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Nice update bhaii bhot awala maza aya giea bhaiii ab new upbate ka intazar ha
hahaha..brother, VIKRAM God ka beta hai,ussise ye kahani hai, toh usse comparison galat hoga par haan RAAZ living beings me kaafi takatwar ban jaayegaSuper update bhai
ab lagta hai raaz ek hero jaisa kamaal ki body bangayi uski aur brain b complete ho gya . ab to Raaz har ek spell command mode me use Kar Raha hai abi 50 % complete hone par itni jyada power hai to 100% hone par to wo seedhe seedhe Vikram ko hi takkar de dega
Nicely written super update bhai ????
AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF DORIAN GASTON AUR DONO PRIMES KI SHAKTI KO KHUD ME SAMET FORBIDDEN FOREST KE LIYE NIKAL JAATA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF ANGIS KI DHAARDHAAR SUFACE SE TAKRAKAR RAAZ A SIR AUR DHADH ALAG HO JAATA HAI.
AB AAGE:-
(CHAPTER-1)
(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)
UPDATE-42
PLANET-ELYSIAN
PLACE-FORBIDDEN FOREST
KARMATYAM KAWACHAM
BREAK THE SHIELD
aankh band kar apni, GASTON,aur dono PRIMES ki shakti ko ek kar uski urja ko apne haathon me laa usse FORBIDDEN FOREST ki taraf kar DORIAN ne is SPELL ko uccharit kiya jiske agle hi pal...
BOOMMMMM....
KADKADKADKAD......
DORIAN ke haathon se ek behad shaktishali ray nikal FORBIDDEN FOREST ke saamne lage shield se takrayi jiske baad hua ek bohot bada visphot....
ye visphot itna tagda tha ki isse nikalne waali urja ek second me hi pure ELYSIAN me faile gayi....
jisse ek saath teen chizen hui...
pehli... pura ELYSIAN planet hil gaya....
dusri...ye urja CHOSENS ke sabhi exits me lage NIYANTRAK aur ELYSIAN planet ke chaaron taraf lage REVEAL SHIELD se takrayi jisse behad zor se bijli ke garajne ki awaaz hui aur issi awaaz ke saath REVEAL SHIELD aur NIYANTRAK,dono hi kamzor padh gaye...
teesri... DORIAN jisne abhi spell bola tha,us urja ke takraane se wo bhi kayi 100 feets piche hawa me udte hue gira...
itna hi nahi,uska pura sharir bhi jagah jagah se phat gaya aur har fati jagah se khoon risne laga....
neeche zamin par gire hue DORIAN ka pura sharir dard ke maare kaamp raha tha...
itna dard toh usse apne SOUL ke AMPLIFICATION process me bhi feel nahi hota tha jitna abhi ho raha tha...
filhal ELYSIAN me RAAT ka samay tha....par is kaali andheri raat me bhi DORIAN ki aankhon me beintihan dard ki dori ko saaf dekha jaa sakta tha...
par DORIAN ko is dard ki parwah nahi thi... kyunki usse maalum tha ki uski body jaldi hi heal ho jaayegi aur aisa hone bhi paga tha..
par uski aankhon ki putliyan me dard ke saath saath curiousity bhi saaf sikh rahi thi...
aur ussi jigyasa ko apni aakhon ne samete wo saamne FORBIDDEN FOREST ke SHIELD ki taraf dekh raha tha jahan is waqt uske spell ki wajah se dhuan faila hua tha aur dheere dheere chhat raha tha....
DORIAN ko puri ummid thi ki itni adhik shaktishaali spell aur urja ke takrane se shield zaroor toot gayi hogi...
par ye ummid us dhuen ke chhatthe hi toot gayi kyunki dhuan chhatne par DORIAN ne dekha ki shield ab bhi jyon ki tyon hai....
uspar us spell aur uski urja se ratti bhar bhi fark nahi aaya hai...
jin aankhon me kuch samay pehle tak jigyasa naach rahi thi,unme ab hairani dikhne lagi thi...
DORIAN ko ummid thi ki bhale hi un chaaron ki sammilit shakti se nikli urja se puri SHIELD naa tute,par kamsekam wo kamzor toh ho hi jaayegi jisse kuch aur prayason se toda jaa sakega par yahan toh aisa kuch bhi nahi hua tha...
uske upar uski khudki lagi padi thi wo alag.....
yahi sab sochte hue DORIAN neeche gira hua tha par tabhi....
