Incest AWARA - DIL DIMAG SE (Completed)

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Hello, Ladies & Gentleman,

We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.



Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 10th, June 2020, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.



Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.

Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.



Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.



Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.

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[Aashiqq..]

Nice END bro....
Achha laga padke.....
Thank u dost story k liye.....

 

[Akil]

Wonderful story bro

 

[Arvind274]

Nice ending

 

[loverboy99999]

Khatam ho gayi....
Urvi ke sath shadi hui publicly
Tanu se hui other state me
Kavya ka kya hua?
Aur teesri haseena ke sath shadi nahi batayi???
Suresh ki shadi mala se??? Ye kaunsa suresh hai bhai?
Agli story start hogi kya???
Kaunsi hogi uska link bhi de dena yaha pe.

 

[Rk1991]

Nice

 

[Siraj Patel]

UPDATE NO 62

dekh lu agar mohit ko kuch bhi pata laga toh muskil ho jaye gyi aur mohit ke dimag me dala mera system kaam naa karna mujhe iss aur paka kar raha hai

aurat:-aap jada tension naa lo woh hamra kuch nhi ka sakta

suresh:-woh toh hai chlo bed par chle uss kamine ke bare me soch ke mod kharab ho gya

aurat:-main banti hu mood aaiye। .......

aise hi dono bed par chhod jate hai aur sex ki aag me jalne lagte hai

Ab aage..............

digvijay ko lekar ham nayi jagah aa gye mere sath sif sehra jagdish aur zoya the

ham ek aise ghar me the jiska pata lagna muskil tha kyoki yeh ek bidh badh wale gharo ke bicho bich tha

ham sab ne raat ko hi sab check kar ke digvijay ko ander rakh diya jaha pehle se ek admi tha aur ham waha se nikl gye

uske baad ham sidhe ek naye adde par gye jiska pata jagdish ne diya tha usne kaha tha woh safe hai

main aur jagdish aur zoya waha chle gye aur sehra ko digvijay ke pas chhod diya ek month ke rasan ke sath taki usse bahar naa aana pade aur room me bhi bahar se lock laga diya gye

main jab room me aaya toh waha 10 admi mere the

main:-kam ho gya

admi:-yess sirr kisi ko kano kaan khabar nhi huyi

main:-very good tumhra inam tumhre account me hai mujhe tum 10 ke 10 abhi out of city chahiye

admi:-yess sir ho jaye gaa

admi ke jate hi jagdish bhi ham se ijajat leke chla gya

zoya:-ab kya karna hai mohit

main:-zoya mera manna hai ke hamm intezar kare aur unhe sochne de baki tum baato kya sochti ho

zoya:-i agree...abhi hamme chup rehna hoga tabhi tumhre papa bill se bahar nikle gye hamme dhundhe ke liye

main:-bilkul teek kaha chlo filhal toh raat ho bHut ho gyi hai chlo tum bhi jakar so jao main bhi unn se mil lu

zoya:-teek hai

uske baad zoya ek room me chli gyi main bhi ek room me chla gya jisse bahar se band kiya hua tha

maine door khol ke ander aa gya aur jaise hi light on ki toh samne bed par do khubsurat pariya soo rahi thi agar aisa kahu behosh padi hai toh sayad jada behtar hoga

maine fir light off kar di aur unke bich me jagah bana ke let gya

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idher rehman aur narangi bhi presan the kyonki unhe digvijay ke kidnep hone ki khabar mil gyi thi

dono iss waqt digvijay ke ghar par hi the

narangi:-(haste huye) matab ab saap nevale ki ladai suru ho gyi

rehman:-matlab kya hai tumhra yaha digvijay gyab hai aur tum hass rahe ho

narangi:-oh chutiya kon saa mera sala lagta tha jo main preshan hou...mujhe sif farmula chahiye jo ab jaldi mile gaa

rehman:-kyaa matlab

narangi:-kyaa rehman bhai apne woh story nhi suni jis me do bander ladte rehte hai aur billi sari roti khaa jati hai

