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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

    Votes: 1,311 83.1%
  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 27 1.7%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 204 12.9%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 35 2.2%

  • Total voters
    1,577

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Update - 72 ~ Divorce!
Ab tak...

'Nahi!!!! I cannot... I don't love him! Wo mera bas ek student hai. Aam students ki tarah. Aur mein ek teacher. Hamaare beech ek profesional rishta hai. Formal relationship. Nothing else. There's nothing between us. From now on... I will treat him just like any other student. That's right! Aisa hi hona chahiye! Yes! I'm right! Of course!!!!'

Apne aasuo ko poch wo kuch derr baad washroom se baahar nikal gayi.

Aur Veer ke mann me tabhi firse ek ghanti baji,

*Ding*

[Nidhi's favourability has been reduced to 40.]


Ab aage...

Kal Nidhi ma'am se mulaqaat ke baad, Veer ke liye kuch bhi faldaayak nahi tha. Na keval Veer Nidhi ma'am ke sang apna rishta sudhaarne me nakaam tha. Balki, Nidhi ma'am ki favourability uske prati aur bhi gir chuki thi. 58 se seedha 40 par aa chuki thi favourability. Wo aur udaas thi uss se.

Nidhi ne decide kar liya tha ki wo Veer se ab zyaada matlab nahi rakhegi, na hi zyaada milegi aur na hi zyaada baat karegi. Ek professional rishta hi bana ke rakhegi wo khud ke aur uske beech.

Veer jaanta tha sab kuch. Wo jaanta tha ki Nidhi ma'am ke mann me uske liye kuch toh hai. Par wo unn feelings ko accept nahi karna chaahti. Wo ye bhi jaanta tha ki ab Nidhi ma'am uss se dur bhaagengi. Uss se kam baat karengi. Ye bahaana dengi ki wo ek student teacher hai aur unhe itna friendly nahi hona chahiye. Usne toh pehle hi aane waale incidents ke baare me imagine kar liya tha.

Par ye sab jaante hue bhi Veer abhi pissed tha.

Wo pissed tha isliye kyuki Nidhi apne emotions ko accept nahi kar rahi thi. Ek taraf Kaera thi jo apne emotions ko feel karne ke liye athak prayaas kar rahi thi. Toh wahi Nidhi thi jiske paas emotions hote hue bhi, wo unhe dhaak kar apni feelings ko chhupa rahi thi. Aur yahi baat Veer ko disappoint kar rahi thi.

Still, wo shaant tha. He was calm. Thanks to his 95 intelligence. Usne saari baatein parakh lii thi. Aur unhe kese deal karna tha ye bhi soch liya tha. Nidhi ma'am bhale hi uss se dur bhaage. Veer ne decide kar liya tha ki ek din wo unhe unke emotions ke aage harwa ke rahega. Aur wo din dur nahi jis din Nidhi khud aake uss se apne dil ki baat kahegi.

Par filhaal, uska attention iss waqt kahi aur zaroori tha. Naha dhone ke baad wo apne room se nikla aur main hall me aaya jaha Suman, Ragini, Aabha aur Sonali sabhi uska hi intezaar kar rahi thi.

Ragini : Baitho Veer!

Ragini ne usse ishaare karte hue baithne ko kaha.

Veer baitha. Wo toh pehle se hi jaanta tha ki Ragini ne yaha sabhi ko subah subah kyu bulaaya tha. Bas wo intezaar kar raha tha.

Ragini : Jaise Dada jii ne apna nirnay liya aur wo apni zimmedari se muqt ho gaye...

Kehte hue usne ek nazar sab par daali fir ek lambi saas lete hue continue kii,

Ragini : Wese hi mene bhi apne jeevan ka faisla le liya hai. Aap sab ko mein apna maanti hu. Apna parivaar maanti hu. Iss ghar ke sadasya hai aap sab. Aur isliye, mein aaj aap sab ke saath apna nirnay saajha karna chaahti hu.

Suman ne ek nod dete hue Ragini ko ishaara kiya ki hum sab sunn rahe hai. Aap kehte jaaiye.

Ragini (nods) : Kaafi kuch soch vichaar karne ke baad, khud se lakh baar sawaal karne ke baad, mein finally iss nirnay par pohuch chuki hu ki...

Sabki nazre uske upar hi tiki hui thi iss waqt. Ragini bhi baari baari sabhi ko dekh rahi thi. Uske baad bina koi sankoch kiye wo boli,

Ragini : Ki... Mein Vivek ko DIVORCE de rahi hu!!!

*Silence*

Aur kuch derr tak bas khaamoshi chhaayi rahi. Koi kuch nahi bola. Veer bas muskuraaya jaise usse pata tha ki Ragini yahi faisla legi.

Na jaane kitni raato ko wo jab jab apne kamre ki orr jaata tha tab tab Ragini ke kamre ke andar se uski rone ki awaaz usse aksar sunaayi de jaaya karti thi. Kamre me sikud kar na jaane kitni raatein roke guzaari thi Ragini ne. Par ab aur nahi. Zindagi me aage bhi badhna tha usse.

Aur Veer jaanta tha ki Ragini issi qadam ko chunegi. Still, yadi wo iska ulta faisla bhi leti toh bhi Veer uska saath deta. Kyuki ab tak Ragini uske sang uske harr kadam par saath de rahi thi. Badle me itna toh karna banta hi tha.

Suman aankho me chamak liye forun hi uth ke aayi aur Ragini ke kandhe par haath rakh uske bagal se baith gayi,

"Aapne ekdum sahi nirnay liya hai Ragini jii! Mein boht khush hu aapke iss faisle se. Ab aap khul ke apna jeevan vyateet kar sakti hai. Aapko ab koi bandish nahi. Yadi aap waapas jaati toh zaahir hai ki aap uss niraasha se kabhi baahar nahi nikal paati. Par ab... Ab sab kuch behtar ho sakta hai."

Suman ki baat sunn Ragini muskuraayi par uske chehre pe waapas se maayusi chha gayi thi. Uski udaasi ko mehsoos karte hue Suman fir boli,

"Aur... Aur mujhe vishvaas hai ki koi aapse behad pyaar karne waala aapke jeevan me jald hi khushiyo ke rang bhar dega. Dekhna..."

Suman ne Veer ko dekhte hue ye baat boli.

'Hmm?'

Suman : Kyu hai na? Veer ji!?

Veer : !?? Haan! O-Of course!

Ragini stabdh nigaaho se Veer ko dekhi aur fir halki muskaan liye neeche dekhne lagi. Uske gaal halke gulaabi the, na jaane kya soch rahi thi.

Par itna zaroor tha ki wo pehle se kaafi behtar mehsoos kar rahi thi.

Aabha aur Sonali toh bas chup chaap baithi rahi shuru se ant tak. Unke kehne ya na kehne se wese bhi kuch nahi hone waala tha. Aur na hi wo itni experienced thi inn maamlo me.

***

Veer's old home...

Veer ke puraane ghar me iss waqt apne kamre me Pranjal baithe hue tha. Diary me na jaane kya likh raha tha.

Par uske chehre ke bhaav bade hi khaufnaak the iss waqt.

'Veeeeerrr!!!! How dare you...!!!!? Hmm~ Nice... Nice... I see!! Toh aisa hai sab kuch haan? Veer!!!! Tumhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha. Na keval tumne mera mazaak banaaya balki, meri poori planning par tumne paani fer ke rakh diya... DAMN YOUUUU VEEERRRR!!! MEIN TUJHE CHORRUNGA NAHIIII!!!'

Pranjal jo apne gusse ko qaabu me karne ki koshish kar raha tha, uska gussa harr guzarte pal badhta hi jaa raha tha. Jese hi wo aankhein band karta, uske saamne wahi banquet me hua sharmindagi waala nazaara saamne aa jaata. Kitna embarassed hona pada tha usse waha. Aaj tak apni poori zindagi me Pranjal ne kabhi itni sharmindagi mehsoos nahi kii thi.

Aur ye sab kiski wajah se hua tha? Khaali ek Veer ki wajah se. Wo Veer, jisse Pranjal bachpan se ullu banaata aaya tha, aaj usme itni himmat aa gayi thi ki wo palat ke uska mazaak bana sake? Wo bhi sab ke saamne?

Pranjal ka khoon khaul raha tha uss manzar ko yaad kar kar ke.

Par Pranjal bhi koi kaccha khilaadi nahi tha. Wo aisa saanp tha jo apne ande ek hi bil me kabhi nahi rakhta tha. Dusre shabdo me, uske paas kayi paitre the. Yadi Veer ne uske plan ka pardafaash bhi kar diya tha toh bhi uske paas kayi upaay the.

In fact, Pranjal ab aur chaukanna ho gaya tha. Usse pata lag chuka tha ki Veer active hai inn maamlo me aur ab boht hi bareeki se jaal bichhaana padega.

'Hmm~ Badla toh mein lunga Veer! Tumne ye wese accha kiya jo mujhe aagah kar diya. Harr ek beizzati ka badla lunga mein. Ab tak mein choti macchliyo ko pakadne me laga hua tha. Par ab mujhe sabse pehle badi macchli pakad ke usse paani me se nikaalna padega. Uske baad... I'll deal with you!!! Kyuki, pehle paisa zaroori hai. Once I'll have that... Tumse nipatna fir chutkiyo ka khel hoga mere liye.'

Sochte hue usne diary me zorr se apna pen panno me khos diya.

***

Aatish' Hideout 5...
Time : 8:13 PM

"Kya sab aa gaye?"

Ye awaaz thi Slogan ki jo kursi par baithe hue tha. Chehre ki chinta saaf bata rahi thi ki wo yaha kuch serious discuss karne hi aaya tha.

Warehouse tha ye Aatish ka ek prakaar se. Uska adda number 5. Aksar wo badi deals yahi kiya karta tha. Kyuki, ye jagah kaafi safe thi.

Slogan ke samaksh baithe Steve ne haa me gardan hilaayi aur apni baat rakhi,

"Aa gaye hai sab Dada. Aap bataiye. Jo bhi orders honge mein wo sab aadmiyo ko samjha dunga."

Slogan : Hmm! Uske pehle... Ye glass bharwao pehle.

Steve : Jii! Balhaar, idhar aao!!!!!

Steve ne Balhaar ko zorr se chillaaya toh wo peeche se aaya aur uske haath me ek jug tha.

Steve aur Slogan dono hi baatein kar rahe the. Aur Balhaar nazre neeche kiye glass me beer bhar raha tha.

Par tabhi jese jis baat ka usse darr tha wahi hua,

Steve : Hmm? Tum toh right handed the na? Ye baaye haath se kyu serve kar rahe ho?

Ye sunte hi Balhaar ke chehre se uska rang udd gaya. Waqai! Steve boht sharp tha. Aise hi nahi usko apna right hand bana ke rakha hua tha Slogan ne. Steve ki baat sunn iss baar Slogan ne bhi usse dekha. Aur dono ki nazro ko apne upar mehsoos kar, Balhaar ke paseene chhootne lage the.

But thanks to Veer, ki usne pehle hi usse iss baare me aagah kar diya tha. So he came prepared. Usse pata tha ki usse kya bolna tha.

Balhaar : Steve bhai! Jis din hum sabhi uss Veer ko pakad ke laaye the. Aur, fir baad me unki gang aa gayi thi. Tab adde se bhaagte time mein aur mere aadmi unke aadmiyo se bhid gaye the. Aur... Ussi ladaayi me... Ye sab ho gaya. Mera haath mud gaya.

Steve : Ohhh! Toh ab tak treatment kyu nahi liya?

Balhaar : Jab tak uss Veer ki khatiya na khadi kar du tab tak mujhe chenn nahi aayega Steve bhai. Ussi ke kaaran ye sab hua hai.

Slogan : Theek hai! Tum jaa sakte ho.

Balhaar : Jii!

Aur Balhaar peeche jaa ke khada ho gaya. Slogan ko pata nahi kyu, par kuch theek nahi laga.

Slogan : Steve! Hume kuch karna hoga. Jald hi.

Steve : Kahiye Dada!

Slogan : Wo jagah...

Slogan ne seedha Steve ki aankho me dekhte hue kaha. Steve bas do shabd sunte hi maun reh chuka tha.

Steve : Kya wahi par...!?

Slogan : Haa wahi par...

Steve : Samajh gaya Dada! Par aap waha par saara intezaam karoge kese? Uss ladki ko...!?

Slogan : Plan aisa hai ki...

Slogan apni saari baatein rakhta jaa raha tha par usse nahi pata tha ki Balhaar wahi peeche khada hua kya kuch nahi kar raha tha.

Slogan apne jeevan kaal me itni deaths ko escape kiya hua tha ki usse khatre ka abhaas ho jaata tha. Aise hi nahi wo itne saal tak zinda tha. Itne bade khatro se ladne ke bawajood wo harr baar zinda bach jaata tha. Kyuki usse experience tha. Wo khatre ko bhaanp leta tha.

Aaj bhi Steve se baatein karte hue, usse kuch ajeeb laga. Toh usne forun hi kaha,

Slogan : STEVE!!

Steve : Jii Dada!

Slogan : Iss Balhaar ko baahar jaane ko kaho.

Steve : Balhaaaarrr!!! Baahar jao!

Balhaar : Jii Steve bhai!

Wo bina kuch kahe baahar nikal gaya. Jese usse jo chaahiye tha, wo usse mil chuka tha. Uske chehre par ek kutil muskaan thi.

Steve : Kya hua Dada? Kuch baat hai kya?

Slogan : Nahi! Ye Balhaar...

Steve : Balhaar apna hi aadmi hai Dada. Aatish bhau ke andar hi wo saalo se kaam karta aaya hai. Wo gaddaari nahi karega, jaha tak mujhe lagta hai. Par kya aapko kuch doubt hai?

Slogan : Hmm! Iss Balhaar ki poori jankaari lo. Mobile phone se leke sab kuch. Mujhe kuch theek nahi lag raha.

Steve : Jesa aap kahe!

Aur issi ke saath Slogan ne wo meeting wahi samaapt kar dii. Aaj usse kuch gadbad mehsoos ho rahi thi. Aur isliye usne Steve ko bhi uss Balhaar ki info nikaalne ka kaam saup diya.

