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[Werewolf]

Very good update.
1. It is high time Pranjal should be taught a lesson so that he becomes a good son for his father, good grandson for his grandfather and suitable brother for his sisters.

Veer is on his way.

2. Swetha anyway will be getting a lesson once the morning sun rises.Awake arise and shine for a better day ahead. She should make herself worth forVeer, sorry for Veer's father.

Ohh you don't have to be sorry on that part.

3. Tej got a lesson not to play with the great Veer.

4. George will get some lesson about the what lies in the box in next update.

Superb writing. School khulna chahiye. Sabko sabak sikhane wala hey Veer.

Thanks a lot!

Bhai super update
Tez to badi tej hai aur
Idhar paranjal ne v jhande gaad diye
Waah bhai waah next update ka besabri se intajar hai bhai

Thanks man!!!

Bhai that's not fair app 1 din mazid wait krwaty ho agar app ko 1 din pahly update ka kh dain to app after 2 days k khahty ho other khud update after 3 days baad daity ho not fair bhai not fair reader k jazbat k sath khailna

What can I do? I met with an accident.

I always said.
Inform to kar hi do chahe update aaye na aaye.

Would have informed. But I didn't get any time to do so at that moment. But yadi 11 baje ke pehle inform na karu kabhi toh samajh jaana, update won't come.

Jankar dukh hua wolfy vro... Savdhani barta kro thodi... Hamari life sirf hamari hi nhi, balki unse bahut se log connected hote hai. Apne liye nhi but unke liye har kadam funk funk kar rkho....

Bahut se jhantu bolte hai ki kismat ka likha hoke rehega. Par Satya ye hai ki hamari kismat hum khud likhte hai ( simple shabdo me = karma ) .... Exa. Koi insan padadi par kudte vakt ye sochta hai ki agar meri kismat me aaj marna likha hoga to marr jaunga, Varna Mera ghanta kucch nhi hoga ... Exa. Ajeeb hai but agar esko gehraii se socche to baat samajh me aa jayegi ..... Ummid karta hu apko jyada chhot nhi lgi hogi & I don't ki galti apki thi ya samne wali ki but next time be careful... Our ha update 11 bje pehle de Dena

Agreed man!!! Thanks a lot! I'm much better. Movements pehle se kaafi kar raha hu ab. I'm fine now. Hmm~ Thoda samay zaroor lagta hai ek haath se type karne me. Kyuki, yadi mein dono use karu toh gharwaale fir tokne lagte hai.

Tension nhi bandhu tum thik hona fir update dene ka itna to wait kr sakte hey bhaya take care of yourself भाऊ .
Aur thoda tonic lene का
Sab dard vard ghumne ko jata hey

Ghar me tonic nahi le sakta bhai. Laude lag jaenge.

Update bro kab tak doge aap mai Updateke liye kisi bhi writer shahb ko nhi kahta but aap se bol rha hu because you are a best writer shahb ✍ .....

Update bhai... Filhaal keval 600 words ke aas paas hi likha hai abhi. Let's see. Mein baithata hu abhi likhne. Aaj wese bhi gap liya tha job se. Kal se fir wahi routine ho jaega. 11 ke pehle inform kar dunga about update.

Werewolf bhai..yadi left hand mein koi problem hai... Toh update baad me de dena one hand se typing kyon kare rahe ho ? Update se phele apna khayal rakho...

Problem kuch nahi hai yaara. Mein left elbow ke bal gira tha toh jis kaaran dard ki wajah se wo mud nahi raha tha. Chot bhi wahi lagi hai. Toh jese jese mein haath ko straight ya band karta hu, elbow ke area me pain hota hai. Wound ki wajah se. Baaki toh normal scratches hai. Ye waali pattiya kal khul jaengi. Ya aaj shaam me hi shayad. Nothing serious. Thanks for the concern by the way. Keep supporting!

Pranjal sai jeetn bht mushkil hoga veer kai liye kyuki pranjal bht harami hai ..ab shweta ko pata chle ga glt kam ka nteeja kya hota hai…or lgta hai veer ki list mai ek or member add hogea

But Veer ka intelligence ab 120 par hai. We'll see!