rehman:-(muskura kar) matlab hamme unn ki ladai me mokke ki talash me rehna chahiye taki hamme aram se farmula mil jaye aur jada nuksan bhi naa ho hamra

narangi:-(muskura kar) itne bhi bewkuf nhi ho...sahi samjhe ab bas najre rakhni hai.... takatvar woh nhi hota jo ladta hai balki woh hota hai jo mokke ka faida utha taa hai varna angrej itne saal ham par raj nhi karte unho ne bhi mokke ka faida uthya aur hamre hath se hamri gardan tak poch gye

rehman:-bilkul sahi main apne admi laga deta hu iss kaam me

narangi:-hamme pal pal ki khabar chahiye ghar ki taki sab kuch hamre samne ho

rehman:-tum uski chinta maat karo sab ho jaye gaa

narangi:-hona hi chahiye yeh mokka hamre hath se nhi niklna chahiye

uske rehman apne admiyo ko kuch samjhta hai aur dono waha se chle jate hai
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subh sab ke liye ek nayi utsukta lekar aayi thi sabse pehle chl lete hai suresh ke room me

suresh:-aaj waqt aa gya hai devgan se face to face milne kaa

aurat:-sayad tum sahi ho par kya mohit ka kuch pata laga

suresh:-nhi par devgan se milne ke baad ghar par phone karo gaa

aurat:-haa teek hai

uske baad dono apne se nikl kar dusre room me chle jate hai

jaha par devgan kursi par majbuti se bandha hua tha aakhe band thi

suresh aur woh dono waha par jakar baith jate hai

suresh:-yaha koi taklif toh nhi ho rahi degvan

kisi ki awaj sunn devgan ko aakhe band kiya hua tha woh muh uper kar ke dekhta hai

apne samne suresh aur uss aurat ko dekh jada hairan nhi hota jaise woh sab kuch janta ho

devgan ko bina reaction ke dekh suresh aur woh aurat jarur hairan ho jate hai

suresh:-kya hua hamme dekh ke hairan nhi hue

devgan:-tumhe kya lagta hai suresh mujhe hairan hona chahiye

Suresh:-matlb tum mera raj jante the par apni biwi ko mere pas dekh kar bhi hairan nhi huye

devgan:-(muskura kar) randiya kisi ki nhi hoti toh iss baat par jada hairan hone ki kya baat hai

suresh;-(hairani se) matlb tu Nirmala ke bare me bhi jante the fir bhi chup the

devgan:-sifff apni beti ke liye jo iss randi ko apni asli maa se bhi jada pyar karti hai iss liye yeh zinda thi par mujhe jada preshni nhi hai kyoki ab uske liye iss randi se bhi jada jaruri hai koi

Suresh:-kon woh kutta mohit.....

devgan:-kutta hi sahi par uss ekle se tumhri halat kharab hai

suresh devgan ki baat sunn tilmila jata hai aur jor dar thapad jadd deta hai

suresh:-teri chuttiya c baate sunne nhi aaya hu farmula kaha hai

devgan:-jada hai mehfuz hai

suresh:-dekh meraa dimag pehle hi kharab hai...tu mera kabhi sabse achaa dost tha iss liye pyar se poch raha hu baata de kaha hai farmula

devgan:-tu dosti jaise sabdo ke liye nhi bana hai....tu toh apni biwi bacho kaa naa hua toh kisi aur ka kya hoga

suresh kuch bolta iss se pehle nirmala waha se ek chaku utha ke devgan ke pair me marti hai jis se uski cheekh pure room me faail jati hai

nirmala:-kab se bakwas kiye jaa raha hai

suresh;-yeh kuch nhi baatne wala mujhe lagta hai hamme iski kamjori ko use karna hoga

nirmala:-main abhi call karti hu urvi ko

suresh:-ab bol tu sach bole gaa yaa teri beti ko tere hi samne lakar chodu

devgan:-tu meri beti tak saat janmo tak nhi poch sakta kutte woh ab tak iss dayan ke bare me jaan chuki hogi aur khud ko mehfuzz bhi kar liya hoga

