Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

[vj4u]

Wah bhai wah, lagta h Vikram jai singh jaldi hi nazar aane wale hai ???

Great update bhai

Bhai awsm update ...

Mujhe to lgta h raaz ka name k aage devil hi likh dena chiye

or Ek Raaz ...

Ek dam sahi kaha hd bhai apne


Vj bhai coments karne ne ke liye majbur karde te he

mokalsar or shaila se jyada hum rider logo ko jhatke de rahe ho ap vj bhai kasm se
Tarif karne ke liye word nahi he

bhai ap such me ek acche writer Ho
jo khani ko padhne ke liye jode rakhte he

Awesome fantastic update bhai

Awesome update bro



I have no words to say something

For today update bro

Great update

thanks brothers...saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

its the magic of your writing .....that turned a silent reader to reply ....sir
and with a positive ATTITUDE I admit you very learned and resourceful
writer bro

sach mein words nahin hai aaj ka jhatka define karne ko

main toh bohot hi kam comments karta hoon sir but ye back to back jhatkon ne
utsahit kardiya comment karne


your story is simply awesome bro and you as well

thanks brother..yunhi saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

Vj bhai or kitne jhatke doge bhai

hub raz ke bare me bta ke to apne hos hi uda diya he bhai

hub razz ke razz ko unfold karo bhai


hub suspens jhela nai jaraha bhai


sub ek sath me bta do razzz ke bare me


tub jake dimag ko santi milegi vj bhai




lajavab update bhai

super

ek or jhtka reder logo ke liye??

aage aur bhi RAAZ hai..yunhi saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

Shayade raaz y janta hai ke uske aarambh se ek anth juda hai
Ese liye vo sab se alag khada hai

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई

Kiy BT hai Bhai
dekha Jaye to dono ek sikke ke 2 pahlu ki trah .

Fantastic superb update chalo kuch raaz to khule k raaz k pas nadu wala dimag b hy or us me chupe kai raaz b hy jis k jawab agy pta chale gy eagerly awaiting for next update

Jabardast update hai bhai. Jawab nahi apka
Waiting for next update,???

Shandar update bhai is update me bahut kuch mila dekhne ko phle to Mahi Alfreen aur Mabel ka brain pe control aur uske baad first attempt me magic ka shardar use
Aur uske baad Molaskar Shaila aur Akshant ka Raaz ke clone mind ka nirman kar us me ghusna aur uske baad ek sasim nidra me molaskar ka so jana Shaila ke andar bhay ka utpann hina kuch dekh ke
Shabhi drisyon ka shandar warnan
Keep it up bhai

Super update hai bhai

behtareen update

thanks brothers...saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

Awesome Mind blowing Dhashu Update ?
Mahi Alreen aur Mabel ne apna pahla magic kar liya aur mahi ne sabse best hone ke anurup charo wizz ko apni chhamta se chauka Diya .
Raaz ko chhodkar sabhi Brain Amplification me safal rahe . Mahi Alreen aur Mabel ko 2nd phase ke Best group me select ho gayi .
Raaz ke Baare jis trah se sovrogins ne adhyan kya aur Mokalsar to Coma me chala gaya es Bhed ko janne me . Shila bhi baal bal bachi hai.
Raaz ke pass Subconscious brain to hai par sabse Alag aur Jatil hai . Yha baki keval white Energy ke dharak hai jabki Raaz white and black dono Energy ka Dharak hai . Aur Black Energy hi prabal hai Usme . Aur shayad ka Creation kisi maksad se kiya gaya hai shayad Vidous ko dhyan me Rakhkar esiliye eska brain special hai .
Mujhe nahi lagta ki Raaz ko Brain Amplification process ki jarurat hogi kyonki Barrier to hai nahi to aage ye aise hi Magic kar sakta hai.
Raaz ke Dimag me sabkuchh ka Vinash Dekha hai to shayad esi ka hissa Alreen ne Dekha hoga jisme uski Mata pita ko bhi Maut Dikhi hogi .

thanks for the review brother
.. yunhi saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

Kya brother lagta h tum shock se hi maroge sbko. Mahi and frnds j sath to bilkul thik hua bahut mehnat ki thi unhone uska fal milna hi tha waise v unki mehnat ko dekhte huye stellers m unki jagah bilkul thik h. But ye jo last line m tmne naya shock failaya h ki vinash ek baat btao ye raaz sala agr VIDEUS ka kaam karega to VIDEUS kya karega bechara ek to aise hi na jane kaha latka pada h ab uska role v chhin loge kya. Khair ab waqt aa gya h VJ aur ASMODEUS ki entry ka tabhi to Shaila aur bakiyo ko apne sawal k jawab milenge. Raaz k subconscious brain m vinash h chumbakiya shakti h sharir m blood nahi h pta nahi aur kya kya h.

