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Update - 85 ~ Bringing down the Bastard.
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Ab tak...

Veer : Sshhhhh!!! Just keep watching!!!

Usne uth ke side me rakhi popcorns uthaayi aur sabke haatho me thama dii.

Wo waapas se apni jagah jaake baitha aur usne pendrive me ek folder open kiya aur usme ek video play kar dii.

Video ke shuru me kuch text likh ke aaye...

LIGHTS! CAMERA! ACTION!!!!

Aur fir wo Video clip play hona shuru ho gayi.

Ab aage...

Raat ka samay tha aur Veer ke puraane ghar me sabhi maujood the. Hall me hi lagi badi LED TV par Veer ne ek video clip play kii hui thi.

Poore main hall me andhera tha. Aisa lag raha tha jese kisi theatre me aake baith gaye ho. TV ki screen bhi behad badi thi, kareeban 55 inch, toh bilkul cinema waali feeling aa rahi thi sabhi ko.

Unn sab ke haatho me Veer ne ek ek popcorn ke packet thamaaye hue the. Veer ke liye jese ye kisi movie se kam nahi tha.

Kavya jo uske baayi taraf baithi hui thi usse curiosity se dekhe jaa rahi thi.

Kavya : Bataiye na bhaiya!!! Ye sab kya chal raha hai?

Veer : Mene kaha na bas dekhti jao.

Kavya : Par... Mmmphhhh!!!?? (´⊙ω⊙`)！

Iss se pehle ki wo bechaari kuch keh paati Veer ne uski goad me rakhe popcorn ke packet se haath me kuch popcorn lii aur seedhe uske muh me thoos dii.

Kavya : Ughhyuuu~ *nom* *nom* ummuaawaa.... *nom*

Veer (smiles) : Enjoy and just watch.

Sawaal toh Arohi ke mann me bhi tha. Par jis tarah se Veer ne Kavya ke muh me popcorn thoose, usse dekhne ke baad Arohi ne apna muh band rakhna hi behtar samjha.

Aur fir sabhi ki nazre tv screen par jamm gayi.

Video jese hi shuru hua, Veer ek gazab ke black tuxedo me tha, andar white shirt ke saath, wo khada hua tha ek mirror ke saamne.

Wo apne baal bana raha tha. Apni kaali ghani zulfo ko set kar wo sheeshe me khud ko taiyaar kar raha tha.

Aur idhar Kavya ne jese hi usse screen me iss qadar dekha wo kahi kho gayi.

Kavya : Hoooo~ Bh-Bhaiya~ So handsome... (๑♡⌓♡๑)

Fir achanak hi usse jese dhyaan aaya.

Kavya : Ahhh!!?? Wait! Bhaiya? Are you wearing that same shirt now? Uwu~ Iska matlab ye video aaj ki hai. Hai na? Hai na? ✧\(>o<)ﾉ✧

Arohi (sarr par tapli maarte hue) : Video par dhyaan do. E-Even though...

Arohi (khuspusaate hue) : He does looks handsome... *blushes*

Kavya : Ouch~ (｡•́︿•̀｡) Kya dii? Video hi toh dekh rahi hu na? Maara kyu aapne mujhe?

Veer : Tum dono...! Ssshhhh! Shaant!

Kavya : Ughhh!!

Arohi : ....

Vivek : Veer? Ye sab kya mazaak hai? Kya tumne yaha hume apna vlog dikhaane ke liye ikhatta kiya hai kya?

Veer : Bilkul nahi! Jab video dekhenge tab hi toh pata chalega na?

Vivek (mann me) : Akhir karna kya chaahta hai ye Veer.

Aur uske baad achanak hi scene change ho gaya.

Veer ke saamne Bhumika maujood thi. Scene tha Ragini ke ghar ka.

Ye scene aate hi Bhumika ki bauhe sikud gayi. Aur wo soch me padd gayi.

'Ye... Ye toh... Ye toh kal ki baat hai. V-Veer ne mujhe record kiya tha??? P-Par kyuuu???'

Veer par usne nazre daali par Veer toh jese poora ka poora tv par focused tha.

Aur idhar Bhumika samet Shweta ki chinta badhti jaa rahi thi.

Fir scene me hui baat shuru hui.

~~~

Veer : Toh kya hua tha? Aap bataengi mujhe?

Bhumika : Ab mein kya kahu Veer? Kya bolu? Kis muh se bolu? Ab toh kuch bacha hi nahi hai. Mein aur mom dono hi... guilt ke iss sagar me doobe hue hai.

Veer : ...

Bhumika : Sab kuch *sniff* Sab kuch uss Pranjal ne kiya hai Veer. Sab kuch uska hi kiya dhara hai. *sniff* Wo hi uss din hotel aaya tha. Mom ko dinner pe leke gaya ye keh ke ki... *sniff* ki wo Mom ko relax karwaana chaahta hai. Next day bhi aaya woh. And I thought, he was doing all this for mom. *sniff*

Veer : ...

Bhumika : Aur fir... Uss raat jab mom aayi uske next din hi ye pata lagta hai ki usne Mom se sign karwa ke poori ki poori hotel hi apne naam kar lii hai.

Veer : How??

Bhumika (rote hue) : I don't know! I don't know Veer!!! Uske paas pata nahi hotel ke original papers kaha se aa gaye. He even modified the terms and conditions. Papers me usne changes karwaaye ki wo hotel ab uska hone jaa raha hai.

Veer : Alright!!!

Veer utha aur Bhumika ko wahi chorr wo baahar nikal gaya. Wo bechaari bas roti rahi.

~~~

Aur idhar hall me sabhi log shaanti se sab kuch video me hota dekh rahe the. Shweta aur Bhumika pal pal Veer ki taraf bechain hoke nazre ghumaati par keval niraasha hi unhe milti, kyuki Veer unn dono ki taraf dekh hi nahi raha tha.

Agle hi pal ek baar fir scene change hua. Iss scene me Veer bike drive kar raha tha. Shayad usne apni breast pocket me camera set karke rakha hua tha. Jiske zariye wo sab kuch record kar ke ek video ke roop me sab kuch prastut kar raha tha.

~~~

Wo utra aur kisi jagah pe gaya. Andar teen chaar lafange baithe hue the. Aur Veer ne ghuste hi unhe chaukanna kar diya.

Veer : Pranjal kaha hai?

Ladka 1 : Kaun hai bey tu? Aur bina puche andar kese aaya?

Veer bina kuch kahe aage badha aur uss ladke ke sofe par seedhe apni laat de maari. Veer ki taang uss ladke ke chehre ke bagal se hoke tezzi se nikli aur peeche sofe par jaake lagi.

*BAAAAAAAMMMMMMM*

Ladka 1 : S-Saale teri toh...

Par wo bolne laayak na bacha. Kyuki agle hi shan Veer ne uska haath pakda aur...

*Ding*

LIMBO!!!

*CRACCKKKKKK*

Ladka 1 : AAAAAARRRRGGHHHH!!!! M-Maaro saale ko... AAAAHHHH Mera haath...

Aur uske baad toh...

Kuch bataane ki zaroorat hi nahi ki unke saath kya hua tha. Palak jhapakte hi wo saare dard se karaahte hue neeche dale hue the.

Ladka 1 : H-Haaahhhh!! M-Mujhe chorr do... Aaaarrrghhhh!! M-Mera haath... Mera haath...

Veer (smiles) : Chorr dunga!! Bas ye bata do, Pranjal kidhar hai??

Ladka 1 : M-Mein... Mein nahi...

Veer : Ohhhh~ Toh shayad mujhe dard aur badhaana padega.

Ladka 1 : N-Nahiiii!!! Nahi!!!! Mein... Mein bataata hu.

Veer (smiles) : Good~

Ladka 1 : W-Wo... Wo Silver...

Veer : Hmm??

Ladka 1 : Silver Club!! Wo xxxxxxx road waala pub.

Veer (smiles) : Nice!!

*Ding*

LIMBO!!!

*CRAAAACKKKK*

Ladka 1 : Ayiiiiii aaaargggghhhh!!!

Wo ladka kisi kutiya kii tarah ek baar fir bilbila utha. Aur scene ek aur baar badal gaya.

~~~

Idhar hall me sabhi jigyaasa liye sab kuch hota dekh rahe the. Kavya ki aankho me toh sabse zyaada chamak thi.

Kavya (blushes) : W-Wowwww!!! S-So cool!!! Bhaiyaaa~

Arohi : K-Kahi Veer ye sab...??

Usne Veer ko dekh pucha. Tabhi ek sansani macha dene waala khayaal uske mastishq se hote hue guzra jis se Arohi ka poora badan sihar utha.

Arohi : Veer!! K-Kahi tum...!?

Uske sawaal par Veer ki muskaan aur fel gayi. Arohi ne jab usse mud ke dekha toh Veer ki wo evil smile dekh uss ke poore badan me ruye khade ho gaye.

Wo sahi soch rahi thi matlab. Veer Pranjal ke saath kuch karne waala tha.

Aur beshaq, Video me scene aaya fir... Silver Club ka.

~~~

Veer Silver Club me enter hua aur... Waha ka nazaara ekdum hi uttejit kar dene waala tha.

Silver club ek high class pub tha. Ghuste se hi Veer ko andaaza lag chuka tha. Saamne ki stage par ladkiya chote chote kapdo me thirakti hui, apni sexiness showcase kar rahi thi. Harr rhythm, harr beat pe unki patli kamar hil rahi thi.

Aur neeche couples toh kahi strangers ek dusre ke saath apni kamar hilaane me lage hue the. Ek dusre ke badan se badan milaane me lage hue the.

Sexy uttejit kar dene waale gaane loudly baj rahe the. Disco lights se poora club jagmaga raha tha.




Aur unn thirakte hue logo ke beech se Veer apna raasta bana ke guzarta jaa raha tha. Jaha baaki sabhi ki aankho me nasha tha, khumaari chhaayi hui thi. Veer ki aankhein kisi baaj ki tarah kisi ko dhundh rahi thi.

Apne agal bagal maujood nashe me naachte hue logo ko nazar andaaz kar wo aage badhta raha.



Aur kuch hi palo me, usse jiski talaash thi, wo uski aankho ke saamne tha.

Pranjal!!!

Uss se thodi hi duri par wo kuch ladko aur ladkiyo ke saath naachta hua paaya gaya. Veer ne jese hi usse dekha toh uske chehre par ek muskaan fel gayi. Aur, wo aage badha.

Pranjal idhar apne khaas dosto ko hotel milne ki party de raha tha. Daaru se lekar, naach gaane ke intezaam ke liye wo sabhi ko yaha aaj Silver club me leke aaya hua tha.

~~~

Idhar Veer ke ghar me baithe jese hi Pranjal ko ladkiyo ke saath naachte hue dekha wo bhi aise club me toh sabke hosh hi udd gaye.

Kavya (blushes) : Ahhh!! Y-Ye sab??

Manorath : Karunessshhhhh!!!! Ye sab kya haiiii???? Ye kya dekh raha hu mein???? Kya kar raha hai tumhara ladka ye???

Karunesh : P-Papa jii...