suresh:-nhiiii aisa nhi ho sakta ek aur harr nhi

suresh gusse se pagal ho jata hai aur puri takat se devgan ke chest par laat marta hai jis se devgan chair sehat hi piche ko gir jata hai

nirmala:-yaha toh game hi ulti padh gyi ab kya kare iss budhe ne toh hamme chakma de diya

suresh:-juhi aur tannu ko kidnep karna hoga

nirmala:-teek hai tum ghar me phone kar ke usse bahar niklo hamm usse waha se kidnep karwa lenge

abhi Suresh kuch bolta hai ke suresh ka phone bajne lagta hai

suresh jaise hi phone pick kar ke phone par baat karta hai toh gusse se pagal ho jata hai aur apna phone utha kar deewar se marta hai

nirmala:-ab kyaa huaa.....

suresh:-uss kutte ne juhi aur tannu ko bhi save kar liyaa

nirmala:-ohhh shittt

inn dono ki baat sunn devgan hasne lagta hai

devgan:-kya huaa muhhh ki khaa rahe ho tumhraa ant najdik hai suresh ab aur nhi.....tumhe tumhraa hi khoon takar de raha hai

suresh:-main uska baap hu

devgan:-sachhh me

itna bol jor jor se hasne lagtaa jaise pata nhi kya raj chupa tha uski hassi me jis se suresh til mila jata hai aur devgan par laato ki barsat kar deta hai jab tak woh behosh nhi ho jata

uske baad dono waha se nikl jate hai

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suresh ke ghar me jab se subh huyi thi sab preshan the wajah thi ghar me dono ladkiyo kaa gayab hona

sara ghar me rona chalu tha kisi ko samjh nhi aa raha tha juhi aur tannu kaha hai

sammer ne police ko bula liya tha toh baki ghar wale tannu aur juhi ka phone try kar rahe the

ghar har kisi ke aakho me aasu the kyonki ek ghatna huye jada dinn nhi hua tha aur yu achanak se juhi aur tannu ko gayab ho jana sab ko preshan kar raha tha

mohit ko bhi phone kiya gya par uska phone abhi tak off hi tha

sameer ne police report toh kar diya tha aur police kaam par bhi lag gyi thi

inn sab me mohit ki maa ka bura haal tha roo roo kar priya aur pihu unhe chup kara rahe the

Superb update bhai.....
Aakhir Mohit Ne Juhi aur Tannu ko save kar liya.. khair dekhte hain ab Suresh Agla plan kya chalta hai..

 

[Siraj Patel]

UPDATE NO 63

ghar har kisi ke aakho me aasu the kyonki ek ghatna huye jada dinn nhi hua tha aur yu achanak se juhi aur tannu ko gayab ho jana sab ko preshan kar raha tha

mohit ko bhi phone kiya gya par uska phone abhi tak off hi tha

sameer ne police report toh kar diya tha aur police kaam par bhi lag gyi thi

inn sab me mohit ki maa ka bura haal tha roo roo kar priya aur pihu unhe chup kara rahe the

Ab aage...........

tannu ko jab subh hosh aayi toh unho ne apne aap ko kisi anjan jagah paa pehle toh ghabraa gyi par jaise hi apne pass mohit ko sota dekha khud ko pakad kar toh woh relex ho gyi

uss ne aas pas dekha toh room pura change tha mohit ke ilawa waha juhi bhi thi

usse samjh nhi aa raha tha woh yaha kaise aa gyi aur toh aur mohit kab aaya

tannu abhi soch hi rhi the ke juhi bhi aakhe maalte huye uth kar baith gyi aur uska bhi reaction vaisa hi tha jaisa thodi der pehle tannu ka tha room aur mohit ko dekh

