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[Werewolf]

Awesome update bhai keep posting

Werewolf bhai jabardast update...
But apne suspense me he chod diya

Superb update

Vadia update dost
Lagta hai pranjal ka kaand live chlne wala hai ab

BaDhiya tha update bhediya par mujhe ek baat hamesa se achhi nahi lagi aur btau me voh kya baat h voh baat ye h ki har baar suspens me chhod deta h, by the way mujhe maja aaya jab veer ne sweta ke sath aisa behave kiya. Abhi to aage aur maaja ayega.

Aur ab kaise ho Werewolf . Fit and fine ho gaya h ya aur time lagega dost tumko.

Amazing update brother

I hate it when ragini slapped veer
She was in shweta's side

Veer maaf na kare shweta ko yahi chaunga main agar har baar hi veer sab ko maaf karta firega to kya fyda iska matlab to yahi hua ki veer apni beizzati bhul gya hai issi liye shweta ya kisi aur ko maaf na kare ab veer request hi kar dakta hu

Khair ab us vakeel aur pranjal ki video play hogi shayad

To video me shayad shweta ke hotel ki recording aur bar ki recording with video ho skti h

Veer shweta ko maff kar dena chahiye...veer konsa video dikha Raha hai suspense he

truly awesome

Superb update

Nice update

Fantastic update

Fantastic mind-blowing update

Awesome update bro

Fantastic update..bhai

Pakka Pranjal ki krtut dikhaye ga Veer
Maza aaya bhai padh k jese humesa aata h apki story me awesome bhai

Jabardastt Updatee.

Ab lagta hai Pranjal ko uske kiye ki saza milegi. Uss harami ko aisi saza dena ke usko zindagi bharr yaar rahee.

Jabrdast update.....

Kaira ka scene thoda ho Jaye Vai.....

Bhai don't worry about other reviews, ap bas apna time nikal ke update dete raho.... And apni health ka bhi dhyaan Dena.

Super se uper awesome

Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm bilakhir shweta aur aur bhumika story mein inn hone jaa Rahi hein, ab dekhna yeh hai Veer konsi vdeo dikhane wala hai, kya Pranjal ka jhoot samne laye ga ya phir kuch dhammaka kere ga ?
Nidhi ki problem kab solve ho gi? kya veer khud ki kamayee se nidhi ka 5 m ka loan pay kere ga ya dada ke paison se qarza chukaye ga?
Kaera aur Sonu mein kab sulah ho gi? Ragni aur Veer ka milan kab ho ga?
kya Arohi Veer se apne pyar ka izhar ker paye gi? kya Ragni apne ghar mein chal rahi veer ki aabha aur uss ki saas ker dermyan sex ko jaan paye gi? kya woh bhi iss sab mein shamil ho gi?
kya Veer Nidhi ke husband ko sabaq sikha paye ga?
Esse hi aur bohat se sawal apne jawab ke muntezir hein, dekhtee hein humare priye werevolf kab kese aur kahan is saealon ke jawab updtes ke through den ge.
Update ka inttezar hai aur bechaini hai ke khatam hi nahi ho ahi................................
Awsome, Fantastic and Mindblowing story hai............................Keep Rockinggggggggggggggggggggg.

Jabardast update bhai
Dekho kon si movie chal rhi hai
Hum bhi popcorn leke padhenge

Jalwa dikhiga ab veer ka.....lagata hai Pranjal ke lawade lagne wale hai.

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Werewolf bhai....
Nice and lovely update....

बहुत ही शानदार और बेहतरीन अनुच्छेद । जबर्दस्त जगह पर रोक दिये हैं भाई। सबसे पहले आप अपना चोटिल हाथ ठीक करिए। हम आपके पाठककुल आपका अनुच्छेद के लिए बेताब हर समय रहेंगे लेकिन भाई जान है तो जहां है। अंतिम का वो शब्द "kutil muskaan" बहुत ही खतरनाक है। प्रांजल का हालत सोचके अभी से ही रोंगटे खड़ा हो रहे है। मैं एक बात पर बिस्वास करता हु की 1)किसी आदमी को मारने के बजाय जिंदा लाश बनाके रखना ज्यादा जरूरी है और 2)अपने शत्रु को अपने पास लेके रखने मे फाइदा है। अभी जो लग रहा है की प्रांजल अपने परिवार के सबके सामने बढ़िया से असली रूप मे प्रतीत हो जाएगा और कहीं इसी करतूत के चलते दादाजी अपना संपत्ति का जो अंग्श प्रांजल को दिये थे वो वापस ले तो क्या कहने। तब पूरा मजा आएगा क्योंकि प्रांजल के साथ न और कोई देगा न उसका बड़े भाई। खैर ये मेरा कल्पना मात्र लेखक का दिशा किधर है क्या पता। मुझे और लग रहा है जैसे रागिनी अपने अतीत की करतूत उजागर कर दी थी वीर को ठीक वैसा ही कुछ होगा श्वेता का वीर के प्रति। हो सकता है की वीर को अपना माँ और बहन के बारे मे श्वेता से ही कुछ हद तक पता चल जाए। देखते है आगे क्या होता है। लेखक को बहुत बहुत धन्यबाद इस चोटिल स्टीठी मे भी इतना जबर्दस्त अनुच्छेद हुमे उपहार देने के लिए। उनसे अनुरोध रहेगा की अपना चोट ठीक करके एक मेगा अनुच्छेद देने का। एक बात और है लेखक का चोट लगा है किसिको बचाने के चक्कर मे जो अपने आप मे बहुत बड़ा उपलब्धि है। धन्यबाद

As usual, another thrilling update. Pehle laga ki Pranjal hi Shweta to marwana chahta hai, per isase usko kya phayeda. use to hotel mil hi gaya hai. ye random robbery wala idea jyada accha hai.
detoxification skill bahut kaam ayegi, poison aur aisi hi kisi cheez ko veer apni body se nikal payega.
ye bina audio wali video, jo Pranjal ne court me dikhai thi, lagta hai ab audio ke saath chalegi.
ab suman aur abha se bhi aage badhein. ragini aur arohi to tayyar hain. kaera ke sath to tabhi maza ayega jab wo uske emotions ko samjhe aur enjoy kare. kya pata ye hi uski dawai ho. waise sonali ka kya haal chal hai, keval professional relationship, ya usase bhi aage. lekin sone per suhaga to tabhi hoga jab suhana ke saath agar sab nahi to kuch to ho. lekin lagata hai ab Shweta, Bhumika, aur Bhavana aur tej is me jyada ayengi. akhir familia arc jo hai. aur locket aur suman ki batayi hui us family ke baare me to koi hint mil hi nahi raha hai.

Behtareen super fantastic mind-blowing action update

वाव
पर अगला अपडेट के बाद ही रिव्यू दूँगा
क्यूंकि जिस जगह सस्पेंस से छोड़ा है वह टूटने के बाद ही कुछ लिखूँगा

Superb, awesome and mind blowing update hai Werewolf bhai,
behad hi shandaar lajawab aur amazing update hai,

Awesome update waiting 4 next

Bro lagta hai veer pranjel ko nanga karega

Or ha ek baar veer or sweta ki khul kar baat karvana jisse wo apne gile sikwe mita sake par veer ko apni mom se jaldi hi mil ana main to bolta hu sweta or veer ka talk bhavna ke samne hi hona cahiye

Or ab jakar sweta ke muh se sahi sabd nikla veer keliye mere bacche shabaash

Or sweta ko apni aoukaat main dekh mera dil katayi garden garden hogaya

Or sabhi sab mouj hai to to bina puch wali lomdi pranjal kaha hai

Bro yaar ragini ko veer se naraz mat karvao yaar excitement ki buri tarah maaa behen hojati hai

Or bhavna wala scean bhi thoda jaldi karvao uska exaitment sambhale nahi sambhal raha hai

Or nidhi madam ka bhi chapter hai

Or bro hosake to ragini ko hi veer ki patni banana

I know aap ki abhi tabiyat theek nahi hai

Main bas ye kehrahu ki suspense bahut jyada hogay hai

Or kuch nahi bro baki apki Story ke update ka intezaar rehta hai

Awesome bhai

Awesome

a satisfying update after a long time ... half satisfying actually ...

satisfying iss liye ki jaise hi veer told Shweta to get lost ... I felt ... ab time sahi hai ki Ragini isse thappad maare ... aur wohi hua ... well played ...

but there was a natural follow-up thought too ... that the slap will set the stage for a very emotionally charged scene between them ... if not ice-breaking make-up sex(nothing is more satisfying and relaxing than make-up sex) ... maybe a premature expectation ... so jaane do ... well scene to tha but not sufficiently emotional ... no expression of deep feelings ... mutual need ... no nothing ... he did not even grab her and press her against the wall with his body ... just a 3-4 second kiss ... not even a full blown french smooch that leaves them breathless and embarrassed/confused ... a missed literary opportunity by the author to set the pressure cooker roiling ...

But Ragini is fast emerging as my favourite ... she not only loves him ... but she owns him ... she's not only destined to get fucked by him ... and bear his children ... she's also destined to keep him connected to his humanity ... which she did by slapping him ... only she can do it ... only she has the strength, the character and the purity of heart ... all without any strings or restrictions ... not Nidhi(she has too many responsibilities of her own) ... Not Arohi(she is too uptight) ... not Kavya or Shreya or Saloni(they are too immature) ... not Bumika(she is emotionally stunted) ... not Suman or Aabha(they are mere Veer daasis) ... not divas like Sonia or Keara(they have too many internal insecurities that they need to come to terms with) ... not Shweta, Sumitra(they will be just available milfs) ... not Suhana(she will be dynamite in bed ...but she has her own agendas) ... only Ragini ... Bahvna and Tejal(hmmm ... maybe ... but they are enigmas as of now) ... did I miss anyone in the emerging harem ...

Only Ragini will understand his relationship with Pari and the System ... and help him nurture use and control it rather than be conrolled by it ... she is matchless ... but when will she be clothless ...

talking about the system ... on seeing Veer Shweta asked ... Why ??? ... how come she never asked ... How ??? ...

but an enjoyable udate over all ... and set the stage for another enjoyable update ... thanks ...

Agle update me Pranjal ki pant geeli hone waali hai ... by the way ... in one of your replies did you confirm(hint) ... that ... Pranjasl has a girlfriend ...

Superb update brooo
Awesome...
Amazing...

Waiting for next update brooo

Super update wolf bhai...aur ye camera action wala pranjal ka hoga..balhaar ki madad se uski gand tod di hogi veer ne

Bhariya...

Superb Update Bro...
Waiting for Next

Nice update bro

Superb mind blowing update Werewolf bhai lekin iss update mein kafi kuch ulajh Gaya hai...

Superb update bhai

Superb update

Nice update bro

Wolf Bro ab to mega update banta hai

भाई आपसे अनुरोध है किसिके उकसावे पर मत आइये। इस फॉरम मे ऐसे कुछ लोग है जिनको लिखने का ल नहीं आयेगा लेकिन किसिकों बुरा भला या ब्यंग करना अच्छी तरह आता है। इसी लिए उनलोगों पर अपना बिचार moderator के साथ साझा कर लीजिये। बहुत सारे ऐसे ही पार हो जाएंगे।

werewolf bhai solid reply.....with perfect explanation

Superb update

Werewolf Bhai ye to dusari graha ke m..c... Prani h inka kaam hi h writer ko gaali dena unhe bharkaha taaki Bo Jaan bujh ke story close kr de inki bajah se bahut si story close Hui h but aap inki baato m maat aao ye to h hi madar..c

Werewolf it's totally wrong, aise update q end krte ho yrrrrr, q hmre emotions k Saath khelte ho.

Haha bhai apne sahi kaha but aise suspense me rahene se uska maza hi kuch aur hai.
Hamare jaise riders kuch kahene se Writer sab apni story ka plot change to kerege nahi jo mil raha hai us hi maza le

Awesome,

par kya shweta bhi hambistar hogi.

Interesting

After all it's a tale of debauchery

Mindblowing update sirji....

क्या मियां, ऐन मौके पे खत्म कर दिया। कोई बात नहीं, थोड़ा इंतजार ही सही।
वैसे अपने हाथ का ध्यान रखे, लंबी छुट्टी ले और ठीक होने के बाद ही अगली किश्त दे।
पाठकों का मान रखने के लिए धन्यवाद।

Extraordinary update sir g

Lajawab shaandaar update and you are right health is first thing rest after that.

