Silent Heart
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Brother, I have just read your entire story, but the story was good in the beginning, later you spoiled it all. I did not like the end of it at all. Because this story could have been even better but I think you have finished it in a hurry which did not feel right at all.
How did the hero and his sisters become united? You did not tell all this in detail and also did not write their sexual relationship.
You ignored the main characters, on which the whole story rests, so it was not much fun to read the story.
How did the hero and his sisters become united? You did not tell all this in detail and also did not write their sexual relationship.
You ignored the main characters, on which the whole story rests, so it was not much fun to read the story.