juhi:-didi yeh toh hamra room nhi hai hamm yaha kaise aaye aur mohit kab aaya

tannu:-choti soch toh main bhi yahi rahi

inn dono ki awaj sunn meri v nind khul gyi par mera abhi uthne ka bilkul mann nhi tha iss liye main apna sar tannu didi ki godh me rakh ke fir se let gya unhe pakad kar

main:-didi sone do naa kyo shor kar rahi ho

tannu:-bhai uth naa dekh mujhe dar lag raha ham yaha kaise aaye yeh toh hamra room nhi balki hamra ghar bhi nhi

main:-mera ghar hai didi aap daro maat ab plss sone do

juhi:-par ham yaha kaise aa gye

inki baate sunn meri nind bhi kharab ho gyi aur main bhi uth kar baith gya

tannu:-mohit baata naa ham yaha kaise aaye

main:-meri sweet sister cool...maine aap dono ko kidnep kiya hai

meri baat sunte hi dono lagbhag cheekh hi uthi aur bed se khadi ho gyi

tannu:-yeh kya bol raha hai tu bhai

main:-cool cool didi main sab samjhta hu pehle aap dono baitho

mere kehne par bhi dono khadi rahi toh main khada hokar unhe baitha diya
main:-didi baat aisi hai ke waha apki jaan ko khatra tha iss liye aap ko kidnep karna pada

juhi:-kya matlb hai mohit hamri jaan ko khatra tha

main:-aap janti hai hamre sath kuch dino se sab bura ho raha hai

tannu:-haa ho raha par inn sab me iss kidnep ka kya lena hai

main:-haa didi sab kuch lena hai...

tannu:-dekh mohit jo baat hai clear bol de

main:-didi bol duga sab baata duga par pehle mujhe kuch pochna chahta hu

juhi:-kya pochna hai mohit

maine bed ke pas gya aur gun nikl kar unke samne rakh diya

main:-didi agar aap dono me se koi bhi papa ke sath mila hua hai toh plss abhi mujhe goli maar do baad me mujhe pata laga toh main goli maar duga dina kuch poche.....main dono se bahut jada pyar karta hu

juhi:-(bighi aakho se) yeh kya bol raha hai mohit aakhir baat kya hai kaisi behki behki baate kar raha

main:-behki behki nhi didi jo sach hai wahi bol raha hu...aap sab nhi jante hamre sath jo ho raha uss me hamre pariwar ke hi log mile huye hai yaa yu kahu hamra pariwar hi kar raha hai

meri baat sunte hi tannu didi ne khich kar mere thapad maar diya aur khud niche baith rone lagi

tannu:-hamne tumhre sath jo kiya ab tu aise badla laiga apne hi pariwar ke bare me aisa kahe gaa...yeh umid nhi thi tumse mohit iss se acha toh tu hamme goli maar deta

main:-didi kuch baate bahut kadwi hoti hai par sach hoti hai...aap sabhi jante hai papa ki maut ho gyi par asal me aisa nhi hai papa abhi bhi zinda hai aur wahi sab kuch kar rahe hai.....


meri baat abhi puri bhi nhi huyi thi ke iss baar juhi ne mere gaalo par chipka diya

ab sala mera gussa chadd raha tha sala subh subh hi yeh dono meri binna condom ke balatkar karne par tuli huyi hai

main:-bas bahut huya ab koi roya yaa mujhe thapad maara toh mujhse bura koi nhi hoga

meri baat sunn dono ne mujhe ghoor ke dekhna suru kar diya par rona band kar diya tha

main:-mujhe ghoorna band karo...jo keh raha hu usse suno...papa hi iss sab ke mastermind hai aur main koi aam insan nhi hu Raw agent hu aur papa bhi issi ka hisa the...par koi farmula hai jiske piche sabhi lage huye aur papa ne apni maut ka natak kiya hai nirmala ke sath mil kar aur devgan ko bhi kidnep kar liya hai

meri baat sunn dono kaa muh khul gya

main:-itna jada hairan maat hoiye abhi bahut kuch baaki hai papa aur nirmala ke sath apne ghar me aur bhi mamber bhi jude huye hai jiska mujhe paka yakeen hai par woh kon hai mujhe nhi pata

