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[Werewolf]

Sabhi update ek sath padhe he.
Aur ye house of killer wala arc bahut suspense liye betha he.
Ragini ko ab bahut yaad aa rahi he veer ki jab Jane se pehle itna close hue the dono. Suman ko bhi pata he ragini ke dil ka haal sath me wo shweta ki halat bhi janti he. Juhi aur Nidhi ka wo scene bahut badhiya likha, esa aage bhi hoga par tab juhi kuch aur bolegi veer ko aur Nidhi bhi haq se sawal karegi ki kab aaoge wapis ?? Yaha maa beti bete ko chhod ke bahar ghum rahe ho ??

Aur Veer ko ye chhupana padega ki woh abhi abhi 2-3 Villains se nipat ke aa raha hai.

Nik sahi me chutiya he jese shuhana ne kaha. Khud risk lena nahi aur profit pura lena he. Divya bhi apne pati ki side le rahi he jab ki veer ko bhejna Nik ki galti hi thi. Kyuki veer uske liye kaam nahi karta, na veer se uska koi lena dena he. Iss Nik ko uski aukaat dekha ne ke baad jana he Veer ko.

Divya ne bhi Nik ko samjhane ki koshish kii thi man. But Nik ne na suni kisi ki. Aur Divya ko jese Suhana se zyada yakeen tha ki Veer shayad iss samasya se baahar aa jaega.

Conner ne jo kaha tha usme "Dark web" shabd use hua he. Aur jese usne kaha he usse saaf pata chalta he ki wo "RED ROOM" ki baat kar raha tha. Jaha insaan ko torture kiya jata he client ke wish ke according. Aur esi servies Dark Web ke alawa kahi aur nahi mil sakti.

He did say it. Ab uska poora raaz kya hai ye Veer hi disclose kar sakta hai.

Mike aur Veer yaha mansion me aa chuke he aur hatya ka silsila bhi shuru ho chuka he. Ab Nightwalker kon he, kyu kar raha he wo sab aage aayega hi. Par Dekhna ye he ki Veer kese ye solve karta he.

He already solved it.

Emma dari hui he aur Veer ke sath hi reh rahi he aur ye sab zoey ki aankhe dekh rahi he. Emma ki har harqat wo dekh rahi he par kuch keh nahi sakti jab wo khud Veer se pehli baar mil rahi he, to kese haq jata de veer pe.

Dono hi Veer aur Zoey aapas me sexually attracted hai. It's not love at all for now.

Nightwalker ke sath ek face off bhi ho chuka he jisme Veer ne dono ladkiyo ki jaan bachai he aur ab wo dono room me hi bandh rehna chahti he, golden bars ki lalach chhod ke.
Ab chester room ke bahar aata he ya nahi ?? Nahi aata to room ke andar bhi koi safe nahi he.
Aur room ke numbers, paintings, Door lock inn sab ke piche jarur koi na koi baat hogi hi. Emma ko batana hi hoga ki wo yaha kese pahuchi ??

Yeah!

Aur ye zoey ke sath ho sake to Veer ko aaage badhna chahiye. Harem banana he apna to kuch ladkiya to rakhni hi padegi Mumbai me Kami nahi he uske paas aur yaha bhi zoey ho sakti he.
Waiting for next update Werewolf bhai.

Dekhte hai kya hota hai.
Thanks a lot man! Ju boht dino ke baad aaye. Umeed hai exams acche gaye honge. Ab aise hi bane rehne ka man!
Keep supporting!

 

[Werewolf]

Update के श्रेणी मे शतक मारने के साथ साथ...
कहानी के thread मे पूरे 1.8 k पन्ने को पुर्ण करने की उपलब्धी आपने प्राप्त की है Werewolf भाई,
आपको इस हसीन उपलब्धी को प्राप्त करने की खुशी मे मैं आपको बहुत सारी बधाइयाँ देता हूँ...
उपर बाले से हमेशा यही गुजारिश करूँगा की आपकी लेखनी को दिन प्रति दिन और निखार प्रदान करते रहे... ।
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और अंत मे...
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अगर इस पल को celebrate करने के लिए कोई पार्टी शार्टी रखने वाले हो तो हमे न भूलना.. और हमारे मित्र (दारू) को तो बिल्कुल भी नही ।
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धन्यवाद

Thanks man! Ab celebration yaha kese kare? Iske liye toh alag se koi thread maangta. Aur ab toh 101 update ho chuke hai. Late ho gaye apan thoda.

Story complete hone ke baad tu apna brainwash karwaliyo jisse tu aasani se story padh sakega ro sakega has sakega

Chhhiii be... Laundiya ki pic laga liya tu. Mujhe pata tha tu andar se laundiya hi hai.

CROFT MANOR mansion hai bhaya ye sayad se "TOMB RAIDER" ke series ka

Nahi pata man apne ko. Lol! Itna dhyaan nahi deta apun ki pics kaha ki hai. Yadi woh imagination ke aas paas rehti hai toh apun unhe use kar leta hai.

Tujhe chahte hain be-intiha,
Par chahna nahi aata..
Ye kaisi mohobbat hai,
Ki hume kehna nahi aata. .
Zindagi main aa jao,
hamari zindagi ban kar,
tere bin humain yun
zinda rehna nahi aata.




Kaisa lga guys pahli bar likhi h

Boht khoob!

veer ke din ki shuruat threesome se hua wahh sevika Ho toh suman jesi malik ka khyaal har trh se rkhti hai bahu ko tohfe ke roop me le aai. Pari bhi shayad jalan mehsus krne lgi hai. Threesome ka ye fayda hua ke 100 point mile. Veer ne business ke liye ek step badha liya food truck kharid liya pari ke pasand ka khyaal rkhte hue. Arohi ke chintan ne usse woh krwa diya jisse ab shayad pranjal ka sach samne ajayega jldi hi, arohi ke hath wheelchair ka woh pahiya lag gya hai jo Gear wala hai ab lgta hai woh din dur nahi jb pranjal ki sachaai sbke samne ayega. Dada ji se ab bhi shikayat hai umrdraaz hone ke sath-2 duniyadari ki smjh hai fir bhi pranjal ki chikni chupdi baate pakad nahi paa rhe. Veer ko mission bhi mil gya business me shamil krne ke liye sonali ko convince krne ke liye ab dekhna ye hai veer kaise manata hai sonali ko dekhte hai..

Thanks man! Bane rahiyega!

LoL aisy kaisy beech Mai chor dain main tu pkg bhi sirf isi story k liy lagwata hu .

