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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery
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So, Veer is back home... Egypt ke tour par jitni use umeed rahi hogi utna Veer haasil nahi kar paaya... Bhavana ek reserved personality ki maalkin hai, especially jab baat uske bete aur past se judi ho, tab wo kisi se bhi yunhi khul nahi sakti... Veer jab Egypt ke liye nikla tha, tabhi ye to clear tha ke wo Bhavana se kuchh bhi jaankari nahi nikalwa paayega, aakhir jab usne apni beti tak ko kuchh nahi bataya to wo ek anjaan ko kya hi batayegi... But, ye trip kuchh maayeno mein Veer ke liye behad important tha, firstly, uski mulakat apni behen se ho hi gayi, haan ye bhi hai ke Tejal ne seedhe munh Veer se baat tak nahi ki, but at least it started... Secondly & the important one, Veer ne jaate jaate hi sahi Bhavana ko asmanjas mein daal hi diya hai...
Wo locket jo Bhavana ne apne bete Veer ko diya tha, use Vikram ke paas dekh kar uska hairaan – pareshaan hona laazmi tha... Ab wo har waqt bas yahi sochti rahegi ki iska kaaran kya hai! Doosra, Veer ne use ye bhi bata diya hai ke use ghar se nikaal baahar kar diya gaya tha, ye bhi Bhavana ke mann mein uthal – puthal machane ke liye kaafi hai... Ab uske paas Veer ka cell number to hai hi, dekhte hain ke aage wo kya karti hai... Wo jab India lautegi tab hi shayad wo kuchh kare... Btw. Bhavana Veer ko airport drop karne gayi thi, aur is locket ke kaaran wo pareshan bhi ho gayi hai... Kahin, uske badle vyavahar ke kaaran Tejal, Veer ki image apne mann mein aur kharab naa bana le...
Idhar, Pranjal ne apna plan poori tarah se execute kar liya hai... Shweta ka hotel aur uski sampatti ab poori tarah se Pranjal ke paas aa gayi hai, wo bhi legally... Aarohi aur Kavya ne apne hisse ki property pehle hi Veer ke naam kar di thi, is baat se filhaal Veer bhi anjaan hai... Par Pranjal ke liye ye ek jhatka tha... Uska ek plan flop ho gaya tha ek tarah se, to usne apne shikaar ke roop mein Shweta ko chuna...
Shweta, ka ek maa ke roop mein Bhumika ke liye, apni beti ke liye chintit hona poori tarah justified hai... I think, Shweta aur Brijesh ka past bhi kuchh na kuchh raaz samete huye hoga... Ek important cheez ye bhi hai ke Bhumika, Brijesh ki apni beti nahi hai, wo Shweta ke pehle pati ki beti hai... Aur hum is baat ko ignore nahi kar sakte ke jab Brijesh ne apne sage bete ko, apne khoon ko ghar se nikaal baahar kar diya tha, to Bhumika joki uski sauteli beti hai, uski wo kya hi care aur chinta karega... Maybe wo karta bhi ho, par Shweta ke liye is scenario mein apni beti ke future ko lekar insecure hona koyi aascharya janak baat nahi hai... Aur isi insecurity ke chalte uske paas jo kuchh tha wo bhi ab Shweta kho chuki hai...
Dekha jaaye to ek baar fir saabit hua ke karma is a bitch & it spares no one
... Jo kuchh Shweta ne Veer ke saath kiya uska nateeja aur fal use bhogna hi tha... Bhumika ko property mein hissa dilwane ke liye usne Vivek & Pranjal ka saath diya Veer ke khilaaf sajish mein... Kabhi bhi usne Veer ko pyaar nahi diya, kya hua agar wo uski sauteli maa thi to, yadi wo Veer ko thoda bhi pyaar deti to Veer Khushi se apne hisse ki property bhi uske aur uski beti ke naam kar deta... But she chose to be on the side of evil guys and she finally got what she deserved... Btw. I think jo thappad use Brijesh ne maara tha uske kaaran bhi wo thoda aur adhik insecure ho gayi, anyatha itni aasani se wo Pranjal ke trap mein naa fansti... 