Manorath ekdum se behekte hue bol uthe. Unhe apni aankho par visvaash hi nahi ho raha tha. Jis Pranjal ko wo doodh ka dhula samajh rahe the wo aisa nikla? Par ye toh kuch bhi nahi tha. Aage jese unhe aur bhi jhatke lagne waale the.

~~~

Idhar waapas se video me... Woofers me gaane itni loud baj rahe the ki uska Bass itna zyaada tha, Veer apni chhaati me unn vibrations ko bhali bhaati mehsoos kar paa raha tha. Club ki vibe hi alag thi.

Aur Pranjal jo halke nashe me naach raha tha wo jab muda toh saamne usse Veer nazar aa gaya.

Pehle wo chaunka, fir muskuraate hue wo Veer ke nazdeek aaya.

Pranjal : Hahahahaha~ If it isnt you my bastard brother!!?

Veer : ...

Pranjal : Aao aao... Tum bhi aao... Hahahaha~

Aur Veer ko kheechte hue wo apne dosto ke paas le gaya. Aaj jese wo behad khushi me tha.

Dosto se pehchaan kara ke, fir Veer ko wo bar side laaya jaha log shots aur drinks le rahe the.

Pranjal : Tum yaha kya kar rahe ho? Haan? Kisi ladki ne chut nahi dii kya aaj? Hahahahaha~ lag toh yahi raha hai. Ekdum suit vuut me haan? Dil tod ke bhaag gayi lagta. Hahahahaha~

Veer : ...

Pranjal : Wese aaj mein khush hu. Hahahaha~ Boht khush. Toh aaj tumhe jo peena ho piyo. Bill mere upar. Apne dushman ke prati itna dildaar toh ho hi sakta hu mein. Hahahahahaha~

Aur waiter ko bol ke Pranjal ne apne aur Veer ke liye drinks mangwaa lii.

Wo pee raha tha aur yaha Veer bhi pee raha tha.

Par jaha Pranjal ko nasha chadhta jaa raha tha. Veer ekdum tip top aur sober condition me tha. Usse koi nasha hi nahi chadh raha tha. Uske hontho par bas ek qaatilana muskaan saji hui thi.

Inn sab ka kaaran tha...

DETOXIFICATION!!!

Uski nayi skill. Usse Pari ke bol apne mann me yaad aane lage.

[Master! This skill is different. Naam se lag raha hoga ki ye poison detoxify karegi but no. Aisa nahi hai. It detoxifies the damage done by liquor and cigarettes. Dusre shabdo me, yadi aap sharaab ya smoke karte ho toh Detoxification skill usme maujood nasheele padaartho ko detox kar degi. Na hi aapki body me koi harm hoega aur na hi aapko nasha chadhega. So, now you are immune to drunken-ness.]

Yahi reason tha jo Veer mazze me Pranjal ke saath drink kar raha tha. He had nothing to lose.

Sabse behtar baat thi ki ye skill ON ya OFF kari jaa sakti thi. Toh Veer usse off kar alcohol ke nashe me doob bhi sakta tha yadi chaahe toh.

Par filhaal, wo ON thi.

Chaturaayi se Veer ne drinks par drinks mangwaayi aur Pranjal ke saath wo peeta gaya. Nashe me dhutt hone ka wo naatak karne laga.

Idhar Pranjal usse nashe me doobte dekh khud bhi nashe me ghum hone laga.

Aur fir, Veer ne apni chaal chalna shuru kii. Shatranj ka pehla pyaada usne badha diya.

Veer : Aisa kyu kiya tumne!?

Pranjal : *hic* Kya kaha? Mene aisa kyu kiya? *hic* S-Saale madarchod!!! Sab tere kaaran!! Sab tere kaaran!! Yadi tu na hota... *hic* toh aaj sab kuch mera hota... Par tuuu....

Veer : ...

Pranjal : Tere kaaran mera saara plan chaupat ho gaya. *hic* Tere kaaran... *hic* M-Mein bhula nahi hu. Banquet me jo tune mere saath kiya... Meri itni beizzati... Sab yaad hai mujhe...

Veer : Aur tumne jo mere saath kiya uska kya?

Pranjal : H-Huh!?? *hic* Haraami wo sab tu... tu deserve karta hai. Saale... Tu deserve karta hai...

Veer : Ohhhh! Tumhi the na!? Jisne mujhe ghar se baahar nikalwaaya!??

Pranjal : *hic* Hahahaha~ tujhe ab maalum pad raha hai!??? Hahahahahaa~ Koi itna bewakoof kese ho sakta hai bc? *hic*

Veer (smiles) : Kese nikalwaaya aur tumne mujhe?

Pranjal : Hahahahahahahaha~ Abey tu ab tak nahi samajh paaya? *hic* Sab kuch mera plan tha gaandu... *hic* Mera plan... Vivek bhaiya ki company se wo special slippery oil... *hic* Mene hi toh daala tha... Tere perro ke neeche... Hahaha~ Jab tu gira tha na... Mere dil ko itni zyaada khushi kabhi mehsoos nahi hui thi. Saara prasaad... *hic* neeche... Aur tu baahar... Hahahaha~

Veer : Nice!! Aur!!? Isse dekh ke kuch yaad aaya?

Veer ne apne blazer ki inner pocket se fir kuch nikaala aur table par rakh diya.

Ye wahi tha.

Manorath ki wheelchair ka wo modified pahiya. Aur usse dekhte hi Pranjal thoda chaunka aur fir usse apne haatho me kheech liya.

Pranjal : S-Saale!!!! *hic* Y-Ye tere paas kese aaya haraamkhor? Haan?

Veer : Tune hi Dada jii ke sath wo sab karwaya tha na? Bol!!!

Pranjal : Hahahahahaha~ Tujhe pata chal gaya!? *hic* Haan saale!!! Uss budhau ko itni baar samjhaaya mene... *hic* Ki mere hawaale kar de zameen... *hic* Madarchod samajhta hi nahi raha... *hic* hahahahaha~ Fir kya? Tapakwa diya! Kherr manao mera dil... *hic* Arre mera dil bada hai. Hehehe~ Jaan se nahi tapkaaya usko... Bolo? *hic* Hu na mein best!? *hic* Iss pahiye ko mene boht paise deke banwaaya tha hahaha~

Veer : Aur fir ye hotel?

Pranjal : Haan gaandu haan! Hahahahaha~ *hic* meri hi chaal thi. Arre apun ne hi kiya re. Arohi dii aur wo pagli Kavya... Saala *hic* pehle hi tere naam sab kar ke baith gayi. *hic* Mein kya karta? Lund hilaata? *hic* T-Toh apun ne bhi... *hic* Apun ne bhi thaan lii... Apun saala *hic* b-badi macchli ko pakdega seedhe. T-Toh isliye?

Veer : ...

Pranjal : Isliye apun wo teri... *hic* Arre wo kya kehte hai? *hic* Arre... W-Wo.. haan!!! Teri sauteli Maa~ hahahahaha~ *hic* Toh apun... Apun uske paas gaya. Uss pagli ko bhi ullu banaana itna asaan nikla... *hic* Saala sab chutiye hai. Hehehe~ Duniya hi chutiya hai. Apun jo chaahta hai... *hic* Usse paa ke rehta hai...!!!

Veer : ...

Pranjal : Aur... Aur.. *hic* aur ek raaz ki baat batau?

Veer : !!!?

Pranjal : Apun ne... *hic* Mene na... Wo hotel poori ki poori aaj hi ek boht bade iss shejer ke don ko bech dii hai. Hehehehe~ Ab apne paas rokda hi rokda hai... Karodo rupaya... Hehehehe~ *hic* ladki chodo... Daaru piyo... Masti karo *hic*... Aur ab mein uss Don se jud chuka hu. Saale!!! *hic* Ab teri khair nahi... Agle number tera hi Veer!!!

Veer : Ohh!? But still... Kyu kiya tumne ye? Aur kya mila?

Pranjal (cheekhte hue) : Kya mila???? HARAMKHORRRR!!!! *hic* Tera kaaran... Wo chali gayi... *hic* India chorr ke... *hic* Mujhse dur... Sab tere kaaran!!!

Aur itni ho rahi baato me pehli baar Veer ko ek jhatka laga.

Veer : Huh??? K-Kaun???

Pranjal : *hic* Wo chali gayi... Wo chali gayi... *hic* Mein tujhe zindagi bhar maaf nahi karunga... Teri duniya *hic* nark bana dunga... *hic*

Veer : H-Heyyy kaun... Kis... Kis ki baat kar rahe ho.

Veer ne usse jhanjhora par... Pranjal nashe me choor choor ho chuka tha toh woh talli hoke wahi table par hi dherr ho gaya.

'Damn it!!!! Who was he referring to??? K-Kaun bhala!!???'

Aur itna sab kuch ho jaane ke baad. Video band ho gayi.

~~~

Jese hi video khatam hui. Poore hall me ek ghanghor sannaata chhaaya hua tha.

Sab ke hosh ude hue the. Of course, siwae Veer ke. Wo toh popcorn khaane me laga hua tha.

'Hmm? This butter flavour is indeed good.'

[ ]

Aur fir,

"KARUNESSSSSSHHHHHHH!!!!!!"

Manorath ki ek zordaar dahaad poore hall me goonj gayi. Sab apni apni jagah se khade ho gaye.

Manorath ka shareer gusse se kaanp raha tha. Aankhein ekdum gusse se aag baboola ho chuki thi. Aur aaj sabhi unhe iss roop me dekh dang reh gaye. Thoda darr bhi gaye.

Arohi sab kuch bhauchakki sii dekhi thi abhi. Uska mind kaam karna band kar chuka tha jese. Kavya bechaari ko itna bada jhatka laga tha ki woh kuch grasp hi nahi kar paa rahi thi.

Wo jaanti thi ki Pranjal bhaiya uske matlabi the aur sahi nahi the par ye sab? Wo itna gir chuke the aur aise the iski usne aaj tak kabhi kalpana bhi nahi kii hui thi. She was totally shocked.

Par sabse bada jhatka toh Sumitra ko laga tha jo apne bete ki asli sacchayi sehen hi na kar paayi aur iss khabar se behosh ho gayi.

Arohi : M-Maaaaa~

Kavya : Mummyyyyy!!!!!!

Arohi aur Kavya dono hi apni Maa ko sambhaalne ke liye aage badhi aur unhe side me litaate hue unhe hosh me laane lagi.

Par yaha maamla behad garam tha.

Bhumika aur Shweta ek dusre ko baaho me liye roti jaa rahi thi. Wo bhaavuk ho chuki thi. Unki sacchayi ke liye akhir kuch toh haath aaya. Aur wo bhi Veer ne kiya ye sab. Jiske prati glaani ke bhaav me wo doobi hui thi.

Brijesh bhi poora stabdh tha. Aur ab usse Shweta aur Bhumika ke prati glaani mehsoos ho rahi thi. Par ab kya fayda jab chidiya chug gayi khet? Wo ab late ho chuka tha.

Manorath iss se pehle ki baraste ki tabhi baahar gaadi ke rukne ki awaaz aayi. Aur fir...

*Honk* *Honk*

Horn maarte hue koi unhe baahar bulaane laga.

Jese hi wo sabhi baahar pohuche. Toh do aadmi Pranjal ko sahaara deke uthaate hue usse laa rahe the.

Pranjal abhi bhi nashe me tha. Iska matlab...

Arohi aur Kavya Veer ko aankhein phaade dekhne lagi. Iska matlab ye video just kuch derr pehle ki thi. Toh isliye Veer ussi shirt me tha. That explains it all.

Pranjal ladkhadaate hue aage aaya aur phisalti zubaan se gaane gaate hue Manorath ke paas gaya.

