Romance Aur Ek Prem Kahani (COMPLETED)

[bondjamesbond09]

3 update wah kya baat hai

 

[Rahul]

Update 33​

Phir shuru huwi har raat ki rehearsals. Har raat 10/11 baje shuru kiya gaya rehearsals jaari rehta subha ke 2/3 baje tak. Saanss lene ke liye time nahin tha kissi ke paas inn chaaron mein se, bahot hi mehnat kar rahe the sab aur raat subha 3.30 Abhay drive karke sab ko wapas ghar chorrne jaata har subha. Unn dinon Abhay ke paas Anny ke liye bhi time nahin tha bus jo school mein milte the wohi aur to bus rehearsals aur tayaariyan. Abhay ek kadak director ki tarah tha aur order diya karta tha yeh eisa karo, woh weisa karo, yeh thik nahin hai, woh ghalat hai, yeh eisa lagega, vaghaira vaghaira… baat baat par ghussa karta tha jab dance ki choregraphy thik nahin baithta tha to…. Bahot nervous rehta tha, magar sab ussko samajhte the, donon dost aur Anny bhi. Sab ko dikhta tha ke kitna mehnat kar raha hai Abhay competition ke liye. Sab chup chaap usski han mein han mila rahe the aur dance ki steps ko follow karte jaa rahe the.

Din mein school main students ke saath sab rehte the aur sham ko ghar jaakar thoda araam karte the sab phir raat ko 9 baje Abhay sab ko pick up karne jata tha sab ke ghar ek ek karke aur uss theatre par jaate the show ke baad rehesrsals karne ko. Paancwe raat ko rehearsal ke dawraan soundtrack mein rukawat agayi aur cd atak gayi….. Sab log dance karte waqt achanak ruk gaye aur sab hanssne lage!! Sound ek eisi jagah par atki thi jahan Abhay ne Anny ko baahon mein liya tha aur Anny ko ek turn karni thi jahan Abhay Anny ko ek haath se ghumakar apne peeth ke upar leta aur Anny halke se usske peeth se jeise slow motion mein khisak kar zameen par ajati…. Aur music uss waqt violin aur drums ke beech kuch classical aur pop music background mein ek saath the wahin atak gayi aur bahot funny sound ane lage…. Khud Anny hanss padi aur Abhay aur Iqbal to kayikayi laga rahe the….Magar Abhay ko bahot ghussa araha tha…… Iqbal ne kaha, “are music ruk gayi to tum bhi Anny ko apne peeth se utaro phir upar lo phir utaaro phir upar lo…jab tak sound weise baje tum bhi ek hi action ko repeat karte jawo…. Hihihihihihihi…..” Abhay chillaya, “Wil you shut the fuck up Iqbal? Tum logon ko mazaak lag raha hai? Socho agar show ke din eisa huwa to kia hoga? Aur ek hi cd

hai agar uss mein kharaabi agayi to kia kiya jaega? Kaun banayega eisa soundtrack phir se?!” Yeh kehkar Abhay dawdte huwe audio room mein gaya aur CD ko rewind kiya phir play kiya magar cd wahin aakar phir atak gayi kayi baar try karne ke baad bhi cd wahin ke wahin ruk jaati thi, phir to aguey forward karne par play bhi nahin kar raha tha ab!!

Ab unn teenon ko bhi shock laga ke ab kia hoga!! Rehearsal kaafi aguey tak badh chukka tha aur bahot achah chal raha tha. Bahot mehnat kiya tha sabhi ne….. Abhay bahot niraash hogaya aur bahot ghussa karne laga cd ki kharaabi ki vajah se…. aur unn teenon se kaha, “hansso ab!! Cancel all cancel!! Kuch nahin hone wala koyi competiton mein bhaag nahin leinguey hum, jawo apne apne ghar I give up!” Anny dhire se Abhay ke sar par apna hath pherte huwe ussko shaant karane ki koshish ki aur donon Iqbal aur Vinay bhi Abhay ke karib aakar ussko hawsla dene lage ke sab thik ho jaega koyi na koyi raasta hoga…. Aur Vinay ne poocha, “tumne cd ki copy nahin banaya tha?” Abhay ne bahot nervous state mein, apne maathey par haath maarte huwe kaha, “kayi baar socha yaar bahot baar socha ke ek do copy bana ke rakh lunga eise hi stithi ke liye magar waqt hi nahin mila inn sab bhaag dawr ke piche, bahot kuch karna padhta hai, yahan jawo, uss se milo, iss se milo, yeh karo, woh karo, in sab mein yaad bhi kahan rehti hai cd ki copy banane ko!! Sala 10 hazaar rupar lage the iss cd ko banane mein aur 8/9 ghante mein music chun chun kar sab banaya tha!! Ab kia karun main??!!”

Kuch der tak sab bilkool khaamosh baithe rahe manch par, bilkool koyi awaaz nahin thi, raat ke 1 baj gaye the, aur Abhay ne kaha, “chalo, wapas chalte hein ab…. Kal uss DJ se milkar dekhta hoon kia kar sakta hai woh….. shaayad usski hard disk mein kuch ho ya uss ne apne liye iss track ko save kiya ho….” Tab Iqbal ne kaha, “are han! Ussne zaroor apne liye ek copy save kiya hoga! Zaroor usske paas ek copy hoga! Woohoo!! Problem solved!” Aur Anny ne dhire se Abhay se kaha, “Ab jeise hi cd mile turant do copies bana lena apne liye okay?”

Dusre din Abhay uss DJ se milne gaya aur sab maamla bataya magar ussne to kuch aur hi rang dikhaya! Yeh unn logon mein se tha jo sirf paise se matlab rakhta hai. Sale ke paas copy to tha magar Abhay se kaha, “mere paas to nahin hai, magar koshish karta hoon magar isske liye tumko phir se 10 hazaar dena padega!” Abhay samajh gaya ke haraami hai woh aur phir se 10 hazaar diya ussko aur ussne khud 3 copies de diye Abhay ko iss baar. Abhay ko ghussa aya usspar magar khushi khushi cd lekar school gaya aur jhoom kar unn logon ko cd sunaya! Exact wohi tha aur uss DJ ke paas tha, magar jab Abhay ne bataya ke phir se ussne 10 hazaar rupay liye to sab ko ghussa aya!!

Rehearsals phir chaalu huwa. Anny ne note kiya ke rehersals ke waqt Abhay bahot tense rehta hai aur ziada ghussa karta hai aur uss wajah se khud apne dance steps par dhyaan nahin de pata hai. Ek eisa moment tha jab Abhay aur Anny ke part ko rehearse karna tha aur Iqbal aur Vinay audience ke jagah baithkar dekh rahe the Abhay hi ke kehne par, to donon ne dekha ke Abhay ke expressions bilkool thik nahin thi….to donon ne Abhay aur Anny ko stop kiya auur donon ne Abhay se kaha ke usska expression ghalat araha hai uss dance ke beech…… Abhay pehle se tense tha hi, to unn logon ke comments se woh aur ziada ghussa hogaya aur chillane laga……