Veer ne sonali ko mana liya as a business partner sonali bhi maan gai basharte usko padhaai krni hai. Acha hai veer or sonali ke rishte ki shuruat Ho gai. Pari bhi khush hai uske pasand ke food truck kharidne se. Ragini Ke hatho inauguration Karana veer ka acha pehal tha. Ab shayad rishtey ko naya Ayam milega. As a chef veer ne sbko shock kr diya. Nidhi bhi Red saari me ana Kya gajab lag hogi main to imagine krne lg gya tha. Veer ka observation gajab ka ho gya system ke ane se usne ek pal me pakad liya arohi kuch paresan hai arohi se puchhne pr usne veer ko sab bta diya ke pranjal ka hath hai Dada ji accident ke me. Ab dekhna ye hai ke arohi or veer ki Jodi Kya rang lati hai. Slogan ne jaal daal diya mirror gallery ka ab Bhai veer ko or strong hona hoga jahan usko samna assassins se Ho skta hai. Veer to kaera ko bhi sath leke jana chahta hai slogan ka kaam asaan kr rha hai.dekhna dilchasp hoga

Ye baat sach hai ki Veer ki observation skills kaafi behtar ho gayi hai. Woh apni surroundings par boht dhyaan dene laga hai ab. Thanks btw!

Mujhe to Werewolf bhai ke update ka besabri se wait ek aur karan se hai.
Aur wo karan hai ki bhai ka update aaya nahi aur kuch fans bhai ke aise bhi hai ki apne aap ko bhai ka sbse bada fan sabit karne ke liye wo bina read kiye hi like to karte hi hai. Jo ki chalta hai.
lakin maje ki baat hai ki bhai ko update diye 2min bhi nahi hote aur NICE UPDATE/ BAWAL BHAI/ BAHUT KHUB BHAI MAJA AA GAYA aise hi na jane kitne comments aa jate hai.

Taajub toh mujhe bhi hota hai iss baat se harr baar.

Very nice update
Night the mansion ka update add kiya usse story too Good ho gya

Or ho na ho Nightwalker mere hisaab se wo chutiya Nik hi hoga

Nahi mitr! Nik kese ho sakta hai yaar? Nik toh idhar investigation department waalo ke saath tha na.

Koi rahe yaa naa rahe lekin mai yahi rahunga or Shweta ki Jabardast pyaar or Ragdmal sex dekhne ke liye intezaar rahega

Sabr banaye rakhna fir.

 

[Werewolf]

Pari or veer ke nok jhok toh hmesha hi mst hota Hai. Jesa ki veer ne kaha woh pari ko smjh gya rat me btayega to Kya pari ko uske mann ki bate pta nahi chala Qki pari to mann ki bate Sun skti hai. Ragini paresan thi veer smjh gya usko dekhte hi jesa ki Maine pehle bhi kaha tha jab se pari uske life aya hai uska observation kamaal ko Ho gya hai pal bhar me jaan gya ke kuch hua hai rat me jis wajah se ragini paresan hai. OR shayad iss update ke Best scene bhi yahi tha veer ke maturity dikhana ragini ko smjhna shayad dono ka emotional attachment agey chal kr dono ke rishtey ko koi naam de sake writer shab ke kahe anusar agr main kahun to shayad ye pati patni ban skte hai. Wese toh main nidhi ko bhi veer ki wife bnte dekhna chahta hu sach kahun toh badshah ke 4-5 biwiya hoti hai usme kaera meri 3rd favourite corrector hai baki writer mahaday better bta skte hai. Kaera ka veer ko smjhane ka tarika badaa hi unique tha kaise signature dishes bnana hai TV ka hi postmortem krwa diya isse kehte hai business minded ek teer se 2 nishane lga diya kaera ne TV wale ko uska business krne ka trika pta chal gya or veer ko uskaa. Superr

Kaera is a queen. Usse form me aana baaki hai abhi. Thanks a lot!

सच बोलू तो आपके childish behavior ही आपको बाकी सभी सहपाठको मे एक यूनिक बनाता है रिहाना जी, रही बात हसी और मज़ाक की तो बस यही बोलना चाहूँगा की...

" जिंदगी चार दिन की है, दोस्तों.
जिसमे सब कुछ पा लिया जाए...
क्यूँ खफा होना यारो इक दूसरे से रस्क कर के...
चलो इक दूसरे की खिंचाई कर मुश्कुरा लिया जाए... "

और रही बात हमारे लेखक महोदय से, तो जहाँ तक मै Werewolf जी को जान पाया हूँ, वो बिना कोई खाश वजह के अपने पाठको से नाराज तो नही होते ।
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मै तो निश्चिंत हूँ...
आप भी हो जाओ यही आशा है

Dekh dekh kese makkhan laga raha...

Starting is pretty good mtlb main character se bohot ache se connect kiya or choti choti details ka bohot ache se dhyan rakha apne barish or baki sabi chijo ko bohot ache se use Kiya me koi pro reader ya writer to nahi hu pr itni detail agr Dali gai ho to story ke scene ko imagine Krna bohot asan ho jata hai or tabi maja ata hai jab aap story ko ache se connect kr paye.

Thanks man!

Esa lag rha hai jese koi anime dekh rha hu, dude crazy story and the way writing is mind-blowing.

bhai faaaaaadddduuuu update par suspense clear karna chahiye tha

Aaj raat me sab clear ho jaega.

Literally amazing n awesome update with interesting action scene nd other things which r totally outstanding

Thanks man!

Bhai as per update it was fucking owesome
nobody noticed those things in voice anouncement that was superb suspense reveal. And camera position revealing and guessing that night Walker ka next target Mike he and the fight with night Walker everything was awesome.
aapne firse suspense me rakh diya.
Bhai as per updates Bhai bura mat manna
par update shedule 3days ka nahi chal raha he 4 to 5 days ka shedule hogaya he.. from last 3 updates Aisa he hey.. plz do something about it bro.. thank you..

Thanks a lot man!
I will try to deliver update faster. But time is not in my hands. I cannot control it man. I can only try.

Nice update....we will wait for the clarification about the victim in next update...I hope we will get next update during Sunday night...

Update 102 will come tonight. Thanks btw!

Superb bhai rongte kade kardiye, mast story hai .
Agle update ke indezaar me pagal ho javunga,
Apki writing skill Ko dil se salaam hai

Dhanyavaad bhai! Bane rahiyega! Agla update aaj raatri me.

Case solve bhi ho gaya aur hume kuch pata bhi nahi chala. Ye to tv serial waala dhokha ho gaya ki jaise hi suspense khatam hone waala tha episode khatam ho gaaya ya fir jab surrur chadna shuru hua to botal khatam ho gayi

Ab ek ke baad ek bam phootenge.

Magar kuch bhi kaho update tha to jaandaar kaash ke Nightwalker ka pata chal pata ki koun hai? Ye Nightwalker tha to shaatir ek number ka, agar Veer ke paas Pari aur powers nahi hoti to Nightwalker bhari padne waala tha uss par.

That is true...

