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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

    Votes: 1,312 83.1%
  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 27 1.7%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 204 12.9%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 35 2.2%

  • Total voters
    1,578

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Update - 80 ~ Reunion and Conspiracy
Ab tak...

Uski destination thi ~ Egypt!!!!

Bhavna bhale hi Giza Pyramids ki khoj se kaut aayi thi. Par Egypt me keval yahi pyramids nahi the. Haal hi me, researchers ne ek aur pyramid khoja tha. Uske andar ki saari chhaan been karne dherro researchers aur scientists aaye hue the. Bhavna unme se ek thi.

Ye ek bade scale ka excavation tha.

Aur Veer ready tha.

Apni Maa se Finally milne ke liye. Aur apni uss behan se bhi.


Ab aage...

Egypt!!!

Ek aisa desh, jo aksar charcha me bana rehta hai, apne culture se jude rehesya aur raazo ko lekar.

Jii haan! Aapne sahi samjha. Egypt naam sunte hi insaan ke mann me sabse pehli cheez jo dimaag me aati hai, wo hai ~ Pyramids.

Aur maano chaahe na maano, par Pyramids of Giza hi nahi, balki aise dherro anya pyramids hai jo kayi saare raaz chhupaaye hue hai.

Giza Pyramid, hamaare sansaar ke seven wonders me se ek hai. Aur sabse puraana hai saare 7 ajubo me se.

Par, aur kya khaas baat thi?

Inn Pyramids ke andar hota kya tha? Mummy? Aur? Bhala Aur kya?

Darasal, puraatan kaal ke Egyptian ka culture kaafi rich tha. Maana jaata hai ki kisi pharaoh ki jab mrityu ho jaati thi. Tab uske liye ye pyramid ka nirmaan kiya jaata tha. Jisme uske shav ko rehesyamayi liquid se coat karke, uss par pattiya baandh usse ek taboot me band kar dafn kar diya jaata tha. Jisse, hum aaj Mummy keh kar pukaarte hai.

Pharaoh ka matlab tha, ek ruler. King! Ya emperor, jo kehna ho. Yahi tha jo poore Egyptians ko rule karta tha. Pharaoh!!!!

Inn Pyramids ke ekdum andar Pharaoh ka burial chamber rehta tha. Jo aksar, beshqeemti khazaane, aur anya items se hamesha bhara jaata tha taaki, wo inn sab ka upyog apni afterlife yaani ki punar jeevan ya bhavishya jeevan me bhi kar sake.

Aas paas ki deewaaro par carvings aur vishesh paintings banaayi jaati thi. Aur, Pharaoh ke chamber ke paas hi, anya kamre rehte the jidhar uski family aur sevako ko dafn kiya jaata tha.

Chaahe Egyptians ho, ya chaahe Chinese, inme ek baat boht common hoti thi. Wo yeh ki inke rulers, immortality ko lekar aur afterlife ko lekar boht jigyaasu hote the. Betaab rehte the inse jude uttar paane ke liye. Wo harr sambhav prayaas karte the immortality paane ka. Amar hona!!! Par jo duniya me aaya hai wo jaata toh hai hi.

Immortality ka jawaab koi na dhundh paaya filhaal.

Ab inme bhala aisa kya khaas tha jiske peeche scientists aur researchers paagal the? Kya aisi baatein thi wese?

Ek baat jo sabse zyaada scientists ko aaj bhi chakra dene par majboor kar deti hai wo ye hai ki, aisa kaun sa liquid padaarth tha Egyptians ke paas, jisse wo shav par lagaate the?

Itne hazaaro saalo ke baad bhi, wo shav ekdum intact rehta tha. Kya mila ke uss liquid ko banaaya jaata tha? Wo golden colour ka padaarth. Aisa lagta tha ki pighla hua swarn ho. Par usme aur kayi saari cheezein rehti thi. Scientists aaj bhi iska jawaab dhundh rahe hai.

Egypt ki ret, dherro raaz chhupaaye hue hai. Aur harr ek khoj hamaari soch ko puraatan duniya ke baare me ek nayi samajh pradaan karti hai.

Aur, aise hi kuch pyramids abhi haal hi me discover hue the firse.

Cairo, Egypt ki rajdhani me hi scientists ne 2 aur pyramids dhundh nikaale the. Ye dafn ho gaye the. Gehri ret ki parat se.

Haal hi me inhe bhi khoj liya gaya. Pyramids nahi kahenge, kyuki wo triangular shape ki jo building thi, wo toh aadhi ret me dhassne se barbaad ho chuki thi. Bas andar ka jo kuch bhi tha, wo bacha hua tha.

Aur ye toh kuch bhi nahi tha. Abhi na jaane kitne aur discover hone baaki the.

Harr pyramid ki excavation site construct karne ke liye ek unique site management plan banaaya jaata tha. Ye depend karta tha ki Pyramid, kesi location par hai, aas paas kya hai, aur kitne force ko seh sakta hai.

Yaha par bhi aisa hi kuch hua tha. Site plan keval do cheezo par focused tha. Conservation aur Restoration.

Yaani ki, sabse pehla kaam hai ki iss khoj, iss khazaane ko, Jo kuch bhi mila hai usse pehle sambhaal ke rakha jaaye. Aur fir inhe restore kiya jaaye. Yaani ki yadi koi artifact toot chuka hai toh usse jitna pehle jesa banaaya jaa sakta hai. Wo kiya jaaye.

Uske baad site ko aisa banaana tha ki baad me isse tourism ke roop me bhi dhaala jaa sake. Of course, jab investigation khatam hoegi toh log tourism ke roop me inn khojo ko aage chal ke dekhne toh aaenge hi. Toh site aisi ho, ki uss par zyaada mehnat na karte hue usse ek tourism site me badla jaa sake.

Threat of urbanization. Iss baat ka bhi dhyaan rakhna tha. Aage badhti duniya kahi inhe bhul na jaaye, ya inhe haani na pohuchaaye.

Vehicles ka danger. Of course! Tourism ke dauraan, paryatak vehicles se hi aaenge jaaenge. Toh inhe unn se bhi thoda dur rakhna hoga.

Aur rahi baat excavation ki, toh usme ek sensible plan ki requirement thi.

Jo, sab kuch Cairo ke, MINISTRY OF TOURISM AND ANTIQUITIES ke varisht member ~ Sir George ne sambhaali hui thi.


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Duniya bhar se aneko scientists aur researchers iss khoj ka hissa the.

Aur inhi me se ek thi~

Bhavna!!!

Aur ussi ke sang uski beti, jo ki ek trainee thi filhaal. Wo seekh rahi thi sab kuch. Apni Maa ki guidance me. Bhavna ki post reputed post thi. Jis kaaran, uski beti ko bhi uske saath aane mil jaata tha.

Aur, yahi iss waqt khoje gaye pyramids ke hi agal bagal ek bada shelter taiyaar kiya gaya tha. Hawa aur paani se usse bachaane ke liye.

Idhar hi, researchers saare raat me rehte bhi the, subah research karte the. Aur ye investigation hafto toh kahi mahino tak chala karti thi.

Shaam ka waqt ho raha tha abhi aur shayad shelter me hi kuch behas ho rahi thi.

"What?? They didn't send it with you? What the hell are they even doing?"

Ek aged aadmi thoda gusse me saamne khade vyakti se bola.

Ye aged aadmi koi aur nahi, Sir George hi the.

Aadmi : I'm sorry Sir!!! But they said it will take time.

George : They are just stalling us. Hmph~

Sir George gusse me itna bol baahar nikal gaye. Aur wahi se thodi dur Bhavna khadi hui thi. Aaj ki investigation samaapt ho chuki thi. Wo apni beti ke sang bas apne camp area me rest karne hi jaa rahi thi.

Saqqara Plateau ke beecho beech the iss waqt woh sab. Chaaro orr ret hi ret thi bas. Aur site ke agal bagal unka shelter. Wo samajh chuki thi ki ye behes kis cheez ko lekar thi. Akhir uska bhi mood off tha iss baat ko lekar.

Tabhi uski beti usse dekh puchi, "Mom! Kya Sir George...!?"

Bhavna : Yes Beta!!! Egyptian govt. iss baar iss excavation me hamaara saath nahi de rahi hai poori tarah.

Ladki : Par kyu Mom!? Giza ke Pyramids me toh kitna behtar intezaam tha. Fir yaha...!?

Bhavna (sighs) : Beta!!! Egypt me simultaneously kayi jagah par research chal rahi hai. Aise me ye ek aur... Tum toh jaanti ho ki research ke liye kitne resources lagte hai. Yahi kaaran hai ki iss baar govt. ne yaha hume permission toh dii hai. Par resources provide karwaane me wo... Katra rahe hai... Taal rahe hai... Sir George gusse me hai kyuki generator almost dead hone waala hai. Aur naye generators aaye nahi hai abhi tak.

Ladki : I see!

Bhavna : Aur ye hum jaante hi hai ki excavation ke dauraan, electricity lagti hi hai. Neeche underground me saari jagah bulbs lage hai. Ussi ke zariye toh hum raat me bhi andar jaa sakte hai. Electric supply boht zaroori hai. Electricity nahi hogi toh equipments kese operate karenge hum? Aur lagta hai... Jaha se generators milne waale the. Unlogo ne taal diya hai...

Ladki : Par kyu Mom? Ye sab toh unke hi desh ka khazaana hai. Fir aisa kyu kar rahe hai woh?

Bhavna : Hmm! Mene bataaya na beta. Pehle hi kayi aur investigations chal rahi hai. Upar se yaha alag alag desh se log aake unke khazaane ko dekh rahe hai, unhe chhu rahe hai. Toh unhe iss baat se khushi thodi hoti hai. Wo aisa isliye kar rahe hai ki ye investigation taali jaa sake. Resources nahi rahenge toh unke paas bahana rahega. Wo chaahte hai ki unke hi investigators yaha ki khoj jaari rakhe. Samjhi?

Ladki : Hmm! But aisa nahi hona chahiye Mom...

Abhi wo aage kehti ki tabhi peeche se unke Sir George ki awaaz aayi.

Sir George : Miss Geeta~

Bhavna : Yes sir!? Is something the matter?

Yaha usse Geeta ke naam se sabhi jaante the. Yahi toh uski alias thi. Bhavna naam jese ab dafn hoke reh gaya tha. Bilkul, iss tomb ke Pyramid ki tarah.

Sir George : Ahh yes! Those rascals! Haven't send any generators. As you can see, we are in dire need of those. So, I have ordered some trainees to go there and get back with our generators. Umm... If you don't have any problem. Can we send your daughter as well. She's good and persuasive. She'll handle this well.

Sir George generators ko mangwaane ke liye Bhavna ki beti ko bhi bhejna chaahte the. Aur wo Bhavna ke uttar ka wait kar rahe the.

Bhavna : Ahh! That...

Wo thodi uljhan me padd gayi.

Ladki : Don't worry Mom!!! I can handle it. We'll arrive very soon. Don't worry! Abhi shaam hi hai. Raat tak aa jaenge hum sab waapas. Itna bhi dur nahi hai.

Bhavna ko na chaahte hue bhi haan me sarr hilaana pada. Kyuki, Sir George ko wo saalo se jaanti thi. Giza ke dauraan bhi wahi the uss jagah ke general.

Bhavna : Go safely okay?

Ladki (smiles) : Wait for me!!! I'll be back soon!

Sir George (smiles) : Help is always appreciated young lady. You are just like your mother. Active and dedicated.

Ladki (smiles) : Thank you~

Aur Bhavna ki beti shelter se baahar nikal gayi. Bhavna chintit nazro se bas usse jaate hue dekhti rahi. Upar waale se dua kar rahi thi. Sab kuch sahi hi rahe. Maa thi, chinta toh hoti hi hai apni santaan ki.

Aur agle hi pal apni beti ke baare me sochne ke baad, uska dhyaan kahi aur bhatak gaya. Uska haath anaayas hi apne pait par chala gaya. Aur maayusi bhare bhav liye wo apne camp area me chali gayi.

***


Mumbai...
Night time ~ 9:17 PM


Jaha Egypt me rait chaand ki roshni me chamak rahi thi, toh yaha apne Mumbai me saara sheher City lights aur raasto par daud rahi gaadiyo ki roshni se jagmaga raha tha.

Udhar ki hawa aur idhar ki hawa me kitna antar tha. Ye thi rushed life.

Ek bemisaal aalishaan 5 star hotel ke saamne hi entry par ek guard maujood tha.


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Waha tabhi ek car ka aagmann hua aur ussi guard ne aage badh car ka door unn andar baithe vyaktiyo ke liye khola.

Andar se ek acche se suit me ek ladka baahar nikla aur dusre side se ek aurat, jo mehngi saree aur zevar pehne hue thi.

Uski aankhein thodi namm thi. Na jaane kya soch rahi thi apne mann me.

"Aaiye Tai jii! Aaiye...!!!"

Uss ladke ne haath se aage chalne ke liye ishaara kiya toh mahila haan me sarr hilaate hue aage badhi. Entrance ka glass door unke motion detection se khula aur wo andar pravesh kiye.

Aur kuch hi derr me wo ek table par maujood the. Hotel ka ambiance bhi shandaar tha. Dim lights aur halka halka madhur music. Koi gaana nahi tha, bas instrumental dhvani jo sabhi ko behad lubha rahi thi.

Aas paas ki tables par harr jagah ameer se ameer log baithe the aur khaane ka lutf le rahe the.

Wo ladka mahila ko dekhte hue bola,

"Tai jii! Jo hua so hua. Mein yaha aapka mann halka karne laaya hu aapko. Aur aap ho ki..."

Uss aurat ne apne aasu poche aur khud ko sambhaal wo idhar udhar dekhne lagi.