Maza ayega bhai, bilkul pura maza ayega bhai

बहुत ही रोमांचक अपडेट l अब आगे देखते हैं क्या होता है l कृपया अपने आप पर भी ध्यान दें l

Lage raho bhai maja aa gaya

Bhai ek suggestion meri or se ki aap salaah sab se liya karo lekin story line khudke hisaab se hi rakho. Kuch logo ka to kaam hi bigadna hota hai hai so keep going.

Keep it up bro

Buhut badiya update bhai

Nice update

Awesome update bhai waiting for next update

Thank you bhai pr bhai baaki to thik h pr ye jo new skill mili h VEER ko uska to description dete
Baaki aapki es story ka ab tak ka sabse bestest update rha h ye vaala ummid h aage bhi aaise hi kmal dikhate rhenge
LIGHT CAMERA ACTION
IT'S TOTALLY OUTSTANDING brother mtlb har ek chik dekhne ko mili h es update me or har ek chij ko samay or jrurt k anusar bakhubi dikhaya hai aapne
Aaj 1st time Balhaar ne b VEER ko etni izzat di h vrna lgta tha jaise sirf majboori me vo VEER ko info de rha tha but ab lagta h jaise sach me dil se izzat krne lga h vo veer ki
Bs ek vinti h aapse chahe es aane vaale update k liye 2 din extra le lena vo chlega but es baar pura seen ek hi update me complete krna baaki sach khu to agr aap es update me ye suspense khtm kr dete to es update ka mja b khtm ho jata pr aapne aaisa nhi hone diya uske liye mai or mere sathi readers aapka tahe dil se aabhar vyakti krte hain

Nice update

प्रणाम भाई सहाब

इस अनुच्छेद में काफी मोड़ थे खास कर श्वेता के साथ पर मुझे जो ज्यादा सही लगा वो था आभा का उस समय वीर के पास जाना जब वाकई बहुत गुस्से और उलझन में था।

ऐसी परिस्थिति में अक्सर इंसान खुद को ही नुकसान पहुंचता है ऐसे मे आभा ने वीर का साथ देकर बहुत ही ज़्यादा अछा किया

और रहा सवालः रागिनी भाभी का तो उनका हक्क बनता हैं वीर पे हात उठा दिया तो क्या बाद मे एक प्यारी सी किस भी तो मिलीं और इंसान को क्या चाहिए

मेरी शुभ कामनाएँ आप को अगले अनुच्छेद के लिए

Nice update brother thanks

Really awesome update

amazing update

Mast update Bhai

Uttam Lekhni ka Prayog Werewolf bhai...Waiting for Next Update Eagerly...

Awesome update bro

Congratulations for 1400 paget...

Nice updates

Nice update bro

Super update hai Bhai

lovely update ..aakhir veer ne bacha hi liya shweta ko par apne mission ko complete karne ke liye ..
lagta hai ab shweta sahi raste par aa gayi hai ..
ab veer kaunsa video dikhane jaa raha hai sab pariwar wali ko .shayad pranjal ke baare me hi ho jisme usne shweta ko fasaya tha ..

Gajjab update he.. veer ne bahut kuch planning ki h lagta h..is liye next update jaldi dena sir ab wait ni hoga

Bhai maze aa gye aap har bar story ko ek mazedaar mood pe la ke end kr dete ho jisse agle update ka aur bhi besabri se intezar rehta h

Nice super

Nice bohut shandar lugta hay Pranjal kee quber khudnay wali hay

N

Nice update

Ek aur dhasu update.
Shweta ka mamala badi asani se nipat gya lekin dekhna padega kisi ko koi shaq hota hai ke nai ke kaise Veer in remote locations pe pahuch jata hai. Mere ko lagta hai Arohi aisa kuch soch sakti hai.
Khair abhi lagta hai Veer, Pranjal ka kartut 4k me dikhane wala hai. Next update me maza aayega.

Awesome update

Best to ignore the trolls ... mood kharab hone ke alawa kuch nahi hota ... you don't owe us anything ... heal, live your life and write ...

Zabardast update

Fantastic update bhai

Super excited update bro

Fantastic update keep going

awesome update man! This story has left your past story in dust! Keep writing!

super awsm update to gud Luvd it

Nice update & for 1400 page

Nice update bhai

Wow what a update! i really like it but end mein tumne phirse dhokha de diya....!
Phirse suspense badha diya....!
Keep writing.....!

Nice update bhai... Sex scene short tha but it's ok! I think veer is showing video of that footage about the contract sign!!

Superb Update...

Bahut he shandar update bhai veer ne ab kiski movie laga di par kuch toh kiya he h usne balahar ke hatho se sayad saboot ikkhate karwaye h aur kahte h na jab khud ke pichwade pe padti h tabi sab dikhta h aj shweta ko pyar beta sab yaad agaya aur bachpan se jo veer ne saha abi toh veer ke chutiye baap ki akal bi thikane lagani h

nice 1

Nice update

Awesome update

fabulous bro waiting for more

Fantastic zabaradast lajawab update waiting for next

Nice update bhai
Ab Ragini ka bhi number lagao bhai veer ke sath aabha ki tarah

Bhai zabardast update hy

Bahut shandar and zabardast update bro . Keep writing like this

Werewolf jee

Please
Ragini ka bhi number lagwa do Veer ke saath
Bechari bahut tadap rahi hai Veer se CHUDWANE ke liye

Bahut intzar ho gaya na

Aapne bhi kaha tha jald aayega Ragini ka number

Bura laga ho meri baat to dil se sorry

Osm update

Ding Superb update hai bhai single hand acha control rakha hai keep updating fabulously best of luck.

Wating bhai..

Waiting...

Action is onnn it's mean

I'd banane se pehle rule acche se padh Lena chahiye tha.... And post ka means Kya hai vro ???batao jra Hume bhi?? ... Tum jo bhi text, image, videos, graphics vagerha kucch bhi post kar rhe ho vo post hi hota hai. Our rule me likha hai "political post is not allowed"... Be careful and enjoy dude

Gajab ka update yara.

Bhai aisa kion lag raha hai jaisy Pranjal us movie ka hero hai apni kali kartoton k sath waisy jo b hai maza aya update prh kr waiting for next and how's your hand now.

Maybe 13 may ko . ( time table ke hisaab se )

May be
Matlb 14 may mere bhai

Bahot hi shandaar updated tha itne chot dene wali mahila ko itni asani se to maaf nahi karega veer par bhumika ka najariya badla veer ke liye iss incident ke baad ye janna hai aur ye Lights camera action ka kya chakkar hai beshabri se agle update ka intezar hai

Awesome update bro

Waiting for more

Waiting bhai

Werewolf update was awesome but I have a request that Veer should use limbo technique on Pranjal's Luli , then he will start giving answers like a hen

mujhe lagta hai ki video me veer ki maa hogi.

Bahot behtareen shaandaar update bhai
Yeh Veer ko si fiml dikhane jaa raha sabko lagta h Pranjal ki pol kaala chittha khulne jaa raha h
Dekhte h aage kia hota h
Bahot behtareen

Bahut hi lajabab update wolfe bro...
Aakhir veer ne sweta ko bacha hi liya, par maaf shayad hi kabhi kar paye...
Aur ab sweta bhi ragini ke sath hi hai, bhoomika ko bhi wahi bula li hai...
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Khair, agar veer sweta ko in future maaf kar deta hai to , aage chal kar usse do do maatao ka pyaar milega.
Kyunki aaj ki huyi ghatnao se bhale hi veer jyada prabhavit nhi huaa par sweta ko jarur prabhavit kiya.
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Khair, ab ye dekhna hai ki veer apne parivaar baalo ko ko kiss ke barbaadi ka recording dikhane wala hai....
I think ki ye pranjal ke khilaf koi saboot hoga jisse sweta aur bhoomi ko unka hotel wapas mil jaaye.
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Ek baar fir se mind blowing update bhai. Dil jeet liye aapne.

Bas thoda sex scene achhe se dikhaya jaaye toj super se aur v super ho jaayegi ye story.

waise to ye clip hotel ki honi chahiye jahan Pranjal ne Shweta ko moorkh banaya tha, with full audio, lekin kahin ye mandir ki to nahin, jahan se remote se Pranjal ne dadaji ko seedhiyon se girata tha.... just a wild thought.

Bhai aaj update aaega?

Awesome update bro maza aa gaya hai



Waiting for the next update bro

Pranjal, may his soul rest in peace!

two polls ...

1. Veer ka baccha sabse pehale kaun paida karegi ... Nidhi, Abha, Ragini, Suhana(she needs motherhood to calm down) ... ya koi aur ...

2. Which is the most anticipated threesome ... Keara+Sonia, Suman+Saloni, Aarohi+Kavya, Shweta+Bhumika, Nidhi+Shreya, Tejal+Arohi ... ya koi aur ...

मेरे हिसाब से अगर:
1) त्रिमुखी यौनता के लिए: अ)रागिनी+सुमन;आ)काएरा+सोनिया और इ)सोनिया+सुहाना
2) बच्चा पैदाइश करने के लिए: अ)रागिनी, आ) सुहाना और इ) आभा
लेखक को अनुरोध है की इस पर ज्यादा तबजजो न दें, यह सिलसिला अगर सही हो तो बहुत अच्छा लेकिन अगर नहीं हुआ तो भी अच्छा। आप अपना हिसाब से इस कहानी को आगे बढ़ाते चलिये। हम सब पाठककुल आपके साथ है और आगे भी रहेंगे। धन्यबाद।

veer ka bachcha aur threesome ka sawal mast hai ,,dekhte hai aage kya hota hai ..

mere khayal se koi bhi nahi jo veer ke bachche ki maa bann sake ..

threesome sabse best kaera aur sonia ka ho sakta hai ..

What about a) Kavya and Arohi???? and b) Nidhi madam??

Very nice update wese aap se ek request hai story mai pics add kro jayada se jayada
Or hai....
Wo update ko lekar jo bakchodi ki maa bhen kiya gya hai
Writer ✍ phle apni health,mind,or time phle dekhega story baad mai

Right

werewolf Bhai kya aaj update ayega. Actually Tuesday wala update Monday ke din ka tha is hisab se aaj update ana chahiye

Clear me is veer still pissed with ragini or is it ok now

Jabrdast mindblowing superbbb speechless update.......
waiting for next update......

Bhai aap update kab dy rhy hy apni story py

Waiting for the update sir

very nice update

Waiting for next update bro

Waiting

Werewolf aaj dega

Besabri se pratiksha hai aapke naveen lrkhan ki

Same reaction mera hai kitne dino baad aya hu story per pichla sab bhool sa gaya tha abhi puri storie dobara parhi to thori yaadasht wapis aa gayi hai....Aur ab review bhi dene pare gye kitne update aage nikal gye hp aisa lag raha hai college assignment submit karne wala hu Lekin koi na ye bhi seh le gye.....Akhir ab tak 1 update to 20k words ka aa he gaya ho ga Kasam se agar abhi bhi 20k words ka update na mila to Jahanum tak peecha karu ga ap ka Chale phir ab review shuru karne ki baari

