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Next update will be delayed due to some medical emergency.
Writer will be unavailable for few days.
Writer will be unavailable for few days.
Ha aana to chahiye kyuki Tuesday wala update Monday me गिना Jana chahiye. Kyuki Tuesday wala update Monday ko aana tha .Bhai aaj update aaega?
मेरे हिसाब से अगर:two polls ...
1. Veer ka baccha sabse pehale kaun paida karegi ... Nidhi, Abha, Ragini, Suhana(she needs motherhood to calm down) ... ya koi aur ...
2. Which is the most anticipated threesome ... Keara+Sonia, Suman+Saloni, Aarohi+Kavya, Shweta+Bhumika, Nidhi+Shreya, Tejal+Arohi ... ya koi aur ...
Koi nahi! Intezaar rahega.वाव
पर अगला अपडेट के बाद ही रिव्यू दूँगा
क्यूंकि जिस जगह सस्पेंस से छोड़ा है वह टूटने के बाद ही कुछ लिखूँगा
Superb, awesome and mind blowing update hai Werewolf bhai,
behad hi shandaar lajawab aur amazing update hai,
Awesome update waiting 4 next
Awesome bhai
Awesome
Superb update brooo
Awesome...
Amazing...
Waiting for next update brooo
Dhanyavaad guys!!!Bhariya...
Bro lagta hai veer pranjel ko nanga karega
Just keep reading!!!Or ha ek baar veer or sweta ki khul kar baat karvana jisse wo apne gile sikwe mita sake par veer ko apni mom se jaldi hi mil ana main to bolta hu sweta or veer ka talk bhavna ke samne hi hona cahiye
Or ab jakar sweta ke muh se sahi sabd nikla veer keliye mere bacche shabaash
Or sweta ko apni aoukaat main dekh mera dil katayi garden garden hogaya
Next update me hi pata lagegaOr sabhi sab mouj hai to to bina puch wali lomdi pranjal kaha hai
Ragini nahi, Veer naraaz hai Ragini se. Ragini ko hi ab pahal karni hogi unn dono ke beech wo shikwa mitaane ki.Bro yaar ragini ko veer se naraz mat karvao yaar excitement ki buri tarah maaa behen hojati hai
Sahi samay aane par Bhavna ki re-entry bhi ho jaegi.Or bhavna wala scean bhi thoda jaldi karvao uska exaitment sambhale nahi sambhal raha hai
Nidhi's matter will get into picture right after Pranjal's matter.Or nidhi madam ka bhi chapter hai
Wife part hasn't been decided yet. Ladkiyo ke actions hi bataenge who will claim Veer first.Or bro hosake to ragini ko hi veer ki patni banana
Suspense jese aata hai wese hi jaata hai. Have patience!I know aap ki abhi tabiyat theek nahi hai
Main bas ye kehrahu ki suspense bahut jyada hogay hai
Or kuch nahi bro baki apki Story ke update ka intezaar rehta hai
Thanks!a satisfying update after a long time ... half satisfying actually ...
satisfying iss liye ki jaise hi veer told Shweta to get lost ... I felt ... ab time sahi hai ki Ragini isse thappad maare ... aur wohi hua ... well played ...
Veer got slapped in front of them. He was pissed. A mere 3-4 seconds kiss isn't something which can console him. He ain't a child anymore.but there was a natural follow-up thought too ... that the slap will set the stage for a very emotionally charged scene between them ... if not ice-breaking make-up sex(nothing is more satisfying and relaxing than make-up sex) ... maybe a premature expectation ... so jaane do ... well scene to tha but not sufficiently emotional ... no expression of deep feelings ... mutual need ... no nothing ... he did not even grab her and press her against the wall with his body ... just a 3-4 second kiss ... not even a full blown french smooch that leaves them breathless and embarrassed/confused ... a missed literary opportunity by the author to set the pressure cooker roiling ...
For now she don't. But she can if she try hard.But Ragini is fast emerging as my favourite ... she not only loves him ... but she owns him ...
She slapped him because she now considers him as her own.she's not only destined to get fucked by him ... and bear his children ... she's also destined to keep him connected to his humanity ... which she did by slapping him ... only she can do it ...
