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Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF VIDEOUS KUCH ATIRIKT SHAKTIYAN APNE NUMAINDON KO DETA HAI WAHIN MAHI RAAZ KO KISS KAR USSE APNE PYAR KA IZHAAR KARTI HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-3


(THE SACRIFICE & THE PERFECT EPILOGUE)



MEGA UPDATE-169



PLANET-ELYLSIAN


PLACE-ALFREEN'S ABODE





NERVOUS...????


ussi sofe par jahan majboori me hiu sahi, par maine apne mom dad ki jaan li thi, aankhen band kar baitha tha mai ki tabhi mere kaano me ye awaaz gunji jisse sun mere face ek smile aa gayi.


REASON..


ye awaaz mere dad ki thi aur unke saath apni mom ki bhi mehsoos kiya tha maine...

aankh khol jab maine saamne dekha toh mom dad ko mujhe dekh smile karte paaya.

wahin mere aankh khulte hi woh dono bhi chalte hue mere kareeb aate chale gaye aur mere ek ek baazu ko thaamte hue mere aaju baaju aakar baith gaye jiske baad..


DAD-batao son..??nervous...!!!

MAI-hahahaha...umm, yup..thoda sa..but don't you worry... performance level me koi kami nahi hogi..

i will give it my very best...

ANJALI-we know it kiddo...tumhare focus par doubt karna focus word ki insult hai...


mom ki baat sun maine halki si smile ki jiske baad...


ANJALI-ab ek sawal ka jawab honestly do..???

yahan is sofe par jahan tumhare dad aur meri second human life ka anth hua tha, aankhen band kar kya soch rahe the tum...??

kya ab bhi jo hua tha,uske liye khudko guilty maante ho....!!!???

MAI-nahi..mai bas aap dono ne jo marte waqt mehsoos kiya hoga,us ehsaas ko feel karne ki koshish kar raha tha..

janana chahta tha ki marte waqt kaisa lagta hai...???does the pain effects to much...???

DAD-honest anwer dun...????

MAI-please...

DAD-hume pain naa ho,iska khayal toh tumne khudhi rakha tha mere bacche..

par haan, tumhare maamle me situation alag hai..tumhe pain hoga.aur uska effect bhi kuch zyada hi hoga..

but relief bhi jald hi mil jaayega kyunki tumhare paas pain killers honge..

MAI-pain killers..!!!

MOM-hum dono beta...we will be there holding your hands...kuch bhi negetive feel nahi hone denge hum tumhe...

isiliye ab ye saari baat chhodo and focus at the battle on which the whole geography of universe is at stake..

MAI-itna bharosa hai mujhpar...???hang on, don't answer that question...???

MOM-kyun..???

MAI-mom dad hain aap mere... mujhpar bharosa rakhna job hai aap dono ka...

DAD-hahahaha..woh toh hai..but tumpar bharosa hume sirf isiliye nahi hai kyunki you are our son...

tumhara sabse bada X-FACTOR kya hai,pata hai..???

tumme ASMODEUS ki tarah sanak bhi hai and at the same time, VIKRAM jaisi sthir buddhi bhi..

ye ek super deadly combination hai son..yahi wajah hai ki VIDEOUS ki taakat jaante hue bhi you haven't ever gave up..

aur ek secret bataun, VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS bhi tumse kaafi amazed hain...

MAI-kuch bhi..

HE IS RIGHT RAAZ....


saamne se aayi ye awaaz jo ki thi THE LORD OF ANGELS ki joki hum teeno ke saamne khade hume dekh smile kar rahe the..

wahin unhe dekh hum teeno bhi khade ho gaye jispar woh theek mere saamne aakar khade hue aur..


VIKRAM-RONIT sahi bol raha hai..jab maine aur ASMODEUS ne apni apni urja ko in dono ke ansh ke saath milakar tumhari uttpatti ki thi,tab tum par, tumhare future par bohot saare calculations kiye the humne..

but you have excelled more than our expectations...

isiliye ab jab finally woh waqt aa gaya hai jab tum aur VIDEOUS ek dusre se antim baar takraane waale ho,uske saamne khade hokar jhaankna uski aankhon me aur batana usse..

ki beshak usne tumhe apne chakravyuh me fasa liya hai,beshak woh tumhe MAHI ke haathon maarne me safal hone waala hai par chhodne waale tum bhi usse nahi ho...

usse hamesha se lagta aaya hai ki ye uski kahani hai..aaj tumhe ye saabit karna hai ki ye kahani uski nahi tumhari hai aur isme chalegi tumhari marzi, chalega sirf tumhara.....ATTITUDE......





PLACE-THE GREAT HALL




NERVOUS...!!!!!


THE GREAT HALL me gunj utha MAHI ka bola gaya wahi shabd jo ALFREEN'S abode me RAAZ ke dad ne usse pucha tha..


khair,MAHI ke one word sawal ko sun ek dusre ko dekhne lage the saare SAVENTS..

haan,woh sab ready the hone waale mahayudh ke liye,khaaskar tab jab us mahayudh ka waqt aa chuka tha.

din ke waqt bhi bahar chhaya andherapan,kaale badalon se dhaka pura akash aur tez chalti hui hawa jaise ek announcement thi us yudh ki...

aar yaa paar ki ladhayi ke liye pure josh se khudko taiyar karte SAVENTS bhi us badle hue mousam aur waisa hone ke piche ke RAAZ ko jaankar thoda sa hi sahi,par nervous ho zaroor gaye the..

un sabke faces is nervousness ko aur achi tarah pukhta kar rahe the par phir bhi woh sab chup hi rahe par unme se kuch ke sir haan me hile jispar MAHI aur uske saath khade uske sabhi doston ke faces par smile naach uthi aur..