Sab ussko samajhte the ke whole concept ka tension tha ussko, aur sabhi ke parts ko follow karna sab sahi karwana aur sabhi ke steps ko sudhaarna aur pure dance ko supervise karna bahot mushkil kaam tha iss wajah se Abhay tension mein tha, bahot nervous tha aur baat baat par ghussa kar raha tha. Usske sab dost ussko achi tarah se samajhte the iss liye jab woh ghussa karta tha to sab khaamosh ho jaya karte the. Magar Anny ne Abhay ko corridor mein akele legaya, phir make up room mein gaye donon aur Anny ne Abhay ko apne baahon mein zor se jakar kar usske honton par apne honton ko lagayi aur ussko kiss karne lagi….Abhay ne bilkool nahin socha tha ke uss waqt, uss maahaul mein Anny weisa karegi…… ab Anny itni pyar aur muhabat se ussko chum rahi thi apne adawon se ussko rijhate huwe ke Abhay shaant hogaya aur ek dum pighal gaya…… Anny ne kaha, “kitne din huwe tumkmo mujhe kiss kiye huwe kuch yaad hai tumko jaan?” Abhay ekdum khaamosh usski chehre mein dekhte huwe kaha, “Pata nahin! Yaad nahin mujhe!” Anny se pyar se muskurate huwe kaha, “10 din hone ko hai, tum ne mujhe pyar se chuwa bhi nahin and I miss you a lot!” Abhay ko heyraani huwi aur Anny ko zor se apne baahon mein lekar kaha, “Oh I am so sory baby, main bahot busy hogaya inn dinon iss concept ko lekar nah to khayaal hi nahin aya ke tumko neglect kar raha hoon please mujhe mwaaf karna sweetheart…. Main kia karun sab gadbad ho raha hai, bahot kum din reh gaye hein aur abhi tak hamara dance complete nahin huwa hai….. bahot tension hai jaan!” Anny ne Abhay ko phir bahot araam aur pyar se usske baalon mein apne narm ungliyon ko pherte huwe kaha, “kuch nahin huwa, sab thik chal raha hai aur sab bilkool thik ho jaega, tum bahot ziada tension le rahe ho inn sab ko lekar, pyar se issko aguey badhawo sab thik ho jaega. Filhaal mujhko pyar karo phir dekhna……” Abhay muskuraya aur Anny ko bahon mein simatkar donon nichey zameen par leth gaye aur Anny ahiste ahiste Abhay ki kameez ki buttons kholte huwe usske chaati par apne narm bheege huwe hoonth pherne lagi, aur Abhi ke haath Anny ke peeth par usski bra ko unhook karne lage aur donon pyar ke aghossh mein kho gaye……

Donon Iqbal aur Vinay ne Anny se kaha tha ke sirf wohi Abhay ki tension ko door kar sakti hai aur wohi Anny ne kiya…… kehte hein ke ek mard ko shaant karne ke liye, usske gham aur tensions ko khatam karne ke liye ek awart ka hona bahot zaroori hota hai, aur pyar karne wali awrat…. Aur Anny wohi thi jisski vajah se Abhay apne uljhanon ko suljha sakta tha…… ab yeh bhi hota hai aksar ek mard ki zindagi mein ke ussko tabah karne wali bhi ek awrat hi hoti hai……bus mard ki kismat achchi ho to Anny jeisi pyar karne wali hoti hai eise bure waqt mein…… Aur ek ghante tak make up room mein ishk farmaane ke baad, donon Abhay aur Anny bilkool nange pade the farsh par ek dusre ke bahon mein, jab baahar se Iqbal ne darwaza khatkhataya yeh kehte huwe; “Abe oh aashiko, rehearsal nahin karni hai kia? Raat guzar rahi hai mujhko neendh arahi hai….” Aur Abhay ne hansste huwe Anny ke chere mein dekhte huwe zor se jawaab diya, “Mujhko bhi neend arahi hai pack up karo ghar wapas chalte hein aaj ke liye bus!!”

Uss raat ko Anny ne apni mummy ko phone karke kaha ke woh ghar nahin arahi hai, abhay ke yahan thehregi, aur subha 3 baje Abhay aur Anny Abhay ke bed par paye gaye ishk karte huwe…donon ek dusre mein doob gaye aur subha ke 9 baje

Abhay ki maa ne Abhay ki room ki darwaza khatkhataayi unn donon ko jagane ke liye……..

To be continued…………………………

wonderful, fantastic update bhai
kia likha hai aap ne yaar... itni tension ke beech bhi aap ko dikh gaya ke ek chota sa erotic ka tukda sab sahi kar dega aur aap ne kiya bhi.
vah bhai bhai...sabko aap se likhna seekhna chahiye
you are the best yaara.
lage raho casi bhai lage raho

 

[Rowdywa]

happy to see triple updates casi

 

[Rowdywa]

Update 31​

Sheher mein ek dance competition organized kiya gaya. Town ki mayor ne announcement karwayi aur radio, TV, press, sabhi jagah par bade dhoom dhaam se charcha hone lagi uss dance competition ke liye. 20 din ki tayyaari karni thi aur thik 20 dinon ke baad apna apna show present karna tha sheher ke sab se bade theatre mein jahan hazaaron log juttey hein. Dance 2 se ziada ke group mein karna tha single nahin. Do se ziada chahe 20 hi kyun na ho, magar best award ussko milna tha jiss ki choregraphy, dance, aur sabhi steps sahi ho. Dance ke 3 bade jaani maani masters ke naam the judges ke team mein. Unn judges mein se do tharki the. Aur aksar pichele competitions mein jahan ladkiyon ki jeet huwi thi, yeh judges ke naam aaye the aur bahot sex scandal ke charche huwe the unn ladkiyon ko lekar jinhon ne inaam aur award jeete the.

To chalo teen saal pehle kia huwa tha woh dekhte hein phir wapas ayeingue iss saal wale competition mein jahan Abhay and friends bhaag leinguey.

Han iss se pehle 3 saal huwe jab aakhri Dance competiton huwa tha uss sheher mein jahan Abhi rehta hai. Woh competiton solo wala tha. Yane sirf ek dancer ki performance wala. Abhay ne tab bhaag nahin liya tha kyun ke unn dinon woh Amita ko khokar bimaar huwa tha tab ki baat hai.

To uss competiton mein do ladkiyan jinhon ne first aur second prize jeete the unn ki kahani sunata hoon, aur saath saath unn do judges aur unn ke saathiyon ke lafde bhi. To do ladkiyan jo quarter final se semi finals tak pohonchne wale the, kul mila kar 12 ladkiyan reh gaye the top 5 mein jane ke liye. Unn mein se ek thi sharada, 18 saal ki aur ek Anjali woh bhi 18 ki. Donon bahot achche dancer the aur classical dance karte the. Magar unn se bhi behtar dancers the competiton mein. Ab, jabke quarter finals mein pass hogaye yeh donon to bahot utaavle the semi final mein jane ke liye, decide nahin huwa tha ke kaun kaun semi finals ke liye chunne gaye hein.

Udhar 3 judges mein se do tharki the, ek, Mr. Bajaj 55 saal ki aur dusra Mr.Agarwaal 57 years ki. Aur ek judge ek awrat thi. Upar se tharki mayor bhi tha, 50 saal ka, jo jaan boojh kar eise competition organize karta tha ladkiyon ko apne kaabu mein karne ke liye aur share karne ke liye judges ke saath kyun ke unnko judges se faeda hota tha kissi karan apne mayorship par kayam rehne ke liye.

To Anjali aur sharada ko unn teen tharkiyon ke ek pimp ne appointment diya tha uss semi final mein qualified karne ke bare mein baat karne ke liye. Sabhi ladkiyon mein yeh baat chal rahi thi ke jo judge ko khush karegi wohi competition jeetegi. Yeh sabko pata tha. Ab unn mein se jo ladkiyan tayyaar the kuch bhi karne ke liye to weh log uss pimp se milte the aur aguey bahrne ke liye kuch bhi karte the. Aur jo apni izat ki zindagi jeena chahte the competiton ko chorr jate the.

To Anjali aur Sharada ne aapas mein baat kar liya tha ke weh donon kuch bhi karne ke liye tayyaar hai competition ko jeetne ke liye, kyun ke mayor aur judges se unnko usske baad ads mein kaam karne ka yahan tak ke filmon tak jane ka raasta khul jayega.

To jab uss pimp ne mulakaat kiya unn donon ladkiyon se to donon raazi huwe judges se milne ke liye. Pimp ne samjhaya ke judges ke saamne dance bhi karni pedegi akele kamre mein aur shaayad kapde bhi utaarne pade. Phir bhi donon ladki raazi the. Phir kia bus mulakaat karna tha.

Raat ke 10 baje ek aalishaan hotel ke do bade kamron mein intezaam kiya gaya donon judges ke liye jahan Sharada aur Anjali unn se milne gaye. Donon ladkiyan apne apne ghar par yeh keh kar gay eke rehearsals karni competition ke liye. Zindagi mein aguey bahrne ki chahat kabhi kabhi kuch bhi karwa sakti hai. Aur kuch log kissi bhi had tak jane ke liye tayyaar hote hein oonche mukaam tak pohonchne ke liye, eise hi the donon Sharada aur Anjali.