Nicely put. But we have seen only Ragini being the assertive one here. Haven't seen any other females totally going in for Veer. Now imagine, Kaera lunges on him after getting her emotions back. Sonia competing with her to get a hold of him. Arohi/Kavya finally realizing their thoughts about him and getting aggressive. Nidhi finally realising her feelings for him. And... Well... They are other females too. (some still haven't entered the story yet.)only she has the strength, the character and the purity of heart ... all without any strings or restrictions ... not Nidhi(she has too many responsibilities of her own) ... Not Arohi(she is too uptight) ... not Kavya or Shreya or Saloni(they are too immature) ... not Bumika(she is emotionally stunted) ... not Suman or Aabha(they are mere Veer daasis) ... not divas like Sonia or Keara(they have too many internal insecurities that they need to come to terms with) ... not Shweta, Sumitra(they will be just available milfs) ... not Suhana(she will be dynamite in bed ...but she has her own agendas) ... only Ragini ... Bahvna and Tejal(hmmm ... maybe ... but they are enigmas as of now) ... did I miss anyone in the emerging harem ...
Time will tell!!!Only Ragini will understand his relationship with Pari and the System ... and help him nurture use and control it rather than be conrolled by it ... she is matchless ... but when will she be clothless ...
I'll explain. Imagine you hate someone. You have been plotting against them for quite a while. Then a situation arises where you are at the risk of losing your life. All your hopes are shattered. Then, suddenly you see your foe standing before you like a shield protecting you.talking about the system ... on seeing Veer Shweta asked ... Why ??? ... how come she never asked ... How ??? ...
Thanks a lot for disclosing your scenarios.but an enjoyable udate over all ... and set the stage for another enjoyable update ... thanks ...
You'll come to know in the upcoming updates.Agle update me Pranjal ki pant geeli hone waali hai ... by the way ... in one of your replies did you confirm(hint) ... that ... Pranjasl has a girlfriend ...
Thanks mate!!Super update wolf bhai...aur ye camera action wala pranjal ka hoga..balhaar ki madad se uski gand tod di hogi veer ne
Superb Update Bro...
Waiting for Next
Nice update bro
Superb mind blowing update Werewolf bhai lekin iss update mein kafi kuch ulajh Gaya hai...
Superb update bhai
Superb update
Thanks a lot guys!Nice update bro
No mega update for now. Update 76 hi mega update tha. Abhi zaroorat nahi.Wolf Bro ab to mega update banta hai
Arre ye chalta rehta hai bro. Eee log haraami hai hum jaanat hai. Par sab saath ke hi hai. Bas patience rakhne ki zaroorat hai inhe.भाई आपसे अनुरोध है किसिके उकसावे पर मत आइये। इस फॉरम मे ऐसे कुछ लोग है जिनको लिखने का ल नहीं आयेगा लेकिन किसिकों बुरा भला या ब्यंग करना अच्छी तरह आता है। इसी लिए उनलोगों पर अपना बिचार moderator के साथ साझा कर लीजिये। बहुत सारे ऐसे ही पार हो जाएंगे।
werewolf bhai solid reply.....with perfect explanation
Superb update
Mindblowing update sirji....
Extraordinary update sir g
Lajawab shaandaar update and you are right health is first thing rest after that.
Thank you guys!!!Maza ayega bhai, bilkul pura maza ayega bhai
Koi na bro! Mein nahi aata kabhi kisi ki baato me. Bas frustrate ho jaata hu kabhi kabhi. Kya hai wese hi pehle se mein rest period pe hu. Aur fir aise replies dekhne ko milte hai toh bas dimaag aur zyaada kharaab ho jaata hai. That's it. But after some time, calm and collected ho jaata hai apun.Werewolf Bhai ye to dusari graha ke m..c... Prani h inka kaam hi h writer ko gaali dena unhe bharkaha taaki Bo Jaan bujh ke story close kr de inki bajah se bahut si story close Hui h but aap inki baato m maat aao ye to h hi madar..c
Patience level badhao mate!!!Werewolf it's totally wrong, aise update q end krte ho yrrrrr, q hmre emotions k Saath khelte ho.
Plot will never get changed Shuru se lekar ant tak story mere according hi jaegi.Haha bhai apne sahi kaha but aise suspense me rahene se uska maza hi kuch aur hai.