Par kis jagah ki baat kar rahe the ye Steve aur Slogan? Ho na ho, Slogan kuch bada hi soch ke aage badh raha tha. Kuch aisa jo iss baar usse uske maqsad tak pohucha sakta tha.

***

Ragini's PoV...

Aaj! Aaj mene apne jeevan ka ek boht hi aham faisla liya tha. Vivek se Talaak!

Mein harr raat jaagti aur mere khayaalo me wo mazar mandraata rehta tha.

"M-Mujhe chorr do... Mujhe mat maaro!"

Vivek ke wo shabd jo usne uss gunde se kahe the jab uss gunde ne ye pucha tha ki kiski jaan lu? Toh Vivek mera apna pati apni jaan ki bheekh maang raha tha. Bina meri koi parvaah kiye.

Kya kuch nahi kiya tha mene uske liye? Uss se pyaar kiya. Uske kehne hi pe mein do saal tak ruki rahi hamaari shaadi ke liye. Mere Dad T.V.S ke showrooms ke maalik the toh mene uski automobiles ki company me kitni madad karwayi thi unn se.

Of course mein ye sab baato ko ginti thodi thi. Kyuki mein sab kuch hamaare liye hi toh kar rahi thi. Shaadi hue abhi hume kuch hi mahine toh hue the. Uske kehne par mein abhi Maa bhi nahi bani thi.

Kyuki wo chaahta tha ki abhi hum life ko aur enjoy kare thoda. Aur mein bhi maan gayi thi.

Usse chaahiye thi property. Toh devar Pranjal ke saath milkar wo dono kuch khichdi pakaate rehte the aur mujhe bina bataaye hi harr baar plan me shaamil kar lete the. Mein bhi yahi samajhti thi ki ye jo bhi matter hai jald hi nipat jaega aur mein apna pyaara jeevan uske sang vyateet karungi.

Veer! Mera devar! Uske khilaaf hi hum sab shadiyantra rachte the. Mein toh bas naam ke liye unke plan me hua karti thi. Mujhe toh sab kuch aksar baad me pata chalta tha ki ye sab akhir karte kya the. Shuru me mujhe aisa lagta tha ki shayad Veer waqai ek bhondu insaan hai. Par mein galat thi.

Uss raat jab mene saari umeed chorr dii thi. Uss raat wahi Veer kisi farishte ki tarah mujhe bachaane aaya tha. Mein... Jo uske khilaaf rehti thi. Mujhe bachaane aaya tha woh. Uss raat mujhe pata lag chuka tha ki ek saccha asli insaan kesa hota hai. Wo tha Veer! Vivek nahi! Vivek ne toh mere dil ko choor choor kar ke rakh diya tha. Saare armaan mere, mere sapne, sab kuch ek hi jhatke me usne bikher ke rakh diye the.

Aur mein kathputli ki tarah uske haatho me naachti rahi. Kaash mujhe ye baatein pehle samajh aa jaati. Kherr! Galti toh insaan se hi hoti hai na? Mujhse bhi hui. Aur ab mein usse sudhaarungi.

Aaj hi na keval mene vakeel ko bula liya tha balki mein Veer aur baaki sabhi ke sang seedha apne mata pita ko leke Vivek ke ghar bhi gayi thi.

Itni kaha suni hui, kaafi derr tak mujhe uske gharwaale manaate rahe. Mere Mom Dad boht supporting the. Unhone poora decision mere pe chorr diya tha. Aaj wo Vivek gusse me mujhe chillaata raha, toh kabhi rote hue gidgidaata raha. Par mein tass se mass na hui. Saala aise insaan pe kese bharosa kar sakti thi mein.

Pata nahi kyu, par meri nazre Vivek ko chorr aaj Veer pe zyaada jaa rahi thi. Wo khaamosh sa bas mere harr faisle me mera saath de raha tha. Ye hoti hai maturity. Sach kahu toh Veer ek gentleman tha.

Haan thoda natkhat tha, aksar wo baatein bhi keh deta tha jo aurto ke liye appropriate nahi hoti thi. Par... Dheere dheere usme change aa raha tha. Aur boht hi behtar change aa raha tha. All in all, he knew how to treat a woman.

Vivek ke parivaar ke lakh manaane par bhi mein na maani aur mene divorce ke paper par sign kar diye the. Shayad Vivek ko bhi pata tha ki ab wo mujhe kabhi nahi mana sakta, toh usne bhi bemann papers par sign kar diye.

Ab toh bas formalities hi bachi thi. Jo kuch din me hi ho jaane waali thi. Main cheez toh sign hi the aur dono taraf ki razamandi.

Uss ghar me toh jese maatam sa chha gaya tha. Ghar ke do sadasya ghar jo chorr chuke the. Mein aur Veer. Do bhi nahi, teen. Veer ki asli maa bhi toh nahi thi. Mujhe unke baare me koi jaankaari nahi thi. Kitni hi ajeeb baat thi. Unse related koi bhi cheez nahi thi ghar me. Na koi photo, na koi zikr unka. Na jaane bechaare Veer ko kitni tadpan hoti hogi apni Maa ko lekar. Bechaare ko kabhi Maa ka pyaar nahi mil paaya tha. Maa ka kya kabhi theek se usse parivaar ka pyaar nahi mila.

Isliye mene usse apne sang rakhne ki sochi thi. I'll give him a familial love.

Aaj mein behad khush thi. Thoda maayus bhi thi par uss se bhi zyada khushi thi. Aisa lag raha tha jese kisi ne dil se kaafi wajni bhaar ko utha liya ho.

Ab mein azaad thi. Ab mein unn raato ko hamesha hamesha ke liye bhulna chaahti thi.

Aur isliye, aaj mene sab kuch hata diya. Saree utaar dii, mangal sutra hata diya, maang me se sindoor hata diya, apne haatho se choodiya nikaal dii. Aaj mein bas ek shining black top aur blue jeans me thi.

Mein bilkul college ki ladki lag rahi thi. Aisa lag raha tha ki mein Arohi aur Kavya ki college ki saheli hu. Jese hi mein iss roop me baahar aayi, meri nazre Veer ke chehre par hi thi. Kesa reaction hoga uska?

Aur jese hi usne mujhe dekha...

'Hahahahahaha~' Meri mann hi mann hassi chooth gayi. He was so cute. Fufu~

Uska muh khula hua tha. Wo aankhein phaade mujhe dekh raha tha. Mein bhi jese nayj naveli girlfriend ki tarah poora ghumte hue usse apna look dikha rahi thi.

'Just stop it! What was I even doing!?'

"K-Kaisi lag rahi hu mein?" Mere sawaal par wo maun reh gaya tha. Fir thkda hadbadaate hue jawaab diya tha usne.

"B-Bhabhi!?? You look wonderful!!!"

"Is that so?? Fufu~"

Usne meri tareef kii thi. Pata nahi kyu, par uske muh se tareef sunte hi mera mann prafullit ho utha tha. Vivek ko jab bhi mein aise dikhaaya karti thi apna look toh woh bas ek look deta tha aur bas yahi kehta tha, 'You look good!'

Harr baar uska same dialogue rehta tha. Par Veer!? I could feel ki usne dil se kaha tha.

"Veer!!! Aaj mein xxxxxxx cafe jaana chaahti hu. Will you take me?"

Mene uss se pucha. Mera waha jaane ka ek hi maqsad tha.

"O-Okay! Chaliye!"

Wo raazi bhi ho gaya. Kitna sweet tha Veer. Kabhi mujhe mana nahi karta tha. Hehe~

Wo car ki orr jaa hi raha tha toh mene usse mana kar diya.

"Nahi Veer! Hum bike pe chalenge!"

"Ehhh!?"

"Bike pe! Tum jaldi bike nikalo."

"Umm... Well! Okay!"

Usne firse mujhe mana nahi kiya. I really wanted to give him a hug. How can he be so sweet?

Wahi Vivek... To be honest usse bike chalaana hi nahi aata tha. Aaj tak mein uske saath bike par kabhi nahi baithi thi. Hamesha car me hi rehta tha woh.

Aaj mein Veer ke theek peeche baithi hui thi uski bike me. Aah! Bike se yaad aaya, ye bike mene hi toh usse gift kii thi. He loves this bike so much. Bhale hi utni mehngi nahi thi par Veer boht care karta tha bike kii.

Mein uske peeche baithi, aur pata nahi kyu par mene apne dono haath aaj uske seene me daal diye. Aur uss se bhi badi baat ki mujhe aisa karte waqt kuch bhi galat nahi laga.

Veer shayad meri iss harqat se thoda hadbada gaya tha par bola kuch nahi.

Kuch hi derr me hum uss cafe ke saamne the. Mere yaha aane ke do hi kaaran the. Pehla ye ki yaha cocktails aur mocktails dono hi boht acchi milti thi. Dusra... Well! Dusra kaaran bhi jald hi aane waala tha.

Andar aane se pehle hi Veer ne mere liye door khola.

'Oh Veer!!! How considerate of you!'

Usne mere liye door khola. Vivek toh inn baato par kabhi dhyaan hi nahi deta tha.

Andar aate hi humne dekha. Cafe me harr jagah couples hi couples the. Haatho me haath liye wo ek dusre se baatein karne me lage hue the. Mand mand music baj raha rha. Cafe ka ambiance ekdum romantic tha.

Aur apni table par aate hi...

'Huh!?? Did he just...!?'

Veer ne mere liye kursi kheechi. Taaki pehle mein baith saku.

'Don't do this Veer. Aur kitna sweet banoge!??' mein mann me chillaayi.

Veer mere just saamne baitha hua tha aur wo thoda uncomfortable lag raha tha. Par meri khaatir wo ye sab kar raha tha. Really! He was too sweet.

Uske baad wo utha aur order dene gaya. Wo meri pasand jaanta tha. Usse puchne ki bhi zaroorat nahi padi. Wahi Vivek, mujh se hi order dene ko keh deta tha. Usse farq nahi padta tha ki mein kya pee rahi hu, meri choices kya hai. Sach me, dono me kitna difference tha. Veer was like a husband figure. Really, kitni lucky hogi wo ladki jisse Veer jaisa ladka milega.

*Sigh*

Mene ek aah bhari. Young hona kitna accha tha. Sadly, mein apne college ke dino se kayi saal aage aa chuki thi. If only I could go back in time...

Then!?

Then what?

Who would I have chosen?

Iss sawaal ko sochte hi meri nazar Veer pe chali gayi jo waha khade hoke order de raha tha.

Aur usse dekh uske baare me sochte hi mere gaal surkh laal pad gaye.

'Ragini!?? What are you even thinking?'

Unn baato ko mene dimaag se nikaal diya. Veer order deke aaya aur saamne baith gaya. Mein usse hi nihaar rahi thi. Aur wo meri nazro se bach kar idhar udhar dekh raha tha. Hehehe~ Shayad sharma raha tha.

It was so fun to tease him.

Jald hi hamaara order bhi aa gaya. Usne watermelon flavour ki ek mocktail mangwaai thi. No alcohol!

Aur mene cocktail! My favourite... Sex on the Beach!

Nahi nahi! Ye cocktail ka naam tha. Kuch aur nahi! Iska flavour mujhe personally pasand tha.

Veer jaanta tha. Mene usse bataaya tha pehle, mujhe yaad hai. Aur usse ab tak yaad tha.

Sip sip karte hue hum apni apni drinks pee rahe the. Par bechaara Veer mujhse nazre hi nahi mila paa raha tha. Hehe~

Uska ek aur kaaran tha. Kyuki, aaj mene black crop top pehna hua tha. Mera poora nanga pait khule aam nazar aa raha tha. Veer ne mujhe kabhi aise nahi dekhta tha. Of course, he was dumbfounded.

Pata nahi kyu, mujhe usse aur sataane ka mann karne laga.

"Veeer~ Idhar aao na! Mere bagal se baitho na!"

I called him. Aur wo mujhe dekhne ke baad firse mujhe inkaar kiye bina hi aake baith gaya. Oh god! Why was he so cute?

"A-Aaj aap khush ho Bhabhi?" Usne pucha.

"Hmm~ Behad! Aaj mere dil se ek bojh jese kam ho gaya." Mene jawaab diya.

Par ab samay aa gaya tha. Mere dusre maqsad ka...

Jis maqsad se mein yaha aayi thi.

Mene cafe ke baahar dekha. Road ke uss side hi boht badi sharaab ki dukaan thi. Mujhe pata tha koi waha aane wala tha. Uska hi intezaar tha mujhe...

Aur jese mein sahi thi.

Uski car aake waha ruki aur wo baahar nikla.

Kaun? Koi aur nahi, meri wahi pati... Pati nahi, ex-pati... Vivek!!!

Aur dukaan me jaake usne ek badi bottle sharaab ki lii aur car ke paas aake bonnet pe tik ke wo poori bottle gatakne laga.

I knew it!!! Mujhe pata tha wo aaega.

Aur tabhi...

"Veer!" I called him.

"Huh!?"

"Apna haath do." Mene uss se demand kiya.

"Ehh!? Mera haath!?"

"Hmm~"

Usne apna haath table ke upar rakha aur uske aisa karte hi...

Mene uska haath thaama aur apne peeche se le jaate hue seedhe apni nangi kamar par uska haath rakh diya.

"Bh-Bhabhiiiiiiii!!????" Wo hadbadaaya. Par mene uska haath ek pal ke liye bhi apne se juda nahi hone diya.

'Yesssssss!!! This was the touch I missed.. I was right!!!!'

Aur tabhi, jis cheez ke ghatit hone ka mujhe intezaar tha. Wo ho gayi.

Vivek ki nazar hamaare cafe ki window par padi. Aur hume dekhte hi...

*Craaaaasssssshhhhhhh*

Uski aankhein aag babula ho chuki thi. Hehehe~
Yessssss!!! I wanted to see him like that.

Mene Veer ka haath aur zorr se kass ke apni kamar me laga liya aur Vivek ko dekhne lagi.

Veer toh sabse anjaan tha. Wo sharma raha tha. Toh wahi Vivek... Uska seena gusse me upar neeche ho raha tha.

Aur wo agle hi pal waha se bhaag ke nikal gaya.

'Yesssssss!!! Ohhh god! This feeling!!! His face.... I feel so good!!!!!'