Pranjal : Chhuu lene do naazuk hontho ko... *hic* Kuch aur nahi bas... Jaam hai ye Chhu lene do naazuk hontho ko... *hic*

Veer jaha mann hi mann jashn mana raha tha toh wahi Manorath gusse se laal hue jaa rahe the. Aur bas jwalamukhi phata aur...

Manorath ne apni laathi uthaayi aur Pranjal par barsaana shuru kar dii..

*THUDDDD* *THUDDDD*

"Aaaaarrrrghhhhhh!!! Ayyyyiiiiiiii... Maar daala re.. aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa"

Pranjal ki dard bhari karaahe goonjne lagi.

Manorath : HARAAAMKHOR!!! NIRLAJ!!! KAPTI SHAITAAN SAALE.... AAJ MEIN TUJHE CHORRUNGA NAHI... AAJ MEIN TUJHE JAAN SE MAAR DUNGA!!!!!

Aur unki laathi Pranjal ke poore shareer par barasna shuru ho gayi. Karunesh bhi peeche nahi hata. Usne apna belt nikaala aur kisi kutte ki tarah apne bete ko maarne laga.

Idhar Vivek ki haalat patli ho chuki thi. Wo mann hi mann khud ko hi dhanyavaad de raha tha. Accha hua jo wo Pranjal ke saath se hatt chuka tha. Warna aaj...!?

Sochte hue hi uska shareer thanda pad gaya aur usne muh me atka apna thook nigal liya.

"Ayyiii daddaaaa.... Buddhe ne maar diyaa re... Budhau ne maar daalaa... Aaaarrrghhhhh Papaa~.... Aaaarrrghhhhh Ayyyiii maaaiiii.... Marr gaya....."

Paani ke chheethe bhi maarte jaa rahe the uske chehre par jis se usse hosh bhi bana rahe aur uski thukaayi bhi chaalu thi.

Tabhi baahar aayi car se ek aur aadmi nikla. Aur chalte hue seedha Veer ke paas aaya.

Usne ek package Veer ko thamaaya aur bola,

"Boss! Saara kaam ho gaya. Jesa aapne kaha tha."

Veer (smiles) : Good! Tum jaa sakte ho ab.

Ye aur koi nahi, Balhaar hi tha.

Balhaar : J-Jii Boss! Aur koi bhi kaam ho toh bas be-jhijhak bata dene ka mujhe.

Aur wo nikal gaya apne aadmiyo ke saath.

Idhar Pranjal ka haal behaal tha. Gaaliyo aur laathiyo se uska sammaan ho raha tha.

Veer ahista ahista chal ke Shweta ke paas aaya. Wo aankho me aasu liye usse hi dekh rahi thi. Aur kuch keh nahi paa rahi thi siwaaye sisakne ke.

Bhumika ka bhi yahi haal tha. Apni Maa se lage hue wo bhi bas Veer ke kuch kehne ka wait kar rahi thi. Par Veer ne kuch na kaha.

Bas wo package halke haatho se feka jo jaake seedha Shweta ki goad me jaa gira.

Shweta ki himmat na hui usse chheene ki, toh Bhumika ne uss package ko khola aur jese hi usne andar maujood cheez ko dekha toh...

Uski aankho se jhar jhar kar ke aasuo ki moti moti boonde behne lagi. Package me wahi tha.

Hotel ke papers. Aur wo bhi Pranjal ke naam nahi. Uske aur Shweta ke naam the.

Uski kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha ki Veer ne aisa kyu aur kaise kiya? Wo bas usse thank you kehna chaahti thi par bechaari ke muh se wo bhi na nikla. Iss waqt usse jese thank you shabd bhi behad chota lag raha tha Veer ke prati gratitude express karne ke liye. Ant me wo bas bilakhti rahi. Kuch keh na paayi.

Veer utha aur agle hi pal wo ghar ke andar gaya. Apne room ki chaavi dhundne laga. Key milte hi wo apne room me gaya aur usne apni almaari kholi...

'It should be here!!!'

Wo kuch dhundh raha tha. Aur jese agle hi shan usse wo mil gaya.

Wo usse lekar baahar aaya jidhar sabhi maujood the. Pranjal maar kha kha ke behosh ho chuka tha. Aur mahaul behad hi tang ho chuka tha.

Veer aage badha aur usne apne haath me maujood wo cheez apne Dada jii ke haatho me rakh dii.

Veer : Jab ghar se baahar nikaala gaya tha. Tab socha nahi tha ki mere saath aisa kuch hoga. Isliye aapke janmdin par ye khareeda tha. Aapko dene ke liye. Par badqismati meri... Jo mein isse aapko de nahi paaya tha. Isliye... Aaj de raha hu.

Jese hi Manorath ne uss cheez ko dekha, unki aankhein paani paani ho gayi.

Unke haatho me ek flower vase tha. Ye wahi Vase tha jisse Veer ne apne Dada jii ke janmdin ke liye khareeda hua tha. Par uss din uske haatho se laakho ka wo vase tootne par Veer ko kabhi mauka hi nahi mil paaya tha ki Veer usse apne Dada jii ko de sake.

Manorath (rote hue) : V-Veeeerrr!!!

Veer : Chalta hu...

Manorath : Rukk jaa .. Rukk jaa mere bacche...

Par Veer na ruka...

Wo nikla baahar aur apni bike ki orr jaane laga jab peeche se achanak hi Kavya aake uss se lipat gayi.

Kavya (rote hue) : Bhaiyaaaaa!!!!

Veer : ....

Kavya (cries) : Y-Ye sab kya ho gaya bhaiya!!?? Pranjal bhaiya aisa kese kar sakte hai? Aapke saath aisa...!? I hate him!!!! I hate him so much... How can he!?? Bhaiya mat jao na...! Mat jao!!!

Veer : Kavya chorr! Jaane de!!

Kavya : Nahiiiiiii!!!! Nahi jaane dungi!!! Kahi nahi jaane dungi... *sniff*

Veer : Kavya...!

Kavya : How can he...!? Do that to you...!? Dada jii ke saath bhi...!?? *sniff* I won't let you gooo~

Veer : Kavya chorr! Mujhe jaana hai. I must...

Kavya : P-Par... Par...

Veer : Chorr jaldi...!

Kavya : Then... Then promise me... Promise me... 3 din baad... You'll come to college. To see me...!!!

Veer : I...

Kavya : PROMISE MEEE!!!!!

Veer : Fine...

Aur na chaahte hue bhi Kavya ko apni pakad dheeli karni hi padi.

Veer aage badh apni bike par sawaar hua aur usne ek antim baar peeche mud ke dekha.

Peeche... Arohi apne aasuo se bheege gaal liye usse hi dekh rahi thi. Ekdum chup chap. Dono ki nazre ek dusre se bhidi hui thi. Veer jese ye vyakt karna chaah raha tha ki ye sab hona hi tha. Aur shayad wo thoda chintit bhi tha. Pranjal Arohi ka saga bhai tha. Aur uske saath Veer ne aaj ye sab kiya tha.

Par uski saari chinta mit gayi jab agle hi pal Arohi ne haule se haan me sarr hilaaya.

Jese sweekriti de rahi thi ki wo samajh sakti thi sab.

Bas!!! Veer ke liye ye kaafi tha.

*Vrrrrrrrrrrroooooooommm*

Aur wo forun hi waha se nikal gaya.

Uske jaate hi Shweta ko bhi jese hosh aaya. Wo uthi aur Bhumika ke saath jaane lagi.

Manorath : B-Bahuuu!? Kaha jaa rahi ho?

Par Shweta ne koi jawaab na diya. Wo apni jis gaadi se aayi thi ussi me jaake baith gayi.

Bhumika bhi uske peeche peeche jaa rahi thi jab, Brijesh ne usse peeche se toka.

Brijesh : Bhumika!!! K-Kaha jaa rahi ho!??

Bhumika (palat ke namm ankho se) : Jidhar meri Maa ki koi izzat nahi, udhar mein ek pal bhi nahi reh sakti.

Aur wo bhi bina kuch kahe waha se Shweta ke sang nikal gayi.

Unki Manzil bhi wahi thi. Ragini ka ghar. Uske siwa kaha jaa sakti thi bhala woh!?

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Itne bade kaand ke baad Veer yaha abhi bhi chenn me thodi hi tha.

'This was just the trailer for him. I will turn his life hell!!!'

[He deserves it Master~ And now you should take rest too.]

'Yeah!!!'

Wo apne kamre me maujood, apni shirt utaar ke wo abhi pant utaarne hi waala tha jab,

"Ahhh!!? V-Veeer!??"

Kamre ki dehleez par Ragini aa gayi. Aur usse iss haalat me dekh thoda sharma ke nazre ferr lii.

Chori chori uski aankhein Veer ke badan par padi aur usse dekhte hi Ragini ke chehre par khumaari sii chhaane lagi. Veer ka badan aisa lag raha tha jese uparwale ne saalo saal mehnat kar ke taraasha ho.

Aaj Tak Ragini ne kabhi kisi mard ki aisi body asal zindagi me nahi dekhi thi.

Ragini : K-Kya mein andar aa sakti hu?

Veer : Umm... S-Sure!

Wo bistar par baithate hue bola. Usse koi sharm nahi aa rahi thi. Ek Alpha Male bhala khud ki body showcase hone par sharmaata thodi tha.

Ragini aayi aur uske bagal se baith gayi. Kuch derr tak dono me se koi na bola. Fir jese tabhi wo side me jhuki aur Veer ke nagn kandho par apna sarr rakhte hue boli,

"T-Tum mujhse naraaz toh nahi ho na?"

Veer : Umm-Hmm... Nahi!

Ragini : Pakka?

Veer : Hmm~

Ragini : Pakka wala pakka??

Veer (smiles) : Hmm!

Ragini (smiles) : that's good then... Aur...

Veer : Hmm??

Ragini ahista ahista apne chehre ko uthaate hue uski aankho me dekhi. Dono ek dusre ki garam saasein feel kar paa rahe the.

Kamre ki maddham light me Veer ke honth Ragini bhali bhaati dekh paa rahi thi. Bas kuch hi duri ka faasla tha.

Wo apna dhadakta dil liye aage badhi... Ahista ahista... Haule haule...

Aur...

*Ding Dong*

Darwaaze ki ghanti ne sab kuch chaupat kar ke rakh diya.

Ragini : Ahhh!! I...

Veer (looks away) ....

Ragini : Aaj kya hua waha sab... Wo... Aur... Wo baat... We'll talk about it later. Good night! Veer!!!

*Chu~ ♡*

Aur bas gaalo par ek meethi pappi dete hue wo nikal gayi.

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Derr raat ho chuki thi. Par koi tha... Jo iss waqt jaag raha tha.

Wo uthi aur Veer ke kamre ki orr badhi. Jo ki khula hua tha. Halke halke kadam rakh wo dabe paav uske nazdeek aayi.

Aur uske sote hue chehre ko nihaarne lagi. Aankho se aasu tapak tapak kar gir rahe the.

Apne komal haatho se usne Veer ke ke gaal ko sehlaaya. Aur aage jhuki...

*Puch~ ♡*

Uske gaal ko chumte hue uske baal sehlaane lagi aur bas jese uske chehre me kho gayi woh kahi.

