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Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

Iron Man

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vj4u said:
jis bande ne 4 bekasoor logon ko jaan se maar diya,usse maar khaate nahi dekh sakte aap...!!!

tabhi kaha tha maine Brother,ki kisi character se khud ko involved mat kijiye...

khair,kahani ko next level par le jaane ke liye jo chizen hona zaroori hai,wo toh hongi hi...aap bas padhte jaaiye...next update se ye kahani ek baar firse ghumne waali hai...
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4 bekasoor logo ko jaan se marna ya phir Brawny ya uske parents ko marna ye dono ghatnaye raaz ko Devil banate hai par Raaz ko banaya gaya hi hai ki uspe emotion ka farak na padta .
Brawny khood Raaz ke pass gaya aur apni baat bhi na kaha ye parinam uske liye sabk bane jo uske liye aage madadgar ho .
Gifrin ko wooger ne Achhuta and Slunder ke parents ko marne ki wajah batya par yah baat ham readers se abhi raaz hai to jitna simple dikh raha ki 4 bekasoor logo ko maar diya uhi magar asal baat utna simple nahi hai .
 
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vj4u said:
AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF HIDA WEAKLINGS KO SPELLAR AUR REFINER KE BAARE ME BATATI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF VIDEOUS MAHI, ALFREEN AUR MABEL SE FRIENDLY HOKAR BAAT KARTA HAI.

AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


( UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-65



PLANET-SPIRAM


PLACE-RIVER BANK







WELL,WELL,WELL.....LOOK WHO WE FOUND....A SUSPECT....



subah ka waqt hai.nadi kinare baithi ek ladki,jiske siway aankh aur honth waale area ke baaki ka pura chehra dhaka hua tha. skin tight stretchable dark red outfit pehne wo ladki neeche baith kar nadi se paani pee rahi thi,tabhi uske piche se ye awaaz aayi thi jisse sun wo turant palti aur dekha ki uske saamne hawa me 2 log khade usse dekh rahe the aur dheere dheere niche zamin par utar rahe the.....

waise toh wo dono shaksh us ladki ke liye anjaan the,par unka usse suspect kehne se usse anuman ho gaya tha ki wo dono kaun ho sakte hain isiliye...


LADKI-chale jaao yahan se....acha rahega tum dono ke liye...

ladki ke jawab ko sun wo dono shaksh man hi man chownke the..

pehli baar ho raha tha un dono ka us ladki se aamna saamna,par aise me bhi wo ladki naa toh ghabrayi thi aur naahi usne un dono ke baare me janane ki koi icha jatayi..

aur aisa hona ajeeb bhi tha asadharan bhi...

1ST-hume dekhkar dari nahi tum...is grah par jeeven ko panpe kuch hi waqt beeta hai,jahan filhal human existence shuru bhi nahi hui hai,wahan khadi ho tum.

in sabse pata chalta hai ki sadharn toh bilkul nahi ho sakti tum...aur yahan is jagah par tumhara pahunchna,ye batata hai ki METAPHYSICAL capabilities bhi hai tumme...

aur agar tum sadharan nahi ho,toh tumhe hamare AURA toh sense ho hi rahe honge jisse tum hamari shakti ka ek halka sa hi sahi,aakalan toh kar paa hi rahi hogi...

kya tumhe nahi lagta ki hume yahan se jaane ki dhamki dena tumhare liya khatarnaak ho sakta hai...

us shaksh ki baat sun us ladki ke chehre par muskaan aa gayi jisse dhake hone ki wajah se wo dono shaksh nahi dekh paaye the...


LADKI-yahan khatarnaak sirf mai hun...toh darne ki zaroorat mujhe nahi,tum dono ko hai...

khair,tumhari baaton se ek baat ti clear ho hi gayi hai ki bina pite tum dono jaaoge nahi..

toh isse pehle ki khel shuru karen,ek baat ka jawab do....kaun hai wo jo dhund raha hai mujhe...

mai suspect hun,ye kaise tay kar liya tum dono ne..

2ND-tum hume maarogi....achi galatfehmi hai...khair, pehle tumhare sawalon ke jawab de dete hain kyunki fir tum us haalat me rahogi nahi ki kuch bhi sun yaa samajh paao...

1ST-arre manners bhul gaya kya..?? conversation shuru karne se pehle introduction zaroori hota hai.. toh pehle wo kar len...???

2nd-ye baat bhi sahi hai...toh lady,myself DORIAN....

1ST-aur mai GASTON hun...

DORIAN-well,humne toh apna intro de diya...ab agar naam batane se aapki is chuppi hui personality ka RAAZ nahi khul jaayega,toh kya hum aapka naam jaan sakte hain...

LADKI-FALLON......

DORIAN-FALLON....nice..toh FALLON,baat kuch aisi hai ki humare LORD ne hume kisiki talash karne ko kaha hai...

ab wo kaun hai,iske baare me toh hume pata nahi hai par uski urja ki shakti ko hamare LORD ne hume mehsoos karwaya tha taaki hum uske zariye usse detect kar saken...

unhone hume ye bhi bataya tha ki aisa ho sakta hai ki jinki talash unhe hai,wo hume directly naa mile toh aise me agar hum kisi aur me usse milte julte urja ke prabhaav ko mehsoos karen,toh iska arth hoga ki wo shaksh unka saathi hai,jiski LORD ko talash hai...

and guess what...itne dino ki lagatar khoj ke baad aakhirkhaar hume ek aisa shaksh mil hi gaya jiski body se hume us WANTED shaksh jaisi urja feel hui hai...

toh hui naa tum hamari suspect....

FALLON-kya naam hai tumhare LORD ka...???

DORIAN- jab hum tumhe unke paas lekar chalenge,toh tum khud hi unse puch lena...

FALLON-milna toh mai chahti hun tumhare LORD se par unfortunately abhi iska waqt nahi aaya hai....

par yahan se mere jaane ka waqt ab zaroor aa gaya hai... isiliye,khel shuru karte hain...

agar khudki jaan bacha paaye,toh tum dono bhi chale jaana..


FALLON ka chehra nahi dikh raha tha par uski awaaz me jo confidence tha,wo DORIAN aur GASTON bohot ache se feel kar paa rahe the...

unhe apni taakat par pura bharosa tha par ek anjaan dushman ko kam aankna,ye bewakufi wo nahi kar sakte the aur isiliye...

GASTON turant gayab hua aur FALLON ke piche aa gaya...

ab DORIAN aur GASTON,dono hi FALLON ke dono taraf the jiska matlab ki wo uspar dono taraf se ek saath waar karne waale the...

FALLON bhi un dono ki ran neeti se anjaan nahi thi....

usne pehle apne saamne khade DORIAN ko dekha aur fir palaththe hue uski nazar GASTON par padi aur tabhi....

FALLON ke chehre ko piche ki taraf ghumta dekha DORIAN ke haathon se ek CURRENT ROPE nikal FALLON ki taraf badhi....

par FALLON jaise pehle se hi jaanti thi ki aisa kuch hone waala hai aur isiliye hi usne hawa me ek ulta cart wheel maara aur DORIAN ke chhode CURRENT ROPE ke upar se guzarti hui jaane lagi...

ye action kaafi speed tha par DORIAN aur GASTON jaise A + SORCERERS ki aankhon ke liye normal hi tha aur isiliye FALLON ke hawa me rehte hue hi GASTON ne apni taraf se ek dusri CURRENT RAY feki uske taraf par tabhi...

FALLON ka right hand uske waist ki taraf jahan usne ek red belt pehni hui thi,uspar gayi...

abhi hawa me hi thi FALLON...par ussi akward aur moving position me usne us belt ko apne waist se naa sirf kheencha,balki agle nano second se bhi kam waqt par wo belt uske haath me the...

belt ko haath me lete hi usne usse ek jhatka diya aur aisa hote hi hui do cheezen...

pehli....belt saamp ki tarah lehra gayi aur agle ho pal us belt ki length 10 feet ki ho chuki thi...

dusri....belt ke lehrate hi usse do behad strong shock waves nikli jisme se ek sidhi padi DORIAN ke CURRENT ROPE par aur dusri padi GASTON ke chhode CURRENT ROPE par aur aisa hote hi wo dono ROPES dhuen me badal gayab ho gaye...

wahan wo ropes gayab hue aur yahan FALLON ka pair zameen par aaya...

abhi abhi jo hua tha,usse dekh ek pal ke liye aankhen hairat se badi hi gayi thi DORIAN aur GASTON ki...

unhone dekha ki FALLON ke haathon me jo chaabul numa badi si belt hai,uske dono side se halki halki urja nikal rahi thi jiska matlab tha ki wo belt ek maayavi astr thi aur usse bohot se metaphisycal activities ko anjaam diya jaa sakta tha....

jahan wo dono ye sab soch rahe the wahin FALLON ab un dono ko mouka nahi dena chahti thi aur isiliye....

jaise hi uske pair zameen ko chhue toh uske agle hi pal usne ek baar fir apne lambe se belt jo kisi chaabuk se kam nahi thi,usse zor se jhatakte hue zamin par maara aur aisa hote hi....

ek saath do chizen hui...

pehli....

us belt ke zamin se takrate hi aas paas ki puri zamin asthir ho gayi aur us zamin ke har hisse me vibrations hone lagi...

dusri....

zamin se takrane par us belt me bhi ek strong impact pada jiske baad uske dono ends se anginat lambe lambe keel nikalne lage...

ye keel us belt ki shakti urja se bane the aur isiliye wo sab jaan leva bhi the...

ek taraf zamin par ho rahe vibrations aur dusri taraf wo anginat keel...

ek saath is dohre hamle se hadbada gaye the DORIAN aur GASTON....

wo khudko zamin par stable bhi nahi kar paa rahe the aur aise me unhe un keelo se bhi bachna tha...

par DORIAN aur GASTON bhi koi kacche khiladi toh the nahi...

zamin ke hilte hi wo dono halke hawa me uth chuke the...wahin hawa me uth un dono ne apne saamne ek ek NON LIVING WORLD DOOR khol diye jiske khulte hi wo keel unme samane lage...

jab FALLON ne apne daanw ko khaali jaate hue dekha toh usne apne belt ko ek baar punah hawa me lehraya aur aisa hote hi ek baar firse us belt se keel nikalne lage par is baar unki disha straight nahi thi...

ek nishchit doori tak pahunchne ke baad wo keel apni disha badalte hue chaaron taraf se ghum ghum kar GASTON aur DORIAN ki taraf badh chale...

ye sab hote dekh ek pal ke liye DORIAN aur GASTON ke chehre par chinta ki lakire ubhri...

kyunki ye wakayi ek ajeeb problem thi...DORIAN aur GASTON ek saath bohot se world doors nahi khol sakte the...

waqt kam tha aur problem badi.. kuch pal aur,uske baad wo saare keel in dono ko cheer dene waale the...

par GASTON aur DORIAN aisa kaise hone de sakte the aur isiliye...

dono ne mind to mind ek dusre se baat ki aur agle hi pal...

dono ke saamne bane WORLD DOOR gayab ho gaye...

aur fir....

DORIAN aur GASTON,dono hi apni apni jagah par gol ghumne lage...un dono ki raftar behad tez thi...

wahin wo saari keelen chaaron taraf se hoti hui un dono ke paas pahuncha chuki thi par isse pehle ki wo unhe chhu paati...

GASTON aur DORIAN,dono ke hi shariron ke ghumne se unke bodies ke charaon taraf ek SHIELD numa AURA banane lagi jisse takrakar wo saari keelen gayab hone lagi...

GASTON aur DORIAN ki yukti se apne naye waar ko bekaar hote dekh ek pal ke liye FALLON hairan hui par fir wo dobara ek naya waar karne ki waali thi lekin tabhi....


WAPAS AA JAAO FALLON....


uske kaano me ye awaaz gunj uthi...


wahin jab DORIAN aur GASTON ko un keelon ki ENERGY mehsoos honi band ho gayi toh unhone ghumna band kar diya..

par ghumna band karne se pehle hi un dono ne apne waar kar diye the...

un dono ke hi bodies se do ray numa bhala nikal FALLON ki taraf badh gaya tha par waar karne ke baad jab GASTON aur DORIAN ki body ruki aur unki nazar saamne gayi tih dono hairan ar ghussa dono ho gaye...

reason....

FALLON gayab ho chuki thi.....





PLANET-ELYSIAN



PLACE-CHOSENS






CONGRATS ACCHUTA & SLUNDER....aapne aaj apne SOUL ko 2 percent tak AMPLIFY kar liya hai...

aur itni jaldi aisa karne waale aap dono pehle WEAKLINGS bane hain...

aapki is uplabdhi par mai aap dono ke liye bohot khush hun...

chehre par khushi ke bhaav liye HIDA ne ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER se ye baat kahi jisse sun un dono ki baachein hi khil gayi thi...

gourav aur khushi...jab ye dono bhaav ek saath ek hi waqt par mehsoos ho toh us feeling ki baat hi kuch aur hoti hai...

aur yahi dono feelings is waqt ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER mehsoos kar rahe the...

aaj class shuru hone ke baad in dono ne REFINER ki practice nahi ki thi aur wo isiliye kyunki us process me bhi kaafi energy release hoti hai jisse SOUL AMPLIFICATION process me problem hoti hai...

one at a time..is quote ko aadhar banakar ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ne aaj sirf apne SOUL ko AMPLIFY karne ki sochi thi aur unki ye soch kaargar bhi sidh hui...

lagatar 3 baar fail hone ke baad finally chowthe attempt me ye dono apne SOUL ko AMPLIFY karne me kaamiyab ho hi gaye...

wahin in sabke beech tha BRAWNY jisse ek taraf toh apne dono group mates ke liye khushi toh ho hi rahi thi wahin dusri taraf apne nirantar haar ke liye sharm bhi mehsoos ho rahi thi..

waise toh usse hamesha se hi apne underperformance se taklif hoti thi par aaj jab usne ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ko dobara apne apne SOUL ko AMPLIFY karte hue dekha toh wo taklif kaafi badh gayi thi...

apne disability par BRAWNY koft kar hi raha tha ki tabhi HIDA ne apni baat aage badhayi...


HIDA-well..ab aap dono ne achievements haasil kiye hain toh aap dono ko prize bhi milega...

aur prize hai catagory upgradation....kal se aap dono is class me nahi balki GROOMERS ki class me baithenge...

itna hi nahi,har GROOMER ki hi tarah aap dono ki bhi life style hogi...

shaam ko aapke quarter me aapki bikes pahunch jaayegi jiske gps me aapke naye apartments ka location set hoga...

ab se aap dono ko is WEAKLINGS ki dress ko 24/7 pehenane ki zaroorat hai...infact kabhi bhi pehenane ki zaroorat nahi hai....

aapke apartments me aapke pahunchne se pehle hi aapki GROOMERS ki uniform aur kuch casual dresses rakhwa di jaayengi aur saath hi har wo cheez jo ek GROOMER ko milti hai...

so congrats again...aaj ki class yahi khatm hoti hai...


jahan ye bol HIDA hall se nikal gayi wahin BRAWNY bhi unke piche piche hi nikal pada...

uske yun nikalne ka kaaran ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER achi tarah samajh rahe the aur unhe uske liye bura bhiag raha tha par wo kar bhi kya sakte the...

wo dono BRAWNY ko hi dekh rahe the ki tabhi un dono ke kaano me padi meri awaaz...


