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Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

Jay Sutar

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Hmmmm AWAAZ ha yeh koi bhi ho sakta hai lekin jo bhi hai vo zaroor is kahani ka bada hissa hai agar aisa na hota toh vo kabhi bhi MAHI ki help na karta wahi Mahi ka past abhi bhi ADHURA hai aisa lag raha hai abhi tak uske origin ke baremien thik se nahi kuch samne aaya hai kyo ki jo baate sabhi insaano ko sikhna aasan nahi hai vo sirf 15 saal mein seekh gayi INTERESTING....aur RAAZ....yeh abhi bhi ek peheli hi hai jo sulajh toh jayegi par jaldi nahi...uske body ka vibrate hona yeh thoda AJEEB hai.....let's see what happens next.
PEACE
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Brijesh

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Hmmmm AWAAZ ha yeh koi bhi ho sakta hai lekin jo bhi hai vo zaroor is kahani ka bada hissa hai agar aisa na hota toh vo kabhi bhi MAHI ki help na karta wahi Mahi ka past abhi bhi ADHURA hai aisa lag raha hai abhi tak uske origin ke baremien thik se nahi kuch samne aaya hai kyo ki jo baate sabhi insaano ko sikhna aasan nahi hai vo sirf 15 saal mein seekh gayi INTERESTING....aur RAAZA....yeh abhi bhi ek peheli hi hai jo sulajh toh jayegi par jaldi nahi...uske body ka vibrate hona yeh thoda AJEEB hai.....let's see what happens next.
PEACE
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF RAAZ AUR FLORIN KE BEECH PEHLI BAAR KHUL KAR BAATEIN HUI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF MAHI NE KUCH STUDENTS KI JAAN BACHAYI




AB AAGE:-




UPDATE-4




PLACE-TONGASS NATIONAL FOREST




KAISI HO MAHI????



jungle ke beecho beech bani ek gufa ke andar jalti hui roshni ke beech haathon me kitab liye usse padhti MAHI ke kaano me ye awaaz gunj uthi jisse sun uske labon par ek muskurahat aa gayi jisne uske beintaha khubsoorat chehere ko aur haseen bana diya tha....

book ko band kar yunhi muskurate hue hi....

MAHI-kaafi dino baad aapki awaaz sun rahi hun...kya aaj bhi sirf is awaaz se hi mujhe baat karna hoga ya fir wo ghadi aa gayi jab mujhe aapke darshan praapt honge....

AWAAZ-wo samay zyada door nahi hai MAHI jab mai aapke saamne aaunga par....

MAHI-par filhal wo waqt nahi aaya hai...!!!!

us awaaz ki baat ko MAHI ne pura kiya.... MAHI ki baat me ek utawlapan tha jo us AWAAZ ne saaf mehsoos kiya tha...

waise ye jigyasa galat bhi nahi thi.....

pichle 15 saal se MAHI is awaaz ko sun rahi thi...par kabhi bhi us awaaz ke swami ko usne dekha naa tha.....

ajeeb hai par hai sach..waise dekha jaaye toh MAHI ki puri zindagi hi ajeeb hai ya fir ye kahen ki ek RAAZ hai....

(A SMALL BRIEF ON MAHI)

MAHI ki zindagi ki shuruat issi jungle se hui thi...naa maa naa baap aur naahi koi aur saathi...

MAHI ne ab tak ki apni puri zindagi akele hi is jungle me guzari hai....

but usse naahi kisi baat ki kabhi complaint rahi hai aur naahi wo kabhi upset hui...

usse hamesha hi aisa laga maano uska koi apna hamesha uske aas paas hi hai,bas usse nazar nahi aa raha..

itne bade jungle me akele rehte hue bhi usse kabhi dar nahi laga..

aur naahi us jungle ke kisi bhi jaanwar ne usse kabhi koi nuksaan pahunchaya...

MAHI ke 3 saal ke hote hi achanak ek din usse apni gufa me kuch kitaben rakhi mili...

aur tabhi pehli baar MAHI ke kaano me wo AWAAZ gunji jo abhi abhi gunji thi....

par pata nahi kyun ek anjaan awaaz ko sunane par bhi MAHI ko dar nahi laga....

aur naa hi usse is baat se ghabrahat hui ki jo AWAAZ wo sun rahi thi,us AWAAZ ka chehra usse dikh nahi raha tha...

us AWAAZ ne MAHI ko bataya ki ye books uske dimag ko viksit karenge aur usse kaabil banayenge....

MAHI ne toh kabhi kisise baat hi nahi ki thi...language jaisi bhi koi cheez hoti hai wo ye tak nahi jaanti thi but fir bhi MAHI us AWAAZ ki baatein samajh gayi..

aur isse kamal ki baat ye hui ki MAHI ne un books ko pehli baar me hi araam se padh liya...

uske baad usse lagatar kuch waqt ke antaral me continuously books milti rahi jinme alag alag subjects ke saath saath puri duniya ke baare me saamanya gyan tha...

MAHI lagatar aur bohot tezi se samajhte hue un saari kitabon ko padhti chali gayi...

is beech jab bhi wo AWAAZ MAHI ke kaano me gunjti toh AWAAZ ki disha ke hisab se MAHI us AWAAZ ke piche ke chehre ko dhundne ki koshish karti par wo kabhi bhi safal nahi hui...

books ka level aur range bhi dheere dheere badhta gaya...alag alag subjects ke saath hi alag alag curricular activities aur fight teqhniques ki books bhi naa sirf MAHI ne padhe balki unsab me wo practically expert bhi banti chali gayi...

aur aaj ki taarik me MAHI aise aise books padh chuki hai jaisa ek life me ek saath padhna ache achon ki bas ki baat nahi...

is waqt bhi MAHI jo book padh rahi thi wo hai INFINITE JEST.....one of the hardest book to digest properly....

but MAHI ne ek hi din me is book ko lagbhag poora hi padh liya tha...

itna hi nahi,jis gufa me is waqt MAHI hai wo books kisi library se kam nahi lag rahi thi...