Bhai is update ne toh sab uthal puthal krke rakh diya hai.
Shweta ko apne lalach ka fal mila. Lekin syatem shweta ki jaan ki bahut bhari kimat rkha hai. Lagta hai baad me kuch accha role hone wala hai iska. dekhte hai kaise bachata hai Veer shweta ko aur shweta ko apne galti ka ehsaas hoga ya nahi. Waise shweta jaise exp business woman kaam aa sakti hai veer ke.
Agle update me dekhte hai kya hota hai.
Also get well soon.

Ohh thanks a lot bhai! Keep supporting!

Thanks bhai itni zabardast update dainy k liye get well soon and waiting for another amazing and interesting update.

Thanks mate!!!

SHUKRA BHAI JYADA NAHI LAGI .PAR BHAI BIKE PE HAMESHA THODI DHYAN RAKHA KARO AUR ALERT BHI RAHIYE KYUN KI KYA PATA KAB SAAMNE WALA ACHANAK RUK JAYE
JAISA KI AAP KE SATH HUA.
AAP PAHLE APNE SEHAT PAR DHYAAN DIJIYE UPDATE TOH AATE RAHENGEY

Haa bhai! Thanks a lot!!! Mein maahir driver hu.
Aisa pehli baar hua hai mere saath. Wo achanak hi ruk gaye the. So to save him and his grand-daughter, mene rear ki jagah aage ke brakes use kar liye. Kyuki, rear waala use karta toh definitely bhidta.

बहुत ही बढ़िया रहा
तो वीर को एक और मिशन मिल गया श्वेता को बचाने के लिए
यह वीर ने अच्छा किया अपनी माँ को अपना एक हिंट दे दिया क्यूंकि अब ढूंढने की बारी गीता उर्फ़ भावना की है
बहुत दिनों के बाद रजत कहानी में आया
अगर दोबारा यही केस कोर्ट में सुनवाई होगी तो देखना दिलचस्प रहेगा रजत को हारते हुए

Dhanyavaad yaara!
Hmm~ Dono saanp ek saath aa gaye hai. Ab dekhte hai Veer kya karta hai.

एक एक पंक्ति ऐसे निपोरा गया है।जैसा लग रहा है ये पूरी तरह एक सच आधारित कोई घटना है।लाजबाव और आप अकसर अपने अपडेट को ऐसे राह पर रोक चले जाते हैं कि लगता है अब क्या होगा।बस अब जल्दी से फिर अपडेट दीजिये। आपकी लेखनी अद्भुत है

Dhanyavaad bhai!!!
Thread me swagat hai aapka. Keep supporting!
Abhi toh boht kuch dekhna baaki hai.

 

[Werewolf]

Nice update Werewolf bhai.
Aarohi ka phone hi chhin liya pranjal ne aur number bhi delete kar diya veer ka. Par aarohi akeli thodi he ghar me jo veer se baat karti he. Kavya ke trough message ya call kar de. Pranjal ko ab yaha aarohi ke samne natak karne ki jarurat nahi. Vese bhi ab property to milne na wali dono behno ki to kya fayda. Pranjal ab funds ke liye bada hath marne ja raha he. Jo he uski taai ji aur unki hotel.

Pranjal ko behno ki koi property na mili. Kavya aur Arohi dono ne hi Veer ke naam kar diya hai sab kuch. Abhi Veer ko bhi nahi pata hai ye baat.

Bhumika thoda surprise he pranjal ko dekh. Usse pata he kaam ke bina to aayega nahi. Baate bhi kari to apni maa ke liye Dhanywad bhi kaha. Warna bhumika to khud hi le Jane wali thi uski maa ko. Par schedule ese hi change nahi kar sakte jab aap ek badi hotel ke owner ho. Kafi responsibility aati he as a owner. Aur ab pranjal apni taai ko iss responsibility se door karna chahta he.
Plan to achha banaya he pranjal ne. Pahele jhuta yakeen dilwaya ki dada se baat karega. Phir ek shart rakh di jisme shweta ko apni property deni pade. Esi deal agar shweta hosh me hoti to jarur shaq karti par yahi to plan ka jaruri hissa tha ki usko hosh me rakha hi na jaye. Ab shweta ne to apni beti ke liye sign kar diye par milne kuch nahi wala ab.
Achha chutiya bana diya pranjal ne apni taai ji ka. Vese ek tarah se achha hi hua. Jab khud ke sath galat hota he tab pata chalta he khud ne kya kya galat kiya he. Veer ko fasa ke ghar se bahar nikal diya usme wo shamil thi. Ab achha hi hua uske sath bhi. Shweta ek tarah se "Karma" ke hotel me bethi thi. You get what you deserve.