Idhar, ek aur muhavra sidh ho gaya, chor – chor mausere bhai... Rajat aur Pranjal ek hi jaise do chutiye, waise to is kahani mein kayi negative kirdar aaye, chahe wo Slogan ho ya fir Aatish... Kaafi hadh tak Kishor se bhi negative aura ki jhalak milti hai... But yadi koyi is kahani mein satya mein bastardism aur haramkhori ki seema rekha ko paar kar chuka hai to wo yahi dono hain
... Pranjal, yadi koyi selfishness ka devta hai to wo yahi hai... Ab to apun ko Vivek par bhi taras aane laga hai... Patni gayi, property gayi aur business bhi kabhi na kabhi chala hi jaayega... Werewolf bro Vivek ki Himalaya ki ticket karwa do, ab uska sanyas lene ka time aa gaya hai, kahin bechare ne Ragini - Veer ko kuchh games (
) khelte dekh liya to bechare ko kahin heart attack hi naa aa jaaye... Rajat ka bhi samay nikat lag raha hai, because Veer ne ek update mein kaha tha ke usne Nidhi ke liye bhi kuchh socha hai, to I'm sure jo bhi wo karega us se Rajat ki pakka jalegi aur fir wo apni bujhwane ke chakkar mein tudwa lega...
Wahin Pranjal ka samay bhi nikat hi hai... Aarohi ke saath huyi ghatna, mujhe nahi lagta ab Veer use chhodega... Veer ne apni Intelligence ko bhi 120 tak pahuncha diya hai... Jahaan tak ki mera khayal hai Pranjal ki Intelligence shayad 80–90 ke beech honi chahiye, shayad kam bhi ho but of course 100 ke paar to nahi hogi... Let's see ke Veer uske saath kya karta hai... Btw. I hope ke Pranjal ki koyi girlfriend ho...
Is beech Court case haarne ke baad Shweta nikal padi hai ghar se... Aur Veer ko mission mila hai uski jaan bachane ka... Ya to wo Suicide karne gayi hai ya fir aise hi TV serial maafik gaadi chalane, aur background mein lagatar bajte “dhoom tana” music ke kaaran uski gaadi ka balance bigdega aur wo thuk jaayegi
... Let's see Veer use kaise bachayega! Bacha to lega hi, aakhir 20,000 points ka choona jo lagega mission fail hone par, but above that penalty Shweta tapak jaayegi aur Veer babu apne harem se ek member kam thodi hone denge 
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I think ab samay aa gaya hai jab Bhumika ka character bhi ubhar kar aayega... Ab tak wo apni Maa ki baaton ko follow karti aayi aur is wajah se kabhi pata hi nahi chala ke uske mann mein asliyat mein kaise bhaav hain... She's a soft hearted person, that's for sure... But, Shweta ki chhatra chhaya mein rehne ke kaaran uski khud ki personality dhundhli si ho gayi thi... Ab jab Veer Shweta ko bachayega aur saath hi Pranjal ka bhi intezaam karega to definitely Shweta,Bhumika ko Veer se bura vyavahar karne ko to kahegi nahi, and I hope ke Bhumika ki ek nayi side hume dekhne mile...
Ragini, ab jald hi wo koyi bada step le sakti hai... Veer jab waapis lauta to uska reaction, Suman, Aabha aur Sonali ke saamne hi wo Veer se jis tarah lipat gayi thi, ab uske liye rukna mushkil hoga, dekhna hoga Veer ka uspar kya reaction hoga... Idhar, Kaera ne hi Veer ke liye Visa arrange Kiya tha, sawaal to uske paas bhi honge, ke kaahe wo Egypt gaya tha... Suhana! Wo kya soch rahi hogi, especially after she denied to help Veer with all that, dekhna hoga ke Kaera aur Suhana se agli bhent kab hogi Veer ki...
Pranjal ke baad Nidhi ka bhi number lagne hi waala hai... But kya wo Veer ki help legi? Ye ab tak ka sabse bada sawaal hai... I don't think ke pehle bhi wo Veer se help leti aur ab to jo kuchh ho chuka hai, it's gonna be tough to convince her... Btw. Waiting for Juhi!
