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[Ajammy]

Superb awsm update to gud Luvd it Plzzzz Plzzzz do cont asap Takecare

 

[Prince800]

Badhiya update Bhai

 

[Decentlove100]

Very nice update bhai.... Sex scene bade majedaar tha.... Ane wale updates main bhi yeh scene aayega lagta hai....

 

[Akthe]

Update to jabardast tha bro

 

[Death Kiñg]

So, saamne aa gaya hai ke kaise Veer ne apna pehla mission poora kiya tha... As expected, Suman ka hi sabse bada role tha is poore prakran mein... Veer ko “Conquer Niharika Bansal", ye mission na kewal Shreya ki problem solve karne hetu mila tha balki Suman ko us raaste par aage bhejne ke liye Mila tha, jiski wajah se Veer use taiyaar kar raha tha... Ab Suman permanently Mahila Mandal mein shaamil hone waali hai, jaisa ke Veer ne Niharika se keh hi diya hai... Beharhal, Jab Suman ne akele hi Rajat ke khilaf morcha khol diya tha, wo scene sachmein bohot hi badhiya tha aur uske baad to Veer ke plan ke hi anusaar Niharika ke group ki baaki mahilayen wahaan pahunch hi gayi thi... Nateejtan, Rajat ko Dhruv ko Nidhi ke haathon mein saunpna pada...

Rajat, seedhe taur par Mahila Mandal ke khauf ke kaaran use wo baat maan ni padi anyatha mujhe nahi lagta ke yadi Nidhi use 50 Lakh ki rakam de deti, to bhi wo Dhruv ko uske hawale karta... Yahaan, Veer ne apne hisse mein aayi property mein se hi wo flat becha tha jiske zariye use wo rakam praapt huyi... Par jo baat vishesh rahi wo the Veer ke wo shabd jo usne Balhaar se kahe the, that he'll take everything from Rajat... It's obvious i guess, jitna dard, jitni takleef usne Nidhi ko di hai, physically Nidhi ko di gayi peeda ek taraf, par jo kasht usne ek Maa ko uske bete se alag karke use diya hai, Rajat ko maafi nahi mil sakti... He'll have to face severe consequences of what he has done to Nidhi & undoubtedly Veer is going to make sure that Rajat will repent his deeds...

Nidhi ke liye is se zyada khushi ki baat kya ho sakti hai ke wo apne bache ko apne seene se lagakar ab dulaar kar sakti hai... Aakhir, itne saare dukhon aur andhere ke baad sukh ka ujala uski zindagi mein ho hi gaya hai... Veer ne ab tak jo kuchh bhi is kahani mein kiya hai, jitnon ki bhi madad ki hai, this one.. bringing together a mother & her child, Veer ne nischit roop se bohot bada kaam kiya hai... Khair, Dhruv aur Nidhi ke punar milan ke baad Veer aur Nidhi ke beech jo bhi mulakatein huyin unmein Nidhi ka badla – badla sa roop saaf dikhayi de raha hai... Jaisa pehle se hi expected tha, Nidhi ki ye problem solve karte hi uska vyavahaar Veer ke liye poori tarah se badal gaya... Veer ka use hug karna aur kehna, “I'll make you mine one day", yadi koyi aur samay hota to ek thappad puraskar ke roop mein use mil gaya hota but...

Khair, favourability mein to jump dikhega hi jab Veer agli baar use check karega but is baat mein bhi koyi shakh nahi ke Nidhi ke dil mein Veer ke prati kritagyata ke bhaav bhi panpenge... Wahin Juhi ki khushi bhi dekhne laayak thi, Dhruv ko wahaan paakar... Use bhi ab ek jeevit khilauna mil gaya hai, Veer jo vaada Juhi se karta tha us se baatein manwane ke liye, wo usne poora kar diya hai, to nischit taur par Chocolate Factory bhi zyada door nahi hai...

Veer ne apne Food Truck ke business ko bhi expand karna shuru kar diya hai... Aur saath hi alag – alag Trucks ko manage karne ke liye workers ko bhi hire kar liya hai... I think Sonali ka kirdar bhi aage chalkar bada hota jaayega... Her role is definitely different from that of Her Mother and Bhabhi, starting mein Veer ke liye uska vyavahar rookha hi tha, joki jaayaz bhi tha... Afterall, apni Maa ke saath Veer ke sambandh uske liye accept karna kahaan sambhav tha... But, I think increase in Veer's appearance, his behaviour with Suman and Sonali both, and the way he included her in his business, sab kuchh milkar Sonali ki soch badal chuke hain... Jab last baar Veer ne apna status check kiya tha, tab Sonali ki favourability bhi kaafi zyada thi aur ab is update mein jo baatein dono mein huyin hain... Let's see how things unfold between them...

Shreya... Kaafi waqt se saaf ho chuka hai ke Shreya Veer se pyaar karne lagi hai... But just like many other girls, wo bhi apne dil ki baat saaf – saaf kehne mein asamarth hai... T – Shirt ke maadhyam se kehne ka prayas Kiya usne but, of course Veer ko abhi bilkul idea nahi hoga ke Shreya uske baare mein kya feel karne lagi hai... I think Veer ko jald hi sochna padega, un sabhi ladkiyon/mahilayon ke baare mein jo uske kareeb hain, sabke saath apne badalte rishte ko use analyse karna padega, anyatha aage chalkar kaafi chaos paida ho sakti hai... Shreya par bhi is poore ghatnakram ka gehra prabhav pada hi hoga... Firstly, Veer saved her from Niharika & then of course Nidhi's problem, again a big rise in favourability is expected here too... (Btw. Yahaan bhi Richa se milta – julta vyavahar tha Shreya ka, difficulties in expressing her love towards Veer/Rahul)...

Wahin, Shweta aur Bhumika ke saath bhi cheezein badal rahin hain... Filhaal ke liye Veer ka bartav Shweta ke prati rookha hi hai, of course he cannot just forget everything in a little time like this... I think jab use Shweta ka past pata chalega, in case he gets to know about it, tab uska bartav Shweta ke prati badal sakta hai... Shweta har prakar ki dishes bana rahi hai, ke kabhi to Veer shayad khush hoga, uske dwara banaye gaye khaane se shayad Veer ke chehre par muskurahat aayegi, but it's not gonna happen soon... Bhumika ke dwara ki gayi request par Veer ne Shweta dwara banaye gaye Gulab Jamun kha liye, aur dono Maa – Beti ke liye is se badhkar aur kya ho sakta tha..? Veer ko manane ki daud mein refueling saman prateet huyi hogi dono ko ye ghatna...

Khair, dono missions ke poora hone ke baad mile points ki madad se Veer ne sabhi stats ki limit ko break kar liya hai, means ab jaldi hi stats par bhi kaam chalu ho jaayega... He has around 5000 points left with him, would be interesting to see wo kis prakaar se unka upyog karega...

Idhar, Niharika ko shayad ab poori tarah se conquer kar liya hai Veer ne... Uske saath jo bhi Veer ne uske office mein kiya, mission waale din aur uske baad Rajat ke intezam waale din, Niharika par dono hi ghatnaon ka behad gehra inpact padna hi tha... Mardon se nafrat karne waali mahila ko yadi koyi mard aise hi apna gulaam banane mein kaamyab ho jaayega, to uspar asar to padna nischit hi hai... Yahaan, Niharika ke is prakar ke vyavahar ka kaaran bhi pata chala, uske Pita dwara uski Maa par past mein ki gayi krurta ka hi nateeja hai jo wo Vikaas ke saath kar rahi hai... Khair, Vikaas ke saath wo chahe kuchh bhi Kare, hune kya..? Wo to saala hai hi kameena, but apne bete se bhi aisa sautela vyavhar meri samajh se baahar hai... It's okay ke wo ek beti chahti thi par Ritvik bhi usi ki aulaad hai, 9 mahine use apne garbh mein rakhne ke baad wo apne bete se alag kamre mein rehti hai... I don't know what to say about this..? Interesting rahega dekhna ke Veer ke saath huye is sex encounter ka kya prabhav hoga Niharika par...