Waiting fir another shock brother

aage aur bhi khatke hain.. yunhi saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

Awesome fantastic Mind-blowing update Bhai...
Kiy kahu kuch smjh. Nhi aa RHA hai ..
Bas Raaz Or RaaZ bnta ja RHA hai
Story jaise jaise aage badh rhi hai suspense badta ja RHA hai ..

Raaz to undono ki hi creation hai
Aur wo dono to brahmand k rakshak hai

To unki creation brahmand ka sarvnash kregi
Bhut mushkil hai apki story ko Samjhana
Isliye apni estimations band krk story hi padhunga


Last story me bhi apne end wale update me inta jabardast jhatka diya tha

To is story me har update me hi mil rhe hai, lgbhag

wonderfull update bhai raaz ke dimag ne sabko hila rakhkha hai pata nahi kya dekha hai sabne uske dimag me kaun baitha hai aur wo kitna jada powerful hai mast update bhai

Nice update. Lagta hai videus ne apni ek chhoti si jhalak dikha di hai

Fantastic update bhai

Fantastic update bhai.ekdam jabardast kas kar Shaila aur mokalsar ka raaz ke brain me jane aur waha se nikalne ka.great going bhai

thanks brothers.. yunhi saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

Har sikke ke do pehlu ,
ek Acchai toh dursi Burai hai..

Rahasyo ke samundar ki abhi toh bas ek jhalak payi hai,
gehrayi kitni yeh toh beech me jane pe hi ptaa chal payega..

waqt ne apne garbh me sameta hai naa jaane kya kyaa,
intzar hai mujhe us teesre pehlu ki jo ki 'Sacchai' hai..

AWESOME UPDATE BHAII...So, atlast hume Raaz ke kuch raaz ptaa chale jo thinking aa rhi thi sbke dimag me ki Raaz kamzor h us galatfehmi ke upar se aaj kuch badal chhate..
So, Raaz ka subconcious brain natural sheild se nhi balki ek artificial sheild jo ki khud uske brain ki power ka ek hissa h usse protected h ...or shyd raaz ke subconcious brain ko normally na dekh pane ka reason bhi woh sheild h ...
UN dono ne Raaz ke dimag me Tabahi dekhi, poore bramhand ka vinash but uske baad kaa woh nhi dekh paye kyuki unhe vhi dikhaya gya jo Raaz ka brain ya us sakti kunj ne dikhaya...but yeh toh sirf ek pehlu hua jo ki burai h...mgr acchai ki toh abhi baari bhi nhi aayi h...vinaash dekh liya ab baari acchai kki hai let's see kya hota h aage

will wait for next update..

wonderful review brother..yunhi saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

Awesome.....

bahut hi bahtreen update hai brother...

gjb ka suspence hai...


ek questions tha, RAJ is story ka hero hai ya villain....?

keep update

Awesome fabulous update
Pura hial Kar rakh Diya teeno ko
Ab to Lord ko aana hi hoga
Keep posting

Nice update

Jabardasttt update bhai

Nice update bro

Bhai lajwab update h maza aa gya sab ne sahi kaha h aapki writing and thinking skills kisi ko bhi comment karne pr mazboor kar deti h

Fabulous update... ? waiting for next

Bahut hi shandar update

Mahi Alfreen aur Mabel ne Magic sikh liya.....wow.
kya imagination hai , kya rachna hai bhai....man gaye aap ko
idhar brain fuse ho rahe hai hamare ye padh kr...
Koi heart patient nahi hai na readers me

thanks brothers...saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

Fantabulous update VJ

Sazaa kisne di hai Raaz ne Ya lord of angel ne ya creature of judgement ne ??

jaise Vikram ki powers Avantika mein thi waise hi shayad Raaz ki shield / positive powers Mahi, Mabel aur Alfreen me se kisi me hogi.

let’s wait n watch for the next update jisne details mein raaz ke brain mein ghusne k baad kya dekha Molaskar ne

waiting buddy

thanks brother..sab pata chal jaayega..yunhi saath bane rahiye