MAI-bohot bura lag raha hai BRAWNY ke liye...


apni khushi me wo dono kuch palon ke liye meri moujudgi ko bhul se gaye the par meri awaaz sun naa sirf unhe mere unke paas hone ka ehsaas hua par saath hi wo dono turant piche palte aur jo hamesha hota aaya hai wahi hua..

dono ke chehron par dar dikhne laga...


MAI-dar kyun rahe ho...aaj toh tum dono ke liye khushi ka din hai.... WEAKLINGS ki pathetic life style se finally azaadi mil hi gayi tum dono ko...

i am very happy for you....


meri aakhri line sun un dono ko hi shock laga...i was happy for them...ye sunkar unhe hairani bhi hui aur khushi bhi...


ACCHUTA/SLUNDER-thanks RAAZ...

MAI-hmm...chalo, aakhri baar apne quater ko dekh lo..shaam ko toh usse alvida kehna hi hai...


is waqt mera chehra bilkul shaant tha...

aur jab is tarah se maine apni baat kahi toh un dono ke cheharon par smile aa gayi aur wo wapas palat aage badh gaye wahin mai bhi unke piche ho liya....

par isse pehle ki hum teeno hall se bahar nikalte....


WELL WELL WELL ... DEKHO TOH KAUN AA RAHA HAI....THE THREE LOOSERS...


ye awaaz thi VALDIS ki jo ki ACCHUTA ki taraf hi aa raha tha..

darasal STELLARS ki class khatm hone ke baad jab saare SAVENTS bahar nikalne lage tab VALDIS ki nazar hall ke beech khade hum teeno par padi aur hume dekh wo rook gaya tha aur ab jab hum ussi ki taraf aa rahe the tab usne ye saari baatein kahin jispar ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER, pehle toh ek raat pehle hue dhulayi ko yaad kar halke ghabraye par fir jab unhone VALDIS ko mujhe looser bolte suna toh unhe aa gaya ghussa....


ACCHUTA-abbe bakwaas band kar...warna LU***D phek kar maarunga,GA**D se pregnant ho jayega tu...

SLUNDER-saale chaman chutiye...apne grahakon ko apni GAA**D ki rishwat dekar unse ghirwakar hume maarta hai aur khudko taakatwar samajhta hai...

saale MALE RAA***D hai tu...


ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki baat sun behad ghusse se bhar unki taraf badha VALDIS aur jab aisa hua tab ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ko realize hua ki ghusse me kuch zyada hi bol gaye hain wo dono...

VALDIS ek 4 percent AMPLIFICATION waala banda tha upar se STELLAR bhi jinka influence CHOSENS me sabse zyada hota hai toh aise me ye situation unke liye sahi nahi thi...

par zuban se nikli baat aur usse hone waale consequences se bhaaga toh jaa sakta tha nahi isiliye wo dono bhi VALDIS se bhidne ke liye ready ho gaye the..

wahin tezi se badhtha hua VALDIS ACCHUTA ke saamne pahunch gaya...

ACCHUTA ke saamne pahunch apne SOUL AMPLIFICATION ki taakat se VALDIS ne usse dhakka dene ke liye haath aage badhaya par tabhi...

behad tezi se mai ACCHUTA aur VALDIS ke beech aa gaya jisse VALDIS ka haath ACCHUTA ke chaati se naa lag meri chaati ko laga aur jab aisa hua toh...

VALDIS ki push ka asar kuch hua nahi...mai apni jagah par hi khada raha..

pehle mujhe yun tezi se ACCHUTA ke saamne aata dekh VALDIS chownka par fir uske SOUL power ki use ke saath diye gaye push se bhi jab ek inch bhi mujhe naa hilte dekha usne toh uski hairani badh gayi...

usse ACCHUTA ki mere baare me kahi gayi kal ki baat yaad aane lagi thi...

wahin apni chhati me uske haath ko dekh maine apne dono haath aage badhaye aur VALDIS ke haathon ko pakad liya....


HMMPHHH..HAMMPHHHH


mere aisa karte hi VALDIS ne apne haathon ko mere haathon se chhudane ke liye pehle normal,fir halki awaaz ke saath average aur aakhir me tez awaaz ke saath apni puri taakat laga di par uska haath mere haathon se chhuta nahi...

jahan aisa hote dekh VALDIS behad chownka tha wahin ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki hasi nikal gayi aur...


ACCHUTA-kyun re lau*e.... bohot dum hai naa tere me.... laga le fir..ga**d se tatti nikal jaayegi par RAAZ ke haath se tera haath nahi nikal paayega...

VALDIS-haath chhod RAAZ.. warna acha nahi hoga...


bebasi me bhi akad ka darwaza pakde gurraya VALDIS jispar...


MAI-abhi maine sirf tera haath pakda hai...agar dabana shuru kar dun toh tere haathon ke zariye teri rooh fana ho jaayegi...

taakat dikhane ka bada shouk hai naa tujhe....ye mouka bhi tujhe milega...par jab tak wo mouka nahi aata,apne haathon ko, apni aukad ko apne dayre me rakh...salamat rahega...

ab nikal....


ye bol maine VALDIS ke haathon ko chhod diya jiske baad apne kalaayion ko masalte hue usne ek baar mujhe aur ek baar ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ko ghura par fir chupchaap nikal gaya...


ACCHUTA-thanks RAAZ...


mujhe yun beech me ghus un dono ko defend karta dekh ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER,dono ke hi aankhon me mere liye khushi respect thi,jo ACCHUTA ke thanks kehne par aur saaf dikhne lagi thi..


MAI-no need dude..what are friends for...???!!!


meri baat sun aur mujhe unhe as friends bolne par ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER dono shock bhi hue aur bhaavuk bhi...

SLUNDER toh ab bhi thoda hichkicha raha tha par ACCHUTA,wo turant aage badha aur mere gale lag gaya aur usse aisa karte dekh SLUNDER ne bhi waisa hi kiya....

apni khushi ko dikha ye dono mere gale lage hi the ki tabhi....


KAAM HO GAYA MASTER.....



ek awaaz gunj uthi mere dimag me jisse sun mere chehre par aa gayi muskaan...

toh chaliye,is scene ko khatm karne se pehle us scene ki taraf chalte hain jiski wajah se mere dimag me ye awaaz gunji thi..





PLANET-MASSOR


PLACE-THE JUNGLE





OH..MY... GOD.......KA...KYA HAI YE..???


kampti hue awaaz me ek aadmi ne ye baat kahi jispar uske jeep ke saamne khade vikral aur ajeeb body ke jaanwar ne pehle apne sir ko jo ki aadha tiger aur adha wolf ka bana tha,halka jhatka diya aur...


ANIMAL-WOOGER HUN MAI....


ek jaanwar ke mooh se insano ki bhasha sunkar wo aadmi jo aur koi nahi balki ACCHUTA ke father the,hairan ho gaye the...

waise hairan toh unke baaju me baithe SLUNDER ke pitah aur jeep ki pichli seat par baithi un dono ki patniyan bhi ho gayi thi....

ACCHUTA ke pitah jinhone SLUNDER ke parents ko apne is naye planet me invite kiya tha aur filhal woh chaaron ek bohot hi advanced hunt jeep me MASSOR ke ek jungle me shikar karne aaye the,unhone apne wildest dream me bhi nahi socha tha ki jungle ke beech unka saamna ek daiytyakaar jaanwar se hoga jo human language me baat kar sakta tha...

wahin dono royal families ki suraksha ke liye jo kuch sipahi aaye the aur unke jeep ke piche dusri gaadiyon me follow kar rahe the,us jaanwar ko dekh un sabki haalat bhi kharab ho gayi thi....

ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke pitah,jo kuch der pehle tak ek hiran ko dekh uske shikar ke liye uske piche gaadi douda rahe the,ab khud ek shikar ki tarah us WOOGER naam ke jaanwar ke saamne khade the..

khair, jaise hi WOOGER ne apna naam bataya toh...


SLUNDER FATHER-ho kaun tum...???aur is tarah hamare saamne aane ka kaaran kya hai...???


apni puri himmat jama kar kahi thi ye baat SLUNDER ke father ne jispar....


WOOGER-mai kaun hun,ye chhodo bas itna jaan lo ki mai tum chaaron ko tumhari zindagi se azaad karne aaya hun...


bohot normally kahi thi ye baat WOOGER ne par uski baat sun un sabki haalat aur kharab ho gayi thi...


ACCHUTA MOTHER-par kyun maarna chahte ho tum hume.. humne tumhara kya bigada hai..???

WOOGER-bigada toh us hiran ne bhi tumhara kuch nahi hai jiske shikar ke liye tum sab nikle ho...


WOOGER ki baat sun un sabko laga ki hiran ki wajah se WOOGER un sabko maarna chahata tha isiliye..


SLUNDER MOTHER-hum nahi karenge us hiran ka shikar...infact,hum kisi bhi jaanwar ka shikar nahi karenge..hum wapas chale jaate hain..


SLUNDER ki mom ki baat puri hui hi thi ki uske agle hi pal unki aur unke saath baaki sabhi ki aankhen badi ho gayi..

reason...

jis hiran ki baat abhi ho rahi thi,wo hiran hawa me udte hue unki taraf aaya aur thik WOOGER ke saamne aakar rook gaya jiske agle hi pal wo hiran WOOGER ke mooh me chala gaya tha...

hiran ko nigalne ke baad..


WOOGER-hiran ho yaa manushya.. kamzoron ko mar hi jaana chahiye...

ek kamzor toh mar gaya..ab tum sabhi ki baari hai...

ACCHUTA FATHER-dekh kya rahe ho..maar daalo isse...

piche apne sipahiyon ko dekhte hue chilla uthe ACCHUTA ke father aur unke aisa karte hi jaise ek sammohan se jaage the saare sainik...

apne king ki awaaz sun wo sabhi turant apni jeep se utre..un sabhi ke haathon me lezer beam guns thi jiska ek shot kisi haathi ko bhi raakh kar sakta tha..

jeep se niche utar position lete hue un sabhi siphahiyon ne WOOGER par gun taan di aur aisa karte hi...

sabne trigger daba diya tha jiske baad guns se nikli lazer beams sidhe WOOGER ki taraf lapki par ye kya...!!!???


WOOGER se ek feet door wo saari beams hawa me hi rook gayi..is karishme ko dekh sabhi hairan ho hi rahe the ki tabhi...

un beams ne apna rookh moda aur wapas us disha ki taraf badh chali jahan se wo aayi thi..

aur aisa hone par ek pal bhi nahi laga un saare sipahiyon ko raakh hone ke liye...

jahan apne sipahiyon ka haal dekh ab chaaron royals thar thar kaampne lage the wahin WOOGER dheere dheere chalte hue un chaaron ki taraf aaya aur....


WOOGER-do option hai tum chaaron ke paas...

pehli...jis gun se tumhare siphahi mujhe maarne waale the,ussi se khudko shoot kar lo...

dusri...mai tum chaaron ko zinda chaba jaata hun...

maroge toh tum chaaron dono hi suraton me bas fark itna hoga ki agar tum chaaron ne khudko shoot kiya toh sirf tum chaaron ki hi jaan jaayegi par agar mujhe tum logon ko maarna pada toh tum chaaron ke baad mai tum dono ke hi grah ke har baashinde ko maar dunga...

aur aakhir me tumhare bete bhi maare jaayenge....

sab tumpar hai...jaldi faisla karo....


WOOGER ki baat sun un chaaron ki hi aankhon me aansu aa gaye the..

marne se darte nahi the wo chaaron par is tarah marna unhe gawara nahi tha...

par option bhi nahi tha unke paas..unki praja aur unke bacchon ki bali wo kaise de sakte the aur isiliye....

kaampte hue haathon se un chaaron ne ek ek gun uthai aur apne sir par rakh di...

aankh band ho gaye the un chaaron ke...unki band aankhon ke saamne unke grah CARAPACE aur ARROW ghum gaye..unki praja aur unka prem dikhne laga unhe.

aur aakhir me dikhe unhe unke bacche.. ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER jinke chehron ko yaad kar ek baar fir un chaaron ke aansu chalak uthe...

ane bacchon ke chehron ko aakhri baad yaad kar....


SCCHHH......


chaar halki halki awaaz nikli un chaaron gun se jiske agle hi pal ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke parents ke sir unke dhad se alag hokar raakh ho chuke the...

aur ye hote hi nikle WOOGER ke mooh se wo shabd jo gunje the RAAZ ke kaano me....


WOOGER-KAAM HO GAYA MASTER....




BACK TO RAAZ:-



QUATER JAO TUM DONO....


khudse alag karte hue kahi maine ye baat ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER se...

wahin alag hone par jab un dono ne mujhe muskurate hue dekha toh unhe laga ki shayad mai unhe dost kehne aur unke mujhe gale lagne ki wajah se hi muskura raha hun...

unhe kahan maalum tha ki ye muskaan un dono ke parents ki zabardasti karwayi gayi khudkhushi ki wajah se aayi thi..

khair,meri baat sun.....


ACCHUTA-tum nahi aa rahe ho...!!!

MAI-mai baad me aata hun...


meri baat sun un dono ne fir aage kuch kaha nahi aur palatthe hue aage badh gaye par fir wo dono hi wapas meri taraf palte aur...


ACCHUTA-thanks RAAZ,humare liye ladhne ke liye...

SLUNDER-and thanks hume dost maanane ke liye....


jahan ye bol wo dono wapas palat chale gaye wahin unki baat sun...



MAI-log kehte hain,


dosti ki hai toh
NIBHANI HOGI......

par RAAZ se dosti me,
jaan GAWAANI HOGI.......

jeena hai toh meri nazar
ko apni ehmiyat DIKHANI HOGI.....

ye meri duniya hai.....

isme meri,bas meri,sirf meri hi
MANMAANI HOGI..










AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......








AAPKA APNA V...J.......
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Excellent update brother keep posting
Thanks for lovely update
 
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vj4u

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Rahul said:
raaz jo kuch bhi kar raha uske piche wajah hogi bina karan wo kuch bhi nahi karta hai qurbani to deni hi hogi kisi na kisi ko aur last me mai to yahi kahunga sab cheen lo raaz se aap lekin uska attitude wo aap nahi cheen sakte jab usse pass koi power nahi thi fir bhi uski baten hunter ki tarah samne wale ke upar padti thi mujhe raaz me sabse powerful uski awaaj lagti hai jo uske marne se pahle koi nahi cheen sakte usse bhai ji raaz ne abhi maar peet kiya kuch update me lekin wo sab karna bhi jaruri raha hoga
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REASONS..... RAAZ ka ek target hai aur us target ko haasil karne ke liye wo kuch bhi karega...

satyavachan....

ye kahani ka ek angle hai...par dusra angle...uska kya..???kaam kitna bhi bada ho,uske hone naa hone se future bhale hi kitna hi hinder kyun naa ho raha ho,par us kaam ka theka sirf RAAZ ka hai,kisi aur kaa nahi...

ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER...agar in dono se ye kaha jaaye ki ek maksad ke taur par tumhare mom dad ko marna padega,toh kaisa reaction hona chahiye unka..



wo dono carodon ko marte hue dekh sakte hain, par apno ki kisi bhi kaam ke liye bali nahi chadha sakenge.

aur jaise shayad RAAZ galat nhi hai,waise wo dono bhi nhi h...ab is galat sahi ke parameter par jo situation ke hisab se logic hoga,wo hoga aur jo KARMA hona chahiye,wo bhi hoga...


aap readers ke liye is kahani se kisi ek kirdaar se attach hona normal baat hai..

par mere liye har character equal hai aur isiliye mere hisaab se jo bhi justification answer hoga,wo har kirdaar ke hisse me aayega.. bas waqt ki baat hai...
 