War and Peace , atlas Shrugge,Ulysses,Finnegans Wake,Gravity's Rainbow ,
the Brothers Karamazov aur aise hi saikdon rare books ki collections se wo gufa bhari padi thi....

apne theoretical knowledge ko practically sahi proove karna bhi MAHI ko bade ache se aata tha aur iska bhi ek example wo gufa hi tha...

kaise???

roshni se bhari wo gufa jahan is waqt MAHI moujud thi,wahan par roshni prakrutik nahi thi,balki us gufa me electric light jal rahi thi...

aur ye karishma kiya tha MAHI ne hydroelectric cells ke sahare...

actually us gufa ke baahar thodi hi door ek nadi behti hai..MAHI ne ussi nadi se gufa tak 6 feet chouda aur 5 feet gehra gadha gadh kar ek chota sa canal banaya hai...

MAHI ne nanoporous magnisium farite se paani ko hydronium aur hydroxide me toda aur fir chandi aur jesta electrode se isse cell ki tarah use kar 3.5 volt ya fir ye kahun ki 80 mili ampere ki electricity paida ki...

hai na genius ye bandi....!!!

END OF INTRO:-

AWAAZ-kya baat hai MAHI???tum meri awaaz pehli baar toh nahi sun rahi par aaj se pehle tumhe itna utawala nahi dekha....

MAHI-pata nahi kyun par aaj kal aisa lag raha hai jaise kuch chhutne wala...

ek ajeeb feeling aati rahti hai...maine is jagah par ab tak ki apni puri zindagi guzari hai...

but ab aisa lagta hai maano ye life,ye jagah ke saath mera saath khatm hone waala hai....

AWAAZ-aur tumhe ye bhi lagta ki is jagah ke saath saath shayad tum meri awaaz bhi fir kabhi naa sun paao!!!haina????

MAHI-shayad.....

AWAAZ-har cheez me sure hone waali ladki me mooh se shayad sunana ajeeb lagta hai..

khair,ye batao ki agar sach me tumhe ye jagah chhodni padi toh kya tumhe taklif hogi???

MAHI-nahi...bas thoda afsos hoga..is jagah maine apni zindagi ka itna waqt jo bitaya hai...

AWAAZ-bhawnaon ke paas dimag nahi hota kyunki wo dil se janm leti hain...isiliye is cheez par kisi ka zor nahi...

bas itna yaad rakho ki tumhare paas jo dimag hai,wo is jagah ke layak nahi hai...iski manzil kahin aur hai....

MAHI-iska matlab meri feelings sahi hai...waise jis dimag ke baare me aap baat kar rahe hain,uske baare me kuch puchun!!!

AWAAZ-pucho!!!

MAHI-bhale hi ye jungle,ye gufa mera ghar hai but mai is duniya se anjaan nahi hun aur naahi yahan ke logon se....

jitna sikhne ke liye log apni puri zindagi laga dete hain,utna maine kuch hi samay me sikha hai....

har insaan me alag alag khubi hoti hai...koi aisi kala hoti hai jisse wo master karta hai...

but mujhe toh is duniya me hone waali saari cheeze aati hain aur wo bhi kuch is tarah se jaise shayad koi aur naa kar paaye...

kaise???mera dimag itna saara data itni aasani se collect kar unhe mere through kaise process kar leta hai....???

AWAAZ-jo ehsaas tumhe aaj kal aa rahi hai,jis din wo ehsaas sach hogi,tumhe tumhare sawal ka jawab mil jaayega....


INTAZAAR KARNA.....





PLACE- ALFREEN ORPHANAGE




HEY GUYZZZZ....WAKE UP....

SEE WHAT'S HAPPENING TO RAAZ......


mere room me total 4 ladke rehte the jinme se ek ne baaki 2 ko chillakar uthaya...

reason....raat ke 3 baj rahe the..mai soya hua tha but meri body bohot zoron se vibrate ho rahi thi.... vibration itni zyada thi ki pura bed awaz karne laga tha jisse mere paas waale bed me soye ladke ki neend khul gayi...

aur jaise hi usne meri haalat dekhi toh wo chownk bhi gaya aur saath hi behad dar bhi..waise bhi sab mujhe ajeeb samajhte the aise me meri aisi haalat dekh koi bhi darega hi...

wi turant utha,light on ki or chillkar baaki ke do ladko ko uthane laga...

aur jaise hi wo dono uthe,unki haalat bhi pehle waale ladke ke jaisi ho gayi...

teeno ko kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha ki wo kya karen???


1st LADKA-ek kaam karo..tum dono wardens ko bulao mai jaakar FLORIN sir aur MARIA madam ko inform karta hun...

apni baat keh wo ladka turant FLORIN sir ke ghar ki taraf bhaaga aur baaki ke do warden ke kamre ki taraf....

in sab se bekhabar mera body lagatar hichkole khaa raha tha....

thodi hi der me warden aur uske kuch minutes baad FLORIN aur MARIA doudte hue mere room me aaye...

meri haalat dekh FLORIN aur MARIA ko jhatka laga..unke liye bhi aisa kuch pehli baar ho raha tha...

wahin wardens mere body ko dabakar control karne ki koshish kar rahe the but iska koi asar ho nahi raha tha....

FLORIN apna mobile apne ghar hi bhule the isiliye unhone warden se


FLORIN-call the doctor.....


warden ne apna mobile nikala aur wo doctor ko call karne hi waala tha ki tabhi mere body ka vibrate hona kam hone laga aur kuch hi seconds me mai normal ho gaya aur aisa hote hi meri aankh khul gayi aur mai ek jhatke me uth kar baith gaha...

uththe hi maine dekha ki mere room mates,wardens, MARIA aur FLORIN mujhe ghere khade hue hain..sabke aankhon me is waqt vismay bhara hua tha....


FLORIN-RAAZ abhi tumhe kya hua tha???

MAI- kuch nahi..i am good...

MARIA-but beta your whole body was terribly shaking....i think we should call a doctor..

MAI-no need...i said i am good...now can i sleep???


ye bol mai bina kuch aur sune wapas let gaya aur apni aakhen band kar li...

kuch der tak mujhe yunhi dekhte rehne ke baad...


FLORIN-chalo baccho..now there's nothing to worry...kal se aap sabke papers hain..so jaaiye...


apni baat keh FLORIN palatne hi waale the ki tabhi kuch dekh wo thithak gaye...