Koi keh sakta tha ki ye aurat apni 40s me thi? Bilkul nahi! Usse dekh ke sab yahi kehte ki ye apni late 30s me hai.

"Kya karu? Meri toh kismat hi aisi hai."

Wo ruaasi sii awaaz me boli.

"Tai jii!! Mein aapka dukh samajh sakta hu."

Uss ladke ne saantvna dete hue kaha. Mahila usse dekhi aur waqai, uski aankho me chinta thi.

"Ab muskuraaiye Tai jii! Aur pehle khaane ka lutf lijiye...!"

Kehte hue usne, waiter ko ishaara kiya toh waiter ne starters unn dono ko serve kiye.

Jii haan! Saamne baithi wo mahila koi aur nahi, Veer ki hi sauteli Maa thi ~

Shweta!!!!

Aur uske saamne suit pehne baitha hua ladka koi aur nahi, wahi tha!!!

Veer ka shatru, uska apna bhai...

PRANJAL!!!!!!


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Wahi Pranjal... Jiska vyaktitv wesa tha ~

A honey tongue, a heart of gall.

Yaani ki, mukh me Ram, bagal me chhuri.
Bhed ke bhes me bhediya.

Ghar me jab usne Shweta ko rota dekha toh wo usse behla ke aaj yaha le aaya. Na jaane uske kapti mann me kya shadiyantra racha jaa raha tha.

Chehre par toh pyaar bhari muskaan thi uske, jiske peeche ka matlab Shweta pehchaan na paayi.

Shweta (namm aankho se) : Kya galat karti hu mein? Apni beti ki parvah kisse nahi rehti Pranjal? Tumhare Papa mummy bhi toh apne baccho ke liye kitna kuch karte hi hai na? Tumhaare liye hi kitna kuch karte hai? Toh mein apni Bhumi ke liye jab bhi kuch karne ko hoti hu toh... *sniff* *sniff* toh bhala sab gadbad kyu ho jaati hai?

Pranjal : Tch tch tch...!! Waqai Tai jii! Mein aapki baat se sehmat hu. Aap chinta mat kariye, mein aapke harr decision me aapke saath hu. Mein kuch karunga...!

Shweta : S-Sach!!?

Pranjal : Hmm~ Ab aap enjoy kariye.

Shweta : I... I'll try!!! Thanks! Apni iss Tai jii ke baare me sochne ke liye. Aur mujhe yaha laane ke liye. Mein waqai boht down feel kar rahi thi.

Pranjal (smiles) : No problem! Ye toh mera farz hai Tai jii!!!

Usne muskuraate hue kaha. Uski muskaan dekh, Shweta muskuraayi aur nazre neeche kar khaana khaane me lag gayi.

Par idhar...

Jo muskaan Pranjal ke chehre par thi. Agle hi pal uski wo muskaan ek haivaan ki smile me badal gayi.


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Iss waqt yadi usse koi dekh leta toh uske chehre ki wo shaitaani muskuraahat dekh ke hi darr jaata.

***


Cairo, Egypt...
Night time ~ 10:13 PM


Raat ho chuki thi. Aur Misr ki ret par Veer yaha apne kadam rakh chuka tha.

Wese toh woh yaha din me hi pohuch gaya tha. Par usne din me aana avoid kiya.

Kyu? Kyuki, din me aata toh wo easily spot ho jaata. Spot toh wo abhi bhi ho jaata but still, night was better than the day.

Yaha aane me uski madad Suhana ne nahi kii thi iss baar. So he chose Kaera!!!

Kaera se hi Veer ne Visa arrange karwaaya tha. Par, apni ID waale plan ko usne hata diya tha.

Toh filhaal right now, uske paas koi ID nahi thi. Nothing at all.

Aur ek reason aur bhi tha. He came here...

... WITH NO PLAN AT ALL.

Jii haan! Veer ke mann me koi plan nahi tha. Sab kuch wo on the spot hi karne waala tha.

ID nahi thi toh bhala ghusega kese? Sir George jese archaeologists jab uski tehqiqaat karenge toh kya jawaab dega? Veer ke paas plan na hoke bhi jese plan tha.

Badi hi mushqil se usse Plateau ke andar aa kar excavation site mili. Par ab dikkat ye thi. Shelter ke baahar kaafi security maujood thi.

Aur kyu nahi rahegi? Itni badi khoj ho rahi thi. Hassi mazaak thodi tha. Security toh kadak honi hi thi.

Yadi, ek do guard ko chutiya banaane ki baat hoti toh Veer kar bhi leta. Par yaha toh several guards maujood the.

[Master! They know ki kaun kaun andar waala vyakti waha kaam karta hai. So if you get caught by them. They will recognise ki aap yaha ke nahi ho. And not to mention, you don't have any ID.]

Pari ne samjhaate hue kaha. Par Veer shaant tha. He was inspecting.

Apne aas paas ke area ko wo poora inspect kar raha tha. Kidhar se andar jaana easy rahega, kidhar kam guards milne ke chances rahenge!?

Usne dekha ki camps dherr saare andar ki orr lage hue the.


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Aur baayi orr se raasta gaya tha andar ki hi taraf jaha par fir wo underground site maujood thi. Uss tomb kii.

Veer ki destination wo camp area hi tha. Usse bhala kya matlab tha site me ho rahi khoj se? Usse toh bas ek hi shaks ki talaash thi. Apni Maa ki~

Bhavna!!!

Still, waha tak pohuchne ke liye Veer ko kuch na kuch toh karna hi tha.

Wo jese hi aage badha, toh uski nazar me aur bhi guards aaye jo usse pehle apni pichli position se nazar nahi aa rahe the.

[Damn it!!! Why are there so many!!!?]

Sabse pehli Entrance par do guards the. Ek baahar ki taraf tha toh ek andar ki taraf.

Veer ne dekha ki baahar waala guard harr thodi derr me round le raha tha. Jese hi wo round lene gaya, Veer aage badha aur seedha uss dusre maujood guard ki taraf jaane laga.

[Ehhh? M-Masterrrr??? Y-You...!??]

Pari ko apne master ka ye move palle hi nahi pada. Veer bhala directly guard ke paas kyu jaa raha tha?

Aur usne forun hi Veer ke mann me jhaak ke dekha toh usse saara maajra pata lag gaya.

[Ahhh! That's a nice move Master!]

Veer jese hi guard ke paas pohucha toh guard apni jagah se uth gaya.

Guard : Waiiittt!!! Who are you???

Aur tabhi,

'Check!!!!'

*Ding*

[Name : Bill

Age : 29
Bio : A new recruit for security. Currently got hired to work here as a security. Have a newly wed wife named, Emma. Talks a lot about her. He loves her a lot, especially her pancakes. Have No kids for now.

Relationship : Strangers
Favourability : 0]

Aur uss guard ka status padhte hi Veer ka mann andar hi andar hass raha tha.

Veer : Hmm? Mister Bill? Where's mister Carter???

Bill : Huhhh??

Veer ki baat sunn jese Bill jhep hi gaya. Kyuki, Carter wahi tha...

Wo pehla guard jo round maarne gaya tha.

Veer ne usse pehle hi check kar liya tha.

Bill : C-Carter? That...

Veer : Oh come on! Mister Bill! You already forgot about me? It's just been 2-3 days. I'm a new recruit.

Bill : Ehhhh?

Bill ki kuch saala samajh me hi nahi aa raha tha. Ye kaun banda tha jo usse jaanta tha par wo isse nahi jaanta tha?

Veer : C'mon Mister Bill! Weren't you the one who told us about your wife, Emma? You got married recently right?

Veer ne apna paansa pheka. Bill ki ye aadat thi. Uski shaadi nayi nayi hui thi. Wo aksar naye trainees se apni wife ki tareef karta tha. Aur usne ye kal hi kiya tha. Trainees kayi saare the. Ab unme se wo sabhi ko kese jaan sakta tha bhala? Aur issi baat ka Veer ne fayda uthaaya.

Bill : Ahhh! Yeah... Haha~ Sorry! B-But who were y....

Veer : You already forgot about me? I'm one of the new recruits. Mister Carter and you are the ones from here since Day 1 right?

Bill : Ahhh! Y-Yesss...

Veer (udaas hote hue) : It's such a shame Mister Bill! I remember so much about you. About your wife. She makes such nice pancakes. You told us that day, didn't you? And you don't even remember about me?

Veer ne apna dusra paansa pheka. Emotional Damage!!!

Bill jisse udaas nahi bhi hona chaahiye tha. Wo Veer ko dekh khud pe sharmindagi mehsoos karne laga.

Bill : Ahh! S-Sorry! I really forgot... But let me check the list. Surely, your name must be there. Let me just...

[Master stop him~]

Veer : There's no need to Mister Bill!!! Didn't I told you my name that day? The very first day? With all of the other trainees.

Bill : Huh??

Veer (smiles) : I'm Vikram!!!

Bill : V-Vikram?? That... I don't suppose... That...

Bill ko Vikram naam se ghanta kuch yaad aane waala tha. Lund jab suna hi nahi tha ye naam pehle toh kaha se yaad aane waala tha? Iske pehle ki wo sab kuch bhaanpta, Veer ne usse firse tok diya.

Veer : You don't have to check anything Mister. After all, I'll be here only.

Aur itna bol Veer andar jaane laga. Samaan toh woh apna pehle hi hotel me rakh aaya tha.

Par aage badhte hi Bill ne firse ek sawaal puch liya.

Bill : Wait! But where were you? When did you went outside?

Veer : I went outside yesterday Sir. Emergency work!!!

Aur itna bol Veer fir andar jaane laga. Yadi kuch derr aur yaha bitayaa samay toh pakke se wo pakda jaane waala tha.

Par Surprisingly, Bill ne usse jaane de diya.

[Wow! Master~ That was so good!!!!!]

Ab usse chinta karne ki zaroorat nahi thi. Andar kayi aur guards zaroor the. Par jab main entrance se hi usse entry mil gayi thi toh andar maujood guard yahi samajh rahe the ki iss bande ko andar aane diya gaya hai. Yadi Veer ki kismat aaj boht hi jhandu rahi toh hi koi aaj uske paas aake usse tokne waala tha.

Andar aate hi usne jab nazar daudaayi toh dekha ki waha toh dherr saare tents lage hue the. Veer ki samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki inme se ab uski Mom ka tent kaunsa tha.

Sirf ek hi raasta tha...

'Check!!!'

Harr ek tent check kar Veer ne harr taraf check kiya. Kayi log tents se nikal rahe the toh kayi tents ke andar jaa rahe the.

Wo usse ghoor ke aur shaq waali nazro se zaroor dekh rahe the. Par kisi ne bhi usse approach nahi kiya. Sabke mann me yahi baat thi, ki yadi andar aaya hai toh koi hoga ye. Aise hi bhala kisi ko bhi toh allow kar nahi denge andar aane.

Par wo nahi jaante the, ki Veer unhi me se tha. Illegal entry me se.

Veer ne apni upar pad rahi nazro ko ignore kiya aur tents par focus kiya... Aur bilkul...

*Ding*

[Shelter Tent.

Bio : A Tent for residing. Currently occupied by Geeta.]

Aur bas... Usse padhte hi Veer ke hontho par muskaan fel gayi.

Wo seedha uss tent ki orr badha.

Tent ki entrance khuli hui thi. Shayad uski Maa Geeta, urf Bhavna jaag rahi thi.

Veer ka dil zorro se dhadak raha tha. He was finally about to meet his own mother. His real mother.

Kya reaction hoga unka? Kya hoga uski behan ka reaction? How they will see him?

Saare sawaalo se uska mann bhara hua tha.

[Master... We don't have to tell our identity.... Yet...!!!]

'I know Pari! I know!'

Aur usne tent ke kapde ko apne haatho se hataaya aur andar aaya.

Saamne ek khubsoorat sii aurat viraajmaan thi. Ek foldable chair par.

Saamne rakhi foldable table par hi ek night lamp chota sa jal raha tha aur....

Uss table par kuch rakha hua tha. Aur wo aurat, apne haatho me ek chota sa brush liye uss rakhi hui cheez par halke haatho se chala rahi thi, taaki jami hui dhool mitti ki parat hata sake.

Uske lambe ghane kaale baal jo usne iss waqt apni choti me baandh ke rakhe hue the.

Veer ki saasein uss aurat ko dekhte hi atak gayi.

*Badump* Dil zorr se dhadka...

'Check!'

*Ding*

[Alias name - Geeta

Real Name - Bhavna Singh.
Age : 47

Bio - Bhavna! Ek behad hi strong woman hai. Boht peeda me hai jo kayi saalo se wo bardaasht karti aa rahi hai. Loves her daughter too much. Ek aas hai usse. Aur kisi ki talaash. Peshe se Archeologist hai.

Favourability - 82
Relationship - Mother.]

Veer ke honth thar tharaane lage. It's her!!!

Wo phati aankho se unhe hi dekh raha tha. Finally!!! Wo uski aankho ke saamne thi. Kese bichad gaye the dono itne saal pehle. Aur kese uss train me bhi dono ek dusre ke alag alag raaste Jaa chuke the.

Par aaj...

Kismat ne unhe waapas se milwa diya tha. Veer ka dil ro raha tha. Uska mann kar raha tha ki abhi jaake apni Maa ke gale lag jaaye. Aur rote hue dherro sawaal puche. Kyu chorr ke gayi usse?

Par... Dekho... Chaah ke bhi wo abhi aisa nahi kar sakta tha. Bhavna, uski Maa uske itna qareeb hoke bhi... Kitna dur thi uss se.