Kya Investigation department hi shamil hai iss sab mein ya koi aur badi shakhsiyat shamil hai isme, ye to Werewolf bhai hi bata sakte hai kal ke update mein jo 12 AM ke aas paas aayega kyonki Werewolf bhai bhi to apne paathko ko pareshaan

No! Investigation department kyu shaamil hoga? They are under the govt. It's not possible. Neither Nik ya Divya me itni haisiyat hai ki wo kuch itne level ka kar de. So you can assume there's someone else. Next update aaj raat me aaega.

Ye Anya yaha kese aa gayi ??
Loid aur yor dono apne tarike se marenge Werewolf bhai.

Anya yaha hai...

Aakhir Nightwalkerwa roomwa mai ghus kar uh Sasura Chesterwaa ka gaand maar hi liya

Mind-blowing update brother and I think there is some new chemistry is developing in between Suhana and Veer. Bro. I want to say one thing that the time schedule in between two updates is increasing update by update, but I respect your writing and have faith in you Werewolf brother.

I will try to deliver updates faster. Thanks btw!

To aapne last 2 paragraph me kahani puri tarah se na bta kr jo suspense bnaya hai I'm sure usse sare reader ko jhatka lagne vala hai, kyoki aapne Chester ki maut kaise hui, nightwalker Kaise itni jaldi pakad me aa gya yah sab hai sath hi veer ne jo last me Chester ke room me observe kiya usse hi puri gutthi sulajhne vali hai...

Tabhi toh suspense banaya hai.

Mike ne camera kaha lage hai yah bta diya veer ko pr sirf 4 hi to nhi honge vo jab Har person ki Har ek movement ko spy kar rhe the vo...

Of course! Mike ne 4 dhundhe hai. Sirf 4 nahi the.

Chester Ka band kamre me Katal or vo bhi alag Tarah se, pet hi fad diye Bich me se, vo to Accha hai Ladkiya yha pr nhi thi Varna unko bchana mushkil ho Jana tha pr mike or veer ki bhi halat sahi nhi the usko aise dekh kr yha action or reaction ko jis tarah se darsaya hai aapne outstanding work bhaya mind blowing
Suhana ka veer ko dekh uske pass daud kr aana or realize hone pr ki vo kaha hai or kya kr rhi hai to Apne action ko dusri disha me badalna Vahi veer ka suhana ko dekh man me sochna sath me divya ka Pahle veer ko sahi slamat dekh shock hona aur baad me haste huye usse milna Sara kuchh superb tha bhai, nik Jo Sayad yha sirf yah dekhne aaya tha ki mike or veer ke sath kon kon vapas aaye hai...

Thank you bhai!

Mike ek true detective hai usne na sirf camera dhundne Balki nightwalker ko bhi hath upar kar surrender karne kaha Jabki use pata tha Yadi thodi si bhi chuk hui to nightwalker ka agla sikar vahi hai or vo jara sa bhi nhi sochega use marne me...
Veer ne mike ka pichha karke akhirkar nightwalker ko pakad hi liya, Jaise veer ke pass pari thi Vaise hi nightwalker ke pass kai varso ka experience or us haveli ki ek ek chij ki puri jankari sath hi uski brutality jiske liye use koi second thought nhi tha...
Awesome update bhai jabarjast superb amazing sandar bhai

Dhanyavaad mitr! Nightwalker apni territory se familiar tha. Isliye woh itne qatl karne me kaamyaab ho gaya. Warna Veer usse itne murders karne nahi deta. Keep supporting man!

Ab Bhai ek jawaab zrur dena ki jese ki pari ne kaha ke ke woh jab chahe ek week ke liye sleep mode me ja skti hai kbhi bhi toh Kya uske sleep me Jane se ye system work krta rhega Kya?

Yes! System work karega. Veer Pari se baat nahi kar payega bas. Aur usse manually khud se saari skills ya cards activate karne padenge. Kyuki pari sleep mode me rahegi toh Veer ko khud hi sab karna padega.

Ab suspence me na maar dena warewolf bhai....please update fast this time.

Update was awesome and thrilling.

Aisa lag raha tha ki live action movie dekh raha hu.

Please update soon..

Update 102 aaj raatri me.

 

[Werewolf]

Ding no word's werewolf bhai such an extraordinary work der se aaya but toofan laya. Jitni pi thi utar gayi amazing an fantastic update
Aur jaise aapne commit kiya hai we are going to see more action.picture Abhi baki hai bhai log.

Thanks man! Next update aaj raat me.

Awesome update Werewolf bhai lekin yeh baat acchi nahi lagi ki aapne hume confusion mein chod diya aur ye confusion pata nahi kitne dino mein khatam hoga...

Confusion aaj dur hoega na bhai. Keep supporting!

बहुत बढ़िया
लगता है कोई जाना पहचाना या नामचीन लपेटे में आने वाला है l
चलो वीर का मिशन पुरा हुआ
अब देखना यह है कि यह सब हो क्यूँ रहा था और कर कौन रहा था
बढ़िया रहा Werewolf भाई

Dhanyavaad bhai!

To aakhirkar Nightwalker ka khel bhi khatam hua. Lakin usase phle usne kya hi buri tarike se chester ko mara. Such me bahut hi brutally way me. Aur Mike such me ek bahut acha detactive nikla. Aapne ye bahut acha kiya ki allmost sub kuch veer ka kiya dhara to dikhaya lakin sath me mike ke bhi intelligence ko aapne ache se dikhaya. Ye baat mujhe such me bahut achi lagi. Aur ye jaan kar mujhe bahut jyada khusi hui ki meri kahi ek baat to puri to nahi lakin kafi had tak such nikli ki nightwalker off time me bhi inka sikar nahi kar skta hai. Aisa kahi mention nahi tha.
But abhi bhi kuch swalo ke jawab cahiye mujhe jiska answer sayad next update me mil jaye.

Thanks man!

1. Gold ka kya hua. Wo mila ki nahi.
2. Emma kaise yaha aayi thi. Aur wo ye baat kyu chupa rahi hai.
3. Un panting ke bare me bhi aapne kuch mention nahi kiya.
4. Veer ne kon si baat ajib notice ki. Kahi chester ki laas move to nahi hui thi. Ya door me kuch tha.
5. Aur zoey ke room me veer ko kya mila. May be gold lakin wo waha aaye kaise. Ya kisne rakhe.
6. Aur veer ne phle sbko niche bhejne ke baad hi ye sb kyu dekha. Sbke samne kyu nahi dekha.
7. Veer ne aisa kya dikhaya ki sb tention me aa gaye.

Ye sare sawal hai filhal mere. Dekhte hai kitne jawab milte hai.
Nd overall Update is just epic. Nd wo current wale scene ne to bachpan ke game ki yaad dila di.

Inn saare sawaalo ke jawaab next update me mil jaenge man.

Hmmm to nightwalker ki walk khatam huyi bechara Chester but bro Chester mara kese kyu ki darwaza to bas ander se hi khola ja sakta tha or nightwalker ke pass to beowolf blessings nahi hai to wo ander ghusa kese

Yahi toh sabse bada sawaal hai bhai.