Ha aisa hota hai kya Werewolf jee

Awesome update

Ummmid hai ajka update 11 bje ke pehle mil Jaye

Great update Werewolf bhai.
End me achha suspense banaya he. Pranjal ke bare me hi hoga par kese sab hua wo janna interesting hoga.
To court case harne ke baad ab shweta ko samjh nahi aa raha ki kya kare wo. Kaha jaye ? Jis pe bharosa kiya tha usne hi to kaata he. Aur pariwar walo ne bhi sath na diya. Vese uss pariwar se umeed bhi nahi ki wo kuch sense wale decision le. Har koi chutiya he uss ghar me. Shweta nikal chuki he marne wahi veer bhi nikla he to bas apna mission pura karne ko.
Wahi ghar me sab chinta kar rahe he ab shweta ki. Manorath apne nalayak beto se keh raha he. Wahi bhumika apni maa ki chinta kar rahi he. Khud ko useless samjh rahi he jo wo he filhal. Aage kya hoga kise pata. Jyada bhi nahi kuch keh sakte kyuki court me shweta ke khilaf hi to sab bola he.
Court case hone ke baad, shweta ka ro ro ke kehne ke baad bhi ghar ke kisi bade ne ye na kaha pranjal ko ki wo hotel wapis shweta ke naam kar de. Brijesh chutiya itne saal shweta ke sath raha to ye nahi jaan paya ki shweta ke liye ye hotel kya mayne rakhta he ? Kya importance he uss hotel ki shweta ki life me. Agar janta to usse thoda shaq jarur hota iss sab par ki kyu shweta apna hotel pranjal ke naam kar degi jab ghar me dono bas ek normal taai aur bhatije he. Par nahi sab dekhte rehna he. Sawal nahi karne kisi se. Bas sawal tabhi karenge jab samne wala shakhs Veer hoga. Kyuki usse hi sawal karne aate he ghar ke unn teeno chutiyo ko.
Veer ko dekh shweta bhi ab sab kuch yaad kar rahi he. Jise kabhi ek maa ka pyaar nahi diya usne hi uski jaan bachai. Par ab kya fayda maafi mangne se. Aur ye bhi pakka he ki veer maaf nahi karega abhi to. Ragini ke ghar laya he to ragini shweta ki baate sunn ke ab wo wahi feel kar rahi he. Ragini aur shweta ek hi tarah ke dard se gujre he. Par veer nahi chahta ki shweta yaha ruke. Aur rukne bhi kyu de jab shweta ke sath uska kuch rishta he hi nahi. Achha kiya sidhe hi bol diya ki shweta uski maa nahi he. Aur ab kitna bhi try karle, achhi baate karle, veer ko jarurat nahi uske pyaar ki. Uski maa he. Aur jald hi wo milega bhi unse.
Shweta ko bahar leke ja raha tha par ragini ne gaal laal kar diya aur ye bhi jata diya ki ye ghar uska he. Wo tay karegi ki shweta yaha rukegi ya nahi. Par thappad maar ke veer ko jarur dukhi kar diya usne. Maafi bhi maang rahi he wo. Kiss karke to jese ragini ne sab tanav hi shant kar diya unn dono ke bich. Perfect wife material he ragini. Janti he veer ko kese shant Karna he tensed situation me. Wahi veer ka sath diya aabha ne. Suman ne hi bheja hoga shayad. Par veer ki sewa karne wo khush he ye bhi jata diya usne. Ab balhaar ne bhi apna kaam kar diya he. Ab lagta he pranjal jyada samay apna waqt enjoy nahi kar payega. Lagne wali he sale ki.
Aur lag bhi wahi raha he. Ghar me sab ko betha ke veer clip dikha raha he. Sare log ghar me he to pranjal bhi hoga na ?? Well jo bhi he clip me wo pata chal hi jayega.
Ek baat aur he uss nayi mili skill ka use kiya hoga veer ne maybe. Kuch to kaam aayi hi hogi inn 2 din me.
2 baate aur he.
Paheli ye ki no matter what shweta ka past raha he. Par usse ye sabit nahi hota ki usne veer ke sath galat nahi kiya. Past dikha ke thoda humdardi jarur hogi par shweta ke actions ko justified nahi kar sakte. Usse ek simple kaam Karna tha veer ko maa ka pyaar dena aur wo bhi usne na kiya. Hua nahi wo baat nahi he balki usne to veer ko jese ignore hi kiya itne saal. Jarur galat hua hoga uske sath par uska matlab ye to nahi ki wo kisi bachhe ko wo pyaar bhi na de jiske liye wo uss ghar me aayi thi. ( Vese kya pata shweta se shadi kis liye ki brijesh ne. Garmi mitane ya veer ko ek maa dene ) itna hi nahi balki usne bhumika ko bhi veer se close hone se roka he. Bhumika ke mann me ulta veer ko leke baate bhi bhari gayi. Kya ye sahi kiya shweta ne ?? Aur uper se Veer ko ghar se nikalne me bhi shamil thi.
Dusri baat ye ki jab bhavna veer ke sath hogi tab veer se jarur puchegi itne saal kese raha etc. Tab veer bhi sab bata hi dega. Shweta se leke pranjal tak sari baate. Tab majha aayega jab bhavna ko pata lagega ki kese shweta ne uske bachhe ke sath galat kiya kuch property ke liye. Jawab mangegi bhavna shweta se. Wo scene dekhna majha aayega. Shweta ki aankho me sharam hogi to bhavna ki aankho me gussa.
Pranjal ke sath vivek ka chehra bhi samne aayega. Aur shweta ka bhi aana chahiye kyuki teeno ne hi veer ko ghar se nikalne ke liye sab plan kiya tha.
Waiting for next update.

Fantastic update bro. Sorry for responding late, as I was out for some important work.

Waiting

Waiting

??

Are bhai update ka kya huya.....??

Intezaar rahega....

Wating bhai...

Besabri se intezar hai bhai

Bhai Always Waiting for your Superb update

Waiting for next update bhai

Next update

Waiting

Bhai intezar kre ya soo jaye ??

Waiting for update

Matlab kel hi na

Waitingggg

Waiting Bro

Bhai kitne time aur hai

Waiting

Warewolf bhaiya 12 bje update de rhe konse waale mai nhi bta rha

Ab toh neend araha hai

Bas update aa jaye

Waiting for update...

still waiting for the update keep posting

Kitne baje tak aayega update?????

Update 85 has been posted.

 

[Werewolf]

Index has been updated.

By the way, ye update 4.8k words ka hai. Also, gifs daale par unka size bada hone ke kaaran, I think they are not playing. Sed lyf bruh!!

Anyways, I'll try to edit them later. Keep supporting!!!

 

[Naik]

Tow Veer n Pranjal se saara kabool naaama kerwa ker gher walo ko dikha dia jisse gher walo ki aankhe khul gayi ki kon sahi tha or kon galat
Sweta ki aankhe khul gayi mera bachcha
baherhal dekhte h ab Pranjal ka kia hota h or Veer k saath kia kerta h ya fir Veer Pranjal ka kia kerta h
Behtareen zaberdast shaandaar lajawab update bhai

 

[Vik1006]

Update - 85 ~ Bringing down the Bastard.
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Ab tak...

Veer : Sshhhhh!!! Just keep watching!!!

Usne uth ke side me rakhi popcorns uthaayi aur sabke haatho me thama dii.

Wo waapas se apni jagah jaake baitha aur usne pendrive me ek folder open kiya aur usme ek video play kar dii.

Video ke shuru me kuch text likh ke aaye...

LIGHTS! CAMERA! ACTION!!!!

Aur fir wo Video clip play hona shuru ho gayi.

Ab aage...

Raat ka samay tha aur Veer ke puraane ghar me sabhi maujood the. Hall me hi lagi badi LED TV par Veer ne ek video clip play kii hui thi.

Poore main hall me andhera tha. Aisa lag raha tha jese kisi theatre me aake baith gaye ho. TV ki screen bhi behad badi thi, kareeban 55 inch, toh bilkul cinema waali feeling aa rahi thi sabhi ko.

Unn sab ke haatho me Veer ne ek ek popcorn ke packet thamaaye hue the. Veer ke liye jese ye kisi movie se kam nahi tha.

Kavya jo uske baayi taraf baithi hui thi usse curiosity se dekhe jaa rahi thi.

Kavya : Bataiye na bhaiya!!! Ye sab kya chal raha hai?

Veer : Mene kaha na bas dekhti jao.

Kavya : Par... Mmmphhhh!!!?? (´⊙ω⊙`)！

Iss se pehle ki wo bechaari kuch keh paati Veer ne uski goad me rakhe popcorn ke packet se haath me kuch popcorn lii aur seedhe uske muh me thoos dii.

Kavya : Ughhyuuu~ *nom* *nom* ummuaawaa.... *nom*

Veer (smiles) : Enjoy and just watch.

Sawaal toh Arohi ke mann me bhi tha. Par jis tarah se Veer ne Kavya ke muh me popcorn thoose, usse dekhne ke baad Arohi ne apna muh band rakhna hi behtar samjha.

Aur fir sabhi ki nazre tv screen par jamm gayi.

Video jese hi shuru hua, Veer ek gazab ke black tuxedo me tha, andar white shirt ke saath, wo khada hua tha ek mirror ke saamne.

Wo apne baal bana raha tha. Apni kaali ghani zulfo ko set kar wo sheeshe me khud ko taiyaar kar raha tha.

Aur idhar Kavya ne jese hi usse screen me iss qadar dekha wo kahi kho gayi.

Kavya : Hoooo~ Bh-Bhaiya~ So handsome... (๑♡⌓♡๑)

Fir achanak hi usse jese dhyaan aaya.

Kavya : Ahhh!!?? Wait! Bhaiya? Are you wearing that same shirt now? Uwu~ Iska matlab ye video aaj ki hai. Hai na? Hai na? ✧\(>o<)ﾉ✧

Arohi (sarr par tapli maarte hue) : Video par dhyaan do. E-Even though...

Arohi (khuspusaate hue) : He does looks handsome... *blushes*

Kavya : Ouch~ (｡•́︿•̀｡) Kya dii? Video hi toh dekh rahi hu na? Maara kyu aapne mujhe?

Veer : Tum dono...! Ssshhhh! Shaant!

Kavya : Ughhh!!

Arohi : ....

Vivek : Veer? Ye sab kya mazaak hai? Kya tumne yaha hume apna vlog dikhaane ke liye ikhatta kiya hai kya?

Veer : Bilkul nahi! Jab video dekhenge tab hi toh pata chalega na?

Vivek (mann me) : Akhir karna kya chaahta hai ye Veer.

Aur uske baad achanak hi scene change ho gaya.

Veer ke saamne Bhumika maujood thi. Scene tha Ragini ke ghar ka.

Ye scene aate hi Bhumika ki bauhe sikud gayi. Aur wo soch me padd gayi.

'Ye... Ye toh... Ye toh kal ki baat hai. V-Veer ne mujhe record kiya tha??? P-Par kyuuu???'

Veer par usne nazre daali par Veer toh jese poora ka poora tv par focused tha.

Aur idhar Bhumika samet Shweta ki chinta badhti jaa rahi thi.

Fir scene me hui baat shuru hui.

~~~

Veer : Toh kya hua tha? Aap bataengi mujhe?

Bhumika : Ab mein kya kahu Veer? Kya bolu? Kis muh se bolu? Ab toh kuch bacha hi nahi hai. Mein aur mom dono hi... guilt ke iss sagar me doobe hue hai.

Veer : ...

Bhumika : Sab kuch *sniff* Sab kuch uss Pranjal ne kiya hai Veer. Sab kuch uska hi kiya dhara hai. *sniff* Wo hi uss din hotel aaya tha. Mom ko dinner pe leke gaya ye keh ke ki... *sniff* ki wo Mom ko relax karwaana chaahta hai. Next day bhi aaya woh. And I thought, he was doing all this for mom. *sniff*

Veer : ...

Bhumika : Aur fir... Uss raat jab mom aayi uske next din hi ye pata lagta hai ki usne Mom se sign karwa ke poori ki poori hotel hi apne naam kar lii hai.

Veer : How??

Bhumika (rote hue) : I don't know! I don't know Veer!!! Uske paas pata nahi hotel ke original papers kaha se aa gaye. He even modified the terms and conditions. Papers me usne changes karwaaye ki wo hotel ab uska hone jaa raha hai.

Veer : Alright!!!

Veer utha aur Bhumika ko wahi chorr wo baahar nikal gaya. Wo bechaari bas roti rahi.

~~~

Aur idhar hall me sabhi log shaanti se sab kuch video me hota dekh rahe the. Shweta aur Bhumika pal pal Veer ki taraf bechain hoke nazre ghumaati par keval niraasha hi unhe milti, kyuki Veer unn dono ki taraf dekh hi nahi raha tha.

Agle hi pal ek baar fir scene change hua. Iss scene me Veer bike drive kar raha tha. Shayad usne apni breast pocket me camera set karke rakha hua tha. Jiske zariye wo sab kuch record kar ke ek video ke roop me sab kuch prastut kar raha tha.

~~~

Wo utra aur kisi jagah pe gaya. Andar teen chaar lafange baithe hue the. Aur Veer ne ghuste hi unhe chaukanna kar diya.

Veer : Pranjal kaha hai?

Ladka 1 : Kaun hai bey tu? Aur bina puche andar kese aaya?

Veer bina kuch kahe aage badha aur uss ladke ke sofe par seedhe apni laat de maari. Veer ki taang uss ladke ke chehre ke bagal se hoke tezzi se nikli aur peeche sofe par jaake lagi.

*BAAAAAAAMMMMMMM*

Ladka 1 : S-Saale teri toh...

Par wo bolne laayak na bacha. Kyuki agle hi shan Veer ne uska haath pakda aur...

*Ding*

LIMBO!!!

*CRACCKKKKKK*

Ladka 1 : AAAAAARRRRGGHHHH!!!! M-Maaro saale ko... AAAAHHHH Mera haath...

Aur uske baad toh...

Kuch bataane ki zaroorat hi nahi ki unke saath kya hua tha. Palak jhapakte hi wo saare dard se karaahte hue neeche dale hue the.

Ladka 1 : H-Haaahhhh!! M-Mujhe chorr do... Aaaarrrghhhh!! M-Mera haath... Mera haath...

Veer (smiles) : Chorr dunga!! Bas ye bata do, Pranjal kidhar hai??

Ladka 1 : M-Mein... Mein nahi...

Veer : Ohhhh~ Toh shayad mujhe dard aur badhaana padega.

Ladka 1 : N-Nahiiii!!! Nahi!!!! Mein... Mein bataata hu.

Veer (smiles) : Good~

Ladka 1 : W-Wo... Wo Silver...

Veer : Hmm??

Ladka 1 : Silver Club!! Wo xxxxxxx road waala pub.

Veer (smiles) : Nice!!

*Ding*

LIMBO!!!

*CRAAAACKKKK*

Ladka 1 : Ayiiiiii aaaargggghhhh!!!

Wo ladka kisi kutiya kii tarah ek baar fir bilbila utha. Aur scene ek aur baar badal gaya.