DORIAN ko kuch mehsoos hua...ek ray..ek search urja jo uski hi taraf aa rahi thi aur ye feel hote hi DORIAN ne apni nazaren chaaron taraf ghumayi aur aisa karte waqt usne dekha ki uske right ki taraf kuch door ek badi si chattan hai aur ye dekhte hi....
DORIAN khud ek urja me badal uski taraf ud chala...chattan ke paas pahunch DORIAN jo is waqt ek urja ke roop me tha,usne khudko ek urja roopi shawl ki tarah us chattan par lapet liya...
itna hi nahi,dekhte hi dekhte wo urja jo ki DORIAN hi thi,usne khudko us chattan ke halke halke daraaron ke andar shrink karna shuru kar diya aur fir kuch hi palon me wo urja roopi DORIAN us chattan ke andar sama chuka tha...
chattan ke andar samane ke baad DORIAN ne apni life ray bhi band kar di taaki usse aur uski shakti ko mehoos ya detect nahi kiya jaa sake.....
ab wo chattan aur DORIAN ek ho chuke the... DORIAN ka pehla plan toh fail ho chuka tha aur ab baari thi plan 2 ki jisme usse karna tha intezar....
intezar uske saamne dikh rahe FORBIDDEN FOREST me kuch aisa hone ka jisse uske saamne lagi SHIELD toot sake aur wo haasil kar sake ESPRIT CRYSTAL....
chaliye,ab DORIAN ko uske intezar ke saath chhodte hain aur dekhte hain ki aakhir us search ray ka kya kissa hai jiski wajah se DORIAN ko bhaagna pada...
PLACE-CHOSENS
YE KAMPAN KAISI...????AUR MUJHE AISA KYUN FEEL HO RAHA HAI JAISE NIYANTRAK AUR REVEAL SHIELD KAMZOR PADH GAYE HAIN....
apne bed se ek jhatke me uththi hui WHIZZ MARILIZA ne ye baat kahi thi....
DORIAN ki urja ke FORBIDDEN FOREST ke SHIELD se takrane par pura ELYSIAN planet zaroor hila tha par us vibration ki strength itni zyada nahi thi ki aadhi raat ke waqt is planet ke baashindon ki neend me khalal daal sake...
NIYANTRAK, REVEAL SHIELD aur usse pehle se lage protect SHIELD ki wajah se un vibrations ka asar naam maatra hi raha tha aur saath hi urja aur shield ke collision se jo dhamaka hua tha,aur jo kadkadane ki awaaz nikli thi,usse bhi in saare shields ne CHOSENS aur uske daayre me aane waale saare ABODES,hostels,aur baaki ki jagahon par asar dikhane ae rok diya tha....
par WHIZZ MARILIZA,jinhone REVEAL SHIELD aur NIYANTRAK ko khud lagaya tha, unhone un saari ghatnaon ko sense kar liya tha...
unhe NIYANTRAK aur REVEAL SHIELD ke kamzor hone ko baat bhi pata chal gayi thi aur isiliye....
ZUMABHAVAM
SEARCH
apne dono haathon ko apne dil ke upar rakh WHIZZ MARILIZA ne is behad hi strong search spell ko uccharit kiya...
spell uccharit hote hi unke sharir se ek urja nikal tezi se aage badhi aur dekhte hi dekhte kuch hi der me us urja ne CHOSENS ke saath saath pure ELYSIAN ko search kar daala...
aankhen band kar search ray ke through pure ELYSIAN ko dekhne ke baad WHIZZ MARILIZA hairan ho gayi kyunki unhe kuch bhi galat nahi dikha tha....
kuch der tak sochne ke baad bhi jab wo kisi nishkarsh par nahi pahunch paayi toh unhone apne dimag ko jhatka...
filhal unka sabse important kaam tha REVEAL SHIELD aur NIYANTRAK ko wapas theek karna aur isiliye....
unhone aankh band kar 2 naam pukare jiske agle hi second unke saamne do log prakat hue...
ye do log PHASE 3 ke WHIZZ aur WHIZZDER the jinhone REVEAL SHIELD aur NIYANTRAK lagane me WHIZZ MARILIZA ki madad ki thi...
(inka naam,intro next chapter me hoga)
jo hua uske baare me discuss kar WHIZZ MARILIZA un dono WHIZZ aur WHIZZDER ke saath upar hawa me jahan REVEAL SHIELD laga tha,uth gayi aur fir teeno ne pehle us SHIELD ko aur uske baad NIYANTRAK ko pehle jaisa kar diya...
apna kaam khatm kar WHIZZ MARILIZA ne un dono WHIZZ aur WHIZZDER ko kuch kaam bataya aur fir wo teeno gayab ho gaye....
