKA-mere dwara...jab MIRO naya bana toh meri unstability usse ek curse ki tarah mili..

wahan lagatar bhukamp aane lage...waise condition me wahan life form karna impossible tha...

isiliye us curse ko mitane ke liye zaroorat thi usse banane waale ke ek sacrifice ki...mere sacrifice ki...

jis MOTHER TREE ke neeche hum is waqt hain aur jiske roots MIRO se jude hue hain,maine inke aage ek waada kiya...

aur mere aisa karte hi inhone MIRO me ho rahe constant earth quakes temporarily band kar diye..

sacrifice kya hoga,ye bhi inhone mere dreams ke through mujhe bata diya tha aur sahi waqt aane par maine BEELZEBUB ki madad se woh sacrifice de diya...

MAI-kya sacrifice aur us sacrifice se SHOWHI ka kya lena dena..???


BHUVIKA-



har bada kaam KURBAANI LETA HAI....

MIRO ne meri us kurbaani ko khudme SAMETA HAI....

woh RAAZ jisse khudse door rakhna pada mujhe...

SHOWHI.......mere aur BEELZEBUB ka BETA HAI...

















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....


















AAPKA APNA V...J....
Gazab ekdam jabardast fantastic update VJbhai
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI APNE SOUL KO EK BAAR FIRSE AMPLIFY KARNE ME KAAMIYAB HO JAATI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ APNE BLOOD KO BHI HAASIL KAR LETA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-45



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-THE CHOSENS





YE ABHI KYA HUA THA MERE SAATH....???? MUJHE AISA KYUN LAGA JAISE KUCH THA YAHAN....

AUR WO BHI BOHOT POWERFUL...

MUJHE AISA KYUN LAGA JAISE KISI NE MERE DIMAG ME PRAVESH KARNE KI KOSHISH KI THI....

MUJHE ITNA NEGETIVE,ITNA GHUTAN KYUN FEEL HO RAHA HAI....


lambi lambi saans leti hui MAHI,chehre par bechaini liye idhar udhar yun dekh rahi thi maano kisi ko talash kar rahi ho...


midnight ka waqt hai.... MAHI jo kuch der pehle gehri neend me thi,usse achanak aisa feel hua maano koi uske pure sharir ko scan kar raha hai...

par kyunki MAHI neend me thi,toh uske dimag ne is ehsaas ko sirf sapne ka ek bhaag samjha....

par tabhi....

MAHI ke brain ko aisa laga jaise koi usme ghusne ki koshish kar raha hai...

maano koi messege hai jo wo uske through MAHI ko dena chahta ho...

itna hi nahi,jaise hi us KOI ne MAHI ke brain me ghusne ki kohish ki toh soyi hui MAHI ko khudme ek ajeeb si ghutan mehsoos hui...

usse aisa laga jaise kisi ne uske astitv ko,uski personality ko,uske ATTITUDE ko change karne ki koshish ki ho...

aur is ajeeb ehsaas ke feel hote hi MAHI ki aankhen khul gayi....

feel hue chizon ko yaad kar ye saare sawal khud se hi puch rahi thi MAHI....

par in saare chizon me sabse ajeeb baat ye thi ki MAHI ki aankh khulte hi baaki saari feelings jo usse feel ho rahi thi,wo toh gayab ho gayi thi par jaate jaate bhi ek aisa ehsaas tha jo ab bhi usse halka sa chipka hua tha...

wahi ehsaas jisse ye puri kahani hai aur jisse MAHI ke andar badalne ki koshish abhi abhi hui thi...

ATTITUDE CHANGE.....

MAHI ko ab bhi thoda thoda aisa feel ho raha tha maano uska chizon ko dekhne ka nazariya, situations ko handle karne ke tarike ko koi change karne ki koshish kar raha ho....


MAHI-par ye kaise mumkin hai...!!!!!


khudse hi is sawal ko pucha MAHI ne aur uske aisa karne ke agle hi pal uske dimag me VIOLET WHIZZ ki kahi gayi baat gunj si uthi...


JUST DONT CHANGE YOUR ATTITUDE AND NOTHING WILL CHANGE YOU....


VIOLET WHIZZ ke ye shabd gunj se uthe MAHI ke dimag me jiske baad MAHI ke dimag me uske ab tak ke jeeven ke saare important drishya dikhne lage....

uska har faisla,uske har shabd jo kisi situation ke final moments ko define karte the,wo sab usse jaise live dikhne lage the..

itna hi nahi, MAHI ne ye bhi feel kiya ki dikhne waala har scene apne mukaam par aakar MAHI se jaise puch raha tha ki kya aapka liya decision sahi tha,aur is sawal ke baad jab MAHI ka brain apne liye faislon par swikriti dikhata tha toh aisa hote hi scene change ho jaata tha....

kaafi der tak ye sab hota raha aur fir ek dum se sab kuch shaant ho gaya...

sirf scenes hi dikhne band nahi hue the,balki uske saath saath jo ATTITUDE CHANGE waali feeling bhi MAHI ke andar rooki hui thi,wo bhi khatm ho chuki thi...


MAHI-kya us din VIOLET WHIZZ issi situation ke baare me baat kar rahi thi...!!!???

par unhone toh woh baatein PHASE 2 ke liye kahi thi jisme abhi kaafi waqt bacha hai...

fir tha kya ye sab...????

kaafi der tak MAHI apne dimag ke ghode ko daudate hue is 2 plus 2 equals 5 waale naye theory ke baare me sochti rahi par jab kaafi der baad bhi wo kisi natije par pahunch nahi paayi toh apne dimag ko jhatak wo wapas so gayi...






PLANET-ZEAL-THE SOUL


PLACE-ABOVE THE AURA





SHURUAT YAHIN SI HUI THI,
ANJAAM BHI YAHIN SE HOGA...

BADNAAM BHI YAHI SE HUE THE,
DOBARA NAAM BHI YAHIN SE HOGA...



ZEAL PLANET ke atmosphere se ek meter upar khade hokar maine neeche dekhte hue is baat ko kaha tha....

kyunki yahi wo jagah thi jahan se maine drishyam dekhte hue apne safar ki shuruat ki thi...

yahi wo jagah thi jahan mujhse pehle VIKRAM ne us CHIZ ko haasil karne ki koshish me apne saath saath yahan base har bande ki jaan gawa di thi....

aur yahi wo jagah thi jahan ab mai us badnaami ko mitate hue is jagah ke upar ek naya naam likhne waala tha...

