Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

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Update - 71 ~ Realization!
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Ab tak...

Dono ke honth aapas me jude hue the. Arohi toh keval uske gaal ko chumna chaahti thi. Par utne me hi Veer palat gaya tha... Aur nateeja...

Arohi : Aaahhh!

Wo hadbada ke peeche hati aur bina Veer ko dekhe hi bhaag gayi.

Veer bechaara bas apni thodi kaapti hui ungli se apne honth par firaata reh gaya aur mann me bas yahi kehta raha...

'It... It was an accident!'

Ab aage...

Kal ki raat toh kya hi raat thi. Veer na keval kayi saare bade logo se apni pehchaan kar paaya tha balki usne Pranjal ko bhi ek muh tod jawaab diya tha.

Ragini ne toh pehle hi Pranjal ke saare raaz khol diye the Veer ke saamne. Ki kese Pranjal ne Veer ko ghar se baahar nikalwaaya tha. Aur kese woh uske khilaaf shadyantra rachta tha.

Aise kapti insaan ki kal Veer ne acche se waat lagaayi thi. Poore banquet me fir Pranjal nazar nahi aaya tha. Na jaane kitni derr tak washroom me wo dhun bana raha tha. Wo kehte hai na, jaisi karni, wesi bharni. Pranjal jis galat uddeshya se Veer ka mazaak banaane aaya tha, Veer ne uska hi mazaak bana ke rakh diya tha.

Ghar aake jab Veer ne saari baat Ragini ko bataayi toh Ragini bhi uske sang hassi ke thahaake lagaane lagi.

Veer ab pehle jesa Veer nahi tha. Dada jii ki 40% jaydaat milne ke baad ab uske under itna kuch tha ki wo iss jaydaat se boht kuch kar sakta tha. Karodo ka maalik tha ab woh.

Wo isliye, kyuki jaydaat me keval zameen hi nahi thi. Manorath ke paas jitne bhi makaan, flats, dukaane, transport ke saadhan, athwa jaha jaha Manorath ne invest kiya tha. Unn sab ka hissa hua tha. Aur wo hissa inhe sab me tha.

Veer ke paas iss waqt dherr saari zameen toh thi hi, saath hi saath uske paas 2 flats bhi the ab. 1 dukaan, 2 cars, aur kaafi saara cash bhi uske account me aa chuka tha.

Dukaan toh pehle se hi rent par dali hui thi toh filhaal Veer usse wese hi rehne dene waala tha. Rahi baat cars ki toh wo bhi koi na koi aake ghar par chorr ke jaane waala tha. Uski tension nahi thi.

Aur 2 flats jo the, inke baare me kuch kiya jaa sakta tha. Original plan Veer ka yahi tha ki wo Suman samet dusre flat me shift ho jaaye. Par Ragini bhala aisa kaha hone dene waali thi? Woh toh Veer aur baaki sab ko kahi bhi nahi jaane de sakti thi. Itna lagaav jo ho gaya tha inn sab se usko.

Abhi wo apne room me laita hi hua tha jab achanak hi...

*Ping*

Uska phone baj utha. Koi notification aaya tha.

'Huh?'

Phone check karte hi usne dekha ki Kavya ki college friend Kritika ka message tha insta par. Wahi, jo kal uski Insta ID maang kar le gayi thi.

Chat kholte hi Veer ko message dikhaayi diya.

Kritika : Hello bhaiya!

Toh Veer ne bhi forun type karte hi message bhej diya.

Veer : Hello!

Kritika : Kaise ho aap?

Veer : I'm good! Tum batao!? Need any help?

Kritika : No bhaiya! Mein toh bas aise hi...

Veer : Okay!

Kritika : Wese! Kya aapne padh liya?

Veer : Padh liya? Kya padh liya?

Kritika : Huh? Kal se seniors ke exams hai na!?

Veer : Ehh!?

Message padhte hi, Veer jo shaanti se araam farma raha tha wo ek jhatke me bistar se koodate hue uth ke baith gaya.

'Fuccckkkkkkk! Kal se exam!? Shit! Arohi dii ne toh bataaya tha kaafi din pehle. Mere dimaag se hi nikal gaya.'

Veer : Okay! Kal kis ka paper hai!?

Kritika : Eh!? Bhaiya!? Kya aapko apna time table nahi pata? Kal shayad Maths hai aapka.

'Ohhhh Fuckkkkkk!!!'

[Haha~]

Maths naam sunte hi Veer ke mann me do khayaal aaye. Pehla, ki usne inn beete dino ghanta kuch padha tha. Padha toh dur, woh toh apne college ki shaqal hi bhul gaya tha. Aur dusra...

Nidhi ma'am! Jo maths ki teacher thi. Aur iss saal uski class teacher bhi. Lag gayi waat.

Khatre ki ghanti baj rahi thi jese uske mann me.

Veer : Okay thanks! Goodbye!

Aur Veer ne itna type kar ke bhejte hue insta band kar diya.

Apne ghar ke bistar par laiti Kritika ne jese hi ye dekha toh wo hairat me reh gayi. Kuch derr pehle hi wo itna khush thi ki Veer bhaiya ne usse forun hi reply de diya. Aur ab...!? Ye toh khade lund pe laat maarne jesa tha.

Kritika : Wha-!? Veer bhaiyaaaa!? Heinnnnnn!????

Par uska jawaab dekhe bagerr hi, Veer off line ho chuka tha. Usne decide kar liya tha. Ki aaj wo poora time padhega. Yadi uske marks kam aaye, toh Nidhi ma'am pakke se aur naraaz ho jaengi.

Apni book shelf se maths book nikaalte hue wo forun hi prashn lagaane laga. Intelligence uski already 95 par thi toh questions ke hal usse yu chutkiyo me samajh aa rahe the.

Par ye intelligence usse paper me bina padhe acche marks nahi dilwa sakti thi. Kam se kam questions ke way of solving aur formulaes ko toh dekhna hi hoga taaki exam me speed barkaraar rahe aur questions bhi asaani se solve ho jaaye.

Toh bas, Veer kitaab utha ke lag chuka tha padhaayi me.

Thanks to Suman, jo uska room harr rozz saaf karti thi. Uss wajah se uske book shelf me zara bhi dhool nahi thi. Warna uski book me ab tak makdi ke jaale lag jaane the, itne mahino se jo nahi khuli hui thi.

Ragini jo Veer ke room me usse dekhne aayi thi, usse padhta dekh thoda chaunk gayi, fir muskuraayi aur baahar nikal gayi.

Jab wo kuch derr baad lauti toh uske haath me ek doodh ka glaas tha.

Tray lete hue wo Veer ke bagal se baith gayi. Aur usse hi nihaar rahi thi. Wo sach kehte hai ki ek aadmi jab focused hota hai ya kisi kaam me leen hota hai toh uss waqt wo sabse zyada attractive lagta hai. Ragini ko bhi iss samay Veer boht zyaada attractive lag raha tha. Upar se uske 75 appearance ke points.

Ragini (smiles) : Veer! Ye lo! Doodh!

Veer : Hmm? Kya bhabhi!? Baccha thodi hu ab.

Ragini : Toh kya bacche hi bas doodh peete hai!?

Veer : Aur nahi toh kya... Huh????

Veer jo sarr jhukaaye jawaab deta jaa raha tha, achanak se usse jese Ragini ke bol ka matlab samajh aaya. Bacche hi doodh peete hai? Bade bhi toh peete hai. Par bade log wo doodh... Seedha jadd se peete hai. In other words... Ahem!

Ragini bechaari toh aise hi bol dii thi. Par agle hi pal jab Veer ne hairat me usse dekha toh jese usse bhi apni kahi gayi baat ka double meaning samajh me aaya. Aur agle hi pal uske gaal gulaabi ho gaye.

Ragini : M-Mera matlab tha. Tumhaare exams hai na Veer? Toh tum... *blushes* Roz doodh pee ke jaoge.

Veer (blushes) : O-Okay!

Fatafat doodh khatam karne ke baad, Veer ek baar fir lag chuka tha apni padhaayi me jab usse suddenly apne nichle honth par Ragini ka haath mehsoos hua.

'!???'

Uske nichle honth par doodh ki abhi bhi kuch boonde saji hui thi. Toh Ragini apne anguthe se usse saaf kar rahi thi. Aur dono ki hi nazre aapas me jese hi mili...

*Silence*

Maano pal bhar ke liye waqt sa tham gaya.

Veer : Bh-Bhabhi!?

Ragini : ....

Ragini ke haath abhi bhi uske honth par the. Sehla rahe the unhe. Aur na chaahte hue bhi apni Bhabhi ke haatho hi Veer ka hathiyaar tight hone laga tha.

Ragini ne jese hi Veer ke pant ke uthate ubhaar ko notice kiya wo thoda jhep gayi.

"Ahh!" Achanak se wo peeche hati aur tezz kadmo ke saath baahar nikal bhaag gayi.

'Damn itttt!!!!'

Veer bas khud ko kosta reh gaya. Ye lund bhi saala galat time pe khada hota tha. Ab na jaane Ragini uske baare me kya soch rahi hogi!?

Usse jaan'ne ka ek hi tareeqa tha.

'Pari!!!!'

[Hmm?]

'Bhabhi ki favourability show karo.'

*Ding*

[Ragini's favourability : 78]

'What the!?? Favourability badh gayi!?? How!????'

Abhi bhi aurto ko samajhne me Veer ka ek lamba raasta tha. Aaj ke iss din fir Veer ne aur kuch na kiya. Raat ko bas Suman ki gaand peli aur Aabha ki choot me wo do baar jhara. Kal exam me usse kisi bhi prakaar ka frustration nahi chaahiye tha.

***

Next day...

Subah subah hi Ragini Veer ki dress me uski tie sahi karne me lagi hui thi. Aur Veer bas sharmaate hue side muh karke khada hua tha.

'Kya Vivek bhaiya ke saath bhi bhabhi pehle aise hi...!?'

[Of course!]

Aaj Veer ko samajh aa raha tha ki ek pyaar karne waali ka hona kitna accha hota tha jeevan me. Kal na keval Ragini usse doodh dene aayi thi balki aaj uski tie bhi sahi kar rahi thi. Bilkul wese hi jese ek patni pati ki tie adjust karti hai uske duty jaate time. Veer ko ek pati patni waali feeling aa rahi thi. Ek behad hi acchi feeling jisse wo apnaana chaahta tha.

Isme bas yadi kisi cheez ki kami thi toh woh thi...

Ek kiss ki...

Veer ne muskuraate hue unn thoughts ko apne mann se baahar nikaala aur wo mudne ke liye abhi hua hi tha jab...

Ragini ne achanak se uski chin pakdi aur...

*Chu~*

"Huhhhhh!!!!?"

Veer hakka bakka hoke Ragini ko ghur raha tha. Abhi abhi jis kiss ke baare me soch raha tha. Wo kiss usse mil chuki thi. Bhale hi ye kiss gaal par thi par...

Uski apni Bhabhi ne dii thi. Wo bhi sabke saamne.

Dur khadi Suman bhi apni aankho me chamak liye iss drishya ko dekh rahi thi.

Ragini (blushes) : G-Good luck!

Veer (blushes) : Thank... you!!!

Aur Veer waha se fatafat nikal liya. Aaj subah subah hi uske dil ki dhadkan badh chuki thi.

College aate hi usne apni Apache park kii aur chal diya college ke main entrance ki orr.

Kyuki list toh wahi lagi hogi. Kaun kaha baithega ye pata karna zaroori tha.

Apna roll no. dhundne ke baad Veer list me likhe gaye room no. me gaya.

Aur darwaaze ki dehleez par pohuchte hi jese hi usne kaha, "May I come in... Huh!??"

Andar ek jaana maana shaks maujood tha. Koi aur nahi...

Nidhi!!!

Nidhi khud Veer ko stabdh nigaaho se ghur rahi thi. Ek pal ke liye dono ek dusre ko dekhne ke baad jese jamm se gaye.

Nidhi toh aur zyaada shock me thi. Sabse pehla shock toh ye ki... Veer test dene aaya tha. Veer ne uski baat ka maan rakha. Aur dusra shock...

Wo tha uska appearance... Pehle se boht zyaada handsome tha ab woh.

'He... He came!!!!!' Apne mann me sochte hue Nidhi ne haa me gardan hila dii.

Aaj Nidhi ek navy blue colour ki saree me thi.




Aur usme wo itni khubsoorat lag rahi thi ki chaah kar bhi Veer apni aankhein hata nahi paa raha tha.