tannu:-tere kehne ka matlab hai ke hamra baap apne hi bacho ka dusman ho gya hai aur teri iss faltu bakwas ko maan bhi le

main:-paisa aur power do aisi chiz hai jo insan ko rishte naate se door kar deta hai baki apki marji hai aap mujh par viswas karte hai yaa nhi par yaha reh kar aap mehfuz hai

tannu:-mohit plss keh de yeh majak hai

main:-didi jab zindgi majak karna suru kar de toh main kaise majak karo jung suru ho chuki hai aur iss jung me main aur papa hi aamne samne nhi balki bahut se log hai...pata nhi iss mission me kon hare gaa kon mare gaa

juhi iss baar mere gaale lag ke rone lagi

tabhi hamre room ka door khula aur zoya teen coffee aur khane ka saman lekar aa gyi

zoya:-good morning every one.....

zoya ko dekh dono pehle toh zoya ko dhyan se dekhne lage fir achanak se hi meri tarf muh kar mujhe ghoorne lage

main:-chill didi kyo mujh par gussa kar rahi ho yeh sif iss mission ki leader hai yeh hai raw agent zoya

zoya:-main zoya...aur tum juhi aur aur tum tannu right

tannu:-kya mohit sach bol raha hai hamre papa ke bare me

zoya:-haa mohit jo bol raha hai woh sach hai but tum tension naa lo iss jung ke baad jo bhi tum dono ke pas bache gaa woh tumhre apne hoge koi lalchi nhi

juhi:-par papa ko dekh kabhi nhi laga papa aisa kuch kar sakte hai mujhe ab bhi yakeen nhi ho raha

zoya:-woh iss liye juhi ke bure logo ka toh hamme pata hai woh bure hai par jo ache bann kar bura karte hai woh sabse khatrnak hote hai aur ham kabhi pehchan pate hai

main:-filhal chhodo inn baato ko aap dono fresh ho jao aur nasta kar lijiye main bhi fresh hokar aata hu

tannu:-par hamre kapde

zoya:-uski tension naa lo woh sab yaha pehle se hi mangwa liya hai

uske baad dono kuch pochti main fresh hone dusre room hi nikl gya

Bahut hi Shandar or lajawab update bhai..
AakhirKar Juhi aur Tanu ko bhi unke Papa ki asliyat ka pata chal gaya,, khair dekhte hain ab aage kya hota hai...

 

[Siraj Patel]

UPDATE NO 6

main:-filhal chhodo inn baato ko aap dono fresh ho jao aur nasta kar lijiye main bhi fresh hokar aata hu

tannu:-par hamre kapde

zoya:-uski tension naa lo woh sab yaha pehle se hi mangwa liya hai

uske baad dono kuch pochti main fresh hone dusre room hi nikl gya

Ab aage.....

thodi der baad main room me aaya toh dono nasta kar rhi thi

main bhi baith gya nasta karne laga ke tabhi mera phone bajne laga number private tha

main:-hello kon

call:-hello beta kaise ho

main:-ohhh toh apne mera number dund liya

asal me mujhe call karne wala mera hi baap tha yani suresh sehgal

suresh:-bhool gya main teraa baap hu

main:-nhi re pagle......vaise mera number dund laine iska yeh nhi aap mujhe dund loge

suresh:-janta hu zoya ke hote tumhe tracking nhi kar pao gaa par tu yeh bhool gya main kitna kamina hu

main:-nhi main kamino ko kabhi nhi bhool taa

suresh:-good toh tumhre pass kuch options hai

main:-kaisi options...