In the end, Ragini... Lagta hai ke Ragini ke sabr ka baandh toot chuka hai... Har roz Veer ke ghar se nikalne ke samay uska saamne se kiss ki maang karna, ishara kaafi tha batane ke liye ke uska pyaar Veer ke prati kitna gehra hota jaa raha hai... But Veer ke liye ye sab samajh na shayad abhi sambhav nahi... Reason, abhi wo apne aas – paas maujood females se apne rishte ko lekar conscious nahi hua hai, the day he starts thinking about all this, his bonding with many will get strengthened... Ragini kitchen ki slab par baithi Beer pi rahi thi, aur uski aankhon mein aansun saje huye the... Kya ab wo samay aa gaya hai jab Ragini apne dil ka haal Veer ke saamne khol kar rakh degi..? I think it's time for the conversation between them...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Rajat se “sab kuchh" kaise chheenega Veer... Nidhi aur Shreya ke saath Veer ka sudhrid hota rishta aage chalkar kya rang lega... Shweta aur Bhumika kab aur kaise apni koshishon mein kaamyab hongi... Pranjal to filhaal ke liye underground ho hi chuka hai, but Rajat aur wo, ye dono kameene Veer ke khilaaf haath mila sakte hai kya (in case Rajat ko pata chal jaaye ke Veer hi sabke pichhe tha)... Wahin Kaera aur Sonia ke darshan huye bhi kaafi samay ho chuka hai... She must be ecstatic to learn another life lesson from Veer... Kavya aur Arohi ke scenes bhi agle kuchh updates mein dekhne mil sakte hain... Niharika ke maamle mein aage kya hoga ye bhi ek sawaal hai, kya wo ab Veer ko poore mann se apna sarvasv saunp degi ya ab bhi uski mardon se nafrat use kisi aur problem mein daal degi... Most importantly, Ragini, uske aansuon ki wajah, aur Veer ko kehna ke kya wo uska saath dega, let's see iska kya matlab hota hai...

Dono hi updates behad khubsurat the bhai... Nidhi – Dhruv aur Juhi ka scene sachmein kaafi badhiya likha aapne... Feelings ko bohot behatreen tareeke se darshaya gaya tha... Wahin Shreya waala scene bhi kaafi badhiya tha... And as I've said earlier also, you're a master when it comes to writing those uncomfortable conversations, i.e., the one like Shreya, in which she was unable to express herself, and secondly, emotions too... The way you describe them, is quite beautiful... Superb work out there bro ~ ...

Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

 

[andyking302]

Update - 91 ~ Moments
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Ab tak...

Veer : Sher ka shikaar karne ke liye thodi derr ke liye bakri ko saamne rakhna padta hai Balhaar.

Balhaar : !!!???

Veer ki awaaz badli hui sii thi. Aur uske haatho me wine ka ek glass tha.

Balhaar : Iska matlab...!?

Veer : I WILL TAKE EVERYTHING FROM HIM!!!

Ab aage...

Niharika's home.
Morning ~ 10:47 AM
Sunday~

Harr sunday ka din, araam farmaane ka hi hota tha. Niharika ke apne ghar me bhi yahi ho raha tha. Woh ek aalishaan double bed par akeli laiti hui thi. Silk ki ek mehngi red nighty uske gadraaye badan ko dhake hue thi.

Abhi tak neend ki waadiyo me thi woh. Aur jab aathvi baar uska alarm baja, toh akhir kaar alarm clock ko band kar wo angdaayi lete hue uthi. Badan ko stretch karte hue, uski badi badi chuchhiya bhi apna pradarshan karne lagi.

*Yawn*

Itne bade bistar par, woh akeli so rahi thi. Na uska pati Vikaas tha, na hi uska beta, Ritvik.

Vikaas neeche alag ek room me so raha tha. Aur ussi ke sang uska ladka. Keval Niharika hi thi jo akele so rahi thi. Aur ye aaj ka nahi tha. Shaadi ke baad se hi aisa chalta aa raha tha.

Ritvik ke ho jaane ke baad, Niharika ne 3 saal tak toh usse apne hi room me rakha, apna doodh pilaaya, par 3 saal ke baad hi, usne ye saari zimmedaari Vikaas ko saup dii thi.

Vikaas hi tha, jo Ritvik ka dhyaan rakhta. Usse khaana khilaata, usse sulaata. Itne aalishaan ghar me ek maid bhi thi. Jo ghar ka kaam karti thi, khaana banaati thi, Ritvik ko school ke liye taiyaar bhi wahi karti thi. Uska dhyaan bhi rakhti thi.

Aur jab Vikaas thak haar ke college se ghar aata toh Ritvik ki dekhbhaal me lag jaata.

Niharika ko koi matlab nahi rehta tha dono baap bete se. Woh toh jese apni alag duniya jee rahi thi. Subah kaam par jaati, aur fir raat ko hi ghar aati.

Ghamand tha usse. Aur kyu na ho? Vikaas se kayi guna zyaada paisa kama rahi thi woh. Samaaj waale kya sochte honge ki pati se zyaada, ek patni paisa kama rahi hai.

Vikaas phass chuka tha buri tarah. Shaadi ke pehle usse nahi pata tha ki Niharika iss kism ki aurat niklegi.

Niharika ko shuru se hi ek aisa mard chahiye tha jo uss se darr ke rahe. Aur Vikaas ke roop me wo usse mil gaya. Vikaas ki job profile Niharika ki job profile se boht hi neeche thi. Kaha wo ek simple sa professor, aur kaha Niharika? Ek MNC ki HR Head.

Niharika ko shaadi apne gharwaalo ke pressure me aake karni padi thi. Yaha tak ki baccha bhi usne isliye hi paida kiya tha. Vikaas ke maa baap dusre sheher me the. Toh kahi koi restrictions nahi the Niharika ke paas.

Wo ek azaad panchhi ki tarah thi jo apni manmaani kar sakti thi. Koi rok tok nahi.

Vikaas Niharika ke husn me phassa...
Shaadi hui...
Ritvik hua...
Aur 3 saal baad...
Niharika ne apne asli rang dikha ke Vikaas ki waat hi laga daali.

Ab chaah ke bhi Vikaas usse talaak nahi de sakta tha. Kyuki, uske bacche ka sawaal tha. Wo yahi chaahega ki kese bhi kar ke Niharika sudhar jaaye. Par jo aurat mardo se hi nafrat karti ho, wo bhala kaha se Vikaas ki baat maanti!?

Par sawaal ye tha ki Niharika mardo se itni nafrat kyu karti thi? Jawaab tha Niharika ka baap.

Jii haan! Niharika ke pita, apni patni par atyachaar karte the. Aur yahi dekhte dekhte hi Niharika badi hui. Uski soch mardo ke prati badalti chali gayi. Aur usne thaan liya tha ki yadi woh shadi karegi toh apne mard ko daba ke rakhegi. Aur wahi hua...

Niharika ne mahila mandal urf Naari shakti samiti join kii, dekhte hi dekhte woh apne padd, apne auhde, aur apni nidarta ke chalte udhar ki head bhi bann gayi. Kami thi toh bas ek cheez ki...

Niharika ko hamesha se ek beti chahiye thi. Par usse mila ek beta. Toh apne bete ke prati ek maa ka rujhaan uska kam ho gaya. Aur wo apne parivaar ko neglect karte chali gayi.

Aur aaj woh iss mukaam par thi.

Bathroom me jaate hue usne apne aap ko nighty se azaad kiya toh uska gadraaya garam badan saamne aaya. Aaiyne me khud ke jism ko nihaarte hue woh shower lene lagi. Poori tarah se naha lene ke baad jab woh baahar ek bathrobe me baahar aayi toh darwaaze ke baahar se hi usse Vikaas ki awaaz sunaayi dii,

"Wo... Niharika... Niharika!??? Tum... Tum uth gayi kya?"

Niharika : Haan uth gayi hu. Naha rahi thi. Kya hai?

