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[Werewolf]

So.. pichhle dono updates Veer ki Egypt journey aur kuchh hadh tak Pranjal ke oopar focused the... Veer finally, Bhavana aur apni behen arthat Tejal tak pahunch gaya hai... Thanks to Suhana, shayad uski help ke bina Veer ke liye itni jaldi un tak pahunchna sambhav naa ho paata... But Suhana ne fake archaeologist ki Id ke regarding uski help karne se mana kar diya tha & I think Gaurav was a reason too... Suhana ka is matter mein fansna shayad Gaurav ko bhi include kar leta aur tab Suhana ke liye uske sawaalon ka jawaab dena kathin ho jaata... Khair, Veer ne Kaera ki madad li Visa ke liye & finally wo Egypt ki us excavation site tak pahunch gaya...

Yes! Suhana ne Gaurav aur family ke chalte madad nahi kii. It was too risky for her.

Bill ko jis prakaar bewakoof banaya Veer ne wo scene kaafi badhiya tha... “Check”, sach much mein kaafi helpful saabit hua hai ab tak Veer ke liye... Bhale hi wo is Egypt waale sequence mein ho ya fir Jalsa mein Aatish se bachne ke waqt... Bhavana ka reaction Veer ko dekhkar aisa hi hona tha, afterall bina permission uske tent mein chala gaya tha wo... But again, thanks to this Check feature, naa kewal Bhavana balki, Sir George par bhi ek bahut badhiya impression ban chuka hai Veer ka...

Ab aise hi, maje maje mein, itne purane artifact ki poori history - geography agar bata dega koyi to obviously saamne waala hairaan ho hi jaayega... Oopar se Hieroglyphs ko read karna, ye to bilkul expect nahi kiya hoga Bhavna ya George ne... Khair, is event se Bhavna par ek achha impression pad chuka hai Veer ka joki abhi aur zyada solidify hone ke chances hai, because is Check feature ka upyog excavation site par bhi bahut faayeda dene waala hai Veer ko...

Check is one hell of a feature.

Saath hi Veer ke behen yaani Tejal urf Tej ka intro hua is update mein... Tej is a unique name for sure... Par surprising tha uski Veer ke prati favourability joki 88 ki thi... Halanki, ye to pehle se hi story mein dikhaya gaya tha ke Tejal ko is baat ki jaankari hai ke uska ek bhai bhi hai, but uski itni favourability bilkul bhi expected nahi thi... Well, I think usmein giravat aane ke bhi poore aasar hain ... Uske info mein, do major points the, first is to find her long lost brother and then to become a successful archaeologist like her mother... I think Tejal ko bhi zyada jaankari hogi nahi Bhavana ke past ki... She knows about the existence of Veer,aur ye bhi ek sawaal hai ke use kaise pata hai is baare mein because Bhavana ne to use bataya hai nahi..

Tej knows that her brother exists. Apart from that, she know nothing about Veer.

I think, Bhavana ka past kewal Brijesh tak hi seemit nahi hai... Veer ke gale mein maujood wo locket, Bhavana ka maayeka, Suman... In sab cheezon ka aapas mein gehra connection hai jiske baare mein kewal Bhavana hi bata sakti hai... Kyonki Suman to saaf mana kar hi chuki hai, let's see ke kya kuchh raaz hai is poore prakran ke pichhe..

Ye toh Bhavna hi bata sakti hai.

Btw. Tejal, Veer se badi hai, but Veer ko ya I think Aarohi, joki Veer se badi hai use bhi Tejal ke baare mein koyi jaankari nahi hai... Shayad Vivek ko pata ho, but wo Veer ko kaahe hi batayega... Manorath ne bhi is baare mein Veer se kabhi koyi baat nahi ki... I mean ho sakta hai ke Bhavana ke saath Brijesh ki kuchh problem huyi ho, aur fir wo apni Beti ke saath ghar chhod gayi ho... Shayad Veer ko uske saath jaane nahi diya hoga Brijesh ne... But at least Manorath ko Veer ko uske past ke baare mein sab batana hi chahiye tha... Brijesh se to kya hi umeed karni but Manorath

Koi baat toh hogi hi...

Khair, Tejal ne kuchh khaas reaction nahi diya Veer ko lekar... Of course, the effect of Appearance of 100 was visible but after all Veer was a total stranger for her... Secondly, Bhavana ne ab Tejal ko Veer ke Check dwara kiye gaye kaarnamon ke baare mein bata diya hai to ho sakta hai ke ab wo usmein thoda interest dikhaye, not to forget ke excavation site par Veer kuchh aur interesting cheezein bhi kar sakta hai...

Sadly, Bhavna didn't let out any details.

Idhar, Pranjal apni planning shayad poori karke baitha hai... Pehle Shweta aur ab Aarohi... Aarohi Veer ko usi baare mein bata rahi thi jab Pranjal ne uske haath se mobile chheen liya... Ab wo bechaari apne ghar mein bhi surakshit nahi hai ... Par is maamle mein filhaal ke liye Veer kuchh nahi kar sakta hai, let's see aage kya hota hai...

So, ab dekhna ye hai ke Pranjal ki sachayi kab aur kaise sabke saamne aayegi aur uska hashra kya hoga... I think, Veer jab Egypt se lautega to Pranjal aur Nidhi ke matter, inhi dono par sabse pehle focus karega... Ab lagta nahi zyada din bachen hain iske paas... Baaki dekhte hain ke aage Egypt mein kya - kya hota hai..

Yes! After Egypt tour now, plot will be focused on Shweta, Ragini, Pranjal, Nidhi, Arohi, Kavya and all. Veer's business too will take a new hike. And then, the house of killers arc. (incest ka tadka boht zorr se lagne waala hai. )

Bahut hi behatreen update tha bhai... Update 80 ke starting mein jo prastavana di aapne Egypt aur uske itihaas ko lekar, Update 81 mein us sword ke pomel ya fir us artifact ke baare mein wahi darshata hai ke ek aam aur ek khaas lekhak ke beech kya antar hota hai... Emotional scenes were balanced too... Veer ka khud par kaaboo karna Bhavna ko dekhne ke baad, ya Tejal ke milne ke baad, sab kuchh perfection ke saath likha aapne, and cheers for that...

Outstanding Update Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Thanks a lot bhai.
Mein kya hi likhu ab. Ju itna bada bada revo dete ho ki mein kuch kehne layak hi nahi bachta.
Revo dena apne aap me bhaari kaam hota hai. Khaaskar jab aisa revo dena ho. Ju amazing ho.
Thanks for supporting!!!
Aise hi bane rehna. Aur likhta mein par abhi left hand ko Mobile se dur rakha hu. Thoda aur movement hone lage fir sahi se saare replies de paunga.

Btw. Ek sawaal tha, Tejal aur Bhavana ki favourability Veer yaani apne Bhai/Bete ke liye hai... But abhi wo Veer ko Vikram ke roop mein jaanti hain, to kya Vikram ke prati unki favourability drop ya rise hone ka asar Veer ke prati unki original favourability par bhi padega?]

Hmm~ Bhavna Veer ko Vikram ke roop me mil rahi hai. She doesn't know that it's him. So, uske mann me apne bacche ke prati vichaar wahi hai. In other words, favourability won't get affected as long as she sees Veer as Vikram. But the moment she realizes it was her son. Things will change.

 

[Werewolf]

लगता है वीर की प्राथमिकता अपनी मां के बारे में ज्यादा से ज्यादा और जल्दी से जल्दी जानने की है.