~~~

Idhar hall me sabhi jigyaasa liye sab kuch hota dekh rahe the. Kavya ki aankho me toh sabse zyaada chamak thi.

Kavya (blushes) : W-Wowwww!!! S-So cool!!! Bhaiyaaa~

Arohi : K-Kahi Veer ye sab...??

Usne Veer ko dekh pucha. Tabhi ek sansani macha dene waala khayaal uske mastishq se hote hue guzra jis se Arohi ka poora badan sihar utha.

Arohi : Veer!! K-Kahi tum...!?

Uske sawaal par Veer ki muskaan aur fel gayi. Arohi ne jab usse mud ke dekha toh Veer ki wo evil smile dekh uss ke poore badan me ruye khade ho gaye.

Wo sahi soch rahi thi matlab. Veer Pranjal ke saath kuch karne waala tha.

Aur beshaq, Video me scene aaya fir... Silver Club ka.

~~~

Veer Silver Club me enter hua aur... Waha ka nazaara ekdum hi uttejit kar dene waala tha.

Silver club ek high class pub tha. Ghuste se hi Veer ko andaaza lag chuka tha. Saamne ki stage par ladkiya chote chote kapdo me thirakti hui, apni sexiness showcase kar rahi thi. Harr rhythm, harr beat pe unki patli kamar hil rahi thi.

Aur neeche couples toh kahi strangers ek dusre ke saath apni kamar hilaane me lage hue the. Ek dusre ke badan se badan milaane me lage hue the.

Sexy uttejit kar dene waale gaane loudly baj rahe the. Disco lights se poora club jagmaga raha tha.




Aur unn thirakte hue logo ke beech se Veer apna raasta bana ke guzarta jaa raha tha. Jaha baaki sabhi ki aankho me nasha tha, khumaari chhaayi hui thi. Veer ki aankhein kisi baaj ki tarah kisi ko dhundh rahi thi.

Apne agal bagal maujood nashe me naachte hue logo ko nazar andaaz kar wo aage badhta raha.



Aur kuch hi palo me, usse jiski talaash thi, wo uski aankho ke saamne tha.

Pranjal!!!

Uss se thodi hi duri par wo kuch ladko aur ladkiyo ke saath naachta hua paaya gaya. Veer ne jese hi usse dekha toh uske chehre par ek muskaan fel gayi. Aur, wo aage badha.

Pranjal idhar apne khaas dosto ko hotel milne ki party de raha tha. Daaru se lekar, naach gaane ke intezaam ke liye wo sabhi ko yaha aaj Silver club me leke aaya hua tha.

~~~

Idhar Veer ke ghar me baithe jese hi Pranjal ko ladkiyo ke saath naachte hue dekha wo bhi aise club me toh sabke hosh hi udd gaye.

Kavya (blushes) : Ahhh!! Y-Ye sab??

Manorath : Karunessshhhhh!!!! Ye sab kya haiiii???? Ye kya dekh raha hu mein???? Kya kar raha hai tumhara ladka ye???

Karunesh : P-Papa jii...

Manorath ekdum se behekte hue bol uthe. Unhe apni aankho par visvaash hi nahi ho raha tha. Jis Pranjal ko wo doodh ka dhula samajh rahe the wo aisa nikla? Par ye toh kuch bhi nahi tha. Aage jese unhe aur bhi jhatke lagne waale the.

~~~

Idhar waapas se video me... Woofers me gaane itni loud baj rahe the ki uska Bass itna zyaada tha, Veer apni chhaati me unn vibrations ko bhali bhaati mehsoos kar paa raha tha. Club ki vibe hi alag thi.

Aur Pranjal jo halke nashe me naach raha tha wo jab muda toh saamne usse Veer nazar aa gaya.

Pehle wo chaunka, fir muskuraate hue wo Veer ke nazdeek aaya.

Pranjal : Hahahahaha~ If it isnt you my bastard brother!!?

Veer : ...

Pranjal : Aao aao... Tum bhi aao... Hahahaha~

Aur Veer ko kheechte hue wo apne dosto ke paas le gaya. Aaj jese wo behad khushi me tha.

Dosto se pehchaan kara ke, fir Veer ko wo bar side laaya jaha log shots aur drinks le rahe the.

Pranjal : Tum yaha kya kar rahe ho? Haan? Kisi ladki ne chut nahi dii kya aaj? Hahahahaha~ lag toh yahi raha hai. Ekdum suit vuut me haan? Dil tod ke bhaag gayi lagta. Hahahahaha~

Veer : ...

Pranjal : Wese aaj mein khush hu. Hahahaha~ Boht khush. Toh aaj tumhe jo peena ho piyo. Bill mere upar. Apne dushman ke prati itna dildaar toh ho hi sakta hu mein. Hahahahahaha~

Aur waiter ko bol ke Pranjal ne apne aur Veer ke liye drinks mangwaa lii.

Wo pee raha tha aur yaha Veer bhi pee raha tha.

Par jaha Pranjal ko nasha chadhta jaa raha tha. Veer ekdum tip top aur sober condition me tha. Usse koi nasha hi nahi chadh raha tha. Uske hontho par bas ek qaatilana muskaan saji hui thi.

Inn sab ka kaaran tha...

DETOXIFICATION!!!

Uski nayi skill. Usse Pari ke bol apne mann me yaad aane lage.

[Master! This skill is different. Naam se lag raha hoga ki ye poison detoxify karegi but no. Aisa nahi hai. It detoxifies the damage done by liquor and cigarettes. Dusre shabdo me, yadi aap sharaab ya smoke karte ho toh Detoxification skill usme maujood nasheele padaartho ko detox kar degi. Na hi aapki body me koi harm hoega aur na hi aapko nasha chadhega. So, now you are immune to drunken-ness.]

Yahi reason tha jo Veer mazze me Pranjal ke saath drink kar raha tha. He had nothing to lose.

Sabse behtar baat thi ki ye skill ON ya OFF kari jaa sakti thi. Toh Veer usse off kar alcohol ke nashe me doob bhi sakta tha yadi chaahe toh.

Par filhaal, wo ON thi.

Chaturaayi se Veer ne drinks par drinks mangwaayi aur Pranjal ke saath wo peeta gaya. Nashe me dhutt hone ka wo naatak karne laga.

Idhar Pranjal usse nashe me doobte dekh khud bhi nashe me ghum hone laga.

Aur fir, Veer ne apni chaal chalna shuru kii. Shatranj ka pehla pyaada usne badha diya.

Veer : Aisa kyu kiya tumne!?

Pranjal : *hic* Kya kaha? Mene aisa kyu kiya? *hic* S-Saale madarchod!!! Sab tere kaaran!! Sab tere kaaran!! Yadi tu na hota... *hic* toh aaj sab kuch mera hota... Par tuuu....

Veer : ...

Pranjal : Tere kaaran mera saara plan chaupat ho gaya. *hic* Tere kaaran... *hic* M-Mein bhula nahi hu. Banquet me jo tune mere saath kiya... Meri itni beizzati... Sab yaad hai mujhe...

Veer : Aur tumne jo mere saath kiya uska kya?

Pranjal : H-Huh!?? *hic* Haraami wo sab tu... tu deserve karta hai. Saale... Tu deserve karta hai...

Veer : Ohhhh! Tumhi the na!? Jisne mujhe ghar se baahar nikalwaaya!??

Pranjal : *hic* Hahahaha~ tujhe ab maalum pad raha hai!??? Hahahahahaa~ Koi itna bewakoof kese ho sakta hai bc? *hic*

Veer (smiles) : Kese nikalwaaya aur tumne mujhe?

Pranjal : Hahahahahahahaha~ Abey tu ab tak nahi samajh paaya? *hic* Sab kuch mera plan tha gaandu... *hic* Mera plan... Vivek bhaiya ki company se wo special slippery oil... *hic* Mene hi toh daala tha... Tere perro ke neeche... Hahaha~ Jab tu gira tha na... Mere dil ko itni zyaada khushi kabhi mehsoos nahi hui thi. Saara prasaad... *hic* neeche... Aur tu baahar... Hahahaha~

Veer : Nice!! Aur!!? Isse dekh ke kuch yaad aaya?

Veer ne apne blazer ki inner pocket se fir kuch nikaala aur table par rakh diya.

Ye wahi tha.

Manorath ki wheelchair ka wo modified pahiya. Aur usse dekhte hi Pranjal thoda chaunka aur fir usse apne haatho me kheech liya.

Pranjal : S-Saale!!!! *hic* Y-Ye tere paas kese aaya haraamkhor? Haan?

Veer : Tune hi Dada jii ke sath wo sab karwaya tha na? Bol!!!

Pranjal : Hahahahahaha~ Tujhe pata chal gaya!? *hic* Haan saale!!! Uss budhau ko itni baar samjhaaya mene... *hic* Ki mere hawaale kar de zameen... *hic* Madarchod samajhta hi nahi raha... *hic* hahahahaha~ Fir kya? Tapakwa diya! Kherr manao mera dil... *hic* Arre mera dil bada hai. Hehehe~ Jaan se nahi tapkaaya usko... Bolo? *hic* Hu na mein best!? *hic* Iss pahiye ko mene boht paise deke banwaaya tha hahaha~

Veer : Aur fir ye hotel?

Pranjal : Haan gaandu haan! Hahahahaha~ *hic* meri hi chaal thi. Arre apun ne hi kiya re. Arohi dii aur wo pagli Kavya... Saala *hic* pehle hi tere naam sab kar ke baith gayi. *hic* Mein kya karta? Lund hilaata? *hic* T-Toh apun ne bhi... *hic* Apun ne bhi thaan lii... Apun saala *hic* b-badi macchli ko pakdega seedhe. T-Toh isliye?

Veer : ...

Pranjal : Isliye apun wo teri... *hic* Arre wo kya kehte hai? *hic* Arre... W-Wo.. haan!!! Teri sauteli Maa~ hahahahaha~ *hic* Toh apun... Apun uske paas gaya. Uss pagli ko bhi ullu banaana itna asaan nikla... *hic* Saala sab chutiye hai. Hehehe~ Duniya hi chutiya hai. Apun jo chaahta hai... *hic* Usse paa ke rehta hai...!!!

Veer : ...

Pranjal : Aur... Aur.. *hic* aur ek raaz ki baat batau?

Veer : !!!?

Pranjal : Apun ne... *hic* Mene na... Wo hotel poori ki poori aaj hi ek boht bade iss shejer ke don ko bech dii hai. Hehehehe~ Ab apne paas rokda hi rokda hai... Karodo rupaya... Hehehehe~ *hic* ladki chodo... Daaru piyo... Masti karo *hic*... Aur ab mein uss Don se jud chuka hu. Saale!!! *hic* Ab teri khair nahi... Agle number tera hi Veer!!!

Veer : Ohh!? But still... Kyu kiya tumne ye? Aur kya mila?

Pranjal (cheekhte hue) : Kya mila???? HARAMKHORRRR!!!! *hic* Tera kaaran... Wo chali gayi... *hic* India chorr ke... *hic* Mujhse dur... Sab tere kaaran!!!

Aur itni ho rahi baato me pehli baar Veer ko ek jhatka laga.

Veer : Huh??? K-Kaun???

Pranjal : *hic* Wo chali gayi... Wo chali gayi... *hic* Mein tujhe zindagi bhar maaf nahi karunga... Teri duniya *hic* nark bana dunga... *hic*

Veer : H-Heyyy kaun... Kis... Kis ki baat kar rahe ho.

Veer ne usse jhanjhora par... Pranjal nashe me choor choor ho chuka tha toh woh talli hoke wahi table par hi dherr ho gaya.

'Damn it!!!! Who was he referring to??? K-Kaun bhala!!???'

Aur itna sab kuch ho jaane ke baad. Video band ho gayi.