Vikaas : Wo... Wo aaj maid chali gayi hai. Uski tabiyat kharaab hai. 4-5 din nahi rahegi.

Niharika : Haan toh mujhe kyu bata rahe ho? Ek minute! Matlab naashta ready nahi hua abhi tak? Tum kar kya rahe ho jabse? Tumne naashta banaaya ya nahi?

Vikaas : Mein wahi toh bata raha hu ki... Maid nahi aayi hai aur naashta bann'na abhi baaki hai. Toh kya tum...!?

Niharika : Huh!!!? Mein? Mein naashta banau? Are you fucking nuts? Huh? Ye tumhaare kaam hai. Jao jaake fatafat naashta ready karo. Aur haan, mujhe salad bhi chahiye. Go now!!!

Darwaaze ki dusri taraf se fir kadmo ke jaane ki awaaz aayi. Vikaas jaa chuka tha.

*Click*

Apna wardrobe khol, Niharika ne apna bathrobe nikaal ke phek diya aur nangi hi aise khade hue wo wardrobe me se apne kapde dhundne lagi aaj ke pehn'ne ke liye.

Tabhi uski nazar ek cheez par padi...

Usse haath me lete hi Niharika ka gussa saatve aasmaan par pohuch gaya.

"That Bastard...!!!!"

Uske haath me wahi choker tha jo Veer ne usse pehnaaya tha uss din uske hi office ke cabin me. Kese wo kutiya bane neeche baithi hui thi, aankho me aasu liye, aur Veer uski gardan par patta baandh raha tha.

Majaal thi ki koi mard uske saath aisa karne ke baare me soch bhi sake? Par Veer ne na keval woh kiya, balki uske gale me ek owner ka tag bhi baandh diya. Ki abse wo uski amaanat thi. Jese maano Niharika koi insaan nahi koi vastu thi, jisse Veer ne khareed liya ho.

Abhi wo gusse me aag baboola ho hi rahi thi jab bagal se hi uske kisi ke seeti bajaane ki awaaz aayi,

*Whistle*

"Huhhhhh!!!?"

Jhatke se wo mudi aur mudte hi usne jo dekha, uski aankhein hairaani aur shock ke maare felti chali gayi.

Saamne Veer deewaar se tike hue haatho me haath baandhe khade hue tha. Aur uske nange jism ko bade hi chaav se dekh raha tha.

"Aaaahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!"

Niharika hadbadaate hue apne bathrobe ko uthaayi aur apne nange badan ko dhakk lii,

Niharika : T-Tuuummmmm!!????

Veer (smiles) : Mujhe nahi pata tha, kapdo ke peeche itna garam jism chhipa hua hoga.

Niharika : Tumm.... H-How did youuuu!???

Niharika ki nazre idhar udhar gayi toh usse samajh aa gaya ki Veer uske kamre ke andar kese aaya tha. Bagal me hi balcony thi. Aur balcony ka gate usne subah uthate hi khola tha. Par wo hairaan iss baat se thi ki Veer itni upar chadh ke kese aa gaya bhala? Aur toh aur entry gate par guards kya kar rahe the? Kya unhone Veer ko nahi dekha?

Niharika : Tum... Tum andar kese aaye??? Aur tumhaari himmat kese hui idhar aane ki... K-Kya... Kya chaahte ho tum??

Veer (smiles) : Hmm? Apni slave ke ghar jaane ke liye mujhe permission lene ki kya zaroorat!? Aur zara dekho toh... Kya tum ye mere liye kapde utaar rahi thi? Hmm?

Niharika : YOU FUCKERRR!!!! GET LOST!!! GET LOST RIGHT NOW!!! WARNA MEIN... MEIN CHEENKH DUNGI AUR SABKO CHAUKANNA KAR DUNGI...

Veer : Go on!!! Hahaha~ Kya hoega jab tumhara pati ye discover karega ki tum kisi aur mard ke saath andar bedroom me so rahi thi.

Niharika : Wh-Whaaaattt!???

Veer (smiles) : Mein toh yahi jawaab dunga na...

Niharika : YOUUU... YOU FUCKING...

Veer : Ssshhhhhh... Zara mein bhi toh dekhu paas se ki kesa badan hai meri slave ka kapdo ke peeche...

Kehte hue Veer ahista ahista jab Niharika ki orr badhne laga toh woh ghabraate hue peeche ki orr jaati gayi aur deewaar se bhidh gayi.

Niharika : Wh-What are you doing?? H-Huhh?? D-Don't you dare... Aisi koshish bhi mat karna... T-Tum jaante nahi ho iska anjaam kya hoga. Mein... Mein tumhaare saath boht kuch kar sakti hu samjhe? K-Kuch bol nahi rahi hu iska matlab ye nahi ki tum...

Par uski awaaz beech me hi kahi gaayab ho gayi jab Veer ne achanak hi apne muh me uske honth bhar liye.

"Mmmmphhhhhhh!!!???"

*Slurp* *slurp* shlick*
*Suck* *lick* *muaahhhh*

"Ahhhnnnn~"

Aur berehmi se unn hontho ko chooste chooste Veer ne Niharika ke jism se wo bathrobe kheench ke alag kar diya. Niharika ekdum nangi Veer ki baaho me thi.

Veer ka ek haath uski thano ko masalne me laga hua tha, toh dusra uski gaand ke pato ko sehlaane me. Aur uske honth Niharika ke hontho se unka rass peene me busy the.

Virodh toh karti rahi Niharika, par Veer aaj rukne wala nahi tha. Dheere dheere Niharika ka virodh kamzor sa hota chala gaya.

*huff* *huff* *huff*

Niharika : Tummm... *huff* Mein tumhe... Mein tumhe jaan se maar dungi... *huff*

Veer : Awww... So cute~

"Ahhhhhhhhnnnnnnnn~"

Veer ne agle hi pal usse apni goad me uthaaya aur wahi rakhe ek red luxury sofe par usse uchhaalte hue fek diya.

"Aaaaaaaaaa~"

Niharika : You bastardddd! Haramkhor...

Veer ne sab ansuna kiya aur Niharika ke badan ko modte hue usne apne dono haatho se uski gaand ke pato ko cheerte hue khola.

Toh ek adhbhut drishya uski aankho ke saamne aaya. Khichaav ke chalte Niharika ki chut ke honth ek dusre se alag ho gaye aur uski gaand ka chhed fel gaya.

Drishya itna aakarshak tha ki Veer ki uttejna boht zyaada badh gayi aur uska lund apni salaami de diya. Matlab wo ready tha. Apna kaam karne ke liye.

Veer : God damn!!!!! Itni soft... Ufffff~ Aisa lag raha hai mein aata goonth raha hu... Jidhar bhi dabao... Bas... Uss shape me hi ye badal jaati hai...

Aur fir...

*Chataaaaaaakkkkk*

"Ayyyyyyiiiiiiiiiiiiiii~"

Ek zordaar chaata Veer ne uski gaand par de maara. Toh Niharika ki gaand paani ke samaan lehre khaate hue hil padi.

Veer : Damnnnn! Now... Spread your ass...

*Chataaaaaakkkkkkkkk*

"Aaahhhhnnnnnn~"

Majbooran, Niharika ko apne haatho se apni gaand ko cheerte hue khol ke dikhaana pada. Uski saasein boht tezz ho chuki thi.




Veer ke saamne firse wo manmohak drishya aa gaya...

Veer : Uffff~ Look at that now... Spread more...

*Chataaaakkkkkk*

"Ahhhnnnnnnnnggghhhh~"

Aur Niharika gusse me hi sahi par apni gaand ko aur cheerne lagi.




Veer (smiles) : Hmm... Toh tumne pehle hi idhar ka udhghaatan karwa liya hai haan? Shayad dildo ka hi kaam hoga. Kyuki, tum Mardo se toh karwaane se rahi. Wese accha hi hai mere liye... Hahaha~

Niharika : Huhhh!!!!??

*Chataaaaaaakkkkk*

Niharika : Aaahhnnn maaaaaaa~

Veer : Spread more....



