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Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

Vaibhav

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Dhamakedar update brother. Sach kahu to har din apka update ka level badhta ja raha h kaha se kaha se laate ho aisa brilliant khoj dimag hil jata h. Last lines jo shayari thi na incredible brother. Never heard something like that. Mabba se takra k raaz ne fr se panga le liya h ab anwir morona se le k ek whizz v piche pad jayegi uske..... Ek aur baat v hai ki VIDEUS ne 2 percent amplification kiya h salo ko pata nahi uski puri history jaan lenge to wahi khade khade darr se heart attack aa jayega sbko........ But raaz ka koii amplification nahi h........ Mahi ye sb ka ab koii khas smjh nahi aata ab har nigah sirf aur sirf villians pe hogi..... Shyd ye duniya ki pehli story hogi jisme villians hi villians se takrane k lie banaye gaye h....... Hida aur browny insb ki kismat v badalne wali h whizz ho k bhi hida ka bahut majak ban chuka h ab raaz h unke team m to performance better hona to banta h....... Dekhna h ki dono villians kis tarah air kaise takrate h padhayi m ya fight m kisme aur kaise ........ Av tak to jis khel ki VIDEUS ne rachna ki h uske baare m b pata nahi h bas do mohre taiyar kiye ja chuke h ab bas daanv lagna baki h........ Let's begin the GAME.......... LAST LINES INFACT WHOLE UPDATE WAS LIT BROTHER........... TOTALLY MIND BLOWING....
HATS OFF TO YOU FOR SUCH AMAZING UPDATE
 

Rohit tyagi

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MABEL BATATI HAI KI EK WEEK ME PHASE 2 SHURU HO JAAYEGA, DUSRI TARAF RAAZ ITNA HI WAQT DETA HAI ACCHUTA AUR SLUNDER KE DADS KO UNKE PLANETS KHAALI KARNE KE LIYE WAHIN TEESRI TARAF VIDEOUS BHI PHASE 2 KI DUNIYA ME PAHUNCH CHUKA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



MEGA UPDATE-57




PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-THE GREAT HALL






WOOO.THIS PLACE IS HUGE MAN......



THE GREAT HALL me enter karti hui ALFREEN ne ye baat kahi thi jispar MAHI aur MABEL ne bhi haami bhari....

THE GREAT HALL....jahan aaj naye session ke pehle din PHASE 2 aur PHASE 3 ke SAVENTS ikattha hone waale the.....

500 metres se bhi thoda lamba aur utna hi chowda hai THE GREAT HALL....

wahin is HALL ke end me kareeb 50 se zyada doors the jinke dusri taraf MAGICAL ROOMS the aur saath hi METAPHYSICAL ACTIVITIES ko trigger karne waali mayavi equipments bhi thi par ye kuch khaas rooms me hi moujud thi...

PHASE 2 aur 3 ke zyadatar practice sessions yahin issi HALL me hote hain....

hall ke chaaron taraf dekhti hui MAHI, MABEL aur ALFREEN HALL ke centre ki taraf jahan sitting arrangements ki gayi thi,badh rahi thi...

wahan pehle se hi bohot se SAVENTS aa gaye the jo apne apne groups me khade yaa fir jahan unke CATAGORIES ka naam likha tha,wahan baithe hue the...

wahin jahan SAVENTS ki sitting arrangements hui thi,uske theek aage hall ke beech me ek bada sa stage bana hua tha jahan filhal bohot se WHIZZ, WHIZZDERS aur saath hi the THREE SOVEREIGN'S bhi baithe hue the...

aage badhti hui MABEL ki nazar jab GROOMERS ke uniform par gayi toh...


MABEL-yaar,wo dekho, categorically uniforms me bhi differentiation hain...


saamne ek taraf jahan GROOMERS ka section tha,wahan khade SAVENTS ko dekh kar MABEL ne ye baat kahi thi....

reason....


PHASE 2 me teeno catagories ke SAVENTS ke uniform bhi alag alag the....


jahan is waqt MAHI, MABEL aur ALFREEN jo ki STELLARS the,unhone WHITE ROBE pehna hua tha wahin GROOMERS bhi robes hi pehente the par us ROBE ka colour pure white naa hokar muddy white tha saath hi unke uniform me use hone waale kapde ki quality bhi average thi jo dekhte hi samajh me aa rahi thi wahin WEAKLINGS catagory ke SAVENTS robes nahi balki normal MUDDY colour ki shirt aur faded black pant pehente the jisse dekhkar aisa lagta tha maano kisi ne barso use kiye jaa chuke second hand kapde pehne ho...

khair, GROOMERS ko ek baar dekhte hue wo teeno aage badh rahi thi ki tabhi ALFREEN ki nazar hall me right wing ki taraf gayi jahan khade the ANWIR aur MORANA...


ALFREEN-yaar dekho ye ANWIR aur MORANA ne WICKEDS se milte julte kapde pehne hue hain...


ALFREEN ki baat sun jab MAHI aur ALFREEN ne uski point ki hui jagah ki taraf dekha toh unhe ANWIR aur MORANA unke group ke saath dikhe...


saath hi unse kuch door ek dusra bada sa group bhi tha jinhone MORALS ke jaise kapde pehne hue the...


MAHI-hoga PHASE 3 ka kuch..

MABEL-ye dono pakka is saal hamare liye problems create karenge...

