Fantasy ATTITUDE.....( MAGIC + ROMANCE )(Completed)

[Avir]

Arre maine kab aaj ka nola tha brother.. mai jab bhi time deta hun,update de deata hun.. aur aaj isilye nahi kyunki likha hi nahi toh post kya karun..

Real life bhi toh hai na bhai,jisme main focur rehta hai.jab bhi wahan se time milta hai,update likhta hun..

Ok no problem bro...
I know but kya hai tumhre update alternate day padhne ki aadat hgyi thats why

 

[Jitu kumar]

AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI VIKRAM AUR AVNATIKA KO IBI KE LIYE CHUNA JAATA HAI WAHIN SHIMLA PAHUNCHTE HI VIKRAM AVANTIKA KO BACHATA HAI....



AB AAGE:-




CHAPTER-1




( DEVIL'S ENCHANTMENT & THE HOLY SPIRIT )




UPDATE-32:-




VOLENTEAR- hey excuse me.you are representing MAHARASHTA... right

??

AVANTIKA hotel ki lobby se bahar ki taraf nikal hi rahi thi ki IBI ki ek volentear ki awaaz sunkar rook gayi.....

AVANTIKA- yes i'm.

VOLENTEAR- oh great.mai aapke paas hi aa rahi thi.

AVANTIKA- kyun,kya hua.any problem!!!!

VOLENTEAR- no,no problem.actually this a the memo of the whole competition.kab kya aur kaise hoga,isme saare details likhe hain....ek aapke liye aur dusra aapke partner ke liye.....i guess aap bahar jaa rahi hain.aap apna rakh lijiye,mai unka unhe de deti hun...

AVANTIKA- no need 4 that.wo abhi hotel me nahi hain...infact mai bhi unke paas hi jaa rahi thi.aap unka memo bhi mujhe hi de dijiye.mai unhe de dungi..

VOLENTEAR- oh really.thanks..

AVANTIKA- oh common...its not a big deal.....

AVANTIKA ne usse VIKRAM ka bhi memo liya aur hotel ke bahar nikal gayi...

AVANTIKA- ab aaya unt pahad ke neeche...competition me kya hoga ye pata hi nahi chalega toh prep kya karega.!!!!

AVANTIKA ne VIKRAM ko dene waala memo faada aur dustbin me fek diya.aur nikal padi shimla darshan pe....

abhi subah ke 10 baj rahe the.aur life me pehli baar mai itni der tak ghode bech kar so raha tha.actually kal raat pehli baar mobile kharidne ke nuksaano se mai rubaroo hua tha..

pehle mom ne ek ghanta mera dimag khaya.pehli baar jo bahar gaya tha akele...fir dad ne aadhe ghante tak tips diye competition se related ki ye sawaal aa sakta hai..wo sawaal aa sakta hai.

dono se baat kar phone rakha hi tha ki ANJALI madam ka phone aa gaya.unhone shimla se unke liye kya laana hai uski list likhwaani shuru ki jisme 1 ghanta aur nikal gaya.madam ne le dekar call rakha hi tha ki RONIT bhai sahab ne ghanti baja di.

aur meri mati maari gayi thi jo maine subah waale AVANTIKA madam ke kaand ke baare me isse bata diya.....fir jo iske sawal jawab aur suggestion ka dour shuru hua toh 1.30 ghante tak chala....

jab phone rakh kar time dekha toh 2 baj chuke the.maine tabhi soch liya tha ki


kal no exercise
no DHYAAN
only taking
sleeping GYAN.......


MAI- hello,haan mom.good morning...

neend khuli bhi toh kaise!!!!mobile ke gala phaadne se....mai toh call karne waale ko gaali bakne hi waala tha,par jab screen par sweet mom flash hua,toh saara ghussa ud gaya.....

MOM- teri awaaz itni alsaayi si kyun lag rahi hai..tabiyat toh theek hai naa.

MAI- haan mom.mai thik hun.wo abhi neend khuli naa,isiliye..

MOM- arre waah.ye toh chamatkar ho gaya.aaj pehli baar mera baccha itni late utha hai....

MAI- haan wo raat ko ANJU aur RONIT se late tak baat hui isiliye neend nahi khuli...