Yes!!! What goes around comes around. Shweta ne jis tarah Veer ke saath kiya tha. Wesa hi ab uske saath ho raha hai. Ab usse samajh aaega ki Veer ko kese feel hota tha.

Yaha shweta ka ek maa hone ka roop bhi achhe se dikhaya. Ye baat bhi jaruri he kyuki wo apne liye kuch nahi kar rahi. Jo kuch bhi kar rahi he apni beti ke liye. Par isme usne galat ka sath diya he. Aur ab usse uska fal bhi milega. Ab samjh aayega usko kesa lagta he jab koi dhoke se aapka kuch cheen le.

You'll come to know more about her when her past will be shown.

Wahi Egypt me veer ke pass ek achha chance he ki wo apni maa bahen ke mann me achha impression chhod sake. Wahi uski maa uska test le rahi he. Sach me jab teeno ek sath honge tab kayi sare masti ke ese pal aane wale he. Veer ke sath bhavna casually hi baate kar rahi he. Par ye baat tejal ke liye nahi kahi ja sakti. Tejal wahi veer pe kadi najar rakh rahi he. Ab usko shaq to hoga hi veer pe. Shaq bhi ese kar rahi he jese veer artifact churane aaya he ya, koi saman le Jane.
Veer ko sidhe jake dhamki hi de di he usne to. Ab use kya pata wo uska hi chota pyara bhai he jisko khoj rahi he wo. Veer ne bhi Hawkeye ka achha use kiya par ese baat nahi banne wali. Ab pahuch chuke he to George ne veer ko hi aage kar diya. Ab baari he Veer ki. Pari he uske sath to kya chinta.
Kahi esa na ho ki iss baar esa aaye ki "Information is locked" first reach to 6th level then try it.

Pari already 6th level pe hai by the way. Ab level 7 pe jaegi woh. But uske liye Veer ko enough missions karne honge to get EXP so that Pari can reach next level. Uske hi saath interesting features bhi unlock hoenge.

Ek baat aur veer kar sakta he yaha. Ek chota sa experiment. Bhavna ne apna naam badal liya he. Par jab koi esa karta he to wo har pal sachet nahi reh pata. Aakhir insaan he. To veer kisi tarah bhavna naam dono ki baat chit me laye fir apni maa ke expression dekhe. Wahi same wo veer naam ke sath kar sakta he. Jab naam badalte he to naye naam pe jyada focus rakhte he. Par natural reflex to change nahi kar sakte na. Ek chota sa experiment jarur kar sakta he veer

Yes kar sakta tha Veer aisa. But wo kaafi risky move tha. Bhavna usse fir wahi confront karti ki usse uska naam kese pata. Veer ne alag way use kiya. Aur iss move se Bhavna ab desperate hai. Veer ko ab Bhavna ki taraf jaane ki zaroorat nahi. Ab bhavna pahal karegi.

Ek aur possibility he wo he ki tejal veer ke bare me janna chahegi jesa usse shaq he. Kisi tarah wo veer ke saman me dekhegi he aur waha usse wo locket mil jata he. Locket le to nahi sakti par yaad to rahega hi. Locket yaad reh jata he usse aur ghar jake yaad pakki karne ke liye ek painting bana degi wo. Kuch samay baad yahi painting ek din bhavna ke hath lagegi. Tab dono maa beti ki baat chit jabardast hogi.
Again it's my assumptions. Bak

Already locket dekh liya. Veer ne intentionally hi dikha diya.

Aur juhi ki baat karao veer se taki usko papa bol sake "galti se" fir "marji se".
Wapis aake ek baar suhana ko bata dena ki uske bina bhi kaam ho sakta he veer ka.

Bas ye Pranjal ka matter hote hi Nidhi ke matter par focus kiya jaega. Aur Nidhi rahegi toh Juhi toh rahegi hi saath me.