MAHI-good...agar nervousness ke liye naa hoti tumhari toh uska matlab hota overconfidence...

par nervous hone ka matlab hai that you all are perfectly ready...

haan,agar dar bhi baitha hai tumme se kuch ke dil me toh usse nikal kar fekh do...

jaante ho kyun..???aksar ek phrase suna hoga tum sabne ki "JAB GOD HAMARE SAATH HAI TOH PHIR DAR KAISA.."

aur aaj tum sab GOD ki taraf se ladhne waale ho,jo bramhaand unhone banayi hai,uski suraksha ke liye DARK WARRIORS se bhidne waale ho,toh tum batao,aakhir dar kaisa...!!!

we have to win and we will win...jaante ho kyun,kyunki bhale hi upar akash abhi kaala hai,par neeche jahan tum khade ho,CHOSENS,ye jagah ab bhi roshni se jagmaga rahi hai.

aur koi kaali shakti is roshni ko bujha nahi sakti...and we will make sure of it...

ALFREEN-indeed we will...


GADGADGADGADHADGAD...


ALFREEN ki baat khtam hui hi thi ki tabhi sabko bijli ki bohot hi tez gadgadahat sunayi di.

ye maamuli thunder sound nahi tha,jaise hi bijli gadgadayi, pura CHOSENS hil gaya tha...

saare SAVENTS aur WHIZZES, WHIZZDERS ke pair ladkhada gaye the..

wahin is temporary aur made up earthquake ko feel karte hi MAHI, ALFREEN aur uske sabhi dost piche mood THE GREAT HALL ke bahar ki taraf lapke aur unke piche piche sabhi WHIZZES, WHIZZDERS aur SAVENTS bhi ho liye...

aur jaise hi woh sab bahar aaye aur un sabki nazar upar aasman ki taraf jahan par bijli ab bhi chamak rahi thi,gayi toh MAHI aur uske dost toh normal hi rahe,infact un sabke jabde bhi sakhti se bheench gaye the par on the other hand,sabhi WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ki nervousness wapas aa gayi thi..


REASON...

"WE ARE HERE"...


jo bijli kadki thi aur ab bhi kadak rahi thi,usse ye akshar upar kaale asmaan me tez chamak rahe the..

us line ko padh sab samajh chuke the ki ab tak theoretically jis ghadi ke liye woh sab khudko taiyar kar rahe the,uska final aur practical version aur waqt aa chuka hai.

khair,un lines ko sun koi kuch kehta ki tabhi..


ROAARRRRRRRRRRRR..

ek aisi dahad gunji CHOSENS ki dharti par jiska asar upar pure akaash ki har hadh par hua.

us dahadh se jahan ek baar phir puri dharti hil gayi,wahin awaaz se nikle sound waves sidhe upar jaakar un chamak rahi bijli se takraye aur aisa hote hi unse bani woh art work "WE ARE HERE"ek jhatke me mit gayi...

is dahadh ka origin sabhi SAVENTS ko apne aas paas hi sunayi diya tha aur jab sabki nazarein us dahadh ke aaye disha ki taraf ghumi toh unke face par chaayi nervousness ek jhatke me parivartit hote hue dar me badal chuki thi aur aisa hone laazmi bhi tha..

ek lagbhagh 20 feet lambha aur bedhadh chowda ajeeb sa jaanwar jo ki kisi WOLF aur TIGER ka MIX BREED lag raha tha,chalta hua unki taraf hi aa raha tha..

us jaanwar ko dekh jahan MAHI, ALFREEN aur baaki sabhi doston ke faces me smile naach uthi thi wahin SAVENTS, WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS dar ke maare piche hathnne lage the par phir achanak se hi un sabke kadam rook bhi gaye..

REASON...


ALFREEN-relax guyzz...ye hamare saath hai....


ALFREEN ki baat sun us un sabke piche haththe kadam rook chuke the but haan,us daityakaar CREATURE ko dekh haalath un sabki ab bhi andar hi andar kharab hi thi...

khair, WOOGER ALFREEN ke paas pahunch rook gaya jiske baad woh uske sir ko sehlane lagi....

aur ye nazara dekh jaise sabhi WHIZZES, WHIZZDERS aur SAVENTS ke confidence wapas aa chuke the..

WOOGER ke saath saath un sabki nazar bhi upar akash ki taraf hi thi jahan se bina dulhe dulhan ki shaadi me sharikh hone VIDEOUS aur uski sena aane waali thi..

aur tabhi..

GADGADGADGAD...

ek baar phir pura akash tez bijli se chamak utha jiske baad ek baar phirse saare SAVENTS aur unke saath khade sabhi WHIZZES, WHIZZDERS ki aankhein badi ho chali thi par is baar waisa hone ka reason kuch aur tha..

jaise hi tez bijli kadki aur pura akash uski chamak se roshan hua toh us chamak ke beech pure akash ko ghere prakat hue 5 lakh se bhi zyada DARK WARRIORS...

ye thi VIDEOUS ki fouj...ek DARK WARRIOR ka life spam 500 years se zyada hota hai aur isiliye is waqt unki aur unke fouj ki sankhya itni zyada di...

upar dekhte hue sabhi ko aisa lag raha tha jaise ki pura aasman hi un DARK WARRIORS ne apne presence se dhak diya hai...

wahin neeche khade SAVENTS ki sankhya thi kareeb 300 aur unke saath unke baaju me khade the kuch 20 WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS...

kamal ka mismatch tha...un laakhon ki sankhya me khade DARK WARRIORS ko dekh sabhi SAVENTS ka gala halka sa khushk pad chuka tha...

kuch bol nahi rahe the woh sab par shayad kuch bolne jaisa bacha hi nahi tha..

bas chupchap un uncountables si dikhne waali legion ko dekh rahe the sabhi par tabhi..


