Fantasy ATTITUDE.....( MAGIC + ROMANCE )(Completed)

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA SHAITAN ASMODEUS AUR USKI TAKAT KE BAARE ME.KAISE USNE EK MAHASHAKTI KO MEHSOOS KIYA AUR USKI KHOJ ME APNE KHAAS DEVIL GHETTO SOFAR KO BHEJA PAR GHETTO SOFAR US SHAKTI KA PATA LAGANE ME NAKAMIYAAB RAHA.....
AB AAGE........





UPDATE 7- ab tak ASMODEUS samajh chuka tha ki is baar uska saamna kisi badi shakti se hone waala hai.ASMODEUS unme se nahi tha jo taakat ke ghamand me khud ko sarvashaktishaali samajhne ki galti karte hain.wo apne dushman ko kabhi kam nahi aankta tha.aur is baar toh khud BHAGWAN ASMODEUS ke raaste ki deewar ban rahe the.ASMODUES apne darbaar me gehri chintan me baitha hua tha.kuch der tak yunhi saari kadiyan jodta raha aur achanak uske mukh par ek smile aa gayi.

ASMODEUS-THIK HAI PARAM PITA..mujhe apki chunouti swikar hai......ye keh ASMODEUS ne aankh band kar kuch naam liye aur ussi waqt uske saamne 4 devils sar jhukaye prakat hue.ye devils bhi kabhi angels the.par jab GOD ne ASMODEUS ko heaven se nikala toh ye sab bhi ASMODEUS kee saath chale aaye.inki soch bhi ASMODEUS se alag nahi thi...ye uske sache wafadar the.inke naam hain.....

DEVIL 1-ABBADON...(ye bhram paida karne me mahir hai.ye insan ke dimag ki tarango ko vash me kar inhe ek dusre ke khilaf bhadkata hai....jab ye angel tha tab iska kaam iska ulat tha.tab ye insaano me bhai chara,pyar failata tha par devil bante hi iski kabiliyat ulat gayi.yahi haal baki sabka bhi tha.)

DEVIL 2-ABRAXAS...(iska sir bade se murge ke sir jaisa par pair dragon ke jaisa hai.isse the DEVIL OF MISCHIEF bhi kehte hain.ye logon ke dimag me chori, loot, kidnapping jaise vichar bharta hai.iska koi bhi kaam sidha nahi hota.)

DEVIL 3-LILITHA...(ye ek female DEVIL hai.isse DEVIL OF LUST bhi kaha jaata hai.ye insaan ke dimag me hawas bharne ka kaam karti hai.)

DEVIL 4-VALEFOR...(Isse DEVIL OF DESTRUCTION bhi kaha jaata hai.duniya me jitne wars hote hain.ye kaam issi ka hota hai.ye insaan ke dimag ki destruction powers badhata hai.naye naye hathiyar banane ke ideas yahi insaan ke dimag me daalta hai....)

Ye hain ASMODEUS ke chaar pramukh hathiyar.inki wajah se hi ASMODEUS ki taqat lagatar badhti hai.aur inki taaqat ka shroth bhi ASMODEUS hi hai.ek aur DEVIL hai jo in chaaro se upar hai aur ASMODEUS ka bohot khass hai par abhi uski entry me time hai....

BACK TO THE STORY......



DEVILS-HAI HAIL DEVIL KING.

ASMODEUS-utho.mere bachon. jo kaam maine tumhe diye,tumne puri nishta se usse pura karte aa rahe ho.par ab tumhe apne kaam me aur tezi laani hogi.insaano me krurta, madhbhedh, hawas kapat is kadar badha do ki nyaya ke rakhwaale angels pareshan ho jaayen.ab tak toh duniya me sab kuch barabar balance me chal raha tha.burai ke saath saath kuch achai bhi thi.par ab nahi.ab achai ka astitv khatm karne ka waqt aa gaya hai.tum sab apne apne kala me nipun ho.apni puri taakat jhokon par mujhe kisi bhi keemat me sansaar se achai ko khatm karna hai.
4RO DEVIL'S-jaisa aap kahen DEVIL'S KING.ASMODEUS se sawal karne ki himmat kisi me na thi.
Par ek devil tha jiske dimag me sawal bunna shuru ho gaye.wo tha THE GOD OF MISCHIEF ABRAXAS.ab wo tha hi badmash dimag ka devil.akhir control nahi kar paaya toh puch hi baitha.

