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Zabardast update
Superb fantabulous update Werewolf bhai....
Nice update bro
Nice update
Awesome update bhai keep posting
Bahut he shandar update veer ko mission mil bi gaya aur usne pura bi karliya bahut he ache tarike se aur divya ki thinking bi change ho gayi h veer ke liye 50 percent faveriablity bi increase ho gayi h par is baar villian dangerous mila h jiska level bi high..
Super duper dhamakedar behtreen update bhai
Jabarjst update bhai but apka tym schedule change hua hai kya do din ki jgh pe ab jyda din gap hota ya koi prblm hai
Ding superb update tha bhai maa mumbai mein beta Vegas mein.great fame improvement or legendary cards ke liye naye mission required honge best of luck for next creativity keep posting.
Awesome update.
Fantastic mind-blowing update
Nice update
Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Werewolf bhai...
Nice and beautiful update....
awesome update hai Werewolf bhai,
Behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur amazing update hai bhai,
Wonderful update, keep rocking Bhai
Per thoda jaldi jaldi rock Kiya kero
Fantastic update
Superb update bro
Nice update bro
Ek taraf ek maa apne bachche ki pahchan khoj Rahi hai to doosri taraf ek beta apni khush ki pahchaan banane mein laga hai. Tej Veer ki badi bahan hai to Bhavna ne use Veer ke saath kyon nahi choda yaa fir Veer ko apne saath kyon nahi le gayi?
Divya bhi ab shikaari se shikaar banti jaa rahi hai aur Suhana bhi mission khatam hote hote Veer par fisalne waali hai. Magar mission ke bahane Veer kaafi points bana kar kaafi skills le sakta hai ab. Matlab jab Veer India pahunchega tab tak wo aur bhi shaktisaali ho chuka hoga. Super exciting update.
Jabardast update
Maza aagya bro mujhe laga tha house of killer arc veer ki family related hoga but ye to kuch or hi nikla but this is awesome
Or bro kyaa house of killar arc poora ka pura vegas main hoga
Hmm veer ne kayi maao ka dudh piya hai
Par sabse badi mestry ye hai ki aakhir veer apni maa se kese bichada or kabhi mil bhi payega ya nahi
Agar ha to shweta ka kya hoga or bro main baat apki ye story incest preflix par hai to kya isme veer or uski dono mom ke bich ya sabhi behno ke bich sex hoga ya nahi
Or suman ki muskurahat ka raaz kab khulega bro ab or nahi raha jata
Mujhe to laga tha aapne do week ka rest liya hai to aapne apna sara pending work finish karliya hoga jisse update jaldi se de sake but aapne but update upload ki tiimeing se nirasha kardiya
Anyways must update tha bro maza aagya padh ke
Marvelous jabardast Shandar update bro
Bhai mast update diya hai! Action, romance mistery..... This part will definitely going to crazy. And thanks for your writing skills.
Werewolf भाई लाज़वाब रहा
अब भावना वीर को विक्रम समझ रही है और तेज के मन में थोड़ी ग्लानि है l पर दोनों ने तय कर लिया है वीर तक पहुँचने के लिए l
इधर वेगास में वीर ने अपना मिशन पूरा करने के साथ साथ ना सिर्फ दिव्या के अहं को रौंदा बल्कि उसके फेवरेबीलीटी को 50 अंक तक हासिल किया l
पहले से ही वीर को अंदेशा था सुहाना की कोई काली अतीत है l अब शायद वीर के समक्ष उस अतीत का आने का समय आ गया है
बहुत ही लाज़वाब रहा यह अंक
हाँ आपने कहा था कि सुहाना कहीं पर भी डिटेक्टिव है उल्लेख नहीं किया था
पर सुहाना को इस केस में दिव्या ने क्यूँ शामिल किया था यह अभी तक मैं जान नहीं पाया
Sir, fantastic Update. The first thing I have done is returned from office and read it. Too Good. Let's see change of Heart of Madam Divya in your upcoming Updates just like that of Suhana Madam (after the recovery of 1.5 Cr Pendant).Thank you.
Zabardast Update Bade Bhai
Maza Aagaya
Veer ka action dekh ke accha laga
Fabulous
Awesome updates
Jabardast update bhai
Main to update raat me padhungi...
Mujhe raat me hi padhne me maza aata h...
Behtreen update
Awesome update bro next update ka intezar rahega
Nice update
ये मारा पापड़वाले को
प्रणाम भाई सहाब
एक बार फिर वीर भाई सहाब आक्रामक रूप मे देख कर अच्छा लगा और
अब वीर की माँ और बहन उसे खोजेंगे मजा आएगा देखने मैं....
अगले अनुच्छेद की हार्दिक शुभकामनाएं आप को
Super fantastic mind blowing update bhai...
Jabrdast Update
See You In Next Update
Su
Superb update
Awesome updates
Romanchak update
Shaandar Update...as always..... Bhai bss update dete reha kro..late nhi krne ka...humse sabr nhi hota
Super update hai Bhai
Shaandaar update bhai. Waiting for next.
Nice update
Amazing update bro
Tej ko bhi apne bhai k bare me pta lg gya
Aur divya ki favourability bhi 50 ho jayegi
Mujh3 lgta hai ki los vegas se jane se phle ye bhi veer k neeche aa chuki hogi
Zabardast bro maza aa gaeya qasam sey
Fabulous updates bro, keep writing
Fabulous update Bhai superb
Awesome update bro
Fantastic update
waiting next update
Wow wonderful.....
Bhavna and purvi Jan gayi hai ki jo ladka Mila tha wo veer hi tha dekhte unke bato me kya Pata chalti hai....
Tez apni vai ko jarur dhundegi bt avi to veer Vegas me hai dekhte hain tez kya karti hai....
Divya fas gayi hai apna hero ke personality me also suhana b thoda thoda .....
Btw sandar fantastic update....
Or ek bat Vegas ka chapter or Kitna hoga
Such a nicend beautiful update Werewolf bhai. Hmesa ki tarah jaisa aapse ummid rahti hai ye update bhi bikul waisa hi bhut hi acha tha.
Yaha apne veer ka ek mission to pura ho gaya hai. Aur usase use bahut jyada fayda bhi mila hai. 3000 points, 200 fame point nd mere hisab se most important divya ki favrability jo ki 50 hai.
Aur jaha tak mai sochta hu ye aage bahut hi jyada kaam aane wali hai. Kyu ye to nahi bata skta lakin kaam jarur aayegi ye. Aur ha batane ki jarurat to hai nahi ye ab increase hi hoti jayegi wo bhi bahut hi teji se. Aur suhana bhi sb veer ke karname smjho live hi dekhegi. Nick bhi ab apna hero ko thoda bhav dene lagega. Aur dhire dhire yaha ab jaise jaise mission aage badhega sare dusman baki sb ko chor veer ke piche pad jayenge. Name to sayad isi mission ke baad uska sbke samne aa jayega. Lakin dekhte hai wo seriously lete hai ya abhi nahi.
Aur wahi mumbai me ab dhire dhire bahut se raj open honge. Mujhe sbse jyada wait hai us update ka jisme bhawna aur tej ko jb pata chlega ki aakhir apne veer ke sath past me kaisa behav kiya jata tha. Aur uske sath kya kya kiya tha ghar walo ne. Tab unka kya haal hoga. I can't imagine nd mujhe us Update ka is liye bhi wait hai ki aakhir tab aap us scene ko kitni achi tarah se dikhate hai.
Aur chlo ye to acha hua apni tej ko apne bhai ke bare me pata to chl gaya hai.
Dekhte hai aage ke Update me aur kya kya bom putata hai.
Awesome
Jabardasttt Updateee
Mazaa aagaya padhkee. Superbbb
wonderfull
Awesome update!
Bohat he zabaradast update waiting for next
Very nice update
Superb update broo
Waiting for next update
Awesome brother itne
Awesome update.. Bhai..
Awesome update Brother
Fantastic update waiting for next
Super fantastic update bro
Bai dasu he
Macha diya......
Zabardast update bro
Nice Update
Nice update...
Thrilled…
शिकारी खुद यहा शिकार हो गया, लाजवाब update Werewolf bro. वीर ने US मे भी झंडे गाड़ दिये, BUT AFTER THIS INCIDENT ONE THING IS SURE THAT HOUSE OF KILLERS WILL BECOME ENEMY OF VEER, LET'S SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT.
Zabardast fantastic update
Superb awsm update brother to gud Luvd it Plzzzz Plzzzz do cont asap Takecare
Bahot behtareen shaandaar update bhai
Tej n apni maa or purvi ki baat na suni hoti tow use pata hi chlta ki jiske saath Egypt m thi woh uska bhai tha itne paas hote huwe nahi pehchan payai jiska use dukh h or hoga bhi kyon na baherhal dekhte h ab Tej kia kerti h apne bhai ko dhoondhne k liye or Bhavna ji or Purvi m kia baat hoti or woh dono kia kerti h Veer ko dhoondhne ke liye
Jim slippery pakda gaya jisme sabse ziada yogdaan Veer ka tha
Badhiya zaberdast shaandaar lajawab update bhai
for completing 1700 pages on
your thread brother
Keep rocking
Nice update bhai
Uttam Lekhni ka Prayog Werewolf bhai...Waiting for Next Update Eagerly...
nice update
Nice update
Bahut hi behtreen update
for completing 1700 pages on your thread werewolf Bhai
Superb update
Also congratulations for 1700 pages Sir. This is massive...