KADKADKADKAD...

ek baar phir bijli kadki par is baar ki bijli sirf aasman tak hi simit nahi thi balki aasman se hote hue woh bijli sidhe hamare saamne zamin par aakar giri..

aur us bijli ke beech se prakat hua VALDIS jo is waqt hume apni kaali aakhon se dekh raha tha.

wahin VALDIS ko dekh mere sabhi dost chownke the..

REASON..

uske sharir se nikal rahi ENERGY jiski strength kuch zyada hi thi...

aisa lag raha tha jaise kisi taakat ke samandar me gote khaakar aaya hai VALDIS aur usse itna shaktishali mehsoos kar woh sab samajh gaye the ki VIDEOUS ne uski shakti kayi guna tak badha di hai..

khair,kuch pal un sabko dekhte rehne ke baad VALDIS ki nazar humare piche khade sabhi SAVENTS aur WHIZZES, WHIZZDERS par gayi aur..


VALDIS-in sabka marna tay hai... aur inka saath dene ke liye tum sabka bhi...

par hamare GOD dayalu hain..kyunki tum sab ussi institution me padh rahe ho jo hamare GOD ke icha anusaar bani hai isiliye tumhe ek mouka milta hai.

saath chhodo inka aur hamare GOD ke disciples ban jaao..hamari taraf aa jaao..

naa sirf jaan baksh di jaayegi tum sabki par saath hi saath tum sab bhi hamare GOD ke kingdom me joki pura universe hone waala hai,raj kar paaoge...


VALDIS ke is tark ka kaaran jaanti thi MAHI aur uske sabhi dost... SAVENTS, WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ko apni taraf kar VIDEOUS bas ye messege dena chahta tha ki acchayi ki taraf se ladhne waale logon ko manupalate karna,unhe darana aur apne saath karna kitna asaan hota hai..

manupalate waali baat uski sahi bhi thi, kuch hadh tak dar waali bhi par apne saath karne waali uski soch tab galat hui jab bina kisi expressions ke sabhi SAVENTS aur WHIZZES, WHIZZDERS VALDIS ko dekhte hue khade rahe.

unki ye chuppi unki naa thi,ye samajh chuka tha VALDIS ko aur isiliye aankhon me chingari liye un sabko dekhne laga woh aur...


VALDIS-murkhon..in logon ko jinke dum par tum hamare khilaaf khade ho,inhe toh hum sambhal lenge par tum sabka kya...???

chand muthi bhar reth ki tarah ho tum sab par upar dekho...

ek pura registaan is waqt tum sabke sir par mout bankar khada hai..

jaise hi woh registaan tum sabki taraf badha toh uski aandhi me kab gayab ho jaaoge tum sab,khabar tak naa padegi...


VALDIS ki baat sun baaki sab toh chup rahe,par MAHI chalte hue uske theek saamne jaakar khadi hui...

nayi badhi hui shaktiyon ke kaaran VALDIS MAHI ke presence se dar nahi raha tha aur isiliye woh kuch kehne ko hua par usse pehle hi...


MAHI-piche dekh....


bas itna hi kaha MAHI ne jiske baad VALDIS ki aankhon me sawal naach utha.

aur woh sawal zyada gehra tab hua jab VALDIS ne sabhi SAVENTS aur WHIZZES,WHIZZDERS ke face par nayi nayi aayi smile aur khushi dekhi..

woh sab bhi uske piche ki direction me dekh rahe the aur isiliye woh bhi palta aur aisa karte hi uske piche ke nazare ko dekh ek pal ke liye uski aankhein bhi badi ho chuki thi..

REASON...

is waqt uske saamne lagbhag 1 lakh ke kareeb PEACE MAKERS khade the...

acchayi ke shaanti dooth par is waqt jung ke liye bilkul ready...

wahin MAHI ko dekh jiski sacchayi woh sabhi PEACE MAKERS jaante the,sir ko neeche kar apna respect diya un sabne usse...

khair,unhe dekh ek pal ke liye hairan hone ke baad VALDIS ke face ki smile waapas aa gayi aur...


VALDIS-bas itna hi back up...kuch kam nahi lag raha..

MAHI-tere baap ki di hui jis shakti ke dum me tu is waqt ucchal raha hai naa MADARC**D,usse teri hi GAA**D me naa ghusa diya toh mera naam bhi MAHI nahi...


BOOOMMMM..

ye dhamaka hua tha MAHI ki language,uska tone sun wahan moujud sabhi ke dimag me..

mooh hi khul gaye the sabke uske mooh se gaali sun...

hamesha shaant rehne waali thi MAHI aur agar naraaz ho bhi jaaye,toh bohot sophisticated way me baat karti thi woh..

par abhi uski aankhon ki intensity,zuban se barsi aag ko dekh VALDIS bhi hadbada gaya tha...

kuch seconds yunhi hadbadane ke baad woh kuch kehne ko hua par tabhi..


MAHI-chup.. aukaad se zyada pehle hi bol chuka hai tu...aur ek shabd nahi..

sirf kuch der ke liye hi saansein chal rahi hain teri...aur ye mohollat kyun mili hai tujhe,jaanta hai..??

kyunki teri fouj toh yahan hai par tere us baap ke didaar abhi tak nahi hue mujhe..

ek baar uski shakal dekh lun,uske saamne hi kaatungi tujhe...

tab ke liye,FUCK OFF...

DHAKKKKK...


MAHI ki baat khtam hote hi ek endless root VALDIS ke pairon ke theek neeche se nikli jisne usse ful force se upar ki taraf ucchal diya..

ek hi PAL me VALDIS upar akash me apne logon ke paas pahunch chuka tha..

khair, VALDIS ko root flight me chadhate hue upar bhejne ke baad jab MAHI piche palti toh usne sabhi ko usse ghurta paaya..

par sabko nazarandaaz kar woh chalti hui GRIFFIN ke baaju me aakar khadi ho gayi...