And Mike hmm it's a really great an jise apni kabiliyat par jara sa bhi ghamand nahi hai nik ki tarah usne veer ka pura sath diya well Nolan khush hogya hoga
But nik ki gaand jal ne ki smell mujhe yaha tak aa rahi

Or suhana ko ab veer ko thoda to apni feeling show karna cahiye usme kuch galat nahi hai divya ka bhi shak gehra hogya

Padhte jaiye aap updates.

Or bro aapne for ek baar mistry chor di Chester ke rrom main or zoey ke room me aakhir kya dekha veer ne????

Raat me sab pata lag jaega man.

Wese chalo ab naya killer ayega samne maza ayega lagta hai house of killers main hume kafi horrible deaths dekhne ko milegi

Baki outstanding update bro

Or agle wale update ka intezaar hai

Thanks a lot man!
Keep supporting!

nice update ..bahut saare points clear nahi huye abhi bhi .
nightwalker ne chester ko kaise maara ,veer ko kya samajh aaya ki usko goosebump aa gaye aur saath me pari ko bhi .
nightwalker ko pakad ke bandh diya par saath leke nahi aaya police ke paas .
aisa kya decode kiya veer ne ki sab shocked ho gaye .

mike ne apna dimag sahi lagaya tha aur camera ke baare me pata kar liya .aur veer ne mike ka pichha karke nightwalker ko pakad hi liya .par nightwalker ka chehra dekha ya nahi veer ne ki wo kaun hai .

Thanks man! Saare points aaj clear ho jaenge. Kuch bhi doubts nahi rahenge. Keep reading!

Update padh to maine raat ko hi liya tha. Per suspense ki wajah se kuchh samajh nahin aaya. To socha ki aaj somras kuchh jyada hi ho gaya hai isiliye samajh nahin pa raha hun. Fir subah uth ke wapis padha to bhi suspense to waise ka waisa hi tha. Khali fokat somras ka maja kharab kar diya.

Saara suspense aaj clear ho jaega.

hmm Nightwalker ko bandh kar rakh diya par uska face nhi dekha wo kon hai or uh chesterwaa jiski gaand kisi ne usi ke room mai maar li Veer ko kiya dikh gya aesa or Zoey ke room mai Veer ko kiya mil gya.......

Mene kab aisa likha ki Nightwalker ko chorr ke Veer aur baaki sab laut aaye aur uska face bhi nahi dekha.

Ese abhi suspens mai rahne do bro

Or sab se badi baat shuhana ka to thik hai par ye divya ka kiyu itna bada jhatka laga jarur saali kuch chupa rhi hai Veer use tapa tap wala jhatka dega to sayad kuch raaz pata chale

Bilkul! Divya kuch aur bhi jaanti hai. Thanks btw!

 

[GMKNG00]

Update - 31 ~ An Erotic Night and Unwanted Guests

[Note - This update will focus majorly on sex. It's a bit kinky too.]​

Ab tak...

[Favourability - 70
Relationship - Mother.]

Aur ye padhte hi Veer ko uski life ka sabse bada jhatka laga tha.

Aaj usse apne janmdin par koi gift mila ho na mila ho. Ye jese...

Uske liye best gift tha.

Ab aage...

Kehte hai na samay kisi ke aage nahi jhukta. Veer ke saath bhi kuch aisa hi tha. Train me wo chadh toh gaya tha par...

Par jese hi usne uss aurat ko check kiya...

Uske hosh udd chuke the. Wo bhauchakka sa bas train ke darwaaze ki dehleez pe khada raha aur Bhavana ki train uski aankho ke saamne uss se dur jaati jaa rahi thi. Ya yu kahe ki uski barso se bichdi Maa jo abhi abhi usse mili thi, wo ab uski aankho se ojhal hoti jaa rahi thi. Aaj shayad usne pehli baar itne mann se uparwaale se guhaar lagayi hogi ki kaash...

Kaash ye waqt tham jaaye, kaash wo apni maa tak firse pohuch jaaye. Par...

Samay toh samay hai. Jo kabhi rukta nahi.

Jab tak Veer ko realize hua, Bhavana ki train kaafi aage jaa chuki thi aur chuki Veer ki khud ki train opposite direction me jaa rahi thi toh duri kab achanak se badh gayi iss samay ka pata hi nahi chala.

"Noooooooo...."

Wo chillaaya aur darwaaze ke baahar latka...

[No maaassterrr!!! Andar hoiye! It's dangerous! Maaasterrrrr!!!!]

Par Pari ke bol jese uske kaano me kaam hi nahi kar rahe the. Uski aankho se aasu kab behne lage usse pata hi na chala. Ehsaas toh tab hua jab gaalo pe kuch geelepan mehsoos hua.

[Maaaasttteeeeerrrrr! Pleeeaaaassseee!!!]

'Huhhh!?'

Jab Pari ne zorr se uske mann me chillaaya tab jaake kahi Veer ko hosh aaya. Usne dekha ki jis train me Bhavana baithi thi wo jaa chuki hai aur uss se aur bhi dur hoti jaa rahi thi.

2 kadam peeche hote hi Veer apne ghutno pe gir pada. Uske haath thar thara rahe the. Uske ek haath me uski Maa ka diya hua wo candy ka packet tha.

Aasu rukne ka naam nahi le rahe the. Aaj kitne dino baad roya tha woh. Unhi kaanpte haatho se usne apna pendant bheench liya jese maano usse darr tha ki koi usse chhina ke le jaega.

'Pariiii!!! *Sniff* Pariii...'

[Master!]

'She's alive Pari... She's alive. She...'

Iss waqt Veer ko kisi baat se sabse zyaada santushti thi toh wo yahi thi ki...

Uski bichdi Maa zinda thi. Unhe kuch bhi nahi hua tha. Uski pyaari maa ekdum sahi salaamat thi. Ye jese uske liye kisi khazaane se kam nahi tha.

[Yes master! I told you right? She might be alive.]

Veer haa me sarr hilaate hue apne aasu pochne laga jo uske khule haatho ki lakeer par yu tapak rahe the.

'Aaj mera b'day hai Pari. Par... B'day khatam hone se pehle... She... Look! *Sniff* she gave me this Pari... Look! *Sniff* It's the best gift Pari... *Sniff* It's the best...'

[Master!!]

Abhi wo kuch aur keh paata Pari se ki tabhi uske kaano me awaaz padi,

"Maalik???"

Dekha toh paaya ki Suman hairat bhare andaaz me usse dekh rahi thi.

Wo agle hi pal forun hi aage badhi aur Veer ke paas jhuk ke uske haath ko pakad lii.

Suman : Maalik?? Aap... Aap ro rahe hai? Kyuuu? Kya hua Maalik?? Kahiye na kuch...

Veer : M-Mein... Theek hu Suman. Kuch nahi hua hai.