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vj4u said:
AB TAK APNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF RAAZ ACCHUTA AUR SLUNDER KO APNA DOST KEHTA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF WOOGER ACCHUTA AUR SLUNDER KE MAATA PITAH KO MAAR DETA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-66




PLACE-ASTER






CHEHRA SHAANT PAR MAN VYAKUL.....KUCH AADATEIN KABHI NAHI BADALTI,HAINA FALLON...!!!


FALLON ke saamne muskurate hue khade ek shaksh ne ye baat kahi jispar...


FALLON-man toh vyakul hoga hi naa MASTER....najane kitne dino ke baad mujhe mere takkar ke do log mile the...

par isse pehle ki hamara dwandh apne natije par pahunchta,aapne mujhe wapas bula liya..


shikayati tone ke saath kahi ye baat
FALLON ne aur aisa kehte hi uske haathon me chamak raha arrow upar utha jiske agle hi pal FALLON ne us arrow ke string ko zor se khinch chhod diya...

uske aisa karte hi pehle toh uske saamne khade uske master muskuraye par fir...

unke kaano ne saamne se aa rahi invisible bows ko sense kar liya..

aur aisa hote hi unke haathon me chamak rahi talwar upar uthi aur har invisible bow ke aage ek shield ki tarah position leti chali gayi aur jab aisa hua toh...


TANNNN.....TANNNN.....TANNNN.....


wo saari invisible bows MASTER ke talwar se takra niche girti chali gayi....

abhyas.....yahi ek tarika tha FALLON ki vyakulta ko shaant karne ka aur MASTER abhi wahi kar rahe the...

aur abhyas ke saath saath wo FALLON ko uske sawalon ke jawab bhi de rahe the...


MASTER-tumhe wapas bulane ke do kaaran the...

pehla....


wo yudh bhale hi tum teeno ke beach ho raha tha,par tumpar nazar uski bhi thi jisne unhe bheja tha aur jisne un dono ko bheja tha,agar usne tumhara yudh koushal thodi aur der tak dekha hota toh tumhe uske saamne jaana hi padta aur aisa hone se koi bhi usse rok nahi sakta tha....


apne MASTER ki baat sun FALLON ko kaafi hairani hui thi...kyunki jo baat abhi abhi uske MASTER ne kahi thi,uske aadhar par uske MASTER jo ki hadh se zyada shaktishaali the,wo bhi is anjaan shaksh ko nahi rok sakte the...

wo is baare me MASTER se puchna chahti thi par usse pehle FALLON wo dusra kaaran jaanana chahti thi jiske kaaran usse wapas bula liya gaya tha...

wo dusra kaaran janane ka wo wait kar hi rahi thi ki tabhi....

aage bolne se pehle MASTER ne apni SWORD ko zor se ghumaya aur aisa karte hi SWORD se ek wave bahar nikli....

FALLON satark thi aur usse maalum tha ki MASTER ke haathon se nikli wave ek energy force ka roop lekar usse ghayal kar degi aur isiliye wo dhyan se un waves ki energy ko aur uski disha ko feel karne me lag gayi thi par aisa karte hi usse hairani hui...

reason....

us wave se nikalne waali energy gayab ho chuki thi...

usse kuch bhi feel nahi ho raha tha...kuch pal beete aur jab uske baad bhi kuch nahi hua toh FALLON thoda relax hone ko hui par tabhi.....

usse achanak apne piche se ek bohot hi strong energy feel hui aur aisa feel hote hi wo tezi se apne left ki taraf kudi....

ye last micro second jump tha par kyunki FALLON ki furti hadh se zyada thi isiliye wo us energy se takrane se bach toh gayi par puri tarah se nahi.....

us energy se nikalte power ka aakhri hissa FALLON se takra gaya jiski wajah se wo straight jump jo FALLON ne maari thi,wo circles me badal gayi...

gol ghumte hua FALLON ka body ek DHAMM ki awaaz ke saath niche gir pada..

itna hi nahi,us energy ki one forth power jo ki FALLON se takrayi thi,usme bhi itni taakat thi ki uske impact se giri padi FALLON turant uth bhi nahi paayi....

ek tez dard uske pure sharir me uth pada jisse jabde bheenche wo zabt karne me lag gayi...

wahin FALLON ke girte hi uske MASTER chalte hue uske saamne aaye aur...


MASTER-dusre reason ka example tha ye....


MASTER ki baat sun dard me bhi aankhon me sawal tair utha FALLON ka jispar...


MASTER-jin do logon se tum ladh rahi thi,unki shakti tumse zyada nahi thi par wo dono tumse kam bhi nahi the...

unme se kisi ek se toh tum fir bhi ladhke shayad jeet bhi sakti thi par un dono se ek saath jitne ki kaabiliyat ab bhi tumme nahi hai...

isiliye apni abhyas ka,apno pratibha ka daayra aur badhao..

tumhara un dono se mulakat ka matlab hai ki ab wo ghadi zyada door nahi jab hum sabke chuppe hue wajud ujagar hone waale hain...


filhal MASTER aur FALLON jis jagah par khade the,uske thoda aage ki zamin gayab thi...

apni baat keh MASTER aage badhe aur us jagah ke aakhri chhor par pahunch unki nazar neeche gayi...

jahan kareeb 100 feet neeche is waqt kaafi saare log alag alag metaphysical activities ki practice kar rahe the.....

wahin ab tak neeche padi FALLON ka dard bhi kuch kam ho chuka tha aur isiliye wo khadi hui aur MASTER ke piche jaakar khadi ho gayi...


FALLON-jisne DORIAN aur GASTON ko bheja tha,kya wo aapse bhi zyada shaktishaali hain MASTER....

MASTER-haan.....


bas itna hi nikla MASTER ke mokh se jisse sun...


FALLON-toh fir aise me woh toh aaj nahi toh kal hamara ye thikana bhi dhund kar nikal hi lega....

MASTER-maine kaha wo mujhse zyada shaktishaali hai...

par jisne ye jagah banayi hai aur hume yahan rehne ki ijazat aur aashirwad diya hai,uski shakti ka koi saani hai...

aur jab tak LORD OF ANGELS nahi chahenge,is jagah ko koi bhi dhund nahi sakta...


LORD OF ANGEL...is naam ko jab bhi FALLON sunti thi,khush ho jaati thi.....

mili nahi thi wo kabhi unse par fir bhi is naam ke uccharit hote hi usse acha lagta tha...

khair, MASTER ki baat sun....


FALLON-waise agar LORD OF ANGEL beech me nahi bhi aaye toh bhi mujhe nahi lagta ki is jagah ko dhunda bhi jaa sakta hai...

yaa fir ye kahun ki aisi bhi koi jagah ho sakti hai,aisa socha bhi jaa sakta hai....

chaaron taraf nazar ghuma FALLON ne ye baat kahi jispar...


MASTER-jab kaam LORD OF ANGEL ka ho,toh aisi cheezen sambhav hoti hain jinki kalpana bhi nahi ki jaa sakti....

jis yudh ko bramhaand ke shaktishaali yodhaon ki sena bhi nahi jeet sakti, us yudh ko wo sirf apne dimag se jeet sakte hain....

shakti aur buddhi ka aisa shroth hain wo jiska har koi kayal bhi hai aur jiske aage sab bebas bhi...


chehre par gourav,prassanatta aur izzat liye ye saari baatein kahi MASTER ne jisse ek tak chup chaap sunti chali gayi FALLON...

wahin apni baat keh jab MASTER ki nazar FALLON par gayi toh uske expressions dekhkar unke chehre par bhi smile aa gayi...


MASTER-baatein bohot hui FALLON...ab jaao,aur jis abhyas ke baare me maine tumhe kuch din pehle bataya tha,usse aarambh karo....


MASTER ki baat sun naa sirf FALLON apne trance se bahar aayi balki apne sir ko ek baar MASTER ke samman me jhuka apne abhyas ke liye nikal gayi...

wahin usse piche se jaata dekh...


FALLON-LORD OF ANGEL ki buddhi ka ek jeeta jaagta namuna tum khud ho FALLON....

aur wo samay nikat hai jab tumhe pata chal jaayega tumhare astiv ka RAAZ......





PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-POISEN




WOW GUYZZZZ..THIS PLACE IS SO HAPPENING...

POISON CLUB me ghuste hi MABEL ke mooh se ye baat apne aap nikal gayi thi....

POISON CLUB..as MABEL said,one of the most happening clubs of PHASE 2...a definate young crowd puller....

is club me universe ke har artistic developed planet ki music numbers bajte hain.....

itna hi nahi, variety variety ke mocktails aur cocktails,dono yahan serve hote hain....

baith kar chill karne ke liye lounges aur couches,dono hi available hain yahan...

aur jaisa ki VIDEOUS ke sujhav par weekend par yahan aana fix hua tha,toh isiliye aaj ye sabhi STELLARS POISON aa chuke the...

khair, MABEL ki baat sun usse ittefaq rakhte hue...


VALDIS-yup... this place is awesome man...mujhe toh ye samajh nahi aa raha ki isse checkout karne me humne itni der kaise laga di...

ALFREEN-baat toh sahi hai yaar par ab jab finally hum yahan aa hi gaye hain,toh fir what are we waiting for...

let's burn the dance floor...


MAHI aur MABEL ka haath lakad unhe kheenchti hui si shor machate hue dance floor ki taraf chal padi ALFREEN wahin VIDEOUS unhe bas piche se jaata hua dekhta raha....

filhal ye sabhi party dresses me the..

jahan ek taraf MABEL aur ALFREEN ne BODYCON DRESS with HIGH HEELS pehne hue the wahin inse ulat MAHI ne ek simple WHITE BLUE JEANS aur WHITE TANK TOP pehna hua tha.

wahin dusri taraf jahan VALDIS ne ek bohot hi bhadkila VELVET JUMPSUIT pehna hua tha par isse ulat VIDEOUS ne MAHI ki hi tarah ek simple blue jeans aur skin tight half sleeve black tshirt pehna hua tha...

aur us tshirt ke upar usne ek half maroon jacket daali hui thi jiski wajah se uske bisceps aur tricips,dono hi bohot achi tarah numaya ho rahe the..

yahi kaaran tha jis moment se VIDEOUS ne club me enter kiya tha,
tabhi se har bandi ki nazar uspar hi drool ho rahi thi....

aur is baat se VALDIS bhi anjaan nahi tha...waise baaki bandiyon ke VIDEOUS ko checkout karne se VALDIS ko koi fark nahi padta tha par bandiyon me MABEL bhi aati thi aur jab usne VIDEOUS ki nazar ko MAHI, ALFREEN aur khaaskar MABEL ko piche se checkout karte dekha toh...


VALDIS-dude....teeno hi bandiyon hot hai naa...!!!khaas kar MABEL...!!


VIDEOUS ke view point ko jaanane ke liye VALDIS ne ye baat kahi thi aur aisa toh ho nahi sakta tha ki is baare me VIDEOUS ko pata jaa ho aur isiliye...


VIDEOUS-very hot...dil karta hai khana hi bana dun in teeno ke upar...inki hotness se pak toh jaayega hi...


VIDEOUS ki baat sun ek baar uski taraf dekh...

HAHAHAHA....

zor se has diya VALDIS wahin VIDEOUS bhi halka sa muskura diya....


VALDIS-par on a serious note dude....bata naa,in teeno me.se tera preference kaun hai...???

VIDEOUS-MABEL bolunga toh tu bura toh nahi maan jaayega....


VIDEOUS ki baat sun hadbada gaya VALDIS par fir...


VALDIS-matlab...???

VIDEOUS-abbe SAVENT hai tu...choti choti baaton ko lamba kheencha suit nahi karta tujhe..

agar feelings hain tere man me MABEL ke liye toh just admit it...


VIDEOUS ki baat sun ek smile aa gayi VALDIS ke chehre aur fir....


VALDIS-tujhe kaise pata ki mujhme MABEL ke liye feelings hai..???

VIDEOUS-zuban ki khamoshi aankhon ki haqiqat ko nahi chhupa sakti...

aur filhal meri aankhen ek aise sach ko dekh rahi hai jo shayad tujhe pasand naa aaye....


saamne dance floor ki taraf dekhte
hue ye baat kahi VIDEOUS ne jisse sun jab VALDIS ki nazar saamne gayi toh usne dekha ki ek dusra STELLAR MABEL ke karib jaakar dance karte hue usse checkout kar raha hai aur ye dekh...


VALDIS-iski MAAKA..meri maal par DAAKA...


ye bol VALDIS turant dance floor ki taraf chal diya aur VIDEOUS chal pada side me bane ek lounge ki taraf....

wahin in sabke beech MAHI, ALFREEN aur MABEL apni dhun me thirak rahi thi....

VALDIS ab tak dance floor par pahunch chuka tha aur wahan pahunchte hi usne us STELLAR aur MABEL ke beech jagah banayi aur naachne lag gaya....

wahin jab MAHI ne VALDIS ko dekha par VIDEOUS ko nahi toh usne alni nazarein har taraf ghumayi aur aisa karte hi usse VIDEOUS ek side bane lounge me akela baitha hua dikha...

first time aise crowded jagah par aayi thi MAHI..usse laga tha ki usse ye pasand aayega par aisa kych hua nahi aur isiliye usne bhi dance floor se jaane ki sochi...

ALFREEN ko bata yaa fir ye kahun ki usse convince kar MAHI dance floor se utar us taraf badh gayi jahan VIDEOUS baitha tha..


MAHI-kya baat hai...is jagah ke baare me tumne hi recommend kiya tha aur ab jab hum yahan hain toh enjoy karna chhod tum yun side me chupchaap baithe ho...!!!!


MAHI ke sawal par VIDEOUS bas muskuraya aur...

VIDEOUS-come,sit....


VIDEOUS ke thik saamne waale lounge par baith...


MAHI-tumne mere sawal ka jawab nahi diya...

VIDEOUS-mujhe shor me khamoshi sunana pasand hai...


VIDEOUS ka jawab sun hairan hui MAHI aur..


MAHI-shor me bhala kaisi khamoshi sunayi de sakti hai...???

VIDEOUS-har shor ke beech ek halka sa pause hota hai aur us pause ki khamoshi behad sukoon bhari hoti hai...

try karkar dekho...meri baat samajh
bhi jaaogi aur uspar yakin bhi ho haayega...

MAHI-ok...toh ab try karne ka tarika bhi bata do..???

VIDEOUS-acha ye batao ki jitna loud ye music hai,agar itni hi zor se tumhare kaan ke paas aakar koi chillaye toh kaise lagega tumhe .??

MAHI-disturbing.... uncomfortable..

VIDEOUS-kyun???

MAHI-kyun matlab..??agar koi itne zor se kaan ke paas aakar chillaye toh irritation toh lagegi hi naa,???

VIDEOUS-galat...its all about adaptation..

jo baj raha hai,wo bhi shor hi hai..bas humare brain ne is shor ko music ka darja de diya hai..isse usne humare sukoon dene waale senses ke saath merge kar diya hai..

aur yahi kaaran hai ki tumhe ye shor irritating nahi lag raha....