Kuch khaas taaruf nahin karwana para kamre ke andar; direct point par agaye judges log apne apne kamre mein ladkiyon ke saath. Donon ladkiyon ko maloom tha ke unn donon judges ke bistar ko garam karna hoga, donon ko raat bhar apne shareer ko unn ke hawale karna hoga to donon ladkiyan tayyaar hokar gaye the ussi ke liye. Sharada thodi si sawnli thi magar bahot badhya figure ki maalkin thi woh. Sundarta ki murti thi, jism jeise tarasha huwa heera, shakal jeise pariyon ki raani, enkhen hirniyon jeisi aur hans jeisi chaal. Mr. Agarwaal ki bistar par baithi jaakar usske bulane par, aur ek safed sari mein thi jab Agarwal ne usski pallu ko apne haathon mein lekar apne awr khincha. Sharada kunwari thi, aur Anjali bhi, donon virgins the, kabhi kissi mard ne unn ke jism ko nahin chhuwa tha. Agarwaal ne jiss dam Sharada ke haath apne haath mein lekar apne jaangh par rakha ussko pata chal gaya ke woh virgin hai tarjurbe se. Aur woh behad khush huwa.

Agarwaal ji ne ek sexy gaane ko dvd player mein dala aur Sharada se usspar sexy dance karne ko kaha aur hukum diya ke naach ke dawraan hawle hawle apni sari ki pallu ko girne diya jaye aur halke halke ussko petty coat se bhi utara jaye… Wah eise dance to filmon mein bhi nahin milti dekhne ko jo Agarwaal apni enkhon ke saamne dekh raha tha… shuru mein Sharada thodi ghabra rahi thi magar jun jun record bajta gaya aur woh dance karti gayi apne aap hi uss mein doobti gayi aur Agarwaal ek haath mein sharaab ka glass liye uthkar Sharada ke bagal mein dol raha tha ek hath se usski sari ko utaarte huwe….. jab puri saari nikaal pheinka tab ussne apne haathon ko Sharada ki mulaayam kamar par karke ussko apne taraf khincha aur usske lab se apne honton ko lagaya aur chumne laga….. Sharada to naach rahi thi ab usske beech kissing karna….. music baji jaa rahi thi aur Agarwaal yeh mehsoos kar raha tha ke ek film chal rahi thi jiss mein ek heroine dance kar rahi thi aur woh uss fiolm mein ghuss kar uss heroine ko apne bahon mein jakar raha hai, wah re wah har kisam ke log hote hein aur kiss kiss tarah ke kalpana hote hein logon ki..Agarwaal ka sapna tha heroines ko apne bistar par sulana aur unn ko chodna aur inn ladkiyon se yehi sapna pura karwata tha……

To be continued…………………….

too good casi. you have wriiten everything so clear that i felt like watching all in frotnt of my eyes.
and your knowledge about so many things you write always amazes me. you are so impressive casi. very very good update bro.
replying on the next now as i read all 3 in one go they ae so interesting.

 

[Rowdywa]

Update 32​

Aur uss tarah se Anjali aur Sanjana ne judges ke bistar garam karke finals tak ponhonchte pohonchte mayor ki bistar aur unn ke doston ke bistar par bhi raat guzare donon ladkiyon ne aur final mein donon ko winner banaya gaya. Phir baad mein donon unn judges ke saat kayi saal tak rakhel ki tarah bane rahe aur unn ko ads mein kaam karne ka mawka diya gaya aur kaafi dawlat bhi kamaye donon ladkiyon ne.

Ab yahan competition ki tayaarai mein lag gaye Abhay aur unn ke saathi aur saath mein school ke chand students bhi, jo background mein dance kareinguey. Har raat der raat tak rehearsal karna padta tha kyun ke din mein to classes hote the. Ab rehearsals mein kabhi Abhay kuch add karta to kabhi Vinay aur Iqbal kuch batate, apne apne ideas dete sabhi phir Anny bhi kuch batati apne taraf se…. magar koyi concept thik nahin baith rahe the…. Teen din beet gaye magar Abhay khush nahin tha bilkool. Har raat rehearsal mein discussion hote the magar Abhay ko kuch bhi passand nahin arahe the. Phir ek din Iqbal, Vinay aur Anny milkar batein kar rahe the Abhay ki ghair mawjoodgi mein.

Vinay: “Abhay ko pata nahin kia chahiye competition mein present karne ke liye, main to thak gaya hoon har raat wohi baat; rehearsal aguey bilkool nahin badh raha hai hum wahin ke wahin hai bina kissi achi concept ke…..”

Iqbal: “Han yaar pata nahin hum hissa leinguey bhi ya nahin, ho sakta hai Abhay idea ko drop karde! Kyun ke ab sirf 15 din reh gaye hein aur hum ne kuch abhi tak tayyaar hi nahin kiya!”

Ananya unn donon ko dekh rahi thi sunte huwe phir kaha, “Kia tum logon ko Abhay ki kaabiliyat par shaque hai? Kia tum log sochte ho ke woh kuch nahin kar paega? Woh zaroor koyi na koyi badhya, alag, sa hatke lekar ayega hamare saamne dekhna!”

Iqbal: “Shaque to bilkool bhi nahin hai Abhay par humko. Magar aaj tak har raat ko yeh thik nahin, woh achchah nahin eisa nahin weisa nahin, hum logon ne 5 raat gawah diye aguey bhi to badhna chahiye tha nah? Ab kuch lekar, sochkar woh zaroor ayega humko pata hai magar itna waqt bhi milega humko tayyaari karne mein tab nah?!”

Vinay: “Han, Abhay beshaque kuch alag hi sochega, jo hum logon ke dimaagh se bilkool door ho…. Magar Abhay waqt ka khayaal nahin kar raha hai. Days are moving fast, we have very less time to prepare now!!”

Phir teenon ne khud apne aap se kaha ke koyi baat nahin kuch na kuch to ho hi jaega bus Abhay ki plan ka intezaar hai.


Uss din classes ke baad Abhay school aya. Aur jaldi se sabhi students ke jaane ke baad teenon ko apne room mein bulaya aur ek cd player mein start kiya unn logon ko sunne ke liye. Sab bahot heyraan magar behad khushi ke sath uss behtareen dhund ko sun rahe the aur Vinay aur Iqbal to beech mein uthkar dance bhi karne laguey uss sound track par…… 10 minutes ka recording tha aur ekdum uttam! Uss record ko baar baar Vinay aur Iqbal rewind karke sun rahe the aur steps tayaar kar rahe the dance karne ko….. Aur rukne ke baad sab ne Abhay se poocha ke kiss ne tayaar kiya uss dhund ko. Abhay ne samjhaya ke 7 ghanton ke baad ek DJ ne ussko tayaar kiya aur 10 hazaar rupay laga uss cd ko banana mein. Uss record mein koyi 15 behtareen musicians ke dhund mix karke ek 10 minutes ka cd banaya gaya. Uss mein A.R. Rehmaan ke music se lekar, Ismael Darbaar, R.D. Burman, S.S.Burman, Madan Mohan aur anya bade musicians ke music ko mix kiya gaya alag alag raagon par aadhaarit, aur uss mein kuch Spanish aur Mexican dhund bhi milaye gaye the. Kamaal ka sound track tha. Weise mix music agar khud A.R. Rahman ji sunte to dang rehjate.

Ab sab ne Abhay se poocha ke concept kia hoga aur dance keise kiya jaega? Abhay ne jab bataya to sab uchalne lage jhumte huwe kyun ke concept to woh tha ke kuch bhi ho kissi aur ne weisa socha bhi nahin hoga. Aur eise haalaat mein to unn ke liye pehla prize nischint tha. Abhay ne briefing kiya- “Iss dance mein ladki ek hi hogi aur woh hogi Ananya. Aur ladke teen. Abhay hero aashik hoga, aur Iqbal aur Vinay Ladki ke diwane aur Abhay ka rival. Dance ko mix ballet aur salsa kiya jaega, beech mein rock and roll bhi hoga, aur contemporary bhi, magar dance will be dominated by ballet and salsa in most part. There will be fight scenes also under the drums sound in the background, and the hero and heroine will be killed by you two when both of you will regret and kill each other afterward under the climax music.”