~~~

Jese hi video khatam hui. Poore hall me ek ghanghor sannaata chhaaya hua tha.

Sab ke hosh ude hue the. Of course, siwae Veer ke. Wo toh popcorn khaane me laga hua tha.

'Hmm? This butter flavour is indeed good.'

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Aur fir,

"KARUNESSSSSSHHHHHHH!!!!!!"

Manorath ki ek zordaar dahaad poore hall me goonj gayi. Sab apni apni jagah se khade ho gaye.

Manorath ka shareer gusse se kaanp raha tha. Aankhein ekdum gusse se aag baboola ho chuki thi. Aur aaj sabhi unhe iss roop me dekh dang reh gaye. Thoda darr bhi gaye.

Arohi sab kuch bhauchakki sii dekhi thi abhi. Uska mind kaam karna band kar chuka tha jese. Kavya bechaari ko itna bada jhatka laga tha ki woh kuch grasp hi nahi kar paa rahi thi.

Wo jaanti thi ki Pranjal bhaiya uske matlabi the aur sahi nahi the par ye sab? Wo itna gir chuke the aur aise the iski usne aaj tak kabhi kalpana bhi nahi kii hui thi. She was totally shocked.

Par sabse bada jhatka toh Sumitra ko laga tha jo apne bete ki asli sacchayi sehen hi na kar paayi aur iss khabar se behosh ho gayi.

Arohi : M-Maaaaa~

Kavya : Mummyyyyy!!!!!!

Arohi aur Kavya dono hi apni Maa ko sambhaalne ke liye aage badhi aur unhe side me litaate hue unhe hosh me laane lagi.

Par yaha maamla behad garam tha.

Bhumika aur Shweta ek dusre ko baaho me liye roti jaa rahi thi. Wo bhaavuk ho chuki thi. Unki sacchayi ke liye akhir kuch toh haath aaya. Aur wo bhi Veer ne kiya ye sab. Jiske prati glaani ke bhaav me wo doobi hui thi.

Brijesh bhi poora stabdh tha. Aur ab usse Shweta aur Bhumika ke prati glaani mehsoos ho rahi thi. Par ab kya fayda jab chidiya chug gayi khet? Wo ab late ho chuka tha.

Manorath iss se pehle ki baraste ki tabhi baahar gaadi ke rukne ki awaaz aayi. Aur fir...

*Honk* *Honk*

Horn maarte hue koi unhe baahar bulaane laga.

Jese hi wo sabhi baahar pohuche. Toh do aadmi Pranjal ko sahaara deke uthaate hue usse laa rahe the.

Pranjal abhi bhi nashe me tha. Iska matlab...

Arohi aur Kavya Veer ko aankhein phaade dekhne lagi. Iska matlab ye video just kuch derr pehle ki thi. Toh isliye Veer ussi shirt me tha. That explains it all.

Pranjal ladkhadaate hue aage aaya aur phisalti zubaan se gaane gaate hue Manorath ke paas gaya.

Pranjal : Chhuu lene do naazuk hontho ko... *hic* Kuch aur nahi bas... Jaam hai ye Chhu lene do naazuk hontho ko... *hic*

Veer jaha mann hi mann jashn mana raha tha toh wahi Manorath gusse se laal hue jaa rahe the. Aur bas jwalamukhi phata aur...

Manorath ne apni laathi uthaayi aur Pranjal par barsaana shuru kar dii..

*THUDDDD* *THUDDDD*

"Aaaaarrrrghhhhhh!!! Ayyyyiiiiiiii... Maar daala re.. aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa"

Pranjal ki dard bhari karaahe goonjne lagi.

Manorath : HARAAAMKHOR!!! NIRLAJ!!! KAPTI SHAITAAN SAALE.... AAJ MEIN TUJHE CHORRUNGA NAHI... AAJ MEIN TUJHE JAAN SE MAAR DUNGA!!!!!

Aur unki laathi Pranjal ke poore shareer par barasna shuru ho gayi. Karunesh bhi peeche nahi hata. Usne apna belt nikaala aur kisi kutte ki tarah apne bete ko maarne laga.

Idhar Vivek ki haalat patli ho chuki thi. Wo mann hi mann khud ko hi dhanyavaad de raha tha. Accha hua jo wo Pranjal ke saath se hatt chuka tha. Warna aaj...!?

Sochte hue hi uska shareer thanda pad gaya aur usne muh me atka apna thook nigal liya.

"Ayyiii daddaaaa.... Buddhe ne maar diyaa re... Budhau ne maar daalaa... Aaaarrrghhhhh Papaa~.... Aaaarrrghhhhh Ayyyiii maaaiiii.... Marr gaya....."

Paani ke chheethe bhi maarte jaa rahe the uske chehre par jis se usse hosh bhi bana rahe aur uski thukaayi bhi chaalu thi.

Tabhi baahar aayi car se ek aur aadmi nikla. Aur chalte hue seedha Veer ke paas aaya.

Usne ek package Veer ko thamaaya aur bola,

"Boss! Saara kaam ho gaya. Jesa aapne kaha tha."

Veer (smiles) : Good! Tum jaa sakte ho ab.

Ye aur koi nahi, Balhaar hi tha.

Balhaar : J-Jii Boss! Aur koi bhi kaam ho toh bas be-jhijhak bata dene ka mujhe.

Aur wo nikal gaya apne aadmiyo ke saath.

Idhar Pranjal ka haal behaal tha. Gaaliyo aur laathiyo se uska sammaan ho raha tha.

Veer ahista ahista chal ke Shweta ke paas aaya. Wo aankho me aasu liye usse hi dekh rahi thi. Aur kuch keh nahi paa rahi thi siwaaye sisakne ke.

Bhumika ka bhi yahi haal tha. Apni Maa se lage hue wo bhi bas Veer ke kuch kehne ka wait kar rahi thi. Par Veer ne kuch na kaha.

Bas wo package halke haatho se feka jo jaake seedha Shweta ki goad me jaa gira.

Shweta ki himmat na hui usse chheene ki, toh Bhumika ne uss package ko khola aur jese hi usne andar maujood cheez ko dekha toh...

Uski aankho se jhar jhar kar ke aasuo ki moti moti boonde behne lagi. Package me wahi tha.

Hotel ke papers. Aur wo bhi Pranjal ke naam nahi. Uske aur Shweta ke naam the.

Uski kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha ki Veer ne aisa kyu aur kaise kiya? Wo bas usse thank you kehna chaahti thi par bechaari ke muh se wo bhi na nikla. Iss waqt usse jese thank you shabd bhi behad chota lag raha tha Veer ke prati gratitude express karne ke liye. Ant me wo bas bilakhti rahi. Kuch keh na paayi.

Veer utha aur agle hi pal wo ghar ke andar gaya. Apne room ki chaavi dhundne laga. Key milte hi wo apne room me gaya aur usne apni almaari kholi...

'It should be here!!!'

Wo kuch dhundh raha tha. Aur jese agle hi shan usse wo mil gaya.

Wo usse lekar baahar aaya jidhar sabhi maujood the. Pranjal maar kha kha ke behosh ho chuka tha. Aur mahaul behad hi tang ho chuka tha.

Veer aage badha aur usne apne haath me maujood wo cheez apne Dada jii ke haatho me rakh dii.

Veer : Jab ghar se baahar nikaala gaya tha. Tab socha nahi tha ki mere saath aisa kuch hoga. Isliye aapke janmdin par ye khareeda tha. Aapko dene ke liye. Par badqismati meri... Jo mein isse aapko de nahi paaya tha. Isliye... Aaj de raha hu.

Jese hi Manorath ne uss cheez ko dekha, unki aankhein paani paani ho gayi.

Unke haatho me ek flower vase tha. Ye wahi Vase tha jisse Veer ne apne Dada jii ke janmdin ke liye khareeda hua tha. Par uss din uske haatho se laakho ka wo vase tootne par Veer ko kabhi mauka hi nahi mil paaya tha ki Veer usse apne Dada jii ko de sake.

Manorath (rote hue) : V-Veeeerrr!!!

Veer : Chalta hu...

Manorath : Rukk jaa .. Rukk jaa mere bacche...

Par Veer na ruka...

Wo nikla baahar aur apni bike ki orr jaane laga jab peeche se achanak hi Kavya aake uss se lipat gayi.

Kavya (rote hue) : Bhaiyaaaaa!!!!

Veer : ....

Kavya (cries) : Y-Ye sab kya ho gaya bhaiya!!?? Pranjal bhaiya aisa kese kar sakte hai? Aapke saath aisa...!? I hate him!!!! I hate him so much... How can he!?? Bhaiya mat jao na...! Mat jao!!!

Veer : Kavya chorr! Jaane de!!

Kavya : Nahiiiiiii!!!! Nahi jaane dungi!!! Kahi nahi jaane dungi... *sniff*

Veer : Kavya...!

Kavya : How can he...!? Do that to you...!? Dada jii ke saath bhi...!?? *sniff* I won't let you gooo~

Veer : Kavya chorr! Mujhe jaana hai. I must...

Kavya : P-Par... Par...

Veer : Chorr jaldi...!

Kavya : Then... Then promise me... Promise me... 3 din baad... You'll come to college. To see me...!!!

Veer : I...

Kavya : PROMISE MEEE!!!!!

Veer : Fine...

Aur na chaahte hue bhi Kavya ko apni pakad dheeli karni hi padi.

Veer aage badh apni bike par sawaar hua aur usne ek antim baar peeche mud ke dekha.

Peeche... Arohi apne aasuo se bheege gaal liye usse hi dekh rahi thi. Ekdum chup chap. Dono ki nazre ek dusre se bhidi hui thi. Veer jese ye vyakt karna chaah raha tha ki ye sab hona hi tha. Aur shayad wo thoda chintit bhi tha. Pranjal Arohi ka saga bhai tha. Aur uske saath Veer ne aaj ye sab kiya tha.

Par uski saari chinta mit gayi jab agle hi pal Arohi ne haule se haan me sarr hilaaya.

Jese sweekriti de rahi thi ki wo samajh sakti thi sab.

Bas!!! Veer ke liye ye kaafi tha.

*Vrrrrrrrrrrroooooooommm*

Aur wo forun hi waha se nikal gaya.

Uske jaate hi Shweta ko bhi jese hosh aaya. Wo uthi aur Bhumika ke saath jaane lagi.

Manorath : B-Bahuuu!? Kaha jaa rahi ho?

Par Shweta ne koi jawaab na diya. Wo apni jis gaadi se aayi thi ussi me jaake baith gayi.

Bhumika bhi uske peeche peeche jaa rahi thi jab, Brijesh ne usse peeche se toka.

Brijesh : Bhumika!!! K-Kaha jaa rahi ho!??

Bhumika (palat ke namm ankho se) : Jidhar meri Maa ki koi izzat nahi, udhar mein ek pal bhi nahi reh sakti.

Aur wo bhi bina kuch kahe waha se Shweta ke sang nikal gayi.

Unki Manzil bhi wahi thi. Ragini ka ghar. Uske siwa kaha jaa sakti thi bhala woh!?

***

Itne bade kaand ke baad Veer yaha abhi bhi chenn me thodi hi tha.

'This was just the trailer for him. I will turn his life hell!!!'

[He deserves it Master~ And now you should take rest too.]

'Yeah!!!'

Wo apne kamre me maujood, apni shirt utaar ke wo abhi pant utaarne hi waala tha jab,

"Ahhh!!? V-Veeer!??"

Kamre ki dehleez par Ragini aa gayi. Aur usse iss haalat me dekh thoda sharma ke nazre ferr lii.

Chori chori uski aankhein Veer ke badan par padi aur usse dekhte hi Ragini ke chehre par khumaari sii chhaane lagi. Veer ka badan aisa lag raha tha jese uparwale ne saalo saal mehnat kar ke taraasha ho.

Aaj Tak Ragini ne kabhi kisi mard ki aisi body asal zindagi me nahi dekhi thi.

Ragini : K-Kya mein andar aa sakti hu?

Veer : Umm... S-Sure!

Wo bistar par baithate hue bola. Usse koi sharm nahi aa rahi thi. Ek Alpha Male bhala khud ki body showcase hone par sharmaata thodi tha.