FLORIN WARDEN SE-can i have ur phone for a second...

WARDEN-sure sir.....


warden ne FLORIN ko apna mobile diya.FLORIN uske camera ko on kar mere bed ke paas aaye,ek pic click ki,aur us pic ko apne phone par send kar....


FLORIN-thanks...

WARDEN- its my pleasure sir...


mobile warden ko pakda MARIA ke saath FLORIN apne room ki taraf badh gaye....

MARIA jo ye sab dekh rahi.thi,room se nikalte hi....


MARIA-what was that all about???

FLORIN-room chalo,kuch dikhata hun....


chaliye jab tak ye dono apne room pahunchte hain,mai apko batata hun ki FLORIN ne kya dekha aur kiski pic li...

daras jab meri body vibrate ho rahi thi tab mere left hand ki index finger mere bed ke side me bane wooden area ko khured rahi thi...

waise toh mere nails itne sharp nahi hain but fir bhi meri body jitne zor se vibrate ho rahi thi ki mere index finger ka pressure bhi us wooden area par utna hi pad raha tha...

aur ussi pressure se baairik hi sahi par kuch kuch likhane laga jispar FLORIN ki nazar padi...

aur unki military man waali nazar ne us likhawat ko pehchaan liya aur unhe ye bhi pata chal gaya ki wo likhawat ekdum fresh hai matlab abhi abhi likhi gayi hai..

aur jab unhone mere right hand ki taraf dekha jo ki maine apne chest ke upar rakha hua tha toh unka shak sahi saabit hua..

scratch karne ki wajah se bed ke wood ka colour mere naakhun me laga hua tha..

aur isiliye hi unhone us likhawat ki pic le ki...

room pahunch FLORIN ne apna mobile uthaya aur jo pic unhone khud ko send ki thi,usse khol pehle khud dekha,fir mobile MARIA ko de diya...

aur mobile dekhte hi....


MARIA-ye sab kya hai???

FLORIN-ye wahi pic hai jo maine RAAZ ke bed se li thi...aur pic me jo likha hua dikh raha hai wo RAAZ ne likha hai wo bhi tab jab usse jhatke lag rahe the....


FLORIN ki baat sun MARIA ko tagda shock laga...


MARIA-how can you say that???

FLORIN-aap bhul rahi hain ki mai kabhi army ka ek decorated officer tha... unexpected chizon ka correct andaza lagana mujhe aata hai...

dhyan se dekhiye pic ko..usme jo likha gaya hai,waisa agressive nail rush se hi likha jaa sakta hai aur waise bhi jab hum RAAZ ke room me pahunche tab bhi maine wood scouring ki awaaz suni thi par tab condition aise the ki maine dhyan nahi diya but baadme jab ye likhawat dekhi aur saath hi RAAZ ke finger ko tab samajh me aaya ki wo ghisne ki si awaaz RAAZ ke nails ki thi....

MARIA-but ye sab likha kya hai???kuch samajh me hi nahi aa raha......maine toh aisi writing pehle kabhi nahi dekhi hai..

FLORIN- yahi toh pata lagana hai...khair,abhi so haate hain,iske baare me baad me sochenge.....


apni baat keh FLORIN aur MARIA bed par let gaye...

jahan MARIA kuch hi der me so gayi wahin FLORIN ki aankhon se neend gayab thi...

unke man me us likhawat ke matlab ko samajhne ki tivr iccha jagi hui thi..

iska ek aur reason bhi tha...RAAZ...ye likhawat aur inme chhipa matlab RAAZ se juda tha aur isiliye hi FLORIN kuch zyada hi soch rahe the....

aur jab kaafi der tak unki soch ne unhe sone nahi diya toh wo uth baithe...

apna mobile nikal wo wapas us likhawat ko samajhne ki koshish karne lage...

net shuru kar wo duniya me bole jaane waale har language ko us likhawat se match karkar dekhne lage par iska bhi koi faayda nahi hua..

apna mobile liye unhone wo pic open ki aur usse dekhne lage....


FLORIN-aakhir kya ho sakta hai iska matlab!!!!!


kaafi der tak alag alag tarah se koshish karne ke baad bhi unhe us likhawat ya fir ye kahun ki us puzzle ke baare me koi hint nai Mila toh thak haar wo wapas let gaye...

lete lete hi wo kuch der tak ussike baare sochte rahe aur yunhi sochte sochte wo neend ke aagosh me chale gaye...

FLORIN so toh gaye par ab bhi unke dimag me wahi likhawat ghum rahi thi....

likhawat jo kuch aisi thi....


INCEPHDONUN GISGNAGRAPH VANDRRUXORMENDURGAL






AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....






AAPKA APNA V.J......







Dear bhai ji,


Gajab update hai ye jarur koi awahan mantra hai ya fir koi paheli jise solve karke raaz aapni power activate kar sakta hai
Dekhte hai kya hota hai
Vahi hoga jo VJ bhai ne socha hoga ?
 

23n24

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF RAAZ AUR FLORIN KE BEECH PEHLI BAAR KHUL KAR BAATEIN HUI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF MAHI NE KUCH STUDENTS KI JAAN BACHAYI




AB AAGE:-




UPDATE-4




PLACE-TONGASS NATIONAL FOREST




KAISI HO MAHI????



jungle ke beecho beech bani ek gufa ke andar jalti hui roshni ke beech haathon me kitab liye usse padhti MAHI ke kaano me ye awaaz gunj uthi jisse sun uske labon par ek muskurahat aa gayi jisne uske beintaha khubsoorat chehere ko aur haseen bana diya tha....

book ko band kar yunhi muskurate hue hi....

MAHI-kaafi dino baad aapki awaaz sun rahi hun...kya aaj bhi sirf is awaaz se hi mujhe baat karna hoga ya fir wo ghadi aa gayi jab mujhe aapke darshan praapt honge....

AWAAZ-wo samay zyada door nahi hai MAHI jab mai aapke saamne aaunga par....