I achieved what I wanted to achieve.

Aur yaha ye buddhu Veer... Hehe~ Kitna sharma raha tha.

Ye buddhu sochta tha ki mein apne kamre me uss Vivek ke liye roti thi. Arre shuru me zaroor roti thi. Par keval Vivek hi ek kaaran nahi tha. Mein toh iss pagle ke liye roti thi.

Because I knew...

I FELL FOR HIM!!

Isliye roti thi. Ki ye galat hai, wagarah wagarah. Vivek ke wo gande laanchan mujhe yaad aa jaate. Par uske bawajood... I fell for this guy.

Aur yadi Vivek itna claim maarta hi tha. That I was having some illicit relationship with Veer.

So why not!??

I'll show him... This time!

Fir mene Veer ko dekha aur uski chin pakad apni orr aage kari.

Aur uske gaal par apni lipstick ke nishaan laga diye.

Not on those damn juicy lips. Unhe bhi chakhungi. Par ek ek seedhi chadhungi mein...

After all, Veer kahi bhaage thodi jaa raha tha.

"Right Veer?"

"Hmm? Kya?"

"Fufu~ Nothing!"
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Kuch 3 se 4 updates kahani me mellow scenes chalenge. Romantic scenes, somewhere erotica and some different PoVs. But boht hi jald action aane waala hai. I'm doing some work. Some hard work on those. Prepare rehne ka action ke liye. Isliye abhi inn mellow scenes ko enjoy kariye. Kyuki palak jhapakte hi thrill start ho jaega.
Anyways! Like karne ka aur revos rakhne ka. ✨

Dhanyavaad!
 
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Update - 72 ~ Divorce!
Ab tak...

'Nahi!!!! I cannot... I don't love him! Wo mera bas ek student hai. Aam students ki tarah. Aur mein ek teacher. Hamaare beech ek profesional rishta hai. Formal relationship. Nothing else. There's nothing between us. From now on... I will treat him just like any other student. That's right! Aisa hi hona chahiye! Yes! I'm right! Of course!!!!'

Apne aasuo ko poch wo kuch derr baad washroom se baahar nikal gayi.

Aur Veer ke mann me tabhi firse ek ghanti baji,

*Ding*

[Nidhi's favourability has been reduced to 40.]


Ab aage...

Kal Nidhi ma'am se mulaqaat ke baad, Veer ke liye kuch bhi faldaayak nahi tha. Na keval Veer Nidhi ma'am ke sang apna rishta sudhaarne me nakaam tha. Balki, Nidhi ma'am ki favourability uske prati aur bhi gir chuki thi. 58 se seedha 40 par aa chuki thi favourability. Wo aur udaas thi uss se.

Nidhi ne decide kar liya tha ki wo Veer se ab zyaada matlab nahi rakhegi, na hi zyaada milegi aur na hi zyaada baat karegi. Ek professional rishta hi bana ke rakhegi wo khud ke aur uske beech.

Veer jaanta tha sab kuch. Wo jaanta tha ki Nidhi ma'am ke mann me uske liye kuch toh hai. Par wo unn feelings ko accept nahi karna chaahti. Wo ye bhi jaanta tha ki ab Nidhi ma'am uss se dur bhaagengi. Uss se kam baat karengi. Ye bahaana dengi ki wo ek student teacher hai aur unhe itna friendly nahi hona chahiye. Usne toh pehle hi aane waale incidents ke baare me imagine kar liya tha.

Par ye sab jaante hue bhi Veer abhi pissed tha.

Wo pissed tha isliye kyuki Nidhi apne emotions ko accept nahi kar rahi thi. Ek taraf Kaera thi jo apne emotions ko feel karne ke liye athak prayaas kar rahi thi. Toh wahi Nidhi thi jiske paas emotions hote hue bhi, wo unhe dhaak kar apni feelings ko chhupa rahi thi. Aur yahi baat Veer ko disappoint kar rahi thi.

Still, wo shaant tha. He was calm. Thanks to his 95 intelligence. Usne saari baatein parakh lii thi. Aur unhe kese deal karna tha ye bhi soch liya tha. Nidhi ma'am bhale hi uss se dur bhaage. Veer ne decide kar liya tha ki ek din wo unhe unke emotions ke aage harwa ke rahega. Aur wo din dur nahi jis din Nidhi khud aake uss se apne dil ki baat kahegi.

Par filhaal, uska attention iss waqt kahi aur zaroori tha. Naha dhone ke baad wo apne room se nikla aur main hall me aaya jaha Suman, Ragini, Aabha aur Sonali sabhi uska hi intezaar kar rahi thi.

Ragini : Baitho Veer!

Ragini ne usse ishaare karte hue baithne ko kaha.

Veer baitha. Wo toh pehle se hi jaanta tha ki Ragini ne yaha sabhi ko subah subah kyu bulaaya tha. Bas wo intezaar kar raha tha.

Ragini : Jaise Dada jii ne apna nirnay liya aur wo apni zimmedari se muqt ho gaye...

Kehte hue usne ek nazar sab par daali fir ek lambi saas lete hue continue kii,

Ragini : Wese hi mene bhi apne jeevan ka faisla le liya hai. Aap sab ko mein apna maanti hu. Apna parivaar maanti hu. Iss ghar ke sadasya hai aap sab. Aur isliye, mein aaj aap sab ke saath apna nirnay saajha karna chaahti hu.

Suman ne ek nod dete hue Ragini ko ishaara kiya ki hum sab sunn rahe hai. Aap kehte jaaiye.

Ragini (nods) : Kaafi kuch soch vichaar karne ke baad, khud se lakh baar sawaal karne ke baad, mein finally iss nirnay par pohuch chuki hu ki...

Sabki nazre uske upar hi tiki hui thi iss waqt. Ragini bhi baari baari sabhi ko dekh rahi thi. Uske baad bina koi sankoch kiye wo boli,

Ragini : Ki... Mein Vivek ko DIVORCE de rahi hu!!!

*Silence*

Aur kuch derr tak bas khaamoshi chhaayi rahi. Koi kuch nahi bola. Veer bas muskuraaya jaise usse pata tha ki Ragini yahi faisla legi.

Na jaane kitni raato ko wo jab jab apne kamre ki orr jaata tha tab tab Ragini ke kamre ke andar se uski rone ki awaaz usse aksar sunaayi de jaaya karti thi. Kamre me sikud kar na jaane kitni raatein roke guzaari thi Ragini ne. Par ab aur nahi. Zindagi me aage bhi badhna tha usse.

Aur Veer jaanta tha ki Ragini issi qadam ko chunegi. Still, yadi wo iska ulta faisla bhi leti toh bhi Veer uska saath deta. Kyuki ab tak Ragini uske sang uske harr kadam par saath de rahi thi. Badle me itna toh karna banta hi tha.

Suman aankho me chamak liye forun hi uth ke aayi aur Ragini ke kandhe par haath rakh uske bagal se baith gayi,

"Aapne ekdum sahi nirnay liya hai Ragini jii! Mein boht khush hu aapke iss faisle se. Ab aap khul ke apna jeevan vyateet kar sakti hai. Aapko ab koi bandish nahi. Yadi aap waapas jaati toh zaahir hai ki aap uss niraasha se kabhi baahar nahi nikal paati. Par ab... Ab sab kuch behtar ho sakta hai."

Suman ki baat sunn Ragini muskuraayi par uske chehre pe waapas se maayusi chha gayi thi. Uski udaasi ko mehsoos karte hue Suman fir boli,

"Aur... Aur mujhe vishvaas hai ki koi aapse behad pyaar karne waala aapke jeevan me jald hi khushiyo ke rang bhar dega. Dekhna..."

Suman ne Veer ko dekhte hue ye baat boli.

'Hmm?'

Suman : Kyu hai na? Veer ji!?

Veer : !?? Haan! O-Of course!

Ragini stabdh nigaaho se Veer ko dekhi aur fir halki muskaan liye neeche dekhne lagi. Uske gaal halke gulaabi the, na jaane kya soch rahi thi.

Par itna zaroor tha ki wo pehle se kaafi behtar mehsoos kar rahi thi.

Aabha aur Sonali toh bas chup chaap baithi rahi shuru se ant tak. Unke kehne ya na kehne se wese bhi kuch nahi hone waala tha. Aur na hi wo itni experienced thi inn maamlo me.

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Veer's old home...

Veer ke puraane ghar me iss waqt apne kamre me Pranjal baithe hue tha. Diary me na jaane kya likh raha tha.

Par uske chehre ke bhaav bade hi khaufnaak the iss waqt.

'Veeeeerrr!!!! How dare you...!!!!? Hmm~ Nice... Nice... I see!! Toh aisa hai sab kuch haan? Veer!!!! Tumhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha. Na keval tumne mera mazaak banaaya balki, meri poori planning par tumne paani fer ke rakh diya... DAMN YOUUUU VEEERRRR!!! MEIN TUJHE CHORRUNGA NAHIIII!!!'

Pranjal jo apne gusse ko qaabu me karne ki koshish kar raha tha, uska gussa harr guzarte pal badhta hi jaa raha tha. Jese hi wo aankhein band karta, uske saamne wahi banquet me hua sharmindagi waala nazaara saamne aa jaata. Kitna embarassed hona pada tha usse waha. Aaj tak apni poori zindagi me Pranjal ne kabhi itni sharmindagi mehsoos nahi kii thi.

Aur ye sab kiski wajah se hua tha? Khaali ek Veer ki wajah se. Wo Veer, jisse Pranjal bachpan se ullu banaata aaya tha, aaj usme itni himmat aa gayi thi ki wo palat ke uska mazaak bana sake? Wo bhi sab ke saamne?

Pranjal ka khoon khaul raha tha uss manzar ko yaad kar kar ke.

Par Pranjal bhi koi kaccha khilaadi nahi tha. Wo aisa saanp tha jo apne ande ek hi bil me kabhi nahi rakhta tha. Dusre shabdo me, uske paas kayi paitre the. Yadi Veer ne uske plan ka pardafaash bhi kar diya tha toh bhi uske paas kayi upaay the.

In fact, Pranjal ab aur chaukanna ho gaya tha. Usse pata lag chuka tha ki Veer active hai inn maamlo me aur ab boht hi bareeki se jaal bichhaana padega.

'Hmm~ Badla toh mein lunga Veer! Tumne ye wese accha kiya jo mujhe aagah kar diya. Harr ek beizzati ka badla lunga mein. Ab tak mein choti macchliyo ko pakadne me laga hua tha. Par ab mujhe sabse pehle badi macchli pakad ke usse paani me se nikaalna padega. Uske baad... I'll deal with you!!! Kyuki, pehle paisa zaroori hai. Once I'll have that... Tumse nipatna fir chutkiyo ka khel hoga mere liye.'

Sochte hue usne diary me zorr se apna pen panno me khos diya.

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Aatish' Hideout 5...
Time : 8:13 PM

"Kya sab aa gaye?"

Ye awaaz thi Slogan ki jo kursi par baithe hue tha. Chehre ki chinta saaf bata rahi thi ki wo yaha kuch serious discuss karne hi aaya tha.

Warehouse tha ye Aatish ka ek prakaar se. Uska adda number 5. Aksar wo badi deals yahi kiya karta tha. Kyuki, ye jagah kaafi safe thi.

Slogan ke samaksh baithe Steve ne haa me gardan hilaayi aur apni baat rakhi,

"Aa gaye hai sab Dada. Aap bataiye. Jo bhi orders honge mein wo sab aadmiyo ko samjha dunga."

Slogan : Hmm! Uske pehle... Ye glass bharwao pehle.

Steve : Jii! Balhaar, idhar aao!!!!!

Steve ne Balhaar ko zorr se chillaaya toh wo peeche se aaya aur uske haath me ek jug tha.

Steve aur Slogan dono hi baatein kar rahe the. Aur Balhaar nazre neeche kiye glass me beer bhar raha tha.

Par tabhi jese jis baat ka usse darr tha wahi hua,

Steve : Hmm? Tum toh right handed the na? Ye baaye haath se kyu serve kar rahe ho?

Ye sunte hi Balhaar ke chehre se uska rang udd gaya. Waqai! Steve boht sharp tha. Aise hi nahi usko apna right hand bana ke rakha hua tha Slogan ne. Steve ki baat sunn iss baar Slogan ne bhi usse dekha. Aur dono ki nazro ko apne upar mehsoos kar, Balhaar ke paseene chhootne lage the.

But thanks to Veer, ki usne pehle hi usse iss baare me aagah kar diya tha. So he came prepared. Usse pata tha ki usse kya bolna tha.

Balhaar : Steve bhai! Jis din hum sabhi uss Veer ko pakad ke laaye the. Aur, fir baad me unki gang aa gayi thi. Tab adde se bhaagte time mein aur mere aadmi unke aadmiyo se bhid gaye the. Aur... Ussi ladaayi me... Ye sab ho gaya. Mera haath mud gaya.

Steve : Ohhh! Toh ab tak treatment kyu nahi liya?

Balhaar : Jab tak uss Veer ki khatiya na khadi kar du tab tak mujhe chenn nahi aayega Steve bhai. Ussi ke kaaran ye sab hua hai.

Slogan : Theek hai! Tum jaa sakte ho.

Balhaar : Jii!

Aur Balhaar peeche jaa ke khada ho gaya. Slogan ko pata nahi kyu, par kuch theek nahi laga.

Slogan : Steve! Hume kuch karna hoga. Jald hi.

Steve : Kahiye Dada!

Slogan : Wo jagah...

Slogan ne seedha Steve ki aankho me dekhte hue kaha. Steve bas do shabd sunte hi maun reh chuka tha.

Steve : Kya wahi par...!?

Slogan : Haa wahi par...

Steve : Samajh gaya Dada! Par aap waha par saara intezaam karoge kese? Uss ladki ko...!?

Slogan : Plan aisa hai ki...

Slogan apni saari baatein rakhta jaa raha tha par usse nahi pata tha ki Balhaar wahi peeche khada hua kya kuch nahi kar raha tha.