Ragini aayi aur uske bagal se baith gayi. Kuch derr tak dono me se koi na bola. Fir jese tabhi wo side me jhuki aur Veer ke nagn kandho par apna sarr rakhte hue boli,

"T-Tum mujhse naraaz toh nahi ho na?"

Veer : Umm-Hmm... Nahi!

Ragini : Pakka?

Veer : Hmm~

Ragini : Pakka wala pakka??

Veer (smiles) : Hmm!

Ragini (smiles) : that's good then... Aur...

Veer : Hmm??

Ragini ahista ahista apne chehre ko uthaate hue uski aankho me dekhi. Dono ek dusre ki garam saasein feel kar paa rahe the.

Kamre ki maddham light me Veer ke honth Ragini bhali bhaati dekh paa rahi thi. Bas kuch hi duri ka faasla tha.

Wo apna dhadakta dil liye aage badhi... Ahista ahista... Haule haule...

Aur...

*Ding Dong*

Darwaaze ki ghanti ne sab kuch chaupat kar ke rakh diya.

Ragini : Ahhh!! I...

Veer (looks away) ....

Ragini : Aaj kya hua waha sab... Wo... Aur... Wo baat... We'll talk about it later. Good night! Veer!!!

*Chu~ ♡*

Aur bas gaalo par ek meethi pappi dete hue wo nikal gayi.

***

Derr raat ho chuki thi. Par koi tha... Jo iss waqt jaag raha tha.

Wo uthi aur Veer ke kamre ki orr badhi. Jo ki khula hua tha. Halke halke kadam rakh wo dabe paav uske nazdeek aayi.

Aur uske sote hue chehre ko nihaarne lagi. Aankho se aasu tapak tapak kar gir rahe the.

Apne komal haatho se usne Veer ke ke gaal ko sehlaaya. Aur aage jhuki...

*Puch~ ♡*

Uske gaal ko chumte hue uske baal sehlaane lagi aur bas jese uske chehre me kho gayi woh kahi.

Fir unn thar tharaate hontho se bas do hi shabd nikle uske,

"Mera baccha~ !!!!"
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!!!
House of the killers arc nazdeek aata jaa raha hai. Bane rahiyega! Baaki, Like thoke ka aur revos rakhne ka.
Dhanyavaad!!!

Superb Update...

 

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Kaun laut aayi Werewolf jee

Ye to shayad iss user ka first comment hai
Iss thread par

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Ragini Veer Ki​

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Garmi mitane

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Update - 85 ~ Bringing down the Bastard.
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Ab tak...

Veer : Sshhhhh!!! Just keep watching!!!

Usne uth ke side me rakhi popcorns uthaayi aur sabke haatho me thama dii.

Wo waapas se apni jagah jaake baitha aur usne pendrive me ek folder open kiya aur usme ek video play kar dii.

Video ke shuru me kuch text likh ke aaye...

LIGHTS! CAMERA! ACTION!!!!

Aur fir wo Video clip play hona shuru ho gayi.

Ab aage...

Raat ka samay tha aur Veer ke puraane ghar me sabhi maujood the. Hall me hi lagi badi LED TV par Veer ne ek video clip play kii hui thi.

Poore main hall me andhera tha. Aisa lag raha tha jese kisi theatre me aake baith gaye ho. TV ki screen bhi behad badi thi, kareeban 55 inch, toh bilkul cinema waali feeling aa rahi thi sabhi ko.

Unn sab ke haatho me Veer ne ek ek popcorn ke packet thamaaye hue the. Veer ke liye jese ye kisi movie se kam nahi tha.

Kavya jo uske baayi taraf baithi hui thi usse curiosity se dekhe jaa rahi thi.

Kavya : Bataiye na bhaiya!!! Ye sab kya chal raha hai?

Veer : Mene kaha na bas dekhti jao.

Kavya : Par... Mmmphhhh!!!?? (´⊙ω⊙`)！

Iss se pehle ki wo bechaari kuch keh paati Veer ne uski goad me rakhe popcorn ke packet se haath me kuch popcorn lii aur seedhe uske muh me thoos dii.

Kavya : Ughhyuuu~ *nom* *nom* ummuaawaa.... *nom*

Veer (smiles) : Enjoy and just watch.

Sawaal toh Arohi ke mann me bhi tha. Par jis tarah se Veer ne Kavya ke muh me popcorn thoose, usse dekhne ke baad Arohi ne apna muh band rakhna hi behtar samjha.

Aur fir sabhi ki nazre tv screen par jamm gayi.

Video jese hi shuru hua, Veer ek gazab ke black tuxedo me tha, andar white shirt ke saath, wo khada hua tha ek mirror ke saamne.

Wo apne baal bana raha tha. Apni kaali ghani zulfo ko set kar wo sheeshe me khud ko taiyaar kar raha tha.

Aur idhar Kavya ne jese hi usse screen me iss qadar dekha wo kahi kho gayi.

Kavya : Hoooo~ Bh-Bhaiya~ So handsome... (๑♡⌓♡๑)

Fir achanak hi usse jese dhyaan aaya.

Kavya : Ahhh!!?? Wait! Bhaiya? Are you wearing that same shirt now? Uwu~ Iska matlab ye video aaj ki hai. Hai na? Hai na? ✧\(>o<)ﾉ✧

Arohi (sarr par tapli maarte hue) : Video par dhyaan do. E-Even though...

Arohi (khuspusaate hue) : He does looks handsome... *blushes*

Kavya : Ouch~ (｡•́︿•̀｡) Kya dii? Video hi toh dekh rahi hu na? Maara kyu aapne mujhe?

Veer : Tum dono...! Ssshhhh! Shaant!

Kavya : Ughhh!!

Arohi : ....

Vivek : Veer? Ye sab kya mazaak hai? Kya tumne yaha hume apna vlog dikhaane ke liye ikhatta kiya hai kya?

Veer : Bilkul nahi! Jab video dekhenge tab hi toh pata chalega na?

Vivek (mann me) : Akhir karna kya chaahta hai ye Veer.

Aur uske baad achanak hi scene change ho gaya.

Veer ke saamne Bhumika maujood thi. Scene tha Ragini ke ghar ka.

Ye scene aate hi Bhumika ki bauhe sikud gayi. Aur wo soch me padd gayi.

'Ye... Ye toh... Ye toh kal ki baat hai. V-Veer ne mujhe record kiya tha??? P-Par kyuuu???'

Veer par usne nazre daali par Veer toh jese poora ka poora tv par focused tha.

Aur idhar Bhumika samet Shweta ki chinta badhti jaa rahi thi.

Fir scene me hui baat shuru hui.

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Veer : Toh kya hua tha? Aap bataengi mujhe?

Bhumika : Ab mein kya kahu Veer? Kya bolu? Kis muh se bolu? Ab toh kuch bacha hi nahi hai. Mein aur mom dono hi... guilt ke iss sagar me doobe hue hai.

Veer : ...

Bhumika : Sab kuch *sniff* Sab kuch uss Pranjal ne kiya hai Veer. Sab kuch uska hi kiya dhara hai. *sniff* Wo hi uss din hotel aaya tha. Mom ko dinner pe leke gaya ye keh ke ki... *sniff* ki wo Mom ko relax karwaana chaahta hai. Next day bhi aaya woh. And I thought, he was doing all this for mom. *sniff*

Veer : ...

Bhumika : Aur fir... Uss raat jab mom aayi uske next din hi ye pata lagta hai ki usne Mom se sign karwa ke poori ki poori hotel hi apne naam kar lii hai.

Veer : How??

Bhumika (rote hue) : I don't know! I don't know Veer!!! Uske paas pata nahi hotel ke original papers kaha se aa gaye. He even modified the terms and conditions. Papers me usne changes karwaaye ki wo hotel ab uska hone jaa raha hai.

Veer : Alright!!!

Veer utha aur Bhumika ko wahi chorr wo baahar nikal gaya. Wo bechaari bas roti rahi.

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Aur idhar hall me sabhi log shaanti se sab kuch video me hota dekh rahe the. Shweta aur Bhumika pal pal Veer ki taraf bechain hoke nazre ghumaati par keval niraasha hi unhe milti, kyuki Veer unn dono ki taraf dekh hi nahi raha tha.