MAHI-par filhal wo waqt nahi aaya hai...!!!!

us awaaz ki baat ko MAHI ne pura kiya.... MAHI ki baat me ek utawlapan tha jo us AWAAZ ne saaf mehsoos kiya tha...

waise ye jigyasa galat bhi nahi thi.....

pichle 15 saal se MAHI is awaaz ko sun rahi thi...par kabhi bhi us awaaz ke swami ko usne dekha naa tha.....

ajeeb hai par hai sach..waise dekha jaaye toh MAHI ki puri zindagi hi ajeeb hai ya fir ye kahen ki ek RAAZ hai....

(A SMALL BRIEF ON MAHI)

MAHI ki zindagi ki shuruat issi jungle se hui thi...naa maa naa baap aur naahi koi aur saathi...

MAHI ne ab tak ki apni puri zindagi akele hi is jungle me guzari hai....

but usse naahi kisi baat ki kabhi complaint rahi hai aur naahi wo kabhi upset hui...

usse hamesha hi aisa laga maano uska koi apna hamesha uske aas paas hi hai,bas usse nazar nahi aa raha..

itne bade jungle me akele rehte hue bhi usse kabhi dar nahi laga..

aur naahi us jungle ke kisi bhi jaanwar ne usse kabhi koi nuksaan pahunchaya...

MAHI ke 3 saal ke hote hi achanak ek din usse apni gufa me kuch kitaben rakhi mili...

aur tabhi pehli baar MAHI ke kaano me wo AWAAZ gunji jo abhi abhi gunji thi....

par pata nahi kyun ek anjaan awaaz ko sunane par bhi MAHI ko dar nahi laga....

aur naa hi usse is baat se ghabrahat hui ki jo AWAAZ wo sun rahi thi,us AWAAZ ka chehra usse dikh nahi raha tha...

us AWAAZ ne MAHI ko bataya ki ye books uske dimag ko viksit karenge aur usse kaabil banayenge....

MAHI ne toh kabhi kisise baat hi nahi ki thi...language jaisi bhi koi cheez hoti hai wo ye tak nahi jaanti thi but fir bhi MAHI us AWAAZ ki baatein samajh gayi..

aur isse kamal ki baat ye hui ki MAHI ne un books ko pehli baar me hi araam se padh liya...

uske baad usse lagatar kuch waqt ke antaral me continuously books milti rahi jinme alag alag subjects ke saath saath puri duniya ke baare me saamanya gyan tha...

MAHI lagatar aur bohot tezi se samajhte hue un saari kitabon ko padhti chali gayi...

is beech jab bhi wo AWAAZ MAHI ke kaano me gunjti toh AWAAZ ki disha ke hisab se MAHI us AWAAZ ke piche ke chehre ko dhundne ki koshish karti par wo kabhi bhi safal nahi hui...

books ka level aur range bhi dheere dheere badhta gaya...alag alag subjects ke saath hi alag alag curricular activities aur fight teqhniques ki books bhi naa sirf MAHI ne padhe balki unsab me wo practically expert bhi banti chali gayi...

aur aaj ki taarik me MAHI aise aise books padh chuki hai jaisa ek life me ek saath padhna ache achon ki bas ki baat nahi...

is waqt bhi MAHI jo book padh rahi thi wo hai INFINITE JEST.....one of the hardest book to digest properly....

but MAHI ne ek hi din me is book ko lagbhag poora hi padh liya tha...

itna hi nahi,jis gufa me is waqt MAHI hai wo books kisi library se kam nahi lag rahi thi...

War and Peace , atlas Shrugge,Ulysses,Finnegans Wake,Gravity's Rainbow ,
the Brothers Karamazov aur aise hi saikdon rare books ki collections se wo gufa bhari padi thi....

apne theoretical knowledge ko practically sahi proove karna bhi MAHI ko bade ache se aata tha aur iska bhi ek example wo gufa hi tha...

kaise???

roshni se bhari wo gufa jahan is waqt MAHI moujud thi,wahan par roshni prakrutik nahi thi,balki us gufa me electric light jal rahi thi...

aur ye karishma kiya tha MAHI ne hydroelectric cells ke sahare...

actually us gufa ke baahar thodi hi door ek nadi behti hai..MAHI ne ussi nadi se gufa tak 6 feet chouda aur 5 feet gehra gadha gadh kar ek chota sa canal banaya hai...

MAHI ne nanoporous magnisium farite se paani ko hydronium aur hydroxide me toda aur fir chandi aur jesta electrode se isse cell ki tarah use kar 3.5 volt ya fir ye kahun ki 80 mili ampere ki electricity paida ki...

hai na genius ye bandi....!!!

END OF INTRO:-

AWAAZ-kya baat hai MAHI???tum meri awaaz pehli baar toh nahi sun rahi par aaj se pehle tumhe itna utawala nahi dekha....

MAHI-pata nahi kyun par aaj kal aisa lag raha hai jaise kuch chhutne wala...

ek ajeeb feeling aati rahti hai...maine is jagah par ab tak ki apni puri zindagi guzari hai...

but ab aisa lagta hai maano ye life,ye jagah ke saath mera saath khatm hone waala hai....

AWAAZ-aur tumhe ye bhi lagta ki is jagah ke saath saath shayad tum meri awaaz bhi fir kabhi naa sun paao!!!haina????

MAHI-shayad.....

AWAAZ-har cheez me sure hone waali ladki me mooh se shayad sunana ajeeb lagta hai..

khair,ye batao ki agar sach me tumhe ye jagah chhodni padi toh kya tumhe taklif hogi???

MAHI-nahi...bas thoda afsos hoga..is jagah maine apni zindagi ka itna waqt jo bitaya hai...

AWAAZ-bhawnaon ke paas dimag nahi hota kyunki wo dil se janm leti hain...isiliye is cheez par kisi ka zor nahi...

bas itna yaad rakho ki tumhare paas jo dimag hai,wo is jagah ke layak nahi hai...iski manzil kahin aur hai....

MAHI-iska matlab meri feelings sahi hai...waise jis dimag ke baare me aap baat kar rahe hain,uske baare me kuch puchun!!!

AWAAZ-pucho!!!