Apni seat par aane ke baad baithate hi Veer ne mann ko shaant kiya. Room me do invigilators hote the. Toh uske room me ek Nidhi ma'am thi. Aur dusri Nidhi ma'am ki hi ek junior professor thi jiska naam tha Ayushi. Ye dono hi class ki aaj ki invigilator thi.

*Tringggggg*

Ghanti baji aur paper start hua.

Veer fatafat questions ko solve kar solution likhta jaa raha tha.

Nidhi jo saamne khadi thi wo badi hi bechaini me usse dekh rahi thi.

'Kya isne padhayi kari!? Likh toh raha hai woh... Kahi sab galat salat toh nahi solve kar diya!? Yadi sab galat kar raha hoga toh...!? He will fail... Nahi!!'

Nidhi itna bechain thi ki wo apne mann ki baatein shaant hi na kar paayi. Aur akhir wo apni bechaini ke aage haar gayi.

Wo dheere se Veer ki row ki taraf aage badhi, ye dekhne ki Veer sahi kar bhi raha hai ya nahi?

Wo harr baar aage jaati toh fir peeche se nikalti, aur Veer ki answer sheet par nazar maarte hue solution dekhne ki koshish karti. Par chand second me wo kuch bhi theek se dekh nahi paa rahi thi.

'Oh no....!'

Fir jese uska dimaag chala aur wo answer sheet me sign karne lagi baari baari.

Iske zariye ab wo Veer ki answer sheet dekh sakti thi. Jese hi wo Veer ke paas aayi. Veer ne answer sheet seedhi kar front page khol ke de dii. Taaki Nidhi ko asaani jaaye aur fatafat wo sign kar de.

Par idhar usse kya pata tha ki uski ye harqat Nidhi ke dimaag ko aur bhi thanka degi.

'This... This stupid brat... This idiot... He... Arrghhh!! Veeeeerrrrrr!!!!' wo mann me hi chillaayi. Pehli baar wo itna irritate ho rahi thi Veer ko lekar.

Fir bhi himmat kar Nidhi ne uske saare panne check kiye.

Veer : M-Ma'am!??

Nidhi : Ahem... P-Paper easy hai na?

Veer : Well, easy toh nahi hai. Moderate hai. Na zyaada easy, na zyaada tough.

Nidhi : O-Okay!

Nidhi dekh paa rahi thi ki shuru ke kuch steps toh sahi kiye the Veer ne. Par wo poora nahi check kar paa rahi thi. Kyuki...

"Ye lijiye ma'am!" Veer ke bagal waala jo dusri branch ka tha, usne apni sheet sign karwaane aage kar dii thi.

Aur iss baar Nidhi ne pyaari sii muskaan dete hue uss ladke ki sheet ko sign kiya. Jo shayad muskaan toh kahi se bhi nahi thi. Aisa lag raha tha ki kisi witch ko ek aam insaan ne gaali bak dii ho aur witch bas muskura rahi hai.

'Ek minute ruk jaata toh kya ukhad jaata iss ladke ka? I couldn't even...'

Majbooran Nidhi ko waha se aage badhna pada.

Veer : Uhmm... Ma'am!?

Nidhi : H-Huh!?? K-Kyaa?

Nidhi ne dekha ki Veer apni mutthi kasse uski orr kiya hua tha.

'Huh!?'

Fir jese uski samajh aaya ki Veer kya kehna chaah raha tha. Wo fist bump karna chaah raha tha.

'This... This idiot!!!! Isse... Isse fist bump ki padi hai...!??? Exam time me!?'

Nidhi ka gussa badhta hi jaa raha tha. Fir bhi, dusro ki nazro se chhupke usne Veer ki fist par apni fist halke se maari...

Aur uske aisa karte hi Veer ne apni mutthi khol dii.

Uske haath me ek candy thi.

Nidhi : ????

Veer (smiles) : For you!!!

*Badump*

Nidhi jo mann hi mann Veer ko kos rahi thi. Ek baar me hi jese uska saara gussa chhumantar ho gaya.
Dil zorr se dhadka. Veer ke chehre ki muskaan dekh wo jese kho gayi usme.

Upar se wo jab se Veer ko daant laga rahi thi mann me par Veer ke ek gesture ne usse shaant kar diya.

Aur agle hi pal, uske gaal surkh laal padne lage.

Bade hi haule se usne Veer ki hatheli se wo chocolate lii aur firse banaavti gussa karte hue mann hi mann Veer ko koste hue aage badh gayi.

'This... Stupid! He's and Idiot! Waqt ki koi parvaah hi nahi hai. Bhari class me... He dared to... Ma'am ko chocolate deni hai. Mujhe chocolate dene se exam me solutions ban jaenge kya!? Haan? Kya soch ke dii usne mujhe ye? Ki ma'am uski fir madad kar dengi exam me? I won't help him. Pata chalne do zara usse bhi. He'll come to know ki bina padhe kuch bhi haasil nahi hota... Idiot!!! Chocolate deni hai...'

Banaavti gussa kar toh rahi thi Nidhi. Par...

Par uska dil andar se boht khush tha. Wo isliye kyuki,

*Ding*

[Nidhi's favourability : 59]

***

Samay jab boht hi kam bacha hua tha toh Veer ne raftaar badhaayi. Nidhi waapas se bechain hone lagi thi. Bhale hi ye final nahi the. Par ye koi assignment test bhi nahi tha. Inke marks count hone the. Ek prakaar se ye term 1 the.

*Triiiiingggggggg*

Ghanti baji aur Nidhi aur Ayushi sabhi se unke papers lene lagi.

Veer ka paper lete hue Nidhi ne ek nazar uss par daali toh dekha Veer apni battissi dikhaate hue usse hi dekh raha tha.

'Idiot!!!!'

Uska irritation aur badh gaya.

'Yadi Veer ke marks kam aaye... Then... I'll...'

Paper lete hue usne Veer ko dekhte hue bola, "Meet me in my cabin after this."

Aur wo aage badh gayi.

'Huh!? Ab ye ma'am ko kya ho gaya?'

[She will lecture you! Be prepared!]

'Hmm'

Paper ke baad, Veer jab class se baahar nikal raha tha toh uske bag me rakha phone baj utha.

Phone uthaate hi,

"Mein taiyaar hu! Tumhari madad karne ke liye."

Ye awaaz thi Balhaar ki. Aur uska response sunte hi Veer ke hontho par muskaan aa chuki thi. Of course! Veer toh pehle se hi jaanta tha ki Balhaar ghum firke ant me ussi ke paas aaega. Aur wahi hua.

Veer : Hmm! Theek hai! Toh fir lag jao kaam par. Dhyaan rahe! Kisi ko bhi pata na chale. Aur mujhse shaanipanti karne ki zaroorat nahi. Kyuki mujhe forun hi pata lag jaega. Kaam sahi hoga toh tumhaara haath bgi sahi hoga.

Balhaar : M-Mein samajh gaya. Tum uski tension mat lo. Mujhe Slogan ki jo bhi information pata lagegi, mein wo bhej dunga.

Veer : Hmm! Good! Phone tracking ka dhyaan rakhna. Slogan tezz hai. Kahi tumhaare peeche aadmi na laga ke rakha ho.

Balhaar : Nahi nahi! Tension mat lo. Mein phone ka boht dhyaan rakhunga. Aur rahi baat aadmi ki toh... Slogan humse directly baat nahi karta. Wo bas Steve ko kehta hai. Aur Steve hum sabko order deta hai. Aur fir hum apne aadmiyo ko lekar kaam karte hai uske liye.

Veer : Ohhhh! I see! Anyways! Tum jese hi khabar mile mujhe bhej dena.

Balhaar : Th-Theek hai. Wo... Mera haath!?

Veer (smiles) : Kaam hote hi tumhara haath bhi sahi kar dunga. Aur yadi Slogan ko mene hunt kiya... Toh fir uska poora area tumhara. Uski satta tumhari. Par dhyaan rahe... Tum mere andar me hi kaam karoge tab bhi...

Balhaar : Yadi... Yadi tumne jo kaha wo sach hota hai toh... Toh mujhe koi aapatti nahi.

Veer (smiles) : Good then! Khabar ka intezaar rahega mujhe....

*Call ends*

Veer ne call cut kiya aur saamne ki orr chal diya. Jaha Nidhi ma'am ka cabin tha.

***

*Bang*

Nidhi ne apni table par dono haath patakte hue Veer ko dekha.

"Veer kya hai ye sab!? How can you be so carefree? Bhari class me mujhe chocolate de rahe ho? Tum uss waqt mujhse koi hint bhi maang sakte the. I could have told you. Thodi boht hint sabhi teachers de dete hai. Mujhe toh pata bhi nahi tumne solutions sahi kiye hai ya nahi? Yadi tum fail hue toh kya jawaab dungi mein tumhari Bhabhi ko? Arre mein khud ko kya jawaab dungi? Why don't you listen...!?"

Wo bolti jaa rahi thi lekin...

Lekin Veer sharmaate hue apna chehra side kiye hue tha.

Nidhi : Huh??

Nidhi ne jese hi fir neeche dekha toh uske khud ke gaal gulaabi ho gaye. Table par jhukne se uski saree ka pallu neeche gir chuka tha. Aur uska aadhe se zyaada cleavage uss neele blouse ke baahar nazar aa raha tha.

Chuudiyo ki khan-khan hui toh Veer samajh gaya ki Nidhi ma'am apna pallu sahi kar rahi hai. Aur khan-khan ke khatam ho jaane ke baad waapas se Veer ne apna chehra saamne kar liya.

Veer : Mene paper acche se hi diya hai ma'am. Don't worry!

Nidhi kuch na boli wo bas mud ke khadi ho gayi. Shayad apna chehra chhupaana chaah rahi thi. Aur shayad ye bhi kehna chaah rahi thi ki Veer ab yaha se jaa sakta hai. Usse aur koi baat nahi karni.

Par agle hi pal...

"Aaahhhhhh!!!!!" Nidhi poori tarah bhauchakki reh gayi jab Veer ne usse peeche se apne aalingan me le liya. Uske mazboot haath zorr se uske nagn pait par kasse the.

Chatpataate hue usne Veer ki pakad churraane ki koshish kii par uska virodh tab ruk gaya jab Veer ne uske kaan me kehna shuru kiya,

"I know everything. Aap jaan bujh ke mere bagal se aa rahi thi aur jaa rahi thi. Ye dekhne ke liye ki how I was doing. Right? Fir Ayushi ma'am ko aapne rok diya, aur khud hi sign karne lagi. In a hope ki aap mera paper dekh paogi. Ki kahi mein kuch galat toh nahi kar raha, right? Ma'am..."

Nidhi ki saasein tezz chal rahi thi. Veer ki giraft me uska seena tezzi se upar neeche ho raha tha. Aur iss baar, Veer ko peeche se Nidhi ka poora cleavage nazar aa raha tha. Par iss baar usne apni nazre nahi hataayi. Ulta apni pakad aur mazboot kar dii.

Veer : Why do you care so much? Tell me!!! Mere liye itni parvaah kyu??? ANSWER ME!!!!

Veer ne uchi awaaz me pucha toh Nidhi hil ke reh gayi. Aur uske mann me jese sannaata sa chha gaya. Sab kuch shunya ho gaya.

Kyu? Veer ki itni parvaah kyu karti hai woh? Haan sahi hi toh pucha Veer ne. Akhir itni parvaah kyu karti hai wo ek student ke liye?

Veer : You know this right? Ki ye bilkul bhi normal nahi hai. Aisa koi teacher nahi karta. Especially a female teacher... Ki kisi male student ki itni parvaah kare. Tell me! Itni care kyu karti ho aap meri? Haan!? Ghar pe rukwaana, college me saath me ek hi gaadi me aana bina apni image ki parvaah kiye, mere harr baar zakhmi hone par mujhse milne aana, kayi baar toh college se hi leave lena, baar baar mujhe padhaayi ko lekar aagah karaana, sukh dukh sabme shaamil hona... Kyuuuuuu??? Answer me!!!!!

Nidhi ka shareer thar-thara ke kaanp raha tha ab.

Veer : You don't wanna answer? Toh mujhe bataane dijiye... Because I know the answer.

*Badump* *Badump*

Harr guzarte pal, Nidhi ka seena aise upar neeche ho raha tha jese maano abhi seene me se uska dil baahar aa jaega. Na jaane Veer ke shabd kya honge? Kya matlab usse uttar pata hi ki kyu wo Veer ki itni parvaah karti hai!? Jab usse khud nahi pata iska jawaab toh bhala Veer ko kese pata hoga?