RAAZ......


khair,mere thik neeche se shuru hoti thi ZEAL ki wo khatarnaak saltanat jahan har taraf wahi gehra dhuan faila hua tha aur isiliye hi mai is planet ke us dhuen ke daayre ke just upar khada tha kyunki bina is dhuen ke AURA ka intezam kiye mai aage nahi badh sakta tha...


MAI-dushman hadh se zyada taakatwar bhi ho toh khud ke pure wajud ke bharose usse lada jaa sakta hai,ek perfect planning aur ran neeti ke tehet usse haraya jaa sakta hai par agar ladayi khudke hi wajud ko pura karne ki ho toh fir bharosa aur ran neeti,dono bhi aadhe adhure hi bante hain....


RENAISS, ANGIS aur ANNJAYA me mera har pehla prayas, koshish naakamiyab hui thi par wo naakiamiyabi mai yahan afford nahi kar sakta tha kyunki baat yahan mere SOUL ki thi....

wo SOUL jiski shakti brain body aur blood ki joint shakti se bhi zyada hoti hai...

aur wo AURA jo mere pairon ke neeche se hota hua is pure PLANET me faila hua tha,mai usse bin chhue bhi mehsoos kar paa raha tha...

mai mehsoos kar raha tha ki beintihan shakti thi us AURA me...

itni shakti ki mera poora brain aur LONSDALEITE hexagon diamond jitna shaktishaali sharir bhi us AURA ki shakti ko jhelne ke kaabil nahi tha...

jahan kisi bhi natije par pahunchne ke liye mere dimag ko 1 second se bhi kam samay lagta tha,wahin mere is naye challenge se nipatne ke liye mere brain ko saare guna bhaag ke ganit ko lagate hue kaafi samay ho chuka tha...

aur aakhir me mere dimag ne mujhe bas itna bataya ki is aane waali chunouti ka solution sirf tabhi mil sakta hai jab iski taakat ko aur isse milne waale challanges ko ek baar parkha jaaye..

par ab is choti si yukti ko kaam me laane ke liye bhi ek yukti sochni thi aur wo isiliye kyunki agar is AURA ki taakat ko aur isse milne waale challange ko parakhna tha,toh uske liye sabse pehle usse apni existence dikhani thi aur agar mai ye directly karta toh iske pure pure chances the ki meri existence aakhri baar hi exist kar paati...

mujhe yahin nipat jaana tha...

mai ye sab soch hi raha tha ki tabhi mere dimag me ek yukti,ek idea koundhi aur isiliye...

maine apni shirt ki pocket me apni ungli fasayi aur....

CHRRRRR.....

ek jhatke ke mere shirt ka woh hissa fath chuka tha...

kapde ke us fate bhaag ko pakde maine ek baar fir aage ke baare me socha aur...

maine us kapde ke bhaag ko neeche chhod diya...

tezi se lehrata hua wo kapde ka hissa niche ki taraf gaya aur.....

usne us dhuen numa AURA ko chhu liya aur aisa hote hi.....

second ke sauwe hisse ke andar hi wo kapde ka hissa jal gaya....

mai is scene ko dekh hi raha tha ki tabhi...

jis point par wo kapda jala tha,thik ussi point par maine kuch nikalta hua sa mehsoos kiya....

aur tabhi....

SWOOBBBBB.....


us point se ek teer ki shakal liye us hisse ka AURA upar utha aur meri taraf badha...

uske aisa karte hi maine turant apni body ek taraf kar di jisse wo teer mere just baju se hota hua upar chala gaya...

ye sab behad jaldi hua tha par fir bhi jab wo teer mere side se nikal raha tab maine us teer ki energy mehsoos ki thi jisse feel kar mujhe behad hairani hui aur wo isiliye kyunki us teer ki energy itni zyadi thi ki agar uska nishana niche ki taraf hota toh wo teer ek pure planet ko cheerti hui dusri taraf nikal jaati..

ye toh acha hua ki mai bade dhyan se us point ko dekh raha tha jisse mere kapde ne chhua tha aur isiliye hi uske baad hue hamle se khud ko bacha paaya kyunki agar galti se bhi AURA se bana hua wo teer mujhe chhu bhi jaata toh fir pata nahi kya hota....

successfully side hatne ki wajah se maine socha ki mai bach gaya par tabhi...

BOOMM......

mujhe thodi upar ek tez dhamaka hua jisse sun jab maine upar dekha toh...


MAI-lag gayi....


lambi saans chhodte hue maine ye baat kahi...

reason...


jis teer ke bina mujhe chhue upar ki taraf nikalne ki baat par mai relax ho raha tha wo teer upar uththa hua ek point par jaakar fath gaya aur aisa hote hi...

dhamake se hua dhuan...waisa hi dhuan jaise mere pairon ke neeche pure PLANET me bicha hua tha...

par ye upar waala dhuan bas kuch seconds ke liye hi tha...

kyunki kuch der baad us dhuen ne apna roop badla aur is baar usne ek bohot hi bade chaadar ka roop le liya...

itne bade chaadar ka jisse pura aasman hi dhak chuka tha...

is naye roop ko dhar wo dhuan,wo AURA neeche aane laga...speed us chaadar ki zyada nahi thi par kyunki hatne ya bachne ka koi rasta mere paas tha nahi isiliye ab mujhe is jagah ki AURA se bhidna hi tha aur isiliye maine khudko taiyar kar liya...

par tabhi....

mere dimag me ek naye vichar ne janm liya....

maine socha ki chaadar hi kyun...aakhir is AURA ne yahi roop kyun liya...ye sawal mere dinag me ghumte hi mujhe iska jawab bhi mil gaya aur wo ye tha ki is chaadar ka maksad mujhe direct haani pahunchana nahi tha balki mujhe ek machli ki taraf fasakar neeche dhakelte hue yahan ki asli AURA ko touch karana tha...

kyunki isse pata tha ki wo mujhe nuksaan toh pahuncha sakti hai par mera khatma karne ki shakti usme nahi balki mere neeche biche AURA me hai...

jaise hi is chadar numa AURA ki planning mere dimag me gunji toh iska ek temporary jawab bhi mere dimag me aa gaya jo tha ek famous quote ki attack is the best defence...

mujhe filhal jitna zyada waqt mil jaaye,utna acha tha aur iske liye is chadar ke mujhe lapetne se pehle mujhe isse takrana tha aur isiliye...

maine apne sharir ko puri takat se upar ki taraf jhakta diya aur mere aisa karte hi...