ABRAXAS- DEVILS KING achanak ye sab!!! kya koi pareshani ho gayi hai?

Uska puchna khatm hi hua tha aur agle hi pal ABRAXAS ki cheekh pure darbar me gunj uthi.usse ek AAG KE ZANJEER ne baandh rakha tha.ABRAXAS dard se chillaye jaa raha tha. Uski dard bhari awaaz se baaki teeno devils thar thar kaamp rahe the.par saamne ASMODEUS ek dum shant khada tha.chehre par koi bhaav nahi.kuch der ABRAXAS ko tadpaane ke baad ASMODEUS ne haath upar kiya aur zanjeer gayab ho gayi.ABRAXAS khada nahi reh paaya aur zameen pe gir gaya.ASMODEUS ne ghur k ABRAXAS ki taraf dekha.ABRAXAS kheenchta hua ASMODEUS ke pairon ke paas pada tha.ASMODUES ne usse hawa me utha liya.


ASMODEUS-aur koi sawal?

ABRAXAS-shama mahamahim.maafi.

ASMODEUS ne turant ABRAXAS ka gala pakda ur dabav banana shuru kiya,jaise jaise dabav badh raha tha ABRAXAS ka chehra kaala padhta jaa raha tha.kuch der baad ASMODEUS ne dabav kuch kam kiya.

ASMODEUS- MAAFI.......is shabd se mujhe sakht nafrat hai.dubara iska istamal mere saamne mat karna.
Ye bol ASMODEUS ne ABRAXAS ko baaki teeno ke taraf feka aur dusre haath se chutki bajai.ABRAXAS udta hua teeno se takraya aur charon gayab ho apne apne jagah pahunch gaye.

DUSRI TARAF PRITHVI ME......

Bache ka naam karan ho chuka tha.BABA VISHAKHT apni raah nikal chuke the.baba ko gate tak chhod jairaj minu aur kamla andar hall me aa gaye.baaki aas paas ke log apne apne ghar jaa chuke the.baaki noukar bhi apne apne kaam me lag gaye the.

KAMLA-dekha malik dekha maalkin.maine kaha tha naa ki chote maalik sadharan nahi.

JAIRAJ- mera bacha sadharan hai ya asadharan,ye sab baad me pata chalega.mera bacha ek acha insaan nikle meri toh bus uparwaale se yahi dua hai.

MINU-haan sahi kaha.aur baba ne hamaree bache ka naam kitna acha rakha hai.VIKRAM.haina!!!!

JAIRAJ.haan ye toh hai.

KAMLA-malik/malkin, dekhna chote maalik apne naam ke jaise hi mahaveer honge.

MINU-tere muh me ghee shakkar kamla.jairaj has diye.kamla ghar ka kaam sambhalne lagi.jairaj ne minu ko rest karne ko kaha,aur khud bhi bache ko godh me lekar minu ke saath bedroom me chal diye.bedroom pahunch minu bed par let gayi.jairaj vikram ko godh me pakad wahin minu ke paas baith gate aur bache ke saath khelne lage.vikram bhi apne papa ko tukur tukur dekh raha tha jaise apne pitah ko pehchaan gaya ho.minu bhi dono baap bete ko muskurati hui dekh rahi thi.

MINU- suniye ji.kuch mahino se aap kuch pareshan se lag rahe hain.kya baat hai?

JAIRAJ -Kuch bhi toh nahi.tumhe aisa kyun laga?

MINU- dekhiye,aapko bhi pata hai aap mujhse jhooth nahi bol sakte.mai aapki khamoshi tak ko pehchaan sakti hun.toh aap baat ko taliye mat.mai jaanti hun meri pregnancy ki wajah se aapne mujhse kuch nahi kaha ki kahin mai pareshan na ho jaun.aur maine bhi delivery tak aapse kuch nahi pucha.par ab toh sab thik hai naa.ab toh aap bata sakte hain.

