Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

[Chinturocky]

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[Avinashraj]

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[Ashish120]

Superb update bhai....

 

[Jamesleon]

AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, HIDA AUR BRAWNY KAAFI STRONG HO CHUKE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF MALL ME MAHI RAAZ KO USKI HELP KARNE KE LIYE THANKS KEHTI HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-99



PLANET-BLACK SPACE


PLACE-THE LAKE OF OBLIVION







SAMASTAM BHADIKARAHAM

COMPLETE SURRENDER






kaale labade me dhaka ek aks apne chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes me dhyan kendrit kar is SPELL ko lagatar uccharit kar raha tha..

aur ye uccharan uske mooh se pichle 1 mahine se lagatar nikal raa tha...

bina khaaye piye pure devotion ke saath paalthi maar baithe us aks ke aas paas ka pura mahoul andhakar se dhaka hua tha....

THE LACKE OF OBLIVION....

antariksh ke ek aise bhaag me bana ek badi si ujaad jagah jahan surya ki halki si kiran tak nahi pahunch sakti..

infact surya hi kya,is andheri jagah ke upar bane space me koi taara tak nahi jagmaga raha tha...

kaali shaktiyon se bhare patharon ki anginat shrinkhala se bani thi ye ujaad jaga..

is puri jagah ke theek beech ek behad bada sa lake tha aur jiska naam OBLIVION tha aur issi lake par naam pada tha is puri jagah ka...

un asankhya kaale patharon se bani is duniya ke theek beech me kaajal se bhi kaale paani se bhari thi ye lake jiske upar hamesha ek kohra numa SHIELD lagi rehti thi aur us kohre ka colour bhi kaala hi tha...

ussi lake ke kirane tha wo aks jiske mooh se mantra uccharan ho rahe the...

sir us aks ka neeche jhuka hua tha jiske upar wo kaala labada jaise uske chehre ki asliyat par parda daale hue tha....

ek mahine se lagatar enchant ho rahe SPELL ki wajah se us aks ke pure sharir se ek invisible energy ray nikal saamne lake ki taraf jaa rahi thi jisse uske sarhad par hi roke hue the woh kohre...

aur is wajah se ek ajeeb sa jakdan bhi feel ho raha tha us aksh ko apne sharir me par phir bhi pure man se bina ho rahi taklif ko beech me laa uske mooh se SPELL uccharit ho hi raha tha...

aur uske is focus ko woh jheel aur uske aage laga kohra dekh bhi raha tha aur shayad test bhi kar raha tha..

pichle ek mahine se bina result milne par bhi lagatar mantra uccharan kar rahe us aks se behad khush ho chuki thi woh jheel aur usme samayi behisaab kaali shaktiyan....

aur isiliye....

achanak se hi us kohre numa shield ne us aks ke invisible energy rays ke liye raasta de diya aur aisa hote hi woh energy rays aage badhi aur agle hi pal uska sangam ho gaya us kaali jheel ke paani se aur jab aisa hua toh....

ek saath do chizen hui..

pehli...

halke halke vibrations hone lagi us jheel ne maano woh us energy rays ke through us aks ki taakat ko jaanch raha ho....

dusri...

jaise hi energy rays ne un kohre numa shield ko penetrate kiya,toh us aks ke mooh se nikal raha mantra uccharan rook gaya..

reason....

uska maksad pura ho chuka tha...uske dedication se khush ho chuki thi OBLIVION aur isiliye aaj ek mahine baad SPELL uccharan band kar wo aks apne CEREBRATION process se bahar aaya aur uski aankhen khul gayi..

aankh khol usne apne sir par laga labada hataya aur jab aisa hua toh us andhakar se doobi duniye me pehla halka prakash dikha joki us aks ke chehre ke gorepan ka tha..

chehra saamne aa chuka tha aur ye chehre jaana pehchaanana tha...ye aks thi MABBA....

ji haan doston MABBA....jo yahan pichle 1 mahine se apne shakti ko ek alag level par pahunchane ke liye lagatar tapasya kar rahi thi...

aur isiliye hi ye pichle ek mahine se CHOSENS me nahi thi..

aur aisa ye kar rahi thi SEBIL ke kehne par jo pehle hi yahan aa chuki thi aur khudko yahan ki kaali shaktiyon ko samarpit kar shakti haasil kar chuki thi..

darasal pehle un paanch WICKEDS ki buri haalat jo ki toh waise RAAZ ne thi par credit le gayi thi nakabposh urf HIDA,aur phir MABBA ka paala paltu snake jo ki kaali shaktiyon ke ek chota par behadh shaktishaali symbol tha,aur jisse khud SEBIL ne hi apni chhoti behen ko gift kiya tha,jab uske patan ke baare me SEBIL ko pata chala toh MABBA ke ulat usne josh nahi balki hosh se kaam sambhala...

jahan MABBA bas RAAZ aur uske doston se badla lene ka soch rahi thi wahin SEBIL chahti thi ki takraav hone se pehle MABBA ki shakti badhayi jaaye...

shatru ko kam nahi aankna chahiye,ye samajhti thi SEBIL aur isiliye hi usne MABBA ko yahan bheja tha taaki EXERTION we pehle MABBA ki shakti aur badh jaaye...

aur MABBA kabhi bhi apni big sister ki baat nahi kaaththi thi aur isiliye woh yahan pahunchi..

bhale MABBA jaisi bhi thi,par is sach ko jhultaya nahi jaa sakta ki PHASE 2 ki sabse shaktishaali WHIZZ thi woh aur jiska matlab tha ki lagan aur focus ki kami nahi thi MABBA me aur ek mahine tak lagatar yahan ke retual aur proccess ko follow kar is baat ko saabit bhi kar diya tha usne..

khair, jaise hi MABBA ne apna labada hataya aur uska face saamne aaya toh uski haalat uske tapasya ko bayan karne lagi..

bhare hue chehre ki maalkin MABBA ka filhal face dull aur pura sukh gaya tha...

aankhen andar dhas chuki thi jinme zamane bhar ki thakan bhi dikh rahi thi...

kaale labade me dhaka sharir bhi kaafi patla lag raha tha..

paused CEREBRATION me rehne ki wajah se MABBA ko apne external haalat ka andaza nahi tha par ab jab uski aankhen khul chuki thi toh woh khudko behad kamzor feel karne lagi thi..

par itne negetives ke baad bhi uski kamzor aankhon ke beech ek chamak thi..

challenge pura karne ko chamak..

aur ussi chamak ke saath woh saamne jheel ke us bhaag ki taraf dekh rahi thi jahan halke halke vibrations ho rahe the aur tabhi...

BOOM......

un vibrations ke beech ek dhamaka hua us jagah par jiske baad ussi jagah se ek behadh gaadhi paani se bani BLACK RAY nikal MABBA ki taraf badhi aur agle hi pal...

AAAHHHHH.......

MABBA ki tez cheekh se gunj utha woh shaant mohoul....

woh ray MABEL ke seeene waali jagah se takra sidhe uske sharir ke andar jaane laga tha..

wahin us ray ke force se MABBA piche palat neeche girne ko hui par woh giri nahi...

talwar ki tarah MABBA ke seene ko bhedthe hue woh paani se bani ray uske aar paar nikal piche patthar par gadh chuke the aur MABBA cheekhne ke baad aadhe baithe,aadhe lete position me marne si haalat me padi hui thi...

ye tha external view..par iske saath hi ek internal view jo bhi maine cheez thi,woh bhi ho rahi thi...

darasal woh paani numa ray MABBA ke sharir ke andar ghus pehle uske khoon ko aur phir baaki teeno AMPLIFICATION modes ko apne surrender me le rahi thi aur usko aisa karne se chaaron hi AMPLIFICATION modes rok nahi rahe the..

reason...

spell toh yaad hi hoga.. COMPLETE SURRENDER....

MABBA ke chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes ne pehle hi un paani numa shakti ke aage surrender kar diya tha...

kuch hi pal me MABBA ke chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes par kabza ho chuka tha BLACK ENERGY ka jiska matlab tha ki ab MABBA human hote hue bhi ban chuki thi ek DEVIL....

process pura hote hi woh BLACK ENERGY ke rays gayab ho gaye aur aisa hote hi MABBA ki aankhen bhi khul gayi..

aankh khulne ke agle hi pal ek jhatke me khadi ho chuki thi MABBA woh bhi apne purane yaa phir ye kahun ki pehle se bhi zyada aakarshak swaroop me..

aankhon ki putliyan puri kaali ho chuki thi jiske andar chhuppi beshumar shaktiyon ko ek baar khudh hi mehsoos kar ek pal ke liye apni aankhen band ki usne aur jab wapas kholi thi woh normal ho chuki thi..

sirf dikh sab normal raha tha par is waqt uske sharir ka har bhaag abnormal aur taakat se bhar chuka tha..

ek baar apni shaktiyon ko phirse mehsoos kar MABBA ke aankhon ke aage RAAZ ka chehra ghuma jisse uski aankhon me darindagi dikhne lagi aur phir is naye MABBA ke hile honth..


MABBA-

jo chot tune di, woh bharne ki jagah gehra ZAKHM HO GAYI....

zindagi apni jee li tune, MOUT ki di hui tujhe mohollat ab KHATM HO GAYI.....






PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-FORBIDDEN FOREST







MADIPARITO SHAKTIYEM

AMASS POWERS



raat ke aakhri pahar FORBIDDEN FOREST ke antim daayre me jahan yahan ke sabse bade aur ghane pedon ka jhund laga hua hai,uske beecho beecho baith tha ek shaksh aur lagatar uccharit karta jaa raha ta is SPELL ko...

us shaksh ke chaaron taraf kaali chaadaron ka ghera tha joki asal me ek aisa diwar tha jisse koi bhi laangh nahi sakta tha...

aankhen band kiye ekaagrata ke peak par pahunch woh shaksh jab bhi SPELL uccharit karta toh kahin door se wo kaali par chamakdaar urja aakar uske sharir me sama jaati...

pichle 3 ghanton se yunhi baitha SPELL uccharan kar raha tha VIDEOUS...

jee haan doston,ye VIDEOUS hi tha aur jo kaali shaktiyon ki abhedya diwar uske chaaron taraf bani hui thi,woh uske teeno DEVOTEES ne banayi thi jisse SOVEREIGN'S tak dekh toh sakte the,par tod nahi sakte the...

aur baat karen VIDEOUS dwara uccharit hone waale SPELL ki aur uske uccharit hote hi us kaali chamakdaar urja ki jo VIDEOUS ke sharir me lagatar samaye jaa rahi thi toh darasal chosens
ke pure itihaas me jitne bhi layak SAVENTS rahe the yaa fir to bhi precise,jitne bhi laayak WICKEDS rahe the, VIDEOUS ne un sabhi SAVENTS ki shaktiyon ki urja ko copy kar ek jagah par sanjo kar rakha tha..

kisi aise waqt ke liye jab agar usse uske rachaye khel me apni aloukik shaktiyon ko chhupana pade,tab bhi shaktiyon ki kami naa rahe uske paas....

par abhi tak toh iski zaroorat padi nahi thi VIDEOUS ko par subah shuru hone EXERTION me padne waali thi...

aur khaaskar tab jab VIDEOUS ne ye gour kiya tha ki RAAZ kaafi tezi se growth kar raha hai..

aur woh growth ek talented SAVENT ke liye bhi aascharya janak hai par jo bhi ho,ab tak toh bhale hi uska aur RAAZ ka shakti pradarshan ke liye aamna saamna hua nahi tha par kal aisa hone waala tha...

aur apne ek maatra pratidwandi se bhala kaise peeche reh sakta tha VIDEOUS aur isiliye sadiyon se sanjoye in shaktiyon ko apne chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes me transfer kar raha tha VIDEOUS....

teen ghanton ke lagatar enchantment ke baad aahirkar saare chuppaye WICKED SAVENTS urja VIDEOUS ke chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes ke saath merge ho chuki thi aur jab aisa hua toh VIDEOUS ki aankhen khul gayi...

jabse apni aloukik shaktiyon ka temporary tyag kiya tha VIDEOUS ne,uske baad aaj pehli baar woh khudme taakat ka sanchar mehsoos kar raha tha..

haan,ye toh sach hai ki uske aloukik shaktiyon ke aage in shakityon ki koi haisiyat nahi thi par ek sach ye bhi hai ki ek SAVENT ke hisaab se ye shaktiyan GOD LEVEL ki thi jinhe 1000 se bhi zyada kaabil aur shaktishaali SAVENT milkar bhi hara nahi sakte the...

aur clearly bataun toh is waqt VIDEOUS ke andar ek normal level ke ke ANGEL jitni powers aa chuki thi....

khair,aankhen kholne ke baad ek chamak dikhne lagi thi VIDEOUS ki aankhen me..