Fir unn thar tharaate hontho se bas do hi shabd nikle uske,

"Mera baccha~ !!!!"
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!!!
House of the killers arc nazdeek aata jaa raha hai. Bane rahiyega! Baaki, Like thoke ka aur revos rakhne ka.
Dhanyavaad!!!

Marvelous update Bhai superb

 

[Janu002]

Waiting

 

[Death Kiñg]

Finally.. Pranjal the bastard has been given what he deserved... Aakhirkar, itni mehnat ke baad use uske mann mutaabik prashad mil hi gaya... But jaisa ke ab tak story mein hota aaya hai, har ek sequence ki samaapti par kuchh naye sawaal khade ho hi jaate hain, same happened here...

Starting from Shweta.. Veer ko Shweta ki jaan bachane ka Mission mila tha & he successfully completed it... However, I feel ke agar mission ka chakkar na bhi hota, aur Veer ko pata chalta ke Shweta ki jaan khatre mein hai, tab bhi wo use bachata... Irrespective of what she did to Veer, he would've never let her die like this... Pehle to laga tha ke shayad Shweta ka accident ho jaayega but that robbery Twist was really good, I mean something new... Aur jaisa ke hona laazmi tha, Shweta has her heart completely filled with guilt & sorrow...

Of course Veer ne uski jaan bachayi but he just cannot forgive her like that, what she did to Veer... Yahaan kewal use ghar se nikaalne ke plan mein shaamil hone ki baat nahi hai, but the way she treated him, right from the start... Obviously, Veer uska sautela beta tha, but beta tha & she never gave any attention or care to him... Brijesh jaise baap, aur Maa ki kami mein Veer ka bachpan kaisa beeta hoga wo kehne ki zarurat hi nahi hai... On top of that, Vivek aur Pranjal jaise bhai, Not to forget tab Arohi bhi Veer se baat nahi karti thi... Being totally alone and feeling segregated in your own house... Damn, Veer had a terrible childhood for sure & Shweta is responsible for that too... Khair, aakhiri lines mein Veer ke kamre mein aane waali mahila Shweta hi thi, “Mera Bacha”, clearly points towards another situation, similar to what happened with Ragini (Being caught in the guilt of your own deeds)...

Bhumika, uski abhi zyada baat karna sahi nahi hoga as her personality is somehow hidden... But it would be really interesting to see how she starts a conversation with Veer now... Though, she didn't do anything to Veer like her mother did, but again, Suhana ke saath jab Veer hotel gaya tha, tab uske wo shabd, “I don't know him”, aasan nahi hone waala Bhumika ke liye Veer se maafi paana...

Ragini slapped Veer, I saw it coming, jaise hi Veer ne Shweta ko Get Lost kaha, tabhi samajh aa gaya tha ke launda thappad khayega... Dono ke beech hone waale adhiktar ya shayad sabhi scenes hi eye catching hote hain, and this one was no different... Ragini hugging him from behind, and then the kiss on lips and on his cheek, sab kuchh behad hi badhiya likha aapne bhai... And what I loved the most was Veer not getting normal from that kiss only, Veer ka ek alpha male hona bhi iska ek kaaran hai (What if this Alpha trait could be upgraded to Sigma one)... The second scene was interrupted due to the doorbell but dono ke beech jald hi kuchh bada hone ki sambhavna ban rahi hai... Something big is around the corner and no way Ragini will be satisfied with just a kiss this time around... She'll make a big step towards Veer & I think he'll accept it, this time around too...

Veer ke poore parivaar ke saamne saari sachayi aa gayi... The plan of Pranjal (Vivek ke shaamil hone ki baat abhi unhe nahi pata hai), And then Veer ka wo gift apne Dadaji ko dena jo wo unke birthday ke liye laaya tha, Manorath was feeling bad too... Those tears are enough to prove that Manorath too, is guilty of what he did... Kavya waala scene ek baar furse kaafi cute tha, she's still a child (ignoring those things which she watches on her laptop or mobile )... Kavya ne bhi kaha hai Veer se ke wo us se College mein mile... Use bhi bura lag hi raha hoga ke uske apne sage bhai ne Veer ke saath wo sab kuchh kiya... Dono ki agli conversation interesting hogi...

Arohi seems to be a really mature & intelligent girl... No doubt, ke uski personality Veer ki presence mein thodi ya shayad kaafi zyada badal jaati hai, but still I think ke Veer ke aas paas jitni bhi ladkiyan hain, only Arohi can stand near Kaera when it comes to intelligence... Her gesture of blinking her eyes to calm Veer,again shows that she has started understanding him very well... The chemistry between these two is going to take huge leaps soon...

But the biggest question for now! Kya Veer waapis ghar lautega? Wo ghar jahaan se use beizzat karke nikaala gaya, wo ghar jahaan use kabhi pyaar aur apnapan nahi mila, aur shayad wo ghar jahaan uski Maa ke saath kuchh aisa hua, jiske kaaran wo apni aulaad ko akela chhod gayi!! Abhi ke liye koyi chance nahi hai ke Veer ghar waapis laute... Rather, mujhe lagta hai ke jald hi wo apna khud ka ek naya ghar banayega (not to forget the chocolate factory though )... The only person who could've forced him to come back home would've been Ragini, in case wo khud us ghar mein hoti... But.. let's see is maamle mein aage kya hota hai, because ab koshishein to ki hi jaayengi Veer ko ghar waapis bulane ki... Manorath & Kavya & Maybe Arohi too, dekhne yogya hogi in sabhi ki conversations...

Brijesh...kuchh khaas reaction uske padhne ko nahi milen hain abhi tak Pranjal waale matter par... Jab Property ke batwaare ke waqt Manorath ne wo Party rakhi thi, tab Pranjal aur Veer ke beech huyi ghatnaon ko Brijesh ne bhi dekha tha, aur Veer ki intelligence ko dekh kar uske chehre par ek muskaan thi... Maybe, in future we'll have to say, Brijesh utna bhi bura nahi!!

Mission completion par Veer ko 5,000 points aur saath hi Detoxification skill bhi mil gayi... Ab uske paas around 6,000 points hain,dekhne yogya hoga ke wo in points ka kya karega... Detoxification is a great skill too, no impact of Alcohol & similar things... The skill was helpful against Pranjal too... Idhar Veer aur Aabha ke beech bhi ek aur sex session hua, I think Aabha bhi Suman ki hi raah par agrasar hai... Haan, shayad Suman ki barabri, in being devoted to Veer, koyi bhi naa kar paaye, but I'm sure ke jald hi Aabha bhi wo favourability ka 100 cross kar legi...

Balhaar... Ab wo pooro tarah se Veer ko apna boss maan chuka hai aur ho bhi kyon naa, Veer has made him the boss of a strong gang... He's the most powerful gangster in Mumbai for now, Balhaar ka hona, Veer ke liye ek bada boost saabit ho sakta hai, yadi uske saamne future mein aane waale challenges par dhyaan diya jaaye to... Ab shayad Veer apne business par bhi jald hi focus karega aur use bhi nayi heights par lekar jaayega...

Coming to Pranjal, uska pardafaash to ho gaya but ek naya sawaal khada ho chuka hai... Pranjal ka Veer ke pichhe haath dhokar padna, property aur paisa hi ab tak iske reasons lagte the but ab Pranjal ne ek naya khulasa kiya hai... Veer se nafrat ka kaaran ek ladki hai!? Joki Veer ki wajah se India chhodkar chali gayi... But kya ye sach hai? Veer ki personality Pari ke aane se pehle kya thi, hum sabhi jaante hain, aise mein Veer ka kisi ladki ke saath koyi connection.. seens impossible... Ho sakta hai Pranjal ko koyi galatfehmi huyi ho or anything like that, but would be really interesting to see what's the reality...

Abhi tak story mein jitni bhi ladkiyon ki entry huyi hai, kewal do hi yahaan par fit ho sakti hain, firstly that Priya (Slogan Incident)... Us mission ke pichhe ka kaaran bhi abhi tak saamne nahi aaya hai... But Priya India mein, oopar se Mumbai mein hi thi,so kya wo Pranjal ki close one ho sakti hai? Seems unlikely, but it's possible ke wo waapis India aa gayi ho aur Pranjal ko pata na ho... Second one, wahi Pahaadi waali ladki, Slogan ki maut ke waqt jo wahaan maujood thi... In dono ke alawa agar koyi hai, to wo new character hi honi chahiye... Btw. I think House Of Killers mein shayad wahi Pahadi waali ladki, villain ho sakti hai...

Pranjal ki sutaayi to ho gayi hai but poora hisaab karna baaki hai... Property jo uske hisse mein aa gayi hai, use Manorath waapis to le hi leha but wo bhi kya Veer ko mil jaayegi? Veer ko ab pata chal chuka hai ke Arohi & Kavya ne apna hissa uske naam kar diya tha,ispar Veer ka reaction? Shweta aur Bhumika aage kya karengi? Veer ne Balhaar ke zariye unhe hotel waapis dilwa diya hai, let's see is baat ka kya impact hota hai dono maa – beti par... Bhavana bhi jaldi hi India aa sakti hai... Not to forget, Kaera aur Sonia kaafi samay se picture se baahar hain, something exciting seems to be on the way...

Bahut hi badhiya updates the bro! Especially, the break down scenes of Shweta, the scenes between Ragini & Veer, dono hi cheezen bahut khubsurti se likhi aapne... Saath hi Pranjal ke saath huyi baat cheet aur uska description, was again excellent... The story is touching new heights after every passing update & that's the beauty of this masterpiece...

Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

 

[Bruce The Bat]