SOOBHHH...


mera sharir bhi behad tezi se ek teer ki hi tarah tezi se upar ki taraf utha aur agle hi pal....

mai us chadar se takra chuka tha aur jab aisa hua tab maine ek saath do chizen mehsoos ki....

pehli ye ki bhale hi wo chaadar dhuen ki bani hui thi,par uski parat lachili thi aur saath hi itni strong bhi ki jisse dhakka toh diya jaa sakta hai par us bhedte hue uske paar nikalna impossible hai....

aur dusri chiz mehsoos ki thi mere sharir ne...actually sharir ke andruni bhaag ne...

chadar se takrate hi maine aisa feel kiya jaise mere body ke andar behata khun mere body se chipak gaya hai aur aisa kar mere anduri sharir ka bohot sa hissa khaali ho gaya hai aur un khaali husson me maine ek behad tez jakdan mehsoos ki..

mujhe aisa lagne laga maano mujhe kisine andar se jakad liya hai...

mera sharir pura tan kar akad sa gaya tha aur ussi position me mai us chadar se chipka hua neeche ki taraf girne laga...

in sab negetive chizon me mere liye bas ek achi chiz hui thi aur wo ye ki us chadar ke mujhse chipakne ki wajah se mai bhi uske saath dheere dheere neeche ki taraf aa raha tha jiska matlab tha ki mere paas thoda extra time tha is situation ko handle karne ke liye...

par mujhe situation ko sirf handle hi nahi karna tha balki is PLANET ke pure AURA ko yaa toh khatm karna tha ya apne control me laana tha...

behad tez jakadan ke beech mera diamg tezi se daud raha tha....har beetathe second me mere dimag me hazar se zyada idea aa bhi rahe the aur unme dum naa hone ki wajah se wo sab cancel bhi hote chale jaa rahe the....

daudte daudte mere dimag ka dhyan mere body ki jakdan ki taraf gaya aur tabhi...

meri aankhen khul gayi.....

solution mujhe mil chuka tha aur wo solution is waqt mere body ke andar daud raha tha..

mera BLOOD.....

the purest creation of universe...

aur yahi wajah thi ki mera pura body jakda hua tha par mera blood is body se chipak jaane ke baawjud bhi lagatar mere dhamniyon me bina kisi rookawat ke beh raha tha...

is PLANET ka AURA mera tha par fir bhi ye mujhe khatm karna chah raha tha aur wo isiliye kyunki is waqt mai human form me tha..

the most corrupted form of life... wo form jisse yahan ka AURA bardasht nahi kar sakta tha par wahin ussi form ke andar behte khun ko is AURA ne mehsoos kar liya tha..

sirf mehsoos kiya tha..isne ye nahi pehchaanana tha ki ye khoon bhi issi body ka hissa hai aur ye body us AURA aur uske maalik matlab SOUL kaa bhi maalik hai...

aur yahi tha solution.. AURA ne jisse mehsoos kiya tha,mujhe usse uski pehchaan karani thi...matlab mere blood se aur iska sirf ek hi tarika tha...

aur wo ye ki isse pehle ki mera body neeche faile AURA ko chhue,mere BLOOD ko us AURA aur is planet ke zamin ki satah ko chhuna tha...

sharir ke jakde hone ki wajah se mai hil toh paa raha tha nahi aur isiliye maine apni aankhen band kar apne CEREBRATION process ko pause kiya...

aisa kar maine apne brain ko apne body se joda aur ek baar firse ussi spell ko uccharit kiya jiska istemaal maine ANNJAYA me kiya tha....

KHANDITA...

CUT.....


apne pair ke anguthe ko dhyan me rakh maine is spell ko uccharit kiya jiske baad mere anguthe ke bhaag me ek cut pad gaya aur aisa hote hi usse khoon ko kuch katre nikal neeche ki taraf tapak gaye...

khoon ke tapakte hi mai us kati jagah ko seal karne ke liye spell bolne ko hua par tabhi...

mera wo cut apne aap bhar gaya aur aisa hote mujhe pata chal gaya ki mera socha solution sahi hai..

reason..

jaise hi mere pair ke anguthe se khoon nikla toh mere sir ko dhaka us AURA ne mere khoon ko mehsoos kiya jiske baad uske nikalne waali jagah ko usne khud hi heal kar diya...

wahin jo khoon ki bunde already tapak chuki thi,wo tezi se niche ki taraf girne lagi aur dekhte hi dekhte us AURA numa dhuen me gayab ho gayi...

wahin iske agle hi second mera neeche girta hua sharir bhi us AURA ki chapet me aa gaya....

maine khudko is waqt ke liye taiyar kiya hua tha...

jaise hi mai us AURA ki chapet me aaya...meri jakdan 1000 guna aur badh gayi...

mujhe aisa lagne laga maano wo dhuan mujhe squash kar dena chahta ho...

mera pura sharir dabne laga....beintehan dard ke beech mai aankh band kiye apne sharir ki jakdan ko sehne laga...

waise toh is AURA me itni shakti thi ki iske sparsh waale second me hi mujhe ye pichka kar maar dene ki capability rakhta tha par kyunki mujhse ek second pehle mera blood isse hokar niche ki taraf gaya tha isiliye iski shakti mujhpar dheere dheere dabaw bana rahi thi...

wahin in ssabse alag mera blood us dhuen numa AURA ke beech se hota hua neeche ki taraf girta chala gaya aur fir....

mere blood ne is ZEAL PLANET ke satah ko chhua aur aisa hote hi....

ek saath do chizen hui...


pehli ye ki mere sharir ki jakdan kam hone lagi...

dusri ye ki is pure PLANET ke AURA ne khudko sametna shuru kar diya...


aur jaise hi tezi se neeche girte hue mera sharir ne is planet ki satah ko chhua toh....

meri jakdan puri tarah se khatm ho chuki thi aur wo dhuan,wo AURA jo is pure planet par faila hua tha, usne bhi khudko puri tarah se sameth liya tha aur ab wo AURA ek football jitne chote se dhuen ki shakal me mere saamne khadi thi...

mujhe pata tha ki baat wahi shuru karegi aur hua bhi aisa....


