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[Werewolf]

Awesome update sir
Amazing story
Waiting for next update
Please update soon sir

Thanks bro

Bhai ekdam fabulous outstanding performance bhai bhai bhai



Ye to bohot hi खतरनाक mission diya hey yar veer ko l lekin age dekhne mey maja abewala hey

Dhanyavaad bhai!

Ding mission mileaga tab mileaga yaha par alag hi level ka suspense create Kiya hai aapne werewolf bhai.next update tak full bhejaa fry please agla update jaldi kar dijiye ga waiting for next update.

Thanks bhai! Agla update mega update hai. Century wala. Samay toh lagega hi...

Agar card beche jaate hai aur bikte bhi kaafi hai to sirf ye 6 log hi yahan kyon aaye jayada kyon nahi, sirf isliye to nahi ki kam log aayenge to aaram se mara jaa sakta hai?

Iska jawaab aage milega. Next update me...

Kya waakai mein night Walker in mein se koi ho sakta hai kya? Shaq to kaafi Mike par bhi hai ki kyon ek unknown ke liye wo apni jaan kyon daav par lagayega?

Mike kese ho sakta hai yaar? Connor jab maara gaya Nightwalker ke haatho toh Mike department me tha. Video dekhi thi usne. Toh ek hi banda do jagah kese ho sakta hai?

Zoey bhi ho sakti kyon ki wo bhi sab ko chod kar unke saath aayi hai, aur Sona yaahan hai bhi yaa nahi? Full suspense waala update

Zoey? Dekhna padega. Sona kaun? You mean Suhana? Suhana yaha nahi hai. Keval Mike aur veer.

Uttam Lekhni ka Prayog Werewolf bhai...Waiting for Next Update Eagerly...

Thanks bro

Superb fantastic update Werewolf bhai....

Bilkul ek horror movie type feeling aarahi hai...

Shukriya bhai

मित्र, सुबह उठके यह अनुच्छेद मिला। भयानक। आप यह फोटो जहां से भी लिए हो, वहाँ के लिए धन्यबाद। यह चित्र ही बहुत कुछ बयां कर देता है। अनुच्छेद के संग संग यह चित्र रोंगटे खड़ा करने के लिए काफी है

Bhai inhe dhundne me hi mujhe boht samay lagta hai.

लेकिन जो बोलिए बहुत ही खतरनाक कार्य का अंजाम देने के लिए वीर पहुँच गया है। यह जो हवेली का बर्णन दिये है, एकदम ड्राकुला का हवेली इसके लिए फिट बैठता है। ऊपर से अंत का वो चींख। क्या लिखते है। भले ही कल आप न दिये हो अनुच्छेद लेकिन उस कहबत "देर आये पर दुरुस्त आये" पुरापुरी लागू होते है। आपका आभार इतना सुंदर लेकिन डरावना एक अनुच्छेद हमे उपहार देने के लिए। keeping my fingers crossed। धन्यबाद

Boht boht dhanyavaad bhai! Aadha adhura aur bin quality ka update mein kabhi post nahi karta aur na hi karunga. Isliye kabhi kabhi updates late ho jaate hai.

 

[Werewolf]

superb update bro aur ye sayad online bet ho raha hai har kisi pe paisa laga hoga ab dekhte hai age ka suspence kya hoga jordar dhasu update bhai aur nex update jaldi dijiyega sir

Dekhna hoga ye. Thanks btw!

romanchak update .to nightwalker ka rahasya pata chal gaya .island me ek mansion hai jaha sone ke bars hai aur usko dhundne ke liye log aate hai aur maare jaate hai .
nik ne jalan ke chalte fasa diya veer ko mission me par mike ek achcha banda hai jo veer ke saath aaya .
ab game shuru ho gaya hai , first round me kuch haath nahi laga par ek ki maut ho gayi hai .
veer kya saamna kar payega nightwalker ka .

Ye toh veer pe hi depend karta hai. Kese wo Nightwalker ko handle karega. Thanks btw!

You don't need to explain and say sorry

You are one of best authors of xforum.

You are loyal to the story . You always reply to the comments
It's more than we readers can get from other authors
So just chill

Mere bhai kitana naam banaoge apna yaar ye meri favourite story banchuki hai sach main har ek update dill khush kardeta hai or update ka intezaar dill tod deta hai

Mein harr ek line sochke likhta hu bhai. Isliye samay lag jata hai.