Great update Werewolf bhai.
Majha aa gaya update padh ke.
Veer sab ko betha ke unke ghar ke ladle ka asli chehra samne laya jo badi safai se chhupa rakha tha pranjal ne. "Unka ghar" isliye kyuki lagta nahi ki veer ko ab uss ghar se matlab he ya wo wapis waha jana chahta he. Bas apni behno aur dada ke liye aaya jaya karega milne par wapis uss ghar me rehne ke liye nahi Jane wala. Itna to pakka he.
Kavya ka character bahut safai se likha he aapne. Uski age ke hisab se. Kavya ghar ki sabse choti sadaysa he aur ladali bhi sabki. Aur isiliye thodi impatient bhi kyuki mastikhor bachhe ese hi hote he. Aur kavya abhi bhi mastikhor to he hi sath me cute bhi he jo Veer ke samne apna pura haq jatati he. Veer ne achha kiya popcorn thoos diye jise dekh ke Aarohi bhi kuch na boli. Par uske sath veer esa nahi kar sakta.
Ab veer ko ese taiyar hota dekh kavya aur Aarohi to kho hi gayi unn me. Bhumika bhi dekh rahi hogi veer ko. Aur taiyar hote waqt Ragini bhi kese piche rehti veer ko dekhne se. Shirt iron kar ke di hogi, shoes chamkake rakhe honge Veer ke liye.
Wahi veer pranjal ka pata lagane uske dosto ko dho diya. Ab ghar pe to keh ke jayega nahi ki pub/bar me ja raha hu. Achhi dhulai bhi kar di thoda hath bhi saaf ho gaya. Wahi ye dekh ke kavya impressed aur Aarohi apni soch me. Aur aage wahi hua jo usne socha tha.
Bar me jake pranjal full party mode me dikha. Yaha veer ne acchi tarah se baate shuru ki warna pranjal ke mooh se sach nahi nikalta. Wahi pranjal veer ko ladki ke maamle me bol raha he. Abe saale pranjal harami ko pata nahi he Veer ne kiski virginity li he . Aage to uski dono behne ke bhi number aayega.
Wahi Veer ko mili nayi skill kamal ki he. Ab parties me khul ke drink bhi kar sakega wo kuch tension hi nahi. Ye skill sabko milni chahiye . Khair Veer ne pranjal se sab kabool karwa hi liya. Wahi pranjal ko nahi pata ki wo apni kabar khud khod raha he.
Clip me sab dekhne ke baad to sab ke hosh hi jese udd gaye. Shweta aur bhumika ko thodi rahat hui hogi ki unke paas ek proof he. Wahi aarohi bhi ekdum blank he, kavya to bholi ladki usse ye sab ek bada jhatka hi lagega. Pranjal ka ye roop na dekha hoga usne. Wahi vivek chain ki saas lega jo uska naam nahi aaya kahi. Par manorath to aaj jese maar hi dalenge pranjal ko. Karunesh aur sumitra dono ko apne bete ka asli chehra dekha jise dekh ke dono sharminda he.
Pranjal aaya bhi to nashe me dhut wo sone pe suhaga tha. Fir to manorath ne achhe se bajayi aur sath hi karunesh ne bhi. Belte belte mare thik he.
Pranjal ne to hotel bech bhi di thi par jise bechi wo Veer ko boss kehta he. Balhar ne papers de diye veer ko. Aur rokda cash bhi le hi lega. Papers bhi shweta ko de diye aur jese diye he usse lagta he Veer aage unki shakal tak nahi dekhna chahta.
Dada ke liye li hui gift aaj de raha he wo. Tab mauka hi kaha diya tha kisi ne. Par aaj wo gift dekh ke uske dada ki aankho me aansu he kyuki tab wo aur unka pariwar galat tha par ab kuch ho nahi sakta. Veer to gift deke nikal chuka he. Piche se kavya ne rok na ka try kiya par ab uss ghar me wo wapis nahi aana chahta. Par ab 3 din baad kya kyu promise liya he kavya ne ?? Kuch special he kya 3 din baad ??
Veer ke jate hi shweta bhi nikal chali. Rokna ki koshish ki par kis mooh se rokte. Bhumika bhi Wahi rahegi jaha uski maa hogi. Wo bhi iss bas naam ke pariwar me nahi rehna chahti.
Aarohi ko pata he ki veer ne jo kiya wo jaruri tha. Har ek update ke sath Veer aur Aarohi ki chemistry achhi hoti ja rahi he.
Ab sachai jaan ke ab brijesh ko pachtawa nahi ho raha ki usne Veer ko ghar se nikal diya ?? Manorath bhi yahi soch raha hoga.
Wahi ghar jake veer abhi bhi satisfied nahi he Aur hona bhi nahi chahiye. Itne saal pranjal ne kya kuch nahi kiya uske sath to ese ek baar saja deke thodi na chhod dena he. Veer usko ehsaas karayega ki kon superior he. Wahi Ragini sab jaanne ko aayi he ki sab thik hua ya nahi jese biwi puchti he ki aaj ka din thik tha ?? Kuch pareshani to nahi ?? Har din ke sath Ragini Veer ki puri wife hi banti ja rahi he. Ek achha moment bann gaya tha par agar sab kuch itni jaldi ho gaya to kya majha . Ye masti Karna, ek dusre ko chhedna ese hi pal to kahani ko aur achha banate he. Aur aap ye bahut achhe se kar rahe ho wolf bhai.
Wahi raat me sab ke sone ke baad shweta hi hogi jo Veer ke room me aayi he. Aur ab jake usse apna bachha yaad aa raha he. Itne saal jese veer tha hi nahi. Par hotel wapis dila di he to ab pyaar bhi dikhayegi par Veer pe asar padega ?? Lagta to nahi ki filhaal veer maaf karega shweta ko. Next update me majha aayega. Shweta kya karegi ab aage ?? Bhumika ka behaviour bhi dekhne layak hoga ab jab jab wo Veer ke samne hogi.
Aur ye sala last me pranjal ne ek sar dard de diya Veer ko. Kon thi wo jo Veer ke karan chali gayi. Bachpan se juda kuch na kuch he warna veer ko yaad hota.
Pranjal ko jab hosh aayega tab majha aayega. Uska reaction kya hoga jab usse pata chalega ki uska bhed khul gaya he. Wo to apna typical roop me hi hoga jese har subah hota he. Par uski agli subah alag hogi. Ab sawal ye he ki pranjal ko kya saja milegi ?? Veer ko vase todne aur prasad girane ki saja ghar se nikal dena thi. Jisme uski galti nahi thi. Par ab jab baate saaf ho chuki he to kya saja dega manorath ??? Ya chhod dega ?? Chhod dega to injustice hoga Veer se.
Lagta he manorath pranjal ko apne gaon bhej dega khet me majduri ke liye. Aur kahega ki ye rahi jameen jitna paisa bana sakta he bana le kheti karke.
Inn sab me Nidhi Shreya juhi ye sab kya kar rahe he ye pata hi na chala??
Kaera aur Sonia to busy rehti he. Suhana bhi milegi jald hi veer se esa lagta he.
Wahi bhavna ke mann me hajaro vichar ghum rahe honge. Aur Tejal ko ye lag raha hoga ki uski maa vikram ko uska papa banane ke vichar me to nahi.
Waiting for next update.

 

[Lovekillsyou]

Itne saare comments rehte hai bro. Mein almost sabhi ko reply deta hu. Kabhi kabhi nazar me nahi aate kuch comments. Reh jaate hai.

Aapko boht acche se samajh aa gaya hai.

Kahani me already explained hai ek baat. Bhavna left Veer when he was only an year old. Toh uss hisaab se Pranjal tab 2 saal ka tha. And Tej 4 saal ki rahi hogi. You got your answer.

To kya huwa pranjal 2 sàl kà thà. Pranjàl hain to harami

 

[Xabhi]

Update - 85 ~ Bringing down the Bastard.
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Ab tak...

Veer : Sshhhhh!!! Just keep watching!!!

Usne uth ke side me rakhi popcorns uthaayi aur sabke haatho me thama dii.

Wo waapas se apni jagah jaake baitha aur usne pendrive me ek folder open kiya aur usme ek video play kar dii.

Video ke shuru me kuch text likh ke aaye...

LIGHTS! CAMERA! ACTION!!!!

Aur fir wo Video clip play hona shuru ho gayi.

Ab aage...

Raat ka samay tha aur Veer ke puraane ghar me sabhi maujood the. Hall me hi lagi badi LED TV par Veer ne ek video clip play kii hui thi.

Poore main hall me andhera tha. Aisa lag raha tha jese kisi theatre me aake baith gaye ho. TV ki screen bhi behad badi thi, kareeban 55 inch, toh bilkul cinema waali feeling aa rahi thi sabhi ko.

Unn sab ke haatho me Veer ne ek ek popcorn ke packet thamaaye hue the. Veer ke liye jese ye kisi movie se kam nahi tha.

Kavya jo uske baayi taraf baithi hui thi usse curiosity se dekhe jaa rahi thi.

Kavya : Bataiye na bhaiya!!! Ye sab kya chal raha hai?

Veer : Mene kaha na bas dekhti jao.

Kavya : Par... Mmmphhhh!!!?? (´⊙ω⊙`)！

Iss se pehle ki wo bechaari kuch keh paati Veer ne uski goad me rakhe popcorn ke packet se haath me kuch popcorn lii aur seedhe uske muh me thoos dii.

Kavya : Ughhyuuu~ *nom* *nom* ummuaawaa.... *nom*

Veer (smiles) : Enjoy and just watch.

Sawaal toh Arohi ke mann me bhi tha. Par jis tarah se Veer ne Kavya ke muh me popcorn thoose, usse dekhne ke baad Arohi ne apna muh band rakhna hi behtar samjha.

Aur fir sabhi ki nazre tv screen par jamm gayi.

Video jese hi shuru hua, Veer ek gazab ke black tuxedo me tha, andar white shirt ke saath, wo khada hua tha ek mirror ke saamne.

Wo apne baal bana raha tha. Apni kaali ghani zulfo ko set kar wo sheeshe me khud ko taiyaar kar raha tha.

Aur idhar Kavya ne jese hi usse screen me iss qadar dekha wo kahi kho gayi.

Kavya : Hoooo~ Bh-Bhaiya~ So handsome... (๑♡⌓♡๑)

Fir achanak hi usse jese dhyaan aaya.

Kavya : Ahhh!!?? Wait! Bhaiya? Are you wearing that same shirt now? Uwu~ Iska matlab ye video aaj ki hai. Hai na? Hai na? ✧\(>o<)ﾉ✧

Arohi (sarr par tapli maarte hue) : Video par dhyaan do. E-Even though...

Arohi (khuspusaate hue) : He does looks handsome... *blushes*

Kavya : Ouch~ (｡•́︿•̀｡) Kya dii? Video hi toh dekh rahi hu na? Maara kyu aapne mujhe?

Veer : Tum dono...! Ssshhhh! Shaant!

Kavya : Ughhh!!

Arohi : ....

Vivek : Veer? Ye sab kya mazaak hai? Kya tumne yaha hume apna vlog dikhaane ke liye ikhatta kiya hai kya?

Veer : Bilkul nahi! Jab video dekhenge tab hi toh pata chalega na?

Vivek (mann me) : Akhir karna kya chaahta hai ye Veer.

Aur uske baad achanak hi scene change ho gaya.

Veer ke saamne Bhumika maujood thi. Scene tha Ragini ke ghar ka.

Ye scene aate hi Bhumika ki bauhe sikud gayi. Aur wo soch me padd gayi.

'Ye... Ye toh... Ye toh kal ki baat hai. V-Veer ne mujhe record kiya tha??? P-Par kyuuu???'

Veer par usne nazre daali par Veer toh jese poora ka poora tv par focused tha.

Aur idhar Bhumika samet Shweta ki chinta badhti jaa rahi thi.

Fir scene me hui baat shuru hui.

~~~

Veer : Toh kya hua tha? Aap bataengi mujhe?

Bhumika : Ab mein kya kahu Veer? Kya bolu? Kis muh se bolu? Ab toh kuch bacha hi nahi hai. Mein aur mom dono hi... guilt ke iss sagar me doobe hue hai.

Veer : ...

Bhumika : Sab kuch *sniff* Sab kuch uss Pranjal ne kiya hai Veer. Sab kuch uska hi kiya dhara hai. *sniff* Wo hi uss din hotel aaya tha. Mom ko dinner pe leke gaya ye keh ke ki... *sniff* ki wo Mom ko relax karwaana chaahta hai. Next day bhi aaya woh. And I thought, he was doing all this for mom. *sniff*

Veer : ...

Bhumika : Aur fir... Uss raat jab mom aayi uske next din hi ye pata lagta hai ki usne Mom se sign karwa ke poori ki poori hotel hi apne naam kar lii hai.

Veer : How??

Bhumika (rote hue) : I don't know! I don't know Veer!!! Uske paas pata nahi hotel ke original papers kaha se aa gaye. He even modified the terms and conditions. Papers me usne changes karwaaye ki wo hotel ab uska hone jaa raha hai.

Veer : Alright!!!

Veer utha aur Bhumika ko wahi chorr wo baahar nikal gaya. Wo bechaari bas roti rahi.