MAHI-bhale hi ye jungle,ye gufa mera ghar hai but mai is duniya se anjaan nahi hun aur naahi yahan ke logon se....

jitna sikhne ke liye log apni puri zindagi laga dete hain,utna maine kuch hi samay me sikha hai....

har insaan me alag alag khubi hoti hai...koi aisi kala hoti hai jisse wo master karta hai...

but mujhe toh is duniya me hone waali saari cheeze aati hain aur wo bhi kuch is tarah se jaise shayad koi aur naa kar paaye...

kaise???mera dimag itna saara data itni aasani se collect kar unhe mere through kaise process kar leta hai....???

AWAAZ-jo ehsaas tumhe aaj kal aa rahi hai,jis din wo ehsaas sach hogi,tumhe tumhare sawal ka jawab mil jaayega....


INTAZAAR KARNA.....





PLACE- ALFREEN ORPHANAGE




HEY GUYZZZZ....WAKE UP....

SEE WHAT'S HAPPENING TO RAAZ......


mere room me total 4 ladke rehte the jinme se ek ne baaki 2 ko chillakar uthaya...

reason....raat ke 3 baj rahe the..mai soya hua tha but meri body bohot zoron se vibrate ho rahi thi.... vibration itni zyada thi ki pura bed awaz karne laga tha jisse mere paas waale bed me soye ladke ki neend khul gayi...

aur jaise hi usne meri haalat dekhi toh wo chownk bhi gaya aur saath hi behad dar bhi..waise bhi sab mujhe ajeeb samajhte the aise me meri aisi haalat dekh koi bhi darega hi...

wi turant utha,light on ki or chillkar baaki ke do ladko ko uthane laga...

aur jaise hi wo dono uthe,unki haalat bhi pehle waale ladke ke jaisi ho gayi...

teeno ko kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha ki wo kya karen???


1st LADKA-ek kaam karo..tum dono wardens ko bulao mai jaakar FLORIN sir aur MARIA madam ko inform karta hun...

apni baat keh wo ladka turant FLORIN sir ke ghar ki taraf bhaaga aur baaki ke do warden ke kamre ki taraf....

in sab se bekhabar mera body lagatar hichkole khaa raha tha....

thodi hi der me warden aur uske kuch minutes baad FLORIN aur MARIA doudte hue mere room me aaye...

meri haalat dekh FLORIN aur MARIA ko jhatka laga..unke liye bhi aisa kuch pehli baar ho raha tha...

wahin wardens mere body ko dabakar control karne ki koshish kar rahe the but iska koi asar ho nahi raha tha....

FLORIN apna mobile apne ghar hi bhule the isiliye unhone warden se


FLORIN-call the doctor.....


warden ne apna mobile nikala aur wo doctor ko call karne hi waala tha ki tabhi mere body ka vibrate hona kam hone laga aur kuch hi seconds me mai normal ho gaya aur aisa hote hi meri aankh khul gayi aur mai ek jhatke me uth kar baith gaha...

uththe hi maine dekha ki mere room mates,wardens, MARIA aur FLORIN mujhe ghere khade hue hain..sabke aankhon me is waqt vismay bhara hua tha....


FLORIN-RAAZ abhi tumhe kya hua tha???

MAI- kuch nahi..i am good...

MARIA-but beta your whole body was terribly shaking....i think we should call a doctor..

MAI-no need...i said i am good...now can i sleep???


ye bol mai bina kuch aur sune wapas let gaya aur apni aakhen band kar li...

kuch der tak mujhe yunhi dekhte rehne ke baad...


FLORIN-chalo baccho..now there's nothing to worry...kal se aap sabke papers hain..so jaaiye...


apni baat keh FLORIN palatne hi waale the ki tabhi kuch dekh wo thithak gaye...


FLORIN WARDEN SE-can i have ur phone for a second...

WARDEN-sure sir.....


warden ne FLORIN ko apna mobile diya.FLORIN uske camera ko on kar mere bed ke paas aaye,ek pic click ki,aur us pic ko apne phone par send kar....


FLORIN-thanks...

WARDEN- its my pleasure sir...


mobile warden ko pakda MARIA ke saath FLORIN apne room ki taraf badh gaye....

MARIA jo ye sab dekh rahi.thi,room se nikalte hi....


MARIA-what was that all about???

FLORIN-room chalo,kuch dikhata hun....


chaliye jab tak ye dono apne room pahunchte hain,mai apko batata hun ki FLORIN ne kya dekha aur kiski pic li...

daras jab meri body vibrate ho rahi thi tab mere left hand ki index finger mere bed ke side me bane wooden area ko khured rahi thi...

waise toh mere nails itne sharp nahi hain but fir bhi meri body jitne zor se vibrate ho rahi thi ki mere index finger ka pressure bhi us wooden area par utna hi pad raha tha...

aur ussi pressure se baairik hi sahi par kuch kuch likhane laga jispar FLORIN ki nazar padi...

aur unki military man waali nazar ne us likhawat ko pehchaan liya aur unhe ye bhi pata chal gaya ki wo likhawat ekdum fresh hai matlab abhi abhi likhi gayi hai..

aur jab unhone mere right hand ki taraf dekha jo ki maine apne chest ke upar rakha hua tha toh unka shak sahi saabit hua..

scratch karne ki wajah se bed ke wood ka colour mere naakhun me laga hua tha..

aur isiliye hi unhone us likhawat ki pic le ki...

room pahunch FLORIN ne apna mobile uthaya aur jo pic unhone khud ko send ki thi,usse khol pehle khud dekha,fir mobile MARIA ko de diya...

aur mobile dekhte hi....


MARIA-ye sab kya hai???

FLORIN-ye wahi pic hai jo maine RAAZ ke bed se li thi...aur pic me jo likha hua dikh raha hai wo RAAZ ne likha hai wo bhi tab jab usse jhatke lag rahe the....


FLORIN ki baat sun MARIA ko tagda shock laga...


MARIA-how can you say that???

FLORIN-aap bhul rahi hain ki mai kabhi army ka ek decorated officer tha... unexpected chizon ka correct andaza lagana mujhe aata hai...

dhyan se dekhiye pic ko..usme jo likha gaya hai,waisa agressive nail rush se hi likha jaa sakta hai aur waise bhi jab hum RAAZ ke room me pahunche tab bhi maine wood scouring ki awaaz suni thi par tab condition aise the ki maine dhyan nahi diya but baadme jab ye likhawat dekhi aur saath hi RAAZ ke finger ko tab samajh me aaya ki wo ghisne ki si awaaz RAAZ ke nails ki thi....