3 MONTHS LATER:-
MAHI,IT SEEMS LIKE YOU ARE MEANT TO BREAK RECORDS.....
TUMNE AAJ APNE SOUL KO 5 PERCENT TAK AMPLIFY KAR LIYA HAI.....
behad khushi se VIOLET WHIZZ ne ye baat MAHI ke kandhe ko thapthapate hue kahi thi...
sirf VIOLET WHIZZ hi nahi, OMMIN, NOX aur yahan tak ki OPHILIA jo ki dusre class me thi, wo yahan aa MAHI ki is uplabdhi ko dekh behad khush aur gourvankik mehsoos kar rahe the...
wahin MAHI bhi apni is uplabdhi par behad khush thi...
MAHI-thanks WHIZZ...par ye sab toh aap sabhi ke guidence ki wajah se hi ho paaya hai...
OMMIN-guidence hum puri class ko dete hain MAHI,par jitna zyada excell tumne kiya,ye kitni badi baat hai,iska filhal tumhe andaza nahi hai...
CHOSENS ke itihaas me tumse pehle sirf 2 hi SAVENTS apne first PHASE me apne SOUL ko 5 percent tak AMPLIFY kar paaye the par itna karne ke liye bhi unhe lagbhag pura ka pura first PHASE ka waqt laga tha wahin tumne apne first PHASE k
pure hone se kaafi pehle hi ye achievement haasil kar li hai...
and that's what we call extraordinary....
WHIZZDER OMMIN ki baat sun sabhi SAVENTS behad hairan ho gaye,aur hona bhi chahiye.....
MAHI ne jo achieve kiya hai,wo wakayi hairan kar dene waali baat thi...
pichle 3 mahino me jahan baaki SAVENTS 1 percent AMPLIFICATION par the, ALFREEN VALDIS aur ALFREEN 2 percent AMPLIFICATION par the,wahin MAHI in sabse doguna se bhi zyada aage badh chuki thi aur jaisi uske sikhne ki raftaar thi,sabko lag raha tha ki bohot jald wo baaki sabhi se itni aage nikal jaane waali thi ki shayad hi koi uske nazdik bhi pahunch paata....
jahan sabhi SAVENTS ye sab soch rahe the,MABEL aur ALFREEN MAHI ke paas khade hokar usse congratulate kar rahe the wahin VIOLET WHIZZ jo ki MAHI ke haav bhaav joki har waqt ki tarah abhi bhi behad maasum the,unko dhyan se dekh rahi thi, unhone...
VIOLET-MAHI....idhar aana....
VIOLET WHIZZ ne MAHI ko awaaz di jispar wo unke paas chali gayi aur....
MAHI-yes WHIZZ....
VIOLET-bohot jald tumhara ye PHASE khatm ho jaayega aur tum PHASE 2 me chali jaaogi.
a place with a completely different ball game...kuch bhi ho jaaye, situations kaisi bhi aayen,kosish karna ki tum jo ab ho,wahi raho....
MAHI-mai samjhi nahi WHIZZ...???
VIOLET-abhi samajhne ka waqt bhi nahi aaya hai... PHASE 2 pahuncho,
samajh jaaogi...
aur jab wo waqt aayega aur tum meri baaton ka matlab samjhogi to meri bas ye baat yaad rakhna ki.....
JUST DON'T CHANGE YOUR ATTITUDE,& NOTHING WILL CHANGE YOU....
PLANET-ANGIS
PLACE-THE LONSDALEITE SURFACE
AB YE SAB KYA HAI...???MERA DHADH EK TARAF PADA HUA HAI,PAR MERI AANKHEN AB BHI KHULI HUI HAIN.SIRF SIR KE SAHARE KAISE ZINDA HUN MAI....???
AUR TOH AUR DO HISSON ME BATA HUA HUN MAI FIR BHI MUJHE DARD NAHI HO RAHA HAI....
do hisso me katne ke baad mai ek baar firse kaafi waqt tak behosh raha tha aur ab jab maine apni aankhen kholi toh khudko in ajeebo gareeb vismit bhare haalaton me paaya....
in sab chizon ke baare me mai soch hi raha tha ki...
WOOGER- RENAISS me aapne apne mastishk ko jo pura kiya tha,ussiki wajah se aapki aankhen khuli hui hai aur aapke sir ke sahare aap zinda bhi hain..
kyunki bina dhadh ke sirf aapka mastishk bhi apne aap me ek living being hai...
