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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

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  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 27 1.7%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 210 13.0%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 35 2.2%

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You mean we can expect 4-5 Mega updates in a row.. :shy:
Wait! what!??? :what1: :runaway:
Update 100 mega update zaroor rahega. Century hai akhir... But 4-5 nahi bhai. Jaan nikal jaegi meri. :shy:
Aur last update 6k words ka tha. Meri dariyadili dekho. Mene mega update ka naam nahi diya usse.
 

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Bahut he shandar update veer ko mission mil bi gaya aur usne pura bi karliya bahut he ache tarike se aur divya ki thinking bi change ho gayi h veer ke liye 50 percent faveriablity bi increase ho gayi h par is baar villian dangerous mila h jiska level bi high..
Abhi kaha dangerous? Wo toh yu hi pakad me aa gaya. :laughing: Wo bas ek pyaada tha. Aage aage dekhiye kya hota hai.
Jabarjst update bhai but apka tym schedule change hua hai kya do din ki jgh pe ab jyda din gap hota ya koi prblm hai 🤔
Vyastata bhai!!!! Par update bada bhi toh tha ... :hinthint:
Ding superb update tha bhai maa mumbai mein beta Vegas mein.great fame improvement or legendary cards ke liye naye mission required honge best of luck for next creativity keep posting.
Thanks a lot man! ✨
Keep supporting! ✨
 

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Bhai phir to mai isse bhi gaya gujara hu. kyo ki comments to dur ki baat hai mai to react bhi nahi karta hu.:idk1::idk1::idk1:
Kara karo bhai. Kahi ju bhi Leon bru ki tarah kisi writer ke lapete me na aa jao. :laughing:
Kuch karna thodi hi rehta hai. Like ki button pe react karo. Aur comment me jo mann me aaya padhte waqt usse likh do. Writers ka hausla iss se hi badhta hai. :bigboss:
Sab ready h Sir... Lappy, snacks, bistar... 🤣
Taaza taaza update ka intezaar h...

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Charge some LIKES from Xabhi bhai for advertisement. Your story is like watching a very hit movie in multiplex and hence is an excellent place for advertisement. Bus ju popcorn bechna start kar do side by side.....
Xabhi hi popcorn bechega!!! Popcorn hi nahi sab kuch bechega...
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Jalwe hai tumhare bhai ke... :smarty:
Last time Jab yaha zinda tha to update 70 tak padha tha aaj aage padhta hu 😜
Toh fir se zinda ho jao bhai. :laughing:
Aapki update ki timing Sir nani yaad dila deti h... :sad:
Mne to socha tha firse bed par baithe lappy apni thighs par rakh bagal me snacks khaate khaate update padhungi. Par
Mein update jaldi dedu? Aisa kabhi hota hai? :laughing:
Subah dekha to pata chala ki update aa bhi gaya baba... :what3:

Aur majboori me mujhe turant update padhna padha. (Bina padhe main raat tak kese rehti? 😝)
Arre... :shy:
1) Update me jaha jaha aapne jo jo pics use kii h... Unke liye taaliyaa... :claps: Ekdum to the point images. Aur Divya to sach me hot nikli... 🔥 Mujhe laga tha shayad first appearance me aisa lag raha h par nahi jii... She's really hot. Considering she's 35...
Yahi baat to mujhe pasand aati h... Aap peeche nahi hatate, kisi bhi kaam k liye... Chaahe pics dalne ki baat hi kyu na ho. Aap wo bhi karte ho. Jo ki mere khyaal se upyog hona hi chahiye.
Hmm! Jo ki ek boht hi boriyat ka kaam hai pics dhundhna aur fir lagaana. Khaaskar sahi pics ko dhundna. Mujhe isme Nani yaad aa jaati hai. :sad:
Mne yaha bohut writers dekhe h jinhone kabhi apni kahaniyo me ek pic nahi daali. Aur sach kahu to ye unki choice h aur mere hisaab se ek aalas ka reason bhi. Bachpan me school ki jab main hindi text books padhti thi. To mujhe yaad h main unn text books ki taraf zyada aakarshit hoti thi jinme story se related kuch drawings hua karti thi. Wesa hi yaha bhi h.. 💫
Iss baat se toh mein bhi agree karta hu aapki. :yes2:
2) Story to ekdum hi naye turn par le aaye ho aap Sir. :what3: Murder mystery? Detectives? Story me kitne elements aaenge??? 🤯🤯 Har cheez to dedi aapne isme. Bacha kya ab?
Veer muh se aag nahi fekega bas. Ye sab nahi hoega. :laughing: Baaki sab kuch dekhne ko milega. Sach kahu toh thoda paranormal ka tadka bhi soch raha hai. Yadi mid plot accha bana uspe toh wo bhi dekhne ko mil sakta hai. ;)