JAIRAJ lambi saans chhodte hue-haan minu pareshani toh hai.kuch 2 mahino se majdooron me aur mere staaf me anban chal rahi hai.majdooron ka union leader mangal bonus ki demand kar raha hain.abhi bridge aadhi bhi nahi bani hai.jo payment ki quotation hamne government ko bheji thi wo bhi abhi tak sanction nahi hui hai. Usme ye bonus ki demand.upar se ye mangal kaam chor bhi hai.jab dekho sharab ke nashe me hi rehta hai.supeevisor ko bhi do teen baar dhamka chuaka hai.jab maine usse baat ki toh mujhe kaam rukwaane ki dhamki de di.samajh nahi aa raha hai ki kya karun.....

MINU- jai chinta karne se kya iska solution nikal jaayega.aapke job me aise problems toh aayenge hi naa.abhi aapki umr bhi kam hai.wo aapko naya samajhkar halke me le raha hai.aap thodi sakhti bartiye.dekhna sab thik ho jayega.

JAIRAJ-tumhe kya lagta hai maine ye socha nahi hoga.
par wo mangal thodi ulti khopdi ka hai.agar mai akela hota toh kab ka usse sabak sikha chuka hota ya nikal diya hota.par darta hun mere kuch karne se wo tumhe koi nuksaan na pahuncha de.aur ab yoh humara bacha bhi hai.isiliye rook jaata hun.

MINU-Mai kabse aapki kamzori ban gayi.aap toh mujhe apni taakat kehte the naa.aur rahi hamare bache ki baat toh yaad hai naa babaji ne kya kaha tha!!! Ki hamara bacha bohot lucky hai.hamare sabhi sapne pure honge.isiliye keh rahin hun aap hamari fikr chhodiye aur tention free hojaiye,aur pehle jaise confident hokar faisle lijiye.

JAIRAJ- As u say my QUEEN..acha mai zara hall me baith kar kuch paperwork nipta leta hun.tum bache ko doodh pilado,aur rest karo.fir apne bache aur biwi ke maathe ko chum jairaj room se nikal gaye.....




(AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.DEKHTE HAIN AAGE KYA KYA HOTA HAI.......)

 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI KAISE ASMODEUS NE APNE 4 PRAMUKH DEVILS KO PAAP BADHANE KE LIYE DHARTI PAR BHEJ DIYA.DUSRI TARAF JAIRAJ NE MINU KO APNI PROBLEM BATAYI.MINU NE JAIRAJ KO US PROBLEM SE BACHNE SE NAHI LADHNE KI SALAAH DI....

AB AAGE......


UPDATE 8- PHIR KUCH KHAAS NA HUA AUR YE DIN BHI NIKAL GAYA.AGLE DIN SUBAH 6 BAJE JAIRAJ UTH JOGGING PE NIKAL GAYE.(JOGGING,EXERCISE JAIRAJ AUR MINU KO DAILY ROUTINE THA.BODY KO FIT RAKHNE ME DONO KI KHAAS RUCHI THI.PAR MINU KE PREGNENT HONE KE BAAD SE JAIRAJ AKELE HI SUBAH UTH JOGGING PE JAANE LAGE HAIN.MINU GHAR ME BAS KUCH YOG AASAN HI KARTI HAI.)JAIRAJ KE GHAR KE PAAS HI EK MAIDAN HAI TOH WO WAHIN KUCH DER JOGGING AUR EXERCISE KAR 7 BAJE TAK GHAR WAPAS LOUT AATE HAIN.AB TAK MINU BHI UTH CHUKI THI.GHAR KE NOUKAR BHI APNE APNE KAAM PAR LAG CHUKE THE.JAIRAJ SIDHE APNE BEDROOM ME GAYE.MINU BATHROOM ME THI.JAIRAJ APNE BACHE KO DEKHNE USKE PAALNE KE PAAS CHALE JAATE HAIN.VIKRAM ABHI SOYA HUA THA.JAIRAJ APNE BACHE KE CHEHRE KI SUNDARTA USKE MASUMIYAT ME KHO JAATE HAIN.UNKA DHYAN MINU KI AWAAZ SE TUTATHA HAI.