Hmmm to nightwalker walk par niklega or agar koi uske samne aaya to khel khatam but mout se to kisi ke aise hi rongte khade nahi hote ha agar marne waleki death horibal hoto baat alag hai

Abhi Nightwalker ko maarte hue toh dekhiye.

Or is nik ki gaand main kisi ne jyada hi hawa bhardi kya bhosdi wala kuch jyada hi uchal raha hai main to bolta hu nik ke samne divya ka swap karwado veer se

Nice hilata reh jayega or bro kya ek jawab de sakte ho kya house of killers main ek killer hai ya ek se jyada or ye arc kitne update chalega or kya village arc is wale arc ke baad ayega???

House of killers. Naam se hi pata laga sakte ho aap. Killers likha hai toh ek se zyada hai. Aur Daniel ne bhi yahi likha tha apne sandesh me. There are more than one.

kya village arc is wale arc ke baad ayega???

Yes! Thoda sa ruk ke aaega. Village arc aur crimson arc parallel me chalenge. Famiglia toh chal hi raha hai. Matlab teen teen arc parallel me chalenge. Pehle village khayam hoega, fir Crimson. Famiglia is never ending arc. Wo last tak jaega.

Wese ye arc bahut jyada thriller hai jo mujhe pasand hai or abhi mumbai ka scene ek do update rehne do ye mention wala scene bahut sahi ja raha hai

Mumbai ka scene abhi wese bhi nahi aaega. Ye Mansion wala jab tak scene samaapt nahi ho jaata.

Baki dhamakedar outstanding update

Boht boht dhanyavaad bhai! Keep supporting!

 

[JAI]

waiting for 100th update dear........

 

[Ajay chauhan]

Dekhna hoga ye. Thanks btw!

Ye toh veer pe hi depend karta hai. Kese wo Nightwalker ko handle karega. Thanks btw!



Mein harr ek line sochke likhta hu bhai. Isliye samay lag jata hai.

Abhi Nightwalker ko maarte hue toh dekhiye.



House of killers. Naam se hi pata laga sakte ho aap. Killers likha hai toh ek se zyada hai. Aur Daniel ne bhi yahi likha tha apne sandesh me. There are more than one.

Yes! Thoda sa ruk ke aaega. Village arc aur crimson arc parallel me chalenge. Famiglia toh chal hi raha hai. Matlab teen teen arc parallel me chalenge. Pehle village khayam hoega, fir Crimson. Famiglia is never ending arc. Wo last tak jaega.

Mumbai ka scene abhi wese bhi nahi aaega. Ye Mansion wala jab tak scene samaapt nahi ho jaata.

Boht boht dhanyavaad bhai! Keep supporting!

Wese bro ye arc kitna chalega or update kab ayega

 

[Werewolf]

Aakhirkar itni wait ka fal mil hi gaya. Aur jo fal mila wo ummid se kahi badh kar hi hai. Such me mujhe nahi lagata is update ka jo plot hai ya jo bhi yaha hua hai uske bare me ek bhi readers bilkul bhi nahi soch skta tha.

Of course!!!

Ha nightwalker ke name se ye baat clear tha ki wo ek killer hai jo Night me hi aata hai. Aur abki marta hai. Baki iske alawa kisi ko bhi kuch bhi pata ho mujhe nahi lagta aisa kuch hoga. Bahut hi awsm update aise hi Updates read karke to maja aata hai.

Thanks man!

Nd Thanks to Mike jisne veer ke sath yaha aane ke liye kud ko aage kiye veer jarur use kuch bhi nahi hone dega. Aur is baat se jaha nik ki aur jyada sulgegi wahi abki fat ke hath me aayegi. Jb apna veer use bhi pakd lega. Lakin ek baat to clear hai to koi Normal person nahi hai jise veer aiwayi pakad lega. 1st criminal ki tarah kuch to bahut hi bwal hoga hi. Aur ye rooms ke door me jarur kuch na kuch locha hai. Aage ke Update me hme ye bhi pata chal jayega. Aur wo model ladki mujhe aisa kyu lagta hai veer ke life me ek aur girl ki entry ho gayi hai. Aur jahir si baat hai veer iski jaan bhi bachayega.

Dekhna padega kya hota hai.

Bt ek baat smjh me nahi aayi bhai ye jo nightwalker hai ye room ke ander rahne wali par Attack karega ya nahi aur ek room me ek se jyada person nahi rah sakte hai kya. Sayad ye next update ka part hai tabhi aapne nahi bataya hoga. Wiki mujhe nahi lagta aap bhoole honge ye important baat batana.