Aur jese kisi ki aahat paate hi yaha Bhavna ne apna sarr ghumaaya aur entrance ki orr dekha, "Hmmm????"
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Egypt waale updates me kaafi mehnat lagi hai. Kyuki kaafi research karke mein inhe likh raha hu. Toh mehnat barbaad na jaane dena. Like thokne ka aur apni raay aur revos rakhne ka. Okay?
Baaki, milte hai next update me. 😁

Dhanyavaad! ✨
 
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Isme kidhar likha hai ..bas dead log ke dekhe ja sakte hai
Check the description of past illustration - 1 Function.
Usme likha hai. :D aur upgrade ke baad wo ab dekh sakta hai. Read karne ki zaroorat nahi. Aatish ke waqt usse read karna pada tha.
 

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Great update Werewolf bhai.
Veer ki achhi se halat kharab ho gayi iss Holi pe. Sab ne apni apni tarah se veer ki vaat lagayi he😁. Badi baat to ragini wali he 😜.
To veer sahab aaram kar rahe he Par unke naseeb me abhi aaram kaha likha he. Kavya bethi he uspe. Ab veer ne uth ke kavya ko wo de diya jiska usse to koi andaja nahi tha. Spanking mili he apne bade bhai se. Veer bhi pata nahi kis mood me tha jo 2-3 baar esa kar gaya. Kavya ke aankh me aasu aa gaye ye jaan ke. But kya usse bura laga he mann se ya bas ek unexpected behaviour tha veer ka wo soch rahi he wo. Par wo ye sab leke rone nahi wali. Poora enjoy kiya usne veer ke sath ka samay.
Ragini, suman apne jalwe dikha rahi he saree me. Saree me ragini ko Nidhi ki takkar de sakti he abhi tak ki kahani me. Aage bhavna bhi hogi to teeno jalwa dikhayegi. Sab ke sab veer ke charm me kho chuke he nashte pe. Ragini ke mann me alag hi laddu foot rahe honge. Suman ab pyaar karti he to usko bhi ab khayal ye hoga ki wo apni taraf se sab kare jisse veer khush rahe.
Kavya bhi saree me jalwe dikha rahi he. Wahi Nidhi Shreya aur juhi bhi aa gaye. Yaha rang na laga hota veer pe to Shreya aur Nidhi bhi veer me kho jati. Par next time dekh lenge😁.
Asli majha tab aaya jab teeno devi aayi. Kaera to puri taiyar hoke aayi he. Usse nahi pata detail me Holi ke bare me. Par achha laga yaha usko khush dekh ke. Ek bomb jarur foda Sonia pe usne. Par veer ne sambhal hi liya. Sonia aur kaera aapas me lage hue he veer unke sath he wahi baki sab veer ko death look de rahi he😁. Sonali janti he kaera ko. Ragini ko bhi jalan he thodi par uski asli rival Nidhi he kaera, Sonia nahi. Wahi kavya ki ye baat badi achhi he ki wo apne emotion jahir kar deti he chahe kuch bhi ho. Yaha bhi jealous dikhi wo. Aur aarohi to ese laga jese iss sab ke baad veer ki achhi khabar legi. Wo abhi to shant he par sabse jyada uncomfortable bhi wahi he veer ko dusri ladkiya ke sath dekh.
Aarohi ne badi baad keh di he yaha ki she was glad that veer took her first kiss. Ab ye badi baat he kyuki isse aarohi ke khayal bhi pata lagte he. Aarohi veer ke sath khush he aur aage bhi moments aayenge. Suman aur aabha ki bajne wali he vese😁😁. Suman to har waqt ready rahegi apne Malik ko khush karne me.
Ye gun agar kisi tarah Nidhi ke hath lag jati juhi ke hath se to veer ke gaal laal ho jate fir se. Wo Vese to veer se door reh rahi he par uska dil kuch aur chahta he. Ab uske liye kya plan kiya he veer ne kya pata ?? Par jo plan he usse Nidhi ko ehsaas ho jana chahiye. Kab tak khud ko rokegi. Wo bhi deserve karti he uske jiwan me usko ek pyaar karne wala ho, uski parwah kare, uski responsibility baante. Aur baat juhi ki bhi mayne rakhti he. Juhi ko wo khud hi bolegi ki "beta abse apne mamu ko akele me papa kehna" 😂😂.
Holi pe sabse badi baaji ragini ne mari he. Ese sidha honth hi mila diye. Ragini ne ek tarah se khud ko sounp diya he veer ko. Aur keh bhi diya ki ab ragini pe uska haq he. Ab ragini aur jyada biwi wale role me aayegi. Good morning kiss se leke good night kiss bhi legi. Veer ke liye Achha hoga ki ragini ko samjhe wo. Veer ko har haal me support karegi wo. Veer bhi alpha male he to piche to na hatega.
Aur lagta he suhana ne kuch info di he veer ko uski maa ki. Ya kuch business me help kari hogi. Dekhte he aage.
Waiting for next update.

Superb update

Jabardast Updatee

Bhai short laga muje ye updated koina waiting for next

Extraordinary update bro

Awesome update bro

Story has taken the next big leap forward let's see where it lands and how it ends.

Nice update.

Jabardast update

nice update. :applause: :applause:

Nice update brother to veer ki maa ka matter finally start ho hi gaya waiting for next update

Awesome Fabolous mind-blowing update

Nic update


Veer : ek aisa ladka jiske sar pr MA ka saya tha hi nhi jaha tk use yaad hai or suhana ke info dene pr uska yu utavle pan ko darsana vajib hai pr yha pari ne use samjhaya or sahi salah di...
Suhana se madad bhi mangi pr suhana is mamle me apni asmarthta darshati hai uski baat bhi sahi hai yah matter Bharat se bahar ka hai Jisme galti ki gunjaish nhi honi chahiye isliye, veer bhi samajh gya or vha se nikal balhar ke pass gya slogan ke headout me vha uska limbo thik kiya aur balhar ka boss ban gya Jisse Fame unlock Hui...
Pari ne veer ko average person or genius person me sambandh bhi btaya or fame ka mtlb bhi...
Pari ne veer ko shock bhi diye apne status ko genius level me le Jane ka rasta bhi btaya jo ki Bahut hi mahga hai Kimat 2000 points per status Yani 10000 total of 1 Status point bdhane ke liye ab 10 points invest karne padenge it's too costly bhaya...
Kya hua in 4 din me kaise manage kiya veer ne forgen ka trip... Yha bhabhi ko bta diya apne Jane ka or ma ke bare me bhi thoda Bahut or bhabhi ko ek pendent bhi pahnaya apne hatho se jisko dekh bhabhi fooli na smai or ek chumma chhap diya veer ki gaal me, sukar hai honth me nhi diya Varna veer to sab bhool yhi baith jata :D
To trip suru ho rhi hai misra ki Dekhte hai vha kya kya sikhne ko milta hai veer ko or kya hota hai uske sath vha...
Ek chij to bhool hi rha tha pari ne kaha ki uski other identity to Iska mtlb :- jaise suhana ko multiple personality disorder hai kya aisa hi pari ke sath bhi hoyega har baar ya uski sari personality Kabhi ek hokar mature system ka roop lega in future...?...
Karan ka Jo veer ke yha Itni sari ladkiyo ko dekh reaction tha or kaera ko dekh jo khushi ka varnan tha Vo Bahut pasand aaya mujhe...
Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab update adventure begins...

Nice update

Jabardast update.. bhai 💥💥💥🎉

Cool one keep going

अदा आई, जफा आई,
गरूर आया, इताब आया,
हजारों आफतें लेकर...
हसीनों का शबाब आया।


Nice update bhai

Awesome update bhai keep posting

very nice update

Uttam Lekhni ka Prayog Werewolf bhai...Waiting for Next Update Eagerly...

ह्म्म्म्म
तो बात ऐसी रही
भलार का हाथ ठीक हो गया
होली में करन पोपट बन गया
जैसे कि पहले से अंदाजा था सुहाना ने वीर को उसके माँ की डिटेल्स ही दिया था
वीर ने रागिनी को शायद स्पेशल टाइम के लिए रिजर्व रखा है
पर चलो यह देखना अच्छा रहेगा वीर कैसे भारत वापस आने के बाद निधि की प्रॉब्लम सॉल्व करता है वीर की फेम बढ़ गया है
अपना गैंग भी सेट हो चुका है
इतना कुछ हो गया है
अब इजिप्ट में क्या होगा यह देखना बहुत दिलचस्प होगा
बढ़िया लिखा हमेशा की तरह

Jabardast update bhai ☺️🙂

Marvelous!! Update bhai...

Wonderful Update Werewolf .
Yeh bola tha ju ne ki bahut dur ki sochte ho. Dekh phi liya ki Egypt ( 4,529 km :Distance from Delhi to Egypt) tak soch liya.:)

😁😁 ❤️❤️

Yes waiting for this

Waiting for veer and Ragini ❤️❤️

:superb: :good: :perfect: awesome update hai Werewolf bhai,
Behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur amazing update hai bhai,
pari se stats ki limit badhane ke baare mein sun kar to veer ka sar hi chakkar kha gaya hai,
Ab aakhir kar veer apni maa se milne ke liye nikal gaya hai,
Ab dekhte hain ki aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update

Nice update

Awesome update

बहुत शानदार अनुछेद। लेकिन होली के रात के कारनामा पूरा गायब है। सोचे थे की देखने मिलेगा की होली के रात मे कोन किसको ले उड़ेगा,लेकिन रात का कोई जिक्र नहीं हुआ। आगे उम्मीद करेंगे की समय पर होली के रात का कारनामा प्रदर्शित होगी। अभी बहुत जरूरी है माँ बेटे का मिलन विदेश मे कैसे और किस हालत मे होती है और वीर को क्या क्या जानकारी मिलता है। बात तो सही है की जो माँ बचपन मे ही वीर को छोड़ गयी थी लेकिन अभी भी हर वक़्त याद करती है, उनकी घर छोरने की कुछ तो बड़ी वजह होगी ही। वो देखने लायक होगा।देखते है कैसे यह गुत्थी सुलझता है। एक बात अच्छा लगा की अब सुहाना भी कुछ कुछ बदली हुई है वीर के प्रति। लगता है की वीर की वीसा पासपोर्ट सब का ब्याबस्था उस बलहर ने ही किया है। आगे की अनुछेद के लिए प्रतीक्षा मे रहेंगे। धन्यबाद।

lovely update ..to suhana ne veer ko uski maa ki jaankari di aur ab veer nikal chuka hai apni maa se milne par jaldi usko apni pehchan nahi batanewala hai .
is baar suhana uski kuch madad nahi kar paayi .

balhar ka haath theek kar diya aur uska boss bann gaya veer aur system ke mutabik veer ne underworld ki duniya me kadam rakh diya hai .

normal insan se aage badhne ke liye ab veer ko kaafi points chahiye .
ragini ko pendant pehna diya veer ne aur wo khush ho gayi 😍.. ab dekhte hai veer ki egypt ki journey kaise hoti hai ,kya waha pe koi adventure karne ko milega ya nahi 🤔🤔..

Excellent update

At last, Veer apni Maan se milne ja raha hai. Padh ke achchha laga.

Lovely update

Bataye kiya bhabhiji ko ki Lounda kya gul khila raha hey?

Nice update...


Bahut khub update bro

Veer akhir apni asli maa se milne ja raha hai, maa bhi uske liye roti hai par beti ko batati nahi hai, dekhte hain Veer apni pehchaan maa se kaise karwata hai, aur vo kya raaz hai jiski vajah se iski maa ko ise chhodna pada, Pranjal ki kartutein abhi Manorath ke samne nahi khuli hain, ye kab khuleingi aur tab kya hoga.

Dhassu updates

Superb update

Nic Update Bhai....

Superb update bhai:beee:

Finally veer apne ma se milne ja raha hai... Chalo lagta ab kuch accha hoga veer le life me😁😁😁

Nice update

Very very nice update bro

Jbrdast update bhai

I m agree with suhana...

Itta tucha plan kon banata hai re ese hi thodi bhavna kuch bata is plan ke hisab se yahi hoga ki "aao aao stranger sir main apka batati hu kyu maine ghar chorha kyu maine apne bete ko chorha"

1 saal chahiye tha nidhi ko 50 lakj jama karne ko mere hisab se ek saal to pura ho hi gya

Superb update

Awesome update

Awesome update bhai waiting for next update

Mind-Blowing update bhai

New life starts for veer... amazing update bhai

Bhai nidhi or kaera ke baad ab very important character hein veer ki maa ab isi character ke liye veer kya kya karta hein or karvata hein woh jaanne ki ruchi rahegi or ek hein jo hein slogan's daughter but woh character abhi bahot door hein pehle yeh maa vaala topic padhna hein i am so excited.....! BCZ OF WORLD MOST WORTHER WORD IS “MAA”....!🥺😘🤗
KEEP WRITING.....!

Super and awesome update

Wow nice update, Veer is getting smart ad strong by the day. Balhaar ka gang uske paas aa gaya hai, property uske paas hi hai aur ab wo apni maa ke paa jaa raha hai. Dekna hoga wo kaise api maa ko approach karta hai. Jaandaar update.

Nice behtarin update bro

Thanks a lot for update ☺️☺️☺️

Excellent work. Waiting for next.

Waiting for next update Werewolf bhai....

Very
Nice
Update

Very nice update bhai now new adventure and some flesh back stories and lots of suspense I guess!

Nice Try. Respect🙏


Bahut hi umda update tha,slogan ki life ki bare janke dukh bhi hua.Is story ka asli villain kishore hei.

Ye sahi kiya guru..sidhe sidhe ma se mila dena kuch jamata nahi.
Now system is going to help, veer aur iski ma ke relation ko naya aakar dene me aur samajhane me.

Fantastic update

Bhai Mera bhi ek sujhav hai... Jab bhi veer apni maa se mile toh sidhe sidhe BAAT karwana hi Sahi lagega plz Bhai itni si request hai mana mat karna

Fantastic zabaradast update waiting for next update

Finaly veer apni mom se milne ja raha hai.
Next update or bi mazedaar hoga
Superb update

Nice update bhai

Dusaro ki biwi be dole daloge to kya kargaa bicharaa......