लेकिन मेरी राय में उसे प्रांजल को पहले काबू में करना चाहिए, मां की जानकारी तो बदलने वाली नहीं है, चाहे आज मिले या 4 दिन बाद. लेकिन देरी करने पर प्रांजल नुकसान पहुंचा सकता है परिवार के किसी सदस्य को.

फैसला वीर को करना है.

Veer already laut aaya hai. Pranjal ko sabak sikhaane.

Werewolf bhai bhut hi bhadiya update...emotions aur suspense se bhara hua...werewolf bhai anime aur manga se kafi prbhavit hai lgta hai....werewolf bhai ek sawal hai veer ke pas mai jo uski maa ka diya unki akhri nishani hai jisse suman ne usse apna malik mana tha to yaha bhi kya bhavna ko wo dekh kr pehchan legi??

Thanks man! Bhavna ne pendant toh Pehchan liya hai.

Wolf shaandar reasearch kahani ke prati

Badhiya laga padhkar
Maa bahan se mil liye aur baat v hui lekin like a stranger

Wolf bhai 1 question
Kyaa bhavna pahchaan payegi locket se jo veer ke gale mai hai
Kuch aisa jisse bhavna pahle react kare to badhiya
Rahega wolf bhai baaki aapki marji
Aaaraam se aap kahani likhe bahut a66a likh rahe abhi sex ki koi jaldi nhi hai
Aur tejal name hi rakhdiye hi tej
Dekhte hain aage aage kyaa karti hai
Elder sister janne ke baad q ki bina jaane favour 88 hai jaan ne ke baad se jyada hogaa
Idhar pranjal and arohi
Waiting for next update bhai

Wo sab toh theek hai but ye kis bechaare ko tag kar diya bhai.
Hmm~ Rahi baat tej ki favourability ki toh wo situations pe depend karega. Thanks btw!

Friends.... Writer has his own job... We are supporting him so why not to give him time? Maximum here are doing job so did you all talk to relatives in between job? Every nice story... There has to wait...

Thanks bhai. Ye log samajhte hi nahi hai. Samjhao inko.

nice update..!!
veer ne bahot achhese apne plan me karan aur baki team ko shamil karke steve ko toh khatam kar diya hai..aur ab slogan ki bari hai..ab toh veer ko mission bhi mila hai slogan ko marne ka..slogan toh ab fas chuka hai..!! veer ki maa aur behen lagta hai firse delhi wapas aagaye hai Egypt se..!! lekin slogan ne aisa kyun kaha ki 'Kahi wo toh nahi? N-Nahi... Wo nahi ho sakta.' aur koun ho sakta hai jo slogan ko marna chahta ho aur jis se slogan dar raha hai..interesting..!!

Aap kaafi peeche ho yaara. Aage aaiye! Current update tak.

Nice update,Ragini ki selfless pyar ko Veer ne accept kar lena chahiye.waiting eagerly.....

Pyaar karne waali bhi toh boht hai.

awesome update hai Werewolf bhai,
Behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur amazing update hai bhai,
Iss pranjal ne to Sweta ka hotel hi hadap liya hai,
Ab dekhte hain ki aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next

Thanks man!

Bohot शानदार जबरदस्त लाजवाब update bhai jann
Aur ये veer ding karke puri details Bata raha hey apna image bananemey
Aur udher ohh chu..... Pranjal ne itna bada kand kar diya ki puri property hi apne nam kr liyi hey
Aur ohh aurat apne ko bohot shatir samjti thi...
Veer ko bhi thoda idher bhi dhyan dena hoga nhi to ohh chu.... Kuch na khuch katha rahey ga.....

Pranjal shaatir hai bhai. Thanks a lot btw. Keep supporting!

Sweta lalach me andhi ho gyi or luta baithi apna or apni beti ke future ka sab kuchh Lagta hai ab sweta ka ghar me rahna bhi mushkil kr dega pranjal, yha hotel me Pahle se hi pranjal ne apni spy Cam lgva rkhe honge jinki madad se vo sweta ko jhutha sabit kr sake or hotel pr apna malikana hak sabit kr sake... Dekhte hai subah sweta ka kya reaction hota hai jb use pta chalega ki Jise usne apna hitaisi samjha vo hi uska sabse bda dushman hai or Jise hmesha dushman mana vo hi unka dost hai... Arohi Di ko dhamki di hai ab dekhna ye hai jb arohi veer ko yah sab btayegi to veer kya karega...
Teju Wah! Veer ne apne Man me hi bola hai galti se bhi uske samne muh se nikal gya na abhi to samjho veer babu ko pari bhi nhi bcha sakti tej mauka dekh tufan ki tarah aai or veer ko chetavni dekr Bijli ki tarah vha se nikal gyi or apna veer bechara sirf OK hi bol saka, kya halat ho gyi thi uski : fufu veer ne use apne visvash me lene ke liye apni Hawkeye skill ka prayog karna pda... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab update next bval dekhne me maza aayega...

Veer excited tha. Tej ko teju bulaane ke liye. Filhaal usne mann me hi bulaaya.
Of course, nahi toh Tej uski khatiya khadi kar deti.
Next 2 updates boht hi interesting rahenge. Aur kaafi satisfying bhi. , Thanks bhai!!! Keep supporting!!!

Are ha Mai Geeta ji ka veer ka test lena to bhul hi gya tha pranjal ke kand ki khushi me... sweta madam aap to lut gyi barbad ho gyi is pranjal ne to Aapko kahi ka na chhoda, ab kya karogi madam dada ji ke pair pakadogi ya veer ke baap ke ya fir veer ka hath pakadogi kyoki veer apne pair nhi chhune dega ha Geeta ji ke chhulva sakta hai ...

 

[Vk248517]

Update - 83 ~ Homecoming!
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Ab tak...

Sir George : You....!!!

Veer : Huh???

Sir George : Tell me! What do you think about this?

Veer : Well...

[Do it master~]

Aur...

*Ding*

Veer ke saamne uss mummy ki saari details aa gayi.

Ab aage...

2 din guzar chuke the.

Aur inn beete 2 dino me, Veer ne koi kasar nahi chorri thi apni Maa se ek gehra rishta jodne me.

Par sadly, usse kuch zyaada safalta nahi mili.

Bhavna, baat toh khul ke karti thi. Par jab bhi sawaal uske ateet se juda hua aata tha toh wo unn sawaalo se khud ko bacha leti thi. Aur conversation ko kahi aur shift kar deti thi.

Inn beete dino Arohi se Veer ki firse baat hui. Aur jo khabar Arohi ne usse waha Mumbai ki sunaayi, usse sunn Veer ke hosh hi udd chuke the.

Veer ko yakeen hi nahi ho raha tha ki wo haraami Pranjal itni jaldi sab kuch kar dega.

Veer, chaahta toh tha ki ussi waqt wo Mumbai laut jaaye. Par usne aisa keval ek hi kaaran se nahi kiya.

Sabse bada kaaran ye tha ki, Pranjal jo bhi kar raha tha, wo Shweta ke saath kar raha tha. Shweta! Yaani ki uski stepmom. Wo stepmom jisne Veer ko kabhi ek bete ke roop me accept kiya hi nahi tha.

Wahi stepmom jo Pranjal, Vivek ke shadiyantro me shaamil rehti thi. Toh bhala Veer waapas laut ke kyu jaaye?

As long as, Kavya, Arohi aur uske Dada jii kisi potential danger me nahi the, Veer ka lautne ka sawaal hi nahi banta tha.

So, he decided to stay for 2-3 days more.

Pranjal ka patta toh wo laut ke saaf karne hi waala tha. Bas yaha se ghar pohuchte hi.