Congratulations for completing 1.7k pages bro......
Congrats on 1700 pages.
Awesome update dear
Congratulations for 1700 pages bro
Waiting for next update bro
yar ap update ke aage MEGA likhna to bhool hi gaye....
Sach mein itna maza to Harry Potter padhne mein bhi na aaya tha!!
Par mere do points hain—
First- Ghar chor kar to Bhawan gayi thi!! Aur Brijesh and family ne to apna address change nahi kiya..
Agar Bhavna sach mein Veer ko dhoondna chahti to bas ek PI hire Karti, use Brijesh ka address dete aur Veer ka pata laga leti... Milna nahi chahti to bhi kaise pal raha hai iska beta, ye to update rakh hi sakti thi!!
Bad momma.. so irresponsible of her!!
Secondly - If I remember correctly, Bewolfs Blessing once deactivated, cannot be re-activated before 24 hrs....
kya iski limit ye thi - 30 min mein kitni bar bhi on-off karo par 30 min poore hone ke bad 24 hrs baad dubara activate kar sakte hain??
Ek or baat - will he get any pussy in Vegas? Ya india aane ka wait karna padega?
Baki Gazab ja rahe ho Guru, full maza aa raha hai...
Hats off
Brilliant update bro maza aa gaya hai
Waiting for the next update bro
For completed 1700 pages on your story thread....
Bhai pyaar 100bar story ka kuch pta chala kisi ko
Werewolf one of the best writer of xforum
1.7k pages me only 98 updates ..It's a strange record ... Is se pata chalta hai ki is story ka craze bohot hai
nice1
Bhai kaleja nikal ke rakh diya tumne toh.,
I know yeh toh ek 6oti si zalak thi picture abhi baaki hein mere dost,
Awaited next out of mind updates....!
Keep Writing.....!
Super wonderful awesome mind-blowing update
Congratulations for 1700
Congratulations for completing 1700 pages
Supper updated bro
Gajab ka action hai.Bechaari Divya ab kya karegi.idhar veer America mein hai udhar usaki maa use Mumbai mein khoj Rahi hai
Extraordinary update bro
Congratulations sir........
Mast updated bhai
Congratulations for complete 1700 pages
Superb update bro lajawab.. but plz give updates regularly..
Atleast minimum twise per week.
Shabdo ke jaadugar to aap hai
Review likhne ke liye naye shabd hum kaha se laye
Isilye
Awesome as always.
Awesome update bhai waiting for next update
SHAANDAAR JABARDUST EXCELLENT FANTASTIC MIND BLOWING AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI
CONGRATULATIONS FOR COMPLETE 1700 PAGES BHAI
Bhai next update aap Monday Tak to de hi sakte ho
Bohot hi shandar लाजवाब जबरदस्त update bhai
Veer ne to tahlka hi mcha diya
Yaha india mey bhavana na ka sach tej Ko pata chala ki ohh kis liye yaha ayi hey
Ab sirf verr ke lotane ki bari hey vapas
Ab age dekhte hey kya hota hey
Waiting for today's update
Hm bda tha bhai pr mai tym janna chahta tha kyuki exams hai pr stry bdi psnd hai tbhi aana pdta hai iske liye jb nhi update hota aapka to ar koi dhundhne lgta fir tym bht nikal jata main reason ye hai
Bhai Agla update kab de rahe ho
Wao! To akhirkar tej ko pta Chal hi gya ki Uski ma yha Mumbai kya karne aayi hai, to Vo mahila tej ki muh boli mausi hai or unhone bhavna ki anupasthiti me apna dudh pilaya hai veer ko...
Bhavna ji Kisse bcha rhi hai veer or tej ko, kya vo us locket se jude hai ya fir koi aur hi kahani hai...
Divya ne us paheli ka na sirf tod dhundh nikala Balki uske andar jo hidden msg tha Vo bhi samajh kr sabko btaya... Jim the slippery ko pakadne ke baad veer ko 3000 points mile sath hi 200 fame or divya ka uske prati najariya bhi badal gya hai or last me 50 fixed favourability bhi mili divya ki taraf se...
Divya madam kuchh karne se pahle Lagta hai jyada situation ko samajhti nhi hai, are jab usne paheli ki ganbhirta ko samajh liya to use yah bhi samajh lena chahiye, us gang se jude logo ko Itna kam aakne ki bhul kaise kr sakti hai Vo... Yha divya ko veer ne apni ek jhalak ya kahe trailer dikha diya hai ki Vo Jo bahar se dikhta hai vaisa hai nhi to uspr ye cheap tricks ka prayog na Kare or usse dur rahe... ek pal ko divya dar hi gyi thi ab dekhte hai aage kya karti hai vo...
Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab amazing
Waiting for the next update sir
Please next update soon sir
Bhai Jo aata hai vahi likh dete hai bhaya vo kyA hai na baccho ko pdhate pdhate or kitabe padh kr unki summery nikalkr btana hota hai, to uski adat ho gyi hai ab...
To bro ky village arc house of killers ke baad ayega
Mind-blowing update bro
Bhai hand of you
Ek dum bawal machaya hua hai
Kafi time bad lota hun
And yakween kro bta pana mushkil hai
You are a great writer
Ham to chai km pani hen apky samny
Keep write bro
awesome update
Superb update
Your story is beyond what I can imagine.
First part of update was interesting and emotional then second half. overall update was very good.
Behad rochak update waiting for next
Waiting for today's update
Nice update
Zabardast update
AGREEEE WITH YOU BRO
AKWYSS WITH YOU MAJE IT QUICK
Jahan tak mera khayal hai ... Bhawna veer ke baare mai uske college se patta lagai gi ... Or wahan se usse nidhi ke baare mai patta challe ga or nidhi bhawna ko veer ke baare mai kya kya batati hai ... That will be interesting
Twice per week ??
Waiting
Awesome
Nice update
Eagerly Waiting for next update
Update soon please
Waiting
Definitely you should.. It's a yes from me
आपके अपडेटस बहुत स्लो आरहे हे
1 हफ्ते मे 1 अपडेटस तो दे दो ना
Yes..
Waiting
Yes open
उत्तम विचार, हमारे तरफ से हाँ हैं
Yes.
ok u can
Bhai update kab aayega
Kyu maje le rahe ho werewolf bhai readers ke ...
Tho Bhai Kay jawab Aya app ke Wale khud se
xforum channel bana do full. Discussion hogi.new idea bhi mile gi
Waiting for update
ग्रंथो मे इसी को कहा गया है....
"घनघोर बेइज़ती"
"तेल डाल के पेलना"
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खैर, मेरे तरफ से भी पूछ लेना वोल्फी ब्रो, खुद से... कि हमे इस वीर गाथा का अगला पृष्ठ कब पढ़ने को मिलेगा ।
Waiting
Behad hi shanadar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.
Zabardast fantastic update
Waiting
Amazing story bro ...just can't wait for more updates...
Incest - Vidhwaa maa ki Hawas
Meri Maa priya kuch asi dikhti hai aur figure bhi kamal ka hai..xforum.live
Waiting Bro
Nice zabardast update
Kahani complete to Karo Bhai
Bhai pari kaise paida hue ye janane ke liye kitane update ka wait karana padega
Update 98 has been posted.Kitni bje aayega bhai update lagbhag?
Excellent update bhai..Update - 98 ~ The NightwalkerAb tak...
[You have established a name of yourself by catching the criminal splendidly. You have been rewarded 200 Fame Points]
'One target down!!! Na jaane kitne baaki hai abhi.'
[It's going to be really tough Master! Really tough!!!]
Pari ki baat se sehmat hoke, Veer chal diya Suhana ke sang car ki orr.
Pehla criminal toh asaani se pakad aa gaya. Par kya baaki bhi itni asaani se pakad me aane waale the? Ye toh waqt hi bataane waala tha.
Ab aage...
Duniya me harr tarah ki ghatnaaye ghatit ho rahi hoti hai. Chaahe khushi ke pal ho, ya naraazgi, kisi se gussa, toh kisi se maar peet. Kahi fame hai toh kahi crime. Kahi controversies toh kahi bhrashtachar.
Aur aise hi Vegas me kal raat ek crime karne waale criminal ko pakda gaya tha. Iss ghatna ko anjaam diya gaya tha.
Aur Iss Operation ka hero kaun tha? Beshaq, Veer!
Par kya khatra tal chuka tha? Hargiz nahi! Jim toh keval shatranj ke khel me ek pyaada tha. Woh pyaada, jo khel me sabse pehle maara jaata tha.
Unn pyaado ke peeche ek se ek dhurindhar baithe hue the. Aise log jinka naam sunn log kaanp uthate.
Ye baat Divya bhali bhaati jaanti thi. Usse ye abhaas ho gaya tha ki boht hi badi koi planning kar raha hai. Par sawaal ye tha usse itna sab kese pata chala?
Kya Divya kuch aur bhi baat chhupa rahi thi? Veer ne ye bhaanp liya tha. Divya kuch na kuch toh zaroor chhipa rahi thi. Par kya? Ye jaan'na baaki tha.
Tab tak Mumbai me kya ho raha tha ye bhi jaan'na zaroori tha.
Idhar Ragini subah ka naashta Suman aur Shweta ke sang banaane ke baad chup chaap apne ghar ki terrace par khadi hui thi.
