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True that...Last Update ke ant mein jo baat Veer ne kahi thi that Pari has a split personality just like Suhana, uspar Pari kewal maun reh gayi... She didn't respond to that, aur isi wajah se ye clear nahi hai ke Veer ki observation sateek thi ya maatra ek bhram... I think to an extent ye sach ho sakta hai, but Pari ke badlate behaviour ke pichhe definitely kuchh bada secret hoga, jo aage chalkar hi saamne aayega...
Update 60 ki shuruaat waise hi huyi jaisa ki expect kiya jaa sakta tha, As they say Two are better than one... Ab threesome ka chaska laga hai Veer ko to nischit hi bhavishya mein kayi Baar ye scene padhne milega, that too with different partners maybe... In between Suman ki anal awakening bhi ho gayi & maybe anal sex can come out as an addiction for Veer...
Jald hi dekhne ko milega ki batwaare me kya hota hai.Idhar jo scene iss update ka sabse zaruri part tha, wo tha Pranjal ki ek nayi chaal... Saala, ab to mujhe lag raha hai ke ye Pranjal kahin Vivek ka patta bhi cut naa kar de... Manorath ki soch kaafi achhi hai property ka batwaara karne ke pichhe but he doesn't know about the cheap tactics going inside Pranjal's mind... Khair, Vivek ko to mere khayal mein kuchh naa milne waala, same to same Shweta – Bhumika ka bhi haal hoga... But Aarohi aur Kavya ne ek baar firse apni baaton se Manorath ko impress kar Diya... Of Course, Aarohi might not get any share in the property because she doesn't looks like the perfect choice to handle it but what she said about Veer, makes it clear that in future she'll get much more than the property...
Very soon... Very soon...But Pranjal ne ek baar firse dikhaya ke wo Veer ke liye utna aasan dushman nahi hone waala, but jaise jaise wo apne naye paintre lagta jaa raha hai, ussi lay mein wo apne liye gaddha gehra karta jaa raha hai... I'm just waiting for the moment Vivek and Pranjal would be standing in front of Manorath fully exposed...
Thanks a lot mate! Gambling ka chaska bhi lag chuka hai Veer ko. He's tending towards quest hunt more rather than spending points on his stats and skills. Pari will fix his habit soon.Idhar Shweta ko andesha ho raha hai ke usse khaali haath hi rehna padega... This is some good news, ab jaldi hi usse realise hoga ke jin dono par usne trust kiya tha wo kitne oonche darze ke kameene hain, but too little realisation and that too coming very late... In the end quest hunt khela Veer ne but of course with 15% success rate, he's not going to get successful every time... A Legendary Clown, means trash card praapt hua usse aur 200 points bhi gaye gaddhe mein...
Some Erotica mixed with some mind games... A really – really good update bro!
Yes! The problem arose due to lack of friends and communication which led her to just shoulder the responsibilities without any questions.So, wo din aa gaya jab Veer Kaera ko mirror gallery lekar jaane waala tha, feeling sad for her, jo bhi wo seh rahi hai, especially for the fact that she doesn't even knows what she has been made to go through... Sed Life!
Shweta is doing things for her daughter. You'll come to know more about her when you'll learn her past.Veer iss baar intentionally Bhumika ke hi hotel gaya and what a treat it was for him! Dono Maa Beti ka hairaan hona banta hi tha, jiss ladke ko ek planning ke tehat ghar se nikaal diya gaya tha, kuchh hi waqt mein wo ek business tycoon ke saath ghoomne laga hai, it's definitely a big big shocker for them... But ab dheeme se hi sahi, Bhumika badal rahi hai, waise to I think ke uski zyada galti thi bhi nahi. Jaisa ki Manorath ne pichhle update mein kaha, ke wo maatra apni Maa ke footsteps hi follow karti rahi hai saari zindagi... It's how Shweta has brought her up, that she can't even think of going against her mother... But looks like ke jald hi Veer aur Bhumika ke beech kaafi cheezein badalne waali hain... But that Shweta ... Uska kuchh nahi ho sakta, but uska intezaam to kameene brothers hi karenge, tab usse pata chalega ke wo kitni badi hai...
Thanks a lot!Khair, Mirror Gallery Slogan ka hi plan hai, jaisa ki hum jaante hi the... But this time around Veer has shown some great calculations, ab uska intelligence itna badh hi chuka hai ke wo sahi se situation ko analyse kar sakta hai, that's a good thing... Suhana ko pehle se inform karna ek achha step tha, so that she can handle the police aur saath hi Raghu aur Jassi ko bhi usne satark rehne ko keh diya andar jaane se pehle...
Now it's Action time, and Veer will have to face some Assassins too as Slogan hired them some time ago...
Superb update, the conversations between Kaera & Veer are always eye – catching, and the way proceedings are going on between the two makes the story more interesting, Kaera is slowly making her way towards the central part of the story and soon she'll be one of the most important charact
He'll buy advanced skills in the future.So, as expected, ek action packed update tha ye jismein Veer ne apni Basic Martial Arts Skill ka behatreeen tareeke se upyog kiya but Pari ka kehna sahi hai ke ab usse Intermediate level ki skill purchase kar leni chahiye because the problems will get more tough going ahead...
As the story will proceed, Fights will be more detailed, more skilled, more brutal and more intense.First of all I would like to applaud you for the fighting scene, It was written in a superb way dude... Koyi bhi jaldbaazi nahi dikhayi writer ne, aur har ek move ko behatreeen tareeke se pesh kiya, seemed to be quite original while I was reading it... Especially the fight with Dexter was presented superbly, cheers for that ...
That is true. The moment he hears something Pari says, especially when in a fight, his body just responds by its own.Pari ya kahun ke system ne iss fight ke dauraan Veer ki poori madad ki, sahi maayeno mein Pari ke hi zariye Veer unn sab gundon especially Dexter ko maat de paaya... As we know that System is just like an organ of Veer's body, to shayad ussi wajah se System ke har order ya suggestion par Veer ki body apne aap hi action mein aa jaa rahi thi...
