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Tension nhi bandhu tum thik hona fir update dene ka itna to wait kr sakte hey bhaya take care of yourself भाऊ .Yes! So about what happened yesterday!?
Kal shaam 7-8 baje hua ye. Mein market se ghar laut raha tha. I was on my bike. 40-45 ki speed thi. Aur mein main road ke jo side me alternate roads rehti hai, usme tha. Achanak hi saamne chal rahe ek aged Uncle ne apni scooty on the spot rok dii thi. He was with his little granddaughter. Sab kuch suddenly hua. So, I applied brakes but my bike slid off. Mein gira aur haath perr me kaafi chot aayi. Chhil gaye haath aur perr.
At that time, mera left arm straight nahi ho raha tha. I thought ki shayad dard ki wajah se aisa tha. So, Mein jese tese ghar aaya. But like 1-1:30 ghante aur guzar gaye but arm straight hi nahi ho raha tha. Tab meri thodi fati. Aur laga ki elbow ki bone shayad toot chuki hai. Kam se kam fracture toh hua hi hoga. Raat ko immediately mein hospital gaya. They did the x-ray aur fortunately, nothing was there. Koi fracture nahi tha.
He gave me some pain killers, jinhe mein raat me leke soya aur subah aaj thoda baaya haath straight ho raha hai.
Now, about update...! Update 83 half completed tha. Abhi bhi utna hi likha pada hua hai. Since, mein phone se hi type karta hu. I'll try with my right hand. Aise hi baithe baithe. I hope probably mein 12 ke pehle hi update deliver kar dunga. Anyways, sorry for the wait guys.
Things happened suddenly. 2 din ke gap liya hu job se bhi. Wounds minor hai. Scratches wagarah. Pattiya hai halki fulki jo 2-3 din me khul jaengi.
Keep supporting!!!
Take care broYes! So about what happened yesterday!?
Kal shaam 7-8 baje hua ye. Mein market se ghar laut raha tha. I was on my bike. 40-45 ki speed thi. Aur mein main road ke jo side me alternate roads rehti hai, usme tha. Achanak hi saamne chal rahe ek aged Uncle ne apni scooty on the spot rok dii thi. He was with his little granddaughter. Sab kuch suddenly hua. So, I applied brakes but my bike slid off. Mein gira aur haath perr me kaafi chot aayi. Chhil gaye haath aur perr.
At that time, mera left arm straight nahi ho raha tha. I thought ki shayad dard ki wajah se aisa tha. So, Mein jese tese ghar aaya. But like 1-1:30 ghante aur guzar gaye but arm straight hi nahi ho raha tha. Tab meri thodi fati. Aur laga ki elbow ki bone shayad toot chuki hai. Kam se kam fracture toh hua hi hoga. Raat ko immediately mein hospital gaya. They did the x-ray aur fortunately, nothing was there. Koi fracture nahi tha.
He gave me some pain killers, jinhe mein raat me leke soya aur subah aaj thoda baaya haath straight ho raha hai.
Now, about update...! Update 83 half completed tha. Abhi bhi utna hi likha pada hua hai. Since, mein phone se hi type karta hu. I'll try with my right hand. Aise hi baithe baithe. I hope probably mein 12 ke pehle hi update deliver kar dunga. Anyways, sorry for the wait guys.
Things happened suddenly. 2 din ke gap liya hu job se bhi. Wounds minor hai. Scratches wagarah. Pattiya hai halki fulki jo 2-3 din me khul jaengi.
Keep supporting!!!
Har dard ki ek hi tonicTension nhi bandhu tum thik hona fir update dene ka itna to wait kr sakte hey bhaya take care of yourself भाऊ .
Aur thoda tonic lene का
Sab dard vard ghumne ko jata hey
Nashe mein nahin tha isiliye to ho gaya, warna nahin hota.Kitni baar bola hai nashe me gaadi mat chalaya kar par nahi sunni hi nahi hai tereko
WaitingYes! So about what happened yesterday!?