VIDEOUS ki baat aur us baat ke logics aur science ko samajh MAHI kaafi impress lag rahi thi..

jo VIDEOUS ne kaha tha,wo sahi tha par us tarah se usne bhi kabhi socha nahi tha...

wahin apni baat ko aage badhata hue...


VIDEOUS-toh ab aate hai main point par...jaise SOUL AMPLIFICATION process me hum apne andar jhaank apne SOUL ko dhundte hain,thik waisa hi kuch tumhe is shor ke beech ki khamoshi ko dhundne ke liye karna hoga...

aakhen band karo apni aur mehsoos karo is shor ko..doob jao iske tarango me aur har dhwani jin hazaron nayi dwaniyon ko paida kar rahi hai,unhe sunane ki koshish karo...

un dwaniyon ke beech ek gap hai, aur wahi gap tumhari manzil hai...

yahan VIDEOUS ye saari baatein ya fir ye kahun ki process bata raha tha and at the same time, MAHI bhi un saari baaton par anusaran karte hue jaisa VIDEOUS bol raha tha,waisa hi kiye jaa rahi thi....

wo music jo is waqt POISON me baj raha tha,us music ki har chhanak ko sun aur mehsoos kar uski gehrayi me utarti jaa rahi thi MAHI...

aur jaise jaise wo is music ke depth me jaa rahi thi,waise waise uske kaano me us music ka shor bhi kam hota chala jaa raha tha..

kuch waqt beeta aur ab MAHI music ke har tarang ko uske base ke saath mehsoos karne lagi thi aur jab aisa hua toh usse un channkaron ke beech ek gap dikha..

aisa gap jisme sirf shaanti thi... MAHI apne aap hi us gap me samati chali gayi aur jab aisa hua toh...

usse aisa laga maano kisine uske garm dimag ko barf se sekh diya ho....

aisa sukoon mila usse,jo usne pehle kabhi bhi mehsoos nahi kiya tha...par tabhi...


YAAR TUM DONO YAHAN BAITHE HO.AUR MAHI,TU AANKH BAND KIYE MUSKURA KYUN RAHI HAI....???


MABEL aur ALFREEN ke saath VIDEOUS aur MAHI ke paas pahunchi ALFREEN ke mooh se ye shabd nikle jisse sun jahan VIDEOUS bas muskura diya wahin MAHI jisse khud pata nahi tha ki wo muskura rahi hai,waisi hi bani rahi jisse dekh..


ALFREEN-MAHI....kya hua tujhe....??


uske shoulder se pakad hila diya ALFREEN ne jiske turant baad hadbadati hue MAHI ki aankhen khul gayi...

aankh khulte hi MAHI ko aisa laga jaise kisine usse uske sabse khubsoorat khwab ko dekhne ke beech hi utha diya hai aur isiliye....


MAHI-tujhe 2 minute bhi chain nahi hai naa...thodi der toh shaanti se baith jaaya kar....


halki chidh se boli thi ye baat MAHI ne jisse sun pehle kuch pal toh halki chownki ALFREEN kyunki is tarah se MAHI ne pehle kabhi usse baat nahi ki thi par fir usne apne dimag ko jhatka aur....


ALFREEN-nahi hai chain mujhe..aur tu ek baat bata, hum yahan enjoy karne ke liye aaye hain,par tu yahan bhi chupchaap baith gayi hai...

aur ye tu aankhen band kiye hue muskura kyun rahi thi...???

MAHI-arre VIDEOUS ne mind relaxing aur focus ke liye ek badhiya trick batayi hai..ek kaam kar,tu bhi try kar...

ALFREEN-yahan bhi padhyai...???hume baksh de maate...hum sadharan log hai,aam janta,har kaam uske sahi waqt par hi kar sakte hain...

MABEL-haan yaar,ye focus aur mind relaxing tenchniques sikhna institution me hi thik hai..

VALDIS-exactly..khair,dance toh ho gaya,toh ab kyun naa kuch drinks order kiya jaaye..i am damn thirsty..

what say MABEL...????

MABEL-why not...kuch piya jaaye...

ALFREEN-sirf kuch nahi,kuch hard piya jaaye.. bohot din ho gaye yaar cocktail ka maza liye..chalo,aaj peete hain...

MAHI-mai nahi peene waali koi hard drink..i am ok with mocktails....

ALFREEN-oh, common MAHI...kuch nahi hota..ek baar try toh kar..dekhna,maza aa jaayega...

VALDIS-haan yaar MAHI,be a sport...

MAHI-ye sport hona bhi institution me hi suit karta hai....


MAHI ko cocktail ke liye convince karne ke liye koi kuch aur kehta ki usse pehle..


VIDEOUS-guyzzz.drinks ke liye kisiko force nahi karte..let her be...haan,agar tum sabko cocktail hi pina hai toh yahan bohot si varieties hain par mere hisaab se best hai BARLEY BEER....


(google it guyzzz..B.C ki beer hai ye aur bohot rare hai)


maine suna hai ki isme nasha bhi hai aur saath hi ye kaafi smooth bhi hai..

MABEL-tumne try ki hai...???

VIDEOUS-maine kaha maine suna hai...piya hota hai toh suna hai nahi kehta...

VALDIS-koi naa..aaj humare saath tu bhi try karle...

VIDEOUS-no thanks man... mera mood already smooth hai..mai mocktail hi lunga...

NEGRONI MOCKTAIL....


jaisa ABODES ka system tha,yahan bhi waisa hi karna tha..bas order karo,aur order ki hui chiz haazir ho jaayegi...

aur hua bhi aisa hi... VIDEOUS ke bolte hi NEGRONI MOCKTAIL uske saamne haazir ho gaya jisse dekh..

MAHI-ye kya hai...???

VIDEOUS- corriendar,cardamon pods ,grape juice aur grape fruit ke syrup se bana mocktail hai ye and its tasty....


VIDEOUS ke batate hi MAHI ne bhi ussi mocktail ko apne liye order kiya wahin baaki baaki teeno ne VIDEOUS dwara batayi cocktail BARLEY BEER ko apne liye order kiya..

aur jaise hi un teeno ne beer ki pehli sip li toh....


ALFREEN-wow yaar..u were right...its damn smooth...lag hi nahi raha ki ye hard drink hai..

MABEL-yaa man,its really good...


VIDEOUS ki choice ki taarif kar rahe thi ALFREEN par usse ye nahi pata tha ki jo drink wo pee rahi hai,uska ek effect ye bhi hai ki wo drink peene waale ke senses par turant affect daata hai...

yahi wajah thi ki sirf kuch sips me hi high hone lag gaye the wo teeno aur jab beer ka asar apne shabab par pahuncha toh...


VIDEOUS-acha ALFREEN..ek baat batao....maine kuch din pehle apne colony ke gate ke bahar tumhe do logon ke saath joki i think tumhare parents the, apne CHARIOT se utarte dekha tha...

wahan gate ke baahar ek WEAKLING SAVENT khada tha jisse tumhare parents ne hug kiya tha aur aisa karte waqt wo dono kaafi emotional bhi lag rahe the....

aur kuch dino pehle bhi maine yahin PHASE me ek jagah firse ussi SAVENT ke saath tumhare parents ko kaafi friendly hokar milte hue dekha tha...

kya wo SAVENT tum logon ka kuch lagta hai. i mean,dont get me wrong,par kya hai naa ki itna kuch suna hai maine abtak CHOSENS ke itihas ke baare me par usme kahin bhi kisi STELLAR SAVENT ya uske parents ka kisi WEAKLING ke saath connection ke baare me nahi suna..

toh isiliye just out of curiosity puch raha hun ye sab...


ALFREEN jo ab tak halki halki jhumne lagi thi,usne jaise hi VIDEOUS ke sawal ko suna toh uske dimag me RAAZ ka chehra flash hua aur...


ALFREEN RAAZ ke baare me aur apne parent's ki uske prati pyar aur care ke baare me batati chali gayi jisse sun...


VIDEOUS-oh..iska matlab kaafi pasand hai tumhare PARENTS ko RAAZ...

ALFREEN-bohot zyada....

VIDEOUS-hmm..fir toh RAAZ bhi tumhare parents ko bohot like karta hoga..???

ALFREEN-shayad....pehle mujhe aisa nahi lagta tha... pehle mujhe wo bas ek arrogant sa banda lagta tha jisse kisiki bhi feelings se koi matlab nahi tha...

par ab lagta hai ki bhale hi wo upar se khudko tough aur carefree dikhata hai par andar se kaafi alag hai wo...

aur kisike baare me toh nahi maalum par i think mere mom dad ko woh kaafi pasand karta hai...


jahan ALFREEN ki baat sun VIDEOUS ke chehre par ek choti si smile aa gayi thi wahin kyunki ab kaafi late ho chuka tha isiliye....


MAHI-chalo guys....kaafi late ho chuka hai..hume chalna chahiye....


MAHI ki baat sun sabhi ne haami bhari jiske baad club se nikal apne apne CHARIOT me baith MAHI, ALFREEN, MABEL aur VALDIS nikal gaye...

waise nikal toh VIDEOUS bhi gaya tha par naa wo apne CHARIOT me gaya tha aur naahi apne ABODE...

sabke jaane ke baad antardhyan ho gaya VIDEOUS aur sidhe pahuncha....





PLACE-WEAKLINGS STAY





KITNI AJEEB BAAT HAI NAA...ANDHERA TUMHE BHI PASAND HAI AUR ANDHERA MUJHE BHI PASAND HAI...

BAAWJUD ISKE TUMHARI UTAPPTI USSI ANDHERE KE PRATIK KO MITANE KE LIYE HUI HAI....


ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke jaane ke baad ab mai apne quater me akela tha aur filhal raat ke is pahar apne khatiya me leta kuch soch hi raha tha ki tabhi mere kaano me ye awaaz padi thi joki mere saamne khade VIDEOUS ki thi jisse sun...


MAI-tujhe apni tanhayiyon se dar lagta hai ya mere akelepan se ghabrahat jo baar baar mere saamne aakar khada ho jaata hai...

VIDEOUS-ab kya karun yaar....???bheed hazaron ki bhale hi kyun naa ho,nazar wahin theherti hai jisme aks khudka dikhta hai...

aur tere alawa mere jaisa bhala hai
kaun...???

MAI-kya baat hai..mujhe apne barabar aakne laga hai tu....khudke liye paali teri galatfehmi door hui hai yaa meri taakat ko naapne ka hunar sikh gaya hai tu...???

VIDEOUS-pura bramhand naap sakta hun mai...taakat naapna kaun si badi baat hai....

par filhal aisa kuch nahi hai...uthi ek baat zehen me,socha discuss kar lun tujhse...agar sahi lage tujhe toh us baat ko kaam banakar anjaam de denge....

MAI-sun raha hun.. bolta jaa....

VIDEOUS-ye CHOSENS, SAVENTS,unki shakti ko badhane ka tarika,aur yahan hone waala lagbhag sabkuch mere dimag ki upaj hai...

par ab jab wo waqt aa gaya hai jab mai khud bhi yahan ka ek SAVENT hun,mera dushman matlab tu bhi ek SAVENT hai toh aise me mujhe lag raha raha hai jaise mai yahan ke baaki SAVENTS ke saath anyay kar raha hun...

MAI-waah....itni fikar SAVENTS ki...!!

VIDEOUS-baat SAVENTS ki nahi hai,us starting line ki hai jahan se doud shuru hoti hai...

jiske starting par toh baaki sabhi SAVENTS khade hi hain par hum dono,pehle hi doud ke aakhri padhav jitne aage khade hain...

ab aise me bhala humse koi jeet sakta hai kya..???jeetna chhodo,yahan toh pratispraddha ki bhi gunjaayish nahi hai....

isiliye taaki competition barabar ka ho,sirf hum dono ke liye hi nahi,balki sabhi ke liye,maine kuch socha hai...

MAI-tu chahta hai ki humari shaktiyon par bandhan lag jaaye jisse hum baakiyon ki tarah ho jaayen....

humari taakat ke daayre aur unhe badhane ka proccess bhi waise hi ho jaaye jaisa SAVENTS ka hota hai...


VIDEOUS ke plan ko bhaamp maine ye baat kahi jisse sun...


VIDEOUS-dekha...maine kaha tha naa ki mere jaisa bas ek tu hi toh hai...kitni asaani se tune mere vichar,mere plan ko jaan liya...

haan,mai yahi chahta hun ki hum dono ki shaktiyan bhi baaki SAVENTS ki hi tarah ho jaayen...

humara BRAIN,humari BODY,humara BLOOD aur SOUL..in chaaron ki wo shaktiyan jo hume SAVENTS se alag karti hain,unhe hum dono ek surakshit sthaan par rakh denge...

aur fir baakiyon ki hi tarah hum bhi apni mehnat aur focus se aage badhenge....

aur ye sab isiliye kyunki mai dekhna chahta hun ki bina un capabilities ke jo hume IMMORTALS banate hain,hum dono me zyada saksham kaun hai...???

MAI-thik hai...agar safar yun aage badhana hai toh yunhi sahi...

VIDEOUS-toh fir aaj se teen din baad FORBIDDEN FOREST ke west me bane mountain me milenge hum aur wahin apni apni IMMORTAL POWERS ko seal karenge....

DEAL.....???


ye kehkar haath aage badhaya VIDEOUS ne jispar kuch pal maine usse dekha aur fir...


MAI-DEAL....


haath mila liya maine usse....

haath hamare mil chuke the jiska matlab tha ki is conversation ki aakhri lafz nikal chuke the humre mooh se...

par in sabke beech hamare man ki aakhri baat abhi nikalni baaki thi aur isiliye..



MAI man me-



jo asli baat hai,
woh tu BATAYEGA NAHI...

par saamne tere RAAZ hai,jo tere
jhaanse me kabhi AAYEGA NAHI...

tere hi khel me,kuch aisa fasega tu,
ki apne paitron ke bojh me dab,

baahar tu kabhi nikal PAAYEGA NAHI.....





VIDEOUS man me-




mujhe pata hai ki tujhe
meri baaton par YAKEEN NAHI...

par VIDEOUS ko samjhe,
itna zyada tu ZAHEEN NAHI...

jab tak tu samjhega,
baazi palat chuki hogi...

tu wo namak ban jaayega,
jiska zayka NAMKEEN NAHI....









AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....








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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF VIDEOUS FLORIN AUR MARIA SE PEHLI BAAR MILTA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ BRAWNY AUR USKE SAATH USKE PARENTS KO BHI MAARTA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-68




PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-CHOSENS



GROOMERS CLASS:-





KNOCK.... KNOCK.... KNOCK.....


subah ka waqt hai..GROOMERS class ke door par knock hua tha jisse sun class ke andar moujud teeno WHIZZ,WHIZZDER aur unke saath sabhi SAVENTS ki nazar bhi door par gayi jahan is waqt mai khada tha...

mujhe GROOMERS ke kapdo me khade ya fir ye kahun ki mujhe dekh jahan ek jhatke me ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER khade ho gaye wahin class ke baaki SAVENTS ki nazar bhi mujh par theher si gayi thi..

WEAKLINGS ki muddy shirt me bhi meri personality kam nahi dikhti thi toh fir aise me is waqt jo robe maine pehna tha,usme mai baakiyon se kayi guna zyada aakarshak lag raha tha aur ye appreciation mujhe wahan moujud har female SAVENTS ki aankhon me bakhubi dikh raha tha...

khair,mujhe dekh....


