Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

[vj4u]

Absolutely true brother. But still Raaz ko marna hoga ye to shyd bahut phle hi bta diya gya tha waise v videous khada hai samne to uske samne Raaz bacha rahe aur wo akela mar jaye ye uske character k sath justify nahi hoga. Ek aisi personality jisne ASMODEOUS AUR VIKRAM ko jhukane pe majboor kar diya ho uski maut k lie uske samne wale ka v khel khatam hona suit karta h. But ye kaam Mahi ko na mil k Mahi aur Alfreen dono ko milna chahiye tha. Mahi sirf white power owner h jabki Alfreen black ki bhi hai. Dekhna ye h ki jab mahi hosh m ayegi aur apne dosto ko sari baatein btayegi tab kya hoga.
Waiting for next update pls post asap

ALFREEN powerful zaroor hai but naa toh woh SYMBOL OF LIFE hai aur naahi LORD OF ANGELS ki beti..

and most importantly, RAAZ ke baad VIDEOUS ko khatra agar kisi se hai toh woh hai MAHI...

isiliye ek teer se do shikar kiye hain VIDEOUS ne...

RAAZ ko maarkar MAHI waise bhi jeete jee mar jaayegi..

 

[DevilKing 😈]

ALFREEN powerful zaroor hai but naa toh woh SYMBOL OF LIFE hai aur naahi LORD OF ANGELS ki beti..

and most importantly, RAAZ ke baad VIDEOUS ko khatra agar kisi se hai toh woh hai MAHI...

isiliye ek teer se do shikar kiye hain VIDEOUS ne...

RAAZ ko maarkar MAHI waise bhi jeete jee mar jaayegi..

C'mon bhai. Mahi k baare me jo apne kaha wo bilkul sahi h but usse v badi baat ye bhi hai ki wo insb powers ki owner h.symbol of life and lord of angels ki beti kaise v situation m waqt lagega but khud ko sambhal ji legi wo. Aakhir niyati pura karna h use. Khud ko na sambhal pane walo sirf Alfreen hi hai.

 

[vj4u]

C'mon bhai. Mahi k baare me jo apne kaha wo bilkul sahi h but usse v badi baat ye bhi hai ki wo insb powers ki owner h.symbol of life and lord of angels ki beti kaise v situation m waqt lagega but khud ko sambhal ji legi wo. Aakhir niyati pura karna h use. Khud ko na sambhal pane walo sirf Alfreen hi hai.

jawab mera theek se padha nahi aapne..

baat hai VIDEOUS ke apne khatron ko hatane ki.

ALFREEN kabhi bhi VIDEOUS ke liye khatra nahi ban sakti.. aur naahi usme itni taakat hai ko woh RAAZ ko maar sake.. but MAHI ban sakti hai..aur RAAZ ko maarne ki taakat usme hai..

aur jahan tak rahi baat uske khudko sambhalne ki toh RAAZ ke marne ke baad woh kuch bhi kare, VIDEOUS ko fark nahi padta kyunki VIDEOUS ko woh hara sakti hai,maar nahi sakti...

ye kaam sirf RAAZ kar sakta hai aur RAAZ ke marne ke baad bhi agar VIDEOUS bacha raha toh woh challenge jeet jaayega jiska matlab hai ki VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS ka naa toh uspar koi control hoga aur naahi Universe par.

aise me VIDEOUS jo chahe,woh MAHI ke saath kar sakta hai..woh uske rehemo karam par hogi kyunki daav par universe hoga jisko sahi salamat rakhne ke liye uska sir,uska kya uske dad ka bhi sir VIDEOUS ke aage jhuk jaayega..

yahi toh plan hai VIDEOUS ka...

aur khud ko bachane ka bhi intazam usne pehle hi kar rakha hai..uski aadhi life source HEMINE, AROZ aur TIFER me hai..

jinhe ek saath marna hoga..alag alag ye kaam hua toh dusre ki shakti se mara hua phir jee uthega..

aur aakhir me bacha VIRAAZ.. VIDEOUS ke kuch life parts usme bhi hain.usse bhi same time par marna hai.

yahi wajah hai ki uske logon ko aur taakatwar banane ki koshish me laga hai VIDEOUS taaki uski woh life shield aur zyada impenetrable ho jaaye.

aur kamal ki baat ye hai ki VIDEOUS aisa bhi kar hi lega..