MAHI-wo hamare liye karenge toh hum unke liye karenge...


MAHI ki baat sun ALFREEN aur MABEL muskura diye aur yunhi baat karte hue wo teeno pahunchne apne catagory STELLARS waali jagah par jahan unke liye LUXURIOUS COUCHES rakhe hue the aur filhal un couches par already 3 SAVENTS baithe hue the jinme se ek VALDIS bhi tha...

MAHI, ALFREEN aur MABEL,ye teeno bhi jaakar COUCHES me baith gaye..

32 SAVENTS the kul FIRST PHASE me jinme se sirf 6 logon ne hi STELLARS catagory ke liye qualify kiya tha aur wahi 6 is waqt couches me baithe hue the...



wahin couch par baith MAHI ne dekha ki GROOMERS ke liye couches nahi balki normal chairs rakhe gaye the aur bachi WEAKLING catagory...

unhe yahan baithna tak allowed nahi tha..is catagory ke SAVENTS ko jo ki filhal sirf BRAWNY tha,is hall me khada hi rehna tha aur isiliye BRAWNY filhal apna sir neeche kiye hue ek jagah par khada hua tha jisse MAHI ne dekh liya tha..


MAHI-ek educational institution bhi itna biased ho sakta hai,kabhi socha nahi tha...


MAHI ki baat MABEL aur ALFREEN ne sun ki thi ayr isiliye...


ALFREEN-yaar us SAVENT ko waise dekhkar bura toh mujhe bhi lag raha hai par ab kar bhi kya sakte hain...???

is baare me toh pehle hi clear kiya jaa chuka tha...yahan par agar acche se survive karna hai toh performance is must...

ab wo aisa nahi kar paaya isiliye wahan us position ke liye bounded hai...


ALFREEN ki baat par koi kuch kehta ki usse pehle...



GOOD MORNING SAVENTS....AAP SABKO PHASE 2 AUR PHASE 3 ME PAHUNCHNE KI BOHOT SAARI SHUBKAAMNAAYEN...



stage ke beech me khadi hui SHAILA ne kahi ye baat jiske baad sabhi SAVENTS ka dhyan unki taraf ghum gaya...


SHAILA-sabse pehle PHASE 2 ke SAVENTS...aap sabhi apni apni catagory ke WHIZZ aur WHIZZDER ko jaan lijiye....

sabse pehle STELLARS....aap sabki class ke WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS hain MABBA,SAPIUS aur REGIS...


SHAILA ke aisa bolte hi unke side me MABBA, SAPIUS aur REGIS aakar khade ho gaye....


MABBA-STELLARS sirf ek catagory nahi hai,balki ek bohot badi zimmedari bhi hai....

zimmedari khud ke talent ko ek nayi unchayi par lejaane ki jisse STELLARS group ki garima bani reh...

aap sabse pehle jitne bhi batches is catagory se paas out hue hain,un sabne ye zimmedari bakhubi nibhayi hai,aur mujhe aap sabse bhi yahi ummid hai...


apne chir parichit ghamand se bhare awaaz ke saath MABBA ne ye baat kahi jispar SAPIUS aur REGIS bas muskura diye....


AKSHAANT-now GROOMERS...ye hain aapke WHIZZES aur WHIZZDER...

EDWINA,ROVEL and PETRA...


AKSHAANT ke bolte hi stage ke dusri side do WHIZZ jinme se ek EDWINA aur dusri PETRA thi,wo khadi ho gayi aur unke baaju me khade the WHIZZDER ROVEL....

but unlike MABBA, apne intro ke baad bhi ye teeno muskurakar apne group GROOMERS ko dekhte hue bilkul shaant khade rahe....


MOKALSAR-and lastly WEAKLINGS catagory ki WHIZZ hain HIDA.....


MOKALSAR ke is naam ko pukarte hi ROVEL ke baaji me ek patli si choti kad ki lady jo ki WEAKLINGS catagory ki WHIZZ HIDA thi,aakar khadi ho gayi aur jab aisa hua toh...



HAHAHAHAHAHAHA.....


HIDA ko dekhte hi ANWIR & MORANA ka group zoron se hasne lag gaya jisse dekh jahan ek taraf PHASE 2 ke sabhi SAVENTS halke hairan hue wahin WHIZZ HIDA jo pehle hi dekhne par kaafi under confident lag rahi thi,unka chehra sharm se aur neeche ho gaya...


HIDA..... pichle 15 PHASES se WEAKLINGS ki eklouti WHIZZ jiski har naye session me us session ke STELLARS catagory ke kaafi SAVENTS ke through lagatar beizzati hoti chali aa rahi hai...

aur beizzati karne me ab tak sabse aage rahe the MORANA or ANWIR ka group jinhone pichle PHASE me lagatar laghbhag har din WHIZZ HIDA ki alag alag tarike se khichayi ki thi aur yahi wajah se thi ki HIDA ka naam anounce hote hi ANWIR ka group HIDA ki khilli udaane waali hasi hasne laga tha...

khair,HIDA ka intro ho chuka tha aur isiliye baat ko aage badhate hue...