ALFREEN masti karna chahati thi uske saath par waqt ki seriousness joki is waqt MAHI ke face bhi dikh rahi thi,usse dekh woh shant hi rahi..

SWEEEHHHHHHHHH.....

abhi MAHI GRIFFIN ke paas aakar khadi hui hi thi ki tabhi pura akash jalti hui jwala se chamakte hue dhak gaya..

ye agni attack rays the jo saare DARK WARRIORS ke haathon se hote hue hamari taraf badh chale the aur ye dekh..


HIDA-here we go...the battle has finally begun...


ek lambi saans chhodte hue kahi ye baat HIDA ne...

wahin hamare saamne khade sabhi PEACE MAKERS aur piche khade saare SAVENTS aur WHIZZES,WHIZZDERS ke jabde bhi un fire rays ko dekh sakht ho chuke the...

un sabne un rays ko out do karne ke liye apne apne haath upar kar liye aur..


JALAM SUDHARUTEH

WATER SUCKER

SPELL ke uccharit hote hi sabhi SAVENTS, WHIZZES, WHIZZDERS aur PEACE MAKERS ke haathon me aneko WATER BALLS create hue aur tezi se upar un fire rays ki taraf badh gaye....

par dikkat ye thi ki un water balls ke mukable fire rays bohot zyada the...

waise MAHI ke doston me se agar koi chahata toh un saare water balls ko ek jhatke me AMPLIFY kar sakta tha,unki ginti uncountables jitni badha sakta tha but itni jaldi khudko woh is battle me show nahi karna chahte the...

woh sab chahte the ki SAVENTS,WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS battle ke is pehle charan se khud nipte taaki unka confidence bhi grow kare...

aisa hi kuch PEACE MAKERS ki soch bhi thi...

par un anant dikhne waale fire rays se un sabka confidence kam hone laga tha...

unka pehle defense SPELL haarne waala tha..yahi sab sochte hue woh sab upar akash ki taraf dekh hi rahe the ki tabhi..


VIJATEHOMAN...

MULTIPLY....


SOVES MARILIZA....abhi tak apne chamber me baithi apni shaktiyon ko channelize karti MARILIZA jab yahan battle spot par pahunchi toh upar akash ka nazara dekh haath upar kar is SPELL ko uccharit kiya unhone aur unke waisa karte hi saare water balls ki sankhya ek jhatke me kayi guna tak badh gayi..

itni ki unhone saare ke saare FIRE RAYS ko cover kar liya aur tabhi...


SHHHHHHWHHHH....


water balls aur fire rays ek dusre se takraye aur aisa hote hi saare fire rays khatm ho gaye...

jahan ye dekh sabhi SAVENTS khush ho gaye the wahin MARILIZA ne dobara haath upar kiya aur...


VAJRAVAYUYEM

AIR TURBULANCE


zor se bola unhone is SPELL ko aur unke waisa karte hi aadhe se zyada DARK WARRIORS ke pair ladkhadane lage...

un sabke aas paas ek tez tufaan uth chuka jo sirf DARK WARRIORS ko hi khudme lapetne kis koshish kar raha tha.

aur apne sathiyon ko us AIR TURBULANCE ki chapet me aakar ladhte dekh unke baaki saathiyon ne kaman sambhali...

VAAYUYEM BHANGAM jiska matlab AIR DISPURSE hota hai,isse use me laate hue un sab ne us AIR TURBULANCE ko khatm karne ki koshish ki par tabhi..


DWAGAMIYA SHAKTIYEM

ENHANCE THE POWER


jab PEACE MAKERS ne bache hue DARK WARRIORS ko apne saathiyon ko bachate dekha toh woh kood pade maidan me aur un sabne ek saath is SPELL ko uccharit kiya aur unke waisa karte hi us AIR TURBULANCE ki speed joki DARK WARRIORS ke spells se kam hone lagi thi,woh dobara tez ho gayi...

yahi reason tha ki dekhte hi dekhte DARK WARRIORS ki aadhi se zyada fouj us AIR TURBULANCE ki chapet me aane lage the.

filhal toh un sabka balance bhar hi bigad raha tha but har guzarte pal ke saath jaise jaise us TURBULANCE ki speed aur aakramakta badhti chali jaa rahi thi, DARK WARRIORS par khatra bhi badhne laga tha..

lekin tabhi...

VOUUUUUUFUUUUUU...

achanak se hi us AIR TURBULANCE ke ird gird ek naya TURBULENCE create hua jisne kuch hi palon me us AIR TURBULANCE ko naa sirf DARK WARRIORS se alag kar diya balki agle hi pal usne us AIR TURBULANCE ko ek chadar ki tarah sidha failate hue ek strong push sa diya..

ye VALDIS tha jisne us AIR TURBULANCE ko neeche CHOSENS ki taraf fekh sa diya tha aur woh me bhi uski shakti ko kayi guna tak badhate hue..

par jahan us AIR TURBULANCE ko kisi invisible mountain aur utni hi energy create karte hue apni taraf aata feel kar PEACE MAKERS, SAVENTS aur WHIZZES, WHIZZDERS halke hadbadaye the wahin ALFREEN & friendz ke faces par is waqt ek smile naach uthi thi..

REASON..

VALDIS VIDEOUS ka khaas numainda tha..par uska yun DARK WARRIORS ke saath PEACE MAKERS, SAVENTS, WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ki bheendat ke beech aana unke liye choti si hi sahi par jeet thi..

khair,us AIR TURBULANCE ki chaadar ko apni taraf aata dekh SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA aage aaye jiske baad..


SLUNDER-ye raha sudh...