Bechaari ka mann hi nahi lag raha tha kahi. Kese lagega? Veer ke jaane se pehle hi Ragini ne jee bhar ke usse chooma tha. Aur wo ehsaas usse paagal kar chuka tha.
Ab toh ek pal bhi uske bina jeena mushqil ho raha tha.
'Hey Bhagwaan!! Mene uske jaane se pehle hi kyu kiya wo sab? Ab toh mujhse raha bhi nahi jaa raha. Baar baar wahi yaad aa raha hai. Akhir roz roz kitni video call karu usse?'
Wo apne aap se baatein kar ek chinta me doob gayi. Roz roz video calls par wo Veer se kam se kam ek ghante to baat kar hi leti thi.
Veer ki yaad Ragini ko itni zyaada sataaegi usse iss baat ka bilkul andaaza nahi tha. Pichli baar jab Veer Egypt gaya tha ya Rajasthan. Tab Ragini ko itni yaad nahi aayi thi. Shayad isse hi dil-lagi kehte the!?
Wo yaha niraasha me khadi hui thi ki uske peeche se tabhi Suman baalti bhar kapde leke aayi aur upar taar me geele kapde felaane lagi.
Aahat paate hue Ragini ne mud ke Suman ko dekha aur firse muh ferr ke wo udaasi me doob gayi. Parantu Suman nahi. Uske chehre par ek kutil muskaan saji hui thi. Wo kapde zaroor fela rahi thi, par uski nazre Ragini ki peeth par hi gadi hui thi.
"Veer jii ko yaad kar rahi ho?"
Ragini ke kaano me Suman ki awaaz peeche se padi. Pal bhar ke liye wo hichkichaayi. Lekin jab usse dhyaan aaya ki Suman toh uski apni hi thi. Ghar ke sadasyo me se ek thi woh. Toh usne dheere se sarr haa me hila diya.
Suman (smiles) : Mein jaanti thi yahi baat hogi.
Ragini : Uski aadat jo ho gayi hai. Uski baatein sunn sunn ke din kese guzar jaata tha pata hi nahi chalta tha. College ke liye jab wo jaata tha toh saara samaan mein ready kar ke deti thi usse. Par uske jaane se din jese katt hi nahi rahe ab...
Suman : Hmm! Ye baat toh hai. Par chinta mat kariye. Veer jii jald hi laut aaenge.
Ragini : Haan! Par kya karu? Mann hai ki maanta nahi. Kherr! Aap bhi araam kar lo. Subah subah machine me itne kapde dhoye hai aaj aapne.
Kehte hue woh neeche jaane lagi, toh Suman ne dheemi sii awaaz me kaha,
"Keval aap hi nahi ho jiski raato ki neend haraam hui hai. Ghar me mere aur aapke alaawa bhi aur koi hai jo mujhse aur aap se bhi zyaada bechain hai... Fufufu~" wo khil-khilaayi.
Suman ki khuspusaahat sunn Ragini palti,
Ragini : Kuch kaha kya aapne?
Suman (smiles) : Hmm? Nahi! Kuch bhi toh nahi.
Ragini : Ohh! Shayad mere hi kaan baj rahe hai...
Kehte hue wo neeche chali gayi. Aur Suman idhar muskuraate hue kapde jhatkaar kar dubaara unhe felaane lagi.
Uske labo se muskaan gayab hone ka naam hi nahi le rahi thi. Na jaane kya soch rahi thi woh.
***
Wahi idhar Nidhi ke ghar me subah subah Juhi bawaal machaaye hue thi.
Shreya toh job ke liye nikal gayi thi. Par aaj dono Maa beti ne chhutti lii hui thi. Juhi ghar me bechaari Nidhi ko hila ke rakhi hui thi. Aur zidd pe zidd kar rahi thi,
Juhi : Maamu se baat karao pehle... Ni toh mein breakfast nahi khaungi...
Nidhi : Juhiiii~ Gandi baatein nahi karte. Bad manners hai na ye!? Mamma ne samjhaaya hai na aapko. Breakfast ke time zidd nahi karte... Chup chaap breakfast karo apna.
Juhi : Niiiiiiiiii~ Pehle maamu se baat karao!!!
Nidhi : Tumhaare maamu yaha nahi hai. Wo baahar gaye hai.
Juhi : Phone pe baat karao pehle... Ni khaungi mein warna...
Nidhi : Tum bhi na!!!! Hey Bhagwan! Kya karu iss ladki ka!? J-Juhi... Beta... Maamu busy honge... Unhe call karna sahi nahi.
Juhi : Maamu Juhi ke liye busy nahi hote kabhi... Pehle baat karao... Ni to mein ni khaungi... Maamu se mujhe chocolate mangaani hai...
Nidhi : Kal hi toh itni badi chocolate khaayi thi na? Ab aur nahi!!! Roz hi khaati ho tum. Daanto me cavity ho jaegi toh sab chidhaenge tumhe fir school me. Bolenge dekho Juhi ke toh daant kharaab ho gaye. Hassenge sab.... Fir mat aana mamma ke paas rote hue.
Juhi : Haan???
Nidhi : Haan!!!!
Juhi : Toh mein Nana jii ki tarah naye daant lagwa lungi. Jese unke daant nikal jaate hai na? Mere bhi doctor uncle nikaal ke new new daant laga denge.
Nidhi : Ugghhh!!!!! Ye ladki... J-Juhi!!! Tumhaare Nana jii ki batteesi nakli hai.
Juhi : Maamu se baat karaoooo!!!!
Nidhi (sighs) : Ye ladki aise nahi maanegi.
Ab toh phone lagaana hi tha. Aur kya hi kar sakti thi Nidhi? Usne phone laga ke seedha Juhi ko hi pakda diya. Kisi kaaran vash wo Veer se baat karne me hichkicha rahi thi.
Par ye pehle ki tarah naraazgi nahi thi. Kuch aur hi baat thi. Kuch alag sii baat...
Nidhi : Z-Zyaada lambi baat mat karna Juhi.
Juhi : Helllooooo???? Maaaaamuuuuuu~
Veer : Juhiii??? Kesi ho??
Juhi : Acchi hu...!!!!
Veer : School nahi gayi aaj?
Juhi : Aaj mamma aur mein dono nahi gaye. Hehehehe ~ Aaj chhutti...
Veer : Ohh!! Accha?? Aur tumhari mummy kidhar hai?
Nidhi ne phone jaan boojh ke loudspeaker par kar ke diya tha Juhi ko. Toh usse saari baatein sunaayi de rahi thi.
Juhi : Mamma yahi khadi hai.
Veer : Kya kar rahi hai? Bas khadi hi hai kya?
Juhi : Mamma mujhe daant rahi thi. Maamu mamma keh rahi hai ki chocolate khaane se daant kharaab ho jaate hai... Maamu... Aap chocolate laoge na mere liye?
Veer : Hahahahaha ~ Roz roz khaane se toh sach me daant kharab ho jaate hai. Hmm! Mein zaroor launga tumhaare liye chocolate.
Juhi : Badi waalii...
Nidhi : Juhi nahiiii!!! Badi chocolate nahi!!!
Veer : Hahaha~ Theek hai baba badi waali le ke aaunga. Aur tumhari mummy kyu bhadak rahi hai?
Juhi : Mamma roz aisa karti hai. Mamma maamu ko miss kar rahi thi... Aur keh rahi thi...
Nidhi : J-Juuuuuhhhhhiiiiiiiiii...
Iss se pehle ki nanhi Juhi aur raaz khol paati Nidhi ne forun hi uske haatho se phone chhina liya.
Nidhi : H-Hello!!??
Juhi ka apna kaam toh nikal hi gaya tha. Chocolate badi waali aane waali thi. Maamu se baat bhi ho gayi thi. Baccho ka mann wese hi chanchal hota hai. Ek jagah zyaada derr unka mann tikta kaha hai. Apna kaam nikalwaane ke baad wo TV chaalu kar apna favourite program dekhne me lag gayi. Aur sofe par ucchal naachne lagi.
Idhar uski Maa bechaari phone pakde awkwardly wahi khadi hui thi.
Veer : Hello... Ma'am!!
Nidhi : Mmm~
Veer : Kaisi hai aap?
Nidhi : M-Mein theek hu.
Bechaari Nidhi ki awaaz itni dheemi thi ki Veer ko dhang se sunaayi hi nahi dii pal bhar ke liye.
Veer : Aur Shreya jii kesi hai?
Nidhi : W-Wo bhi acchi hai. Office ke liye nikal gayi.
Veer : Accha!!!
Nidhi : T-Tum...
Veer : ???
Nidhi : Tum... Kab tak lautoge?
Veer (smiles) : Are you missing me?
Nidhi (blushes) : Wh-Who would??? Mein... Mein toh Juhi ke liye puch rahi thi. Wese bhi... Tum kaun sa college aate ho? Inn sab ke liye tumne kabhi dhyaan hi nahi diya. S-So who will miss you? I-I don't... Bas! Apni studies pe dhyaan do... Aur...
Veer : Hahahahahahahaha~
Nidhi : Wh-Whaatt? Hass kyu rahe ho?
Veer : Hass isliye raha hu ki itna safed jhooth jab aap bolti ho toh usse pakadne ki zaroorat hi nahi padti. Alag hi pata lag jaata hai. Aur... Yahi baatein aapko cute banaati hai.
Veer ki baat sunn Nidhi ke gaal surkh laal ho chale. Wo jawaab me kuch na boli.