Suman : Iss baat se toh jhooth bhi sharma jaaye. Maalik! Zaroor kuch baat hai. Kripya kar mujhe bataaiye. K-Kya... Kya aapko abhi mujhpe bharosa nahi hai Maalik?

Veer : Wo baat nahi hai Suman. Bas! Aaj mein boht khush hu. *Smiles*

Suman (frowns) : Par aap...

Veer : Mene kaha na ki...

Wo Suman ki taraf palta aur aage kuch kehta ki tabhi Suman ke uroj jo aadhe uske blouse se jhaak rahe the wo uski nazar me aa gaye.

Aur Veer ne sharmaate hue muh ferr liya. Ye samay uss taraf dhyaan dene ka nahi tha. Par jese aaj uski nahi chalne waali thi.

Suman thi toh ek aurat. Aur wo bhi experience waali. Bhala kese nahi bhaanpti wo ki uske Maalik abhi abhi kya dekh rahe the.

Apne haatho se usne apne maalik ke chehre ko apni taraf kiya aur boli.

Suman : Aise chori chori kyu dekhna? Jab aap...

Kehte hue uske khud ke gaal surkh laal pad gaye aur agle hi pal usne Veer ka haath thaama aur usse utha ke apne adhnangi chhaati se laga diya.

Suman : Jab aap inhe jab chaahe tab thaam sakte ho!?

Aur bas uska itna kehna hi tha ki pata nahi Veer ko kya hua achanak hi wo andar se boht zyaada garam mehsoos karne laga. Jese maano ubaal sa aa raha ho uske andar ek.

'Shit! W-What is this feeling!? I-I want her... Arrrgh!! Pari...'

[It's activated I guess.]

'Huh!?'

[The Alpha Trait function.]

'Huhh? K-Kya keh rahi ho Pari...'

[I will explain later Master. Abhi itna samajh lijiye ki you are no longer a beta male. Ab aap me ek Alpha male ke traits aane shuru ho jaenge. Mein baad me samjhaungi. Filhaal...]

[System has entered into the sleep mode.]

'Pariii? Huh??? Pariiii!!?? Shiiittt!!!!'

"Maalik!!!?" Suman ne uske haantho ko aur kass ke thaama par uska aisa karna jese Veer ko aur bhadka raha tha.

'Suman... Jao please!!! Don't... Just don't...'

Wo kehna toh chaahta tha par jese uske shabd nahi nikal rahe the.

Aur jese hi Suman ne uske haath pe haath rakh apne uroj dabwaaye...

Bas...

Veer utha aur Suman ko usne dabochte hue darwaaze ke paas hi lage bathroom ke andar kar diya aur khud bhi andar ho gaya.

Usne andar se gate band kiya aur uske baad Suman ke raseele hontho ko apne muh me bharna shuru kar diya. Suman achanak hue iss vaar se thodi chaunki zaroor thi par ant me usne apne maalik ko poori tarah se aamantrit karte hue khud ko unke hawaale chorr diya.

Haath firaate hue usne Suman ki saree ka pallu uske seene se hataaya aur gardan pe apne honth rakh usse chusne laga.

"Aaahhh! Maalik...!!!"

Siski lete hue Suman ki aankhein band ho gayi.
Uske haath apne maalik ke sar ke peeche lipat gaye aur wo uske baalo ko haath me bhar sehlaane lagi, usse apne se chipkaane lagi.

Aur pal bhar me hi Veer ne uska blouse aur bra nikal ke uski chuchhiyo ko azaad kar nanga kar diya. Unn raseele aamo ko muh me bharte hue usne badi hi berehmi se unhe nichodna aur chusna shuru kar diya. Aur Suman bas siskiyaa leti rahi.

Veer : Aaj tumhe aisa chodunga ki tumhari chut ki barso ki pyaas mit jaegi meri Suman...

Josh josh me Veer ke muh se ashleel bhare shabd nikalna shuru ho gaye.

Suman : Jii... Jii Maalik!

Suman apne maalik ke iss naye roop ko dekh hairat-angez me khud haami bhar dii.

Aur idhar Veer ne na kuch bola na hi kuch suna, usne bas Suman ko neeche baithaaya aur uski aankho me aankhein daalte hue apne jeans ki button kholi, zip utaari aur underwear neeche karte hue apna lund Suman ke chehre ke saamne kar diya. Uska ling uchakte hue ekdum se baahar aaya jiski madak sii mehak Suman ki naak me padi aur wo paas aate hue lund ki mehak ko jee bhar ke sunghne lagi.

Uski aankhein band ho chuki thi aur wo iss adhbhut ehsaas me doobti chali gayi.

Veer apna lund Suman ke chehre par dheere dheere fira raha tha. Uske gaalo pe, uske maathe pe, uske hontho pe, uski naak pe, harr jagah wo apna ling mal raha tha jese maano lund se uska make-up kar raha ho. Jese maano wo chaah raha ho ki bas mere gupt ang ki mehak hi tumhaare chehre se aani chaahiye.

Suman ne aankhein khol apne maalik ke lund ko apne dono haath me leke uthaaya bilkul wese jese koi talaab se apne dono haatho me paani ko bharke uthaata hai.

Usne aage badh uske lund ka wo laal supaada apne hontho se chuma.

*Chu*

Aur ye ehsaas paate hi Veer ki aankhein band ho gayi. Suman ne ahista ahista harr ek jagah pe apni chumbano ka vaar jaari rakha.

Aisi koi jagah nahi bachi thi jaha par usne apne hontho se chooma naa ho. Kayi jagah toh uske hontho ki wo maroon lipstick bhi lund pe chhaap chorr chuki thi. Wo jese apne hontho se saboot chorr rahi thi ki mene apne maalik ke lund ko chooma hai.

Veer ne bade hi pyaar se Suman ke sar par haath fera jese maano wo uski koi paaltu billi ho. Aur harr baar ki tarah apne sarr par haath ko mehsoos karte hi uska badan sihar utha. Ye na jaane aaj kal uske maalik ki nayi aadat bann gayi thi. Jab bhi wo unse chipakti ya unke ling ko chusti toh hamesha uske maalik uske sarr par haath ferrte aur na jaane kyu... Ek sihran sii daud jaati thi Suman ke badan me.

Apni jeebh nikaalte hue Suman ne apne maalik ke andkosho ko chaatna shuru kiya. Harr baar zubaan firaate hi uske andkosh bhi upar ki orr uth jaate aur jeebh se alag hote hi wo neeche gir jaate.

Kabhi wo unhe muh me bharti toh kabhi pappiyaa deti. Toh kabhi muh me bhar ke hi unhe choosti aur zubaan firaati. Uski zubaan ekdum garam thi aur ye harqat Veer ko saatve aasmaan par pohucha rahi thi.

Uss garam garam geeli zubaan ke adhbhut ehsaas me Veer khoya hua tha.