Advice...
Es baar bach gaye to...Agali baar usko batna mat ki mai teri biwi pe chadne waala hu...

Nahi to wo tere pe chad jay gaa...

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣


congratulations for 1300 pages..!!

Update mast tha
Par asli maza dono maa bete ke milne ke baad hi ayega.....

मेरा ले भी न पाओगे आप वत्स 😂.
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वैसे यहाँ ये शख्त बंदा भी पिघल गया.....
हे NupurSharma@1994 जी, ये सब आपकी ही माया है 😂😂😂

:congrats: For completed 1.3M pages on your story thread...

Super update bro

Congratulations 👏👏🎉🎉 1300 Pag

Fantastic update

1 saal 🤔 Kya dobara se dipavali aa gyi, are nhi abhi to march chal rha hai kal hi to Holi kheli thi veer ne...

Fantastic update....

Ragini ki pendent deke veer ne ek step complete kr diya....

Ab dkhna hai veer ka Asli Maa ka sach or uski sis ki behavior......

Superb Update Bro...
Waiting for Next

शानदार जबरदस्त लाजवाब update bhai jann

Kya yaar ... holi ki raat pr parda daal diya ... Abha jeeti jaagti aurat na hokar ... ek gadda ban kar reh gayi hai ...

So our man is going to Egypt ... to see and approach his mother as a stranger ... and will try to get close to her without revealing his identity ... waise suna hai Egypt ke prisons me khatirdaari acchi hoti hai ... kagaz pakke hone chahiyen ...

Anyway, when he gets back, will Ragini be able to hold herself ... ab to gale me haar bhi pehna diya hai ... agar unke milan ko shortchange kia ... then you would have chosen voilence ... keh deta houn ... sab readers ki tarf se ... phir mat bolna ki pehale nahi bataya ...

"... Par Veer aur Pari dono hi ek baat nahi jaante the. Jis Bhavna ne aaj tak apni beti tak ko sach nahi bataaya, wo ek stranger ke saath apni baatein kese share kar sakti thi? ..."

- true, par .... apne lover ke saath to share kar sakti hai ... specially after he's rocked her world ...:wink::wink:

.... arre bhai ... why not ... bande ke stats 100 percent hai ... ab unjaan banke milega ... charm karega ... dosti bhadayega ... will win her confidence ... exotic location hai ... desert night skies are the best ... a hunk and a MILF ... on a starlit night ... on a arabian magic carpet on the cold desert sands ... ab romance aur seduction to banta hai ...

kabhi kabhi to mujhe lagta hai ki mere comments hi iss thread ke debauched contents hain ... :lotpot::lotpot::lotpot:

Jabrdast mindblowing superbbb speechless update.......
waiting for next update......

Nice update on


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क्या ऐसा मुमकिन है कि भावना का हाथ हो system में। आखिर वो एक archeologist है और उसे ये किसी खोज के समय मिला हो।

Writer साहब पुष्टि करे।

Excellent dia;og, pari ki nok-jhok majedar hai


Bhai Pari ka khna ekdum shi h yr aaise thodi hota h ki jao or sidha khdo maana maa hain vo or apne bachhe k pass aate hi unko pta chal jata h pr Veer ko b unke baare me phle thodi jankari jutani chahiye or sath me thodi thodi unse najdikiya badhani chahiye fir jaake unko sach btana chahiye
Mujhe to sir Pari ka idea hi best lga
Vaise ye aachanak Veer ko kon aaisa mil gya jisne uski help ki es matter me khi SUHANA hi ne to help nhi ki h mujhe to vhi lagti h ek jo aaise mamle me help kr skti ho vo chahe jaisi b ho uska past jaisa b rha ho pr vo b Veer ko dukhi to nhi dekh skti h

I am loving your story. Read all of it in just 1 to 2 days. Fan bana liya yar ap ne apna. Keep doing the good work and plz update jalde dein intezar nae ho raha

Congratulations for completing 1300 pages 🎉🎉

Superb n amazing update 😊

Ab ye bht lamba khichne wala hai ye mostly story me aise ku krte hai ki apni hi mom dad ke sath rhke ni batate ki hm apke bche hai i knw story ko exited bnana hota hai bt fir b chlo koi ni

Next update kab tak ayega?
Date ?

Awesome update bro

Waiting for next update

Waiting for next update bro

Waiting for next update bro

Zabardast update bhai...veer na sahi socha hai isi tarah usse apni maa sa milna chaiya akhir use bhi pata chale ki kyu voh usee chood kar chali gai thi

Behad hi shanadar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

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So... Slogan ki maut ke baad aakhir kaar Veer ki zindagi mein kuchh din shaanti ke aaye... Aur isi beech Holi ke tyohar se badhiya stress buster kya ho sakta tha... Slogan ki maut se kayi faayde huye hain Veer ko... Pari ka level up hona, Pari ke behaviour ya kahun personality mein ek baar fir badlaav aaya hai... The old Pari is back, but is baar bhi ek change mujhe nazar aaya, I think Pari ab thodi si sycophantic ho gayi hai, maybe that's not the perfect word but haan pichhli Pari jo Veer ko “Master” kehti thi, uske comparison mein ab waala behaviour kuchh zyada hi soft hai...

Stock Master, ye skill praapt huyi hai Veer ko Slogan ki maut ke baad, and I think it can be a big, big blessing for Veer... Btw. Veer ek number ka juaari ban jaayega aage chalkar, pehle Quest Hunt aur ab ye Share Market, points aur paise dono hi sankat mein hain Veer ke... 70% is a good chance as compared to the normal people but still, risk kaafi zyada hai, aur jaisi Veer ki kismat rahi hai ab tak uske mutaabik to ye 30% bhi koyi chhoti percentage nahi hai...

Is beech jo sabse badhiya baat huyi wo ye ki Veer ke stats perfect 100 par pahunch chuke hain aur filhaal uske paas kuchh 3000 points baaki hain... But, Pari ne ek aur khulasa bhi kar diya hai ke this is not the end! Jab Suman ki favourability 100 ke paar gayi thi tabhi mujhe andesha ho gaya tha ke Stats ka ant bhi 100 par nahi hone waala... I think ye limitless bhi ho sakta hai,jitna zyada Veer Stats badhata jaayega wo utna hi behtar hota jaayega... Par aage chalkar stats ek pareshaani ka sabab ban ne waale hain uske liye... 10,000 points to sabko unlock karne mein hi lag jaayenge aur fir har ek point badhane ke liye 10 points invest karne padenge... And I think 150 points tak stats pahunchane ke baad ye 10 ka aankda 20 ya us se zyada mein bhi convert ho sakta hai... But ek Baat achhi hai ke Veer ko ab Points achhe amount mein milne lage hain & I'm sure ke jab Nidhi ka matter solve hoga to us mission ka reward nischit hi gigantic hoga...

Ragini... Dheere - dheere hi sahi ab Ragini aur Veer ke beech ki nazdikiyan kiss tak pahunch gayi hain... Gaal par kayi baar pehle bhi kiss kar chuki thi Ragini, par this lip kiss,I think Veer would've never thought about it... But, ab Ragini ke liye khud ko control karna, sambhav nahi hoga... Veer ke liye ye accept karna aasan nahi hoga,Ragini ki khubsurti ko dekh kar imaginations mein jaana alag hai aur jab wo hakeekat mein hone lage to Veer ke liye sweekar karna kathin to hona hi tha... Especially,ab divorce ke baad to maybe Veer ke liye aur bhi adhik tricky situation ban gayi hai... Par jo bhi ho, ab jab Veer Egypt se lautega to itni waqt ki doori Ragini ko nischit hi majboor kar degi shayad kuchh bada karne par...

Kavya... Lagta hai ke ladki badi ho gayi hai aur kuchh ulti seedhi cheezen bhi dekhne lagi hai Mobil par :D... Veer ke liye Kavya ek chhoti bachi hi hai, afterall ek wahi hai uski family mein jo us se chhoti hai... But asal mein Kavya ab sahi mein badi ho gayi hai... Veer ne to use chhote bachon ki tarah hi slap kiya tha but ye madam us slap ko spanking ke roop mein imagine karne lagi :sigh:... Aur uske baad uska Saree pehan na aur fir Veer ko hug karna ya kahun ke Veer ko dikhana ke ab wo sach mein badi ho gayi hai :lol:... Let's see ke aage dono ke beech kya hoga...

Aarohi... “I'm glad that you were my first”! It was somehow clear that Aarohi is attracted towards Veer... Manorath ke dwara rakhi gayi party mein jab doosri ladkiyan Veer ko ghoor rahi thi tabhi uske reaction se ye baat saaf ho gayi thi... Aur fir wo accidental kiss,Aarohi ka usko lekar sharmana aur Veer se bachna, ye bhi expected hi tha... Veer ne kaafi achhe se use handle kiya aur fir uska bina uski galti hote huye bhi Sorry kehna, I think Aarohi ki favourability 70 thi, aur is Holi ke baad kam se kam 75 to hi gayi hogi... But jo usne ant mein jo kaha us se Veer ka surprise hona laazmi hi tha... Let's see how things unfold between them further on...

Sonia aur Kaera ke beech Veer ko lekar cat fight jaari hi hai... Kaera ne jis tarah Veer se kaha, “Say yes or get beaten up”, wo scene kaafi mazedaar tha... Pehli bara laga ke jaise Kaera ke andar bhi emotions hon... Aur Holi se pehle jo sawaal wo Julia se kar rahi thi, I think Julia bhi kahin naa kahin samajh gayi hai ke uski Kaera Miss Veer se pyaar karne lagi hai... I think shayad abhi Kaera ki feelings ko agar pyaar kaha jaaye to wo galat ho sakta hai, but jaise hi Kaera normal ho jaayegi, she'll straightaway realise that she has fallen in love with Veer...

Wahin Sonia ki favourability bhi 70 cross kar chuki hai... Us bechaari ka to bachpan se dimaag hi kharaab kar diya gaya hai... Ab to har cheez mein wo Kaera se directly - indirectly compete karti hi rehti hai... But somehow I think ke wo Kaera se jeetna chahti hai, par isliye ke shayad us kaaran se use apni bachpan ki saheli waapis mil jaaye... When both of them will be friends again (aage sautan bhi banengi :D) would be a great scene to read... Wahin Suhana ka pati Gaurav bhi kuchh hadh tak Rajat ki hi photo copy hai... Ab sawaal ye hai ke Gaurav ke Pita Rajat ke ghar gaye the ya Rajat ke pita Gaurav ke :confused:... Suhana ka Veer ki debauchery list mein yadi naam judta hai to uska ek mukhya kaaran Gaurav hi hoga...

Balhaar ka haath bhi Veer theek kar chuka hai, aur Veer ne underworld mein apne kadam rakh diye hain... Veer has a gang now! That's a huge thing, ab agar wo chaahe to Pranjal ka pakka intezaam bhi kar sakta hai :roflol:... Balhaar bhi Veer ke kaarnamo se prabhaavit hai aur koyi chance nahi hai ke wo Veer ko double cross kare... But is beech ek nayi cheez arthat Fame Points dekhne ko mili... Veer has a total of 600 fame points,Uski Social image aur status hi Fame Points ko decide karenge... But in points ka use kya hoga? Kya in points se bhi koyi feature ya ability wo purchase kar sakta hai, ya fir just favourability ki hi tarah ye sirf ek number hai...

The most anticipated moment is close... Bhavana urf Geeta,ki story mein official entry nikat hai, aur saath hi Veer ki behen ki bhi... Suhana ke zariye praapt ki gayi information se ab Veer Egypt ki taraf apne kadam badha raha hai... Pari ka idea, Bhavana se ek stranger ban kar Milne ka zaroor thoda ajeeb hai oar I think ke bekaar nahi hai, afterall yadi 100 ki intelligence praapt kar chuke Veer ne us idea par apni sehmati jatayi hai to nischit hi kuchh socha hi hoga... Ye to definite hai ke Bhavana Veer ko uske asli roop mein kuchh nahi batane waali, so there's no loss in pretending to be a stranger... Haan ye sach hai ke Bhavana ne apni beti ko bhi kuchh nahi bataya hai but let's see ke Veer ya kahun ke Pari ka idea kaam karta hai ya nahi...

But Suhana ne agar mana kar diya hai Veer ki help karne se to Veer ne kiski sahayata li hai apna nakli Archaeologist ka certificate banwane ke liye... Karan!? Ya fir koyi aur? Ya plan change kar diya hai usne? Jo bhi ho, Veer ki Bhavana aur uski Behen se mulakat rochak hone waali hai... But somehow, I feel like Veer aur uski behen ke beech cheezon ki starting normal nahi hone waali... I feel like Veer ka first impression behuda hoga uski behen par :dazed:..

So, ab dekhna ye hai ke Veer aur Bhavana/Bhavana's daughter ke beech shuru hone waale is arc mein kya hota hai aur kya Veer wo sachayi jaan paayega jiski wajah se wo apne hi ghar mein itne saal ek stranger ki tarah rehta raha... Pari, I don't know ke iska kya raaz hai, I feel like har baar level up hone ke baad, Fact. Restore Settings ka button daba deta hai system, jiske chalte Pari khud hi bhool jaati hai ke past mein usne kya kya kaha tha... Dekhna hoga ke Pari ka raaz kab tak khulega...

Pranjal ke liye bhi achha mauka hai Veer ki gair maujoodgi mein Aarohi aur Kavya ke hisse ki property hadapne ka... Vivek, wo kya karega aage? Aur Nidhi, wo kya accept kar paayegi jo wo feel karti hai, I don't know... Shreya bhi kaafi samay baad nazar aayi, dekhte hain uska aage kya role hota hai...