Bas khamosh reh gayi.
Veer : Mujhe aane me abhi thoda samay lag sakta hai.
Nidhi : I-I see!!
Veer : Ek urgent call aa raha hai. Mein aapse baad me baat karta hu.
Nidhi : O-Okay!!
Aur Veer ne phone kaat diya.
Nidhi : B-Bye...!!!
Bechaara Veer Nidhi ka bye sunn hi nahi paaya. Ek lambi aah bharte hue Nidhi ne phone rakha. Juhi ko ek nazar dekha jo apna kaam nikalwa ke ekdum mazze me uchhal kood rahi thi. Kya hi Zindagi thi uski.
Aise pyaar lutaane waale maamu mile the usse. Shan bhar ke liye Nidhi ko jalan sii mehsoos hui. Par fir wo Juhi ke liye khush bhi ho gayi.
Gaal abhi bhi laal the uske. Mann ke vichaaro se baahar aane ke liye wk kitchen me bhaag gayi.
***
Veer waha Vegas me tha par uske khilaaf bil me ghuse saanp yaha haath par haath dhare nahi baithe the.
Chaahe Niharika ho, chaahe Pranjal ya chaahe Rajat. Teeno hi apni saazish ko anjaam dene ke liye sahi mauke ka intezaar kar rahe the.
"Yessssss~ Suck my clit bitchesss!!!!"
Harr baar ki tarah, Niharika washroom me thi. Neeche se poori nangi. Uska ek perr toilet seat par tha aur dusra neeche farsh par. Aur uski do slaves, uski chut chaatne me lagi hui thi.
Unn dono ke baalo ko kheech kar wo unka muh apni chut me daba rahi thi.
"Suck it!!!! Zorr se chaato kutiyo!!!! Zorr se!!! Aahhhhnnnn!!!! Mmmm~ Aise hi... Daana chabao... Haan!!! Yessssss~ Chusoooo chusoooo... Aur chusoooo mmmmm~"
Apni kamar matkaate hue wo apni geeli chut ko unke chehre par ragad rahi thi. Unki jeebh ko apne chut ke chhed me ghusa ke woh kamar hilaate jaa rahi thi.
Kahi ek ladki ke muh me apni chut deti toh kahi dusri ke , toh kahi dono ko hi saath me chaatne kehti woh.
Par mann me uske kuch aur bhi chal raha tha. Jab se Veer ne uske dono chhedo ko choda tha. Tab se hi usse masturbation se wo santushti nahi mil paa rahi thi. Yaha tak ki lesbian sex me bhi usse wo maza nahi aa raha tha.
Aur iss baat se Niharika ko apne aap par itna gussa aa raha tha ki usse kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha ki kya kare. Woh ek aurat... Kese ek mard ke neeche aa sakti thi???? Par uska jism toh kuch aur hi maang raha tha.
Kheejte hue wo pareshaan ho chuki thi. Jab jab wo chut me ungli karti, ya apni slaves se apni chut chatwaati, Veer apna lund uske chhedo me daalte hue... uski woh chhavi uske mann me aa jaati. Aur nateeja?
Uski aankhein khul jaati, aur saari banaayi gayi uttejna gusse ke chalte kahi gaayab ho jaati.
"Fuuuuckkkk thisss....!!!! Urrrgghhhh!!!"
Aaj bhi wahi hua. Jab wo apne climax par lagbhag pohuch hi gayi thi. Tabhi, usse wo drishya yaad aa gaya, jab Veer uski chut me apna lund pel raha tha aur uska apna pati darwaaze ke theek baahar maujood uss se baat kar raha tha.
"Aaarggghhhhh!!!! I hate him soooo muchhh!!!!"
Yaad karte hi uski aankhein khul gayi gusse me par...
*Drip*
"H-Huhhhhh!!??? Ahhnnnnnnnnn ssssss~"
*Sqquiiiiiirtttttt*
*Sqquiiiiiirtttttt*
Uski chut kisi fuwwaare ki tarah khuli aur dherr saara paani bahaate hue unn do ladkiyo ke chehro ko bhigo diya.
"Wh-Whhaaaaattttt? Ahhnnnnnnnnn!!! This... This....!???"
Niharika ko vishvaas hi nahi ho raha tha. Wo jhar gayi??? Jese hi usse pata laga ki wo kya soch ke jhari... Uska badan kaanp utha.
"N-Nooo!!! It can't be!!!"
Wo jhari thi... Veer ko yaad karke. Uski chudaayi yaad karke. Bhale hi wo apne mann se kitna hi kyu na hate kare Veer se. Par ek aurat ka jism kabhi nahi jhooth bolega. Wahi hua...
Apne pati se chhup ke anjaan jawaan ladke se tabadtod chudaayi karwaana. Ye vichaar hi uske jism me ek aag laga diya tha. Kitna hi kyu na chidh le wo Veer se. Par chut ye nahi dekhti thi ki lund kiska hai.
Lund yadi mazboot ho, toh chut uske aage haar hi jaati hai. Niharika bhi haar chuki thi. Aur uski chut bhi.
"Nahiiiiii!!! Aisa hargiz nahi ho sakta.... Uss kameene ke saamne mein jhuk jau? H-Hargiz nahi!!!"
Aur fir usse wo drishya yaad aaya. Jab Veer ke mazboot haath uske baalo ko jakde hue the. Aur kese wo car ke andar usse pakad ke jhukaaya hua tha. Kese wo uske vishaal lund ko muh me bhar ke choos rahi thi. Kese Veer ki dusri slave Suman saare nazaare ko mazze se dekh rahi thi.
*Splllluuuurrrrtttttt*
*Drip* *Drip*
"Aaaaaahhhhhhhhhhnnnnnnnnn~"
Aur ek baar fir, uski chut ne apna pani chorr diya.
Niharika apni chut ko aankhein faade aur muh khole hairat me dekhne lagi. Aisa kese ho sakta tha bhala? Wo ek dominator thi. Submissive female nahi. Fir aisa kese ho sakta tha?
Kese uski chut itna pani bahaa rahi thi???
"I FUCKING HATE THISSS SO MUCCCH!!"
Usne zorr se chillaate hue apne haatho me lii hui apni panty dur fek dii.
"Dur hato kutiyo!!!!! GET FUCKING LOST!!!!"
Wo gurraayi!!! Aur apni dono hi slaves ko baahar bhaagne bol dii.
Uski dono slaves, jinme se ek Ayushi thi. Shreya ki colleague toh wahi dusri ka naam tha Ishani. Dono majboori ke chalte Niharika ki daasi bani hui thi.
Par dono iss baat se anjaan thi, ki unki ye maalkin khud kisi mard ki daasi banti jaa rahi thi.
Niharika haafte hue toilet seat par baith gayi. Chut ka haal behaal tha. Paani chorr chorr ke wo poori geeli ho chuki thi. Aur lund lene ke liye tadap rahi thi.
"Uggghhhhh!!!!" Usne zorr zorr se ungli kari aur kuch hi shan bhar me punah ek baar....
*Splurrrrtttttttt*
*Sqquiiiiiirtttttt*
Wo fir jharr gayi.
"I... *huff* I must do something! *huff* Mujhe uske... Mujhe uske paas se wo video haasil karni hi hogi. Yesssss!!! *huff* Veer! Khud ko boht smart samajhte ho??? *huff* Mene already tumhaare phone me keylogger install kar rakha hai. *huff* Hahahaha~"
Sochte hue ek khatarnak muskaan uske chehre par sajj gayi.
"Jald hi... *huff* Jald hi tum mere perro ki neeche hoge...!!"
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Vegas
Evening ~ 7:14 PM
Subah Veer ki baat jab Nidhi se ho rahi thi. Tab usse ek urgent call aa gaya tha beech me. Jo kisi aur ka nahi, Karan ka tha.
Ek khushkhabri thi.
Veer ne apna paisa jis Vatsala Steel Industries ke shares par lagaaya tha. Uske daam badh chuke the.
Karan ko toh vishvaas hi nahi ho raha tha. Jo company itne loss me chal rahi thi woh akhir achanak se upar kese uth sakti thi? Aur yadi uthi bhi toh Veer ko pehle se itna bharosa kese tha company pe? Usse kese pata chala?
Iska raaz toh Veer hi jaanta tha. Stock Master!!! Ekmaatr skill jo uske business me uski madad ke liye thi.
Veer ne baithe baithe hi laakho rupaaye ka profit kar liya tha. Aur ye lakh jald hi crore me tabdeel hone waale the.
Aaj ki unki toli waapas se investigation department ki orr jaa rahi thi.
Sab pehle ki hi tarah baithe hue the. Driver seat par Nik, uske bagal se Suhana. Aur peeche Divya sang Veer.
Kal ki hui vardaat ke bawajood, Divya apne haatho par patti baandh ke kaam kar rahi thi.
Baat hi kuch aisi thi. Police ne jab Jim ki acchi tarah khaatirdaari kari toh kayi ghanto ke baad jaake Jim ne apna muh khola.
Aur usne kuch details dii thi. Next criminal ki...
Jese hi wo jankaari crime investigation waalo ko pata chali, woh jaan ke unki rooh kaanp gayi.
Divya aur Nik bhi unme se ek the. Din ka daura toh unka chhaan been karne me hi guzar gaya tha. Woh Daniel ki post mortem reports bhi check karne gaye the. Toh wahi crime scene ke aas paas bhi jitna ho sakta tha utna pata lagaya. Par haath kuch na aaya.