Slogan apne jeevan kaal me itni deaths ko escape kiya hua tha ki usse khatre ka abhaas ho jaata tha. Aise hi nahi wo itne saal tak zinda tha. Itne bade khatro se ladne ke bawajood wo harr baar zinda bach jaata tha. Kyuki usse experience tha. Wo khatre ko bhaanp leta tha.

Aaj bhi Steve se baatein karte hue, usse kuch ajeeb laga. Toh usne forun hi kaha,

Slogan : STEVE!!

Steve : Jii Dada!

Slogan : Iss Balhaar ko baahar jaane ko kaho.

Steve : Balhaaaarrr!!! Baahar jao!

Balhaar : Jii Steve bhai!

Wo bina kuch kahe baahar nikal gaya. Jese usse jo chaahiye tha, wo usse mil chuka tha. Uske chehre par ek kutil muskaan thi.

Steve : Kya hua Dada? Kuch baat hai kya?

Slogan : Nahi! Ye Balhaar...

Steve : Balhaar apna hi aadmi hai Dada. Aatish bhau ke andar hi wo saalo se kaam karta aaya hai. Wo gaddaari nahi karega, jaha tak mujhe lagta hai. Par kya aapko kuch doubt hai?

Slogan : Hmm! Iss Balhaar ki poori jankaari lo. Mobile phone se leke sab kuch. Mujhe kuch theek nahi lag raha.

Steve : Jesa aap kahe!

Aur issi ke saath Slogan ne wo meeting wahi samaapt kar dii. Aaj usse kuch gadbad mehsoos ho rahi thi. Aur isliye usne Steve ko bhi uss Balhaar ki info nikaalne ka kaam saup diya.

Par kis jagah ki baat kar rahe the ye Steve aur Slogan? Ho na ho, Slogan kuch bada hi soch ke aage badh raha tha. Kuch aisa jo iss baar usse uske maqsad tak pohucha sakta tha.

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Ragini's PoV...

Aaj! Aaj mene apne jeevan ka ek boht hi aham faisla liya tha. Vivek se Talaak!

Mein harr raat jaagti aur mere khayaalo me wo mazar mandraata rehta tha.

"M-Mujhe chorr do... Mujhe mat maaro!"

Vivek ke wo shabd jo usne uss gunde se kahe the jab uss gunde ne ye pucha tha ki kiski jaan lu? Toh Vivek mera apna pati apni jaan ki bheekh maang raha tha. Bina meri koi parvaah kiye.

Kya kuch nahi kiya tha mene uske liye? Uss se pyaar kiya. Uske kehne hi pe mein do saal tak ruki rahi hamaari shaadi ke liye. Mere Dad T.V.S ke showrooms ke maalik the toh mene uski automobiles ki company me kitni madar karwayi thi uss se.

Of course mein ye sab baato ko ginti thodi thi. Kyuki mein sab kuch hamaare liye hi toh kar rahi thi. Shaadi hue abhi hume kuch hi mahine toh hue the. Uske kehne par mein abhi Maa bhi nahi bani thi.

Kyuki wo chaahta tha ki abhi hum life ko aur enjoy kare thoda. Aur mein bhi maan gayi thi.

Usse chaahiye thi property. Toh devar Pranjal ke saath milkar wo dono kuch khichdi pakaate rehte the aur mujhe bina bataaye hi harr baar plan me shaamil kar lete the. Mein bhi yahi samajhti thi ki ye jo bhi matter hai jald hi nipat jaega aur mein apna pyaara jeevan uske sang vyateet karungi.

Veer! Mera devar! Uske khilaaf hi hum sab shadiyantra rachte the. Mein toh bas naam ke liye unke plan me hua karti thi. Mujhe toh sab kuch aksar baad me pata chalta tha ki ye sab akhir karte kya the. Shuru me mujhe aisa lagta tha ki shayad Veer waqai ek bhondu insaan hai. Par mein galat thi.

Uss raat jab mene saari umeed chorr dii thi. Uss raat wahi Veer kisi farishte ki tarah mujhe bachaane aaya tha. Mein... Jo uske khilaaf rehti thi. Mujhe bachaane aaya tha woh. Uss raat mujhe pata lag chuka tha ki ek saccha asli insaan kesa hota hai. Wo tha Veer! Vivek nahi! Vivek ne toh mere dil ko choor choor kar ke rakh diya tha. Saare armaan mere, mere sapne, sab kuch ek hi jhatke me usne bikher ke rakh diye the.

Aur mein kathputli ki tarah uske haatho me naachti rahi. Kaash mujhe ye baatein pehle samajh aa jaati. Kherr! Galti toh insaan se hi hoti hai na? Mujhse bhi hui. Aur ab mein usse sudhaarungi.

Aaj hi na keval mene vakeel ko bula liya tha balki mein Veer aur baaki sabhi ke sang seedha apne mata pita ko leke Vivek ke ghar bhi gayi thi.

Itni kaha suni hui, kaafi derr tak mujhe uske gharwaale manaate rahe. Mere Mom Dad boht supporting the. Unhone poora decision mere pe chorr diya tha. Aaj wo Vivek gusse me mujhe chillaata raha, toh kabhi rote hue gidgidaata raha. Par mein tass se mass na hui. Saala aise insaan pe kese bharosa kar sakti thi mein.

Pata nahi kyu, par meri nazre Vivek ko chorr aaj Veer pe zyaada jaa rahi thi. Wo khaamosh sa bas mere harr faisle me mera saath de raha tha. Ye hoti hai maturity. Sach kahu toh Veer ek gentleman tha.

Haan thoda natkhat tha, aksar wo baatein bhi keh deta tha jo aurto ke liye appropriate nahi hoti thi. Par... Dheere dheere usme change aa raha tha. Aur boht hi behtar change aa raha tha. All in all, he knew how to treat a woman.

Vivek ke parivaar ke lakh manaane par bhi mein na maani aur mene divorce ke paper par sign kar diye the. Shayad Vivek ko bhi pata tha ki ab wo mujhe kabhi nahi mana sakta, toh usne bhi bemann papers par sign kar diye.

Ab toh bas formalities hi bachi thi. Jo kuch din me hi ho jaane waali thi. Main cheez toh sign hi the aur dono taraf ki razamandi.

Uss ghar me toh jese maatam sa chha gaya tha. Ghar ke do sadasya ghar jo chorr chuke the. Mein aur Veer. Do bhi nahi, teen. Veer ki asli maa bhi toh nahi thi. Mujhe unke baare me koi jaankaari nahi thi. Kitni hi ajeeb baat thi. Unse related koi bhi cheez nahi thi ghar me. Na koi photo, na koi zikr unka. Na jaane bechaare Veer ko kitni tadpan hoti hogi apni Maa ko lekar. Bechaare ko kabhi Maa ka pyaar nahi mil paaya tha. Maa ka kya kabhi theek se usse parivaar ka pyaar nahi mila.

Isliye mene usse apne sang rakhne ki sochi thi. I'll give him a familial love.

Aaj mein behad khush thi. Thoda maayus bhi thi par uss se bhi zyada khushi thi. Aisa lag raha tha jese kisi ne dil se kaafi wajni bhaar ko utha liya ho.

Ab mein azaad thi. Ab mein unn raato ko hamesha hamesha ke liye bhulna chaahti thi.

Aur isliye, aaj mene sab kuch hata diya. Saree utaar dii, mangal sutra hata diya, maang me se sindoor hata diya, apne haatho se choodiya nikaal dii. Aaj mein bas ek shining black top aur blue jeans me thi.

Mein bilkul college ki ladki lag rahi thi. Aisa lag raha tha ki mein Arohi aur Kavya ki college ki saheli hu. Jese hi mein iss roop me baahar aayi, meri nazre Veer ke chehre par hi thi. Kesa reaction hoga uska?

Aur jese hi usne mujhe dekha...

'Hahahahahaha~' Meri mann hi mann hassi chooth gayi. He was so cute. Fufu~

Uska muh khula hua tha. Wo aankhein phaade mujhe dekh raha tha. Mein bhi jese nayj naveli girlfriend ki tarah poora ghumte hue usse apna look dikha rahi thi.

'Just stop it! What was I even doing!?'

"K-Kaisi lag rahi hu mein?" Mere sawaal par wo maun reh gaya tha. Fir thkda hadbadaate hue jawaab diya tha usne.

"B-Bhabhi!?? You look wonderful!!!"

"Is that so?? Fufu~"

Usne meri tareef kii thi. Pata nahi kyu, par uske muh se tareef sunte hi mera mann prafullit ho utha tha. Vivek ko jab bhi mein aise dikhaaya karti thi apna look toh woh bas ek look deta tha aur bas yahi kehta tha, 'You look good!'

Harr baar uska same dialogue rehta tha. Par Veer!? I could feel ki usne dil se kaha tha.

"Veer!!! Aaj mein xxxxxxx cafe jaana chaahti hu. Will you take me?"

Mene uss se pucha. Mera waha jaane ka ek hi maqsad tha.

"O-Okay! Chaliye!"

Wo raazi bhi ho gaya. Kitna sweet tha Veer. Kabhi mujhe mana nahi karta tha. Hehe~

Wo car ki orr jaa hi raha tha toh mene usse mana kar diya.

"Nahi Veer! Hum bike pe chalenge!"

"Ehhh!?"

"Bike pe! Tum jaldi bike nikalo."

"Umm... Well! Okay!"

Usne firse mujhe mana nahi kiya. I really wanted to give him a hug. How can he be so sweet?

Wahi Vivek... To be honest usse bike chalaana hi nahi aata tha. Aaj tak mein uske saath bike par kabhi nahi baithi thi. Hamesha car me hi rehta tha woh.

Aaj mein Veer ke theek peeche baithi hui thi uski bike me. Aah! Bike se yaad aaya, ye bike mene hi toh usse gift kii thi. He loves this bike so much. Bhale hi utni mehngi nahi thi par Veer boht care karta tha bike kii.

Mein uske peeche baithi, aur pata nahi kyu par mene apne dono haath aaj uske seene me daal diye. Aur uss se bhi badi baat ki mujhe aisa karte waqt kuch bhi galat nahi laga.

Veer shayad meri iss harqat se thoda hadbada gaya tha par bola kuch nahi.

Kuch hi derr me hum uss cafe ke saamne the. Mere yaha aane ke do hi kaaran the. Pehla ye ki yaha cocktails aur mocktails dono hi boht acchi milti thi. Dusra... Well! Dusra kaaran bhi jald hi aane waala tha.

Andar aane se pehle hi Veer ne mere liye door khola.

'Oh Veer!!! How considerate of you!'

Usne mere liye door khola. Vivek toh inn baato par kabhi dhyaan hi nahi deta tha.

Andar aate hi humne dekha. Cafe me harr jagah couples hi couples the. Haatho me haath liye wo ek dusre se baatein karne me lage hue the. Mand mand music baj raha rha. Cafe ka ambiance ekdum romantic tha.

Aur apni table par aate hi...

'Huh!?? Did he just...!?'

Veer ne mere liye kursi kheechi. Taaki pehle mein baith saku.

'Don't do this Veer. Aur kitna sweet banoge!??' mein mann me chillaayi.

Veer mere just saamne baitha hua tha aur wo thoda uncomfortable lag raha tha. Par meri khaatir wo ye sab kar raha tha. Really! He was too sweet.

Uske baad wo utha aur order dene gaya. Wo meri pasand jaanta tha. Usse puchne ki bhi zaroorat nahi padi. Wahi Vivek, mujh se hi order dene ko keh deta tha. Usse farq nahi padta tha ki mein kya pee rahi hu, meri choices kya hai. Sach me, dono me kitna difference tha. Veer was like a husband figure. Really, kitni lucky hogi wo ladki jisse Veer jaisa ladka milega.

*Sigh*

Mene ek aah bhari. Young hona kitna accha tha. Sadly, mein apne college ke dino se kayi saal aage aa chuki thi. If only I could go back in time...

Then!?

Then what?

Who would I have chosen?

Iss sawaal ko sochte hi meri nazar Veer pe chali gayi jo waha khade hoke order de raha tha.

Aur usse dekh uske baare me sochte hi mere gaal surkh laal pad gaye.

'Ragini!?? What are you even thinking?'

Unn baato ko mene dimaag se nikaal diya. Veer order deke aaya aur saamne baith gaya. Mein usse hi nihaar rahi thi. Aur wo meri nazro se bach kar idhar udhar dekh raha tha. Hehehe~ Shayad sharma raha tha.

It was so fun to tease him.

Jald hi hamaara order bhi aa gaya. Usne watermelon flavour ki ek mocktail mangwaai thi. No alcohol!

Aur mene cocktail! My favourite... Sex on the Beach!

Nahi nahi! Ye cocktail ka naam tha. Kuch aur nahi! Iska flavour mujhe personally pasand tha.

Veer jaanta tha. Mene usse bataaya tha pehle, mujhe yaad hai. Aur usse ab tak yaad tha.

Sip sip karte hue hum apni apni drinks pee rahe the. Par bechaara Veer mujhse nazre hi nahi mila paa raha tha. Hehe~

Uska ek aur kaaran tha. Kyuki, aaj mene black crip top pehna hua tha. Mera poora nanga pait khule aam nazar aa raha tha. Veer ne mujhe kabhi aise nahi dekhta tha. Of course, he was dumbfounded.

Pata nahi kyu, mujhe usse aur sataane ka mann karne laga.

"Veeer~ Idhar aao na! Mere bagal se baitho na!"

I called him. Aur wo mujhe dekhne ke baad firse mujhe inkaar kiye bina hi aake baith gaya. Oh god! Why was he so cute?

"A-Aaj aap khush ho Bhabhi?" Usne pucha.

"Hmm~ Behad! Aaj mere dil se ek bojh jese kam ho gaya." Mene jawaab diya.

Par ab samay aa gaya tha. Mere dusre maqsad ka...

Jis maqsad se mein yaha aayi thi.

Mene cafe ke baahar dekha. Road ke uss side hi boht badi sharaab ki dukaan thi. Mujhe pata tha koi waha aane wala tha. Uska hi intezaar tha mujhe...

Aur jese mein sahi thi.

Uski car aake waha ruki aur wo baahar nikla.

Kaun? Koi aur nahi, meri wahi pati... Pati nahi, ex-pati... Vivek!!!