suresh:-baata raha hu sabar kar beta....kavya...priya aur komal dono me se kon tujhe zinda chahiye

mere baap ki baat sunnte hi mera khoon khol gya apne baap se jada khud par gussa aa raha tha ke itni jaruri baat bhool kaise gya main

suresh:-kya hua beta muh ki khaani padi tune sab kuch sahi kiya par yeh bhool gya main kis hadd tak jaa sakta hu

main:-(chillate huye) agar inn me se kisi ko kuch bhi hua toh teri lash bhi teri maut dekh kaap jaye gyi suresh sehgal yeh vaada hai

Suresh:-beta jab samne wale ke hath main tumhri gardan ho naa toh jada chillana nhi chahiye balki request karna chahiye main kisi ek ko toh zinda chhod du

main:-dekho unn dono ki iss me koi galati nhi hai unhe jane do

suresh:-jante toh tum bhi ho ache tarike se galati kisi ki nhi hai siwye mere par kya kare jaruri thodi hai har baar galati karne par hi saza mile

main:-tumhe kya chahiye.....

suresh:-yeh qestion acha hai...toh sunno mujhe urvi chahiye aur tumhri maa

main:-urvi ka mujhe kuch nhi pata aur mummy se kya chahiye apko

suresh:-tere asli baap se milna hai uss kuttiya ko.......

main:-matlab devgan se.......

suresh:-haa bilkul par woh nhi janti hai naa mere kamine paan ko usko toh pata bhi nhi hai ke tu mera nhi devgan ka beta hai

main:-haa main janta hu....

suresh:-tumhre pass kal tak kaa waqt hai kahi se bhi dundo mujhe urvi chahiye warna tum samjhdar ho

main:-main khosis karta hu unhe kuch maat karna

suresh:-ab yeh toh tumhre uper hai

main kuch bolta phone kaat gya abhi meri halat bahut thi meri bewkufi ne mujhe kaha lakar khada kar diya tha
zoya tannu aur juhi mujhe dekh rhi thi halki sunn toh unho ne bhi sab liya tha kyoki phone maine handsfree kar diya tha

tannu;-pata itna kuch karte hai maine kabhi sapne bhi nhi socha tha

juhi:-didi plss usse papa maat kaho woh haiwan hai darinda hai

tannu:-mohit......

main:-plss iss par baad me baat karna didi. .....

meri baat sunn tannu mere pass aa mere gale lag gyi

tannu:-tu hamesa mera bhai tha hai aur rahe gaa

main:-main janta hu didi ab aap rona band kijiye mujhe bahut kaam karna hai bahut si zindgi ka sawal hai

zoya:-maine number tracking kar ke dekha kuch nhi milaa

main:-zoyaa kya kare.....

zoya:-mere hisab se suresh har tarf se nakamyab raha hai iss liye samne aa gya aur urvi ka mangna matlb usse farmula nhi mila aur ab woh tumhri maa aur urvi ko use kar uss farmule ko hasil karna chahta hai hamme urvi ka pata kar farmule tak pochna chahiye

main:-par iss se kavya aur priya komal ka kya hoga

zoya:-pagal maat banno mohit agar yeb farmula tumhre papa ke hath lag gya toh lakho zindgi barbad ho jaye gyi pata nhi kya bala ho uss farmule me

main:-kuch bhi ho main kavya aur priya kurwani nhi de sakta

zoya:-main aisa nhi keh raha tum unhe marne do ham puri khosis kare gye par farmula hasil karna hamra pehla target hona chahiye

main:-nhi main koi khatra nhi le sakta inn sab ke liye

zoya:-(saas chhod) teek hai baato kya karna hai....

maine bhi abhi tak socha nhi tha main kya karo gaa bas dimag me chl raha tha mujhe sab ko bachna hai

mera baap ke ander kamina pan kutt kutt ke bhara hai iss liye main koi risk nhi le sakta tha

main:-teek hai hamme sare kaam mil kar karne hoga baki koi bhi step miss naa ho ikk mint

maine bada saa projector laga diya

pehle hamre target dekh lete hai

zoya:-okkk main target toh tumhre papa hai

main:-haa bilkul par iske sath hi hamme ab sab clear karna hoga jaise narangi,ISI agents,raw ke gaddar agent digvijay