Veer : God damn itttt!!!

Veer ne usse dobaara goad me uthaaya aur washroom ki orr le gaya.

Veer (smiles) : Akele akele tumne naha liya? Aisa kese ho sakta hai bhala? Punishment toh milegi hi.




Niharika : N-Nahiiii chorrrrrroooo...

*Chataaaaaakkkkkk*

Niharika : Aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh~

Veer ne washroom ke cubicle me ghuste hi shower on kar diya, aur Niharika ka nanga badan poora geela hone laga.

Paani ki boonde uske badan par sajj chuki thi.



Aur Veer ne uske gadraaye jism ko masal ke thaama aur deewaar se laga diya. Shower se girta paani dono ko bhiga raha tha.

Veer ne apna pehla vaar kiya. Seedha Niharika ke thano par. Aur doodh choosne laga,

Veer : Akhir inme se doodh toh nikaalna hi padega na!? Toh meri zimmedari hai ye ki mein inn doodh ki thailiyo ko khaali karu. Right?

*Suck* *Slurrrrrpppp*

Veer Niharika ke thano se doodh choos choos kar peene laga. Iss se behtar aur kya ho sakta tha uske liye? Usse ek aisi slave mil gayi thi jo apne thano se doodh bahaaati thi. Iss se zyaada uttejna sa bhari baat aur kya ho sakti thi? Veer jab chaahe uske thano ko masal unme se doodh pee sakta tha.

Veer : *slurrrrpppppp* Uffff~ Kya swaad hai...

Niharika : Ahhhnnnn maaa~ *huff* *huff* Kutte... Kameeneee.... Haramkhor.... Chorrr... *huff* *huff* Chorrrrr mujheee... Aahhhhnnnn~

Lekin Veer choosta raha. Uski ungliya neeche Niharika ki chut ko masalti rahi jiske chalte Niharika paani paani ho chuki thi. Chut se rass aise beh raha tha jese maano paani ka baandh toot gaya ho.

Bhale hi Niharika ka dil aur mann mard ko na pasand kare, par uska badan toh ek mard ke touch ke liye tadap hi raha tha na?
Uski body apne aap response de rahi thi.

Jab wo poori tarah se geeli ho gayi toh Veer ne mauka dekha aur...

"Aaaaaaaayyyyiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii maaaaaaaaaaaa~"

Apna lund Niharika ki gufa me pel diya. Ek bacche ko janm de chuki thi Niharika. Toh dard toh hua usse par utna nahi jitna ek virgin ladki mehsoos kiya karti hai. Veer ke jhatke aur uski length ke chalte Niharika ki aankhein palatne lagi.

*Phhhhhaattttt*

*Phhhaaattttt*

*Phhhhaatttttt*

Bas shower ke paani girne ki aur Veer ki kamar Niharika ki gaand par padne ki hi awaaz goonj rahi thi poore bathroom me.

Chod chod ke Veer ne Niharika ka haal behaal kar diya tha.

Niharika : Noooooooooo~ Nooooooo~ Ahhhhhhnnnnnnnnn Wh-What is this.... Ssssssssssss~ *huff* *huff* ahnnnn~

Uski aankhein band hoti toh kabhi aankho ki putliya palatne lagti... Dhakke ka kaaran poora shareer uska hichkole khaa raha tha. Doodh ki thailiya idhar se udhar jhoom rahi thi aur nipples se doodh ki boonde riss rahi thi. Chut uski kass kass ke Veer ke lund ko khaane ki koshish kar rahi thi aur gaand ka chhed baar baar uksaa uksaa ke khul aur band ho raha tha.

Akhir lesbian sex, ek lesbian sex hi hota hai. Real sex nahi. Aaj jab veer ne Niharika ko ek mard ki tarah choda. Toh Niharika ka rom rom khil utha. Uska poora astitv hi hil gaya. Aisi chudaayi usne aaj tak apne jeevan me nahi kii thi.

Par tabhi,

"Niharikaaaaaa~"

Kamre ke baahar se Vikaas ki tezz awaaz aayi.

Niharika : H-Huhhh!??

Iss se pehle ki wo awaaz de paati, Veer ne usse goad me uthaaya aur chodte chodte hi wo usse baahar le aaya.

"Aaahhhnnnnnnn~"

Vikaas (baahar se) : Niharika...!?

Veer Niharika ko darwaaze se tika ke hi chod raha tha. Darwaaze par apne dono haath tikaaye, jhuke hue Niharika apni chut me Veer se lund pilwa rahi thi.

Niharika : Ahhhnnnnggghhh~

Vikaas : Niharika!???

Niharika : H-Haan... *huff* *huff* K-Kya hai!!??

*Phhhhatttttt* *Phhhhaaaatttt*
*Phhhhaaattt* *Phhhhattttttttt*

Vikaas : Wo...

Niharika : Kya haiiii!!?? B-Bolo jaldi... *huff* *huff* Nnnghhh~

Vikaas : Wo... Breakfast ready hai.

Niharika : Ohh accha!! H-Haan toh chalo... *huff* M-Mein naha ke aa rahi hu.

*Phattttt* *Phhhhaattttt*

Vikaas : Par tum toh naha chuki thi na?

Niharika : Nnngghhhh~ mmmmm~ H-Haan... Firse naha rahi hu... Tumhe koi dikkat!!?? *huff*

*Phhhhatttttt* *Phhhhaaattttt*

Vikaas : Nahi!!! Bas yahi kehna tha jaldi neeche aa jaana. Ritwik neeche wait kar raha hai.

Aur Vikaas waha se chala gaya.

Usse iss baat ka andaaza tak nahi tha ki uski patni theek ussi darwaaze ke peeche khade hoke apni chut me ek gerr mard ka lund le rahi thi. Wahi chut jis se Ritvik ka janm hua tha, uss gufa ko Veer ab apne naam kar chuka tha.

Woh chhed ab poori tarah se Veer ka ho chuka tha. Keval wahi chhed nahi. Baaki sabhi chhed bhi.

Veer ne chut me jese hi apna paani chorra, chut se lund nikaal usne Niharika ki gaand ke andar pel diya. Aur iss hamle se Niharika ki maano jaan hi nikal gayi. Wo ekdum tilmila uthi.

Cheenkh ko Veer ne apne haatho se roka aur danadan uski gaand me lund pelne laga. Lund itna geela tha ki gaand ko geela karne ki zaroorat hi nahi padi.

Jeebh nikaale, adhkhuli aankho se Niharika aise chud rahi thi jese kal sansaar ka ant hone waala tha.

Veer : Look at you... Such a nasty bitch...

*Phhhhaattttt* *Phattttt*

Alag alag positions me Veer ne Niharika ko itna choda ki bechaari Niharika ki hilne tak ki himmat na bachi...



Kahi baalo se pakad ke toh kahi uske chehre ko pakad ke.

Bas chodta raha.



Jab tak ki Veer satisfied nahi ho gaya. Niharika ke hosh udd chuke the. Wo zameen par kutiya bane laiti hui thi. Bechaari ki peshaab tak chhut gayi thi udhar hi zameen me jiska usse koi hosh nahi tha. Uski chut par peshaab aur kaamrass ki boonde saji hui thi.

Aur itna lewd drishya tha woh. Dono chhedo me Veer ka veerya chhapa hua tha. Wo Niharika ke sarr ke paas gaya aur uske muh me apna lund thoos diya. Tab tak uske muh ko choda, jab tak uska lund saaf nahi ho gaya.

Chudaayi ke baad, Veer ne apna jeans pehna aur Niharika ko uske baalo se kheech uske kaano me bas ek hi baat boli,

"Tumhara agla kaam hai, Suman ko NSS me jagah dena. Usse ek sadasya banaana. Aur haan, mujhe aaj bhi choker nahi dikha tumhaare gale me. Next time, kahunga nahi. Choker gale me hona chaahiye aur neeche... Tum aaj se panty nahi pehnogi. Good day!!!"