Aur aaj hi uska yaha akhiri din tha. Usne mummy ki zyaada kuch details nahi dii thi Sir George ko. Zaroorat se zyaada yadi Veer bataane lagta toh logo ko shaq ho sakta tha. Ki ek bande ko itna sab kuch kese pata hai? Aur wo bhi itni jaldi uttar kese de paa raha hai?

Isliye Veer ne vague answers diye. Jis kaaran se unhe bhi yakeen ho gaya ki Veer bhi ek insaan hi hai aur aisi bhi cheezein hai jinke baare me usse kuch nahi pata.

Veer ne yaha kuch boht hi acche pal guzaare apni Maa aur behan ke sang.

But unfortunately, ab samay aa gaya tha ki yaha se waapas jaaya jaaye.

Par...

Uske pehle...

Veer ko ek kaam karna tha. Wo Bhavna ke muh se kuch baatein toh nahi nikalwa paaya. Isliye, ab uske paas akhiri upaay yahi bacha hua tha.

Cairo ke airport me jab Veer apne desh ke liye rawaana hone waala tha.

Toh usse chorrne keval Bhavna hi aayi hui thi. Baaki sabhi abhi bhi site par the.

Bhavna~


Bhavna : Thode din aur rukk jaate Vikram!?

Veer : Jii nahi! Ab lautna hoga mujhe.

Bhavna : Wo... Toh waha M-Mumbai me kaun kaun rehta hai tumhaare saath!?

Bhavna ne pucha. Kyuki, Veer ne apne ghar se related koi bhi info Bhavna ko nahi bataayi thi siwae ye ki wo Mumbai me rehta tha.

Mumbai shabd sunn ke hi tab Bhavna ka reaction dekhne laayak tha. Lekin, Yaha Jab uski Maa uss se apne ateet ko chhipa ke mystery rakhna chaahti thi toh Veer ne bhi wahi kiya fir. Mystery hi sahi. Usne aage kuch nahi bataaya.

Par ab sahi mauka tha. Kuch aisi details chorrne ka jis se Bhavna hil ke reh jaaye.

Veer (smiles) : Ghar!? Haha~ Mujhe toh ghar se hi nikaal diya gaya tha.

Bhavna : !!!???

Aur Bhavna ko ye sunn thoda jhatka sa laga.
Vikram ki baat ka matlab kya tha?

Bhavna : K-Kya matlab?

Veer : Matlab ki ye Miss Geeta... I... Mujhe mere Ghar walo ne apne ghar se nikaal diya hai.

Bhavna : K-Kyaaaaa!!???

Wo aankhein phaade Veer ko dekhti rahi.

Veer : Jii haan!

Bhavna : P-Par kyuuuu??

Veer : Hahaha~ Well! Inn baato ka rehesya tab hi pata lagega jab aap apni kuch baatein bataogi. Dost hone ke bawajood aapne mujhse ab tak kuch bhi share na kiya. Toh badle me aap mujhse kese expect kar sakti ho ki mein apne baare me sab kuch aapko yu hi bata dunga? Hmm?

Bhavna : I... I...

Aur Bhavna ki nazre guilt ke maare neeche jhuk gayi.

Bhavna (looks away) : M-Mein majboor hu.

Veer (smiles) : And So am I... Anyways! Chalta hu... Fir milenge...

Bhavna : Ahh! Wo...

Veer : Hmm?

Bhavna : M-Mein... I mean... How can we come into contact again?

Veer apni Maa ko dekh muskuraaya aur usne apne jeb se koi puraani receipt nikali aur usme apna number likh ke de diya.

Veer : That's my number!!!

Bhavna : Thank you~ I hope hum firse kahi mil payenge. You have a very keen eye. Kabhi India me jab exploration pe mein jaungi then we can go there. How about it?

Veer (smiles) : Sure! Alright! I should leave now!

Bhavna (nods) : Y-Yes!!!

[Time for the last move Master~]

'Yup!!! Here wo go now...!'

Veer fir apna samaan uthaane ke liye neevhe jhuka. Wo jese hi neeche ko hua...

'Ohhh Fuccckkkk!!! Atak gaya kya?'

[Arre jhuko na master!!! Acche se. Baahar aaega. Aur jhuko, thoda hilao dilao. It will come out!!!]

'Wh-What??? Pari!!? Wordings sahi rakho apni.'

[Ahhh!!! Y-You... You are so mean master! What were you even thinking...!? ]

Aur agle hi pal...

Veer ki shirt se andar se uska pendant...

Jhukne ke kaaran baahar aa nikla.

Bhavna jo ab tak usse hi dekh rahi thi. Uski nazre achanak se hi uss pendant par padi. Pehle toh usse kuch bhi alag nahi laga. Wo kuch derr aur dekhi...

Aur shan bhar baad hi, uska jese dimaag hi ghoom gaya.

Andar mann me hi jese ek visfot hua. Sochne samajhne ki shakti wo kuch derr ke liye kho chuki thi. Uski aankhein phati ki phati uss pendant par tiki hui thi.

Veer samaan leke utha aur usne apni Maa ko dekha. Dekha ki pal bhar me uski Maa ka chehra kese hairaani ke maare badal gaya.

Par ab yaha rukne ka samay nahi tha. Jald se jald yaha se nikalna tha. Bhavna ki koi bhi baat sune bina hi.

Wo muda aur jaane laga. Bhavna abhi bhi stabdh wahi khadi hoke Veer ki peeth ko dekh rahi thi. Jese jese wo dur jaata jaa raha tha Bhavna ki dhadkane tezz hoti jaa rahi thi.

Wo itna shocked thi ki uske muh se ek shabd na nikla aur na hi wo koi harqat kar paayi.

Bas... Veer ko jaata hua dekhti rahi. Jab tak ki wo uski nazro se ojhal nahi ho gaya.

Aur fir usse hosh aaya. Saasein tezz liye wo haaf kar aage badhi par ek kadam aage rakhte hi uske perr wahi kamzor pad gaye aur jawaab de gaye.

"Haaahhhh!!!"

Perro me kampan hua aur haafte hue wo wahi gir padi.

'N-Nahiiiii!!!!!! Y-Ye kese...!?????'

Usse girta hua dekhte hi, waha maujood security uske paas aayi.

"Security!!!! Yes!!! Ma'am are you okay??"

Ek naujavaan uske qareeb aaya aur usse uthwa ke security ke paas le gaya.

Bhavna wahi kuch derr baithi rahi. Wo kisi bhi baat ka koi response hi nahi de rahi thi. Jis kaaran se security ne usse apne paas hi baitha liya.

Wo toh jese alag hi duniya me jaa chuki thi.

'N-Nahiiiii!!! Wo... Wo locket...!!!! W-Wo toh wahi locket hai... H-Haan!!! Mein galat nahi ho sakti. W-Wo toh wahi tha. P-Par... Uss Vikram ke paas wo locket kese aaya!?? Huh?'

Locket toh wahi tha jo Bhavna ne apne bete ko pehnaaya tha. 20 saal pehle. Aur iss waqt wo apne aap me joojh rahi thi ki wo locket iss Vikram ke paas kese aaya. Aur agle hi pal...

Ek boht hi hairat-angez possibility uske dimaag se hoke guzri. Jis kaaran wo wahi jamm ke reh gayi.

'N-Nahi!!! T-Toh jo... Vikram mere saath itne din raha, mujhse baatein kiya... W-Wo... Kahi wo... Wo mera apna... N-Nahiiiii!!!!'

Sochte hi uske raungte khade ho gaye.

Aur uski aankho se aasu jhar jhar kar ke behne lage. Wo apne dono haatho se apne khule muh ko dhakk sisakte hue rone lagi.