zoya:-okkk yeh sabhi hamre target ho gye iske liye hamme achi team chahiye

tannu:-main bhi inn sab me involve hogi

main:-(gusse se) aap dono kahi nhi jaye gye iss ghar se bahar nhi jao gyi jab tak yeh sab khatam nhi ho jata...naa mujhe call karo gyi

tannu:-(rote huye) iss se acha toh maar hi de main nhi reh sakti tere bina

ab kya karo iss pagli ka mujhe samjh nhi aa raha tha waqt pehle kam tha aur inn ladkiyo ka rona dhona par iske aasu dekhe bhi kaha jate hai

maine jakar tannu ko gale se laga liye

main:-aap mujhe kamjor karna chahte ho aap dono meri jaan ho agar apko kuch ho gya toh main bilkul tut jao gaa aap dono meri takat ho(kaan me) ek baar sab teek ho jane dijiye fir aap aur main kahi door chale jaye gye jaha main apko bahut pyar duga bahut jada plss maat zidd kariye naa

meri baat sunn tannu ek dumm se alag ho gyi

tannu:-vaada kar jo bola usse nibhayenge

main:-(aakho me dekh) paka vaada apki kasam ......

tannu:-teek hai ham kahi nhi jaye gye

zoya:-ab main team bano

zoya ki baat sunn tannu usse ghoor ke dekhti hai par main usse sant rehne ko bolta hu

main:-haa bilkul....

zoya;-ek team me main aur tum ho jaye jiska target tumhre papa hoge

dusri team sehraa ki hogi jo digvijay aur munnibai mehra ko sambhal lega aur information tisri team ko dega

tisri team me jagdish aur hamre kuch khass dost hoge jo isi agent aur narangi ko sambhal lainge

main:-hamm team toh achi hai toh shuruaat sabse pehle hamme inhe kaam dekar karna chahiye taki jab ham kaam kare toh koi aur disturb naa kare

zoya;-bilkul sahi

main:-okk tum jagdish aur apne dosto ko kaam samjho main sehraa ko samjhta hu usse kya karna hai

zoya:-teek hai

zoya apne kaam me lag gyi main apne kaam me maine sehra ko sab kaam samjha diya karna hai
main:-yeh kaam ho gya ab urvi ko kaha dunde

zoya:-kyo naa ghar se shuruaat kare kuch naa kuch toh mile gaa hamme

main:-teek hai chlo tyar hote hai sab hathyar le lo kab kya karna padh jaye 10 mint me nikle gye yaha se

uske baad ham dono apne apne room me chle gye mere piche piche juhi aur tannu bhi aa gyi maine ek beg tyar kiya jis me har woh jaruri saman rakh liya jise meri jarurt pad sakti thi

yeh sab karne ke baad main juhi ke pas gya

main:-meri bacho wali didi...(mathe ko chum) aap ko apni hifazat karni hogi plss meri baat ko dhayan rakhna kuch nhi open karna hai naa windows naa door... yaha ek week tak ka saman hai aur ek baat sunno aap dono yeh room bahut khas hai...(led start kar) yaha se aap dono bahar ki har harkat ko dekh sakte ho hamre jate hi ghar ke charo tarf alert suru ho jaye gaa agar koi bhi khatra hua aap ko information yaha par mil jaye gyi aur khatra ka pata lagte hi aap dono ne iss almira ka battan press karna hai aur yaha se ikk surang open ho jaye gyi jis se aap yaha se bahar chle jao gye aur yaha bahut bada dhamaka ho jaye gaa...meri baato ka dhyan rakhna koi galati maat karna aur bahut jada jarurt ho toh mujhe call karna main jarur aap dono ke pass aao gaa yeh sab khatam hone ke baad (tannu ko gale laga) juhi didi aur apna khayal rakhna didi...i love you..