Agle hi pal ek baar fir scene change hua. Iss scene me Veer bike drive kar raha tha. Shayad usne apni breast pocket me camera set karke rakha hua tha. Jiske zariye wo sab kuch record kar ke ek video ke roop me sab kuch prastut kar raha tha.

~~~

Wo utra aur kisi jagah pe gaya. Andar teen chaar lafange baithe hue the. Aur Veer ne ghuste hi unhe chaukanna kar diya.

Veer : Pranjal kaha hai?

Ladka 1 : Kaun hai bey tu? Aur bina puche andar kese aaya?

Veer bina kuch kahe aage badha aur uss ladke ke sofe par seedhe apni laat de maari. Veer ki taang uss ladke ke chehre ke bagal se hoke tezzi se nikli aur peeche sofe par jaake lagi.

*BAAAAAAAMMMMMMM*

Ladka 1 : S-Saale teri toh...

Par wo bolne laayak na bacha. Kyuki agle hi shan Veer ne uska haath pakda aur...

*Ding*

LIMBO!!!

*CRACCKKKKKK*

Ladka 1 : AAAAAARRRRGGHHHH!!!! M-Maaro saale ko... AAAAHHHH Mera haath...

Aur uske baad toh...

Kuch bataane ki zaroorat hi nahi ki unke saath kya hua tha. Palak jhapakte hi wo saare dard se karaahte hue neeche dale hue the.

Ladka 1 : H-Haaahhhh!! M-Mujhe chorr do... Aaaarrrghhhh!! M-Mera haath... Mera haath...

Veer (smiles) : Chorr dunga!! Bas ye bata do, Pranjal kidhar hai??

Ladka 1 : M-Mein... Mein nahi...

Veer : Ohhhh~ Toh shayad mujhe dard aur badhaana padega.

Ladka 1 : N-Nahiiii!!! Nahi!!!! Mein... Mein bataata hu.

Veer (smiles) : Good~

Ladka 1 : W-Wo... Wo Silver...

Veer : Hmm??

Ladka 1 : Silver Club!! Wo xxxxxxx road waala pub.

Veer (smiles) : Nice!!

*Ding*

LIMBO!!!

*CRAAAACKKKK*

Ladka 1 : Ayiiiiii aaaargggghhhh!!!

Wo ladka kisi kutiya kii tarah ek baar fir bilbila utha. Aur scene ek aur baar badal gaya.

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Idhar hall me sabhi jigyaasa liye sab kuch hota dekh rahe the. Kavya ki aankho me toh sabse zyaada chamak thi.

Kavya (blushes) : W-Wowwww!!! S-So cool!!! Bhaiyaaa~

Arohi : K-Kahi Veer ye sab...??

Usne Veer ko dekh pucha. Tabhi ek sansani macha dene waala khayaal uske mastishq se hote hue guzra jis se Arohi ka poora badan sihar utha.

Arohi : Veer!! K-Kahi tum...!?

Uske sawaal par Veer ki muskaan aur fel gayi. Arohi ne jab usse mud ke dekha toh Veer ki wo evil smile dekh uss ke poore badan me ruye khade ho gaye.

Wo sahi soch rahi thi matlab. Veer Pranjal ke saath kuch karne waala tha.

Aur beshaq, Video me scene aaya fir... Silver Club ka.

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Veer Silver Club me enter hua aur... Waha ka nazaara ekdum hi uttejit kar dene waala tha.

Silver club ek high class pub tha. Ghuste se hi Veer ko andaaza lag chuka tha. Saamne ki stage par ladkiya chote chote kapdo me thirakti hui, apni sexiness showcase kar rahi thi. Harr rhythm, harr beat pe unki patli kamar hil rahi thi.

Aur neeche couples toh kahi strangers ek dusre ke saath apni kamar hilaane me lage hue the. Ek dusre ke badan se badan milaane me lage hue the.

Sexy uttejit kar dene waale gaane loudly baj rahe the. Disco lights se poora club jagmaga raha tha.




Aur unn thirakte hue logo ke beech se Veer apna raasta bana ke guzarta jaa raha tha. Jaha baaki sabhi ki aankho me nasha tha, khumaari chhaayi hui thi. Veer ki aankhein kisi baaj ki tarah kisi ko dhundh rahi thi.

Apne agal bagal maujood nashe me naachte hue logo ko nazar andaaz kar wo aage badhta raha.



Aur kuch hi palo me, usse jiski talaash thi, wo uski aankho ke saamne tha.

Pranjal!!!

Uss se thodi hi duri par wo kuch ladko aur ladkiyo ke saath naachta hua paaya gaya. Veer ne jese hi usse dekha toh uske chehre par ek muskaan fel gayi. Aur, wo aage badha.

Pranjal idhar apne khaas dosto ko hotel milne ki party de raha tha. Daaru se lekar, naach gaane ke intezaam ke liye wo sabhi ko yaha aaj Silver club me leke aaya hua tha.

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Idhar Veer ke ghar me baithe jese hi Pranjal ko ladkiyo ke saath naachte hue dekha wo bhi aise club me toh sabke hosh hi udd gaye.

Kavya (blushes) : Ahhh!! Y-Ye sab??

Manorath : Karunessshhhhh!!!! Ye sab kya haiiii???? Ye kya dekh raha hu mein???? Kya kar raha hai tumhara ladka ye???

Karunesh : P-Papa jii...

Manorath ekdum se behekte hue bol uthe. Unhe apni aankho par visvaash hi nahi ho raha tha. Jis Pranjal ko wo doodh ka dhula samajh rahe the wo aisa nikla? Par ye toh kuch bhi nahi tha. Aage jese unhe aur bhi jhatke lagne waale the.

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Idhar waapas se video me... Woofers me gaane itni loud baj rahe the ki uska Bass itna zyaada tha, Veer apni chhaati me unn vibrations ko bhali bhaati mehsoos kar paa raha tha. Club ki vibe hi alag thi.

Aur Pranjal jo halke nashe me naach raha tha wo jab muda toh saamne usse Veer nazar aa gaya.

Pehle wo chaunka, fir muskuraate hue wo Veer ke nazdeek aaya.

Pranjal : Hahahahaha~ If it isnt you my bastard brother!!?

Veer : ...

Pranjal : Aao aao... Tum bhi aao... Hahahaha~

Aur Veer ko kheechte hue wo apne dosto ke paas le gaya. Aaj jese wo behad khushi me tha.

Dosto se pehchaan kara ke, fir Veer ko wo bar side laaya jaha log shots aur drinks le rahe the.

Pranjal : Tum yaha kya kar rahe ho? Haan? Kisi ladki ne chut nahi dii kya aaj? Hahahahaha~ lag toh yahi raha hai. Ekdum suit vuut me haan? Dil tod ke bhaag gayi lagta. Hahahahaha~

Veer : ...

Pranjal : Wese aaj mein khush hu. Hahahaha~ Boht khush. Toh aaj tumhe jo peena ho piyo. Bill mere upar. Apne dushman ke prati itna dildaar toh ho hi sakta hu mein. Hahahahahaha~

Aur waiter ko bol ke Pranjal ne apne aur Veer ke liye drinks mangwaa lii.

Wo pee raha tha aur yaha Veer bhi pee raha tha.

Par jaha Pranjal ko nasha chadhta jaa raha tha. Veer ekdum tip top aur sober condition me tha. Usse koi nasha hi nahi chadh raha tha. Uske hontho par bas ek qaatilana muskaan saji hui thi.

Inn sab ka kaaran tha...

DETOXIFICATION!!!

Uski nayi skill. Usse Pari ke bol apne mann me yaad aane lage.

[Master! This skill is different. Naam se lag raha hoga ki ye poison detoxify karegi but no. Aisa nahi hai. It detoxifies the damage done by liquor and cigarettes. Dusre shabdo me, yadi aap sharaab ya smoke karte ho toh Detoxification skill usme maujood nasheele padaartho ko detox kar degi. Na hi aapki body me koi harm hoega aur na hi aapko nasha chadhega. So, now you are immune to drunken-ness.]

Yahi reason tha jo Veer mazze me Pranjal ke saath drink kar raha tha. He had nothing to lose.

Sabse behtar baat thi ki ye skill ON ya OFF kari jaa sakti thi. Toh Veer usse off kar alcohol ke nashe me doob bhi sakta tha yadi chaahe toh.

Par filhaal, wo ON thi.

Chaturaayi se Veer ne drinks par drinks mangwaayi aur Pranjal ke saath wo peeta gaya. Nashe me dhutt hone ka wo naatak karne laga.

Idhar Pranjal usse nashe me doobte dekh khud bhi nashe me ghum hone laga.

Aur fir, Veer ne apni chaal chalna shuru kii. Shatranj ka pehla pyaada usne badha diya.

Veer : Aisa kyu kiya tumne!?

Pranjal : *hic* Kya kaha? Mene aisa kyu kiya? *hic* S-Saale madarchod!!! Sab tere kaaran!! Sab tere kaaran!! Yadi tu na hota... *hic* toh aaj sab kuch mera hota... Par tuuu....

Veer : ...

Pranjal : Tere kaaran mera saara plan chaupat ho gaya. *hic* Tere kaaran... *hic* M-Mein bhula nahi hu. Banquet me jo tune mere saath kiya... Meri itni beizzati... Sab yaad hai mujhe...

Veer : Aur tumne jo mere saath kiya uska kya?

Pranjal : H-Huh!?? *hic* Haraami wo sab tu... tu deserve karta hai. Saale... Tu deserve karta hai...

Veer : Ohhhh! Tumhi the na!? Jisne mujhe ghar se baahar nikalwaaya!??

Pranjal : *hic* Hahahaha~ tujhe ab maalum pad raha hai!??? Hahahahahaa~ Koi itna bewakoof kese ho sakta hai bc? *hic*

Veer (smiles) : Kese nikalwaaya aur tumne mujhe?

Pranjal : Hahahahahahahaha~ Abey tu ab tak nahi samajh paaya? *hic* Sab kuch mera plan tha gaandu... *hic* Mera plan... Vivek bhaiya ki company se wo special slippery oil... *hic* Mene hi toh daala tha... Tere perro ke neeche... Hahaha~ Jab tu gira tha na... Mere dil ko itni zyaada khushi kabhi mehsoos nahi hui thi. Saara prasaad... *hic* neeche... Aur tu baahar... Hahahaha~

Veer : Nice!! Aur!!? Isse dekh ke kuch yaad aaya?

Veer ne apne blazer ki inner pocket se fir kuch nikaala aur table par rakh diya.

Ye wahi tha.

Manorath ki wheelchair ka wo modified pahiya. Aur usse dekhte hi Pranjal thoda chaunka aur fir usse apne haatho me kheech liya.

Pranjal : S-Saale!!!! *hic* Y-Ye tere paas kese aaya haraamkhor? Haan?

Veer : Tune hi Dada jii ke sath wo sab karwaya tha na? Bol!!!

Pranjal : Hahahahahaha~ Tujhe pata chal gaya!? *hic* Haan saale!!! Uss budhau ko itni baar samjhaaya mene... *hic* Ki mere hawaale kar de zameen... *hic* Madarchod samajhta hi nahi raha... *hic* hahahahaha~ Fir kya? Tapakwa diya! Kherr manao mera dil... *hic* Arre mera dil bada hai. Hehehe~ Jaan se nahi tapkaaya usko... Bolo? *hic* Hu na mein best!? *hic* Iss pahiye ko mene boht paise deke banwaaya tha hahaha~

Veer : Aur fir ye hotel?

Pranjal : Haan gaandu haan! Hahahahaha~ *hic* meri hi chaal thi. Arre apun ne hi kiya re. Arohi dii aur wo pagli Kavya... Saala *hic* pehle hi tere naam sab kar ke baith gayi. *hic* Mein kya karta? Lund hilaata? *hic* T-Toh apun ne bhi... *hic* Apun ne bhi thaan lii... Apun saala *hic* b-badi macchli ko pakdega seedhe. T-Toh isliye?

Veer : ...

Pranjal : Isliye apun wo teri... *hic* Arre wo kya kehte hai? *hic* Arre... W-Wo.. haan!!! Teri sauteli Maa~ hahahahaha~ *hic* Toh apun... Apun uske paas gaya. Uss pagli ko bhi ullu banaana itna asaan nikla... *hic* Saala sab chutiye hai. Hehehe~ Duniya hi chutiya hai. Apun jo chaahta hai... *hic* Usse paa ke rehta hai...!!!

Veer : ...

Pranjal : Aur... Aur.. *hic* aur ek raaz ki baat batau?

Veer : !!!?

Pranjal : Apun ne... *hic* Mene na... Wo hotel poori ki poori aaj hi ek boht bade iss shejer ke don ko bech dii hai. Hehehehe~ Ab apne paas rokda hi rokda hai... Karodo rupaya... Hehehehe~ *hic* ladki chodo... Daaru piyo... Masti karo *hic*... Aur ab mein uss Don se jud chuka hu. Saale!!! *hic* Ab teri khair nahi... Agle number tera hi Veer!!!

Veer : Ohh!? But still... Kyu kiya tumne ye? Aur kya mila?

Pranjal (cheekhte hue) : Kya mila???? HARAMKHORRRR!!!! *hic* Tera kaaran... Wo chali gayi... *hic* India chorr ke... *hic* Mujhse dur... Sab tere kaaran!!!

Aur itni ho rahi baato me pehli baar Veer ko ek jhatka laga.

Veer : Huh??? K-Kaun???

Pranjal : *hic* Wo chali gayi... Wo chali gayi... *hic* Mein tujhe zindagi bhar maaf nahi karunga... Teri duniya *hic* nark bana dunga... *hic*

Veer : H-Heyyy kaun... Kis... Kis ki baat kar rahe ho.

Veer ne usse jhanjhora par... Pranjal nashe me choor choor ho chuka tha toh woh talli hoke wahi table par hi dherr ho gaya.

'Damn it!!!! Who was he referring to??? K-Kaun bhala!!???'

Aur itna sab kuch ho jaane ke baad. Video band ho gayi.

~~~

Jese hi video khatam hui. Poore hall me ek ghanghor sannaata chhaaya hua tha.

Sab ke hosh ude hue the. Of course, siwae Veer ke. Wo toh popcorn khaane me laga hua tha.

'Hmm? This butter flavour is indeed good.'

[ ]

Aur fir,

"KARUNESSSSSSHHHHHHH!!!!!!"

Manorath ki ek zordaar dahaad poore hall me goonj gayi. Sab apni apni jagah se khade ho gaye.

Manorath ka shareer gusse se kaanp raha tha. Aankhein ekdum gusse se aag baboola ho chuki thi. Aur aaj sabhi unhe iss roop me dekh dang reh gaye. Thoda darr bhi gaye.

Arohi sab kuch bhauchakki sii dekhi thi abhi. Uska mind kaam karna band kar chuka tha jese. Kavya bechaari ko itna bada jhatka laga tha ki woh kuch grasp hi nahi kar paa rahi thi.

Wo jaanti thi ki Pranjal bhaiya uske matlabi the aur sahi nahi the par ye sab? Wo itna gir chuke the aur aise the iski usne aaj tak kabhi kalpana bhi nahi kii hui thi. She was totally shocked.

Par sabse bada jhatka toh Sumitra ko laga tha jo apne bete ki asli sacchayi sehen hi na kar paayi aur iss khabar se behosh ho gayi.

Arohi : M-Maaaaa~

Kavya : Mummyyyyy!!!!!!

Arohi aur Kavya dono hi apni Maa ko sambhaalne ke liye aage badhi aur unhe side me litaate hue unhe hosh me laane lagi.

Par yaha maamla behad garam tha.

Bhumika aur Shweta ek dusre ko baaho me liye roti jaa rahi thi. Wo bhaavuk ho chuki thi. Unki sacchayi ke liye akhir kuch toh haath aaya. Aur wo bhi Veer ne kiya ye sab. Jiske prati glaani ke bhaav me wo doobi hui thi.

Brijesh bhi poora stabdh tha. Aur ab usse Shweta aur Bhumika ke prati glaani mehsoos ho rahi thi. Par ab kya fayda jab chidiya chug gayi khet? Wo ab late ho chuka tha.

Manorath iss se pehle ki baraste ki tabhi baahar gaadi ke rukne ki awaaz aayi. Aur fir...

*Honk* *Honk*

Horn maarte hue koi unhe baahar bulaane laga.

Jese hi wo sabhi baahar pohuche. Toh do aadmi Pranjal ko sahaara deke uthaate hue usse laa rahe the.

Pranjal abhi bhi nashe me tha. Iska matlab...

Arohi aur Kavya Veer ko aankhein phaade dekhne lagi. Iska matlab ye video just kuch derr pehle ki thi. Toh isliye Veer ussi shirt me tha. That explains it all.

Pranjal ladkhadaate hue aage aaya aur phisalti zubaan se gaane gaate hue Manorath ke paas gaya.