AURA-ZEAL ME SWAGAT HAI AAPKA RAAZ...


is awaaz ko sun mai man hi man halka chownka tha aur wo isiliye kyunki mai is awaaz ko jaanta tha...


MAI-WOOGER....tum ho yahan ke AURA..tumne mujhe jakda hua tha....

WOOGER-nahi..mai yahan ka AURA nahi hun...yahan ke AURA ko sametne ke baad usse contain karna zaroori tha aur mai bas wahi kar raha hun....

kyunki iski shakti sirf aapse yaa aapke hisse se hi control ho sakti hai...

MAI-aage kya karna hai...????

WOOGER-piche dekhiye...


WOOGER ke aisa bolte hi mai palta aur dekha ki meri sidh me hi mujhse kuch door par ek nahi balki do do roshni ke gole line me lage chamak rahe the.....

par meri nazar aur mera dhyan un do roshni ke golon par sirf ek pal ke liye hi tik paaya kyunki maine un do roshniyan se thoda piche ek aur roshni ka gola dekha par dekhne se zyada mai us roshni ko mehsoos kar paa raha tha..

mujhe aisa lag raha tha jaise wo roshni ka gola mujhse juda hua hai.....

mai us roshni ke gole ko ek tak dekh hi raha tha ki tabhi....


WOOGER-jis roshni ke gole par aapki nazar tiki hai wo roshni ka gola hi aapka SOUL hai....


aage badh un do roshniyon ke baaju me khada dhuen numa WOOGER ne is baat ko kaha jispar..


MAI-aur ye do gole kaise...???

WOOGER-ye do roshni ke gole aapke wo do chunoutiyan hain jinhe paar karne ke baad hi aap apne SOUL ko paa sakte hain..

MAI- chunouti kya hai...???

WOOGER- ye do gole asal me do logon ke jeeven ke,unke karm path ke chune hue kuch aise pal hain jinhe aapko jeena hai...

sirf jeena hi nahi hai balki un palon me jo paristithi aapke saamne aayegi,yaa fir utpann hogi,usse aapko apne hisab se sanchalit karna hai...

aur wahi sanchalan aapki chunouti hai... aapka sanchalan, apke faisle,yahi tay karenge ki jis kaarya ko uske anjaam tak pahunchane ke liye aapki utpatti hui hai,aap uske yogya hain yaa nahi...

agar aap uttirn hue,toh apka SOUL aapka hua.....


MAI-thik hai....waise ye do log hain kaun jinke jeeven aur karmpath ke pal mujhe jeene hain...

WOOGER-ASMODEUS AUR VIKRAM.......








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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI KE DIMAG ME KOI GHUSNE KO KOSHISH KARTA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ KO ZEAL ME DO NAYI CHUNOUTIYAN MILTI HAIN.


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CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-46



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-CHOSENS





KYA HUA MAHI...???TU ITNI KHOYI KHOYI KYUN LAG RAHI HAI....????


subah ka waqt hai..INSTITUTION jaa rahe hain MAHI aur ALFREEN...

jahan ALFREEN lagatar kisi naa kisi topic par kuch naa kuch bole jaa rahi thi wahin MAHI kuch puchne par bas hun,hmm,is tarah ke jawab hi de rahi thi woh bhi kabhi kabhi...

zyadatar toh wo bas saamne dekhte hue khudme khoyi hui aage badh rahi thi aur issi baat ko notice kar ALFREEN ne MAHI ke kandhe ko hilate hue ye sawal kiya tha jispar MAHI jaise kisi tandra se jaaagi aur...


MAHI-haan,kya hua???


ek dum se hosh me aate hue MAHI ne ye sawal kiya jispar...???


ALFREEN-tu bata ki tujhe kya hua hai...??mai kitni der se dekh rahi hun ki kahin khoyi hui si hai...???

MAHI-aisi toh koi baat nahi hai...??mai toh teri baatein hi sun rahi thi...

ALFREEN- MAHI,tu SAVENT bhale hi best haj par jhooth bolne ke maamle me tu worst hai...

isiliye bina baaton ko ghumaye chupchaap bata ki problem kya hai???

MAHI-chupchaap rahungi toh baat kaise karungi....????


ALFREEN ki baat sun mazak me MAHI ne ye kaha jispar...


ALFREEN-very funny..par funny hone ke aur bhi mouke milenge, isiliye filhal tu bas itna bata ki what's fishing..???

kis khayal me khoyi hui thi tu...??? what's disturbing you..???


MAHI ko maalum tha ki ALFREEN maanane waali toh thi nahi isiliye ek lambi saans chhod usne ALFREEN ko kal raat uske saath kya hua tha wo bata diya jisse sun ALFREEN bhi hairan ho gayi....


ALFREEN-you know agar aisa kuch hamare saath yahan aane se pehle hua hota toh mai bas isse ek brain illusion maanti..

ek dream dissorder jo kisike bhi saath ho sakta hai but this place is fucking insane...

yahan anything is possible...aur isiliye mujhe lagta hai ki hume tere kal raat aayi feelings ke base ko dhundna chahiye...

MAHI-aur ye hum karenge kaise.???

ALFREEN-sabse pehle toh hume is baat ke baare me VIOLET WHIZZ ko batana chahiye..i think wo hume proper guide karengi....

MAHI-ye khayal kar raat hi mere mind me aaya tha par somehow i feel ki isse koi faayda nahi hoga..

kyunki jo bhi hua,wo bas ek khayal tha jo mere dimag me aaya aur fir chala gaya...


WHIZZ ko batane ka faada tab hota jab wo situation unki aankhon ke saamne occour ho taaki wo usse sahi se samajh paayen...

ALFREEN-Yhmm..ye bhi hai...

MAHI-and you know what, actually mai WHIZZ ki help lena chahti hi nahi hun...

i want to face every problem all by myself...

mujhe khud apne problems ko handle bhi karna hai,unhe tackle bhi karna hai aur unhe harana bhi hai....


full confidence se kahi thi ye baa MAHI ne jisse dekh...


ALFREEN-wo toh thik hai MAHI par agar koi problem hamare bas ke baahar ki baat ho toh aise situation me help toh leni hi padti hai naa...

