Fantasy ATTITUDE.....( MAGIC + ROMANCE )(Completed)

[Dark Devil]

Waiting for the next update

 

[Rajurajsingh91]

Waiting more

 

[vj4u]

Maine bus isliye ye Socha kyunki AAP ne kaha tha ye story khud ko hi likh rahi hai to isliye Socha Bhai .and waiting for next TC

Hahahaha.....wo baat bhi in dono ki chemistry ke liye likhi gayi hai.bas,aur koi alag angle ke liye nahi..

 

[SD...]

Bro aapki story superb hai aisi writing skills pahele xossip pe kuch writer ke story me dekhane ko Mili thi ab aap ke story me wohi skill hai
Great working bro keep it up
Next update ka intejar rahega

 

[Alex123]

Hahahaha.....wo baat bhi in dono ki chemistry ke liye likhi gayi hai.bas,aur koi alag angle ke liye nahi..

Ok bro samaj gaya

 

[vj4u]

Bohot hi badiya update Bhai

Nice bhai

Nice

Superb update bhai

Nice update

Behtreen update

Ek dam zabardast

VJ Bhai ek riquest hai hero ki ek herone hai vo bhi thoda sarma rahi hai iqrar karne me Kam se Kam do to rakho.agar Meri bat buri lagi ho to sorys

thanks brothers... be along

 

[vj4u]

Thanks br

Mst update bro abb intzaar hai ki yeh dono ka pyar kb parwan chadhta hai aur dono bhaiyoon mai takraw kb hota hai story mst jaa rhi hai bro wating for next waise apka ATTITUDE bhi Kamal ka hai likhne mai

Thanks brother....bas aap yunhi saath bane rahiye,ATTITUDE bhi aisa hi rahega....

 

[vj4u]

Superrrrr Update bhaiii

MODOXX ki maa k sapne m VJ gya or sab sach bataya ki kya hone vala h.

Aodomos n MODOXX ko pura sach nhii bataya or jab Modoxx dard jel nhii paya tab Shii samay dekhkar tyag vale raste par uski maa ko laya

MODOXX or AODOMOS dono bade gunehgar h ek maa takk ko nhii choda apni power badane k liye

VJ or Aodomos ki first batchit jabardast rhii
VjJ n bataya ki kese Aodomos se alag h
Aodomos apne aap ko har jagah Shii manta h ek maa marvane ka dosh bhii kudd nhii le rha vo bhiii MODOXX se sar dal rha h
Ye kam to Aodomos n hii karvaya tha to jitna karne vala gunehgaar utna hii karvane vala bhii gunehgaar h

Ek maa k tyag ko kya samaj payenge ye logg

thanks maahi brother for the review....ab ye kahani hai hi itni intense ki kuch bohot galat cheezen bhi dikhani padti hai...aap yunhi saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

Pata ni but ronit n Jo baatein bataye ki Vikram usko kaise motivate karta tha,. Unsab ko padh kr ek alag hi feeling aayi h I mean totally different but true..
Uske bare m to kuch bol hi ni sakte bs Sach h..


Maddox Sach m Devil hi h aur shayad isi baat ko leke Asmodeus khush hota h ki uska sochna uska attitude insanoo ko leke Jo h wo sahi h.. bhale hi Asmodeus n manipulate kadiya Maddox ko but Maddox n Sach m apni MAA ko tyaga dia sirf dard s chutkara aur powers pane k liye.. isse bada koi devil ka character aur Kya ho sakta h ki apni maa ka khoon krdia.. really sad

Maddox ki maa ka jikr hua to shocked laga .. it was totally unexpected ..
Aur shurat m jisko dream aaya tha wo b maa thi aur dusra shaks Vikram..
Ab samjha Vikram n apneaap ko apradhi kyu kaha but usne y b bola tha ki Ek ki jaan Jane s caroro ki jaan Bach sakti h but abto Maddox n apni maa ko maar dia h aur unke khoon ko trnace pool k pani m mila kar powers b paa Lia h to Maddox to ab atank machaega to isme Kya acha hua h aur kaise jaan bachegi YE SABSE BADA QUESTION h mere mann m..

Vikram n kuch soch k hi bola hoga ..
But insab vakye s uska demotivate hona b jayaz tha.. duniya ko bachane k kaam m kabi kabi nirdosh logo ki b Jana jati h. Aur Jo shaks sabse pyar karta ho , burai m b achai dekhta ho , usko to har nirdosh ki jaan Jane p dukh hoga hi .
But ek ki jaan Jane s kafi logo ki bhalai hoti h to ye shadadat to Deni hi padegi aur Tyag b karna padega..



In Last I want to say.. m motivated for something.. so big thanks to u..

Keep it up..

Thanks brother ki meri likhi kuch lines aapke life me kaam aayengi.....koshish karunga ki aage bhi aapko is story ke lines pasand aaye... yunhi saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

Awesome update bro

Keep going

Thanks brother.. yunhi saath bane rahiye