Fantasy ATTITUDE.....( MAGIC + ROMANCE )(Completed)

[Black water]

idhar kidhar waiting...ye part kabka khatm ho gaya bhai....

Sorry bhai mistake hogaya

 

[Killer2222]

Next part already started bhai.....
https://xforum.live/threads/attitude-kabhi-angel-kabhi-devil.11383/unread

Thanks boro

 

[Xfan]

Hey abhi abhi tumhari story complte padhi padh to bahut din se raha tha lekin bich mai break lia kyunki kucch jagah pe bore ho gya tha...
aaj complte ki hai...
Bahut hi badhiya story hai...
Keep it up aise hi apni dusri wali story ko bhi move do...

 

[Hayaan]

Hey abhi abhi tumhari story complte padhi padh to bahut din se raha tha lekin bich mai break lia kyunki kucch jagah pe bore ho gya tha...
aaj complte ki hai...
Bahut hi badhiya story hai...
Keep it up aise hi apni dusri wali story ko bhi move do...

Dusra Part Start ho Chuka hai...

 

[Xfan]

Dusra Part Start ho Chuka hai...

thanks
i know that is liye maine kaha isi tar apne dusri wali storu ko bhi move do

 

[Kapala69]

अत्यन्त रोचक एवं लुभावनी कहानी आरम्भ से अंत तक सब कुछ हर जगह अलग ही आनंद मिला पढ़ कर

 

[Vipul]

tere ghamand ka KHONA
MUJHE ACCHA LAGA....

ehsaase-galti pe RONA
MUJHE ACHA LAGA....

bacche bhala mera
kya bigaad paayenge..
(looking at DIGVIJAY)

par tera mere liye
fikramand HONA.....

MUJHE ACCHA LAGA....


Kya line hain maja aagaya

 

[Last benchers]

tere ghamand ka KHONA
MUJHE ACCHA LAGA....

ehsaase-galti pe RONA
MUJHE ACHA LAGA....

bacche bhala mera
kya bigaad paayenge..
(looking at DIGVIJAY)

par tera mere liye
fikramand HONA.....

MUJHE ACCHA LAGA....


Kya line hain maja aagaya

Hmm apne sahi Kahn ...
Ye story aisi hai ki ispr ko series on Jaye to blockbuster rahegi..

 

[Vipul]

Hmm apne sahi Kahn ...
Ye story aisi hai ki ispr ko series on Jaye to blockbuster rahegi..

Sahi kaha main abhi padh hi raha hu or kafi maza bhi aa raha hain...

 

[vj4u]

tere ghamand ka KHONA
MUJHE ACCHA LAGA....

ehsaase-galti pe RONA
MUJHE ACHA LAGA....

bacche bhala mera
kya bigaad paayenge..
(looking at DIGVIJAY)

par tera mere liye
fikramand HONA.....

MUJHE ACCHA LAGA....


Kya line hain maja aagaya

aapke comment se upar in lines ko mai bhi ek reader ki hi tarah padh raha tha aur soch raha tha ki arre waah...sahi lines hain...

but fir achanak click hua ki meri hi dimag ki upaj se nikli thi ye lines...jisse mai khud hi bhul gaya tha...

aaj khud apne banaye lines ko ek reader ki taraf padh bohot acha laga...