MOM- acha ab uth jaa.nashta time se karna chahiye warna tabiyat bigad jayegi...

MAI- ok mom.where's dad!!!

MOM- woh aaj thoda jaldi office nikal gaye.

MAI- ok mom,mai baad me baat karta hun.bye luv u....

MOM- ok beta.bye.luv u 2...tc.....




WAHIN DUSRI TARAF:-




AVANTIKA- bhaiya 10th ki all in one book hai kya?

?

B.OWNER-yes madam.mai abhi laaya..

AVANTIKA (man me) uska memo toh faad diya.par risk nahi le sakti.....mujhe puri tarike se prepared rehna hoga...ye competition jeetenge toh hum dono,par credit sirf mujhe hi milega....

is waqt AVANTIKA madam ek book shop me khadi thi... VIKRAM se aage rahne ke liye madam se jo ban pad raha tha ,sab aazma rahi thi....

S.OWNER- ye lijiye madam.....

AVANTIKA- isme saare subjects covered hain naa!!!

MAI- bilkul ma'am.... is catogory ki ye best book hai...

AVANTIKA- ok thanks.

madamji book lekar sidhe nikli wapas hotel ke liye.ab bhai book le toh li thi,ab ratnaabhi toh tha.....



BACK TO HERO:-



MAI- kidhar madam......

AVANTIKA meri awaaz sunkar rook gayi.

mai neeche lobby me baitha mobile pe kuch padh hi raha tha ki AVANTIKA mujhe aati dikhi....

AVANTIKA ka chehra ek sec ek liye fika pad gaya kyunki uske haath me book ke saath memo bhi tha.par wo turant sambhal gayi aur badi chalaki se memo ko book ke peeche sarka diya..

MAI- kahan kho gayi aap..aur ye haath me kya pakda hua hai.

AVANTIKA- kuch nahi.bas aise hi timepaas karne ke liye ek book lene gayi thi.wahi hai...

MAI- kal competition hai aur tumhe time paas karna hai...

AVANTIKA- haan toh.meri preparations ho gayi hai....acha mujhe room me kuch kaam hai.ok bye....

MAI- arre suno toh raajdhani express.maine bhi tumse gappe maarne ke liye tumhe nahi roka hai.acha ye batao IBI waalon ne koi memo ya koi paper bheja hai kal ke format ka...!!!!

AVANTIKA- nahi toh...aisa bhi kuch hota hai kya???

MAI- tum na ek no ki dumbo ho....kisi bhi competition me uska format toh pehele se aata hi hai naa.

AVANTIKA- oh.i didn't know..acha mai jaati hun....

MAI- aaram se jaiyo...kahin fisal kar chot na laga baithna warna fir uske liye bhi mujhe hi kosogi.

par AVANTIKA ne kuch bhi nahi bola aur nikal gayi..

MAI- kamaal hai yaar.ab bhi kuch nahi boli.ek din me itna change.

actually kal airport ke baahar hue haadse ke baad se maine AVANTIKA ko bohot taunt maare the par usne ek baar bhi kuch nahi bola tha.....
khair saanu ki......mai bhi chal pada room kal ki taiyari karne.....



HEAVEN ME :-




ST CECILIA- ye jo ho raha hai aur isse aage jo hoga kya wo sahi hai.....

ST SEBASTIAN- ye hamare haath me nahi hai......ye kahani khud hi khudko likh rahi hai.bas dekhte jao........




BACK TO HERO:-




MAI- so finally, we are here......

AVANTIKA- haan,mujhe toh kaafi nervousness ho rahi hai.....

SAINT PAUL INTERNATIONAL SCHOOL...wo jagah jahan is saal IBI competition rakha gaya tha.....hum abhi school ke bahar hi khade the......aadhe ghante me competition start hone waala tha.....

MAI- chalen....

AVANTIKA ne apna sir hilaya aur hum dono andar chale gaye.andar kaafi saare VOLUNTEERS the.unme se ek se humne competition ki jagah puchi....

VOLUNTEER- and u are???

MAI- VIKRAM JAIRAJ SINGH

AVANTIKA- AVANTIKA AHUJA.

VOLUNTEER- maharashtra zone.right!!!

HUM DONO- yes....