RAAZ se apne nirnayak takraav se pehle ek practice match ke jaise is SAVENT waale avatar me takrane ki chamak...

ek baad phirse aankhen band kar in nayi shaktiyon ko dobara mehsoos kar usne aankhen kholi aur...


VIDEOUS-


shikar karne se pehle chalo apne shikar ke saath zara KHEL LE.....

mout jab dunga,tab dunga par pehle, tu us mout ke dard ko JHEL LE....







PLACE-THE PROHIBITED SPACE






ANTARMANAM DRISHYAM

INSIGHT VIEW



SPELL uccharan ke saath hi mai apne hi andar pahunch chuka tha...

behad tez prakash ke beech meri urja mere sharir ke har bhaag me ghum rahi thi....

ye tez prakash asal me woh emotions stable power thi jisse pichle ek mahine ke lagatar mehnat aur focus se maine haasil kiya tha......

is prakashit safar me tezi se meri urja har taraf dekhti hui aage badh rahi thi ki tabhi achanak...

ek jagah pahunch woh ruk gayi aur aisa hote hi mujhe khushi bhi toh hui par usse zyada hairani hui..

reason....

mere heart ke paas ek aisi jagah thi jahan ab tak bilkul bhi roshni nahi hui thi jiska matlab tha ki woh bhaag abhi stable nahi hua tha..

ussi jagah par woh divya roshni chamak rahi thi jisse dhund raha tha mai...

aur isiliye hi mujhe khushi hui thi...

par hairani ki baat ye thi ki baaki ke woh sabhi bhaag jo pehle unstable the,unme chippi asimit urja hamesha se hi mehsoos ki thi maine par aaj jab is bhaag par mai pahuncha toh paaya aur mehsoos kiya ki is khaali bhaag me urja bhi gayab thi...

bilkil khaali sthan tha ye jagah...khair, jaise hi us khaali sthan par chamak rahe GODLY urja ki kiran ko dekha maine toh ek pal ke liye woh urja aur tez chamki aur phir gayab ho gayi...

par gayab hone se pehle woh mere paanchon AMPLIFICATION modes joki abhi ek dusre se jude hue tha,unhe taakat ki khuraak de chuki thi aur isiliye us ray ke gayab hote hi meri aankh bhi khul gayi...

aur aisa hote hi mere chehre par smile aa gayi....

reason...

mere filhal chaaron humraaz HIDA, BRAWNY, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ek jagah par khade the jiska matlab tha ki EXERTION se pehle ki unki antim practice complete ho chuki thi...

ek saath khade woh chaaron unke saamne rakhe chiz ko joki SPELLER tha,usse ghur rahe the aur apne apne sir ko khuja us alag se dikhne waale SPELLAR ko samajhne ko koshish bhi kar rahe the...

alag kyun,aayiye khud hi jaan lijiye...


MAI-jo jawab saamne se hi mil jaana hai,usse jaanane ke liye sir kyun khapana..???


un chaaron ke paas pahunch maine apni baat kahi jispar...


ACCHUTA-bhai, karamat hi tune aisi ki hai ki dimag khapana laazmi si baat hai...


HIDA-tumne apne, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER,teeno ke hi SPELLER ko mila kar ek SPELLAR banaya hai naa,kyun....????

MAI-tum chaaron ke powers kaafi nourish ho chuke hain..

agar aise me ek hi SPELLER ko tum chaaron ko powers examine karne ke liye rakha jaaye toh power measure karne waala liquid RED se bhar aayega joki POWERFUL shaktiyon ka smarak hai par waisi power toh yahan ke WICKEDS aur MORALS ke paas bhi hoti hai..

par ab jab maine teen SPELLARS ko ek kiya hai toh aise me YELLOW aur ORANGE liquid joki weak aur average power dikhate hain,woh bahar aayenge hi nahi..

is three in one SPELLAR ke tubes me sirf red liquid hi dikhega aur upar uththe hue tum chaaron ki shaktiyon ko check karega aur naapega..

ACCHUTA-yaar,ye toh badhiya idea hai...par kya iska ye matlab hai ki agar is modified SPELLAR ki jagah normal SPELLAR hota toh usme hamari shaktiyon se GREY liquid joki invisible strength ka prateek hai,usse bhar jaata..


ACCHUTA ki baat par mai halke se muskura diya aur..


MAI-INVINSIBLE STRENTH sirf powerful METAPHYSICAL capabilities se nahi mil sakti ACCHUTA...

uske liye paanchon AMPLIFICATION modes ka ek hokar pure AMPLIFICATION form me aana zaroori hai..

aisa hote hi WHITE aur BLACK ENERGY ka mishran banta hai sharir me jisse shakti 1000 guna tak badh jaati hai...

aur aisa gift SAVENTS ko nahi mila hai ab tak...

isiliye filhal us strength ko bhul jaao aur jitni taakat haasil ki hai,usse aazmao...

waise HIDA, BRAWNY ko SPELLAR aur uske kaam karne ke tarike ke baare me bata diya hai naa tumne...

HIDA-haan,bata diya hai...

MAI- SHATIYEM PARVUJAKTE....

yahi SPELL hai jisse apni apni shakti naapi jaati hai..ek ek karke saamne aao aur SPELLAR ki taraf haath kar SPELL bolo...

apni baat karte hue hi mai thoda aage badh gaya aur kareeb 10 metre un chaaron door pahunch maine SPELLAR ko hawa me hi latka diya aur uske baaju me hi khada ho gaya..

wahin meri baat sun SLUNDER ne sabse pehle apne haath aage kiye aur.....


SHAKTIYEM PARVUJAKTE.....

SPELL uccharit hote hi uske haathon se uske chaaron AMPLIFICATION ki power uske haath me merge hokar prakat hui jiske agle hi pal...

ek gaadhi WHITE ray uske haathon se nikal sidhe SPELLAR par padi jiske baad SPELLAR ke nichle tath par RED LIQUID dikhne laga jo dheere dheere upar uth raha tha...

pure SPELLAR par percentage ke hisaab se marking bhi thi jisse dheere dheere wo red liquid cross karta hua upar uthne laga tha..

wahin SLUNDER ke jabde aapas me fase hue the jiska arth tha ki usne apni shakti ka pura zor lagaya hua hai..

woh liquid upar uththa hua ab tak 75 percent tak pahunch chuka tha par uske baad uske growth rook gayi aur isiliye maine apna haath upar kiya jiske baad SLUNDER ne apna haath niche kar liya...


MAI-not bad SLUNDER...growth rate kaafi achi hai tumhari....

agar ye normal SPELLAR hota toh sirf 5 second me hi red liquid pura bhar chuka hota aur aisa filhal koi WICKED ya MORAL bhi nahi kar sakta....

meri baat sun khush ho gaya tha SLUNDER...

khair, SLUNDER ke baad ACCHUTA,uske baad HIDA aur last me BRAWNY ne bhi apni apni shakti ke limit ko examine kiya jiska result utna hi raha jitna ki SLUNDER ka tha..

is extra power consuming SPELLAR ko bhi in sabne 75 percent tak bhar diya tha aur aisa karna kahin se bhi sadharan baat nahi thi...

ye chaaron wakayi kaafi shaktishaali ho chuke the aur us taakat ka namuna kal EXERTION me pura CHOSENS dekhne waala tha...

khair,woh chaaron ne hi apne apne power test kar liye the aur isiliye SPELLAR ko wapas rakhne ke liye maine uski taraf haath badhaya hi tha ki tabhi...


ACCHUTA-bhai yaar ek request hai.. tune toh hum sabki power dekhi bhi hai aur parkhi bhi hai..

hum chaaron bhi ek baar teri GROWTH dekhna chahte hain...


ACCHUTA ne jo kaha,wahi request baaki teeno ke bhi aankh me dikha mujhe aur isiliye mai bhi muskurate hue unke paas aaya,wapas muda aur apne haath SPELLAR ki taraf kar diye jisse dekh woh chaaron khush ho gaye...


SHATIYEM PARVUJAKTE...


mere mooh se SPELL uccharit hua jiske baad jab meri shakti ka ray mere haathon se nikal SPELLAR par pada toh woh chaaron hi turant SPELLAR ke paas pahunch gaye..

un chaaron ki hi tarah meri shakti se bhi us SPELLAR ke andar red liquid bharne laga jo upar uththe hue lagbhag 80 percent par rook gaya aur aisa hote hi maine apna haath niche kar liya..


SLUNDER-waah yaar..tera normal power bhi humse zyada hi hai..

ACCHUTA-haan par sirf 5 percent.. RAAZ,dekhna,hum chaaron bhi bohot jald tere power level tak pahunch hi jaayenge...

MAI-mujhe intezar rahega us pal ka...chalo ab niklo tum sab. time ho gaya hai...

ACCHUTA-tu nahi aayega saath..

MAI-filhal yahan aur training ki zaroorat nahi hai tum chaaron ko..

isiliye is jagah ko bhi ab yahan hone ki zaroorat nahi hai..mai isse shrink karke aaunga...


ab aur yahan training nahi hogi,ye sun woh chaaron ek pal ke liye udaas hue,par phir khudko normal kar bahar exit ki taraf badh gaye..

par phir BRAWNY achanak palta aur mere sane aakar khada hua aur..


BRAWNY-thanks RAAZ...tarika bhale kuch bhi raha ho,help tumne meri bohot ki hai...tumhari wajah se hi looser ka tag hat paaya hai mujhse...

MAI-hata nahi hai abhi woh tag..kal sabke saamne including tumhare mom dad,tum hataoge us tag ko...

jo zindagi tum khudke aur apne parents ke liye chahte the,kal ke baad woh mil jaayega tumhe...

bas apna focus mat khona...


meri baat sun jasbaati hi gaya tha BRAWNY par isse pehle ki woh kuch aur kahe...


MAI-jao BRAWNY aur apni bhaavnaaon ko niyantran me rakhna bhi sikho...

hunar aur nikhar jaayega...

meri taraf ek baar aur thanks waali nazar se dekh BRAWNY palat SPACE se bahar nikal gaya..

aur uske jaate hi..


DHANUR-apne doston ko toh apni shakti ki limit dikha di,ek baar mujhe bhi dikha do par asli limit...

woh jhuti limit nahi jisse dekha aur sach samjha hai un chaaron ne..


DHANUR ki baat par ek baar muskuraya mai aur....


MAI- SHAKTIYEM PARVUJAKTE...


ek bar phirse SPELL uccharit hua mere mooh se jiske sirf 5 second baad hi SPELLAR pura 100 percent tak red liquid se bhar gaya tha aur uske baad shuru hua SPELLAR me kampan jisse dekh aur mehsoos kar..


DHANUR-adbhudh....


DHANUR ke aisa kehte hi maine apne haath ko niche kar liya jiske baad..


DHANUR-tum lagbhag taiyar ho RAAZ...mera kaam khatm hua par mai EXERTION dekhna chahta hun isiliye kal competition ke baad mai tumse aur karm lok se hamesha ke liye vida lunga...


MAI-zaroor....waise EXERTION ka wait toh mujhe bhi hai...

KHEL rach khudko sarvashreshta toh ghoshit kar diya hai VIDEOUS ne par ab....




dekhna usse bhi hai jo kaam mere KIRDAAR KA HAI.....

ye khel ab takkar ka hoga,pata mera bhi ab TAAKAT ke BAZAAR KA HAI....


jeetne ka maza bhi aana hi hai,khaas kar tab......


jab intezar logon ko,meri HAAR KA HAI.....















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI...........