Aur dukaan me jaake usne ek badi bottle sharaab ki lii aur car ke paas aake bonnet pe tik ke wo poori bottle gatakne laga.

I knew it!!! Mujhe pata tha wo aaega.

Aur tabhi...

"Veer!" I called him.

"Huh!?"

"Apna haath do." Mene uss se demand kiya.

"Ehh!? Mera haath!?"

"Hmm~"

Usne apna haath tabke ke upar rakha aur uske aisa karte hi...

Mene uska haath thaam aur apne peeche se le jaate hue seedhe apni nangi kamar par uska haath rakh diya.

"Bh-Bhabhiiiiiiii!!????" Wo hadbadaaya. Par mene uska haath ek pal ke liye bhi apne se juda nahi hone diya.

'Yesssssss!!! This was the touch I missed.. I was right!!!!'

Aur tabhi, jis cheez ke ghatit hone ka mujhe intezaar tha. Wo ho gayi.

Vivek ki nazar hamaare cafe ki window par padi. Aur hume dekhte hi...

*Craaaaasssssshhhhhhh*

Uski aankhein aag babula ho chuki thi. Hehehe~
Yessssss!!! I wanted to see him like tha.

Mene Veer ka haath aur zorr se kass ke apni kamar me laga liya aur Vivek ko dekhne lagi.

Veer toh sabse anjaan tha. Wo sharma raha tha. Toh wahi Vivek... Uska seena gusse me upar neeche ho raha tha.

Aur wo agle hi pal waha se bhaag ke nikal gaya.

'Yesssssss!!! Ohhh god! This feeling!!! His face.... I feel so good!!!!!'

I achieved what I wanted to achieve.

Aur yaha ye buddhu Veer... Hehe~ Kitna sharma raha tha.

Ye buddhu sochta tha ki mein apne kamre me uss Vivek ke liye roti thi. Arre shuru me zaroor roti thi. Par keval Vivek hi ek kaaran nahi tha. Mein toh iss pagle ke liye roti thi.

Because I knew...

I FELL FOR HIM!!

Isliye roti thi. Ki ye galat hai, wagarah wagarah. Vivek ke wo gande laanchan mujhe yaad aa jaate. Par uske bawajood... I fell for this guy.

Aur yadi Vivek itna claim maarta hi tha. That I was having some illicit relationship with Veer.

So why not!??

I'll show him... This time!

Fir mene Veer ko dekha aur uski chin pakad apni orr aage kari.

Aur uske gaal par apni lipstick ke nishaan laga diye.

Not on those damn juicy lips. Unhe bhi chakhungi. Par ek ek seedhi chadhungi mein...

After all, Veer kahi bhaage thodi jaa raha tha.

"Right Veer?"

"Hmm? Kya?"

"Fufu~ Nothing!"
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Kuch 3 se 4 updates kahani me mellow scenes chalenge. Romantic scenes, somewhere erotica and some different PoVs. But boht hi jald action aane waala hai. I'm doing some work. Some hard work on those. Prepare rehne ka action ke liye. Isliye abhi inn mellow scenes ko enjoy kariye. Kyuki palak jhapakte hi thrill start ho jaega.
Anyways! Like karne ka aur revos rakhne ka. ✨

Dhanyavaad!
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Werewolf

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Superb update

Behtreen update .💜
Maza aa gaya❤️❤️
. Ragini ke saath veer kee baat cheet bahut achhi lagi .
🧡✌️✌🏼

Palang Tod update bhai

Awesome update bhai keep posting

Fantastic update

Sabsa Jada nidhi mam aur veer ki nok-jok ma maza aata hai

Superb update

Awesome Updatee

badhiya awesome update

bhai ab aaj update aya hai par ye kal ka hai to agla update parso ayega ya phir do din bad.

Fantastic update..

Cool update bro halka fulka ishaq mushaq wwala ..
Thoda emotional wala
Thoda comedy wala...
Aur ha padhayi wala also kool milake combo tha ha ha ha

Awesome update 👍👍

बहुत ही शानदार और मनोरंजक अपडेट भाई।।।।

Badhiya zaberdast shaandaar update
Nidhi ki favorability kam ho gayi or wahi Ragini ki favorability 78 pahoch gayi h sahi jaa rehe ho
Badhiya h lajawab

Update 70 & 71...

So, Update 70 started off with Veer reaching the party place... And as expected Kavya and Aarohi were visibly surprised to see the difference in Veer's appearance, afterall appearance of 75 is huge compared to what he was having earlier... Aarohi ka Veer ki presence mein sharmana, us se baat karte huye baar - baar blush karna, it was quite evident that she's attracted towards Veer... Joki kahin na kahin laazmi bhi tha, because Veer saved her from Aatish that Night, then how things have unfolded between them, Aarohi has somehow started Falling for him (Veer ke liye uska past ka bura behaviour bhi iska ek bada kaaran hai)... And now, this kiss... Or should I say an accidental kiss... Jo bhi ho, The story has the first glimpses of “Incest” in the 70th Update, and taking into note the fact that each update is of around 3.5-4k words... This is what makes the story and the writer special, that's the reason of this story being one of the best “Incest” stories on the forum already & Cheers for that Werewolf bro! (This story is a perfect example of Plot >>> Sex, exactly what I look for in a story). :thumbup:

Coming back to that kiss, iska asar Aarohi par nischit hi padega... Halanki, Veer ant mein bas yahi kehkar reh gaya ke “It was an accident” but Aarohi itni aasani se is cheez ko nazar andaz nahi kar paayegi... Jitna abhi tak main Aarohi ki personality ko samajh paaya hoon, she's a very - very emotional kind of girl, who somehow becomes more sensitive when she's around Veer... Khair, ab dekhna hoga ke is incident ka effect Aarohi ki favourability par kitna padega aur uske p.o.v. se bhi ek scene shayad aage aaye, & it would be great to read that!

Pranjal urf chhote kameene, ko ek perfect example mila hoga, What you sow so shall you reap, ka... Veer ko sabke saamne beizzat karne ka jo tareeka usne socha tha wahi uspar bhaari pad gaya aur fir... :D

Khair, Pranjal par apni is doosri haar, Property distribution mein bhi ek tarah se uski haar huyi hai, is back to back doosri haar ka kya asar hoga ye dekhna interesting hoga kyonki ab definitely wo kuchh bada plan karega, sawaal ye hai ke wo Veer ko apna nishana banayega ya fir apne pichhle plan ke mutaabik hi Kavya - Aarohi ki property ko hathiyane ki koshish Karega...

Party mein bhi Veer ki kayi logon, ya kahun ke kayi naami logon se mulakat ho gayi hai & that's going to help him in the future... Kyonki Manorath ki 40% property bahut bada asset hai Veer ke liye, Cars, Money, Flats and all... Ab ye dekhna bhi interesting hoga ke Veer ka aage ka business plan kya hai... Will he stick to the Food Truck or take it a new different level?


:akshay: Wtf! Ragini = Ashleel?? By the way this scene suddenly reminded me of something related with this name - “Ragini” :D...

Veer ko Kritika ke zariye pata chala apne exams ke baare mein... That was similar to most of the boys, I remember myself calling my friends and asking like, Kal kis subject ka paper hai... Khair, Kritika seems to be attracted towards Veer, of course not in that way but the first meeting, appearance of 75, well - dressed and his his way of talking... Any girl would feel to know more about him... Kritika is no different!

Ragini ke saath dheere - dheere nazdeekiyan badhti gayi aur aaj haal ye hai ke Veer ki wo Bhabhi jo kabhi us se seedhe munh baat tak nahi karti thi, jo Veer ko ghar se nikaalne ke plan mein indirectly shaamil thi aaj uski favourability Veer ke liye 78 hai... And some double - meaning for the first time between them... Previous updates mein jab Veer ne Ragini ko hug kar uske gaal par kiss kiya tha, uspar Ragini ke reaction se ye clear ho gaya tha ke jald hi dono mein cheezein badalne waali hain and this current incident is like some of the final gateways before the lightning strikes between them... Ragini ka Veer ki tie set karna and Veer getting some feelings like a husband and then that kiss... Soon, things are going to get more beautiful between them! Wahin Suman ka bhi reaction is cheez par dekhne yogya tha...

In the end a wholesome scene between Veer and Nidhi... Nidhi cares for him and we all know that aur ye cheez visible thi jab Veer apna exam likh raha tha... How tensed she was and the things which were going in her mind, clearly depict that yes she has fallen for Veer...

The ending, well it was quite anticipated ke jab Nidhi ko sachayi realise hogi uska reaction kuchh isi prakaar ka hoga... Age gap ko to ek baar nazar andaaz kar bhi den but she's married, of course her husband doesn't deserves to be with her but you can't ignore the fact that Nidhi is not just a wife but also a mother... This realisation isn't just acceptable for her, she can't accept that she's in love with Veer, her Student... At least, currently she can't, let's see how things fare between Nidhi and Veer in coming updates...

Btw. Balhaar is ready to work for Veer and that's a great news... Slogan ka ant ab kareeb hai aur saath hi wo waqt bhi kareeb hai jab Veer ki khudki ek gang hogi... He himself will be the boss of a Crime Boss, i.e., Balhaar...

So, Ragini ke saath Veer ka relation kaise aage badhega ye dekhna kaafi interesting rahega... I think jald hi Ragini ko realise ho jaayega ke Veer ab uska maatra devar ya fir dost nahi raha or maybe she has already realised this? But I think jab tak Vivek ke saath uska divorce nahi ho jaayega wo khulkar Veer se is baare mein shayad keh naa paaye... Secondly, Aarohi kya soch rahi hogi us kiss ke baad, definitely uspar ek achha khaasa impact pada hoga us incident ka and it would be exciting to see how she'll feel when Veer meets her next time... Third, Pranjal kya planning kar raha hai, aage ke liye especially after Veer turning the tables on him in the party... And not to forget Vivek, wo bhi shaant nahi baithega Pranjal ke dhokhe ke baad...

Coming to Nidhi, the drop in favourability, reduced from 58 to 40! And I think it'll drop more... Nidhi ke liye is realisation se baahar nikalna aasan nahi hoga, kaise wo is cheez ko handle karegi dekhna interesting hoga because ye saaf hai ke ab Veer uske liye ek ordinary student ban ne waala hai... At least for some time now, she'll behave with Veer or she'll try to behave with him in the way she does with other students...

Meanwhile, I feel like Bhavana aur uski Beti are on their way to bump into Veer!

Simply Amazing piece of writing bro! That Aarohi scene, I just loved it... Then the conversation with Ragini and her gestures, that was written beautifully by you... And as always the scene involving Nidhi was written with perfection! Without a doubt, you are a master in writing those conversations and portraying the deep feelings between story characters... Great work mate! :good:

Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Bole to ekdam rapchik update bhai.
Veer ne apne dil ki baat to keh di ab dekhte hai aage kya hota hai

nice update so Rgini agay burh rahi hay Veer sahab aap bhi kuch aagay burhya or yea Nidhi maam kaa musla kuch juld hee solve kurna puray gaa jub tuk uss ka talaq nahi huta us ka babi us kay pass nahi aata yaa wo janver numa us ka soher mur nahi jaata yea Shadi shuda wali khurafat us kay mun say nahi neklay gee or wasay yea favourability kum kun huwi is koo tuu mazeed burha caheya tha let see please Bgwan Nidhi sahi fasla kuray or Veer Ragni kee feeling bhi sahi say sumjha lay

Boht zabardast update

Nice update bhai

Bhai bhai mast update


Veer to bhul hi gya tha ki college me paper hai Vo to bhla ho kritika ka Jo Usne bta diya paper hai kal yha bhabhi veer ko dekhte hue kho gyi or veer se double meaning baat Bol gyi pr jb ahsas hua or veer ka khda hota dekha to sarma kr bhag gyi, vhi subah veer ko tie badhne ke baad gaal pr kiss Karna veer ko miya Bibi vali fealing de gya, college me nidhi ma'am ke sath ka incident gajab ka tha veer ne jab ahsas dilaya ki unka bartav kaisa hai uske prati or apna ijhar bhi kr diya to veer ko get lost hona pda, nidhi ma'am ka yah nirnay ki ab se veer ko baki baccho ke Jaise hi treat karengi Dekhte hai kya rang lata hai yha unki favourability bhi kam ho gyi hai... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab

Nice update bhai 😊☺️😊

Ab Nidhi ji ko kaun samjhaye ki jitna pyaar wo Veer se karti hain, utna shayad dusra koi nahin karta. Bahut hi pashopesh ki sthiti mein hain Nidhi mam is waqt.

Keep posting bhai

Bhai nidhi ma'am ka love ekdum true hein heart touching hein woh bhi so emotional.
But she was fight heart & mind bcz her age gap and family so they can't accept....!
Speechless update.....!😢
Keep Writing...!😊

Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Werewolf bhai....
Nice and beautiful update....

Nice update

Ab phir nidhi ki favourability phir se kam ho gyi ... Dekhty hain ab veer aagy kya kary ga ....

Extraordinary and lovely update

Nice update

वाह क्या बात है
रागिनी की फेवोरेबिलीटी बढ़ गई पर यह क्या निधि की फेवोरेबिलीटी घट गई 😲
पर वीर का मिशन तो निधि को बचाना है
हम्म्म अब वीर की अपीयरेंस बढ़ जाने के बाद भी फेवोरेबिलीटी का घटना मतलब दिल पर दिमाग का हावी हो जाना
फिर भी लाज़वाब अपडेट

Awesome Sam Didier GIF by Jerology

Uttam Lekhni ka Prayog Werewolf bhai...Waiting for Next Update Eagerly...

:claps::claps::claps::claps: भाई आप बहुत ही ड्रमैटिक लिखते है और मुझे ऐसा फॅमिली ड्रामा पसंद है जो की एक किरदार के कैरिक्टर को मजबूत और बढ़ने मे मदद करे, खैर कहानी बहुत ही अच्छी तरह से आगे बढ़ रही है, आपने हर किरदार पर हल्का प्रकाश डालते हुए वीर के किरदार को मजबूत किया है। और एक और बड़े रोमांचक मोड पर अपडेट को खतम किया है है। आगे देखते है क्या होता है।

Akhir Apna lunda Rocky ban gya 😁

Arey yah Kia Fav. Reduce kar ke 40 हो gayi Kia veer ne kuch jaldi kar diya aur Agar jaldi kar bhi diya to bhi theek hain coz atleast usne Apni feelings Kah hi di magar Neha Kia usko aam student ki Tarah treat kar payegi Kia woh apne Dil me uthay jazbat ko rok payegi Intezar rahega inhi sab sawal ke jawab ke sath aapki ek aur bohat khoob update ka.