Kal shaam 7-8 baje hua ye. Mein market se ghar laut raha tha. I was on my bike. 40-45 ki speed thi. Aur mein main road ke jo side me alternate roads rehti hai, usme tha. Achanak hi saamne chal rahe ek aged Uncle ne apni scooty on the spot rok dii thi. He was with his little granddaughter. Sab kuch suddenly hua. So, I applied brakes but my bike slid off. Mein gira aur haath perr me kaafi chot aayi. Chhil gaye haath aur perr.
At that time, mera left arm straight nahi ho raha tha. I thought ki shayad dard ki wajah se aisa tha. So, Mein jese tese ghar aaya. But like 1-1:30 ghante aur guzar gaye but arm straight hi nahi ho raha tha. Tab meri thodi fati. Aur laga ki elbow ki bone shayad toot chuki hai. Kam se kam fracture toh hua hi hoga. Raat ko immediately mein hospital gaya. They did the x-ray aur fortunately, nothing was there. Koi fracture nahi tha.
He gave me some pain killers, jinhe mein raat me leke soya aur subah aaj thoda baaya haath straight ho raha hai.
Now, about update...! Update 83 half completed tha. Abhi bhi utna hi likha pada hua hai. Since, mein phone se hi type karta hu. I'll try with my right hand. Aise hi baithe baithe. I hope probably mein 12 ke pehle hi update deliver kar dunga. Anyways, sorry for the wait guys.
Things happened suddenly. 2 din ke gap liya hu job se bhi. Wounds minor hai. Scratches wagarah. Pattiya hai halki fulki jo 2-3 din me khul jaengi.
Keep supporting!!!
Sahi bolaHar dard ki ek hi tonic
What happened Werewolf bro. Take good rest and heal yourselfI got into an accident. I'll update you guys further in the evening.
Update bro kab tak doge aap mai Updateke liye kisi bhi writer shahb ko nhi kahta but aap se bol rha hu because you are a best writer shahb ✍ .....Sabhi ko sabse pehle Hello!
Ye meri iss forum par dusri kahani hogi. Pehli kahaani [Akhir kyu?From hatred to love] ko aap sabhi ne itna saraaha aur pyaar diya ki mujhe dusri kahaani likhne par majboor kar diya.
By the way meri pehli kahani padhi ya nahi? Nahi padhi toh jao yaar pehle usko padho. Fir ye nayi kahani me dubki lagaana.
Toh finally, aapke saamne prastut hu apni ek aur nayi kahani lekar,
"Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery"
Ye kahani ekdum hi hatt ke hone waali hai. Aisi kahani aapne nahi padhi hogi. Kahani sub genre - 'System' par adhaarit hai. Jinhone chinese aur japanese novels padhi hai iss sub genre ki unhe pata hoga. Par jinhone nahi padhi hai unke liye ye ekdum new hone waali hai. Isliye, mene socha kyu na iss sub genre ko yaha forum par introduce kiya jae.
Ab kuch key points dhyaan me zaroor rakhiyega kahani ko padhne se pehle kyuki baad me comment section me apun ko koi bakchodi nahi chahiye.
1. Story ka prefix wese toh mein fantasy rakhne wala tha par kyuki isme incest bhi hai kaafi maatra me toh mene incest rakh diya.
2. Story harem par based hai.
3. Story based toh real world me hi hai par kuch logics apply nahi honge.
4. Ye kahani kaalpanik hai. Isme charchit sabhi paatr keval meri kalpanao ka hissa hai. Yadi koi naam, vyavsaay, ya kuch aur asal zindagi me kisi se mel khaata hai toh ye keval ek sanyog hoga. Isse kisi galat nazariye sa na liye jae.
Bas ye 4 points ko dhyaan me rakhiyega.
Intro chota sa hi dunga, mein chaahta hu readers khud hi kahani padh ke characters ke baare me jaane taaki aap paatro se aur acche se familiar ho sake. Isliye, zyada bada intro nahi dunga.
Dhanyavaad!