Zas23
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surkiya dost behtarin review ke liye apke najriye ki kadar karta hu par story me abhi bahut razz hai jo samne aaye gye so story padh kar reviw dete raheAbb naya musibat zoya ayegi bina lund ke bina tel ke gaan maregi hamara awaraka
Tannu didi ki iss over acting ne muje sochne per majboor kar diya kahi wo bi iss file ke peeche naa ho
Bhai update jaldi ata tho maza ata lakin apki is lambi gap ne tho maze ko kirkira kardiya
Bhai pls ek ya do din chodke doge bi tho chalega per itna gap nahi mere yaar pls ye mere request hai apse
mohit ne sach kyo batya aur kya chl raha hai uske dimag me dhire dhire samjh aata jaye gaa tab tak story padhte rahe aur aise hi pyare REVIEW dete rahe
Excellent update bhai Aakhirkar Mohit Ne Tannu ka pyar accept kar liya aur abhi tak ki sari Sachai usko Bata Diya Ki Kyun wo usse abhi tak Dur tha & Mohit aur Tannu ka pyar bahut badiya dikhaye Ho, aur ab Mohit ko lead karne ke liye uski senior head Zoya Aane Wali Hai dekhte hain ab aage kya hota hai.....
Waiting for next update_____
Fantastic updates
thanxx dost aram se story padh kar review de...apka iss thread par thahe dil se sawagat karta hudost pehle to mafi chahta hun, quoki maine story aaj he padhni suru ki h. Per jald he current update tak pahuch jaunga.
Kya karun yaar thoda lalchi ho gaya tha.
Yeh story mere dil ke bahot karib h ab padhke he baki comment karunga.
Story ke liye
surkiya dost apke pyare REVIEW ke liye aur mohit ke dimag me kya chl raha hai woh jald hi pata lag jaye gaa zoya ka bhi samjh aa jaye gaa aap sab sath babne raheBahut hi jabardast update. Kya kahu kuch samajh na aa raha he. Aapne to jhatka dediya zoya ki entry karwa kar. Ab wo lead karegi mission ko. Tannu di ne to gaal lal kar diye. Aur emotional hoke hero ne use sab bata diya lekin sayad us file ke bare me na bataya ho. Ab dekhna ye he ki mohit aage in sab ko kaise sambhalta he.
Waiting 4 next update
surkiya dost apka REVIEW aur itne Dhyan se story padh kar reviw dene ka main kayal hu har baar apke reviw ko padh kar bahut acha lagta haiGajab bhai gajab
Deir aaye durust aaye
ZOYA entry kar rhi hai aur vo mission lead karegi mtlb bade vale L lag jayenge apne AWARA ke
MOHIT ne probably sab bta diya ho par shayad yeh na btaya ho ki vo file uske andar hi hai but mujhe na jane kyun TANNU se negative thoughts aa rhe hain as usse sab pta chl gya hai MOHIT ke baare mai aur ab jab MOHIT apne BAAP pr bharosa nhi kar skta toh mai bhi kisi character bhrosa kaose karun mere liye MOHIT jungle mai chupe JANWARON ke bich ek akela insan hai jo kisi pr bhi bhrosa nhi kr skta (MOHIT ki MOM iss sab se abhi alag hai)
ZOYA aate hi GAND phodne lag jayegi MOHIT ki hopefully MOHIT usse bhi MUNNIBAI ke dhikane par na bheje na uske baare mai btaye but shayad BOSS se usse yeh pta chl jaye ki MUNNIBAI MOHIT ke pass hai (agar BOSS ko pta hai iss bare mai toh)
MOHIT mission ke doran kisi par bhi bharosa nhi krta yahan tak ki RAW pr bhi nhi issliye har mission ki detail usse complete karne ke baad di jaati hai
Well see what happens
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