~~~

Aur idhar hall me sabhi log shaanti se sab kuch video me hota dekh rahe the. Shweta aur Bhumika pal pal Veer ki taraf bechain hoke nazre ghumaati par keval niraasha hi unhe milti, kyuki Veer unn dono ki taraf dekh hi nahi raha tha.

Agle hi pal ek baar fir scene change hua. Iss scene me Veer bike drive kar raha tha. Shayad usne apni breast pocket me camera set karke rakha hua tha. Jiske zariye wo sab kuch record kar ke ek video ke roop me sab kuch prastut kar raha tha.

~~~

Wo utra aur kisi jagah pe gaya. Andar teen chaar lafange baithe hue the. Aur Veer ne ghuste hi unhe chaukanna kar diya.

Veer : Pranjal kaha hai?

Ladka 1 : Kaun hai bey tu? Aur bina puche andar kese aaya?

Veer bina kuch kahe aage badha aur uss ladke ke sofe par seedhe apni laat de maari. Veer ki taang uss ladke ke chehre ke bagal se hoke tezzi se nikli aur peeche sofe par jaake lagi.

*BAAAAAAAMMMMMMM*

Ladka 1 : S-Saale teri toh...

Par wo bolne laayak na bacha. Kyuki agle hi shan Veer ne uska haath pakda aur...

*Ding*

LIMBO!!!

*CRACCKKKKKK*

Ladka 1 : AAAAAARRRRGGHHHH!!!! M-Maaro saale ko... AAAAHHHH Mera haath...

Aur uske baad toh...

Kuch bataane ki zaroorat hi nahi ki unke saath kya hua tha. Palak jhapakte hi wo saare dard se karaahte hue neeche dale hue the.

Ladka 1 : H-Haaahhhh!! M-Mujhe chorr do... Aaaarrrghhhh!! M-Mera haath... Mera haath...

Veer (smiles) : Chorr dunga!! Bas ye bata do, Pranjal kidhar hai??

Ladka 1 : M-Mein... Mein nahi...

Veer : Ohhhh~ Toh shayad mujhe dard aur badhaana padega.

Ladka 1 : N-Nahiiii!!! Nahi!!!! Mein... Mein bataata hu.

Veer (smiles) : Good~

Ladka 1 : W-Wo... Wo Silver...

Veer : Hmm??

Ladka 1 : Silver Club!! Wo xxxxxxx road waala pub.

Veer (smiles) : Nice!!

*Ding*

LIMBO!!!

*CRAAAACKKKK*

Ladka 1 : Ayiiiiii aaaargggghhhh!!!

Wo ladka kisi kutiya kii tarah ek baar fir bilbila utha. Aur scene ek aur baar badal gaya.

~~~

Idhar hall me sabhi jigyaasa liye sab kuch hota dekh rahe the. Kavya ki aankho me toh sabse zyaada chamak thi.

Kavya (blushes) : W-Wowwww!!! S-So cool!!! Bhaiyaaa~

Arohi : K-Kahi Veer ye sab...??

Usne Veer ko dekh pucha. Tabhi ek sansani macha dene waala khayaal uske mastishq se hote hue guzra jis se Arohi ka poora badan sihar utha.

Arohi : Veer!! K-Kahi tum...!?

Uske sawaal par Veer ki muskaan aur fel gayi. Arohi ne jab usse mud ke dekha toh Veer ki wo evil smile dekh uss ke poore badan me ruye khade ho gaye.

Wo sahi soch rahi thi matlab. Veer Pranjal ke saath kuch karne waala tha.

Aur beshaq, Video me scene aaya fir... Silver Club ka.

~~~

Veer Silver Club me enter hua aur... Waha ka nazaara ekdum hi uttejit kar dene waala tha.

Silver club ek high class pub tha. Ghuste se hi Veer ko andaaza lag chuka tha. Saamne ki stage par ladkiya chote chote kapdo me thirakti hui, apni sexiness showcase kar rahi thi. Harr rhythm, harr beat pe unki patli kamar hil rahi thi.

Aur neeche couples toh kahi strangers ek dusre ke saath apni kamar hilaane me lage hue the. Ek dusre ke badan se badan milaane me lage hue the.

Sexy uttejit kar dene waale gaane loudly baj rahe the. Disco lights se poora club jagmaga raha tha.




Aur unn thirakte hue logo ke beech se Veer apna raasta bana ke guzarta jaa raha tha. Jaha baaki sabhi ki aankho me nasha tha, khumaari chhaayi hui thi. Veer ki aankhein kisi baaj ki tarah kisi ko dhundh rahi thi.

Apne agal bagal maujood nashe me naachte hue logo ko nazar andaaz kar wo aage badhta raha.



Aur kuch hi palo me, usse jiski talaash thi, wo uski aankho ke saamne tha.

Pranjal!!!

Uss se thodi hi duri par wo kuch ladko aur ladkiyo ke saath naachta hua paaya gaya. Veer ne jese hi usse dekha toh uske chehre par ek muskaan fel gayi. Aur, wo aage badha.

Pranjal idhar apne khaas dosto ko hotel milne ki party de raha tha. Daaru se lekar, naach gaane ke intezaam ke liye wo sabhi ko yaha aaj Silver club me leke aaya hua tha.

~~~

Idhar Veer ke ghar me baithe jese hi Pranjal ko ladkiyo ke saath naachte hue dekha wo bhi aise club me toh sabke hosh hi udd gaye.

Kavya (blushes) : Ahhh!! Y-Ye sab??

Manorath : Karunessshhhhh!!!! Ye sab kya haiiii???? Ye kya dekh raha hu mein???? Kya kar raha hai tumhara ladka ye???

Karunesh : P-Papa jii...

Manorath ekdum se behekte hue bol uthe. Unhe apni aankho par visvaash hi nahi ho raha tha. Jis Pranjal ko wo doodh ka dhula samajh rahe the wo aisa nikla? Par ye toh kuch bhi nahi tha. Aage jese unhe aur bhi jhatke lagne waale the.

~~~

Idhar waapas se video me... Woofers me gaane itni loud baj rahe the ki uska Bass itna zyaada tha, Veer apni chhaati me unn vibrations ko bhali bhaati mehsoos kar paa raha tha. Club ki vibe hi alag thi.

Aur Pranjal jo halke nashe me naach raha tha wo jab muda toh saamne usse Veer nazar aa gaya.

Pehle wo chaunka, fir muskuraate hue wo Veer ke nazdeek aaya.

Pranjal : Hahahahaha~ If it isnt you my bastard brother!!?

Veer : ...

Pranjal : Aao aao... Tum bhi aao... Hahahaha~

Aur Veer ko kheechte hue wo apne dosto ke paas le gaya. Aaj jese wo behad khushi me tha.

Dosto se pehchaan kara ke, fir Veer ko wo bar side laaya jaha log shots aur drinks le rahe the.

Pranjal : Tum yaha kya kar rahe ho? Haan? Kisi ladki ne chut nahi dii kya aaj? Hahahahaha~ lag toh yahi raha hai. Ekdum suit vuut me haan? Dil tod ke bhaag gayi lagta. Hahahahaha~

Veer : ...

Pranjal : Wese aaj mein khush hu. Hahahaha~ Boht khush. Toh aaj tumhe jo peena ho piyo. Bill mere upar. Apne dushman ke prati itna dildaar toh ho hi sakta hu mein. Hahahahahaha~

Aur waiter ko bol ke Pranjal ne apne aur Veer ke liye drinks mangwaa lii.

Wo pee raha tha aur yaha Veer bhi pee raha tha.

Par jaha Pranjal ko nasha chadhta jaa raha tha. Veer ekdum tip top aur sober condition me tha. Usse koi nasha hi nahi chadh raha tha. Uske hontho par bas ek qaatilana muskaan saji hui thi.

Inn sab ka kaaran tha...

DETOXIFICATION!!!

Uski nayi skill. Usse Pari ke bol apne mann me yaad aane lage.

[Master! This skill is different. Naam se lag raha hoga ki ye poison detoxify karegi but no. Aisa nahi hai. It detoxifies the damage done by liquor and cigarettes. Dusre shabdo me, yadi aap sharaab ya smoke karte ho toh Detoxification skill usme maujood nasheele padaartho ko detox kar degi. Na hi aapki body me koi harm hoega aur na hi aapko nasha chadhega. So, now you are immune to drunken-ness.]

Yahi reason tha jo Veer mazze me Pranjal ke saath drink kar raha tha. He had nothing to lose.

Sabse behtar baat thi ki ye skill ON ya OFF kari jaa sakti thi. Toh Veer usse off kar alcohol ke nashe me doob bhi sakta tha yadi chaahe toh.

Par filhaal, wo ON thi.

Chaturaayi se Veer ne drinks par drinks mangwaayi aur Pranjal ke saath wo peeta gaya. Nashe me dhutt hone ka wo naatak karne laga.

Idhar Pranjal usse nashe me doobte dekh khud bhi nashe me ghum hone laga.

Aur fir, Veer ne apni chaal chalna shuru kii. Shatranj ka pehla pyaada usne badha diya.

Veer : Aisa kyu kiya tumne!?

Pranjal : *hic* Kya kaha? Mene aisa kyu kiya? *hic* S-Saale madarchod!!! Sab tere kaaran!! Sab tere kaaran!! Yadi tu na hota... *hic* toh aaj sab kuch mera hota... Par tuuu....

Veer : ...

Pranjal : Tere kaaran mera saara plan chaupat ho gaya. *hic* Tere kaaran... *hic* M-Mein bhula nahi hu. Banquet me jo tune mere saath kiya... Meri itni beizzati... Sab yaad hai mujhe...

Veer : Aur tumne jo mere saath kiya uska kya?

Pranjal : H-Huh!?? *hic* Haraami wo sab tu... tu deserve karta hai. Saale... Tu deserve karta hai...

Veer : Ohhhh! Tumhi the na!? Jisne mujhe ghar se baahar nikalwaaya!??

Pranjal : *hic* Hahahaha~ tujhe ab maalum pad raha hai!??? Hahahahahaa~ Koi itna bewakoof kese ho sakta hai bc? *hic*

Veer (smiles) : Kese nikalwaaya aur tumne mujhe?

Pranjal : Hahahahahahahaha~ Abey tu ab tak nahi samajh paaya? *hic* Sab kuch mera plan tha gaandu... *hic* Mera plan... Vivek bhaiya ki company se wo special slippery oil... *hic* Mene hi toh daala tha... Tere perro ke neeche... Hahaha~ Jab tu gira tha na... Mere dil ko itni zyaada khushi kabhi mehsoos nahi hui thi. Saara prasaad... *hic* neeche... Aur tu baahar... Hahahaha~

Veer : Nice!! Aur!!? Isse dekh ke kuch yaad aaya?

Veer ne apne blazer ki inner pocket se fir kuch nikaala aur table par rakh diya.

Ye wahi tha.

Manorath ki wheelchair ka wo modified pahiya. Aur usse dekhte hi Pranjal thoda chaunka aur fir usse apne haatho me kheech liya.

Pranjal : S-Saale!!!! *hic* Y-Ye tere paas kese aaya haraamkhor? Haan?

Veer : Tune hi Dada jii ke sath wo sab karwaya tha na? Bol!!!

Pranjal : Hahahahahaha~ Tujhe pata chal gaya!? *hic* Haan saale!!! Uss budhau ko itni baar samjhaaya mene... *hic* Ki mere hawaale kar de zameen... *hic* Madarchod samajhta hi nahi raha... *hic* hahahahaha~ Fir kya? Tapakwa diya! Kherr manao mera dil... *hic* Arre mera dil bada hai. Hehehe~ Jaan se nahi tapkaaya usko... Bolo? *hic* Hu na mein best!? *hic* Iss pahiye ko mene boht paise deke banwaaya tha hahaha~

Veer : Aur fir ye hotel?

Pranjal : Haan gaandu haan! Hahahahaha~ *hic* meri hi chaal thi. Arre apun ne hi kiya re. Arohi dii aur wo pagli Kavya... Saala *hic* pehle hi tere naam sab kar ke baith gayi. *hic* Mein kya karta? Lund hilaata? *hic* T-Toh apun ne bhi... *hic* Apun ne bhi thaan lii... Apun saala *hic* b-badi macchli ko pakdega seedhe. T-Toh isliye?

Veer : ...

Pranjal : Isliye apun wo teri... *hic* Arre wo kya kehte hai? *hic* Arre... W-Wo.. haan!!! Teri sauteli Maa~ hahahahaha~ *hic* Toh apun... Apun uske paas gaya. Uss pagli ko bhi ullu banaana itna asaan nikla... *hic* Saala sab chutiye hai. Hehehe~ Duniya hi chutiya hai. Apun jo chaahta hai... *hic* Usse paa ke rehta hai...!!!

Veer : ...

Pranjal : Aur... Aur.. *hic* aur ek raaz ki baat batau?

Veer : !!!?

Pranjal : Apun ne... *hic* Mene na... Wo hotel poori ki poori aaj hi ek boht bade iss shejer ke don ko bech dii hai. Hehehehe~ Ab apne paas rokda hi rokda hai... Karodo rupaya... Hehehehe~ *hic* ladki chodo... Daaru piyo... Masti karo *hic*... Aur ab mein uss Don se jud chuka hu. Saale!!! *hic* Ab teri khair nahi... Agle number tera hi Veer!!!

Veer : Ohh!? But still... Kyu kiya tumne ye? Aur kya mila?

Pranjal (cheekhte hue) : Kya mila???? HARAMKHORRRR!!!! *hic* Tera kaaran... Wo chali gayi... *hic* India chorr ke... *hic* Mujhse dur... Sab tere kaaran!!!

Aur itni ho rahi baato me pehli baar Veer ko ek jhatka laga.

Veer : Huh??? K-Kaun???

Pranjal : *hic* Wo chali gayi... Wo chali gayi... *hic* Mein tujhe zindagi bhar maaf nahi karunga... Teri duniya *hic* nark bana dunga... *hic*

Veer : H-Heyyy kaun... Kis... Kis ki baat kar rahe ho.

Veer ne usse jhanjhora par... Pranjal nashe me choor choor ho chuka tha toh woh talli hoke wahi table par hi dherr ho gaya.

'Damn it!!!! Who was he referring to??? K-Kaun bhala!!???'

Aur itna sab kuch ho jaane ke baad. Video band ho gayi.