MAI-aur mera ye dhadh jo kat chuka hai..kya iski bhumika yahin khatm ho gayi...???kya ab iska koi mahatv koi importance nahi...!!!!???
WOOGER-jo aapka hissa ho,uski bhumika kaise khatm ho sakti hai.....!!!!
har sakht chiz uske narm bhaag ke bina adhuri hoti hai jaise ki ek naariyal....
aapka ye sharir jo kat kar gira hua hai,ye us pyaale ki tarah hai jisme paani bhara jaata hai....
ye PLANET aapke sharir ka wo sakht, mazboot aur unbreakable part hai jo aapke is kate hue dhadh ke upar hi lag sakta hai....
MAI-toh fir isne isse kaat kyun diya..???
WOOGER-ye aapka nazariya hai...par agar is planet ke DRISHTIKON se kahen toh isne aapke dhadh ko kaata nahi hai, balki isse aapke sir se alag kiya hai....
ye sharir iska bhaag hai toh fir ye kaise isse kisi aur se juda hua dekh sakta hai....???
MAI-GAZAB......par ye planet waali body ho yaa fir ye saamne padi hui body,dono hai toh mere hi...
WOOGER-toh saabit kijiye.. jaisa aapne RENAISS me kiya tha....
MAI-par RENAISS me toh maine apne brain ko brain AMPLIFICATION process ke through haasil kiya tha aur jab same pattern maine yahan try kiya, BODY AMPLIFICATION ka,toh mere sir aur dhadh alag ho gaye....
WOOGER-hamare beech hui baaton me aapke sawal ka jawab chhupa hua hai...???dhoondiye usse....
is baat ke baad maine WOOGER ko feel nahi kiya jiska matlab tha ki ab naahi wo aaspaas hai aur naahi wo aur kuch bolega....
waise bhi ab baat karne ke liye kuch bacha toh tha bhi nai aur isiliye maine apni aakhen band ki aur on ho gaya mera rewind mode.....
rewind karte hue mai WOOGER ki kahi har baat ko yaad karne laga aur aisa karte karte achanak....
meri aankhen khul gayi aur mere mooh se nikla....
MAI-DRISHTIKON.......yahi toh hai wo shabd,wo fark aur yahi hai mera jawab....
maine jo solution nikala,wo mera nazariya hai,mera DRISHTIKON hai par yahan solution mere DRISHTIKON se nahi,balki is PLANET ke DRISHTIKON se honi hai...
badhiya.....par kaise...????
ye bol maine ek baar firse apni aakhen band kar li par agle hi pal...
MAI-ek second...
flash second se bhi kam samay me mere brain me ek baat ghum gayi thi aur....
MAI-DRISHTIKON,haan....
PAR HAR WO NAZARIYA JO MUJHSE ALAG HAI,WO GALAT HAI....
aur khaaskar wo nazariya zyada galat tab ban jaata hai jab wo mujhse hokar bhi mere faisle se bagawat karta hai...
ye baat bol maine apne kate hue dhadh ko dekha....
toh jis baat ne mujhe click kiya tha,ye woh baat thi jo kuch der pehle WOOGER ki awaaz ne mujhse
kahi thi...
us awaaz ne mujhse ye kaha tha ki is planet ne mere dhadh ko kaata nahi hai,balki isse mujhse,mere sir se alag kiya hai..
aur wo isiliye kyunki is planet ke hisaab se ye dhadh uski property hai,meri nahi...
matlab according to this planet,ye mere hi dhadh ko mujhse hi bachana chahta hai...
waah beta,matlab jisne paida kiya hai,ussiko baap maanane se inkaar kar raha hai ye..
khair,ab is planet ki soch,iska nazariya hi mera solution bhi tha...
kaise,aayiye khud dekh lijiye...
maine apni aaakhen ek baar firse band ki aur apne CEREBRATION process ko pause kar apne pure brain me jhaanka....
kyunki ab mera CONSCIOUS aur SUBCONSCIOUS brain ek ho chuke the,isiliye aage aur peeche waala maamla bhi khatm gaya tha...
mere apne andar jhaankte hi mera brain tezi se chamakne laga maano mujhse puch raha ho ki mai kya chahta hun aur aisa hone par...