SHAILA-aapke is PHASE ki classes kaise lagengi,aap sabke apne PHASES aur catagories ki complete activities,saath hi wo ACCESS CARDS jinki madad se aap PHASE 2 ke sabhi luxuries ka apne catagory ke hisaab se lutf utha paayenge,unke baare me aap sabko aapke appointed WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ke through pata chal jaayega...

and for PHASE 3 SAVENTS...chune hue har WICKEDS aur MORALS ko hamari shubkaamnayen...

par jin SAVENTS ka chunaav in do groups me nahi ho paaya hai,wo PHASE 2 ke STELLARS catagory ke saath dobara khud ko nourish karenge...

hum ummid karte hain ki is session ke PHASE 2 aur PHASE 3 ke SAVENTS khudko ab tak ke CHOSENS ke itihas ke best SAVENTS saabit karenge.....


SAVENTS ke fresh allots se SOVEREIGN'S ki baat ho chuki thi aur isiliye sabhi SAVENTS ko ye laga ki ab essembly conclude hone waali hai par aisa tha nahi...

kyunki ab waqt tha aaj ke ya fir ye kahun ki ab tak ke sabse bade aur ehem announcements ki aur isiliye....


AKSHAANT-well humare paas teen news hai jo hum aap sabke saath share karna chahte hain...

pehli....aap sabko ye baat toh pata hi hai ki CHOSENS se kuch kilometers door ek FOREST hai... FORBIDDEN FORREST....

wo forest aisi bohot si cheezon se bhara hua hai jinse aap sabko apni metaphysical capabilities ko nikharne me madad mil sakti hai aur saath hi naye aur exciting adventures karne ke liye bhi us forest me kaafi spots hai...

aur kyunki wo forest ek empenitrable SHIELD se covered raha hai isiliye wahan koi kabhi jaa nahi paaya hai..

par ye jaankar aap sabko behad khushi hogi ki ab aisa nahi hai...us FOREST ke chaaron taraf lagi SHIELD hata di gayi hai aur isiliye aap sab ab wahan jaakar us FOREST ko explore kar paayenge but with supervision...

khudse wahan jaana khatre se bhara ho sakta hai isiliye aisa karna allowed nahi hai....


AKSHAANT ki baat sunkar sabhi SAVENTS bohot excited ho gaye the aur hona bhi chahiye....

jis jagah ke baare me un sabne sirf padha tha,us jagah ko,us FOREST ko ab wo sab explore kar sakte the aur ye koi choti baat nahi thi...

sabhi SAVENTS iske baare me ek dusre se baat kar hi rahe the ki tabhi....



MOKALSAR-shaant ho jaaiye....


gunj si uthi MOKALSAR ki awaaz us HALL me jiske turant baad pure hall me pin drop silence ho gaya tha...


MOKALSAR-dusri news ye hai ki jaisa ki aap sabko pata hai ki har saal pure universe ke alag alag planets se yahan CHOSENS me SAVENTS laaye jaate hain jo yahan metaphysical activities ki study karte hain...

pichle saal bhi ye kriya dohrayi gayi thi jiska natija yahan moujud PHASE 2 ke SAVENTS hain...

but aap sabhi ki tarah ek SAVENT aur tha jisse pichle session me CHOSENS join karna tha par kuch serious problems ki wajah se wo aisa kar nahi paaya...

wo SAVENT bhale hi yahan nahi aa paaya par humne usse uske hi PLANET me PHASE 1 ki study karwayi thi jisme usne acha perform karte hue apne soul ko 2 percent tak AMPLIFY kar liya tha...


jiska matlab hai ki us SAVENT ne PHASE 2 ke STELLARS catagory me khudko qualify karwa liya hai...

aur isiliye is session me wo yahan PHASE 2 ke STELLARS catagory ka hissa hoga...


MOKALSAR ki baat sun sabhi SAVENTS shocked ho gaye...kyunki aisa kuch pehli baar ho raha tha...

wahin ye sab sun MAHI, MABEL aur ALFREEN us naye SAVENT se jo ki ab unke hi catagory ka hissa tha,milne ke liye excited ho gaye the...

khair,ye toh thi dusri news par ab baari thi new number 3 ki aur isiliye.....



SHAILA-PHASE 2 SAVENTS...aap sabko yaad hoga ki aapke pichle PHASE me SWEEP-STAKE COMPETITION ke waqt aapke teen PHASE MATES,RAAZ, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER laapata ho gaye the...

achi khabar ye hai ki wo teeno bilkul thik hain aur is PHASE me wo teeno aap sabko join karne waale hain...

infact,wo abhi thodi der me aap sabke saamne honge...


SHAILA ki baat sun sabhi PHASE 2 ke sabhi SAVENTS suprise bhi hue aur khush bhi...

ALFREEN ke man me bhi RAAZ par waar karne ka jo ek bojh sa tha,wo bhi ab kam hone laga tha...

MAHI bhi SHAILA ki baat sun behad khush thi par uski khushi ka reason kuch alag tha...

aur wo reason the MARIA aur FLORIN... MAHI ko pata tha ki wo dono RAAZ ke gumshuda hone ki wajah se sabse zyada dukhi hue the aur ab jab RAAZ wapas aa gaya hai,toh wo dono bhi kaafi khush hone waale the...

khair,baat ko aage badhate hue...


SHAILA-ye thi wo teen news...


aur ab sabse pehle aap sab apne us PHASE MATE se mil lijiye jo CHOSENS me sidhe PHASE 2 ke STELLARS catagory me enter karne waala hai...

VIDEOUS....


saamne ki taraf point karte hue halke zor se SHAILA ne ye naam pukara jisse sun...