Ye to samay hi batayega. Dono maa beti ek dusre se competition karne wali he veer ko leke bhavishya me.
Waiting for next update.

Thanks a lot mate!!!
Tussi great ho.
Harr update ko lekar itni gehri baatein rakhna. Khaas kar veer ki niji life ke scenarios. Ju ki imagination kamaal ki hai. Aise hi bane rehna bro saath me.
Keep supporting as usual.

 

[khemucha]

Pranjal ko behno ki koi property na mili. Kavya aur Arohi dono ne hi Veer ke naam kar diya hai sab kuch.

waise yeh baat galat hai ... behano ki property nhi leni chahiye veer ko ... chahe unki lele ...

 

[Werewolf]

Ise kehte hain jo dusron ke liye bura karta hai bhagwan uske liye bhi aisa hi karte hain

Just awesome update Werewolf bhai.

Pranjal ne Kamaal kar diya shweta ko uske bure karmo ki saja dedi Jo usne veer ke saath kiye the...
Ab system ko veer ko mission Pranjal dena chahiye jisse veer ko points bhi mile or Pranjal bhi raste se hat Jaye.....

Sab hoega! Keep reading!

Hand break (Aage ki break) mari isliye tu gira par most of time sab yahi galti karte hai.Maine khud ki hai.Get well soon wahla

Yes! That is what happened! Yadi wo nahi maarta toh saamne waale unkil ko udaa diya hota mene.

Behtrin aur umda update
Ab bari h pranjal ki ha ha ha veer se kabse ye umid thi ki pranjaal ki kutayi. Kare ab ayega maza jab rajat bhaiya aur pranjal bhaiya dono ki lagegii lol ...aur bhawana ka bi dhekna h ki ab kaise vo vikram ki sachayi pata karegi sne wale updates aur shandar jaandar honge

Thanks mate!

Bahot hi badiya update he bhai par aapne bhavna yani veer ki maa aur tej ke sath kuchh aur pal dikhaye hote to maja aa jata...

But still it was awesome update...

Unko bhi samay milega bhai. Keep reading!

Is update se bhaiyo hume ye sikh milti hai ki kabhi bhi kisi ke muh ka nivala nahi chin na cahiye

Agreed!!! Janhit me jaari!!!

Jo sweta ne kiya tha pranjel or vivek ke sath mil kar

Or isse pehle wale update main kya bol rahi thi meri bhumi mera bacha hai to kya veer ne tera or tere bacche ka kya bigada tha be sali kameenee aourat

Teri beti tera bachcha or dusro ke bacche bigde huye

Or sahi huva hai sweta ke sath yahi hona cahiye tha jyada paiso ka lalach kesa laga aagya swad

Hmm~ Swaad toh mil gaya usse.

Khair par ab pachtawe hot kya jab kutta kaat gaya gaand

Ye toh pehli baar suna hai.

Baki must update bro maza aagya ab maa bete ka milan karvao or brijesh ko aise hi chor doge wo bhi kam kamina nahi

Sab hoega. Keep reading!

Jabardast update wolf bhai...i knew it...veer pendant ki help lega...bhavna ke aise reaction ki ummid ni thi anyway plot bhut mast hai phle veer bhavna ke piche ab bhavna veer ke piche...too much fun!!.

bc iss pranjal ki intelligence 100 se upr lgta hai bc itni badi planning..

Pranjal ki intelligence kitni hai ye bhi pata chalega abhi aane waale updates me.

veer shweta ko kaise rescue krta hai aur uske baad shweta ka reaction kaisa hota hai...eagerly waiting for next update!!...wolf bhai take rest and get well soon...pari ka system use krlo

Kaash mere andar bhi Pari hoti. Mera accident hota hi nahi.

Shweta doosri daasi banegi ... Suman ki tarah ... she will be his hitlady ... Pranjal ki maut ussi ke haaton hogi ... nothing more dangerous than a woman scorned ... abhi to bas saas bahu dekhi hai ... lagta hai aage chal kar maa beti bhi dikhegi ... "slurp" ...