AAPKA APNA V.....J

Aakhri me aaj jo shayri likhi hena kasm se ek dam lajawb he vj4u Bhai

Bhot hi besari se Exertion compitistion ka intezar rahega

pata nahi kiski har hogi ya jit
but lAgta he

khani fir se moad legi
❤❤❤❤❤❤❤​

 

[Iron Man]

AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, HIDA AUR BRAWNY KAAFI STRONG HO CHUKE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF MALL ME MAHI RAAZ KO USKI HELP KARNE KE LIYE THANKS KEHTI HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-99



PLANET-BLACK SPACE


PLACE-THE LAKE OF OBLIVION







SAMASTAM BHADIKARAHAM

COMPLETE SURRENDER






kaale labade me dhaka ek aks apne chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes me dhyan kendrit kar is SPELL ko lagatar uccharit kar raha tha..

aur ye uccharan uske mooh se pichle 1 mahine se lagatar nikal raa tha...

bina khaaye piye pure devotion ke saath paalthi maar baithe us aks ke aas paas ka pura mahoul andhakar se dhaka hua tha....

THE LACKE OF OBLIVION....

antariksh ke ek aise bhaag me bana ek badi si ujaad jagah jahan surya ki halki si kiran tak nahi pahunch sakti..

infact surya hi kya,is andheri jagah ke upar bane space me koi taara tak nahi jagmaga raha tha...

kaali shaktiyon se bhare patharon ki anginat shrinkhala se bani thi ye ujaad jaga..

is puri jagah ke theek beech ek behad bada sa lake tha aur jiska naam OBLIVION tha aur issi lake par naam pada tha is puri jagah ka...

un asankhya kaale patharon se bani is duniya ke theek beech me kaajal se bhi kaale paani se bhari thi ye lake jiske upar hamesha ek kohra numa SHIELD lagi rehti thi aur us kohre ka colour bhi kaala hi tha...

ussi lake ke kirane tha wo aks jiske mooh se mantra uccharan ho rahe the...

sir us aks ka neeche jhuka hua tha jiske upar wo kaala labada jaise uske chehre ki asliyat par parda daale hue tha....

ek mahine se lagatar enchant ho rahe SPELL ki wajah se us aks ke pure sharir se ek invisible energy ray nikal saamne lake ki taraf jaa rahi thi jisse uske sarhad par hi roke hue the woh kohre...

aur is wajah se ek ajeeb sa jakdan bhi feel ho raha tha us aksh ko apne sharir me par phir bhi pure man se bina ho rahi taklif ko beech me laa uske mooh se SPELL uccharit ho hi raha tha...

aur uske is focus ko woh jheel aur uske aage laga kohra dekh bhi raha tha aur shayad test bhi kar raha tha..

pichle ek mahine se bina result milne par bhi lagatar mantra uccharan kar rahe us aks se behad khush ho chuki thi woh jheel aur usme samayi behisaab kaali shaktiyan....

aur isiliye....

achanak se hi us kohre numa shield ne us aks ke invisible energy rays ke liye raasta de diya aur aisa hote hi woh energy rays aage badhi aur agle hi pal uska sangam ho gaya us kaali jheel ke paani se aur jab aisa hua toh....

ek saath do chizen hui..

pehli...

halke halke vibrations hone lagi us jheel ne maano woh us energy rays ke through us aks ki taakat ko jaanch raha ho....

dusri...

jaise hi energy rays ne un kohre numa shield ko penetrate kiya,toh us aks ke mooh se nikal raha mantra uccharan rook gaya..

reason....

uska maksad pura ho chuka tha...uske dedication se khush ho chuki thi OBLIVION aur isiliye aaj ek mahine baad SPELL uccharan band kar wo aks apne CEREBRATION process se bahar aaya aur uski aankhen khul gayi..

aankh khol usne apne sir par laga labada hataya aur jab aisa hua toh us andhakar se doobi duniye me pehla halka prakash dikha joki us aks ke chehre ke gorepan ka tha..

chehra saamne aa chuka tha aur ye chehre jaana pehchaanana tha...ye aks thi MABBA....

ji haan doston MABBA....jo yahan pichle 1 mahine se apne shakti ko ek alag level par pahunchane ke liye lagatar tapasya kar rahi thi...

aur isiliye hi ye pichle ek mahine se CHOSENS me nahi thi..

aur aisa ye kar rahi thi SEBIL ke kehne par jo pehle hi yahan aa chuki thi aur khudko yahan ki kaali shaktiyon ko samarpit kar shakti haasil kar chuki thi..

darasal pehle un paanch WICKEDS ki buri haalat jo ki toh waise RAAZ ne thi par credit le gayi thi nakabposh urf HIDA,aur phir MABBA ka paala paltu snake jo ki kaali shaktiyon ke ek chota par behadh shaktishaali symbol tha,aur jisse khud SEBIL ne hi apni chhoti behen ko gift kiya tha,jab uske patan ke baare me SEBIL ko pata chala toh MABBA ke ulat usne josh nahi balki hosh se kaam sambhala...

jahan MABBA bas RAAZ aur uske doston se badla lene ka soch rahi thi wahin SEBIL chahti thi ki takraav hone se pehle MABBA ki shakti badhayi jaaye...

shatru ko kam nahi aankna chahiye,ye samajhti thi SEBIL aur isiliye hi usne MABBA ko yahan bheja tha taaki EXERTION we pehle MABBA ki shakti aur badh jaaye...

aur MABBA kabhi bhi apni big sister ki baat nahi kaaththi thi aur isiliye woh yahan pahunchi..

bhale MABBA jaisi bhi thi,par is sach ko jhultaya nahi jaa sakta ki PHASE 2 ki sabse shaktishaali WHIZZ thi woh aur jiska matlab tha ki lagan aur focus ki kami nahi thi MABBA me aur ek mahine tak lagatar yahan ke retual aur proccess ko follow kar is baat ko saabit bhi kar diya tha usne..

khair, jaise hi MABBA ne apna labada hataya aur uska face saamne aaya toh uski haalat uske tapasya ko bayan karne lagi..

bhare hue chehre ki maalkin MABBA ka filhal face dull aur pura sukh gaya tha...

aankhen andar dhas chuki thi jinme zamane bhar ki thakan bhi dikh rahi thi...

kaale labade me dhaka sharir bhi kaafi patla lag raha tha..

paused CEREBRATION me rehne ki wajah se MABBA ko apne external haalat ka andaza nahi tha par ab jab uski aankhen khul chuki thi toh woh khudko behad kamzor feel karne lagi thi..

par itne negetives ke baad bhi uski kamzor aankhon ke beech ek chamak thi..

challenge pura karne ko chamak..

aur ussi chamak ke saath woh saamne jheel ke us bhaag ki taraf dekh rahi thi jahan halke halke vibrations ho rahe the aur tabhi...

BOOM......

un vibrations ke beech ek dhamaka hua us jagah par jiske baad ussi jagah se ek behadh gaadhi paani se bani BLACK RAY nikal MABBA ki taraf badhi aur agle hi pal...

AAAHHHHH.......

MABBA ki tez cheekh se gunj utha woh shaant mohoul....

woh ray MABEL ke seeene waali jagah se takra sidhe uske sharir ke andar jaane laga tha..

wahin us ray ke force se MABBA piche palat neeche girne ko hui par woh giri nahi...

talwar ki tarah MABBA ke seene ko bhedthe hue woh paani se bani ray uske aar paar nikal piche patthar par gadh chuke the aur MABBA cheekhne ke baad aadhe baithe,aadhe lete position me marne si haalat me padi hui thi...

ye tha external view..par iske saath hi ek internal view jo bhi maine cheez thi,woh bhi ho rahi thi...

darasal woh paani numa ray MABBA ke sharir ke andar ghus pehle uske khoon ko aur phir baaki teeno AMPLIFICATION modes ko apne surrender me le rahi thi aur usko aisa karne se chaaron hi AMPLIFICATION modes rok nahi rahe the..

reason...

spell toh yaad hi hoga.. COMPLETE SURRENDER....

MABBA ke chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes ne pehle hi un paani numa shakti ke aage surrender kar diya tha...

kuch hi pal me MABBA ke chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes par kabza ho chuka tha BLACK ENERGY ka jiska matlab tha ki ab MABBA human hote hue bhi ban chuki thi ek DEVIL....

process pura hote hi woh BLACK ENERGY ke rays gayab ho gaye aur aisa hote hi MABBA ki aankhen bhi khul gayi..

aankh khulne ke agle hi pal ek jhatke me khadi ho chuki thi MABBA woh bhi apne purane yaa phir ye kahun ki pehle se bhi zyada aakarshak swaroop me..

aankhon ki putliyan puri kaali ho chuki thi jiske andar chhuppi beshumar shaktiyon ko ek baar khudh hi mehsoos kar ek pal ke liye apni aankhen band ki usne aur jab wapas kholi thi woh normal ho chuki thi..

sirf dikh sab normal raha tha par is waqt uske sharir ka har bhaag abnormal aur taakat se bhar chuka tha..

ek baar apni shaktiyon ko phirse mehsoos kar MABBA ke aankhon ke aage RAAZ ka chehra ghuma jisse uski aankhon me darindagi dikhne lagi aur phir is naye MABBA ke hile honth..


MABBA-

jo chot tune di, woh bharne ki jagah gehra ZAKHM HO GAYI....

zindagi apni jee li tune, MOUT ki di hui tujhe mohollat ab KHATM HO GAYI.....






PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-FORBIDDEN FOREST







MADIPARITO SHAKTIYEM

AMASS POWERS



raat ke aakhri pahar FORBIDDEN FOREST ke antim daayre me jahan yahan ke sabse bade aur ghane pedon ka jhund laga hua hai,uske beecho beecho baith tha ek shaksh aur lagatar uccharit karta jaa raha ta is SPELL ko...

us shaksh ke chaaron taraf kaali chaadaron ka ghera tha joki asal me ek aisa diwar tha jisse koi bhi laangh nahi sakta tha...

aankhen band kiye ekaagrata ke peak par pahunch woh shaksh jab bhi SPELL uccharit karta toh kahin door se wo kaali par chamakdaar urja aakar uske sharir me sama jaati...

pichle 3 ghanton se yunhi baitha SPELL uccharan kar raha tha VIDEOUS...

jee haan doston,ye VIDEOUS hi tha aur jo kaali shaktiyon ki abhedya diwar uske chaaron taraf bani hui thi,woh uske teeno DEVOTEES ne banayi thi jisse SOVEREIGN'S tak dekh toh sakte the,par tod nahi sakte the...

aur baat karen VIDEOUS dwara uccharit hone waale SPELL ki aur uske uccharit hote hi us kaali chamakdaar urja ki jo VIDEOUS ke sharir me lagatar samaye jaa rahi thi toh darasal chosens
ke pure itihaas me jitne bhi layak SAVENTS rahe the yaa fir to bhi precise,jitne bhi laayak WICKEDS rahe the, VIDEOUS ne un sabhi SAVENTS ki shaktiyon ki urja ko copy kar ek jagah par sanjo kar rakha tha..

kisi aise waqt ke liye jab agar usse uske rachaye khel me apni aloukik shaktiyon ko chhupana pade,tab bhi shaktiyon ki kami naa rahe uske paas....

par abhi tak toh iski zaroorat padi nahi thi VIDEOUS ko par subah shuru hone EXERTION me padne waali thi...

aur khaaskar tab jab VIDEOUS ne ye gour kiya tha ki RAAZ kaafi tezi se growth kar raha hai..

aur woh growth ek talented SAVENT ke liye bhi aascharya janak hai par jo bhi ho,ab tak toh bhale hi uska aur RAAZ ka shakti pradarshan ke liye aamna saamna hua nahi tha par kal aisa hone waala tha...

aur apne ek maatra pratidwandi se bhala kaise peeche reh sakta tha VIDEOUS aur isiliye sadiyon se sanjoye in shaktiyon ko apne chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes me transfer kar raha tha VIDEOUS....

teen ghanton ke lagatar enchantment ke baad aahirkar saare chuppaye WICKED SAVENTS urja VIDEOUS ke chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes ke saath merge ho chuki thi aur jab aisa hua toh VIDEOUS ki aankhen khul gayi...

jabse apni aloukik shaktiyon ka temporary tyag kiya tha VIDEOUS ne,uske baad aaj pehli baar woh khudme taakat ka sanchar mehsoos kar raha tha..

haan,ye toh sach hai ki uske aloukik shaktiyon ke aage in shakityon ki koi haisiyat nahi thi par ek sach ye bhi hai ki ek SAVENT ke hisaab se ye shaktiyan GOD LEVEL ki thi jinhe 1000 se bhi zyada kaabil aur shaktishaali SAVENT milkar bhi hara nahi sakte the...

aur clearly bataun toh is waqt VIDEOUS ke andar ek normal level ke ke ANGEL jitni powers aa chuki thi....

khair,aankhen kholne ke baad ek chamak dikhne lagi thi VIDEOUS ki aankhen me..