MARIA-but ye sab likha kya hai???kuch samajh me hi nahi aa raha......maine toh aisi writing pehle kabhi nahi dekhi hai..

FLORIN- yahi toh pata lagana hai...khair,abhi so haate hain,iske baare me baad me sochenge.....


apni baat keh FLORIN aur MARIA bed par let gaye...

jahan MARIA kuch hi der me so gayi wahin FLORIN ki aankhon se neend gayab thi...

unke man me us likhawat ke matlab ko samajhne ki tivr iccha jagi hui thi..

iska ek aur reason bhi tha...RAAZ...ye likhawat aur inme chhipa matlab RAAZ se juda tha aur isiliye hi FLORIN kuch zyada hi soch rahe the....

aur jab kaafi der tak unki soch ne unhe sone nahi diya toh wo uth baithe...

apna mobile nikal wo wapas us likhawat ko samajhne ki koshish karne lage...

net shuru kar wo duniya me bole jaane waale har language ko us likhawat se match karkar dekhne lage par iska bhi koi faayda nahi hua..

apna mobile liye unhone wo pic open ki aur usse dekhne lage....


FLORIN-aakhir kya ho sakta hai iska matlab!!!!!


kaafi der tak alag alag tarah se koshish karne ke baad bhi unhe us likhawat ya fir ye kahun ki us puzzle ke baare me koi hint nai Mila toh thak haar wo wapas let gaye...

lete lete hi wo kuch der tak ussike baare sochte rahe aur yunhi sochte sochte wo neend ke aagosh me chale gaye...

FLORIN so toh gaye par ab bhi unke dimag me wahi likhawat ghum rahi thi....

likhawat jo kuch aisi thi....


INCEPHDONUN GISGNAGRAPH VANDRRUXORMENDURGAL






AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....






AAPKA APNA V.J......
Shaandar update bhai
 

Rahul

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hum to mahi me kuch khas baat hai wo alag hai tez hai bahadur bhi hai ye sayad story ki nayika banegi :jump:ab is ladke ne kya likh diya sote sote hilte hue bhai:D
 
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF RAAZ AUR FLORIN KE BEECH PEHLI BAAR KHUL KAR BAATEIN HUI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF MAHI NE KUCH STUDENTS KI JAAN BACHAYI




AB AAGE:-




UPDATE-4




PLACE-TONGASS NATIONAL FOREST




KAISI HO MAHI????



jungle ke beecho beech bani ek gufa ke andar jalti hui roshni ke beech haathon me kitab liye usse padhti MAHI ke kaano me ye awaaz gunj uthi jisse sun uske labon par ek muskurahat aa gayi jisne uske beintaha khubsoorat chehere ko aur haseen bana diya tha....

book ko band kar yunhi muskurate hue hi....

MAHI-kaafi dino baad aapki awaaz sun rahi hun...kya aaj bhi sirf is awaaz se hi mujhe baat karna hoga ya fir wo ghadi aa gayi jab mujhe aapke darshan praapt honge....

AWAAZ-wo samay zyada door nahi hai MAHI jab mai aapke saamne aaunga par....

MAHI-par filhal wo waqt nahi aaya hai...!!!!

us awaaz ki baat ko MAHI ne pura kiya.... MAHI ki baat me ek utawlapan tha jo us AWAAZ ne saaf mehsoos kiya tha...

waise ye jigyasa galat bhi nahi thi.....

pichle 15 saal se MAHI is awaaz ko sun rahi thi...par kabhi bhi us awaaz ke swami ko usne dekha naa tha.....

ajeeb hai par hai sach..waise dekha jaaye toh MAHI ki puri zindagi hi ajeeb hai ya fir ye kahen ki ek RAAZ hai....

(A SMALL BRIEF ON MAHI)

MAHI ki zindagi ki shuruat issi jungle se hui thi...naa maa naa baap aur naahi koi aur saathi...

MAHI ne ab tak ki apni puri zindagi akele hi is jungle me guzari hai....

but usse naahi kisi baat ki kabhi complaint rahi hai aur naahi wo kabhi upset hui...

usse hamesha hi aisa laga maano uska koi apna hamesha uske aas paas hi hai,bas usse nazar nahi aa raha..

itne bade jungle me akele rehte hue bhi usse kabhi dar nahi laga..

aur naahi us jungle ke kisi bhi jaanwar ne usse kabhi koi nuksaan pahunchaya...

MAHI ke 3 saal ke hote hi achanak ek din usse apni gufa me kuch kitaben rakhi mili...

aur tabhi pehli baar MAHI ke kaano me wo AWAAZ gunji jo abhi abhi gunji thi....

par pata nahi kyun ek anjaan awaaz ko sunane par bhi MAHI ko dar nahi laga....

aur naa hi usse is baat se ghabrahat hui ki jo AWAAZ wo sun rahi thi,us AWAAZ ka chehra usse dikh nahi raha tha...

us AWAAZ ne MAHI ko bataya ki ye books uske dimag ko viksit karenge aur usse kaabil banayenge....

MAHI ne toh kabhi kisise baat hi nahi ki thi...language jaisi bhi koi cheez hoti hai wo ye tak nahi jaanti thi but fir bhi MAHI us AWAAZ ki baatein samajh gayi..

aur isse kamal ki baat ye hui ki MAHI ne un books ko pehli baar me hi araam se padh liya...

uske baad usse lagatar kuch waqt ke antaral me continuously books milti rahi jinme alag alag subjects ke saath saath puri duniya ke baare me saamanya gyan tha...

