Fantasy ATTITUDE.....( MAGIC + ROMANCE )(Completed)

[vj4u]

Is dhamakedar update ke bare me kya bolu....jitne bar padhta hu.....or padhne ka man karta hai....yar superbbbb ho aap.....thanks to give such a best story......I am huge fan of u brother

Thanks 4 bieng a writer's dream reader brother... yunhi saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

Superb, excellent, fantastic, mind blowing update bhai.... Ye to full package tha....kya likha hai bhai...maza aa gaya...sab kuch kitana sahi se likha hai bhai. VJ aur avanitika dono ka connection akhir ho gaya... Dekhte hai ab inka romance kaise hota... Par ye dusari bavishyvani ka kya chakkar hai kuch samaj nahi aaya.. next update ka intezar rahega... keep rocking bhai...

Thanks 4 appreciating brother... sab pata chal jaayega brother... yunhi saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

Tumhari story bahut hi achchhi hai. Aur mujhe iska idea bahut hi pasand aaya.
Mujhe nahi lagta ki ismodus vj ko marana chahta hai. Mujhe lagta hai ki vo bas apne pita ko sabit karna chahta hai ki vo sahi hai. Aur isi soch ne ki sirf vohi sahi hai dusre sab galat usko dusra side nahi dekhne diya. He is a right person with worng ideas.
Aur kisi update me vj ne bhi kaha tha ke mera bhai galat nahi hai, shayad puri tarah se nahi.

Thanks brother...... ASMODEUS ek khatarnaak paheli hai brother.. itni aasani se nahi suljhegi.. aage aage dekhiye, hota hai kya.. aur yunhi saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

Super mind blowing apke leya jo vi bolu kam lage ga

Samdar zabardast lajawab Kya khun samajh nahi aata waiting for next one

Badiya update Bhai

thanks brothers... yunhi saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

Jabardast ,fantastic ,shoking and Superrrrr action

Pahle avantika ka sath jana
VJ or Aodomos k bich action or Beelzebub ka injured hona

Asli Aodomos aana ek shoking tha socha tha markar jinda hoga lekin apni hii copy bejkar yudd ko hii badal diya

Teeno power(katak se teen spell samvega maya, Graham maya or Bharam maya ko ek sath ) ka istemaal shoking tha

Aodomos n avantika par sakrun vish paryok kar diya
Vese ye sapna avantika n dekha tha pahle hii

Fountain of flower n bahut madad ki jisse avantika ko thoda time mila hosh m aane ka

Book ka VJ se bahr aana or
VJ ki bato ko gor karne par avantika ko paheli ka hal mil gya

Aakir kar avantika or VJ n i love u bol hi diya

Damaka kar diya bhaiii selute u behtarin Update k liye
VJ ab jakhmi sher h
dekhte h aage kya karta h VJ
Aodomos ko pta chal hi gya hoga ki VJ bach gya h to next chal kya hogi
Vese Bhuvika ko yudd m nhii laya matlab AODOMOS next game k liye pahle hii kafi hadd takk teyar h

Thanks 4 the review brother... bhuvika abhi taiyar hi kahan hai..aapko yaad hoga usse uski shaktiyan milne se pehle hi ASMODEUS ne bula liya tha... aur waise bhi ab tak toh aap samajh hi gaye honge ki ASMODEUS ka dimag kaise chalta hai.. aage aur jhatke hain...saath bane rahiyega....

 

[vj4u]

Dear VJ,
At the end of this update you have said Aaj ke liye bas itna....
Bas itna???? Yun laga maano iss kahani ne ek yug jee liya ho... I, like many of other readers, am awestruck....
Such a fantastic, such a marvelous update.... At a point of time, I had said each update appears to be better than all the previous ones yet we doubt if this will remain the best or will there be a still better one? Almost every time you surprise us, at least me.... I am all praises for your efforts... You simply rock... Keep writing and keep rocking... So far as waiting for one day extra is concerned, yes it will be painful, yet, we will wait....

Thanks 4 such lovely words brother.. after i deliver the update, the bowl is in ur court.. liking it or criticising it..readers r the judge... and i am thankful that till time,i have only got appreciation.... and i"ll try to maintain my form.. just be along

 

[vj4u]

Phele toh itna late reply ke liye maafi bhai,exams chal rage the aur mein maafi busy rehtha hu
Mein aapke updates toh roj Partha hu Lekin phele ki tarah detail review nahi de paunga mein
Ab aaye hae aapke updates pe toh saare updates ek se badhkar ek hae,mere pass kehene ke liye sabdh nahi hae bhai aur Sabse acchi baat aapko ye hai ki aap starting and ending updates ki bohat jabardast tarike se karte ho

Thanks brother 4 appreciating... aap kahani ke saath jude hue hain,yahi kaafi h..aage ke updates me bhi aapka saath chahunga.. yunhi saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

UPDATE KUCH HI DER ME

 

[Ashish120]

Bhai jaldi de update...

 

[RAJIV SHAW]

Waiting bhai