MAHI-VIDEOUS....wierd name....


dheere se kaha MAHI ne ye aur uske baad uska aur uske saath sabhi ka chehra piche ki taraf jahan SHAILA ne point kiya tha,ghum gaya aur tabhi....


OH....MY...GOD.....



ek saath nikle ye shabd kayi ladkiyon ke mooh se...

reason....


VIDEOUS......naam hi kaafi hai...


STELLARS ki uniform pehne ek gora,muscular banda jiske chehre par itna tej tha ki pata nahi nahi chal raha tha ki zyada kya chamak raha hai...

wo white robe jo usne pehna hua tha ya fir uska confidence aur ATTITUDE se bhara handsome chehra...

aankhon me chamak,chehre par halki si muskaan aur chaal me zabardast confidence liye aage badhta chala aa raha tha VIDEOUS...

aur yunhi chalte hue jaise hi wo MAHI, ALFREEN aur MABEL ke couch ke paas pahuncha toh....

uski nazar un teeno ki taraf yaa fir ye kahun ki MAHI ki taraf ghumi...

wahin MAHI jo ussiko dekh rahi thi,jab VIDEOUS ne usse dekha toh usne apni nazar sidhi kar li.....

ek pal ke liye hi dekha VIDEOUS ne MAHI ko aur fir nazar sidhi kar aage badh chala...


VIDEOUS ki personality se impress sirf girl SAVENTS hi nahi hui thi balki stage par khadi MABBA, EDWINA,PETRA aur yahan tak ki WHIZZ HIDA bhi hui thi jo ektak VIDEOUS ko dekhe jaa rahi thi....

stage par pahunch ek baar sabhi WHIZZ, WHIZZDER aur SOVEREIGN'S ko dekh VIDEOUS SAVENTS ki taraf face karkar khada ho gaya...


AKSHAANT-kuch kehna chahoge VIDEOUS....


AKSHAANT ki baat sun ek baar uski taraf dekh muskuraya VIDEOUS aur fir...


VIDEOUS-SHAKTI,is bramhaand ki sabse badi shiksha bhi hai aur ek maatra SACH bhi...

aur CHOSENS is shiksha aur sach ka ek jeeta jaagta swaroop hai...


mujhe khushi hai ki mai yahan hun..aur jin logon ki soch mere jaisi hai,woh aaj toh khush hain hi,aage bhi rehne waale hain......

ek karkashta thi VIDEOUS ki awaaz me jo naa sirf wahan moujud har kisike kaano me padh rahi thi balki kaano se utarti hui uski awaaz sabke dil tak ko jhanjhor rahi thi...

VIDEOUS ne jo kaha,usse koi aur khush ho naa ho par MABBA jiski soch bhi waisi hi thi jaisa VIDEOUS ne bola tha,bohot khush hui thi...

wahin VIDEOUS ki baat sun teeno SOVEREIGN'S muskura uthe....


MOKALSAR-ab baari hai aap sabki apne unhi teen missing PHASE MATES se milne ki...





PLACE-OUTSIDE THE INSTITUTION




WOW........




PHASE 2 ke pure area se guzarte hue finally institution ke sarhad par pahunchne tak bas ye WOW shabd hi nikalta raha ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke mooh se...


subah ka waqt hai aur finally wo din aa hi gaya jab PHASE 2 shuru hone waala tha aur isiliye ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER yahan CHOSENS me pahunch chuke the aur filhal institution ke PHASE 2 block ke gate ke baahar khade the...

ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke grah jis SOLAR SYSTEM me hai, wahan waise toh baaki sabhi grah in dono ke grah ki izzat karte the,par in sabke beech 2 aise Planets bhi hain jo CARAPACE aur ARROW ke sabse bade samarthak bhi hain aur us SOLAR SYSTEM ke area wise sabse bade PLANETS bhi...

ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke FATHER'S ne unhi do PLANETS se khudke aur khudke Planet ke logon ki survival ke liye refuge maangi thi jisse un dono PLANETS ke KINGS ne saharsh maan liya tha aur isiliye hi aaj subah hi RAAZ ke dwara khole gaye asankhya WORLD DOORS ki madad se CARAPACE aur ARROW ke pure log apne naye PLANET aur aashiyane me shift ho gaye the...

wahin in sab se alag ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke saamne jo WORLE DOOR khula tha,wo yahan ELYSIAN ka tha jiske dusri taraf tha PHASE 2 jahan pahunch chalte chalte PHASE 2 ki khubsoorat duniya ka deedar karte hue ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER yahan institution ke gate ke baahar pahunche the...


ACCHUTA-bhai,aakhir pahunch hi gaye...

SLUNDER-haan,par ek baat samajh nahi aati ki RAAZ ne kaha tha ki wo bhi hamare saath hi yahan padhenge fir wo hamare saath kyun nahi aaye....???

ACCHUTA-toh yahan tak ka raasta tere phupha ne bataya hai kya...???


ACCHUTA ki baat sun SLUNDER ne usse ghur kar dekha par iska ACCHUTA par koi fark nahi pada...


ACCHUTA-RAAZ ne hi toh hamare brain se judkar hume yahan tak ka raasta bataya hai..wo yahin hai bas saamne nahi aaya hai ab tak....