He will never lose her.Mission Completion ke 900 points bhi mile Veer ko, aur ab uske paas 1000 points ho chuke hain but in the end ek naya mission uske saamne tha, aur issi mission ke chalte Veer ko wahaan rukna pada because this time around the penalty was not of some points but was of losing Pari, which Veer can never afford!
It already started when he gifted that teddy to her.... Would definitely kickstart an emotional tsunami inside Kaera!
And the moment she realizes it. There'll be chaos.The love angle will come soon... Soon, she'll get normal and will realise that she has already started Falling for Veer...
Well, I can agree that he's a selfish guy.Let's start with talkin' about a demon named Kishore, duniya mein kayi prakaar ke gaan** hote hain but Kishore definitely un sabka sardar hai, sahi maayeno mein he's an ultimate ... How self centred one can be?? Kishore portrays the true answer of this question... Sirf aur sirf success aur fame, inn do cheezon se hi matlab hai uss gawaar ko, Kaera ne Jab Veer ke liye uss se help maangi tabhi wo samajh gaya ke Veer is someone special for her aur wo kaise ye bardaasht kar leta... Wo to sochkar hi baitha hoga ke uske paise banane ki machine arthat Kaera ki shaadi wo kisi Bill Gates maafik aadmi se karwayega (ignore the age please )... What he said on the phone to his worker clearly states the role he's going to play going forward...
No comments about this for now.Khair, Suhana ne Veer ki madad ke liye apni saheli Divya se contact kiya tha,seems to be another rich woman... Let's see whether she has some more part to play in the story or not... But
That blush was in general. Divya suddenly asked what was going on between Veer and her and that caught her off guard. As a result, she blushed. Nothing else for now. She does not loves Veer.Blushes?
What If Pari has a physical form like a human.
She always cares for him.So, kaafi mehnat mashakkat ke baad bhi Veer ko Slogan ke gundon ne pakad liya aur le gaye uske adde par... Of course Veer ka injured hona unke liye vardaan saabit hua... Khair, ab dekhna hai ke Slogan Veer ke saath kya karega...
Pari ka bhi ek badla sa roop dekhne ko mila, she cares for Veer... Definitely she cares for him and maybe she loves him too! Ek ke baad ek quests ko kholne ke baad aakhirkar ek Legendary card saamne aa hi gaya... Beowulf Blessings...
It will surely increase his agility stat by 50%. For example if his agility is at 100 then it will reach to 150. Now in case of full moon, the percentage will get doubled. That means, 50% will change into 100% so, Basically his agility will get doubled which will be 200 in this case. Yes! Quest Hunt is insane. But risky af too.“Recieve the Beowulf's blessings. Once blessed by the Moon Goddess, Beowulf became the legend of the Wolf race. Grants the user 60% increase in senses, +50% in Agility, Reflexes, Speed and Healing. In case of full moon, the percentage will get doubled.”
In every sense, Quest Hunt is a Massive Massive thing... Par ek sawaal tha bro, jo ye 50% increase agility mein hai wo stats mein increase hoga ya just quest card tak hi seemit rahega... Let's see ke iss card ka Veer ko abhi kitna faayeda hota hai...
Things will proceed in parallel.So, inn action packed updates ko padhkar maza aa gaya, especially ek saath padhne se usmein kayi guna izafa bhi ho gaya... But ab kuchh sawaal saamne khade hain... Firstly, Jo Slogan ne plan banaya hai ke Veer ko chaare ki tarah istemaal karke Kaera tak pahunchega, wo kitna successful hoga, kya Kaera Slogan dwara banyae iss rattrap mein fans jaayegi? Kya Veer iss hideout se nikal paayega? Agar haan to kaise?? Kishore ka agla step kya hoga??And not to forget Kameene brothers ki aage ki planning kya hai...
Thanks a lot mate. And that is what I wanted to hear. The reason why I always sometimes slow down the pace to focus on emotional scenes in between the action and thrill is because people must remember that this is happening in the Earth. Veer is a human and not any super human guy. To keep in touch with the relatable surroundings it's important to keep a balance between both the imaginary system and the realistic daily life. Before writing each update, I always keep this in mind that people should not get this sense of feeling that they are now reading some kind of sci-fi another world shit. And trust me, to keep that Balance is damn hard. A balance which maintains the imaginary sci fi system and Veer's daily realistic Life routine.Superb updates bro, love the way you are presenting the story... The thing which I loved the most about your previous story was the realistic approach you carried throughout the story & this story is no different! Pari ki presence ke bawajood Veer ko ek dum se superhuman nahi dikhaya hai aapne and that's what makes you a special writer... The story's flow is absolutely amazing... And now you've showed that you're extremely good in writing fighting scenes as well... The detailing of every scene especially of the fights is so great that this story is well on its way to become one of the best or maybe the sole best Incest Story of the forum! Great work Mate ...
Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next One..
Abhi toh kaafi characters baaki hai jinke baare me in depth info dii hi nahi gayi hai. For example, Suhana, Sonia, Shweta, Pranjal, etc. Jab inke baare me dikhaaya jaega, tab aur acche se pata chalega. Harr ek character apne aap me unique hai.ek writers ke liye har character ke saath poora poora insaaf karna bohat hi mushkil hota hai...................
werewolf bhai ne story me mojood sabhi chatacters ke saath bohat hi achhe se insaaf kiya hai......
aisa karna har writer ke liye easy nahi hai...
Chalo koi toh hai jisse Pranjal ka character pasand aaya.werewolf bhai ne story me mojood all females charactes ke ilawa abb tak jo sabse best character hai wo to hai hi hamara hero veer .......
lekin veer ke baad mujhe agar is story me kisi male character ko padh kar maza aaya.
to wo hai "pranjal" ka character
Arre thanks a lot bro!wereworf saab ne "pranjal" ke character ko bohat hi achhe se pesh kiya hai.....
us ke liye main werewolf bhai ko dil ki gehraaiyon se salaam pesh karta hoon.
Pranjal bhi ek important character hai. Filhaal iss baare me koi spoiles nahi.haan ek baat mann me hai k kuch aisa ho k "pranjal" veer ke liye future me
ek bada khatra bane........ baki villain to story me aate hi rahenge lekin...