Jis bete se wo itne saalo se dur thi. Wo yaha itno dino tak uske paas tha??? Uske itne qareeb?? Aur usse pata tak nahi chala????

Glaani, dukh, dard, peeda, maayusi, bechaini, sab kuch Bhavna iss waqt ek hi saath mehsoos kar rahi thi.

Ek baar wo apne gale tak se nahi laga paayi usse. Apne kaleje ko. Kesa mehsoos hota hai ek Maa ko jab uska apna laal saalo se bichadne ke baad uske itne paas ho aur woh ek baar bhi usse apne seene se na laga paaye!?

Bhavna abhi ussi peeda se guzar rahi thi.

Still, ye ek possibility hi thi. Iska matlab abhi 100% ye nahi tha ki Vikram hi uska beta tha. Chances 50-50% the.

Aisa bhi ho sakta tha ki Vikram ko woh locket kahi se mila ho? Ho sakta hai uske bete ke gale se wo Locket ghum gaya ho aur Vikram ko mila ho!? Ye bhi ek possibility thi.

Ho na ho, par Bhavna ke mann me jese ek nayi umang jaag chuki thi. Pata lagaane ki...

Ki woh locket pehna vyakti... Kya!??

Kya uska apna... Wahi khoon tha? Uska apna baccha? Uska apna laal?

Aur ek khayaal aur aaya uske mann me,

"Matlab ki ye Miss Geeta... I... Mujhe mere Ghar walo ne apne ghar se nikaal diya hai."

Uske mann me Veer ki awaaz gunji.

'M-Mera baccha!??? U-Usse ghar se baahar nikaal diya hai?? N-Nahiii! Pehle mujhe... Pehle mujhe ye pata karna hoga ki wo mera hi beta hai ya nahi!? P-Par yadi wo mera hi beta nikla... T-Toh...!!!!'

Aur ek baar fir, Veer ke saath itne beete hue din, guzaare gaye pal, wo saare lamhe uske dimaag me mandraane lage. Unki pehli mulaqaat.

Aur uske dil par punaah ek pahaad sa toot pada.

Aankhein fir bheeg chali. Andar hi andar glaani usse kachotne lagi.

Itna paas reh ke bhi... Wo ek baar bhi...

Ek baar bhi apne kaleje ko pehchaan na paayi. Kaash usse pehle hi wo pendant dikh jaata. Bahaane se hi sahi...

Par Kam se kam... Kam se kam apne bacche ko bas ek baar seene se laga ke usse acche se mehsoos toh kar sakti thi. Lekin ab toh Veer jaa chuka tha.

'Nooooo~ Haan!!! I'll... I'll find out!!! Mere paas ye hai abhi!!! I'll find out!!!!'

Usne apne haatho me uss sikudi hui reciept ko dekha jisme Veer ka number tha. Aur forun hi usne wo number save kar liya.

Aur save me naam rakh diya ~ Vikram!!!!

***

Mumbai...

Veer waapas se apne sheher me aa chuka tha.

Aur darwaaze par aate hi...

"Veeeeeeeerrrrrr!!!!!"

Ragini bhaagte hue aayi aur uski baaho me sama gayi. Uske ubhre hue stan uski chhathi me samaane ki poori koshish kar rahe the. Veer ko wo nipples saaf saaf mehsoos hue.

'What the...!?'

[Looks like she missed you. Haha~]

Pari ki baat sach thi. Aisa ek din bhi nahi gaya tha jis din Ragini ne usse call na kiya ho. Harr ek din wo usse phone laga ke kaafi derr tak baat karti thi.

Peeche khadi Suman aur baaki sabhi iss drishya ko hairaani se dekh rahi thi.

Veer : Umm... Ahem... Bh-Bhabhi?

Ragini : I missed you a lot~ ♡

Veer : M-Mein bas kuch hi dino ke liye toh gaya tha. Bh-Bhabhi!!! Sab dekh rahe hai!!!

Ragini : Toh kya? Kya tumhe pasand nahi Veer? Kya tumhe accha nahi laga mera yu tumhe hug karna?

Veer : Ah! Nahi! Baat woh nahi hai... Lijiye!!!

Kehte hue Veer ne apne haath aage badhaaye aur Ragini ko firse apne seene se chipka liya. Iss baar Veer uski nangi kamar par haath rakh dabaav banaane me peeche nahi hata.

Aur uske iss action se Ragini ke hontho par forun hi muskaan fel gayi. Jaise maano wo jis kaam ke liye aayi thi, usme wo jeet gayi ho.

Ragini : Chalo andar~ ♡

Andar aate hi usse accha accha khaana parosa gaya, jisse wo waqai boht miss kar raha tha. Aur uske baad Veer ne apni Maa se milne ki kaafi kuch details Ragini se share kii, jinhe sunn wo behad khushi me ek baar fir issi bahaane Veer se chipak gayi.

Par Veer ki sabse badi samasya thi abhi...

Pranjal!!!!

'That bitch is getting out of hands huh!?'

[Well! Aapko hi ab interfere karna hoga Master.]

'I thought System mujhe iske liye koi mission dega. Isliye bhi mein ruka hua tha ab tak. What do you think Pari? Kya mein uss harami Pranjal pe apne haath saaf karu? Ya fir system ke mission ke liye ruka rahu?'

[I don't think aapko ab aur wait karna chahiye Master. Khaaskar ki jab itna kuch usne kar diya ho. Aapke puraane ghar me abhi kya haalat hogi waha logo ki ye mein bata bhi nahi sakti.]

'Yeah!!!! Then, fine!!! Pari!!! Limit break karo.'

[Kis stat ki Master?]

'Intelligence!!!'

[Alright Master!]

*Ding*

[2000 Points have been used to break the limit of Intelligence.]

*Ding*

[Intelligence limit has now reached 200.]

*Ding*

[Intelligence : 100/200]

'Good!!! Kitne points bache hai ab Pari?'

[You are now left with 1092 Points Master!]

'Hmm~ aur tumne kaha tha ki...'

[10 points 1 point ke baraabar hoga Master. (・_・]

'Fuckkk! It hurts!!! Sunte hue hi... Dil me dard ho raha hai Pari! 10 points 1 ke barabar!? Aise toh mein lutt jaunga Pari. Mere dil ka kuch toh khayaal rakho.'

[I know Master. (｡•́︿•̀｡) But I cannot help it. Do you want to...!?]

'Ahh! Yes! Intelligence ko 120 par le aao.'

[As you wish Master~ ]

*Ding*

[200 Points have been invested into Intelligence.]

*Ding*

[Intelligence : 120/200]

[Points Remaining : 892]

'It fucking hurts. But koi nahi! I'll earn more points soon. Alright then!!!!'

***

Day before yesterday...

Beete dino kuch gadbad hui thi. Yaha Veer ke puraane ghar me. Ye kehna galat nahi tha ki poore ghar me uthal puthal machi hui thi.

Jis raat Shweta nashe me waapas ghar aayi thi. Agli subah uthne ke baad, usse filhaal toh kuch bhi gadbad mehsoos nahi hui thi.

Usse yaad hi nahi tha ki kal raat usne kinn papers par sign kiye the. Wo toh yahi soch rahi thi ki Pranjal ke saath usne acche se dinner kiya aur fir wo ghar aa gayi.

Acche mann ke saath wo subah apni hotel gayi.

Sab kuch normal hi tha. Par kuch samay baad hi...

Pranjal uski hotel me enter hua...

Aur jaake seedha owner ki seat par baith gaya.

Shweta ne mazaak samajh uss se jab baat kii toh usse apni zindagi ka sabse bada jhatka praapt hua.

Shweta : Tum yaha firse?