EDWINA-aao RAAZ...congrats for the upgradation...waise tum deserve karte the ye promotion...

SAVENTS,aapko jaankar hairani hogi ki RAAZ aisa pehla SAVENT hai jisne ek hi din me apne SOUL ko do baar AMPLIFY kiya hai...

in a way ye keh sakte hain ki isne ek hi din me khudko upgrade kiya hai....


meri achievement ko sun jahan baaki sabhi SAVENTS hairan ho rahe the wahin ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ko toh ye sab normal hi laga tha..

wo dono toh issi baat se khush the ki unke according unka friend unki class me aa gaya tha...

WHIZZ EDWINA ke baad WHIZZDER ROVEL aur WHIZZ PETRA ne bhi mujhe congratulate kiya aur fir baithne ko kaha..

ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER toh jaise issi baat ka intazar kar rahe the...

jaise hi mai aage badha,un dono ne hi mujhe unke saath baithne ka ishara kiya jiske baad mai un dono ke beech jaakar baith gaya...


EDWINA-RAAZ... WHIZZ HIDA ne tumhe SPELLAR aur REFINER ke baare me toh bataya hi hoga...

MAI-haan...

EDWINA-WEAKLINGS aur GROOMER'S ke SPELLARS aur REFINERS me fark hota hai...

hamari catagory me SPELLARS me
kul teen pipes hote hain jinki SPELLS ko jhelne ki shamata zyada hoti hai...

aur saath hi REFINERS ki sankhya bhi zyada hoti hai...jahan WEAKLINGS class me aap sirf ek hi REFINER ko trigger karne ki koshish kar rahe the wahin is class me aap kul teen REFINERS ko trigger karenge....

HAPPY SAD AND ANGRY....

jinke spells hain....

SAMPURN AANANDITAM...

SAMPURN ANTARDUKHAM

SAMPURN KRODHAM....

in teeno RIFINER SPELLS ko aapko use me laana sikhna hai...


PETRA-ye bohot achi baat hai ki aapne ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki tarah session ke shuruat me hi khudko upgrade kar liya hai kyunki abhi tak kisi bhi SAVENT ne kisi bhi REFINER ko trigger nahi kiya hai...

REFINER ko maamuli darje tak refine karne ke liye aapko kul 2 minute tak paused CEREBRATION me rehkar apne REFINER ko man hi man uccharit karna hoga..

agar aapne aisa kar diya toh aapke SPELLS ka level low se average pahunch jaayega....

complete power ke liye yahi process 5 minutes tak karna padta hai...

toh shuru karen....???

SAB-yes WHIZZ....

ACCHUTA-arre yaar..fir g***d fatne waali hai....saala is AANANDITAM REFINER ki toh...saala ek baar jaan aa jaaye is REFINER me...

itna bajaunga iski ga***d me ki fir kabhi pareshan nahi karega...

pichle 2 din se has has kar atdi sukhne ko aa gayi hai....

SLUNDER -abbe chup.. WHIZZ ne sun liya toh teri ga***d sooj jaani hai...

ACCHUTA-bhai jab ga***d faththi hai naa,toh uska ek side reaction ga***d ko suja bhi deta hai..aur kitna sujayegi ye...

SLUNDER-apni bakwas band kar aur concertration pura task me laga...


SLUNDER ki baat par ACCHUTA kuch kehta ki tabhi...


MAI-issi class me chipke reh second hand ka tag lagaye rehna toh focus mat kar...

par agar khudko strong bana VALDIS aur uske jaiso se takkar lena hai toh fir atdi sukhe yaa fir saans ki nali...har obstacle ko paar karna hi padega...

ACCHUTA-yahi toh baat hai...kam bolta hai par zabardast bolta hai...yaar,kuch bhi bol...teri har baat kaan se hokar dil me utarti hai....

aur logic bhi to the point hota hai..kaun si nabs kab dabani hai,ache se maalum hota hai tujhe...

ROVEL-SAVENTS...personal talks baad me bhi ho sakti hain,filhal class me concentrate karen...???


koi kuch kehta ki usse pehle hi ROVEL ki awaaz humare kaano me padi jiske baad baatein khatm aur kaam chalu ho gaya...

jahan baaki sabhi SAVENTS apni apni aankhen band kar REFINER ko man me uccharit kar uske effect se zor zor se hasne lag gaye the wahin has mai bhi raha tha par ye hasi fake thi..

reason...

filhal toh mujhe SPELL ko power dene ke liye kisi REFINER ki zaroorat thi nahi par kal ke baad aisa hone wala nahi tha...

parso se mai bhi ek normal SAVENT tha jisse un sabhi taklifon we guzarna tha jisse hokar ek SAVENT apne mukaam haasil karta hai...

par isme mere liye ek bohot badi problem thi... EMOTIONS...

wahi emotions jinse REFINERS bane the...jab wo EMOTIONS ek shakti ray me badal SOUL se connect hote the,tab SOUL ke through un emotions ke SPELL ko shakti milti thi...

par mujhme toh unme se koi bhi EMOTIONS the nahi....fir aise me bina meri aloukik shaktiyon ke kaise karunga mai apne SPELLS ko refine....

sawal mushkil tha par jawab maine already khoj liya tha..

par us jawab ko filhal mai khudme try nahi kar sakta tha....

aur wo isiliye kyunki ek toh mera vyaktiv,mera ATTITUDE mujhe aisa karne ki ijazat nahi deta tha par agar fir bhi,ek temporary base par in emotions ko try bhar karne ke liye mai inka istamal kar bhi leta toh parso se,jab mere paas wo authority nahi hogi jisse mai kuch bhi kar sakta hun,meri ye harkat ek alag hi shakti ka roop le backfire kar mujhe ek mout jaisi neend me sula degi....

waise same condition VIDEOUS ke saath bhi hai but mujhe pata hai ki jab ye normal hone ka plan uska hai toh aisa hone ke baad aani waali pareshani ka solution usne bohot pehle hi nikaal liya hoga...

khair,yahi wajah thi meri fake hasi ki aur aisa mai ye tab tak karta raha jab tak saare SAVENTS ne lagatar hasne se pet me uth rahe marod ki wajah se give nahi kar diya..

class khatm ho chuki thi aur isiliye teeno WHIZZES aur WHIZZDER class se nikal gaye aur jab aisa hua toh...


ACCHUTA-pata nahi bhai,kab hoga merge ye pehla REFINER SOUL se aur mukti milegi is dard se...

MAI-hota kuch nahi hai ACCHUTA...
karna padta hai...


meri baat par ACCHUTA kuch kahe usse pehle...


SLUNDER-arre chhodo naa yaar..jab hoga tab hoga..filhal toh i am very happy ki hum teeno wapas ek hi class me aa gaye hain...

pata hai RAAZ,hum bhale hi apartment me shift ho chuke the, life style sahi ho chuki thi par jab us din tune hume apne dost ka darja diya toh quater se nikalne ke baad bhi ek khaalipan lagta tha...

par ab tu aa gaya hai toh ab fullon dhamal karenge...


apne aadat ke ulat bilkul ACCHUTA ki tarah apni excitement dikha raha tha SLUNDER jiski baat sun...


ACCHUTA-satyavachan....aur pata hai RAAZ,do din ho gaye hume GROOMERS bane...

chaaron LUXURY GATEWAYS mile hain hume jinse hum pura PHASE explore kar sakte hain par abhi tak humne kiya nahi hai...

aaj shaam ka plan bana tha aur ab jab tu bhi saath hai toh fullon dhaamal karenge...

MAI-dhamal baad me karna..pehle ghar chalte hain....


ye bol jahan mai aage badh gaya wahin mere baad wo dono bhi mere piche ho liye aur raaste bhar dono ki patar patar on mode me hi rahi...






PLACE-HEAVEN





YE PARESHANI BHI CHIZ AJEEB HAI...

JAB BHI TERE CHEHRE PAR AATI HAI,TUJHE AUR KHUBSOORAT BANA JAATI HAI...


AVANTIKA ke chehre par dikh rahi pareshani ki silwaton ko dekh kahi thi ye baat VIKRAM ne jispar AVANTIKA ne turant khudko normal kar liya par wo ye bhul gayi thi uske saamne khade shaksh se kuch bhi chuppana mumkin nahi...


VIKRAM-kya baat hai..humari jaan humse hi RAAZ rakhne lagi....!!!

jaanbujh kar RAAZ shabd ka istemal kiya tha VIKRAM ne aur uske aisa karte hi ek baar firse AVANTIKA ke chehre par tanaav dikhne laga tha jisse dekh VIKRAM muskura diya...


AVANTIKA-aapko toh sab pata hai toh fir ye sawal kyun..???

VIKRAM-pata toh aapko bhi sabkuch hai toh fir ye tanaav kyun...???

AVANTIKA-theory aur practical me fark hota hai V.J...jo RAAZ kar raha hai uska bhale hi mujhe andaza tha par ab jab wo saari chizen wakayi ho rahi hain aur mai unhe dekh rahi hun toh khud ko pareshan hone se rok nahi paa rahi...

aur uske upar VIDEOUS... RAAZ ko harane ke chakkar me wo kuch bhi kar sakta hai....aur sabse badi baat toh ye hai ki RAAZ uski chaalon ko pehle se counter nahi karne waala....

VIKRAM-VIDEOUS toh shuru se hi upar hai AV..acha ek sawal ka jawab do...ANSH aur URJA me kya fark hai...???

AVANTIKA-ye kaise sawal hai..???

ansh matlab PART hota hai, khud ka ek PORTION aur URJA matlab ENERGY....

VIKRAM-elaborate aur differentiate karo dono ko with example...

AVANTIKA-ansh inheritance jaisa hota hai jo ki ek compulsion hai..

isme zor nahi chalta... example ke taur par aap aur ASMODEUS jo ki GOD ke ansh hai...aap dono hi unke inheritance hain jisse aap khudbhi chaahen toh deny nahi kar sakte...

wahin URJA ek POWER OF ATTORNEY ki tarah hai jisse yaa toh ek waqt ke baad artificially apne man se kisiko diya jata hai aur fir kisi aur reason ki wajah se ye POWER kisi bahar waale ke haath lag jaati hai..

aur iska best example hai RAAZ aur VIDEOUS...

jahan ek taraf VIDEOUS ko aapki aur aapke bhai ki shaktiyan ek lottery ki tarah mil gayi wahin dusri taraf RAAZ ko wo shaktiyan aapne aur ASMODEUS ne apni marzi se di...

VIKRAM-not bad AV... example acha tha... difference toh tumne bata diya ab similarity batao..???

AVANTIKA-similarity....!!!wo mujhe nahi pata par ek baat batao...ye saari baatein abhi kyun...???

VIKRAM-batata hun..par pehle similarity jaan lo....

ANSH ho yaa fir URJA,dono ke hi growth ne waqt lagta hai...jab mera janm hua tha,tabse hi mere andar har wo aloukik shakti thi jo mere father GOD ne pradan ki thi..

wahi shakti jo ASMODEUS ko bhi GOD ne apne bete ki haisiyat se di thi...

par kya mai us waqt ASMODEUS se takkar le sakta tha...kya mai usse jeet sakta tha....

bilkul nahi... ASMODEUS mujhe asaani se hara deta...aur ye isiliye tha kyunki ASMODEUS ki utappati mere janm se karodon saal pehle ki thi..

wo shaktiyan jo GOD ne usse di thi, ASMODEUS ne un shaktiyon ko waqt ke saath AMPLIFY kiya tha..nurture kiya tha..

AV,karm ache ho yaa bure,ye nishchit hai ki agar mehnat ki jaaye toh uska fal milne se GOD bhi rok nahi sakte...

bhale hi fir us fal ka natija negetive hi kyun naa ho...

ASMODEUS ne mehnet ki thi, bohot mehnat ki thi aur yahi kaaran tha ki us waqt wo mujhse kayi guna zyada shaktishaali tha...

thik ussi tarah jab RAAZ ko uski puri shakti mili jo ki hum dono bhaiyon ki urja hai,tab uski taakat utni hi thi jitni VIDEOUS ki utappati ke waqt uski thi...

par us waqt me aur abhi ke waqt me bohot lambe samay ka antaral hai...

itne waqt me BANISHMENT me rehne ke baawjud VIDEOUS ne apni shaktiyon ko AMPLIFY kiya hai,badhaya hai aur us shakti ke AURA ko RAAZ ne tabhi mehsoos kar liya tha jab wo pehli baar VIDEOUS ke saamne aaya tha...

ANSH ho ya fir URJA..shakti ko badhane me waqt lagta hi hai par jitna waqt VIDEOUS ne khudko nurture karne ke liye liya hai,utna RAAZ nahi le sakta....

aur issi kaaran usse support chahiye..aisa support jo bhale hi aankhon ko naa dikh raha ho,par uski moujudgi mehsoos ki jaa sakti ho...

achi baat ye hai ki RAAZ ko us support ke baare me dheere dheere hi sahi pata chal raha hai par jo baat RAAZ ke liye acchi hai, unfortunately kaho,ya kismat,wo baat kisi aur ke liye achi nahi ho sakti..

par yahi is kahani ki niyati hai...isse badla nahi jaa sakta...kyunki RAAZ ke saamne VIDEOUS hai..

aur VIDEOUS us LOHE ki tarah hai jisse sirf dusra LOHA hi kaat sakta hai..

aur wo LOHA RAAZ nahi hai,wo ATTITUDE hai jo RAAZ me hai...wo ATTITUDE jo VIDEOUS ke aayne ke samaan hai...

ACCHAYI,REHEMDILI,MAAFI,APNAPAN,TYAG...agar inme se ek bhi emotion ne RAAZ ke andar permanent ghar kiya,toh uske agle hi pal
wo bhi khatm ho jaayega aur uske saath ye kahani bhi..

isiliye chinta mukt hokar kahani ka maza lijiye..aur ye mat bhuliye ki jab bhi koi chiz apni hadh paar karti hai,toh us chiz ko lagam dene ke liye koi naa koi bedi taiyar rehti hi hai...

VIKRAM ki is aakhri baat ko sun AVANTIKA ka murjaya chehra achanak hi chamak utha aur...

AVANTIKA-ye main mudde ki baat aap aakhir me hi kyun karte hain...???chaliye,bataiye,kaun si lagam taiyar kar rakhi hai aapne...???

VIKRAM-lagaam taiyar toh bohot pehle hi kar li thi...bas usse kheenchne ka,lagane ka waqt ab aaya hai....ab wo lagam kya aur kaise lagega,ye khud dekh lo.....






PLACE-SOME WHERE IN UNIVERSE




PEHLE PATA HOTA KI TUM YUNHI SAAMNE AA JAAOGI TOH TUMHE DHUNDNE ME WAQT ZAAYA NAHI KARTA MAI.....


ye baat kahi thi WOOGER ne....

reason....

ek urja me badal badi tezi se WOOGER bramhanad ke beecho beech chala jaa raha tha ki tabhi usne apne saamne ek badi si shield ko mehsoos kiya aur aisa mehsoos karte hi wo turant rook gaya..

WOOGER ke rookne ke agle hi pal wo SHIELD gayab ho gayi aur jahan wo SHIELD thi,wahan ek naya aakar banane laga jo kisi jaanwar ka tha aur us jaanwar ke apne pure form me aate hi WOOGER ne ye baat kahi thi jispar...


ANIMAL-kabse jaante ho mere baare me....??