Agle update me sab pata chalega bhai.

Wiki mujhe nahi lagta aap bhoole honge ye important baat batana.
At the end aapka bahut bahut sukriya bhai itna acha Update dene ke liye.

Thanks bhai!! Keep supporting as usual!

Gold bars inthe door congrats Nice update

Ju ko lagta hai mein itni asaani se details aur secret de dunga?

Bahut badhiya update hai bhai.... Dekhte hai nightwalker kya karte hai.....or veerfb kyha karta hai.....or veer ki maa yani ki bhavna kya karti hai aage...kaise kaise dhundhegi apni aulad ko........
or mansion me or kya kya hota hai dekhte hai... ..
waiting for next update

Kaun kya karta hai aage hi pata lagega. Thanks btw!

Werewolf bhaya.........
Update bohot jyada weird imagination look de raha tha bhaya, gajab ka update tha man gajab ka, mai ye jarur kahunga ki ye story apki writting skill pe hi depend hai puri trah se aur baat kre apki imagination ki to wo to iss story ko aur bhi romanchak bana deta hai

Thanks a lot man!!!

Hmm, maine bola bhi tha apne pichle review me ki ye log matlab private detective wale veer ko hi isme dhakelenge aur wo chutiya Nik gaand marawane ke liye thodi jayega island pe aur divya uska to kya hi kahe choro aur rahi baat suhana ki to wo bhi ab veer ke prati lagav rakh rahi hai nhi to pahle jyada lagaav nhi tha uska,lekin ab dheere dheere wo veer ke saath frankly ho rahi hai matlab familiar ho rahi hai aur ussne veer ke island pe jaane waali baat pr objection to bohot kiye honge jaisa apne kaha bhi tha lekin veer ne usse mana liye uss baat ke liye aur aagaya island pr lekin usske jo bhav the jab veer helicopter pr sawar hua tha jane ke liye to wo bhav uske dil se nikle the and I guess ki wo ab veer ke prati emotional attachment me to jarur aagayi hogi

Beshaq! Simple sii baat hai bhai. Suhana aur Veer ka rishta Mumbai se hai. Pehle se jaante hai woh ek dusre ko. Kayi baar ek dusre ki madad kar chuke hai. Saath me Holi mana chuke hai. They are friends. Aur Suhana ye baat admit nahi karegi par Veer ki fiqr hai usse. Copter me Veer ko jaata dekh uski haalat sahi nahi thi. Kyuki, Connor wahi mara tha. Usse dar tha ki woh Veer ko maut ke ghaat utaar rahi hai.

Khair kahna to padega hi ki Mike ek pal bhi n socha apne life ke baare me aur veer ke saath waha uss maut ke safar pr chal diya gajab, sach kahu to mughe ye baat kuch ajjib laagi lekin fir socha ki insaaniyat dikhaya hai bande ne to kya hi sakk kru mai

Aur ab aate hai island pr to island pura sunsaan hai matlab ekdum khali matlab socho ek baar agar kisi sunsaan island pe chorr diya jaye wo bhi tumhe aur tumhare kisi dost ko to kyaa haal hoga kyaa imagine bhi kr sakte ho matlab kyaa haalat hota agar veer aur Mike ke paas himatt aur jajbaa nhi hota to, lekin dar to unhe bhi laga hoga ek pal bhale unhe ab weird feeling aarahi hogi and baat kre Island ke bicho bich mansion ki to bc gandiya fatt jayegi Ache acho ki,

Exactly! Mene iss par zyaada charcha nahi kii. Because ye understandable tha aur saath hi update boht lamba ho jaata. But thanks for pointing it out. Sunsaan jagah me jaane se kiski nahi phatati? Khaaskar jab aapka ek saath pehle hi wahi maara gaya ho.