VOLUNTEER- ok.aap log mere peeche chaliye..

wo hume lekar andar ek auditorium me Pahunchi.har taraf IBI ke banners lage hue the.kaafi saare national boards ke officers bhi wahan moujud the.....

hum chalte hue ek jagah pahunche jisse dekh kar hamari AVANTIKA madam khush ho gayi.actually hum apne seats ke paas pahunch chuke the jiske piche hum dono ke bade bade photos lage hue the.madam lag gayi apni hi photo ke saath selfie lene me..

MAI- ho gaya tumhara.yaar apne hi photo ke saath photo.ajeeb nahi hai.

AVANTIKA bas mooh bana kar reh gayi...

VOLUNTEER- ye lijiye aapke badges...seats toh aapne dekh li.baith jaiye.

humne bhi usse thanks kaha aur apni seats me baith gaye....

hey young man...how are u..

abhi hum baithe hi the ki hamare saamne ICSE department ke director aaye.ye wahi the jinhone mujhe 1st anounce kiya tha.

MAI- i'm fine sir.she is AVANTIKA AHUJA.my partner..

DIRECTOR- all the best 2 u too.

AVANTIKA- thanks sir..

DIRECTOR- acha VIKRAM.maine tumnhe memo ki soft copy bheji thi...u went through it..

MAI- ya ya..i did went through it....& thanks 4 ur support and help..

DIRCTOR- any time my boy..bohot suna hai tumhare princi se tumhare baare me.just win the competition.ok....

MAI- i'll try my best sir.

DIRECTOR ne hum dono ko ek baar aur wish kiya aur chale gaye...maine AVANTIKA ki taraf dekha jo sir jhukaye sharmindagi mehsoos kar rahi thi..

MAI- dhoke se mili jeet jeet nahi hoti....par V.J ko dhoka dena bhi itna aasan nahi hai madam.mujhe memo ki soft copy sir ne ek din pehle hi msg kar di thi...

AVANTIKA- i am sorry..

MAI- oye ya kya bol diya soniye...khuda ka kahar hi ho gaya ye toh.aapke mooh se sorry.
par wo kuch zyada hi sad lag rahi thi,usne kuch nahi bola.....

MAI- arre relax.mazak kar raha tha.ye sab bhool jao aur competition pe focus karo...

tabhi anouncement hui...

PRESENTER- good morning every body..we welcome u in the 25th IBI MEET...hamare beech is waqt 15 states se wahan ke 2 best students aaye hai participate karne.without any further due mai aapko is saal ka format samjha deti hun...

is saal is competition ko 2 parts me divide kiya gaya hai.....ek competion aaj hoga aur doosra jo ki finals hai aaj se 3 din baad....

aaj ka aapka competition general quiz hai....aap sabhi apne state ke toppers hain.aaj ke aapke saare sawaal aapke books se hi honge.aaj tak aapne jo bhi padha hai saare questions unhi me se honge.

par catche ye hai ki aap sab jo ki jodi me aaye hain aaj ek dusre ke saath hokar bhi alag alag test denge.....

PUNJAB TEAM- sorry ma'am i didn't get you.saath hokar bhi alag alag,means....

PRESENTER- iska matlab hai aap ko aur aapke partner ko exam ki tarah hi ek ek question paper aur ek answer sheet di jayegi...aap individually us paper ko solve karke submit karenge...

fir hum aapke aur aapke partner ke right answers calculate karenge....aur dono ke right answers ko jodne par jo number banega wo aapke team ka result hoga.

for example team ek ek student ne 10 me se 10 sahi jawab diye hain aur dusre ne 1.toh dono ka total hoga 11 out of 20.....aur haan sabse imp baat,question solve karne ke liye aapke paas bus 15 minutes hi honge.

top 5 results ya yun kahun 5 states finals ke liye qualify karenge...baaki ke states unfortunately aaj shaam ki flight se waapas ghar chale jaayenge...so are u all ready...

SABHI- YES MA'AM.....

fir hum sabhi ko question sheet aur mark sheet baatin gayi...maine aur AVANTIKA ne ek baar ek dusre ko dekha par kuch kaha nahi...hooter ki aawaaz se humne likhna start kiya aur 15 min baad ek aur hooter baja jiske baad humare answer sheet le liye gaye.

results aadhe ghante baad anounce hone the......