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Update - 80 ~ Reunion and Conspiracy
Ab tak...

Uski destination thi ~ Egypt!!!!

Bhavna bhale hi Giza Pyramids ki khoj se kaut aayi thi. Par Egypt me keval yahi pyramids nahi the. Haal hi me, researchers ne ek aur pyramid khoja tha. Uske andar ki saari chhaan been karne dherro researchers aur scientists aaye hue the. Bhavna unme se ek thi.

Ye ek bade scale ka excavation tha.

Aur Veer ready tha.

Apni Maa se Finally milne ke liye. Aur apni uss behan se bhi.


Ab aage...

Egypt!!!

Ek aisa desh, jo aksar charcha me bana rehta hai, apne culture se jude rehesya aur raazo ko lekar.

Jii haan! Aapne sahi samjha. Egypt naam sunte hi insaan ke mann me sabse pehli cheez jo dimaag me aati hai, wo hai ~ Pyramids.

Aur maano chaahe na maano, par Pyramids of Giza hi nahi, balki aise dherro anya pyramids hai jo kayi saare raaz chhupaaye hue hai.

Giza Pyramid, hamaare sansaar ke seven wonders me se ek hai. Aur sabse puraana hai saare 7 ajubo me se.

Par, aur kya khaas baat thi?

Inn Pyramids ke andar hota kya tha? Mummy? Aur? Bhala Aur kya?

Darasal, puraatan kaal ke Egyptian ka culture kaafi rich tha. Maana jaata hai ki kisi pharaoh ki jab mrityu ho jaati thi. Tab uske liye ye pyramid ka nirmaan kiya jaata tha. Jisme uske shav ko rehesyamayi liquid se coat karke, uss par pattiya baandh usse ek taboot me band kar dafn kar diya jaata tha. Jisse, hum aaj Mummy keh kar pukaarte hai.

Pharaoh ka matlab tha, ek ruler. King! Ya emperor, jo kehna ho. Yahi tha jo poore Egyptians ko rule karta tha. Pharaoh!!!!

Inn Pyramids ke ekdum andar Pharaoh ka burial chamber rehta tha. Jo aksar, beshqeemti khazaane, aur anya items se hamesha bhara jaata tha taaki, wo inn sab ka upyog apni afterlife yaani ki punar jeevan ya bhavishya jeevan me bhi kar sake.

Aas paas ki deewaaro par carvings aur vishesh paintings banaayi jaati thi. Aur, Pharaoh ke chamber ke paas hi, anya kamre rehte the jidhar uski family aur sevako ko dafn kiya jaata tha.

Chaahe Egyptians ho, ya chaahe Chinese, inme ek baat boht common hoti thi. Wo yeh ki inke rulers, immortality ko lekar aur afterlife ko lekar boht jigyaasu hote the. Betaab rehte the inse jude uttar paane ke liye. Wo harr sambhav prayaas karte the immortality paane ka. Amar hona!!! Par jo duniya me aaya hai wo jaata toh hai hi.

Immortality ka jawaab koi na dhundh paaya filhaal.

Ab inme bhala aisa kya khaas tha jiske peeche scientists aur researchers paagal the? Kya aisi baatein thi wese?

Ek baat jo sabse zyaada scientists ko aaj bhi chakra dene par majboor kar deti hai wo ye hai ki, aisa kaun sa liquid padaarth tha Egyptians ke paas, jisse wo shav par lagaate the?

Itne hazaaro saalo ke baad bhi, wo shav ekdum intact rehta tha. Kya mila ke uss liquid ko banaaya jaata tha? Wo golden colour ka padaarth. Aisa lagta tha ki pighla hua swarn ho. Par usme aur kayi saari cheezein rehti thi. Scientists aaj bhi iska jawaab dhundh rahe hai.

Egypt ki ret, dherro raaz chhupaaye hue hai. Aur harr ek khoj hamaari soch ko puraatan duniya ke baare me ek nayi samajh pradaan karti hai.

Aur, aise hi kuch pyramids abhi haal hi me discover hue the firse.

Cairo, Egypt ki rajdhani me hi scientists ne 2 aur pyramids dhundh nikaale the. Ye dafn ho gaye the. Gehri ret ki parat se.

Haal hi me inhe bhi khoj liya gaya. Pyramids nahi kahenge, kyuki wo triangular shape ki jo building thi, wo toh aadhi ret me dhassne se barbaad ho chuki thi. Bas andar ka jo kuch bhi tha, wo bacha hua tha.

Aur ye toh kuch bhi nahi tha. Abhi na jaane kitne aur discover hone baaki the.

Harr pyramid ki excavation site construct karne ke liye ek unique site management plan banaaya jaata tha. Ye depend karta tha ki Pyramid, kesi location par hai, aas paas kya hai, aur kitne force ko seh sakta hai.

Yaha par bhi aisa hi kuch hua tha. Site plan keval do cheezo par focused tha. Conservation aur Restoration.

Yaani ki, sabse pehla kaam hai ki iss khoj, iss khazaane ko, Jo kuch bhi mila hai usse pehle sambhaal ke rakha jaaye. Aur fir inhe restore kiya jaaye. Yaani ki yadi koi artifact toot chuka hai toh usse jitna pehle jesa banaaya jaa sakta hai. Wo kiya jaaye.

Uske baad site ko aisa banaana tha ki baad me isse tourism ke roop me bhi dhaala jaa sake. Of course, jab investigation khatam hoegi toh log tourism ke roop me inn khojo ko aage chal ke dekhne toh aaenge hi. Toh site aisi ho, ki uss par zyaada mehnat na karte hue usse ek tourism site me badla jaa sake.

Threat of urbanization. Iss baat ka bhi dhyaan rakhna tha. Aage badhti duniya kahi inhe bhul na jaaye, ya inhe haani na pohuchaaye.

Vehicles ka danger. Of course! Tourism ke dauraan, paryatak vehicles se hi aaenge jaaenge. Toh inhe unn se bhi thoda dur rakhna hoga.

Aur rahi baat excavation ki, toh usme ek sensible plan ki requirement thi.

Jo, sab kuch Cairo ke, Secretary general of the supreme council of antiquities ~ Sir George ne sambhaali hui thi.


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Duniya bhar se aneko scientists aur researchers iss khoj ka hissa the.

Aur inhi me se ek thi~

Bhavna!!!

Aur ussi ke sang uski beti, jo ki ek trainee thi filhaal. Wo seekh rahi thi sab kuch. Apni Maa ki guidance me. Bhavna ki post reputed post thi. Jis kaaran, uski beti ko bhi uske saath aane mil jaata tha.

Aur, yahi iss waqt khoje gaye pyramids ke hi agal bagal ek bada shelter taiyaar kiya gaya tha. Hawa aur paani se usse bachaane ke liye.

Idhar hi, researchers saare raat me rehte bhi the, subah research karte the. Aur ye investigation hafto toh kahi mahino tak chala karti thi.

Shaam ka waqt ho raha tha abhi aur shayad shelter me hi kuch behas ho rahi thi.

"What?? They didn't send it with you? What the hell are they even doing?"

Ek aged aadmi thoda gusse me saamne khade vyakti se bola.

Ye aged aadmi koi aur nahi, Sir George hi the.

Aadmi : I'm sorry Sir!!! But they said it will take time.

George : They are just stalling us. Hmph~

Sir George gusse me itna bol baahar nikal gaye. Aur wahi se thodi dur Bhavna khadi hui thi. Aaj ki investigation samaapt ho chuki thi. Wo apni beti ke sang bas apne camp area me rest karne hi jaa rahi thi.

Saqqara Plateau ke beecho beech the iss waqt woh sab. Chaaro orr ret hi ret thi bas. Aur site ke agal bagal unka shelter. Wo samajh chuki thi ki ye behes kis cheez ko lekar thi. Akhir uska bhi mood off tha iss baat ko lekar.

Tabhi uski beti usse dekh puchi, "Mom! Kya Sir George...!?"

Bhavna : Yes Beta!!! Egyptian govt. iss baar iss excavation me hamaara saath nahi de rahi hai poori tarah.

Ladki : Par kyu Mom!? Giza ke Pyramids me toh kitna behtar intezaam tha. Fir yaha...!?

Bhavna (sighs) : Beta!!! Egypt me simultaneously kayi jagah par research chal rahi hai. Aise me ye ek aur... Tum toh jaanti ho ki research ke liye kitne resources lagte hai. Yahi kaaran hai ki iss baar govt. ne yaha hume permission toh dii hai. Par resources provide karwaane me wo... Katra rahe hai... Taal rahe hai... Sir George gusse me hai kyuki generator almost dead hone waala hai. Aur naye generators aaye nahi hai abhi tak.

Ladki : I see!

Bhavna : Aur ye hum jaante hi hai ki excavation ke dauraan, electricity lagti hi hai. Neeche underground me saari jagah bulbs lage hai. Ussi ke zariye toh hum raat me bhi andar jaa sakte hai. Electric supply boht zaroori hai. Electricity nahi hogi toh equipments kese operate karenge hum? Aur lagta hai... Jaha se generators milne waale the. Unlogo ne taal diya hai...

Ladki : Par kyu Mom? Ye sab toh unke hi desh ka khazaana hai. Fir aisa kyu kar rahe hai woh?

Bhavna : Hmm! Mene bataaya na beta. Pehle hi kayi aur investigations chal rahi hai. Upar se yaha alag alag desh se log aake unke khazaane ko dekh rahe hai, unhe chhu rahe hai. Toh unhe iss baat se khushi thodi hoti hai. Wo aisa isliye kar rahe hai ki ye investigation taali jaa sake. Resources nahi rahenge toh unke paas bahana rahega. Wo chaahte hai ki unke hi investigators yaha ki khoj jaari rakhe. Samjhi?

Ladki : Hmm! But aisa nahi hona chahiye Mom...

Abhi wo aage kehti ki tabhi peeche se unke Sir George ki awaaz aayi.

Sir George : Miss Geeta~

Bhavna : Yes sir!? Is something the matter?

Yaha usse Geeta ke naam se sabhi jaante the. Yahi toh uski alias thi. Bhavna naam jese ab dafn hoke reh gaya tha. Bilkul, unn iss tomb ke Pyramid ki tarah.

Sir George : Ahh yes! Those rascals! Haven't send any generators. As you can see, we are in dire need of those. So, I have ordered some trainees to go there and get back with our generators. Umm... If you don't have any problem. Can we send your daughter as well. She's good and persuasive. She'll handle this well.

Sir George generators ko mangwaane ke liye Bhavna ki beti ko bhi bhejna chaahte the. Aur wo Bhavna ke uttar ka wait kar rahe the.

Bhavna : Ahh! That...

Wo thodi uljhan me padd gayi.

Ladki : Don't worry Mom!!! I can handle it. We'll arrive very soon. Don't worry! Abhi shaam hi hai. Raat tak aa jaenge hum sab waapas. Itna bhi dur nahi hai.

Bhavna ko na chaahte hue bhi haan me sarr hilaana pada. Kyuki, Sir George ko wo saalo se jaanti thi. Giza ke dauraan bhi wahi the uss jagah ke general.

Bhavna : Go safely okay?

Ladki (smiles) : Wait for me!!! I'll be back soon!

Sir George (smiles) : Help is always appreciated young lady. You are just like your mother. Active and dedicated.

Ladki (smiles) : Thank you~

Aur Bhavna ki beti shelter se baahar nikal gayi. Bhavna chintit nazro se bas usse jaate hue dekhti rahi. Upar waale se dua kar rahi thi. Sab kuch sahi hi rahe. Maa thi, chinta toh hoti hi hai apni santaan ki.

Aur agle hi pal apni beti ke baare me sochne ke baad, uska dhyaan kahi aur bhatak gaya. Uska haath anaayas hi apne pait par chala gaya. Aur maayusi bhare bhav liye wo apne camp area me chali gayi.

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Mumbai...
Night time ~ 9:17 PM


Jaha Egypt me rait chaand ki roshni me chamak rahi thi, toh yaha apne Mumbai me saara sheher City lights aur raasto par daud rahi gaadiyo ki roshni se jagmaga raha tha.

Udhar ki hawa aur idhar ki hawa me kitna antar tha. Ye thi rushed life.

Ek bemisaal aalishaan 5 star hotel ke saamne hi entry par ek guard maujood tha.


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Waha tabhi ek car ka aagmann hua aur ussi guard ne aage badh car ka door unn andar baithe vyaktiyo ke liye khola.

Andar se ek acche se suit me ek ladka baahar nikla aur dusre side se ek aurat, jo mehngi saree aur zevar pehne hue thi.

Uski aankhein thodi namm thi. Na jaane kya soch rahi thi apne mann me.

"Aaiye Tai jii! Aaiye...!!!"

Uss ladke ne haath se aage chalne ke liye ishaara kiya toh mahila haan me sarr hilaate hue aage badhi. Entrance ka glass door unke motion detection se khula aur wo andar pravesh kiye.

Aur kuch hi derr me wo ek table par maujood the. Hotel ka ambiance bhi shandaar tha. Dim lights aur halka halka madhur music. Koi gaana nahi tha, bas instrumental dhvani jo sabhi ko behad lubha rahi thi.

Aas paas ki tables par harr jagah ameer se ameer log baithe the aur khaane ka lutf le rahe the.

Wo ladka mahila ko dekhte hue bola,

"Tai jii! Jo hua so hua. Mein yaha aapka mann halka karne laaya hu aapko. Aur aap ho ki..."

Uss aurat ne apne aasu poche aur khud ko sambhaal wo idhar udhar dekhne lagi.

Koi keh sakta tha ki ye aurat apni 40s me thi? Bilkul nahi! Usse dekh ke sab yahi kehte ki ye apni late 30s me hai.

"Kya karu? Meri toh kismat hi aisi hai."