Matlab uss mansion me wo log jab enter hue to unhe bohot si ancient vibes to aayi hi saath hi saath unhe ancient chise bhi dekhne ko milli jaise chariots bina horses ke dikhe,
Aur jab Mike ne jab gate ko uss card se khola jiske baare me uunhe uss video se pata chala yaa kaho to kahi aur se lekin ye bohot ajjib hai ki kisi mansion ka card koi sell krta ho bolo matlab koi card ko bhi sell krne ke liye transport krta hai kya aur wo slot wala matlab shopkeeper wo card sell krta hai usse bhi n pata hai ki wo kyaa sell kr raha hai batao matlab ye kamartowahi baat ho gayi
*ki kamar ke piche pistol tangi hai aur idhar ham lath pele jaa rahe hai*

Woh Shopkeeper Slot machines street me hai. Slot machines street jidhar satta khela jaata hai lottery Machines me. Toh zaahir hai ki shopkeeper fayda ke liye hi ye kar raha hai. Usse matlab nahi inn cards se kya hota hai. Yadi inn cards ko bechne se usse dherr saare paise mil rahe hai toh kyu na beche? Air yadi police uske paas aayi bhi toh woh ye keh sakta hai ki usse iske baare me kuch nahi maalum. Ue cards toh simple hai isliye woh bech raha hai. Police ko chutiya banaane ke liye bhi kayi bahaane hai uske paas.

Aur jo ye ghatnaye mansion me hoti hai
"ye koi pshycopathic hi krega ki aao bhai card kharido mansion me aao aur apni bali chadhao"
matlab yaar ye agar pshyco panti hua n to ye bc believe me ye hadd ho jayegi Pshycopanti ki alag hi level pe matlab lalach do aur sidha the end kro,

Abhi ju ne psychopanti dekhi nahi hai.

Lekin mai agar frankly bolu to ye NIGHTWALKER ne ye sahi hi to kiya agar Treasure hunt rakha hai ussne to kisiko to marna hoga hi yaa ye thodi hoga aagaye mansion me treasure dhunde aur nikal liye bc tab ye treasure hunt kon kaam ka kahleayega

Wahi toh... Ab kuch na kuch toh karega hi.

Aur ab baat kre unn naye charecters ki jo abhi mile veer aur Mike se kyaa naam tha Emu

Chester ko bhul gaye ju. Chestser aur Tommy music band ke hai. Unka ek band hai. Jacob fashion designer ka assistant. Ronnie ek choti si compa5 ka employee. Emma nurse. Aur Zoey apni struggling model.

Ye log mile veer aur Mike ko uss mansion me jo pahle se golden bar ke chakr me aaye the yaa kaho to apni kismat ajmanne lekin yaha unhe greedy kahna galat hoga unnlogo ko lekin agar aage ke Updates me ye log koi greedy giri krte hai to
"this may be possible that there death is on their own hand !!"

of course!!!

Ab aate apan log uss voice pr to mughe pakka to n hai lekin itna jarur pata hai ki NIGHTWALKER ke saath bohot se log aur jude hue hai and I am damn sure of this fucking guess !!

Ye dekhna hoga!!!

So, uss voice ne teen intervals diye wo bhi aise ki jab tumhara time khtm hoga to idhar NIGHTWALKER ka time suru hoga aur iss bich jo bhi mil gaya mansion me ghumte hue to wo to gaya Tata bye bye.......matlab khula warning de gaya hai wo voice messanger jo bhi wo tha aur subah ke 6 baje tk ka time diya hua hai to ye assan nhi hai ki wo golden bars ke treasures unhe mil jaye lekin I think ki veer dhund hi lega and mai sure bhi hu ki dhund lega wo

Ye bhi dekhte hai. Veer ka main motto waha pehle uss gutthi ko suljhaane ka hai. Aur Mike ko safe rakhne ka. Golden bars toh akhiri preference hai. Yadi mile toh mile aur yadi nahi toh bhi koi baat nahi.

And also mughe wo golden bars kaha milenge ye to pata chal gaya hai and I am damn sure ki ussi jagah wo golden bars hai kyun bhaya ju kuch smjhe kaha bol raha hu aur konsi jagah,to mera guess tha jo chis veer ko ajjib lagi ki gate pr rectangular bars bane hue hai, to mughe lagta hai ki jiss jagah ye rectangular bars ka sign indicate ho waha yaa wahi rectangular bar golden bars hai and ye bhi to hai ki jab veer ne door ko open kiya to wo bohot jyada heavy feel hua tha usse and this can be possible by those Golden bars
may be ye guess galat hojaye lekin dekhte hai aage kya hota hai

Ju ko lagta hai mein itni asaani se itna bada secret de dunga...
Thanks btw man for such a massive review. Aise hi bane rehne ka man!

 

[Werewolf]

Wese bro ye arc kitna chalega or update kab ayega

Ye arc mujhe nahi pata yaar honestly. Par ye arc chota hai. Zyada bada nahi hai.