AVANTIKA- toh kaisa raha???

MAI- thik thaak.

AVANTIKA- mera toh avon raha.bohot easy questions the.

MAI -mai bas muskura diya......


AFTER 30 MINS:-


PRESENTER- so students we have the names of the qualifiers....

FIRST position me hain MAHARASHTRA....inke 20 questions me se pure 20 sahi hain...

AVANTIKA ki toh khushi dekhti ban rahi thi...aur issi khushi me anjaane me wo mere gale lag gayi...

DHAAKKKKKK............AVANTIKA ke gale lagte hi zor se mera dil dhadka.....thodi der baad usse realize hua ki wo mere gale lagi hui hai.wo jhat se alag hui....

AVANTIKA- sorry,wo excitement me dhyan nahi raha...

MAI- its ok.hota hai.....

idhar presenter ne baaki charon states ke naam bhi bataye.wo sab imp nahi hai toh mai unke baare me nahi likhunga,haan par ek baat thi,hum paanchon teams jo finals ke liye select hui thi unme ek chiz commom thi.har team me ek ladka tha aur ek ladki.....

PRESENTER- ok then.rest of the teams,we are really sorry 4 ur loss.better luck next time & finalists team...we will meet 4 the finals on saturaday.till then prepare 4 it & enjoy ur stay in shimla....

DIRECTOR- excuse me,all the finalists.come here please...

hum sabhi ek dusre ko congratulate kar rahe the.sir ke bulane par unke paas chale gaye..

DIRECTOR- pehle toh finals me pahunchne ke liye aap sab ko badhai...

SAB- thank you sir..

DIRCTOR- CAFE SOL naam ka yahan ek bohot famous resturant hai.aaj raat ko aap sab ke honour me ek party rakhi hai wahan.aap sab ko pic karne ke liye sharp 8 baje gaadi pahunch jayegi...aap sab ready rahiyega..

1 STUDENT- sir hum toh party wear bhi nahi laaye hain...

DIRECTOR- uski zaroorat nahi hi.dopahar tak aap sab ke room me aaj raat ke liye kapde pahunch jayenge..ok toh milte hain raat ko.

HUM SAB- ok and thank you sir..

hum sab ko ek hi hotel allot kiya gaya tha.hum sab saath hi nikal pade hotel ke taraf......



PARTY NIGHT:-



MAI- WOWWWWW..........

jo sawaal har AASHIQ puchta hai,
kahin ye wahi JAWAB toh nahi.....

itni khoobsurti,haqiqat ho nahi sakti,
kahin ye koi haseen KHWAB toh nahi...

is waqt mai taiyar hokar neeche lobby me just pahuncha tha.baaki sab neeche aa chuke the....tabhi meri nazar AVANTIKA par padi..

kaali saari me halki makeup ke saath itni khoobsurat lag rahi thi ki mere mooh se apne aap hi shayri nikal gayi.....abhi tak unme se kisi ki nazar mujhpe nahi padi thi.tabhi unme se ek ladki ne mujhe dekh liya.

LADKI- WOWWWW.......

uski awaaz sun sabne uski taraf dekha.aur uski nazar ka peecha kar jab sabne mujhe dekkha toh sabke mooh se bhi yahi nikla.WOOOOWWWW..in woww me ek woww AVANTIKA ka bhi tha....

2ND LADKI- yaar kitna hot hai....bye god meri toh heart beat skip kar gayi isse dekh.

ladkiyon ko chhodo ladke bhi ek tak mujhe dekh rahe the....mai ab tak unke paas pahunch chuka tha.....

MAI- kya hua guyzzzz.aise kya dekh rahe ho...

KARUNA- yaar tu kya dikh raha hai.meri maan party me mat jaa.yahan hamara haal behaal hai pata nahi wahan ki ladkiyon ka kya haal hoga...

( ye ladki karuna DELHI ko represent kar rahi hai.iske partner ka naam pawan hai ) ye dono se aaj hi hamara intro hua hai.

PAWAN- sach yaar....kasam se AVANTIKA aur TU dono hi kayamat dhaa rahe ho yaar.saala hume toh koi dekhega bhi nahi.....