3) Aur wo riddle to mere sarr k upar se nikal gayi thi. Lekin thanks to some readers. Jinhone spoiler pehle hi gira diya. 🤣🤣 Hum jese riddle me kamzor logo ka beda paar hua...
Asaan thi wese toh woh... :hmm2:
4) Hmmm... To aap iss pal ka intezar kar rahe the haa???? Ki yaha aap Veer ko Vegas bheje aur waha se Tej aur Bhavna Mumbai aaye. Timing baitha k chal rahe the pehle se hi haa???? :monkahmm: Not bad Not bad...
Na jaane kya kya soch rakha hoga. Aur na jaane iss house of killers me kya hone wala h... But I can tell. Next update will be too awesome. 🔥
Yes! I planned it. Suspense chalte rehna chahiye. :smoking:
5) Aur ye update aapne fever me likha h? 🤯🤯 Full potential me nahi likha? To full potential me kya karte ho? :poggers: Main bol hi rahi thi pehle hi... Meri kisi ne suni hi nahi. Ye Werewolf Sir jaadu tona karte h guys. Inka roz raat ko alag kuch chalta h... Offerings dete h ye... Hum jese maasoom readers ki feelings ko offer kar dete h. Badle me inhe inke god of writing jo bhi h wo inko apnni shaktiyo se bless karte h... Tabhi to dekho kitne readers jama kar liye h... 🤣🤣🤣
:laughing: :laughing: :laughing:
Bataya toh tha mene. Kaala jaadu karta hai apun... 🪄 👻 Fir apne ko naye naye ideas aate hai.
6) Iss samay main sabse zyada excited hu to wo h kuch scenes k liye. Ye to chal hi raha h. Par main Arohi ka scene dekhna chahungi. Jisme wo realize karti h ki uske andar ek nayi feeling ne janm le liya h...
Pari ke kuch secrets. Wo abhi bhi sabse badi mystery h... Veer k past se bhi badi.
Tej Bhavna aur Veer ka firse milna. Par iss baar ye jaante hue hi Veer hi uska asli bhai aur beta h...
Kaera ki full glory kab dekhne ko milegi hume? Bechari wo aur Sonia kabse scenes me nahi aayi. :sad:
Kam se kam unke ek do scenes hi dikha do Sir. Kya kar rahi h wo, kaha par h?
1) Arohi ka zikr vegas ke baad aaega vistaar me.
2) Pari ka ek sabse bada secret Vegas me hi khulega. Bas aa hi gaya samjho...
3) Tej aur Bhavna aur Veer, inn teeno ka sabse acche se zikr village arc me hoega.
4) OG Kaera vegas ke baad janm legi.
5) Sonia ka zikr ussi ke saath rahega.
Lo... Saare jawaab de diye. :D
 

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nice update .investigators ka khoon ho raha hai aur khooni ka koi ata pata nahi isliye divya ne suhana se madad maangi hai .
daniel ne party me jo dekha usko paheli me likh diya .aisa kya ho raha tha waha jisko dekhne se daniel ko apni jaan gawani padi 🤔. aur ek detective hote huye bhi uske paseene chhut gaye .

favour ke badle favour ka idea divya ka hai jisko suhana bhi follow karti hai 😁.
suhana ne kuch jyada hi taarif kar di thi veer ki isliye divya ne usko bhi saath laane ko kaha, par kya khud itni badi detective hone ke baad bhi usko suhana ki jarurat pad gayi ,suhana ke paas itna tezz dimaag hai kya 🤣.

aur yaha bhawna veer ki talash me aayi hai aisa lagta hai aur ab wo apni dost purvi se madad lene ka soch rahi hai .
Divya ko Suhana ki zaroorat uski investigation skills ke liye nahi hai. Ye hum jaante hi hai ki suhana koi detective nahi hai. Toh aise me uska dimaag investigation me nahi chalega. Divya khud hi boht Intelligent hai. Usse Suhana ki zaroorat kisi aur cheez ke liye hai. Manobal!!! :smartm: Emotional support!!! Aur do sabse bade reason. Pehla toh Veer ko test karna. Aur doosra... Update 95 ki ending padho firse ek baar. Usme clue hai. :hint:
To akhir kar veer ka las vegas me aane ka reason pata chal hi Gaya. Aur ye kya bhavna veer ko dhundte hue firse Mumbai aa gayi. Only God and writer knows what will happen.
Anyways Update was excellent.
Waiting for next update 😜😎
God ko bhi nahi pata bhai! Only I know it. :D Thanks btw! ✨
Super awesome update bro like always and thanks for update bro since you are not well but still giving updates is outstanding 🔥🔥♥️♥️
Thanks man! ✨
Bai Keya sabd istemal karu.....!!😮
Keya allfaz kahu......😯
Your writing skills so so good.....😱
Love you.....❤