MAHI-agar situation,problem hadh se baahar ki hai toh sabse pehle hume usse apni hadh ke andar karna hai yaa fir apni hadh ko badhana hai...

aur issike liye hi toh hum hain yahan..is INSTITUTION me...to achieve the impossible...

ALFREEN-teri aaj ki baatein aisi hain jaise tu kisi competition me participate karne waali hai aur uske liye khud ko motivate kar rahi hai...


ALFREEN ki baat sun MAHI muskurayi aur...


MAHI-pata nahi yaar par kal mere 6 percent SOUL AMPLIFICATION ke baad ek alag hi energy doud rahi hai mere andar..

aur kal raat jab wo weird feeling mere brain ko ghere hue thi,tab bhi mujhe aisa laga jaise wo feeling mujhe challenge kar rahi hai aur fir jab us feeling ne mere brain ko chhoda toh aisa laga maano mai usse jeet gayi hun..

aur jab aisa hua toh mai bata nahi sakti ki mujhe kitna acha feel hua.....

ALFREEN-jab tujhe kal raat hue haadse ki koi chinta nahi hai toh fir thodi der pehle itni gehri soch me kyun khoyi hui thi tu...???

MAHI-arre mai toh bas kal ke pure wakiye ko analyze kar rahi thi..

soch rahi thi ki agar aisa kuch kabhi aur firse hua toh mujhe us situation ko kaise handle karna chahiye...???

ALFREEN-waah re teri soch.....maana tu hum sabse abhi aage hai par abhi hamara first PHASE khatm nahi hua hai..

toh agar sochna hi hai naa,toh apne next SOUL percentage ke AMPLIFICATION ke baare me soch...

aur usse bhi pehle ye soch ki hum aaj ki class ke liye late ho chuke hain..


ALFREEN ki baat sun MAHI ko bhi realize hua ki baaton baaton me wo dono late ho chuke hain..

aur ye realize karte hi shuru hua dono ka blame game jo karte hue wo dono CHOSEN'S ki taraf badh gaye....




PLANET-SEAL- THE SOUL


PLACE-THE DEAD SURFACE





KYA AAP JAANANA CHAHENGE KI YE DO NAAM KINKE HAIN...???INKE SWAMI ASAL ME HAIN KAUN...???


VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS..wo do naam jinke life ke palon ko mujhe jeena tha aur un palon ko apne hisaab se mould karna tha,unke baare me pucha mujhse WOOGER ne jispar....


MAI-kya un dono ke baare me jaankar mujhe unke life ke palon ko jeene me kuch madad milegi...???

WOOGER-nahi...

MAI-toh kyun jaanu mai un dono ke baare me..???

WOOGER-jinke zindagi ke palon ko aapko jeena hai,kya unke baare me jaanane ki jigyasa nahi hai aapko..???

MAI-zindagi unki toh jigyasa meri kyun...??mujhe sirf unhi cheezon ki jigyasa rehti hai jisme mera faayda rehta hai...

isiliye ye faaltu ki baat chhodo aur mudde par aakar ye batao ki what's the catch...???is chunouti ka wo kaun sa hissa hai jo tumne abhi tak mujhe nahi bataya..???

WOOGER-bohot ache...mujhe bas aapki doordarshita dekhni thi..dekhna tha ki jo saamne hai usse toh aap dekh hi rahe hain,par jo chhupa hua hai,uspar aapka dhyan hai yaa nahi...

MAI-mudde par aa WOOGER.....


thodi kadak awaaz me maine ye baat kahi thi jisse sun us dhuen me jisse WOOGER ki awaaz aa rahi thi,usme halchal hui maano usse mere bolne ke tarike ko sun dar laga ho aur isiliye....


WOOGER-is chunouti ka asli pench,sabse badi rookawat hai EHSAAS....

ye wo bhaag jo aapki chunouti ko behad kathin banayega....

aur wo isiliye kyunki inme se jo bhi gola aapke andar samayega,aapka astitv us gole ke maalik ke adhin ho jaayega....

kehne ka matlab ye hai ki gole ke aapke andar samate hi aap aap nahi rahenge balki wo ho jaayenge jinki urja se ye gole bane hain...

aur aise me aapko jis bhi pal ko jeene hai aur saath me apne hisaab se sanchalit bhi karna hai,us pal me aap aap rahenge hi nahi....

aap wo ho jaayenge jinke wo pal honge..aapke brain,aapke body aur aapke blood par us kirdaar ka raaj hoga jisne originally wo pal jiye the..

yahan tak ki aapka wo bhaag jo filhaal aapke paas nahi hai,aapka SOUL,us bhaag me bhi us kirdaar ka ek temporary SOUL fit ho jaayega jisse aapki bhaavna bhi uske hisaab se chalegi....

aap puri tarah se us kirdaar ke ATTITUDE me DHAK jaayenge....

aur aapko ussi condition me us kirdaar ke palon ko yaa fir ye kahun ki kisi ek khaas pal ko apne hisaab se mould karna hai...

ab wo pal kya hai aur usse kaise mould karna hai,yahi aapki asli chunouti hai.....


ye chunouti kam suicide zyada lag rahi thi..jab mai mai hi nahi rahunga toh sanchalit kya ghanta karunga....

uske upar mere SOUL ka bhaag jo filhal khaali hai,uspar bhi kisi aur ka kabza hone waala tha...

aise negetive waqt par jahan haath aur pair baandhe nahi gaye hain balki kaat diye gaye hain,mujhe tairna tha...

par aage badhne ke alawa option nahi tha mere paas.. actually tha,par mujhe koi option chahiye hi nahi tha..

aur wo isiliye kyunki maine aaj tak kisi competition me bhaag nahi liya tha,kisi race me douda nahi tha par sirf isiliye kyunki mujhe koi competition,koi race apne standard ke barabar ka laga nahi tha par aaj jo chunouti mere saamne thi,wo thi mere takkar ki..

ek aisi chunouti jo mere INSTINCTS ko, mere confidence ko yahan tak ke mere existence tak ko challange kar rahi thi...

and i,like it....

MUJHE YE ACHA LAGA.....

aur isiliye...


MAI-shuru karen....????

WOOGER-aap bataiye,kisse..????

MAI-ASMODEUS


mere is naam ko chunte hi us naam ka gola tezi se meri taraf badha aur agle hi pal....


AHHHHH...AHHHH...AHHHH....AHHHH...AHHH.......AHHHHH...AHHHHHH.....

kaale andhere bramhand ke madhya float sa karta hua niche gir raha tha mai...