SWSSSSSSSHHHH....BHAKKKKKKK...


haath ek jhatke me upar ki taraf kiya SLUNDER ne aur uske waisa karte hi uske haathon se uski GOD GIFTED shakti,SHIELD,uski ek badi se transparent par halki visible sheet upar akash ki taraf uth gayi aur tezi si upar jaate hue agle hi pal usne pure AIR TURBULANCE ki chaadar ko khudme lapet liya..

SHIELD sheet se takrate hi AIR TURBULANCE ekdum se rook chuka tha aur tabhi..


ACCHUTA-aur ye raha BYAAJ...

SOOBHHH...

haath aage kiye ACCHUTA ne aur uske aisa karte hi uski GOD GIFTED BOW aur ARROW uske haathon me aa chuki thi..

pratyancha chadha bas us ARROW ki 10 pratishat shakti ko jaagrit karte hue usne ARROW release kar di aur aisa hone ke agle hi pal...

BOOMMM..

woh ARROW sidhi SLUNDER ki SHIELD sheet aur usme ghire AIR TURBULANCE se jaakar takrayi jiske baad ek tez dhamaka hua..

AHHHHHHHHH....

ye cheekh nikli thi kayi hazaar DARK WARRIORS ke mooh se..

REASON....

ACCHUTA ki ARROW jaise hi SHIELD sheet aur AIR TURBULANCE se takrayi toh shield toh gayab hi ho gayi par arrow ki taakat sidhe jaakar us air turbulence ke saath mil gayi..

aisa hote hi woh AIR TURBULANCE kayi thousands chote chote invisible blades me convert ho gaya aur second ke duswe hisse se bhi kam waqt me sidhe jaakar thousands of DARK WARRIORS se takraya..

un invisible blades me ARROW ke pure WHITE ENERGY ki urja thi..

yahi wajah thi ki jaise hi woh blades un DARK WARRIORS ke andar samayi,hriday vidarak cheekh ke saath un sabki bodies pighalte hue kuch hi pal me puri tarah gal chuki thi...

DORIAN, GASTON, UBEL, TRISTEN...

un hazaron DARK WARRIORS ke ek jhatke me khatm hote hi VALDIS ke baaju me prakat hue ye chaaron..

dehekti hui aankhon se niche moujud sabhi WHITE ENERGY ke holders aur owners ko dekh rahe the woh sab...

aur kuch pal yunhi ghurne ke baad un paanchon ne ek saath neeche CHOSENS ki taraf apni apni finger point ki aur..


PAANCHON-lets kill this basterds...attack...

SOOBHHHH...


kisi falling star ki tarah par kaale rang me dhale woh sab tezi se neeche CHOSENS ki taraf badh chale the.

aur unko yun neeche badhta dekh MAHI ne apne dono haath faila diye aur uske waisa karte hi uske ek haath se GRIFFIN aur dusre se ANZU woh bhi apne original gigantic form me bahar nikle aur tezi se upar saare DARK WARRIORS ki taraf badh gaye..


CCHHHNNNNN...

MNMNMNMNMNMN....


ye do ajeeb par behadh loud aur impactful si awaaz nikli thi GRIFFIN aur ANZU dono ke mooh se aur un awaazon se bahar nikle do dangerous supersonic sound waves..

un sounds ki tarange itni strong thi ki lagbhag 1/4 DARK WARRIORS jinki ginti bhi lakhs me thi,unki abhi banayi khudki black rays beech se hi completely tear ho gayi jiska matlab tha ki woh sab khtam ho chuke the..

wahin lagbhagh aadhe DARK WARRIORS ki rays ko ek tez pull block laga jiski wajah se woh rays piche ki taraf udte hue wapas ussi jagah par pahunch gaye jahan se neeche aane ki un sabne shuruat ki thi..

aur bache DORAIN,GASTON, UBEL, TRISTEN aur VALDIS...

jhatka un sabki bodies ko bhi joki rays hi thi,laga tha but jhatka lagte hi ye sab gayab hokar directly neeche MAHI se kuch door par prakat hue...

prakat hote hi DORIAN, GASTON, UBEL,TRISTEN aur VALDIS ne ek saath MAHI ki disha ki taraf apna apna haath kar diya tha.

woh sab ek saath MAHI par SPELL hit karna chahte the but isse pehle ki woh apne SPELLS bolte..

MAHI ne apna haath pledge lene waali position me karte hue pehle neeche aur phir left se right ki taraf kiya..

MAHI ke waisa karte hi sabse pehle un sabke uthe hue haath ek jhatke me wapas neeche ho gaye aur jaise hi MAHI ne apne haath ko left se right kiya toh un sabko aisa laga jaise unki bodies kisi heavy invisible bull se takra gayi hai.

right ki taraf udte hue se woh paanchon kaafi door jaakar gire.

girte hi woh jab khade hue toh unhone apne saamne ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY, HIDA aur MABEL ko paaya..

un sabko dekh woh paanchon samajh gaye ki MAHI unse ladhna nahi chahti.

saath hi saath jis tarah bas haath jhatakte hue usne un sabko door feka tha,usse dekh woh ye bhi jaan gaye ki woh paanchon milkar bhi MAHI ko takkar dena toh door,uske saamne kuch pal bhi teek nahi sakte..

unki ye dono hi soch sahi thi...MAHI chahti thi toh un paanchon ko kuch hi der me ek saath khatm kar sakti thi par aisa karne me uski ENERGY waste hoti aur aisa woh hone nahi de sakti thi yaa phir ye kahun ki aisa naa karne ke liye RAAZ ne usse kaha tha..

REASON...

HEMINE,AROZ, TIFER...MAHI,TUMHE APNI PURI TAAKAT IN TEENO KE LIYE BACHAKAR RAKHNI HAI...

YE TEENO SIRF TUMHARI ZIMMEDARI HAIN..

