Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

[vj4u]

Asslam-o-alikum

Bhai jb ap ki story shru ki toh jesy sirf tim pas k lye prhna shru ki toh tim pas se ye duty bn gae pta nae chala kam k tim b agy kya ho ga yhe khyal rhta h k6 dno mae complete ki

Bhai ap writing skills ki tarief k lye alfaz kam h bs jesy a6y shair ki shairi k lye ap jesy a6y writer k lye wah he nikal skta h agy beawaz hu kio k agy alfaz jo tarief k kabil lagy nae la skta

Ap ki story pr mera phela comment hai q k ab update ka intzar nae ho rha h

Give us update bck to bck

Good luck

walaikum assalam bhai jaan..

sabse pehle toh aapko paak ramzan-e-mahine ki mubarakbaad...

agli baar jab aap namaz padhe toh ek dua hamare liye bhi maang lijiyega..

aur shukriya kahani ko itna pasand karne ke liye...likhna toh maine bhi time paas ke liye hi shuru kiya tha.

waise time paas toh ab bhi hai par ab isme aap jaise umda readers ki ummiden bhi jud chuki hain toh ye time paas ab zara zaroori sa lagta hai..

rahi baat update ki toh shaam tak post kar dunga...

 

[vj4u]

Bhai writing skils ap ki umer 50+ btati h kya itne h

50...!!!?!arre bhai jaan,abhi toh nikah bhi naa padha humne aur aap hume nawase khilwane par tule hue hain..

issi mahine ke aakhir tak 30 ka ho jaayunga mai...

 

[Shani khan]

Hahahaha

Kher mubarak
Ap ko b

Dua to krta hu sb k lye aj sae nam ly k kru ga

Taref hr br nikalti h pr alfaz match nahe hoty jesy k ap ki akhri punch line us ka bary wala fan hu ye pta nae kesy krty ho

Kya shairi mae interest h

Or karwa lo phr shadi ta ky jtna exprnc writng mae h us hisb sae jaldi poty nawasy waly bn jao gay hahahaha

Or
Ek bt

Jo hr reader ko rhta h k khe incmplete na ho q k selfnes brh jati h a6e story prhny sae or ap ki life b br hal ap abhe kunwary h toh apny lye kafi tim bna lyta h to hmesha 7 bny rhy ga

 

[Golu]

Bahut din baad aaj login kiya hu password bhi reset krna pada sab bhul gya tha
Story bhi apne antim chapter pe hai aur mai comments bhi nhi kar paya apni fav story pe
Jabardast bhai kya hi likhte ho
Mza aa jata hai padhke aapka har update shandar rhta hai
Yun kah lo bhai aapke story ke update padhne baad to kuch samay ke liye koi tention bhi bhul jate hai aap ye part to 1st part se bilkul alag hai
Aaj ke update ka besabri se intzar hai

 

[Asif khan]

Waiting vj bahi

 

[Vikram Bhosle]

 

[Black water]

Waiting bhai

 

[Ajay]

Waiting for next update

 

[Vikram Bhosle]

Kb tk ay ga....?

 

[Vikram Bhosle]

Bhai time bta do

har min check kr rha hu