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Dunte Huye Story Parte RAHO.....😁
Dhanyavaad bhai! ✨
Bane rehna! ✨
And for the House Of Killers....🩸

It’s the FINAL COUNT DOWN.....💥🔪🔫
House of killers is not the final countdown. :laughing:
It's a part where Veer gets to know that there is much more to this World.
Bhai ji aisa review padh kar writer’s chest will become breast (with pride) 🤣👌🏽

Astute observation sirji 👌🏽

Aur writer Ji agar bhaisaab ka review kuch aur lamba hota to word count mein update jitna hi ho jaata!!! 🤣🎩
Death Kiñg be like...

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जबरदस्त लाजवाब update bhai jann

To LA mey suhana aur veer case solved krene gaye hey Sahi hey ye bhi

Bohot din ke bad bhavana ki koi news ayi hey Aur ohh veer ko dhund te huve mumbai aa gayi hey, usne uske kisi frend Ko call lgaya lgata hey

Ab age dekhna padega kya hota hey

Update is fabulous man
Dhanyavaad bhai! ✨
Keep supporting! ✨
 

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Bahot behtareen shaandaar update bhai
Divya tow kuch ziada hi flirt ker rahi h veer se Pari ko kyon itna jealousy feel ho rahi h
Suhana ko diye huwe favor ki wajah se Divya n Suhana or Veer ko bulaya h ek case m help k liye
Divya ko kia mil gaya Denial k likhe huwe letter m jo uchal padi or veer ka dimag kia keh raha h
Bhavna ji or Tej Mumbai pahoch gayi Purvi kon h jisse urgent milne ko bulaya h
Baherhal dekhte h aage kia hota h
Bahot zaberdast shaandaar lajawab update bhai
Ye waali pari ki personality cutesy waali hai. Usse pasand nahi jab nakchadi ladkiya Veer par dorre daale. :laughing: Dhanyavaad bhai! ✨
Bane rahiyega! ✨
Gajab bhai.kahani me ye ek naya.mor la diya hai Bhai. Update majedar hai par bare hi suspence me daal diya hai.
Thanks man! ✨
Iss Kahani se addicted 😅 ho gayi thi isliye gayab ho gayi thi 😆😆

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Vegas ki chakachaundh ko dekh kr koi bhi mantra mugdh ho jayega or aapne to Ispr image daal kr imagination ko or bhi behtar bna diya bhai...
Kabhi kabhi images zaroori rehti hai.
Crime scene me pahuch kr veer ne jo mahsus kiya ki koi Khatarnak (kudristi) najro se unhe dekh rha hai, divya ka pati nik veer ko vha dekh use bhagana chahta tha pr divya ne mna liya Vahi suhana ko sonny kahne pr chidh gyi vo... Crime scene ek detective ke Marne ka hai jaha pr Usne Marne se pahle ek paheli likh chhodi hai jo ki ek clue ke sath sath ek warning bhi hai, veer us paheli ko hi dekhe ja rha hai or divya bhi, pr lagta hai use jvab mil gya hai ab Dekhte hai akhir kya jvab hai us paheli ka...
Bhumika or Tej pahuch gyi hai Mumbai, jaha tej apni ma se yha aane ka karan Janna chahti hai vahi Bhumika bina kuchh btaye tej ko hotel ke kamre me band kr deti hai or apni kisi friend purvi ko call karti hai madad ke liye, ab dekhte hai ye purvi Kon hai or bhumika kab tej ko sach btati hai... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab
Ju summary likh diye firse!!!? :what1: Ab iss par mein kya jawaab du? Ye toh mene hi likhela hai apun ko yaad hai. :hmm: Koi tippadi nahi? Chalo koi baat nahi...!!! :sigh2:
Awesome brother kya turn diya hai aapne bhi story ko veer jab las vegas gaya tabhi bhavan tej ko lekar mumbai aai shayad ab bhavna ko bhi sab pata chalne wala hai jald hi but veer se mulakat nahi ho paayegi abhi
Dhanyavaad bhai! ✨
Divya ka case kya veer se Judi hui ye 🤔🤔🤔Daniel ne jo likha ta Divya ese Dari to lagta hai bada case niklega....