Awesome Maza aa gaya

Fantastic Update. Please keep it up. Waiting for next Update.

Nice update

Awesome update

Fabulous update

Mast update bhai nidhi ki favourlity ek jhatke me 40 aagaya

Nice update bro

Bohot hi shandar update bhai jannn
लाजवाब

Nice updates

Bhai nice update har baar readers ki prediction se pehle naya suspance! That keeps story so good! Keeps posting

nice update


Beautiful update 😁

Bechara Veer kahan Nidhi ki feelings bahar nikalne gaya tha aur ab khud uske dil se bahar ho gaya. Rangini bhi veer se attract ho rahi hai, kya wo ab Vivek ko divorce degi? How Veer will manage this property? Beautiful update

:superb: :good: awesome update hai Werewolf bhai,
behad hi shandaar aur lajawab update hai bhai

Nice n beautiful update... Jane anjane me Veer ke L lag gye

Nice update bhai

bhut he awla update bro agli update ka besbri se intzr ha😏

What a twist! Kuch parane ke liye kuch khona padta hai

Nice update

Nice update brother

Nice update

Superb update 👍👍👍

Nice update

Favourability reduced ????? Dil Tod diya aapne. He he

Lagta kafi sundariyon ke sahwas ke baad Nidhi mam se Milan hoga.

Nice update

Nice update bhai
Veer ke pass 2 flat he to use nidhi mam ko dena chahiye koi ek flat nidhi ki favor badhe veer ki taraf

Update bhaut Jada kubsurat hain

excellent update...
nidhi's favorability is reduced, excellent twist

super hero ko set hona hai to super villian bhi chahiye ... Pranjal aur Slogan ki jodi acchi rahegi ...
ab dekhna hai ki Aarohi, Ragini air Nidhi me se kaun Veer ka bistar pehale garam karti hain ... chingaari to teeno me lag gayi hai ...

Lo bhaiya kat gya chutiya

Nice update...

Nice update bro

Ab dekhna hai veer kya karta hai Favorability badhane ke liye

Superb Update Bro...
Waiting for Next

Nice update

Lagta kafi sundariyon ke sahwas ke baad Nidhi mam se Milan hoga.

Ha yehi lag raha hai

Superb update

Mind-Blowing update bhai

Ab veer ki zindagi poori badalne wali hai shayad 🙂

nice update .

Awesome update bro maza aa gaya hai



Waiting for the next update bro

Super wonderful awesome mind-blowing rocking update

Nice update...

Awesome update as always.
Nidhi is avoiding the inevitable, let's see how long she can supress her feeling.

Super update :applause:

waiting for next

Nice update

Gurudev update kab tak ayega😀

Nice update

Black Bhai reader bhi hai ye to breaking news hai bhaya... Maine to Abhi tk Aapko sirf writer ke roop me dekha tha...

Super awesome update bro to gud.
Finally nidhi and veer love story start hui.
Eagerly waiting for some romantic scenes between them
plzzz do cont asap takecare

Nice update bro

Nice update Bhai

Bhai apki story gajab he.
Bs apse ek hi request h meri.....
Aajkl ap update nigh k jgh morning me dete ho...
Jis wjh se next update ap jis din morning me dete ho usse 2 din bad ata h.....
Isliye meri apse hath jod k bas ek hi request h ...
Ya to ap update rat m so jis din shedule ho
Ya phir
Morning m update to to jis din update Ane wala tha usi din ko calculate kro rather than jb update diya tb...

For example -
Update 71
Sheudle tha - 27 March
Is hisab se
Update 72 Ane wala tha
30 March ko

But....

Update 71 aya 28 March ko
Isliye ab ap update 72 doge 31 March ko


Isiliye meri request h ya to ap update shedule time or do ya agr next day de rhe ho to us day ko b calculate kro...plz consider if possible 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

Waiting for update.

Waiting for Nice updats brother

Nice update. But i feel it little bit shorter. Waiting for next update.



Werewolf bhai aaj update aayega kya???

Kabhi Kabhi pathko ko bhi surprise Dena chahiye fir apko.
I think you know what I wanna say. :happyjump:

Early Excess :shy:

Waiting for your next update
Very excited


A

akhir kar apna Lunda Rocky ban gya 👌💐💐💐💐💐

Nice update bhai waiting for next update

Chal jhutta :roll:

मैं एक silent reader रही हूं इतने दिनो तक परंतु आपकी कहानी इतनी उत्कृष्ट और excellent हैं की मुझे comment करने के लिए मजबूर कर दिया।
आप एक उम्दा लेखक है । आपके हर अपडेट में आपने जान डाल दी हैं। मैंने आपके हर अपडेट को तल्लीनता से पढ़ा है एवं वो भी कई बार क्यूंकि आपके हर अपडेट इतने अच्छे होते हैं।
आप एक मर्द हैं अतः आपने वीर पे कुछ ज्यादा ही focus किया ही कहानी में , वो सही भी है क्युकी न सिर्फ़ कहानी के अधिकतर पाठक male है और साथ ही साथ वीर hero भी हैं।
परंतु एक female पाठक होने के नाते मेरी एक छोटी सी गुज़ारिश हैं की आप किसी मुख्य नायिका पर भी थोड़ा ध्यान दे।
Romance आपने बखूबी डाला हैं कहानी में वो मुझे बेहद पसंद भी हैं और आया भी आपकी कहानी में अब तक
परंतु महिलाएं भी चाहती है थोड़ी erotic भी हो कहानी में।
वीर जब सुमन या उसकी बहु के साथ सेक्स करता हैं तो लड़के वीर की जगह खुदकर imagine कर अपनी fantasy को जी लेते हैं लेकिन हम female रीडर्स अपनी फैंटेसी को जी नही पाती क्योंकि हर कोई अपने आप को या तो hero या फिर मुख्य नायिका की जगह ही रख के सोचता/सोचती हैं । अतः हम सब female readers की भावनाओं की कद्र करते हुए किसी मुख्य नायिका के साथ सेक्स डालिए । अचानक से नही लेकिन थोड़ा जल्दी डालिए कहानी में।
किसी मुख्य नायिका जैसे kaera , सोनिया के साथ। लेकिन मुझे भी पता हैं उनकी favourability अभी उतनी नही बढ़ी है इसलिए मुश्किल है ।कोई बात नही। लेकिन कम से कम रागिनी के साथ तो थोड़ा डालिए ,या फिर सुहाना के साथ। सुहाना और वीर तो कई बार नजदीक भी आ चुके है ।
मेरी बात का बुरा मत मानिएगा । मैंने तो बस सच्चे प्रशंसक होने के नाते अपनी इच्छा बताई है । बाकी आप लेखक है । आपको बेहतर पता होगा कब क्या करना चाहिए और क्या लिखना चाहिए। लेकिन कम से कम कब होगा ये तो बता दीजिए मुख्य नायिका के साथ न सही रागिनी या सुहाना के साथ। मेरी humble रिक्वेस्ट का बुरा मत मानिएगा प्लीज़।


Superb fantastic update waiting for next

Wetting for next update bro

Nice update Werewolf bhai.
To ab iss update se veer ab kuch property ka Malik to bann hi chuka he. Manorath ji ki jameen he, 2 flat he, 2 cars bhi he ab to. Ab uski kisi premika ko long drive pe leke ja sakta he😅.
Vese ab to uske pass 2 flat he. Ragini veer ko Jane nahi degi wo pata he par veer inn flat se Nidhi ki mushkil to kamm kar sakta he na. Nidhi ke samne abhi to nahi jayega par Shreya to he hi. Usse bol de ki mere flat me raho aur Nidhi ko mat batana ki ye flat veer ka he. Nidhi ko uske flat ka rent to nahi dena padega. Nidhi rent puchi bhi to shreya keh degi ki mene de diya apni salary se. Dekhte he veer kya karega.
Yaha to ragini puri tarah veer ke attraction me kho chuki he khud ko. Kritika ne bata diya ye achha kiya. Ragini achhi tarah Sr sewa kar rahi he veer ki jese uska pati ho. Thoda romantic pal bhi bana bich me par abhi dono ke bich kuch shuru nahi hua warna baat bistar pe jake khatam hoti. Par yaha par jese ragini khud ko veer ke aage haar rahi he. Padhai karte samay bhi veer me hi khoyi hui he wo. High intelligence ki vajah se kafi madad ho gayi uski. Ab frustration nikal ne ke liye suman aur aabha to he hi. Suman apna farz nibha rahi he wahi aabha bhi iss pal ko enjoy kar rahi he.
Subah ka ye scene bhi bada badhiya likha he. Ragini tie laga rahi he. Generally esa kaam kar rahi he jo biwi karti he apne pati ke liye. Aur veer ko bhi ye pata he. Veer ki baat bhi sahi he. Veer ko bhi chahiye ragini jesi koi jo uski esi parwah kare, biwi wali feeling de. Ragini bhi veer ko good luck charm de di gaal pe kiss karke. Future me yahi same scene veer ke kamre me aur uss waqt kiss gaal pe nahi honto pe hogi to uss scene me majha aayega. Tab ragini bhi kahegi shaam ko jaldi aana aapke pasand ka khana banane wali hu. 😂😅
College jate hi Nidhi mil gayi aur uske hi class me. Nidhi bhi bas veer ko hi dekh rahi he. Yaha aapne Nidhi ki bechaini kafi achhi tarah dikhai he. Nidhi bas kisi tarah veer ke paper me dekhna chahti he ki usse yakeen ho jaye ki veer paper me sahi kar raha he. Ek do baar try bhi ki aur trick bhi use kari par veer ne bazi palat di😅. Irritate bhi ho rahi aur chinta bhi kar rahi he. Aur uper se veer ko fist bump ki padi he🤦🏻‍♂️. Candy deke sara gussa shant kar diya usne. Achha he jab sath honge tab bhi yahi trick use Karna. Paper deke ab milne bulaya he.
Yaha balhar ka bhi call aa gaya aur ab wo sath dene ko ready he. Dekhte he ye plan kitna success hoga.
Yaha cabin me to Nidhi ne shuru kar diya apna lecture. Par veer bhi kese sune jab aage esa najara ho. Iss bar bhi lagta he veer ne jaldi kar di. Nidhi ko uski sab harqate ginwai aur last me sachhai bhi uske samne rakh di. Yahi par lagta he jaldbazi ho gayi. Nidhi bhi jese janti hi he ki usko veer pasand he par wo manna nahi chahti. Teacher student, age gape sab usse yaad aa raha he. Aur isi baato se wo khud ko samjhane ki koshish kar rahi he ki wo veer ko pasand nahi karti. Par sachhai kuch aur hi he. Yaha usne to faisla bhi kar diya ki ab veer ko special treatment nahi milega. Par kya wo khud esa kar payegi aur kiya bhi to kab tak ???
Dekhte he Nidhi kese nahi jealous hoti jab veer aur Shreya date pe jayenge ya shreya pura din veer veer karti rahegi. Uper se Sonia aur kaera bhi to he jinko Nidhi dekh chuki he. Next time wo khud ko rok na payegi.
Agar kuch pareshani he to JUHI he hi😅.
Nice update Werewolf bhai.
Waiting for next update.

Sahi baat hai yaar 🤣🤣🤣.
कुछ को मै भी जानता हुँ जो इधर द्विलिंगी बने फिर रहे हैं:laugh::gaylaugh::laughing::evillaugh:

Waiting for your update bro.........

Approximately Kb tk update aaega bhai.....

Bhai aj to update ka din hai aj kab tak update aayega

Maja aagya pranjal ki aisi halat dekh kar 😂😂

Uffffff. Ye intejaaaaar ki ghadiyan.

Behad hi shanadar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb


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Ok bro waiting

Zabardast fantastic update

Kuch hi der matlab Indian time hai ya fir UK time vo bhi bats do bhai

Ohhh Bhai !!! Earlier es time ko bolte hai to fir late kise bolte hai ? Me esi vaste jgta rha ki update jaldi ayega. It's very disappointed dude 😔
Update 72 has been posted.
 

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Update - 72 ~ Divorce!
Ab tak...

'Nahi!!!! I cannot... I don't love him! Wo mera bas ek student hai. Aam students ki tarah. Aur mein ek teacher. Hamaare beech ek profesional rishta hai. Formal relationship. Nothing else. There's nothing between us. From now on... I will treat him just like any other student. That's right! Aisa hi hona chahiye! Yes! I'm right! Of course!!!!'

Apne aasuo ko poch wo kuch derr baad washroom se baahar nikal gayi.

Aur Veer ke mann me tabhi firse ek ghanti baji,

*Ding*

[Nidhi's favourability has been reduced to 40.]


Ab aage...

Kal Nidhi ma'am se mulaqaat ke baad, Veer ke liye kuch bhi faldaayak nahi tha. Na keval Veer Nidhi ma'am ke sang apna rishta sudhaarne me nakaam tha. Balki, Nidhi ma'am ki favourability uske prati aur bhi gir chuki thi. 58 se seedha 40 par aa chuki thi favourability. Wo aur udaas thi uss se.

Nidhi ne decide kar liya tha ki wo Veer se ab zyaada matlab nahi rakhegi, na hi zyaada milegi aur na hi zyaada baat karegi. Ek professional rishta hi bana ke rakhegi wo khud ke aur uske beech.

Veer jaanta tha sab kuch. Wo jaanta tha ki Nidhi ma'am ke mann me uske liye kuch toh hai. Par wo unn feelings ko accept nahi karna chaahti. Wo ye bhi jaanta tha ki ab Nidhi ma'am uss se dur bhaagengi. Uss se kam baat karengi. Ye bahaana dengi ki wo ek student teacher hai aur unhe itna friendly nahi hona chahiye. Usne toh pehle hi aane waale incidents ke baare me imagine kar liya tha.

Par ye sab jaante hue bhi Veer abhi pissed tha.