Wo ruaasi sii awaaz me boli.

"Tai jii!! Mein aapka dukh samajh sakta hu."

Uss ladke ne saantvna dete hue kaha. Mahila usse dekhi aur waqai, uski aankho me chinta thi.

"Ab muskuraaiye Tai jii! Aur pehle khaane ka lutf lijiye...!"

Kehte hue usne, waiter ko ishaara kiya toh waiter ne starters unn dono ko serve kiye.

Jii haan! Saamne baithi wo mahila koi aur nahi, Veer ki hi sauteli Maa thi ~

Shweta!!!!

Aur uske saamne suit pehne baitha hua ladka koi aur nahi, wahi tha!!!

Veer ka shatru, uska apna bhai...

PRANJAL!!!!!!


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Wahi Pranjal... Jiska vyaktitv wesa tha ~

A honey tongue, a heart of gall.

Yaani ki, mukh me Ram, bagal me chhuri.
Bhed ke bhes me bhediya.

Ghar me jab usne Shweta ko rota dekha toh wo usse behla ke aaj yaha le aaya. Na jaane uske kapti mann me kya shadiyantra racha jaa raha tha.

Chehre par toh pyaar bhari muskaan thi uske, jiske peeche ka matlab Shweta pehchaan na paayi.

Shweta (namm aankho se) : Kya galat karti hu mein? Apni beti ki parvah kisse nahi rehti Pranjal? Tumhare Papa mummy bhi toh apne baccho ke liye kitna kuch karte hi hai na? Tumhaare liye hi kitna kuch karte hai? Toh mein apni Bhumi ke liye jab bhi kuch karne ko hoti hu toh... *sniff* *sniff* toh bhala sab gadbad kyu ho jaati hai?

Pranjal : Tch tch tch...!! Waqai Tai jii! Mein aapki baat se sehmat hu. Aap chinta mat kariye, mein aapke harr decision me aapke saath hu. Mein kuch karunga...!

Shweta : S-Sach!!?

Pranjal : Hmm~ Ab aap enjoy kariye.

Shweta : I... I'll try!!! Thanks! Apni iss Tai jii ke baare me sochne ke liye. Aur mujhe yaha laane ke liye. Mein waqai boht down feel kar rahi thi.

Pranjal (smiles) : No problem! Ye toh mera farz hai Tai jii!!!

Usne muskuraate hue kaha. Uski muskaan dekh, Shweta muskuraayi aur nazre neeche kar khaana khaane me lag gayi.

Par idhar...

Jo muskaan Pranjal ke chehre par thi. Agle hi pal uski wo muskaan ek haivaan ki smile me badal gayi.


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Iss waqt yadi usse koi dekh leta toh uske chehre ki wo shaitaani muskuraahat dekh ke hi darr jaata.

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Cairo, Egypt...
Night time ~ 10:13 PM


Raat ho chuki thi. Aur Misr ki ret par Veer yaha apne kadam rakh chuka tha.

Wese toh woh yaha din me hi pohuch gaya tha. Par usne din me aana avoid kiya?

Kyu? Kyuki, din me aata toh wo easily spot ho jaata. Spot toh wo abhi bhi ho jaata but still, night was better than the day.

Yaha aane me uski madad Suhana ne nahi kii thi iss baar. So he chose Kaera!!!

Kaera se hi Veer ne Visa arrange karwaaya tha. Par, apni ID waale plan ko usne hata diya tha.

Toh filhaal right now, uske paas koi ID nahi thi. Nothing at all.

Aur ek reason aur bhi tha. He came here...

... WITH NO PLAN AT ALL.

Jii haan! Veer ke mann me koi plan nahi tha. Sab kuch wo on the spot hi karne waala tha.

ID nahi thi toh bhaka ghusega kese? Sir George jese archaeologists jab uski tehqiqaat karenge toh kya jawaab dega? Veer ke paas plan na hoke bhi jese plan tha.

Badi hi mushqil se usse Plateau ke andar aa kar excavation site mili. Par ab dikkat ye thi. Shelter ke baahar kaafi security maujood thi.

Aur kyu nahi rahegi? Itni badi khoj ho rahi thi. Hassi mazaak thodi tha. Security toh kadak honi hi thi.

Yadi, ek do guard ko chutiya banaane ki baat hoti toh Veer kar bhi leta. Par yaha toh several guards maujood the.

[Master! They know ki kaun kaun andar waala vyakti waha kaam karta hai. So if you get caught by them. They will recognise ki aap yaha ke nahi ho. And not to mention, you don't have any ID.]

Pari ne samjhaate hue kaha. Par Veer shaant tha. He was inspecting.

Apne aas paas ke area ko wo poora inspect kar raha tha. Kidhar se andar jaana easy rahega, kidhar kam guards milne ke chances rahenge!?

Usne dekha ki camps dherr saare andar ki orr lage hue the.


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Aur baayi orr se raasta gaya tha andar ki hi taraf jaha par fir wo underground site maujood thi. Uss tomb kii.

Veer ki destination wo camp area hi tha. Usse bhala kya matlab tha site me ho rahi khoj se? Usse toh bas ek hi shaks ko talaash thi. Apni Maa ki~

Bhavna!!!

Still, waha tak pohuchne ke liye Veer ko kuch na kuch toh karna hi tha.

Wo jese hi aage badha, toh uski nazar me aur bhi guards aaye jo usse pehle apni pichli position se nazar nahi aa rahe the.

[Damn it!!! Why are there so many!!!?]

Sabse pehli Entrance par do guards the. Ek baahar ki taraf tha toh ek andar ki taraf.

Veer ne dekha ki baahar waala guard harr thodi derr me round le raha tha. Jese hi wo round lene gaya, Veer aage badha aur seedha uss dusre maujood guard ki taraf jaane laga.

[Ehhh? M-Masterrrr??? Y-You...!??]

Pari ko apne master ka ye move palle hi nahi pada. Veer bhala directly guard ke paas kyu jaa raha tha?

Aur usne forun hi Veer ke mann me jhaak ke dekha toh usse saara maajra pata lag gaya.

[Ahhh! That's a nice move Master!]

Veer jese hi guard ke paas pohucha toh guard apni jagah se uth gaya.

Guard : Waiiittt!!! Who are you???

Aur tabhi,

'Check!!!!'

*Ding*

[Name : Bill
Age : 29
Bio : A new recruit for security. Currently got hired to work here as a security. Have a newly wed wife named, Emma. Talks a lot about her. He loves her a lot, especially her pancakes. Have No kids for now.

Relationship : Strangers
Favourability : 0]

Aur uss guard ka status padhte hi Veer ka mann andar hi andar hass raha tha.

Veer : Hmm? Mister Bill? Where's mister Carter???

Bill : Huhhh??

Veer ki baat sunn jese Bill jhep hi gaya. Kyuki, Carter wahi tha...

Wo pehla guard jo round maarne gaya tha.

Veer ne usse pehle hi check kar liya tha.

Bill : C-Carter? That...

Veer : Oh come on! Mister Bill! You already forgot about me? It's just been 2-3 days. I'm a new recruit.

Bill : Ehhhh?

Bill ki kuch saala samajh me hi nahi aa raha tha. Ye kaun banda tha jo usse jaanta tha par wo isse nahi jaanta tha?

Veer : C'mon Mister Bill! Weren't you the one who told us about your wife, Emma? You got married recently right?

Veer ne apna paansa pheka. Bill ki ye aadat thi. Uski shaadi nayi nayi hui thi. Wo aksar naye trainees se apni wife ko tareef karta tha. Aur usne ye kal hi kiya tha. Trainees kati saare the. Ab unme se wo sabhi ko kese jaan sakta tha bhala? Aur issi baat ka Veer ne fayda uthaaya.

Bill : Ahhh! Yeah... Haha~ Sorry! B-But who were y....

Veer : You already forgot about me? I'm one of the new recruits. Mister Carter and you are the ones from here since Day 1 right?

Bill : Ahhh! Y-Yesss...

Veer (udaas hote hue) : It's such a shame Mister Bill! I remember so much about you. About your wife. She makes such nice pancakes. You told us that day, didn't you? And you don't even remember about me.

Veer ne apna dusra paansa pheka. Emotional Damage!!!

Bill jisse udaas nahi bhi hona chaahiye tha. Wo Veer ko dekh khud pe sharmindagi mehsoos karne laga.

Bill : Ahh! S-Sorry! I really forgot... But let me check the list. Surely, your name must be there. Let me just...

[Master stop him~]

Veer : There's no need to Mister Bill!!! Didn't I told you my name that day? The very first day? With all of the other trainees.

Bill : Huh??

Veer (smiles) : I'm Vikram!!!

Bill : V-Vikram?? That... I don't suppose... That...

Bill ko Vikram naam se ghanta kuch yaad aane waala tha. Lund jab suna hi nahi tha ye naam pehle toh kaha se yaad aane waala tha? Iske pehle ki wo sab kuch bhaanpta, Veer ne usse firse tok diya.

Veer : You don't have to check anything Mister. After all, I'll be here only.

Aur itna bol Veer andar jaane laga. Samaan toh woh apna pehle hi hotel me rakh aaya tha.

Par aage badhte hi Bill ne firse ek sawaal puch liya.

Bill : Wait! But where were you? When did you went outside?

Veer : I went outside yesterday Sir. Emergency work!!!

Aur itna bol Veer fir andar jaane laga. Yadi kuch derr aur yaha bitayaa samay toh pakke se wo pakda jaane waala tha.

Par Surprisingly, Bill ne usse jaane de diya.

[Wow! Master~ That was so good!!!!!]

Ab usse chinta karne ki zaroorat nahi thi. Andar kayi aur guards zaroor the. Par jab main entrance se hi usse entry mil gayi thi toh andar maujood guard yahi samajh rahe the ki iss bande ko andar aane diya gaya hai. Yadi Veer ki kismat aaj boht hi jhandu rehti toh hi koi aaj uske paas aake usse tokne waala tha.

Andar aate hi usne jab nazar daudaayi toh dekha ki waha toh dherr saare tents lage hue the. Veer ki samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki inme se ab uski Mom ka tent kaunsa tha.

Sirf ek hi raasta tha...

'Check!!!'

Harr ek tent check kar Veer ne harr taraf check kiya. Kayi log tents se nikal rahe the toh kayi tents ke andar jaa rahe the.

Wo usse ghoor ke aur shaq waali nazro se zaroor dekh rahe the. Par kisi ne bhi usse approach nahi kiya. Sabke mann me yahi baat thi, ki yadi andar aaya hai toh koi hoga ye. Aise hi bhala kisi ko bhi toh allow kar nahi denge andar aane.

Par wo nahi jaante the, ki Veer unhi me se tha. Illegal entry me se.

Veer ne apni upar pad rahi nazro ko ignore kiya aur tents par focus kiya... Aur bilkul...

*Ding*

[Shelter Tent.
Bio : A Tent for residing. Currently occupied by Geeta.]

Aur bas... Usse padhte hi Veer ke hontho par muskaan fel gayi.

Wo seedha uss tent ki orr badha.

Tent ki entrance khuli hui thi. Shayad uski Maa Geeta, urf Bhavna jaag rahi thi.

Veer ka dil zorro se dhadak raha tha. He was finally about to meet his own mother. His real mother.

Kya reaction hoga unka? Kya hoga uski behan ka reaction? How they will see him?

Saare sawaalo se uska mann bhara hua tha.

[Master... We don't have to tell our identity.... Yet...!!!]

'I know Pari! I know!'

Aur usne tent ke kapde ko apne haatho se hataaya aur andar aaya.

Saamne ek khubsoorat sii aurat viraajmaan thi. Ek foldable chair par.

Saamne rakhi foldable table par hi ek night lamp chota sa jal raha tha aur....

Uss table par kuch rakha hua tha. Aur wo aurat, apne haatho me ek chota sa brush liye uss rakhi hui cheez par halke haatho se chala rahi thi, taaki jami hui dhool mitti ki parat hata sake.

Uske lambe ghane kaale baal jo usne iss waqt apni choti me baandh ke rakhe hue the.

Veer ki saasein uss aurat ko dekhte hi atak gayi.

*Badump* Dil zorr se dhadka...

'Check!'

*Ding*

[Alias name - Geeta
Real Name - Bhavna Singh.
Bio - Bhavna! Ek behad hi strong woman hai. Boht peeda me hai jo kayi saalo se wo bardaasht karti aa rahi hai. Loves her daughter too much. Ek aas hai usse. Aur kisi ki talaash. Peshe se Archeologist hai.

Favourability - 82
Relationship - Mother.]

Veer ke honth thar tharaane lage. It's her!!!

Wo phati aankho se unhe hi dekh raha tha. Finally!!! Wo uski aankho ke saamne thi. Kese bichad gaye the dono itne saal pehle. Aur kese uss train me bhi dono ek dusre ke alag alag raaste kaa chuke the.

Par aaj...

Kismat ne unhe waapas se milwa diya tha. Veer ka dil ro raha tha. Uska mann kar raha tha ki abhi jaake apni Maa ke gale lag jaaye. Aur rote hue dherro sawaal puche. Kyu chorr ke gayi usse?

Par... Dekho... Chaah ke bhi wo abhi aisa nahi kar sakta tha. Bhavna, uski Maa uske itna qareeb hoke bhi... Kitna dur thi uss se.

Aur jese kisi ki aahat paate hi yaha Bhavna ne apna sarr ghumaaya aur entrance ki orr dekha, "Hmmm????"
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Egypt waale updates me kaafi mehnat lagi hai. Kyuki kaafi research karke mein inhe likh raha hu. Toh mehnat barbaad na jaane dena. Like thokne ka aur apni raay aur revos rakhne ka. Okay?
Baaki, milte hai next update me. 😁

Dhanyavaad! ✨
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Update - 80 ~ Reunion and Conspiracy
Ab tak...