NIRBHINNATI PARIZEZITA
DESTROY REMAINS
apne dhadh ke chitr ko apne mastishk me utar COMMAND MODE ke tahat ek bohot hi powerful spell ko apne dimag me uccharit kiya maine jiske baad....
mere sir ke centre se ek ray nikal mere dhadh se takrayi aur aisa hoti hi...
KADKADKADKAD....
pura planet tez gadgadahat se gunj utha....ek baar firse pura PLANET vibrate hone laga.... saath hi yahan faili invisible baamp ne ek baar firse khudko yahan ke surface ka roop diya aur aage badhte hue mere kate hue dhadh ko gherne lagi taaki mere brain se nikalne waali urja se usse bacha sake....
par yahan mere paas ek plus point tha aur wo ye ki mera BRAIN mere paas hone ki wajah se ab complete tha aur isiliye uski shakti bohot zyada thi wahin yahan ka non distructable hexagonic diamond surface apne maalik ko naa apnaane ki wajah se mere brain ke mukaable kamzor tha aur issi wajah se is planet ka wo AURA jisne mere dhadh ko bachane ke liye khud ko kawach banaya hua tha,usme darar aane lagi...
aur is baat ko is PLANET ne mehsoos kar liya aur isiliye agle hi pal...
BOOM.....BOOMMM.....BOOMMM...
yahan ke surface se bade bade chattan ke size ke tukde nikal mere sir se takraane lage par is baat ko mere brain ne sense kar liya tha aur isiliye mere pure sir ke chaaron taraf ek urja fail chuki thi jo ki mere sir ki kawach thi...
wo chattan numa surface ussi kawach se takra rahi thi...aur kyunki wo chattan,wo surface mera hi hissa thi,isiliye unke kawach me takraane ke baawjud mera pura sir hil jaa raha tha..
mujhe aisa lag raha tha maano mera sir fat jaayega par aisa lagne ke agle hi pal mera sir khudko heal bhi kar le raha tha..
ye waqt mere patience ka test thi jisse mai lagatar jhelte chale jaa raha tha..
wahin in sabse alag mere sir ke beech se nikalti ray lagatar us kawach numa AURA se takrate hue usse kamzor karti chali jaa rahi thi aur jab is planet ne,yahan ke surface ne is baat ko sense kiya ki kuch hi palon me uska bana kawach toot jaayega toh uske andar se ek naya AURA nikla aur us AURA ne human aakruti leni shuru kar di aur jab uska wo form pura hua toh.....
SURFACE-ROOK JAAIYIYE...MAI HAAR MAANTA HUN....
pura PLANET us aakruti ki awaaz se gunj utha..uski awaaz mere kaano se hote hue mere brain ke andar tak gunj uthi jiske baad maine apni ray wapas kheench li aur aisa hone ke baad maine apni aankhen khol di...
aankh khulte hi maine dekha ki mera saamne sir jhukaye is PLANET ka AURA khada tha...
MAI-sir kyun jhuka hai tumhara...???
tumhari sakhti kamzor pad gayi isiliye yaa fir akad kamzor padh gayi isiliye....
SURFACE-aapke mujhpar kadam rakhte hi mai samajh gaya tha ki mera wajud pura hone waala hai...
par jo bhi hua,wo hona bhi zaroori tha...jo taklif aapko hui,jo dimagi mehnat aapne ki,ye aapko aapke astitv ki mahatvpoornata yaad dilayegi....
MAI-yaadasht meri kabhi kamzor nahi thi....tab bhi nahi jab mera brain adhura tha...
chiz apni ho yaa parayi,agar important hai toh mujhe yaad rehti hi hai....
isiliye gyan baatna chhod aur bas itna bata ki aage kya...???
SURFACE-kya aap mujhe apnaate hain...???
MAI-haan....
mere aisa bolte hi wo AURA wapas neeche SURFACE me sama gayi aur aisa hone ke agle hi pal...
pura PLANET tez roshni se naha gaya aur...
DDDDDD..DDDDDD...DDDDD....
roshni se nahaye is planet ne ek ajeeb awaaz ke saath khudko sametna shuru kiya...
wahin mera wo dhadh jo saamne zamin par gira hua tha,wo hawa me uth gaya aur wapas mere paas aakar mere sir se judne laga...
mere gale ke bhaag ke upar ek roshni chamki aur aisa hone ke agle hi pal mera wo dhadh mujhse jud chuka tha...
dhadh ke judte hi jab maine saamne dekha toh paaya ki ab tak is pure planet ke surface ne khudko fold kar liya tha.....
jis surface se ye pura planet covered tha,wo hat chuki thi aur ab ek baar firse mere saamne ek dead planet tha....