Dhanyavaad bhai!pranjal bhi ek dhamakedaar villain ke character me ubhar kar saamne aaye to maza hi kuch aur ho ......
har writer ne story likhne se pehle kuch na kuch soch rakha hota hai...
maine to waise hi jo dil me aaya. to ek suggestion de diya......
Thanks To All Readers And Writers................Bye
Hindi me koi na hai bhai.Brother wo sab to English ma ha koi hindi ma translate ha to koi batdo plzz
Arre bhai boht boht dhanyavaad!Are bhai ye kya likh diya aapne
Hands down the best shit I ever read in xforum
I was searching for this kinda story for a lot of time and read a few but none of them were good enough to continue but your's is something else
Your choice of words, emotions, characters everything is just too perfect
I'm glad that you didn't rushed into the character instead took time to develop it
This story has everything I can ever imagine in a story
Family,love,betrayal, teacher, lessons,
This is a masterpiece
One more thing I loved about this story is that it is almost non sexual and you just didn't forced any sexual shit
You are a hell of writer brother
It took me two days to read all of the updates and I didn't regret it
Thank you for giving us this masterpiece
Love and respect
Yes! Veer for now can only defend himself. But what about his loved ones? Koi na koi upaay usko jald khojna padega.Sabse best update tha ye wala. Surprising & intresting vo vala scane lga jisme kaira ke dad ke masube jahir hue. Offcourse legendary card ke baad veer takatvar bann jayega our sayad slogan ko takkar bhi de payega but vo un logon se kaise defende kar payega Jo unki najro se dur uske Hani pahunchane ki chestha me khde hai ! Just like Kiara's dad... Sacch me bahut kucch majhedar hone vala hai
Don't worry! Story will involve sex for sure. This isn't non erotica. Sab ka khayaal rakha jaega. Personally, I don't write non eroticas. Yadi likhta hu toh wo most probably short stories ki list me aati hai. So you don't have to worry, jinhe sexual scenes se problems hai they can always skip those scenes. Story will remain the same.Btw kucch harishchandra ke chahete ye chahte hai ki story me sexual seen na creat ho to bhi story badiya hogi. But yaaro sexual seen ke bina ye ek thriller film ki script ho jayega. Ab aisa masala bahut se novels me, ya fir bahut se non erotic forum hai jisme masterpiece thriller, suspense our romance vali story padhne ko mil jayegi. Yha es adult forum me sexual seen hi un stories se hatke banate hai ... I know Werewolf vro ki apne story ke plot me hi k sexual seen add karne ke bare me mann bna liya hoga.. so vro kuch mahanubhav ke sujhao me akar hot seen erase matt kar dena ... Hum jaise thode se tharki readers ka bhi khayal karna
Kuch toh chal raha hai.Wah bhai sahab... Wo kehte hai na ki der aaye durust aaye...
Veer ko bachaane ke liye kaera ne apne baap se madad mangi thi aur wo veer ko hi tapkaane ke bare me sochne laga.
Aakhir iske dimaag me chal kya rha h?
Quest hunt Juaa hai. Points toh jaane hi the.Khair...
Apna hero veer to hamesha ki trh khatro ke bich ja kar fas gya h.
Aur uske bahut saare points v barbaad ho gye..
Lagta hai saale ki kismat hi jhand h
Dhanyavaad bhai!Pari ka behavior me shayad ab kuchh changes dekhne ko mile.
Baaki hameshaa ki hi tarah dil jeet lene wala update tha Werewolf bhai...
Shandaar
Zabardast update bhai next update ka besabri se intezar rahega
Thank you!Awesome update bhai keep posting
Last three updates were focused on action and thrill. Isme emotional kaha se ho gayi poori story?Yar sorry bro phly hi yar ap story ka ik hi point 5 update ma raky hoa ha story boring ho gi ha thodra change sari story bs Emushunal ha kia
Read the above highlighted part. Aur harr update me action nahi hoga.bor
wait karne ka koi fayda nahi hua
Wo part wahi dikhaana zaroori tha bro. The moment Karan sees Kaera going away. Uss waqt hi past ke baare me detail dena zaroori tha. Thanks a lot btw.Bahott hi mastt Updatee thaa. Maza aagaya. Par agar Karan ka kaera ke sang ka relation abhi rokh kar agar Veer ka kuch action dikha dete toh jyaada achha hota. Khairrr next update ka intezaar rahegaa.
Kaera ki jivan lila karan se sunkr I feel very sad about her karan ka veer ko dost bolna golu ki yaad dila gya it also very sad hame 3rd girl ka naam bhi pta Chal gya Eva... Akhir Suman apni bahu ko le hi aai veer ke kamre me... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjastUpdate - 56 ~ Wilted RoseAb tak...
Karan : Raghu mujhse harr detail share karta tha. Including details about you. Mujhe pata chala hai ki kayi baar Raghu ne didi ko tumhaare saath dekha hai, wo bhi muskuraate hue. Didi muskura rahi thi. Wo khush thi. So... I want to tell you about something. Kya tum sunoge? It's about her.
Veer (frowns) : ....
Karan : ....
Veer (sighs) : Fine... Talk!
Ab aage...
19 Years Ago...
Ek behad hi khubsoorat aur aalishaan se bangle ke baahar bane ek park me behad hi pyaari sii bacchi apni do saheliyo ke sang khel rahi thi.
"Kaera! Ye dekh ye waala phool, kitna accha hai na? Kitni khushbu aa rahi hai iss se?"
Uski ek pyaari sii saheli ne muskuraate hue kaha.
"Sach Sonu? Mujhe bhi dikha na!"
Kaera jaldbaazi me nazdeek aayi aur usne apni saheli ke haatho se wo phool lia aur uski khushboo soonghte hi maano jese uska mann prafullit ho utha.
"Kitna pyaara phool hai hahaha~" Wo khil-khilaayi.
Uski muskaan itni pyaari thi ki kisi bhi kathor se kathor aadmi ka dil jeet le. Wo nadaani, wo chanchalta, wo bachpana aur khaas kar wo chaand jaisa pyaara chehra jo kisi ko bhi uss par pyaar lutaane par majboor kar de.
Kuch aisi thi Kaera.
