Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

[vj4u]

khani hub ek naye safar ki or ja rahi he
Dhire dhire sub ke razz khul rahe he


Dorian or gaston black anergy ke dharak he
or unhe lagta he ke razz ki vajese dum ghunta he unka
to une pata hona chaiye sayad razz
Bi lord of angel ke

Whait anergy ka dhark ho

Ya fir lord of creatur or lord of angel ka koy unsh hum ye to vj bhai bta sakte he

Lekin khani ki naye rup rekha raz ki or ja rahi he or khani ki naye sharuat

Hub razz apne asli ROOP me ayega

18sall ka hone ja raha he razz

Or khani ka nayak

ane wala razz

CHOSENS ka pura itihas badl dega
Vj bhai
Ek number update bhai
Gajab likha he apne

Agle updte ka intezar rahega bhai

thanks brother for the review.. brother,aapki likhi har baat me logic hai,kaafi hadh tak wo sab sahi hai siway ek ke...ab wo kya hai,ye aap khud guess kijiye nahi toh sahi waqt aane par mai khud reveal kar dunga...

 

[vj4u]

Gajab

lekin naa to Raaz maraa hai aur naa hi apne dono doston ko marne dega. Ye hai Raaz ke transformation ki shuruwaat.
Waiting to see in next updates.

thanks brother...DOST!!!!!!dekhte hain....

 

[Arjun Singh 72]

Awesome update ?
Bhai change ka pata tha lakin itna change hoga ye nahi pata tha pahle time ka loop ab ye dono bhot asar karega story ke twist par
Keep posting

 

[Add]

khatarnaak.....
ab alfreen aur morana raaz ki maut ki vajah khud ko samjhenge
waiting

 

[DEVILWANTED]

thanks brother for the review.. brother,aapki likhi har baat me logic hai,kaafi hadh tak wo sab sahi hai siway ek ke...ab wo kya hai,ye aap khud guess kijiye nahi toh sahi waqt aane par mai khud reveal kar dunga...

raj white energy ka nhi balki black energy ka lord hai....

 

[Jerry]

Awsm update bhai

 

[Jamesleon]

thanks brother for the review.. brother,aapki likhi har baat me logic hai,kaafi hadh tak wo sab sahi hai siway ek ke...ab wo kya hai,ye aap khud guess kijiye nahi toh sahi waqt aane par mai khud reveal kar dunga...

thenkx bhai

ab wo kya he wo to me nai bta sakta

apki khani kab plat jaye koy nai bta sakta apke siva bhai

or jo bat hame janni he wo sahi samy pe pta chale to uska maza hi alag he bhai

Ap bus ese hi likh te rahiye vj bhai
khani mod le chuki he
Razz ko abi puri tarah se janna bakki he hum logo ke liye

razz ke razz sahi samy par khulega waps khani plat jaygi

so ese hi likh te rahiye

hum sub apke sath he vj bhai

or apme or ek khubi ye he ke
ap hum sub Khani padhne walo ko coment

karne par majbur kardete ho

or khani hamre samne pes karne ke liye thenkx??????☺?

 

[Jamesleon]

raj white energy ka nhi balki black energy ka lord hai....

muje nahi lagta ke razz black energy ka dhark he nai to dorian or gasTon ko ajib fil nai hota
sayd raz ke under black or whit do no energy ho sayd is liye razz ka pura attitud alag he jo na asmodius or vikram jesa attitud nahi he raz ke bolne ka tarika or kahi bat me sach hota he or uska bolne ka tark samne wale ko chup rehne par majbur kar deta he

Vese vj bhai hame age khani me btahi dege
or ham jo socha he vesa khani me kabi nai howa ham jo soch te he khani me hub ye hoga lekin agle update ane par ham jo socha tha wo dhare ke dhare reh jate he

So wo kya he hame khani me age pta chalega

 

[Vaibhav]

thenkx bhai

ab wo kya he wo to me nai bta sakta

apki khani kab plat jaye koy nai bta sakta apke siva bhai

or jo bat hame janni he wo sahi samy pe pta chale to uska maza hi alag he bhai

Ap bus ese hi likh te rahiye vj bhai
khani mod le chuki he
Razz ko abi puri tarah se janna bakki he hum logo ke liye

razz ke razz sahi samy par khulega waps khani plat jaygi

so ese hi likh te rahiye

hum sub apke sath he vj bhai

or apme or ek khubi ye he ke
ap hum sub Khani padhne walo ko coment

karne par majbur kardete ho

or khani hamre samne pes karne ke liye thenkx??????☺?

Bhai mujhe to lagta h ki lord of judgement and creature nahi ho sakta h kyunki wo to phle se hi hai. Dorian aur Gaston to black energy k dharak h to raaz m shyd black aur white energy dono ho. Last story m VJ v jab black energy k chakkar m fasa tha curious pe tab black energy k wajah se VJ ko bahut problem hua tha islie iss baar it may be possible ki raaz m both black and white energy ho. But ek baat ye v hai agr Dorian aur Gaston dno ko raaz k sath rhne pe ghutan hoti thi to v wo dono har waqt uske sath hi kyu rehte the. Mana ki uske bhitar k raz ko janne k lie uske sath ho but fir v jab wo koii jawab nahi de raha tha tab to usse dur reh sakte the. Ye av tak smjh nahi aaya.
Raaz m ye v kaha tha ki indno k v raaz h kahi raaz infno ko pehchan to nahi gya tha matlab acchuta aur slunder ki story sunayi jrur gayi thi but usne ispe believe kiya ya nahi uska koii reaction aaya nahi tha. Aisa v to ho sakta h ki wo sach jaan gya ho ki ye dno acchuta aur slunder nahi h aur use nuksan pahunchana chahte ho aur apne bachav k lie koii upay phle se kar rakha ho. But jo v ho use insb se laut k aane m waqt to lagega hi.
Tab tak idhar alfreen musibat m fas jayegi. Jaise hi raaz aur 3 ladke gayab honge baat failegi aur anwir and morona ye baat pkka bolnge ki unhone alfreen ko raaz pe humla karte huye dekha h......
Agr ye baat bahar nikli to pkka alfreen anwir morona 3no ka band bajna tay h. Florin and maria ko v shock lagega.......
Pls brother post update asap.
Eagerly waiting for next update brother

 

[Jamesleon]

hmm Next update me hi pata chalega bhai
Ke kya hoga ub age

lekin hamne jesa soch hoga wese to nai hoga
muje pta he

vj bhai ne bhot soch samj kar is khani ke plot khud creat kiye huwa he

unhe pta he khani padhne ke bad ham kya sochege vo vj bhai ko pta hoga

is liye wo is khani ke plot ese tayyar kiye he ke hum soch bi nai sakte

har update me khani ek naya mod leti he
or sub apne sahi samy par unke bi raz khulege
bus hum soch ne ke siva kuch nai kar sakte