MINU-Kya hua jai?mere bache ko itne dhyaan se dekh rahe ho!
JAIRAJ-Mera nahi hamara.aur kyun na dekhun,hamara bacha hai hi itna khoobsurat.

MINU-Haan ye toh sach hai.kabhi kabhi toh lagta hai kahin mere bache ko meri nazar hi na lag jaaye.

JAIRAJ-Arre yaar tum bhi.gulab ko kabhi gulab se khatra hota hai bhala!!!

MINU-Jao ji.bade aaye gulab waale.jab se hospital se wapas aayi hun,thik se saath baithe tak nahi aur ab jhuti taarif kar rahe ho.

JAIRAJ- Ae khuda.sun raha hai tu.kaise kaise jhutte ilzam lag rahe hai mujhpe.ab mai karun bhi toh kya,meri ek louti biwi meri gulbadan meri jaanejahan meri nazare noor ko hi mere mohobbat pe shak ho raha hai...(JAIRAJ MINU SE AISE HI EK DILFEK ASHIQ KI TARAH BAAT KIYA KARTE HAIN.MINU KO BHI JAIRAJ KA YE TARIKA BOHOT PASAND HAI)

Jairaj ke is tarah baat karne se Minu ke chehre par ek pyari si muskurahat aa gayi.

JAIRAJ-Arre bas bas.ye muskurane ke teer naa chalao.abhi mujhe kaam pe bhi jaana hai.kahin ghayal ho gaya toh ghar baithna pad jaayega.

MINU-Haan toh ho jao ghayal.abhi bache ko paida hue 3 din nahi hua aur aap kaam pe jaane ki baat kar rahe ho.hun,dekh liya aaka pyar!!!!!!!

JAIRAJ-Arre meri jaan kal tumne hi toh kaha tha ki mai darun naa strong ban ke faisle lun,bas ussi ke liye jaa raha hun.zyada wakt nahi lagega,bas mazdooron se aur unke us leader mangal se kuch baatein clear kar lun phir aata hun.(ye baat bolte waqt ek ghussa ek confidence tha jairaj ke chehre pe jisse dekh minu ko khushi hui ki ab jairaj tention free hogaye hai aur pehle jaise confient bhi...)

MiNU-thik hai,jao.par jaldi aajana.

JAIRAJ-jaisa aap kahen my love.ab mai zara naha leta hun,aur ye kamla kidhar hai.pehle usse nashta banane ke liye bol deta hun

MINU-Aap jaiye,mai bol dungi.

JAIRAJ-Bilkul nahi.doctor ne tumhe rest karne ko bola hai,toh tum kahin nahi jaogi.mai bol dunga tum rest karo.minu ne bohot kahan par jairaj nahi maane aur minu ko pakad unhe bed me baitha diya.ussi waqt kamla room me chaaye ki tray lekar aayi.

MINU-lo kamla bhi aa gayi.kamla,tum chaye rakh do mai banalungi,tum jaakar sahab ka naashta banao.banane ke baad nashta yahin le aana..

KAMLA- ji malkin.

MINU-Aap pehle chaaye pee lijiye phir nahalijiyega tab tak naashta bhi ban jaayega.phir minu chaye bana do cup me daali.jairaj chaaye pee bathroom me ghus gaye.bathroom se nikal formal kapde pehen taiyar ho gaye.tabhi darwaza knock hua.

JAIRAJ-Come in.

Kamla andar aayi.uske haathon me naashte ki tray thi.

MINU-kamla,nashta idhar bed pe hi laga de.kamla wahin bed par hi naashta laga chali gayi.phir kuch khaas nahi hua.jairaj aur minu ne saath naashta kiya fir jairaj minu aur bache ke maathe pe kiss kar apni car se kaam pe nikal gaye.


