Beautiful update bhai
Owen update VJ bro
Now the game is on
And mahi ek hi book mai
Basic morals ko mita chuki hai
So agar esa hi chala then
I can see 1000000000000000 times amplified Mabba +Hida
Behtareen update,
To jald hi raaz ki entry sttaler me hone wali hai.
mahi ki line apne jo likha he bro wakey me lajawab he
Next update ka intejar rahega vj bro
Fabulous update bhai
thanks brothers...be alongVJ Bhai I am a silent reader from your last story Attitude first part which I have downloaded in PDF form and read many time.Now I will say... Aap apna kaam kiiye baaaki sb ko bolne dijiye and I like ur writing skills.
Update dete rhiye...
thanks for the review brother....saath bane rahiyeAwesome Super Fantastic Mind Blowing Dhanshu.
Mahi pe Videous ka plan sahi disha ne ja chuka hai par aaj raaz ke waha hone se kaam bigad gaya to kahi aisa na ho jaye ab teen tigda kaam bigda ?
Raaz ke bare me Videous ko ek lead mil chuki ab eo kya kar pata hai esse .
Mahi apne friends se door ho gayi ab Dekhte hai kya hota hai . Raaz aur Mahi ki dailog shandar the
very nice update bhai maza aa gya ab dekhte hai ki aage kya hota hai
Super fantastic update waiting for next
Superb update
Awesome update
Bahut hi khubsurat update bhai ?
Bhai yeh mahi to bap se hi hoshiyaari kar rahi hain kya line hain bhai
diwal kitni hi unchi kyun naa ho,usse faand JAAUNGA mai....
har race ki finishing line me, sabse
pehle, sirf nazar AAUNGA mai...
zindagi ki kadar nahi hai mujhe,naahi kisi ka dar,
maut bhi agar bhide mujhse,toh
usse bhi ........kafan ODHAUNGA mai......
Super update hai bhai
Nice one
thanks brothers...be alongBahut achha aur interesting update tha. It was worth waiting for this one. Ab iska ATTITUDE bhi negative ho chuka hai and Mahi ko VIDEOUS k sath dekh liya RAAZ ne that means kuch to bhaamp jayega vo.. Waiting for next update
thanks for appreciating brother...yunhi saath bane rahiyenice update bro
ab dekhna ye hai ke kya Mahi vidios ki chal me fasti hai ya uska bhi koi backup hai mahi ke pas
ab dekhna ye bhi hai ke in 8dino me browny ka kya hua
or shayd browny hi Raaz or vikram ko milane ki kadi ho kuch or lekin browny ko mere hisab se Raaz marne nahi dega jab tak usse jo milna hai raz ko mil na jaye
ya aisa bhi sakta hai browny ke marne se hi Raaz ko kuch mile
itne sawal khade ho jate hai dimag me apka update padhke ke konsa sawal likhe konsa na likhe samajh hi ni Aata hai
But vj bhai or ek do story ki vajah se pahli bar xf pe id bana ke comnt kar raha hu warna to bahut purana reader hoo xp pe bhi kabhi id nahi banai
2 minuteJaldi bhai
Nice update bro
Awesome Mindblowing fantastic update
Nic update bro
Awesome update bro
Kamal ka update tha boro maza a gaya perh ker
Ye mahi ka Kaya kalp ho gaya h
Awesome update
Keep posting
Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next
dosti me dost ke gunah nahi GINTE...
kaun jaane,YAARI ke kitne lamhe AFREEN THE....
dosti ki hai,toh bas nibhate jaa..
kyunki woh waqt bhi aayega jab zuban kahegi ki woh bhi kya DIN THE....
awesome bhai ji kya baat kahi hai
लाज़वाब
निशब्द
बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई
Super update hai bhai
Behtareen update,
Aaj dosti ka matlab bahut achchhe se samjhaya Raaz ne. Morena ne puri baat chhipakar mabba ke liye gaddha khod diya. Agar mabba sabke samne weakling category ki whizz se humiliate ho to maza hi aa Jaayega.
Awesome
Bhai , every dialouge delivered (written) in this story just make that point of story more exciting.
Nice update bro waiting for next update
thanks brothers...be alongSuperb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next
thanks for the review brother...saath bane rahiyeBehad hi shandar or jabardast update
To Anwir ki sachai bhi samne aa gayi ki kyon wah best hai jabki real me Morena hai . Morena ne yah mamla sambhal liya aur Mabba ko bhrmit bhi kar diya . Ab dekhte hai uski sis 5 wickeds ko thik kar pati hai ya nahi . Alreen ki madad karte huye Mabel se dodti karwa diya Raaz ne aur phir bhi se Achhuta ne Uski baato se pel diya bechara daant peesh kar chala gaya . Ab dekhte hai Mahi me ho rahe do trah ke vicharo ke matbhed ka kab ant hoga ? Kaise wah Black power ke chungal se bahar aayegi?