Pranjal : Hmm? Kyu nahi? Ye meri hi toh hotel hai na?

Shweta : Haha~ Of course! Ye tumhari bhi hotel hai.

Pranjal (smiles) : Na na na na~ Correction! Tai jii, Correction! Meri BHI hotel nahi... Sirf meri hotel hai.

Shweta (bauhe sikodte hue) : Mein... Kuch samjhi nahi!?

Pranjal ne apne bag se fir kuch nikaala. Ye wahi kaagzaat the. Aur unhe table par Shweta ke saamne patak diya.

Jese hi Shweta ne unn papers ko padha. Uske perro tale zameen khisak chuki thi.

Shweta : Y-Ye.... Ye... Ye sab kya hai!??? Ye kesa mazaak hai? Haan? Wh-What is this?

Pranjal : Ohh~ Nothing! Bas... Starting from today... I'll be the owner of this hotel. Haha~ Jaiye ghar jaiye Tai jii! Araam kijiye!!!

Shweta (cheekhte hue) : What do you mean by thissss??? Haaaaannn??? Mein kuch tumse puch rahi hu. Y-Ye papers!!! Ye kaha se aaye tumhaare paas??

Usse boht bada jhatka laga tha. Ye papers toh uski hotel ki ownership ke hi the. Real ekdum. Ye Pranjal ke haath kese lage bhala? Aur sign? Sign bhi ussi ke the. Uska sarr chakra gaya tha.

Ye sab kya ho raha tha!?

Papers me saaf saaf ye baat likhi thi. Ki Shweta ye hotel kaafi samay se ghar ke kisi candidate ko saupna chaahti thi. Aur Pranjal se behtar uske liye koi nahi tha. Usme likha tha ki Wo apni poori iccha se ye hotel Pranjal ke naam kar rahi hai.

She was baffled to the core.

Aur fir shuru hua behas ka silsila.

Baat itni badh gayi thi ki Shweta haathapaayi par utar aayi thi.

Aur Pranjal bhi aggressive ho chuka tha.

Pranjal ne ye dhamki de dii ki yadi Shweta shaant nahi hui toh wo Police ko bulaega seedha.

Akhir himmat kese hui iss Pranjal ki uske saath aisa karne ki? Wo sochi.

Aur fir jese kal ki dhundhli baatein uske dimaag me saaf hone lagi. Jese hi usse maajra samajh aaya. Wo thithur kar zameen par gir padi.

Aur Pranjal uski iss dasha par bas hassta raha.

"Hahahaha~ Jaiye ab!!! There's nothing you can do."

Lekin Shweta fir bhadki...

Uthate hue wo cheekh kar apni baatein zorr se kehne lagi,

"Haraam khor!!!! Nirlaj!!! Tu itna kapti insaan niklega, mene kabhi socha tak nahi tha!!!! Kyu kiya tumne mere saath aisa??? Nahi!! Tumhari himmat bhi kese hui mere saath aisa karne kii? Haan!!! M-Mein... Mein abhi ghar me teri ye ghinoni harqato ke baare me bataati hu. Tu bachega nahi... Tera saara sach mein saamne khol ke rakhungi. Rukk tu bas...!"

Usne dhamkaate hue kaha. Par Pranjal kaun tha? Kya usse inn dhamkiyo se koi farq padne waala tha? Ghanta!!!

Pranjal : Hahahaha~ Ohh Tai jii!!! Toh jaiye! Bataiye!!! Bataiye! Hahahaha~ Kaun vishvaash karega aapka? Haan? Boliye? Kaun karega yakeen? Aur bhuliye mat...

Shweta : !!!???

Pranjal (smiles) : Ki... Veer ko ghar se baahar karwaane me aap Vivek bhaiya ke saath thi.

*Boooooommmm*

Ek aur dhamaka Shweta ke mann me hua.

Pranjal ne apni ek aur ghinauni chaal chal dii.

Shweta sirf yahi jaanti thi ki Veer ko bhagaane ka plan Vivek ne banaaya tha. Usse ye nahi pata tha ki uss plan ke peeche Pranjal ka haath tha. Aur apna naam aate hi, Shweta ke chehre se uska rang udd chuka tha.

Shweta : Y-YOUUU!!!! YOU!!! YOU WILL ROT IN HELL!!!! I'LL SUE YOU!!! HARAAM KHOR KAHI KE....

Aur wo bhaag ke nikal gayi.

Yadi wo Parivaar walo ko convince nahi kar sakti thi toh...

Kuch aur toh kar hi sakti thi na?

Aur Shweta ne wahi kiya. Shweta ne desperation me aa kar. Seedha court case hi thok diya Pranjal par.

Jesa ki expected tha, gharwalo ko ye baat pata lag hi gayi, obviously.

Aur Shweta ki image jo pehle hi batwaare ke samay kharaab ho chuki thi wo aur bhi kharaab ho gayi.

Shweta!? Usne apne hi ghar ke sadasya par case kiya? Aur wo bhi tab jab usne hi hotel Pranjal ke naam kii ho? Kya chal raha tha ye sab?? Saari baat ka pata unhe court me laga acche se.

Shweta ne ek accha sa vakeel hire kiya hua tha. Kuch bhi ho jaaye, ye hotel uske haatho se nahi jaani chahiye thi.

Aur yaha Pranjal ne bhi ek jaane maane vakeel ko hire kiya tha.

And guess who it was??

Kaun ho sakta tha??? Of course... None other than...

RAJAT!!!! Nidhi's Husband!!!!

Wo kehte hai na, birds of the same feather flock together.

Dono hi kapti insaan the. Toh dono ki hi patni thi aapas me. Ittefaaq bhi dekho.

Rajat : Tension not! Mein ye case asaani se tumhe jitwa dunga...

Pranjal (smiles) : Of course~

Aur fir shuru hui, Court me Pranjal ki award winning performance.

Jisne poora paasa hi palat ke rakh diya tha.

Shweta ki haalat itni kharaab thi ki usse dekh ke hi taras aa raha tha.

Shweta (screams) : HE'S A LIAR!!!! YE JHOOTH BOL RAHA HAI!! ISNE CHHAL SE MERI HOTEL APNE NAAM KII. MUJHSE NASHE ME SIGN KARWAAYE HAI!!!!

Rajat : Your honour!!! Mere paas uss hotel ki cctv recording hai. Jisse mein sab ke saamne prastut karna chaahunga.

Judge (nods) : Permission granted.

Aur agle hi pal, ek recording play kii gayi.

Ji haan! Hotel ki wahi recording. Jis waqt, Pranjal aur Shweta bar me baithe hue the.

Rajat : Dekhiye my lord!!! Ye recording uss waqt ki hai jab mere client Miss Shweta ko unke mental state ko thoda relax karwaane unhe dinner karwaane ke liye leke gaye hue the.

Shweta (screams) : That's a fucking lie...!!!!

Judge : Apni bhaasha ka sahi prayog kijiye Miss. Please, resume the recording.

Majbooran, Shweta ko shaant hona hi pada.

Recording fir play hui. Ye CCTV footage thi. Isme audio nahi tha par video quality acchi thi.

Aur agle hi pal ek scene aaya.

Shweta ne apna order diya, a pint of shiraz.

Rajat : Ye dekhiye! My lord! Miss Shweta wine ka order dete hue.

Fir ek scene aaya jaha Shweta ne uske baad apni hi taraf se kayi baar glasses bharwaayi.

Aur ye dekhte hi Shweta ka dimaag kaam karna band ho chuka tha.