Sab behad khush huwe aur heyraan bhi aur Abhay se poochne lage ke ussko idea mila keise iss concept ki? Abhay ne kaha ke eise hi raat bhar pehle din se sochta raha aur idea agaya…… phir kuch der baad abhay ne kaha, “Sab ke costumes aur shoes banane hai. Anny ek modern princess hoga dance mein, main ek prince tum donon rival princes….. Yeh 19th Century ki end par adhaarit hoga aur kissi Europeean desh ki story hogi jeise Spain ya scotish…. Sword ka istemaal bhi hoga issmein aur asli sword hoga kyun ke sound ana chahiye takrate waqt magar khayaal rahe koyi bhi hurt nahin hona chahiye, main ne ek stunt master ko bhi dekh liya hai jo hum teenon ko talwaar chalana seekhayega aur woh kiss waqt kiss kiss dhund par use kareinguey woh baad mein batawunga…… hamara stage set mein ek mahal ka terasse hoga, aur garden ki ground jahan hum perform kareinguey magar uss dawraan Ananya terasse par perform karegi jo ek oonchaayi par hogi, phir main niche se uss se milne upar terasse par jawunga dancing steps mein aur tum donon apne apne dancing steps mein mera picha karoge ek dusre ko ishara karte huwe……. Baad mein tum donon chhup kar hum donon ko watch karoge tab tak Anny aur main niche terasse par ajayeinguey dance karte huwe ek dusre ke saath khushi mein……”

Iqbal: “Wow!! Fantastic concept hai yeh to! Just wonderful! Yeh to dhamaka hoga, judges paagal ho jayeingeuy!!”

Abhay: Han magar hum iss class mein rehearsal nahin kar sakte, yeh bahot chota par jaega, we need space aur iss ke liye main ne Saharma ji se usski theatre ko hire kar liya hai har raat ke rehearsal ke liye agle 15 dinon ke tak……”

Vinay: “Magar wahan to har roz shows hein!”

Abhay: “Han, hum rehearsals, show ke khatam hone ke baad start kareinguey, raat ke 11 se raat ke 2 baje tak!! Kissi raat ko subha ke 3/4 bhi baj sakte hein!!”

Yeh sunkar Iqbal aur Vinay ne ek dusre ko dekhkar laachaari ka ishara kiya tab Abhay ne kaha, “Agar tum log nahin kar sakoge to abhi issi waqt kehdo, main sab cancel kar dunga, aur if you guys agree to undergo the inconveniences tab we can rock it!”

Iqbal aur Vinay tab Abhay ke kareeb aakar usske haath mein ek saath haath milate huwe ek hi awaaz mein kaha, “WE WILL ROCK IT NOW! HEHEHE!!” Aur Ananya piche se aakar Abhay ke peeth par apna sar rakh kar usske piche gardan ke hisse ko chumte huwe kaha, “no doubt you will rock jaan!”

To be continued…………………………….

so good man, you have given such great details that again i feel watching all in front of my eyes.

 

[Rowdywa]

Update 33​

Phir shuru huwi har raat ki rehearsals. Har raat 10/11 baje shuru kiya gaya rehearsals jaari rehta subha ke 2/3 baje tak. Saanss lene ke liye time nahin tha kissi ke paas inn chaaron mein se, bahot hi mehnat kar rahe the sab aur raat subha 3.30 Abhay drive karke sab ko wapas ghar chorrne jaata har subha. Unn dinon Abhay ke paas Anny ke liye bhi time nahin tha bus jo school mein milte the wohi aur to bus rehearsals aur tayaariyan. Abhay ek kadak director ki tarah tha aur order diya karta tha yeh eisa karo, woh weisa karo, yeh thik nahin hai, woh ghalat hai, yeh eisa lagega, vaghaira vaghaira… baat baat par ghussa karta tha jab dance ki choregraphy thik nahin baithta tha to…. Bahot nervous rehta tha, magar sab ussko samajhte the, donon dost aur Anny bhi. Sab ko dikhta tha ke kitna mehnat kar raha hai Abhay competition ke liye. Sab chup chaap usski han mein han mila rahe the aur dance ki steps ko follow karte jaa rahe the.

Din mein school main students ke saath sab rehte the aur sham ko ghar jaakar thoda araam karte the sab phir raat ko 9 baje Abhay sab ko pick up karne jata tha sab ke ghar ek ek karke aur uss theatre par jaate the show ke baad rehesrsals karne ko. Paancwe raat ko rehearsal ke dawraan soundtrack mein rukawat agayi aur cd atak gayi….. Sab log dance karte waqt achanak ruk gaye aur sab hanssne lage!! Sound ek eisi jagah par atki thi jahan Abhay ne Anny ko baahon mein liya tha aur Anny ko ek turn karni thi jahan Abhay Anny ko ek haath se ghumakar apne peeth ke upar leta aur Anny halke se usske peeth se jeise slow motion mein khisak kar zameen par ajati…. Aur music uss waqt violin aur drums ke beech kuch classical aur pop music background mein ek saath the wahin atak gayi aur bahot funny sound ane lage…. Khud Anny hanss padi aur Abhay aur Iqbal to kayikayi laga rahe the….Magar Abhay ko bahot ghussa araha tha…… Iqbal ne kaha, “are music ruk gayi to tum bhi Anny ko apne peeth se utaro phir upar lo phir utaaro phir upar lo…jab tak sound weise baje tum bhi ek hi action ko repeat karte jawo…. Hihihihihihihi…..” Abhay chillaya, “Wil you shut the fuck up Iqbal? Tum logon ko mazaak lag raha hai? Socho agar show ke din eisa huwa to kia hoga? Aur ek hi cd

hai agar uss mein kharaabi agayi to kia kiya jaega? Kaun banayega eisa soundtrack phir se?!” Yeh kehkar Abhay dawdte huwe audio room mein gaya aur CD ko rewind kiya phir play kiya magar cd wahin aakar phir atak gayi kayi baar try karne ke baad bhi cd wahin ke wahin ruk jaati thi, phir to aguey forward karne par play bhi nahin kar raha tha ab!!

Ab unn teenon ko bhi shock laga ke ab kia hoga!! Rehearsal kaafi aguey tak badh chukka tha aur bahot achah chal raha tha. Bahot mehnat kiya tha sabhi ne….. Abhay bahot niraash hogaya aur bahot ghussa karne laga cd ki kharaabi ki vajah se…. aur unn teenon se kaha, “hansso ab!! Cancel all cancel!! Kuch nahin hone wala koyi competiton mein bhaag nahin leinguey hum, jawo apne apne ghar I give up!” Anny dhire se Abhay ke sar par apna hath pherte huwe ussko shaant karane ki koshish ki aur donon Iqbal aur Vinay bhi Abhay ke karib aakar ussko hawsla dene lage ke sab thik ho jaega koyi na koyi raasta hoga…. Aur Vinay ne poocha, “tumne cd ki copy nahin banaya tha?” Abhay ne bahot nervous state mein, apne maathey par haath maarte huwe kaha, “kayi baar socha yaar bahot baar socha ke ek do copy bana ke rakh lunga eise hi stithi ke liye magar waqt hi nahin mila inn sab bhaag dawr ke piche, bahot kuch karna padhta hai, yahan jawo, uss se milo, iss se milo, yeh karo, woh karo, in sab mein yaad bhi kahan rehti hai cd ki copy banane ko!! Sala 10 hazaar rupar lage the iss cd ko banane mein aur 8/9 ghante mein music chun chun kar sab banaya tha!! Ab kia karun main??!!”

Kuch der tak sab bilkool khaamosh baithe rahe manch par, bilkool koyi awaaz nahin thi, raat ke 1 baj gaye the, aur Abhay ne kaha, “chalo, wapas chalte hein ab…. Kal uss DJ se milkar dekhta hoon kia kar sakta hai woh….. shaayad usski hard disk mein kuch ho ya uss ne apne liye iss track ko save kiya ho….” Tab Iqbal ne kaha, “are han! Ussne zaroor apne liye ek copy save kiya hoga! Zaroor usske paas ek copy hoga! Woohoo!! Problem solved!” Aur Anny ne dhire se Abhay se kaha, “Ab jeise hi cd mile turant do copies bana lena apne liye okay?”