Veer : It's because... YOU!!!!!! YOU LIKE ME!!!!

*Booooooommmmm*

Aur ye vaakya ek bam ki tarah phata Nidhi ke kaano me.

Veer : And let me tell you one more thing... Wo ye ki... I LIKE YOU AS WELL!!!

Pehle ka shock kam tha kya jo Veer ne apni agli baat rakh usse aur ek bada jhatka de diya.

Veer iss se pehle ki aage kuch keh paata, Nidhi ne usse zorr se dhakka de diya...

"LEAVE ME ALOOONNNNEEE!!!!" Wo chillaayi.

"Ma'am!????"

"I SAID LEAVE ME ALONE!!!! GET OOOUUUTTT!!! GET OOUUUTTT!!!"

Veer bhauchakka sa wahi jamm gaya tha.

'No... no way!!'

Veer toh bas ek test kar raha tha. Wo ye baat jaanta tha ki usse Nidhi ma'am pasand hai. Aur shayad Nidhi ma'am bhi usse pasand karti thi. Par Veer sure nahi tha. Isliye, aaj usne apne dil ki baat toh kahi hi, par saath hi...

Usne ye bhi keh diya ki Nidhi ma'am bhi usse pasand karti hai. Aur jese hi Nidhi ne usse dhakela, Nidhi ka wo outburst, uska virodh karna, usse bhagaana aur rona...

Veer samajh chuka tha.

Ki wo sahi tha.

'No wayyyyy!!! Iska matlab... Ma'am mujhse!??'

Wo aankhein phaade Nidhi ko ghurta raha.

"I SAID GET OUUUTTTT! RIGHT NOWWWW!!!"

Aur iss baar majbooran usse baahar jaana hi pada.

Nidhi, Veer ke jaane ke turant baad washroom me gayi aur door band kar... Phoot phoot kar rone lagi.

'He's lying!!! Sab jhooth hai. There's nothing between us!!!!! I don't love him... Never!! I don't like him! I don't love him at all! He's lying!!!! Kuch bhi keh raha hai woh... Kabhi nahi ho sakta aisa... I'm already married... There's nothing...!!!!'

Wo khud ko saantvna dene ki koshish karne lagi.

Par, harr baar wo mann hi mann khud se hi haar rahi thi. Kyuki baar baar Veer ke sang guzaare pal uske dimaag me aa rahe the.

'NOOOOOOO!!!! I DON'T LOVE HIM!!!!!!'

Wo fir mann me cheenkhi...

Par koi fayda nahi.

Veer se milna, uske sang rehna, baatein karna, college jaana, shopping karna, uski parvah karna, uske liye kapde lena, dusri ladkiyo ko uske sang dekh dil me peeda hona...

Ye sab jese jese Nidhi ko yaad aata jaa raha tha. Uske aasu aur bhi tezz behte jaa rahe the.

Because she knew...

Veer was right!!!

She loves him!!!!

'Noooooooooo!!!!!!!'

Apne haath ko door par maarte hue wo sarr jhukaaye khadi rahi.

Aasu behte hue zameen par gir rahe the.

Wo ek shadishuda mahila thi. Do baccho ki maa thi. 30 saal ki umr thi uski. Aur Veer maatr 21 ka. 9 saal ka gap. Wo uski teacher thi. Veer bas uska student. Unn dono ke beech aisa kahi se bhi kuch nahi hona chaahiye tha.

Uske bawajood...

It happened!

Chaah ke bhi Nidhi usse apne dimaag se nahi nikaal paati thi. Uska hassta muskuraata chehra harr baar uske dimaag me aa jaata tha.

'Nahi!!!! I cannot... I don't love him! Wo mera bas ek student hai. Aam students ki tarah. Aur mein ek teacher. Hamaare beech ek profesional rishta hai. Formal relationship. Nothing else. There's nothing between us. From now on... I will treat him just like any other student. That's right! Aisa hi hona chahiye! Yes! I'm right! Of course!!!!'

Apne aasuo ko poch wo kuch derr baad washroom se baahar nikal gayi.

Aur Veer ke mann me tabhi firse ek ghanti baji,

*Ding*

[Nidhi's favourability has been reduced to 40.]
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!
Now the reason kyu night me nahi aaya update. Wo isliye because raat me type karte waqt, my eyes were hurting, so I decided to take my sleep first. And then to post the update in the morning. Bas, yahi reason tha.
Anyways, apna apna kaam karke jaane ka. Aur comments rakhne ka.

वाह क्या बात है
रागिनी की फेवोरेबिलीटी बढ़ गई पर यह क्या निधि की फेवोरेबिलीटी घट गई
पर वीर का मिशन तो निधि को बचाना है
हम्म्म अब वीर की अपीयरेंस बढ़ जाने के बाद भी फेवोरेबिलीटी का घटना मतलब दिल पर दिमाग का हावी हो जाना
फिर भी लाज़वाब अपडेट

 

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[Brandy123]

Uttam Lekhni ka Prayog Werewolf bhai...Waiting for Next Update Eagerly...

 

[Adam WarlocK]

Update - 3 ~ A Full Fledged Plan​

Ab tak...

Brijesh (zorr se) : Ab khade khade intezaar kya kar rahe ho? Aage badho aur apne Dada jii ko tohfa do.

Manorath : Aao Veer!

Aur apne Dada jii ki sahuliyat se Veer aage badhte hue apne Dada jii ko gift dene jaane laga.

Ab aage...

Veer ke Dada jii, Manorath uss par kayi hadd tak bharosa karte the. Kyuki jitni bhi shikaayat wo sunte aa rahe the, unhone aaj tak Veer ko kabhi apni aankho se koi galat kaam karte nahi dekha tha. Aur aaj ye pehli baar nahi tha jab Pranjal ke muh se unhone Veer ki ghatna ke baare me suna tha.

Ye toh saalo se chala aa raha tha. Koi na koi aake Manorath ke saamne Veer ke karmo ki shikaayat karta tha aur Veer keval sar jhukae khada rehta tha. Veer virodh kiya karta tha par uske paas apni baat ko sahi saabit karne ka koi proof nahi rehta tha. Aur isliye ab usne virodh karna bhi chorr diya tha.

Aaj bhi kuch aisa hi tha. Veer ke paas koi saboot nahi tha apni begunaahi saabit karne ka. Aur kya kehta woh? Kon uski baato ka yakeen karta?

Pichle kayi saalo se jo image uski ghar me bani hui thi, uske chalte toh koi uss par reham bhi nahi khaata tha.

Jab Veer apne haatho me wo flower vase lete hue aage badha tabhi achaanak se pata nahi kya hua uska perr fisla aur wo buri tarah saamne ki orr jaa gira.

*Crash*

Flower vase uske haatho se chhuth kar gol ghumte hue ek tezz shor karte hue neeche jaa gira aur ek hi jhatke me wo sundar sa vase dherr saare tukdo me bikhar gaya.

"Aaaaaaaaaaa," Waha baithi mahilae aur ladkiyo ke muh se kuch aisi hi hairaani bhari awaaz nikli.

Aur fir ek shaanti sii chhaa gayi.

Sab ki aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi. Sabhi Veer ko aise dekh rahe the jese maano usne kisi ka khoon kar diya ho.

Dekhe bhi kyu na, akhir wo flower vase itna keemti jo tha. Manorath ko shuru se hi paudhe aur flower vases ka boht shauk tha, yahi kaaran tha ki unke ghar me ek alag se garden bhi tha.

Iss waqt Veer ki haalat kharab thi. Usne khud apne Dada jii ke liye ek flower vase chunn ke rakha hua tha jisse wo baad me unhe dene waala tha. Iss vase ke saamne uska vase toh kuch bhi nahi tha. Par ab kya? Ab toh wo vase uske haatho toot chuka tha.

Bas! Brijesh jo apna gussa pehle hi badi mushqil se control kiye hue tha wo uth khada hua aur chillaaya.

Brijesh : Haram khor! Tujhe pata hai wo tohfa kitna mehnga tha?

Apne Dad ki garajti awaaz sunn ek baar fir wo sihar utha. Brijesh usse aag babula hoke khaa jaane wali nazro se ghur raha tha.

Manorath : Brijeesshhhh!!!

Brijesh : Papa jii... Aap... Aap jaante hai ye tohfa kitne ka tha? Ye flower vase 3 lakh ka tha. Mene khud import karwaya tha China se isse aapke liye... Aur iss bewakoof ne...

Vase ki keemat sunte hi waha khade logo ko jese ek bada jhatka laga. 3 lakh unn sabke saamne yu barbaad hoke bikhar ke jo pade hue the.

Sabse zyaada haalat toh Veer ki kharaab thi. Uski samajh nahi aa raha tha wo kare kya.

Brijesh se ab raha na gaya, wo wese hi kayi saalo se Veer se pareshaan tha. Veer uski harr umeedo par paani ferr deta tha.

Veer ki taraf tezz kadmo ke saath jaate hue wo usse ek zorrdaar thappad maarne hi wala tha ki...

Manorath : Brijeessshhh!!

Brijesh : Par Papa jii...

Manorath : Aaj mera janmdin hai. Aur mere janmdin ke din tum aisa suluk karoge toh matlab hi kya. Jo hua usse ek galti maan ke aage badho. Vase kitna hi mehnga kyu na ho, wo toh ab toot chuka hai. Ab uske peeche rone ka koi fayda nahi. Rahi baat paiso ki toh iske paise mein de dunga.

Brijesh : Ye aap kesi baatein kar rahe ho Papa jii? Aapka janmdin hai. Mein bhala aap se paise kyu lunga?

Manorath ki baat sunn Brijesh ne apne haath rok liye par uska gussa abhi tak kam nahi hua tha.

Pranjal : Dada jii, mene Veer se kaha tha baahar hi ki apne shoes utaar de kyuki baarish se geele ho chuke hai. Par Veer ne meri suni hi nahi. Bola ki maids toh ghar me lagi hi hai, wo kis kaam aaengi?

Aur uski baat sunn sabhi ki nazre Veer ke perro par gayi jo geele jute pehna hua tha aur farsh ko ganda kar raha tha.

Aur ye dekh Brijesh aur krodhit ho gaya. Tabhi Veer ki stepmom Shweta uth khadi huyi.

Shweta : Veer din ba din laaparwaah hota jaa raha hai.

Pranjal : Veer! Apne jute utaaro, idhar aao ye sleepers pehn lo aur ab galti ho gayi toh ho gayi. Ye dekho bhagwaan ka prasaad rakha hua hai. Dada jii ko ye prasaad do aur unse maafi maang lo.

Pranjal usse haath pakad ke uske jute utarwaata hai aur usse wahi Dada jii ke paas rakhi ek sleepers ko pehna deta hai. Pranjal ne wahi table pe rakhe hue dahi shakkar jo ki bhagwaan ko chadhaaya gaya tha usse katori me laake Veer ko thama diya.

Pranjal : Jao Veer! Dada jii ko prasaad do aur maafi maango.

Veer bechaara itna seham gaya tha aaj ki ghatnao se. Aaj uski zindagi ka sabse manhoos aur bura din tha.

Veer ne prasaad ki katori haath me thaami aur wo aage badha hi tha ki firse uska perr na jaane kese fisla aur prasaad ki katori uske haath se chhatak kar seedhe uske Dada jii ki orr jaa giri.

Aur saara ka saara prasaad uske Dada jii ke kapdo par jaa gira.

Bas! Brijesh ka jo gussa abhi apni limit par tha, wo cross ho gaya. Wo aage badha aur...

*Chataak* *Chataak* *Chataak*

Thappado ki jhadi laga dii aur Veer ke gaalo par raseed raseed ke maarte gaya.

Thappado ki goonj se Kavya sehamte hue sab kuch dekh rahi thi. Usse waqai Veer pe taras aa raha tha. Arohi bhi bauhe sikodti hui saamne ho rahe drashya ko dekh rahi thi.

Wahi Pranjal aur Vivek khushi se fule nahi sama rahe the.

Vivek (khuspusaate hue) : Yahi hai wo grand show... Haha!

Ragini : Ohhh! Toh tum iski baat kar rahe the. Par... Par ye kuch zyaada nahi ho gaya?

Vivek : Hmph! Zyaada kaha ye toh abhi bhi kam hai.

Ragini : Aur ye idea kis ka tha?