Kaafi badhiya likha aapne Egypt waala sequence Werewolf bhai... Jis tarah aapne research kar likha aur apna poora effort lagaya uske liye
... Ismein koyi do raaye nahi ke jab yun achaanak se kahani ka rukh badal diya jaata hai to lekhak ke liye bhi adjust karna kathin hota hai, (as the story suddenly went to Egypt from Mumbai)... And, not to forget ab tak ka shayad sabse important scene bhi ye Egypt waala hi tha, as it was related to those two, jinki jagah Veer ki life mein shayad sabse special hai... That's why, Great job, bro! 
Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...
Wo locket jo Bhavana ne apne bete Veer ko diya tha, use Vikram ke paas dekh kar uska hairaan – pareshaan hona laazmi tha... Ab wo har waqt bas yahi sochti rahegi ki iska kaaran kya hai! Doosra, Veer ne use ye bhi bata diya hai ke use ghar se nikaal baahar kar diya gaya tha, ye bhi Bhavana ke mann mein uthal – puthal machane ke liye kaafi hai... Ab uske paas Veer ka cell number to hai hi, dekhte hain ke aage wo kya karti hai... Wo jab India lautegi tab hi shayad wo kuchh kare... Btw. Bhavana Veer ko airport drop karne gayi thi, aur is locket ke kaaran wo pareshan bhi ho gayi hai... Kahin, uske badle vyavahar ke kaaran Tejal, Veer ki image apne mann mein aur kharab naa bana le...
Idhar, Pranjal ne apna plan poori tarah se execute kar liya hai... Shweta ka hotel aur uski sampatti ab poori tarah se Pranjal ke paas aa gayi hai, wo bhi legally... Aarohi aur Kavya ne apne hisse ki property pehle hi Veer ke naam kar di thi, is baat se filhaal Veer bhi anjaan hai... Par Pranjal ke liye ye ek jhatka tha... Uska ek plan flop ho gaya tha ek tarah se, to usne apne shikaar ke roop mein Shweta ko chuna...
Shweta, ka ek maa ke roop mein Bhumika ke liye, apni beti ke liye chintit hona poori tarah justified hai... I think, Shweta aur Brijesh ka past bhi kuchh na kuchh raaz samete huye hoga... Ek important cheez ye bhi hai ke Bhumika, Brijesh ki apni beti nahi hai, wo Shweta ke pehle pati ki beti hai... Aur hum is baat ko ignore nahi kar sakte ke jab Brijesh ne apne sage bete ko, apne khoon ko ghar se nikaal baahar kar diya tha, to Bhumika joki uski sauteli beti hai, uski wo kya hi care aur chinta karega... Maybe wo karta bhi ho, par Shweta ke liye is scenario mein apni beti ke future ko lekar insecure hona koyi aascharya janak baat nahi hai... Aur isi insecurity ke chalte uske paas jo kuchh tha wo bhi ab Shweta kho chuki hai...
Dekha jaaye to ek baar fir saabit hua ke karma is a bitch & it spares no one
... Jo kuchh Shweta ne Veer ke saath kiya uska nateeja aur fal use bhogna hi tha... Bhumika ko property mein hissa dilwane ke liye usne Vivek & Pranjal ka saath diya Veer ke khilaaf sajish mein... Kabhi bhi usne Veer ko pyaar nahi diya, kya hua agar wo uski sauteli maa thi to, yadi wo Veer ko thoda bhi pyaar deti to Veer Khushi se apne hisse ki property bhi uske aur uski beti ke naam kar deta... But she chose to be on the side of evil guys and she finally got what she deserved... Btw. I think jo thappad use Brijesh ne maara tha uske kaaran bhi wo thoda aur adhik insecure ho gayi, anyatha itni aasani se wo Pranjal ke trap mein naa fansti... Idhar, ek aur muhavra sidh ho gaya, chor – chor mausere bhai... Rajat aur Pranjal ek hi jaise do chutiye, waise to is kahani mein kayi negative kirdar aaye, chahe wo Slogan ho ya fir Aatish... Kaafi hadh tak Kishor se bhi negative aura ki jhalak milti hai... But yadi koyi is kahani mein satya mein bastardism aur haramkhori ki seema rekha ko paar kar chuka hai to wo yahi dono hain