HEMINE,TIFER aur AROZ itne strong ho jaane waale hain ki aseemit shaktiyon ke baawjud ek hi waqt me ALFREEN aur uske dost un teeno ko ek saath khatm nahi kar paayege...

bottom line,RAAZ and party ki buri tarah lag chuki hai...

 

[11 ster fan]

jawab mera theek se padha nahi aapne..

baat hai VIDEOUS ke apne khatron ko hatane ki.

ALFREEN kabhi bhi VIDEOUS ke liye khatra nahi ban sakti.. aur naahi usme itni taakat hai ko woh RAAZ ko maar sake.. but MAHI ban sakti hai..aur RAAZ ko maarne ki taakat usme hai..

aur jahan tak rahi baat uske khudko sambhalne ki toh RAAZ ke marne ke baad woh kuch bhi kare, VIDEOUS ko fark nahi padta kyunki VIDEOUS ko woh hara sakti hai,maar nahi sakti...

ye kaam sirf RAAZ kar sakta hai aur RAAZ ke marne ke baad bhi agar VIDEOUS bacha raha toh woh challenge jeet jaayega jiska matlab hai ki VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS ka naa toh uspar koi control hoga aur naahi Universe par.

aise me VIDEOUS jo chahe,woh MAHI ke saath kar sakta hai..woh uske rehemo karam par hogi kyunki daav par universe hoga jisko sahi salamat rakhne ke liye uska sir,uska kya uske dad ka bhi sir VIDEOUS ke aage jhuk jaayega..

yahi toh plan hai VIDEOUS ka...

aur khud ko bachane ka bhi intazam usne pehle hi kar rakha hai..uski aadhi life source HEMINE, AROZ aur TIFER me hai..

jinhe ek saath marna hoga..alag alag ye kaam hua toh dusre ki shakti se mara hua phir jee uthega..

aur aakhir me bacha VIRAAZ.. VIDEOUS ke kuch life parts usme bhi hain.usse bhi same time par marna hai.

yahi wajah hai ki uske logon ko aur taakatwar banane ki koshish me laga hai VIDEOUS taaki uski woh life shield aur zyada impenetrable ho jaaye.

aur kamal ki baat ye hai ki VIDEOUS aisa bhi kar hi lega..

HEMINE,TIFER aur AROZ itne strong ho jaane waale hain ki aseemit shaktiyon ke baawjud ek hi waqt me ALFREEN aur uske dost un teeno ko ek saath khatm nahi kar paayege...

bottom line,RAAZ and party ki buri tarah lag chuki hai...

Ek baat Bata do bhaya ki agar mahi ne raaj ko maar ke sacrifice Kar liya to usse badale me konsa gift milega...aur raaj to God ke emotions se bana hai to wo marane ke baad bhi aa sakata hai aisa isliye kyoki jab God pahali baar apne banaye gaye sabhyata ko nasht kiye to wo emotionless ho gaye the but unka emotions phir se jivit ho gaya tha...videous ka kahana hai ki kai baar jitane ke liye harana parata hai to wo baat raaj and mahi par bhi lagu hai ki naye jivan ke shuruwat ke liye marana parata hai so raaj ek baar phir uth khada hoga...

 

[Shanu]

Awsum fabulous update

 

[vj4u]

Ek baat Bata do bhaya ki agar mahi ne raaj ko maar ke sacrifice Kar liya to usse badale me konsa gift milega...aur raaj to God ke emotions se bana hai to wo marane ke baad bhi aa sakata hai aisa isliye kyoki jab God pahali baar apne banaye gaye sabhyata ko nasht kiye to wo emotionless ho gaye the but unka emotions phir se jivit ho gaya tha...videous ka kahana hai ki kai baar jitane ke liye harana parata hai to wo baat raaj and mahi par bhi lagu hai ki naye jivan ke shuruwat ke liye marana parata hai so raaj ek baar phir uth khada hoga...

acha toh ye bataiye ki woh ye kaise karega..!!!

bas isiliye kyunki woh GOD ka EMOTION hai.

is lihaz se toh naa RAAZ VIDEOUS ko khatm kar sakta hai aur naahi VIDEOUS RAAZ ko.. phir kahani kaheki...

aur Gift..GIFT kis baat ka..yaa toh survive karna hai ya mar jaana hai.