RAAZ se apne nirnayak takraav se pehle ek practice match ke jaise is SAVENT waale avatar me takrane ki chamak...

ek baad phirse aankhen band kar in nayi shaktiyon ko dobara mehsoos kar usne aankhen kholi aur...


VIDEOUS-


shikar karne se pehle chalo apne shikar ke saath zara KHEL LE.....

mout jab dunga,tab dunga par pehle, tu us mout ke dard ko JHEL LE....







PLACE-THE PROHIBITED SPACE






ANTARMANAM DRISHYAM

INSIGHT VIEW



SPELL uccharan ke saath hi mai apne hi andar pahunch chuka tha...

behad tez prakash ke beech meri urja mere sharir ke har bhaag me ghum rahi thi....

ye tez prakash asal me woh emotions stable power thi jisse pichle ek mahine ke lagatar mehnat aur focus se maine haasil kiya tha......

is prakashit safar me tezi se meri urja har taraf dekhti hui aage badh rahi thi ki tabhi achanak...

ek jagah pahunch woh ruk gayi aur aisa hote hi mujhe khushi bhi toh hui par usse zyada hairani hui..

reason....

mere heart ke paas ek aisi jagah thi jahan ab tak bilkul bhi roshni nahi hui thi jiska matlab tha ki woh bhaag abhi stable nahi hua tha..

ussi jagah par woh divya roshni chamak rahi thi jisse dhund raha tha mai...

aur isiliye hi mujhe khushi hui thi...

par hairani ki baat ye thi ki baaki ke woh sabhi bhaag jo pehle unstable the,unme chippi asimit urja hamesha se hi mehsoos ki thi maine par aaj jab is bhaag par mai pahuncha toh paaya aur mehsoos kiya ki is khaali bhaag me urja bhi gayab thi...

bilkil khaali sthan tha ye jagah...khair, jaise hi us khaali sthan par chamak rahe GODLY urja ki kiran ko dekha maine toh ek pal ke liye woh urja aur tez chamki aur phir gayab ho gayi...

par gayab hone se pehle woh mere paanchon AMPLIFICATION modes joki abhi ek dusre se jude hue tha,unhe taakat ki khuraak de chuki thi aur isiliye us ray ke gayab hote hi meri aankh bhi khul gayi...

aur aisa hote hi mere chehre par smile aa gayi....

reason...

mere filhal chaaron humraaz HIDA, BRAWNY, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ek jagah par khade the jiska matlab tha ki EXERTION se pehle ki unki antim practice complete ho chuki thi...

ek saath khade woh chaaron unke saamne rakhe chiz ko joki SPELLER tha,usse ghur rahe the aur apne apne sir ko khuja us alag se dikhne waale SPELLAR ko samajhne ko koshish bhi kar rahe the...

alag kyun,aayiye khud hi jaan lijiye...


MAI-jo jawab saamne se hi mil jaana hai,usse jaanane ke liye sir kyun khapana..???


un chaaron ke paas pahunch maine apni baat kahi jispar...


ACCHUTA-bhai, karamat hi tune aisi ki hai ki dimag khapana laazmi si baat hai...


HIDA-tumne apne, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER,teeno ke hi SPELLER ko mila kar ek SPELLAR banaya hai naa,kyun....????

MAI-tum chaaron ke powers kaafi nourish ho chuke hain..

agar aise me ek hi SPELLER ko tum chaaron ko powers examine karne ke liye rakha jaaye toh power measure karne waala liquid RED se bhar aayega joki POWERFUL shaktiyon ka smarak hai par waisi power toh yahan ke WICKEDS aur MORALS ke paas bhi hoti hai..

par ab jab maine teen SPELLARS ko ek kiya hai toh aise me YELLOW aur ORANGE liquid joki weak aur average power dikhate hain,woh bahar aayenge hi nahi..

is three in one SPELLAR ke tubes me sirf red liquid hi dikhega aur upar uththe hue tum chaaron ki shaktiyon ko check karega aur naapega..

ACCHUTA-yaar,ye toh badhiya idea hai...par kya iska ye matlab hai ki agar is modified SPELLAR ki jagah normal SPELLAR hota toh usme hamari shaktiyon se GREY liquid joki invisible strength ka prateek hai,usse bhar jaata..


ACCHUTA ki baat par mai halke se muskura diya aur..


MAI-INVINSIBLE STRENTH sirf powerful METAPHYSICAL capabilities se nahi mil sakti ACCHUTA...

uske liye paanchon AMPLIFICATION modes ka ek hokar pure AMPLIFICATION form me aana zaroori hai..

aisa hote hi WHITE aur BLACK ENERGY ka mishran banta hai sharir me jisse shakti 1000 guna tak badh jaati hai...

aur aisa gift SAVENTS ko nahi mila hai ab tak...

isiliye filhal us strength ko bhul jaao aur jitni taakat haasil ki hai,usse aazmao...

waise HIDA, BRAWNY ko SPELLAR aur uske kaam karne ke tarike ke baare me bata diya hai naa tumne...

HIDA-haan,bata diya hai...

MAI- SHATIYEM PARVUJAKTE....

yahi SPELL hai jisse apni apni shakti naapi jaati hai..ek ek karke saamne aao aur SPELLAR ki taraf haath kar SPELL bolo...

apni baat karte hue hi mai thoda aage badh gaya aur kareeb 10 metre un chaaron door pahunch maine SPELLAR ko hawa me hi latka diya aur uske baaju me hi khada ho gaya..

wahin meri baat sun SLUNDER ne sabse pehle apne haath aage kiye aur.....


SHAKTIYEM PARVUJAKTE.....

SPELL uccharit hote hi uske haathon se uske chaaron AMPLIFICATION ki power uske haath me merge hokar prakat hui jiske agle hi pal...

ek gaadhi WHITE ray uske haathon se nikal sidhe SPELLAR par padi jiske baad SPELLAR ke nichle tath par RED LIQUID dikhne laga jo dheere dheere upar uth raha tha...

pure SPELLAR par percentage ke hisaab se marking bhi thi jisse dheere dheere wo red liquid cross karta hua upar uthne laga tha..

wahin SLUNDER ke jabde aapas me fase hue the jiska arth tha ki usne apni shakti ka pura zor lagaya hua hai..

woh liquid upar uththa hua ab tak 75 percent tak pahunch chuka tha par uske baad uske growth rook gayi aur isiliye maine apna haath upar kiya jiske baad SLUNDER ne apna haath niche kar liya...


MAI-not bad SLUNDER...growth rate kaafi achi hai tumhari....

agar ye normal SPELLAR hota toh sirf 5 second me hi red liquid pura bhar chuka hota aur aisa filhal koi WICKED ya MORAL bhi nahi kar sakta....

meri baat sun khush ho gaya tha SLUNDER...

khair, SLUNDER ke baad ACCHUTA,uske baad HIDA aur last me BRAWNY ne bhi apni apni shakti ke limit ko examine kiya jiska result utna hi raha jitna ki SLUNDER ka tha..

is extra power consuming SPELLAR ko bhi in sabne 75 percent tak bhar diya tha aur aisa karna kahin se bhi sadharan baat nahi thi...

ye chaaron wakayi kaafi shaktishaali ho chuke the aur us taakat ka namuna kal EXERTION me pura CHOSENS dekhne waala tha...

khair,woh chaaron ne hi apne apne power test kar liye the aur isiliye SPELLAR ko wapas rakhne ke liye maine uski taraf haath badhaya hi tha ki tabhi...


ACCHUTA-bhai yaar ek request hai.. tune toh hum sabki power dekhi bhi hai aur parkhi bhi hai..

hum chaaron bhi ek baar teri GROWTH dekhna chahte hain...


ACCHUTA ne jo kaha,wahi request baaki teeno ke bhi aankh me dikha mujhe aur isiliye mai bhi muskurate hue unke paas aaya,wapas muda aur apne haath SPELLAR ki taraf kar diye jisse dekh woh chaaron khush ho gaye...


SHATIYEM PARVUJAKTE...


mere mooh se SPELL uccharit hua jiske baad jab meri shakti ka ray mere haathon se nikal SPELLAR par pada toh woh chaaron hi turant SPELLAR ke paas pahunch gaye..

un chaaron ki hi tarah meri shakti se bhi us SPELLAR ke andar red liquid bharne laga jo upar uththe hue lagbhag 80 percent par rook gaya aur aisa hote hi maine apna haath niche kar liya..


SLUNDER-waah yaar..tera normal power bhi humse zyada hi hai..

ACCHUTA-haan par sirf 5 percent.. RAAZ,dekhna,hum chaaron bhi bohot jald tere power level tak pahunch hi jaayenge...

MAI-mujhe intezar rahega us pal ka...chalo ab niklo tum sab. time ho gaya hai...

ACCHUTA-tu nahi aayega saath..

MAI-filhal yahan aur training ki zaroorat nahi hai tum chaaron ko..

isiliye is jagah ko bhi ab yahan hone ki zaroorat nahi hai..mai isse shrink karke aaunga...


ab aur yahan training nahi hogi,ye sun woh chaaron ek pal ke liye udaas hue,par phir khudko normal kar bahar exit ki taraf badh gaye..

par phir BRAWNY achanak palta aur mere sane aakar khada hua aur..


BRAWNY-thanks RAAZ...tarika bhale kuch bhi raha ho,help tumne meri bohot ki hai...tumhari wajah se hi looser ka tag hat paaya hai mujhse...

MAI-hata nahi hai abhi woh tag..kal sabke saamne including tumhare mom dad,tum hataoge us tag ko...

jo zindagi tum khudke aur apne parents ke liye chahte the,kal ke baad woh mil jaayega tumhe...

bas apna focus mat khona...


meri baat sun jasbaati hi gaya tha BRAWNY par isse pehle ki woh kuch aur kahe...


MAI-jao BRAWNY aur apni bhaavnaaon ko niyantran me rakhna bhi sikho...

hunar aur nikhar jaayega...

meri taraf ek baar aur thanks waali nazar se dekh BRAWNY palat SPACE se bahar nikal gaya..

aur uske jaate hi..


DHANUR-apne doston ko toh apni shakti ki limit dikha di,ek baar mujhe bhi dikha do par asli limit...

woh jhuti limit nahi jisse dekha aur sach samjha hai un chaaron ne..


DHANUR ki baat par ek baar muskuraya mai aur....


MAI- SHAKTIYEM PARVUJAKTE...


ek bar phirse SPELL uccharit hua mere mooh se jiske sirf 5 second baad hi SPELLAR pura 100 percent tak red liquid se bhar gaya tha aur uske baad shuru hua SPELLAR me kampan jisse dekh aur mehsoos kar..


DHANUR-adbhudh....


DHANUR ke aisa kehte hi maine apne haath ko niche kar liya jiske baad..


DHANUR-tum lagbhag taiyar ho RAAZ...mera kaam khatm hua par mai EXERTION dekhna chahta hun isiliye kal competition ke baad mai tumse aur karm lok se hamesha ke liye vida lunga...


MAI-zaroor....waise EXERTION ka wait toh mujhe bhi hai...

KHEL rach khudko sarvashreshta toh ghoshit kar diya hai VIDEOUS ne par ab....




dekhna usse bhi hai jo kaam mere KIRDAAR KA HAI.....

ye khel ab takkar ka hoga,pata mera bhi ab TAAKAT ke BAZAAR KA HAI....


jeetne ka maza bhi aana hi hai,khaas kar tab......


jab intezar logon ko,meri HAAR KA HAI.....















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI...........