Aur bas... Veer waha se jese aaya tha wese hi nikal gaya. Niharika besudh sii wahi padi rahi. Farsh par kaamrass aur moot pada hua tha. Usse koi hosh tak nahi tha ab. Aur neeche uska pati aur baccha uska intezaar kar rahe the.

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Din bhar Veer laga raha apne kaamo me. Kahi Karan se milke kuch business discuss karta, toh kahi Balhaar se milke kuch baatein aur hoti.

Kul milaake, poora din beet gaya tha aur raat ke 10 baj chuke the.

System se Veer ko Nidhi ka mission complete karne ke liye 6000 Points mile the. Ab tak ke sabse zyaada. Aur uske paas ab 12,892 Points the.

Jiska istemaal Veer ne sabhi stats ki limit ko unlock karne me kar liya tha.

Harr ek stat ki limit ko unlock karne ke liye usse total 8000 points gawaane pad gaye.

Aur ab uske total points the ~ 4892.

Scroll Hunt bhi unlock ho chuka tha. Jese Quest Hunt me cards milte the, isme cards jagah scrolls milte the.

Veer abhi jaa hi raha tha ki,

[You fucked her too hard Master! (◍•ᴗ•◍)]

'What the...!? Tum sleep mode me nahi gayi? Tum sab kuch dekh rahi thi?'

[Ehehehe~ Yes yes!!! (〃ﾟ3ﾟ〃)]

'Tum...'

[Ye gandi baat hai master. Sleep mode me mujhe bhejna jab aap masti kar rahe ho. I want to see it too... I want to see it tooo
(✿ ♡‿♡)]

'The hell!? Tumhe sharm nahi aati? Do logo ko sex karte dekhte hue?'

[Huh!!? W-Why would I feel ashamed? It was so beautiful... (~￣³￣)~ Ehehehe~]

'Wtf? Ye Pari ko kya hua? Ye personality toh...'

[Ehehehehehee~ ♡(˃͈ દ ˂͈ ༶ ) ]

'Fuuucckkkk!!!!!'

[Maaaashhhteeerrrr~ Muuuaaahhhhh ❤ I love youuuu~ (~￣³￣)~]

'Ohhhh fuuuuckkkkkk!!!!'

Pari ko ignore kar Veer jese tese pohucha...

Nidhi ke ghar. Shaam ko shreya ka call aaya tha usse ki jab woh ghar laute toh milta hua jaaye.

Toh Veer haazir tha. Darwaaza atka hua tha Nidhi ke ghar ka toh Veer ne darwaaza push kar diya.

Dhakelte hi darwaaza khul gaya aur wo andar aa gaya. Par...

"Ahhhhhnnnnn!!!!"

Nidhi jo deewaan par baithi Dhruv ko stanpaan karwa rahi thi woh achanak hi Veer ko dekhte hi apna pallu Dhruv ke sarr par daal dii taaki apne stano ko woh chhipa sake.

Veer : Ahhh sorry... Wo mein...

Nidhi (blushes) : It's... It's okay. Aa jao...

Wahi Shreya jo sofe par baithi thi wo apni jeebh nikaalte hue darwaaza band karne gayi. Aur Nidhi ne ye dekh liya.

Nidhi : Kyu? Shreya? Tumne hi gate khol ke rakha tha na!?

Shreya : Ahahaha~ Oops galti ho gayi.
(*´ω｀*)

Nidhi : Galti ho gayi ki bacchi... Gate laga ke rakhna chahiye na.

Shreya : Ab mujhe laga Veer aaega hi toh kholna toh padega hi. Isliye fir khula hi rakha. Mujhe nahi pata tha aap... Ahem...

Nidhi (blushes) : It's okay... Tum dono andar jaa sakte ho yadi baat karni hai toh...

Shreya (smiles) : Hmm hmm...

Shreya aage badhi, par uss se pehle wo palti aur Veer ko dekh khuspusaate hue boli,

"Oye... Pssstt~ Tum knock karke nahi aa sakte the?"

Veer : Well wo...

Shreya : It's okay. Accha wo chorro aur andar aao jaldi.

Apne kamre me le jaate hue wo Veer ko andar laayi aur andar se hi usne gate band kar diya.

Veer : Juhi kaha hai? Kahi nazar nahi aa rahi.

Shreya : Woh bagal waale flat me gayi hai. Udhar koi bacchi aayi hui thi uski umr ki toh dono saath me khel rahi hai.

Veer : Ohhhh~ Par itni raat gaye?

Shreya : Haan bacche hai. 12 baje ke pehle kaha sote hai!?

Veer : Ohhh! Toh!? Mujhe aise achaanak kyu..!?

Tabhi Shreya ne ek packet khola aur usme se kuch nikaala.

Aur apne haatho me usse leke woh Veer ke nazdeek aayi aur uski chaathi par usse lagaaya.

Ek t shirt!!!

Veer : Ye...!?

Shreya (blushes) : Ye tumhaare liye...

Veer : Really? For me...!?

Shreya (blushes) : Yes Idiot!!!

Veer : Par... Iski kya zaroorat thi!??

Shreya (blushes) : Stupid...

Veer : Huh?

Shreya (blushes) : It's... It's a return gift you stupid. Thank you!!! Meri help karne ke liye..
Dii ki help karne ke liye... Dhruv ko waapas laane ke liye... Juhi ko uska chota bhai dilwaane ke liye... Uss Rajat se dii ko bachaane ke liye... Thank you. Thank you for everything. Thank you for coming in my life... I... I... mean... for coming in our life.

Veer (smiles) : Thanks...

Veer ne t shirt dekhi toh ek white colour ki half t shirt thi jispar likha hua tha, 'What you are searching for is right before your eyes.'

Shreya ka dil zorr zorr se dhadak raha tha.

Shreya (mann me) : Did he find out!??

Veer (smiles) : Waqai boht acchi hai. Such a motivational quote...

Shreya (mann me) : Ohhh God this stupid guy!!!!

Shreya (blushes) : Pehn ke dekho na.

Veer : Ehh!? Yaha!??

Shreya (blushes) : Toh aur kaha stupid? Of course yahi par... Ab ye mat kehna ki sharam aati hai.

Veer : Nahi wo baat nahi hai...

Shreya : THEN DO ITTT!!!!

Veer : Woah!!! Okay okay... Calm down... Pehanta hu.

Aur veer ne apni t shirt utaar dii. Utaarte hi jab uski body saamne aayi toh bechaari Shreya ka poora chehra laal pad gaya. Aankhein phaade woh bas Veer ki body dekhti rahi. Jese maano padh rahi ho uski body. Kaha kaha uske badan par til hai, kaun si jagah kitni khubsoorat hai, kitne cuts hai body me... Sab kuch.

Khud woh Veer ko sharmaane ke liye keh rahi thi par idhar uski khud ki haalat hi kharaab thi.

Jab Veer ne t shirt pehni toh Shreya ki aankho me chamak aa gayi. Aur wo apne aap hi uski baaho me kood padi,

Veer : H-Heyyy....

Shreya : .....

Veer : Umm....

Shreya : ....

Veer : Something happened!?

Shreya : Ssshhhh!!! Bas mujhe aise hi rehne do.

Veer : A-Alright!!!

Shreya (mann me) : Today too, I failed. *sigh*

Baahar aa kar jab Veer jaane ko hua toh Nidhi ne bhi usse apne gale se laga liya.

Nidhi : Veer... Mein... Tumhaare paise... Jald hi lauta dungi...

Veer : Kar diya na firse paraaya... Aap uss baare me soch rahi ho... Batao...

Nidhi : Wo... Paise toh lautaane hi padenge. 50 lakh koi choti moti rakam nahi. Aur mein kisi se bhi...

Veer : Mujhe toh laga tha mein aapka khaas tha.

Nidhi : I...

Veer : Toh mein gerr nikla haa?

Nidhi : Nahiiiiii! Aisi baat nahi hai. Tum galat soch rahe ho.

Veer : Yadi paiso ki hi baat karni hai toh mein yaha nahi rukunga. Chalta hu.

Nidhi : N-Nooooo Veeeeerrr... Sunoooo!!!!