bottom line bas itni hai bhai ki khatm dono hi ho sakte hain,aur khudko bacha bhi sakte hain,but dono hi chiz unhe apne dimag aur skill ke dum par karni hai..

unka ohda kaam nahi aane waala...maine pehle hi kaha tha ki ye kahani achhayi aur burayi ke beech ki battle nahi balki power ki battle hai...

power dimag ki aur aloukik shaktiyon ki..

aur sabse important baat jo abhi tak maine reveal hi nahi ki,woh toh bhul hi jaa rahe hain readers..

kaaran..woh kaaran jiske wajah se ye BHAVISHYAVANI hui hai..

ye bhagwan ki taraf se aayi BHAVISHYAVANI nahi hai balki VIDEOUS ki rachi chakravyuh ka hissa hai jisse VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS bhi nahi tod sakte..

aur GOD, woh beech me aayenge nahi..chahe phir kuch bhi kyun naa ho jaaye..

kya hua kaise hua,ye next update ke starting me hi pata chal jaayega..

aur yahi woh main wajah thi jiske liye mai hamesha kehta tha ki kirdaaron se pyar aur lagav mat rakho..

ek VIDEOUS se nipatne ke liye itne zyada bande lage hain toh yunhi toh jeetne dega nahi ye character..

padhte jaaiye, VIDEOUS mare,RAAZ mare, dono mar jaayen,fark nahi padta..mera focus bas kahani ko jeetane ka hai aur woh jeet jaayegi because i said so...

 

[A. P]

I must say VJ is forum par koi dusra writer nahi jo fantasies stories mein tumhe takkar de sake... last two updates dhasu the bhai.. raaz ke emotion se lekar mahi ke powerful hone tak everything is superb.. waiting for next update bhai.

 

[11 ster fan]

acha toh ye bataiye ki woh ye kaise karega..!!!

bas isiliye kyunki woh GOD ka EMOTION hai.

is lihaz se toh naa RAAZ VIDEOUS ko khatm kar sakta hai aur naahi VIDEOUS RAAZ ko.. phir kahani kaheki...

aur Gift..GIFT kis baat ka..yaa toh survive karna hai ya mar jaana hai.

bottom line bas itni hai bhai ki khatm dono hi ho sakte hain,aur khudko bacha bhi sakte hain,but dono hi chiz unhe apne dimag aur skill ke dum par karni hai..

unka ohda kaam nahi aane waala...maine pehle hi kaha tha ki ye kahani achhayi aur burayi ke beech ki battle nahi balki power ki battle hai...

power dimag ki aur aloukik shaktiyon ki..

aur sabse important baat jo abhi tak maine reveal hi nahi ki,woh toh bhul hi jaa rahe hain readers..

kaaran..woh kaaran jiske wajah se ye BHAVISHYAVANI hui hai..

ye bhagwan ki taraf se aayi BHAVISHYAVANI nahi hai balki VIDEOUS ki rachi chakravyuh ka hissa hai jisse VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS bhi nahi tod sakte..

aur GOD, woh beech me aayenge nahi..chahe phir kuch bhi kyun naa ho jaaye..

kya hua kaise hua,ye next update ke starting me hi pata chal jaayega..

aur yahi woh main wajah thi jiske liye mai hamesha kehta tha ki kirdaaron se pyar aur lagav mat rakho..

ek VIDEOUS se nipatne ke liye itne zyada bande lage hain toh yunhi toh jeetne dega nahi ye character..

padhte jaaiye, VIDEOUS mare,RAAZ mare, dono mar jaayen,fark nahi padta..mera focus bas kahani ko jeetane ka hai aur woh jeet jaayegi because i said so...

Ju to pura ka pura Shakespeare ki tarah bole ho character bhale hi mar Jaye par story ko jitna hi hoga aur iss baat ki shuruwat Shakespeare ne ki thi ...unki story ka tragedy wali hoti thi ...

 

[11 ster fan]

acha toh ye bataiye ki woh ye kaise karega..!!!

bas isiliye kyunki woh GOD ka EMOTION hai.

Jaise Anjali punah jivit hui thi...

 

[11 ster fan]

aur Gift..GIFT kis baat ka..yaa toh survive karna hai ya mar jaana hai.

Abhi tak iss khel me ek padav paar karane par usko gift Mila hai to phir mahi ko kyo nhi