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Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

Suryaa

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After 2 update reading i wan't say.......
Fast VIDEOUS then VIRAAZ & now VALDIS all of NAJAYAJ r United in same place :drunk::drunk::vhappy1:
They all are made up from D.N.A
Daddy's Najayaj Aulad
(As there is no mother only daddy )
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI DONO LANDS KO EK KARNE KI KOSISH ME LAG JAATI HAI,DUSRI TARAF VALDIS APNI ASLI PEHCHAAN GAFFER KE ROOP ME ALFREEN & PARTY KE SAAMNE AA JAATA HAI WAHIN TEESRI TARAF BHUVIKA RAAZ KO BATATI HAI KI SHOWHI USKA AUR BEELZEBUB KA BETA HAI.

AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-3


(THE SACRIFICE & THE PERFECT EPILOGUE)



UPDATE-161



PLANET- THE LAND


PLACE-THE LAND






DWALITAH JWADIHAGAM

BINDING MERGE


chehra upar karte hue man hi man uccharit kiya is SPELL ko MAHI ne...

apne neeche ki zamin me apni shakti ki urja ko nirantar aur bade dheeme pace me bahate hue MAHI ne aakhirkaar bina zamin aur planet ke CORE ko destroy aur even shake kiya bina hi pure LAND ko apne shaktiyon ke saath jod liya tha aur jab aisa ho gaya toh baari thi agle hi step ki joki tha upar akash me bane LAND ko neeche ke LAND ke saath jodne ki..

THE LAND PLANET ke core me puri jagah ka sabse zyada magnetic field activated tha..

darasal woh magnetic field upar akash me bane land ki gravitational field ka ek trigger point tha..

aur jaise hi MAHI ki urja core tak pahunchi,toh theek tabhi MAHI ne sir upar kar DWALITAH JWADIHAGAM SPELL ko uccharit kar diya aur uske aisa karte hi ek saath do chizen hui..

pehli..

uske heart se ek invisible binding beam nikal uske haathon ke zariye neeche core ko taraf badh gayi..

dusri...

uske brain se bhi ek beam nikli aur sidhe upar akash me bane land ki taraf badh gayi..

woh beam upar ke land ko penetrate karte hue sidhe uske core ko touch kar gayi thi..

aur jab aisa hua toh is core me beh raha magnetic field force MAHI ke beam ko khudse jodta hua pure LAND me faile gaya..

ye sab MAHI apni band aankhon se dekh rahi thi..

aur jo ho raha tha,usse dekh uske face par ek victory smile naach uthi thi..

jo woh chahti thi,ho raha tha..ab bas uske dono beams ko interconnect hona tha joki ek automatic process tha aur woh isiliye kyunki neeche aur upar, dono taraf bane LANDS ke core pehle se hi ek light bond se jude hue the jinhe MAHI ke dono beams ne light se strong bond me convert kar diya tha..

ab bas un dono cores ko paas aate hue ek hone ki der thi jiski shuruwat bhi ho chuki thi.

once this process was done,upar akash me bana LAND wahan se gayab hote hue neeche waale LAND ke saath attach ho jaayega aur ye adhura THE LAND PLANET complete ho jaayega...

yahi sab soch MAHI aankein band kiye muskura rahi thi par tabhi...


KRRRRKRRRRKRRRRKRRRR.....

BOOMMMMM........

ek tez dhamaka sa hua..par ye dhamaka dono LANDS ke fatne ka,yaa phir unse MAHI ke link tootne ka nahi tha...

ye dhamaka hua tha MAHI ke brain me base ek locked part ke sudden unlock hone ki wajah se...

darasal hua ye ki MAHI is LAND linking challenge ki wajah se abhi PAUSED CEREBRATION ke deepest mode me pahunch chuki thi..

aur dheeme par nirantar pravah se behti uski urja sirf dono lands ke depth ko nahi balki uske brain ke har depth ko bhi continously touch kar rahi thi...

aur phir,jaisa ki jharne ke lagatar girne se hota ha, uske raaste par aane waala har patthar anjaane me hi toot jaata hai,theek waise hi MAHI ke brain ka woh locked part bhi uske urja ke continously poke karne ke kaaran blast hote hue toot gaya...

aur jab aisa hua toh MAHI ko laga ek tez jhatka..ye jhatka us blast ki wajah se nahi,balki us drishya ki wajah se usse laga tha jo us LOCKED part se bahar aate hue usse dikhi thi..

ye woh drishya tha jo uski utpatti ka main definition tha...

saath hi saath MAHI ko us drishya ke through ye bhi dikha ki agar woh apni taakat ke asli defination ko practically likhne me asamarth rahi toh VIDEOUS kya kar sakta hai...

jahan apni vastavikta ke sach ko jaan MAHI bohot khush thi wahin us vastavikta ke saath jo zimmedari uske PITAH ne usse di thi,uspar naa khare utar paane ki keemet kitni badi ho sakti hai,uske baare me soch roungte khade ho chuke the uske..

ek jhatke me aankh khul gayi uski aur aisa hote hi jo usne dekha,woh usse filhal ke liye sukoon dene ke liye kaafi tha..

THE LAND naam ke dono LANDS ek ho chuke the,jo daayitv uske pitah ne RAAZ ke zariye usse diya tha, woh usne pura kar diya tha..

ab finally THE LAND ek complete LIFE SUSTAINABLE PLANET me convert ho chuka tha...

ek celebrating moment tha ye par MAHI ka mind filhal us celebration ke liye taiyaar nahi tha...

par haan,jahan woh khadi thi,aage jaakar us PLANET me life hone waali hai,tarah tarah ke empires aur community wahan rise hongi,ye sab soch ek aadhe chain ki hi sahi,saans li MAHI ne jiske baad wapas se mile daayitv ko yaad kar...


MAHI-i just hope that i am worthy...

U ARE WORTHY MY DAUGHTER...


upar jahan ab land nahi akash tha,wahan gunj uthi VIKRAM ki awaaz jisse sun ek jhatke me MAHI ka saara tention,saara nervousness jaata raha..

woh bas muskurate hue upar neele akash me apne dad ki chavi imagine karte hue unhe kuch der tak dekhti rahi jispar..


VIKRAM-go to your friends MAHI...par,jab tak hadh se zyada zaroorat na padh jaaye, interfere mat karna.. aur jo sake toh RAAZ ka wait karna..

jab woh wahan pahunchne waala hoga, tumhe aur tumhare baad sabko pata chal jaayega...

but tab tak,jitna ho sake,wait...is kahani ke hissedaar tumhare sabhi dost bhi hain...aur unki khudki shamata hi ye tay karegi ki kya woh sab is kahani ke aakhri adhaya me bhi hissedaar hone ke laayak hain ya nahi..

MAHI-ok dad..but filhal mera sawal kuch aur hai...???kya karna hai,ye jaanti hun mai,par kahan se karna hai,ye nahi pata mujhe..

bina us shakti shroth ko jaane mai apna kaam nahi kar sakti...

VIKRAM-jab manzil tumhari hai toh raasta bhi tumhe hi dhundna padega MAHI..

par haan,thodi madad toh sabko milti hai,tumhe bhi milegi..

dhyan se suno...

"APNE ORIGIN KE US JAGAH PAR JAANA HAI TUMHE JAHAN RAAT KI NEEND PURI NAHI HOTI..."





PLANET-GOLETH


PLACE-THE DARK DIFFUSION




ITNE DINO BAAD MIL RAHE HAIN,ARRE KUCH TOH BOLO...!!!


hamari taraf ghum kahi ye baat VALDIS ne jispar ACCHUTA aur baaki sab chup hi rahe..

aur isiliye..


VALDIS-i am disappointed..isse better reaction ki ummid ki thi maine tum sabse...

ALFREEN-how...tum shuruat se hamare saath the..baaki sabko toh dodge de sakte ho tum,but mere bhai ki nazaron se apni asliyat kaise chuppayi tumne..???


ALFREEN ki baat sun muskuraya VALDIS aur..


VALDIS-tum RAAZ ko kuch zyada hi importance de rahi ho ALFREEN....

mai,VALDIS koi maamuli DARK WARRIOR nahi hun jisse woh looser RAAZ aise hi pehchaan leta..

i am the BLOODY GAFFER of BLACK ENERGY...ek aisi taakat hun mai jiski buniyad aaj se laakhon saal pehle rakhi gayi thi...

bhale hi mai is kahani ka woh paatr nahi hun jisse mitaane ke liye RAAZ the so called CHOSEN ONE ka janm aur utpatti, dono hua hai par pehchaan apni bhi kaafi strong hai...

ALFREEN-laakhon saalo pehle...!!!

VALDIS-batata hun,waise bhi hidden identity ke saath kaafi waqt guzar diya maine..

aur ussi hidden identity ki hi wajah se RAAZ,ye ACCHUTA, SLUNDER jaise log mujhe harm karne ki, mujhe harane ki galatfehmi paale baithe hain...

tumhe kya lagta hai, sirf hamare GOD VIDEOUS hi ek aisi urja hain jo bramhaand me laakhon saalon tak BLACK ENERGY ke sanrakshan me ghumte rahe..

VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS se bani urja ki tarah joki hamare GOD VIDEOUS hain,ek aur urja bhi thi jo unki kahani me release hote hue bekaabu hokar UNIVERSE me ghoom rahi thi...

do behadh hi strong BLACK ENERGY ke owners jinke sudden power flipping ki wajah se unhe toh redemption mil gayi par unki purani pehchaan,BLACK ENERGY ki behisaab shakti unse alag hokar bramhand me bikhar gayi...

aur jab hamare GOD VIDEOUS ko unka woh roop jisse tum sab jaante ho mila,jab woh pure hue toh toh unhone hi un bikhre hue BLACK ENERGY ki urja ko ikattha kiya aur apni hi tarah shape dete hue ek naya roop banaya..

aur wahi roop matlab ki VALDIS is waqt tum sabke saamne khada hai..

ALFREEN-VIDEOUS ka toh samajh bhi aata hai ki woh kyun SAVENT ban kar CHOSEN me aaya..RAAZ ke liye..

uske shakti ke kano se VIRAAZ banane aur usse suffer karane ke liye..

par tum kisliye SAVENT bankar hamare beech rahe..??

VALDIS-iski wajah se..??


MABEL ke taraf point karte hue kahi ye baat VALDIS ne jispar..


MABEL-matlab tumhe pehle se hi mere GOD GIFTED POWERS ke baare me pata tha..

VALDIS-bilkul...asal me tumhari shaktiyan hain hi aisi jisse in baakiyon ki tarah chuppa kar nahi rakha jaa sakta tha.

haan,kyunki woh us waqt trigger nahi hui thi, isiliye unka energy flow sense karna asaan nahi tha but agar RAAZ kar sakta tha toh mai toh kar hi sakta tha...

tumhari ability meri taakaton ko ek nayi disha de sakti thi..ek aisi unchaayi de sakti thi jiske baad RAAZ ki chinta hamare GOD VIDEOUS ko karni hi nahi padti..

mai khudhi usse araam se nipat leta...par aisa karne ka catch bhi mujhe maalum tha...

tumhare kareeb jaana tha mujhe... aur mai chala bhi gaya tha...

you liked me...par woh moment jab pyar ke pravah me behkar tum khudko,apne sharir ko mujhe sounp deti aur aisa jote hi mai tumhare shaktiyon ka hissedaar apne aap ban jaata,is ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ne mera plan fail kar diya..

aur ab this two will pay for that...


dehekti aankhon se SLUNDER aur khaaskar ACCHUTA ko dekhte hue kahi ye baat VALDIS ne jispar koi kuch kehta ki tabhi..


HAHAHAHAHA....

zor se has padi ALFREEN jiske baad...


ALFREEN-kya kaha tune.. tu mere bhai se nipat leta...beta,sirf ek ghurti nazar bhar se woh tujhe nibta deta..

par koi naa,teri galatfehmi aaj aur abhi RAAZ ki behen door kar degi...


HARDIYAM KAWACHAM...

LINKAGE BARRIER...


apni baat keh VALDIS ko sabak sikhane ke iraade se ALFREEN kuch karti ki tabhi VALDIS ne man hi man is spell ko uccharit kiya aur uske aisa karte hi door lehrate hue DARK DIFFUSION se ek dhuen ka beam nikal theek ALFREEN jahan khadi thi,uske aage aakar gira..

aur jab aisa hua toh ek hi pal ke andar ALFREEN ke chaaron taraf kaale dhuen ka hi ek chota sa pinjra sa ban gaya..

ye sab dekh ALFREEN ki aankhein ghusse se jal uthi aur..