Par Veer tab tak jaa chuka tha.

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Ghar aate aate usse raat ke 11:30 baj chuke the. Woh khaana peena Nidhi ke ghar se hi karke aaya tha. Aur andar aate hi, gate khula hua tha.

'Hmmm? Sab so gaye kya?'

Bas kitchen se... Deewaar par pad rahi, Peele rang ki maddham maddham roshni hi aa rahi thi. Aisa lag raha tha ki andhere me koi mombatti jal rahi thi andar.

Baaki hall me poori tarah andhera tha.

'Strange! Sab itni jaldi so gaye!?'

Veer ne kitchen me jaane ka decide kiya. Ahista ahista woh gaya aur kitchen ke jese hi woh andar aaya toh usne dekha...

Ragini... kitchen ke platform ke upar baithi hui thi. Keval blouse aur petticoat me. Uske gore perr neeche jhool rahe the. Haatho me uske ek bada sa kaanch ka glass tha jisme kuch bhara hua tha. Shayad Beer thi.

Bagal me ek mombatti jal rahi thi. Aur Veer ki nazre jab uske chehre par gayi toh woh dang reh gaya...

Wo... ro rahi thi...

Usne Veer ko haule se mudte hue dekha. Aur fir haath me liya hua glass aage karte hue boli,

"Mera saath nahi doge Veer!!!???"
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!!!
Aane waale 4-5 update kaafi important rahenge. Inke baad hi naya arc shuru hoega. Ye updates aham isliye rahenge kyuki yahi se Veer waqai me apni love life ke baare me sochna shuru karega. Baaki, like thokne ka, revos rakhne ka. Bane rahiyega!
Dhanyavaad!!!

जबरदस्त लाजवाब शानदार update bhai jann
Superrrrrr

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Usse samay 1 saal ka mila tha. Aur Veer ko ye karne me kareeb 8 mahine lag gaye. Toh mission ki deadline ke 4 mahine pehle hi usne ye mission complete kar diya.

Niharika ko toh sabak sikha hi raha hai woh.

Woh alhad hai thodi. Gaav se hai. Upar se baap atyaachaar karta tha. Hamesha se usne awaaz uthaayi hai. Toh nidar hai, aur tapaak se kuch bhi bol deti hai.

Dekhte hai kese Shweta aur Veer ka relationship sahi hota hai.

Boht boht dhanyavaad sanju bhai.

Yeh line... Adhbhut!!!
Baaki, aap toh hamaare forum ke ho...
Harr writer yahi chaahta hai ki aapke jesa ek na ek reader ho unke paas. Sanchhipt me varnan karke sameeksha rakhna koi aap se seekhe. Aise hi bane rahiyega.

Aloknath bana diya mughe ! Are bhai us buddhe se kahe tulna kar rahe ho... agar karna hi hai to sallu bhai se karo. Hamari age kuchh kuchh milti hai..Lekin abhi bhi mere jaisa handsome nahi hai wo.

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

So, saamne aa gaya hai ke kaise Veer ne apna pehla mission poora kiya tha... As expected, Suman ka hi sabse bada role tha is poore prakran mein... Veer ko “Conquer Niharika Bansal", ye mission na kewal Shreya ki problem solve karne hetu mila tha balki Suman ko us raaste par aage bhejne ke liye Mila tha, jiski wajah se Veer use taiyaar kar raha tha... Ab Suman permanently Mahila Mandal mein shaamil hone waali hai, jaisa ke Veer ne Niharika se keh hi diya hai... Beharhal, Jab Suman ne akele hi Rajat ke khilaf morcha khol diya tha, wo scene sachmein bohot hi badhiya tha aur uske baad to Veer ke plan ke hi anusaar Niharika ke group ki baaki mahilayen wahaan pahunch hi gayi thi... Nateejtan, Rajat ko Dhruv ko Nidhi ke haathon mein saunpna pada...

Rajat, seedhe taur par Mahila Mandal ke khauf ke kaaran use wo baat maan ni padi anyatha mujhe nahi lagta ke yadi Nidhi use 50 Lakh ki rakam de deti, to bhi wo Dhruv ko uske hawale karta... Yahaan, Veer ne apne hisse mein aayi property mein se hi wo flat becha tha jiske zariye use wo rakam praapt huyi... Par jo baat vishesh rahi wo the Veer ke wo shabd jo usne Balhaar se kahe the, that he'll take everything from Rajat... It's obvious i guess, jitna dard, jitni takleef usne Nidhi ko di hai, physically Nidhi ko di gayi peeda ek taraf, par jo kasht usne ek Maa ko uske bete se alag karke use diya hai, Rajat ko maafi nahi mil sakti... He'll have to face severe consequences of what he has done to Nidhi & undoubtedly Veer is going to make sure that Rajat will repent his deeds...

Nidhi ke liye is se zyada khushi ki baat kya ho sakti hai ke wo apne bache ko apne seene se lagakar ab dulaar kar sakti hai... Aakhir, itne saare dukhon aur andhere ke baad sukh ka ujala uski zindagi mein ho hi gaya hai... Veer ne ab tak jo kuchh bhi is kahani mein kiya hai, jitnon ki bhi madad ki hai, this one.. bringing together a mother & her child, Veer ne nischit roop se bohot bada kaam kiya hai... Khair, Dhruv aur Nidhi ke punar milan ke baad Veer aur Nidhi ke beech jo bhi mulakatein huyin unmein Nidhi ka badla – badla sa roop saaf dikhayi de raha hai... Jaisa pehle se hi expected tha, Nidhi ki ye problem solve karte hi uska vyavahaar Veer ke liye poori tarah se badal gaya... Veer ka use hug karna aur kehna, “I'll make you mine one day", yadi koyi aur samay hota to ek thappad puraskar ke roop mein use mil gaya hota but...

Khair, favourability mein to jump dikhega hi jab Veer agli baar use check karega but is baat mein bhi koyi shakh nahi ke Nidhi ke dil mein Veer ke prati kritagyata ke bhaav bhi panpenge... Wahin Juhi ki khushi bhi dekhne laayak thi, Dhruv ko wahaan paakar... Use bhi ab ek jeevit khilauna mil gaya hai, Veer jo vaada Juhi se karta tha us se baatein manwane ke liye, wo usne poora kar diya hai, to nischit taur par Chocolate Factory bhi zyada door nahi hai...

Veer ne apne Food Truck ke business ko bhi expand karna shuru kar diya hai... Aur saath hi alag – alag Trucks ko manage karne ke liye workers ko bhi hire kar liya hai... I think Sonali ka kirdar bhi aage chalkar bada hota jaayega... Her role is definitely different from that of Her Mother and Bhabhi, starting mein Veer ke liye uska vyavahar rookha hi tha, joki jaayaz bhi tha... Afterall, apni Maa ke saath Veer ke sambandh uske liye accept karna kahaan sambhav tha... But, I think increase in Veer's appearance, his behaviour with Suman and Sonali both, and the way he included her in his business, sab kuchh milkar Sonali ki soch badal chuke hain... Jab last baar Veer ne apna status check kiya tha, tab Sonali ki favourability bhi kaafi zyada thi aur ab is update mein jo baatein dono mein huyin hain... Let's see how things unfold between them...

Shreya... Kaafi waqt se saaf ho chuka hai ke Shreya Veer se pyaar karne lagi hai... But just like many other girls, wo bhi apne dil ki baat saaf – saaf kehne mein asamarth hai... T – Shirt ke maadhyam se kehne ka prayas Kiya usne but, of course Veer ko abhi bilkul idea nahi hoga ke Shreya uske baare mein kya feel karne lagi hai... I think Veer ko jald hi sochna padega, un sabhi ladkiyon/mahilayon ke baare mein jo uske kareeb hain, sabke saath apne badalte rishte ko use analyse karna padega, anyatha aage chalkar kaafi chaos paida ho sakti hai... Shreya par bhi is poore ghatnakram ka gehra prabhav pada hi hoga... Firstly, Veer saved her from Niharika & then of course Nidhi's problem, again a big rise in favourability is expected here too... (Btw. Yahaan bhi Richa se milta – julta vyavahar tha Shreya ka, difficulties in expressing her love towards Veer/Rahul)...