'It was himm!!!! This bastard!!! Sab kuch isne karwaya tha mujhse... *Sobs*'

Yahi kaaran tha ki Pranjal ne uss se kaha tha~

"Yahi aapko himmat degi Tai jii! Trust me! Yahi aapko himmat degi. Kyuki, aap aage sunn'ne ke liye ready nahi ho."

Yahi shabd toh kahe the Pranjal ne. Jab wo usse aur wine mangwaane ke liye keh raha tha. Sab kuch pehle se hi calculated tha. Shweta apni hi qabr khod rahi thi uss waqt.

Rajat : Dekha na aapne? Kese Miss Shweta ek ke baad ek wine ke glasses leti jaa rahi hai.

Aur fir ek aur scene aaya, jisme Shweta ne apne purse se wo kaagazaat nikaale.

Rajat : Ye dekhiye my lord!!! Miss Shweta ke paas wo papers pehle se hi maujood the. Yaani ki saaf hai, wo pehle se hi mann bana ke aayi thi mere client ko hotel saupne ka.

Shweta (screams) : WHY WOULD I???? KYU APNI HI HOTEL MEIN KISI AUR KE HAWAALE KARUNGI? HE'S LYING!!? YE PAPERS ISSI NE MUJHE RAKHNE KO DIYE THE!! MERI HI HOTEL ME!!!

Par kaun believe karne waala tha uska? Court keval evidence dekhta tha. Logo ki bhaavnaaye nahi.

Shweta ke paas koi evidence nahi tha ki wo ye baat sach saabit kar sake.

Aur recording me fir wo scene bhi aaya jidhar Shweta ne sign kiye. Aur Pranjal usse mana karne laga.

Rajat : Ye dekhiye!! My lord! Aap dekh rahe hai na?? Ye wahi samay tha jab Miss Shweta ne sign kiye papers par. Apni marzi se. Aur aap dekh hi sakte hai, kese mere client iss baat ka virodh kar rahe hai. Aap ne dekha na? Mere client jaante hai isliye unka virodh kar rahe the. Aur next segment me sab saaf ho gaya hai my lord.

Aur fir aaya recording ka akhiri scene. Jidhar Shweta Pranjal ko zabardasti papers thama rahi thi. Aur ant me usne uska haath pakad apne sarr par rakhwa liya.

Rajat : Mister Pranjal... Please bataiye iss context ke baare me.

Pranal (banaawti aasuo se) : Y-Ye... *sniff* Ye wahi time tha... Jab... *sniff* Jab Tai jii ne mujhe apne sarr par rakh kasam khilwayi ki mein unki hotel apne naam karne ke liye raazi ho jau. *sniff* Badle me wo Dada jii ki... Mujhse kuch property maangne ki maang rakhi thi. Keh rahi thi ki... *sniff* Mein apni saari property unke hawaale kar du. *sniff* Mujhe nahi pata tha ki wo aisa kuch kar dengi...*sniff*

*Boooommmmm*

Ek aur bam phata Shweta ke liye iss statement ke baad.

Sab kuch bikhar raha tha. Uski sthiti iss waqt, aisi thi ki wo jese khaayi me ek rassi se latki hui thi jo harr guzarte pal tootati jaa rahi thi.

Shweta (screams) : YOU FUCKING BASTARD!!!!!!

Judge : SILENCEEE!!!!

Rajat : Kya wo sign aapke hai papers me?

Shweta (gusse me) : THEY... THEY ARE!!!

Rajat : Kya aap pichle kuch samay se mentally exhausted thi!?

Shweta : I... I WAS...

Rajat : Kya aap batwaare me kuch hissa paana chaahti thi?

Shweta : I... Y-YESSS!!!

Rajat : There you have it my lord! Miss Shweta, ek mentally unstable state me thi property ko hathiyaane ke liye. Mere client jinhe inn sab ke baare me kuch nahi pata tha wo ek good intention ke saath Miss, Shweta ko relax karwaane unhe dinner par leke gaye, jiski testimony unki khud ki beti Miss Bhumika ne hume dii kuch derr pehle, saath hi unki hotel ki manager ne bhi dii.

Judge : *nods*

Rajat : Par mere client ko koi bhi idea nahi tha. Miss Shweta came prepared. Unhone apni saari hotel mere client ke naam kari. Aur badle me unka haq unse chhen'na chaah rahi thi. In other words, mere client ki property. Hume ye bhi pata chala ki ghar me property ko lekar pehle bhi vivaad ho chuka hai. So, desperation me aakar Miss Shweta iss hadd par utar aayi.

Judge : *nods*

Rajat : Aur fir unhone apni kasam bhi khilwayi ki mere client wo hotel apne paas hi rakhe. Par badle me saari property unke naam kar de? Ye sarasar ek chaal hai. Na keval unhone mere client ke good will ko nazar andaaz kiya. Balki, unse unka haq chheen'ne ka prayaas bhi kiya. Aur saath hi saath itna bada aarop laga ke, unke apne parivaar aur dosto me unki chhavi par laanchhan lagaaya hai. Please! Meri aap se darkhaast hai ki aap iski jadd tak jaa ke faisla le.

Shweta (screams) : I fucking didn't!!!!

Rajat : See!? She also has some anger issues. I rest my case my lord!

Aur khatam! Sab kuch khatam ho chuka tha.

Boht derr tak... Ye sab chalta raha. Par...
Shweta ke paas koi evidence hi nahi tha siwae kehne ke. Na hi koi witness.

Wahi Pranjal ke liye sabhi ne acchi baatein hi kahi thi.

Thanks to Ragini, jo wo ab iss parivaar ka hissa nahi thi. Warna Pranjal ke khilaaf hi bolti woh. Aur uske liye ek mushqil khadi kar deti.

Vivek inn maamlo se dur rehna chaahta tha toh wo chup raha. Arohi kehne waali thi par Veer ne usse phone par mana kar ke rakha hua tha. So usne kuch na kaha.

Baaki sabhi ne Pranjal ke liye acche shabd kahe the.

Itne dino se wo apni image jo banaane me laga tha. It paid off very well. Sab kuch usne itna precisely calculate kar ke kiya tha.

Ghar pe Manorath apne room me rehte the. Arohi aur Kavya apne kaamo me. Vivek apni company me. Karunesh aur Brijesh apne business me. Bhumika aur Shweta hotel me. Aur uski Maa Sumitra aksar kitchen me.

Shweta ke room me ghuskar almaari se unn papers ko dhundna uske liye koi boht badi baat nahi thi.

Shweta ke liye sab kuch ujad chuka tha.

Kyuki, jab faisla aaya.

Toh uski wo akhiri umeed bhi toot chuki thi.

Hotel...

Pranjal ke naam ho chuki thi.

CASE DISMISSED!!!

Uske andar se jese uski aatma ne dam tod diya tha.

Bhumika bechaari se apni Maa ki ye haalat dekhi hi nahi jaa rahi thi.

Aur ghar aate hi, Shweta forun hi car me baithi, car start kii...

Aur kahi jaane ke liye hui ...

"M-Maaaaaa~"

Par jab tak Bhumika apni maa ko kahi jaane se rok paati, Shweta nikal chuki thi.

***

Idhar Veer jo agli raat Arohi se milke vistaar se baat jaan'ne ke liye uss se jab milne ke liye ready ho raha tha. Tab hi...

*Ding*

[Mission : Rescue Shweta before she dies.
Rewards : ???? Points.
Time Limit : 30 minutes.
Mission Failure Penalty : 20,000 Points Deduction.]

'Ahhh! Shittt!!! Here wo go again~'
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Thanks a lot! Itna sabr rakhne ke liye. I'm doing well. Minor wounds hai. I was lucky haha~ Anyways, Like thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka yaara.
Keep supporting!
Dhanyavaad!