ASMODEUS....

PARMESHWAR PUTR....THE CREATURE OF JUDGEMENT....

par ab ye designation meri nahi thi....

kyunki abhi abhi is bramhaand ke raichaita,par usse pehle mere father GOD ne mujhe mere hi ghar HEAVEN se baahar fekh diya tha...

aur kaaran....

us gande,ghinoune,maamuli keede ki haisiyat rakhne waale manushya jaati ke liye...

ankhon me beintehaan krodh,tadap,bebasi liye HEAVEN ke darwaze se hota hua is kaale universe ke beech girta chala raha tha mai aur mere saath mere wo saath humsaaye jinhone har waqt,hat lamhe me mera saath diya tha...

mere SEVEN OPOSTLES...

jo karah bhari awaaz abhi abhi nikli thi,wo un saathon ki hi thi....

reason....

GODS THUNDER....wo jhatka jisse GOD ne mujhe aur mujhe support karne waale mere in SEVEN OPOSTLES ke upar chhoda tha...

ye koi maamuli thunder nahi tha...is thunder ke mujhe aur mere OPOSTLES ko lagte hi hamari designations humse chhin chuki thi...

naa mai ab CREATURE OF JUDGEMENT raha tha aur naahi mere OPOSTLES ANGELS....

is waqt mera dard aur mera ghussa itna zyada tha ki mujhe us THUNDER ke mere IMMORTAL sharir ko lagne ke baad jo taklif uthi,usse mai apne jabde bheeche zabt kar gaya par jaise hi us thunder ne mere SEVEN OPOSTLES ko chhua,toh unke mooh se cheekh nikal gayi.....

itna hi nahi,un sabke senses bhi kho gaye aur wo saathon behosh ho chuke the..

wahin mai us sharirik, maansik aur roohani dard ko jhelte hue kuch aur der tak shunya ko ghurta raha aur fir..


MAI-FATHER.....ek taraf tha mai...wo shakti jisse aapne apni urja se banaya,apni shakti se seencha aur apne saamrajya me bada kiya aur dusri taraf thi wo maanav jaati...

ek aisi prajati jisse banane ke liye aapki sirf ek soch hi kaafi thi...

ek taraf aapke hi kano se bana aapka IMMORTAL putr aur dusri taraf wo MORTAL manushya jinke astitv ke hone naa hone se koi fark nahi padta....

chunaaw kitna asaan tha..kitna saral...kitne ek paksh....

par aapne kya kiya,apne putr ki jagah manushya jaati ko chuna.... roshni ki jagah andhere ko chuna...

mai jaanta hun ki har pitah ko apne putr se ummiden hoti hain par ek putr ki bhi toh apne pitah se kuch aashayen hoti hain...

manushya jaati ki najane kitni hi galtiyan,apraadh aapne maine dekhe...

unke vinash ke mere har tark ko aap bas itna kehkar taalte gaye ki punya ke panapne ke liye paap ka hona bhi zaroori hai...

purnatah nirarthak vachan....

par koi baat nahi father....jo hua,acha hi hua...ye acha hi hai ki ab mai CREATURE OF JUDGEMENT nahi hun...

kyunki ab mai aapke aadhin nahi hun.... mujhe kuch bhi karne ke liye ab aapke ijaazat ko zaroorat nahi hai....

isiliye ab apni pyari maanav jaati ke sangrakshan hetu kawach bicha lijiye...

kyunki ab unpar waar ASMODEUS khulkar karega....

haan,shart ke mutaabik sidhe sidhe toh us jaati ka samuh naash mai nahi kar sakta par koi baat nahi...

hun toh aap hi ka putra..har sawal ka jawab,har pareshani ka hal nikal hi lunga...

aur sirf utna hi waqt hai aapke priya manushya jaati ke paas.....


behad zoron se chillate hue maine ye saari baatein kahi thi...mai jaanta tha ki bhale hi FATHER ne mujhe cast out kar diya hai par unki nazar har waqt mujhpar hai...

mujhe ye bhi pata tha ki meri soch aur mere faisle se wo achi taraf waakif hain aur zaroor uska hal bhi unhone nikal liya hoga par mai apne faisle par adig tha...

ye sab sochte hue kaafi der ho chuka tha.. mere saathon OPOSTLES bhi ab tak behosh the aur kyunki unhe GODS THUNDER ka jhatka laga tha, isiliye wo tab tak hosh me aane waale bhi nahi the,jab tak mai unki chetna nahi loutatha...

is waqt mere krodh aur meri bebasi ke beech ek aur chiz ho rahi thi jo mere liye thodi aascharyajanak thi aur wo ye ki GOD'S THUNDER se jo dard mujhe hua tha,wo ab tak kaayam tha...

aur ye koi sadharan baat nahi thi kyunki kitna bhi bada prahar mujhe ASMODEUS ko zyada der tak dard de nahi sakta tha...

par fir mujhe laga ki shayad CREATURE OF JUDGEMENT ki meri upadhi ke chhin jaane ki wajah se mere self heal ka koi ansh kamzor padh gaya hai aur isiliye hi mujhe dard ho raha hai aur isiliye...


KAMURADHAWE

SELF HEAL


apne chaati ke madhya haath rakh maine is spell ko bola jiske baad mujhe ek halka sa jhatka laga par fir dheere dheere mera dard jaata raha...

dard ke jaaneke baad meri nazar ek disha me ghumi jahan ek tairta hua kaafi bada sa asteroid ghum raha tha...

us jagah ko dekhte hi mere sharir se 7 kirane nikal mere saathon OPOSTLES ko jaakar lagi aur aisa hote hi mai aur mere 7 OPOSTLES gayab hokar sidhe us asteroid par prakat hue....

asteroid par pair rakhte hi mere sharir se ek baar firse saath kirane nikli aur jaakar sidhe OPOSTLES se takrayi jiske kuch hi der baad un sabko hosh aa gaya...

hosh me aate hi kuch seconds lage un sabko pura maamla samajhne me par fir jab unhe yaad aaya ki unhe heaven se cast out kar diya gaya hai aur ab wo angels nahi rahe toh unhe bohot bura lagne laga...

un sabke sir jhuke hue the aur wo saathon chup the...mere OPOSTLES kabhi bhi mere saamne khudse baat nahi karte the...

unke mookh tabhi khulte the jab mai unse kuch puchta ya fir aadesh deta tha..

aur filhal mujhe un sabki manosthithi ke baare me pata tha isiliye....