Aur Jim ki dii gayi jaankaari ke chalte, uski pushti karne ke liye investigation department ne Connor ko bheja tha.
Woh bhi ek detective tha. Ek senior detective.
Anubhav me koi kami nahi thi uske paas. Sahi nirnay, sahi samay pe lena bakhubi aata tha usse.
Beshaq, wo maut ke kuye me tha ek prakaar se. Par ye hi toh uska kaam tha.
Lekin, jis baat ka darr tha wahi hua. Divya aur Nik ko urgent call aaya achanak8 department se ki woh jaha kahi bhi hai, jald se jald department pohuche.
Isliye, sabhi firse uss orr jaa rahe the.
Peeche ki seat par Divya aaj Veer ko alag nazro se dekh rahi thi. Kal Veer ne points badhaaye the. Appearance ke bhi. Zaahir tha uski twacha aur khili khili nazar aa rahi thi. Divya isliye aaj usse badi hi jigyaasa se nihaar rahi thi.
Kabhi wo sharaarti dhang me kuch soch muskuraati toh kabhi Veer ko dekh usse aankh maar deti.
Eka-ek Veer ki nazar jab Divya par gayi toh usne dekha ki woh uski orr thoda jhukte hue apna ang pradarshan kar rahi thi.
Uske gore badan ka cleavage saaf saaf jhalak raha tha. Veer ko woh smile karte hue dekh rahi thi.
Aur fir badi hi dheemi awaaz me boli,
Divya (smiles) : You can touch them.
Veer : Huh??
[I will fuckiinngggg killll herrrr!!!! (ʘᴗʘ✿) Maaassttteeerrrr~ Don't touch her!!]
Divya ki harqat Veer toh dekh hi raha tha acche se par saamne driver seat par baitha Nik bhi mirror se sab kuch dekh chuka tha.
Woh sunn toh nahi paaya ki uski patni ne kya kaha par woh itna zaroor jaan gaya tha ki Divya Veer ke saath flirt kar rahi thi. Filhaal woh kuch nahi bola. Par aankhein gada ke unko dekhta raha toh majbooran Divya ko apni flirting rokni padi.
Unhe nahi pata tha ki department ki taraf se urgently kyu bulaaya gaya hai. Isliye abhi woh aage aane waale jhatke ke pehle thoda relaxed the.
Gaadi ruki, sabhi uss se utre aur andar gaye.
Veer aur Suhana ko baahar hi rok diya gaya tha. Department ke Head ke cabin me keval aur keval Nik aur Divya hi gaye the.
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*Click*
Darwaaza band hua aur dono pati patni, department ke Head yaani ki Nolan ke saamne baithe hue the.
Nik : What happened ?
Nolan : Look for yourself.
Kehte hue usne dono ke sarr par ek ek headphones pehna diya. Saamne computer screen thi.
Aur connection seedha Conner se tha.
Conner gaya hua tha ek Mansion me. Nik aur Divya dono hi Connor ki shaqal dekh sakte the. Camera connected tha. Aur Audio bhi.
Unn dono ko Connor ki saare baatein sunaayi de rahi thi.
Nolan : It's not live. It happened just a few minutes ago.
Aur fir unhone dekha...
Connor kuch keh raha tha. Uska chehra poora paseene se bheega hua tha. Chehre se ekdum rang udaa hua tha. Bhaybhheet poora!!! Lambi lambi saans lete hue haaf raha tha woh.
Uski haalat dekh aisa lag raha tha jese usne koi bhoot saamne dekh liya ho.
Aur wo bolna shuru kiya,
"I WILL FUCKING DIE!!!!! I'M TRAPPED!!!! I'M TRAPPED!!!! *huff* H-Help me!"
"This is much bigger than we thought of... It's insane... We all will die here!!! Listen to me!!! *huff* This is live killing!!!! FUCKING LIVE KILLING!!! There are few of us. They too participated here. But we are being recorded!! IT'S FUCKING DARK WEB!!!!"
"H-HE WILL KILL ONE OF US!!! REMEMBER! HIS NAME IS... *********** PEOPLE ARE PAYING TO WATCH US GETTING KILLED!!! IT'S A FUCKING HOUSE OF KILLERS. DANIEL WAS GODDAMN RIGHT!! *huff* *huff* THERE'S AIN'T A SINGLE ONE. *huff* P-PLEASE!!! GUYS!!! SEND ME THE HELP!!! SEND ME THE HELP!!!! I DON'T WANNA DIE HERE!!!!"
"H-Huhhhhhh????"
Par tabhi...
Connor kisi jagah dekh ghabraaya. Uski saasein atak gayi. Woh chillaaya,
"WHAT'S...? WHAT'S HAPPENING? N-Nooooo!!?!!!"
Aur agle hi pal...
*Thud* *Thud* *Thud*
Uske haatho se camera gira...
Cheekhne chillaane ki awaaz aane lagi. Connor ki cheenkh waha aur Nik aur Divya ke headphones me goonjne lagi.
Aur fir camera me jo Nik aur Divya ne dekha. Usse dekh dono ka badan thanda pad gaya. Maano jese saanp soongh gaya.
Divya apna muh dhak zorr zorr se bilakhte hue rone lagi. Uske poora badan ke ruye khade ho gaye.
Darr ke maare uska shareer kaanpne laga. Woh ghabraate hue daud kar baahar nikal ke aayi.
Idhar baahar Veer aur Suhana kareeb 1 ghante se unn dono ke baahar aane ka intezaar kar rahe the.
Veer : 1 ghante ke upar ho chuka hai. What are they doing inside?
Suhana : I have no clue!
Veer : Ohhh! Wo aa gaye...!
Suhana : Hmm??
Suhana ne jab Veer ki nazro ko follow kar uss orr dekha toh paaya ki Divya ghabraate hue baahar nikli aur seedha apne ghutno ke bal gir padi.
Suhana : Divyyyaaaaa!!!!
Dono Veer aur Suhana daudate bhaagte hue uske paas aaye aur usse sambhaal ke uthaaya.
Suhana : Divya kya hua????
Par Divya kuch na boli. Usse sambhalne me thoda samay lag gaya.
Jab uski haalat thodi theek hui toh usne rote hue bataaya,
Divya (cries) : C-Connor is dead!!!!
Suhana : Whaaaaaaaaatttttt?
Divya : Connor is dead Suhana.... He died!!!!
Suhana : ...
Divya : I must... I must show you something!!!
Wo aasu poch uth ke andar gayi. Aur usne jo dekha, uska ek paper par printout nikaalne lagi computer screen ko sahi timestamp par rok ke.
Idhar Nolan Divya ko aata dekh apni baat rakha,
Nolan : Who decided to send him alone there?
Nik : That... It was decided in the meeting in the morning.
Nolan : That's what I'm asking... Who voted for him to go there alone?
Nik : Th-That's....
Nolan (chillaate hue) : ANSWER MEEE!!!!
Divya : W-We all supported it. C-Connor too opted for it.
Nolan : YOU DUMB IDIOTSSSS!!!!!!! WE LOST HIM!!! WE LOST OUR ANOTHER PERSON!!!!!! I DON'T CARE WHAT YOU GUYS WILL DO NOW. BUT NEXT... I WANT YOU GUYS TO SEND SOMEONE FROM YOUR TEAM NOW MY SO CALLED PRIVATE DETECTIVES.... WE WON'T BE SENDING OUR DEPARTMENT'S DETECTIVES NOW!!!!!!! YOU GET THAT....??
Nik : W-We... We do!!!
Nolan : YOU CAN LEAVE!!!!
Divya jese hi baahar aayi, woh Suhana aur Veer ko haath pakad apne cabin me le gayi.
Divya : The second criminal...!!!!!
Veer : Huh???
Suhana : !!????
Aur agle hi pal... Usne table par ek paper patakte hue rakha. Ye wahi printout tha...
Usse dekhte hi Suhana ka badan kaanp utha.
Saamne printout me jo tha, wo tha...
Ek wanted paper!!!!
Divya : And his name is...
Veer : ?????
"THE NIGHTWALKER!!!!"
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Samay samay par mein Mumbai ka zikr bhi dikhaunga. Baaki, like thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka. Ye sab banaane me mehnat lagti hai.
Dhanyavaad!
Superb Bro ek update me sab cover kardhiya simply superb..Update - 98 ~ The NightwalkerAb tak...
[You have established a name of yourself by catching the criminal splendidly. You have been rewarded 200 Fame Points]
'One target down!!! Na jaane kitne baaki hai abhi.'
[It's going to be really tough Master! Really tough!!!]
Pari ki baat se sehmat hoke, Veer chal diya Suhana ke sang car ki orr.
Pehla criminal toh asaani se pakad aa gaya. Par kya baaki bhi itni asaani se pakad me aane waale the? Ye toh waqt hi bataane waala tha.
Ab aage...
Duniya me harr tarah ki ghatnaaye ghatit ho rahi hoti hai. Chaahe khushi ke pal ho, ya naraazgi, kisi se gussa, toh kisi se maar peet. Kahi fame hai toh kahi crime. Kahi controversies toh kahi bhrashtachar.
Aur aise hi Vegas me kal raat ek crime karne waale criminal ko pakda gaya tha. Iss ghatna ko anjaam diya gaya tha.