~~~

Jese hi video khatam hui. Poore hall me ek ghanghor sannaata chhaaya hua tha.

Sab ke hosh ude hue the. Of course, siwae Veer ke. Wo toh popcorn khaane me laga hua tha.

'Hmm? This butter flavour is indeed good.'

[ ]

Aur fir,

"KARUNESSSSSSHHHHHHH!!!!!!"

Manorath ki ek zordaar dahaad poore hall me goonj gayi. Sab apni apni jagah se khade ho gaye.

Manorath ka shareer gusse se kaanp raha tha. Aankhein ekdum gusse se aag baboola ho chuki thi. Aur aaj sabhi unhe iss roop me dekh dang reh gaye. Thoda darr bhi gaye.

Arohi sab kuch bhauchakki sii dekhi thi abhi. Uska mind kaam karna band kar chuka tha jese. Kavya bechaari ko itna bada jhatka laga tha ki woh kuch grasp hi nahi kar paa rahi thi.

Wo jaanti thi ki Pranjal bhaiya uske matlabi the aur sahi nahi the par ye sab? Wo itna gir chuke the aur aise the iski usne aaj tak kabhi kalpana bhi nahi kii hui thi. She was totally shocked.

Par sabse bada jhatka toh Sumitra ko laga tha jo apne bete ki asli sacchayi sehen hi na kar paayi aur iss khabar se behosh ho gayi.

Arohi : M-Maaaaa~

Kavya : Mummyyyyy!!!!!!

Arohi aur Kavya dono hi apni Maa ko sambhaalne ke liye aage badhi aur unhe side me litaate hue unhe hosh me laane lagi.

Par yaha maamla behad garam tha.

Bhumika aur Shweta ek dusre ko baaho me liye roti jaa rahi thi. Wo bhaavuk ho chuki thi. Unki sacchayi ke liye akhir kuch toh haath aaya. Aur wo bhi Veer ne kiya ye sab. Jiske prati glaani ke bhaav me wo doobi hui thi.

Brijesh bhi poora stabdh tha. Aur ab usse Shweta aur Bhumika ke prati glaani mehsoos ho rahi thi. Par ab kya fayda jab chidiya chug gayi khet? Wo ab late ho chuka tha.

Manorath iss se pehle ki baraste ki tabhi baahar gaadi ke rukne ki awaaz aayi. Aur fir...

*Honk* *Honk*

Horn maarte hue koi unhe baahar bulaane laga.

Jese hi wo sabhi baahar pohuche. Toh do aadmi Pranjal ko sahaara deke uthaate hue usse laa rahe the.

Pranjal abhi bhi nashe me tha. Iska matlab...

Arohi aur Kavya Veer ko aankhein phaade dekhne lagi. Iska matlab ye video just kuch derr pehle ki thi. Toh isliye Veer ussi shirt me tha. That explains it all.

Pranjal ladkhadaate hue aage aaya aur phisalti zubaan se gaane gaate hue Manorath ke paas gaya.

Pranjal : Chhuu lene do naazuk hontho ko... *hic* Kuch aur nahi bas... Jaam hai ye Chhu lene do naazuk hontho ko... *hic*

Veer jaha mann hi mann jashn mana raha tha toh wahi Manorath gusse se laal hue jaa rahe the. Aur bas jwalamukhi phata aur...

Manorath ne apni laathi uthaayi aur Pranjal par barsaana shuru kar dii..

*THUDDDD* *THUDDDD*

"Aaaaarrrrghhhhhh!!! Ayyyyiiiiiiii... Maar daala re.. aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa"

Pranjal ki dard bhari karaahe goonjne lagi.

Manorath : HARAAAMKHOR!!! NIRLAJ!!! KAPTI SHAITAAN SAALE.... AAJ MEIN TUJHE CHORRUNGA NAHI... AAJ MEIN TUJHE JAAN SE MAAR DUNGA!!!!!

Aur unki laathi Pranjal ke poore shareer par barasna shuru ho gayi. Karunesh bhi peeche nahi hata. Usne apna belt nikaala aur kisi kutte ki tarah apne bete ko maarne laga.

Idhar Vivek ki haalat patli ho chuki thi. Wo mann hi mann khud ko hi dhanyavaad de raha tha. Accha hua jo wo Pranjal ke saath se hatt chuka tha. Warna aaj...!?

Sochte hue hi uska shareer thanda pad gaya aur usne muh me atka apna thook nigal liya.

"Ayyiii daddaaaa.... Buddhe ne maar diyaa re... Budhau ne maar daalaa... Aaaarrrghhhhh Papaa~.... Aaaarrrghhhhh Ayyyiii maaaiiii.... Marr gaya....."

Paani ke chheethe bhi maarte jaa rahe the uske chehre par jis se usse hosh bhi bana rahe aur uski thukaayi bhi chaalu thi.

Tabhi baahar aayi car se ek aur aadmi nikla. Aur chalte hue seedha Veer ke paas aaya.

Usne ek package Veer ko thamaaya aur bola,

"Boss! Saara kaam ho gaya. Jesa aapne kaha tha."

Veer (smiles) : Good! Tum jaa sakte ho ab.

Ye aur koi nahi, Balhaar hi tha.

Balhaar : J-Jii Boss! Aur koi bhi kaam ho toh bas be-jhijhak bata dene ka mujhe.

Aur wo nikal gaya apne aadmiyo ke saath.

Idhar Pranjal ka haal behaal tha. Gaaliyo aur laathiyo se uska sammaan ho raha tha.

Veer ahista ahista chal ke Shweta ke paas aaya. Wo aankho me aasu liye usse hi dekh rahi thi. Aur kuch keh nahi paa rahi thi siwaaye sisakne ke.

Bhumika ka bhi yahi haal tha. Apni Maa se lage hue wo bhi bas Veer ke kuch kehne ka wait kar rahi thi. Par Veer ne kuch na kaha.

Bas wo package halke haatho se feka jo jaake seedha Shweta ki goad me jaa gira.

Shweta ki himmat na hui usse chheene ki, toh Bhumika ne uss package ko khola aur jese hi usne andar maujood cheez ko dekha toh...

Uski aankho se jhar jhar kar ke aasuo ki moti moti boonde behne lagi. Package me wahi tha.

Hotel ke papers. Aur wo bhi Pranjal ke naam nahi. Uske aur Shweta ke naam the.

Uski kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha ki Veer ne aisa kyu aur kaise kiya? Wo bas usse thank you kehna chaahti thi par bechaari ke muh se wo bhi na nikla. Iss waqt usse jese thank you shabd bhi behad chota lag raha tha Veer ke prati gratitude express karne ke liye. Ant me wo bas bilakhti rahi. Kuch keh na paayi.

Veer utha aur agle hi pal wo ghar ke andar gaya. Apne room ki chaavi dhundne laga. Key milte hi wo apne room me gaya aur usne apni almaari kholi...

'It should be here!!!'

Wo kuch dhundh raha tha. Aur jese agle hi shan usse wo mil gaya.

Wo usse lekar baahar aaya jidhar sabhi maujood the. Pranjal maar kha kha ke behosh ho chuka tha. Aur mahaul behad hi tang ho chuka tha.

Veer aage badha aur usne apne haath me maujood wo cheez apne Dada jii ke haatho me rakh dii.

Veer : Jab ghar se baahar nikaala gaya tha. Tab socha nahi tha ki mere saath aisa kuch hoga. Isliye aapke janmdin par ye khareeda tha. Aapko dene ke liye. Par badqismati meri... Jo mein isse aapko de nahi paaya tha. Isliye... Aaj de raha hu.

Jese hi Manorath ne uss cheez ko dekha, unki aankhein paani paani ho gayi.

Unke haatho me ek flower vase tha. Ye wahi Vase tha jisse Veer ne apne Dada jii ke janmdin ke liye khareeda hua tha. Par uss din uske haatho se laakho ka wo vase tootne par Veer ko kabhi mauka hi nahi mil paaya tha ki Veer usse apne Dada jii ko de sake.

Manorath (rote hue) : V-Veeeerrr!!!

Veer : Chalta hu...

Manorath : Rukk jaa .. Rukk jaa mere bacche...

Par Veer na ruka...

Wo nikla baahar aur apni bike ki orr jaane laga jab peeche se achanak hi Kavya aake uss se lipat gayi.

Kavya (rote hue) : Bhaiyaaaaa!!!!

Veer : ....