RAAZ ke the ye shabd,uski thi ye ran neeti jiske tahat is waqt DORAIN, GASTON, UBEL, TRISTEN aur VALDIS ,in paanch logon ke saamne uske 5 dost khade the wahin MAHI ki nazar is waqt upar aasman ki taraf thi...

REASON....

GRIFFIN aur ANZU jinhone ek jhatke me 1/4th of the DARK WARRIORS ko maar diya tha aur filhal woh dono aur upar udte hue baaki ke DARK WARRIORS jo apni pehle waali jagah par pahunch chuke the,wahan jaa rahe the..

MAHI jaanti thi ki GRIFFIN aur ANZU ki chapet se koi bhi DARK WARRIOR apne dum par nahi bhid sakta aur naahi unse bach sakta hai..

aur VIDEOUS apne sabhi numaindo ko ek jhatke me khatm hone dega nahi...

woh zaroor un sabko bachane ke liye ek super strong backup bhejega..

ab DORIAN, GASTON, UBEL, TRISTEN aur VALDIS toh neeche hi the aur woh bhi ANZU aur GRIFFIN se takrane ke layak nahi the..

toh bacha kaun...HEMINE,AROZ aur TIFER..MAHI ko pura yakin tha ki GRIFFIN,ANZU ko rokne,infact unhe khatm karne ke liye ye teeno zaroor aayenge aur isiliye uske pura focus ANZU aur GRIFFIN par hi tha aur tabhi...

BOOMMMM.....

jaise hi GRIFFIN aur ANZU DARK WARRIORS ke paas pahunche,out from nowhere,DARK WARRIORS ke just saamne ek MEANDERING TYPHOON WAVE create hui jo light speed pakadte hue GRIFFIN aur ANZU ki taraf badh chali..

us MEANDERING TYPHOON WAVE ka yun achanak form hona aur fir light speed ke saath aage badhna,ye dono hi conditions GRIFFIN aur ANZU ke liye super sudden the..

dono hi DARK WARRIORS ko khtam karne par completely focused the..

aur isiliye ek baar phirse SUPERSONIC SOUND WAVES release karne ke liye woh cheekhne hi waale the aur tabhi ye new unimaginable aur mighty attack unpar hua tha.

there was no way ki woh is attack se dodge kar sakte the..yahi wajah thi ki un dono ne khudko un MEANDERING TYPHOON WAVE se takrane ke liye taiyar kar liya tha par MAHI jiska pura focus GRIFFIN aur ANZU ki taraf hi tha,usne naa sirf us new mighty wave ko dekh liya tha balki saath hi saath theek us WAVE ke create hote waqt hi uske dimag me kuch uccharit bhi ho chuka tha..


DHARTIYEM PRAVAH ANTAM

EARTH COUNTERMAND


ELYSIAN ki dharti ke magnetic field ko jiski hadh upar aasman tak thi, is SPELL ke through ek order sa diya MAHI ne aur uske waisa karte hi puri ELYSIAN ki magnetic field power us MEANDERING TYPHOON WAVE ke just saamne create hui aur aisa hote hi woh WAVE sidhe us BARRIER roopi MAGNETIC FIELD se takrayi.

aur jab aisa hua toh us MAGNETIC FIELD ki shakti ne us WAVE ko puri tarah sokhte hue khudme samet khatm kar diya..

GRIFFIN aur ANZU bach gaye the but MAGNETIC FIELD aur us MEANDERING TYPHOON WAVE ke takrane se create hue impact ki wajah se un dono ko hi bodies ko jhatka laga aur woh dono neeche girne lage the..

ye dekh MAHI ne ek baar phirse ek reverse GRAVITATIONAL FORCE un dono ki body ke neeche create kar diya aur aisa hote hi un dono ki bodies sthir ho gayi...

SOOBHHH....

bohot se RING BLADES jinke chaaron taraf se solid diamond thorns nikle hue the,ek saath MAHI ki taraf bohot tezi se badh chuke the..

ye tab hua jab MAHI GRIFFIN aur ANZU ke neeche reverse GRAVITATIONAL FORCE create kar rahi thi...

but aisa karte hue bhi usne un RING BLADES ko sense kar liya tha aur isiliye ek pair ko halka zor se patka usne aur uske waisa karte hi jahan woh khadi thi,uske neeche waali zamin ke andar se ek jhatke me antimony, arsenic, bismuth, cadmium, chromium, cobalt, indium, iron, nickel, selenium, tantalum, tellurium, tin,zinc.

ye saare metals jo ground ke andar paaye jaate hain,ek jhatke me bahar aaye aur turant ek dusre se judte hue unhone MAHI ko chaaron taraf se gher liya...

woh saare RING BLADES sidhe unhi metals ke mishran roopi kawach se takrakar nishkriya ho chuke the aur aisa hone ke baad jab woh sab wapas zamin ke andar samaye toh..

akash ke jis point se woh RING BLADES nikal MAHI ki taraf badhe the,wahan ek black hole jaisa bana hua tha jiske beech se MAHI ke theek saamne waale area ke liye neeche kude ek saath 4 log...

HEMINE,AROZ, TIFER aur unke saath tha VIRAAZ..

jahan ek taraf un chaaron ki aankhon me MAHI ko dekh ek death thirst saaf dekhi jaa sakti thi wahin dusri taraf MAHI bilkul plain face ke saath un chaaron ko dekh rahi thi..

par thodi door WOOGER ke upar chadh baith hui ALFREEN ne jab VIRAAZ ko dekha,uski aankhein chamak uthi...

REASON...

"ALFREEN,TUMHARA PURA FOCUS, TUMHARI ENERGY KA HAR KAN SIRF VIRAAZ SE NIPATNE KE LIYE HOGA..

YUDH ME NAA TUM MAHI KI MADAD KAROGI,NAA APNE DOSTON KI AUR NAAHI SAVENTS, WHIZZ, WHIZZDERS ki..