KARUNA- AVANTIKA yar tum dono agar couple nahi hote toh mai abhi isse propose kar deti..( aaj subah jab AVANTIKA ne mujhe hug kiya tha,tabse sabhi hume couple samajh rahe the )

abhi mai kehne hi waala tha ki hum couple nahi hain ki

AVANTIKA- arre ye sab baatein baad me karenge.abhi chalte hain...hum already late hai.

hum sab cars me baith nikal pade restaurant ki taraf.....

AVANTIKA- wow,what a beautiful view..

jab hum wahan pahunche toh AVANTIKA ke mooh se pehle shabd yahi nikle.waise restuarnt tha bhi taarif ke kaabil.jheel ki side me bana half covered half open resturant.decorations bhi kamal ki thi.lawn me ek taraf fountain laga hua tha dusri taraf kuch guitarist guitar baja rahe the.

DIRECTOR- welcome everybody......aayiye,aap sab ka hi intazar ho raha hai...

hume apne apne partners jo ki by default ban gaye the,unke saath pairing me andar jaana pada.aisa mere aur AVANTIKA ke liye first time tha.hum dono hi thode uncomfortanle the.

DIRECTOR- ladies & gentleman.i proudly present to u the 10 most intelligent students of our country....

sabne hamare liye taali bajayi.....

humne bow down karke sabko thanks kaha.

DIRECTOR- now i would like to introduce the national topper of this years 10th icse examination.VIKRAM JAIRAJ SINGH...

ab ye mere liye unexpected tha.par ab naam le liya hai toh aage toh jaana hi padega naa..

MAI- thank you every body 4 this warm welome.isse zyada aur mai bolna nahi chahta tha....mai wapas peeche jaakar khada ho gaya.

humare liye ek big round table laga hua tha.hum sab jaakar wahan baith gaye.

hamara dinner ho chuka tha....hotel se lekar ab tak mai aur AVANTIKA ek dusre ko chori chori dekhte aa rahe the.pata nahi kyun par mai usse dekhne se khud ko rok nahi paa raha tha.shaad yahi haal uska bhi tha...

HOST- hello every body...mai neelam aaj raat ki aapki host aur aapki dost aap sabhi ka CAFE SOL me welcome karti hun..

toh guyz hum sab jaante hain ki hamare beech india ke top ten minds baithe hain.par mai ye dekhna chahti hun ki kya in minds ke paas dil bhi hai...

toh maine kuch task soche hain jinme hamare khaas mehmaan (hum 10 ) participate karenge.isse pata chal jayega ki inke dimag jitne hi inke dil bhi strong hain ki nahi.....

hum sab ne mana kiya par wahan ki crowd ne hamare naam ki hooting shuru kardi.hamare paas naa ka option hi nahi bacha..

NEELAM- sone pe suhaga ye hai ki luckily hamare paas 5 boys hain aur 5 girls.toh task pairing me hoga.aur pairing unhi ke saath aapki hogi jiske saath aap yahan IBI me participate karne aaye ho.

so get ready 4 the first task.please bring the guitar.

PAWAN- ye kya karane ka soch rahi hai bhai.

MAI- ab guitar mangwaya hai toh goli toh chalwayegi nahi.dekhta jaa...

NEELAM-haan toh girls ka task ye hai ki unhe yahan aakar ek song sunana hai aur boys ka task hai ki unhe unke partner ke song pe giutar bajana hai....aur jo couple is task ko pura karega,usse ek aur pyara sa task diya jaayega...

ladkiyon ka toh theek tha kyunki normally ladkiyan acha hi gaati hai.par ladkon ko apna task sunkar hawa nikal gayi.par marta kya na karta....NEELAM ek ek kar sabhi jodiyon ko bulati rahi aur sabhi ladke apni izzat utarwakar wapas aate rahe.....

PAWAN- saala,acha khaasa taliyon se swagat hua tha,jaane ka time hote hote jo izzat kamayi thi,sab utar gayi...

MAI- relax veere,har baar acha karna aur jeetna zaroori nahi...

AVANTIKA- apni baari aa gayi isiliye.....chalo,first time the great VIKRAM ko haarte hue dekhungi.....ye aaj first time tha jab AVANTIKA ne mujhse baat ki thi....