Wo pissed tha isliye kyuki Nidhi apne emotions ko accept nahi kar rahi thi. Ek taraf Kaera thi jo apne emotions ko feel karne ke liye athak prayaas kar rahi thi. Toh wahi Nidhi thi jiske paas emotions hote hue bhi, wo unhe dhaak kar apni feelings ko chhupa rahi thi. Aur yahi baat Veer ko disappoint kar rahi thi.

Still, wo shaant tha. He was calm. Thanks to his 95 intelligence. Usne saari baatein parakh lii thi. Aur unhe kese deal karna tha ye bhi soch liya tha. Nidhi ma'am bhale hi uss se dur bhaage. Veer ne decide kar liya tha ki ek din wo unhe unke emotions ke aage harwa ke rahega. Aur wo din dur nahi jis din Nidhi khud aake uss se apne dil ki baat kahegi.

Par filhaal, uska attention iss waqt kahi aur zaroori tha. Naha dhone ke baad wo apne room se nikla aur main hall me aaya jaha Suman, Ragini, Aabha aur Sonali sabhi uska hi intezaar kar rahi thi.

Ragini : Baitho Veer!

Ragini ne usse ishaare karte hue baithne ko kaha.

Veer baitha. Wo toh pehle se hi jaanta tha ki Ragini ne yaha sabhi ko subah subah kyu bulaaya tha. Bas wo intezaar kar raha tha.

Ragini : Jaise Dada jii ne apna nirnay liya aur wo apni zimmedari se muqt ho gaye...

Kehte hue usne ek nazar sab par daali fir ek lambi saas lete hue continue kii,

Ragini : Wese hi mene bhi apne jeevan ka faisla le liya hai. Aap sab ko mein apna maanti hu. Apna parivaar maanti hu. Iss ghar ke sadasya hai aap sab. Aur isliye, mein aaj aap sab ke saath apna nirnay saajha karna chaahti hu.

Suman ne ek nod dete hue Ragini ko ishaara kiya ki hum sab sunn rahe hai. Aap kehte jaaiye.

Ragini (nods) : Kaafi kuch soch vichaar karne ke baad, khud se lakh baar sawaal karne ke baad, mein finally iss nirnay par pohuch chuki hu ki...

Sabki nazre uske upar hi tiki hui thi iss waqt. Ragini bhi baari baari sabhi ko dekh rahi thi. Uske baad bina koi sankoch kiye wo boli,

Ragini : Ki... Mein Vivek ko DIVORCE de rahi hu!!!

*Silence*

Aur kuch derr tak bas khaamoshi chhaayi rahi. Koi kuch nahi bola. Veer bas muskuraaya jaise usse pata tha ki Ragini yahi faisla legi.

Na jaane kitni raato ko wo jab jab apne kamre ki orr jaata tha tab tab Ragini ke kamre ke andar se uski rone ki awaaz usse aksar sunaayi de jaaya karti thi. Kamre me sikud kar na jaane kitni raatein roke guzaari thi Ragini ne. Par ab aur nahi. Zindagi me aage bhi badhna tha usse.

Aur Veer jaanta tha ki Ragini issi qadam ko chunegi. Still, yadi wo iska ulta faisla bhi leti toh bhi Veer uska saath deta. Kyuki ab tak Ragini uske sang uske harr kadam par saath de rahi thi. Badle me itna toh karna banta hi tha.

Suman aankho me chamak liye forun hi uth ke aayi aur Ragini ke kandhe par haath rakh uske bagal se baith gayi,

"Aapne ekdum sahi nirnay liya hai Ragini jii! Mein boht khush hu aapke iss faisle se. Ab aap khul ke apna jeevan vyateet kar sakti hai. Aapko ab koi bandish nahi. Yadi aap waapas jaati toh zaahir hai ki aap uss niraasha se kabhi baahar nahi nikal paati. Par ab... Ab sab kuch behtar ho sakta hai."

Suman ki baat sunn Ragini muskuraayi par uske chehre pe waapas se maayusi chha gayi thi. Uski udaasi ko mehsoos karte hue Suman fir boli,

"Aur... Aur mujhe vishvaas hai ki koi aapse behad pyaar karne waala aapke jeevan me jald hi khushiyo ke rang bhar dega. Dekhna..."

Suman ne Veer ko dekhte hue ye baat boli.

'Hmm?'

Suman : Kyu hai na? Veer ji!?

Veer : !?? Haan! O-Of course!

Ragini stabdh nigaaho se Veer ko dekhi aur fir halki muskaan liye neeche dekhne lagi. Uske gaal halke gulaabi the, na jaane kya soch rahi thi.

Par itna zaroor tha ki wo pehle se kaafi behtar mehsoos kar rahi thi.

Aabha aur Sonali toh bas chup chaap baithi rahi shuru se ant tak. Unke kehne ya na kehne se wese bhi kuch nahi hone waala tha. Aur na hi wo itni experienced thi inn maamlo me.

***

Veer's old home...

Veer ke puraane ghar me iss waqt apne kamre me Pranjal baithe hue tha. Diary me na jaane kya likh raha tha.

Par uske chehre ke bhaav bade hi khaufnaak the iss waqt.

'Veeeeerrr!!!! How dare you...!!!!? Hmm~ Nice... Nice... I see!! Toh aisa hai sab kuch haan? Veer!!!! Tumhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha. Na keval tumne mera mazaak banaaya balki, meri poori planning par tumne paani fer ke rakh diya... DAMN YOUUUU VEEERRRR!!! MEIN TUJHE CHORRUNGA NAHIIII!!!'

Pranjal jo apne gusse ko qaabu me karne ki koshish kar raha tha, uska gussa harr guzarte pal badhta hi jaa raha tha. Jese hi wo aankhein band karta, uske saamne wahi banquet me hua sharmindagi waala nazaara saamne aa jaata. Kitna embarassed hona pada tha usse waha. Aaj tak apni poori zindagi me Pranjal ne kabhi itni sharmindagi mehsoos nahi kii thi.

Aur ye sab kiski wajah se hua tha? Khaali ek Veer ki wajah se. Wo Veer, jisse Pranjal bachpan se ullu banaata aaya tha, aaj usme itni himmat aa gayi thi ki wo palat ke uska mazaak bana sake? Wo bhi sab ke saamne?

Pranjal ka khoon khaul raha tha uss manzar ko yaad kar kar ke.

Par Pranjal bhi koi kaccha khilaadi nahi tha. Wo aisa saanp tha jo apne ande ek hi bil me kabhi nahi rakhta tha. Dusre shabdo me, uske paas kayi paitre the. Yadi Veer ne uske plan ka pardafaash bhi kar diya tha toh bhi uske paas kayi upaay the.

In fact, Pranjal ab aur chaukanna ho gaya tha. Usse pata lag chuka tha ki Veer active hai inn maamlo me aur ab boht hi bareeki se jaal bichhaana padega.

'Hmm~ Badla toh mein lunga Veer! Tumne ye wese accha kiya jo mujhe aagah kar diya. Harr ek beizzati ka badla lunga mein. Ab tak mein choti macchliyo ko pakadne me laga hua tha. Par ab mujhe sabse pehle badi macchli pakad ke usse paani me se nikaalna padega. Uske baad... I'll deal with you!!! Kyuki, pehle paisa zaroori hai. Once I'll have that... Tumse nipatna fir chutkiyo ka khel hoga mere liye.'

Sochte hue usne diary me zorr se apna pen panno me khos diya.

***

Aatish' Hideout 5...
Time : 8:13 PM

"Kya sab aa gaye?"

Ye awaaz thi Slogan ki jo kursi par baithe hue tha. Chehre ki chinta saaf bata rahi thi ki wo yaha kuch serious discuss karne hi aaya tha.

Warehouse tha ye Aatish ka ek prakaar se. Uska adda number 5. Aksar wo badi deals yahi kiya karta tha. Kyuki, ye jagah kaafi safe thi.

Slogan ke samaksh baithe Steve ne haa me gardan hilaayi aur apni baat rakhi,

"Aa gaye hai sab Dada. Aap bataiye. Jo bhi orders honge mein wo sab aadmiyo ko samjha dunga."

Slogan : Hmm! Uske pehle... Ye glass bharwao pehle.

Steve : Jii! Balhaar, idhar aao!!!!!

Steve ne Balhaar ko zorr se chillaaya toh wo peeche se aaya aur uske haath me ek jug tha.

Steve aur Slogan dono hi baatein kar rahe the. Aur Balhaar nazre neeche kiye glass me beer bhar raha tha.

Par tabhi jese jis baat ka usse darr tha wahi hua,

Steve : Hmm? Tum toh right handed the na? Ye baaye haath se kyu serve kar rahe ho?

Ye sunte hi Balhaar ke chehre se uska rang udd gaya. Waqai! Steve boht sharp tha. Aise hi nahi usko apna right hand bana ke rakha hua tha Slogan ne. Steve ki baat sunn iss baar Slogan ne bhi usse dekha. Aur dono ki nazro ko apne upar mehsoos kar, Balhaar ke paseene chhootne lage the.

But thanks to Veer, ki usne pehle hi usse iss baare me aagah kar diya tha. So he came prepared. Usse pata tha ki usse kya bolna tha.

Balhaar : Steve bhai! Jis din hum sabhi uss Veer ko pakad ke laaye the. Aur, fir baad me unki gang aa gayi thi. Tab adde se bhaagte time mein aur mere aadmi unke aadmiyo se bhid gaye the. Aur... Ussi ladaayi me... Ye sab ho gaya. Mera haath mud gaya.

Steve : Ohhh! Toh ab tak treatment kyu nahi liya?

Balhaar : Jab tak uss Veer ki khatiya na khadi kar du tab tak mujhe chenn nahi aayega Steve bhai. Ussi ke kaaran ye sab hua hai.

Slogan : Theek hai! Tum jaa sakte ho.

Balhaar : Jii!

Aur Balhaar peeche jaa ke khada ho gaya. Slogan ko pata nahi kyu, par kuch theek nahi laga.

Slogan : Steve! Hume kuch karna hoga. Jald hi.

Steve : Kahiye Dada!

Slogan : Wo jagah...

Slogan ne seedha Steve ki aankho me dekhte hue kaha. Steve bas do shabd sunte hi maun reh chuka tha.

Steve : Kya wahi par...!?

Slogan : Haa wahi par...

Steve : Samajh gaya Dada! Par aap waha par saara intezaam karoge kese? Uss ladki ko...!?

Slogan : Plan aisa hai ki...

Slogan apni saari baatein rakhta jaa raha tha par usse nahi pata tha ki Balhaar wahi peeche khada hua kya kuch nahi kar raha tha.

Slogan apne jeevan kaal me itni deaths ko escape kiya hua tha ki usse khatre ka abhaas ho jaata tha. Aise hi nahi wo itne saal tak zinda tha. Itne bade khatro se ladne ke bawajood wo harr baar zinda bach jaata tha. Kyuki usse experience tha. Wo khatre ko bhaanp leta tha.

Aaj bhi Steve se baatein karte hue, usse kuch ajeeb laga. Toh usne forun hi kaha,

Slogan : STEVE!!

Steve : Jii Dada!

Slogan : Iss Balhaar ko baahar jaane ko kaho.

Steve : Balhaaaarrr!!! Baahar jao!

Balhaar : Jii Steve bhai!

Wo bina kuch kahe baahar nikal gaya. Jese usse jo chaahiye tha, wo usse mil chuka tha. Uske chehre par ek kutil muskaan thi.

Steve : Kya hua Dada? Kuch baat hai kya?

Slogan : Nahi! Ye Balhaar...

Steve : Balhaar apna hi aadmi hai Dada. Aatish bhau ke andar hi wo saalo se kaam karta aaya hai. Wo gaddaari nahi karega, jaha tak mujhe lagta hai. Par kya aapko kuch doubt hai?

Slogan : Hmm! Iss Balhaar ki poori jankaari lo. Mobile phone se leke sab kuch. Mujhe kuch theek nahi lag raha.

Steve : Jesa aap kahe!

Aur issi ke saath Slogan ne wo meeting wahi samaapt kar dii. Aaj usse kuch gadbad mehsoos ho rahi thi. Aur isliye usne Steve ko bhi uss Balhaar ki info nikaalne ka kaam saup diya.

Par kis jagah ki baat kar rahe the ye Steve aur Slogan? Ho na ho, Slogan kuch bada hi soch ke aage badh raha tha. Kuch aisa jo iss baar usse uske maqsad tak pohucha sakta tha.

***

Ragini's PoV...

Aaj! Aaj mene apne jeevan ka ek boht hi aham faisla liya tha. Vivek se Talaak!

Mein harr raat jaagti aur mere khayaalo me wo mazar mandraata rehta tha.

"M-Mujhe chorr do... Mujhe mat maaro!"

Vivek ke wo shabd jo usne uss gunde se kahe the jab uss gunde ne ye pucha tha ki kiski jaan lu? Toh Vivek mera apna pati apni jaan ki bheekh maang raha tha. Bina meri koi parvaah kiye.

Kya kuch nahi kiya tha mene uske liye? Uss se pyaar kiya. Uske kehne hi pe mein do saal tak ruki rahi hamaari shaadi ke liye. Mere Dad T.V.S ke showrooms ke maalik the toh mene uski automobiles ki company me kitni madad karwayi thi unn se.

Of course mein ye sab baato ko ginti thodi thi. Kyuki mein sab kuch hamaare liye hi toh kar rahi thi. Shaadi hue abhi hume kuch hi mahine toh hue the. Uske kehne par mein abhi Maa bhi nahi bani thi.

Kyuki wo chaahta tha ki abhi hum life ko aur enjoy kare thoda. Aur mein bhi maan gayi thi.

Usse chaahiye thi property. Toh devar Pranjal ke saath milkar wo dono kuch khichdi pakaate rehte the aur mujhe bina bataaye hi harr baar plan me shaamil kar lete the. Mein bhi yahi samajhti thi ki ye jo bhi matter hai jald hi nipat jaega aur mein apna pyaara jeevan uske sang vyateet karungi.