Agle hi pal Suman ne lund ko apne muh me bhar liya aur shuru ho gayi Veer ki blowjob.

*Gwak* *Gwak*
*Slurp* *Slurp*

Ki awaazo se Suman ka muh tezzi se aage peeche ho raha tha. Uske haanth Veer ki chuttado par bandhe hue the aur usse sehla rahe the.

Aur Veer bas pyaar se Suman ka sar sehlaaye jaa raha tha. Jese jese wo sehlaata, Suman Mmmm Mmmm karke apni aankhein band kar leti.

Dekhte hi dekhte dono ke hi jism se kapde utar chuke the aur Veer ne kapde jaha saaf jagah mili wahi taang diye ya rakh diye.

Suman neeche apne ghutno par baith apne maalik ke lund ki sewa apne mukh se kar rahi thi. Apne maalik ke lund ko wo apne jeebh se nehla rahi thi, usse geela kar rahi thi, chaat ke wo lund ko saaf kar rahi thi.

Veer (smiles) : Kesa hai swaad!?

Veer ke sawaal par Suman ne apni nazre upar kari aur boli,

Suman : Adhbhut maalik! Mera bas chale toh mein isse apne muh me hi rakhe rahu maalik...

*Muah*

Kehte hue usne uska supaada choom liya.

Veer (tezz saasein lete hue) : Mera bhi mann kare toh mein tumhaare andar hi isse rakhu.

Apne angutha usne Suman ke gulaabi hontho par fera aur tezz saasein lekar pucha,

"Kya ho tum meri Suman!?"

Suman jese jaanti thi. Wo aaj apni maalik ki iss ajeeb sthiti ka anumaan laga chuki thi. Wo khadi hui aur nagn haalat me hi apne maalik ke qareeb aayi. Veer ke seene me ek haath rakh aur dusra haath uske gupt ang par le jaate hue, wo apni doodh ki thailiya uski chaathi par tikaate hue kaan ke sameep aayi aur boli,

"Mein jaanti hu aap kya sunn'na chaahte hai."

Veer : K-Kya? Kya sunn'na chaahta hu mein bhala?

Suman (smiles) : Yahi ki...

Veer : Hmm!??

Suman (smiles) : Mein aapki Rakhel hu.

'Fuccckkkkkk'

Aur ye sunte hi Veer ke andar ka ubaal jese baahar aa chuka tha.

Usne josh josh me Suman ko baithaate hue seedhe ling uske muh me utaar diya.

Suman apne muh ki raftaar badhaate hue apne maalik ko param sukh pradaan kar rahi thi.

Aur kuch derr ki lund chusaayi ke baad Veer ne usse uthaaya aur usse paltaate hue uska ek perr utha ke side me rakhwa diya.

Mulaayam gaand dekhte hi Veer ka lund ek jhatka maar diya. Usne bade hi pyaar se Suman ki gori gaand par haath ferra aur fir do tamaache jadd diye.

*Chataaak*

"Aaahhh!!!" Wo chillaayi.

Veer : Halla nahi!

Suman (blushes) : Jii... Jii maalik!

Apne dono angutho se usne pehle Suman ki chuttado ke gaalo ko alag kiya toh usse Suman ki gaand ka bhura chhed usse nazar aaya aur wo dekhte hi ek baar fir Veer ka lund bhadak utha aur ek jhatka maar diya. Uski gaand ke chhed par Veer ne apna angutha fera toh bechaari Suman hil ke reh gayi.

Veer : Iska... Iska udhghaatan baad me karunga.

Suman (blushes) : Mein... Mein intzaar karungi maalik.

Veer : Yahi baatein toh tumhaari pasand hai mujhe Suman.

Veer ne waapas se usse apni orr ghumaaya aur uski gardan pe apne honth chalaane laga. Suman ki gardan ko chaatne ke baad Veer ne zorr zorr se usse kaatna shuru kar diya jese maano wo koi vampire tha aur Suman uska shikaar.

Veer uske gale aur gardan me hickeys pe hickeys de raha tha aur nishaan banaata jaa raha tha taaki jab bhi Suman ko koi dekhe aur uske gale pe nazar daale toh logo ko pata lag jaaye ki wo berehmi sii chudi hai. Aur wo kisi ki amaanat hai.

"Ohhhh maalik.... Sssssss.... "

Jhatke pe jhatke lete hue Suman apne maalik ke harr ek vaar ko aamantran de rahi thi aur siskiya le rahi thi. Itna haq kabhi kisi mard ne nahi jataaya tha uss par.

Uski gardan par acchi tarah se apne daato aur hontho ki nishaani chorrne ke baad, Veer ne neeche haath le jaate hue Suman ki baalo se dhaki choot ke labo ko alag kiya toh usse Suman ki gulaabi chut nazar aayi. Uske gupt ang ke baal usse aur bhi zyaada madhosh kar rahe the.

Veer ke lund me khud hi thode baal the toh ye uske liye aur bhi exciting tha.

Veer : Ghar pohuch ke hum dono hi apne guptang shave karenge. Uske baad tumhari saaf chut maarunga.

Usne uski choot ko sehlaate hue kaha.

Na jaane aaj Veer ko kya hua tha ki wo apshabd ka prayog khul ke kar raha tha aur ye baat jese Suman ko pagal kar rahi thi.

Suman (lambi saasein lete hue) : Jii... Jiii... Maalik!

Veer : Tumne pehle kabhi apni chut ke baal saaf kiye hai Suman?

Suman (jhatke lete hue) : Haa... Ssssss... Haa... maalik! Razor se pehle.... pehle kiya karti thi. Par abhi kaafi samay se nahi kiye hai.... Aaahhhhh...

Veer (smiles) : Ghar pohuch ke ye jungle mein saaf kar dunga.

Bolte hue usne Suman ki jhaato ko apni ungliyo me le liya aur dheere dheere kheechne laga.

Suman : Aaahhhhh!!! Sssss... Maalik aap kyu kasht karte ho? Mein... mein kar lungi. Ye... Ye sab... gandgi ke kaam... Mein... Mein kar lungi...

Veer (smiles) : Mujhe tumhari harr ek cheez pasand hai...

Suman (blushes) : Par maalik...!?

Iss se pehle ki wo aur virodh karti, Veer ne uski bur ko zorr se bheench liya, jiske chalte bechaari Suman ka muh khula ka khula reh gaya.

Veer : Mene kaha na...!? Tumhari bur sirf mein saaf karunga.

Kehte hue usne Suman ke kaan ka nichla hissa apne muh me bhar liya jiske chalte Suman ka shareer ek jhatka kha gaya aur wo badi hi dheemi sii awaaz me boli,

Suman : Jo... Jo... hukum maalik!

Aur agle hi pal Veer ne apna lund Suman ki chut par set kiya, supaade se usne choot ki faako ko hata ke beech me ched ki orr kiya aur ek zordaar dhakke ke saath uska lund sansanaata hua andar ghuss gaya.