WOOGER-jabse tum jaanti ho apne baare me GRIFFIN.....


GRIFFIN...wo behad badi aur vishalkaay janwar thi jo is waqt WOOGER ke saamne khadi thi....

GRIFFIN ka structure behad alag,ajeeb aur darawana tha...jahan uski puri body ek LIONESS ki tarah thi wahin uska mooh ek CHEEL,ek EAGLE ki tarah tha par chowda tha aur saath hi kisi eagle ki hi tarah uske pankh bhi the....

(NOTE:-doston,apne man se GRIFFIN ko describe nahi kiya hai maine, ancient greek mythology ke mutabik issi naam ka jaanwar inhi features ke saath kabhi hua karta tha)

khair, WOOGER ki baat sun...


GRIFFIN-par kaise jaante ho tum mere baare me aur kyun dhund rahe the tum mujhe...???

WOOGER-kamal karti ho GRIFFIN....mere MASTER ki shakti se utpatti hui thi meri aur tumhari mistress MAHI se tumhari....

(JI HAAN DOSTON,GRIFFIN HI HAI WO ANIMAL JISNE BACHPAN SE HI MAHI KA TONGASS NATIONAL FOREST ME KHAYAL RAKHA THA)


interlinked hai hum fir kaise nahi jaaunga mai tumhare baare me....???

najaane kab se dhundte aa raha hun mai tumhe....aur dekho, finally aaj tum khud mere saamne ho...

GRIFFIN-bataya nahi tumne ki kyun dhoond rahe the tum mujhe...???

WOOGER-jawab tumhe pata hai GRIFFIN....mujhe naam aur pata chahiye us shaksh ka jiski utpatti mere MASTER aur tumhari MISTRESS ke saath hui thi...

jisse mere us tak pahunchne se pehle hi gayab kar diya gaya tha....

GRIFFIN-usse gayab isiliye kar diya gaya tha kyunki agar tum us tak pahunchte toh apni zaroorat haasil kar maar dete tum usse...

WOOGER-marna toh usse hai hi..agar us waqt hi mar jaati toh kya fark pad jaata...

GRIFFIN-fal khaane ke liye ped nahi kaata jaata...par afsos itni simple si baat tum kabhi nahi samajh paaoge....

WOOGER-mujhe wo ped khana hai jisne meri matlab ke fal ko khudme ugane ki himmat ki....

baat ko kheencho mat GRIFFIN...agar kuch aur waqt tak saans leti rehna chahti ho toh naam aur pata batao uska...

ek baat aur,tum aa toh gayi ho mere saamne ,par jaa tab tak nahi sakti jab tak mai naa chahun...


WOOGER ke aisa kehte hi GRIFFIN ke chaaron taraf ek invisible cage ban gaya tha jisse naa sirf GRIFFIN ne mehsoos kar liya tha balki wo ye bhi jaan gayi thi ki wo us cage ko tod nahi paayegi...

GRIFFIN-WOOGER...apne MASTER ki wajah se taakat toh bohot hai tumme par akal kahan bech aaye tum...???

kya mujhe ye baat pata nahi hai ki filhal mai tumhara mukabala nahi kar sakti...aur ye janane ke baad bhi agar mai tumhare saamne khud aayi hun toh maine aisa kuch soch kar hi kiya hoga naa...

ye mat bhoolo ki sirf mai hun jo tumhe kuch bhi bata sakti hun...agar mai khatm hui,toh tumhe kuch pata nahi chalega.....


GRIFFIN ki baat khatm hote hi uske chaaron taraf laga cage bhi khatm ho gaya....


WOOGER-kya chahti ho...???

GRIFFIN-kaaran jaanana chahti hun....wo kaaran jiski wajah se tumne ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke bekasoor MAATA PITAH ko maar diya...

WOOGER-correction dear....maine nahi maara unhe..unhone khud apni jaan li thi...

GRIFFIN-bandookh chalane waala haath bhale koi bhi ho,par us bandhook ko un haathon me pahunchane waala hi asli kasoorwaar hota hai..

aur tumne toh shart hi aisi rakhi thi ki us waqt unhe apni zindagi mout se choti hi lagi thi...ab bina baat ghumaye kaaran bataoge yaa fir mai jaaun...???


ek lambi saans chhodi WOOGER ne aur fir wo bohot si baatein jo ho chuki hain aur jinhe hona hai,with reason batata chala gaya GRIFFIN ko jisse sun....


GRIFFIN-tumhare MASTER ab kisi bhi SAVENT ko aur unse related kisi bhi vyakti ko nahi maarenge....

agar unhone maara toh unki wo shakti jiske balbute wo VIDEOUS ko takkar de sakte hain,khatm ho jaayegi...

agar ye waada karo toh mai tumhe us shaksh ka naam bataungi aur uska chehra dikhaungi jiski talash tumhe hai...

WOOGER-apni aukad se zyada demand nahi kar rahi ho tum...

GRIFFIN-meri aukaad kya hai,ye sahi waqt aane par pata chal jaayega tumhe....filhal maine jo shart rakhi hai,kya tum raazi ho usse....!!!


GRIFFIN ki baat par kuch seconds dekhta raha WOOGER usse aur fir...


WOOGER-tumne kaha sirf naam bataogi aur chehra dikhaogi....itni badi kurbaani sirf ek naam aur chehre ke badle,kuch zyada nahi ho gaya....

itne bade bramhand me sirf ek naam aur chehre ke dum par kisiko dhundna reth ke dher me sui dhundne jaisa hai...

GRIFFIN-naam aur chehra,kisi raah chalte ko nahi,mai tumhe bata rahi hun..aur sirf naam aur chehre ke zariye kisiko kaise dhunda jaata hai,itna hunar toh hai hi tumme...

haan,usme waqt toh lagega hi,par itni mehnat toh kar hi loge tum...

WOOGER-mere MASTER ke paas ALOUKIK shaktiyan hain..aur aisi shaktiyan khatm nahi hoti GRIFFIN...

haan, mai tumse ye waada kar sakta hun ki agar mere MASTER ne kisi SAVENT yaa usse jude kisi shaksh ko maara toh wo shaktiyan mere MASTER ka tyag kar dengi...


WOOGER ki baat sun GRIFFIN ki aankhen sochne ke andaz me choti ho gayi...

usse maalum tha ki WOOGER jhut nahi bol raha hai.. ALOUKIK shaktiyan wakayi khatm nahi hoti bas unka thikana badal jaata hai toh aise me RAAZ ki shaktiyon ko bas usse alag hi kiya jaa sakta hai...

uske dimag me ye baat bhi aayi ki RAAZ waada tod kisiko maarkar aisa risk lega nahi kyunki ek baar aisi shaktiyan alag hui toh unhe wapas paana next to impossible hai aur agar aisa kisi tarah ho bhi jaaye toh usse pehle hi VIDEOUS apne ek maatr dushman ko khatm kar dega jiska matlab tha game over....

saare ganit lagane ke baad....


GRIFFIN-manzoor hai....par iski kya guarantee ki RAAZ apne waade se nahi mukrega...!!!

WOOGER-hadh me raho GRIFFIN..mat bhulo ki tumhare saamne WOOGER khada hai...

is bramhaand ka sabse khatarnaak CREATURE....

mujhe ya mere MASTER ko kuch bhi karne ke liye jhuthi aad lene ki zaroorat nahi hai...

agar MASTER ka dil kare toh tumhari MISTRESS ko ek pal nahi lagega apni aakhri saans ke safar tak pahunchne ke liye... isiliye dont tempt me....


gurrate hue kahi thi ye saari baat WOOGER ne jisse sun andar hi andar hil gayi thi GRIFFIN...


GRIFFIN-thik hai...mai jaa rahi hun..aur mere gayab hoti hi tumhe naam aur chehra,dono pata chal jaayega...


aisa bolne ke agle hi pal gayab ho gayi GRIFFIN aur uske gayab hote hi jahan wo khadi thi,wahan dhuen se ek chehra banane laga tha aur us chehre ke thik neeche ek naam aane laga tha jiske pure hote hi...


WOOGER-


tera naam mere kaano me ab
GUNJTA RAHEGA.....

ye WOOGER tere chehre ko ab har jagah DHUNDTA RAHEGA....

baazi chaalu hai,
GAME ON HAI...

mai aa raha hun wahan,
jahan chuppi hui tu......FALLON hai......










AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....









AAPKA APNA V...J....
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF RAAZ GROOMERS CLASS KO JOIN KARTA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF WOOGER GRIFFIN SE EK DEAL KE TAHAT FALLON KA NAAM AUR CHEHRA JAAN JAATA HAI.

AB AAGE:-


CHAPTER-2

(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)


UPDATE-69


PLANET-ELYSIAN

PLACE-WEAKLING STAY





KNOCK.....KNOCK..... KNOCK......

door toh hota hai nahi WEAKLINGS quater me...ek wooden halt jaisi cheez khud ped kaat kar banayi thi SHALTON ne aur usse hi quater ke darwaze ki jagah laga diya tha..

ussi wooden halt ko knock kiya tha abhi abhi MAHI ne....

shaam ka waqt hai.... institution se aane ke kuch der baad hi MAHI apne CHARIOT me baith uske gps system me WEAKLINGS STAY ka adress daal yahan pahunchi thi...

aana toh wo kal hi chahti par uske BRAWNY ke liye shortcut maarkar ABODE chale jaane ke baad ALFREEN aur MABEL jo gate par uska intazar kar rahe the,wo wapas aayi aur unhone usse INSTITUTION ke kayi jagahon par dhunda par jab wo nahi mili toh wo dono INSTITUTION se nikal uske ABODE chale gaye jahan MAHI unhe mil gayi....

jab un dono ne MAHI se yun akele aane ka kaaran pucha toh usne un dono se jhuth keh diya ki SOVEREIGN'S ne usse bulaya tha....

par fir un dono ne MAHI ke ghar hi lunch kiya aur lunch ke baad bhi wahin rooki rahi jis wajah se MAHI kal yahan nahi aa paayi thi..

par aaj INSTITUTION se aate hi lunch kar wo turant apne CHARIOT me baith WEAKLINGS STAY ki taraf nikal gayi....

aur yahan pahunch yahan ke pehle quater ki us wooden halt par knock kiya tha usne...

wahin knock ki awaaz sun andar apne pati ke sirahane NAOMI uthi aur darwaze ki taraf chal padi......


MAHI-namaste aunty....


NAOMI ke apne saamne aate hi greet kiya MAHI ne jispar...


NAOMI-namaste....ji aap...???

MAHI-mera naam MAHI hai....mai..

NAOMI-oh,toh tum ho MAHI....


MAHI ki baat beech me hi kaatkar khushi se MAHI ka naam leti hui NAOMI aage badhi aur MAHI ke gale lag gayi...

NAOMI ke is sudden reaction se pehle toh MAHI halki hairan hui par fir usse andaza ho gaya ki zaroor ye BRAWNY ka hi quater hai aur saamne khadi lady ko BRAWNY ne uske baare me bataya hoga...


NAOMI-mai BRAWNY ki maa hun...thanks beta....aapne jo kuch bhi mere bete ke liye kiya uske liye mai hamesha aapki ehsaanmand rahungi...

MAHI-please aunty ,thanks mat boliye....mai wahi kiya hai jo mujhe karna chahiye tha aur jo mere bas me bhi tha...aur please aap badi hain mujhse,mujhe aap tum kehkar hi pukariye..mujhe acha lagega...


MAHI ki baat sun bade pyar se haath fera uske sir par NAOMI ne....


NAOMI-aao beta andar aao....


ye bol ek taraf hatkar side diya NAOMI ne MAHI ko jiske baad MAHI quater ke andar daakhil hui...

aur andar daakhil ho quater ki haalat dekh usse bohot bura feel hua BRAWNY aur uske parents ke liye...

wahin andar ghus jab MAHI ki nazar saamne khatiya par lete aadmi par padi toh woh us aadmi ki haalat dekh halki chownki...

reason..

saamne SHALTON us khatiya par lete hue the..unke dono haath halke halke mude hue the jisse uth rahe asahaniya dard ko zabt karne ki naakamiyab koshish karte hue SHALTON ke mooh se rook rook kar karah foot rahi thi..

wahin unke khatiye ke baaju me neeche baitha BRAWNY apne baap ki haalat par aansu bahaye jaa raha tha...

apne saamne khadi MAHI ko dekh BRAWNY ne turant apne aansu poche aur zabardasti muskurane ki koshish karne laga...

quater ki jarjar haalat se zyada kharab BRAWNY ke pitah ki haalat lag rahi thi jisse dekh MAHI ko unpar behad daya aayi...


MAHI-namaste uncle...mai MAHI...mai bhi BRAWNY ki hi tarah ek SAVENT hun...


MAHI ki baat sun dard me bhi halka sa muskura diye SHALTON jispar...


MAHI- BRAWNY,uncle ke haath ko kya hua...???


MAHI ke sawal par BRAWNY kuch kehta ki usse pehle...


NAOMI-us ladke ne tod diye inke haath jisne kal BRAWNY ko maara tha....


BRAWNY RAAZ ka naam nahi lena chahta tha.. RAAZ ka wo roop,aur wo beraham ATTITUDE dekh wo samajh gaya tha ki usse jitna door raho,utna sahi hai par teer kaman se nikal chuka tha...

usse kuch kehne se pehle hi uski maaa ne sach ugal diya tha...

wahin NAOMI ki baat sun hairani se palti unki taraf MAHI par piche palat jab uski nazar NAOMI ke chehre par padi toh usse aage kuch puchne ki zaroorat padi hi nahi....

reason..

is waqt NAOMI ke chehre par dukh,nafrat,tadap,bebasi sabhi bhaav clear dikh rahe the jisse dekh wo samajh gayi thi ki RAAZ ne hi ye sab kiya hai...

NAOMI ki baat sun aur unke facial expressions ko dekh MAHI ka chehra aur uska dil RAAZ ke liye nafrat se bhar gaya tha aur usne tay kar liya ki wo RAAZ ko nahi chhodegi...

wahin MAHI ke expressions ko dekh uske dil me chal rahi baaton ko guess kar liya BRAWNY ne aur isiliye...


BRAWNY-please MAHI..meri request hai tumse ki tum RAAZ se behes ya ladhayi mat karna...


BRAWNY ki baat par MAHI kuch kehne ko hui par tabhi...


BRAWNY-please MAHI...tumhe bhi pata hai ki ye INSTITUTION normal nahi hai aur naahi yahan ke rules...

yahan good,bad jaisa kuch nahi hai....kamzoron ko bully karna toh jaise yahan compulsory hai....

toh aise me kis kis se bachaogi tum mujhe...aur jahan tak baat RAAZ ki hai,toh MAHI, mere liye yaa fir kisike liye bhi please tum usse mat bhidna....

usse ulajhna sahi nahi hai....


BRAWNY ki is aakhri baat ko sun hairan ho gayi MAHI aur hona bhi chahiye... MAHI apne PHASE ki best SAVENT thi...sabse strong thi aur ye baat BRAWNY bhi jaanta tha fir bhi wo usse aisa keh raha tha toh aise me hairani toh hogi hai..

aur MAHI ki is hairani ko BRAWNY bhi samajh gaya tha isiliye....


BRAWNY-mai jaanta hun ki tum kya soch rahi ho MAHI..par yakin maano mera,mai sach keh raha hun...