"Mujhe bhi dekhna hai." Kehte hue uski dusri saheli aage aayi aur phool ki sugandh ka jayza lene lagi. Par tabhi...
"Kaera!!! Kaera!!!!"
Achanak aayi andar se tezz awaaz sunte hi Kaera ekdum sachet ho gayi aur palti toh usne dekha ki andar se uske Pita baahar garden me aa rahe the.
Par wo akele nahi the. Usne dekha ki unke saath saath uski Maa bhi aa rahi thi. Lekin aur bhi chaunka dene waali baat ye thi ki uske Mata Pita ke saath koi 2 anya log bhi the jo unke saath aa rahe the. Iske pehle Kaera ne unn aadmiyo ko pehle kabhi nahi dekha tha. Kaun the ye log bhala?
Wo naye anjaan aadmi dhoti kurta pehne hue the. Unme se ek javaan tha aur ek budha. Jab chaaro log aake Kaera ke nazdeek khade hue toh Kaera ke Pita usse dekh uss budhe aadmi se bole.
"Ye hai hamaari laadli Guru jii! Iska naam hai Kaera!"
"Sundar! Bada hi pyaara naam hai. Kaera ka toh matlab hi Anokha hota hai. Anootha! Adwiteeya!"
Wo anjaan budha aadmi itna bol fir muskuraate hue aage aaya aur Kaera ke sarr par pyaar se haath ferra aur apni aankhein band kar liya.
"Adhbhut! Avishvasaneey! Alaukik! Ekdum utkrasht!"
"Huh!? K-Kya hua Guru jii! Kaera sach me bohut hi honhaar niklegi na?" Uske Pita ne Guru jii se pucha.
"Honhaar niklegi? Arre! Karodo me se ek niklegi ye bacchi! Itna hunar mene aaj tak kisi bacchi me nahi dekha."
Badle me Guru jii muskuraate hue bole aur fir kuch aur baatein bhi kahi, "Ye bacchi, heera hai heera Kishor! Tumhaari ye bacchi, itna aage jaegi ki pucho mat. Keval tej dikh raha hai mujhe iski aankho me. Kabhi bhi koi bhi iske raaste me aakar iska adanga nahi ban sakta. Apna raasta ye ladki khud banaegi. Aur sabse sarvashreshth hi banegi."
"K-Kya!? Haha~ Ye toh... Ye toh badi hi acchi baat hai Guru jii! Aapne aisa keh ke maano jese meri saari chintaaye dur kar dii!"
Kaera ke pita Kishor khush hote hue Guru jii ke paav padne lage toh Guru jii ne unhe unki baah pakad uthaaya.
"Arre! Thik hai baccha! Khush raho! Khush raho!"
"Sach me Guru jii! Aapki baato se mera bhi mann ab halka ho gaya hai. Dhanyavaad! Aur iss nanhe bacche ka jab janm hoga toh mein chaahti hu ki aap hi iska naam karan kare." Kaera ki Maa ne apna ubhra hua pait sehlaate hue kaha.
Toh Guru jii bhi haan me sarr hilaaye, "Theek hai beti! Mein zaroor ek antim baar iss sheher aaunga keval tumhaare navjaat shishu ke liye. Mene tab hi bataya tha Kishor ko ki sheher ki zindagi mujhe pasand nahi. Mera ghar toh kudrat me hai. Fir bhi ek antim baar zaroor aa jaunga."
"Dhanyavaad Guru jii! Mein jaanta hu ki aap ko ye sab kyu pasand nahi hai. Wo toh ye meri kismat thi jo mere kehne par aap yaha mere ghar tak aaye. Warna uss din toh mene dekha tha ki aap kisi ke bulaane par kahi nahi jaate."
"Sahi kaha tumne Kishor! Mene uss din hi tumhari aankho me dekh liya tha. Ki tumhe meri sakht zaroorat thi."
"Jii! Dhanyavaad Guru jii! Arre mein bhi na... kaha aapko yaha baato me laga liya. Aaiye na bhojan taiyaar hai!" Kishor ne haatho se ishaara kar andar chalne ke liye kaha. "Aur beta Sonu aur Ava beti, jao ab tum dono ghar theek!? Kaera abhi khaana khaegi."
"Okay Uncle!" Aur dono hi bacchiya Kaera ko bye bol apne gharo ki orr chali gayi.
"Kya ye dono Kaera beti ki saheliya thi!?" Guru jii ne pucha.
"Jii haan! Guru jii! Wo kaale baalo waali Sonia hai, pyaar se Sonu kehte hai sab usse. Aur wo jo videshi sii prateet ho rahi thi, peele rang ke baalo waali, wo Ava hai. Dono hi hamaare do acche padosiyo ki beti hai. Ava ki maa videshi hai, aur pita hindustani. Isliye wo..."
"Ohhh!! Samjha!! Par tumhaari ye ladki boht aage jaegi Kishor! Ekdum alag starr pe rahegi ye bacchi..."
Guru jii hasste hue bole toh unke bagal se khade uss naujavaan vyakti ne unki baah kheech unke kaano me khuspusaate hue kaha, "Guru jii! Kuch zyaada nahi ho gaya? Kahi humne kuch zyaada jhooth toh nahi keh diya? Ye aadmi chota mota aadmi nahi hai. Mujhe toh darr lag raha hai Guru jii."
Guru jii jese apne shishya, Raman ki baat sunn sachet ho gaye. Par fir muskuraate hue Raman ko dekhe aur dheere se bole, "Tum abhi bhi kacche khilaadi ho Raman. Isliye mein tumlogo ka guru hu aur tumlog mere chele."
"Par Guru jii, aapne iss bacchi ke baare me boht kuch keh diya hai. Yadi ye bacchi bhavishya me wesi nahi nikli jesa ki aapne iska varnan kiya hai toh fir toh, sab ko pata chal jaega ki hum dhongi hai."
Raman zaahir sii baat thi ki darr gaya tha. Wo Guru jii ka naya shishya tha. Aur Guru jii ko kaam karte dekh usse bas iss baat ki chinta sataaye jaa rahi thi ki kahi galti se unki pol na khul jaaye. Warna sab kuch dhara ka dhara reh jaega.