Exam thi bhai. Uske liye yaha nahi tha.
Ab ek ek karke update padhunga.

Ohhh! Padho padho man. Ju gaayab the. Mujhe yaad aaya koi dikhayi nahi de raha hai. Aur fir ju yaad aaye. Toh apun ne pucha...

 

[Werewolf]

Very nice update werewolf bhai.... Iss update se yeh to pata chal gaya ki nightwalker ko veer ke aane ka pata chal gaya hai... Let's see what happen next..

Thanks man!

Kyu sad hote ho aap? Bolo? Mne aapko mana kia h na iss baare me sochne se.
main to deti hu na review... Aur kitne saare log h jo kitne pyaare pyaare reviews dete h aapki kahani me. Aapki kahani reviews se bharti jaa rahi h...
fir kyu sochna h inke baare me? Aur kyu karte ho khud ko sad aap? Focus on us. Jo baat dukh de uske baare me nahi sochna h. Okay...?
Main apna review raat me dungi. Raat me padha tha update. I got goosebumps. And don't be sad...

Bhai kaise soch lete ho ye sab agar koi ispe movie banana toh sab record hi tod degi
Excellent update bhai

Thanks man!

Bhai update shandaar tha aur mujhe lagta hai ki treasure doors mein hi hai

Thanks man!

Wonderful update no.99.
Update 98 was full of action.
Update 99 is lacking action, but full of suspense and seems to be prequel to next action wala update no.100.
Very good writing skill.
All the best for update #100.

Thanks man!

I'm still hopeful that Veer will not come out alive of that mansion..

Ju wants Nightwalker to win?

Bohat he zabaradast update tha dekhte hy sone ki plate dhondte dhondte kitne apni Jaan gawate hy or kisko wo nasib hoti hy

Thanks bhai

Dost, achchha laga aapne reply diya, iske liye thanks......

Baaki jesa aapko theek lge wahi likhiye, main aapki story ke support me hu, mujhe personally ye story bahut achchhi lgi main fan ho gya hu aapka, is veer sinha ko kaafi dino baad koyi story impress kr payi h, aap jo v likhenge mujhe wo as it is swikaar h bro, keep wrinting n dont worry I m with u always always.

Veer sinha

Thanks man

awesome update hai Werewolf bhai,
Behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur amazing update hai bhai,

Azibogarib andaz me azibogarib update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

amazing twist
Waiting for next update

Amazing update

Fantastic update

Zabardast update

Thank you guys!

 

[Werewolf]

Thank god kal update jaldi aa gaya tha...
aur aaya to pura hila k rakh diya.
Do jagah par I got goosebumps...
pehla jab aapne pics ke zariye island aur mansion ko jo describe kiya h ... Too good sir.
aur dusra moment wo last wala. Wo scream jo end me goonji... I got goosebumps...

Aww thanks!

Main imagine nahi kar sakti aapko itni apt images dhundne me kitna time laga hoga. Wo pictures itni perfectly fit baith rahi h... Aisa lag raha tha woh sach me ek hi mansion ki thi.

Bas unhe hi dhundne me toh time lagta hai sabse zyada.

Aur ye aap baar baar sad kyu ho jaate ho haa???

main dungi reviews. Par sad nahi hona...
aap samjhte nahi ho ki hum sab kitna jude hue h iss story se.. (khaaskar Juhi )

Main imagine karti hu ki kaash juhi sach much hoti... Kaash main uss se mil paati. Uski dost ban paati. Uski cuteness apne saamne dekh paati Par main jaanti hu wo sirf mere mann me h... Sirf mann me... She doesn't exists in real. Aur jab jab mujhe reality hit karti h main realize karti hu ki it's a story. Characters are not real...

Iss ko dhyaan se padhna. Juhi's character is actually inspired by a real little girl who is no more now. I wanted to keep her memories alive so I made a character named Juhi and gave an irreplaceable place here in story.

ye aapki art h jo aap hamare mann me characters ko iss tarah baithaye hue h ... Ki insaan unke baare me sochne par majboor h ... Aur fir bhi aap sad hote ho? Why so??? Aage se aapko sad hota dekhi na to soch lena...

jab aapko aisa kuch lage to aap mujhse baat kar sakte h... I will talk...

Ju baat karogi mujhse? Haan?