Damnnnn!!!! Nice speculation!

kahani me bas ek hi kami hai ... woh hai Pranjal ki sundar si ... sexy si ... nazuk si ... mangetar ... jisse Veer ccheen sake ...

You'll see things soon..

vaise Egypt ka chapter jaldi close karke accha kiya ... dikh raha tha ki aap uss context me struggle kar rahe thae ... stay in familiar territory ... jaise ki Khandala ... Lonavla ... Singhad ... Goa ... ityaadi ...

Jab familiar context se baahar jao toh struggle karna hi padta hai.

but pendant ki jhalak dikha kar accha twist laaye ho ... now she will use her excavation and exploration skills to uncover his past ... they will be like two wrestlers ... circling each other ... eyeing each other ... nice ... khela hobe ..

Hmmm~ Otherwise koi twist hi nahi aata. Veer did something unexpected.

Awesome Updateee

Ab toh Pranjal ko uske kiye ki saza milni hi chahiyeee. Isne daulat ke liye apno ko hi dhoka diya aur apni maa saman tai ko marne pe majbur kardiyaa. Uss harami ne yeh tak nhi socha uss hotel ke le lene se unka kyaa hogaa.

Ab bhi agar Pranjal ko uske kiye ki ekdum sahi saza nhi mili toh yeh galat hoga bahot galat.

Pranjal se sabse zyaada nafrat hai lagta hai aapko. Keep reading!!! Surprise milega.

agle update mein to Shweta ko bachaoge, uske baad pranjal ka kissa tamam karo, fir maa aur behan se dil khol ke milna ab yahan system mat ghusa dena

Hmm~ Abhi toh famiglia arc continue hua hai toh ghar se related matters hi solve honge. Until house of the killers arc starts.

vaise time to nidhi ke bete ko bhi chudane ka aa gaya hai, ab ek update mein kya kya karte ho dekhte hain

Ek update me sab kuch toh nahi ho sakta. Dekhte hai...

 

[khemucha]

Jab familiar context se baahar jao toh struggle karna hi padta hai.

waise haryana me ab bahut sites hai ... harrapan civilization ke ... Bhavna and Veer can meet there ... aur Shimla aur Mussourie bhi pps hai ... where they can excape for some kochie koo ...

 

[Werewolf]

waise yeh baat galat hai ... behano ki property nhi leni chahiye veer ko ... chahe unki lele ...

Veer ko nahi pata ye.
Wo jab Egypt tour ke liye gaya tha tab hi Arohi aur Kavya ne property uske naam kard dii. Well, veer ehsaan rakhne waalo me se nahi. He'll shower his sisters with many gifts in the future.

 

[Werewolf]

waise haryana me ab bahut sites hai ... harrapan civilization ke ... Bhavna and Veer can meet there ... aur Shimla aur Mussourie bhi pps hai ... where they can excape for some kochie koo ...

Original plan wahi tha. I reasearched about our Indian archaeological sites. But then as I said earlier. Modification updates me on the spot likhte time hota hai. Hence, we got to see some Egyptian ancient culture.

 

[khemucha]

Veer ko nahi pata ye.
Wo jab Egypt tour ke liye gaya tha tab hi Arohi aur Kavya ne property uske naam kard dii. Well, veer ehsaan rakhne waalo me se nahi. He'll shower his sisters with many gifts in the future.

hope some of those gift showers are warm, gooey and internal ...

 

[Werewolf]

Awesome update....

Bhavana ko Pata chal gya veer beta Hai uska.....

Ohh Radhika ka scene awesome .....

Sweta to ab gir jayegi apna hero ke bahome....

Pranjal ko Sala Esa thokna hai Sala marte dam tak yad rakhe....us sale Rajat ka b Esa hal Hona chahiye.....

Ye Radhika kaun aa gayi bhai meri kahani me jiske baare me mein hi nahi jaanta.

Gajab waise to super update raha
Lekin wait hoga next update jisme bhavna aur veer dubara milenge
Waise to shweta ko nhi bachana chahye
Lekin kyaa kare point ka maamla hai bhai
Nice

Thank you bhai!