AAPKA APNA V.....J

 

[Avir]

Nice One

 

[jitutripathi00]

Ek dum Jabardast, wakai bemisaal,

 

[Black water]

AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, HIDA AUR BRAWNY KAAFI STRONG HO CHUKE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF MALL ME MAHI RAAZ KO USKI HELP KARNE KE LIYE THANKS KEHTI HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-99



PLANET-BLACK SPACE


PLACE-THE LAKE OF OBLIVION







SAMASTAM BHADIKARAHAM

COMPLETE SURRENDER






kaale labade me dhaka ek aks apne chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes me dhyan kendrit kar is SPELL ko lagatar uccharit kar raha tha..

aur ye uccharan uske mooh se pichle 1 mahine se lagatar nikal raa tha...

bina khaaye piye pure devotion ke saath paalthi maar baithe us aks ke aas paas ka pura mahoul andhakar se dhaka hua tha....

THE LACKE OF OBLIVION....

antariksh ke ek aise bhaag me bana ek badi si ujaad jagah jahan surya ki halki si kiran tak nahi pahunch sakti..

infact surya hi kya,is andheri jagah ke upar bane space me koi taara tak nahi jagmaga raha tha...

kaali shaktiyon se bhare patharon ki anginat shrinkhala se bani thi ye ujaad jaga..

is puri jagah ke theek beech ek behad bada sa lake tha aur jiska naam OBLIVION tha aur issi lake par naam pada tha is puri jagah ka...

un asankhya kaale patharon se bani is duniya ke theek beech me kaajal se bhi kaale paani se bhari thi ye lake jiske upar hamesha ek kohra numa SHIELD lagi rehti thi aur us kohre ka colour bhi kaala hi tha...

ussi lake ke kirane tha wo aks jiske mooh se mantra uccharan ho rahe the...

sir us aks ka neeche jhuka hua tha jiske upar wo kaala labada jaise uske chehre ki asliyat par parda daale hue tha....

ek mahine se lagatar enchant ho rahe SPELL ki wajah se us aks ke pure sharir se ek invisible energy ray nikal saamne lake ki taraf jaa rahi thi jisse uske sarhad par hi roke hue the woh kohre...

aur is wajah se ek ajeeb sa jakdan bhi feel ho raha tha us aksh ko apne sharir me par phir bhi pure man se bina ho rahi taklif ko beech me laa uske mooh se SPELL uccharit ho hi raha tha...

aur uske is focus ko woh jheel aur uske aage laga kohra dekh bhi raha tha aur shayad test bhi kar raha tha..

pichle ek mahine se bina result milne par bhi lagatar mantra uccharan kar rahe us aks se behad khush ho chuki thi woh jheel aur usme samayi behisaab kaali shaktiyan....

aur isiliye....

achanak se hi us kohre numa shield ne us aks ke invisible energy rays ke liye raasta de diya aur aisa hote hi woh energy rays aage badhi aur agle hi pal uska sangam ho gaya us kaali jheel ke paani se aur jab aisa hua toh....

ek saath do chizen hui..

pehli...

halke halke vibrations hone lagi us jheel ne maano woh us energy rays ke through us aks ki taakat ko jaanch raha ho....

dusri...

jaise hi energy rays ne un kohre numa shield ko penetrate kiya,toh us aks ke mooh se nikal raha mantra uccharan rook gaya..

reason....

uska maksad pura ho chuka tha...uske dedication se khush ho chuki thi OBLIVION aur isiliye aaj ek mahine baad SPELL uccharan band kar wo aks apne CEREBRATION process se bahar aaya aur uski aankhen khul gayi..

aankh khol usne apne sir par laga labada hataya aur jab aisa hua toh us andhakar se doobi duniye me pehla halka prakash dikha joki us aks ke chehre ke gorepan ka tha..

chehra saamne aa chuka tha aur ye chehre jaana pehchaanana tha...ye aks thi MABBA....

ji haan doston MABBA....jo yahan pichle 1 mahine se apne shakti ko ek alag level par pahunchane ke liye lagatar tapasya kar rahi thi...

aur isiliye hi ye pichle ek mahine se CHOSENS me nahi thi..

aur aisa ye kar rahi thi SEBIL ke kehne par jo pehle hi yahan aa chuki thi aur khudko yahan ki kaali shaktiyon ko samarpit kar shakti haasil kar chuki thi..

darasal pehle un paanch WICKEDS ki buri haalat jo ki toh waise RAAZ ne thi par credit le gayi thi nakabposh urf HIDA,aur phir MABBA ka paala paltu snake jo ki kaali shaktiyon ke ek chota par behadh shaktishaali symbol tha,aur jisse khud SEBIL ne hi apni chhoti behen ko gift kiya tha,jab uske patan ke baare me SEBIL ko pata chala toh MABBA ke ulat usne josh nahi balki hosh se kaam sambhala...

jahan MABBA bas RAAZ aur uske doston se badla lene ka soch rahi thi wahin SEBIL chahti thi ki takraav hone se pehle MABBA ki shakti badhayi jaaye...

shatru ko kam nahi aankna chahiye,ye samajhti thi SEBIL aur isiliye hi usne MABBA ko yahan bheja tha taaki EXERTION we pehle MABBA ki shakti aur badh jaaye...

aur MABBA kabhi bhi apni big sister ki baat nahi kaaththi thi aur isiliye woh yahan pahunchi..

bhale MABBA jaisi bhi thi,par is sach ko jhultaya nahi jaa sakta ki PHASE 2 ki sabse shaktishaali WHIZZ thi woh aur jiska matlab tha ki lagan aur focus ki kami nahi thi MABBA me aur ek mahine tak lagatar yahan ke retual aur proccess ko follow kar is baat ko saabit bhi kar diya tha usne..

khair, jaise hi MABBA ne apna labada hataya aur uska face saamne aaya toh uski haalat uske tapasya ko bayan karne lagi..

bhare hue chehre ki maalkin MABBA ka filhal face dull aur pura sukh gaya tha...

aankhen andar dhas chuki thi jinme zamane bhar ki thakan bhi dikh rahi thi...

kaale labade me dhaka sharir bhi kaafi patla lag raha tha..

paused CEREBRATION me rehne ki wajah se MABBA ko apne external haalat ka andaza nahi tha par ab jab uski aankhen khul chuki thi toh woh khudko behad kamzor feel karne lagi thi..

par itne negetives ke baad bhi uski kamzor aankhon ke beech ek chamak thi..

challenge pura karne ko chamak..

aur ussi chamak ke saath woh saamne jheel ke us bhaag ki taraf dekh rahi thi jahan halke halke vibrations ho rahe the aur tabhi...

BOOM......

un vibrations ke beech ek dhamaka hua us jagah par jiske baad ussi jagah se ek behadh gaadhi paani se bani BLACK RAY nikal MABBA ki taraf badhi aur agle hi pal...

AAAHHHHH.......

MABBA ki tez cheekh se gunj utha woh shaant mohoul....

woh ray MABEL ke seeene waali jagah se takra sidhe uske sharir ke andar jaane laga tha..

wahin us ray ke force se MABBA piche palat neeche girne ko hui par woh giri nahi...

talwar ki tarah MABBA ke seene ko bhedthe hue woh paani se bani ray uske aar paar nikal piche patthar par gadh chuke the aur MABBA cheekhne ke baad aadhe baithe,aadhe lete position me marne si haalat me padi hui thi...

ye tha external view..par iske saath hi ek internal view jo bhi maine cheez thi,woh bhi ho rahi thi...

darasal woh paani numa ray MABBA ke sharir ke andar ghus pehle uske khoon ko aur phir baaki teeno AMPLIFICATION modes ko apne surrender me le rahi thi aur usko aisa karne se chaaron hi AMPLIFICATION modes rok nahi rahe the..

reason...

spell toh yaad hi hoga.. COMPLETE SURRENDER....

MABBA ke chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes ne pehle hi un paani numa shakti ke aage surrender kar diya tha...

kuch hi pal me MABBA ke chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes par kabza ho chuka tha BLACK ENERGY ka jiska matlab tha ki ab MABBA human hote hue bhi ban chuki thi ek DEVIL....

process pura hote hi woh BLACK ENERGY ke rays gayab ho gaye aur aisa hote hi MABBA ki aankhen bhi khul gayi..

aankh khulne ke agle hi pal ek jhatke me khadi ho chuki thi MABBA woh bhi apne purane yaa phir ye kahun ki pehle se bhi zyada aakarshak swaroop me..

aankhon ki putliyan puri kaali ho chuki thi jiske andar chhuppi beshumar shaktiyon ko ek baar khudh hi mehsoos kar ek pal ke liye apni aankhen band ki usne aur jab wapas kholi thi woh normal ho chuki thi..

sirf dikh sab normal raha tha par is waqt uske sharir ka har bhaag abnormal aur taakat se bhar chuka tha..

ek baar apni shaktiyon ko phirse mehsoos kar MABBA ke aankhon ke aage RAAZ ka chehra ghuma jisse uski aankhon me darindagi dikhne lagi aur phir is naye MABBA ke hile honth..


MABBA-

jo chot tune di, woh bharne ki jagah gehra ZAKHM HO GAYI....

zindagi apni jee li tune, MOUT ki di hui tujhe mohollat ab KHATM HO GAYI.....






PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-FORBIDDEN FOREST







MADIPARITO SHAKTIYEM

AMASS POWERS



raat ke aakhri pahar FORBIDDEN FOREST ke antim daayre me jahan yahan ke sabse bade aur ghane pedon ka jhund laga hua hai,uske beecho beecho baith tha ek shaksh aur lagatar uccharit karta jaa raha ta is SPELL ko...

us shaksh ke chaaron taraf kaali chaadaron ka ghera tha joki asal me ek aisa diwar tha jisse koi bhi laangh nahi sakta tha...

aankhen band kiye ekaagrata ke peak par pahunch woh shaksh jab bhi SPELL uccharit karta toh kahin door se wo kaali par chamakdaar urja aakar uske sharir me sama jaati...

pichle 3 ghanton se yunhi baitha SPELL uccharan kar raha tha VIDEOUS...

jee haan doston,ye VIDEOUS hi tha aur jo kaali shaktiyon ki abhedya diwar uske chaaron taraf bani hui thi,woh uske teeno DEVOTEES ne banayi thi jisse SOVEREIGN'S tak dekh toh sakte the,par tod nahi sakte the...

aur baat karen VIDEOUS dwara uccharit hone waale SPELL ki aur uske uccharit hote hi us kaali chamakdaar urja ki jo VIDEOUS ke sharir me lagatar samaye jaa rahi thi toh darasal chosens
ke pure itihaas me jitne bhi layak SAVENTS rahe the yaa fir to bhi precise,jitne bhi laayak WICKEDS rahe the, VIDEOUS ne un sabhi SAVENTS ki shaktiyon ki urja ko copy kar ek jagah par sanjo kar rakha tha..

kisi aise waqt ke liye jab agar usse uske rachaye khel me apni aloukik shaktiyon ko chhupana pade,tab bhi shaktiyon ki kami naa rahe uske paas....

par abhi tak toh iski zaroorat padi nahi thi VIDEOUS ko par subah shuru hone EXERTION me padne waali thi...

aur khaaskar tab jab VIDEOUS ne ye gour kiya tha ki RAAZ kaafi tezi se growth kar raha hai..

aur woh growth ek talented SAVENT ke liye bhi aascharya janak hai par jo bhi ho,ab tak toh bhale hi uska aur RAAZ ka shakti pradarshan ke liye aamna saamna hua nahi tha par kal aisa hone waala tha...

aur apne ek maatra pratidwandi se bhala kaise peeche reh sakta tha VIDEOUS aur isiliye sadiyon se sanjoye in shaktiyon ko apne chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes me transfer kar raha tha VIDEOUS....

teen ghanton ke lagatar enchantment ke baad aahirkar saare chuppaye WICKED SAVENTS urja VIDEOUS ke chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes ke saath merge ho chuki thi aur jab aisa hua toh VIDEOUS ki aankhen khul gayi...

jabse apni aloukik shaktiyon ka temporary tyag kiya tha VIDEOUS ne,uske baad aaj pehli baar woh khudme taakat ka sanchar mehsoos kar raha tha..

haan,ye toh sach hai ki uske aloukik shaktiyon ke aage in shakityon ki koi haisiyat nahi thi par ek sach ye bhi hai ki ek SAVENT ke hisaab se ye shaktiyan GOD LEVEL ki thi jinhe 1000 se bhi zyada kaabil aur shaktishaali SAVENT milkar bhi hara nahi sakte the...

aur clearly bataun toh is waqt VIDEOUS ke andar ek normal level ke ke ANGEL jitni powers aa chuki thi....

khair,aankhen kholne ke baad ek chamak dikhne lagi thi VIDEOUS ki aankhen me..