Vivek (smiles) : Chote ka...

Ragini (hairaani me) : Pranjal ka??? Devar jii kuch zyaada hi chatur ho rahe hai aaj kal...

Idhar thappado se Veer ke gaal laal ho chale the.

Brijesh (gusse me) : Tu jaanta hai aaj tune kya kiya hai? Haram khor!!! Wo prasaad hamaare kul ki devi ka tha. Aur tune usse zameen pe gira diya? Aur wo bhi Papa jii ke upar? Naye kapde bhi kharaab kar diye tune unke... 3 lakh ke tohfe ka chuna laga diya... Roz roz tere haath se kuch na kuch gadbad hoti hi hai. Beta nahi panauti hai tu... Mein kehta hu nikal jaa... Nikal jaa issi waqt ghar se... Aur ahinda se iss ghar me qadam bhi mat rakhna...

Aur Brijesh usko haatho se pakad ke ghaseet ke baahar le gaya aur zorr se dhakka dete hue usse darwaaze ke baahar fek diya.

Ghar me maujood sabhi log darwaaze ki orr tezz kadmo ke saath aae siwae Manorath ke...

Aaj tak Devi ke prasaad ka aisa apmaan unke kul me kisi ne bhi nahi kiya tha. Manorath khud abhi iss waqt atyant dukh aur gusse me tha. Issi kaaran usne Brijesh ko bhi iss baar nahi toka.

Aur wo wahi baitha hua chup chaap apne hi mann me Devi se shama maangne laga.

Brijesh : Nikal jaa! Nikal jaa iss ghar se... Aaj se tera aur mera koi sambandh nahi. Marr gaya aaj se tu mere liye... Mera koi beta nahi hai. Khabardaar yadi tune iss ghar me dubaara kadam bhi rakha toh...

Veer kaapte hue sab kuch apni aankho se dekh raha tha, ye pal bhar me kya se kya ho gaya. Aaj kyu uske saath ye sab hua?

Veer ki sauteli Maa, Shweta saamne ke nazaare ko badi hi khushi se dekh rahi thi. Uski mann ki muraad poori jo ho gayi thi. Ab uski beti hi jaydaad ki maalkin banegi. Yahi sochte hue wo apni beti ki orr mudi toh dekha ki uski beti, Bhumika ke chehre par koi expression nahi the. Aur ye jaan kar Shweta ko khushi hui. Ki uski beti ke mann me bhi Veer ke prati koi bhaav nahi hai.

Veer ke aasu uski aankho se lagataar bahe jaa rahe the. Par wo kuch nahi bola.

Wo chup chaap utha aur baahar ki orr chal diya. Usne apne jeb me se gaadi ki chaavi nikaali aur wo gaadi on karne hi waala tha ki peeche se Brijesh ki awaaz aayi.

Brijesh : Ye gaadi teri nahi hai...

Aur Veer chaavi ko gaadi me lage hi chorr kar ghar se baahar nikal aaya.

Usne ek jhalak peeche mud ke dekha. Shweta aur Bhumika usse bina koi bhaav ke dekh rahi thi. Brijesh ki aankho me bhayaanak gussa nazar aa raha tha. Wahi uske Karunesh chacha bhi usse bina koi bhaav ke dekh rahe the.

Uski Sumitra chachi thoda chintit zaroor prateet ho rahi thi.

Vivek aur Pranjal ke chehro par halki khushi nazar aa rahi thi. Ragini aur Arohi bauhe sikode jese kisi soch me doobi hui thi. Jab uski nazar Kavya par gayi toh Kavya ne sehamte hue sar jhuka liya.

Bas! Uske baad Veer palat ke ghar se dur jaane laga. Ghar ke security guards bhi Veer ko jaata hua dekh rahe the.

Achanak baadal garje aur baarish firse shuru ho gayi.

Par Veer na ruka. Aur kuch hi palo me wo apne gharwaalo ki nazro se ojhal ho chuka tha.

Iss waqt Veer ko baarish acchi lag rahi thi. Usse apni lag rahi thi. Jab Ajay se maar khaate waqt wo ghar laut raha tha tab bhi baarish ne uska saath diya tha. Aur abhi jaha uske ghar waalo ne usse ghar se nikaal ke usse akela chhorr diya tab bhi baarish uska saath de rahi thi.

Uske saath saath mausam bhi yu ro raha tha. Veer bina koi awaaz kiye rote rote bas chalta jaa raha tha.

Usne apne seene par latka pendant apne haatho me thaam liya. Ek bada hi pyaara sa pendant tha, ekdum alag type ka.

Usse bheenchte hue Veer ke aasu aur tezzi se behne lage. Ye woh pendant tha jo uski asli Maa ne usse pehnaaya tha.

Veer ko apni asli Maa ke baare me kuch bhi nahi pata tha. Bas itna pata tha ki uss Maa ne usse janm diya hai. Jab bhi wo Brijesh se apni Maa ke baare me puchta tha toh Brijesh bas ek hi baat bolta~ "Naam mat lo uss kameeni aurat ka..."

Uski Maa ka naam tha Bhawana. Veer ke janm ke ek saal baad hi dono ke beech talaak ho gaya aur Bhawana ghar se chali gayi thi.

Kaha gayi woh, kis haal me hogi abhi, zinda bhi hai ya nahi uski Maa usse kuch nahi pata tha. Yaha tak ki uski Maa ka naam bhi uske Dada jii ne usse bataya tha. Na hi uss aurat ko lekar ghar me charcha hoti thi na hi koi uske baare me koi topic chedhta tha.

Veer ko toh ye bhi nahi pata tha ki uski Maa kesi dikhti thi. Koi bhi photo album nahi tha, uski Maa se judi koi bhi cheez nahi thi ghar me.

Baarish ke kaaran sadko par abhi gaadiya bhi kam chalti hui nazar aa rahi thi. Usse nahi pata tha wo kaha jaa raha hai. Jab tak uske perr chal rahe the wo bas chalta jaa raha tha. Usse apni sagi Maa ki yaad aane lagi. Yadi wo yaha hoti abhi toh uski Maa uske saath kesa vyavhaar karti? Kya usse pyaar deti? Ya fir Brijesh ki hi tarah wo bhi...!?

Paani se bheega hua Veer main road par aa chuka tha, abhi wo mudne hi waala tha ki ekdum se ek car mod se aayi aur Veer ne palat ke car ko dekha.

Par tab tak boht derr ho chuki thi.

Car ka agla hissa uski pasli se takraaya aur thokar hote hi wo zorr se jaate hue dur gir pada.

"Ohhhh! Noooo...." Car me baithe ek aadmi ke muh se nikla.

Car ko jhatka lagte hi peeche baithi ek ladki forun hi aage ki seat se jaa bhidi, "Aaaahhhh!"

Aadmi : Madam aap theek toh hai na?

Ladki (sar malte hue) : Haa! Mein... Mein thik hu.

Fir jese hi uss ladki ne saamne dekha toh uski maano saasein hi atak gayi. Saamne ek ladka zameen par dala hua tha aur usse samajhne me derr na lagi ki abhi abhi uski car kis se takraayi thi.

Wo ladka waha baarish me car se bhid ke pada bheeg raha tha.

Ladki (ghabraate hue) : Ye... Ye....

Aadmi : Inn sab ka samay nahi hai Madam. Hume jald hi nikalna hoga.

Aur itna bol wo aadmi forun hi gaadi aage badhaane lagta hai.

Ladki (chillaate hue) : Ye kya bol rahe ho aap? Nahi... Hum aise usse chorr kar nahi jaa sakte...

Aadmi : Madam! Baat ko samajhiye... Iss waqt humaara yaha se nikalna boht zaroori hai.

Aur usne car ke accelerator par perr rakh car aage badha dii.

Ladki peeche mud window se uss ladke ko dekh rahi thi, uska nichla honth daato tale zorr se daba hua tha ki maano khoon hi nikal aae. Aankho me halke aasu bhi aa chuke the.

"I'm sorry..." Usne mann me kaha.

Aur wo car palak jhapakte hi logo ki nazro se ojhal ho gayi.

Idhar accident dekh aas paas ke jo bhi log dukaan ke neeche baarish se bachne ke liye khade hue the wo daudte hue aae aur Veer ko uthaane lage.
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Dhanyavaad!
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[Lucky@khan]

Update - 15 ~ An eye for an eye​

Ab tak...

'Should I call?? No... What am I even thinking?'

Wo sarr na me hilaate hue apni neend me chali gayi.

Par usse nahi pata tha...

Ki aane waala samay...

Uske liye kya kya laane waala tha.

Ab aage...

Ghar me apni Maa ki awaaz sunn neend ke aghosh se ek ladka subah subah utha. Aise hi uske dincharya ki shuruaat hoti thi.

Apni dhun me magan wo naha dho ke college jaane ke liye taiyaar tha.

Jaldbaazi me naashta karte hue wo apne phone par busy tha aur uski yahi gandi aadat par uski Maa usse sunaane lagi,

"Kitni baar kaha hai ki naashte ke waqt phone mat chalaaya karo par tum ho ki sunte hi nahi? Aur itni kya jaldi hai beta ki naashta karne ke liye bhi time nahi hai? Arre, 2-4 minute late bhi pohuchoge toh teacher bhaga nahi denge tumhe beta."

Wo aurat apni bauhe sikode apne bete ki harqat se naakhush hote hue boli.

Par uske bete ko toh jese koi farq hi nahi pad raha tha. Iss kaan se sunn uss ladke ne apni maa ki baatein apne dusre kaan se nikaal dii.

Aur bas, muh me naashta bhare, chabaate hue uski nazre ek taq phone me lagi hui thi.

Aurat : Padhaayi ka kya hua? Exams aane waale hai na? Kuch padhte ho raat me room me? Ya poore time woi pubg khelte rehte ho??

Ladka : Arre ho jaegi na yaar Mom. Kyu tension leti ho?

Aurat : Pata nahi kab sudhroge tum...

Wo udaas hote hue uth ke andar kitchen me gayi aur ek water bottle laate hue apne bete ke bag me rakh dii jo wahi sofe par pada hua tha.

Agle pal hi wo ladka naashta khatam kar khada hua apna bag uthaaya aur bottle side me fassi dekh usse nikaala aur baahar chal diya,

"Arre bottle kyu roz roz nikaal deta hai? Paani nahi piyoge kya?"

Wo chillaate hue baahar aayi jaha uska beta apni duke bike nikaalne me busy tha.

Ladka : Arre Mom! Kitni baar batau, dost log rehte hai na... Sab ke sab bottle laate hai. Ye faaltu me rakh ke kyu apne bag ka bojh badhau? Tum tension na lo yaar... Ab jao andar.

Aurat : Ajayyyy... Kuch bhul toh nahi raha na??

Par apni Maa ki awaaz ko ansuna kar wo bas apni hi dhun me khoya hua tha aur ghar se yu hawa ke jhoke ki tarah nikal gaya.

Ye aur koi nahi, Veer ki pitaayi karne waala wahi ladka tha ~ Ajay.

Ajay ki Maa Sushma wahi darwaaze par khadi khadi apne hi khyaalo me ghum ho gayi. Chinta, shikan uske chehre par saaf nazar aa rahi thi.

Apne beta ka aisa ravaiyaa usse hamesha soch me daalne par majboor kar deta tha aur uska apne aap se bas ek hi sawaal rehta tha.

Ki akhir kab uske bete ki ye aadatein chuutengi? Aur kab wo uski baato par dhyaan dena shuru karega?

Chaahe Ajay jesa bhi tha, tha toh uska beta. Uska apna kaleja... Usme Sushma ki jaan basti thi.

Aur shayad yahi ek kaaran bhi tha ki wo zyaada zorr se usse daant bhi nahi paati thi kyuki wo ekmaatr aulaad jo thi uski aur uske pati ki.

Ek gambheer aah chorr wo waapas darwaaza lagaate hue andar chali gayi.

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Idhar Ajay bina apne Maa ke prati ravaiyye par dhyaan diye apne hi vichaaro me leen tha.

Kaafi khush sa bhi lag raha tha woh. Na jaane aisa kya kaaran tha?

Bade hi josh se bharpoor aur excited hote hue wo college me pravesh kiya.

Apne apne pantaro se uski mulaqaat hui. Sabhi ko high five dete hue wo apni class me ghusa.

Akhir wo dada tha apni class ka. 3rd year tha ye uska college me aur poori class me uska raub tha. Ek image thi uski. Ek badboy ki image.