Sahi khel gaya prinjal maza aagaya

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Bhai baaki sab to shi h Shweta ko b koi na koi sja to milni hi chahiye but bhai jab Veer ko es mission ki panelty 20000 points ki mil rhi h or time bhi sirf half hour mila hai mission k liye to reward me b kuch dhasu milna to banta hai na to reward me points k sath extra me koi aaisi ability bhi dilvaeyega jo future me bhut jyada helpful rhe use

Mission update bhi ho sakta hai bhai.

Amazing update! Whenever I feel this is a normal plot - you bring something new! Keep up the great work!

Thanks mate!

Bohat vadia story dost,
Pehla comment mera aapki story ke liye
Bohat hi acha likhte ho
Ummeed hai isi tara vadia vadia update
Jaldi milte rahenge

Swagat hai aapka thread me. Dhanyavaad! Bane rahiyega!

Bhai abhi pranjal ka role rhega lg rha kyuki usko hta diya to uski family ki favorability points kaise bdhenge aise hi shweta ka bdhega jb bachayega fir maa ko bachaya to ldki ka bhi bdh jayega (bhumika) bhumi bhi arohi ki trh veer ki hogi intresting.
Shweta fir veer ke baap ki maregi kyuki bhr to whi nikala tha na plan bhle kisi ar ka ho fir baap ki jaydad hai shweta jo uski hogi

We'll see!!!

Wah bhai kya Chal chali hai bhavna ji ko pahli baar train me dekh kr or click karke pta lga kr Jaisa veer ne mahsoos kiya tha vaisa hi kuchh aaj bhavna ji ko bhi mahsoos hua veer (vikram) ka locket dekh kr, veer ne Jane se pahle unhe apna no bhi de diya sath hi yah bhi btaya ki use uske ghar valo ne Ghar se nikal diya hai... Veer ne arohi ko bhi mna kr rakha hai pranjal ke khilaf bolne se, pranjal ne apna asli rang dikha hi diya Aaj sweta se Usne sbkuchh chhin liya uska Hotal maan samman or Jo thodi ijjat Bachi thi vo sweta ne court case me gva diya 120 intelligent Ho gyi veer ki or points 892 bche hai 2000 se apni limit exceed kr li,
Pranjal ne case bhi kise diya nidhi ke husband ko, do kamino ne sweta ki sari ijjat court me utar di pranjal ne Pahle blackmail kiya veer ko lekr fir court me or bhi purani bato ko add kr or kuchh ka reference dekr faisla apne naam karva liya... Sweta case haar kr apni gadi se nikal gyi hai or yhi apne veer babu ko mission milta hai protect sweta to die, kya hua hoga uske sath kaha gyi thi Vo aise Bahut se sawal hai pr sweta ko bchane ke liye reward show nhi kiya penalty bhar bhar ke rakhi hai 20000 points... Samay bhi sirf 30 minute mtlb risk factor high hai... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab

System reward me points kitne milenge ye kabhi show nahi karta. Kyuki, Pari ne bataaya tha na. Mission jitna acche tareeqe se poora hota hai uss hisaab se points milte hai. Isliye hamesha rewards me questions mark banke aata hai. Thanks btw shandaar revo ke liye. Keep supporting!

Bhavna ki aisi halat dekh kahi apni Tej kuchh ulta seedha na samajh le vikram ke bare me, veer to bhavna ji ko shock or confusing situation me chhod aaya vha Dekhte hai ab kab tk Geeta ji apni Tej ke sath Mumbai vapas aati hai or kab fir se mulakat hoti hai...
Dekhte hai sweta or pranjal ke matter me manorath ji ka kya reaction rahta hai...
Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast

Well, Bhavna ki haalat dekhne ke liye wo airport me nahi thi. Aur jab tak bhavna site me lauti hogi tab tak wo apne emotions par kaabu kar legi.

Matbal pranjal favorability badhane ek jariya hai...matbal wo anajne me hi sahi sabhi ko wo veer ke pass le ja rha ....ab Sweta bhi veer ki har baat tote ki tarah manegi, to bhomika bhi manegi hi...bahane already veer ke paksh me hai...bhabhi to lattu hai hi...ab socho ki agar veer aur pranjal ka aamana samana hoga to veer ke pass Trump card par Trump card hoga.......pranjal ki durdarshita bahut kamjor nikali yaar...

Hmm!? Well you can say that Pranjal did help veer to get some points.