TUMHARA EK MAATRA LAKSHYA HOGA VIRAAZ..TUM SIRF USSE LADOGI"...


RAAZ ki ye hidayat hi abhi tak ALFREEN ko is yudh me bhaag lene se roki hui thi aur ab jab uska target finally uski aankhon ke saamne tha toh ek shikari waali chamak uski aankhon me saaf dekhi jaa sakti thi..

ek baar WOOGER ke sir ko sehlaya usne aur uske waisa karte hi..

ROARRRRRRRR...

ek chinghad ke saath WOOGER ne maari ek chalang aur theek MAHI ke baaju me pahunch khada ho gaya...

manch lagbhagh set the...

MAHI, ALFREEN aur WOOGER ke saamne the HEMINE, AROZ, TIFER aur VIRAAZ..

dusri taraf the ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY, HIDA aur MABEL jinke saamne the unke paanch pratidwandi, DORIAN, GASTON, UBEL, TRISTEN aur VALDIS...

ek taraf khade the DARK WARRIORS..dusri taraf the PEACE MAKERS, WHIZZ, WHIZZDERS aur SAVENTS jo unhe hi dekh rahe the...

kami thi toh bas un do logon ki jo is yudh ke,is kahani ke centre of attraction the...

woh do log jinki takkar hi is yudh ka aur bramhaand ka asli natija tay karne waali thi..

ELYSIAN ki dharti par jitne bhi log khade the,woh sab bhale hi is waqt apne apne pratidwandi ki aankhon me jhaank rahe the,par dil ke kisi kone me in sabko ki un do pramukh paatron ka intezar tha aur unka ye intazar khatm hone hi waala tha kyunki tabhi...

ek saath do chizen hui....

jahan se kuch seconds pehle HEMINE, AROZ, TIFER aur VIRAAZ akash ke jis black hole numa point se neeche kude the,woh point failne laga aur aisa hone par jo halka andhera har taraf faila hua tha,woh amavasya ki raat ki taraf syah kaala hone laga...

dekhte hi dekhte pura CHOSENS us black hole ke andhere se dhak chuka tha...

par baat bas itni hi nahi thi.jaise hi pura akash us khokhle hole me parivartit hua,toh ek superstrong but partial magnetic energy us hole se generate hui..

partial isiliye kyunki jus magnetic energy ka asar sirf WHITE SHAKTIYON ke HOLDERS aur OWNERS par ho raha tha...

POWER OWNERS toh kisi tarah khudko zamin se jude rakhne me kaamiyab ho rahe the but jitne bhi PEACE MAKERS, WHIZZ, WHIZZDERS aur SAVENTS the,un sabka balance aur connection zamin se khatm hone laga tha aur woh apna pura dum lagane ke baad bhi upar us BLACK HOLE ki taraf kheenchate chale jaane lage..

us BLACK HOLE me joki ab pura akash tha,usme samate hi un sabko khtam ho jaana tha..

MAHI jaanti thi ye baat aur isiliye usne neeche dharti ki MAGNETIC FIELD waali urja badha di par is baar woh puri tarah kaamiyab nahi ho paayi..

REASON..

ye dharti ELYSIAN ki thi jisse bhale hi SHAILA, AKSHAANT aur MOKALSAR ne banaya tha,par adhikar abhi bhi ispar VIDEOUS ka tha..

haan MAHI ki shakti ki wajah se un sabhi ka upar BLACK HOLE ki taraf badhne ki gati kaafi kam ho chuki thi par unki upward movement ab bhi jaari thi..

ye dekh jahan itne der se shaant face liye khadi MAHI ke face par ghussa dikhne laga tha wahin uske saamne khade HEMINE, AROZ, TIFER aur VIRAAZ ke face par uske liye ek khilli udane waali smile thi...

par ye smile bhi shanik hi thi kyunki..

BHAKKKK...

ab tak ghanghor andhere me dooba CHOSENS ek jhatke me roshni se naha chuka tha aur ye hua tha PARTIAL HELL'S BLAZING FIRE ki wajah se jo CHOSENS ki har khaali hisse ke zamin par prakat hote hue dehek chuki thi..

kareeb 100 feet upar tak us fire ke flames jaa rahe the...

partial isiliye kyunki jahan WHITE ENERGY ke HOLDERS aur OWNERS ko HELL'S BLAZING FIRE ki garmi se koi fark nahi padh raha tha wahin dusri taraf aur upar akash me khade jitne bhi DARK WARRIORS the,joki us HELL'S BLAZING FIRE ki flame ki chapet se bhi door the,aisa hone ke baad bhi usse release hote hue un tak pahunch rahi us aag ki halki si aanch bhi un sabke sharir ko dheere dheere jalane lagi thi..

itna hi nahi,un sabke MAGIC abilities bhi us aag ki aanch ne neutralize kar diye the..

DORIAN, GASTON, UBEL, TRISTEN aur VALDIS us HELLS BLAZING FIRE ki aag se jal toh nahi rahe the par unhe aisa lag raha tha jaise garmi ke mousam me nange sharir ke saath bhari dopahar me woh sab ek registaan ke beech khade hain.

pura chehra aur sharir pasine se bheeg chuka tha un paanchon ka..

wahin HEMINE, AROZ, TIFER aur VIRAAZ ko bhale hi same feeling nahi aa rahi thi but HELL'S BLAZING FIRE ki aanch se un sabka sharir bhi halka halka sa hi sahi,par vibrate zaroor karne laga tha...

but sabse bada change aaya tha us BLACK HOLE se nikal rahe GRAVITATIONAL FORCE ko.

jaise hi HELL'S BLAZING FIRE ki aanch aur uska dhuan HOLE ke beech pahunche toh uske agle hi pal uski PULL energy khatm ho gayi..

aisa hote hi saare PEACE MAKERS, WHIZZ, WHIZZDERS aur SAVENTS wapas neeche dharti par aa gaye...

aur ye sab dekh ab baari thi ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY, HIDA, MABEL aur ALFREEN ke smile karne ki par un sabki smiles bhi shanik hi thi aur woh isiliye kyunki..