Hamare jaise riders kuch kahene se Writer sab apni story ka plot change to kerege nahi jo mil raha hai us hi maza le
Keep reading to know more.Awesome,
par kya shweta bhi hambistar hogi.
Interesting
After all it's a tale of debauchery
Dhanyavaad! I'm feeling better now.क्या मियां, ऐन मौके पे खत्म कर दिया। कोई बात नहीं, थोड़ा इंतजार ही सही।
वैसे अपने हाथ का ध्यान रखे, लंबी छुट्टी ले और ठीक होने के बाद ही अगली किश्त दे।
पाठकों का मान रखने के लिए धन्यवाद।
1.Ragini paida karegi bachha sabse pehletwo polls ...
1. Veer ka baccha sabse pehale kaun paida karegi ... Nidhi, Abha, Ragini, Suhana(she needs motherhood to calm down) ... ya koi aur ...
2. Which is the most anticipated threesome ... Keara+Sonia, Suman+Saloni, Aarohi+Kavya, Shweta+Bhumika, Nidhi+Shreya, Tejal+Arohi ... ya koi aur ...
Kyumere khayal se koi bhi nahi jo veer ke bachche ki maa bann sake ..
बहुत ही रोमांचक अपडेट l अब आगे देखते हैं क्या होता है l कृपया अपने आप पर भी ध्यान दें l
Lage raho bhai maja aa gaya
Keep it up bro
Buhut badiya update bhai
Nice update
Awesome update bhai waiting for next update
Thanks guys!!!Nice update
Story shuru se lekar ab tak mere according hi chali hai aur ant tak bhi yahi hoega bro. No changes will be done. Last story me mene fir bhi readers ke kehne par kuch changes kiye the. But this won't. This will be a masterpiece and will satiate every reader's desires. (Except the part where readers like protagonist's partners to have sex with others. This won't happen!! )Bhai ek suggestion meri or se ki aap salaah sab se liya karo lekin story line khudke hisaab se hi rakho. Kuch logo ka to kaam hi bigadna hota hai hai so keep going.
Thanks a lot bhai! Thread me swagat hai aapka. Keep supporting!!Thank you so much for this marvellous story. I can say that ki ye forum ki best story me se ek hai. So keep writting and also updating. Aur hamne padha ki kuch logo ko story se problem hai to bhai aise logo ka hona na hona barabar kyonki kabhi kabhi forum pe aate hai aur man marji comment daal dete so never thought about them.
Next update me milega.Thank you bhai pr bhai baaki to thik h pr ye jo new skill mili h VEER ko uska to description dete
ThanksBaaki aapki es story ka ab tak ka sabse bestest update rha h ye vaala ummid h aage bhi aaise hi kmal dikhate rhenge
LIGHT CAMERA ACTION
Yes! That's what I intended to do.IT'S TOTALLY OUTSTANDING brother mtlb har ek chik dekhne ko mili h es update me or har ek chij ko samay or jrurt k anusar bakhubi dikhaya hai aapne
Of course! Jo banda Slogan ko tapka diya aur Aatish aur uske combined resources uske hawaale kar gaya. Wo koi aerra gerra toh ho nahi sakta?? Balhar realized ki Veer hi boss hai Mumbai ka. Usse already Mumbai me Slogan ki satta mil gayi. Uss se zyada khushi ki baat kya hogi uske liye? He'll be loyal to veer. We can say for now.Aaj 1st time Balhaar ne b VEER ko etni izzat di h vrna lgta tha jaise sirf majboori me vo VEER ko info de rha tha but ab lagta h jaise sach me dil se izzat krne lga h vo veer ki
Every update contains a cliffhanger. Call it my style. Ab aadat daal lo iski mate!Bs ek vinti h aapse chahe es aane vaale update k liye 2 din extra le lena vo chlega but es baar pura seen ek hi update me complete krna baaki sach khu to agr aap es update me ye suspense khtm kr dete to es update ka mja b khtm ho jata pr aapne aaisa nhi hone diya uske liye mai or mere sathi readers aapka tahe dil se aabhar vyakti krte hain
Nice update brother thanks
Really awesome update
amazing update
Mast update Bhai
Awesome update bro
Thanks guys!Uttam Lekhni ka Prayog Werewolf bhai...Waiting for Update Eagerly...