Thoda sex scene v rakhiye writer ji

Aaenge aaenge wo bhi aaenge. Bas padhte jaiye.

Ek aur behtareen update. Bhavan ko jab tak hosh aata, veer nikal gaya tha. Accha hai, usko sochne ka mauka milega. Aur ghar se nikal dene wali baat to wo confirm ker sakti hai.
Pranjal ne kya khoob chal chali hai, danke ki chot per shweta ko murkh banaya hai. Ab isko khatam kerne ka time aa gaya hai.
Kfi dino se mausam khushk chal raha hai, kuch chhed-khani, kusn romance ya phir wo sab.... ho jaye.

Hmm~ Thoda sookha sookha isliye tha kyuki Veer ke aas paas flirt karne ke liye koi nahi tha. He couldn't flirt with his own mom and sis right!? Haha~
Ab chuki wo waapas aa gaya hai. He'll get many opportunities. Kuch naye darwaaze bhi khulenge.

Waow nice update ab to lag raha he ke shweta nd bhumika veer ke liye kaam karega uska business barane mai aisa mujhe lag raha he age dakhte he kya hota he

Thanks mate!!!

Ek baar to main bhi chakkar main pad gaya is bhai ka post padh ke.

O bhai Kon si duniya me ho abhi to update aaya tha, kuchh padhe bhi ho ya aise hi likh kr post kr diya har jagah

Pagal ho geya he ya ganja dhatura kha ke aya he ye bata de bhay

First of all sorry Bhai Apke Egypt wale ek bhi update pr comment nhi kr payea actually words dhund rha tha tarif ke liye pr mi hi nhi rhe the pr fir bhi kuch words ke sath try krne ja rha hu hope they appreciate your updates a bit mind blowing, fabulous, amazing updates
Veer gaya Egypt wha apni Hosyiayri ke chalte ander ghusa apni maa se mila uski nigaho Mai ane ke liye pari ka full support liya or usne diya bhi meanwhile udhar Mumbai Mai pranjal ne apni chal chalu rakhi or dekhte hi dekhte bhawana or shweta ka hotel apne naam krwa hi liya or uski madad kri nidhi ke kamine pati ne or ek aisa moka bna diya ki veer ne Apne dushmano ko mitane ke liye Apni intelligence ko break krke 120 tk le gaya jis se ab veer pranjal or nidhi ke husband ki waat to lagegi ab or nidhi wala mission bhi time limit ke kareeb pahunchne wala hai to usko poora krke veer nidhi ke husband ko achi maat dega or nidhi ko uska beta lauta kr uski achi khasi Favourability bhi bdha lega meanwhile veer apni behan tej se bhi mi chuka jo ki bilkul apne naam ki trah Tejaswani bhi hai or full confidence se loaded bhi jisko ptane ke liye (affirmative way) means Apni side krke unka trust jeetne ke liye Hawkeye ka use kiya or Sir George ne to veer ke lga dale us se jaankari le le kar or ab veer ko mission bhi mil chuka shweta ko bachane ka 30 min ke ander ander jiske baad uski Favourability Or support usko milega uske regret ke chalte agar fail hua to 20k points penalty ab dekhna hoga ki veer kya kr pata hai usme



Eagerly Waiting For Next Update

Koi nahi bhaaya. Thanks a lot for such a wonderful revo. Bas bane rahiyega! Aur dekhte jaiye. Bas romaanchak hi hota jaega safar.

अद्भुद मित्र, यहाँ साफ़ दिख रहा है की आप ने कहानी को आगे लिखने के लिए बहोत reserch किये है मिश्र के बारे मे.... !
हमेशा की तरह

अद्भुद मित्र, यहाँ साफ़ दिख रहा है की आप ने कहानी को आगे लिखने के लिए बहोत reserch किये है मिश्र के बारे मे.... !
हमेशा की तरह एकदम रापचिक update था ।