ALFREEN-tujhe lagta hai ki tu mujhe kaid kar sakta hai...dekhta jaa,ek second bhi nahi lagega mujhe is cage ko break karne me..

VALDIS-i totally agree...aisa karna chahti ho,beshak karlo, but usse pehle consiquences jaan lo toh behtar hoga...

filhal tum jis barrier me ho,ye koi mamuli barrier nahi hai...

ye tumhari shakti se toot zaroor sakta hai,but break hote hue ye jo karega,woh result shayad tum bardasht naa kar sako..

darasal ye barrier bana hai is DARK DIFFUSION ke core strength se aur abhi ye usse interconnected hai..

toh agar tumne is barrier ko toda, toh iske saath tum us core ko bhi hinder kar baithogi...

result, bramhaand me base billions and billions logon ke kamsekam 20 pratishat log jinki ginti bhi billions me hi hogi, woh log jo BLACK ENERGY ki sabse zyada giraft me hain,woh sab mar jaayenge..

haan,bure logon ke marne se tumko zyada fark nahi padega par agar is tarah se woh sab mare,toh GOD aur BLACK ENERGY ke beech sandhi ka ek aisa violation create hoga jiski aad me BLACK ENERGY aur hamare GOD VIDEOUS pure bramhand me khulle aam kohram macha sakte hain..

do you want that to happen...??if yes,go for it.break the CAGE...


VALDIS ki baatein sun jabde sakhti se bheench gaye the ALFREEN ke par man hi man woh laachar bhi feel karne lagi thi..

aur woh laachari uske face par dikhne lagi thi jisse dekh ab baari thi VALDIS ke hasne ki..

HAHAHAHA...


VALDIS-tum WHITE ENERGY se bhare log..kitna aasaan hota hai tum jaiso ko majboor karna...


khilli udate hue kahi ye baat VALDIS ne jispar ALFREEN kuch kehti ki tabhi..


ACCHUTA-tu tention naa le ALFREEN..tu cage me hai,hum toh nahi...isse hum nipat lenge...

VALDIS- ACCHUTA.. over confidence ka bhandar hai tere andar...

mai GAFFER hun...KAALI SHAKTIYON ka ek shaktishaali pratik...aur jis WHITE ENERGY ke dum par tu uchak raha hai,mujhse nipatne ke waade kar raha hai,jaanta hai,meri shakti ka shroth kya hai..???

tumhari apni WHITE ENERGY...


VALDIS ki baat sun chownke wahan moujud sabhi aur..


HIDA-dont bluff ACCHUTA..tum jaise DARK INSECT ka shroth WHITE ENERGY ho hi nahi sakta...

VALDIS-is that so...???yaad hai maine bataya tha ki do log jinki shakti BLACK ENERGY se achanak WHITE ENERGY me flip hui thi,aur jiski wajah se unki purani KAALI URJA joki mai tha, unstable ho gayi thi..

woh do log naa sirf ab WHITE ENERGY ke pratik hain balki saath hi saath super powerful bhi hain..

aur kyunki mai unki purani hi sahi, par urja se bana hun, isiliye unki abhi ki taakat ne bhi meri BLACK ENERGY ko shaktishaali banaya hai...

ALFREEN-kiski baat kar raha hai tu..???

VALDIS-apne parents ki jinhe apne is bacche ke baare me pata hi nahi..


BHUVIKA & BEELZEBUB....




PLANET-COURIOUS


PLACE-MOTHER TREE





OK CHAMPION, THEORETICAL PRACTICE TIME IS OVER...NOW LET'S DO SOME PRACTICAL ANALYZATION.


abhi mujhe HISIRO BHAVATI SPELL ke power ko apne andar samana shuru kiye kuch minutes hi beete the ki tabhi PAUSED CEREBRATION process me hone ke baawjud ek jaani pehchaani awaaz mere kaano ko bhedh gayi..

ab yahan aisa toh sirf ek hi shaksh kar sakta tha.. ASMODEUS..

jo is waqt theek mere piche khada tha..

wahin ANALIA aur BHUVIKA joki lagatar mere spell se ho rahe aantarik prabhav ka aakalan kar rahe the aur mere SPELL ki power ko absorb karne ki shamata ko dekh mujhse kaafi impressed lag rahe the,unka woh saara impression ASMODEUS ki awaaz se jaise khatm hi ho chuka tha..

ASMODEUS ne mujhe 1 ghanta kaha tha,par aa woh aadhe ghante me hi gaya tha..

uska diya 1 ghanta bhi kaafi kam tha is SPELL ko master ko karne ke liye aur ab uske yun half time me aa jaane se mere learning process me ek aisa stop lag chuka tha jiske baad ANALIA aur BHUVIKA ko samajh nahi aa raha tha ki mera aage kya haal hone waala hai..

wahin in sabke beech ASMODEUS ki awaaz sun aankh khul chuki thi meri jiske baad khade hokar uski taraf ghuma mai aur..


MAI-ghadi badliye apni...1 ghanta me bajne waala alarm aadhe ghante baad hi baj raha hai..

ASMODEUS-ghadi aur waqt jinke hisaab se chalte hain,alarms bhi unke ishaare par hi bajte hain...

MAI-aadha ghanta aur hisaab-e-ishara kar lo..mera alarm bhi baj jaayega...

ASMODEUS-bilkul baj jaayega..but what's the fun in that...

tumhare humans me ek kahawat kaafi mashoor hai..."every boxer has a plan till he himself recieves a punch"...

tumhara plan hai ki tum SPELL ki shakti ko khudme merge karoge aur phir practically check karoge..

i say ki kyun naa merging ke waqt hi practically check bhi kar liya jaaye..

this way is more interesting..it will either make it or break it..aur pata bhi chal jaayega,tum wakayi kitne paani me ho...

so what say,are you up for the challenge yaa phir rehne de...???

MAI-kuch der pehle khud hi kaha tha aapne ki mujhme jo pagalpan hai,woh aapse hai..phir ye sawal kyun..???

so i say,just bring it on...???

ASMODEUS-maza aayega...so here's the plan..tum apni sword apne andar chupaoge aur with all the effects of HISIRO BHAVATI SPELL,uski taakat ko bhi HIDE karoge..

and at the same time tumhe bina ye dikhaye ki tumme HEAVENLY POWERS hain, ALOUKIK SHAKTIYAN hain,tumhe khudko super strong SHOW karna padega...

utna hi shaktishaali jitna tum apne ALOUKIK SHAKTIYON ko bina chupaye SHOW kar sakte ho...

MAI-ye challange nahi ho sakta.. what's the catch...


meri baat sun smile naach uthi ASMODEUS ke face par aur..


ASMODEUS-jab tum HISIRO BHAVATI SPELL ki madad se SWORD ko apne andar chuppa rahe hoge,tab mai tumhare body me enter karunga..

and it's gonna cause you pain.. Hell's pain...us pain ko bear karte hue tumhe HIDE aur SHOW ka game successfully jeetna hai...

jahan ASMODEUS ki baat sun aankhen badi ho gayi mere piche khade ANALIA aur BHUVIKA ki,wahin maine ek lambi saans chhodi aur...


MAI-shuru karen...!!

SOOBHH.....


SWORD ko apne heart ke upar rakha maine..mere aisa karte hi woh gayab hote hue mere andar sama chuki thi..

aisa hote hi apni baat kahi maine jiske baad bina ek pal gawaye hi ASMODEUS ek urja me badal tezi se aage badha aur mere forehead waale bhaag se hote hue mere andar sama gaya..

AAHHHHHH...

ASMODEUS ke mere sir me samate hi naa sirf woh bhaag pura jhanjhana gaya balki saath hi saath jaisa ASMODEUS ne kaha tha,waisa hi hua...

mera sir aise pain hone laga jaise kisine uske andruni bhaag me aag laga diya ho..

is uncontrollable pain ko sehte hue mujhe ASMODEUS joki filhal ek urja ke roop me mere sir me tha,uska downward movement saaf feel hua...

us feeling ke aate hi kisi tarah apne jalte hue sir ke dard ko bardasht karte hue maine HISIRO BHAVATI SPELL ke asar ko apne HEART area me circulate karna shuru kiya..

jaisa ki ANALIA ne bataya tha ki HISIRO BHAVATI do super powerful spells ko ek karke bana tha,aur isiliye is SPELL ki taakat aur impact bhi kuch zyada hi strong tha..

yahi wajah thu ki mere is SPELL ko apne heart me circulate karte hu SWORD ka bhaaripan jo mai pehle se hi feel kar raha tha,woh hadh se zyada badh gaya..

uske upar ASMODEUS joki mujhe constant unbearable pain dete hue neeche SWORD ki taraf hi badh raha tha,itna sab ek saath naa mera brain jhel paaya aur naahi mera heart..

aankhein bhaari ho gayi meri aur kuch seconds me hi mai behosh ho chuka tha...

mere behosh hote hi ASMODEUS mujhse bahar nikal gaya aur wapas apni purani position ne jaakar khada ho gaya..

uske haath se ek ray nikal mere sir se aa takrayi..

ye ek concious ray thi jiske asar se mujhe kuch hi seconds me hosh aa chuka tha..

aankh khulte hi mai uthkar khada ho gaya aur mere aisa karte hi..



ASMODEUS-again..

SOOBH......


ek hi word bola ASMODEUS ne jiske agle hi pal woh ek baar phirse mere forehead me sama chuka tha aur uske andar samane ke agle hi pal..

AHHHHHHH....

mere mooh se dobara cheekh nikal chuki thi....

pichle baar HISIRO BHAVATI SPELL ko activate karte hue ASMODEUS naam ke pain in the ass ko sir par jhelta hua mai kuch 10 seconds hi teek paaya tha..

is baar ye silsila 5 seconds zyada chala but uske baad mere senses firse dull hote chale gaye...

DHAPPP

1,2,3,5,8,10......ye duswi baar tha jab mai behosh hote hue neeche gir chuka tha aur is baar jab ASMODEUS ne mujhe hosh me laaya toh...


ASMODEUS-socha nahi tha ki tum itne weak hoge RAAZ...

chand seconds bhi mujhe jhelte hue SPELL merging task pura nahi kar paa rahe ho tum..

you accepted the challenge,but you failed RAAZ...

MAI-really.....!!!! but I don't think so...

ASMODEUS-ziddi toh tum ho RAAZ..haar kar bhi haar nahi maan rahe..koi nahi,aur try kar lete hai...!!!

MAI-uski zaroorat nahi padegi...


apni baat bolte hue maine bas apne haath ko aage kar usse halka sa twist kiya aur mere aisa karte hi..


AHHHHHH...........

ladhkhada se gaye ASMODEUS ke kadam...piche ki taraf dagmagate hue meri taraf dekhne lagi uski nazar jinme is waqt do bhaav the..

pehle hairani ke aur dusri khushi ke...

par in dono hi bhaavon ka reason ek hi tha...SWORD....jo is waqt mere nahi balki ASMODEUS ke andar thi..

jisse maine HISIRO BHAVATI SPELL ke asar ko ek next level tak le jaate hue ASMODEUS ke andar hi transfer kar diya tha..

aur spell ke complete asardaar hone ka saboot yahi tha ki usse iske baare me pata bhi nahi chala tha...

filhal HISIRO BHAVATI SPELL ke asar ko hata diya tha maine aur isiliye is waqt ASMODEUS bohot zyada pain me tha..

itna pain ki agar uski jagah koi aur hota toh 1000 baar tadap kar mar chuka hota but ASMODEUS koi aur toh ho nahi sakta..

bade confidently SWORD se mil rahe us asahaniya dard ko jhelte hue woh mujhe prashansha bhari nazaron se dekh raha tha jispar..


MAI-ek kahawat boli thi aapne..."every boxer has a plan till he himself recieves a punch"...

but the thing with me is, I don't believe anything... doesn't matter who said it or where i read it... until and unless my conscience allows it to be believed...

aur mai apne liye bane jis kahawat me believe karta hun,woh ye hai...

har boxer ka plan sirf mukke khaane se pehle tak ka hi hota hai,par RAAZ ka asal plan mukke khaane ke baad shuru hota hai...


apni baat bol bas apne haathon se finger scratching kiya maine aur mere aisa karte hi SWORD ASMODEUS ke andar se gayab hokar mere haathon me aa gayi aur aisa hote hi ASMODEUS ka pain turant jaata raha...

khudko sayammit kar...