Uski destination thi ~ Egypt!!!!

Bhavna bhale hi Giza Pyramids ki khoj se kaut aayi thi. Par Egypt me keval yahi pyramids nahi the. Haal hi me, researchers ne ek aur pyramid khoja tha. Uske andar ki saari chhaan been karne dherro researchers aur scientists aaye hue the. Bhavna unme se ek thi.

Ye ek bade scale ka excavation tha.

Aur Veer ready tha.

Apni Maa se Finally milne ke liye. Aur apni uss behan se bhi.


Ab aage...

Egypt!!!

Ek aisa desh, jo aksar charcha me bana rehta hai, apne culture se jude rehesya aur raazo ko lekar.

Jii haan! Aapne sahi samjha. Egypt naam sunte hi insaan ke mann me sabse pehli cheez jo dimaag me aati hai, wo hai ~ Pyramids.

Aur maano chaahe na maano, par Pyramids of Giza hi nahi, balki aise dherro anya pyramids hai jo kayi saare raaz chhupaaye hue hai.

Giza Pyramid, hamaare sansaar ke seven wonders me se ek hai. Aur sabse puraana hai saare 7 ajubo me se.

Par, aur kya khaas baat thi?

Inn Pyramids ke andar hota kya tha? Mummy? Aur? Bhala Aur kya?

Darasal, puraatan kaal ke Egyptian ka culture kaafi rich tha. Maana jaata hai ki kisi pharaoh ki jab mrityu ho jaati thi. Tab uske liye ye pyramid ka nirmaan kiya jaata tha. Jisme uske shav ko rehesyamayi liquid se coat karke, uss par pattiya baandh usse ek taboot me band kar dafn kar diya jaata tha. Jisse, hum aaj Mummy keh kar pukaarte hai.

Pharaoh ka matlab tha, ek ruler. King! Ya emperor, jo kehna ho. Yahi tha jo poore Egyptians ko rule karta tha. Pharaoh!!!!

Inn Pyramids ke ekdum andar Pharaoh ka burial chamber rehta tha. Jo aksar, beshqeemti khazaane, aur anya items se hamesha bhara jaata tha taaki, wo inn sab ka upyog apni afterlife yaani ki punar jeevan ya bhavishya jeevan me bhi kar sake.

Aas paas ki deewaaro par carvings aur vishesh paintings banaayi jaati thi. Aur, Pharaoh ke chamber ke paas hi, anya kamre rehte the jidhar uski family aur sevako ko dafn kiya jaata tha.

Chaahe Egyptians ho, ya chaahe Chinese, inme ek baat boht common hoti thi. Wo yeh ki inke rulers, immortality ko lekar aur afterlife ko lekar boht jigyaasu hote the. Betaab rehte the inse jude uttar paane ke liye. Wo harr sambhav prayaas karte the immortality paane ka. Amar hona!!! Par jo duniya me aaya hai wo jaata toh hai hi.

Immortality ka jawaab koi na dhundh paaya filhaal.

Ab inme bhala aisa kya khaas tha jiske peeche scientists aur researchers paagal the? Kya aisi baatein thi wese?

Ek baat jo sabse zyaada scientists ko aaj bhi chakra dene par majboor kar deti hai wo ye hai ki, aisa kaun sa liquid padaarth tha Egyptians ke paas, jisse wo shav par lagaate the?

Itne hazaaro saalo ke baad bhi, wo shav ekdum intact rehta tha. Kya mila ke uss liquid ko banaaya jaata tha? Wo golden colour ka padaarth. Aisa lagta tha ki pighla hua swarn ho. Par usme aur kayi saari cheezein rehti thi. Scientists aaj bhi iska jawaab dhundh rahe hai.

Egypt ki ret, dherro raaz chhupaaye hue hai. Aur harr ek khoj hamaari soch ko puraatan duniya ke baare me ek nayi samajh pradaan karti hai.

Aur, aise hi kuch pyramids abhi haal hi me discover hue the firse.

Cairo, Egypt ki rajdhani me hi scientists ne 2 aur pyramids dhundh nikaale the. Ye dafn ho gaye the. Gehri ret ki parat se.

Haal hi me inhe bhi khoj liya gaya. Pyramids nahi kahenge, kyuki wo triangular shape ki jo building thi, wo toh aadhi ret me dhassne se barbaad ho chuki thi. Bas andar ka jo kuch bhi tha, wo bacha hua tha.

Aur ye toh kuch bhi nahi tha. Abhi na jaane kitne aur discover hone baaki the.

Harr pyramid ki excavation site construct karne ke liye ek unique site management plan banaaya jaata tha. Ye depend karta tha ki Pyramid, kesi location par hai, aas paas kya hai, aur kitne force ko seh sakta hai.

Yaha par bhi aisa hi kuch hua tha. Site plan keval do cheezo par focused tha. Conservation aur Restoration.

Yaani ki, sabse pehla kaam hai ki iss khoj, iss khazaane ko, Jo kuch bhi mila hai usse pehle sambhaal ke rakha jaaye. Aur fir inhe restore kiya jaaye. Yaani ki yadi koi artifact toot chuka hai toh usse jitna pehle jesa banaaya jaa sakta hai. Wo kiya jaaye.

Uske baad site ko aisa banaana tha ki baad me isse tourism ke roop me bhi dhaala jaa sake. Of course, jab investigation khatam hoegi toh log tourism ke roop me inn khojo ko aage chal ke dekhne toh aaenge hi. Toh site aisi ho, ki uss par zyaada mehnat na karte hue usse ek tourism site me badla jaa sake.

Threat of urbanization. Iss baat ka bhi dhyaan rakhna tha. Aage badhti duniya kahi inhe bhul na jaaye, ya inhe haani na pohuchaaye.

Vehicles ka danger. Of course! Tourism ke dauraan, paryatak vehicles se hi aaenge jaaenge. Toh inhe unn se bhi thoda dur rakhna hoga.

Aur rahi baat excavation ki, toh usme ek sensible plan ki requirement thi.

Jo, sab kuch Cairo ke, Secretary general of the supreme council of antiquities ~ Sir George ne sambhaali hui thi.


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Duniya bhar se aneko scientists aur researchers iss khoj ka hissa the.

Aur inhi me se ek thi~

Bhavna!!!

Aur ussi ke sang uski beti, jo ki ek trainee thi filhaal. Wo seekh rahi thi sab kuch. Apni Maa ki guidance me. Bhavna ki post reputed post thi. Jis kaaran, uski beti ko bhi uske saath aane mil jaata tha.

Aur, yahi iss waqt khoje gaye pyramids ke hi agal bagal ek bada shelter taiyaar kiya gaya tha. Hawa aur paani se usse bachaane ke liye.

Idhar hi, researchers saare raat me rehte bhi the, subah research karte the. Aur ye investigation hafto toh kahi mahino tak chala karti thi.

Shaam ka waqt ho raha tha abhi aur shayad shelter me hi kuch behas ho rahi thi.

"What?? They didn't send it with you? What the hell are they even doing?"

Ek aged aadmi thoda gusse me saamne khade vyakti se bola.

Ye aged aadmi koi aur nahi, Sir George hi the.

Aadmi : I'm sorry Sir!!! But they said it will take time.

George : They are just stalling us. Hmph~

Sir George gusse me itna bol baahar nikal gaye. Aur wahi se thodi dur Bhavna khadi hui thi. Aaj ki investigation samaapt ho chuki thi. Wo apni beti ke sang bas apne camp area me rest karne hi jaa rahi thi.

Saqqara Plateau ke beecho beech the iss waqt woh sab. Chaaro orr ret hi ret thi bas. Aur site ke agal bagal unka shelter. Wo samajh chuki thi ki ye behes kis cheez ko lekar thi. Akhir uska bhi mood off tha iss baat ko lekar.

Tabhi uski beti usse dekh puchi, "Mom! Kya Sir George...!?"

Bhavna : Yes Beta!!! Egyptian govt. iss baar iss excavation me hamaara saath nahi de rahi hai poori tarah.

Ladki : Par kyu Mom!? Giza ke Pyramids me toh kitna behtar intezaam tha. Fir yaha...!?

Bhavna (sighs) : Beta!!! Egypt me simultaneously kayi jagah par research chal rahi hai. Aise me ye ek aur... Tum toh jaanti ho ki research ke liye kitne resources lagte hai. Yahi kaaran hai ki iss baar govt. ne yaha hume permission toh dii hai. Par resources provide karwaane me wo... Katra rahe hai... Taal rahe hai... Sir George gusse me hai kyuki generator almost dead hone waala hai. Aur naye generators aaye nahi hai abhi tak.

Ladki : I see!

Bhavna : Aur ye hum jaante hi hai ki excavation ke dauraan, electricity lagti hi hai. Neeche underground me saari jagah bulbs lage hai. Ussi ke zariye toh hum raat me bhi andar jaa sakte hai. Electric supply boht zaroori hai. Electricity nahi hogi toh equipments kese operate karenge hum? Aur lagta hai... Jaha se generators milne waale the. Unlogo ne taal diya hai...

Ladki : Par kyu Mom? Ye sab toh unke hi desh ka khazaana hai. Fir aisa kyu kar rahe hai woh?

Bhavna : Hmm! Mene bataaya na beta. Pehle hi kayi aur investigations chal rahi hai. Upar se yaha alag alag desh se log aake unke khazaane ko dekh rahe hai, unhe chhu rahe hai. Toh unhe iss baat se khushi thodi hoti hai. Wo aisa isliye kar rahe hai ki ye investigation taali jaa sake. Resources nahi rahenge toh unke paas bahana rahega. Wo chaahte hai ki unke hi investigators yaha ki khoj jaari rakhe. Samjhi?

Ladki : Hmm! But aisa nahi hona chahiye Mom...

Abhi wo aage kehti ki tabhi peeche se unke Sir George ki awaaz aayi.

Sir George : Miss Geeta~

Bhavna : Yes sir!? Is something the matter?

Yaha usse Geeta ke naam se sabhi jaante the. Yahi toh uski alias thi. Bhavna naam jese ab dafn hoke reh gaya tha. Bilkul, unn iss tomb ke Pyramid ki tarah.

Sir George : Ahh yes! Those rascals! Haven't send any generators. As you can see, we are in dire need of those. So, I have ordered some trainees to go there and get back with our generators. Umm... If you don't have any problem. Can we send your daughter as well. She's good and persuasive. She'll handle this well.

Sir George generators ko mangwaane ke liye Bhavna ki beti ko bhi bhejna chaahte the. Aur wo Bhavna ke uttar ka wait kar rahe the.

Bhavna : Ahh! That...

Wo thodi uljhan me padd gayi.

Ladki : Don't worry Mom!!! I can handle it. We'll arrive very soon. Don't worry! Abhi shaam hi hai. Raat tak aa jaenge hum sab waapas. Itna bhi dur nahi hai.

Bhavna ko na chaahte hue bhi haan me sarr hilaana pada. Kyuki, Sir George ko wo saalo se jaanti thi. Giza ke dauraan bhi wahi the uss jagah ke general.

Bhavna : Go safely okay?

Ladki (smiles) : Wait for me!!! I'll be back soon!

Sir George (smiles) : Help is always appreciated young lady. You are just like your mother. Active and dedicated.

Ladki (smiles) : Thank you~

Aur Bhavna ki beti shelter se baahar nikal gayi. Bhavna chintit nazro se bas usse jaate hue dekhti rahi. Upar waale se dua kar rahi thi. Sab kuch sahi hi rahe. Maa thi, chinta toh hoti hi hai apni santaan ki.

Aur agle hi pal apni beti ke baare me sochne ke baad, uska dhyaan kahi aur bhatak gaya. Uska haath anaayas hi apne pait par chala gaya. Aur maayusi bhare bhav liye wo apne camp area me chali gayi.

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Mumbai...
Night time ~ 9:17 PM


Jaha Egypt me rait chaand ki roshni me chamak rahi thi, toh yaha apne Mumbai me saara sheher City lights aur raasto par daud rahi gaadiyo ki roshni se jagmaga raha tha.

Udhar ki hawa aur idhar ki hawa me kitna antar tha. Ye thi rushed life.

Ek bemisaal aalishaan 5 star hotel ke saamne hi entry par ek guard maujood tha.


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Waha tabhi ek car ka aagmann hua aur ussi guard ne aage badh car ka door unn andar baithe vyaktiyo ke liye khola.

Andar se ek acche se suit me ek ladka baahar nikla aur dusre side se ek aurat, jo mehngi saree aur zevar pehne hue thi.

Uski aankhein thodi namm thi. Na jaane kya soch rahi thi apne mann me.

"Aaiye Tai jii! Aaiye...!!!"

Uss ladke ne haath se aage chalne ke liye ishaara kiya toh mahila haan me sarr hilaate hue aage badhi. Entrance ka glass door unke motion detection se khula aur wo andar pravesh kiye.

Aur kuch hi derr me wo ek table par maujood the. Hotel ka ambiance bhi shandaar tha. Dim lights aur halka halka madhur music. Koi gaana nahi tha, bas instrumental dhvani jo sabhi ko behad lubha rahi thi.

Aas paas ki tables par harr jagah ameer se ameer log baithe the aur khaane ka lutf le rahe the.

Wo ladka mahila ko dekhte hue bola,

"Tai jii! Jo hua so hua. Mein yaha aapka mann halka karne laaya hu aapko. Aur aap ho ki..."

Uss aurat ne apne aasu poche aur khud ko sambhaal wo idhar udhar dekhne lagi.

Koi keh sakta tha ki ye aurat apni 40s me thi? Bilkul nahi! Usse dekh ke sab yahi kehte ki ye apni late 30s me hai.

"Kya karu? Meri toh kismat hi aisi hai."

Wo ruaasi sii awaaz me boli.