MAI ( dheere se ) hum toh pehle hi haar gaye....

AVANTIKA- kya kaha???

MAI- kuch nahi.aap bas apni awaaz sambhaliye.aur yaad rakhiye,sabse pehle taali bhi aap hi bajayengi.

AVANTIKA- dekhte hain!!!!!

NEELAM- dekha.....ladkiyan ladko se aage hi rehti hain.abhi tak ek bhi ladke ne ladkiyon se better perform nahi kiya hai....

ab bulate hain HAMARI LAST JODI KO.MISS AVANTIKA aur MR vikram KO jo hain AAMCHI MUMBAI se.....give them a big round of aplauds......

sabne humko wish kiya aur hum chal pade stage ki aur.mai guitar lekar ek stool par baith gaya aur AVANTIKA mere baaju me mike lekar khadi ho gayi.....

fir shuru hua song......

Main tenu samjhava ki
Na tere bina lagda jee
Tu ki jaane pyaar mera
Main karoon intezar tera
Tu dil tui yon jaan meri
Main tenu samjhawa ki
Na tere bina lagda jee

Mere dil ne chun laiyaa ne
Tere dil diyaan raahan
Tu jo mere naal tu rehta
Turpe meriyaan saaha
Jeena mera.. hoye
Hun hai tera, ki main karaan
Tu kar aitbaar mera
Main karoon intezar tera
Tu dil tui-yon jaan meri
Main tenu samjhawan kee
Na tere bina lagda jee

AVANTIKA ki awaaz bohot achi thi.mai bas usse puri tarah feel karke guitar bajaye jaa raha tha.....mukhda aur first antra toh maine dropped d aur drop c me bajaya tha par aakhri antre me maine augment chord se bajana shuru kiya....

jab gaana khatm hua toh maine aankhen kholi.....sabhi aankhen faade meri taraf dekh rahe the....maine AVANTIKA ki taraf dekha toh uska bhi wahi haal tha....maine usse hilaya toh wo hosh me aayi.aur sabse pehli clapping bhi ussi ne ki..aur fir sabne uska saath diya.

NEELAM- oh my god.....what song and i must say what guitar playing man.....i mean u just nailed it.lag raha tha jaise koi profeesional baja raha hai....well aap pehli jodi hain jisne apna pehla task pura kiya hai.

but abhi aapka dusra task baaki hai.mr VIKRAM aapko miss SHANAYA ke liye ek poetry bolni hogi.....so are u ready...

MAI- do i have an option.

NEELAM- bilkul nahi.chaliye mahoul ko thoda romantic karte hain.lights ko thoda dim kijiye & can we have a romantic instumental music in the background.alright mai chali.....all the best...

maine apna haath aage kiya jisse AVANTIKA ne pakad liya.sharm uske chehre ko aur khoobsurat bana rahi thi.....




mai lafzon me kuch bhi IZHAAR nahi karta
magar iska ye matlab nahi
ki mai PYAR nahi karta...

chahne ka hunar mere andar bhi hai,
par is soch me apna waqt
BARBAAD nahi karta...

tamasha na ban jaun kahin zamane
ke saamne,
isiliye apne dard ka IZHAAR nahi karta...

jo kuch bhi mila hai
usse khush hun mai,
aur paane ke liye
khuda se TAKRAAR nahi karta...

par kuch toh baat hai
tujhme aae zaalim
warna tujhe chaahne ki khata
ye dil,BAAR BAAR nahi karta.....

mai lafzon me kuch bhi IZHAAR nahi karta
par iska ye matlab nahi ki mai
PYAAAAARRRRRRR nahi kartaaaaa........





AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI



AAPKA APNA V.....J......