MAHI lagatar aur bohot tezi se samajhte hue un saari kitabon ko padhti chali gayi...

is beech jab bhi wo AWAAZ MAHI ke kaano me gunjti toh AWAAZ ki disha ke hisab se MAHI us AWAAZ ke piche ke chehre ko dhundne ki koshish karti par wo kabhi bhi safal nahi hui...

books ka level aur range bhi dheere dheere badhta gaya...alag alag subjects ke saath hi alag alag curricular activities aur fight teqhniques ki books bhi naa sirf MAHI ne padhe balki unsab me wo practically expert bhi banti chali gayi...

aur aaj ki taarik me MAHI aise aise books padh chuki hai jaisa ek life me ek saath padhna ache achon ki bas ki baat nahi...

is waqt bhi MAHI jo book padh rahi thi wo hai INFINITE JEST.....one of the hardest book to digest properly....

but MAHI ne ek hi din me is book ko lagbhag poora hi padh liya tha...

itna hi nahi,jis gufa me is waqt MAHI hai wo books kisi library se kam nahi lag rahi thi...

War and Peace , atlas Shrugge,Ulysses,Finnegans Wake,Gravity's Rainbow ,
the Brothers Karamazov aur aise hi saikdon rare books ki collections se wo gufa bhari padi thi....

apne theoretical knowledge ko practically sahi proove karna bhi MAHI ko bade ache se aata tha aur iska bhi ek example wo gufa hi tha...

kaise???

roshni se bhari wo gufa jahan is waqt MAHI moujud thi,wahan par roshni prakrutik nahi thi,balki us gufa me electric light jal rahi thi...

aur ye karishma kiya tha MAHI ne hydroelectric cells ke sahare...

actually us gufa ke baahar thodi hi door ek nadi behti hai..MAHI ne ussi nadi se gufa tak 6 feet chouda aur 5 feet gehra gadha gadh kar ek chota sa canal banaya hai...

MAHI ne nanoporous magnisium farite se paani ko hydronium aur hydroxide me toda aur fir chandi aur jesta electrode se isse cell ki tarah use kar 3.5 volt ya fir ye kahun ki 80 mili ampere ki electricity paida ki...

hai na genius ye bandi....!!!

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AWAAZ-kya baat hai MAHI???tum meri awaaz pehli baar toh nahi sun rahi par aaj se pehle tumhe itna utawala nahi dekha....

MAHI-pata nahi kyun par aaj kal aisa lag raha hai jaise kuch chhutne wala...

ek ajeeb feeling aati rahti hai...maine is jagah par ab tak ki apni puri zindagi guzari hai...

but ab aisa lagta hai maano ye life,ye jagah ke saath mera saath khatm hone waala hai....

AWAAZ-aur tumhe ye bhi lagta ki is jagah ke saath saath shayad tum meri awaaz bhi fir kabhi naa sun paao!!!haina????

MAHI-shayad.....

AWAAZ-har cheez me sure hone waali ladki me mooh se shayad sunana ajeeb lagta hai..

khair,ye batao ki agar sach me tumhe ye jagah chhodni padi toh kya tumhe taklif hogi???

MAHI-nahi...bas thoda afsos hoga..is jagah maine apni zindagi ka itna waqt jo bitaya hai...

AWAAZ-bhawnaon ke paas dimag nahi hota kyunki wo dil se janm leti hain...isiliye is cheez par kisi ka zor nahi...

bas itna yaad rakho ki tumhare paas jo dimag hai,wo is jagah ke layak nahi hai...iski manzil kahin aur hai....

MAHI-iska matlab meri feelings sahi hai...waise jis dimag ke baare me aap baat kar rahe hain,uske baare me kuch puchun!!!

AWAAZ-pucho!!!

MAHI-bhale hi ye jungle,ye gufa mera ghar hai but mai is duniya se anjaan nahi hun aur naahi yahan ke logon se....

jitna sikhne ke liye log apni puri zindagi laga dete hain,utna maine kuch hi samay me sikha hai....

har insaan me alag alag khubi hoti hai...koi aisi kala hoti hai jisse wo master karta hai...

but mujhe toh is duniya me hone waali saari cheeze aati hain aur wo bhi kuch is tarah se jaise shayad koi aur naa kar paaye...

kaise???mera dimag itna saara data itni aasani se collect kar unhe mere through kaise process kar leta hai....???

AWAAZ-jo ehsaas tumhe aaj kal aa rahi hai,jis din wo ehsaas sach hogi,tumhe tumhare sawal ka jawab mil jaayega....


INTAZAAR KARNA.....





PLACE- ALFREEN ORPHANAGE




HEY GUYZZZZ....WAKE UP....

SEE WHAT'S HAPPENING TO RAAZ......


mere room me total 4 ladke rehte the jinme se ek ne baaki 2 ko chillakar uthaya...

reason....raat ke 3 baj rahe the..mai soya hua tha but meri body bohot zoron se vibrate ho rahi thi.... vibration itni zyada thi ki pura bed awaz karne laga tha jisse mere paas waale bed me soye ladke ki neend khul gayi...

aur jaise hi usne meri haalat dekhi toh wo chownk bhi gaya aur saath hi behad dar bhi..waise bhi sab mujhe ajeeb samajhte the aise me meri aisi haalat dekh koi bhi darega hi...

wi turant utha,light on ki or chillkar baaki ke do ladko ko uthane laga...

aur jaise hi wo dono uthe,unki haalat bhi pehle waale ladke ke jaisi ho gayi...

teeno ko kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha ki wo kya karen???


1st LADKA-ek kaam karo..tum dono wardens ko bulao mai jaakar FLORIN sir aur MARIA madam ko inform karta hun...

apni baat keh wo ladka turant FLORIN sir ke ghar ki taraf bhaaga aur baaki ke do warden ke kamre ki taraf....

in sab se bekhabar mera body lagatar hichkole khaa raha tha....

thodi hi der me warden aur uske kuch minutes baad FLORIN aur MARIA doudte hue mere room me aaye...

meri haalat dekh FLORIN aur MARIA ko jhatka laga..unke liye bhi aisa kuch pehli baar ho raha tha...

wahin wardens mere body ko dabakar control karne ki koshish kar rahe the but iska koi asar ho nahi raha tha....

FLORIN apna mobile apne ghar hi bhule the isiliye unhone warden se


FLORIN-call the doctor.....


warden ne apna mobile nikala aur wo doctor ko call karne hi waala tha ki tabhi mere body ka vibrate hona kam hone laga aur kuch hi seconds me mai normal ho gaya aur aisa hote hi meri aankh khul gayi aur mai ek jhatke me uth kar baith gaha...

uththe hi maine dekha ki mere room mates,wardens, MARIA aur FLORIN mujhe ghere khade hue hain..sabke aankhon me is waqt vismay bhara hua tha....