Dusre din Abhay uss DJ se milne gaya aur sab maamla bataya magar ussne to kuch aur hi rang dikhaya! Yeh unn logon mein se tha jo sirf paise se matlab rakhta hai. Sale ke paas copy to tha magar Abhay se kaha, “mere paas to nahin hai, magar koshish karta hoon magar isske liye tumko phir se 10 hazaar dena padega!” Abhay samajh gaya ke haraami hai woh aur phir se 10 hazaar diya ussko aur ussne khud 3 copies de diye Abhay ko iss baar. Abhay ko ghussa aya usspar magar khushi khushi cd lekar school gaya aur jhoom kar unn logon ko cd sunaya! Exact wohi tha aur uss DJ ke paas tha, magar jab Abhay ne bataya ke phir se ussne 10 hazaar rupay liye to sab ko ghussa aya!!

Rehearsals phir chaalu huwa. Anny ne note kiya ke rehersals ke waqt Abhay bahot tense rehta hai aur ziada ghussa karta hai aur uss wajah se khud apne dance steps par dhyaan nahin de pata hai. Ek eisa moment tha jab Abhay aur Anny ke part ko rehearse karna tha aur Iqbal aur Vinay audience ke jagah baithkar dekh rahe the Abhay hi ke kehne par, to donon ne dekha ke Abhay ke expressions bilkool thik nahin thi….to donon ne Abhay aur Anny ko stop kiya auur donon ne Abhay se kaha ke usska expression ghalat araha hai uss dance ke beech…… Abhay pehle se tense tha hi, to unn logon ke comments se woh aur ziada ghussa hogaya aur chillane laga……

Sab ussko samajhte the ke whole concept ka tension tha ussko, aur sabhi ke parts ko follow karna sab sahi karwana aur sabhi ke steps ko sudhaarna aur pure dance ko supervise karna bahot mushkil kaam tha iss wajah se Abhay tension mein tha, bahot nervous tha aur baat baat par ghussa kar raha tha. Usske sab dost ussko achi tarah se samajhte the iss liye jab woh ghussa karta tha to sab khaamosh ho jaya karte the. Magar Anny ne Abhay ko corridor mein akele legaya, phir make up room mein gaye donon aur Anny ne Abhay ko apne baahon mein zor se jakar kar usske honton par apne honton ko lagayi aur ussko kiss karne lagi….Abhay ne bilkool nahin socha tha ke uss waqt, uss maahaul mein Anny weisa karegi…… ab Anny itni pyar aur muhabat se ussko chum rahi thi apne adawon se ussko rijhate huwe ke Abhay shaant hogaya aur ek dum pighal gaya…… Anny ne kaha, “kitne din huwe tumkmo mujhe kiss kiye huwe kuch yaad hai tumko jaan?” Abhay ekdum khaamosh usski chehre mein dekhte huwe kaha, “Pata nahin! Yaad nahin mujhe!” Anny se pyar se muskurate huwe kaha, “10 din hone ko hai, tum ne mujhe pyar se chuwa bhi nahin and I miss you a lot!” Abhay ko heyraani huwi aur Anny ko zor se apne baahon mein lekar kaha, “Oh I am so sory baby, main bahot busy hogaya inn dinon iss concept ko lekar nah to khayaal hi nahin aya ke tumko neglect kar raha hoon please mujhe mwaaf karna sweetheart…. Main kia karun sab gadbad ho raha hai, bahot kum din reh gaye hein aur abhi tak hamara dance complete nahin huwa hai….. bahot tension hai jaan!” Anny ne Abhay ko phir bahot araam aur pyar se usske baalon mein apne narm ungliyon ko pherte huwe kaha, “kuch nahin huwa, sab thik chal raha hai aur sab bilkool thik ho jaega, tum bahot ziada tension le rahe ho inn sab ko lekar, pyar se issko aguey badhawo sab thik ho jaega. Filhaal mujhko pyar karo phir dekhna……” Abhay muskuraya aur Anny ko bahon mein simatkar donon nichey zameen par leth gaye aur Anny ahiste ahiste Abhay ki kameez ki buttons kholte huwe usske chaati par apne narm bheege huwe hoonth pherne lagi, aur Abhi ke haath Anny ke peeth par usski bra ko unhook karne lage aur donon pyar ke aghossh mein kho gaye……

Donon Iqbal aur Vinay ne Anny se kaha tha ke sirf wohi Abhay ki tension ko door kar sakti hai aur wohi Anny ne kiya…… kehte hein ke ek mard ko shaant karne ke liye, usske gham aur tensions ko khatam karne ke liye ek awart ka hona bahot zaroori hota hai, aur pyar karne wali awrat…. Aur Anny wohi thi jisski vajah se Abhay apne uljhanon ko suljha sakta tha…… ab yeh bhi hota hai aksar ek mard ki zindagi mein ke ussko tabah karne wali bhi ek awrat hi hoti hai……bus mard ki kismat achchi ho to Anny jeisi pyar karne wali hoti hai eise bure waqt mein…… Aur ek ghante tak make up room mein ishk farmaane ke baad, donon Abhay aur Anny bilkool nange pade the farsh par ek dusre ke bahon mein, jab baahar se Iqbal ne darwaza khatkhataya yeh kehte huwe; “Abe oh aashiko, rehearsal nahin karni hai kia? Raat guzar rahi hai mujhko neendh arahi hai….” Aur Abhay ne hansste huwe Anny ke chere mein dekhte huwe zor se jawaab diya, “Mujhko bhi neend arahi hai pack up karo ghar wapas chalte hein aaj ke liye bus!!”

Uss raat ko Anny ne apni mummy ko phone karke kaha ke woh ghar nahin arahi hai, abhay ke yahan thehregi, aur subha 3 baje Abhay aur Anny Abhay ke bed par paye gaye ishk karte huwe…donon ek dusre mein doob gaye aur subha ke 9 baje

Abhay ki maa ne Abhay ki room ki darwaza khatkhataayi unn donon ko jagane ke liye……..

To be continued…………………………

so brilliantly wriiten and concepted. watever you have written about the concept of the dance is in fact your concept which is fantastic. credit goes to you casi not to abhay. and then you also think of the sexual escape to get rid of stress, that is also superb
bravo bro. hats off.

 

[Axba]

Update 31​

Sheher mein ek dance competition organized kiya gaya. Town ki mayor ne announcement karwayi aur radio, TV, press, sabhi jagah par bade dhoom dhaam se charcha hone lagi uss dance competition ke liye. 20 din ki tayyaari karni thi aur thik 20 dinon ke baad apna apna show present karna tha sheher ke sab se bade theatre mein jahan hazaaron log juttey hein. Dance 2 se ziada ke group mein karna tha single nahin. Do se ziada chahe 20 hi kyun na ho, magar best award ussko milna tha jiss ki choregraphy, dance, aur sabhi steps sahi ho. Dance ke 3 bade jaani maani masters ke naam the judges ke team mein. Unn judges mein se do tharki the. Aur aksar pichele competitions mein jahan ladkiyon ki jeet huwi thi, yeh judges ke naam aaye the aur bahot sex scandal ke charche huwe the unn ladkiyon ko lekar jinhon ne inaam aur award jeete the.

To chalo teen saal pehle kia huwa tha woh dekhte hein phir wapas ayeingue iss saal wale competition mein jahan Abhay and friends bhaag leinguey.

Han iss se pehle 3 saal huwe jab aakhri Dance competiton huwa tha uss sheher mein jahan Abhi rehta hai. Woh competiton solo wala tha. Yane sirf ek dancer ki performance wala. Abhay ne tab bhaag nahin liya tha kyun ke unn dinon woh Amita ko khokar bimaar huwa tha tab ki baat hai.

To uss competiton mein do ladkiyan jinhon ne first aur second prize jeete the unn ki kahani sunata hoon, aur saath saath unn do judges aur unn ke saathiyon ke lafde bhi. To do ladkiyan jo quarter final se semi finals tak pohonchne wale the, kul mila kar 12 ladkiyan reh gaye the top 5 mein jane ke liye. Unn mein se ek thi sharada, 18 saal ki aur ek Anjali woh bhi 18 ki. Donon bahot achche dancer the aur classical dance karte the. Magar unn se bhi behtar dancers the competiton mein. Ab, jabke quarter finals mein pass hogaye yeh donon to bahot utaavle the semi final mein jane ke liye, decide nahin huwa tha ke kaun kaun semi finals ke liye chunne gaye hein.