Nice updates

 

[Werewolf]

Awesome update Werewolf bhai.
Sala achha popat bana diya hum sabka. Hum to yahi samjh rahe the ki veer ki choti bahen hogi. Ya fir judwa hogi. Par yaha bada jhatka laga.

Aaya maza!? Iss baar Neha jesi choti behan nahi hai. But Neha se kam bhi nahi rahegi. You'll see more of Tej later anyways.

Tent me ghus bhi gaya veer par ab baat kese shuru kare. To achha rasta nikala pari ki madad se. Bhavna se veer uss topic par baat kar raha he jisme wo khud expert he. Isi wajah se bhavna ko bhi aascharya hua hoga ki veer itna sab kese janta he. Ab ese me dono ke bich me baate to hongi hi. Jisse veer apni achhi chhap chhod sakta he bhavna ke mann me.
Veer ne apna plan shuru kar diya he aur shuruwat achhi rahi he. Bhavna veer ke sath baate kar rahi he aur veer bhi wo pal achhe se enjoy kar raha he. Sath hi ek dard bhi he uske mann me ki apni maa ke itna pass hoke wo gale bhi nahi mil sakta. Maa kehna to dur ki baat he. Bhavna bhi ye jaan ke hairan he ki uske siwa ek aur Indian bhi he yaha jisse archaeology me itna gyaan he. Par unko kya pata pari ke bare me. Ab bill aur George aaye tab pol khulni hi thi. Par bhavna ne veer ke abhi me kiye karname bataye fir George ne bhi ek test liya veer ka.
Ab George ko to ek chalta firta translator mil gaya tha to le gaye tent me aur pakka sab ke bare me info li hogi. Bhavna bhi veer ki halat pe hass rahi he jese usse pata he ki George apne kaam ke bare me kitna gambhir he.

Veer ke harr uttar par George ko orgasm aa jaata tha.

Yahi pe entry hui uski bahen ki. Finally naam bhi pata chal hi gaya.

Tejal bhi apni maa ki tarah hi banna chahti he aur dusra goal he apne bhai ko pana jisse inki family puri ho jaye. Bhavna ne bhi sab bata diya hoga tejal ko aur tejal bhi ab lagta he kadi najar rakhegi veer par. Aur ye important matter konsa he jo maa beti baat kar rahi

Just something about those generators. Nothing else.

Par veer yaha jarur confused he. Dimag chakra gaya he uska ye jaan ke ki tejal uski badi bahen he. To fir uske ghar me tejal ke bare me kyu kuch bhi nahi he. Na photo he na koi baat karta he dono maa beti ke bare me. Veer se 3 saal badi matlab uske bare me sab ko pata to hoga ki. Veer have to find out. Ye bahut badi baat lagti he. Veer ki ek dasi he, uski ek badi bahen he, ek maa jo apni beti ke sath hi rehti he. Even khud ke pariwar se bhi door. Veer ki maa ka pariwar jarur bahut bada hoga, ya koi Raj pariwar bhi ho sakta he. Warna suman sirf ek locket dekh ke khud ko dasi nahi bana leti. Jarur locket bhi khaas he. Ye matter ab veer ko solve Karna hi hoga. Dekhna he ab ki kya Hua hoga ki bhavna ke sath uss samay. Tejal bhi desperate he apne bhai ko leke. Usse ek clue bhi mil jaye to wo shuruwat kare veer ko khojne ki. Par uska bhai to samne hi he. Veer ko alert rehna hoga ki koi esi baat na keh de jisse maa beti ko doubt ho.

Well! Veer ne already khud se hi Bhavna ko apna pendant dikha diya hai. He didn't tell the whole truth. But uske itna karne se, Bhavna is in panic mode now. She's desperate too.

Mumbai me bhi aarohi pranjal pe najar rakh rahi he. Veer ko call pe sab batana chaha par usse pahele hi shayad pranjal ne phone chhin liya usse. Pranjal bhi apni chaal chal raha he. Aarohi ke sath kya Hua veer ko sahi se na pata par kuch theek to nahi he. Pranjal ka roop bhi ab samne Lana hoga. Aarohi ke naam jo property he shayad usse lene ke liye pranjal ye sab kar raha he.
Yaha veer bhi ab excavation site me ja raha he aur mind me aim clear he. Tejal najar rakhegi. Chaap achhi rehni chahiye.
Dono maa beti pe veer ke charm ka asar hua he. Bhavna Tejal dono hi ghur ke dekh rahi thi veer ko. Majha aayega ab.
Excavation site me kuch na kuch hadsa jarur hoga jisme veer bachayega dono ko. Tab lagta he dono ke dil me halchal hogi veer ko leke.

Filhaal site me aisa kuch nahi hua. But who knows if this was their last site exploration? Maybe future holds something more.

Bhavishya ke kuch scene ki raah he ab. Kaera Sonia aur dono maa beti ki meeting, kavya-Aarohi ka apni taai ji se milna, Nidhi-Ragini ka apni sasu maa se milna.
Waiting for next update.

House of killers arc se pehle boht kuch hone wala hai. Especially with, Shweta, Nidhi, Kavya, Arohi, Ragini
Thanks a lot mate!!!!
Aise hi bane rehna. Itne bade revos, khaaskar detailed scenarios rakhte hue likhne ke liye dil se dhanyavaad!! It means a lot!!!
Keep supporting!

 

[Werewolf]

Ye bhavna to chutiya nikli apne kam ke chakkar me usne ye bhi nahi suna ki veer ne use miss geeta kaha.

Hein!??? Kya?? Wo Geeta ke hi naam se toh jee rahi hai. Geeta kehke hi usne Veer ko introduce kiya tha. Tabhi toh Veer sad tha.

Me to chahta tha ki bhavna ko ek sudden jhatka lage and she react like "

Aur baha voh pranjal sala harami badi bahut bada wala madarchod h sala. Duniya gol nahi duniya madarchod h aisi hi loge ke liye ye line kahi gayi hain.

Werewolf mere bhediya mujhe arohi bahut gajab ki lagti hain usse setting kara de.

Arohi se setting toh bas Veer ki ho sakti hai.

nice update ..pranjal ne apni chaal chal di aur dadaji ke naam ka jhootha sahara liya ki wo shweta ko hotel ke badle property dena chahte hai aur nashe me dhutt shweta ne bhi un paper par sign kar diya .ab lagta hai wo hotel pranjal ke naam ho gaya hai .. isse yahi lagta hai ki shweta ek bewkoof aurat hai jo lalach me aakar galat faisla le leti hai .nashe me sign karna aur wo bhi tab jab sharab jyada pee ho .

Wait till you see her past.

veer ka test le rahi hai geeta aur veer usme pass bhi ho raha hai . par tej galat soch rahi hai veer ke baare me ki wo koi chor hai ..
tej apne tevar dikhake gayi aur veer ne apni hawkeye se uska kaam tamam kar diya .

Dhanyavaad bhai! Hmm~ Tej apne naam ki tarah hai.

Atyadhik mazedaar update Werewolf bhai ..
Pranjal toh bahut hi chalaki se sabhi ki property PE haath saaf kar raha hai aur kisi ko samajh mein bhi nahi aa raha hai...

Uski acting top notch hai bhai.
Thanks btw!