WAHIN DUSRI TARAF ABRAXAS KE BAAKI TEENO DEVILON SE TAKRATE HI CHARON DEVIL GAYAB HO SIDHA DHARTI ME JUNGAL KE EK GUFA ME PAHUNCHE.YE CHARON DEVIL KABHI KISI INSAN KE SAAMNE SIDHE NAHI AATE THE.BAS INKI NAKARATMAK URJA AUR SHAKTI INSANON ME PAHUNCHAATI THI.INHE JAB BHI MILNA HOTA YE ISSI GUFA ME MILTE THE.YE GUFA VAKAZULA DESH (IMAGINARY) KE OKZIM NAAM KE EK CHOTE SE TOWN SE 100 KM DOOR STITH EK VISHAL.JUNGLE KE BEECH THI.YE JUNGLE ITNA GHANA THA KI YAHAN SURYA KI ROSHNI TAK NAHI PAHUNCHTI THI,FIR INSAAN KA PAHUNCHNA TOH LAGBHAG NAAMUMKIN THA.IS JUNGLE KA NAAM SECRILLA tha.is jungle ko ye naam secret(RAAZ) shabd se mila tha.iska kaaran tha ki ye jungle najane kitne hi raaz khudme samete hue tha.kya kya...........bhai ye bhi ek raaz hai,aage chalkar aapko pata chalega.toh chalo filhal kahani me vapas chalte hain....gufa ke andar teen devil khade hue the aur choutha niche baitha ya ye kahen niche pada hua apni saanson ko durust kar tha. Waise toh devils ko jeene ke liye saans lene ki zaroorat nahi padti par jab gala ASMODEUS ne dabaya ho toh saans kya khoon bhi ek jagah rook jaata hai.ABRAXAS ka bhi yahi haal tha.kuch waqt laga fir wo thik ho khada hua.

LILITHA-ABRAXAS tumhara dimag kharab ho gaya kya jo tum LORD ASMODEUS se sawal karne lage.

VALEFOR-aur nahi toh kya.tumhare chakkar me hum sab ki jaan bhi chali jaati.aur tum jaante hona jab ek devil marta hai toh kya hota hai! Insan ki mout ke baad ya yoh heaven ya hell jaata hai ya fir reincarnated(punarjeevit) ho kahina kahin fir paida hota hai par hum devils ke mout ke baad hamara pura astitva hi khatm ho jaata hai.fir bhi tum......

ABBADON-Bas karon tum dono.ABRAXAS ko uski galti ka ahsaas hai.

ABRAXAS-HAAN DOSTON.mai fir aisa kuch kabhi nahi karunga.pata nahi tab kaisi ek jigyasa si hui aur mai MAHAMAHIIM se sawal puch baitha.

ABBADON-jo hua usse ek seekh ki tarah lo.aur ab chalo sab MAHAMAHIM ne jo kaam soumpa hai usme lag jaate hai.sabne haami bhari aur gayab ho apne apne kaam ko anjaam dene nikal pade.

ABBADON pahuncha WESLANDIA.dharti ki sabse badi country.jitna bada desh utna hi strict kanoon.ABBADON janta tha ki agar itne strict desh me wo arajakta faila de toh dusre deshon me bhi inki dekha dekhi yahi hoga.ABBADON ek political council meeting me pahuncha jahan bohot se mulkon ke babe bade representatives aaye hue the.aaj tak kisine devils ko dekha nahi tha.devils adrishya hokar hi apna kaam karte the.ABBADON ne WESLENIA ke representative ko hi pakda.uske paas jaake ABBADON ne ek mantra bola. "TASWARYA VIRAACHARE BHIGNACHHATE."aur iske saath hi WESLENIA ke representative ka dimag ghum gaya.jis shanti prastav ke liye usne sabhi desho ke representatives ko bulaya tha uski jagah usne sabhi deshon ko dhamki de daali ke sab unke desh ke hisab se hi chalen kyunki unka desh sabse powerful hai.pure meeting ki tasvir hi badal gayi.sabhi desh ke representatives apne apne desh ko takatwar batane lage.ab iska koi nishkarsh toh nilkalne waala tha nahi isilye ye meeting ek bade jhagde ke saath khatm hui.ABBADON ne apna kaam bakhubi kar diya tha.
Ab chalte hai ABRAXAS ki taraf.ABRAXAS pahuncha VAKAZULA desh.ye wahii desh hai jahan SECRILLA jungle tha.wahin ke BINZOL city ke ek underground factory me underwold ki meeting chal rahi thi.alag alag gangs ke dons wahan moujud the.sabhi dons ke beech pahunch ABRAXAS ne mantra bola "
SWAYAM DRISHTI PRAYOJINA......