Awesome updates bhai,
what a great story,
bhai itna shandaar, lajawab aur amazing story hai ki mere paas aapki tarif ke liye shabd nhi hai,
vj ke dwara bola gaya kavita itna adbhut tha ki mai bata nhi sakta,
ab dekhte hai aage kya hota hai

 

[vj4u]

Awesome updates bhai,
what a great story,
bhai itna shandaar, lajawab aur amazing story hai ki mere paas aapki tarif ke liye shabd nhi hai,
vj ke dwara bola gaya kavita itna adbhut tha ki mai bata nhi sakta,
ab dekhte hai aage kya hota hai

Aage padhte jaiye brother.. kahani jaise jaise aage badhti hai,aur intense hote jaati hai

 

[vj4u]

KAMAL KI UPDATE THI
TO AKHIR ANALIA KI FEELING KA MOAMLA BHI SOLVE HO GYA
AUR ANALIA AUR BHUVIKA KA SACH BHI SAMNA AGYA
AB AGLI UPDATE KA INTAZAR RAHE GA

Wah kya baat aj face to face karwa diya dono ko is ab kya bhuvika kis ki side rahe gi asmodeous ki side yan vikram ki side??

Fantastic, mind blowing, extra ordinary update

Gale lagane ka Asmodeous ka koi chal to nahin

Nice

Gjb update h biradr

Excellent...... Speechless.... Mind blowing...
Fantastic update bhai... Maza aa gaya... keep writing

Mind blowing and fantastic update

Super update hai bhai

Thanks brothers.. be along

 

[vj4u]

Lajabab update biradar....

Lajawab update bhai mjaa aagya
Interesting

Bhai deri se comment karne ka liye mafi chahuga phlie exams and job thei
Aur apki last do lines ka matalab ab samaz me aya ki God me kyu kahi thi vo bat

Mast update very awesome​

Behad Shandar Update Bhai

Waiting...

Bahut hi lajawab update bhai
I'm totally speechless
Amazing story bhai

Thanks brothers.. yunhi saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

Awesome brother...bahut si fantasy stories padhi hai par characters ka itna acha development kisi bhi story me dekhne nai mila

Aapko pasand aa raha hai yahi mere liye ek trophy jaisa hai.. saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

Bhai update padte hue ek baat maine notice ki hai ki jab vj baat karta hai matlub dailog bolta hai bhagawaan kishn ki tarah lagta hai kyunki unki baat bi aisi paheli jaise hote hai teek usi tarah vj baat karta hai kaha se laate ho aise dailog bhai agar iss story ko koi serial director ne pad lina tho wo jaroor ek serial kareha iss story ke uper bhai aisa koi hai jo iss story ko serial me convert karde tho unka iska script dedo yaar paise bi hojayaga or naam bhi or maza hum logonko dugna ayega pls dekho ho to me thumari age haath jodta hu

Aapne bohot bada compliment de diya brother.. thanks 4 that... ayr rahi baat story kisi ko dene ki toh is forum me bhi laakhon log aate hain... agar kisi ka koi aisa contact ho toh wohi karde...it will eb a big favour 4 me...saath bane rahiye

 

[Asif khan]

Waiting for cheta update

 

[Dark Devil]

Waiting for the next update

 

[vj4u]

Awesome



Awesome update bhai
Maza aa gya
Vj twisted dimension mein gya
Aur waha uski energy kis wajah se
Unstable Kyu Hui aur wo Kya tha
Jisne vj ki urja ko unstable Kiya
Mirror world mein mein Jo kaam
Karne gya tha vj wo to aadha hi hua hai
Aur wo uski yaad Tak ko kaid Kar aaya
Taaki asmodemous ko pata na chale
Clever
Vj aur Ronit ki pyaar bhari nok jhonk
Ek baar phirse dekhne ko mili
Jise dekh Kar acha laga

Vj ka yun moniskel Jana aur
Bhuvika aur analia ko apne
Baare mein sab kuch pata chal gya
Bhuvika ab asmodemous k chhall k
Baare mein sab kuch jaan gayi hai
But ab bhi wo ek devil hai
Kya wo phirse ek Sachi ladki
Ban payegi jaisi pehle thi
Asmodemous aur vj ka vyaktitva
Bahut ki alag hai ek doosre se
Jaha BeezleBub aur bhuvika k
Saath saath sabke andar kuch
Alag alag feeling hai
Wohi dono Bhai ek doosre k
Gale lag rahe hai

Waha Kya Kya hoga wo dekhna padega
Waiting for the next update

Thanks brother 4 this beautiful review... aage bohot maza aane waala hai... saath bane rahiye