RAAZ se ulajhne ka result kabhi bhi sahi nahi ho sakta...maine uski aankhon me dekha hai...ek khamosh paagal darinda hai wo...

jiski taakat ka shayad andaza bhi nahi lagaya jaa sakta....mujhe maalum hai ki tum abhi is PHASE ki sabse strong SAVENT ho..

first PHASE me SOUL ko 8 percent AMPLIFICATION karna bohot badi baat hai...tum se pehle toh aisa kisine kiya hi nahi...

par jaise tum aisi pehli ho jisne first PHASE me apne SOUL ko 8 percent tak AMPLIFY kiya hai thik waise hi RAAZ aisa pehla SAVENT hai jisne ek hi din me 2 baar apne SOUL ko AMPLIFY kiya hai...

zara socho,agar last PHASE me usne actively classes me participate kiya hota toh kya wo tumse aage nahi hota...

tumhe lag raha hoga ki jisne mera mooh suja diya, mere pitah ka hath tod diya,mai uski tarafdaari kyun kar raha hun...

ye tarafdaari nahi hai MAHI,sach hai..aur sach se bhaagna sabse badi bewakufi hoti hai...

aisa nahi hai ki tum usse maar nahi sakti..mai jaanta ki tum ye kar logi..par uske baad kya...

tumne meri treatment ki,yahan mera haal dekhne aayi,isse pata chalta hai ki you have a good SOUL..

but RAAZ ka SOUL dark hai.. bohot dark...agar tumne usse hara bhi diya,usse maar diya toh bhi tum ye ek limit me hi karogi...

par maine mehsoos kiya hai uski aankhon me uski intensity ko...he is a DEVIL....

maar khaane me baad wo chup nahi baithega...he will make himself strong enough to handle you...

aur jab aisa hoga then he will come back for you...aur wo jab aayega toh sirf tumhe nuksaan nahi pahunchayega...

wo har us shaksh ko taklif dega jo tumhare kareeb honge...wo mujhe aur meri family ko bhi nahi chhodega...

so,why to set a base for self destruction...jaane do MAHI,leave it...


BRAWNY ki har baat bade dhyan se sun rahi thi MAHI....usse bhi ye jaankar bohot hairani hui ki RAAZ ne ek hi din me 2 baar apne SOUL ko AMPLIFY kiya hai...

usse pata tha ki aisa karna is not a joke...khud usne bhi pichle PHASE me aisa karne ki sochi thi par har AMPLIFICATION ke baad body me itni shakti tak nahi hoti ki dobara apne CEREBRATION ko pause tak kiya jaa sake toh aise SOUL AMPLIFY karna toh bohot door ki baat hai...

par RAAZ ne aisa kiya hai...is baat se usse RAAZ ki us raat kahi hui wo baat yaad aa gayi ki jab usne kaha tha ki uska competition MAHI, ALFREEN se hai hi nahi...

waise darti toh MAHI kisi bhi haalat me kisise thi nahi.... BRAWNY ki baat sunane ke baad bhi usse RAAZ se dar toh laga nahi tha par haan, BRAWNY ki wo baat jisme usne kaha ki wo sirf usse nahi balki uske chahne waalon ko bhi nuksaan pahunchayega,wo baat sochne waali thi...

khair, BRAWNY ki baat sun....


MAHI-itni intellectual,deep aur door ki soch hai tumhari then how come ki tum abhi tak apne SOUL ko trigger nahi kar paaye ho...

mujhe lagta hai bas confidence ki kami hai tumme..usse jagao,then sky is just the limit for u
my friend...

jahan MAHI ki baat sun BRAWNY bas muskura diya wahin apne bete ki taarif sun NAOMI aur SHALTON behad khush hue...


NAOMI-beta,aap baitho..i will make some tea for you...

MAHI-no thanks AUNTY...i am good... mujhe jaana chahiye,mere friends mere ABODE me aate hi honge..

par jaane se pehle, ELUSORY....


MAHI ke naam pukarte hi ELUSORY uske saamne prakat ho gaya jisse dekh MAHI toh normal hi rahi but NAOMI, aur SHALTON,dono hi us ajeebo gareeb praani ko dekhkar hairan ho gaye the...


MAHI-ye ek ELUSORY hai..har STELLAR ki dekhbhal ke liye allot hota hai ye...kal BRAWNY ka ilaaj issi ne kiya tha..

ELUSORY,kya tum uncle ke haath ko thik kar sakte ho...???


MAHI ki baat sun ELUSORY SHALTON ki taraf badha aur aisa hote dekh SHALTON halka ghabra gaye the...


MAHI-relax uncle..isse ek doctor ki tarah samjhiye...


SHALTON ke paas pahunch unke halke mude haath ko touch kiya ELUSORY ne aur....


ELUSORY-inke elbow joint bone diaplace ho gaye hain...inhe sahi jagah baitha strap tape laga dene se within a week ye theek ho jaayenge...


ELUSORY ki baat sun MAHI kuch kehti,usse pehle hi...


NAOMI-kya sach me...toh fir jo karna pade karo par please inhe theek kar do...

MAHI-relax aunty...uncle bilkul theek ho jaayenge..


apni baat keh MAHI ne ELUSORY ko dekh haan me sir hilaya...


ab ELUSORY MAHI ka personal slave tha aur isiliye NAOMI ki baat sunane le baad bhi wo chupchaap khada MAHI ke approval ka wait kar raha tha aur jab MAHI ne haan kaha toh uske agle hi pal..


KDAKKKK....AHHHHHH....


ELUSORY ne un joint bones ko jo displaced the,unhe ek jhatke me unki sahi jagah baitha diya aur uske aisa karte hi SHALTON ki cheekh gunj uthi thi...


ELUSORY-relax....aapke bones apni sahi jagah par aa chuke hain ab bas unme strap tapes laga dun,fir mera kaam khatm...

apni baat keh ELUSORY ne apne hatheli aage ki aur uske aisa karte hi wahan strap tapes aa gayi jiske baad ELUSORY ne wo transparent strap tapes salike se SHALTON ke effected areas par laga diya...

kuch hi seconds me ye kaam ho gaya tha jiske baad....


ELUSORY-done...aapka pain kuch minutes me hi kam ho jaayega par fir bhi kuch dino tak apne haathon me pressure kam dijiyega....

anything else MISTRESS....???

MAHI-thanks ELUSORY....tum jaa sakti ho....


MAHI ki baat sun apne sir ko halka sa jhuka ELUSORY gayab ho gaya aur aisa hone ke baad...


MAHI-ok uncle,aunty....i will take your leave now..


MAHI ki baat khatm hi hui thi ki NAOMI aankhon me aansu aur haathon ko jod uske saamne khadi ho gayi jisse dekh...


MAHI-please aunty..aisa mat kijiye...jo mere bas me tha,maine bas utna hi kiya....

SHALTON-bas me har kisike kuch naa kuch hota hi hai beta... par har koi tumhare jaisa hota nahi hai...

MAHI-duniya ko jaise dekhenge uncle,wo waise hi lagegi...bohot negetives hain aas paas,par focus agar positives me rakha jaaye toh life smooth ho jaati hai...


apni baat keh NAOMI,SHALTON aur BRAWNY ko bye bol nikal gayi MAHI par jaane se pehle uske kahe aakhri shabd sun muskura uthe wo teeno....





PLACE-THE MEET





OH....MY.....GOD......


ek saath kayi ladkiyon ke mooh se aur bohot si ladkiyon ke man me gunj uthi ye baat....

reason.....

THE MEET naam ki is jagah par just abhi abhi ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke saath kadam rakha tha maine...

simple slim fit black tshirt aur blue denims me tha mai par i guess itna hi kaafi tha...

shaam ka waqt hai...kal institution se jaane ke baad thoda late nikle the hum teeno PHASE exploration ke liye issi liye waqt ki kami ko dhyan me rakh kal sirf shopping ki thi humne aur dusri jagah par jaane ka plan aaj ka banaya tha aur plan ke mutabhik aaj hum yahan hain,THE MEET me....

THE MEET...ye ek indoor sports aur get togethers ke liye perfect jagah hai...

youngsters ki bheed hone ke baawjud zyada shor nahi hota yahan aur isiliye hi humne yaa fir mai ye kahun ki SLUNDER ne zor dekar is jagah ko suggest kiya tha...

anyways, bandiyan mujhe taad rahi thi,par expressions ACCHUTA de raha tha....


ACCHUTA-bhai,ye toh jannat hai yaar...kasam se,yahin bas jaana hai maine...

SLUNDER-haan ball boy ki noukri par lag jaa..teri personality ko suit bhi karega...

ACCHUTA-bas, khol diya apne mooh ka gutter...saale,wo position tujhe suit karta hai mujhe nahi...

apna thikana toh in bandiyon ki aankhen hain, jinme doob gothe khaunga mai...

SLUNDER-saale kitna dillusional hai tu..ye saari bandiyon RAAZ ko dekh rahi hai,teri sadi hui shakal ko nahi...

ACCHUTA-abbe baap ko mat samjha saale..pata hai mujhe ki in sabki aankhen isse hi scan kar rahi hain...

par bhai,khaana kitna hi tasty ho,khaane ka ek limit toh hota hi hai naa..... RAAZ ka bhi hoga..uske baad toh apna hi number hai...

SLUNDER-chhii,kitni gandi soch hai teri..ladkiyon ko tu khaana keh raha hai...???

ACCHUTA-abbe khaane se pet bharta hai..par in bandiyon ko dekhne se toh mera dil,meri aatma tak bhar jaa rahi hai...

MAI-ye saari bakwas karne ke liye yahan aane ki kya zaroorat thi....???flat me kar lete toh kharcha bach jaata..


SLUNDER ke jawab se pehle maine apni baat kahi jisse sun..


ACCHUTA-haan bhai,tujhe toh hamari baatein bakwas hi lagengi...

saari khubsoorati upar waale ne tujhe gift kar di hai, options ki kami nahi hai tere paas..jisko bhi dekhega,usse teri ho jaani hai..

impression jamane ki mehnat,kisiko is chehre ke saath apna banane ki zehmat toh hum jaiso ke liye hi hai....


aakhri baat halki serious hokar kahi thi ACCHUTA ne jispar...


MAI-chehre toh kayi hain,jo KHUBSOORAT hain.....

par ishq agar surat se ho,toh ye ishara hai ki ROOH TABAAH ho chuki hai...


simple aur straight baat kahi thi maine par is baat ko sun ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki aankhen badi ho gayi...

unke nazar se maine kaafi gehri baat kahi thi...

khair,un dono ko surprised chhod mai bowling alley ki taraf chal pada aur mere piche piche wo dono bhi aane lage....

is dauran zyadatar bandiyan jinki nazar kuch der pehle mujhpar hi thi,ab wo sab apne groups me busy ho gaye the par ab bhi kuch ki nazar mujhpar hi thi aur in KUCH me se se ek thi MORANA jo jabse mai aaya tha,mujhe hi checkout kar rahi thi aur isiliye...


MORANA-mai aati hun...


uske baaju mai baithe ANWIR se ye keh MORANA meri taraf badh gayi...

MORANA ko mujhe checkout karna,ye baat uske baaju mai baithe ANWIR se chhupi nahi thi aur wo mujhse hi milne nikli thi,iska bhi usse andaza tha par filhal wo shaant hi raha....

khair,yahan mai bowling alley par pahunch chuka tha aur saath hi mere piche pahunch chuke the ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER aur jab unki nazar alley par gayi toh...


SLUNDER-what the fuck....???ye kaisi bowling hai...????


alley ko dekhte hi ye baat nikli SLUNDER ke mooh se...

reason....

yahan ki bowling alley normal bowling se alag thi....

jahan normal bowling me 10 bowling pins ek saath lage rehte hain wahin yahan maamla alag tha..

yahan bhi waise toh 10 pins hi the par un pins ki rakhawat bohot different thi...

zigsag position me woh saare pins alag one by one rakhe hue the... bowling alley ki lambayi aur chowdayi bhi normal alley se zyada thi....

SLUNDER ke baad jab ACCHUTA ki nazar hamare side me lage bowling rules ke paper par gayi toh...


ACCHUTA-ab ye kya chutiyaapa hai...???saala iske toh niyam bhi alag hain....


ACCHUTA ke baad jab SLUNDER ki nazar us rule par jo ki sirf ek hi tha,uspar gayi toh wo bhi haran hua..

aur wo isiliye kyunki niyam is bowling ka ye tha ki jahan normal bowling me kul do chances milte the wahin isme sirf ek hi chance milta tha...

ek toh pins ki ajeeb positions aur uske upar sirf ek chance....ye dono hi chizen is game ko aur tough kar rahi thi...

anyways, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke reactions ko dekh....


MAI-tum dono baar baar bhul jaate ho kya ki tum SAVENTS ho... chizen, competition agar tough nahi hui toh fir SAVENT hone ka kya matlab...


CHIZEN TOUGH HO NAA HO, ATTITUDE TOUGH HONA CHAHIYE... AND I HOPE KI TUMME WO HAI...


ACCHUTA ke piche se aayi thi ye awaaz jisse sun jab wo dono palte toh unki aankhen badi ho gayi...

unke saamne ek bohot hi khubsoorat bandi khadi thi jo chalte hue aage badhi aur un dono ko cross kar mere saamne aakar khadi ho gayi....


MORANA-hye... MORANA.....


haath aage badhte hue meri aankhon me dekh kahi ye baat MORANA ne jispar maine bhi uska haath mila liya aur....


MAI-RAAZ.....


mere haathon ki sakhti ko mehsoos kar...


MORANA-strong touch...waise aisa kya chhupaya hai tumne ki naam bhi RAAZ rakhna pada....!!!!

MAI-bata diya toh fir chhupane ka kya faayda....???waise ek RAAZ toh tumhare naam me bhi hai..

MORANA-matlab....!!!

MAI-tumhara naam,MORANA.... GODDESS OF DEATH hota hai iska matlab.....RAAZ hi toh hua naa ye..i am sure zyada logon ko nahi pata hoga ye....

(SLAVIC MYTHOLOGY KE ANUSAAR)


MORANA-zyada..!!!tum pehle ho jisne ye figure out kiya hai and i must say i am impressed....

ek hi PLANET se ek hi batch me ek saath teen SAVENTS ka ek saath aana jinme se ek tum the,fir achanak mid PHASE se gayab ho jaana,fir by default WEAKLINGS me select hona,aur fir ek hi din me do baar apne SOUL ko AMPLIFY kar GROOMERS me select hona,ab samajh aa raha hai ki kyun tum mujhe first time dikhte hi alag lage the....

MAI-impressed toh mai hun.mere baare me kaafi kuch jaanti hi tum...

MORANA-well i have my sources..aur jo chiz MORANA ko pasand ho,uske baare me sab kuch jaanane ka haq sirf MORANA ko hi hai...

MAI-CHIZZ...!!!mai koi chiz nahi hun MORANA....mai wo RAAZ hun jiske chhupe rehne se mout milti hai aur khul jaane se zindagi chali jaati hai...

MORANA-agar mai kahun ki mai is RAAZ par marna chahti hun toh...!!


behad lusty tarike se meri aankhon me jhaank MORANA ne kahi thi ye baat jisse mere saath piche se kaan lagaye ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER bhi sun rahe the...


ACCHUTA-bhai.... RAAZ ka iman dole naa dole,mera sab kuch dol gaya hai...

kasam se,jitne seducing way me ye RAAZ se baat kar rahi hai,agar uska 1 percent bhi ye mujhpar apply kar de toh khushi khushi mar jaaunga mai...