MAI-agar tum saathon chaaho toh mujhe chhod kar jaa sakte ho....mujhe bura nahi lagega...


meri baat ko sun un sabke jhuke hue sir ek jhatke me upar uthe aur....


OPOSTLES-aap hamare aaradhya hai...aapke bina hamara astitv hi nahi hai...

ASMODEUS-ek baar firse soch lo..kyunki abtak tum sab Angels the...

mere saath saath GOD bhi tumhare taraf the par ab aisa nahi hoga...

ab wo mere saath nahi mere saamne khade honge ek pratidwandi ki tarah..

aise me tum sabka ye immortal state bhi khatre me padh sakta hai....

OPOSTLES-hum taiyar hain....aap aadesh karen ki hume kya karna hai???

MAI-hmm.... HEAVEN se cast out karne ke baad meri shakti ka ek hissa jo CREATURE OF JUDGEMENT ki upadhi ki wajah se mujhe mila tha,wo ab chhin chuka hai aur isiliye sabse pehle mujhe apni shakti me izafa karna hai...

shakti ke us rikht sthaaan ko bharna hai.....aur isiliye mai chahta hun ki tum sab bramhaand ke har power source ki talash karo...

aisi shaktiyan dhundo jo mere dhaaran karne ke yogya ho...


USKI KOI ZAROOAT NAHI HAI....AGAR TUM CHAAHO TOH BRAMHAAND ME BASI SHAKTI KA SABSE BADA SHROTH TUMHE ABHI YAHIN MIL JAAYEGA....


mere aadesh par OPOSTLES kuch kehte,usse pehle hi mere piche se ye awaaz aayi jisse sun mai palta aur dekha ki mere saamne ek badi si kaali dhuen ki chaadar thi...

ek aisi chaadar jisse beintihan shakti ka sanchar ho raha tha...

mai jaanta tha ki ye kya hai aur isiliye...


MAI-BLACK ENERGY......


bramhaand ka wo kaala sach jisse naa chahte hue khud bramhaand ne banaya tha yaa fir ye kahun ki mere shatruon ne, manushyon ne....

maamuli se manushya jinki utpatti ke baad unke dwara kiye gaye paap se panpi ek aisi shakti jo waqt ke saath behad shaktishali ho chuki hai...

mere baad wo dusri aisi chiz jisse god khatm nahi kar sakte kyunki aisa karne ke liye unhe apni priya manushya jaati ki bhi kurbaani deni hogi....


wahi BLACK ENERGY jiska koi form nahi,mere saamne khadi thi....

wahin us black energy ko dekh mere saathon OPOSTLES bhi kaafi hairan ho gaye the aur saath hi wo ye baat samajh gaye the ki abhi utpann hui paristithi me BLACK ENERGY ka mere saamne prakat hona kisi anhoni ke hone ka sanket hai aur isiliye un saath OPOSTLES me se ek kuch bolne ko hua par maine usse feel kar liya tha aur isiliye maine apna haath upar kiya jiske baad wo OPOSTLE chup hi reh gaya..


(ATTITUDE PART ONE KE LAST UPDATE ME BLACK ENERGY KE AANE SE OPOSTLES KI NAAPASANDAGI KE BAARE ME BATAYA GAYA HAI)


MAI-kuch keh rahe the tum....???

BLACK ENERGY-ASMODEUS, GOD'S SON ko baatein samajhne ke liye un baaton ko sunana kabse zaroori ho gaya...

tum achi tarah jaante ho ki mai kya keh raha hun aur meri baaton ke fal se tum kya kuch haasil kar sakte ho..

tumhe tumhare apne hi pitah ne bedakhal kar diya hai....tumhari shakti ka ek bada hissa filhal tumhare paas nahi hai...

tum kamzor ho.. tumhe shakti ki zaroorat hai...par ek sach bhi hai ki bhale hi tum kitne hi shaktiyon ko prapt kyun naa kar lo,kintu tumhari shakti ka jo bhaag GOD ne tumse chhin liya hai,us shakti ke barabar ki shakti tum khudse haasil nahi kar sakte...

par meri madad se naa sirf tum us shakti ke barabar shakti prapt kar sakoge,balki pehle se kayi guna zyada shaktishaali bhi ban jaaoge...

itne shaktishaali ki fir tum jo chaho,kar sakoge...

MAI-sawal ye hai ki tum meri madad karna kyun chahte ho...??

kyunki mai toh manushya jaati ka anth chahta hun...wahi manushya jaati jinki wajah se tumme shakti aayi hai...tumhara ye adhura astitv bana hai...

aur agar maine aisa kar diya,toh inke saath saath tum bhi khatm ho jaaoge...

BLACK ENERGY-khatm toh mai waise bhi kisi naa kisi din ho hi jaaunga aur wo isiliye kyunki mera apna koi sampurn astitv nahi hai....

mai immortal bhi manushya jaati ke sahare hi hun...

agar manushya jaati khatm nahi bhi hui toh mujhe yakin hai GOD kisi naa kisi tarah mere astitv ko mitane ka tarika khoj hi lenge...

aur isiliye hi mujhe hamesha se kisi aise ki talash rahi hai jo naa sirf itna shaktishaali ho ki mujhe apna sake,balki wo IMMORTAL bhi ho...

aur tum me ye dono goon hain....agar tum mujhe apna lete ho toh mujhe ek sthayi astitv mil jaayega aur tumhe apaar shakti....


BLACK ENERGY ki baat sun maine uski baat ke baare me sochna shuru kiya wahin is waqt OPOSTLES ke man ki baat bhi mujhe sunayi de rahi thi jo ki BLACK ENERGY ke khilaaf thi...

par kuch der pehke mere apne father se mujhe jo dard mila tha wo itna zyada tha ki OPOSTLES ki soch filhal mere liye matter nahi karti thi....

wahin mujhe sochta dekh....


BLACK ENERGY-jis saude me har taraf se faayda ho uske baare me zyada socha nahi karte....

bina vilamb kiye mujhe apna lo..mera dhaaran karte hi tumhari shakti ka wo bhaag jo filhal khaali ho gaya hai,wo wapas bhar jaayega..

itna hi nahi, mujhe apnaate hi mai tumhe is bramhaand me chhupe aisi shakti ke baare me bataunga jiske baare me tum khud se kabhi nahi jaan paaoge...

aur ek baar tumne us shakti ko haasil kar liya toh tum pehle se bhi zyada shaktishaali ho jaaoge...