meri aur unn dono ki aakho me aasu the par ham teeno hi jante the ke yeh jaruri hai

main unhe sab kuch samjha ke niche aaya jaha zoya pehle se hi tyar baithi thi mere aate hi woh bhi khadi ho gyi par ek baar fir tannu aur juhi ne mujhe gale se laga liya jaise main koi jung par jaa raha hu par sayad yeh jung se kaam bhi kaha thi

maine unhe wapas aane ka vada kar zoya ke sath nikl liya aur chl diye ham dono urvi ke ghar ki tarf jaha se hamme kuch milne ki umid thi

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idher suresh nirmala baithe the aur unke samne hi devgan kavya komal aue priya dari sehmi chair par bandhe baithe the

nirmala;-kaam kare gaa yeh suresh kyoki mujhe nhi lagta mohit ka itna lagav hoga inn sab se

suresh:-sab kuch hoga meri jaan sab kuch hoga....aur jo rishton me viswas karte hai naa unke liye koi rishta kam ya jada nhi rehta hamre indians ki yahi toh problem hai bache ke paida hone se lekar admi ke marne tak insan ek hi chiz nhi chhod pata janti ho kya hai woh risthe ka moh...woh maa baap ke liye ho bhai behan ke liye ho dost ke kiye ho apni biwi ya mashuka ke liye ho yeh risthon ka moh rehta jarur hai jo hamme kamjor kar deta jaan

nirmala:-maltb mohit hamra kaam jarur kare gaa

suresh:-(muskura kar) jarur kare ga infect woh kaam par lag bhi gya hoga....ufff yeh najuk risthe v naa kya kya nhi kara dete devgan:-tujh se dogale insan ke liye yeh risthon ki kismat nhi hogi varna yeh risthon ke moh me itni takat hoti hai ke woh phhad tak bhi ekla tod deta hai

suresh:-janta hu chuttiye manjhi ko....par kya mila patni wapas mil gyi kya haddiya tuda kar

devgan:-tu nhi samjh sakta suresh uss manjhi ko apni haddiyan tuda kar kya mila....woh sakoon...woh ehsaas...tere jaise insan ke liye nhi banne hai

suresh:-haa bilkul yeh ehsaas mujhe chahiye bhi nhi mujhe bas ek chiz chahiye woh farmula...

devgan:-woh tujhe iss janam me toh nhi mile gaa

suresh:-sab mile gaa devgan sab mile gaa teri beti ki chut v.......

devgan:-(jor se chilla) kamineeeeee.....

suresh:-bass bass yahi...yahi tadap mujhe farmula dilaye gyi ek baar bas mujhe teri beti mil jaye fir sab asan hoga

nirmala:-sab mile gye suresh tab iss budhe ki akad nikalo gyi....abhi chlo suresh yaha se hamme ghar par bhi set karna hoga sab taki beckup tyar rahe agar uss kamine ne cheat karne ki khosis ki toh

suresh;-sahi kaha jaan issi liye toh main tumhra deewna hu...agar farmula mil jaye inn sab ko nangi kar ke chodu gaa sab ne dimag ki sahi kar di hai

nirmala:-farmula mil jane ke baad toh hamra hi raj hoga suresh tab jo marji hoga woh kare gye

issi ke sath dono haste huye waha se chle jate hai

Fantastic update bhai.....
Story Mein Ek or twist maja aa Gaya Mohit Suresh ka nahi balki Devgan ka beta hai, matlab Is hisab Se urvi Mohit ki bahan hui.. khair dekhte hain abhi aage or kya Dhamaka karne wale ho...

 

[kingkhankar]

Story ka ending mast that.

Yeh story jab start hua tha, bahut hi shandar tha, particularly the entry of the hero and his characterization. Update regularly ata tha. Story ka hero and heroins ke sath ek lagab sa ho gaya tha. Bich me story ruk gayi thi bahut dino ke liye, so thoda so interest kam ho gaya tha.

Recently writer saab ne shandar comeback kiya and story complete ho gayi. Lot of thanks to the writer "AWARADIL" for this fantastic story.

Please keep writing and all the best for your next project. ?