Wahin, Shweta aur Bhumika ke saath bhi cheezein badal rahin hain... Filhaal ke liye Veer ka bartav Shweta ke prati rookha hi hai, of course he cannot just forget everything in a little time like this... I think jab use Shweta ka past pata chalega, in case he gets to know about it, tab uska bartav Shweta ke prati badal sakta hai... Shweta har prakar ki dishes bana rahi hai, ke kabhi to Veer shayad khush hoga, uske dwara banaye gaye khaane se shayad Veer ke chehre par muskurahat aayegi, but it's not gonna happen soon... Bhumika ke dwara ki gayi request par Veer ne Shweta dwara banaye gaye Gulab Jamun kha liye, aur dono Maa – Beti ke liye is se badhkar aur kya ho sakta tha..? Veer ko manane ki daud mein refueling saman prateet huyi hogi dono ko ye ghatna...

Khair, dono missions ke poora hone ke baad mile points ki madad se Veer ne sabhi stats ki limit ko break kar liya hai, means ab jaldi hi stats par bhi kaam chalu ho jaayega... He has around 5000 points left with him, would be interesting to see wo kis prakaar se unka upyog karega...

Idhar, Niharika ko shayad ab poori tarah se conquer kar liya hai Veer ne... Uske saath jo bhi Veer ne uske office mein kiya, mission waale din aur uske baad Rajat ke intezam waale din, Niharika par dono hi ghatnaon ka behad gehra inpact padna hi tha... Mardon se nafrat karne waali mahila ko yadi koyi mard aise hi apna gulaam banane mein kaamyab ho jaayega, to uspar asar to padna nischit hi hai... Yahaan, Niharika ke is prakar ke vyavahar ka kaaran bhi pata chala, uske Pita dwara uski Maa par past mein ki gayi krurta ka hi nateeja hai jo wo Vikaas ke saath kar rahi hai... Khair, Vikaas ke saath wo chahe kuchh bhi Kare, hune kya..? Wo to saala hai hi kameena, but apne bete se bhi aisa sautela vyavhar meri samajh se baahar hai... It's okay ke wo ek beti chahti thi par Ritvik bhi usi ki aulaad hai, 9 mahine use apne garbh mein rakhne ke baad wo apne bete se alag kamre mein rehti hai... I don't know what to say about this..? Interesting rahega dekhna ke Veer ke saath huye is sex encounter ka kya prabhav hoga Niharika par...

In the end, Ragini... Lagta hai ke Ragini ke sabr ka baandh toot chuka hai... Har roz Veer ke ghar se nikalne ke samay uska saamne se kiss ki maang karna, ishara kaafi tha batane ke liye ke uska pyaar Veer ke prati kitna gehra hota jaa raha hai... But Veer ke liye ye sab samajh na shayad abhi sambhav nahi... Reason, abhi wo apne aas – paas maujood females se apne rishte ko lekar conscious nahi hua hai, the day he starts thinking about all this, his bonding with many will get strengthened... Ragini kitchen ki slab par baithi Beer pi rahi thi, aur uski aankhon mein aansun saje huye the... Kya ab wo samay aa gaya hai jab Ragini apne dil ka haal Veer ke saamne khol kar rakh degi..? I think it's time for the conversation between them...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Rajat se “sab kuchh" kaise chheenega Veer... Nidhi aur Shreya ke saath Veer ka sudhrid hota rishta aage chalkar kya rang lega... Shweta aur Bhumika kab aur kaise apni koshishon mein kaamyab hongi... Pranjal to filhaal ke liye underground ho hi chuka hai, but Rajat aur wo, ye dono kameene Veer ke khilaaf haath mila sakte hai kya (in case Rajat ko pata chal jaaye ke Veer hi sabke pichhe tha)... Wahin Kaera aur Sonia ke darshan huye bhi kaafi samay ho chuka hai... She must be ecstatic to learn another life lesson from Veer... Kavya aur Arohi ke scenes bhi agle kuchh updates mein dekhne mil sakte hain... Niharika ke maamle mein aage kya hoga ye bhi ek sawaal hai, kya wo ab Veer ko poore mann se apna sarvasv saunp degi ya ab bhi uski mardon se nafrat use kisi aur problem mein daal degi... Most importantly, Ragini, uske aansuon ki wajah, aur Veer ko kehna ke kya wo uska saath dega, let's see iska kya matlab hota hai...

Dono hi updates behad khubsurat the bhai... Nidhi – Dhruv aur Juhi ka scene sachmein kaafi badhiya likha aapne... Feelings ko bohot behatreen tareeke se darshaya gaya tha... Wahin Shreya waala scene bhi kaafi badhiya tha... And as I've said earlier also, you're a master when it comes to writing those uncomfortable conversations, i.e., the one like Shreya, in which she was unable to express herself, and secondly, emotions too... The way you describe them, is quite beautiful... Superb work out there bro ~ ...

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What is this ? My god ! Kal padhunga death king bhai ka review.

 

[Ayush2017]

Awesome update bro

 

[agmr66608]

So, saamne aa gaya hai ke kaise Veer ne apna pehla mission poora kiya tha... As expected, Suman ka hi sabse bada role tha is poore prakran mein... Veer ko “Conquer Niharika Bansal", ye mission na kewal Shreya ki problem solve karne hetu mila tha balki Suman ko us raaste par aage bhejne ke liye Mila tha, jiski wajah se Veer use taiyaar kar raha tha... Ab Suman permanently Mahila Mandal mein shaamil hone waali hai, jaisa ke Veer ne Niharika se keh hi diya hai... Beharhal, Jab Suman ne akele hi Rajat ke khilaf morcha khol diya tha, wo scene sachmein bohot hi badhiya tha aur uske baad to Veer ke plan ke hi anusaar Niharika ke group ki baaki mahilayen wahaan pahunch hi gayi thi... Nateejtan, Rajat ko Dhruv ko Nidhi ke haathon mein saunpna pada...

Rajat, seedhe taur par Mahila Mandal ke khauf ke kaaran use wo baat maan ni padi anyatha mujhe nahi lagta ke yadi Nidhi use 50 Lakh ki rakam de deti, to bhi wo Dhruv ko uske hawale karta... Yahaan, Veer ne apne hisse mein aayi property mein se hi wo flat becha tha jiske zariye use wo rakam praapt huyi... Par jo baat vishesh rahi wo the Veer ke wo shabd jo usne Balhaar se kahe the, that he'll take everything from Rajat... It's obvious i guess, jitna dard, jitni takleef usne Nidhi ko di hai, physically Nidhi ko di gayi peeda ek taraf, par jo kasht usne ek Maa ko uske bete se alag karke use diya hai, Rajat ko maafi nahi mil sakti... He'll have to face severe consequences of what he has done to Nidhi & undoubtedly Veer is going to make sure that Rajat will repent his deeds...

Nidhi ke liye is se zyada khushi ki baat kya ho sakti hai ke wo apne bache ko apne seene se lagakar ab dulaar kar sakti hai... Aakhir, itne saare dukhon aur andhere ke baad sukh ka ujala uski zindagi mein ho hi gaya hai... Veer ne ab tak jo kuchh bhi is kahani mein kiya hai, jitnon ki bhi madad ki hai, this one.. bringing together a mother & her child, Veer ne nischit roop se bohot bada kaam kiya hai... Khair, Dhruv aur Nidhi ke punar milan ke baad Veer aur Nidhi ke beech jo bhi mulakatein huyin unmein Nidhi ka badla – badla sa roop saaf dikhayi de raha hai... Jaisa pehle se hi expected tha, Nidhi ki ye problem solve karte hi uska vyavahaar Veer ke liye poori tarah se badal gaya... Veer ka use hug karna aur kehna, “I'll make you mine one day", yadi koyi aur samay hota to ek thappad puraskar ke roop mein use mil gaya hota but...