Bhavana or tez dhundne nikle hai veer ko or e purvi he kon dekhte Hain....

Bdw nyc update brother....
Thanks man! ✨
 

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Xabhi hi popcorn bechega!!! Popcorn hi nahi sab kuch bechega...
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If I remember correctly, the updates when Suhana took Veer with her for a party in Delhi, so that he can accompany Sonia... Right after that Update, somehow it started looking like Suhana was hiding something... Suhana, beshak wo ek bohot badi company ki member hai ya kahun ki maalkin hai
Suhana ka husband badi company ka CEO hai. Suhana ke pita badi automobiles company ke maalik hai jisme Sonia bhi ek prakaar se owner ki tarah hai. Par wo CEO nahi hai. Sonia randomly company ki madad karti hai. Kyuki wo job profile se bandhna nahi chaahti. Same goes for Kaera. Kaera bhi randomly madad karti hai company kii. They are like sub owners of their company.
But apart from that, it seemed to be like Suhana was something bigger and more different than that... Slogan ke case mein jis tarah usne Veer ki help ki, she seemed to be familiar with using guns, she handled the police too... It was clear that Suhana had connections & apart from that she had a deep past too, past which was dark maybe... :hmm2:
Yes!!! :D Suhana ain't simple at all. She fucking murders an innocent teddy on her daily basis after all.
Aur is update ke baad wo doubt kaafi pukhta ho gaya hai... Suhana, Divya ki ek call par hi Las Vegas jaane ko taiyar ho gayi thi and now we know ki wo Veer ko apne saath, Divya ke hi kehne par lekar gayi hai... The reason is a favour Divya did on Suhana in the past... Suhana ko pata tha ki yadi Divya ne use itni urgently bulaya hai to problem bohot badi hogi, means it would be risky to go there... Still, wo gayi, ye kewal ek hi baat ki taraf ishara karta hai ki Suhana par Divya dwara ki gayi wo favour, mamooli nahi thi... :think:
Yes!!! Lekin Divya ne Suhana ko uski investigation skills ke liye nahi bulaaya hai. She called her for three purposes. First to get her emotional support during this crisis in the city. Second to observe Veer. Kyuki Divya Veer ke baare me jaanti hai. (Including Aatish and Slogan.) And lastly... Read update 95 ending part. Conversation between Suhana and Divya. :hint:
Well, kaafi pehle se ye point clear tha ki Suhana has definitely killed someone in her past... I guess, jab wo teddy ke saath masti kar rahi thi, aur Veer use dekhkar ghabra gaya tha (:shy:), usi update ke aas – paas Veer ne Suhana se seedhe ye baat kahi thi, that he has understood that Suhana has killed someone earlier... And abhi tak ki kahani se main yahi samjha hoon, ki wo shakhs Pushkar tha, Sonia ka childhood friend... Is baare mein shayad pehle kabhi maine apne review mein kaafi baatein likhi bhi thi... And, now I think ki jo favour Divya ne Suhana par kiya tha, wo use Pushkar waale maamle mein help karne se juda hoga (assuming she killed Pushkar)... Means, Divya, being a skilled and experienced detective would've helped Suhana get out of that matter, by removing all the proofs & clues out there, and finally they would've made Pushkar 's murder look like a suicide, as Sonia mentioned... :dontknow:
Suhana did kill someone. Veer ne jab uss se ye kaha tha toh uska reaction dekhne waala hi tha. But questions arises... Whom did she kill? Iska jawaab Vegas me hi milega... Jald hi... Suhana ke baare me kaafi acche se jaan'ne ko milega hume. Suhana and Divya both knows how to handle a gun. Divya ko aur acche se aata hai ye. She even knows how to fight. Jim se ladte waqt iss baat ka andaza lag gaya hoga. About Pushkar... We'll see what happened with him.