Apratim update bhai, ... Veer ne wapas jate jate apni real ma ko jhatka de hi diya pendent dikha kar,
Par idhar to shweta ki duniya hi ujad chuki hai, pranjal ne bahut bura fasaya hai shweta ko, ... Aur issi karan shweta aatmhatya karne ko vivash ho gyi,.... Khair wo to bach hi jayegi, veer ko jo system ki taraf se task mila h shweta ko save karne ki, shayad yahan se shweta ka veer ke prati behaviour me bhi bahot bada change dekhne ko mile.
Par ab main mudda to ye ho gya na ki shweta ko veer uska hotel wapas kaise dilayega.... Halanki yahi dekhna interesting hoga... Kyonki udhar pranjal ka sath jo vakeel hai usse bhi to veer ka puraana hisaab hai... Aakhir wo apne veer ki pyari nidhi mam ka husband hai.
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Baaki update lajabab tha bhai....
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Aur ant me bas yahi bolunga ki gaadi waadi jara dhyan se chalaya karo, warana ekaadh din chal doge...., aur jara socho agar tum chal doge to ham jaise shabhya, shanskaari readers ka kya hoga....
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To bas stay alert, safe drive

Thanks a lot bhai!!!
Haan bhai! Mein sambhal ke hi chalta hu. Bas sthiti hi aisi thi. Kherr! Jo hua so hua. I'm better now. Bane rahiyega!
Keep supporting as always!

Vese sala shweta ko bachane me veer ka bhi ek fayda he. Apni maa ke bare me puch sakta he wo.
Uska past bhi sad hoga. Dhoka khaya hoga usne isiliye apni beti ke liye ek behtar future secure Karna chahti he wo.

Apun ne wo galti se likh diya tha.
Shweta ko Bhavna ke baare me nahi pata. I mean khud socho. Wo late aayi ghar me. And she doesn't know what happened with Bhavna.

Bro wait or nhi ho Raha hai so pls daily 1 update diya koro and we are lv u

Bhai meri jaan nikal jaegi aise me.

इस फोरम में बोहत सारी शानदार कहानियां पढ़ी मैने किंतु इस कहानी की बात ही अलग है। पहले तो बहुत बहुत शुभकामनाएं लेखक महोदय को और आशा करता हूं की नित्य नए एपिसोड आते रहेंगे इस कहानी के।

Arre Dhanyavaad yaara!
Swaagat hai aapka!
Keep supporting!

 

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Ye Radhika kaun aa gayi bhai meri kahani me jiske baare me mein hi nahi jaanta.

Thank you bhai!



Mission update bhi ho sakta hai bhai.

Thanks mate!

Swagat hai aapka thread me. Dhanyavaad! Bane rahiyega!

We'll see!!!

System reward me points kitne milenge ye kabhi show nahi karta. Kyuki, Pari ne bataaya tha na. Mission jitna acche tareeqe se poora hota hai uss hisaab se points milte hai. Isliye hamesha rewards me questions mark banke aata hai. Thanks btw shandaar revo ke liye. Keep supporting!

Well, Bhavna ki haalat dekhne ke liye wo airport me nahi thi. Aur jab tak bhavna site me lauti hogi tab tak wo apne emotions par kaabu kar legi.

Hmm!? Well you can say that Pranjal did help veer to get some points.

Aaenge aaenge wo bhi aaenge. Bas padhte jaiye.

Hmm~ Thoda sookha sookha isliye tha kyuki Veer ke aas paas flirt karne ke liye koi nahi tha. He couldn't flirt with his own mom and sis right!? Haha~
Ab chuki wo waapas aa gaya hai. He'll get many opportunities. Kuch naye darwaaze bhi khulenge.

Thanks mate!!!






Koi nahi bhaaya. Thanks a lot for such a wonderful revo. Bas bane rahiyega! Aur dekhte jaiye. Bas romaanchak hi hota jaega safar.


Thanks a lot bhai!!!
Haan bhai! Mein sambhal ke hi chalta hu. Bas sthiti hi aisi thi. Kherr! Jo hua so hua. I'm better now. Bane rahiyega!
Keep supporting as always!

Apun ne wo galti se likh diya tha.
Shweta ko Bhavna ke baare me nahi pata. I mean khud socho. Wo late aayi ghar me. And she doesn't know what happened with Bhavna.

Bhai meri jaan nikal jaegi aise me.

Arre Dhanyavaad yaara!
Swaagat hai aapka!
Keep supporting

Bhai update kab ay gi?