Pranjal : Chhuu lene do naazuk hontho ko... *hic* Kuch aur nahi bas... Jaam hai ye Chhu lene do naazuk hontho ko... *hic*

Veer jaha mann hi mann jashn mana raha tha toh wahi Manorath gusse se laal hue jaa rahe the. Aur bas jwalamukhi phata aur...

Manorath ne apni laathi uthaayi aur Pranjal par barsaana shuru kar dii..

*THUDDDD* *THUDDDD*

"Aaaaarrrrghhhhhh!!! Ayyyyiiiiiiii... Maar daala re.. aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa"

Pranjal ki dard bhari karaahe goonjne lagi.

Manorath : HARAAAMKHOR!!! NIRLAJ!!! KAPTI SHAITAAN SAALE.... AAJ MEIN TUJHE CHORRUNGA NAHI... AAJ MEIN TUJHE JAAN SE MAAR DUNGA!!!!!

Aur unki laathi Pranjal ke poore shareer par barasna shuru ho gayi. Karunesh bhi peeche nahi hata. Usne apna belt nikaala aur kisi kutte ki tarah apne bete ko maarne laga.

Idhar Vivek ki haalat patli ho chuki thi. Wo mann hi mann khud ko hi dhanyavaad de raha tha. Accha hua jo wo Pranjal ke saath se hatt chuka tha. Warna aaj...!?

Sochte hue hi uska shareer thanda pad gaya aur usne muh me atka apna thook nigal liya.

"Ayyiii daddaaaa.... Buddhe ne maar diyaa re... Budhau ne maar daalaa... Aaaarrrghhhhh Papaa~.... Aaaarrrghhhhh Ayyyiii maaaiiii.... Marr gaya....."

Paani ke chheethe bhi maarte jaa rahe the uske chehre par jis se usse hosh bhi bana rahe aur uski thukaayi bhi chaalu thi.

Tabhi baahar aayi car se ek aur aadmi nikla. Aur chalte hue seedha Veer ke paas aaya.

Usne ek package Veer ko thamaaya aur bola,

"Boss! Saara kaam ho gaya. Jesa aapne kaha tha."

Veer (smiles) : Good! Tum jaa sakte ho ab.

Ye aur koi nahi, Balhaar hi tha.

Balhaar : J-Jii Boss! Aur koi bhi kaam ho toh bas be-jhijhak bata dene ka mujhe.

Aur wo nikal gaya apne aadmiyo ke saath.

Idhar Pranjal ka haal behaal tha. Gaaliyo aur laathiyo se uska sammaan ho raha tha.

Veer ahista ahista chal ke Shweta ke paas aaya. Wo aankho me aasu liye usse hi dekh rahi thi. Aur kuch keh nahi paa rahi thi siwaaye sisakne ke.

Bhumika ka bhi yahi haal tha. Apni Maa se lage hue wo bhi bas Veer ke kuch kehne ka wait kar rahi thi. Par Veer ne kuch na kaha.

Bas wo package halke haatho se feka jo jaake seedha Shweta ki goad me jaa gira.

Shweta ki himmat na hui usse chheene ki, toh Bhumika ne uss package ko khola aur jese hi usne andar maujood cheez ko dekha toh...

Uski aankho se jhar jhar kar ke aasuo ki moti moti boonde behne lagi. Package me wahi tha.

Hotel ke papers. Aur wo bhi Pranjal ke naam nahi. Uske aur Shweta ke naam the.

Uski kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha ki Veer ne aisa kyu aur kaise kiya? Wo bas usse thank you kehna chaahti thi par bechaari ke muh se wo bhi na nikla. Iss waqt usse jese thank you shabd bhi behad chota lag raha tha Veer ke prati gratitude express karne ke liye. Ant me wo bas bilakhti rahi. Kuch keh na paayi.

Veer utha aur agle hi pal wo ghar ke andar gaya. Apne room ki chaavi dhundne laga. Key milte hi wo apne room me gaya aur usne apni almaari kholi...

'It should be here!!!'

Wo kuch dhundh raha tha. Aur jese agle hi shan usse wo mil gaya.

Wo usse lekar baahar aaya jidhar sabhi maujood the. Pranjal maar kha kha ke behosh ho chuka tha. Aur mahaul behad hi tang ho chuka tha.

Veer aage badha aur usne apne haath me maujood wo cheez apne Dada jii ke haatho me rakh dii.

Veer : Jab ghar se baahar nikaala gaya tha. Tab socha nahi tha ki mere saath aisa kuch hoga. Isliye aapke janmdin par ye khareeda tha. Aapko dene ke liye. Par badqismati meri... Jo mein isse aapko de nahi paaya tha. Isliye... Aaj de raha hu.

Jese hi Manorath ne uss cheez ko dekha, unki aankhein paani paani ho gayi.

Unke haatho me ek flower vase tha. Ye wahi Vase tha jisse Veer ne apne Dada jii ke janmdin ke liye khareeda hua tha. Par uss din uske haatho se laakho ka wo vase tootne par Veer ko kabhi mauka hi nahi mil paaya tha ki Veer usse apne Dada jii ko de sake.

Manorath (rote hue) : V-Veeeerrr!!!

Veer : Chalta hu...

Manorath : Rukk jaa .. Rukk jaa mere bacche...

Par Veer na ruka...

Wo nikla baahar aur apni bike ki orr jaane laga jab peeche se achanak hi Kavya aake uss se lipat gayi.

Kavya (rote hue) : Bhaiyaaaaa!!!!

Veer : ....

Kavya (cries) : Y-Ye sab kya ho gaya bhaiya!!?? Pranjal bhaiya aisa kese kar sakte hai? Aapke saath aisa...!? I hate him!!!! I hate him so much... How can he!?? Bhaiya mat jao na...! Mat jao!!!

Veer : Kavya chorr! Jaane de!!

Kavya : Nahiiiiiii!!!! Nahi jaane dungi!!! Kahi nahi jaane dungi... *sniff*

Veer : Kavya...!

Kavya : How can he...!? Do that to you...!? Dada jii ke saath bhi...!?? *sniff* I won't let you gooo~

Veer : Kavya chorr! Mujhe jaana hai. I must...

Kavya : P-Par... Par...

Veer : Chorr jaldi...!

Kavya : Then... Then promise me... Promise me... 3 din baad... You'll come to college. To see me...!!!

Veer : I...

Kavya : PROMISE MEEE!!!!!

Veer : Fine...

Aur na chaahte hue bhi Kavya ko apni pakad dheeli karni hi padi.

Veer aage badh apni bike par sawaar hua aur usne ek antim baar peeche mud ke dekha.

Peeche... Arohi apne aasuo se bheege gaal liye usse hi dekh rahi thi. Ekdum chup chap. Dono ki nazre ek dusre se bhidi hui thi. Veer jese ye vyakt karna chaah raha tha ki ye sab hona hi tha. Aur shayad wo thoda chintit bhi tha. Pranjal Arohi ka saga bhai tha. Aur uske saath Veer ne aaj ye sab kiya tha.

Par uski saari chinta mit gayi jab agle hi pal Arohi ne haule se haan me sarr hilaaya.

Jese sweekriti de rahi thi ki wo samajh sakti thi sab.

Bas!!! Veer ke liye ye kaafi tha.

*Vrrrrrrrrrrroooooooommm*

Aur wo forun hi waha se nikal gaya.

Uske jaate hi Shweta ko bhi jese hosh aaya. Wo uthi aur Bhumika ke saath jaane lagi.

Manorath : B-Bahuuu!? Kaha jaa rahi ho?

Par Shweta ne koi jawaab na diya. Wo apni jis gaadi se aayi thi ussi me jaake baith gayi.

Bhumika bhi uske peeche peeche jaa rahi thi jab, Brijesh ne usse peeche se toka.

Brijesh : Bhumika!!! K-Kaha jaa rahi ho!??

Bhumika (palat ke namm ankho se) : Jidhar meri Maa ki koi izzat nahi, udhar mein ek pal bhi nahi reh sakti.

Aur wo bhi bina kuch kahe waha se Shweta ke sang nikal gayi.

Unki Manzil bhi wahi thi. Ragini ka ghar. Uske siwa kaha jaa sakti thi bhala woh!?

***

Itne bade kaand ke baad Veer yaha abhi bhi chenn me thodi hi tha.

'This was just the trailer for him. I will turn his life hell!!!'

[He deserves it Master~ And now you should take rest too.]

'Yeah!!!'

Wo apne kamre me maujood, apni shirt utaar ke wo abhi pant utaarne hi waala tha jab,

"Ahhh!!? V-Veeer!??"

Kamre ki dehleez par Ragini aa gayi. Aur usse iss haalat me dekh thoda sharma ke nazre ferr lii.

Chori chori uski aankhein Veer ke badan par padi aur usse dekhte hi Ragini ke chehre par khumaari sii chhaane lagi. Veer ka badan aisa lag raha tha jese uparwale ne saalo saal mehnat kar ke taraasha ho.

Aaj Tak Ragini ne kabhi kisi mard ki aisi body asal zindagi me nahi dekhi thi.

Ragini : K-Kya mein andar aa sakti hu?

Veer : Umm... S-Sure!

Wo bistar par baithate hue bola. Usse koi sharm nahi aa rahi thi. Ek Alpha Male bhala khud ki body showcase hone par sharmaata thodi tha.

Ragini aayi aur uske bagal se baith gayi. Kuch derr tak dono me se koi na bola. Fir jese tabhi wo side me jhuki aur Veer ke nagn kandho par apna sarr rakhte hue boli,

"T-Tum mujhse naraaz toh nahi ho na?"

Veer : Umm-Hmm... Nahi!

Ragini : Pakka?

Veer : Hmm~

Ragini : Pakka wala pakka??

Veer (smiles) : Hmm!

Ragini (smiles) : that's good then... Aur...

Veer : Hmm??

Ragini ahista ahista apne chehre ko uthaate hue uski aankho me dekhi. Dono ek dusre ki garam saasein feel kar paa rahe the.

Kamre ki maddham light me Veer ke honth Ragini bhali bhaati dekh paa rahi thi. Bas kuch hi duri ka faasla tha.

Wo apna dhadakta dil liye aage badhi... Ahista ahista... Haule haule...

Aur...

*Ding Dong*

Darwaaze ki ghanti ne sab kuch chaupat kar ke rakh diya.

Ragini : Ahhh!! I...

Veer (looks away) ....

Ragini : Aaj kya hua waha sab... Wo... Aur... Wo baat... We'll talk about it later. Good night! Veer!!!

*Chu~ ♡*

Aur bas gaalo par ek meethi pappi dete hue wo nikal gayi.

***

Derr raat ho chuki thi. Par koi tha... Jo iss waqt jaag raha tha.

Wo uthi aur Veer ke kamre ki orr badhi. Jo ki khula hua tha. Halke halke kadam rakh wo dabe paav uske nazdeek aayi.

Aur uske sote hue chehre ko nihaarne lagi. Aankho se aasu tapak tapak kar gir rahe the.

Apne komal haatho se usne Veer ke ke gaal ko sehlaaya. Aur aage jhuki...

*Puch~ ♡*

Uske gaal ko chumte hue uske baal sehlaane lagi aur bas jese uske chehre me kho gayi woh kahi.

Fir unn thar tharaate hontho se bas do hi shabd nikle uske,

"Mera baccha~ !!!!"
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!!!
House of the killers arc nazdeek aata jaa raha hai. Bane rahiyega! Baaki, Like thoke ka aur revos rakhne ka.
Dhanyavaad!!!

वाव
यह हुई ना बात
सौतेली माँ ने आख़िर वीर को बेटा मान ही लिया
प्रंजल के षड्यंत्र और वीर के निर्दोष होने के प्रमाण आखिर सबको मिल गया
पर नशे में बेहोश होने से पहले प्रंजल ने वीर को किसके बारे में कहा होगा.....???
खैर हर दिन की तरह रागिनी फिर से ख्वाहिशें पुरी करने से चूक गई
बहुत बढ़िया रहा
अब बस वह सस्पेंस क्या हो सकता है यह जानने की क्युरोसीटी बढ़ गई है

 

[pawanqwert]

Mein raat jaaga hua hoon. Ap kab tak update de do gay yeh bata do ta k mein usse time phir online aa ker perh loon.

Your story is too good. A new concept . I really miss such unique ideas. Xossip had a lot of such unique stories . But here everyone is obsessed with stories of just sex and no real story at all.

Yes this story is too good and unique. That's make it interesting and also one of the best story of this xforum Werewolf jee

 

[RAJIV SHAW]

Super update hai Bhai

 

[RWAY-19149]

Wonderful update