Jiski peeche aksar ladkiya bhaagti thi. Par keval wahi ladkiya jinhe pataana behad asaan hota tha aur unme zyaada koi khubiyaa nahi hoti thi.

Ek aisi ladki jo samajhdaar ho aur saath hi saath teekshn boojh waali ho wo kabhi bhi aise ladko par apna time waste nahi karegi.

Shayad yahi kaaran tha jo Pragya ko unn sab ladkiyo me se alag banaata tha. Ajay ke kayi baar propose karne ke baad bhi, Pragya ne usse sirf as a friend hi banaaye rakha tha.

Aur isliye Ajay usse aur bhi zyaada paana chaahta tha. Jitna koi cheez aapse dur bhaagti hai, usse paane ki laalsa aapki aur bhi badh jaati hai. Yahi haal tha Ajay ka.

Pragya ki adaa, uski wo carefree personality aur easy going attitude jese usse baaki saari ladkiyo se alag kar deta tha Ajay ki nazro me.

Usse aur koi ladki bhaati hi nahi thi. Bas Pragya hi uske dimaag me ghumti rehti thi.

Aaj bhi aisa hi kuch tha. Aaj Pragya college nahi aayi hui thi par uske bawajood Ajay ka dhyaan toh jese uspe hi laga hua tha.

Uski harr ek image Ajay ke mann me aa rahi thi. Uska hassna, baatein karna, advices dena, sab kuch usse bada yaad aa raha tha.

Par Ajay jaanta tha. Aaj kuch kaam tha usse. Jiske chalte wo aaj college nahi aayi thi.

Uske baare me soch Ajay ne apni seat par baithe apna phone nikaala aur wo Pragya ko call karne hi wala tha ki tabhi uske phone pe ek unknown number se message aaya,

'Aaj bore ho rahe ho na?'

Message padh Ajay soch me pad gaya. Ye bhala unknown number se uske phone pe message kaha se aa gaya? Aur bhala aisa message kyu aaya usse? Kahi wrong number pe toh message nahi bhej diya sender ne?

Usne confused hote hue reply bheja,

'Kaun??'

Aur agle hi pal usse firse message aaya,

'Oh hooo!! Tumne really mujhse ye sawaal kiya? You deserve a punishment.'

Message padh bhale hi Ajay confused tha par iss unknown sender se baatein karte hue jese ab usse interest sa aane laga tha.

Usne firse ek message bheja...

'Mein nahi jaanta aap kaun ho. Shaayad wrong number lag gaya hai aapka. Apna naam bataaiye!'

Usne aisa likhte hue message bheja par kuch derr tak koi reply na aaya aur wo lagataar apni mobile ki screen par teacher se bach bach ke dekhta jaa raha tha.

Kuch minute ke baad hi usse reply aaya,

'Mujhse puch rahe ho kaun hu mein? Beta itna maarungi na...'

Aur usse padhte hi pata nahi kyu par Ajay ke chehre par ek muskaan aa gayi. Ab usse itna toh pata chal gaya tha ki ye jo bhi hai ek ladki hai.

Usne fatafat ek message type kiya aur bhej diya,

Ajay : Accha chalo nahi puchta. Par ab ye toh bata do ki mujhe message kyu kiya hai?

Unknown : Accha bacchu? Upar padho na kya likh ke bheji thi mein.

Ajay ne sabse pehla message padha jisme likha tha,
'Aaj bore ho rahe ho na?'

Aur usse padhne ke baad usne reply diya,

Ajay : Haa! Padha mene. Aur aapko kese pata mein bore ho raha hu?

Unknown : Obviously I know... Tumhari rag rag se waaqif hu mein.

Ek baar fir Ajay message padh bada hi confuse ho gaya. Akhir kaun thi ye bandi jo usse aise messages bhej rahi thi?

Kaun thi aisi wo ladki jo uski rag rag se waaqif thi?

Usne sochne ka prayaas kiya ki akhir kaun ho sakti hai ye ladki par itna sochne ke baad bhi usse koi jawaab na mila.

Bas ek hi jan tha jo uski rag rag se waaqif tha college me aur wo ladki thi Pragya.

Pragya ke baare me sochte hi uske dimaag me ek ghanti sii baji. Pragya hi toh ek ladki thi jo uski bestt friend thi ekdum.

Wahi toh usse bakhubi jaanti thi. Aur wahi toh aise baat karti thi uss se?

Jese hi Ajay ne upar ke saare messages padhe, usse 70% lagne laga ki ye bandi Pragya hi thi.

Par uske paas Pragya ka number toh pehle se hi tha fir woh bhala unknown number se usse message kyu bhejegi?

Aur yahi soch usne ek aur message bheja...

Ajay : Tum Pragya? Tell me! I know mene sahi kaha hai. Ab jhooth mat bolna...

Unknown : Arre yaar! Sahi me... I thought ki thoda toh maze lu tumhaare. Itni jaldi guess karne ki kya zaroorat thi paagal.

Aur agle hi pal Ajay ke chehre pe muskaan aa gayi.
Uski muskaan alag hi baya kar rahi thi ki wo poori tarah se iss shaks ko pehchaan gaya hai.

Ajay : Ye unknown number se message kyu kar rahi ho?

Pragya : Arre yaar... Mene tumhe kya bataya tha kal?

Ajay : Yahi ki tumhe kal chacha ke ghar jaana hai?

Pragya : Haa! Toh wahi hu. Wo chacha aaj new SIM laaye the toh mene socha kyu na tumhaare saath masti ki jaaye new SIM se haha~

Ajay : Tu bhi na yaar!

Pragya : Mujhe pata tha tum bore ho rahe hoge. Mein toh gayi nahi aaj. Tumhaare wai do chaar friends tumhe paka rahe honge aur tum mujhe miss kar rahe hoge.

Ajay : Ye baat toh hai. Miss toh bada kar raha hu tumhe. Aur ye baat tum bhi jaanti hi ho ☺

Pragya : Flirt kar rahe ho? Paagal kahi ke...

Ajay : Haha~ Tumhara plan fail ho gaya but...

Pragya : I know!!! Tum aur tumhari aadat... Accha suno...

Ajay : ??

Pragya : Uss din mene tumse uss ladke ke baare me baat ki thi na?

Ajay : Kaun?

Pragya : Arre paagal jisse tum maarne waale the...

Ajay : Ohh! Hahaha~ Wo chuza? Uske baare me kya?

Pragya : Wo mere paas aaya tha.

Ajay : What?

Pragya : Yes! Aur wai baatein tumse karni hai aur ek aur surprise hai tumhare liye.

Ajay : Surprise? Surprise chorro aur uss chutiye ki himmat kese hui tumhaare paas aane ki?

Pragya : What the hell? Usse kya appointment lena padega mere paas aane ke liye? He just came...

Ajay : But kyuuuu?????

Pragya : Tumse related hi baat thi...

Ajay : Kyaaa??

Pragya : Wo baad me bataungi na... Abhi suno! Iss number pe call mat karna okay? Ye chacha ka number hai.

Ajay : Okay! But... Bataogi kab?

Pragya : Kaha na! Surprise bhi dena hai. Jab mein khud iss number se message karungi bas padhte jaana aur bilkul wesa hi karna okay? No sawaal! Warna punishment milegi.

Ajay : Accha jii! Jesa aap kahogi bilkul wesa hi hoga.

Pragya : Good! Shaam me baat karti hu. Abhi chacha ko phone chaahiye hai. Tab tak college bhi chooth jaega.

Aur itna bol Pragya ne dubaara koi message na bheja.

Ajay muskuraate hue college ke lectures toh kahi apne dosto ke saath bakchodi me vyast ho gaya.

Aaj bhale hi Pragya nahi aayi thi college par uske saath yu iss tarah se baatein kar ke wo khushi se fula nahi sama raha tha.

Aaj ye pehli baar tha jab Pragya ne aisa kuch uske saath kiya tha. Aaj toh wo jese saatve aasmaan par tha.

Aaj uska dil garden garden ho chala tha. Aur bas andar ek hi gaane ki panktiyaa goonj rahi thi,

Udta hi firu... Inn hawaaon me kahi...
Ya mein jhool jau... Inn ghataaon me kahi...

Pehla nasha... Pehla khumaar...
Naya pyaar hai... Naya intezaar...

Ajay yu panktiyo ko gungunaate hue apne pantaro ke sarr par tapli bhi maar raha tha, mazaakiya dhang me. Wo jese bilkul kho sa gaya tha aaj.

College ka departure ho chuka tha aur wo parking me se apni bike nikaal raha tha. Shuru se ant tak uske chehre par muskaan thi. Yaha tak ki aaj uske dost bhi usse 'Pyaar me paagal ho gaya hai' keh keh ke usse cherr rahe the aur na chaahte hue bhi Ajay bas sharm ke maare sharmaata jaa raha tha.

Na jaane kya hi surprise plan kiya hua tha uski Pragya ne. Usse sochte sochte wo Bike parking se baahar laaya aur side me gaadi rokte hue usne ek baar apna phone check kiya kyuki ek pal ke liye wo vibrate hua tha.

Aur screen par notification dekhte hi uske chehre par firse ek muskaan aa gayi.

Pragya ka message aaya hua tha...

Pragya : Oye! Suno! Ab surprise ki baat karle? Haa toh wo xxxxxxxx chauraahe par gift shop dekhi hai na? Kaafi famous hai yaar wo toh... Ab naa mat keh dena.

Message padhte hi na chaahte hue bhi Ajay ki hassi chooth gayi. Apne sarr ke peeche par baalo me haath ferrte hue usne bike me baithe baithe hi reply kiya,

Ajay : Jii! Teacher jii! Jii! Mujhe pata hai.

Pragya : Thank god! Okay! Ab jao waha pe...

Ajay : Waha pe? But kyu?

Pragya : Kaha na jao! Mene kaha tha na baba... No sawaal and all...

Ajay : Jii! Jii! Jo hukum aapka devi!!

Aur muskuraate hue Ajay apne khyaalo me doobe gaane gaate hue bike se chal diya Pragya ki bataayi hui destination ki orr.

Sawaal toh kayi saare the uske mann me par ab usse bhi jese ye khel khelne me maza sa aane laga tha. Aur toh aur wo kaafi excited bhi tha ye surprise leke...

Kuch hi minute baad wo pohuch chuka tha uss gift shop par jo Pragya ne bataayi thi.

Tabhi uska phone firse vibrate hua...

Pragya : Pohuch gaye???

Ajay : Yes!!! Agla hukum dijiye devi jii!

Pragya : Hmm! Ab agla hukum hai ki... Buy a rose flower from there...

Ye padhte hi Ajay ke dil ki dhadkane tezz ho gayi...

Ajay (mann me) : Kya wo mujhe...!?

Usne puchna chaaha ki ye kisliye par dusri side se bas ek hi jawaab aaya~
'Jesa bol rahi hu wesa karo'

Aur bas! Fir kya tha. Fir toh jesa jesa Pragya ne bola Ajay ne theek wesa hi kiya.

Ek pyaara sa rose ka phool lete hue wo baahar aaya aur uske Pragya ko message bheja ki usne flower le liya hai.

Aur agle hi pal usse ek aur message aaya,

Pragya : Le liya na... Ab jao xxxxxxxx shop pe. Waha se xxxxxx chocolate khareedo.

Aur Pragya ka agla hukum paake Ajay chal diya dusri dukaan ki orr. Par jese jese kaam Pragya uss se karwa rahi thi, wese wese hi uski dil ki dhadkane badhti jaa rahi thi.

Kahi ye wahi pal toh nahi tha? Jiska usse besabri se intezaar tha? Kahi Pragya uske proposal ko accept toh nahi karne waali thi? Kahi isliye toh nahi wo uss se ye sab karwa rahi thi? Kya wo firse chaahti thi ki Ajay usse propose kare aur iss baar wo uska proposal accept kaare?

Na jaane kitne sawaalo se Ajay ka dimaag ghira hua tha par inn sab ka jawaab toh keval Pragya hi de sakti thi.

Dusri dukaan me pohuch kar, Ajay ne bataayi gayi chocolate khareedi aur itna khareedte hi usse ek aur message aa gaya,

Pragya : Ab xxxxxxxx toy shop jao aur waha se ek pink teddy khareedo...

Uski baat padh ab toh jese Ajay ko poora confirm sa ho gaya tha ki jo wo soch raha tha shayad wahi hone waala tha aur ye sochte hi uski khushi ka koi thikaana nahi tha.

