Fantasy ATTITUDE.....( MAGIC + ROMANCE )(Completed)
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Lajawab mega Update bhaiii
Aodomos teeno santo se alag alag question kiye magar santo n kisi tarah se taal diye
Aodomos n nishkalika ko beja kisi tarah mala digvijay ko pahna de
Nishkalika ne sapne ka bahana karke chalaki se pahna diya
Digvijay n maa ka bahana banakar avantika ko gar le gya
Par use kya pta tha ki VJ n pahle hii injam kar rakha
Bhale hi usne surksha chakar lga rakha tha
VJ ko dekkar chok gya kyoki usse aasa nhi thii ki VJ aa jayega
Digvijay ko iss duniya se mukti mil gyii dusri palant par milenge
Superrrrr action bhaii
What n creative thought
Digvijay +nishkalika bann gye ab
MODOXX ki vapsi kya bat h
VJ k Dusmano ginti badti ja rhii h kam hone ka nam nhii le rhe h
Mega Update padkar mja gya aase hii lage rahiye
Vese VJ ki battoo se pta lga ki avantika chabi h sakti kunj ki
Lagta h or bhii alag alag tarah ki saktiya Abii pani Bakii h
Aodomos bahut jayda powerful h
Abii k halat dekhe to Aodomos k pass jayda saktiya h
Kyoki VJ or Aodomos dono ko God se power mili h but Aodomos k pass devil power bhii h isliye vo powerful jayda h
Abii bhii Aodomos ko sakti badane ka junun h
But VJ k safar Abii power ki or huee hi nhii
Dawali jeel se umid thii lekin vha se kuch power nhii mila
Ab power pane k adventure ki bari aani chahiye kam se kam ye to lagge ki Aodomos ki tarah VJ bhii saktisali hota ja rha h
Ha manta hu Aodomos or VJ dono alag h or AODOMOS jha power ko hii sab manta h Vhii VJ Sachii ko mnts h or power ko mahtav nhii deta
But last m ladna bhii to h Aodomos se
Itne power ful Aodomos se ....
Mann m jo bta diya bhaii
Agar kuch galat lge to pahle hii maffi mang rha hu
Lekin kya h na story se bahut jayda Dil se Judd chuke h ki Hero or Devil Dono ki or Dekhte h
Isliye thoda Hero ko power ful banane ka Dil karta h
Aodomos teeno santo se alag alag question kiye magar santo n kisi tarah se taal diye
Aodomos n nishkalika ko beja kisi tarah mala digvijay ko pahna de
Nishkalika ne sapne ka bahana karke chalaki se pahna diya
Digvijay n maa ka bahana banakar avantika ko gar le gya
Par use kya pta tha ki VJ n pahle hii injam kar rakha
Bhale hi usne surksha chakar lga rakha tha
VJ ko dekkar chok gya kyoki usse aasa nhi thii ki VJ aa jayega
Digvijay ko iss duniya se mukti mil gyii dusri palant par milenge
Superrrrr action bhaii
What n creative thought
Digvijay +nishkalika bann gye ab
MODOXX ki vapsi kya bat h
VJ k Dusmano ginti badti ja rhii h kam hone ka nam nhii le rhe h
Mega Update padkar mja gya aase hii lage rahiye
Vese VJ ki battoo se pta lga ki avantika chabi h sakti kunj ki
Lagta h or bhii alag alag tarah ki saktiya Abii pani Bakii h
Aodomos bahut jayda powerful h
Abii k halat dekhe to Aodomos k pass jayda saktiya h
Kyoki VJ or Aodomos dono ko God se power mili h but Aodomos k pass devil power bhii h isliye vo powerful jayda h
Abii bhii Aodomos ko sakti badane ka junun h
But VJ k safar Abii power ki or huee hi nhii
Dawali jeel se umid thii lekin vha se kuch power nhii mila
Ab power pane k adventure ki bari aani chahiye kam se kam ye to lagge ki Aodomos ki tarah VJ bhii saktisali hota ja rha h
Ha manta hu Aodomos or VJ dono alag h or AODOMOS jha power ko hii sab manta h Vhii VJ Sachii ko mnts h or power ko mahtav nhii deta
But last m ladna bhii to h Aodomos se
Itne power ful Aodomos se ....
Mann m jo bta diya bhaii
Agar kuch galat lge to pahle hii maffi mang rha hu
Lekin kya h na story se bahut jayda Dil se Judd chuke h ki Hero or Devil Dono ki or Dekhte h
Isliye thoda Hero ko power ful banane ka Dil karta h
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Raja thakur
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BURA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Bura kyun lagega.....apka review,sawal bohot sahi hain brother.....aur aap is story ke one of d best readers bhi hain...toh comment me suggestion aur apni narazgi dikhane me kabhi hichkichaiyega nahi.....
Ab aate hain aapki demand par,maahi brother is story ke start me maine hero ka jo bio likha tha,usme ye saaf bataya tha ki uska safar aasan nahi hai...wo haara bhi hai par har haar se sikh kar aage badhta gaya....wahi sab vistar se dikha raha hun....
