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Aenge bhai, aaenge. Nidhi, Ragini sab ke sang scenes aaenge. House of the killers arc ke pehle romance ko hi first preference diya jaega. Dhanyavaad. Keep supporting!Mast he Bhai, waiting for more romantic encounter with Ragini,Nidhi and Arohi.....
Veer ko Maa aur Behen se bhi milwa do.
And Veer ki dushmano se bhi scene dikha dena.And finally waiting waiting waiting for........
Thanks man!Mast update bhai... Every aspect of the story explained
Dhanyavaad bhai!ह्म्म्म्म
सोच रहा हूँ क्या प्रतिक्रिया दूँ
एक वीर ना जाने कितने हीर
श्वेता की ममता हिलोरें ले रही है
रागिनी के अरमान करवटें ले रही हैं
बेचारी निहारिका
और अमेजिंग सुमन
रजत को पीतल बनाने में कोई कसर ना छोड़ा
अब लेवल भी सात तक पहुँच गया है
अब अपग्रेड वर्जन परी
लगता है परी के अंदर मानवीय भावनाएँ पनपने लगे हैं
खैर आगे देखते हैं क्या होता है
एक पाठक के रूप में वीर को नायक और निधि को मुख्य नायिका के रूप में देख व सोच पा रहा हूँ
पर लेखक आप हैं आपकी कल्पना में क्या क्या तिलिस्म छुपे हुए हैं आप ही जानों
बहरहाल बेहतरीन अपडेट
Wo writer hi kya jo readers ke comments par apni pratikriya hi na de!? Thanks btw!lols mujhey bahut acha laga raders key jabav dtey hue bhee aap kahani ko bhi time dey rahei hain,
lagey raho aag laga do aag sarey aap key deewaney ho jain ishwere sey yahi dua hey'
Thanks man!Nice update bhai, I always support you I know ur hard work, I can wait for this to read to any longer, thanks bhai giving this nice story
Alpha trait toh hai hi, but let's see aage kya milta hai usse. Thanks btw!Werewolf bhai loved the update, as always . Aapne starting me jo veer ko alpha trait di thi mujhe lagta hai wahi is story ki jaan hai. Aapse ek question tha ki aapne Puri story pahle se soch rakhi hai end tak ya phir go with the flow wala way hai aapka likhne ka, just asking ...... Aur rahi baat update ki , I always prefer QUALITY OVER QUANTITY ,so jab aap chaho tab update do .
Yahi toh kaaran tha jo Veer Suman ko rules and regulations padhne ko keh raha tha duniya ke. Usse sab kuch sikha raha tha. Mahila mandal me ab Shweta apna jhanda lehraaegi. Ek aisi naari jo samaaj ke liye ek taqatvar naari hai, jiska aadar hona chahiye, jiski izzat karni chahiye. Par unhe kya pata ki wahi aurat ek mard ke liye khud ko usse poori tarah se saup chuki hai. Upar se ab Niharika bhi Veer ke under aa rahi hai. Dhanyavaad bhai! Bane rahiyega!Lajabab update Wolfe brother.
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Nidhi mam ko unka dhrub lautane ke liye veer ne naap taul kar kadam badhaya...
Yahan mujhe ye bhi lagta hai ki suman ko issi tarah veer, mahila sanghatan me apni mazbooti banane ko kahega jisse mahila sangathan ke ki next adhyachh suman ban jaye.
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"Ragini" Iss aurat ne apne veer ko poori tarah se sammohit kar diya hai, bhale hi wo sammohan apne achhayi aur apnapan ka ho.. But mujhe kahani ke unn khaas character me se ek ragini ji ka character lagta hai...
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Veer : I WILL TAKE EVERYTHING FROM HIM!!!
Verr ne nidhi ke ex husband ko apne flat bechkar 50 lakh rupye to de diye . Lekin veer ke ant me bole gaye iss vakya ne kahi na kahi ye bata diya hai ki veer na keval uss insan se apne 50 lakh vapas lega balki, wo uskaa sab kuchh chheen lega... Kaise...
Wo to age ke update mai hame pata hi chal jayegi.
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Ant me bas itna hi kahna chahta hun ki... Bhai... Amazing.... U r amazing bro aur aapki lekhni super amazing
Thanks man!लाजवाब update bhai jann superree duperrere जबरदस्त शानदार
Veer to full to wat lagayega Rajat ki
Kese lagata hey ye bhai dekhna दिलचस्प hoga
Bhai veer ki maa bhavana ka kya huva ohh locate dekhne ke bad
Thanks! Thread me swagat hai.Just completed reading all updates superb story
Dhanyavaad! Swaagat hai thread me aapka.Bhai aapki story laazwab he one of the best story he ye forum jitni padhi he
Aapse bas ek request he veer & uski maa ke Sweta ke sath physical relation dikhane ki jaldi koshish karna aur ho sake to veer ki real make sath bhi ...
Aur thanks lot aise behtareen kahani likhne ke liye
Bro aj update ayega kyaPlanning se hi Veer chalega ab. Thanks a lot btw.
Pehli baar hi naam sunn raha hu free guy. Story kisi se bhi inspired nahi hai. System ek sub genre hota hai jo Japanese aur Chinese light novels me use hota hai. Jese vampire ek sub genre hai, supernatural powers ek sub genre hai, wese hi system hai. Yaha pe kisi ne introduce nahi kia tha toh sabhi iss sub genre se vanchit the.Great story...kuch hatke hai....sub genre - 'System'... Mujhe koi idea nahi ye kya hai but starting m laga ye Hollywood movie "Free Guy" se inspired hai...wo 13 Aug ko release Hui ye 14 ko start....jo v ho padne m maza aa raha hai....keep writing....
Abhi ye nahi bata sakta. Bas padhte jaiye.Bro nice update....
Ek sawal hai mera vo ladki kon thi jo slogan ko marte vakt jungle ke dusri tarf thi is it she is any main charcter??
NahiYes but itna to bata sakte ho is she main character like soniya or not