ASMODEUS-how...???

MAI-mai behosh jaan bujh kar ho raha tha..aapke mere andar samane se jo pain mujhe ho raha tha,uska reason SPELL nahi balki SWORD thi..


SWORD aapki mujhme upasthiti bardasht nahi kar rahi thi aur isiliye mujhe pain de rahi thi..

par pehli baar jab mai behosh hua aur aap mujhse bahar hue,toh sword ne mujhe andar se clean karna shuru kiya.

theek ussi waqt mere subconscious brain ne HISIRO BHAVATI SPELL trigger karna shuru kar diya jiska natija double speed se mujhe milne laga..

woh SPELL badi tezi se mere body ke saath merge hone laga tha...

ASMODEUS-isiliye tum baar baar behosh ho rahe the taaki us chote time margin me jab mai tumhare andar nahi tha, tumhara sub concious brain SPELL ko thik se trigger karte hue usse tumme merge kar paaye..

MAI-9th baar behosh hote hote maine SPELL ke pure asar par control paa kar liya tha..

pehle socha ki aapko bata dun but phir ek khayal aaya..

mujhe apni is nayi SHOW/HIDE shakti ko cheak karna tha and who could be a better volenteer than you..

10th baar jab aap mere brain me ghusse aur neeche ki taraf jaane lage toh maine SPELL ke HIDE part ko activate kar SWORD aapme sama di aur SHOW part se aapko apne andar sabkuch normal feel karwaya....

moral of the story...agar PARMESHWAR PUTR bhi mere HISIRO BHAVATI SPELL ke prabhav se bach nahi sakta toh i think i am good enough to handle ALIUM...!!!


meri baat sun muskurate hue kuch pal dekhta raha ASMODEUS aur phir...

ek sudden movement feel hui mujhe jisse jab tak mai samajh bhi paata,meri location badal chuki thi...

ek nayi but jaani pehchaani location me tha mai jisse dekh aankhon me sawal liye mai ASMODEUS ko dekh...


MAI- PECULIAR SPACE....!!!hum phir yahan....!!!





PLACE-PECULIAR SPACE



ASMODEUS-yup...hum phir yahan...


isse aage kuch kaha nahi ASMODEUS ne naahi mujhe zaroorat padi kyunki ab tak is jagah ka ganit samajh chuka tha mai aur isiliye...


MAI-oh..toh isiliye is jagah ko DARK SPACE kehte hain..if i am not wrong,this is the origin of HUMAN LIFE in universe...

woh pehle 10 living planets yahin bane the aur kyunki un PLANETS ko GOD ne destroy kiya tha, isiliye ye jagah itni negetive aur dark hai..

pure bramhand se alag ek banishment zone ki tarah..

ASMODEUS-important baat bhul rahe ho..ye wahi jagah hai jahan ALIUM moujud hai..

aur jahan ALIUM hogi,space ki woh jagah CURSED se kam nahi..

yahan moujud ALIUM ki INVISIBLE aur undetected urja ki madad se hi VIDEOUS ne apni shakti ko nahi unchayi di thi..

bohot koshish ki thi usne yahan ki shakti ke peeche ki sachchai ko jaanane ki,mere aur VIKRAM ki kahani ke har bhaag ko,har baarikh se baarikh detail ko khangala tha usne,but jo kissa hum dono ki kahani ka bhaag hai hi nahi,woh usse dhundta kaise..???

MAI-hmm..toh kahan hai ye ALIUM...???

ASMODEUS-hamare saamne hi hoga...bas dekhne ki nazar chahiye jiska access sirf tumhari SWORD mehai..


SWORD ke POMMEL par lage RED DIAMOND ko press karte hue apne ALOUKIK SHAKTIYON ko usse connect karwaao,har nazara clear ho jaayega...

ASMODEUS ne jaisa kaha,maine kiya..

aur jaise hi maine apne POMMEL par lage RED DIAMOND ko press karte hue usme apne ALOUKIK SHAKTIYON ke urja ko release kiya toh..

mujhe apne haathon se hokar mere pure dhamniyon me ek nayi urja ke bahav ka abhaas hone laga.

ye bahav mere pure sharir se hota hua sidhe mere dono aankhon me aakar theher gaya aur aisa hote hi mere aankhon se ek red beam nikla jisne us andhere DARK SPACE ko roshni se bhar diya..

par meri nazar anant DARK SPACE ke sirf ek specific hisse par theher gayi thi jahan is waqt ek BLACK PLANET meri RED BEAM ki wajah se chamak raha tha..

ALIUM....

finally apne next destination ALIUM ko dekhte hue meri aankhon ki chamak aur usse nikal rahe red beam ki roshni bhi thodi aur badh chuki aur ye dekh..


ASMODEUS-so finally you are seeing ALIUM...???

MAI-haan us taraf..


ek disha ki taraf jahan ALIUM tha,kahi maine ye baat jisse sun..

ASMODEUS-point out karke faayda nahi.. ALIUM ko sirf tum hi dekh sakte ho...

MAI-ok then..of i go then...


but isse pehle ki mai ALIUM ki taraf kooch karta...


ASMODEOUS-mera ek kaam karna hoga tumhe RAAZ....

ab tak ke tumhare safar me tum kabhi ANGEL rahe ho aur kabhi DEMON...

par DEVIL kabhi nahi ban paaye...but now is the time when you unleash that side of yours...

ye ALIUM hi woh kaaran hai jiski wajah se mere PITAH ko taklif hui thi...

bhale hi mere PITAH ke liye ab ye baat koi maayne nahi rakhti par jis kisine kabhi bhi mere PITAH ko taklif paunchayi ho,woh dand ka paatr hai..

haan,tumhara maksad bhi us PLANET ko khtam karna hai par dand usse uske existence par hi milna chahiye..

jahan tum jaa rahe ho,woh jagah aur wahan base log are the symbol of EVIL...

aur isiliye, us planet ko khatm karne se pehle usme base logon par apna WRATH barsana hai tumhe..

NO MERCY....

un sabke sharir par,unki aatma par DEVIL ka true defination imprint karna bai tumhe...




taakat ka aisa pradarshan ho jo dekh kar bhi VEHEM LAGE...

khouf kuch yun paida karna ke dil ki dhadkan bajni KAM LAGE...

kohram se nikli cheekh behre tak ko sunayi de...

dard,taklif,tadap kuch yun badhana ki MOUT bhi us chot ki MARHAM LAGE....
















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....



















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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI ALFREEN KO EK RAAT PEHLE USSE FEEL HUE EK AJEEB EHSAAS KE BAARE ME BATATI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ NE APNI PEHLI CHUNOUTI PURI KAR LI HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)




MEGA UPDATE-47



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-CHOSEN'S





3 MONTHS LATER



KYA HAAL HAI LOOSERS...????


ALFREEN aur MABEL jo ki ek dusre se baat kar rahi thi,unke piche se ye awaaz aayi jispar jab unhone palat kar dekha toh dono hi thoda chownk gayi....

reason....

unke saamne ANWIR aur MORANA khade muskura rahe the...

subah ka waqt hai...classes shuru hone me thoda sa waqt hai but sabhi SAVENTS class me aa chuke hain aur apne apne groups bana kar khade hain..

filhal MABEL aur ALFREEN ke saath MAHI nahi thi aur wo isiliye kyunki kuch SAVENTS jinhe apne SOUL ke AMPLIFICATION me kuch zyada hi dikkat aa rahi hai,wo sab MAHI se apne SOUL ko AMPLIFY karne ke ideas le rahe the aur MAHI bhi badi khushi aur man se un sabhi SAVENTS ko unke will power ko aur strong karne ke tips bata rahi thi...

aur issi beech hui entry MORANA aur ANWIR ki jinhe dekh sirf MABEL aur ALFREEN hi nahi balki MAHI aur uske saath khade sabhi SAVENTS bhi chownk gaye the....

MABEL aur ALFREEN ki hi tarah MAHI ne bhi un dono me ke mooh se looser shabd suna tha aur wo jaanti thi ki ye word un dono ne MABEL aur ALFREEN ke liye bola hai par filhal wo shaant hi rahi....

par un dono ko dekh ALFREEN ka acha khaasa mood bigad gaya aur unke taunt ko sun uska dimag bhi ghum gaya aur isiliye...


ALFREEN-yaar MABEL ek baat bata..looser hona zyada galat hai yaa fir bhikari hona...

MABEL-mere hisaab se bhikari hona...

ALFREEN-haina..chalo fir,hum looser hi thik hain..kamsekam in dono ki tarah bhikari toh nahi hain jo baar baar apne ghar matlab apne PHASE ko chhodkar hamare PHASE me aakar kuch naa kuch mangte rehte hain...


jahan ALFREEN ki baat sun us class me moujud PHASE 1 ke sabhi
SAVENTS has diye wahin MORANA aur ANWIR ko ghussa aa gaya aur...


MORANA-apni zuban ko apni aukaad ke hadh me rakh kar mooh khola kar ladki....hum jinhe tu bhikari keh rahi hai,wo PHASE 2 ke best SAVENTS hain...

wo SAVENTS jinke saamne teri koi haisiyat nahi...

ALFREEN-haan wo toh dikh raha hai....tabhi baar baar apni sadi hui shakal liye is PHASE me ghusse chale aate ho...

ANWIR-sirf isiliye kyunki filhal tu first PHASE me hai,teri zubaan hamare saamne chal rahi hai...

par koi baat nahi..sirf 3 mahino ki hi baat hai..uske baad teri azaadi ka,tere bolne ka yahan tak ki tere sir uthane ka waqt khatm....

kyunki PHASE 2 me sabhi SAVENTS, WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ke saamne teri akad nichod di jaayegi aur koi kuch nahi kar paayega....

MAHI-self obsession ki hadh ho yaar tum dono...ek free advice deti hun,tum dono bola kam aur kiya zyada karo...

warna tumme aur ek kutte me kya fark reh jaayega....


MAHI jo ab tak chup chaap saari baaton ko sun rahi thi, ANWIR ki aakhri baat sun usne apni chuppi todte hue baat ko aage badhaya jisse sun ek baar firse ANWIR aur MORANA ka dimag ghuma..

wo dono fir kuch kehne hi waale the ki tabhi....


VIOLET-GOOD MORNING SAVENTS...


un dono ke piche se VIOLET WHIZZ ki awaaz aayi jo NOX aur OMMIN ke saath class me enter kar rahi thi...

wahin VIOLET WHIZZ ki awaaz ko sun MORANA aur ANWIR ne apne aap ko control kiya aur WHIZZ ki taraf mud gaye aur baaki sabhi SAVENTS ke saath un donko ne bhi VIOLET WHIZZ aur dono WHIZZDERS ko wish kiya...


VIOLET-arre MORANA, ANWIR..tum dono morning me hi aa gaye..mujhe laga tha ki class ke baad aaoge...

ANWIR-actually WHIZZ, pichli khch classes itni hectic rahi hain ki aaj hum dono ne hi class se off liya hai aur aapko toh pata hi hai ki hum hamare PHASE ke best SAVENTS hain aur hume off lene se koi rokta nahi....


pure ghamand se ANWIR ne apni baat kahi aur is baat ko karte waqt uski gardan ghumte hue ALFREEN aur MAHI par tiki rahi...

wahin ANWIR ki baat sun VIOLET WHIZZ toh bas muskurayi par NOX ko ANWIR ki baat achi nahi lagi aur isiliye...


NOX-toh apne PHASE ke best SAVENT...ek baat batao ki apne is off time me tum yahan kyun aaye....???

VIOLET-ye dono MAHI ke SOUL AMPLIFICATION ke process ko dekhne aaye hain...


ANWIR kuch jawab de,usse pehle hi VIOLET WHIZZ ne apni baat kahi jisse sun MAHI pehle toh shock hui par fir usse maajra samajh me aa gaya aur isiliye wo muskura di...

toh jo MAHI ne samjha aur jo asal me kaaran tha jiski wajah se ANWIR aur MORANA yahan the wo ye tha ki MAHI ne jo karnama kiya tha,6 percent SOUL AMPLIFICATION ka wo bhi first PHASE me hokar,wo pehle kabhi bhi nahi hua tha aur isiliye ye baat pure CHOSENS me fail gayi thi..