RAAZ se apne nirnayak takraav se pehle ek practice match ke jaise is SAVENT waale avatar me takrane ki chamak...

ek baad phirse aankhen band kar in nayi shaktiyon ko dobara mehsoos kar usne aankhen kholi aur...


VIDEOUS-


shikar karne se pehle chalo apne shikar ke saath zara KHEL LE.....

mout jab dunga,tab dunga par pehle, tu us mout ke dard ko JHEL LE....







PLACE-THE PROHIBITED SPACE






ANTARMANAM DRISHYAM

INSIGHT VIEW



SPELL uccharan ke saath hi mai apne hi andar pahunch chuka tha...

behad tez prakash ke beech meri urja mere sharir ke har bhaag me ghum rahi thi....

ye tez prakash asal me woh emotions stable power thi jisse pichle ek mahine ke lagatar mehnat aur focus se maine haasil kiya tha......

is prakashit safar me tezi se meri urja har taraf dekhti hui aage badh rahi thi ki tabhi achanak...

ek jagah pahunch woh ruk gayi aur aisa hote hi mujhe khushi bhi toh hui par usse zyada hairani hui..

reason....

mere heart ke paas ek aisi jagah thi jahan ab tak bilkul bhi roshni nahi hui thi jiska matlab tha ki woh bhaag abhi stable nahi hua tha..

ussi jagah par woh divya roshni chamak rahi thi jisse dhund raha tha mai...

aur isiliye hi mujhe khushi hui thi...

par hairani ki baat ye thi ki baaki ke woh sabhi bhaag jo pehle unstable the,unme chippi asimit urja hamesha se hi mehsoos ki thi maine par aaj jab is bhaag par mai pahuncha toh paaya aur mehsoos kiya ki is khaali bhaag me urja bhi gayab thi...

bilkil khaali sthan tha ye jagah...khair, jaise hi us khaali sthan par chamak rahe GODLY urja ki kiran ko dekha maine toh ek pal ke liye woh urja aur tez chamki aur phir gayab ho gayi...

par gayab hone se pehle woh mere paanchon AMPLIFICATION modes joki abhi ek dusre se jude hue tha,unhe taakat ki khuraak de chuki thi aur isiliye us ray ke gayab hote hi meri aankh bhi khul gayi...

aur aisa hote hi mere chehre par smile aa gayi....

reason...

mere filhal chaaron humraaz HIDA, BRAWNY, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ek jagah par khade the jiska matlab tha ki EXERTION se pehle ki unki antim practice complete ho chuki thi...

ek saath khade woh chaaron unke saamne rakhe chiz ko joki SPELLER tha,usse ghur rahe the aur apne apne sir ko khuja us alag se dikhne waale SPELLAR ko samajhne ko koshish bhi kar rahe the...

alag kyun,aayiye khud hi jaan lijiye...


MAI-jo jawab saamne se hi mil jaana hai,usse jaanane ke liye sir kyun khapana..???


un chaaron ke paas pahunch maine apni baat kahi jispar...


ACCHUTA-bhai, karamat hi tune aisi ki hai ki dimag khapana laazmi si baat hai...


HIDA-tumne apne, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER,teeno ke hi SPELLER ko mila kar ek SPELLAR banaya hai naa,kyun....????

MAI-tum chaaron ke powers kaafi nourish ho chuke hain..

agar aise me ek hi SPELLER ko tum chaaron ko powers examine karne ke liye rakha jaaye toh power measure karne waala liquid RED se bhar aayega joki POWERFUL shaktiyon ka smarak hai par waisi power toh yahan ke WICKEDS aur MORALS ke paas bhi hoti hai..

par ab jab maine teen SPELLARS ko ek kiya hai toh aise me YELLOW aur ORANGE liquid joki weak aur average power dikhate hain,woh bahar aayenge hi nahi..

is three in one SPELLAR ke tubes me sirf red liquid hi dikhega aur upar uththe hue tum chaaron ki shaktiyon ko check karega aur naapega..

ACCHUTA-yaar,ye toh badhiya idea hai...par kya iska ye matlab hai ki agar is modified SPELLAR ki jagah normal SPELLAR hota toh usme hamari shaktiyon se GREY liquid joki invisible strength ka prateek hai,usse bhar jaata..


ACCHUTA ki baat par mai halke se muskura diya aur..


MAI-INVINSIBLE STRENTH sirf powerful METAPHYSICAL capabilities se nahi mil sakti ACCHUTA...

uske liye paanchon AMPLIFICATION modes ka ek hokar pure AMPLIFICATION form me aana zaroori hai..

aisa hote hi WHITE aur BLACK ENERGY ka mishran banta hai sharir me jisse shakti 1000 guna tak badh jaati hai...

aur aisa gift SAVENTS ko nahi mila hai ab tak...

isiliye filhal us strength ko bhul jaao aur jitni taakat haasil ki hai,usse aazmao...

waise HIDA, BRAWNY ko SPELLAR aur uske kaam karne ke tarike ke baare me bata diya hai naa tumne...

HIDA-haan,bata diya hai...

MAI- SHATIYEM PARVUJAKTE....

yahi SPELL hai jisse apni apni shakti naapi jaati hai..ek ek karke saamne aao aur SPELLAR ki taraf haath kar SPELL bolo...

apni baat karte hue hi mai thoda aage badh gaya aur kareeb 10 metre un chaaron door pahunch maine SPELLAR ko hawa me hi latka diya aur uske baaju me hi khada ho gaya..

wahin meri baat sun SLUNDER ne sabse pehle apne haath aage kiye aur.....


SHAKTIYEM PARVUJAKTE.....

SPELL uccharit hote hi uske haathon se uske chaaron AMPLIFICATION ki power uske haath me merge hokar prakat hui jiske agle hi pal...

ek gaadhi WHITE ray uske haathon se nikal sidhe SPELLAR par padi jiske baad SPELLAR ke nichle tath par RED LIQUID dikhne laga jo dheere dheere upar uth raha tha...

pure SPELLAR par percentage ke hisaab se marking bhi thi jisse dheere dheere wo red liquid cross karta hua upar uthne laga tha..

wahin SLUNDER ke jabde aapas me fase hue the jiska arth tha ki usne apni shakti ka pura zor lagaya hua hai..

woh liquid upar uththa hua ab tak 75 percent tak pahunch chuka tha par uske baad uske growth rook gayi aur isiliye maine apna haath upar kiya jiske baad SLUNDER ne apna haath niche kar liya...


MAI-not bad SLUNDER...growth rate kaafi achi hai tumhari....

agar ye normal SPELLAR hota toh sirf 5 second me hi red liquid pura bhar chuka hota aur aisa filhal koi WICKED ya MORAL bhi nahi kar sakta....

meri baat sun khush ho gaya tha SLUNDER...

khair, SLUNDER ke baad ACCHUTA,uske baad HIDA aur last me BRAWNY ne bhi apni apni shakti ke limit ko examine kiya jiska result utna hi raha jitna ki SLUNDER ka tha..

is extra power consuming SPELLAR ko bhi in sabne 75 percent tak bhar diya tha aur aisa karna kahin se bhi sadharan baat nahi thi...

ye chaaron wakayi kaafi shaktishaali ho chuke the aur us taakat ka namuna kal EXERTION me pura CHOSENS dekhne waala tha...

khair,woh chaaron ne hi apne apne power test kar liye the aur isiliye SPELLAR ko wapas rakhne ke liye maine uski taraf haath badhaya hi tha ki tabhi...


ACCHUTA-bhai yaar ek request hai.. tune toh hum sabki power dekhi bhi hai aur parkhi bhi hai..

hum chaaron bhi ek baar teri GROWTH dekhna chahte hain...


ACCHUTA ne jo kaha,wahi request baaki teeno ke bhi aankh me dikha mujhe aur isiliye mai bhi muskurate hue unke paas aaya,wapas muda aur apne haath SPELLAR ki taraf kar diye jisse dekh woh chaaron khush ho gaye...


SHATIYEM PARVUJAKTE...


mere mooh se SPELL uccharit hua jiske baad jab meri shakti ka ray mere haathon se nikal SPELLAR par pada toh woh chaaron hi turant SPELLAR ke paas pahunch gaye..

un chaaron ki hi tarah meri shakti se bhi us SPELLAR ke andar red liquid bharne laga jo upar uththe hue lagbhag 80 percent par rook gaya aur aisa hote hi maine apna haath niche kar liya..


SLUNDER-waah yaar..tera normal power bhi humse zyada hi hai..

ACCHUTA-haan par sirf 5 percent.. RAAZ,dekhna,hum chaaron bhi bohot jald tere power level tak pahunch hi jaayenge...

MAI-mujhe intezar rahega us pal ka...chalo ab niklo tum sab. time ho gaya hai...

ACCHUTA-tu nahi aayega saath..

MAI-filhal yahan aur training ki zaroorat nahi hai tum chaaron ko..

isiliye is jagah ko bhi ab yahan hone ki zaroorat nahi hai..mai isse shrink karke aaunga...


ab aur yahan training nahi hogi,ye sun woh chaaron ek pal ke liye udaas hue,par phir khudko normal kar bahar exit ki taraf badh gaye..

par phir BRAWNY achanak palta aur mere sane aakar khada hua aur..


BRAWNY-thanks RAAZ...tarika bhale kuch bhi raha ho,help tumne meri bohot ki hai...tumhari wajah se hi looser ka tag hat paaya hai mujhse...

MAI-hata nahi hai abhi woh tag..kal sabke saamne including tumhare mom dad,tum hataoge us tag ko...

jo zindagi tum khudke aur apne parents ke liye chahte the,kal ke baad woh mil jaayega tumhe...

bas apna focus mat khona...


meri baat sun jasbaati hi gaya tha BRAWNY par isse pehle ki woh kuch aur kahe...


MAI-jao BRAWNY aur apni bhaavnaaon ko niyantran me rakhna bhi sikho...

hunar aur nikhar jaayega...

meri taraf ek baar aur thanks waali nazar se dekh BRAWNY palat SPACE se bahar nikal gaya..

aur uske jaate hi..


DHANUR-apne doston ko toh apni shakti ki limit dikha di,ek baar mujhe bhi dikha do par asli limit...

woh jhuti limit nahi jisse dekha aur sach samjha hai un chaaron ne..


DHANUR ki baat par ek baar muskuraya mai aur....


MAI- SHAKTIYEM PARVUJAKTE...


ek bar phirse SPELL uccharit hua mere mooh se jiske sirf 5 second baad hi SPELLAR pura 100 percent tak red liquid se bhar gaya tha aur uske baad shuru hua SPELLAR me kampan jisse dekh aur mehsoos kar..


DHANUR-adbhudh....


DHANUR ke aisa kehte hi maine apne haath ko niche kar liya jiske baad..


DHANUR-tum lagbhag taiyar ho RAAZ...mera kaam khatm hua par mai EXERTION dekhna chahta hun isiliye kal competition ke baad mai tumse aur karm lok se hamesha ke liye vida lunga...


MAI-zaroor....waise EXERTION ka wait toh mujhe bhi hai...

KHEL rach khudko sarvashreshta toh ghoshit kar diya hai VIDEOUS ne par ab....




dekhna usse bhi hai jo kaam mere KIRDAAR KA HAI.....

ye khel ab takkar ka hoga,pata mera bhi ab TAAKAT ke BAZAAR KA HAI....


jeetne ka maza bhi aana hi hai,khaas kar tab......


jab intezar logon ko,meri HAAR KA HAI.....















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI...........