Update was so good! Mere paas enough words nahi h ... Images were top notch... Aur sabse khaas baat aapki editing aur narration.

island ki khubsoorti aur atmosphere kitni khubsoorti se aapne describe kia... Fir veer aur zoey ka eye contact. Aap chahte to ye sab add nahi karte... Lekin ye choti choti baate hi interesting banati h story ko...

Thanks!

Uske baad seemless narration. Mansion k andar ka poora narration alag hi category ka tha. Pari aur veer k beech emotional talk me mujhe emotional kar dia tha.

Ab aise hi hona hai

ab next update ka bilkul wait nahi ho raha h... Main janti hu wo kitna dhamakedar hone wala h ... Upar se century update h...
aur mega update... I just can't wait..

Yep!!!

aap happy rahiye... Music suniye... Chill kariye... Itni choti choti baato pe stress nahi lete Sir... Netflix enjoy kariye... Id password to hoga hi aapke paas ... Ho sake to mujhe share kar dena... I'm kidding...

bas last me... Apna dhyaan rakhiye... Love your work as always...

Ju ko Id password chahiye? Badle me mujhe kya milega?
Thanks a lot dear btw! Itna sab kuch likhne ke liye. Saath bani rehna aise hi. Keep supporting!

 

[Werewolf]

Are bhai kisi ke ulte seedhe suggestions mat man le na plz ...
You are doing really stupendously great

Arre na bhai! Mein keh chuka hu hazaar baar. Story mere plots ke hisaab se hi aage jaegi. Changes jo hoenge wo meri soch ke according honge. Not because kf suggestions.

Insanely Over powered heroes, jo ki ek ungli se Hercules ko hara den, aisi stories se ye site Bhari padi hai...
It gets boring really fast...
Storyline itself crashes and burns..

That is true. Aise stories boring hoti nahi hai. Boring bana dii jaati hai. Because of lack of foundation and in depth storyline. Jab meri fantasy based story aaegi woh padhna aap. Gaand phaad world building hai usme. Boht bada project hai woh.

After some time, there’s nothing left for the hero to do..
Fir to Space se hi Launde Laane padte hain...
Aur laundia bhi, kyu ki plain vanilla homosapian sex overdone ho hi Chuka hota hai...

That is true. Fir dusra world introduce karte hai. Fir pata chalta hai aur bhi worlds hai. Unme jaakar bhi ladna hai. Ye lo... 3-4 parts ki story taiyaar.

Do what you are doing... slow and steady and sensuous

That is what I intended to do...

Incest stories slow hi hoti hain...
There’s shouldn’t be any Wham Bam, Thankyou Mam in such tales...

Exactly! It takes time. We have already seen Arohi and Kavya kissing Veer. Emotions have already been swayed. A little time more. And we'll see the forbidden relationship.

That breach of morals, that gradual lessening of hesitation, the change of paradigm that leads to such taboo thoughts...
CAN NOT happen OVERNIGHT!!!

This dish is best cooked in a slow cooker...
overnight....
Only then you’ll get that tender, juicy flavour!!!

Agreed!

Your story is like mental foreplay...
It teases all senses...
A sense of buildup precedes all major events... be it action, thrill, drama or (my fav) sex

That craving, that anticipation, that you are successful in igniting in readers mind is quite unique and the prime reason for your uncharted success as a fiction writer
And then comes the mind blowing CLIMAX!!! ( to the story arc as well the mental orgasm )

Thanks a lot man!

Waise bro, you didn’t reply to my last comment. My guess about your ‘House of Killers’ setup was quite close... if I say so myself..

Mene kayi logo ke replies nahi diye the. Kyuki samay nahi tha. Baad me mene sabke diye hai. I hope aapne dekh liya hoga mera reply. Ju ko aur guessing karni hogi... Hardcore waali...

Aur bhai kisi yede ki baat man kar Sex Mat Hatana... hum tharki log kahan jayenge phir...
Itne realistic characters ke beech realistically cultivated relations ka lutf...
aa hahaha.... maza aa jata hai!!

Dekho meri topi apne Ap udd gayi..

Uss baat se aap nishchint raho. Everything will happen. Aur sach keh raha hu. Jab erotica introduce hogi na toh hila ke rakh degi. Sab kuch
Thanks a lot btw man! Thanks for giving such a good review. Yahi khush karta hai hum logo ko. Aise hi bane rehna man! Keep supporting!

 

[Werewolf]

Update thoda जल्दी-जल्दी karo na bhai

3 din ka schedule hai. Inhe likhne me time kagta hai man.