ANWIR aur MORANA bhi is khabar se acchute nahi the..waise toh is khabar ko sun unhe bilkul bhi acha nahi laga par fir unhone socha ki bhale hi ye baat unke liye negetive thi par saath hi important bhi thi..

wo jaanana chahte the ki MAHI kis tarah pain aur emotions ke bahav ke beech khud ko shaant rakhti hui apne SOUL ko lagatar itna zyada AMPLIFY karne me kaamiyab ho rahi hai..???

wo aana toh bohot pehle se chahte the par khud ke PHASE ke task se ho rahe vyastata ke kaaran dono aa nahi paa rahe the but aaj finally dono yahan the....

par yahan aate hi MAHI, ALFREEN aur MABEL ko dekh dono apni aadat se majbur bully karne se baaz nahi aaye par aisa karna unhe khud par hi bhaari padh gaya.....

khar,jaise hi VIOLET WHIZZ ne un dono ke yahan aane ka kaaran bataya toh...


NOX-arre par PHASE 2 ke best SAVENT ko bhala PHASE 1 ki MAHI se kya kaam ho sakta hai...???

OMMIN-bilkul ho sakta hai.. kyunki ye dono sirf is saal ke liye PHASE 2 ke best SAVENTS hain....

par MAHI PHASE 1 me sirf is saal ki hi nahi balki CHOSENS ke itihaas ke 25 thousand years ki best SAVENT hai..

aur aise SAVENT ke paas kaun nahi aana chahega...???


OMMIN ki baat sun MORANA aur ANWIR ko andar hi andar behad ghussa aaya par dono ke chehre shaant hi rahe..


ANWIR-WHIZZDER OMMIN, WHIZZDER NOX...sikhna toh hume har kisi se hi chahiye naa...

aur ye baat issi PHASE me aur issi class me aap dono ne hi humse kahi thi...

ab dekhiye naa, sirf 2 PHASE me aur usme bhi hamara second PHASE abhi khatm hua nahi hai,itne kam waqt me hum dono hi 8 percent SOUL AMPLIFICATION ke dhaarak ban chuke hain...

MORANA-aur shayad itna hi percent aap pure life me AMPLIFY kar paaye hain, haina WHIZZDER OMMIN aur WHIZZDER NOX....


ek khilli udane waali smile ke saath MORANA ne is baat ko kaha jisse sun ANWIR toh muskura diya par OMMIN aur NOX,dono ko behad bura laga...

waise bura toh MAHI, ALFREEN aur MABEL ko bhi laga tha..

ALFREEN toh kuch bolne waali bhi thi par MAHI ne ishare se usse chup rehne ko kaha...

wahin apni baat ko aage badhate hue...


MORANA-aur waise bhi is class me agar MAHI ko alag kar den,toh hum pure confidence se keh sakte hain ki aur koi bhi hum dono ke takkar ka nahi hai...

first PHASE me hum dono ne hi 4 percent tak apne SOUL ko kar liya tha jo i am sure ki is class me MAHI ke alawa ye karnama aur koi karne me capable nahi hai....

VIOLET-tum galat ho MORANA... MAHI ke baaju me jo do ladkiyan khadi hain, MABEL aur ALFREEN,in dono ne hi abhi tak apne SOUL ko 3 percent tak AMPLIFY kar liya hai..

ye dono tum dono se bas 1 percent hi piche hain and i am sure ki is PHASE ke khatm hone se pehle hi ye dono tumhari barabari kar lenge....


VIOLET WHIZZ ki baat sun MORANA aur ANWIR chownke...unhe is baat ki bilkul bhi ummid nahi thi ki MABEL aur ALFREEN itne aage badh chuke honge...


aur jaisa ki VIOLET WHIZZ ne kaha ki is PHASE ke khatm hone se pehle hi ye dono apne SOUL ko 4 percent tak AMPLIFY kar lenge,jiska matlab tha ki ALFREEN aur MABEL un dono ke barabar ho jaayenge aur ye baat dono ko hazam nahi ho paa rahi thi...

isiliye ANWIR ka dimag tezi se doudne laga aur fir usse kuch click hua.


ANWIR-haan,ye ho sakta hai WHIZZ ki ye dono is PHASE ke khatm hote hote tak 4 percent tak pahunch jaayen par fir bhi ye dono humse piche hi rahengi aur wo isiliye kyunki humne apne SOUL ka 4 th percent first PHASE ke khatm hone se 3 mahine pehle kar liya tha matlab abhi jo waqt hai,is time tak hamara SOUL 4 percent AMPLIFY ho chuka tha..

par ye dono toh abhi 3 percent par hain matlab ye humse piche hain aur humesha piche hi rahenge...


ALFREEN-ye waqt abhi khatm nahi hua hai aur jab tak ye hoga,hum apne SOUL ko 4 percent tak AMPLIFY kar chuke honge...


MORANA aur ANWIR ko ghurte hue ALFREEN ne ye baat kahi jispar...


MORANA-really..??par kaise karogi tum ye...???kyunki aaj hi wo din hai,wo waqt hai jab humne apne soul ko 4 percent tak AMPLIFY kiya tha..

jiska matlab hai ki tumhe bhi aaj hi ye achievement haasil karma hoga...

ALFREEN-aisa hi hoga..hum aaj hi ye kar ke dikhayenge...

ANWIR-aur agar naa kar paaye toh...!!!


MAHI jaanti thi ki MORANA aur ANWIR ALFREEN ko bhadka rahe hain,aur isiliye wo kuch bolne ko hui par tabhi..


ALFREEN-toh tum jo bolo,mai wo maan lungi.....and that's my promise....

MABEL-my nahi our.... that's our promise...agar hum unsuccessful hue toh tum dono jo bolo hum dono wo maan lenge...


MAHI ke interfere karne se pehle hi ALFREEN aur MABEL ne promise kar diya tha jiska matlab tha ki ab MAHI kuch bhi kar nahi sakti thi...

wahin in saari baaton ko sun VIOLET, NOX aur OMMIN bhi thode pareshan ho gaye the kyunki ek toh wo jaante the ki SOUL ko asaani se AMPLIFY nahi kiya jaa sakta aur saath hi unhe ye bhi maalum tha ki agar MABEL aur ALFREEN unsuccessful rahe toh MORANA aur ANWIR zaroor un dono se kuch ulta sidha demand karenge....

par in sabhi pareshaniyon ke beech wo teeno ye bhi jaante the ki MABEL aur ALFREEN ko agar wo bacha bhi len toh wo sirf abhi ke kiye hoga..

par aisa karne se next PHASE me unke problems aur badhengi..saath hi wo teeno soch rahe the ki next PHASE ka ek halka sa swaad MABEL aur ALFREEN ko abhi hi chakh lena chahiye kyunki us PHASE me jo hota hai,jo zindagi jee jaati hai,wo chunouti, ghamand,sangharsh and most importantly shakti pradarshan ke beech hi jee jaati hai....

kamzoron ke liye wo PHASE hell se kam nahi...aur yahi sab sochte hue wo teeno chup hi rahe...

wahin ALFREEN aur MABEL ke promise karte hi....


ANWIR-thik hai fir...toh agar tum dono aaj ki class me apne soul ko ek baar firse AMPLIFY karne me kaamiyab hue toh hum maan lenge ke tum dono humare equals ho,humse kam nahi ho par agar aisa nahi hua toh....

MORANA-3 percent AMPLIFICATION me ho tum dono..iska matlab hai ki tum dono hi next PHASE me STELLARS group ka hissa ban chuke ho...

toh hum ye chahte hain ki agar tum dono aaj fail hui toh next PHASE me STELLARS group me nahi balki WEAKLINGS group me enter karogi...


MORANA ki baat sun sabhi SAVENTS including WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS hairan ho gaye..

wahin MAHI ek baar firse kuch bolne ko hui par tabhi...


MABEL/ALFREEN-HUME MANZOOR HAI....







PLANET-ZEAL-THE SOUL



PLACE-THE RED SURFACE





TOH DER KIS BAAT KI....???SHURU KAREN!!!



meri agli aur aakhri chunouti ka waqt aa chuka tha aur isiliye ye baat maine WOOGER se kahi jispar....


WOOGER-ek baat hai jo aapko is chunouti ke shuru hone se pehle jaanani zaroori hai...

ye chunouti aapki pichli chunouti se thodi alag hone waali hai....

kaise,iske baare me aapko aapki chunouti ke douran pata chal jaayega...

bas ek hi chiz hogi aapke paas..aapka focus..usse mat khone mat dijiyega....


WOOGER ki baat sunane ke baad bhi mai chup hi raha aur isiliye...

wo dusri roshni ka gola tezi se aage badha aur agle hi pal....


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YE KAISI JAGAH HAI....HAR TARAF SIRF ROSHNI...AUR IS ROSHNI SE ITNI ZYADA URJA KYUN NIKAL RAHI HAI...

BUT MOST IMPORTANTLY,MAI YAHAN KYA KAR RAHA HUN....

MUJHE TOH KUCH PAL PEHLE US ROSHNI NE CHHUA THA,USKE BAAD KYA HUA...???


us beintahan roshni ke samandar ke beech fasa mai ye sab apne aap se bol hi raha tha ki tabhi mujhe laga jhatka...


reason...



SAMAY SACHALAKON...ISHWAR NE AAP SABKI PRARTHANA SUN LI...AAP SABKE DUKH AUR TAKLIF KI GHADI SAMAPT HUI...AAKHEN KHOLIYE....


ek tez awaaz gunj uthi mere kaano me par jhatka mujhe us awaaz ko sunkar nahi laga tha....

jhatka mujhe is baat par laga ki jaise hi is awaaz se aankhen kholne ki baat kahi,toh mere saamne dikh raha tez prakash ek dum se gayab ho gaya aur aisa hone par maine dekha ki mai kisi badi si jagah par khada hun...

mere saamne bohot se log khade hain par filhal wo human form me nahi balki SHADOW FORM me hain..

aur mere aaju baaju kul chaar log khade the jinme ek ladki thi aur teen ladke...

ab ye sab ho kya raha tha,iska toh mujhe koi idea tha nahi..mai bas apne dimag ko douda kar situation ko samajhne ki koshish kar hi raha tha ki tabhi...


AHHH,AHHHH,AHHHH.....


mere saamne khade un spirit form ke logon ke mooh se dard bhari karah nikal gayi jisse sun...


MAI-ab saala inhe kya ho raha hai...??aur ye inke pair ke niche aag kyun jal uthi???

ye sawal maine man me nahi,balki apni mooh se bola tha par aisa karte hi mujhe ek naya shock laga aur wo isiliye kyunki bhale hi maine in baaton ko apne mooh se bola tha par ye baatein bahar nikli hi nahi balki mere andar hi gunj uthi...

par jaise hi maine ye sawal kiya,toh uske agle hi pal mere brain me is scene ka data jaise store hone laga..

aur is scene ka hi nahi,balki is scene se ghata pehle ka scene aur is scene ke baad jo hone waala tha,wo scene bhi mere dimag me clearly ghum gaya...

saath hi jo filhal mai tha,uska naam aur saath hi mere aaju baaki jo paanch log khade the,wo kaun the aur is character ke saath jo fihal kai tha,VIKRAM,use unsab ka rishta bhi mujhe pata chal chuka tha..

aur aisa hote hi mujhe aadhi baat aur half situation bhi samajh me aa gayi...

toh chaliye, jitna mai samjha tha,utna aap bhi samajh lijiye par usse pehle....