Khair, ye raaz to aage chalkar hi khulega, par mera yahi maan na hai ki ya to Pushkar ka intention Sonia ko harm karne ka raha hoga, ya fir Suhana ne unintentionally use maar diya hoga, other than these two I don't think there could've been any other reason for the same... :dazed: Iske atirikt mujhe aur koyi bada maamla nahi dikhta jiske liye ki gayi favour ke badle Suhana wahaan jaane ko taiyaar ho gayi ho... Chahe Divya aur Suhana langotiya saheliyan :D kyon na hon but still hamari Suhana madam ko jitna hum samjhe hain, wo itni bhi pyaari mahila nahin hain ki yunhi dariya dilli dikha kar uski sahayta ko pahunch jaayen :laugh:.
Actually, Suhana does considers Divya her best friend. She still would have come even if there wasn't any favour on her. Haan par Suhana Divya ki sharto aur uske gifts se dur hi rehti hai. Warna aur favours chadh jaate hai uspe... Haha!!!
Beharhal, Divya ka character bhi dheere – dheere behtar tareeke se samajh aane laga hai... Usko check karte waqt hi samajh aa gaya tha ki Veer jaise ladkon ke liye uske dil mein kitna prem, kitna apnapan hai :D:... But after reading this update, it's clear that she is seriously intelligent & smart... Her antics & words points towards this only... Veer ko wahaan bulaane ke pichhe Divya ki kya mansha thi, ye to aage hi pata chalega... But I think, Slogan ki maut aur us se pehle Aatish ka safaya (If Divya knows about Aatish's incident, I think she knows), ye do mukhya kaaran ho sakte hain Divya ke use wahaan buland ke liye..
Yup! She knows about it all. Suhana ne hi bataya after all. Par jesa ki mene bataaya. Teen hi reasons hai Divya ne Suhana aur Veer ko jis kaaran Vegas bulaaya hai.
Plus, I think Suhana se baat cheet ke dauraan usne Suhana ki Veer se closeness ko bhi observe kar liya hoga, aur isiliye uska sach jaan ne ke liye usne donon ko saath mein wahaan bulaya ho... Abhi tak to wo, isi prakar ki praani lagi hai, typical 30-35 year old woman with a more notorious brain (no disrespect though) :evillaugh:
She's much more... :D
Idhar, saamne aa gaya hai ki asal mein Divya ke saath wahaan ho kya raha hai... Divya aur Nicholas ke teen investigators ki maut ho chuki hai & the latest one is Daniel... Daniel ne party mein kuchh aisa suna aur dekha jiski keemat use apni jaan dekar chukani padi... A really really important & big planning, I think... Kuchh bada hone waala hai, aur uski jaankari Daniel ko mil gayi, aur nateeja hamare saamne hai... Kya seedha target Divya-Nicholas hain, un murderer/murderers ka? Ya fir unke raaste ki rukavat bani huyi hai in donon ki agency, and isi liye donon unke nishane par hain..? :confused: Btw. Jo note usne evidence ke taur par chhoda tha...
House of the killers arc is very different. No spoilers though... :D
Kya hai ye House Of Killers!!?? Koyi sangathan? Kisi operation/plan ka naam? Par jo kuchh bhi hai, Divya ko us baare mein jaankari hai... She cracked the puzzle I think, aur uske baad jo shabd usne kahe, wo isi aur ishara karte hain ki nischit hi khatra bohot bada hai... Lagta yahi hai ke abhi to bas laashein girna shuru hi huyin hain, abhi bohot sa raktpaat hona baaki hai... And most importantly, the brain behind all this.. I guess, we're really not ready for what's coming, as you said... :eyes2:
You guys are not ready at all!!! :D
Yes! Divya ne na keval puzzle solve ki balki riddle ke peeche aur kya baat chhipi hui thi uska bhi pata lagaaya.
Nicholas ka Suhana ko Sonny kehkar pukarna aur uspar uska reaction, saaf hai ki teenon ek – doosre ko kaafi pehle se jaante hain... Kuchh hi der ke liye padha hai abhi humne Nicholas ke baare mein, and it's too early to make an opinion about him... Par fir bhi, lag to wo so and so hi raha hai, it's possible ki wo black sheep nikle, aage chalkar... :huh:
Waqt hi bataega...!!!
Beharhal, Veer ne apne stats increase kar liye hain... 20 points in the appearance, another reason for Divya to do what she loves to do... Suhana ka reaction bhi dekhne laayak hoga next day...
Yes! Kyuki changes abhi hue nahi hai. Agli subah hi unhe dekhne ko milega.
Intelligence mein 10 aur points add karna ek smart move hai filhal ki situation mein... Lagbhag 4,000 points baaki hain Veer ke paas, looks like ke is trip par ek aadhi nayi skill bhi purchase karni pad sakti hai use...