Udhar 3 judges mein se do tharki the, ek, Mr. Bajaj 55 saal ki aur dusra Mr.Agarwaal 57 years ki. Aur ek judge ek awrat thi. Upar se tharki mayor bhi tha, 50 saal ka, jo jaan boojh kar eise competition organize karta tha ladkiyon ko apne kaabu mein karne ke liye aur share karne ke liye judges ke saath kyun ke unnko judges se faeda hota tha kissi karan apne mayorship par kayam rehne ke liye.

To Anjali aur sharada ko unn teen tharkiyon ke ek pimp ne appointment diya tha uss semi final mein qualified karne ke bare mein baat karne ke liye. Sabhi ladkiyon mein yeh baat chal rahi thi ke jo judge ko khush karegi wohi competition jeetegi. Yeh sabko pata tha. Ab unn mein se jo ladkiyan tayyaar the kuch bhi karne ke liye to weh log uss pimp se milte the aur aguey bahrne ke liye kuch bhi karte the. Aur jo apni izat ki zindagi jeena chahte the competiton ko chorr jate the.

To Anjali aur Sharada ne aapas mein baat kar liya tha ke weh donon kuch bhi karne ke liye tayyaar hai competition ko jeetne ke liye, kyun ke mayor aur judges se unnko usske baad ads mein kaam karne ka yahan tak ke filmon tak jane ka raasta khul jayega.

To jab uss pimp ne mulakaat kiya unn donon ladkiyon se to donon raazi huwe judges se milne ke liye. Pimp ne samjhaya ke judges ke saamne dance bhi karni pedegi akele kamre mein aur shaayad kapde bhi utaarne pade. Phir bhi donon ladki raazi the. Phir kia bus mulakaat karna tha.

Raat ke 10 baje ek aalishaan hotel ke do bade kamron mein intezaam kiya gaya donon judges ke liye jahan Sharada aur Anjali unn se milne gaye. Donon ladkiyan apne apne ghar par yeh keh kar gay eke rehearsals karni competition ke liye. Zindagi mein aguey bahrne ki chahat kabhi kabhi kuch bhi karwa sakti hai. Aur kuch log kissi bhi had tak jane ke liye tayyaar hote hein oonche mukaam tak pohonchne ke liye, eise hi the donon Sharada aur Anjali.

Kuch khaas taaruf nahin karwana para kamre ke andar; direct point par agaye judges log apne apne kamre mein ladkiyon ke saath. Donon ladkiyon ko maloom tha ke unn donon judges ke bistar ko garam karna hoga, donon ko raat bhar apne shareer ko unn ke hawale karna hoga to donon ladkiyan tayyaar hokar gaye the ussi ke liye. Sharada thodi si sawnli thi magar bahot badhya figure ki maalkin thi woh. Sundarta ki murti thi, jism jeise tarasha huwa heera, shakal jeise pariyon ki raani, enkhen hirniyon jeisi aur hans jeisi chaal. Mr. Agarwaal ki bistar par baithi jaakar usske bulane par, aur ek safed sari mein thi jab Agarwal ne usski pallu ko apne haathon mein lekar apne awr khincha. Sharada kunwari thi, aur Anjali bhi, donon virgins the, kabhi kissi mard ne unn ke jism ko nahin chhuwa tha. Agarwaal ne jiss dam Sharada ke haath apne haath mein lekar apne jaangh par rakha ussko pata chal gaya ke woh virgin hai tarjurbe se. Aur woh behad khush huwa.

Agarwaal ji ne ek sexy gaane ko dvd player mein dala aur Sharada se usspar sexy dance karne ko kaha aur hukum diya ke naach ke dawraan hawle hawle apni sari ki pallu ko girne diya jaye aur halke halke ussko petty coat se bhi utara jaye… Wah eise dance to filmon mein bhi nahin milti dekhne ko jo Agarwaal apni enkhon ke saamne dekh raha tha… shuru mein Sharada thodi ghabra rahi thi magar jun jun record bajta gaya aur woh dance karti gayi apne aap hi uss mein doobti gayi aur Agarwaal ek haath mein sharaab ka glass liye uthkar Sharada ke bagal mein dol raha tha ek hath se usski sari ko utaarte huwe….. jab puri saari nikaal pheinka tab ussne apne haathon ko Sharada ki mulaayam kamar par karke ussko apne taraf khincha aur usske lab se apne honton ko lagaya aur chumne laga….. Sharada to naach rahi thi ab usske beech kissing karna….. music baji jaa rahi thi aur Agarwaal yeh mehsoos kar raha tha ke ek film chal rahi thi jiss mein ek heroine dance kar rahi thi aur woh uss fiolm mein ghuss kar uss heroine ko apne bahon mein jakar raha hai, wah re wah har kisam ke log hote hein aur kiss kiss tarah ke kalpana hote hein logon ki..Agarwaal ka sapna tha heroines ko apne bistar par sulana aur unn ko chodna aur inn ladkiyon se yehi sapna pura karwata tha……

To be continued…………………….

behad majedaar update casi.
kia mast likha hai bhai

 

[Axba]

Update 32​

Aur uss tarah se Anjali aur Sanjana ne judges ke bistar garam karke finals tak ponhonchte pohonchte mayor ki bistar aur unn ke doston ke bistar par bhi raat guzare donon ladkiyon ne aur final mein donon ko winner banaya gaya. Phir baad mein donon unn judges ke saat kayi saal tak rakhel ki tarah bane rahe aur unn ko ads mein kaam karne ka mawka diya gaya aur kaafi dawlat bhi kamaye donon ladkiyon ne.

Ab yahan competition ki tayaarai mein lag gaye Abhay aur unn ke saathi aur saath mein school ke chand students bhi, jo background mein dance kareinguey. Har raat der raat tak rehearsal karna padta tha kyun ke din mein to classes hote the. Ab rehearsals mein kabhi Abhay kuch add karta to kabhi Vinay aur Iqbal kuch batate, apne apne ideas dete sabhi phir Anny bhi kuch batati apne taraf se…. magar koyi concept thik nahin baith rahe the…. Teen din beet gaye magar Abhay khush nahin tha bilkool. Har raat rehearsal mein discussion hote the magar Abhay ko kuch bhi passand nahin arahe the. Phir ek din Iqbal, Vinay aur Anny milkar batein kar rahe the Abhay ki ghair mawjoodgi mein.

Vinay: “Abhay ko pata nahin kia chahiye competition mein present karne ke liye, main to thak gaya hoon har raat wohi baat; rehearsal aguey bilkool nahin badh raha hai hum wahin ke wahin hai bina kissi achi concept ke…..”

Iqbal: “Han yaar pata nahin hum hissa leinguey bhi ya nahin, ho sakta hai Abhay idea ko drop karde! Kyun ke ab sirf 15 din reh gaye hein aur hum ne kuch abhi tak tayyaar hi nahin kiya!”

Ananya unn donon ko dekh rahi thi sunte huwe phir kaha, “Kia tum logon ko Abhay ki kaabiliyat par shaque hai? Kia tum log sochte ho ke woh kuch nahin kar paega? Woh zaroor koyi na koyi badhya, alag, sa hatke lekar ayega hamare saamne dekhna!”

Iqbal: “Shaque to bilkool bhi nahin hai Abhay par humko. Magar aaj tak har raat ko yeh thik nahin, woh achchah nahin eisa nahin weisa nahin, hum logon ne 5 raat gawah diye aguey bhi to badhna chahiye tha nah? Ab kuch lekar, sochkar woh zaroor ayega humko pata hai magar itna waqt bhi milega humko tayyaari karne mein tab nah?!”

Vinay: “Han, Abhay beshaque kuch alag hi sochega, jo hum logon ke dimaagh se bilkool door ho…. Magar Abhay waqt ka khayaal nahin kar raha hai. Days are moving fast, we have very less time to prepare now!!”

Phir teenon ne khud apne aap se kaha ke koyi baat nahin kuch na kuch to ho hi jaega bus Abhay ki plan ka intezaar hai.