Khair, favourability mein to jump dikhega hi jab Veer agli baar use check karega but is baat mein bhi koyi shakh nahi ke Nidhi ke dil mein Veer ke prati kritagyata ke bhaav bhi panpenge... Wahin Juhi ki khushi bhi dekhne laayak thi, Dhruv ko wahaan paakar... Use bhi ab ek jeevit khilauna mil gaya hai, Veer jo vaada Juhi se karta tha us se baatein manwane ke liye, wo usne poora kar diya hai, to nischit taur par Chocolate Factory bhi zyada door nahi hai...

Veer ne apne Food Truck ke business ko bhi expand karna shuru kar diya hai... Aur saath hi alag – alag Trucks ko manage karne ke liye workers ko bhi hire kar liya hai... I think Sonali ka kirdar bhi aage chalkar bada hota jaayega... Her role is definitely different from that of Her Mother and Bhabhi, starting mein Veer ke liye uska vyavahar rookha hi tha, joki jaayaz bhi tha... Afterall, apni Maa ke saath Veer ke sambandh uske liye accept karna kahaan sambhav tha... But, I think increase in Veer's appearance, his behaviour with Suman and Sonali both, and the way he included her in his business, sab kuchh milkar Sonali ki soch badal chuke hain... Jab last baar Veer ne apna status check kiya tha, tab Sonali ki favourability bhi kaafi zyada thi aur ab is update mein jo baatein dono mein huyin hain... Let's see how things unfold between them...

Shreya... Kaafi waqt se saaf ho chuka hai ke Shreya Veer se pyaar karne lagi hai... But just like many other girls, wo bhi apne dil ki baat saaf – saaf kehne mein asamarth hai... T – Shirt ke maadhyam se kehne ka prayas Kiya usne but, of course Veer ko abhi bilkul idea nahi hoga ke Shreya uske baare mein kya feel karne lagi hai... I think Veer ko jald hi sochna padega, un sabhi ladkiyon/mahilayon ke baare mein jo uske kareeb hain, sabke saath apne badalte rishte ko use analyse karna padega, anyatha aage chalkar kaafi chaos paida ho sakti hai... Shreya par bhi is poore ghatnakram ka gehra prabhav pada hi hoga... Firstly, Veer saved her from Niharika & then of course Nidhi's problem, again a big rise in favourability is expected here too... (Btw. Yahaan bhi Richa se milta – julta vyavahar tha Shreya ka, difficulties in expressing her love towards Veer/Rahul)...

Wahin, Shweta aur Bhumika ke saath bhi cheezein badal rahin hain... Filhaal ke liye Veer ka bartav Shweta ke prati rookha hi hai, of course he cannot just forget everything in a little time like this... I think jab use Shweta ka past pata chalega, in case he gets to know about it, tab uska bartav Shweta ke prati badal sakta hai... Shweta har prakar ki dishes bana rahi hai, ke kabhi to Veer shayad khush hoga, uske dwara banaye gaye khaane se shayad Veer ke chehre par muskurahat aayegi, but it's not gonna happen soon... Bhumika ke dwara ki gayi request par Veer ne Shweta dwara banaye gaye Gulab Jamun kha liye, aur dono Maa – Beti ke liye is se badhkar aur kya ho sakta tha..? Veer ko manane ki daud mein refueling saman prateet huyi hogi dono ko ye ghatna...

Khair, dono missions ke poora hone ke baad mile points ki madad se Veer ne sabhi stats ki limit ko break kar liya hai, means ab jaldi hi stats par bhi kaam chalu ho jaayega... He has around 5000 points left with him, would be interesting to see wo kis prakaar se unka upyog karega...

Idhar, Niharika ko shayad ab poori tarah se conquer kar liya hai Veer ne... Uske saath jo bhi Veer ne uske office mein kiya, mission waale din aur uske baad Rajat ke intezam waale din, Niharika par dono hi ghatnaon ka behad gehra inpact padna hi tha... Mardon se nafrat karne waali mahila ko yadi koyi mard aise hi apna gulaam banane mein kaamyab ho jaayega, to uspar asar to padna nischit hi hai... Yahaan, Niharika ke is prakar ke vyavahar ka kaaran bhi pata chala, uske Pita dwara uski Maa par past mein ki gayi krurta ka hi nateeja hai jo wo Vikaas ke saath kar rahi hai... Khair, Vikaas ke saath wo chahe kuchh bhi Kare, hune kya..? Wo to saala hai hi kameena, but apne bete se bhi aisa sautela vyavhar meri samajh se baahar hai... It's okay ke wo ek beti chahti thi par Ritvik bhi usi ki aulaad hai, 9 mahine use apne garbh mein rakhne ke baad wo apne bete se alag kamre mein rehti hai... I don't know what to say about this..? Interesting rahega dekhna ke Veer ke saath huye is sex encounter ka kya prabhav hoga Niharika par...

In the end, Ragini... Lagta hai ke Ragini ke sabr ka baandh toot chuka hai... Har roz Veer ke ghar se nikalne ke samay uska saamne se kiss ki maang karna, ishara kaafi tha batane ke liye ke uska pyaar Veer ke prati kitna gehra hota jaa raha hai... But Veer ke liye ye sab samajh na shayad abhi sambhav nahi... Reason, abhi wo apne aas – paas maujood females se apne rishte ko lekar conscious nahi hua hai, the day he starts thinking about all this, his bonding with many will get strengthened... Ragini kitchen ki slab par baithi Beer pi rahi thi, aur uski aankhon mein aansun saje huye the... Kya ab wo samay aa gaya hai jab Ragini apne dil ka haal Veer ke saamne khol kar rakh degi..? I think it's time for the conversation between them...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Rajat se “sab kuchh" kaise chheenega Veer... Nidhi aur Shreya ke saath Veer ka sudhrid hota rishta aage chalkar kya rang lega... Shweta aur Bhumika kab aur kaise apni koshishon mein kaamyab hongi... Pranjal to filhaal ke liye underground ho hi chuka hai, but Rajat aur wo, ye dono kameene Veer ke khilaaf haath mila sakte hai kya (in case Rajat ko pata chal jaaye ke Veer hi sabke pichhe tha)... Wahin Kaera aur Sonia ke darshan huye bhi kaafi samay ho chuka hai... She must be ecstatic to learn another life lesson from Veer... Kavya aur Arohi ke scenes bhi agle kuchh updates mein dekhne mil sakte hain... Niharika ke maamle mein aage kya hoga ye bhi ek sawaal hai, kya wo ab Veer ko poore mann se apna sarvasv saunp degi ya ab bhi uski mardon se nafrat use kisi aur problem mein daal degi... Most importantly, Ragini, uske aansuon ki wajah, aur Veer ko kehna ke kya wo uska saath dega, let's see iska kya matlab hota hai...

Dono hi updates behad khubsurat the bhai... Nidhi – Dhruv aur Juhi ka scene sachmein kaafi badhiya likha aapne... Feelings ko bohot behatreen tareeke se darshaya gaya tha... Wahin Shreya waala scene bhi kaafi badhiya tha... And as I've said earlier also, you're a master when it comes to writing those uncomfortable conversations, i.e., the one like Shreya, in which she was unable to express herself, and secondly, emotions too... The way you describe them, is quite beautiful... Superb work out there bro ~ ...

Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

साहब,इतना सुंदर और मननशील टिप्पणी बहुत कम ही देखने मिलता है। इस उपन्यास का सबसे बड़ा खासियत रहा है की एक तो लेखक का एक के बाद एक जबर्दस्त अनुच्छेद और दूसरा है उस अनुच्छेद पर पाठकों द्वारा टिप्पणी और उनका उत्तर मिलना लेखक से। आपका टिप्पणी आपने आप मे बहुत सारी पहलू दर्शाता है जिस पर हमारे लेखक मित्र जरूर बिचार करेंगे। लेकिन मित्र कहानी आप जैसे चला रहे है बहुत कम लेखक ऐसे चला पाएंगे। नमस्कार