Veer actually Points save karke chal raha hai. Kyuki kabhi bhi aisi situation aa sakti hai jaha usse koi skill hi baahar nikaal sake. Aur aise me points hona behad zaroori hai. :smartm:
Status mein Shweta aur Bhumika ki favourability mein aaya rise highlight raha... Ragini ka aankda bhi 90 ko paar kar chuka hai & finally, Nidhi's number is on a constant rise too...
Ye toh laazmi hi hai ab.
Pari ak behaviour is update mein, I hope uska koyi human form na ho... Anyatha.. :rip:Veer!! Har 5 minute mein personality badalne waali ladki ko kaise sambhalega Veer, ye sabse bada sawaal hai, yadi Pari ki human form huyi to... Ek aur personality bhi thi shayad Pari ki jo is waali ke similar thi... Par uske comparison mein ye waali thodi aur intensify ho gayi hai... So, I guess ki Pari ki personalities Intensify hokar repeat hoti hain, kuchh particular level ups ke baad..? :think:
Harr 5 minute ne nahi badalti Pari ki personality. Only after system gets levelled up. Ye secret Veer ne hi disclose kiya tha. Pari ki personality se hi related bada secret khulega Vegas me hi... Boht jald...
Bhavana & Tejal are back in Mumbai, Bhavana ke mann mein jo doubt chhodkar aaya tha Veer, wo doubt use waapis Mumbai kheench hi laaya... Kya hoga, jab Bhavana ka shakh yakeen mein badal jaayega, taking into note ki possible hai us realisation ke waqt Veer Vegas mein hi ho... Brijesh and Family ka koyi sadsya yadi Bhavana se takraya, tab kya hoga... And important one is Tejal, use Mumbai ki hawa familiar lag rahi hai, aur lage bhi kyon na... She knows that she has a brother but jab use pata chalega ki Egypt mein aaya Vikram hi uska bhai Veer tha, jab use pata chalega ki uski Maa ke Mumbai aane ki wajah wahi hai,tab uski pratikriya dekhne laayak rahegi... As you mentioned in the end, a bunch of exciting things are waiting for the readers in the coming updates... Btw. Who's that Purvi..? Bhavna's good old friend..
Already pata lag gaya hai Tej ko... Confirmed nahi hai. Par wo filhaal yahi assume kar ke chal rahi hai ki Vikram hi uska bhai tha. Purvi is none other than muh boli sis of Bhavna... Haha!! Veer ne bachpan me Purvi ka bhi doodh piya hai. Bhavna ki absence me, jesa ki Purvi ne khud bataaya. Aage pata chalega uske baare me hume aur...
Again, it was a wonderful update, exactly what we're used to... The lines, in the form of a riddle by Daniel, you did a great job there, definitely, except that House Of Killers, acronym, there's some other meaning too hidden in the lines... As far as I've understood the lines, maybe Daniel was pointing towards a black sheep too... Nicholas!!?? Maybe I'm wrong but I think, The lines meant that happiness might turn into sorrow but one should get rid of that sorrow and move ahead {Related to Divya & Nicholas (:confused:)}... Maybe he's pointing towards finding and eliminating the evil inside, or to be exact within them in the form of a Vibhishan..? But one thing is for sure, the opponents are really strong in strength as well as in number... Well, let's see what happens next...
Iska jawaab Divya ne already samjha diya. Something big is lurking out there... Issi wajah se wo tension me aa gayi thi.
Outstanding Update Bhai & Waiting For Next.
Mannnn!! Ab kya hi bolu mein ... Dekh rahe ho kitna samay lag gaya khaali reply karne me ju ke revo par... Battery down ho gayi device ki... :awoo: Aise darraya mat karo bhai. Ek warning de diya karo... Ki lamba revo aane waala hai. Dil thoda sambhal jaata hai. :fever:
Ju ko pata hai writer logis kitna taraste hai ju jese reviewer ke liye??

Yadi aise hi ju likhte rahe, toh xf ke number 1 reviewer ban jaoge. But wait!!! Mere khayaal se ju already wo mukaam haasil kar chuke ho. :10:

Ek accha reviewer wo nahi hota jo quantity me reviews de harr jagah. Accha reviewer wo hota hai jo quality revo deta hai. Jiska ek revo baakiyo ke 10 revos ke barabaar ho. Aur ju unme se ek ho. :thumbup:

Aise hi bane rehne ka man!!! Thanks a lot for such a Massive review. Keep supporting! ✨
 
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