AAPKA APNA V.....J

Super fantastic update bhai
Rana bhumi saj chuki hai youdh keliye
Youdha bhi tayar hai jor ajmane keliye
Ab ye dekhna hai ki achhai aur burai wali ye youdh me koun kisper bhari padta hai

 

[Iron Man]

AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, HIDA AUR BRAWNY KAAFI STRONG HO CHUKE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF MALL ME MAHI RAAZ KO USKI HELP KARNE KE LIYE THANKS KEHTI HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-99



PLANET-BLACK SPACE


PLACE-THE LAKE OF OBLIVION







SAMASTAM BHADIKARAHAM

COMPLETE SURRENDER






kaale labade me dhaka ek aks apne chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes me dhyan kendrit kar is SPELL ko lagatar uccharit kar raha tha..

aur ye uccharan uske mooh se pichle 1 mahine se lagatar nikal raa tha...

bina khaaye piye pure devotion ke saath paalthi maar baithe us aks ke aas paas ka pura mahoul andhakar se dhaka hua tha....

THE LACKE OF OBLIVION....

antariksh ke ek aise bhaag me bana ek badi si ujaad jagah jahan surya ki halki si kiran tak nahi pahunch sakti..

infact surya hi kya,is andheri jagah ke upar bane space me koi taara tak nahi jagmaga raha tha...

kaali shaktiyon se bhare patharon ki anginat shrinkhala se bani thi ye ujaad jaga..

is puri jagah ke theek beech ek behad bada sa lake tha aur jiska naam OBLIVION tha aur issi lake par naam pada tha is puri jagah ka...

un asankhya kaale patharon se bani is duniya ke theek beech me kaajal se bhi kaale paani se bhari thi ye lake jiske upar hamesha ek kohra numa SHIELD lagi rehti thi aur us kohre ka colour bhi kaala hi tha...

ussi lake ke kirane tha wo aks jiske mooh se mantra uccharan ho rahe the...

sir us aks ka neeche jhuka hua tha jiske upar wo kaala labada jaise uske chehre ki asliyat par parda daale hue tha....

ek mahine se lagatar enchant ho rahe SPELL ki wajah se us aks ke pure sharir se ek invisible energy ray nikal saamne lake ki taraf jaa rahi thi jisse uske sarhad par hi roke hue the woh kohre...

aur is wajah se ek ajeeb sa jakdan bhi feel ho raha tha us aksh ko apne sharir me par phir bhi pure man se bina ho rahi taklif ko beech me laa uske mooh se SPELL uccharit ho hi raha tha...

aur uske is focus ko woh jheel aur uske aage laga kohra dekh bhi raha tha aur shayad test bhi kar raha tha..

pichle ek mahine se bina result milne par bhi lagatar mantra uccharan kar rahe us aks se behad khush ho chuki thi woh jheel aur usme samayi behisaab kaali shaktiyan....

aur isiliye....

achanak se hi us kohre numa shield ne us aks ke invisible energy rays ke liye raasta de diya aur aisa hote hi woh energy rays aage badhi aur agle hi pal uska sangam ho gaya us kaali jheel ke paani se aur jab aisa hua toh....

ek saath do chizen hui..

pehli...

halke halke vibrations hone lagi us jheel ne maano woh us energy rays ke through us aks ki taakat ko jaanch raha ho....

dusri...

jaise hi energy rays ne un kohre numa shield ko penetrate kiya,toh us aks ke mooh se nikal raha mantra uccharan rook gaya..

reason....

uska maksad pura ho chuka tha...uske dedication se khush ho chuki thi OBLIVION aur isiliye aaj ek mahine baad SPELL uccharan band kar wo aks apne CEREBRATION process se bahar aaya aur uski aankhen khul gayi..

aankh khol usne apne sir par laga labada hataya aur jab aisa hua toh us andhakar se doobi duniye me pehla halka prakash dikha joki us aks ke chehre ke gorepan ka tha..

chehra saamne aa chuka tha aur ye chehre jaana pehchaanana tha...ye aks thi MABBA....

ji haan doston MABBA....jo yahan pichle 1 mahine se apne shakti ko ek alag level par pahunchane ke liye lagatar tapasya kar rahi thi...

aur isiliye hi ye pichle ek mahine se CHOSENS me nahi thi..

aur aisa ye kar rahi thi SEBIL ke kehne par jo pehle hi yahan aa chuki thi aur khudko yahan ki kaali shaktiyon ko samarpit kar shakti haasil kar chuki thi..

darasal pehle un paanch WICKEDS ki buri haalat jo ki toh waise RAAZ ne thi par credit le gayi thi nakabposh urf HIDA,aur phir MABBA ka paala paltu snake jo ki kaali shaktiyon ke ek chota par behadh shaktishaali symbol tha,aur jisse khud SEBIL ne hi apni chhoti behen ko gift kiya tha,jab uske patan ke baare me SEBIL ko pata chala toh MABBA ke ulat usne josh nahi balki hosh se kaam sambhala...

jahan MABBA bas RAAZ aur uske doston se badla lene ka soch rahi thi wahin SEBIL chahti thi ki takraav hone se pehle MABBA ki shakti badhayi jaaye...

shatru ko kam nahi aankna chahiye,ye samajhti thi SEBIL aur isiliye hi usne MABBA ko yahan bheja tha taaki EXERTION we pehle MABBA ki shakti aur badh jaaye...

aur MABBA kabhi bhi apni big sister ki baat nahi kaaththi thi aur isiliye woh yahan pahunchi..

bhale MABBA jaisi bhi thi,par is sach ko jhultaya nahi jaa sakta ki PHASE 2 ki sabse shaktishaali WHIZZ thi woh aur jiska matlab tha ki lagan aur focus ki kami nahi thi MABBA me aur ek mahine tak lagatar yahan ke retual aur proccess ko follow kar is baat ko saabit bhi kar diya tha usne..

khair, jaise hi MABBA ne apna labada hataya aur uska face saamne aaya toh uski haalat uske tapasya ko bayan karne lagi..

bhare hue chehre ki maalkin MABBA ka filhal face dull aur pura sukh gaya tha...

aankhen andar dhas chuki thi jinme zamane bhar ki thakan bhi dikh rahi thi...

kaale labade me dhaka sharir bhi kaafi patla lag raha tha..

paused CEREBRATION me rehne ki wajah se MABBA ko apne external haalat ka andaza nahi tha par ab jab uski aankhen khul chuki thi toh woh khudko behad kamzor feel karne lagi thi..

par itne negetives ke baad bhi uski kamzor aankhon ke beech ek chamak thi..

challenge pura karne ko chamak..

aur ussi chamak ke saath woh saamne jheel ke us bhaag ki taraf dekh rahi thi jahan halke halke vibrations ho rahe the aur tabhi...

BOOM......

un vibrations ke beech ek dhamaka hua us jagah par jiske baad ussi jagah se ek behadh gaadhi paani se bani BLACK RAY nikal MABBA ki taraf badhi aur agle hi pal...

AAAHHHHH.......

MABBA ki tez cheekh se gunj utha woh shaant mohoul....

woh ray MABEL ke seeene waali jagah se takra sidhe uske sharir ke andar jaane laga tha..

wahin us ray ke force se MABBA piche palat neeche girne ko hui par woh giri nahi...

talwar ki tarah MABBA ke seene ko bhedthe hue woh paani se bani ray uske aar paar nikal piche patthar par gadh chuke the aur MABBA cheekhne ke baad aadhe baithe,aadhe lete position me marne si haalat me padi hui thi...

ye tha external view..par iske saath hi ek internal view jo bhi maine cheez thi,woh bhi ho rahi thi...

darasal woh paani numa ray MABBA ke sharir ke andar ghus pehle uske khoon ko aur phir baaki teeno AMPLIFICATION modes ko apne surrender me le rahi thi aur usko aisa karne se chaaron hi AMPLIFICATION modes rok nahi rahe the..

reason...

spell toh yaad hi hoga.. COMPLETE SURRENDER....

MABBA ke chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes ne pehle hi un paani numa shakti ke aage surrender kar diya tha...

kuch hi pal me MABBA ke chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes par kabza ho chuka tha BLACK ENERGY ka jiska matlab tha ki ab MABBA human hote hue bhi ban chuki thi ek DEVIL....

process pura hote hi woh BLACK ENERGY ke rays gayab ho gaye aur aisa hote hi MABBA ki aankhen bhi khul gayi..

aankh khulne ke agle hi pal ek jhatke me khadi ho chuki thi MABBA woh bhi apne purane yaa phir ye kahun ki pehle se bhi zyada aakarshak swaroop me..

aankhon ki putliyan puri kaali ho chuki thi jiske andar chhuppi beshumar shaktiyon ko ek baar khudh hi mehsoos kar ek pal ke liye apni aankhen band ki usne aur jab wapas kholi thi woh normal ho chuki thi..

sirf dikh sab normal raha tha par is waqt uske sharir ka har bhaag abnormal aur taakat se bhar chuka tha..

ek baar apni shaktiyon ko phirse mehsoos kar MABBA ke aankhon ke aage RAAZ ka chehra ghuma jisse uski aankhon me darindagi dikhne lagi aur phir is naye MABBA ke hile honth..


MABBA-

jo chot tune di, woh bharne ki jagah gehra ZAKHM HO GAYI....

zindagi apni jee li tune, MOUT ki di hui tujhe mohollat ab KHATM HO GAYI.....






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AMASS POWERS



raat ke aakhri pahar FORBIDDEN FOREST ke antim daayre me jahan yahan ke sabse bade aur ghane pedon ka jhund laga hua hai,uske beecho beecho baith tha ek shaksh aur lagatar uccharit karta jaa raha ta is SPELL ko...

us shaksh ke chaaron taraf kaali chaadaron ka ghera tha joki asal me ek aisa diwar tha jisse koi bhi laangh nahi sakta tha...

aankhen band kiye ekaagrata ke peak par pahunch woh shaksh jab bhi SPELL uccharit karta toh kahin door se wo kaali par chamakdaar urja aakar uske sharir me sama jaati...

pichle 3 ghanton se yunhi baitha SPELL uccharan kar raha tha VIDEOUS...

jee haan doston,ye VIDEOUS hi tha aur jo kaali shaktiyon ki abhedya diwar uske chaaron taraf bani hui thi,woh uske teeno DEVOTEES ne banayi thi jisse SOVEREIGN'S tak dekh toh sakte the,par tod nahi sakte the...

aur baat karen VIDEOUS dwara uccharit hone waale SPELL ki aur uske uccharit hote hi us kaali chamakdaar urja ki jo VIDEOUS ke sharir me lagatar samaye jaa rahi thi toh darasal chosens
ke pure itihaas me jitne bhi layak SAVENTS rahe the yaa fir to bhi precise,jitne bhi laayak WICKEDS rahe the, VIDEOUS ne un sabhi SAVENTS ki shaktiyon ki urja ko copy kar ek jagah par sanjo kar rakha tha..

kisi aise waqt ke liye jab agar usse uske rachaye khel me apni aloukik shaktiyon ko chhupana pade,tab bhi shaktiyon ki kami naa rahe uske paas....

par abhi tak toh iski zaroorat padi nahi thi VIDEOUS ko par subah shuru hone EXERTION me padne waali thi...

aur khaaskar tab jab VIDEOUS ne ye gour kiya tha ki RAAZ kaafi tezi se growth kar raha hai..

aur woh growth ek talented SAVENT ke liye bhi aascharya janak hai par jo bhi ho,ab tak toh bhale hi uska aur RAAZ ka shakti pradarshan ke liye aamna saamna hua nahi tha par kal aisa hone waala tha...

aur apne ek maatra pratidwandi se bhala kaise peeche reh sakta tha VIDEOUS aur isiliye sadiyon se sanjoye in shaktiyon ko apne chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes me transfer kar raha tha VIDEOUS....

teen ghanton ke lagatar enchantment ke baad aahirkar saare chuppaye WICKED SAVENTS urja VIDEOUS ke chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes ke saath merge ho chuki thi aur jab aisa hua toh VIDEOUS ki aankhen khul gayi...

jabse apni aloukik shaktiyon ka temporary tyag kiya tha VIDEOUS ne,uske baad aaj pehli baar woh khudme taakat ka sanchar mehsoos kar raha tha..

haan,ye toh sach hai ki uske aloukik shaktiyon ke aage in shakityon ki koi haisiyat nahi thi par ek sach ye bhi hai ki ek SAVENT ke hisaab se ye shaktiyan GOD LEVEL ki thi jinhe 1000 se bhi zyada kaabil aur shaktishaali SAVENT milkar bhi hara nahi sakte the...

aur clearly bataun toh is waqt VIDEOUS ke andar ek normal level ke ke ANGEL jitni powers aa chuki thi....

khair,aankhen kholne ke baad ek chamak dikhne lagi thi VIDEOUS ki aankhen me..