(WRITER'S NOTE-RAAZ ko toh scene samajh me aa gaya..ummid hai ki aap sabko bhi samajh aa gaya hoga...

ye scene hai SHADOW WORLD ka jahan ASMODEUS ne YELUPTUS planet me basne waale SAMAY SANCHALAKON ko kaid karke rakha hua tha...

detail me dobara yaad karne ke liye update 110 padh len..)


back to the story:-


toh jo aadhi baat mujhe samajh me aayi thi,wo ye thi ki bhale hi mai abhi is VIKRAM ke sharir me tha,ya fir ye kahun ki filhal mai hi VIKRAM tha,par tab bhi mai apne hisaab se chizen nahi kar sakta tha...

mere har sawal ke mere dimag me uththe hi mujhe uska jawab mil jaayega jo ki mujhe is sharir ke maalik ka brain dega...

aur isiliye hi WOOGER ne kaha tha ki meri ye chunouti meri pehli chunouti se alag hone waali hai..

kyunki us chunouti me toh mera wajud hi gayab ho gaya tha par jab mujhe mere hone ka ehsas hua tab maine ASMODEUS ke body par apna control le liya but yahan toh maamla hi ulta hai...

yahan mera astitv shuru se hi mere paas hai par fir bhi mai is scene me is VIKRAM ke jiske pal mujhe jeene hain,uske aadhin hun...

and this is bloody scary for me...

kyunki yahi toh wo chiz thi,aadhinta,samarpan,kisi aur ke chaaye me jeena yaa saans lena jisse mujhe sakht nafrat hai..

yahi bas ek aisa condition hai jisme mera dimag sthir nahi reh sakta...i bloody hate to be someone,live like that someone and most importantly, depend upon that someone or anyone dammit...

is aadhe sach ko jaankar mera dimag hi ghum gaya....mera uddeshya,mera target,sab bhulne laga tha mai...

mujhe bas kisi tarah is human choge ko,jisse mujhe zabardasti pehna diya gaya tha,utaarna tha par saala ye bhi hone se raha...

ek ajeeb mental state me fasa mai bas chupchaap honth sile saamne chal rahe scene ko dekh raha tha jisme bas chutiyaapa ho raha tha..

akhand chutiyaapa...arre,kare koi bhare koi....fase saale ye nikamme the,par nikalna is saale VIKRAM ko padega..

arre kyun bhai...dusri ke fadde me padhna kaayko... marne de,tadapne de saalon ko..

mera matlab is VIKRAM ke baaju me ek bandi khadi thi,jiske baare me mujhe pata chala tha ki ye iski maal hai..

abbe lekar ghum isse.enjoy kar...chota sa lounda dikh raha hai shakal se par saale ki chul badon waali hai..

sabki madad karenge ye....aur us madad me apni mahanta mujhe bhi dikhayenge...

ek aise bande ko jo is scene ke actual date ke najaane kitne decades ke baad paida hua hai...

par ab kar bhi kya sakte hain...apne aap me badbadata hua mai bhi sabki tarah scene ko dekhne me lag gaya jahan is waqt dialogue dialogue khela jaa raha tha...


MAI-najaane kitni sadiyon tak aapne pure bramhaand ke samay chakra ko sahi tarike se ghumane ka daayitv nibhaya hai..

aur aaj bhi aap jis aag se tap rahe hain,wo bhi ussi samay chakra ki nirantarta ko banaye rakhne ke liye sah rahe hain...

aap sab ne pehle hi bina kisi galti ke itne varshon tak saza bhugti hai....

mujhe aapko bachane ke liye pehle hi aa jaana chahiye tha par mai aisa kar nahi paaya...mere aage jhuk kar mujhe aur sharminda nahi kijiye....


un SAMAY SANCHALAKON ke jhukne ki wajah se ye gratefulness bhare shabd nikle the VIKRAM ke mooh se jisse sun mera dimag aur ghumne laga...


abbe jhuk rahe hain toh jhukne de....har kriya par pratikriya dena zaroori hai kya...????


maine apne CEREBRATION process ko pause kar khudko is scene se nikalne ki koshish ki par naa toh mera CEREBRATION process ruka aur naahi mai kahin jaa paaya...

mai samajh gaya tha ki chupchaap is scene ko dekhne ke alawa mai aur kuch nahi kar sakta....

par sawal tha kyun...????is ajeeb si situation ka mai hissa aakhir hun hi kyun..????

mere dimag ye khayal,ye sawal utha aur aisa hote hi....


BAS EK HI CHIZ HOGI AAPKE PAAS..AAPKA FOCUS..USSE MAT KHONE MAT DIJIYEGA....


yahan aane se pehle WOOGER ke dwara kahe gaye ye aakhri shabd mere dimag me gunj uthe aur tab...


MAI-FOCUS.....toh isiliye WOOGER ne wo sab kaha tha...


sirf ek hi chiz hogi mere paas yahan...mera focus... WOOGER ko ye achi tarah pata tha ki aisi situations mujhe pasand nahi hai..

aise haalaton par mujhe behad ghussa aata hai aur isiliye usne mujhe focus karne ko kaha...

par sawal tha ki kis chiz par focus...???

aur is sawal ke mere dimah me aate hi mere dimag me ek aur vichar aaya...

aur wo vichar related tha is scene se,is scene se pehle hue scene se aur is scene ke baad jo hone waala tha,us scene se...

aur wo vichar tha INTERCONNECTION....

in sabhi scenes ke beech ka interconnection.....

yahan aane ke baad mere brain ke paas jo bhi ho raha hai,us situation aur uske kaaran ke baare me bata diya tha jispar maine abhi tak dhyan nahi diya tha par ab jab ye interconnection waala thought mere dimag me ghuma toh....

maine sthithi ko samajhna shuru kiya...


SHADOW WORLD....jahan par ki is waqt mai hun aur ye scene chal raha hai....

par is jagah ka main base hai YELUPTUS.... YELUPTUS ke phase log jinhe SAMAY SANCHALAK kaha jaata hai,ye VIKRAM unhe bachane ke liye yahan aaya hai....

saath hi iske ek dost RONIT ki bandi bhi yahin par hai...usse bhi ye bachayega...

wo bandi jiske SOUL ko yahan rakha gaya hai par uski body YELUPTUS me hai...

toh VIKRAM in samay SANCHALAKON ko aur us ANJALI ko wahan YELUPTUS lekar jaayega...

is beech usse ek banda (ASMODEUS)rokne ke liye jaal pehle hi bicha chuka hai par is VIKRAM ke paas uska bhi kaat hai...

jitne scenes aur unme chuppi baatein mere brain me feed hui thi,un sab scenes ke baare me mera dimag sochne laga tha....

aur jab ye bichaye hue jaal ko kaatne ke baare me maine socha toh ek aur baat mujhe click hui par tabhi maine saamne dekha jahan filhal scene badla hua tha...

filhal mere saamne wahi chutiyaapa ho raha tha jisse mujhe sakht chidh thi...

wo RONIT aur ANJALI ek dusre se chipke ro rahe the...

ajeeb hote hai ye insaan,par inke aankhon se nikalne waale aansu toh saale inse bhi zyada ajeeb hote hain....

khushi me bhi tap tap...
aur gam me bhi tap tap....

ye sab dekh mera FOCUS ek baar firse dagmagane laga tha...

kisi tarah khud ko shaant rakh maine badhte hue scene ko dekha jisme is waqt VIKRAM sabko us ANJALI ke baare me bata raha tha jisse sun....


MAI-yahan aane se pehle hi VIKRAM ko yahan hone waali ghatnaon ke baare me pehle se pata tha...


ye SAMAY SANCHALAK toh yahan pehle se fase the,par ANJALI baad me aayi...

toh iska matlab is ANJALI ke liye hi VIKRAM ne ye sab plan kiya tha...???


khudse maine is sawal ko pucha tha jiske baad jo jawab mujhe mila, usse sun mujhe behad hairani hui...

darasal mere sawal ka jawab ye tha ki ANJALI ke chakkar me VIKRAM ne in SAMAY SANCHALAKON ko nahi bachaya tha balki SAMAY SANCHALAKON ko bachane ke liye hi ANJALI ek bate ki tarah yahan fasayi gayi thi...

ANJALI ke rooh ka yahan fasna,fir SAMAY SANCHALAKON aur usse bachana,uske liye jo jaal is planet ke baahar bichaya gaya hai,usse todna,in sab chizon ki planning is VIKRAM ne pehle hi kar li thi...

GAZAB.....

zindagi me pehli baar mai kisise impressed hua tha...itni doordarshita,itni gehri soch aur har soch ko sach karne ki itni perfect timing ke hisaab se ki gayi planning....

ye banda haarta bhi tab tha jab wo haar uski permanent jeet ke liye zaroori ho.... brilliant...

aisi soch,maine pehle naa kabhi suni thi aur naa dekhi thi...

aur is bande ke ganit ko samajhne ke baad WOOGER ki kahi gayi us baat ka matlab bhi clear ho gaya tha jisme usne kaha tha ki ye chunouti meri pehli ki chunouti se alag hai...

mai us alag shabd ka matlab samajh gaya tha...darasal mujhe in chal rahe scenes me VIKRAM ke dwara kiye gaye kisi loop hole ko nahi dhundna hai aur wo isiliye kyunki is bande ka jiski doordarshita itni adhik ho,uske faislon me koi loop hole ho hi nahi sakta....

no chance....mujhe bas chal rahe scenes me kuch aisa dhoodna hai jisse meri kahani aage badh sake...

mujhe koi faayda ho...aur ye thi pate ki baat .

kyunki baat jab mere faayde ki ho toh mai kuch bhi kar sakta hun..kuch bhi......

aur isiliye bilkul shaant dimag se maine ek baar firse ho chuke scenes,chal rahe scenes aur aage hone waale scenes ke baare me sochne laga...

itna toh mai samajh chuka tha ki mere hisse me bas ye 5 hi scenes hain..

jinme se do khatm ho chuke the.. ANJALI ke saath VIKRAM and party wapas SAMAY SANCHALAKON ke paas jaa rahe the jo ki third scene tha...

fourth tha sabko yahan se lekar YELUPTUS jaana aur paanchva scene....

jahan VIKRAM in SAMAY SANCHALAKON ke haath me unki khoyi hui chiz,wo PARIVARTAK....

ek second....

paanchva scene...wo PARIVARTAK....


in saare scenes ke hone ka maine reason..in SAMAY SANCHALAKON ke yahan fasne ka main reason...

PARIVARTAK...

jaise hi maine us cheez ka naam liya...ek ke baad ek 2 chizen hui...


pehli...mere dimag me us chiz ki saari qualities ghoom gayi...

jisse jaan pata nahi kyun par mujhe aisa laga ki ye chiz mere kaam ki hai...

dusri...jaise hi mujhe ye laga ki wo PARIVARTAK mere kaam ka hai toh...

scene achanak se badal gaya..aur ab jo scene mere saamne tha, usse dekh mera doubt clear ho chuka tha..

mai jaan gaya tha ki maine jo socha hai,woh sahi hai aur ussi soch ko sach karna hi meri chunouti hai...

toh baat ye hai ki filhal mai YELUPTUS me tha....the last scene...aur mere saamne wahi scene chal raha tha jab VIKRAM SAMAY SANCHALAKON ko unki amanat wo PARIVARTAK dene waala tha...


MAI-maine pehle bhi kaha tha ki ye sab karne ki koi zaroorat nahi....aur haan,ye rakhiye...


SAMAY SANCHALAK jo abhi VIKRAM ke samman me jhuke hue the,isiliye VIKRAM ne ye baat kahi aur aisa kehne ke baad usne apna haath aage kar diya jisme is waqt PARIVARTAK tha...


uske aisa karte hi ek SAMAY SANCHALAK jo VIKRAM ke paas khada tha,usne PARIVARTAK ko lene ke liye haath aage badhaya par tabhi...


MAI-meri ek choti si shart hai...


haath ko band karte hue maine ye baat kahi....


MAINE....VIKRAM nahi, RAAZ....


ji haan doston,jaise hi is chunouti ka,is PARIVARTAK ka ganit mere samajh me aaya toh uske agle hi pal mera lock khul gaya jiski wajah se mai aur VIKRAM ab ek ho gaye the..

jiska matlab tha ki ab bhale hi sabke saamne VIKRAM tha, par bol mai raha tha...

wahin mere moothi band kar lene aur shart waali baat sunkar sabhi SAMAY SANCHALAK thode hairan hue par phir...


SAMAY SANCHALAK-hamari zindagi aapki rini hai...aapko humse kisi bhi shart ko rakhne ki aawashyakta nahi hai..

aap bas aadesh karen...

MAI-is PARIVARTAK ki wo urja jisse ye kaam karti hai,bhavishya me agar mujhse jude kisi shaksh ko uski zaroorat pade,toh aap usse wo de denge....

SAMAY SANCHALAK-jaisi aapki iccha...


SAMAY SANCHALAKON ke haan kehte hi maine apni band moothi khol di jiske baad us SAMAY SANCHALAK ne mere hatheli se us PARIVARTAK ko le liya aur aisa hote hi....