Teesri dukaan jaake usne waha se nirdesh anusaar ek pink teddy liya aur sab kuch leke wo apni bike pe sawaar ho gaya.

Pragya : Le liya na?

Ajay : Ab aur kitna samaan kharidwaogi yaar? Teeno dukaane itni dur dur thi. But tumhaare liye inn duriyo ki parvaah nahi kii mene...

Pragya : Aww! So sweet! Ab suno... Forun hi mujhe college ki peeche waali road par milo. I have a surprise for you... Mein idhar hi hu...

Ajay : What? Tum waha? But waha kyu milna hai? Paagal! Tumhaare gifts ke chakkar me 6:30 baj gaya. Aur tum waha kya kar rahi ho? Wo road safe nahi Pragya!

Pragya : Itni hi parvaah hai meri toh fir aao na jaldi.

Ajay : Fine! Mein aata hu!

Message bhej Ajay tezz raftaar me apni bike bhagaate hue college ke peeche ki sadak par jaane laga. Excitement toh koot koot kar bharta jaa raha tha usme...

Aur kuch hi samay baad wo saara samaan leke waha pohucha toh fir se usse ek message aaya,

Pragya : Wo board laga hai na... Direction waala. Uske paas aao.

Aur message padh Ajay thoda aage lage uss board ke paas pohuch gaya. Usne gaadi roki aur wo bike se utra. Samaan ki thaili uski bike ke handle par hi tangi hui thi.

Tabhi ek baar fir uska mobile vibrate hua aur usne message padha,

Pragya : You see the tree? Tumhaare left waala? I'm just behind it.

Aur itna bol Pragya ne fir koi message na bheja.

Apne dil ki tezz dhadkane liye Ajay uss ped ki taraf badhne laga. Aur agle hi pal uski aankho me ek chamak aa gayi...

Usse ped ke peeche se...

Ek pink colour ki chunri ka hissa hawa me lehraata hua dikhaayi diya. Bhale hi shaam ke 6:45 baj rahe the par iske bawajood itna sab kuch araam se dekha jaa sakta tha.

Halka halka andhera bas chhaaya hua tha. Ek aasha liye wo aage badha...

Aur usne ped ke bagal se apna sar aage badhaate hue ped ke peeche dekhne ka prayaas kiya...

Ki tabhi...

"Surprise motherfucka..."

*POW*

Ek tezz zorrdaar ghusaa uske jabde pe kisi train ki raftaar jitni tezzi me aate hue pada aur agle hi pal wo thoda uchakte hue peeche ki orr road par dhadaam se jaa gira.

Kuch seconds tak toh usse kuch samajh hi naa aaya. Fir jese usse bhayaanak dard utha apne jabde me aur gaal pe...

Aur fir usne aankhein khol upar nazre karte hue dekha toh pehle toh sahi se nazar na aaya. Taare jo chhaa gaye the aankho ke saamne wo zordaar ghusaa khaane ke baad.

Jab finally usse sahi se nazar aaya toh usne dekha ki ek jaana pehchaana chehra uske saamne khada hua tha.

Ye koi aur nahi Veer hi tha.

Uske gale me ek pink colour ki chunri kisi muffler ki tarah bandhi hui thi.

Jese hi Ajay ne Veer ko dekha uska gussa saatve aasmaan par pohuch gaya. Wo utha...

Ajay : Chuze tu? Teri ye majaal?

Aur gurraaaya...

Par koi fayda nahi...

*POW*

Ek laat theek uske seene par aakar padi jisse khaate hi wo hawa me uchal peeche ki orr jaa gira.

Dard me karaahte hue Ajay jese tese khada hua par iss baar toh jese laat aur ghuso ki jhadi lag chuki thi...

Ajay ne hamlo ko counter toh kiya par koi fayda nahi...

*POW*

"Ye ghusa... Meri pitwaayi karwaane ke liye."

*POW*

"Ye laat... Meri beizzati karne ke liye."

*POW*

"Ye ghusa... Mera mazaak banaane ke liye."

Veer ke harr prahaar par uski awaaz tezz hoti jaa rahi thi. Gussa uski awaaz me saaf jhalak raha tha.

Aur harr ek vaar uska poori taaqat se bharpoor tha.

Ajay ki haalat pitate pitate battar hoti jaa rahi thi.

Aur agle hi pal wo zameen par gir pada.

Tabhi uske girte hi...

Veer ne apna perr uthaaya aur uske sarr par zorr se dabaav banaate hue rakha,

"Aaaaaaarrrrrggghhhhhhh!!!"

Ek tezz karaah Ajay ke muh se nikli.

Joota uske sarr par tikaaye hue Veer bola,

"Aulelelele bacche ko dard ho raha hai? Ruko abhi dard dur kar deta hu."

Ye wahi bol the jab Ajay ne theek issi tarah issi jagah par issi waqt Veer ke sarr par aise laat rakh ke bole the. Aur aaj wo khud Veer ke apne jooto ke neeche tha.

Abhi dard se Ajay cheenkh hi raha tha ki tabhi uske muh me kuch zabardasti thoos diya gaya...

Aur jese agle hi pal usse andaaza lag gaya ki wo kya cheez thi...

Ek lollipop!!!!

Veer : Tujhe pata hai mein ye lollipop leke kyu ghumta hu hamesha? Taaki tujh jese bacche jab udham karne lagte hai na toh unki aqal thikaane laga saku.

Ye wahi bol the...

Ajay ke khud ke bol...

Jinhe Veer ne apne zehan me ab tak baithaaye hue the theek issi waqt par unhe chukaane ke liye.

Aur agle hi pal na chaahte hue bhi, dard ke maare aur apni iss haalat ki anbhooti hone ke chalte, Ajay ke aasu nikalne lage.

*Thuuu*

Aur fir achaanak hi uske upar Veer ka thook gira.

Aise hi usne Veer ke upar thooka tha.

Ye toh badla tha.

Veer ka badla.

Shayad ab usse samajh aa raha tha ki kabhi maar khaate hue kaisa lagta hai.

"K... Kese!?"

Ajay ne Veer ke perr pakad apni adhkhuli ankhoo se usse dekha. Uske honth kaanp rahe the...

Veer : Kese? It was me all along you Idiot! Wo Pragya nahi... Mein hi tha. I made you a fool...

Ajay ko iss baat ka bodh hote hi aur gussa aane laga. Kitna galat tha woh.

Itna bewakoof koi akhir kese bann sakta tha?

Par wo bana tha...

Aur wo bhi Veer ke haatho, jo uski nazro me bas ek chuza tha.

*POW*

Aur achaanak hi Veer ne kuch aur hamle kiye, jiske chalte Ajay poori tarah behosh ho gaya.

Usse ghaseet kar Veer uski bike ke paas laaya aur uski bike bhi giraate hue wahi uske qareeb daal dii. Taaki logo ko lage ki wo bhidne ke chalte behosh ho gaya.

Veer ne saara samaan uski bike se uthaaya aur jaate jaate usne ek akhiri baar behosh huye Ajay par daali...

"I promised someone... Ki ab se yadi jiyunga toh ek Raja ki tarah... Aur yadi marunga bhi... Toh bhi ek Raja ki hi tarah..."

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Dheemi awaaz me wo khud se itna bol waha se chal diya...
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!

Akhir Apna lunda Rocky ban gya

 

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Update - 71 ~ Realization!
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Ab tak...

Dono ke honth aapas me jude hue the. Arohi toh keval uske gaal ko chumna chaahti thi. Par utne me hi Veer palat gaya tha... Aur nateeja...

Arohi : Aaahhh!

Wo hadbada ke peeche hati aur bina Veer ko dekhe hi bhaag gayi.

Veer bechaara bas apni thodi kaapti hui ungli se apne honth par firaata reh gaya aur mann me bas yahi kehta raha...

'It... It was an accident!'

Ab aage...

Kal ki raat toh kya hi raat thi. Veer na keval kayi saare bade logo se apni pehchaan kar paaya tha balki usne Pranjal ko bhi ek muh tod jawaab diya tha.

Ragini ne toh pehle hi Pranjal ke saare raaz khol diye the Veer ke saamne. Ki kese Pranjal ne Veer ko ghar se baahar nikalwaaya tha. Aur kese woh uske khilaaf shadyantra rachta tha.

Aise kapti insaan ki kal Veer ne acche se waat lagaayi thi. Poore banquet me fir Pranjal nazar nahi aaya tha. Na jaane kitni derr tak washroom me wo dhun bana raha tha. Wo kehte hai na, jaisi karni, wesi bharni. Pranjal jis galat uddeshya se Veer ka mazaak banaane aaya tha, Veer ne uska hi mazaak bana ke rakh diya tha.

Ghar aake jab Veer ne saari baat Ragini ko bataayi toh Ragini bhi uske sang hassi ke thahaake lagaane lagi.

Veer ab pehle jesa Veer nahi tha. Dada jii ki 40% jaydaat milne ke baad ab uske under itna kuch tha ki wo iss jaydaat se boht kuch kar sakta tha. Karodo ka maalik tha ab woh.

Wo isliye, kyuki jaydaat me keval zameen hi nahi thi. Manorath ke paas jitne bhi makaan, flats, dukaane, transport ke saadhan, athwa jaha jaha Manorath ne invest kiya tha. Unn sab ka hissa hua tha. Aur wo hissa inhe sab me tha.

Veer ke paas iss waqt dherr saari zameen toh thi hi, saath hi saath uske paas 2 flats bhi the ab. 1 dukaan, 2 cars, aur kaafi saara cash bhi uske account me aa chuka tha.

Dukaan toh pehle se hi rent par dali hui thi toh filhaal Veer usse wese hi rehne dene waala tha. Rahi baat cars ki toh wo bhi koi na koi aake ghar par chorr ke jaane waala tha. Uski tension nahi thi.

Aur 2 flats jo the, inke baare me kuch kiya jaa sakta tha. Original plan Veer ka yahi tha ki wo Suman samet dusre flat me shift ho jaaye. Par Ragini bhala aisa kaha hone dene waali thi? Woh toh Veer aur baaki sab ko kahi bhi nahi jaane de sakti thi. Itna lagaav jo ho gaya tha inn sab se usko.

Abhi wo apne room me laita hi hua tha jab achanak hi...

*Ping*

Uska phone baj utha. Koi notification aaya tha.

'Huh?'

Phone check karte hi usne dekha ki Kavya ki college friend Kritika ka message tha insta par. Wahi, jo kal uski Insta ID maang kar le gayi thi.

Chat kholte hi Veer ko message dikhaayi diya.

Kritika : Hello bhaiya!

Toh Veer ne bhi forun type karte hi message bhej diya.

Veer : Hello!

Kritika : Kaise ho aap?

Veer : I'm good! Tum batao!? Need any help?

Kritika : No bhaiya! Mein toh bas aise hi...

Veer : Okay!

Kritika : Wese! Kya aapne padh liya?

Veer : Padh liya? Kya padh liya?

Kritika : Huh? Kal se seniors ke exams hai na!?

Veer : Ehh!?

Message padhte hi, Veer jo shaanti se araam farma raha tha wo ek jhatke me bistar se koodate hue uth ke baith gaya.

'Fuccckkkkkkk! Kal se exam!? Shit! Arohi dii ne toh bataaya tha kaafi din pehle. Mere dimaag se hi nikal gaya.'

Veer : Okay! Kal kis ka paper hai!?

Kritika : Eh!? Bhaiya!? Kya aapko apna time table nahi pata? Kal shayad Maths hai aapka.

'Ohhhh Fuckkkkkk!!!'

[Haha~]

Maths naam sunte hi Veer ke mann me do khayaal aaye. Pehla, ki usne inn beete dino ghanta kuch padha tha. Padha toh dur, woh toh apne college ki shaqal hi bhul gaya tha. Aur dusra...

Nidhi ma'am! Jo maths ki teacher thi. Aur iss saal uski class teacher bhi. Lag gayi waat.

Khatre ki ghanti baj rahi thi jese uske mann me.

Veer : Okay thanks! Goodbye!

Aur Veer ne itna type kar ke bhejte hue insta band kar diya.

Apne ghar ke bistar par laiti Kritika ne jese hi ye dekha toh wo hairat me reh gayi. Kuch derr pehle hi wo itna khush thi ki Veer bhaiya ne usse forun hi reply de diya. Aur ab...!? Ye toh khade lund pe laat maarne jesa tha.