Uss din classes ke baad Abhay school aya. Aur jaldi se sabhi students ke jaane ke baad teenon ko apne room mein bulaya aur ek cd player mein start kiya unn logon ko sunne ke liye. Sab bahot heyraan magar behad khushi ke sath uss behtareen dhund ko sun rahe the aur Vinay aur Iqbal to beech mein uthkar dance bhi karne laguey uss sound track par…… 10 minutes ka recording tha aur ekdum uttam! Uss record ko baar baar Vinay aur Iqbal rewind karke sun rahe the aur steps tayaar kar rahe the dance karne ko….. Aur rukne ke baad sab ne Abhay se poocha ke kiss ne tayaar kiya uss dhund ko. Abhay ne samjhaya ke 7 ghanton ke baad ek DJ ne ussko tayaar kiya aur 10 hazaar rupay laga uss cd ko banana mein. Uss record mein koyi 15 behtareen musicians ke dhund mix karke ek 10 minutes ka cd banaya gaya. Uss mein A.R. Rehmaan ke music se lekar, Ismael Darbaar, R.D. Burman, S.S.Burman, Madan Mohan aur anya bade musicians ke music ko mix kiya gaya alag alag raagon par aadhaarit, aur uss mein kuch Spanish aur Mexican dhund bhi milaye gaye the. Kamaal ka sound track tha. Weise mix music agar khud A.R. Rahman ji sunte to dang rehjate.

Ab sab ne Abhay se poocha ke concept kia hoga aur dance keise kiya jaega? Abhay ne jab bataya to sab uchalne lage jhumte huwe kyun ke concept to woh tha ke kuch bhi ho kissi aur ne weisa socha bhi nahin hoga. Aur eise haalaat mein to unn ke liye pehla prize nischint tha. Abhay ne briefing kiya- “Iss dance mein ladki ek hi hogi aur woh hogi Ananya. Aur ladke teen. Abhay hero aashik hoga, aur Iqbal aur Vinay Ladki ke diwane aur Abhay ka rival. Dance ko mix ballet aur salsa kiya jaega, beech mein rock and roll bhi hoga, aur contemporary bhi, magar dance will be dominated by ballet and salsa in most part. There will be fight scenes also under the drums sound in the background, and the hero and heroine will be killed by you two when both of you will regret and kill each other afterward under the climax music.”

Sab behad khush huwe aur heyraan bhi aur Abhay se poochne lage ke ussko idea mila keise iss concept ki? Abhay ne kaha ke eise hi raat bhar pehle din se sochta raha aur idea agaya…… phir kuch der baad abhay ne kaha, “Sab ke costumes aur shoes banane hai. Anny ek modern princess hoga dance mein, main ek prince tum donon rival princes….. Yeh 19th Century ki end par adhaarit hoga aur kissi Europeean desh ki story hogi jeise Spain ya scotish…. Sword ka istemaal bhi hoga issmein aur asli sword hoga kyun ke sound ana chahiye takrate waqt magar khayaal rahe koyi bhi hurt nahin hona chahiye, main ne ek stunt master ko bhi dekh liya hai jo hum teenon ko talwaar chalana seekhayega aur woh kiss waqt kiss kiss dhund par use kareinguey woh baad mein batawunga…… hamara stage set mein ek mahal ka terasse hoga, aur garden ki ground jahan hum perform kareinguey magar uss dawraan Ananya terasse par perform karegi jo ek oonchaayi par hogi, phir main niche se uss se milne upar terasse par jawunga dancing steps mein aur tum donon apne apne dancing steps mein mera picha karoge ek dusre ko ishara karte huwe……. Baad mein tum donon chhup kar hum donon ko watch karoge tab tak Anny aur main niche terasse par ajayeinguey dance karte huwe ek dusre ke saath khushi mein……”

Iqbal: “Wow!! Fantastic concept hai yeh to! Just wonderful! Yeh to dhamaka hoga, judges paagal ho jayeingeuy!!”

Abhay: Han magar hum iss class mein rehearsal nahin kar sakte, yeh bahot chota par jaega, we need space aur iss ke liye main ne Saharma ji se usski theatre ko hire kar liya hai har raat ke rehearsal ke liye agle 15 dinon ke tak……”

Vinay: “Magar wahan to har roz shows hein!”

Abhay: “Han, hum rehearsals, show ke khatam hone ke baad start kareinguey, raat ke 11 se raat ke 2 baje tak!! Kissi raat ko subha ke 3/4 bhi baj sakte hein!!”

Yeh sunkar Iqbal aur Vinay ne ek dusre ko dekhkar laachaari ka ishara kiya tab Abhay ne kaha, “Agar tum log nahin kar sakoge to abhi issi waqt kehdo, main sab cancel kar dunga, aur if you guys agree to undergo the inconveniences tab we can rock it!”

Iqbal aur Vinay tab Abhay ke kareeb aakar usske haath mein ek saath haath milate huwe ek hi awaaz mein kaha, “WE WILL ROCK IT NOW! HEHEHE!!” Aur Ananya piche se aakar Abhay ke peeth par apna sar rakh kar usske piche gardan ke hisse ko chumte huwe kaha, “no doubt you will rock jaan!”

To be continued…………………………….

ekdum mast casi bhai.
kia concept dhunda hai abhay ne mast mast mast

 

[Axba]

Update 33​

Phir shuru huwi har raat ki rehearsals. Har raat 10/11 baje shuru kiya gaya rehearsals jaari rehta subha ke 2/3 baje tak. Saanss lene ke liye time nahin tha kissi ke paas inn chaaron mein se, bahot hi mehnat kar rahe the sab aur raat subha 3.30 Abhay drive karke sab ko wapas ghar chorrne jaata har subha. Unn dinon Abhay ke paas Anny ke liye bhi time nahin tha bus jo school mein milte the wohi aur to bus rehearsals aur tayaariyan. Abhay ek kadak director ki tarah tha aur order diya karta tha yeh eisa karo, woh weisa karo, yeh thik nahin hai, woh ghalat hai, yeh eisa lagega, vaghaira vaghaira… baat baat par ghussa karta tha jab dance ki choregraphy thik nahin baithta tha to…. Bahot nervous rehta tha, magar sab ussko samajhte the, donon dost aur Anny bhi. Sab ko dikhta tha ke kitna mehnat kar raha hai Abhay competition ke liye. Sab chup chaap usski han mein han mila rahe the aur dance ki steps ko follow karte jaa rahe the.

Din mein school main students ke saath sab rehte the aur sham ko ghar jaakar thoda araam karte the sab phir raat ko 9 baje Abhay sab ko pick up karne jata tha sab ke ghar ek ek karke aur uss theatre par jaate the show ke baad rehesrsals karne ko. Paancwe raat ko rehearsal ke dawraan soundtrack mein rukawat agayi aur cd atak gayi….. Sab log dance karte waqt achanak ruk gaye aur sab hanssne lage!! Sound ek eisi jagah par atki thi jahan Abhay ne Anny ko baahon mein liya tha aur Anny ko ek turn karni thi jahan Abhay Anny ko ek haath se ghumakar apne peeth ke upar leta aur Anny halke se usske peeth se jeise slow motion mein khisak kar zameen par ajati…. Aur music uss waqt violin aur drums ke beech kuch classical aur pop music background mein ek saath the wahin atak gayi aur bahot funny sound ane lage…. Khud Anny hanss padi aur Abhay aur Iqbal to kayikayi laga rahe the….Magar Abhay ko bahot ghussa araha tha…… Iqbal ne kaha, “are music ruk gayi to tum bhi Anny ko apne peeth se utaro phir upar lo phir utaaro phir upar lo…jab tak sound weise baje tum bhi ek hi action ko repeat karte jawo…. Hihihihihihihi…..” Abhay chillaya, “Wil you shut the fuck up Iqbal? Tum logon ko mazaak lag raha hai? Socho agar show ke din eisa huwa to kia hoga? Aur ek hi cd

hai agar uss mein kharaabi agayi to kia kiya jaega? Kaun banayega eisa soundtrack phir se?!” Yeh kehkar Abhay dawdte huwe audio room mein gaya aur CD ko rewind kiya phir play kiya magar cd wahin aakar phir atak gayi kayi baar try karne ke baad bhi cd wahin ke wahin ruk jaati thi, phir to aguey forward karne par play bhi nahin kar raha tha ab!!