(black energy warriors world ke odridge mountain me chhupi shakti ke baare me baat kar raha hai...zyada jaanane ke liye part 1 ka wo part fir se padh len)


MAI-thik hai....mai tumhe dhaaran karne ke liye taiyar hun...

BLACK ENERGY-atti uttam...toh fir apne shairir aur apni aatma ko jodkar kaho ki..

MAI ASMODEUS APNE SHARIR AUR APNI AATMA KI HI TARAH BLACK ENERGY KO BHI APNA ATOOT ANG MAANTE HUE USSE APNATA HUN....

MAI-MAI ASMODEUS APNE SHARIR AUR APNI AATMA KI HI TARAH....

EK SECOND......


bolte bolte mai achanak rook gaya yaa fir ye kahun ki maine ASMODEUS ko aage bolne se rok diya...

mai matlab RAAZ....

jee haan doston....mai RAAZ jo kuch der pehle tak ASMODEUS ke rang me kuch aisa rang gaya tha ki mai bhul hi gaya tha ki mai ASMODEUS nahi RAAZ hun...

aur shayad mai is pure scene me,pal me ASMODEUS hi bana rehta par anjaane me hi sahi par ASMODEUS ne us parat ko khol diya jisme mai chhup gaya tha...

nahi samjhe,samjhata hun par uske liye thoda piche chalte hain...

aapko yaad hoga ki GODS THUNDER lagne ki wajah se THE SEVEN OPOSTLES ko dard hua tha aur wahi dard ASMODEUS ko bhi hua tha..

darasal wo dard ASMODEUS ko nahi balki uske andar chuppe mere astitv ko hua tha..

wo astitv jo us gole ke jo ASMODEUS ke jeeven ka pal tha,mujhme samate hi vilupt ho gaya tha par us jhakte ke lagte hi mera astitv ASMODEUS ke andar jaag gaya..

itna hi nahi,us GOD'S THUNDER ke lagne se mujhe hadh se zyada taklif bhi mehsoos hone lagi...

aisi taklif jiski wajah se mujhe yaad hi nahi raha ki mai filhal ek scene ka hissa hun...

par ek sach ye bhi tha ki filhal meri taklif ASMODEUS ki taklif thi aur isiliye jab usne us taklif se nijaat paane ke liye spell bola toh uske saath saath mujhe bhi dard se chhutkara mil gaya..

aur aisa hote hi meri buddhi jo ab tak ASMODEUS ke adhin thi,uspar thoda thoda hi sahi par mera control aane laga...

aur jab aisa hua toh maine apne chitt ko shant kar khudke dimag ke un bhaagon ko jo ab bhi ASMODEUS ke control me thi,unhe apni control me laane ko koshish karne laga...

is beech aage ka scene chalta raha...par fir jab BLACK ENERGY ASMODEUS ke saamne prakat hui aur usse khudko apnaane ke liye convince karne lagi tab mai badi dhyan se uski baat sun raha tha..

aur kyunki mai aur ASMODEUS filhal ek hi the isiliye apne pitah ke faisle ki wajah se uske dil me lagatar uth raha dard aur saath hi SEVEN OPOSTLES ke dimag ki soch jo ki BLACK ENERGY ke khilaaf thi, usse bhi mai mehsoos kar raha tha...

par aakhir me jab ASMODEUS ke raazi hone par BLACK ENERGY se usse ek specific sentence ko dohraane ke liye bola aur ASMODEUS ne bhi usse repeat karna shuru kiya toh maine ASMODEUS par control lete hue usse chup kara diya....


ab baari thi is ASMODEUS ke khamosh hone ki kyunki BLACK ENERGY ke saath deal bhale hi usne shuru ki thi par isse khatm mujhe karna tha aur isiliye...


MAI-mai tumhe aur tumhari shakiyon ko apne hith ke liye apnata hun....


BLACK ENERGY ko baat ko repeat naa karte hue maine apne hisaab se baat ki jispar.....


BLACK ENERGY-aise nahi..tumhe ye kehna ki MAI ASMODEUS APNE...

MAI-wo sun chuka hun mai....par wo baatein mai kahunga nahi....jo maine kaha hai,wahi sahi hai...


BLACK ENERGY ki baat ko kaat maine apni baat kahi jisse sun BLACK ENERGY chownka par fir baat ko sambhalne ke liye..


BLACK ENERGY-par jo maine kaha hai,usse dohrane se hi tumhe mera pura laabh mil sakta hai...

MAI-laabh toh milega par mujhe nahi tumhe...

BLACK ENERGY-mai samjha nahi...

MAI-itne nasamajh toh nahi ho sakte tum...khair samjhata hun...

meri body aur meri aatma,inki utpatti se hi meri utpatti hui thi...kehne ka matlab hai ki ye dono hi mera atoot hissa hain...

par tum nahi ho..aur jo tum mujhse bulwana chahte ho usse tum bhi in dono ki tarah hi mujhse jud jaaoge..

ek tarah se mai tumme badal jaaunga...mere body aur soul ke saath milkar tum mere swami ban jaaoge..

aur ye mai hone nahi de sakta..tum mere saathi ho sakte hi,mere maalik nahi...

agar tumhe mera sharir chahiye,toh tum isme....

EK KIRAYDAAR KI TARAH REH SAKTE HO,PAR ISS KHARID NAHI SAKTE....


CHAANNNN......


akhri line bolte hi ek jhatka sa laga mere dimag ko aur fir....


back to ground zero....

maine dekha ki mai wapas ZEAL me tha....

meri chunoutiyon waale dono golon me se ek gola gayab ho chuka tha aur ab mere saamne sirf ek gola tha...

mera dimag ghum raha tha aur issi wajah se maine kuch palon ke liye apni aakhen band ki aur fir jab mujhe kuch thik laga toh...

maine apni aakhen kholi aur mere aisa karte hi mere kaano me WOOGER ki awaaz gunj gayi....

WOOGER-pehli chunouti puri hui...ab baari hai dusri chunouti ki..


taiyar ho jaayiye apne agle safar ke liye jisme aap honge....VIKRAM......







AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....







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