Veer! Mera devar! Uske khilaaf hi hum sab shadiyantra rachte the. Mein toh bas naam ke liye unke plan me hua karti thi. Mujhe toh sab kuch aksar baad me pata chalta tha ki ye sab akhir karte kya the. Shuru me mujhe aisa lagta tha ki shayad Veer waqai ek bhondu insaan hai. Par mein galat thi.

Uss raat jab mene saari umeed chorr dii thi. Uss raat wahi Veer kisi farishte ki tarah mujhe bachaane aaya tha. Mein... Jo uske khilaaf rehti thi. Mujhe bachaane aaya tha woh. Uss raat mujhe pata lag chuka tha ki ek saccha asli insaan kesa hota hai. Wo tha Veer! Vivek nahi! Vivek ne toh mere dil ko choor choor kar ke rakh diya tha. Saare armaan mere, mere sapne, sab kuch ek hi jhatke me usne bikher ke rakh diye the.

Aur mein kathputli ki tarah uske haatho me naachti rahi. Kaash mujhe ye baatein pehle samajh aa jaati. Kherr! Galti toh insaan se hi hoti hai na? Mujhse bhi hui. Aur ab mein usse sudhaarungi.

Aaj hi na keval mene vakeel ko bula liya tha balki mein Veer aur baaki sabhi ke sang seedha apne mata pita ko leke Vivek ke ghar bhi gayi thi.

Itni kaha suni hui, kaafi derr tak mujhe uske gharwaale manaate rahe. Mere Mom Dad boht supporting the. Unhone poora decision mere pe chorr diya tha. Aaj wo Vivek gusse me mujhe chillaata raha, toh kabhi rote hue gidgidaata raha. Par mein tass se mass na hui. Saala aise insaan pe kese bharosa kar sakti thi mein.

Pata nahi kyu, par meri nazre Vivek ko chorr aaj Veer pe zyaada jaa rahi thi. Wo khaamosh sa bas mere harr faisle me mera saath de raha tha. Ye hoti hai maturity. Sach kahu toh Veer ek gentleman tha.

Haan thoda natkhat tha, aksar wo baatein bhi keh deta tha jo aurto ke liye appropriate nahi hoti thi. Par... Dheere dheere usme change aa raha tha. Aur boht hi behtar change aa raha tha. All in all, he knew how to treat a woman.

Vivek ke parivaar ke lakh manaane par bhi mein na maani aur mene divorce ke paper par sign kar diye the. Shayad Vivek ko bhi pata tha ki ab wo mujhe kabhi nahi mana sakta, toh usne bhi bemann papers par sign kar diye.

Ab toh bas formalities hi bachi thi. Jo kuch din me hi ho jaane waali thi. Main cheez toh sign hi the aur dono taraf ki razamandi.

Uss ghar me toh jese maatam sa chha gaya tha. Ghar ke do sadasya ghar jo chorr chuke the. Mein aur Veer. Do bhi nahi, teen. Veer ki asli maa bhi toh nahi thi. Mujhe unke baare me koi jaankaari nahi thi. Kitni hi ajeeb baat thi. Unse related koi bhi cheez nahi thi ghar me. Na koi photo, na koi zikr unka. Na jaane bechaare Veer ko kitni tadpan hoti hogi apni Maa ko lekar. Bechaare ko kabhi Maa ka pyaar nahi mil paaya tha. Maa ka kya kabhi theek se usse parivaar ka pyaar nahi mila.

Isliye mene usse apne sang rakhne ki sochi thi. I'll give him a familial love.

Aaj mein behad khush thi. Thoda maayus bhi thi par uss se bhi zyada khushi thi. Aisa lag raha tha jese kisi ne dil se kaafi wajni bhaar ko utha liya ho.

Ab mein azaad thi. Ab mein unn raato ko hamesha hamesha ke liye bhulna chaahti thi.

Aur isliye, aaj mene sab kuch hata diya. Saree utaar dii, mangal sutra hata diya, maang me se sindoor hata diya, apne haatho se choodiya nikaal dii. Aaj mein bas ek shining black top aur blue jeans me thi.

Mein bilkul college ki ladki lag rahi thi. Aisa lag raha tha ki mein Arohi aur Kavya ki college ki saheli hu. Jese hi mein iss roop me baahar aayi, meri nazre Veer ke chehre par hi thi. Kesa reaction hoga uska?

Aur jese hi usne mujhe dekha...

'Hahahahahaha~' Meri mann hi mann hassi chooth gayi. He was so cute. Fufu~

Uska muh khula hua tha. Wo aankhein phaade mujhe dekh raha tha. Mein bhi jese nayj naveli girlfriend ki tarah poora ghumte hue usse apna look dikha rahi thi.

'Just stop it! What was I even doing!?'

"K-Kaisi lag rahi hu mein?" Mere sawaal par wo maun reh gaya tha. Fir thkda hadbadaate hue jawaab diya tha usne.

"B-Bhabhi!?? You look wonderful!!!"

"Is that so?? Fufu~"

Usne meri tareef kii thi. Pata nahi kyu, par uske muh se tareef sunte hi mera mann prafullit ho utha tha. Vivek ko jab bhi mein aise dikhaaya karti thi apna look toh woh bas ek look deta tha aur bas yahi kehta tha, 'You look good!'

Harr baar uska same dialogue rehta tha. Par Veer!? I could feel ki usne dil se kaha tha.

"Veer!!! Aaj mein xxxxxxx cafe jaana chaahti hu. Will you take me?"

Mene uss se pucha. Mera waha jaane ka ek hi maqsad tha.

"O-Okay! Chaliye!"

Wo raazi bhi ho gaya. Kitna sweet tha Veer. Kabhi mujhe mana nahi karta tha. Hehe~

Wo car ki orr jaa hi raha tha toh mene usse mana kar diya.

"Nahi Veer! Hum bike pe chalenge!"

"Ehhh!?"

"Bike pe! Tum jaldi bike nikalo."

"Umm... Well! Okay!"

Usne firse mujhe mana nahi kiya. I really wanted to give him a hug. How can he be so sweet?

Wahi Vivek... To be honest usse bike chalaana hi nahi aata tha. Aaj tak mein uske saath bike par kabhi nahi baithi thi. Hamesha car me hi rehta tha woh.

Aaj mein Veer ke theek peeche baithi hui thi uski bike me. Aah! Bike se yaad aaya, ye bike mene hi toh usse gift kii thi. He loves this bike so much. Bhale hi utni mehngi nahi thi par Veer boht care karta tha bike kii.

Mein uske peeche baithi, aur pata nahi kyu par mene apne dono haath aaj uske seene me daal diye. Aur uss se bhi badi baat ki mujhe aisa karte waqt kuch bhi galat nahi laga.

Veer shayad meri iss harqat se thoda hadbada gaya tha par bola kuch nahi.

Kuch hi derr me hum uss cafe ke saamne the. Mere yaha aane ke do hi kaaran the. Pehla ye ki yaha cocktails aur mocktails dono hi boht acchi milti thi. Dusra... Well! Dusra kaaran bhi jald hi aane waala tha.

Andar aane se pehle hi Veer ne mere liye door khola.

'Oh Veer!!! How considerate of you!'

Usne mere liye door khola. Vivek toh inn baato par kabhi dhyaan hi nahi deta tha.

Andar aate hi humne dekha. Cafe me harr jagah couples hi couples the. Haatho me haath liye wo ek dusre se baatein karne me lage hue the. Mand mand music baj raha rha. Cafe ka ambiance ekdum romantic tha.

Aur apni table par aate hi...

'Huh!?? Did he just...!?'

Veer ne mere liye kursi kheechi. Taaki pehle mein baith saku.

'Don't do this Veer. Aur kitna sweet banoge!??' mein mann me chillaayi.

Veer mere just saamne baitha hua tha aur wo thoda uncomfortable lag raha tha. Par meri khaatir wo ye sab kar raha tha. Really! He was too sweet.

Uske baad wo utha aur order dene gaya. Wo meri pasand jaanta tha. Usse puchne ki bhi zaroorat nahi padi. Wahi Vivek, mujh se hi order dene ko keh deta tha. Usse farq nahi padta tha ki mein kya pee rahi hu, meri choices kya hai. Sach me, dono me kitna difference tha. Veer was like a husband figure. Really, kitni lucky hogi wo ladki jisse Veer jaisa ladka milega.

*Sigh*

Mene ek aah bhari. Young hona kitna accha tha. Sadly, mein apne college ke dino se kayi saal aage aa chuki thi. If only I could go back in time...

Then!?

Then what?

Who would I have chosen?

Iss sawaal ko sochte hi meri nazar Veer pe chali gayi jo waha khade hoke order de raha tha.

Aur usse dekh uske baare me sochte hi mere gaal surkh laal pad gaye.

'Ragini!?? What are you even thinking?'

Unn baato ko mene dimaag se nikaal diya. Veer order deke aaya aur saamne baith gaya. Mein usse hi nihaar rahi thi. Aur wo meri nazro se bach kar idhar udhar dekh raha tha. Hehehe~ Shayad sharma raha tha.

It was so fun to tease him.

Jald hi hamaara order bhi aa gaya. Usne watermelon flavour ki ek mocktail mangwaai thi. No alcohol!

Aur mene cocktail! My favourite... Sex on the Beach!

Nahi nahi! Ye cocktail ka naam tha. Kuch aur nahi! Iska flavour mujhe personally pasand tha.

Veer jaanta tha. Mene usse bataaya tha pehle, mujhe yaad hai. Aur usse ab tak yaad tha.

Sip sip karte hue hum apni apni drinks pee rahe the. Par bechaara Veer mujhse nazre hi nahi mila paa raha tha. Hehe~

Uska ek aur kaaran tha. Kyuki, aaj mene black crop top pehna hua tha. Mera poora nanga pait khule aam nazar aa raha tha. Veer ne mujhe kabhi aise nahi dekhta tha. Of course, he was dumbfounded.

Pata nahi kyu, mujhe usse aur sataane ka mann karne laga.

"Veeer~ Idhar aao na! Mere bagal se baitho na!"

I called him. Aur wo mujhe dekhne ke baad firse mujhe inkaar kiye bina hi aake baith gaya. Oh god! Why was he so cute?

"A-Aaj aap khush ho Bhabhi?" Usne pucha.

"Hmm~ Behad! Aaj mere dil se ek bojh jese kam ho gaya." Mene jawaab diya.

Par ab samay aa gaya tha. Mere dusre maqsad ka...

Jis maqsad se mein yaha aayi thi.

Mene cafe ke baahar dekha. Road ke uss side hi boht badi sharaab ki dukaan thi. Mujhe pata tha koi waha aane wala tha. Uska hi intezaar tha mujhe...

Aur jese mein sahi thi.

Uski car aake waha ruki aur wo baahar nikla.

Kaun? Koi aur nahi, meri wahi pati... Pati nahi, ex-pati... Vivek!!!

Aur dukaan me jaake usne ek badi bottle sharaab ki lii aur car ke paas aake bonnet pe tik ke wo poori bottle gatakne laga.

I knew it!!! Mujhe pata tha wo aaega.

Aur tabhi...

"Veer!" I called him.

"Huh!?"

"Apna haath do." Mene uss se demand kiya.

"Ehh!? Mera haath!?"

"Hmm~"

Usne apna haath tabke ke upar rakha aur uske aisa karte hi...

Mene uska haath thaam aur apne peeche se le jaate hue seedhe apni nangi kamar par uska haath rakh diya.

"Bh-Bhabhiiiiiiii!!????" Wo hadbadaaya. Par mene uska haath ek pal ke liye bhi apne se juda nahi hone diya.

'Yesssssss!!! This was the touch I missed.. I was right!!!!'

Aur tabhi, jis cheez ke ghatit hone ka mujhe intezaar tha. Wo ho gayi.

Vivek ki nazar hamaare cafe ki window par padi. Aur hume dekhte hi...

*Craaaaasssssshhhhhhh*

Uski aankhein aag babula ho chuki thi. Hehehe~
Yessssss!!! I wanted to see him like tha.

Mene Veer ka haath aur zorr se kass ke apni kamar me laga liya aur Vivek ko dekhne lagi.

Veer toh sabse anjaan tha. Wo sharma raha tha. Toh wahi Vivek... Uska seena gusse me upar neeche ho raha tha.

Aur wo agle hi pal waha se bhaag ke nikal gaya.

'Yesssssss!!! Ohhh god! This feeling!!! His face.... I feel so good!!!!!'

I achieved what I wanted to achieve.

Aur yaha ye buddhu Veer... Hehe~ Kitna sharma raha tha.

Ye buddhu sochta tha ki mein apne kamre me uss Vivek ke liye roti thi. Arre shuru me zaroor roti thi. Par keval Vivek hi ek kaaran nahi tha. Mein toh iss pagle ke liye roti thi.

Because I knew...

I FELL FOR HIM!!

Isliye roti thi. Ki ye galat hai, wagarah wagarah. Vivek ke wo gande laanchan mujhe yaad aa jaate. Par uske bawajood... I fell for this guy.

Aur yadi Vivek itna claim maarta hi tha. That I was having some illicit relationship with Veer.

So why not!??

I'll show him... This time!

Fir mene Veer ko dekha aur uski chin pakad apni orr aage kari.

Aur uske gaal par apni lipstick ke nishaan laga diye.

Not on those damn juicy lips. Unhe bhi chakhungi. Par ek ek seedhi chadhungi mein...

After all, Veer kahi bhaage thodi jaa raha tha.

"Right Veer?"

"Hmm? Kya?"

"Fufu~ Nothing!"
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Kuch 3 se 4 updates kahani me mellow scenes chalenge. Romantic scenes, somewhere erotica and some different PoVs. But boht hi jald action aane waala hai. I'm doing some work. Some hard work on those. Prepare rehne ka action ke liye. Isliye abhi inn mellow scenes ko enjoy kariye. Kyuki palak jhapakte hi thrill start ho jaega.
Anyways! Like karne ka aur revos rakhne ka. ✨

Dhanyavaad!
Pranjal aur Vivek dono ki watt lag gayi aur reason only one Veer. Chahe directly ya in directly but maza aa gaya. Pranjal ka sach ab uski family ko bhi pata chalna chahiye, tab aur bhi maza aayega. So finally Ragaini accepted Veer hor her. Mast scene hone waala hai ye, ek dum dhaansu scene.
 
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