Wolf Bro hamare Bollywood mai bohot se super star hue hai jinke bache floop ho gaye.kiunki unki abhinay kashmata apne mata pita jitni nahi thi.waise hi writing skill ke baat hai jis parkar shabdo se khelna ki kala ek ache writer mai hoti hai.
Vo hum jaise Kaye readers mai nahi hai.
Mai exbii ,xossip se xfourm tab se stories read karta a Raha hu.par shayad utna acha Ripley nahi de pata.

Bro mein nahi kehta lamba chauda likho. Ek line hi likh do. Par guzaarish yahi hai ki woh line harr baar same na ho.

Bhai dhikhi nhi hone ka...warna nightwalker aake apko kachha chaba jaayega....bhai mere kheyal se aise revo bahut kam hai....or tention nhi lene ka....or jo apke revo achhe se deta hai usike liye hi sahi update dijiyega please... I'm extremely sorry for this....
I beg you...
I hope aap samajh geye honge....
Or update jaldi hi denge....or hafte me kitna update aata hai bhai.....

Koi na man! Ab toh aadat sii hai mujhko aise jeene me...

awesome. Bhai apke Story ka koi jawab nahi mast bole toh jhakaasss. Bhai mera apse ek sawaal hai Kya nidhi ko dusri life jeene ka start krne ka adhikaar nahi hai? OR agr hai to veer ke sath usko settle kr do Bhai nidhi ek mature Lady hai nidhi ne bure wqt me veer ko smbhala agr main kahun veer aj jo kuch bhi hai uski wajah nidhi hai to glt nahi hoga.

Arre bhai aap toh behad peeche ho abhi kahani me. Aap aage tak toh aaiye. Current update tak. Fir ye sawaal rakhiyega. Aur bilkul! Kyu nahi? Nidhi ko poora haq hai ek acchi life jeene ka.

Wese bhi Maine logo se suna hai shadi usse kro jo Mature ho apki life ko ache bure wqt me sath de Supporting Ho caring Ho nidhi me woh sb kuch hai. Jb ragini ko maaf kr skta hai to nidhi ko apnane me Kya buraai hai. Ab zara ate hai update pe toh veer ne ragini ko suman ko training dene ke liye mana liya hai jo agey veer ko kaam ayegi. 31st ke night bhi ache manaai jisme nidhi ke sath kasmakash Hi sahi lekin veer ne Kuch wqt bitaya jisme jhappi daalne ka mission mila jisme woh kamyaab bhi hua ab system 5th level pe upgrade ho gya hai. Dekhte hai ab Kya hota hai..

Bas padhte rahiye bhai aap! Abhi boht kuch dekhna baaki hai. Relationship dheere dheere banta jaa raha hai Veer ka chuninda ladkiyo ke saath. Padhte jaiye aap.

bhai bahot hi jabardast story hai
mujhe bahot jyada maza aaya padne
par update thoda jldi ho jaaye to mazza aajaye
vrna ek hafta intezaar karna mushkil hota hai

Ek hafta nahi bro. 3 din ke baad aate hai updates. Thanks btw!

Bhai veer bhi gold bar bhi lene gya tha kya
Veer ko phile se hi pata sayed ?
Or bhai ab delay mat krna

Na na! Veer ko kaha pata tha? Woh toh mystery suljhaane gaya hai.

Ch 100 will come soon. Awesome milestone! Cheers to that!

Thanks man!

Lajavab..... intresting update...pichli sabhi updates ki tarah....lekin idr Vegas ka episode full mast lg raha hai.... suspence or thrill extra hai... mazedaar

Thanks a lot bro! Keep supporting!

Superb Veer ko yaha iss Island per bhejne m sabse bada haath Nik ka tha thanks to Mike jisne Veer k saath yaha aane k liye raazi huwa or itna bada khatra uthataya
Baherhal khel shuru ho chuka h aadhe ghante bita ker sab apne kamre m bhi aa gaye lekin yeh cheekha ko kiski thi itni dard naak cheekh
Baherhal dekhte h aage kia hota h kon bachta h or wapas jaa pata h or kon yahi per dafan ho jaata h
behad shaandaar zaberdast lajawab
Update please

Dhanyavaad Naik bhai!
Bane rahiyega!

Bai Kase kar lete Ho....kitna mast likh te ho ap........ Is update me to maza e a Gaya...

Shukriya bhai!