CHANNNN.....


jo pichli baar hua tha,wo ek baar fir hua...

ek jhatka sa laga mere dimag ko aur fir back to ground zero....

mai wapas ZEAL me tha par filhal mai kuch bhi dekhne ko haalat me nahi tha aur wo isiliye kyunki filhal mere sir pichle baar ke mukable 10 times zyada tezi se ghoom raha tha...

mujhe kuch zyada hi chakkar aa rahe the aur isiliye hi mai aakhen band kiye neeche zamin par baitha raha....

kuch time tak aisa hi raha par fir dheere dheere mai normal hone laga aur jab puri tarah control me aane ke baad maine saamne dekha toh halka hadbada gaya...

reason.....

mere just chehre ke saamne wo gola tha..mera SOUL jo lagatar hawa me rotate ho raha tha...

WOOGER gayab tha par fir bhi mai usse mehsoos kar paa raha tha...

us gole me....

kuch der tak us chamakte hue gole ki taraf dekhte rehne ke baad....


MAI-MAI TUMHE APNATA HUN...

KADKADKADKAD.........


bura bramhaand jaise ek akeli bijli ke kadkadane se kaamp gaya tha...

har planet ke mausam ka rookh jaise badal sa gaya..dead aur living...dono hi catagories me aane waale planets halke halke shake kar gaye the...

aur ye sab hua kyunki meri ijazat milne par wo gola aage badha aur mujhme sama gaya....aisa hote hi meri aankhen band ho gayi...

par mai mehsoos kar raha tha..zindagi me pehli baar mai feel kar raha tha..

apne sharir, apne khoon,apni dhamniyon ke andar ke khaali jagah ko bharta hua, mai mehsoos kar raha tha....

mujhe aisa mehsoos ho raha tha maano saalon ke banzar tapte hue zamin par kisine ek saath hazaron laakhon litres paani chhod diya ho...

wo sukoon jisse ab tak mehroom tha mai,wo jagah banati chali jaa rahi thi mere andar...

ye saare changes the internal..par in internal changes ke saath saath kuch external changes bhi hui thi mujhme..

aur wo ye ki jaise hi meri SOUL mujhme samayi aur meri aankhen band hui toh uske agle hi pal mera sharir hawa me uthne laga...

dekhte ho dekhte mere sharir ke upar ka kapda bhi change hone laga...

sabse pehle mere sharir ke chaaron taraf ek White AURA ne ghera banaya aur fir wo AURA mere sharir ke andar sama gayi...

aisa hote hi mere sharir par lenin ka ek white robe aa gaya...uske baad us robe ke theek upar white AURA ki hi tarah ek Black AURA ne ghera banaya aur fir wo AURA mere white robe se hote hui mere sharir ke andar sama gayi..

par aisa karne ke dauran jab us black aura ne mere white robe ko chhua toh us robe ka colour light grey ho gaya jo ki white aur black ke mixture se banta hai....

aisa hone je baad dheere dheere mera sharir neeche aane laga aur fir jaise hi maine neeche zamin ko chhua toh...

meei aankhen khul gayi....

gehri kaali aankhen jinke side ke white layers kuch zyada hi white lag rahe the...

khair,jaise hi meri aankhen khuli toh ek aur cheez hui jo aaj se pehle tak kabhi nahi hui thi....

aur wo thi mere chehre par aayi smile....

ek aisi smile jisse agar koi dekhe toh khush ho jaaye par agar us smile ka matlab woh samajh len toh khade khade hi mar jaaye...

waise mere chehre par muskurahat bewajah nahi aayi thi..ye aayi thi saamne ke drishya ko dekh kar....

kyunki mere saamne is waqt ZEAL ka wahi CAVE tha jo ki mere yahan is planet ka aakhri padhav bhi tha.....

wo cave jiske andar rakhi thi wo chiz jisse paane ke chakkar me ek living planet dead planet me badal gaya tha....

jisse haasil karne ki chaah liye hue hi VIKRAM ki aatma is duniya se kooch kar gayi thi...

wo chiz jisse maine ab tak toh dekha nahi hai par wo hai meri..

aur jab maine ye kaha hai ki wo hai meri toh iska matlab hai ki wo hai meri...

khwahish meri us chiz ko paane ki isiliye nahi hai kyunki usse mere liye rakha gaya hai...

balki wo chiz meri isiliye honi chahiye kyunki uspar ek pure planet ka khoon chadha hai...

aur har wo chiz jisse jaan ka souda ho,wo meri milkiyat hai...mera possession hai...

kadam aage badhaye maine aur mere aisa karte hi us cave ke dwar par lage kawach ne ek second ke liye roka mujhe jaise meri ability ko check kar rahe hon...

par mere sharir ke layers ko chhune ke baad wo kawach,wo SHIELD hath gaye...

jaise ijazat de di hon mujhe andar jaane ki par mai aage nahi badha..

wahin khada raha...

reason....

ijazat nahi di thi maine us shield ko mujhe chhune ki,mujhe check karne ki...

mai saamne tha uske..usse mujhe mehsoos karte hi hat jaana chahiye tha par usne aisa kiya nahi...

aur ye MUJHE ACCHA NAHI LAGA...

meri aankhon ki putliyon ne us pure cave ke saamne ke hisse ko ghura aur unke aisa karte hi meri aankhon se ek tez beam nikal us gufe par padi aur aisa hoti hi...

BOOM........

ek behad tez dhamaka hua jisse har taraf dhuan dhuan ho gaya par jab kuch der baad dhuan halka sa chatta aur nazara thoda clear hua toh....

mere saamne ab koi gufa nahi thi...

wo GUFA jisme kisi shaktishali cheez ko rakha gaya tha,wo puri gufa baarik kankad me badal chuki thi...

meri nazar saamne hi tiki thi jahan kuch door par abhi bhi gehra dhuan tha par wo bhi dheere dheere chhat raha tha..

wo jagah us gufe ka aakhri chhor tha jahan wo CHIZ thi jisse mujhe lena tha...

mai us chiz ki shakti ko,usse uth rahe vibrations ko bohot ache mehsoos kar raha tha...

par filhal us dhuen ki wajah se maine us chiz ko ab tak dekha nahi tha..

par ye bas kuch seconds ki hi baat thi...aur wo seconds bhi aakhirkaar beet gaye....

dhuan chhatthe chhatthe chhat hi gaya aur jab aisa hua toh zindagi me dusri baar mere chehre par smile aa gayi...

reason....

meri yahan hone ki wajah,meri milkiyat,mera prized possession meri aankhon ke saamne chamak raha tha..


beintihan shakti sa labalab bhara hua LORD OF ANGEL KA........



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AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......








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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI DONO LANDS KO EK KARNE KI KOSISH ME LAG JAATI HAI,DUSRI TARAF VALDIS APNI ASLI PEHCHAAN GAFFER KE ROOP ME ALFREEN & PARTY KE SAAMNE AA JAATA HAI WAHIN TEESRI TARAF BHUVIKA RAAZ KO BATATI HAI KI SHOWHI USKA AUR BEELZEBUB KA BETA HAI.

AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-3


(THE SACRIFICE & THE PERFECT EPILOGUE)



UPDATE-161



PLANET- THE LAND


PLACE-THE LAND






DWALITAH JWADIHAGAM

BINDING MERGE


chehra upar karte hue man hi man uccharit kiya is SPELL ko MAHI ne...

apne neeche ki zamin me apni shakti ki urja ko nirantar aur bade dheeme pace me bahate hue MAHI ne aakhirkaar bina zamin aur planet ke CORE ko destroy aur even shake kiya bina hi pure LAND ko apne shaktiyon ke saath jod liya tha aur jab aisa ho gaya toh baari thi agle hi step ki joki tha upar akash me bane LAND ko neeche ke LAND ke saath jodne ki..

THE LAND PLANET ke core me puri jagah ka sabse zyada magnetic field activated tha..

darasal woh magnetic field upar akash me bane land ki gravitational field ka ek trigger point tha..

aur jaise hi MAHI ki urja core tak pahunchi,toh theek tabhi MAHI ne sir upar kar DWALITAH JWADIHAGAM SPELL ko uccharit kar diya aur uske aisa karte hi ek saath do chizen hui..

pehli..

uske heart se ek invisible binding beam nikal uske haathon ke zariye neeche core ko taraf badh gayi..

dusri...

uske brain se bhi ek beam nikli aur sidhe upar akash me bane land ki taraf badh gayi..

woh beam upar ke land ko penetrate karte hue sidhe uske core ko touch kar gayi thi..

aur jab aisa hua toh is core me beh raha magnetic field force MAHI ke beam ko khudse jodta hua pure LAND me faile gaya..

ye sab MAHI apni band aankhon se dekh rahi thi..

aur jo ho raha tha,usse dekh uske face par ek victory smile naach uthi thi..

jo woh chahti thi,ho raha tha..ab bas uske dono beams ko interconnect hona tha joki ek automatic process tha aur woh isiliye kyunki neeche aur upar, dono taraf bane LANDS ke core pehle se hi ek light bond se jude hue the jinhe MAHI ke dono beams ne light se strong bond me convert kar diya tha..

ab bas un dono cores ko paas aate hue ek hone ki der thi jiski shuruwat bhi ho chuki thi.

once this process was done,upar akash me bana LAND wahan se gayab hote hue neeche waale LAND ke saath attach ho jaayega aur ye adhura THE LAND PLANET complete ho jaayega...

yahi sab soch MAHI aankein band kiye muskura rahi thi par tabhi...


KRRRRKRRRRKRRRRKRRRR.....

BOOMMMMM........

ek tez dhamaka sa hua..par ye dhamaka dono LANDS ke fatne ka,yaa phir unse MAHI ke link tootne ka nahi tha...

ye dhamaka hua tha MAHI ke brain me base ek locked part ke sudden unlock hone ki wajah se...

darasal hua ye ki MAHI is LAND linking challenge ki wajah se abhi PAUSED CEREBRATION ke deepest mode me pahunch chuki thi..

aur dheeme par nirantar pravah se behti uski urja sirf dono lands ke depth ko nahi balki uske brain ke har depth ko bhi continously touch kar rahi thi...

aur phir,jaisa ki jharne ke lagatar girne se hota ha, uske raaste par aane waala har patthar anjaane me hi toot jaata hai,theek waise hi MAHI ke brain ka woh locked part bhi uske urja ke continously poke karne ke kaaran blast hote hue toot gaya...

aur jab aisa hua toh MAHI ko laga ek tez jhatka..ye jhatka us blast ki wajah se nahi,balki us drishya ki wajah se usse laga tha jo us LOCKED part se bahar aate hue usse dikhi thi..

ye woh drishya tha jo uski utpatti ka main definition tha...

saath hi saath MAHI ko us drishya ke through ye bhi dikha ki agar woh apni taakat ke asli defination ko practically likhne me asamarth rahi toh VIDEOUS kya kar sakta hai...

jahan apni vastavikta ke sach ko jaan MAHI bohot khush thi wahin us vastavikta ke saath jo zimmedari uske PITAH ne usse di thi,uspar naa khare utar paane ki keemet kitni badi ho sakti hai,uske baare me soch roungte khade ho chuke the uske..

ek jhatke me aankh khul gayi uski aur aisa hote hi jo usne dekha,woh usse filhal ke liye sukoon dene ke liye kaafi tha..

THE LAND naam ke dono LANDS ek ho chuke the,jo daayitv uske pitah ne RAAZ ke zariye usse diya tha, woh usne pura kar diya tha..

ab finally THE LAND ek complete LIFE SUSTAINABLE PLANET me convert ho chuka tha...

ek celebrating moment tha ye par MAHI ka mind filhal us celebration ke liye taiyaar nahi tha...

par haan,jahan woh khadi thi,aage jaakar us PLANET me life hone waali hai,tarah tarah ke empires aur community wahan rise hongi,ye sab soch ek aadhe chain ki hi sahi,saans li MAHI ne jiske baad wapas se mile daayitv ko yaad kar...


MAHI-i just hope that i am worthy...

U ARE WORTHY MY DAUGHTER...


upar jahan ab land nahi akash tha,wahan gunj uthi VIKRAM ki awaaz jisse sun ek jhatke me MAHI ka saara tention,saara nervousness jaata raha..

woh bas muskurate hue upar neele akash me apne dad ki chavi imagine karte hue unhe kuch der tak dekhti rahi jispar..


VIKRAM-go to your friends MAHI...par,jab tak hadh se zyada zaroorat na padh jaaye, interfere mat karna.. aur jo sake toh RAAZ ka wait karna..

jab woh wahan pahunchne waala hoga, tumhe aur tumhare baad sabko pata chal jaayega...

but tab tak,jitna ho sake,wait...is kahani ke hissedaar tumhare sabhi dost bhi hain...aur unki khudki shamata hi ye tay karegi ki kya woh sab is kahani ke aakhri adhaya me bhi hissedaar hone ke laayak hain ya nahi..