"Tum hamesha hi mand buddhi rahoge Raman!" Guru jii ne muskuraate hue kaha. Wo dekh rahe the ki Kishor aur uski patni andar ki orr jaa rahe the. Khaane ki taiyaari karne.
Aur nanhi Kaera unhe apni pyaari sii aankho se badi hi jigyaasa se ghur rahi thi.
"M-Mein kuch samjha nahi Guru jii!?"
Guru jii ne Raman ko dekha aur fir darwaaze ki taraf jaha ek 40-45 ki umr ka vyakti ek butler ke kapde pehne hue khada tha. Aur unn dono ko hi ghur ke dekh raha tha.
Wo muskuraate hue Kaera ke nazdeek aaye aur pyaar se uske sarr pat haath ferr Raman se dheere se bole,
"Arre! Mere mand buddhi waale shishya. Yadi gadhe ko bhi baar baar, lagataar koi cheez sikhayi jaaye toh gadha bhi hoshiyaar bann jaata hai. Fir ye toh insaan ki bacchi hai."
"M-Mein kuch samjha nahi abhi bhi Guru jii!"
Raman aage kuch aur keh paata ki tabhi andar se Kishor nikal kar baahar aaya aur Guru jii se bola,
"Arre!? Aap yahi hai ab tak Guru jii? Khaana lag hi chuka hai. Andar aaiye na."
"Darasal! Mein kuch soch raha tha!" Guru jii ne jawaab diya.
"K-Kya soch rahe the aap?"
"Kaera bitiya ke baare me."
"Kaera ke baare me? Kya hua?"
"Tumhari patni saath me thi isliye mene saari baat nahi bataayi thi."
"S-Saari baat? Guru jii saaf saaf kahiye na."
"Hmm! Dekho Kishor! Tumhaari ye bacchi niklegi toh boht honhaar par..."
"P-Par? Par kya Guru jii?"
"Par ye ki... iske jeevan me kayi saari adhchane aaengi. Aur aisa bhi ho sakta hai ki unn adhchano ke chalte ye apni disha se bhatak jaaye aur apni zindagi me kuch bhi haasil na kar paaye." Guru jii ne ekdum serious hote hue kaha toh bechaare Kishor ke chehre ka rang hi udd gaya.
"M-Mein kuch samjha nahi Guru jii! Kripya kar khul ke samjhaaiye!"
"Saral bhaasha me hi keh raha hu Kishor. Harr vyakti ke jeevan me pareshaaniya aati hi hai. Mein bas itna kehna chaah raha hu ki... Kaera bitiya ke jeevan me kuch zyaada hi adhchane aaengi. Aur yadi Kaera bitiya zara bhi unn adhchano me fassi. Toh wo kuch bhi haasil na kar paegi. Unn pareshaaniyo ka muaqaabla isse khud hi karna hoga."
"Ye sab!?? T-Toh mein kya karu Guru jii? K-Koi hal toh hoga hi aapke paas!?"
"Hai na baccha! Par... Thoda mushqil rahega."
"Aap bataiye bas Guru jii!"
"Tumhe iss par dhyaan dena hoga. Boht zyaada dhyaan. Iski adhchane zaahir hai ki tabhi aaengi jab ye kahi jaegi. Saral bhaasha me, tumhe Kaera bitiya se uski thodi azaadi chheen'ni padegi. Usse sarvashreshth shiksha pradaan karni hogi. Par ye sab baahar na ho. Tum samajh rahe ho na Kishor?"
Kishor toh jese Guru jii ki baat sunn stabdh sa murti bann ke reh gaya tha. Kuch derr maun rehne ke baad wo bola,
"Guru jii! Aaiye! Andar chal ke vistaar se baat karte hai. Meri patni ko bhi jaan'na zaroori hai."
"Theek hai baccha! Chalo!"
Aur Guru jii Kishor ke saath andar jaane lage. Baahar bageeche me khada Raman Guru jii ko dekhta raha bas aur mann hi mann sochne laga.
'Toh ye matlab tha Guru jii ka. Ki gadhe ko bhi baar baar sikhao toh wo hoshiyaar bann jaata hai. Matlab Guru jii iss nanhi sii bacchi ko bachpan se hi baahri duniya se dur rakh ke keval isse padhaayi me lagwa denge. Aur aise me zaahir hai ki ye ladki aage chal ke hoshiyaar hi niklegi. Waah! Maan gaye guru jii ko! Par abhi Kishor raazi nahi hua hai. Dekhte hai Guru jii kese karte hai ye sab?!'
Kuch derr tak andar sabhi log bhojan karte rahe. Kaafi samay guzar chuka tha. Aur Kaera ke baare me sab kuch Guru jii ne bata diya tha Kishor aur uski patni ko. Ab nirnay karna Kishor ke haath me tha. Kya wo Guru jii ki baat ko maanega? Ya nahi?
Wo apna faisla sunaane hi waala tha jab baahar bageeche se Kaera ki ek zordaar cheenkh unn sabko sunaayi dii.
"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa...."
Ghabraate hue wo sab uthe aur baahar ki orr bhaage.
Jese hi Kishor aur baaki sab waha pohuche toh jo nazaara unhone dekha usse dekh sabki rooh kaanp gayi. Unke raungte khade ho gaye.
"Aaaahhh!"
Kaera ki maa jo garbhvati hone ke kaaran thoda dheere dheere chalte hue waha aayi, unhone saamne ka manzar dekhte hi apna chehra apne haatho se dhak liya.
Neeche zameen par unke yaha jo maali kaam karta tha wo khoon se latpat pada hua tha.
Uske seene par churri ke gopne ke ghaav the jinme se khoon nikal kar poora uski shirt ko lahu luhaan kar chuka tha. Uski khuli daraawni aankhein jo andekhi aur ankahi kuch ghatna ke baare me vyakt karna chaah rahi thi.
"Archana! Kaera ko lekar andar jao forun...!"
Apne Pati ki baat sunn Archana ne Kaera ko pakda aur uss nanhi sii darri hui bacchi ko wo forun hi andar le gayi.