Kritika : Wha-!? Veer bhaiyaaaa!? Heinnnnnn!????

Par uska jawaab dekhe bagerr hi, Veer off line ho chuka tha. Usne decide kar liya tha. Ki aaj wo poora time padhega. Yadi uske marks kam aaye, toh Nidhi ma'am pakke se aur naraaz ho jaengi.

Apni book shelf se maths book nikaalte hue wo forun hi prashn lagaane laga. Intelligence uski already 95 par thi toh questions ke hal usse yu chutkiyo me samajh aa rahe the.

Par ye intelligence usse paper me bina padhe acche marks nahi dilwa sakti thi. Kam se kam questions ke way of solving aur formulaes ko toh dekhna hi hoga taaki exam me speed barkaraar rahe aur questions bhi asaani se solve ho jaaye.

Toh bas, Veer kitaab utha ke lag chuka tha padhaayi me.

Thanks to Suman, jo uska room harr rozz saaf karti thi. Uss wajah se uske book shelf me zara bhi dhool nahi thi. Warna uski book me ab tak makdi ke jaale lag jaane the, itne mahino se jo nahi khuli hui thi.

Ragini jo Veer ke room me usse dekhne aayi thi, usse padhta dekh thoda chaunk gayi, fir muskuraayi aur baahar nikal gayi.

Jab wo kuch derr baad lauti toh uske haath me ek doodh ka glaas tha.

Tray lete hue wo Veer ke bagal se baith gayi. Aur usse hi nihaar rahi thi. Wo sach kehte hai ki ek aadmi jab focused hota hai ya kisi kaam me leen hota hai toh uss waqt wo sabse zyada attractive lagta hai. Ragini ko bhi iss samay Veer boht zyaada attractive lag raha tha. Upar se uske 75 appearance ke points.

Ragini (smiles) : Veer! Ye lo! Doodh!

Veer : Hmm? Kya bhabhi!? Baccha thodi hu ab.

Ragini : Toh kya bacche hi bas doodh peete hai!?

Veer : Aur nahi toh kya... Huh????

Veer jo sarr jhukaaye jawaab deta jaa raha tha, achanak se usse jese Ragini ke bol ka matlab samajh aaya. Bacche hi doodh peete hai? Bade bhi toh peete hai. Par bade log wo doodh... Seedha jadd se peete hai. In other words... Ahem!

Ragini bechaari toh aise hi bol dii thi. Par agle hi pal jab Veer ne hairat me usse dekha toh jese usse bhi apni kahi gayi baat ka double meaning samajh me aaya. Aur agle hi pal uske gaal gulaabi ho gaye.

Ragini : M-Mera matlab tha. Tumhaare exams hai na Veer? Toh tum... *blushes* Roz doodh pee ke jaoge.

Veer (blushes) : O-Okay!

Fatafat doodh khatam karne ke baad, Veer ek baar fir lag chuka tha apni padhaayi me jab usse suddenly apne nichle honth par Ragini ka haath mehsoos hua.

'!???'

Uske nichle honth par doodh ki abhi bhi kuch boonde saji hui thi. Toh Ragini apne anguthe se usse saaf kar rahi thi. Aur dono ki hi nazre aapas me jese hi mili...

*Silence*

Maano pal bhar ke liye waqt sa tham gaya.

Veer : Bh-Bhabhi!?

Ragini : ....

Ragini ke haath abhi bhi uske honth par the. Sehla rahe the unhe. Aur na chaahte hue bhi apni Bhabhi ke haatho hi Veer ka hathiyaar tight hone laga tha.

Ragini ne jese hi Veer ke pant ke uthate ubhaar ko notice kiya wo thoda jhep gayi.

"Ahh!" Achanak se wo peeche hati aur tezz kadmo ke saath baahar nikal bhaag gayi.

'Damn itttt!!!!'

Veer bas khud ko kosta reh gaya. Ye lund bhi saala galat time pe khada hota tha. Ab na jaane Ragini uske baare me kya soch rahi hogi!?

Usse jaan'ne ka ek hi tareeqa tha.

'Pari!!!!'

[Hmm?]

'Bhabhi ki favourability show karo.'

*Ding*

[Ragini's favourability : 78]

'What the!?? Favourability badh gayi!?? How!????'

Abhi bhi aurto ko samajhne me Veer ka ek lamba raasta tha. Aaj ke iss din fir Veer ne aur kuch na kiya. Raat ko bas Suman ki gaand peli aur Aabha ki choot me wo do baar jhara. Kal exam me usse kisi bhi prakaar ka frustration nahi chaahiye tha.

***

Next day...

Subah subah hi Ragini Veer ki dress me uski tie sahi karne me lagi hui thi. Aur Veer bas sharmaate hue side muh karke khada hua tha.

'Kya Vivek bhaiya ke saath bhi bhabhi pehle aise hi...!?'

[Of course!]

Aaj Veer ko samajh aa raha tha ki ek pyaar karne waali ka hona kitna accha hota tha jeevan me. Kal na keval Ragini usse doodh dene aayi thi balki aaj uski tie bhi sahi kar rahi thi. Bilkul wese hi jese ek patni pati ki tie adjust karti hai uske duty jaate time. Veer ko ek pati patni waali feeling aa rahi thi. Ek behad hi acchi feeling jisse wo apnaana chaahta tha.

Isme bas yadi kisi cheez ki kami thi toh woh thi...

Ek kiss ki...

Veer ne muskuraate hue unn thoughts ko apne mann se baahar nikaala aur wo mudne ke liye abhi hua hi tha jab...

Ragini ne achanak se uski chin pakdi aur...

*Chu~*

"Huhhhhh!!!!?"

Veer hakka bakka hoke Ragini ko ghur raha tha. Abhi abhi jis kiss ke baare me soch raha tha. Wo kiss usse mil chuki thi. Bhale hi ye kiss gaal par thi par...

Uski apni Bhabhi ne dii thi. Wo bhi sabke saamne.

Dur khadi Suman bhi apni aankho me chamak liye iss drishya ko dekh rahi thi.

Ragini (blushes) : G-Good luck!

Veer (blushes) : Thank... you!!!

Aur Veer waha se fatafat nikal liya. Aaj subah subah hi uske dil ki dhadkan badh chuki thi.

College aate hi usne apni Apache park kii aur chal diya college ke main entrance ki orr.

Kyuki list toh wahi lagi hogi. Kaun kaha baithega ye pata karna zaroori tha.

Apna roll no. dhundne ke baad Veer list me likhe gaye room no. me gaya.

Aur darwaaze ki dehleez par pohuchte hi jese hi usne kaha, "May I come in... Huh!??"

Andar ek jaana maana shaks maujood tha. Koi aur nahi...

Nidhi!!!

Nidhi khud Veer ko stabdh nigaaho se ghur rahi thi. Ek pal ke liye dono ek dusre ko dekhne ke baad jese jamm se gaye.

Nidhi toh aur zyaada shock me thi. Sabse pehla shock toh ye ki... Veer test dene aaya tha. Veer ne uski baat ka maan rakha. Aur dusra shock...

Wo tha uska appearance... Pehle se boht zyaada handsome tha ab woh.

'He... He came!!!!!' Apne mann me sochte hue Nidhi ne haa me gardan hila dii.

Aaj Nidhi ek navy blue colour ki saree me thi.




Aur usme wo itni khubsoorat lag rahi thi ki chaah kar bhi Veer apni aankhein hata nahi paa raha tha.

Apni seat par aane ke baad baithate hi Veer ne mann ko shaant kiya. Room me do invigilators hote the. Toh uske room me ek Nidhi ma'am thi. Aur dusri Nidhi ma'am ki hi ek junior professor thi jiska naam tha Ayushi. Ye dono hi class ki aaj ki invigilator thi.

*Tringggggg*

Ghanti baji aur paper start hua.

Veer fatafat questions ko solve kar solution likhta jaa raha tha.

Nidhi jo saamne khadi thi wo badi hi bechaini me usse dekh rahi thi.

'Kya isne padhayi kari!? Likh toh raha hai woh... Kahi sab galat salat toh nahi solve kar diya!? Yadi sab galat kar raha hoga toh...!? He will fail... Nahi!!'

Nidhi itna bechain thi ki wo apne mann ki baatein shaant hi na kar paayi. Aur akhir wo apni bechaini ke aage haar gayi.

Wo dheere se Veer ki row ki taraf aage badhi, ye dekhne ki Veer sahi kar bhi raha hai ya nahi?

Wo harr baar aage jaati toh fir peeche se nikalti, aur Veer ki answer sheet par nazar maarte hue solution dekhne ki koshish karti. Par chand second me wo kuch bhi theek se dekh nahi paa rahi thi.

'Oh no....!'

Fir jese uska dimaag chala aur wo answer sheet me sign karne lagi baari baari.

Iske zariye ab wo Veer ki answer sheet dekh sakti thi. Jese hi wo Veer ke paas aayi. Veer ne answer sheet seedhi kar front page khol ke de dii. Taaki Nidhi ko asaani jaaye aur fatafat wo sign kar de.

Par idhar usse kya pata tha ki uski ye harqat Nidhi ke dimaag ko aur bhi thanka degi.

'This... This stupid brat... This idiot... He... Arrghhh!! Veeeeerrrrrr!!!!' wo mann me hi chillaayi. Pehli baar wo itna irritate ho rahi thi Veer ko lekar.

Fir bhi himmat kar Nidhi ne uske saare panne check kiye.

Veer : M-Ma'am!??

Nidhi : Ahem... P-Paper easy hai na?

Veer : Well, easy toh nahi hai. Moderate hai. Na zyaada easy, na zyaada tough.

Nidhi : O-Okay!

Nidhi dekh paa rahi thi ki shuru ke kuch steps toh sahi kiye the Veer ne. Par wo poora nahi check kar paa rahi thi. Kyuki...

"Ye lijiye ma'am!" Veer ke bagal waala jo dusri branch ka tha, usne apni sheet sign karwaane aage kar dii thi.

Aur iss baar Nidhi ne pyaari sii muskaan dete hue uss ladke ki sheet ko sign kiya. Jo shayad muskaan toh kahi se bhi nahi thi. Aisa lag raha tha ki kisi witch ko ek aam insaan ne gaali bak dii ho aur witch bas muskura rahi hai.

'Ek minute ruk jaata toh kya ukhad jaata iss ladke ka? I couldn't even...'

Majbooran Nidhi ko waha se aage badhna pada.

Veer : Uhmm... Ma'am!?

Nidhi : H-Huh!?? K-Kyaa?

Nidhi ne dekha ki Veer apni mutthi kasse uski orr kiya hua tha.

'Huh!?'

Fir jese uski samajh aaya ki Veer kya kehna chaah raha tha. Wo fist bump karna chaah raha tha.

'This... This idiot!!!! Isse... Isse fist bump ki padi hai...!??? Exam time me!?'

Nidhi ka gussa badhta hi jaa raha tha. Fir bhi, dusro ki nazro se chhupke usne Veer ki fist par apni fist halke se maari...

Aur uske aisa karte hi Veer ne apni mutthi khol dii.

Uske haath me ek candy thi.

Nidhi : ????

Veer (smiles) : For you!!!

*Badump*

Nidhi jo mann hi mann Veer ko kos rahi thi. Ek baar me hi jese uska saara gussa chhumantar ho gaya.
Dil zorr se dhadka. Veer ke chehre ki muskaan dekh wo jese kho gayi usme.

Upar se wo jab se Veer ko daant laga rahi thi mann me par Veer ke ek gesture ne usse shaant kar diya.

Aur agle hi pal, uske gaal surkh laal padne lage.

Bade hi haule se usne Veer ki hatheli se wo chocolate lii aur firse banaavti gussa karte hue mann hi mann Veer ko koste hue aage badh gayi.

'This... Stupid! He's and Idiot! Waqt ki koi parvaah hi nahi hai. Bhari class me... He dared to... Ma'am ko chocolate deni hai. Mujhe chocolate dene se exam me solutions ban jaenge kya!? Haan? Kya soch ke dii usne mujhe ye? Ki ma'am uski fir madad kar dengi exam me? I won't help him. Pata chalne do zara usse bhi. He'll come to know ki bina padhe kuch bhi haasil nahi hota... Idiot!!! Chocolate deni hai...'

Banaavti gussa kar toh rahi thi Nidhi. Par...

