Fantasy ATTITUDE.....( MAGIC + ROMANCE )(Completed)

[vj4u]

Awesome mega update Bhai
ND
Congrats for the 200 pages

Aaj ka update bahut hi shaandar tha
Jaha Hume analia ka yaha aane
ka karan pata chala wohi ye bhi pata
Chala ki asal mein analia ko yaha
Laane Wala vj hi tha.

Taaki bhavishavaani k baare mein
Avni jaan sake aur vj ko theek Kar sake
Vj ne courian phal k andar 2 kano ko chupa
Kar asmodemous ki chaal ki kaat soch li thi
Aur intezaar tha to sahi vakt ka ki kàb wo
Theek hoga.

Ronit aur avni ne analia k through
bhavishavaani ko samajh k vj ko
theek Kar diya. Aur vj k theek hote hi
Use uski Lord of Angel's ki pehchaan
Bhi vaapis mil gayi hai. Dekhna padega
Ki ab vj Kya karega aur kaise wo shaila
Aur Isla walo k saath saath
samay sanchalakon ko bhi unke kasht
Se nijaat kab dilwayega.

Waiting for the next update

Thanks brother 4 the review...Sab pata chal jaayega wo bhi bohot ho jald...aap bas saath bane rahuye

 

[vj4u]

Bhai kya kahane hai update ke.... Speechless writing skills hai bhai aapki..... Detailing bahut hi kamal ki karte ho bhai.... Samaj nahi aata itana sab kaise yaad karate ho.... U r great yaar...I am a big fan of you and your writing... Aaj ka update sabse badhiya laga... Maza aa gaya... keep writing.. and keep rocking

Thanks 4 such heart melting words of appreciation brother... aage aur bhi maza aane waala hai... saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

waise bhai ek baat samajh nahi aayi ki angels Demolition and Devil's sacrifice kaise ?

Sacrifice to Angel ka kaam hona chahiye and Demolition Devils ka hone chahiye this is what i feel.......

Shaila ke baare mein bhi sochnaa kitni tadap rahi hai wo kitnaa bharosa hai use apne dost par .....kash VJ use itni saksham banaa de ki wo apni ladayi khud lad sake...

Brother wo hadbadi me galti se mistake ho gayi thi.. thik kar diya hai

 

[vj4u]

Awesome story bhai,
abhi maine 8 updates hi padha hai,
story ka plot bahot hi shandaar hai,
Mahamahim ki agya se sabhi devil's ne charo or arajakta failana prarambh kar diya hai,
dekhte hai ab aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update

Jaise jaise aap updates padhte jaayenge,ye kahani aapko ek unsoche thrilling safar par le jaayegi... jaldi se padhiye aur present updates ke saath judiye..

 

[vj4u]

So lovely, so simple yet so complicated... So down to earth yet so magnificently out of reach....
वैसे तो इस कहानी का हर अपडेट अपने आप में एक मेगा अपडेट है बल्कि दूसरे कई कथाकारों की so called मेगा अपडेट से तुलना करें तो सुपर मेगा अपडेट हैं लेकिन पिछले दो अपडेट, खास कर 100वां अपडेट कई मायनों में निराले रहे। कथानक हो, गति हो, शब्द हों या भाव, वाक्य हों या दैहिक भंगिमा। सभी का वर्णन लाजवाब रहा।

So far as puzzle is concerned, I had solved it Almost. Almost because possibly due to same reasons that Avantika stated, I too had considered VJ's mom. Had I have pondered over it some more, I might have reached the correct conclusion... Why? For this, I will send you something in conversation... Will post that possibly in the night.
Till then,
Bye.... God Bless You...

Thanks brother 4 this beautiful review... mom or dad,both have the same stream of bloid fliwing in thier viens with a common feeling 4 V.J..LOVE...

lots to come by...be along

 

[vj4u]

Best thing was Abt Father's unconditional love ..
Although MAA aur Papa k pyar ka comparison kabi ni kia ja sakta kyuki dono hi Ek saman aur bhagwan k jaise h kiisi b Bache k liye . Dono hi apna jivan guzar dete h apne bacho ki jindgi swarne k liye aur najane kitne hi sacrifices karte h..

Still kuch cheeze h Jo sirf MAA aur sirf pita Kar sakte h .. kher kabi kabi aisa ho b jata h ki kisi Bache k close uski MAA ya uske pita ho . I think it's natural and nothing wrong in this..
Is case m Jairaj ji vikram k jyada close h aur aaj unki wajah s aur unke oyar ki wajah s Lord of Angels dobara revive hoke aaye..



Itna kch hua h just 1-2 update m ki har Chez bare m bol b ni sakte ..


Well, since lord of Angels is back , ab sare problem solve hone lagengi but Kya itna kafi hoga VJ k liye Asmodeus ko harane k liye ??


Asmodeus n itne samay m Kya kuch ni kia hoga Vikram ki wapas aane k baad uspe hamla karne k liye . M sure Asmodeus hamesa s janta tha ki vikram thek jarur hojaega isliye wo hamesa kaam karta Raha .. Asmodeus ki cross world aur iske black ospotcles uski shaktiya badhane k kaam m hamesa lage rahe h ..

Avi Asmodeus ko white energy b mili h 3 Rays k Roop m aur wo shayad Beelzeebub aur buuvika k liye b h . Ab ye white energy h to inse to teeno aur b jyafa Shaktishali hojaenge ...


I think ab Vikram ko b new source of white energy ko Pana hoga apni shaktiya badhane k liye ...



insab s alag analia ..
Analia n bola ki wo pyar karti h Vikram s but bhavishvani k solve hone k baadjab ye baat batayi avni n ki Vikram n ek kahani b chodi h analia k andar Jiski wajha s ye sab possible hua h to I think analia ko Jo feelings aayi thi wo is wajahs hi thi..

Curious planet m har shaks k andar vj ki white energy flow kr rhi h but analia k andar kuch aur b tha. Shayad isliye analia ko alag feel hua Vikram k liye ..
Ab jab ye sav solve ho Chuka h to I think analiab ab normal ho Jani chahiye .
Well in case agar analia Sach m pyar karni lagi h to dekhte h vj Kya decide krta h...

Wasie ye mast scene hoga jab bhuvika k samne analia aaegi bcoz dono sagi behne h aur bhuvika ye baat janti b ni h.

Let's see Kya hotah h...

Thanks 4 the review brother... bohot kuch bua aur aage bhi hoga.. speculations toh bohothain,dekhte hain,kahani kis aur badhti hai...

Aur haan,sirf bhuvika hi nahi,analia ko bhi abhi tak nahi pata ki BHUVIKA kaun hai...

 

[vj4u]

UPDATE RAAT TAK

 

[RAJIV SHAW]

Waiting

 

[Mahakaal]

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OK INTIZAR RAHEGA RAAT TAK

 

[Prince]

Post kariye sir jee...aur intezaar nai ho ra hai