Ab rahi baat ASMODEUS jitna powerful hone ki,toh aap khud bataiye, ek devil,jo nanaje kitne laakh saalon se lagatar apni shakti badhaye jaa raha hai,uske barabar shakti ek ladka jo ki mahaz 18 varsh ka hai,kaise paa sakta hai.!!!!sirf isiliye kyunki wo GOD ka beta hai,wo tob ASMODEUS bhi hai.......uske baawajud filhal VIKRAM kaafi shaktishaali ho gaya hai....maine kaha tha brother ki mai ye story as a writer nahi balko as a reader likh raha hun....mai hamesha se ek aisi story padhna chahta tha jisme villain ko bhi hero jitni yaa fir ye kahin hero se zyada value mile..kyunki bhale hi uske karam bure ho,par mehnat wo hero se double karta hai....aur fir apne vilaain ki toh baat hi alag hai...kabhi bohot bura hai toh kabhi bohot acha.....
Agar aap is story se dil se jude hue hain toh Aage chalkar aur bhi aise kayi mod aayenge jiski jiski shayad aapko ummid na ho,aapko ajeeb lage,par jo bhi hoga usme magic ke saath saath logic bhi ghussa hua hoga...yunhi saath bane rahiye brother...thanks....
Raja thakur
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BURA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Bura kyun lagega.....apka review,sawal bohot sahi hain brother.....aur aap is story ke one of d best readers bhi hain...toh comment me suggestion aur apni narazgi dikhane me kabhi hichkichaiyega nahi.....Lajawab mega Update bhaiii
Aodomos teeno santo se alag alag question kiye magar santo n kisi tarah se taal diye
Aodomos n nishkalika ko beja kisi tarah mala digvijay ko pahna de
Nishkalika ne sapne ka bahana karke chalaki se pahna diya
Digvijay n maa ka bahana banakar avantika ko gar le gya
Par use kya pta tha ki VJ n pahle hii injam kar rakha
Bhale hi usne surksha chakar lga rakha tha
VJ ko dekkar chok gya kyoki usse aasa nhi thii ki VJ aa jayega
Digvijay ko iss duniya se mukti mil gyii dusri palant par milenge
Superrrrr action bhaii
What n creative thought
Digvijay +nishkalika bann gye ab
MODOXX ki vapsi kya bat h
VJ k Dusmano ginti badti ja rhii h kam hone ka nam nhii le rhe h
Mega Update padkar mja gya aase hii lage rahiye
Vese VJ ki battoo se pta lga ki avantika chabi h sakti kunj ki
Lagta h or bhii alag alag tarah ki saktiya Abii pani Bakii h
Aodomos bahut jayda powerful h
Abii k halat dekhe to Aodomos k pass jayda saktiya h
Kyoki VJ or Aodomos dono ko God se power mili h but Aodomos k pass devil power bhii h isliye vo powerful jayda h
Abii bhii Aodomos ko sakti badane ka junun h
But VJ k safar Abii power ki or huee hi nhii
Dawali jeel se umid thii lekin vha se kuch power nhii mila
Ab power pane k adventure ki bari aani chahiye kam se kam ye to lagge ki Aodomos ki tarah VJ bhii saktisali hota ja rha h
Ha manta hu Aodomos or VJ dono alag h or AODOMOS jha power ko hii sab manta h Vhii VJ Sachii ko mnts h or power ko mahtav nhii deta
But last m ladna bhii to h Aodomos se
Itne power ful Aodomos se ....
Mann m jo bta diya bhaii
Agar kuch galat lge to pahle hii maffi mang rha hu
Lekin kya h na story se bahut jayda Dil se Judd chuke h ki Hero or Devil Dono ki or Dekhte h
Isliye thoda Hero ko power ful banane ka Dil karta h
Ab aate hain aapki demand par,maahi brother is story ke start me maine hero ka jo bio likha tha,usme ye saaf bataya tha ki uska safar aasan nahi hai...wo haara bhi hai par har haar se sikh kar aage badhta gaya....wahi sab vistar se dikha raha hun....
Ab rahi baat ASMODEUS jitna powerful hone ki,toh aap khud bataiye, ek devil,jo nanaje kitne laakh saalon se lagatar apni shakti badhaye jaa raha hai,uske barabar shakti ek ladka jo ki mahaz 18 varsh ka hai,kaise paa sakta hai.!!!!sirf isiliye kyunki wo GOD ka beta hai,wo tob ASMODEUS bhi hai.......uske baawajud filhal VIKRAM kaafi shaktishaali ho gaya hai....maine kaha tha brother ki mai ye story as a writer nahi balko as a reader likh raha hun....mai hamesha se ek aisi story padhna chahta tha jisme villain ko bhi hero jitni yaa fir ye kahin hero se zyada value mile..kyunki bhale hi uske karam bure ho,par mehnat wo hero se double karta hai....aur fir apne vilaain ki toh baat hi alag hai...kabhi bohot bura hai toh kabhi bohot acha.....
Agar aap is story se dil se jude hue hain toh Aage chalkar aur bhi aise kayi mod aayenge jiski jiski shayad aapko ummid na ho,aapko ajeeb lage,par jo bhi hoga usme magic ke saath saath logic bhi ghussa hua hoga...yunhi saath bane rahiye brother...thanks....
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