Aur Iss Operation ka hero kaun tha? Beshaq, Veer!
Par kya khatra tal chuka tha? Hargiz nahi! Jim toh keval shatranj ke khel me ek pyaada tha. Woh pyaada, jo khel me sabse pehle maara jaata tha.
Unn pyaado ke peeche ek se ek dhurindhar baithe hue the. Aise log jinka naam sunn log kaanp uthate.
Ye baat Divya bhali bhaati jaanti thi. Usse ye abhaas ho gaya tha ki boht hi badi koi planning kar raha hai. Par sawaal ye tha usse itna sab kese pata chala?
Kya Divya kuch aur bhi baat chhupa rahi thi? Veer ne ye bhaanp liya tha. Divya kuch na kuch toh zaroor chhipa rahi thi. Par kya? Ye jaan'na baaki tha.
Tab tak Mumbai me kya ho raha tha ye bhi jaan'na zaroori tha.
Idhar Ragini subah ka naashta Suman aur Shweta ke sang banaane ke baad chup chaap apne ghar ki terrace par khadi hui thi.
Bechaari ka mann hi nahi lag raha tha kahi. Kese lagega? Veer ke jaane se pehle hi Ragini ne jee bhar ke usse chooma tha. Aur wo ehsaas usse paagal kar chuka tha.
Ab toh ek pal bhi uske bina jeena mushqil ho raha tha.
'Hey Bhagwaan!! Mene uske jaane se pehle hi kyu kiya wo sab? Ab toh mujhse raha bhi nahi jaa raha. Baar baar wahi yaad aa raha hai. Akhir roz roz kitni video call karu usse?'
Wo apne aap se baatein kar ek chinta me doob gayi. Roz roz video calls par wo Veer se kam se kam ek ghante to baat kar hi leti thi.
Veer ki yaad Ragini ko itni zyaada sataaegi usse iss baat ka bilkul andaaza nahi tha. Pichli baar jab Veer Egypt gaya tha ya Rajasthan. Tab Ragini ko itni yaad nahi aayi thi. Shayad isse hi dil-lagi kehte the!?
Wo yaha niraasha me khadi hui thi ki uske peeche se tabhi Suman baalti bhar kapde leke aayi aur upar taar me geele kapde felaane lagi.
Aahat paate hue Ragini ne mud ke Suman ko dekha aur firse muh ferr ke wo udaasi me doob gayi. Parantu Suman nahi. Uske chehre par ek kutil muskaan saji hui thi. Wo kapde zaroor fela rahi thi, par uski nazre Ragini ki peeth par hi gadi hui thi.
"Veer jii ko yaad kar rahi ho?"
Ragini ke kaano me Suman ki awaaz peeche se padi. Pal bhar ke liye wo hichkichaayi. Lekin jab usse dhyaan aaya ki Suman toh uski apni hi thi. Ghar ke sadasyo me se ek thi woh. Toh usne dheere se sarr haa me hila diya.
Suman (smiles) : Mein jaanti thi yahi baat hogi.
Ragini : Uski aadat jo ho gayi hai. Uski baatein sunn sunn ke din kese guzar jaata tha pata hi nahi chalta tha. College ke liye jab wo jaata tha toh saara samaan mein ready kar ke deti thi usse. Par uske jaane se din jese katt hi nahi rahe ab...
Suman : Hmm! Ye baat toh hai. Par chinta mat kariye. Veer jii jald hi laut aaenge.
Ragini : Haan! Par kya karu? Mann hai ki maanta nahi. Kherr! Aap bhi araam kar lo. Subah subah machine me itne kapde dhoye hai aaj aapne.
Kehte hue woh neeche jaane lagi, toh Suman ne dheemi sii awaaz me kaha,
"Keval aap hi nahi ho jiski raato ki neend haraam hui hai. Ghar me mere aur aapke alaawa bhi aur koi hai jo mujhse aur aap se bhi zyaada bechain hai... Fufufu~" wo khil-khilaayi.
Suman ki khuspusaahat sunn Ragini palti,
Ragini : Kuch kaha kya aapne?
Suman (smiles) : Hmm? Nahi! Kuch bhi toh nahi.
Ragini : Ohh! Shayad mere hi kaan baj rahe hai...
Kehte hue wo neeche chali gayi. Aur Suman idhar muskuraate hue kapde jhatkaar kar dubaara unhe felaane lagi.
Uske labo se muskaan gayab hone ka naam hi nahi le rahi thi. Na jaane kya soch rahi thi woh.
***
Wahi idhar Nidhi ke ghar me subah subah Juhi bawaal machaaye hue thi.
Shreya toh job ke liye nikal gayi thi. Par aaj dono Maa beti ne chhutti lii hui thi. Juhi ghar me bechaari Nidhi ko hila ke rakhi hui thi. Aur zidd pe zidd kar rahi thi,
Juhi : Maamu se baat karao pehle... Ni toh mein breakfast nahi khaungi...
Nidhi : Juhiiii~ Gandi baatein nahi karte. Bad manners hai na ye!? Mamma ne samjhaaya hai na aapko. Breakfast ke time zidd nahi karte... Chup chaap breakfast karo apna.
Juhi : Niiiiiiiiii~ Pehle maamu se baat karao!!!
Nidhi : Tumhaare maamu yaha nahi hai. Wo baahar gaye hai.
Juhi : Phone pe baat karao pehle... Ni khaungi mein warna...
Nidhi : Tum bhi na!!!! Hey Bhagwan! Kya karu iss ladki ka!? J-Juhi... Beta... Maamu busy honge... Unhe call karna sahi nahi.
Juhi : Maamu Juhi ke liye busy nahi hote kabhi... Pehle baat karao... Ni to mein ni khaungi... Maamu se mujhe chocolate mangaani hai...
Nidhi : Kal hi toh itni badi chocolate khaayi thi na? Ab aur nahi!!! Roz hi khaati ho tum. Daanto me cavity ho jaegi toh sab chidhaenge tumhe fir school me. Bolenge dekho Juhi ke toh daant kharaab ho gaye. Hassenge sab.... Fir mat aana mamma ke paas rote hue.
Juhi : Haan???
Nidhi : Haan!!!!
Juhi : Toh mein Nana jii ki tarah naye daant lagwa lungi. Jese unke daant nikal jaate hai na? Mere bhi doctor uncle nikaal ke new new daant laga denge.
Nidhi : Ugghhh!!!!! Ye ladki... J-Juhi!!! Tumhaare Nana jii ki batteesi nakli hai.
Juhi : Maamu se baat karaoooo!!!!
Nidhi (sighs) : Ye ladki aise nahi maanegi.
Ab toh phone lagaana hi tha. Aur kya hi kar sakti thi Nidhi? Usne phone laga ke seedha Juhi ko hi pakda diya. Kisi kaaran vash wo Veer se baat karne me hichkicha rahi thi.
Par ye pehle ki tarah naraazgi nahi thi. Kuch aur hi baat thi. Kuch alag sii baat...
Nidhi : Z-Zyaada lambi baat mat karna Juhi.
Juhi : Helllooooo???? Maaaaamuuuuuu~
Veer : Juhiii??? Kesi ho??
Juhi : Acchi hu...!!!!
Veer : School nahi gayi aaj?
Juhi : Aaj mamma aur mein dono nahi gaye. Hehehehe ~ Aaj chhutti...
Veer : Ohh!! Accha?? Aur tumhari mummy kidhar hai?
Nidhi ne phone jaan boojh ke loudspeaker par kar ke diya tha Juhi ko. Toh usse saari baatein sunaayi de rahi thi.
Juhi : Mamma yahi khadi hai.
Veer : Kya kar rahi hai? Bas khadi hi hai kya?
Juhi : Mamma mujhe daant rahi thi. Maamu mamma keh rahi hai ki chocolate khaane se daant kharaab ho jaate hai... Maamu... Aap chocolate laoge na mere liye?
Veer : Hahahahaha ~ Roz roz khaane se toh sach me daant kharab ho jaate hai. Hmm! Mein zaroor launga tumhaare liye chocolate.
Juhi : Badi waalii...
Nidhi : Juhi nahiiii!!! Badi chocolate nahi!!!
Veer : Hahaha~ Theek hai baba badi waali le ke aaunga. Aur tumhari mummy kyu bhadak rahi hai?
Juhi : Mamma roz aisa karti hai. Mamma maamu ko miss kar rahi thi... Aur keh rahi thi...
Nidhi : J-Juuuuuhhhhhiiiiiiiiii...
Iss se pehle ki nanhi Juhi aur raaz khol paati Nidhi ne forun hi uske haatho se phone chhina liya.
Nidhi : H-Hello!!??
Juhi ka apna kaam toh nikal hi gaya tha. Chocolate badi waali aane waali thi. Maamu se baat bhi ho gayi thi. Baccho ka mann wese hi chanchal hota hai. Ek jagah zyaada derr unka mann tikta kaha hai. Apna kaam nikalwaane ke baad wo TV chaalu kar apna favourite program dekhne me lag gayi. Aur sofe par ucchal naachne lagi.
Idhar uski Maa bechaari phone pakde awkwardly wahi khadi hui thi.
Veer : Hello... Ma'am!!
Nidhi : Mmm~
Veer : Kaisi hai aap?
Nidhi : M-Mein theek hu.
Bechaari Nidhi ki awaaz itni dheemi thi ki Veer ko dhang se sunaayi hi nahi dii pal bhar ke liye.