Idhar yeh madharchod pranjal ne Is Randi shweta ke sath sahi kiya bhadwi sali jab isko pata tha ki yeh haram ka jana pehle hi iski gaand maar chuka hai fir bhi jakar apne usi yaar ke lode pe baithi hai Randi kahi ki haramzadi ko panch paise ki akal nahi

Aur yeh bhadwa Veer bhavna ke bhosde mein ghusa pada maa maa karta hua bhenchod ko yeh nahi hai ki pranjal ka kissa khatam kare jakar pehle fir is randwi se bakchodi pele aur upar se tej ke sath bakchodi alag se pele ja raha hai

Are haram ke jaane veer pehle jo cheeze short out karni hai woh kar bhosdi wale madarchod sale
Nidhi ka masla paranjal others par nahi isko iss Randi se sawal jawab karne hai

Are bhenchod teri isko parwah hoti to pehle tujhe sath rakhti tujhe chorh ke na ati bhenchod 100 intelligent points ka kya hi fyada jab ese chutiya hi bane rehna hai madarchod bhadwa sala




Sorry Writer bhai update ko padhte padhte frustrate ho gya tha is bhadwe Veer Paranjal aur shweta ki harakte padhkar madarchod hai teeno aur yeh bhawna sab se badi

Ju ko dekh ke lag raha, saari khunnas nikaal rahe. Wait till you see Shweta's Past. Harr action ke peeche ek reason hota hai.

आख़िर प्रंजल अपने षड्यंत्र में सफल रहा
जब प्रंजल का वास्तविक रुप सामने आयेगा तब क्या होगा
तेज़ को वीर पर संदेह है या इनफेरीयर काम्प्लेक्स
यह समझ में नहीं आ रहा है
खैर अपडेट थोड़ा धीमा लगा पर फिर भी अच्छा रहा

Tej ko koi inferiority complex nahi.
Thanks btw!!!

Superb Update bhai or Chodampatti kab dekhne ko milega tharkiyo ke liye

Aane waale updates me. Incest boht zorr se aane wala hai. Chaddi utaar ke padhna ab updates.

Superbbb Updateee

Bhaii ab iss Pranjal ka kuchh karoo. Iss kamine toh ab saari hadee hi paar kardii. Shweta ka hotel bhi isne apne naam karwa liya aur unko raaste pe laa diyaa. Kab milegaa iss harami ko iske gunaaho ki sazaa.

Next 2 updates se aap prasann ho jaoge.
Thanks btw bro! Keep supporting!

Dhyaan nahi raha bro, sayad mere saste nashe ka asar hai.

Sach sach bataana! Kaun kaun nasaa kar ke update padhta hai? Ghabrana mat. Mein kisi ko nahi bataunga.

Bahut badhiya update tha bhai.
First half me thode der ke liye tension hogya tha lag rha tha Veer ka maal bc pranjal thode chakh lega after all Stepcest is bestest haha.
Waise egypt side ka story dekh ke lagta hai 3 4 update abhi aur lagega ya phir ek aat mega update.
Dekhte hai jab Shweta ka nasha utrega toh uska kya halat hoga.

Nahi bhai! Egypt tour already khatam. Harr baar cheezein hamaare according nahi chalti. Yahi hua Veer ke sath. Usse laga tha Bhavna kuch toh share karegi. Par wo bhi ziddi hai. Kese share karti bhala? In the end veer ko lautna pada. Ek puraani macchli jo jab se uudham macha rahi thi pani me, uske liye.
Thanks btw!

Another well researched excellent update. Kafi kuch mummies aur unki chambers ke baare me pata chala. Teja aur veer ki mulakaat majedaar thi.

Thanks!!!

Pranjal ka to pata tha ki wo Shweta se uska hotel hadap kar lega, per itni jaldi, hmmmm... wo expose nahi ho jayega??? dekhte hain

Who will expose him? Arohi won't since Veer has stopped her. His image is too good in the family unlike Shweta. He has all the evidences against Shweta. Ragini is no more a oart of this family now. She's already out of this scene. Pranjal came prepared.

wo kaise Shweta ko murkh banata rehta hai. ho sakta hai ki Shweta ko papers per sign kerne ki yaad hi nahi rahe aur usko pata bhi nahi chale ki uska hotel uske haathon se nikal gaya hai. dekhte hain ki veer kaise is musibat se usko bachata hai.
kya Arushi darr jayegi aur veer ko kuch nahi batayegi. story shuru se hi itni intresting hai, aur kamal to ye hai ki ye interest itne saare updates ke baad bhi jara sa kam nahi ho raha hai, one keeps on sitting on the edge of the chair.

Thanks mate! Story aisi hi chalegi jab tak khatam nahi ho jaati. Interesting and suspenseful till the end. Aur abhi toh house of the killers arc bhi shuru nahi hua. Wo toh alag hi bawaal cheez hai.
Heck abhi toh kitne mind games aur fights dekhni baaki hai. Aage boht hi romaanchak cheezein aame wali hai. Abhi toh famiglia hi continue ho raha hai. Aur ye fir simultaneously House of the killers ke saath chalega.
Keep supporting!

Bich me pranjal gusa ke yaar mood off kar diya...!
I want only veer or Bhavna/Tej update not another.....!
Keep Writing.....!

Wo dono bhi sahi samay par aur limelight me aaengi. Akhir Veer ki sagi maa behan hai woh.

 

[Xabhi]

Hein!??? Kya?? Wo Geeta ke hi naam se toh jee rahi hai. Geeta kehke hi usne Veer ko introduce kiya tha. Tabhi toh Veer sad tha.



Arohi se setting toh bas Veer ki ho sakti hai.

Wait till you see her past.

Dhanyavaad bhai! Hmm~ Tej apne naam ki tarah hai.

Uski acting top notch hai bhai.
Thanks btw!

Ju ko dekh ke lag raha, saari khunnas nikaal rahe. Wait till you see Shweta's Past. Harr action ke peeche ek reason hota hai.

Tej ko koi inferiority complex nahi.
Thanks btw!!!

Aane waale updates me. Incest boht zorr se aane wala hai. Chaddi utaar ke padhna ab updates.

Next 2 updates se aap prasann ho jaoge.
Thanks btw bro! Keep supporting!

Sach sach bataana! Kaun kaun nasaa kar ke update padhta hai? Ghabrana mat. Mein kisi ko nahi bataunga.

Nahi bhai! Egypt tour already khatam. Harr baar cheezein hamaare according nahi chalti. Yahi hua Veer ke sath. Usse laga tha Bhavna kuch toh share karegi. Par wo bhi ziddi hai. Kese share karti bhala? In the end veer ko lautna pada. Ek puraani macchli jo jab se uudham macha rahi thi pani me, uske liye.
Thanks btw!

Thanks!!!

Who will expose him? Arohi won't since Veer has stopped her. His image is too good in the family unlike Shweta. He has all the evidences against Shweta. Ragini is no more a oart of this family now. She's already out of this scene. Pranjal came prepared.

Thanks mate! Story aisi hi chalegi jab tak khatam nahi ho jaati. Interesting and suspenseful till the end. Aur abhi toh house of the killers arc bhi shuru nahi hua. Wo toh alag hi bawaal cheez hai.
Heck abhi toh kitne mind games aur fights dekhni baaki hai. Aage boht hi romaanchak cheezein aame wali hai. Abhi toh famiglia hi continue ho raha hai. Aur ye fir simultaneously House of the killers ke saath chalega.
Keep supporting!

Wo dono bhi sahi samay par aur limelight me aaengi. Akhir Veer ki sagi maa behan hai woh.

Sirf chaddhi utarke hi kyo kuchh log to chhatri khol kr bhi update padenge...

 

[Yuvraj singh]

Waiting

 

[Bhatakta Rahi 1234]

Waiting

 

[Tyszxdrg]

Bhai next part kab de rahe hu waiting

 

[Alok]

Werewolf bhai next update kab tak aayega