GADGADGADGAD...

ek baar phirse upar aasman me bane black hole ke beech tez bijli kadki jiske agle hi pal us hole se laakhon ki counting ke saath LAVA RAIN neeche girne laga...

un saare LAVA RAIN PARTICLES ki disha sirf WHITE ENERGY waalon ke taraf hi thi..

saath hi saath un lava ki energy pure BLACK thi..

woh lava khud VIDEOUS k shakti se bana tha jisse control karna ya khtam karna neeche zamin par moujud kisi bhi WHITE ENERGY ke OWNER ke liye bhi lagbhag impossible tha..

MAHI bhi jaanti thi ye baat par us LAVA ko neeche uske saathiyon aur logon tak pahunche bhi toh nahi de sakti thi woh aur isiliye us lava rain ko rokne ke liye haath upar kiya usne and the same time,MAHI ko rokne ke liye HEMINE ne bhi apna haath uski taraf kiya but tabhi...

SWOOOOOSHHHHHHHHHH.....

achanak se hi saare CHOSENS ke center point par create hui ek light...

ye light ek limitless speed se ghum rahi chiz se generate hi rahi thi...

aur kisi ki toh nahi par MAHI ki aankhon ne us impossible rotating cheez ko dekh liye tha..


SWORD OF RAAZ....


ye RAAZ ki SWORD hi thi jo asadharon gati se apni jagah par ghum rahi thi..

itna hi nahi,uske rotate hone se jo air pressure release ho raha tha,usme ek super chilling sensation thi jo upar uththe hue HEAVENLY ICE BERGS ko convert ho rahe the..

woh saare lava ki bunde sidhe un HEAVENLY ICE BERGS se takraye aur aisa hote hi un BERGS ne unhe sokhte hue khudke saath khatm kar diya...

pehle VIDEOUS ki energy se bani LAVA aur phir RAAZ ki SWORD se bane HEAVENLY ICE BERGS ki wajah se ek ajeeb sa kohra pure CHOSENS me fail sa gaya tha aur tabhi....

upar akash me bana BLACK HOLE simatthe hue chakrawat ki shakal liye tez ghumne aur yunhi ghumte hue woh neeche CHOSENS ki taraf aane laga...

us chakrawat ke saath hi upar moujud baaki ke DARK WARRIORS bhi neeche CHOSENS ki taraf badh chale the...

dekhte hi dekhte woh chakrawat CHOSENS ki dharti ko touch kar gaya aur aisa hote hi us chakrawat se ek aisi push force generate hui jisse wahan moujud har shaksh dharti par pada tha...

ALFREEN jo WOOGER ke upar thi,woh bhi piche ki taraf palat girne ko hui par WOOGER ne apne pichle pair halke uthathe hue ALFREEN ko control kiya..

girne waali toh MAHI bhi thi par kisi tarah usne khudko balance kar liya aur aisa karte hi us chakrawat ko dekhte hue..


MAHI-VIDEOUS....


yahan MAHI ne naam liya aur wahan woh chakrawat rook gaya aur aisa hote hi sabke beech khada tha apne GREY ROBE me is kahani ka mukhya bindu...VIDEOUS....


is dauran sabhi BLACK ENERGY HOLDERS aur OWNERS joki neeche gire hue the,woh uth chuke the par VIDEOUS ko dekh woh sab turant apne apne ghutno par aa chuke the..

apne sabhi saathiyon ko muskurate hue dekh raha tha VIDEOUS par tabhi..


SWOOSSSSSSSHHHHHHH..

ek baar phirse badi tezi se ghumne lagi SWORD aur aisa hote hue woh tezi se neeche aayi aur theek VIDEOUS ke aage aakar gadh gayi...

SWORD ke zamin par gadne se jo energy release hui thi,usne ek baar phirse sabhi CHOSENS waasiyon ko neeche gira diya tha..

wahin SWORD ke zamin me dhasne ke agle hi pal uske just piche ek tez light flash hui jiske beech prakat hua MAI...

waise toh kaali aur safedh, dono shakti ka malik tha mai,par kyunki acchayi ki taraf se aguwaayi kar raha tha mai, isiliye is waqt mere body par WHITE ROBE thi...

mujhe dekh saare PEACE MAKERS apne ghutno par aa chuke the...khair,

manch taiyar tha..

yudh ke do mukhya pratispradhi ek dusre ke saamne khade the...

ek baar apne sabhi saathiyon ko joki mere logon ke saamne khade the, unhe dekhte hue VIDEOUS ki nazar wapas mujhpar aakar tiki jiske baad...


VIDEOUS-gazab ki galatfehmi hai tujhe RAAZ....



tujhe lagta hai ki tujhse aur tere in logon se HAARUNGA MAI..!!!!

tujhse ummid rakhne waale in sabhi ke saamne teri izzat aaj UTAARUNGA MAI...

meri shakti aur gati ki barabari karna tere bas ki baat nahi..

tu mujhe ek maarega,tab tak tujhe DAS MARUNGA MAI....



MAI-galtfehmi toh tune paali hui hai VIDEOUS..agaaz hua nahi aur anjaam tak ki kalpana kar li tune...

aur rahi baat mujhe harane ki toh...




tere har waar ko samet sake,mere paas woh GAAGAR HOGA...

tera ghamand jisme doobega, RAAZ aaj woh SAAGAR HOGA...

beshak mere 1 waar ke badle mujhe dus maarega tu magar..!!!!

mera har EK waar tere DUS ke BARAABAR HOGA...

















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....


















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