SLUNDER-hmm..chal hum toh andar chalte hi hain....

is gate se hote hue SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA dono hi institution ke gate se hote hue andar daakhil ho gaye....

wahin kuch door chalne ke baad un dono ko ek giant size ka hall dikha aur aisa hote hi unke dimag me unhe ussi hall ke andar jaane ka sanket diya....

ye sanket RAAZ ke through hi unhe mila tha jisse jaankar un dono ne apne kadam us HALL ke taraf hi badha diye..

par abhi un dono ne apna apna ek kadam hi aage badhaya tha ki tabhi....


SLUNDER-arre,ye kya ho raha hai...???ye kaise kapde aa gaye hakn mere sharir par...???

ACCHUTA-sirf tere nahi humare...???

saala ye kaise kapde hain..???kichad ki colour ka crushed shirt aur ye ghisi hui kaali pant...aisa lag raha hai jaise kisi bhikari ne 15 saal pehenane ke baad apne kapde daan diye hue hon...

SLUNDER-aur inka size bhi humare size se kaafi bada hai...


hall ke andar ghus age badhte hue dono ke mooh se ye baatein nikli thi par isse aage wo kuch kehte ki tabhi padi un dono ke kaan me ek awaaz jisme....



MOKALSAR-RAAZ ACCHUTA, SLUNDER,.....



RAAZ ke saath un dono ka naam bhi anounce ho chuka tha jisse sun dono ka hi dhyan saamne ki taraf gaya jahan is waqt bohot se bacche jo ko unke hi age ke lag rahe the,baithe hue the aur un sabke aage ek bada sa stage laga hua tha jahan bohot se log khade hue the aur unhike beech se unke naam pukare gaye the...

aur isiliye halki hickichahat ke saath wo dono aage stage ki taraf badh gaye...

wahin naam anounce hote hi sabhi SAVENTS aur khaas kar ALFREEN aur MAHI ne turant apni nazar puche ghumayi jahan unhe dikhai diye SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA par unhone dekha ki filhal RAAZ abhi nadarad tha...

wahin in sabse alag sabse zyada utsukta dikh rahi thi stage ke ek side me khade VIDEOUS ki jo obviously RAAZ ko dekhne liye hi thi par jab usne RAAZ ko ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke saath nahi dekha toh uske maathe par sochne ke bal padhne lage the...

in sabke beech ab tak ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER stage ke paas pahunch gaye the par isse pehle ki wo dono stage par chadhte....


JISSE DEKHKAR TUM DONO KE ANDAR MUJHE DEKHNE SE HONI WAALI GHABRAHAT MEHSOOS HO,JAWAB USSI KO DEKHKAR DENA...


RAAZ ki awaaz gunj uthi un dono ke dimag me jispar ek pal ke liye toh wo dono thithak se gaye par fir ek baar ek dusre ko dekh wo dono aage badh gaye...

stage ki sidhiyan chadhte waqt un dono ki nazar upar khade har shaskh par gayi aur aisa hote hote jab unki nazar VIDEOUS par gayi jo unhe hi dekh raha tha toh un dono ko laga wahi dar jo unhe RAAZ ki aankhon me dekhkar lagta tha...

halki halki ghabrahat ke beech wo dono MOKALSAR ke saamne pahunch gaye...


MOKALSAR-RAAZ kahan hai..???wo toh tumhare hi saath tha naa???

MOKALSAR ki baat sun ek baar ek dusre ko dekh un dono ne apni gardan ghumadi VIDEOUS ki taraf jo unke answer ki hi pratiksha kar raha tha...

ACCHUTA/SLUNDER-RAAZ ne kaha hai ki wo aa raha hai...tab tak intazar kijiye...

halki zor ki awaaz me kahi ye baat ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ne jisse sun ek saath alag alag reactions saamne aaye...

jahan ek taraf teeno SOVEREIGN'S aur unke saath VIDEOUS ke chehte par bhi muskaan aa gayi wahin stage par khade baaki sabhi WHIZZ aur WHIZZDER hairan reh gaye par unke beech khadi MABBA ko aa gaya krodh...


ek SAVENT ne jo ki ek WEAKLING tha,usne un sab ko wait karne ke liye kaha tha,ye jaankar MABBA ko krodh toh aana hi tha...


MABBA-tum dono jaante bhi ho ki kya keh rahe ho aur kisse keh rahe ho...???

daanton ko bheenche hue halki halki gurrate hue MABBA ne ye kahi jisse sun ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER dono hi thode sehem gaye...

SLUNDER kuch kehne ko hua par tabhi ACCHUTA ki nazar saamne gayi aur....


ACCHUTA-HE IS HERE...RAAZ aa gaya....


haath aage point kar kahi thi ye baat ACCHUTA ne...


par sehme hue hone ki wajah se zara zyada zor se bol gaya ACCHUTA jis wajah se wahan moujud sabhi ko uski baat sunayi de gayi aur isiliye sabhi ki gardan ek baar firse piche ki taraf palti aur jab aisa hua toh....