MAHI-ok dad..but filhal mera sawal kuch aur hai...???kya karna hai,ye jaanti hun mai,par kahan se karna hai,ye nahi pata mujhe..

bina us shakti shroth ko jaane mai apna kaam nahi kar sakti...

VIKRAM-jab manzil tumhari hai toh raasta bhi tumhe hi dhundna padega MAHI..

par haan,thodi madad toh sabko milti hai,tumhe bhi milegi..

dhyan se suno...

"APNE ORIGIN KE US JAGAH PAR JAANA HAI TUMHE JAHAN RAAT KI NEEND PURI NAHI HOTI..."





PLANET-GOLETH


PLACE-THE DARK DIFFUSION




ITNE DINO BAAD MIL RAHE HAIN,ARRE KUCH TOH BOLO...!!!


hamari taraf ghum kahi ye baat VALDIS ne jispar ACCHUTA aur baaki sab chup hi rahe..

aur isiliye..


VALDIS-i am disappointed..isse better reaction ki ummid ki thi maine tum sabse...

ALFREEN-how...tum shuruat se hamare saath the..baaki sabko toh dodge de sakte ho tum,but mere bhai ki nazaron se apni asliyat kaise chuppayi tumne..???


ALFREEN ki baat sun muskuraya VALDIS aur..


VALDIS-tum RAAZ ko kuch zyada hi importance de rahi ho ALFREEN....

mai,VALDIS koi maamuli DARK WARRIOR nahi hun jisse woh looser RAAZ aise hi pehchaan leta..

i am the BLOODY GAFFER of BLACK ENERGY...ek aisi taakat hun mai jiski buniyad aaj se laakhon saal pehle rakhi gayi thi...

bhale hi mai is kahani ka woh paatr nahi hun jisse mitaane ke liye RAAZ the so called CHOSEN ONE ka janm aur utpatti, dono hua hai par pehchaan apni bhi kaafi strong hai...

ALFREEN-laakhon saalo pehle...!!!

VALDIS-batata hun,waise bhi hidden identity ke saath kaafi waqt guzar diya maine..

aur ussi hidden identity ki hi wajah se RAAZ,ye ACCHUTA, SLUNDER jaise log mujhe harm karne ki, mujhe harane ki galatfehmi paale baithe hain...

tumhe kya lagta hai, sirf hamare GOD VIDEOUS hi ek aisi urja hain jo bramhaand me laakhon saalon tak BLACK ENERGY ke sanrakshan me ghumte rahe..

VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS se bani urja ki tarah joki hamare GOD VIDEOUS hain,ek aur urja bhi thi jo unki kahani me release hote hue bekaabu hokar UNIVERSE me ghoom rahi thi...

do behadh hi strong BLACK ENERGY ke owners jinke sudden power flipping ki wajah se unhe toh redemption mil gayi par unki purani pehchaan,BLACK ENERGY ki behisaab shakti unse alag hokar bramhand me bikhar gayi...

aur jab hamare GOD VIDEOUS ko unka woh roop jisse tum sab jaante ho mila,jab woh pure hue toh toh unhone hi un bikhre hue BLACK ENERGY ki urja ko ikattha kiya aur apni hi tarah shape dete hue ek naya roop banaya..

aur wahi roop matlab ki VALDIS is waqt tum sabke saamne khada hai..

ALFREEN-VIDEOUS ka toh samajh bhi aata hai ki woh kyun SAVENT ban kar CHOSEN me aaya..RAAZ ke liye..

uske shakti ke kano se VIRAAZ banane aur usse suffer karane ke liye..

par tum kisliye SAVENT bankar hamare beech rahe..??

VALDIS-iski wajah se..??


MABEL ke taraf point karte hue kahi ye baat VALDIS ne jispar..


MABEL-matlab tumhe pehle se hi mere GOD GIFTED POWERS ke baare me pata tha..

VALDIS-bilkul...asal me tumhari shaktiyan hain hi aisi jisse in baakiyon ki tarah chuppa kar nahi rakha jaa sakta tha.

haan,kyunki woh us waqt trigger nahi hui thi, isiliye unka energy flow sense karna asaan nahi tha but agar RAAZ kar sakta tha toh mai toh kar hi sakta tha...

tumhari ability meri taakaton ko ek nayi disha de sakti thi..ek aisi unchaayi de sakti thi jiske baad RAAZ ki chinta hamare GOD VIDEOUS ko karni hi nahi padti..

mai khudhi usse araam se nipat leta...par aisa karne ka catch bhi mujhe maalum tha...

tumhare kareeb jaana tha mujhe... aur mai chala bhi gaya tha...

you liked me...par woh moment jab pyar ke pravah me behkar tum khudko,apne sharir ko mujhe sounp deti aur aisa jote hi mai tumhare shaktiyon ka hissedaar apne aap ban jaata,is ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ne mera plan fail kar diya..

aur ab this two will pay for that...


dehekti aankhon se SLUNDER aur khaaskar ACCHUTA ko dekhte hue kahi ye baat VALDIS ne jispar koi kuch kehta ki tabhi..


HAHAHAHAHA....

zor se has padi ALFREEN jiske baad...


ALFREEN-kya kaha tune.. tu mere bhai se nipat leta...beta,sirf ek ghurti nazar bhar se woh tujhe nibta deta..

par koi naa,teri galatfehmi aaj aur abhi RAAZ ki behen door kar degi...


HARDIYAM KAWACHAM...

LINKAGE BARRIER...


apni baat keh VALDIS ko sabak sikhane ke iraade se ALFREEN kuch karti ki tabhi VALDIS ne man hi man is spell ko uccharit kiya aur uske aisa karte hi door lehrate hue DARK DIFFUSION se ek dhuen ka beam nikal theek ALFREEN jahan khadi thi,uske aage aakar gira..

aur jab aisa hua toh ek hi pal ke andar ALFREEN ke chaaron taraf kaale dhuen ka hi ek chota sa pinjra sa ban gaya..

ye sab dekh ALFREEN ki aankhein ghusse se jal uthi aur..


ALFREEN-tujhe lagta hai ki tu mujhe kaid kar sakta hai...dekhta jaa,ek second bhi nahi lagega mujhe is cage ko break karne me..

VALDIS-i totally agree...aisa karna chahti ho,beshak karlo, but usse pehle consiquences jaan lo toh behtar hoga...

filhal tum jis barrier me ho,ye koi mamuli barrier nahi hai...

ye tumhari shakti se toot zaroor sakta hai,but break hote hue ye jo karega,woh result shayad tum bardasht naa kar sako..

darasal ye barrier bana hai is DARK DIFFUSION ke core strength se aur abhi ye usse interconnected hai..

toh agar tumne is barrier ko toda, toh iske saath tum us core ko bhi hinder kar baithogi...

result, bramhaand me base billions and billions logon ke kamsekam 20 pratishat log jinki ginti bhi billions me hi hogi, woh log jo BLACK ENERGY ki sabse zyada giraft me hain,woh sab mar jaayenge..

haan,bure logon ke marne se tumko zyada fark nahi padega par agar is tarah se woh sab mare,toh GOD aur BLACK ENERGY ke beech sandhi ka ek aisa violation create hoga jiski aad me BLACK ENERGY aur hamare GOD VIDEOUS pure bramhand me khulle aam kohram macha sakte hain..

do you want that to happen...??if yes,go for it.break the CAGE...


VALDIS ki baatein sun jabde sakhti se bheench gaye the ALFREEN ke par man hi man woh laachar bhi feel karne lagi thi..

aur woh laachari uske face par dikhne lagi thi jisse dekh ab baari thi VALDIS ke hasne ki..

HAHAHAHA...


VALDIS-tum WHITE ENERGY se bhare log..kitna aasaan hota hai tum jaiso ko majboor karna...


khilli udate hue kahi ye baat VALDIS ne jispar ALFREEN kuch kehti ki tabhi..


ACCHUTA-tu tention naa le ALFREEN..tu cage me hai,hum toh nahi...isse hum nipat lenge...

VALDIS- ACCHUTA.. over confidence ka bhandar hai tere andar...

mai GAFFER hun...KAALI SHAKTIYON ka ek shaktishaali pratik...aur jis WHITE ENERGY ke dum par tu uchak raha hai,mujhse nipatne ke waade kar raha hai,jaanta hai,meri shakti ka shroth kya hai..???

tumhari apni WHITE ENERGY...


VALDIS ki baat sun chownke wahan moujud sabhi aur..


HIDA-dont bluff ACCHUTA..tum jaise DARK INSECT ka shroth WHITE ENERGY ho hi nahi sakta...

VALDIS-is that so...???yaad hai maine bataya tha ki do log jinki shakti BLACK ENERGY se achanak WHITE ENERGY me flip hui thi,aur jiski wajah se unki purani KAALI URJA joki mai tha, unstable ho gayi thi..

woh do log naa sirf ab WHITE ENERGY ke pratik hain balki saath hi saath super powerful bhi hain..

aur kyunki mai unki purani hi sahi, par urja se bana hun, isiliye unki abhi ki taakat ne bhi meri BLACK ENERGY ko shaktishaali banaya hai...

ALFREEN-kiski baat kar raha hai tu..???

VALDIS-apne parents ki jinhe apne is bacche ke baare me pata hi nahi..


BHUVIKA & BEELZEBUB....




PLANET-COURIOUS


PLACE-MOTHER TREE





OK CHAMPION, THEORETICAL PRACTICE TIME IS OVER...NOW LET'S DO SOME PRACTICAL ANALYZATION.


abhi mujhe HISIRO BHAVATI SPELL ke power ko apne andar samana shuru kiye kuch minutes hi beete the ki tabhi PAUSED CEREBRATION process me hone ke baawjud ek jaani pehchaani awaaz mere kaano ko bhedh gayi..

ab yahan aisa toh sirf ek hi shaksh kar sakta tha.. ASMODEUS..

jo is waqt theek mere piche khada tha..

wahin ANALIA aur BHUVIKA joki lagatar mere spell se ho rahe aantarik prabhav ka aakalan kar rahe the aur mere SPELL ki power ko absorb karne ki shamata ko dekh mujhse kaafi impressed lag rahe the,unka woh saara impression ASMODEUS ki awaaz se jaise khatm hi ho chuka tha..

ASMODEUS ne mujhe 1 ghanta kaha tha,par aa woh aadhe ghante me hi gaya tha..

uska diya 1 ghanta bhi kaafi kam tha is SPELL ko master ko karne ke liye aur ab uske yun half time me aa jaane se mere learning process me ek aisa stop lag chuka tha jiske baad ANALIA aur BHUVIKA ko samajh nahi aa raha tha ki mera aage kya haal hone waala hai..

wahin in sabke beech ASMODEUS ki awaaz sun aankh khul chuki thi meri jiske baad khade hokar uski taraf ghuma mai aur..


MAI-ghadi badliye apni...1 ghanta me bajne waala alarm aadhe ghante baad hi baj raha hai..

ASMODEUS-ghadi aur waqt jinke hisaab se chalte hain,alarms bhi unke ishaare par hi bajte hain...

MAI-aadha ghanta aur hisaab-e-ishara kar lo..mera alarm bhi baj jaayega...

ASMODEUS-bilkul baj jaayega..but what's the fun in that...

tumhare humans me ek kahawat kaafi mashoor hai..."every boxer has a plan till he himself recieves a punch"...

tumhara plan hai ki tum SPELL ki shakti ko khudme merge karoge aur phir practically check karoge..

i say ki kyun naa merging ke waqt hi practically check bhi kar liya jaaye..

this way is more interesting..it will either make it or break it..aur pata bhi chal jaayega,tum wakayi kitne paani me ho...

so what say,are you up for the challenge yaa phir rehne de...???

MAI-kuch der pehle khud hi kaha tha aapne ki mujhme jo pagalpan hai,woh aapse hai..phir ye sawal kyun..???

so i say,just bring it on...???

ASMODEUS-maza aayega...so here's the plan..tum apni sword apne andar chupaoge aur with all the effects of HISIRO BHAVATI SPELL,uski taakat ko bhi HIDE karoge..

and at the same time tumhe bina ye dikhaye ki tumme HEAVENLY POWERS hain, ALOUKIK SHAKTIYAN hain,tumhe khudko super strong SHOW karna padega...

utna hi shaktishaali jitna tum apne ALOUKIK SHAKTIYON ko bina chupaye SHOW kar sakte ho...