"Tai jii!! Mein aapka dukh samajh sakta hu."

Uss ladke ne saantvna dete hue kaha. Mahila usse dekhi aur waqai, uski aankho me chinta thi.

"Ab muskuraaiye Tai jii! Aur pehle khaane ka lutf lijiye...!"

Kehte hue usne, waiter ko ishaara kiya toh waiter ne starters unn dono ko serve kiye.

Jii haan! Saamne baithi wo mahila koi aur nahi, Veer ki hi sauteli Maa thi ~

Shweta!!!!

Aur uske saamne suit pehne baitha hua ladka koi aur nahi, wahi tha!!!

Veer ka shatru, uska apna bhai...

PRANJAL!!!!!!


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Wahi Pranjal... Jiska vyaktitv wesa tha ~

A honey tongue, a heart of gall.

Yaani ki, mukh me Ram, bagal me chhuri.
Bhed ke bhes me bhediya.

Ghar me jab usne Shweta ko rota dekha toh wo usse behla ke aaj yaha le aaya. Na jaane uske kapti mann me kya shadiyantra racha jaa raha tha.

Chehre par toh pyaar bhari muskaan thi uske, jiske peeche ka matlab Shweta pehchaan na paayi.

Shweta (namm aankho se) : Kya galat karti hu mein? Apni beti ki parvah kisse nahi rehti Pranjal? Tumhare Papa mummy bhi toh apne baccho ke liye kitna kuch karte hi hai na? Tumhaare liye hi kitna kuch karte hai? Toh mein apni Bhumi ke liye jab bhi kuch karne ko hoti hu toh... *sniff* *sniff* toh bhala sab gadbad kyu ho jaati hai?

Pranjal : Tch tch tch...!! Waqai Tai jii! Mein aapki baat se sehmat hu. Aap chinta mat kariye, mein aapke harr decision me aapke saath hu. Mein kuch karunga...!

Shweta : S-Sach!!?

Pranjal : Hmm~ Ab aap enjoy kariye.

Shweta : I... I'll try!!! Thanks! Apni iss Tai jii ke baare me sochne ke liye. Aur mujhe yaha laane ke liye. Mein waqai boht down feel kar rahi thi.

Pranjal (smiles) : No problem! Ye toh mera farz hai Tai jii!!!

Usne muskuraate hue kaha. Uski muskaan dekh, Shweta muskuraayi aur nazre neeche kar khaana khaane me lag gayi.

Par idhar...

Jo muskaan Pranjal ke chehre par thi. Agle hi pal uski wo muskaan ek haivaan ki smile me badal gayi.


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Iss waqt yadi usse koi dekh leta toh uske chehre ki wo shaitaani muskuraahat dekh ke hi darr jaata.

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Cairo, Egypt...
Night time ~ 10:13 PM


Raat ho chuki thi. Aur Misr ki ret par Veer yaha apne kadam rakh chuka tha.

Wese toh woh yaha din me hi pohuch gaya tha. Par usne din me aana avoid kiya?

Kyu? Kyuki, din me aata toh wo easily spot ho jaata. Spot toh wo abhi bhi ho jaata but still, night was better than the day.

Yaha aane me uski madad Suhana ne nahi kii thi iss baar. So he chose Kaera!!!

Kaera se hi Veer ne Visa arrange karwaaya tha. Par, apni ID waale plan ko usne hata diya tha.

Toh filhaal right now, uske paas koi ID nahi thi. Nothing at all.

Aur ek reason aur bhi tha. He came here...

... WITH NO PLAN AT ALL.

Jii haan! Veer ke mann me koi plan nahi tha. Sab kuch wo on the spot hi karne waala tha.

ID nahi thi toh bhaka ghusega kese? Sir George jese archaeologists jab uski tehqiqaat karenge toh kya jawaab dega? Veer ke paas plan na hoke bhi jese plan tha.

Badi hi mushqil se usse Plateau ke andar aa kar excavation site mili. Par ab dikkat ye thi. Shelter ke baahar kaafi security maujood thi.

Aur kyu nahi rahegi? Itni badi khoj ho rahi thi. Hassi mazaak thodi tha. Security toh kadak honi hi thi.

Yadi, ek do guard ko chutiya banaane ki baat hoti toh Veer kar bhi leta. Par yaha toh several guards maujood the.

[Master! They know ki kaun kaun andar waala vyakti waha kaam karta hai. So if you get caught by them. They will recognise ki aap yaha ke nahi ho. And not to mention, you don't have any ID.]

Pari ne samjhaate hue kaha. Par Veer shaant tha. He was inspecting.

Apne aas paas ke area ko wo poora inspect kar raha tha. Kidhar se andar jaana easy rahega, kidhar kam guards milne ke chances rahenge!?

Usne dekha ki camps dherr saare andar ki orr lage hue the.


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Aur baayi orr se raasta gaya tha andar ki hi taraf jaha par fir wo underground site maujood thi. Uss tomb kii.

Veer ki destination wo camp area hi tha. Usse bhala kya matlab tha site me ho rahi khoj se? Usse toh bas ek hi shaks ko talaash thi. Apni Maa ki~

Bhavna!!!

Still, waha tak pohuchne ke liye Veer ko kuch na kuch toh karna hi tha.

Wo jese hi aage badha, toh uski nazar me aur bhi guards aaye jo usse pehle apni pichli position se nazar nahi aa rahe the.

[Damn it!!! Why are there so many!!!?]

Sabse pehli Entrance par do guards the. Ek baahar ki taraf tha toh ek andar ki taraf.

Veer ne dekha ki baahar waala guard harr thodi derr me round le raha tha. Jese hi wo round lene gaya, Veer aage badha aur seedha uss dusre maujood guard ki taraf jaane laga.

[Ehhh? M-Masterrrr??? Y-You...!??]

Pari ko apne master ka ye move palle hi nahi pada. Veer bhala directly guard ke paas kyu jaa raha tha?

Aur usne forun hi Veer ke mann me jhaak ke dekha toh usse saara maajra pata lag gaya.

[Ahhh! That's a nice move Master!]

Veer jese hi guard ke paas pohucha toh guard apni jagah se uth gaya.

Guard : Waiiittt!!! Who are you???

Aur tabhi,

'Check!!!!'

*Ding*

[Name : Bill

Age : 29
Bio : A new recruit for security. Currently got hired to work here as a security. Have a newly wed wife named, Emma. Talks a lot about her. He loves her a lot, especially her pancakes. Have No kids for now.

Relationship : Strangers
Favourability : 0]

Aur uss guard ka status padhte hi Veer ka mann andar hi andar hass raha tha.

Veer : Hmm? Mister Bill? Where's mister Carter???

Bill : Huhhh??

Veer ki baat sunn jese Bill jhep hi gaya. Kyuki, Carter wahi tha...

Wo pehla guard jo round maarne gaya tha.

Veer ne usse pehle hi check kar liya tha.

Bill : C-Carter? That...

Veer : Oh come on! Mister Bill! You already forgot about me? It's just been 2-3 days. I'm a new recruit.

Bill : Ehhhh?

Bill ki kuch saala samajh me hi nahi aa raha tha. Ye kaun banda tha jo usse jaanta tha par wo isse nahi jaanta tha?

Veer : C'mon Mister Bill! Weren't you the one who told us about your wife, Emma? You got married recently right?

Veer ne apna paansa pheka. Bill ki ye aadat thi. Uski shaadi nayi nayi hui thi. Wo aksar naye trainees se apni wife ko tareef karta tha. Aur usne ye kal hi kiya tha. Trainees kati saare the. Ab unme se wo sabhi ko kese jaan sakta tha bhala? Aur issi baat ka Veer ne fayda uthaaya.

Bill : Ahhh! Yeah... Haha~ Sorry! B-But who were y....

Veer : You already forgot about me? I'm one of the new recruits. Mister Carter and you are the ones from here since Day 1 right?

Bill : Ahhh! Y-Yesss...

Veer (udaas hote hue) : It's such a shame Mister Bill! I remember so much about you. About your wife. She makes such nice pancakes. You told us that day, didn't you? And you don't even remember about me.

Veer ne apna dusra paansa pheka. Emotional Damage!!!

Bill jisse udaas nahi bhi hona chaahiye tha. Wo Veer ko dekh khud pe sharmindagi mehsoos karne laga.

Bill : Ahh! S-Sorry! I really forgot... But let me check the list. Surely, your name must be there. Let me just...

[Master stop him~]

Veer : There's no need to Mister Bill!!! Didn't I told you my name that day? The very first day? With all of the other trainees.

Bill : Huh??

Veer (smiles) : I'm Vikram!!!

Bill : V-Vikram?? That... I don't suppose... That...

Bill ko Vikram naam se ghanta kuch yaad aane waala tha. Lund jab suna hi nahi tha ye naam pehle toh kaha se yaad aane waala tha? Iske pehle ki wo sab kuch bhaanpta, Veer ne usse firse tok diya.

Veer : You don't have to check anything Mister. After all, I'll be here only.

Aur itna bol Veer andar jaane laga. Samaan toh woh apna pehle hi hotel me rakh aaya tha.

Par aage badhte hi Bill ne firse ek sawaal puch liya.

Bill : Wait! But where were you? When did you went outside?

Veer : I went outside yesterday Sir. Emergency work!!!

Aur itna bol Veer fir andar jaane laga. Yadi kuch derr aur yaha bitayaa samay toh pakke se wo pakda jaane waala tha.

Par Surprisingly, Bill ne usse jaane de diya.

[Wow! Master~ That was so good!!!!!]

Ab usse chinta karne ki zaroorat nahi thi. Andar kayi aur guards zaroor the. Par jab main entrance se hi usse entry mil gayi thi toh andar maujood guard yahi samajh rahe the ki iss bande ko andar aane diya gaya hai. Yadi Veer ki kismat aaj boht hi jhandu rehti toh hi koi aaj uske paas aake usse tokne waala tha.

Andar aate hi usne jab nazar daudaayi toh dekha ki waha toh dherr saare tents lage hue the. Veer ki samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki inme se ab uski Mom ka tent kaunsa tha.

Sirf ek hi raasta tha...

'Check!!!'

Harr ek tent check kar Veer ne harr taraf check kiya. Kayi log tents se nikal rahe the toh kayi tents ke andar jaa rahe the.

Wo usse ghoor ke aur shaq waali nazro se zaroor dekh rahe the. Par kisi ne bhi usse approach nahi kiya. Sabke mann me yahi baat thi, ki yadi andar aaya hai toh koi hoga ye. Aise hi bhala kisi ko bhi toh allow kar nahi denge andar aane.

Par wo nahi jaante the, ki Veer unhi me se tha. Illegal entry me se.

Veer ne apni upar pad rahi nazro ko ignore kiya aur tents par focus kiya... Aur bilkul...

*Ding*

[Shelter Tent.

Bio : A Tent for residing. Currently occupied by Geeta.]

Aur bas... Usse padhte hi Veer ke hontho par muskaan fel gayi.

Wo seedha uss tent ki orr badha.

Tent ki entrance khuli hui thi. Shayad uski Maa Geeta, urf Bhavna jaag rahi thi.

Veer ka dil zorro se dhadak raha tha. He was finally about to meet his own mother. His real mother.

Kya reaction hoga unka? Kya hoga uski behan ka reaction? How they will see him?

Saare sawaalo se uska mann bhara hua tha.

[Master... We don't have to tell our identity.... Yet...!!!]

'I know Pari! I know!'

Aur usne tent ke kapde ko apne haatho se hataaya aur andar aaya.

Saamne ek khubsoorat sii aurat viraajmaan thi. Ek foldable chair par.

Saamne rakhi foldable table par hi ek night lamp chota sa jal raha tha aur....

Uss table par kuch rakha hua tha. Aur wo aurat, apne haatho me ek chota sa brush liye uss rakhi hui cheez par halke haatho se chala rahi thi, taaki jami hui dhool mitti ki parat hata sake.

Uske lambe ghane kaale baal jo usne iss waqt apni choti me baandh ke rakhe hue the.

Veer ki saasein uss aurat ko dekhte hi atak gayi.

*Badump* Dil zorr se dhadka...

'Check!'

*Ding*

[Alias name - Geeta

Real Name - Bhavna Singh.
Age : 47
Bio - Bhavna! Ek behad hi strong woman hai. Boht peeda me hai jo kayi saalo se wo bardaasht karti aa rahi hai. Loves her daughter too much. Ek aas hai usse. Aur kisi ki talaash. Peshe se Archeologist hai.

Favourability - 82
Relationship - Mother.]

Veer ke honth thar tharaane lage. It's her!!!

Wo phati aankho se unhe hi dekh raha tha. Finally!!! Wo uski aankho ke saamne thi. Kese bichad gaye the dono itne saal pehle. Aur kese uss train me bhi dono ek dusre ke alag alag raaste kaa chuke the.

Par aaj...

Kismat ne unhe waapas se milwa diya tha. Veer ka dil ro raha tha. Uska mann kar raha tha ki abhi jaake apni Maa ke gale lag jaaye. Aur rote hue dherro sawaal puche. Kyu chorr ke gayi usse?

Par... Dekho... Chaah ke bhi wo abhi aisa nahi kar sakta tha. Bhavna, uski Maa uske itna qareeb hoke bhi... Kitna dur thi uss se.

Aur jese kisi ki aahat paate hi yaha Bhavna ne apna sarr ghumaaya aur entrance ki orr dekha, "Hmmm????"
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Egypt waale updates me kaafi mehnat lagi hai. Kyuki kaafi research karke mein inhe likh raha hu. Toh mehnat barbaad na jaane dena. Like thokne ka aur apni raay aur revos rakhne ka. Okay?
Baaki, milte hai next update me. 😁

Dhanyavaad! ✨
Fantastic mind-blowing update
 
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