RAAZ se apne nirnayak takraav se pehle ek practice match ke jaise is SAVENT waale avatar me takrane ki chamak...

ek baad phirse aankhen band kar in nayi shaktiyon ko dobara mehsoos kar usne aankhen kholi aur...


VIDEOUS-


shikar karne se pehle chalo apne shikar ke saath zara KHEL LE.....

mout jab dunga,tab dunga par pehle, tu us mout ke dard ko JHEL LE....







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ANTARMANAM DRISHYAM

INSIGHT VIEW



SPELL uccharan ke saath hi mai apne hi andar pahunch chuka tha...

behad tez prakash ke beech meri urja mere sharir ke har bhaag me ghum rahi thi....

ye tez prakash asal me woh emotions stable power thi jisse pichle ek mahine ke lagatar mehnat aur focus se maine haasil kiya tha......

is prakashit safar me tezi se meri urja har taraf dekhti hui aage badh rahi thi ki tabhi achanak...

ek jagah pahunch woh ruk gayi aur aisa hote hi mujhe khushi bhi toh hui par usse zyada hairani hui..

reason....

mere heart ke paas ek aisi jagah thi jahan ab tak bilkul bhi roshni nahi hui thi jiska matlab tha ki woh bhaag abhi stable nahi hua tha..

ussi jagah par woh divya roshni chamak rahi thi jisse dhund raha tha mai...

aur isiliye hi mujhe khushi hui thi...

par hairani ki baat ye thi ki baaki ke woh sabhi bhaag jo pehle unstable the,unme chippi asimit urja hamesha se hi mehsoos ki thi maine par aaj jab is bhaag par mai pahuncha toh paaya aur mehsoos kiya ki is khaali bhaag me urja bhi gayab thi...

bilkil khaali sthan tha ye jagah...khair, jaise hi us khaali sthan par chamak rahe GODLY urja ki kiran ko dekha maine toh ek pal ke liye woh urja aur tez chamki aur phir gayab ho gayi...

par gayab hone se pehle woh mere paanchon AMPLIFICATION modes joki abhi ek dusre se jude hue tha,unhe taakat ki khuraak de chuki thi aur isiliye us ray ke gayab hote hi meri aankh bhi khul gayi...

aur aisa hote hi mere chehre par smile aa gayi....

reason...

mere filhal chaaron humraaz HIDA, BRAWNY, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ek jagah par khade the jiska matlab tha ki EXERTION se pehle ki unki antim practice complete ho chuki thi...

ek saath khade woh chaaron unke saamne rakhe chiz ko joki SPELLER tha,usse ghur rahe the aur apne apne sir ko khuja us alag se dikhne waale SPELLAR ko samajhne ko koshish bhi kar rahe the...

alag kyun,aayiye khud hi jaan lijiye...


MAI-jo jawab saamne se hi mil jaana hai,usse jaanane ke liye sir kyun khapana..???


un chaaron ke paas pahunch maine apni baat kahi jispar...


ACCHUTA-bhai, karamat hi tune aisi ki hai ki dimag khapana laazmi si baat hai...


HIDA-tumne apne, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER,teeno ke hi SPELLER ko mila kar ek SPELLAR banaya hai naa,kyun....????

MAI-tum chaaron ke powers kaafi nourish ho chuke hain..

agar aise me ek hi SPELLER ko tum chaaron ko powers examine karne ke liye rakha jaaye toh power measure karne waala liquid RED se bhar aayega joki POWERFUL shaktiyon ka smarak hai par waisi power toh yahan ke WICKEDS aur MORALS ke paas bhi hoti hai..

par ab jab maine teen SPELLARS ko ek kiya hai toh aise me YELLOW aur ORANGE liquid joki weak aur average power dikhate hain,woh bahar aayenge hi nahi..

is three in one SPELLAR ke tubes me sirf red liquid hi dikhega aur upar uththe hue tum chaaron ki shaktiyon ko check karega aur naapega..

ACCHUTA-yaar,ye toh badhiya idea hai...par kya iska ye matlab hai ki agar is modified SPELLAR ki jagah normal SPELLAR hota toh usme hamari shaktiyon se GREY liquid joki invisible strength ka prateek hai,usse bhar jaata..


ACCHUTA ki baat par mai halke se muskura diya aur..


MAI-INVINSIBLE STRENTH sirf powerful METAPHYSICAL capabilities se nahi mil sakti ACCHUTA...

uske liye paanchon AMPLIFICATION modes ka ek hokar pure AMPLIFICATION form me aana zaroori hai..

aisa hote hi WHITE aur BLACK ENERGY ka mishran banta hai sharir me jisse shakti 1000 guna tak badh jaati hai...

aur aisa gift SAVENTS ko nahi mila hai ab tak...

isiliye filhal us strength ko bhul jaao aur jitni taakat haasil ki hai,usse aazmao...

waise HIDA, BRAWNY ko SPELLAR aur uske kaam karne ke tarike ke baare me bata diya hai naa tumne...

HIDA-haan,bata diya hai...

MAI- SHATIYEM PARVUJAKTE....

yahi SPELL hai jisse apni apni shakti naapi jaati hai..ek ek karke saamne aao aur SPELLAR ki taraf haath kar SPELL bolo...

apni baat karte hue hi mai thoda aage badh gaya aur kareeb 10 metre un chaaron door pahunch maine SPELLAR ko hawa me hi latka diya aur uske baaju me hi khada ho gaya..

wahin meri baat sun SLUNDER ne sabse pehle apne haath aage kiye aur.....


SHAKTIYEM PARVUJAKTE.....

SPELL uccharit hote hi uske haathon se uske chaaron AMPLIFICATION ki power uske haath me merge hokar prakat hui jiske agle hi pal...

ek gaadhi WHITE ray uske haathon se nikal sidhe SPELLAR par padi jiske baad SPELLAR ke nichle tath par RED LIQUID dikhne laga jo dheere dheere upar uth raha tha...

pure SPELLAR par percentage ke hisaab se marking bhi thi jisse dheere dheere wo red liquid cross karta hua upar uthne laga tha..

wahin SLUNDER ke jabde aapas me fase hue the jiska arth tha ki usne apni shakti ka pura zor lagaya hua hai..

woh liquid upar uththa hua ab tak 75 percent tak pahunch chuka tha par uske baad uske growth rook gayi aur isiliye maine apna haath upar kiya jiske baad SLUNDER ne apna haath niche kar liya...


MAI-not bad SLUNDER...growth rate kaafi achi hai tumhari....

agar ye normal SPELLAR hota toh sirf 5 second me hi red liquid pura bhar chuka hota aur aisa filhal koi WICKED ya MORAL bhi nahi kar sakta....

meri baat sun khush ho gaya tha SLUNDER...

khair, SLUNDER ke baad ACCHUTA,uske baad HIDA aur last me BRAWNY ne bhi apni apni shakti ke limit ko examine kiya jiska result utna hi raha jitna ki SLUNDER ka tha..

is extra power consuming SPELLAR ko bhi in sabne 75 percent tak bhar diya tha aur aisa karna kahin se bhi sadharan baat nahi thi...

ye chaaron wakayi kaafi shaktishaali ho chuke the aur us taakat ka namuna kal EXERTION me pura CHOSENS dekhne waala tha...

khair,woh chaaron ne hi apne apne power test kar liye the aur isiliye SPELLAR ko wapas rakhne ke liye maine uski taraf haath badhaya hi tha ki tabhi...


ACCHUTA-bhai yaar ek request hai.. tune toh hum sabki power dekhi bhi hai aur parkhi bhi hai..

hum chaaron bhi ek baar teri GROWTH dekhna chahte hain...


ACCHUTA ne jo kaha,wahi request baaki teeno ke bhi aankh me dikha mujhe aur isiliye mai bhi muskurate hue unke paas aaya,wapas muda aur apne haath SPELLAR ki taraf kar diye jisse dekh woh chaaron khush ho gaye...


SHATIYEM PARVUJAKTE...


mere mooh se SPELL uccharit hua jiske baad jab meri shakti ka ray mere haathon se nikal SPELLAR par pada toh woh chaaron hi turant SPELLAR ke paas pahunch gaye..

un chaaron ki hi tarah meri shakti se bhi us SPELLAR ke andar red liquid bharne laga jo upar uththe hue lagbhag 80 percent par rook gaya aur aisa hote hi maine apna haath niche kar liya..


SLUNDER-waah yaar..tera normal power bhi humse zyada hi hai..

ACCHUTA-haan par sirf 5 percent.. RAAZ,dekhna,hum chaaron bhi bohot jald tere power level tak pahunch hi jaayenge...

MAI-mujhe intezar rahega us pal ka...chalo ab niklo tum sab. time ho gaya hai...

ACCHUTA-tu nahi aayega saath..

MAI-filhal yahan aur training ki zaroorat nahi hai tum chaaron ko..

isiliye is jagah ko bhi ab yahan hone ki zaroorat nahi hai..mai isse shrink karke aaunga...


ab aur yahan training nahi hogi,ye sun woh chaaron ek pal ke liye udaas hue,par phir khudko normal kar bahar exit ki taraf badh gaye..

par phir BRAWNY achanak palta aur mere sane aakar khada hua aur..


BRAWNY-thanks RAAZ...tarika bhale kuch bhi raha ho,help tumne meri bohot ki hai...tumhari wajah se hi looser ka tag hat paaya hai mujhse...

MAI-hata nahi hai abhi woh tag..kal sabke saamne including tumhare mom dad,tum hataoge us tag ko...

jo zindagi tum khudke aur apne parents ke liye chahte the,kal ke baad woh mil jaayega tumhe...

bas apna focus mat khona...


meri baat sun jasbaati hi gaya tha BRAWNY par isse pehle ki woh kuch aur kahe...


MAI-jao BRAWNY aur apni bhaavnaaon ko niyantran me rakhna bhi sikho...

hunar aur nikhar jaayega...

meri taraf ek baar aur thanks waali nazar se dekh BRAWNY palat SPACE se bahar nikal gaya..

aur uske jaate hi..


DHANUR-apne doston ko toh apni shakti ki limit dikha di,ek baar mujhe bhi dikha do par asli limit...

woh jhuti limit nahi jisse dekha aur sach samjha hai un chaaron ne..


DHANUR ki baat par ek baar muskuraya mai aur....


MAI- SHAKTIYEM PARVUJAKTE...


ek bar phirse SPELL uccharit hua mere mooh se jiske sirf 5 second baad hi SPELLAR pura 100 percent tak red liquid se bhar gaya tha aur uske baad shuru hua SPELLAR me kampan jisse dekh aur mehsoos kar..


DHANUR-adbhudh....


DHANUR ke aisa kehte hi maine apne haath ko niche kar liya jiske baad..


DHANUR-tum lagbhag taiyar ho RAAZ...mera kaam khatm hua par mai EXERTION dekhna chahta hun isiliye kal competition ke baad mai tumse aur karm lok se hamesha ke liye vida lunga...


MAI-zaroor....waise EXERTION ka wait toh mujhe bhi hai...

KHEL rach khudko sarvashreshta toh ghoshit kar diya hai VIDEOUS ne par ab....




dekhna usse bhi hai jo kaam mere KIRDAAR KA HAI.....

ye khel ab takkar ka hoga,pata mera bhi ab TAAKAT ke BAZAAR KA HAI....


jeetne ka maza bhi aana hi hai,khaas kar tab......


jab intezar logon ko,meri HAAR KA HAI.....















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI...........















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Shyad Mabba Videous mahi aur AADHE stallar ek team me honge jinki takkar Raaz Hida and Brawny se hogi . Achhuta Slunder and groomers ki takkar Vailds Mabel Alreen aur Aadhe staller ki dushri team se hogi .