Veer : Aur Shreya jii kesi hai?
Nidhi : W-Wo bhi acchi hai. Office ke liye nikal gayi.
Veer : Accha!!!
Nidhi : T-Tum...
Veer : ???
Nidhi : Tum... Kab tak lautoge?
Veer (smiles) : Are you missing me?
Nidhi (blushes) : Wh-Who would??? Mein... Mein toh Juhi ke liye puch rahi thi. Wese bhi... Tum kaun sa college aate ho? Inn sab ke liye tumne kabhi dhyaan hi nahi diya. S-So who will miss you? I-I don't... Bas! Apni studies pe dhyaan do... Aur...
Veer : Hahahahahahahaha~
Nidhi : Wh-Whaatt? Hass kyu rahe ho?
Veer : Hass isliye raha hu ki itna safed jhooth jab aap bolti ho toh usse pakadne ki zaroorat hi nahi padti. Alag hi pata lag jaata hai. Aur... Yahi baatein aapko cute banaati hai.
Veer ki baat sunn Nidhi ke gaal surkh laal ho chale. Wo jawaab me kuch na boli.
Bas khamosh reh gayi.
Veer : Mujhe aane me abhi thoda samay lag sakta hai.
Nidhi : I-I see!!
Veer : Ek urgent call aa raha hai. Mein aapse baad me baat karta hu.
Nidhi : O-Okay!!
Aur Veer ne phone kaat diya.
Nidhi : B-Bye...!!!
Bechaara Veer Nidhi ka bye sunn hi nahi paaya. Ek lambi aah bharte hue Nidhi ne phone rakha. Juhi ko ek nazar dekha jo apna kaam nikalwa ke ekdum mazze me uchhal kood rahi thi. Kya hi Zindagi thi uski.
Aise pyaar lutaane waale maamu mile the usse. Shan bhar ke liye Nidhi ko jalan sii mehsoos hui. Par fir wo Juhi ke liye khush bhi ho gayi.
Gaal abhi bhi laal the uske. Mann ke vichaaro se baahar aane ke liye wk kitchen me bhaag gayi.
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Veer waha Vegas me tha par uske khilaaf bil me ghuse saanp yaha haath par haath dhare nahi baithe the.
Chaahe Niharika ho, chaahe Pranjal ya chaahe Rajat. Teeno hi apni saazish ko anjaam dene ke liye sahi mauke ka intezaar kar rahe the.
"Yessssss~ Suck my clit bitchesss!!!!"
Harr baar ki tarah, Niharika washroom me thi. Neeche se poori nangi. Uska ek perr toilet seat par tha aur dusra neeche farsh par. Aur uski do slaves, uski chut chaatne me lagi hui thi.
Unn dono ke baalo ko kheech kar wo unka muh apni chut me daba rahi thi.
"Suck it!!!! Zorr se chaato kutiyo!!!! Zorr se!!! Aahhhhnnnn!!!! Mmmm~ Aise hi... Daana chabao... Haan!!! Yessssss~ Chusoooo chusoooo... Aur chusoooo mmmmm~"
Apni kamar matkaate hue wo apni geeli chut ko unke chehre par ragad rahi thi. Unki jeebh ko apne chut ke chhed me ghusa ke woh kamar hilaate jaa rahi thi.
Kahi ek ladki ke muh me apni chut deti toh kahi dusri ke , toh kahi dono ko hi saath me chaatne kehti woh.
Par mann me uske kuch aur bhi chal raha tha. Jab se Veer ne uske dono chhedo ko choda tha. Tab se hi usse masturbation se wo santushti nahi mil paa rahi thi. Yaha tak ki lesbian sex me bhi usse wo maza nahi aa raha tha.
Aur iss baat se Niharika ko apne aap par itna gussa aa raha tha ki usse kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha ki kya kare. Woh ek aurat... Kese ek mard ke neeche aa sakti thi???? Par uska jism toh kuch aur hi maang raha tha.
Kheejte hue wo pareshaan ho chuki thi. Jab jab wo chut me ungli karti, ya apni slaves se apni chut chatwaati, Veer apna lund uske chhedo me daalte hue... uski woh chhavi uske mann me aa jaati. Aur nateeja?
Uski aankhein khul jaati, aur saari banaayi gayi uttejna gusse ke chalte kahi gaayab ho jaati.
"Fuuuuckkkk thisss....!!!! Urrrgghhhh!!!"
Aaj bhi wahi hua. Jab wo apne climax par lagbhag pohuch hi gayi thi. Tabhi, usse wo drishya yaad aa gaya, jab Veer uski chut me apna lund pel raha tha aur uska apna pati darwaaze ke theek baahar maujood uss se baat kar raha tha.
"Aaarggghhhhh!!!! I hate him soooo muchhh!!!!"
Yaad karte hi uski aankhein khul gayi gusse me par...
*Drip*
"H-Huhhhhh!!??? Ahhnnnnnnnnn ssssss~"
*Sqquiiiiiirtttttt*
*Sqquiiiiiirtttttt*
Uski chut kisi fuwwaare ki tarah khuli aur dherr saara paani bahaate hue unn do ladkiyo ke chehro ko bhigo diya.
"Wh-Whhaaaaattttt? Ahhnnnnnnnnn!!! This... This....!???"
Niharika ko vishvaas hi nahi ho raha tha. Wo jhar gayi??? Jese hi usse pata laga ki wo kya soch ke jhari... Uska badan kaanp utha.
"N-Nooo!!! It can't be!!!"
Wo jhari thi... Veer ko yaad karke. Uski chudaayi yaad karke. Bhale hi wo apne mann se kitna hi kyu na hate kare Veer se. Par ek aurat ka jism kabhi nahi jhooth bolega. Wahi hua...
Apne pati se chhup ke anjaan jawaan ladke se tabadtod chudaayi karwaana. Ye vichaar hi uske jism me ek aag laga diya tha. Kitna hi kyu na chidh le wo Veer se. Par chut ye nahi dekhti thi ki lund kiska hai.
Lund yadi mazboot ho, toh chut uske aage haar hi jaati hai. Niharika bhi haar chuki thi. Aur uski chut bhi.
"Nahiiiiii!!! Aisa hargiz nahi ho sakta.... Uss kameene ke saamne mein jhuk jau? H-Hargiz nahi!!!"
Aur fir usse wo drishya yaad aaya. Jab Veer ke mazboot haath uske baalo ko jakde hue the. Aur kese wo car ke andar usse pakad ke jhukaaya hua tha. Kese wo uske vishaal lund ko muh me bhar ke choos rahi thi. Kese Veer ki dusri slave Suman saare nazaare ko mazze se dekh rahi thi.
*Splllluuuurrrrtttttt*
*Drip* *Drip*
"Aaaaaahhhhhhhhhhnnnnnnnnn~"
Aur ek baar fir, uski chut ne apna pani chorr diya.
Niharika apni chut ko aankhein faade aur muh khole hairat me dekhne lagi. Aisa kese ho sakta tha bhala? Wo ek dominator thi. Submissive female nahi. Fir aisa kese ho sakta tha?
Kese uski chut itna pani bahaa rahi thi???
"I FUCKING HATE THISSS SO MUCCCH!!"
Usne zorr se chillaate hue apne haatho me lii hui apni panty dur fek dii.
"Dur hato kutiyo!!!!! GET FUCKING LOST!!!!"
Wo gurraayi!!! Aur apni dono hi slaves ko baahar bhaagne bol dii.
Uski dono slaves, jinme se ek Ayushi thi. Shreya ki colleague toh wahi dusri ka naam tha Ishani. Dono majboori ke chalte Niharika ki daasi bani hui thi.
Par dono iss baat se anjaan thi, ki unki ye maalkin khud kisi mard ki daasi banti jaa rahi thi.
Niharika haafte hue toilet seat par baith gayi. Chut ka haal behaal tha. Paani chorr chorr ke wo poori geeli ho chuki thi. Aur lund lene ke liye tadap rahi thi.
"Uggghhhhh!!!!" Usne zorr zorr se ungli kari aur kuch hi shan bhar me punah ek baar....
*Splurrrrtttttttt*
*Sqquiiiiiirtttttt*
Wo fir jharr gayi.
"I... *huff* I must do something! *huff* Mujhe uske... Mujhe uske paas se wo video haasil karni hi hogi. Yesssss!!! *huff* Veer! Khud ko boht smart samajhte ho??? *huff* Mene already tumhaare phone me keylogger install kar rakha hai. *huff* Hahahaha~"
Sochte hue ek khatarnak muskaan uske chehre par sajj gayi.
"Jald hi... *huff* Jald hi tum mere perro ki neeche hoge...!!"
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Vegas
Evening ~ 7:14 PM
Subah Veer ki baat jab Nidhi se ho rahi thi. Tab usse ek urgent call aa gaya tha beech me. Jo kisi aur ka nahi, Karan ka tha.
Ek khushkhabri thi.
Veer ne apna paisa jis Vatsala Steel Industries ke shares par lagaaya tha. Uske daam badh chuke the.
Karan ko toh vishvaas hi nahi ho raha tha. Jo company itne loss me chal rahi thi woh akhir achanak se upar kese uth sakti thi? Aur yadi uthi bhi toh Veer ko pehle se itna bharosa kese tha company pe? Usse kese pata chala?
Iska raaz toh Veer hi jaanta tha. Stock Master!!! Ekmaatr skill jo uske business me uski madad ke liye thi.