Par uska dil andar se boht khush tha. Wo isliye kyuki,

*Ding*

[Nidhi's favourability : 59]

***

Samay jab boht hi kam bacha hua tha toh Veer ne raftaar badhaayi. Nidhi waapas se bechain hone lagi thi. Bhale hi ye final nahi the. Par ye koi assignment test bhi nahi tha. Inke marks count hone the. Ek prakaar se ye term 1 the.

*Triiiiingggggggg*

Ghanti baji aur Nidhi aur Ayushi sabhi se unke papers lene lagi.

Veer ka paper lete hue Nidhi ne ek nazar uss par daali toh dekha Veer apni battissi dikhaate hue usse hi dekh raha tha.

'Idiot!!!!'

Uska irritation aur badh gaya.

'Yadi Veer ke marks kam aaye... Then... I'll...'

Paper lete hue usne Veer ko dekhte hue bola, "Meet me in my cabin after this."

Aur wo aage badh gayi.

'Huh!? Ab ye ma'am ko kya ho gaya?'

[She will lecture you! Be prepared!]

'Hmm'

Paper ke baad, Veer jab class se baahar nikal raha tha toh uske bag me rakha phone baj utha.

Phone uthaate hi,

"Mein taiyaar hu! Tumhari madad karne ke liye."

Ye awaaz thi Balhaar ki. Aur uska response sunte hi Veer ke hontho par muskaan aa chuki thi. Of course! Veer toh pehle se hi jaanta tha ki Balhaar ghum firke ant me ussi ke paas aaega. Aur wahi hua.

Veer : Hmm! Theek hai! Toh fir lag jao kaam par. Dhyaan rahe! Kisi ko bhi pata na chale. Aur mujhse shaanipanti karne ki zaroorat nahi. Kyuki mujhe forun hi pata lag jaega. Kaam sahi hoga toh tumhaara haath bgi sahi hoga.

Balhaar : M-Mein samajh gaya. Tum uski tension mat lo. Mujhe Slogan ki jo bhi information pata lagegi, mein wo bhej dunga.

Veer : Hmm! Good! Phone tracking ka dhyaan rakhna. Slogan tezz hai. Kahi tumhaare peeche aadmi na laga ke rakha ho.

Balhaar : Nahi nahi! Tension mat lo. Mein phone ka boht dhyaan rakhunga. Aur rahi baat aadmi ki toh... Slogan humse directly baat nahi karta. Wo bas Steve ko kehta hai. Aur Steve hum sabko order deta hai. Aur fir hum apne aadmiyo ko lekar kaam karte hai uske liye.

Veer : Ohhhh! I see! Anyways! Tum jese hi khabar mile mujhe bhej dena.

Balhaar : Th-Theek hai. Wo... Mera haath!?

Veer (smiles) : Kaam hote hi tumhara haath bhi sahi kar dunga. Aur yadi Slogan ko mene hunt kiya... Toh fir uska poora area tumhara. Uski satta tumhari. Par dhyaan rahe... Tum mere andar me hi kaam karoge tab bhi...

Balhaar : Yadi... Yadi tumne jo kaha wo sach hota hai toh... Toh mujhe koi aapatti nahi.

Veer (smiles) : Good then! Khabar ka intezaar rahega mujhe....

*Call ends*

Veer ne call cut kiya aur saamne ki orr chal diya. Jaha Nidhi ma'am ka cabin tha.

***

*Bang*

Nidhi ne apni table par dono haath patakte hue Veer ko dekha.

"Veer kya hai ye sab!? How can you be so carefree? Bhari class me mujhe chocolate de rahe ho? Tum uss waqt mujhse koi hint bhi maang sakte the. I could have told you. Thodi boht hint sabhi teachers de dete hai. Mujhe toh pata bhi nahi tumne solutions sahi kiye hai ya nahi? Yadi tum fail hue toh kya jawaab dungi mein tumhari Bhabhi ko? Arre mein khud ko kya jawaab dungi? Why don't you listen...!?"

Wo bolti jaa rahi thi lekin...

Lekin Veer sharmaate hue apna chehra side kiye hue tha.

Nidhi : Huh??

Nidhi ne jese hi fir neeche dekha toh uske khud ke gaal gulaabi ho gaye. Table par jhukne se uski saree ka pallu neeche gir chuka tha. Aur uska aadhe se zyaada cleavage uss neele blouse ke baahar nazar aa raha tha.

Chuudiyo ki khan-khan hui toh Veer samajh gaya ki Nidhi ma'am apna pallu sahi kar rahi hai. Aur khan-khan ke khatam ho jaane ke baad waapas se Veer ne apna chehra saamne kar liya.

Veer : Mene paper acche se hi diya hai ma'am. Don't worry!

Nidhi kuch na boli wo bas mud ke khadi ho gayi. Shayad apna chehra chhupaana chaah rahi thi. Aur shayad ye bhi kehna chaah rahi thi ki Veer ab yaha se jaa sakta hai. Usse aur koi baat nahi karni.

Par agle hi pal...

"Aaahhhhhh!!!!!" Nidhi poori tarah bhauchakki reh gayi jab Veer ne usse peeche se apne aalingan me le liya. Uske mazboot haath zorr se uske nagn pait par kasse the.

Chatpataate hue usne Veer ki pakad churraane ki koshish kii par uska virodh tab ruk gaya jab Veer ne uske kaan me kehna shuru kiya,

"I know everything. Aap jaan bujh ke mere bagal se aa rahi thi aur jaa rahi thi. Ye dekhne ke liye ki how I was doing. Right? Fir Ayushi ma'am ko aapne rok diya, aur khud hi sign karne lagi. In a hope ki aap mera paper dekh paogi. Ki kahi mein kuch galat toh nahi kar raha, right? Ma'am..."

Nidhi ki saasein tezz chal rahi thi. Veer ki giraft me uska seena tezzi se upar neeche ho raha tha. Aur iss baar, Veer ko peeche se Nidhi ka poora cleavage nazar aa raha tha. Par iss baar usne apni nazre nahi hataayi. Ulta apni pakad aur mazboot kar dii.

Veer : Why do you care so much? Tell me!!! Mere liye itni parvaah kyu??? ANSWER ME!!!!

Veer ne uchi awaaz me pucha toh Nidhi hil ke reh gayi. Aur uske mann me jese sannaata sa chha gaya. Sab kuch shunya ho gaya.

Kyu? Veer ki itni parvaah kyu karti hai woh? Haan sahi hi toh pucha Veer ne. Akhir itni parvaah kyu karti hai wo ek student ke liye?

Veer : You know this right? Ki ye bilkul bhi normal nahi hai. Aisa koi teacher nahi karta. Especially a female teacher... Ki kisi male student ki itni parvaah kare. Tell me! Itni care kyu karti ho aap meri? Haan!? Ghar pe rukwaana, college me saath me ek hi gaadi me aana bina apni image ki parvaah kiye, mere harr baar zakhmi hone par mujhse milne aana, kayi baar toh college se hi leave lena, baar baar mujhe padhaayi ko lekar aagah karaana, sukh dukh sabme shaamil hona... Kyuuuuuu??? Answer me!!!!!

Nidhi ka shareer thar-thara ke kaanp raha tha ab.

Veer : You don't wanna answer? Toh mujhe bataane dijiye... Because I know the answer.

*Badump* *Badump*

Harr guzarte pal, Nidhi ka seena aise upar neeche ho raha tha jese maano abhi seene me se uska dil baahar aa jaega. Na jaane Veer ke shabd kya honge? Kya matlab usse uttar pata hi ki kyu wo Veer ki itni parvaah karti hai!? Jab usse khud nahi pata iska jawaab toh bhala Veer ko kese pata hoga?

Veer : It's because... YOU!!!!!! YOU LIKE ME!!!!

*Booooooommmmm*

Aur ye vaakya ek bam ki tarah phata Nidhi ke kaano me.

Veer : And let me tell you one more thing... Wo ye ki... I LIKE YOU AS WELL!!!

Pehle ka shock kam tha kya jo Veer ne apni agli baat rakh usse aur ek bada jhatka de diya.

Veer iss se pehle ki aage kuch keh paata, Nidhi ne usse zorr se dhakka de diya...

"LEAVE ME ALOOONNNNEEE!!!!" Wo chillaayi.

"Ma'am!????"

"I SAID LEAVE ME ALONE!!!! GET OOOUUUTTT!!! GET OOUUUTTT!!!"

Veer bhauchakka sa wahi jamm gaya tha.

'No... no way!!'

Veer toh bas ek test kar raha tha. Wo ye baat jaanta tha ki usse Nidhi ma'am pasand hai. Aur shayad Nidhi ma'am bhi usse pasand karti thi. Par Veer sure nahi tha. Isliye, aaj usne apne dil ki baat toh kahi hi, par saath hi...

Usne ye bhi keh diya ki Nidhi ma'am bhi usse pasand karti hai. Aur jese hi Nidhi ne usse dhakela, Nidhi ka wo outburst, uska virodh karna, usse bhagaana aur rona...

Veer samajh chuka tha.

Ki wo sahi tha.

'No wayyyyy!!! Iska matlab... Ma'am mujhse!??'

Wo aankhein phaade Nidhi ko ghurta raha.

"I SAID GET OUUUTTTT! RIGHT NOWWWW!!!"

Aur iss baar majbooran usse baahar jaana hi pada.

Nidhi, Veer ke jaane ke turant baad washroom me gayi aur door band kar... Phoot phoot kar rone lagi.

'He's lying!!! Sab jhooth hai. There's nothing between us!!!!! I don't love him... Never!! I don't like him! I don't love him at all! He's lying!!!! Kuch bhi keh raha hai woh... Kabhi nahi ho sakta aisa... I'm already married... There's nothing...!!!!'

Wo khud ko saantvna dene ki koshish karne lagi.

Par, harr baar wo mann hi mann khud se hi haar rahi thi. Kyuki baar baar Veer ke sang guzaare pal uske dimaag me aa rahe the.

'NOOOOOOO!!!! I DON'T LOVE HIM!!!!!!'

Wo fir mann me cheenkhi...

Par koi fayda nahi.

Veer se milna, uske sang rehna, baatein karna, college jaana, shopping karna, uski parvah karna, uske liye kapde lena, dusri ladkiyo ko uske sang dekh dil me peeda hona...

Ye sab jese jese Nidhi ko yaad aata jaa raha tha. Uske aasu aur bhi tezz behte jaa rahe the.

Because she knew...

Veer was right!!!

She loves him!!!!

'Noooooooooo!!!!!!!'

Apne haath ko door par maarte hue wo sarr jhukaaye khadi rahi.

Aasu behte hue zameen par gir rahe the.

Wo ek shadishuda mahila thi. Do baccho ki maa thi. 30 saal ki umr thi uski. Aur Veer maatr 21 ka. 9 saal ka gap. Wo uski teacher thi. Veer bas uska student. Unn dono ke beech aisa kahi se bhi kuch nahi hona chaahiye tha.

Uske bawajood...

It happened!

Chaah ke bhi Nidhi usse apne dimaag se nahi nikaal paati thi. Uska hassta muskuraata chehra harr baar uske dimaag me aa jaata tha.

'Nahi!!!! I cannot... I don't love him! Wo mera bas ek student hai. Aam students ki tarah. Aur mein ek teacher. Hamaare beech ek profesional rishta hai. Formal relationship. Nothing else. There's nothing between us. From now on... I will treat him just like any other student. That's right! Aisa hi hona chahiye! Yes! I'm right! Of course!!!!'

Apne aasuo ko poch wo kuch derr baad washroom se baahar nikal gayi.

Aur Veer ke mann me tabhi firse ek ghanti baji,

*Ding*

[Nidhi's favourability has been reduced to 40.]
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!
Now the reason kyu night me nahi aaya update. Wo isliye because raat me type karte waqt, my eyes were hurting, so I decided to take my sleep first. And then to post the update in the morning. Bas, yahi reason tha.
Anyways, apna apna kaam karke jaane ka. Aur comments rakhne ka.

Arey yah Kia Fav. Reduce kar ke 40 हो gayi Kia veer ne kuch jaldi kar diya aur Agar jaldi kar bhi diya to bhi theek hain coz atleast usne Apni feelings Kah hi di magar Neha Kia usko aam student ki Tarah treat kar payegi Kia woh apne Dil me uthay jazbat ko rok payegi Intezar rahega inhi sab sawal ke jawab ke sath aapki ek aur bohat khoob update ka.

 

[pakibest]

Awesome Maza aa gaya

 

[agmr66608]

Fantastic Update. Please keep it up. Waiting for next Update.

 

[G goraya g]

Nice update