BLOODY HELL.....WOW.........



nazar rook si gayi sabki wahan jahan is waqt khada tha...................MAI.................

aur jo shabd mujhe dekh nikle the,waise toh wo shabd wahan moujud har bandi aur shayad har bande ke dil me bhi gunja hoga par mooh se ye shabd nikle the MORANA ke jisse sun uske baaju me khade ANWIR ne usse ek look diya par MORANA mujhe dekhne me kuch aisi khoyi hui thi ki uska dhyan kahin aur gaya hi nahi....

wahin ek pal khade rehne ke baad mai badha aage...

filhal hum ek hall me the jahan par environment ko magic se cool banaye rakhne ke liye halki halki hawa chal rahi thi aur us hawa me lehra rahe the mere halke lambe baal...

jaw line meri perfect thi jisse mera fair chehra aur behtar bana raha tha...

gore chehre ke beech meri gehri kaali aankhen itni deep thi ki door se dekhne par bhi iski gehrayi saafi nazar aa sakti thi aur filhal wahan moujud lagbhag har bandi ki aankhen meri inhi kaali aankhon me jhaank rahi thi....

wahi muddy shirt pehni hui thi maine jo mere chowde biceps aur piche ki taraf cuts bana kar nikalte hue triceps me chipak kar ek alag hi look dene lagi thi.....

neeche ki meri faded pant narrow thi jo mere thighs se chipakne ki wajah se alag hi dikh rahi thi...

kuch pal khade rehne ke baad maine apne kadam aage badha diye aur badh chala mai stage ki taraf...


HAAYEEEE.........


har row jisse hote hue mai aage badh raha tha,wahan baithi bandiyon ke mooh se ek thandi aah nikal rahi thi par un sab bewajah ke human compliments ko ignore karte hue mai aage badh raha tha..

wahin insab ke beech sabse alag reactions the MAHI aur ALFREEN ke chehre par...

unhe yakin hi nahi ho raha tha ki jo ladka unke saamne se chala aa raha hai,ye wahi RAAZ hai jisse wo jaanti thi...

kahan wo dabbu sa,saanwla aur patla RAAZ aur kahan dusri taraf mai jo hatta katta tha aur jiski height 6 feet se bhi upar nikal rahi thi....

jiski naa toh hieght,naahi baaki koi personality us RAAZ se match khaati thi jisse wo dono jaanti thi...

kuch hi palon me mai unke row tak pahunch chuka tha par wahan pahunchne ke baad bhi maine un dono ki taraf ek second ke liye bhi apni nazarein nahi ghumayi aur sidhe stage ki taraf badh chala...

jab side se guzarte hue bhi maine MAHI ki tarar nahi dekha toh usse behad ajeeb feel hua tha...

wahin stage par khade har shaksh ki aankhen bhi mujhpar hi tiki hui thi....

jahan SOVEREIGN'S mere wajood ke pura hone ke baad pehli baar mujhe dekh khush ho rahe the,wahin WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS toh bas ek tak mujhe dekh hi rahe the..

un sabka dimag jaise mere presence me atak sa gaya tha....

MABBA jo mere aane se pehle ACCHUTA ki baat sun uspar aur mujhpar naaraz thi,wo bhi jaise apna wo ghussa bhul si gayi thi...

ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ne toh mujhe dekhte hi apni nazarein neechi kar li thi...

aur in sabse alag khada tha VIDEOUS...jo behad chaaw aur excitement ke saath mujhe hi dekh raha tha...

wahin VIDEOUS se ulat maine uski taraf dekha tak nahi aur stage par chaddh gaya....


SHAILA-welcome back RAAZ..apne PHASE MATES se kuch kehna chahoge...????


SHAILA ki taraf ek baar dekh maine saamne dekha jahan sabki nazar mujhpar hi thi...


MAI-SHAKTI.....is bramhaand ka sabse bada JHOOTH hai ye shabd....

ye woh shabd hai jisse kaayar apni kaayarta chuppane ke liye istemaal karte hain...

universe ka ek maatra sach hai DAR....kyunki ek dar hi hai jo zinda hone ka pura ehsaas dilata hai....

mujhe khushi hai ki mai CHOSENS dobara aaya hun,aur jin logon ki soch mere jaisi hai ,wo filhal khush ho yaa naa hon,par bhavishya me wo khush rehne waale hain...


jab mai bol raha tha tab wahan moujud har SAVENT ko aur yahan tak ki mere baaju me khade WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS tak ko apne andar ek halka sa kampan mehoos ho raha tha par wo us feeling ko samajh nahi paa rahe the...

wahin VIDEOUS ne jo kaha tha,maine theek uska ulat bola jisse sun ek taraf mere sabhi PHASEMATES shocked the kyunki gayab hone se pehle jahan maine kabhi normal conversation bhi kabhi nahi ki thi par aaj maine ek mini speech de di thi,dusri taraf VIDEOUS jisne meri baatein jo uske ulat thi,usse sun wo halke se has diya tha aur teesri taraf MABBA jo VIDEOUS ki baat se itifaaq rakhti thi aur aise me jab maine ek alag hi baat kahi thi toh isiliye wo ghussa jo unka mujhpar mere aane se pehle tha,wo wapas jaag gaya tha aur isiliye...


MABBA-ek WEAKLING hokar itni badi badi baatein karna tumhe suit nahi karta ladke....


mujhe ghurti hui MABBA ne ye baat kahi jispar...


MAI- SOVEREIGN'S...kya ye aurat WEAKLINGS ko padhayengi....!!!

MABBA-mind your tounge young man...mai yahan ek respectable WHIZZ hun aur tum mujhe aurat keh rahe ho....

MAI-thik waise hi jaise mai yahan ek SAVENT hun aur aap mujhe ladka keh rahi hain...


meri baat sun MABBA ka ghussa aur badh gaya tha...wo fir se kuch kehne ko hui par...