"Anarth! Ghor anarth! Baap re! Hey bhagwaan!!! Ye aaj mene kya dekh liya?" Guru jii darrte hue bole.
"Madhav!! Oo madhav! Jaldi aao idhar!"
Kishor ne awaaz lagaayi toh wahi 40-45 waali umr ka aadmi jo butler ki uniform me peeche hi khada tha wo saamne aaya. Aur usse jese pata tha ki kya karna hai.
Usne jhuk ke uss maali ko check kiya aur fir Kishor se kaha. "Sahab! Ye toh marr chuka hai."
Aur ye sunte hi Guru jii aur Raman ki sitti pitti gul ho gayi.
Par jese unhe abhi aur ek jhatka lagna baaki tha.
Jese hi sabki nazar saamne ki diwaar par gayi toh sab ke sab ek baar fir maun reh gaye.
Saamne safed diwaar par bade bade aksharo me paint se likha hua tha.
"Killed by Slogan"
Ye bhure paint se likha hua tha. Wo maali paudho ke gamlo me paint kar raha tha. Aur shayad hatyaare ne ussi paint se ye sab likha tha.
Ye dekhne ke baad toh jese Kishor ekdum darr gaya.
"Dekha tumne Kishor!?" Guru jii bole.
"H-Huh!??"
"Mene tumse kaha tha na? Kaera bitiya ke jeevan me adhchane aaengi! Dherr saari! Aur dekho... Hey bhagwaan! Itna bada ghor anarth! Itna bada apraadh! Bechaari Kaera bitiya itni sii umr me kya kya dekh baithi. Mene kaha tha na Kishor! Tumhe boht dhyaan dena padega. Mujhe ab meri aankho ki shuddhi karni hogi. Na jaane kya dekh liya ye mene aaj. Bhagwaan reham kar!!!"
Aur Kishor ne fir ek pal bhi nahi gawaaya aur bola,
"Aapne ekdum sahi kaha Guru jii! Aaj se hi... Kaera kahi nahi jaegi. Uski padhaayi ke liye... Mein sarvashreshth professors ko ghar hi bulwaunga aur usse ghar par hi padhwaunha. Wo apne exams ghar se hi degi. Mein apni bacchi ko khona nahi chaahta. Aaj se uska khelna kudna band. Keval usko growth par hi mera poora dhyaan hoga. Poora dhyaan... Meri Kaera..."
Raman jo khade khade sab dekh raha tha. Wo mann hi mann apne Guru jii ki tareefo ke pul baandh raha tha.
'Maan gaye Guru jii aapko. Kisi bhi paristhiti ko apne faayde ke liye kese upyog karna hai koi aapse seekhe. Yaha kisi ki hatya ho gayi aur aapne apna kaam nikalwa liya. Waah! Maan gaye aapko!'
Par wahi dusri orr Kishor saamne Slogan likhe naam ko padh ke aur bhi ghabraaya hua tha.
'K-Kaun hai ye? Meri toh kisi se bhi dushmani nahi hai. Kaun hai ye Slogan? Kaun ho sakta hai ye?'
"Madhav! P-police ko jald se jald bulao."
"Jii Sahab!"
Kehte hue Madhav andar chala gaya telephone se phone karne.
"Ab mein chalta hu Kishor! Mujhe jald se jald mandir jaana hoga. Warna mein apna ye vichlit mann shaant nahi kar paunga."
Kehte hue Guru jii jaane lage toh Kishor ne unhe bulaaya. Par wo toh jese kisi ki sune hi nahi aur apni hi dhun me aage badh waha se nikal gaye.
Ab waha keval Kishor aur Raman hi bache hue the.
"Guru jii aise hi hai. Boht pavitra hai. Unhe toh ab mandir ka vatavaran aur bhagwan ke bhajan hi shaant kar sakte hai. Na jaane kya dekh liya aaj unhone." Raman bola.
"M-Mujhe maaf karna. Aise mere ghar par... Guru jii ko..."
"Arre!? Nahi nahi! Isme aapki koi galti nahi hai. Ye toh zindagi hai. Kab kaha pe na jaane kis ke sath kya ho jaaye. Accha! Ab mein chalta hu."
"Arre? Par Guru jii ki daskhina?"
"Dakshina? Guru jii toh apne naam par aaj tak ek rupaya nahi liye. Wo toh wese hi kudrat me rehna pasand karte hai. Haan! Par kabhi kabhi kuch diler log unke shishyo ko raashi thama dete hai. Aur badle me Guru jii uss raashi ko samaaj ke kaamo me laga dete hai. Yahi hai bas hamaara toh..."
"Haan! Toh, rukiye na aap..." Kehte hue Kishor forun hi andar gaya aur usne paiso ki kuch gaddi almaari se nikaali aur laa kar Raman ke haatho me thama dii.
"Arreeee!? Y-Ye... Ye kya kar rahe hai aap? Itne saare paise?"
"Dekhiye! Ye meri taraf se hai. Guru jii ko dhanyavaad kahiyega. Aur aap inn raashi ka mujhe pata hai nek kaam ke liye hi istemaal karenge."
"P-Par...!?!"
"Dekhiye! Naa mat kahiyega! Aur maafi chaahta hu mein thoda jaldi me hu. Itna bada haadsa ho gaya ghar me. Ghar ka mukhiya hone ke naate mujhe hi sab dekhna hoga."
Aur kehte hue Kishor waha se nikal gaya. Police aa chuki thi aur saari jaanch padtaal kari.
Par uske pehle hi Raman waha se apni thaili me wo paise liye nikal chuka tha.
'Hahahaha~ Maan gaye Guru jii ko. Ye toh lakh se bhi zyaada hai. Baap re!!! Ye itna raees aadmi kaha se mil gaya Guru jii ko?'
Wo sochte sochte bus stand pohcha aur ek bus me sawaar ho gaya. Aur andar hi ek seat par uske Guru jii baithe hue the. Jaise maano wo uska hi intezaar kar rahe the.
Wo paise, zaahir hai ki kisi nek kaam me istemaal nahi hone waale the. Balki unn paiso ka istemaal toh Daru, aur anya aisho araam ke liye istemaal hone waala tha. Guru jii aur unke shishya mil kar kitna bada dhong rach rahe the duniya ke logo ke saath ye baat koi nahi jaanta tha.