"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhnnnnnn!!"

Karaah bharte hue Suman ne aankhein band kar lii aur apni muniyaa se lund ko bheechte hue wo apne maalik ke hathiyaar ka swaagat karne lagi.

Veer ne Suman ke muh par apna haath rakha aur zordaar dhakko ke saath uski chudaayi shuru kar dii.

"Aaaaaahnnnnnn"
"Ummmmmmmm"
"Uiiiiiiiiii"
"Mmmmmphhhhhh"

Aur Suman ki dheemi dheemi siskiyaa bathroom me fel gayi.

Jaha ek taraf train ne raftaar pakdi hui thi toh wahi saath hi saath Veer ke dhakko ne bhi raftaar pakad lii thi. Jaha train chhuk chhuk kar ke awaaz nikaalte hue apni manzil tay kar rahi thi, toh wahi...

*Phatt* *Phatt*

Veer ke dhakke bhi alag awaaz nikaalte hue apni manzil tay kar rahe the.

Uski kamar harr dhakke ke saath jaake Suman ki gaddidaar gaand se takraati aur madak awaaz utpann karti. Aur harr ek dhakke pe Suman ka shareer poori tarah se hil jaata, yadi Veer ne usse zorr se jakda na hota toh wo ek hi dhakke me gir jaati.

Veer ke andkosh Suman ki baahri choot ke labo se jaa ke takraate aur awaaz karte. Harr dhakka Suman ko jhanjhor kar rakh de raha tha. Wo bas aankhein band kiye rel gaadi me hi apni khud ki siskiyo ki rel gaadi chalaaye jaa rahi thi.

Aur kuch derr baad hi...

Veer (karaahte hue) : Aah! Mera hone waala hai...

*Facch* *Facch*

Aur kuch seconds baad hi Veer ke lund se ek safed dhaar ki pichkaari nikli aur Suman ki chut ko andar se bhigo ke rakh dii. Bhigo kya dii balki chut ko labaalab bhar diya Veer ne apne Veerya se.

"Aaaahhhh!!! Maaaaaaalikkkkk!!!" Ek lambi aah bharte hue wo khud teesri baar jhar gayi.

Suman ki peeth par apna bhaar rakhte hue Veer uski naram naram chuchhiya sehlaane laga.

Veer : Inse mera mann hi nahi bharta. Kaash inme doodh hota...

Suman (Saas kaabu me karte hue) : Maaf karna maalik. Ab inme doodh nahi. Par dubaara aa sakta hai... Yadi...

Veer : Yadi!?

Suman (blushes) : Yadi mein garbhwati ho jau...

Usne palat ke dekhte hue kaha toh Veer bas hass diya. Par kahi na kahi Suman jese chaah rahi thi ki uske maalik wo shabd kahe jo wo sunn'na chaahti thi.

"Ohhh fuck!!" Aur tabhi Veer ko kuch ehsaas hua.

'Shitttt!'

Usko pressure bana...

Pressure itni tezz aaya ki wo usse rok na paaya.

Paani jo pee liya tha itna station me aane ke pehle.

Aur agle hi pal...

Ek zordaar peshaab ki dhaar Veer ke lund se nikli...

Par...

Uska lund abhi bhi Suman ki choot me hi tha...

Aur jese hi Suman ko peshaab ki pehli garam garam boond ka ehsaas apni chut ke andar hua, uska badan hil utha. Aankhein palat gayi...

Muh khula ka khula reh gaya...

Aur wo sar upar kar jhatke pe jhatke lene lagi. Ye kya ajeeb ehsaas tha jo ho raha tha usse? Aisi anubhooti uske jeevan kaal me aaj tak usse nahi hui thi. Aur sabse ashcharya janak baat ye thi ki usse ye anubhooti kahi se bhi buri nahi lagi. Ulta wo mehsoos kar usse aisa laga jese wo kisi alag hi duniya me pohuch chuki hai.

Suman uss ehsaas ko shabdo me baya na kar sakti thi. Wo bas iss adbhut anubhooti me leen thi.

Usme khoyi hui thi...

Veer ki garam garam peshaab uski chut se risti hui neeche uski jaangho aur taango se behti hui toilet ke chamber me jaa rahi thi.

"Shit!!!!"

Ye ehsaas keval Suman ke liye hi nahi balki Veer ke liye bhi ekdum alag tha. Iss se pehle usne aisa kabhi nahi kiya tha aur na hi aisa kuch anubhav kiya tha. Suman ke nange badan ko zorr se bheenche hue usne apni saari peshaab uski choot me bhar dii. Aur wahi peshaab uski khud ki taango se bhi behte hue neeche gir rahi thi.

Jab Veer ne apni tanki khaali kari toh lambi saas lete hue usne apna lund Suman ki choot ki gehraaiyo se azaad kiya.

*Puch*

Karte hue Lund peshaab aur veerya se sana baahar aaya. Aur agle hi pal Suman ghutno ke bal neeche pasar gayi.

Lambi lambi saasein lete hue uski chuchhiya upar neeche ho rahi thi. Paseene se uske baal poore geele ho chuke the aur bikhar chuke the. Veer ne bade hi pyaar se uska sar sehlaaya toh wo aage badhi aur apne maalik ka peshaab se sana lund apne haatho me bhar lii.

Veer : Saaf karo Suman...

Suman ka ye baat sunte hi badan hil utha. Ek sihran daud gayi uske poore nange badan me. Maano ek current ka jhatka uske badan se hote hue nikla ho. Usne nazre utha ke moot se sane lund ko dekha aur kaapte hue usne apne honth khole ki tabhi Veer ki awaaz uske kaano me padi,

"Ye lo! Mene nal chaalu kar diya hai.

Usne dekha ki Veer wahi peeche lage basin ki orr ishaara kar raha tha. Aur ye dekhte hi aur sochte hi ki wo abhi kya karne jaa rahi thi, uska shareer jhatke lene laga aur uski choot ne paani chorr diya. Apna nichla honth usne daato se zorr se dabaaya aur haa me dheere se sarr hilaate hue wo apne maalik ke lund aur unke perro ko paani se saaf karne lagi.

Usne apni panty uthaayi aur uss se apne maalik ke geele lund aur perr ko pochne lagi.

Ant me jab sab kuch saaf ho gaya. Suman ne apne maalik ko pyaar se ahista ahista kapde pehnaaye par khud abhi bhi nangi hi thi. Jab Veer ne saare kapde pehn liye toh wo baahar nikalne se pehle bola,

"Jaldi aao! Apni choot aur muh dono saaf kar lena. Meri berth par tum mujhe 15 minute ke andar dikhni chaahiye."

Aur itna bol wo baahar nikal gaya.