Kavya (cries) : Y-Ye sab kya ho gaya bhaiya!!?? Pranjal bhaiya aisa kese kar sakte hai? Aapke saath aisa...!? I hate him!!!! I hate him so much... How can he!?? Bhaiya mat jao na...! Mat jao!!!

Veer : Kavya chorr! Jaane de!!

Kavya : Nahiiiiiii!!!! Nahi jaane dungi!!! Kahi nahi jaane dungi... *sniff*

Veer : Kavya...!

Kavya : How can he...!? Do that to you...!? Dada jii ke saath bhi...!?? *sniff* I won't let you gooo~

Veer : Kavya chorr! Mujhe jaana hai. I must...

Kavya : P-Par... Par...

Veer : Chorr jaldi...!

Kavya : Then... Then promise me... Promise me... 3 din baad... You'll come to college. To see me...!!!

Veer : I...

Kavya : PROMISE MEEE!!!!!

Veer : Fine...

Aur na chaahte hue bhi Kavya ko apni pakad dheeli karni hi padi.

Veer aage badh apni bike par sawaar hua aur usne ek antim baar peeche mud ke dekha.

Peeche... Arohi apne aasuo se bheege gaal liye usse hi dekh rahi thi. Ekdum chup chap. Dono ki nazre ek dusre se bhidi hui thi. Veer jese ye vyakt karna chaah raha tha ki ye sab hona hi tha. Aur shayad wo thoda chintit bhi tha. Pranjal Arohi ka saga bhai tha. Aur uske saath Veer ne aaj ye sab kiya tha.

Par uski saari chinta mit gayi jab agle hi pal Arohi ne haule se haan me sarr hilaaya.

Jese sweekriti de rahi thi ki wo samajh sakti thi sab.

Bas!!! Veer ke liye ye kaafi tha.

*Vrrrrrrrrrrroooooooommm*

Aur wo forun hi waha se nikal gaya.

Uske jaate hi Shweta ko bhi jese hosh aaya. Wo uthi aur Bhumika ke saath jaane lagi.

Manorath : B-Bahuuu!? Kaha jaa rahi ho?

Par Shweta ne koi jawaab na diya. Wo apni jis gaadi se aayi thi ussi me jaake baith gayi.

Bhumika bhi uske peeche peeche jaa rahi thi jab, Brijesh ne usse peeche se toka.

Brijesh : Bhumika!!! K-Kaha jaa rahi ho!??

Bhumika (palat ke namm ankho se) : Jidhar meri Maa ki koi izzat nahi, udhar mein ek pal bhi nahi reh sakti.

Aur wo bhi bina kuch kahe waha se Shweta ke sang nikal gayi.

Unki Manzil bhi wahi thi. Ragini ka ghar. Uske siwa kaha jaa sakti thi bhala woh!?

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Itne bade kaand ke baad Veer yaha abhi bhi chenn me thodi hi tha.

'This was just the trailer for him. I will turn his life hell!!!'

[He deserves it Master~ And now you should take rest too.]

'Yeah!!!'

Wo apne kamre me maujood, apni shirt utaar ke wo abhi pant utaarne hi waala tha jab,

"Ahhh!!? V-Veeer!??"

Kamre ki dehleez par Ragini aa gayi. Aur usse iss haalat me dekh thoda sharma ke nazre ferr lii.

Chori chori uski aankhein Veer ke badan par padi aur usse dekhte hi Ragini ke chehre par khumaari sii chhaane lagi. Veer ka badan aisa lag raha tha jese uparwale ne saalo saal mehnat kar ke taraasha ho.

Aaj Tak Ragini ne kabhi kisi mard ki aisi body asal zindagi me nahi dekhi thi.

Ragini : K-Kya mein andar aa sakti hu?

Veer : Umm... S-Sure!

Wo bistar par baithate hue bola. Usse koi sharm nahi aa rahi thi. Ek Alpha Male bhala khud ki body showcase hone par sharmaata thodi tha.

Ragini aayi aur uske bagal se baith gayi. Kuch derr tak dono me se koi na bola. Fir jese tabhi wo side me jhuki aur Veer ke nagn kandho par apna sarr rakhte hue boli,

"T-Tum mujhse naraaz toh nahi ho na?"

Veer : Umm-Hmm... Nahi!

Ragini : Pakka?

Veer : Hmm~

Ragini : Pakka wala pakka??

Veer (smiles) : Hmm!

Ragini (smiles) : that's good then... Aur...

Veer : Hmm??

Ragini ahista ahista apne chehre ko uthaate hue uski aankho me dekhi. Dono ek dusre ki garam saasein feel kar paa rahe the.

Kamre ki maddham light me Veer ke honth Ragini bhali bhaati dekh paa rahi thi. Bas kuch hi duri ka faasla tha.

Wo apna dhadakta dil liye aage badhi... Ahista ahista... Haule haule...

Aur...

*Ding Dong*

Darwaaze ki ghanti ne sab kuch chaupat kar ke rakh diya.

Ragini : Ahhh!! I...

Veer (looks away) ....

Ragini : Aaj kya hua waha sab... Wo... Aur... Wo baat... We'll talk about it later. Good night! Veer!!!

*Chu~ ♡*

Aur bas gaalo par ek meethi pappi dete hue wo nikal gayi.

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Derr raat ho chuki thi. Par koi tha... Jo iss waqt jaag raha tha.

Wo uthi aur Veer ke kamre ki orr badhi. Jo ki khula hua tha. Halke halke kadam rakh wo dabe paav uske nazdeek aayi.

Aur uske sote hue chehre ko nihaarne lagi. Aankho se aasu tapak tapak kar gir rahe the.

Apne komal haatho se usne Veer ke ke gaal ko sehlaaya. Aur aage jhuki...

*Puch~ ♡*

Uske gaal ko chumte hue uske baal sehlaane lagi aur bas jese uske chehre me kho gayi woh kahi.

Fir unn thar tharaate hontho se bas do hi shabd nikle uske,

"Mera baccha~ !!!!"
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!!!
House of the killers arc nazdeek aata jaa raha hai. Bane rahiyega! Baaki, Like thoke ka aur revos rakhne ka.
Dhanyavaad!!!

Wah bhai veer ne to pranjal ki acche se kah kr le li, to ye detoxification skill jahar ko nhi sarab ke nashile hanikarak pdarth ko sarir se bahar nikal deti hai, sahi hai guru Isse to veer Lagbhag hmesha immune rhega, to lite camera and action yha se suru hua tha bhumika ke khulashe se ki pranjal kaha se or kab aaya sweta ke samne... veer ne pranjal ke ek bande ko apni skill limbo ke use se aisa mara ki use pranjal ka thikana btana hi pda, vo Hotal(club-pub) jaha se Uski barbadi ki dasta likhi Jane vali thi veer ne vha pahuch Jo dekha use dekh kr to manorath dada ji ki bhauhe hi tan gyi...
sarab or sabab ke Bich jhumta hua pranjal Jise dekh veer ki mushkan me char chand lga diye or Jo baki rahi sahi kasar baki thi vo veer ne pranjal ko sarab pila pila kr sare raaj ugalva liye... Ghar me dada ji or uske bete ne kya gajab suta hai pranjal ko maza hi aa gya padh kr bhai, to akhir kar itne dino se dada ji ko unka birthday gift jo veer ne dene ke liye rakh rkha tha vo de diya, dada ji or papa ji dono ne rokne ki Kosis ki pr apna veer alpha male hai Vo na ruka or ruke bhi kyo jb uski ijjat ek kutte se bhi buri kr rakhi thi Ghar me Sabhi ne, Kavya ko arohi ko ek jhatka lga ki unka bhai kitna gira hua insan hai or sath hi unhe veer ke dard ka Sayad thoda ahsas hua ho ki kya gujri hogi Uspr... veer ne jate huye arohi ko tb tk dekha jb tk arohi ne apna sir ha me nhi hila diya or yah arohi ka Ha me apna sir hilana veer ke liye ek medal se kam nhi tha... veer ne akhir kya kiya tha pranjal ke sath Jisse vo veer se is kadar nafrat karta hai akhir kiske bare me baat kr rha tha pranjal kya vo ek ladki thi Ya koi ladka dekhna mazedar hoga... Pranjal ne sweta ka hotel ek don ko bech diya Jisse use kafi paisa milta hai or Vo Don balhar miya hai jo khud veer ke under rahta hai, veer ne sweta ko uska Hotal uske or Uski beti ke name kr diya or vha se nikal gya vhi sweta or uski ladki dono bhi us Ghar se nikal veer ke yha chali gyi or Aaj to bhumika ya bhavna jo bhi naam tha Usne bhi apne baapu Ko jvab diya - jaha pr meri MA ki ijjat nhi vha Mai nhi Rah sakti... Is baat pe siti bjane ka man kiya tha mera...
Superb update bhai Sandar jabarjast lajvab

 

[Xabhi]

Is Pranjal talking about " Tej " ?????? ( Bachpan ka pyaar )

because story ki starting se leker abhi tak Veer aur Pranjal ke bich kisi ladki ko leker koi clash hua nahi
and as u mentioned in the start of the story ki veer ka interection with pepole was zero and he was not a daring boy too koi ladki ka metter veer ke saath jisko pranjal love karta ho not possible.

according to me it might be Tejju di Essa isliye kyoki us time jab veer born hua tha to bhavna aur tej bhi manorath ke ghar per hi rahte the to pranjel and tej saath hi rahte the khelte the to pranjel ke mann mai tej ko leker feelings aayi hongi but something bed happened (according to pranjal its because of veer as he said to veer ) and bhavna aur tej veer ko chodker chali gayi.

it is just my guess Werewolf bhai because app esi kisi ladki ko introduce nahi karvaya ha

by the way update is top notch keep it bhai.....

Bhai jb tej or bhavna Ghar chhod kr gyi to veer 1 saal ka or pranjal 2 sal ka tha Jra aap btao aapko apne 2 saal ka kya kya yaad hai, mujhe lagta hai school ki koi ladki hogi...

 

[Xabhi]

Waitttt!!!! Yadi Veer Pranjal ki lulli par Limbo use karega... Toh aise me toh usse uske tatte pakadne honge. No waaayyyy he would do that...
Kahi aur karwa lo bro. Not on lulli...

 

[Werewolf]

Nice update bhai

Nice behtarin mast awesome update bro

Uttam Lekhni ka Prayog Werewolf bhai...Waiting for Next Update Eagerly...

Nice update

Fabulous update bhai keep posting

Fantastic mind-blowing update

Mast update bhai

Nice update brother ek aur suspence badha diya aapne ab dekhte hai pranjal kis ladki ki baat kar raha tha

Superb fantastic update bro

Zabardast update bhai

Mind blowing update....

Sala Pranjal ka to beda par ho gaya ...

Shewta ka dil pighal gaya ab ....m

Superb update

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Jabardast update bhai maza aa gaya.ab dekhte hai age kya hota hai or kiss karne wali kon hai .

Kau thi ye shweta ya koi aur. jabardast bahut hi shaandaar update tha.

Nice update bhai
Aakhir kar Pranjal ka khel khatam kar diya veer ne

Nice update...

Nice update

Ye pranjal kiski baar kar raha tha. Veer ki wajah se kon india chhod kar chali gayi. Kahi pranjal veer ki bahan ki baat to nahi kar raha na

Superb update bhai

Fabulous update bhai

awesome

Nice Update

Badhiya tha ji

Nice update

Super update bro

Extraordinary update and super emotional

Great twist!

Thanks guys!