MAI- SOVEREIGN'S...yahan WEAKLINGS ki WHIZZ kaun hai..???


MABBA ko point karte hue maine ye baat kahi jispar...


AKSHAANT-..HIDA..ye hain aapki WHIZZ...


HIDA WHIZZ ki taraf point karte kaha AKSHAANT ne...


MAI-then why is this WHIZZ talking to me...???


MABBA ki taraf dekh maine ye baat kahi aur fir bina kuch sune mai stage se utar us taraf badh chala jahan BROWNY khada tha...

wahin meri baat sun aur meri unhe yun ignore kar chale jaane se man hi man fat si padi thi MABBA par SOVEREIGN'S ke saamne hone ki wajah se wo kuch kar sakti nahi thi isiliye filhal ke liye unhone khudko shaant kar liya...

wahin kyunki ab saari announcements ho chuki thi isiliye....


AKSHAANT-so SAVENTS..we wish all of you a great PHASE ahead...

baaki ki baatein aapke appointed WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS aapse apne CATAGORY aur group ke hisaab se karenge....


ek baar VIDEOUS aur ek baar meri taraf dekh teeno SOVEREIGN'S stage se utarkar chale gaye....

wahin SOVEREIGN'S ke jaate hi sabhi WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS apne apne groups ke paas jaane lage....


MABBA-aayiye VIDEOUS...aap hamare saath apne catagory ke PHASE MATES ke paas chaliye...

jahan ye bol MABBA, SAPIUS aur REGIS STELLARS ki taraf chal pade
wahin unke jaate hi VIDEOUS ek dusri taraf chal pada...


WEAKLINGS catagory jahan filhal WHIZZ HIDA ke saath ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur BRAWNY khade the,unke baaju se hota hua VIDEOUS thoda aage chal diya jahan apni peeth karke akele khada hua tha MAI...

aur mai yahan khada bhi isiliye hi hua tha kyunki mujhe maalum tha ki sabse pehle VIDEOUS mere paas hi aayega aur wo hi gaya...


VIDEOUS-ye bohot galat baat hai...jiske astitv ki wajah se tujhe tera astitv mila, usse ab tak milna toh door dekha bhi nahi tune....

MAI-tere astitv ki wajah se nahi,balki tere astitv ko mitane ki wajah se mila hai mujhe mera astitv..

aur jab ek din tujhe gayab hi ho jaana hai, toh fir tujhe dekhne ka,tujhse milne ka kya faayda...!!!


VIDEOUS ki taraf palaththe hue uski aankhon me jhaank maine ye baat kahi jisse sun...


VIDEOUS-manushya sadharan ho yaa fir asadharan..ek baat toh sabme common hoti hi hai...khwab dekhna...tu bhi dekh le...isme koi burayi nahi...

MAI-dhyan se dekh mujhe...naa toh mai soya hua hun aur naahi meri aankhen band hai...

aur jaagte hue sapne dekhne ki mujhe aadat nahi....

aankh teri band thi hazaron saalon se,toh khwab aur us khwab me khudke liye galatfehmi paalna,tera kaam hai,mera nahi....

VIDEOUS-jinki rooh,jinka dimag apne hisaab se kaam karta hai,unhe aate hai khwab...

tere saamne the last level GENIUS KHADA HAI,

VIDEOUS khada hai.....

jiska dimag aur rooh dono hi uske hisaab se chalte hain...mere khwab dikhte baad me hain,pure pehle ho jaate hain....

MAI-ye baat tab tak sach thi jab tak MAI nahi tha...ab tere khwab pure ho naa hon,par tere din zaroor pure ho chuke hain....

bohot shouk hai naa tujhe competition ka,dekh tere saamne khada hai RAAZ...

wo naam jo agar kisi competition me likha hai,toh uska matlab hai,FIRST PLACE RESERVED...

VIDEOUS-tu sirf ek khiladi hai RAAZ....par mai koi khiladi nahi balki pura KHEL hun...

mujhme khela jaata hai,mujhse khela nahi jaa sakta...

MAI-har khel me khiladi hote hain... par kabhi na kabhi koi aisa khiladi zaroor aata hai jiske baad wo khel us khiladi ke naam se jaana jaata hai...

mai wahi khiladi hun VIDEOUS...is khel ke rules tune banaye hain,maidan bhi tune chuna hai(CHOSENS)...


ab dekh,tere hi saamne,
tere hi rules ke saath
tere hi KHEL ka,

NAKSHA BADAL DUNGA MAI....


tere har daav,tere har paitre
teri har chaal ko tujh par
hi palat ek din,

TUJHKO BHI MASAL DUNGA MAI...










AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....