Jitne bhi DONS the sabke man me dusre dons ki kaam ko haathiyaane ki iccha jaag gayi.sabhi ek dusre ko offers dene lage unke kaam apne naam karne ki.sabhi taish me aa gaye the.jab koi nahi maana toh dhamki pe utar gaye.kyunki sabhi apne apne bodyguards ke saath the toh khoon kharaba toh nahi hua par sabke man me compmete CONTROL ki bhawana jaag gayi thi....yahi toh ABRAXAS chahta tha.uska kaam bhi ho gaya....

Ab dekhte hain LILITHA ne kya kiya.

LILITHA pahunchi KLENSOLE desh ke shahar PLISTEL me.is shahar ko city of love bhi kaha jaata hai. LILITHA ek jheel ke kinare pahunchi jo PLISTEL ke beech me tha.

HRIDAYAM SHAMIKAYAM LUBHAM KARAAJATE.
LILITHA ke is mantra ucharan ke saath hi uske haath se ek adrishya roshni nikali aur hawa me ghull gayi.jaise jaise ye hawa PLISTEL ke logon tak pahunchi logon ke dimag me jo jagah pyar ki thi usme hawas bhi ghulne lagi.ye mantra dheere dheere apna asar karti thi.dhekte hi dekhte kuch mahinon me ye LOVE CITY sirf naam ki rah gai uski jagah LOVE ki jagah lust ne leli.LILITHA ka kaam bhi ho gaya.usse maalum tha is city me carodon log har saal ghumne aate hai.ab wo aayenge toh apne love ke saath ya love dhundne par jayenge lust ke saath.ye sochte hue hi LILITHA muskura di aur gayab ho gayi....

Ab chalte hain VALEFOR ki taraf......ye kahan gayen? Arre ye toh DEKHOLM desh ke DSRO(DEKHOLM SPACE & RESEARCH ORGANISATION) me hain.ye yahan kya kar raha hai?ohh ab samjha, darasal DEKHOLM desh nuclear energy ke parikshan me no.1 hai.toh apni shakti pradarshan aur kaam ke liye isse achi jagah toh VALEFOR ke liye ho hi nahi sakti.VALEFOR sidha us chamber me pahunche jahan DEKHOLM ke cheif scientists kuch experiments kar rahe the.

"BHAVO VISHESHANA VINAASHAYA DAVAYNTI"......
aur ek tarang nikal sabhi scientists ke dimag me ghus gayi.

SCIENTIST 1- FRIENDS mai soch raha tha ki kyun na filhal ke liye is experiment ko rok kuch alag try karen.mere dimag me ek idea aaya hai.kyun naa apne desh ki raksha ke liye hum ek underground nondeductable weapon banaye.sabhi scientists chownk gaye kyunki sabhi ke man me ye khayal.ek saath aaya tha par kisine koi shocking reaction nahi diya aur is idea ko approove kar liya.aur sabhi is kaam me lag gaye.ab ek desh weapon banate aur baaki desh chup rahen,ye toh ho nahi sakta. VALEFOR ye baat ache se jaanta tha isiliye usne aisa kiya.........



(AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....DOSTON KHUL KE REVIEWS DIJIYE.KHAAS KAR STORY KE PLOT KE BAARE ME.MUJHE PATA CHALNA ZAROORI HAI KI APKO STORY MAZEDAAR LAG RAHI HAI KI NAHI.

 

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Ha,ha,ha.....thanks Aj brother Dobara bhi ussi josh se updates padhne ke liye

 

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Apki story zabardast hai nice updates

 

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Thanks brother...saath bane rahiye

 

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