Ab unn teenon ko bhi shock laga ke ab kia hoga!! Rehearsal kaafi aguey tak badh chukka tha aur bahot achah chal raha tha. Bahot mehnat kiya tha sabhi ne….. Abhay bahot niraash hogaya aur bahot ghussa karne laga cd ki kharaabi ki vajah se…. aur unn teenon se kaha, “hansso ab!! Cancel all cancel!! Kuch nahin hone wala koyi competiton mein bhaag nahin leinguey hum, jawo apne apne ghar I give up!” Anny dhire se Abhay ke sar par apna hath pherte huwe ussko shaant karane ki koshish ki aur donon Iqbal aur Vinay bhi Abhay ke karib aakar ussko hawsla dene lage ke sab thik ho jaega koyi na koyi raasta hoga…. Aur Vinay ne poocha, “tumne cd ki copy nahin banaya tha?” Abhay ne bahot nervous state mein, apne maathey par haath maarte huwe kaha, “kayi baar socha yaar bahot baar socha ke ek do copy bana ke rakh lunga eise hi stithi ke liye magar waqt hi nahin mila inn sab bhaag dawr ke piche, bahot kuch karna padhta hai, yahan jawo, uss se milo, iss se milo, yeh karo, woh karo, in sab mein yaad bhi kahan rehti hai cd ki copy banane ko!! Sala 10 hazaar rupar lage the iss cd ko banane mein aur 8/9 ghante mein music chun chun kar sab banaya tha!! Ab kia karun main??!!”

Kuch der tak sab bilkool khaamosh baithe rahe manch par, bilkool koyi awaaz nahin thi, raat ke 1 baj gaye the, aur Abhay ne kaha, “chalo, wapas chalte hein ab…. Kal uss DJ se milkar dekhta hoon kia kar sakta hai woh….. shaayad usski hard disk mein kuch ho ya uss ne apne liye iss track ko save kiya ho….” Tab Iqbal ne kaha, “are han! Ussne zaroor apne liye ek copy save kiya hoga! Zaroor usske paas ek copy hoga! Woohoo!! Problem solved!” Aur Anny ne dhire se Abhay se kaha, “Ab jeise hi cd mile turant do copies bana lena apne liye okay?”

Dusre din Abhay uss DJ se milne gaya aur sab maamla bataya magar ussne to kuch aur hi rang dikhaya! Yeh unn logon mein se tha jo sirf paise se matlab rakhta hai. Sale ke paas copy to tha magar Abhay se kaha, “mere paas to nahin hai, magar koshish karta hoon magar isske liye tumko phir se 10 hazaar dena padega!” Abhay samajh gaya ke haraami hai woh aur phir se 10 hazaar diya ussko aur ussne khud 3 copies de diye Abhay ko iss baar. Abhay ko ghussa aya usspar magar khushi khushi cd lekar school gaya aur jhoom kar unn logon ko cd sunaya! Exact wohi tha aur uss DJ ke paas tha, magar jab Abhay ne bataya ke phir se ussne 10 hazaar rupay liye to sab ko ghussa aya!!

Rehearsals phir chaalu huwa. Anny ne note kiya ke rehersals ke waqt Abhay bahot tense rehta hai aur ziada ghussa karta hai aur uss wajah se khud apne dance steps par dhyaan nahin de pata hai. Ek eisa moment tha jab Abhay aur Anny ke part ko rehearse karna tha aur Iqbal aur Vinay audience ke jagah baithkar dekh rahe the Abhay hi ke kehne par, to donon ne dekha ke Abhay ke expressions bilkool thik nahin thi….to donon ne Abhay aur Anny ko stop kiya auur donon ne Abhay se kaha ke usska expression ghalat araha hai uss dance ke beech…… Abhay pehle se tense tha hi, to unn logon ke comments se woh aur ziada ghussa hogaya aur chillane laga……

Sab ussko samajhte the ke whole concept ka tension tha ussko, aur sabhi ke parts ko follow karna sab sahi karwana aur sabhi ke steps ko sudhaarna aur pure dance ko supervise karna bahot mushkil kaam tha iss wajah se Abhay tension mein tha, bahot nervous tha aur baat baat par ghussa kar raha tha. Usske sab dost ussko achi tarah se samajhte the iss liye jab woh ghussa karta tha to sab khaamosh ho jaya karte the. Magar Anny ne Abhay ko corridor mein akele legaya, phir make up room mein gaye donon aur Anny ne Abhay ko apne baahon mein zor se jakar kar usske honton par apne honton ko lagayi aur ussko kiss karne lagi….Abhay ne bilkool nahin socha tha ke uss waqt, uss maahaul mein Anny weisa karegi…… ab Anny itni pyar aur muhabat se ussko chum rahi thi apne adawon se ussko rijhate huwe ke Abhay shaant hogaya aur ek dum pighal gaya…… Anny ne kaha, “kitne din huwe tumkmo mujhe kiss kiye huwe kuch yaad hai tumko jaan?” Abhay ekdum khaamosh usski chehre mein dekhte huwe kaha, “Pata nahin! Yaad nahin mujhe!” Anny se pyar se muskurate huwe kaha, “10 din hone ko hai, tum ne mujhe pyar se chuwa bhi nahin and I miss you a lot!” Abhay ko heyraani huwi aur Anny ko zor se apne baahon mein lekar kaha, “Oh I am so sory baby, main bahot busy hogaya inn dinon iss concept ko lekar nah to khayaal hi nahin aya ke tumko neglect kar raha hoon please mujhe mwaaf karna sweetheart…. Main kia karun sab gadbad ho raha hai, bahot kum din reh gaye hein aur abhi tak hamara dance complete nahin huwa hai….. bahot tension hai jaan!” Anny ne Abhay ko phir bahot araam aur pyar se usske baalon mein apne narm ungliyon ko pherte huwe kaha, “kuch nahin huwa, sab thik chal raha hai aur sab bilkool thik ho jaega, tum bahot ziada tension le rahe ho inn sab ko lekar, pyar se issko aguey badhawo sab thik ho jaega. Filhaal mujhko pyar karo phir dekhna……” Abhay muskuraya aur Anny ko bahon mein simatkar donon nichey zameen par leth gaye aur Anny ahiste ahiste Abhay ki kameez ki buttons kholte huwe usske chaati par apne narm bheege huwe hoonth pherne lagi, aur Abhi ke haath Anny ke peeth par usski bra ko unhook karne lage aur donon pyar ke aghossh mein kho gaye……

Donon Iqbal aur Vinay ne Anny se kaha tha ke sirf wohi Abhay ki tension ko door kar sakti hai aur wohi Anny ne kiya…… kehte hein ke ek mard ko shaant karne ke liye, usske gham aur tensions ko khatam karne ke liye ek awart ka hona bahot zaroori hota hai, aur pyar karne wali awrat…. Aur Anny wohi thi jisski vajah se Abhay apne uljhanon ko suljha sakta tha…… ab yeh bhi hota hai aksar ek mard ki zindagi mein ke ussko tabah karne wali bhi ek awrat hi hoti hai……bus mard ki kismat achchi ho to Anny jeisi pyar karne wali hoti hai eise bure waqt mein…… Aur ek ghante tak make up room mein ishk farmaane ke baad, donon Abhay aur Anny bilkool nange pade the farsh par ek dusre ke bahon mein, jab baahar se Iqbal ne darwaza khatkhataya yeh kehte huwe; “Abe oh aashiko, rehearsal nahin karni hai kia? Raat guzar rahi hai mujhko neendh arahi hai….” Aur Abhay ne hansste huwe Anny ke chere mein dekhte huwe zor se jawaab diya, “Mujhko bhi neend arahi hai pack up karo ghar wapas chalte hein aaj ke liye bus!!”

Uss raat ko Anny ne apni mummy ko phone karke kaha ke woh ghar nahin arahi hai, abhay ke yahan thehregi, aur subha 3 baje Abhay aur Anny Abhay ke bed par paye gaye ishk karte huwe…donon ek dusre mein doob gaye aur subha ke 9 baje

Abhay ki maa ne Abhay ki room ki darwaza khatkhataayi unn donon ko jagane ke liye……..

To be continued…………………………

haan ishk farmana hi baaki tha
too good casi wonderful my dear

 

[Casinar]

cool great friendship and faithfullness from ikbal towards abhay.
in real life it would have been the contraty.
good update buddy you wrote all perfectly well

thanks my friend