FLORIN-RAAZ abhi tumhe kya hua tha???

MAI- kuch nahi..i am good...

MARIA-but beta your whole body was terribly shaking....i think we should call a doctor..

MAI-no need...i said i am good...now can i sleep???


ye bol mai bina kuch aur sune wapas let gaya aur apni aakhen band kar li...

kuch der tak mujhe yunhi dekhte rehne ke baad...


FLORIN-chalo baccho..now there's nothing to worry...kal se aap sabke papers hain..so jaaiye...


apni baat keh FLORIN palatne hi waale the ki tabhi kuch dekh wo thithak gaye...


FLORIN WARDEN SE-can i have ur phone for a second...

WARDEN-sure sir.....


warden ne FLORIN ko apna mobile diya.FLORIN uske camera ko on kar mere bed ke paas aaye,ek pic click ki,aur us pic ko apne phone par send kar....


FLORIN-thanks...

WARDEN- its my pleasure sir...


mobile warden ko pakda MARIA ke saath FLORIN apne room ki taraf badh gaye....

MARIA jo ye sab dekh rahi.thi,room se nikalte hi....


MARIA-what was that all about???

FLORIN-room chalo,kuch dikhata hun....


chaliye jab tak ye dono apne room pahunchte hain,mai apko batata hun ki FLORIN ne kya dekha aur kiski pic li...

daras jab meri body vibrate ho rahi thi tab mere left hand ki index finger mere bed ke side me bane wooden area ko khured rahi thi...

waise toh mere nails itne sharp nahi hain but fir bhi meri body jitne zor se vibrate ho rahi thi ki mere index finger ka pressure bhi us wooden area par utna hi pad raha tha...

aur ussi pressure se baairik hi sahi par kuch kuch likhane laga jispar FLORIN ki nazar padi...

aur unki military man waali nazar ne us likhawat ko pehchaan liya aur unhe ye bhi pata chal gaya ki wo likhawat ekdum fresh hai matlab abhi abhi likhi gayi hai..

aur jab unhone mere right hand ki taraf dekha jo ki maine apne chest ke upar rakha hua tha toh unka shak sahi saabit hua..

scratch karne ki wajah se bed ke wood ka colour mere naakhun me laga hua tha..

aur isiliye hi unhone us likhawat ki pic le ki...

room pahunch FLORIN ne apna mobile uthaya aur jo pic unhone khud ko send ki thi,usse khol pehle khud dekha,fir mobile MARIA ko de diya...

aur mobile dekhte hi....


MARIA-ye sab kya hai???

FLORIN-ye wahi pic hai jo maine RAAZ ke bed se li thi...aur pic me jo likha hua dikh raha hai wo RAAZ ne likha hai wo bhi tab jab usse jhatke lag rahe the....


FLORIN ki baat sun MARIA ko tagda shock laga...


MARIA-how can you say that???

FLORIN-aap bhul rahi hain ki mai kabhi army ka ek decorated officer tha... unexpected chizon ka correct andaza lagana mujhe aata hai...

dhyan se dekhiye pic ko..usme jo likha gaya hai,waisa agressive nail rush se hi likha jaa sakta hai aur waise bhi jab hum RAAZ ke room me pahunche tab bhi maine wood scouring ki awaaz suni thi par tab condition aise the ki maine dhyan nahi diya but baadme jab ye likhawat dekhi aur saath hi RAAZ ke finger ko tab samajh me aaya ki wo ghisne ki si awaaz RAAZ ke nails ki thi....

MARIA-but ye sab likha kya hai???kuch samajh me hi nahi aa raha......maine toh aisi writing pehle kabhi nahi dekhi hai..

FLORIN- yahi toh pata lagana hai...khair,abhi so haate hain,iske baare me baad me sochenge.....


apni baat keh FLORIN aur MARIA bed par let gaye...

jahan MARIA kuch hi der me so gayi wahin FLORIN ki aankhon se neend gayab thi...

unke man me us likhawat ke matlab ko samajhne ki tivr iccha jagi hui thi..

iska ek aur reason bhi tha...RAAZ...ye likhawat aur inme chhipa matlab RAAZ se juda tha aur isiliye hi FLORIN kuch zyada hi soch rahe the....

aur jab kaafi der tak unki soch ne unhe sone nahi diya toh wo uth baithe...

apna mobile nikal wo wapas us likhawat ko samajhne ki koshish karne lage...

net shuru kar wo duniya me bole jaane waale har language ko us likhawat se match karkar dekhne lage par iska bhi koi faayda nahi hua..

apna mobile liye unhone wo pic open ki aur usse dekhne lage....


FLORIN-aakhir kya ho sakta hai iska matlab!!!!!


kaafi der tak alag alag tarah se koshish karne ke baad bhi unhe us likhawat ya fir ye kahun ki us puzzle ke baare me koi hint nai Mila toh thak haar wo wapas let gaye...

lete lete hi wo kuch der tak ussike baare sochte rahe aur yunhi sochte sochte wo neend ke aagosh me chale gaye...

FLORIN so toh gaye par ab bhi unke dimag me wahi likhawat ghum rahi thi....

likhawat jo kuch aisi thi....


INCEPHDONUN GISGNAGRAPH VANDRRUXORMENDURGAL






AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....






AAPKA APNA V.J......
Bahut hi shandar update bhai gajab matlab ek hi update mein aapane donon ka vivaran de Dala maja a Gaya aaj ke update mein. matlab ek athara sal ki bacchi hi samajh sakte aap ladki 18 saal ki abhi abhi jo balak Hui hai usko duniya Ka har book ka knowledge hai uska dimag kaisa viksit hua hai aur use awaaz ka kya prabhav uske upar pada hai aaj ke update mein jana jo ki kabile tarif hai. Sathi sath Raj ki ki Aaj pehli abnormal activity dekhne ko Mili but usne likha gaya tha jab yah floran aur Mariya hi nahin samajh paye to ham kya samajh payenge yah to sirf aap hi jante Hain Kher next update Ka intezar hop aap jld hi denge
 
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