Veer ne baithe baithe hi laakho rupaaye ka profit kar liya tha. Aur ye lakh jald hi crore me tabdeel hone waale the.
Aaj ki unki toli waapas se investigation department ki orr jaa rahi thi.
Sab pehle ki hi tarah baithe hue the. Driver seat par Nik, uske bagal se Suhana. Aur peeche Divya sang Veer.
Kal ki hui vardaat ke bawajood, Divya apne haatho par patti baandh ke kaam kar rahi thi.
Baat hi kuch aisi thi. Police ne jab Jim ki acchi tarah khaatirdaari kari toh kayi ghanto ke baad jaake Jim ne apna muh khola.
Aur usne kuch details dii thi. Next criminal ki...
Jese hi wo jankaari crime investigation waalo ko pata chali, woh jaan ke unki rooh kaanp gayi.
Divya aur Nik bhi unme se ek the. Din ka daura toh unka chhaan been karne me hi guzar gaya tha. Woh Daniel ki post mortem reports bhi check karne gaye the. Toh wahi crime scene ke aas paas bhi jitna ho sakta tha utna pata lagaya. Par haath kuch na aaya.
Aur Jim ki dii gayi jaankaari ke chalte, uski pushti karne ke liye investigation department ne Connor ko bheja tha.
Woh bhi ek detective tha. Ek senior detective.
Anubhav me koi kami nahi thi uske paas. Sahi nirnay, sahi samay pe lena bakhubi aata tha usse.
Beshaq, wo maut ke kuye me tha ek prakaar se. Par ye hi toh uska kaam tha.
Lekin, jis baat ka darr tha wahi hua. Divya aur Nik ko urgent call aaya achanak8 department se ki woh jaha kahi bhi hai, jald se jald department pohuche.
Isliye, sabhi firse uss orr jaa rahe the.
Peeche ki seat par Divya aaj Veer ko alag nazro se dekh rahi thi. Kal Veer ne points badhaaye the. Appearance ke bhi. Zaahir tha uski twacha aur khili khili nazar aa rahi thi. Divya isliye aaj usse badi hi jigyaasa se nihaar rahi thi.
Kabhi wo sharaarti dhang me kuch soch muskuraati toh kabhi Veer ko dekh usse aankh maar deti.
Eka-ek Veer ki nazar jab Divya par gayi toh usne dekha ki woh uski orr thoda jhukte hue apna ang pradarshan kar rahi thi.
Uske gore badan ka cleavage saaf saaf jhalak raha tha. Veer ko woh smile karte hue dekh rahi thi.
Aur fir badi hi dheemi awaaz me boli,
Divya (smiles) : You can touch them.
Veer : Huh??
[I will fuckiinngggg killll herrrr!!!! (ʘᴗʘ✿) Maaassttteeerrrr~ Don't touch her!!]
Divya ki harqat Veer toh dekh hi raha tha acche se par saamne driver seat par baitha Nik bhi mirror se sab kuch dekh chuka tha.
Woh sunn toh nahi paaya ki uski patni ne kya kaha par woh itna zaroor jaan gaya tha ki Divya Veer ke saath flirt kar rahi thi. Filhaal woh kuch nahi bola. Par aankhein gada ke unko dekhta raha toh majbooran Divya ko apni flirting rokni padi.
Unhe nahi pata tha ki department ki taraf se urgently kyu bulaaya gaya hai. Isliye abhi woh aage aane waale jhatke ke pehle thoda relaxed the.
Gaadi ruki, sabhi uss se utre aur andar gaye.
Veer aur Suhana ko baahar hi rok diya gaya tha. Department ke Head ke cabin me keval aur keval Nik aur Divya hi gaye the.
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*Click*
Darwaaza band hua aur dono pati patni, department ke Head yaani ki Nolan ke saamne baithe hue the.
Nik : What happened ?
Nolan : Look for yourself.
Kehte hue usne dono ke sarr par ek ek headphones pehna diya. Saamne computer screen thi.
Aur connection seedha Conner se tha.
Conner gaya hua tha ek Mansion me. Nik aur Divya dono hi Connor ki shaqal dekh sakte the. Camera connected tha. Aur Audio bhi.
Unn dono ko Connor ki saare baatein sunaayi de rahi thi.
Nolan : It's not live. It happened just a few minutes ago.
Aur fir unhone dekha...
Connor kuch keh raha tha. Uska chehra poora paseene se bheega hua tha. Chehre se ekdum rang udaa hua tha. Bhaybhheet poora!!! Lambi lambi saans lete hue haaf raha tha woh.
Uski haalat dekh aisa lag raha tha jese usne koi bhoot saamne dekh liya ho.
Aur wo bolna shuru kiya,
"I WILL FUCKING DIE!!!!! I'M TRAPPED!!!! I'M TRAPPED!!!! *huff* H-Help me!"
"This is much bigger than we thought of... It's insane... We all will die here!!! Listen to me!!! *huff* This is live killing!!!! FUCKING LIVE KILLING!!! There are few of us. They too participated here. But we are being recorded!! IT'S FUCKING DARK WEB!!!!"
"H-HE WILL KILL ONE OF US!!! REMEMBER! HIS NAME IS... *********** PEOPLE ARE PAYING TO WATCH US GETTING KILLED!!! IT'S A FUCKING HOUSE OF KILLERS. DANIEL WAS GODDAMN RIGHT!! *huff* *huff* THERE'S AIN'T A SINGLE ONE. *huff* P-PLEASE!!! GUYS!!! SEND ME THE HELP!!! SEND ME THE HELP!!!! I DON'T WANNA DIE HERE!!!!"
"H-Huhhhhhh????"
Par tabhi...
Connor kisi jagah dekh ghabraaya. Uski saasein atak gayi. Woh chillaaya,
"WHAT'S...? WHAT'S HAPPENING? N-Nooooo!!?!!!"
Aur agle hi pal...
*Thud* *Thud* *Thud*
Uske haatho se camera gira...
Cheekhne chillaane ki awaaz aane lagi. Connor ki cheenkh waha aur Nik aur Divya ke headphones me goonjne lagi.
Aur fir camera me jo Nik aur Divya ne dekha. Usse dekh dono ka badan thanda pad gaya. Maano jese saanp soongh gaya.
Divya apna muh dhak zorr zorr se bilakhte hue rone lagi. Uske poora badan ke ruye khade ho gaye.
Darr ke maare uska shareer kaanpne laga. Woh ghabraate hue daud kar baahar nikal ke aayi.
Idhar baahar Veer aur Suhana kareeb 1 ghante se unn dono ke baahar aane ka intezaar kar rahe the.
Veer : 1 ghante ke upar ho chuka hai. What are they doing inside?
Suhana : I have no clue!
Veer : Ohhh! Wo aa gaye...!
Suhana : Hmm??
Suhana ne jab Veer ki nazro ko follow kar uss orr dekha toh paaya ki Divya ghabraate hue baahar nikli aur seedha apne ghutno ke bal gir padi.
Suhana : Divyyyaaaaa!!!!
Dono Veer aur Suhana daudate bhaagte hue uske paas aaye aur usse sambhaal ke uthaaya.
Suhana : Divya kya hua????
Par Divya kuch na boli. Usse sambhalne me thoda samay lag gaya.
Jab uski haalat thodi theek hui toh usne rote hue bataaya,
Divya (cries) : C-Connor is dead!!!!
Suhana : Whaaaaaaaaatttttt?
Divya : Connor is dead Suhana.... He died!!!!
Suhana : ...
Divya : I must... I must show you something!!!
Wo aasu poch uth ke andar gayi. Aur usne jo dekha, uska ek paper par printout nikaalne lagi computer screen ko sahi timestamp par rok ke.
Idhar Nolan Divya ko aata dekh apni baat rakha,
Nolan : Who decided to send him alone there?
Nik : That... It was decided in the meeting in the morning.
Nolan : That's what I'm asking... Who voted for him to go there alone?
Nik : Th-That's....
Nolan (chillaate hue) : ANSWER MEEE!!!!
Divya : W-We all supported it. C-Connor too opted for it.
Nolan : YOU DUMB IDIOTSSSS!!!!!!! WE LOST HIM!!! WE LOST OUR ANOTHER PERSON!!!!!! I DON'T CARE WHAT YOU GUYS WILL DO NOW. BUT NEXT... I WANT YOU GUYS TO SEND SOMEONE FROM YOUR TEAM NOW MY SO CALLED PRIVATE DETECTIVES.... WE WON'T BE SENDING OUR DEPARTMENT'S DETECTIVES NOW!!!!!!! YOU GET THAT....??
Nik : W-We... We do!!!
Nolan : YOU CAN LEAVE!!!!
Divya jese hi baahar aayi, woh Suhana aur Veer ko haath pakad apne cabin me le gayi.
Divya : The second criminal...!!!!!
Veer : Huh???
Suhana : !!????
Aur agle hi pal... Usne table par ek paper patakte hue rakha. Ye wahi printout tha...
Usse dekhte hi Suhana ka badan kaanp utha.
Saamne printout me jo tha, wo tha...
Ek wanted paper!!!!
Divya : And his name is...
Veer : ?????
"THE NIGHTWALKER!!!!"
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Samay samay par mein Mumbai ka zikr bhi dikhaunga. Baaki, like thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka. Ye sab banaane me mehnat lagti hai.
Dhanyavaad!