SLUNDER-haan,teri khushi dikh bhi rahi hai tere pant me....


SLUNDER ki baat sun ACCHUTA ki nazar turant apne neeche gayi jahan is waqt halka erection saaf dikh raha tha jisse turant adjust karte hue...


ACCHUTA-abbe saale,itni hot ladki khadi hai saamne aur tu mere pant par nazar gadaye hai...saare purze toh thik hai naa....


wahan ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER apni behes me lag gaye the aur yahan apni baat keh mere haathon ko jo ab bhi MORANA ne chhoda nahi tha,usse halka aur dabate hue wo mujhe dekhe jaa rahi thi...

kuch der tak MORANA ko dekh mai kuch kehne ko hua par tabhi...


HYE RAAZ......


ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke piche se ye awaaz aayi thi joki MABEL ki thi jisse sun meri nazar ke saath MORANA ka sir bhi us awaaz ki taraf ghuma...

hamare saamne MABEL ke saath ALFREEN aur MAHI khade the....

kuch der pehle THE MEET me enter karte hi nazar ghumati hui MABEL ne mujhe dekha tha...

kyunki MORANA ka sir meri taraf tha isiliye usse usne nahi pehchaanana tha...

meri taraf point kar usne ALFREEN, MAHI aur VALDIS ko mujhe dikhaya aur meri taraf aane lagi aur MABEL ke saath ALFREEN aur MAHI bhi meri taraf badh gaye the...

MAHI toh mujhse baat karna nahi chahti thi par agar wo nahi aati toh usse ALFREEN aur MABEL ko jhute reasons dene padte aur isiliye wo bhi unke saath holi...

aur VALDIS,usse toh mujhe dekh ghussa aa gaya tha par kar wo kuch filhal sakta tha nahi isiliye washroom ka bol wo dusri taraf chal diya tha...

khair,jahan MORANA ko dekh MABEL, ALFREEN aur MAHI,un teeno ke chehron par hi naapasandi ke bhaav dikhne lage wahin MORANA ko bhi unhe dekhna acha nahi laga.....

par MORANA jaanti thi ki bhale hi filhal meri catagory MAHI, ALFREEN aur MABEL se alag thi,par the toh hum PHASE MATES..

uske upar MAHI,ALFREEN aur mai toh ek hi PLANET se the toh aise me usse mere saamne un teeno se bhidna yaa unhe taunt karna thik nahi laga isiliye usne wahan se filhal jaane ki sochi par jo yunhi chali jaaye toh fir wo MORANA toh ho nahi sakti aur isiliye...


MORANA-ok RAAZ...it was very lovely to finally meet you...but filhal mujhe jaana hai...khair,ab toh mulakatein hoti hi rahengi....


aakhir baat keh MORANA aage badhi aur.....


MUAAH.....


apne honth se halka sa signature kar diya usne mera gaal par jiske baad ek baar aur halka sa daba usne mere haathon ko chhoda aur ek nazar un teeno girls par daal jo mujhe aur MORANA ko aankhen faade dekh rahe the,ek look de,wo chali gayi aur uske jaate hi...


ALFREEN-lagta hai pops ko batana padega ki unka ye ladka bada ho gaya hai aur ab tumhara ghar basane ka waqt aa gaya hai....

MAI-tumhare is sade joke par hasun yaa sharmaun,ye bhi bata do...

MABEL-RAAZ...tum MORANA ko kabse jaante ho...???

MAI-paanch minute se...

MAB-what...???

MAI-arre first time mila hun...

MABEL-aur first meeting me hi usne tumhe kiss bhi kar diya...

MAI-kyun...???kya hamari first meeting me maine tumhare haathon ko nahi chuma tha...???


mere counter sawal ko sun halki hadbada gayi MABEL...


ALFREEN-but RAAZ..??she is not a good girl....

MAHI dheere se-toh ye kaun sa accha hai....


MAHI ne dheere se kahi ye baat jisse samajh naa paane ki wajah se....


ALFREEN-kya kaha...???

MAHI-maine kaha ki it's his life yaar....jisse chaahe pasand kare...

ALFREEN-arre,aise kaise...???tujhe bhi pata hai ki she is not a nice girl...

MAI-girls,ye faaltu ke discussions band karo aur Chalo,lets bowl....

ACCHUTA, SLUNDER....wahan kya kar rahe ho,yahan aao....


ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER jo MORANA ka mujhe kiss karne ko ab bhi digest karne me lage hue the,meri awaaz se jaisi unki tandra tuti aur wo dono mere paas aa gaye...

mere topic change karne se girls ka aadha dhyan toh MORANA waale baat se hath hi gaya tha,baaki ka adha mere ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke unse intro karane ke baad hath gaya...

intro ke dauran bowling area me jahan mai ek bowl lekar khada tha,wahan apni bowl lene pahunchi MAHI toh....


MAI-baat wahi karni chahiye jisse dobara puche jaane par badalna naa pade...


meri baat sun chownki MAHI...usse andaza ho gaya tha ki mai uski ussi baat ke baare me keh raha hun jo pehle usne dheere se kahi thi par fir ALFREEN ke puchne se usne baat ko badal diya tha....

usse is baat par hairani ho rahi thi ki jo baat uske baaju me khadi ALFREEN sun nahi paayi thi usse mai jo halka door khada tha, kaise sun liya tha...???!!!

khair, jawab toh usse dena hi tha aur isiliye...


MAHI-sawal agar sidhe tumne pucha hota toh jawab mera kabhi nahi badalta...

par unfortunately,sawal ALFREEN ka tha..ussi ALFREEN ka jiske maa baap tumhe apna beta maante hai...

aur agar ALFREEN ke through bhi unhe tumhare asli chehre ke baare me pata chal gaya toh unhe bohot bura lagega aur yahi nahi chahti mai...

MAI-tumhare chahne naa chahne se koi fark padta hi nahi hai...jo hona hai,wo toh hoga hi...

sahi,galat,acha bura se upar uthne ka hunar nahi hai tumme...aur bina us hunar ke tumhari awaaz aur us awaaz se nikli kisi bhi baat ka koi saar nahi....

lakshya agar clear naa ho,toh nishana kitna bhi clear kyun naa ho,wo thik se lagega nahi par agar laskhya behte paani ki tarah saaf hai, toh nishana lagane ki zaroorat hi nahi...

KHADGGGH.....


apni baat keh bina saamne bowling alley ko dekhe apne haath me pakdi bowl ko feka maine us alley me jiske baad wo bowl zig zag pattern me ghumta hua ek ke baad ek pure 10 pins se takraya aur

TNNNNN....


score board par ek bada sa X ban gaya jiska matlab tha STRIKE.....


jahan mere perfect shot ko dekh ALFREEN aur MABEL ne clap kiya,aur unka saath diya ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ne wahin MAHI ki aankhen hairat se badi hi gayi....


reason....

jis score ko haasil karne ke liye usse bohot focus ke saath bowl karna padta tha usse maine bina dekhe hi achieve kar liya tha...

aur aisa hote dekh uske dimag me meri kuch seconds pehle kahi baat gunj uthi ki....

AGAR LAKSHYA BEHTE PAANI KI TARAH SAAF HO,TOH NISHANA LAGANE KI ZAROORAT HI NAHI....





PLACE-FORBIDDEN FOREST....





SIR NEECHE KYUN JHUKE HUE HAIN TUM TEENO KE.....????


THE THREE DEVOTEES.....

yahi kehlate the wo teeno jo is waqt VIDEOUS ke saamne sir neeche jhukaye khade the aur unki issi harkat ko dekh sawal pucha tha VIDEOUS ne....

THE THREE DEVOTEES....VIDEOUS ke andar panapte BLACK ENERGY se bane burayi ke teen aise pratik hain jinki rachna VIDEOUS ne aaj se 25 hazar saal pehle ki thi...

kyun,ye aage pata chalega....

VIDEOUS ke sawal ko sun....


1ST DEVOTEE-aapke aadesh par wo kaam jo is INSTITUTION ki shuruat se nirantar hum karte aaye hain,pehli baar aisa hua hai ki hum us kaam ko karne me asafal rahe hain...

aur isse zyada sharm ki baat aur kya ho sakti hai...???

VIDEOUS-sharm auraton ka gehna hota hai...ye gehna hum jaise paapiyon par acha nahi lagega isiliye isse utar kar fek do...

aur rahi baat tumhare kaarya me viphal hone ki toh MAHI baaki SAVENTS se alag hai.....

kuch hai usme jo usse har manupalation se bachata hai... isiliye hi tum teeno ka AURA uspar nahi chhad saka...toh us baare me sochna chhodo....


(NOTE:-yaad hoga aapko doston ki MAHI ke SOUL trigger hone ke baad raat ko uske ABODE me koi uske dimag me ghusne ki koshish kar raha tha..wo koi ye teeno hi the...)

apni baat kehne ke baad VIDEOUS ki nazar apne second DEVOTEE ki taraf gayi jiske chehre par bhi sawal the aur isiliye...


VIDEOUS-us din RAAZ ne mujhe dhakka dekar gira diya tha,aur mai gir bhi gaya tha,aisa kaise ho gaya...???yahi janana chahte ho...???


us dusre DEVOTEE ko dekh kahi ye baat VIDEOUS ne jispar...


2ND DEVOTEE-maaf kijiyega LORD....mai ye sab sochna nahi chahta tha par baar baar wo drishya mere dimag me ghumte rehta hai...

VIDEOUS-ek baat hamesha yaad rakhna... VIDEOUS ka shatru VIDEOUS se sirf tabhi aage jaa sakta hai jab khud VIDEOUS aisa chahta ho...


RAAZ ne mujhe giraya nahi tha,maine usse khudko girane diya tha...

tumne sirf wahi dekha jo wahan moujud baakiyon ne dekha tha..wahi samjha jitna mai samjhana chahta tha...

jo tumhari aankhen nahi dekh paayin,tumhari buddhi nahi samajh paayi wo hai ye....


apni baat keh VIDEOUS ne apne dono haath aage kiye aur jab aisa hua toh....


uske right haath me ek behad strong urja banane lagi aur left me prakat hua ESPRIT CRYSTAL...

URJA aur ESPRIT CRYSTAL ke haathon me prakat hote hi VIDEOUS ne kuch baatein batayi jisse sun teeno DEVOTEES man hi man apne LORD ki buddhi ke aage natmastakh ho gaye...

wo BLACK ENERGY jisse un teeno ka astitv tha,wo bhi ek baar firse VIDEOUS ki kaayal ho gayi....

khair,puri baat bata...


VIDEOUS-mai kriya aarambh kar raha hun.....apni puri shakti ke upyog se mujhe chaaron taraf lapeto....

jo kriya VIDEOUS karne wala tha, usme RAAZ se related bhi chiz thi jisse VIDEOUS ke upyog me laate hi usse pata chal jaana tha isiliye VIDEOUS ne apne DEVOTEES ko chakkar lagane ko kaha tha kyunki un teeno ke aisa karne se har urja aur uski shakti ek ghere me bandh jaati aur kisiko kuch pata nahi chalta....

VIDEOUS ke aisa kehte hi SOUL FORM me khudko badal wo teeno DEVOTEES hi ek dusre se jud VIDEOUS ke chaaron taraf tezi se ghumne lage aur jab aisa hua toh...


SAMPLAVAYATI SHAKTIYEM.....


apni aankhen band kar apne dono haathon ko paas laate hue is DARK SPELL ko uccharit kiya VIDEOUS ne jiske baad ek behad strong force uske haathon me banane lagi...

ye force itni zyada thi ki teeno DEVOTEES jo is waqt VIDEOUS ke chaaron taraf light speed se ghum rahe the,wo bhi thartharane lage the...

unki formation dagmane lagi thi jisse wo apni puri shakti nichod tutne se rok rahe the...

itna hi nahi, SPELL bolte hue jaise jaise VIDEOUS ke dono haath paas aa rahe the,waise waise VIDEOUS ke jabde sakht hote jaa rahe the...

usse apne dono hi haathon me behad bhaar mehsoos ho raha tha jisse kisi tarah sambhale hue SPELL uccharit kar wo paas laaye jaa raha tha..

kuch seconds yunhi chala par fir....

wo URJA aur ASPRIT CRYSTAL judkar ek ho gaye aur aisa hote hi VIDEOUS ne un dono ke mishran ko apne saamne rakhi ek CHEEZ ke upar kar diya aur aisa hote hi us CHIZ ne saharsh us CRYSTEL ko khudme samet liya...

kriya khtam ho chuki thi aur aisa hote hi teeno DEVOTEES ka naa sirf ghumna rook gaya balki...


DHAMMM...DHAMMM...DHAMMM


ek ke baad ek teeno zamin par gire aur behosh ho gaye aur aisa hote dekh muskura utha VIDEOUS aur....



VIDEOUS-


tohfa taiyar hai,sahi waqt par
tujhe DUNGA...

kisne socha tha ki kahani ka aisa
bhaag bhi mai LIKHUNGA.....

jitna dil kare,aage badhta jaa tu,


baazi tu jeet,kyunki JUNG sirf
mai JEETUNGA....











AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....









AAPKA APNA V...J.....
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WTF kya super insane god Lev ka update likh siya bhai apake pairo ko chhune ka man kar raha aur morons ne kya line boli thi aur mahi ko kya jawab diya raz ne aur aisi to kahi bate hain aur mujhe to attitude wali aur raaz ki kahi gayi shakal wali bate to sabse achhi lagi

chehre toh kayi hain,jo KHUBSOORAT hain.....

par ishq agar surat se ho,toh ye ishara hai ki ROOH TABAAH ho chuki hai...

Yeh line to sach main god Lev ki thi bhai it is to good...
 
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REASONS..... RAAZ ka ek target hai aur us target ko haasil karne ke liye wo kuch bhi karega...

satyavachan....

ye kahani ka ek angle hai...par dusra angle...uska kya..???kaam kitna bhi bada ho,uske hone naa hone se future bhale hi kitna hi hinder kyun naa ho raha ho,par us kaam ka theka sirf RAAZ ka hai,kisi aur kaa nahi...

ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER...agar in dono se ye kaha jaaye ki ek maksad ke taur par tumhare mom dad ko marna padega,toh kaisa reaction hona chahiye unka..



wo dono carodon ko marte hue dekh sakte hain, par apno ki kisi bhi kaam ke liye bali nahi chadha sakenge.

aur jaise shayad RAAZ galat nhi hai,waise wo dono bhi nhi h...ab is galat sahi ke parameter par jo situation ke hisab se logic hoga,wo hoga aur jo KARMA hona chahiye,wo bhi hoga...


aap readers ke liye is kahani se kisi ek kirdaar se attach hona normal baat hai..

par mere liye har character equal hai aur isiliye mere hisaab se jo bhi justification answer hoga,wo har kirdaar ke hisse me aayega.. bas waqt ki baat hai...
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Toh bhai mahi ke bare main kya sochate hain aap aur sabse badi bat brawny ke saath raaz ka aisa galat attitude aur use motivate hone se rokna yeh sab mere dimag main ghum raha hain raas kis waqt ka intezar kar raha hain pata nahi magar mujhe itna to lagta hain brawny normal nahi hain jab tak aap brawny ke bare main clear kuchh bol nahi dete main hamesha brawny ke bare main puchhata rahunga bhai.
 
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