Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

[Jay Sutar]

Well kaafi awesome update the. RAAZ ka Achhuta aur Slunder ko achhe se apne powers ke baremein explain karna.........Wahi RAAZ ne Browny ko bhi kaise use karna hai yeh bhi soch liya hoga........Rahi baat VIDEOUS ki toh vo bhi zaroor kuch plan kar hi raha hoga.....bina plan kiye vo kuch karega hi nahi.......agar vo choosens ko apne plane ka hisaa bana sakta hai toh usne aur bhi bohot kuch soch ke rakha hoga.......waise MAAHI aur ALFREEN ke opponents Achhuta aur Slunder.......kaafi thrilling rahega yeh dekhna.......Rahi baat RAAZ ke Florin aur Maria se milne ki toh.......jaise is story ka title hai KABHI ANGEL KABIR DEVIL.......USSE ACHHE SE SUIT KARTA HAI........
Well let's see what happens next.
PEACE.

 

[Last benchers]

Waiting sir..

 

[Black water]

Waiting bhai

 

[rocking2raaz]

Bhai waiting for update

 

[Rajurajsingh91]

Waiting more update

 

[vj4u]

Fabulous update bhai..??..aapka har update bahut bdiya hota h bhai..
Akhir kar florin or Maria ki mulakat ho hi gyi raaz se..or ab raaz ka attitude unke liye thoda change h ..jisse wo bahut khush h ..ab dekhna hoga aane wala waqt kya mod lata h...

Sabhi party ke sath main bhi surprise hu ki raaz Maria florin se Milne gaya tha lakin kyu akhir Kya kaam pad gaya raaz ko
Raaz ne bola equation change hoga lakin kaise karega
Keep posting

Jabardast update.....

Bhai kya tha yeh raaz to ab girgid ki tarah ho gaya hain apani fitarat hi badal di ek pal main...

Awesome fantastic Mind-blowing update Bhai....
Florin or maria ki feeling kiy hogi Raaz ke aise behave SE ye btane ke liye..filal mere pass word nhi hai...
BrAwny ko frustrate kiw hone hai.ye sayd aane wale time hi btaye...
Is update ka favorite scene...
Jb mahi ko Raaz jawab deta hai... awesome line Bhai.

Fabulous update bhai

Ab shayad Raaz Maria or Florin ko im motionally use karega apne fayde ke liye Stellars ke khilaf

Are bhai ye Raaz na ajeeb hi ladka hai kab kya Kare samajh se bahar hai.
lagta hai achhuta aur slunder ki watt lagne wali hai training se. Ye dono ko mahi aur Alfreen ke liye taiyar karega. Bahut maza aane wala hai.

Fantastic marvelous update

fantastic update bhai maza aa gya ab dekhte hai ki aage kya hota hai

Nice update

Kamal ka update hai bhai ji

Jisme emotion nahi the pehle ab usme emotion aa chuka hai....

Pehle chidh thi jise rishto se vo ab rishte bana raha hai....

Ab kya hoga rishto ka or emotion ka...

Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next

waah bhai waah alfreen ki fatne wali hai

thanks brothers..be along

 

[vj4u]

Waah Bhai nice update
Raaz ne bi apne khel ki bisaat bichaana shuru Kar diya hai . Browny ka frustrate hona aur RAAZ ka Maria or Florin se with a smile milna bi issi khel ka ek ehem hissa hoga or Maria ka ye kehna ki " jisse taklif hogi wo apna dekh lega " ye is or ishara karta hai ki Florin or Maria ke liye Alfreen se jyada raaz Mayne rakhta hai . Ye shayad is liye hoga ki earth par unka Dil kahi na kahi ye maan Chuka tha ki unki beti nahi rahi or jab wo mili bi to pehle hi frustrated thi or Raaz ke baare me jaankr ki ussi ki vajah se hi usse uske parents se door rehna pada or uske parents Raaz se kafi attached hai

thanks for appreciating brother..yunhi saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

SIR JI AAKHRI KI PANKTIYON MEIN TOH
SUSPENSE DE DIYA AAPNE

BUT NO DOUBT IT'S A SUPER UPDATE
WITH SAME PERFECTION AS YOU
POSSESS IN REST OF THE STORY

AND ONE MORE IMPORTANT POINT THAT I HAVE NOTICED WHILE GOING THROUGH
AN UPDATE
'' UPDATE ITNA MAZEDAAR HOTA HAI KE HAR LINE DO-DO BAAR PADHNE PAR MAJBOOR KAR DETA HAI, TOH AAP JITNE BHI WORD KA UPDATE LIKHO USSE DOUBLE HI SAMJHO KYONKI VO EHSAAS TOH DOGUNA HI DETA HAI ''

a writer is just as good as his reader Brother..so thank you for being that reader which makes me atleast an okay writer...

 

[vj4u]

Ek dam gajab ka update
vj bhai

ye sub last me jo ap shayri creat karte he kasm se updte padhne ka mazA do guna ho jata he Vj bhai

apko acha laga,matlab mera sochna likhna kaam aa gaya..thanks for that Brother...be along

 

[vj4u]

Raaz,Acchuta aur Slunder apne weaklings quarter me pahunch jate hai paidal hi aur tab unhe machchher pareshan karte hai v Raaz apni serch rays ko bdhane ke liye bahar thyan me betha tha aur vah ander aakar unhe brain, body, bloud ko jode kar ek spell ke dwara unhe andhere me dekhne ka abhyast karata hai v machchhro se bachne ke liye unki body per ek parat bhi chadh jati hai. Ushke baad vah bahar ghumne jate hai aur dushri taraf alfreen ke dwara florin aur mariya ko Raaz ke bare me pata chalne per sab ushe milne nikal padte hai. Aur Raaz apne behaviour ke vipreet Florin aur Maria ko gale lagata hai v hansh ke milta hai.
Bahut behtreen update hai dost.

thanks for the review brother..bas padhte jaaiye..bohot maza aane waala hai..saath bane rahiye