Shayad, abhi tak kisi ne bhi Guru jii ko nahi pakda tha. Aur aise hi unki zindagi aisho araam se bhar chuki thi.
Par...
Jaha Guru jii aur anya log masti me lage the wahi dusri orr bechaari nanhi Kaera ki zindagi jese ujaad ke rakh dii thi Guru jii ne.
Kishor ne uska school jaana sakht band kar diya tha.
Pehle toh Kaera ko baat samajh nahi aayi. Kyuki wo kaafi choti thi. Par jese jese wo badi hui, aur usse pata chala ki uski saheliya sabhi baahar nikal ke ghoomne firne school jaati thi toh jese usse samajh me aaya.
Wo zidd karti, aur Kishor uski baatein ignore kar deta. Wo roti, bilakhti, ki usse bhi baahar jaana hai. Par koi faayda nahi.
Wo ek band pinjre me kisi chidiya ki tarah bann ke reh gayi thi. Beshaq! Usse ucchh shiksha pradaan kii jaa rahi thi. Harr ek vishay ka honhaar professor aake usse padhaata tha.
Par...
Kya faayda tha aisi shiskha ka? Jaha usse koi azaadi tak nahi thi. Wo bas uss aalishaan se bangle me qaid rehke khidki ke baahar anya baccho ko raaste se hasste khelte hue guzarte dekha karti thi.
Uski saheliya zaroor kabhi kabhi aati thi. Sonu aur Ava.
Par jese dheere dheere unse bhi uska touch khatam ho raha tha.
Dost kya hote hai, shayad ye bhi wo ab bhulne lagi thi.
Ek samay aisa bhi aaya jab uski Maa ka dehant ho gaya. Aur tab se wo jese aur shaant sii ho gayi.
Baap, jo uski baat sunta hi nahi tha. Keval uski padhayi ki baat karta tha. Maa, jo waqt se pehle chal basi.
Aur ek chota bhai, jo abhi kaafi chota tha inn sab baato ko samajhne ke liye.
Jab Kaera 8th std me thi tab uski padosi saheli Ava, waha se chali gayi videsh. Hamesha ke liye.
Aur jaane se pehle bhi, wo dono hi ek dusre se keval ek baar hi mil paaye.
Ava : I'm going Kaera!
Kaera : Hmm~
Ava : T-Tum... Tum kab tak aise rahogi? Ghar me?
Kaera : Jab tak Dad allow nahi karte.
Ava : Tumhe apne Dad se baat karni chaahiye. Really!
Kaera : I will!
Ava aage badhi aur usne Kaera ke haath me ek bracelet pehnaaya aur uske gale se lag gayi.
Ava (cries) : I will never forget you. Goodbye!
Par Kaera ki aankho se aasu na nikle. Usse samajh me hi nahi aa raha tha ki usse rona chaahiye ya nahi. Usse pata hi nahi tha kuch. Kyuki wo bachpan se hi inn sab feelings se jese vanchit reh gayi thi.
Ek chote bacche ko aap bachpan me jo sikhaoge, bade hone ke baad wo ussi ko follow karta hai. Aur uske lakshan bhi dekhne ko milte hai.
Kaera ke saath bhi kuch aisa hi tha. Usse feelings ke baare me kuch sikhaaya hi nahi gaya tha. Uska din shuru hota tha subah 5 baje. Naukar aake uske kapde badalte the. Naashta hota tha dining table par. Subah subah uski good manners ki ek class lagti. Uske baad subah se raat tak alag alag vishay ke teachers aake usse personally padhaate the.
Beech beech me uth wo apna lunch karti aur raat me dinner aur bas fir uska din khatam ho jaata. Aur agle din se fir wahi routine shuru.
Uske dost nahi the. Jo the wo bhi ab nahi aate the. Ava jaa chuki thi. Sonu hi hamesha beech beech me zidd kar ke aa jaati thi aur uss se baat karti.
Kabhi kabhi toh Sonu uske Dad se bhi ladd gayi thi.
Wo Kaera se sawal karti ki kyu wo apne aap ko yu qaid karke rakhe hue hai.
Toh Kaera bas ek hi jawaab deti, "Dad mujhe kamyaab hote dekhna chaahte hai."
Aur bas, wahi discussion khatam ho jaaya karta tha.
Wo ek robot ki tarah ban chuki thi. Jisse bas kaam karwaane ke liye banaaya jaa raha tha.
Jab uska janmdin aata toh bas ek cake kaata jaata tha aur bas ho gaya uska janmdin.
Apne bhai Karan se kabhi kabhi Kaera ko jalan hoti thi. Kyuki uska bhai school bhi jaata tha aur dosto ke saath khelne bhi. Usse koi manaahi nahi thi.
Par jese uska ye emotion bhi gaayab ho gaya. Ek prakaar se usse bas ab business karna aata tha. Kyuki wo business sambhaalne ke liye hi padh rahi thi ab tak.
Baaki saari cheeze jese wo bhulti jaa rahi thi.
Jab usne School se graduate kiya toh Kishor ne usse pehli baar videsh bheja University join karne ke liye. Par waha bhi, wo ek bangle me rehti thi. University nahi jaati thi. Aur wahi se usne University me top bhi kiya tha.
Sonia urf Sonu, uski bachpan ki dost uss se jalti thi. Kyuki hamesha hi Kaera uss se aage rehti thi. Aakhir itna knowledge koi vyakti lega toh zaahir hai ki wo anya logo se aage hi rahega.
Par Sonia ko jab ye baat samajh aayi ki uski dost uss par zara bhi dhyaan nahi deti. Toh Sonia ne jese ye maqsad bana liya tha apna.
Wo bhi same University jaegi. Wo bhi same pratispardha me bhaag legi aur Kaera ko haraegi. Taaki uski dost uss par dhyaan de.
Kabhi kabhi Kaera kuch contests me aati thi. Par contests khatam hote hi wo gaayab.
Aur aise hi uski zindagi ek nark ke samaan ho chuki thi.