wahin fold hone ke baad ab mere saamne koi surface nahi tha balki ek tez chamakti hui roshni thi jo zamin se upar rooki hui thi..
ek pal yunhi rookne ke baad wo roshni aage badhi aur sidhe mere paas aakar rook gayi....
mere saamne kuch seconds rookne ke baad wo roshni ek jhatke me aage badhi aur......
ek baar firse meri aankhen band ho gayi thi...sir se pair tak mai itni tez roshni se ghir gaya tha ki aisa lag raha tha maano 100 surya ne mujhe khudme lapet liya hai...
meri aankhen toh band thi par mai apne sharir me ho raha badlaav saaf mehsoos kar paa raha tha...
mai feel kar raha tha ki meri height badh rahi thi,mera jism chouda ho raha tha aur saath hi mujhe mere sharir ki beintihan sakhti bhi mehoos hone lagi thi...
dekhte hi dekhte kuch hi der me mere sharir me ho raha parivartan pura hua....
mera wo sharir jo mere prithvi par aane se hi mujhse alag ho gaya tha,aaj mujhe wo mil chuka tha....
mere sharir ke puri tarah mujhse judte hi wo roshni jo ab tak chamak rahi thi, dheere dheere gayab ho gayi aur aisa hote hi jab maine apne haathon ko dekha toh paaya ki ab wo pehle ki tarah saawle nahi the...
wo kaafi fair lag rahe the..mai khudko pehle ke mukaable kaafi uncha bhi mehsoos kar raha tha....
khudko puri tarah dekhne ki iccha liye maine apni aakhen band ki aur....
AADHESHAM....
SWAMDEHA KAROTI....
REFLECT ME.....
COMMAND MODE ke antargat maine khudko dekhne ki iccha zahir ki jiske baad is SPELL ke through mujhse hubahu meri hi ek transparent chavi nikal mere saamne aakar khadi ho gayi....
6 feet se thodi zyadi height,gehri kaali aankhen,jitni kaali aakhen,utna hi gora aur aakarshak chehra aur sharir...
sharir, jo kisi faulad se bhi zyada sakht lag raha tha...is planet me aate waqt mere sharir par jo kapde the,wo mujhe kaafi dheele aate the par ab aisa nahi tha...
wo INSTITUTION ki dheeli dhaali shirt ab mere sharir par puri kas gayi thi..aisa lag raha tha jaise agar maine halki si bhi zor aazmaaish ki toh wo fat jaayegi...
wahin neeche jo pant thi,uske waistline par ilastic material lage hone ki wajah se wo bhaag strech ho gaya tha par uske neeche se pant chota aur tight ho chuka tha...
khudko ek nazar dekhne ke baad maine apni pratibimbh par haath firaya jisse wo gayab ho gaya....
yahan ka mera kaam khatm ho chuka tha... aaj mai 50% tak pura ho chuka tha..aur ab mujhe apne agle padhav ke liye nikalna tha aur isiliye...
maine apni aakhen band ki aur fir mere labh hile...
ANNJAYA......
AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....
AAPKA APNA V....J......
thanks for the beautiful review brother..bhai bhot hi shandar update hai... maza aa gia... attitude bhot mazay ka hai raaz ka.... aur isi attitude se usne apni body ko hasil kr hi lia... ab ja kr lagta hai k apna hero ab hero hai... aur jab complete ho kr wapis elysian jae ga to phir asli story shuru ho gi... sab ko hilla kr rakh de ga apna hero is attitide se....pehlay to har koi hi panga le rha hota tha.. ab hero unhe unki aukaat btae ga apni achievements se.... and i think ab hero ka attitude b thora bhot change ho jae ga jese k pehlay kisi se koi lena dena nhi tha isla kisi se sedhe se bat na krna wooger k mana krne ki wajha se ab raaz maybe sab k sath un k rawaiye k mutabik hi unhe treat kray ga... achon k sath acha aur buron k sath bura... aur maria and florrin k sath b shayad ab unhe respect se trear kray as like his parents... aur rahi dorian ki bat to woh jab raaz forbidden forrest me jaega ga to woh b us thora se time me jab shield open ho to woh b andar ghur jae forbidden forrest me... esa hi kuch socha hoga usne... well dekhtay hain kia hota hai next.. sach kahun to jab ek update parh lo to phir wait nhi hota next update ka... ap k likhnay ka andaaz aur story me jaan hi aisi h k wait nhi hota phir next update tak ka...