AAPKA APNA V...J.....
Amazing update
 

Kingsingh

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Super update Bhai
to aakhir 2nd phase start ho hi gya or 'the great hall' me savents ka categorize hona Harry Potter movie ki yaad dila gya Bhai . Alfreen, Mabel or Mahi to white robe me sunder lag hi rahi thi par show ki spotlight to VIDEUS aur RAAZ ke uper hi rahi jaha CHOSENS ki har female ki nazarein in dono par hi tiki Hui thi , Alfreen or Mahi to Raaz ko dekhkar pehchan hi na paayi or
Raaz aur VIDEUS ka first faceoff to kamaal ka Raha ,mast dialogues the Bhai
SUPERB
 

vj4u

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Dhamakedar update brother. Sach kahu to har din apka update ka level badhta ja raha h kaha se kaha se laate ho aisa brilliant khoj dimag hil jata h. Last lines jo shayari thi na incredible brother. Never heard something like that. Mabba se takra k raaz ne fr se panga le liya h ab anwir morona se le k ek whizz v piche pad jayegi uske..... Ek aur baat v hai ki VIDEUS ne 2 percent amplification kiya h salo ko pata nahi uski puri history jaan lenge to wahi khade khade darr se heart attack aa jayega sbko........ But raaz ka koii amplification nahi h........ Mahi ye sb ka ab koii khas smjh nahi aata ab har nigah sirf aur sirf villians pe hogi..... Shyd ye duniya ki pehli story hogi jisme villians hi villians se takrane k lie banaye gaye h....... Hida aur browny insb ki kismat v badalne wali h whizz ho k bhi hida ka bahut majak ban chuka h ab raaz h unke team m to performance better hona to banta h....... Dekhna h ki dono villians kis tarah air kaise takrate h padhayi m ya fight m kisme aur kaise ........ Av tak to jis khel ki VIDEUS ne rachna ki h uske baare m b pata nahi h bas do mohre taiyar kiye ja chuke h ab bas daanv lagna baki h........ Let's begin the GAME.......... LAST LINES INFACT WHOLE UPDATE WAS LIT BROTHER........... TOTALLY MIND BLOWING....
HATS OFF TO YOU FOR SUCH AMAZING UPDATE
hahahaha.. thanks brother..story line to ready hi rakha tha maine Brother,haan update dar update shabdon ke hisaab se us storyline ko likhna thoda hard hota hai but utna toh hoga hi..

haan,is update me ek chiz jo likhna normally mushkil hota hai,mere liye thoda asaan tha aur woh tha VIDEOUS aur RAAZ ke beech ki dialogue baazi...

kabhi waisi hi milti julti showoff baatein kisise school me ki thi maine... bas ussi yaad ko idhar chhap diya.. saath bane rahiye..
 
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vj4u

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Dhamakedar update brother. Sach kahu to har din apka update ka level badhta ja raha h kaha se kaha se laate ho aisa brilliant khoj dimag hil jata h. Last lines jo shayari thi na incredible brother. Never heard something like that. Mabba se takra k raaz ne fr se panga le liya h ab anwir morona se le k ek whizz v piche pad jayegi uske..... Ek aur baat v hai ki VIDEUS ne 2 percent amplification kiya h salo ko pata nahi uski puri history jaan lenge to wahi khade khade darr se heart attack aa jayega sbko........ But raaz ka koii amplification nahi h........ Mahi ye sb ka ab koii khas smjh nahi aata ab har nigah sirf aur sirf villians pe hogi..... Shyd ye duniya ki pehli story hogi jisme villians hi villians se takrane k lie banaye gaye h....... Hida aur browny insb ki kismat v badalne wali h whizz ho k bhi hida ka bahut majak ban chuka h ab raaz h unke team m to performance better hona to banta h....... Dekhna h ki dono villians kis tarah air kaise takrate h padhayi m ya fight m kisme aur kaise ........ Av tak to jis khel ki VIDEUS ne rachna ki h uske baare m b pata nahi h bas do mohre taiyar kiye ja chuke h ab bas daanv lagna baki h........ Let's begin the GAME.......... LAST LINES INFACT WHOLE UPDATE WAS LIT BROTHER........... TOTALLY MIND BLOWING....
HATS OFF TO YOU FOR SUCH AMAZING UPDATE
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Shekhawat_Raj

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VJ SIR JI YOU ARE SIMPLY AESTHETIC

AND THIS UPDATE HAS ITS BEUTY WITHIN

THE INTRO...THE PARA'S......THE CONCLUSION .....

IT IS REALLY A MEGA UPDATE NO DOUBT
IT POSSESSES EVERYTHING
AND EVERYTHING WAS MIND BOGGLING!!!!

YOU NEVER LET THE ENDING BE DULL
!!AND THE ENDING LINES WERE AMAZING!!

BOLETO JHAKASSSSSSSS!!!!!!
BOLETO MASTERPIECE!!!!
 

Suryaa

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silver spoon ke saath paida hone waale bacchon ki responsibility bhi kaafi zyada hoti hai Brother..unse ummiden zyada hoti hai..

ab dekhiye naa, MAHI, MABEL aur ALFREEN..ye teene agar kuch bhi achieve karengi toh ussi me sab khush ho jaayenge par wahin RAAZ aur VIDEOUS ke maamle me aisa nahi hai..

unke character ke baare me likhtw waqt, unke kaamo ko dimag ko dikhate waqt normal chizen nahi likhi jaa sakti..

isse koi impress nahi hone waala...kyunki normal prediction toh koi bhi in dono ke baare me kar hi lega toh aise me inka kuch aisa karna jo kisi ne socha hi naa ho,its damn difficult to execute...
True brother but y 3rd paragraph ka answer hai 1st and 2nd k bare mai aapne khuch nahi kaha
 

Black water

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Awesome mind blowing update bhai
Super Raaz aur Videous ka first mulaqat achha tha aur Raaz ne whizz mamba ki jo bajayi hai na kya kahoon aur dekhna hoga ki mamba Raaz ke sath kya karegi
:congrats: for 400 pages VJ bhai
 
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