Ek khila hua gulaab aise murjha ke reh gaya tha.
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Karan : Aur ye hai... Didi ki sacchaayi.
Jab Karan ne saari baatein bata kar apni baat khatam kari toh Veer ki mutthi gusse me kass gayi.
"Damn ittttt!!!!"
*Thud*
Usne zorr se apna mutthi bench par maari toh lohe ki wo bench pe ek dent pad gaya.
Karan uske gusse ko dekh taajub tha.
Veer : So that's the reason... That's the reason why she... Damn it!!!!
Veer ko yaad aaya ki Kaera ki mulaqaat uss se pehli baar kab hui thi. Club me...
Aur usse jese samajh aa chuka tha ki kyu Kaera waya aayi thi. She just wanted to know things out...
Wo toh bechaari bas ye dekhne aayi thi ki club ki life kesi hoti hai. Kya hota hai waha? Apni curiosity ko khatam karne aayi thi waha wo. Aur uss din hi Aatish ne waha hamla kar diya tha. Aur fir Veer aur uska yu aapas me intercourse karna...
Bechaari! Harr jagah toh jhela hi tha usne. Ye sab sochte hi maano Veer ke mann me Kaera ke prati responsibility aur badh chuki thi.
Veer : Tumhe kese pata chali ye sab baatein!? Tum toh tab paida bhi nahi hue the!?
Karan : Yadi wafadaari ka koi dusra naam hai toh woh hai Madhav Uncle! Unhone hi mujhe sab kuch bataaya tha jab mein foreign jaane wala tha. Aur isliye tab se hi mein Raghu ke contact me hu. Kuch bhi hota hai wo mujhe bataata hai.
Veer : Hmm~ Toh Madhav uncle uss Guru jii ke baare me jaante the.
Karan : Madhav uncle ki nazar tezz hai logo ko parakhne me. Unhe samajh aa chuka tha ki wo Aadmi dhongi tha. Unhone Dad ko bataya bhi par Dad ne vishwaash nahi kiya. Wo inn sab me kuch zyaada hi vishwaash karte hai.
Veer : Itne bade aadmi hone ke bawajood inn sab pe...!?
Karan : Harr bada aadmi kisi na kisi andhvisvaash pe yakeen karta hi hai Veer. Kuch logo numerology par yakeen karte hai. Ki unka lucky number ye hai. Wagarah wagarah...
Veer : I see! Well!? Toh ye sab kyu bataaya tumnd mujhe!?
Karan : Because I think you can change her.
Veer : Huh!?
Karan : Tumhe pata hai mene kesi kesi situations me dii ko dekha hai? Unka bday tha last year. Aur Dad ne unhe wish tak nahi kia tha. Wo kaam me itna busy the. Upar se wo Dii ko meetings par time par pohuchne ke liye keh rahe the. Aur dii ne koi complaint nahi kii. Fir raat me mene Dad se thoda uchi awaaz me baat kii tab jaake unhe yaad aaya aur unhone Dii ko wish Kiya tha. Tum samajh rahe ho na?
Veer : ....
[That's quite sad...]
Karan (sighs) : Jab mujhe pata chala ki Dii ne tumhe approach kiya aur tumse baat karte hue unke chehre par smile aa jaati hai. That means you are someone special. Didi faaltu logo se kabhi impressed nahi rehti. Koi special hi hota hai jo unhe impress kar sake.
Veer : O-Ohhh!
Karan : So? Can you help her?
Veer (smiles) : Yadi tumne nahi bhi kaha hota toh bhi mein kar raha hota.
Karan (smiles) : Hmm~ Par dhyaan rahe, if I find you taking advantage of her. Toh mujhse bura koi na hoga.
Veer : *smiles*
Aur tabhi Karan ne apna haath aage badhaaya.
Karan : So? Friends?
Aur pal bhar ke liye Veer ko jese kuch yaad aaya.
Golu!!!!
Aise hi toh usne dosti ka haath aage badhaaya tha. Aur kya hua tha uske saath?
Ye yaad aate hi Veer ki nazre neeche jhuk gayi aur wo palat gaya.
Veer : I don't make friends...
Kehte hue wo waha se nikal gaya. Aur bechaara Karan usse bas prashn bhari nigaaho se jaate hue dekhta raha.
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Agli subah hui. Aaj Veer ko apne food truck ka bandobast karna tha. Aur yahi soch aaj wo jaldi uth gaya.
Par tabhi...
*Knock knock*
Uske darwaaze par kisi ne dastak dii.
Uthte hue usne jaise hi door khola toh saamne Suman khadi hui thi.
Par...
Par uske bagal se koi aur bhi khada hua tha.
Veer : ???
Suman muskuraa rahi thi aur apne bagal me khade vyakti ko usne dhakka deke andar kamre me dhakela aur khud andar aake darwaaza band kar lii.
Suman : Mene kaha tha na? Kal aapko ek uphaar milega!?! Ye hai aapka uphaar!
Veer : Ehhh!?
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
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Dhanyavaad!
Dhanyavaad dost. Ye baat toh sahi kahi aapne.Veer ke chahne waale bahot hain aur sabhi veer ke liye fikar mand hain aur jiske sath apne chahne walon ki prathnayen aur duwayen hoti hain uska koi kuch nahi ukhaad sakta hai ....aur naseeb bhi usi ka sath deta hai isiliye to veer ko card mil gaya hai...........had se jyada super update
Next update uss se bhi badhiya hone waala hai.its very interesting update
chalo veer ko Beowulf card se itne benefits to mile
ab dekhna ye h k kese sholgan ko dhajya urata h veer
udhr ragin,maam,suman,arohi Sab veer ko ly k prashan hain
kaira or Karan ki beech misunderstanding boht badhiya dikhayi
overall best update throw kiye ho
let's see what happened
Thanks a lot brother!Amazing update Brother ...
Let's see what this card brings to the table ..
Waiting for next update ...
Fantastic update
Mind blowing update bhai.
Super update hai Bhai
awesome update hai Werewolf bhai,
Behad hi shandaar aur lajawab update hai bhai,
Sandar fantastic update
Thanks a lot guys!Nice update waiting for the next