MAI-ye challange nahi ho sakta.. what's the catch...


meri baat sun smile naach uthi ASMODEUS ke face par aur..


ASMODEUS-jab tum HISIRO BHAVATI SPELL ki madad se SWORD ko apne andar chuppa rahe hoge,tab mai tumhare body me enter karunga..

and it's gonna cause you pain.. Hell's pain...us pain ko bear karte hue tumhe HIDE aur SHOW ka game successfully jeetna hai...

jahan ASMODEUS ki baat sun aankhen badi ho gayi mere piche khade ANALIA aur BHUVIKA ki,wahin maine ek lambi saans chhodi aur...


MAI-shuru karen...!!

SOOBHH.....


SWORD ko apne heart ke upar rakha maine..mere aisa karte hi woh gayab hote hue mere andar sama chuki thi..

aisa hote hi apni baat kahi maine jiske baad bina ek pal gawaye hi ASMODEUS ek urja me badal tezi se aage badha aur mere forehead waale bhaag se hote hue mere andar sama gaya..

AAHHHHHH...

ASMODEUS ke mere sir me samate hi naa sirf woh bhaag pura jhanjhana gaya balki saath hi saath jaisa ASMODEUS ne kaha tha,waisa hi hua...

mera sir aise pain hone laga jaise kisine uske andruni bhaag me aag laga diya ho..

is uncontrollable pain ko sehte hue mujhe ASMODEUS joki filhal ek urja ke roop me mere sir me tha,uska downward movement saaf feel hua...

us feeling ke aate hi kisi tarah apne jalte hue sir ke dard ko bardasht karte hue maine HISIRO BHAVATI SPELL ke asar ko apne HEART area me circulate karna shuru kiya..

jaisa ki ANALIA ne bataya tha ki HISIRO BHAVATI do super powerful spells ko ek karke bana tha,aur isiliye is SPELL ki taakat aur impact bhi kuch zyada hi strong tha..

yahi wajah thu ki mere is SPELL ko apne heart me circulate karte hu SWORD ka bhaaripan jo mai pehle se hi feel kar raha tha,woh hadh se zyada badh gaya..

uske upar ASMODEUS joki mujhe constant unbearable pain dete hue neeche SWORD ki taraf hi badh raha tha,itna sab ek saath naa mera brain jhel paaya aur naahi mera heart..

aankhein bhaari ho gayi meri aur kuch seconds me hi mai behosh ho chuka tha...

mere behosh hote hi ASMODEUS mujhse bahar nikal gaya aur wapas apni purani position ne jaakar khada ho gaya..

uske haath se ek ray nikal mere sir se aa takrayi..

ye ek concious ray thi jiske asar se mujhe kuch hi seconds me hosh aa chuka tha..

aankh khulte hi mai uthkar khada ho gaya aur mere aisa karte hi..



ASMODEUS-again..

SOOBH......


ek hi word bola ASMODEUS ne jiske agle hi pal woh ek baar phirse mere forehead me sama chuka tha aur uske andar samane ke agle hi pal..

AHHHHHHH....

mere mooh se dobara cheekh nikal chuki thi....

pichle baar HISIRO BHAVATI SPELL ko activate karte hue ASMODEUS naam ke pain in the ass ko sir par jhelta hua mai kuch 10 seconds hi teek paaya tha..

is baar ye silsila 5 seconds zyada chala but uske baad mere senses firse dull hote chale gaye...

DHAPPP

1,2,3,5,8,10......ye duswi baar tha jab mai behosh hote hue neeche gir chuka tha aur is baar jab ASMODEUS ne mujhe hosh me laaya toh...


ASMODEUS-socha nahi tha ki tum itne weak hoge RAAZ...

chand seconds bhi mujhe jhelte hue SPELL merging task pura nahi kar paa rahe ho tum..

you accepted the challenge,but you failed RAAZ...

MAI-really.....!!!! but I don't think so...

ASMODEUS-ziddi toh tum ho RAAZ..haar kar bhi haar nahi maan rahe..koi nahi,aur try kar lete hai...!!!

MAI-uski zaroorat nahi padegi...


apni baat bolte hue maine bas apne haath ko aage kar usse halka sa twist kiya aur mere aisa karte hi..


AHHHHHH...........

ladhkhada se gaye ASMODEUS ke kadam...piche ki taraf dagmagate hue meri taraf dekhne lagi uski nazar jinme is waqt do bhaav the..

pehle hairani ke aur dusri khushi ke...

par in dono hi bhaavon ka reason ek hi tha...SWORD....jo is waqt mere nahi balki ASMODEUS ke andar thi..

jisse maine HISIRO BHAVATI SPELL ke asar ko ek next level tak le jaate hue ASMODEUS ke andar hi transfer kar diya tha..

aur spell ke complete asardaar hone ka saboot yahi tha ki usse iske baare me pata bhi nahi chala tha...

filhal HISIRO BHAVATI SPELL ke asar ko hata diya tha maine aur isiliye is waqt ASMODEUS bohot zyada pain me tha..

itna pain ki agar uski jagah koi aur hota toh 1000 baar tadap kar mar chuka hota but ASMODEUS koi aur toh ho nahi sakta..

bade confidently SWORD se mil rahe us asahaniya dard ko jhelte hue woh mujhe prashansha bhari nazaron se dekh raha tha jispar..


MAI-ek kahawat boli thi aapne..."every boxer has a plan till he himself recieves a punch"...

but the thing with me is, I don't believe anything... doesn't matter who said it or where i read it... until and unless my conscience allows it to be believed...

aur mai apne liye bane jis kahawat me believe karta hun,woh ye hai...

har boxer ka plan sirf mukke khaane se pehle tak ka hi hota hai,par RAAZ ka asal plan mukke khaane ke baad shuru hota hai...


apni baat bol bas apne haathon se finger scratching kiya maine aur mere aisa karte hi SWORD ASMODEUS ke andar se gayab hokar mere haathon me aa gayi aur aisa hote hi ASMODEUS ka pain turant jaata raha...

khudko sayammit kar...


ASMODEUS-how...???

MAI-mai behosh jaan bujh kar ho raha tha..aapke mere andar samane se jo pain mujhe ho raha tha,uska reason SPELL nahi balki SWORD thi..


SWORD aapki mujhme upasthiti bardasht nahi kar rahi thi aur isiliye mujhe pain de rahi thi..

par pehli baar jab mai behosh hua aur aap mujhse bahar hue,toh sword ne mujhe andar se clean karna shuru kiya.

theek ussi waqt mere subconscious brain ne HISIRO BHAVATI SPELL trigger karna shuru kar diya jiska natija double speed se mujhe milne laga..

woh SPELL badi tezi se mere body ke saath merge hone laga tha...

ASMODEUS-isiliye tum baar baar behosh ho rahe the taaki us chote time margin me jab mai tumhare andar nahi tha, tumhara sub concious brain SPELL ko thik se trigger karte hue usse tumme merge kar paaye..

MAI-9th baar behosh hote hote maine SPELL ke pure asar par control paa kar liya tha..

pehle socha ki aapko bata dun but phir ek khayal aaya..

mujhe apni is nayi SHOW/HIDE shakti ko cheak karna tha and who could be a better volenteer than you..

10th baar jab aap mere brain me ghusse aur neeche ki taraf jaane lage toh maine SPELL ke HIDE part ko activate kar SWORD aapme sama di aur SHOW part se aapko apne andar sabkuch normal feel karwaya....

moral of the story...agar PARMESHWAR PUTR bhi mere HISIRO BHAVATI SPELL ke prabhav se bach nahi sakta toh i think i am good enough to handle ALIUM...!!!


meri baat sun muskurate hue kuch pal dekhta raha ASMODEUS aur phir...

ek sudden movement feel hui mujhe jisse jab tak mai samajh bhi paata,meri location badal chuki thi...

ek nayi but jaani pehchaani location me tha mai jisse dekh aankhon me sawal liye mai ASMODEUS ko dekh...


MAI- PECULIAR SPACE....!!!hum phir yahan....!!!





PLACE-PECULIAR SPACE



ASMODEUS-yup...hum phir yahan...


isse aage kuch kaha nahi ASMODEUS ne naahi mujhe zaroorat padi kyunki ab tak is jagah ka ganit samajh chuka tha mai aur isiliye...


MAI-oh..toh isiliye is jagah ko DARK SPACE kehte hain..if i am not wrong,this is the origin of HUMAN LIFE in universe...

woh pehle 10 living planets yahin bane the aur kyunki un PLANETS ko GOD ne destroy kiya tha, isiliye ye jagah itni negetive aur dark hai..

pure bramhand se alag ek banishment zone ki tarah..

ASMODEUS-important baat bhul rahe ho..ye wahi jagah hai jahan ALIUM moujud hai..

aur jahan ALIUM hogi,space ki woh jagah CURSED se kam nahi..

yahan moujud ALIUM ki INVISIBLE aur undetected urja ki madad se hi VIDEOUS ne apni shakti ko nahi unchayi di thi..

bohot koshish ki thi usne yahan ki shakti ke peeche ki sachchai ko jaanane ki,mere aur VIKRAM ki kahani ke har bhaag ko,har baarikh se baarikh detail ko khangala tha usne,but jo kissa hum dono ki kahani ka bhaag hai hi nahi,woh usse dhundta kaise..???

MAI-hmm..toh kahan hai ye ALIUM...???

ASMODEUS-hamare saamne hi hoga...bas dekhne ki nazar chahiye jiska access sirf tumhari SWORD mehai..


SWORD ke POMMEL par lage RED DIAMOND ko press karte hue apne ALOUKIK SHAKTIYON ko usse connect karwaao,har nazara clear ho jaayega...

ASMODEUS ne jaisa kaha,maine kiya..

aur jaise hi maine apne POMMEL par lage RED DIAMOND ko press karte hue usme apne ALOUKIK SHAKTIYON ke urja ko release kiya toh..

mujhe apne haathon se hokar mere pure dhamniyon me ek nayi urja ke bahav ka abhaas hone laga.

ye bahav mere pure sharir se hota hua sidhe mere dono aankhon me aakar theher gaya aur aisa hote hi mere aankhon se ek red beam nikla jisne us andhere DARK SPACE ko roshni se bhar diya..

par meri nazar anant DARK SPACE ke sirf ek specific hisse par theher gayi thi jahan is waqt ek BLACK PLANET meri RED BEAM ki wajah se chamak raha tha..

ALIUM....

finally apne next destination ALIUM ko dekhte hue meri aankhon ki chamak aur usse nikal rahe red beam ki roshni bhi thodi aur badh chuki aur ye dekh..


ASMODEUS-so finally you are seeing ALIUM...???

MAI-haan us taraf..


ek disha ki taraf jahan ALIUM tha,kahi maine ye baat jisse sun..

ASMODEUS-point out karke faayda nahi.. ALIUM ko sirf tum hi dekh sakte ho...

MAI-ok then..of i go then...


but isse pehle ki mai ALIUM ki taraf kooch karta...


ASMODEOUS-mera ek kaam karna hoga tumhe RAAZ....

ab tak ke tumhare safar me tum kabhi ANGEL rahe ho aur kabhi DEMON...

par DEVIL kabhi nahi ban paaye...but now is the time when you unleash that side of yours...

ye ALIUM hi woh kaaran hai jiski wajah se mere PITAH ko taklif hui thi...

bhale hi mere PITAH ke liye ab ye baat koi maayne nahi rakhti par jis kisine kabhi bhi mere PITAH ko taklif paunchayi ho,woh dand ka paatr hai..

haan,tumhara maksad bhi us PLANET ko khtam karna hai par dand usse uske existence par hi milna chahiye..

jahan tum jaa rahe ho,woh jagah aur wahan base log are the symbol of EVIL...

aur isiliye, us planet ko khatm karne se pehle usme base logon par apna WRATH barsana hai tumhe..

NO MERCY....

un sabke sharir par,unki aatma par DEVIL ka true defination imprint karna bai tumhe...




taakat ka aisa pradarshan ho jo dekh kar bhi VEHEM LAGE...

khouf kuch yun paida karna ke dil ki dhadkan bajni KAM LAGE...

kohram se nikli cheekh behre tak ko sunayi de...

dard,taklif,tadap kuch yun badhana ki MOUT bhi us chot ki MARHAM LAGE....
















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AAPKA APNA V....J....
Excellent fantastic birrillint shandar update with awesome writing skills
 
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