... Pranjal, yadi koyi selfishness ka devta hai to wo yahi hai... Ab to apun ko Vivek par bhi taras aane laga hai... Patni gayi, property gayi aur business bhi kabhi na kabhi chala hi jaayega... Werewolf bro Vivek ki Himalaya ki ticket karwa do, ab uska sanyas lene ka time aa gaya hai, kahin bechare ne Ragini - Veer ko kuchh games () khelte dekh liya to bechare ko kahin heart attack hi naa aa jaaye... Rajat ka bhi samay nikat lag raha hai, because Veer ne ek update mein kaha tha ke usne Nidhi ke liye bhi kuchh socha hai, to I'm sure jo bhi wo karega us se Rajat ki pakka jalegi aur fir wo apni bujhwane ke chakkar mein tudwa lega... Wahin Pranjal ka samay bhi nikat hi hai... Aarohi ke saath huyi ghatna, mujhe nahi lagta ab Veer use chhodega... Veer ne apni Intelligence ko bhi 120 tak pahuncha diya hai... Jahaan tak ki mera khayal hai Pranjal ki Intelligence shayad 80–90 ke beech honi chahiye, shayad kam bhi ho but of course 100 ke paar to nahi hogi... Let's see ke Veer uske saath kya karta hai... Btw. I hope ke Pranjal ki koyi girlfriend ho
...Is beech Court case haarne ke baad Shweta nikal padi hai ghar se... Aur Veer ko mission mila hai uski jaan bachane ka... Ya to wo Suicide karne gayi hai ya fir aise hi TV serial maafik gaadi chalane, aur background mein lagatar bajte “dhoom tana” music ke kaaran uski gaadi ka balance bigdega aur wo thuk jaayegi
... Let's see Veer use kaise bachayega! Bacha to lega hi, aakhir 20,000 points ka choona jo lagega mission fail hone par, but above that penalty Shweta tapak jaayegi aur Veer babu apne harem se ek member kam thodi hone denge ...I think ab samay aa gaya hai jab Bhumika ka character bhi ubhar kar aayega... Ab tak wo apni Maa ki baaton ko follow karti aayi aur is wajah se kabhi pata hi nahi chala ke uske mann mein asliyat mein kaise bhaav hain... She's a soft hearted person, that's for sure... But, Shweta ki chhatra chhaya mein rehne ke kaaran uski khud ki personality dhundhli si ho gayi thi... Ab jab Veer Shweta ko bachayega aur saath hi Pranjal ka bhi intezaam karega to definitely Shweta,Bhumika ko Veer se bura vyavahar karne ko to kahegi nahi, and I hope ke Bhumika ki ek nayi side hume dekhne mile...
Ragini, ab jald hi wo koyi bada step le sakti hai... Veer jab waapis lauta to uska reaction, Suman, Aabha aur Sonali ke saamne hi wo Veer se jis tarah lipat gayi thi, ab uske liye rukna mushkil hoga, dekhna hoga Veer ka uspar kya reaction hoga... Idhar, Kaera ne hi Veer ke liye Visa arrange Kiya tha, sawaal to uske paas bhi honge, ke kaahe wo Egypt gaya tha... Suhana! Wo kya soch rahi hogi, especially after she denied to help Veer with all that, dekhna hoga ke Kaera aur Suhana se agli bhent kab hogi Veer ki...
Pranjal ke baad Nidhi ka bhi number lagne hi waala hai... But kya wo Veer ki help legi? Ye ab tak ka sabse bada sawaal hai... I don't think ke pehle bhi wo Veer se help leti aur ab to jo kuchh ho chuka hai, it's gonna be tough to convince her... Btw. Waiting for Juhi!
Kaafi badhiya likha aapne Egypt waala sequence Werewolf bhai... Jis tarah aapne research kar likha aur apna poora effort lagaya uske liye
... Ismein koyi do raaye nahi ke jab yun achaanak se kahani ka rukh badal diya jaata hai to lekhak ke liye bhi adjust karna kathin hota hai, (as the story suddenly went to Egypt from Mumbai)... And, not to forget ab tak ka shayad sabse important scene bhi ye Egypt waala hi tha, as it was related to those two, jinki jagah Veer ki life mein shayad sabse special hai... That's why, Great job, bro! Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...
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