Suman bas jhatke pe jhatke leti rahi. Aisa adhbhut sambhog usne aaj tak apne jeevan me nahi kiya tha. Usse toh pata bhi nahi tha ki sambhog me itna maza bhi aa sakta hai. Aaj jese usse ek naye ehsaas ke baare me pata chala tha.

Apni choot ko malte hue usne dheere dheere apni choot me do ungliya daali aur andar apne maalik ki peshaab ko nikaalne lagi. Usne zorr se pressure lagaaya aur tabhi...

*Sarrrrrrrrr*

Ki awaaz karte hue uski choot ke andar se Veer ka moot baahar nikalne laga. Kitni ajeeb baat thi. Wo moot toh rahi thi par moot uska nahi tha. Uske maalik ka tha jo abhi abhi wo uski choot me bharke gaye the. Keval peshaab hi nahi, usse yaad aaya ki iss peshaab me uska apna paani aur uske maalik ka veerya bhi mila huya tha.

Paani se dho dho ke Suman ne apni choot saaf kii. Ye uski maalik ki peshaab thi jo uski yoni me se gir rahi thi. Peshaab ki boonde uski baahri choot me aur jhaato me saji hui thi.

Apni ungliyo me lage peshaab ko wo ghurti aur uska badan fir jhatka khaata aur gaal gulaabi pad jaate. Badi hi mushqil se usne choot aur apne muh ko jaldi jaldi saaf kiya aur fir apni taange saaf kii jinse behke moot niche giri thi.

Apne kapde pehn wo baahar nikli, pal bhar ke liye wo coach me aayi aur toothbrush, toothpaste aur saabun leke wo waapas se bathroom me ghus gayi.

Uske maalik ne aadesh diya tha usse. Ki choot aur muh saaf karke aana. Isliye wo acche se manjan kar rahi thi aur apni choot ko bhi usne saree utha ke neeche baith ke sabun se mal mal ke saaf kiya jab tak ki uski pyaari muniya waapas se sugandhit na ho gayi.

Usne apni bur ke baalo ko dheere se apne haatho me bhara, aur tabhi Veer ke bol uske kaano me gunj gaye.

"Tumhari bur mein saaf karunga."

Ye soch ke Suman ke dil ki dhadkan tezz ho gayi aur uska badan kasmasa gaya.

Fir usse wo bhi yaad aaya jab Veer uski gaand ke ched ko mal raha tha aur keh raha tha,
"Iska udhghaatan baad me karunga."

Sochte hi Suman ki saasein tezz ho gayi. Kya hoga jab uske maalik ka wo mussal lund uski gaand ko cheerte hue andar jaega!?

Idhar Jese hi Veer coach me aaya toh Sonali usse ghoor ke behad gusse me dekh rahi thi.

'Ahh! So she knows... Tabhi... Well! I don't care now.'

'Check'

Aur mann me hi usne Sonali check kiya.

[ Name - Sonali
Age - 18
Status - Suman's daughter from her first husband.

Bio - Sonali! Ek behad hi chanchal swabhaav ki ladki hai. Par utni hi gussail bhi. Maa se atyant prem karti hai. Kayi saare sapne the jo uske bikhar chuke hai. Padhna chaahti hai, par ghar ko sthiti ke chalte padhaayi kaafi samay pehle chooth gayi.

Favourability - 5
Relationship - Familiars.]

'Ohh? Atleast 5 toh hai favourability. Phew! Hmm? She wants to study? I'll see what I can do for her.'

Sonali se nazre hata ke jab Veer ne Aabha ko dekha toh paaya ki wo behad zyaada sharma ke usse dekh rahi thi.

'Check!'

[ Name - Abha
Age - 21
Status - Amit's wife.

Bio - Aabha Suman ki bahu hai. Apne pati se boht pareshaan thi. Ab bas wo ek acchi zindagi vyateet karna chaahti hai. Baahar ki duniya dekhna uska khwaab hai. Badi badi gaadiyo me ghumna, bangle me rehna, acche acche kapde pehn'na uska sapna hai.

Favourability - 40
Relationship - Benefactor]

'Huh?? Ye toh poore Papa ki Pari waale shauk rakhti hai. So she sees me as her benefactor huh!? Miss Sonia ki tarah mein bhi iska madadgaar hu. Hmm! I wonder Miss Sonia ka status kya hoga. Aur uss nakchidi Suhana ka.'

Kherr! Ye raat Veer aur Suman ke liye adhbhut thi par Sonali ke liye nahi.

Wo bina kuch bole hi upar jaake so chuki thi aur idhar Aabha bhi upar jaake lait chuki thi.

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Agli din jab sabhi Mumbai pohuche toh taxi me baithne ke baad Suman se leke Aabha aur Sonali ke muh khule ke khule reh gaye the. Itni badi badi buildings raaste me chalti ek se ek mehngi gaadiya, parks na jaane kya kya wo teeno apne jeevan me pehli baar dekh rahi thi.

Aascharya toh hona hi tha. Sonali bhi apna gussa bhul jese Mumbai ke nazaare ko dekh kho chuki thi.

Kuch derr ki duri tay karne ke baad wo Ragini ke ghar pohuche aur Veer ne door bell bajaayi toh Ragini gate kholne aayi.

Jese hi usne gate khola toh wo Veer ko dekh ekdum khush ho gayi aur usse apne gale se lagaane waali thi ki Veer ke theek peeche usse anya teen mahilaaye nazar aayi.

Aur unhe dekh uski bauhe sikudti chali gayi.

Ragini : Veer?? Ye...!? Sab...!?

Veer : Maaf karna Bhabhi! Yadi aapki permission ho toh kya mein inhe kuch din idhar hi rakh sakta hu? Aapko koi aitraaz toh nahi na?

Ragini : Huh?? P-Par... Ye sabhi!? Hai kon?

Veer : Ye... *Smiles* Inhone meri boht madad ki hai. Aur... Ye ab se mere qareebi hai.

Ragini : Ohhh!

Tabhi Suman aage badhi aur Ragini ke haatho ko thaam lii.

Suman : Aap maali... Ahem! Aap Veer jii ki Bhabhi hai na? Toh... Ab se aap hamaari sakha hui. Ghar ka saara kaam ab aap hum pe chorr dijiye. Aur yadi ho sake toh kripya kar hume rehne ke liye kuch din ke liye...

Ragini (smiles) : Mein samajhti hu. Chinta mat kariye. Yadi aap Veer ke kareebi hai matlab mere bhi kareebi kehlaayi. Aaj se aap jitne din chaahe utne din yaha reh sakti hai. Aaiye andar. Ghar itna bada hai. Akhir ab laga na ki ghar me koi reh raha hai.

Ragini kheech ke sabhi ko andar le gayi.

Idhar Veer saare intezaamo se khush tha aur ab wo ring waapas karne ke liye jaane hi waala tha.

Wo jese hi darwaaze par aaya toh gate ke baahar hi usse kuch awaaz sunaayi dii.

"Aaiye Dad... Aaiye Mom!"

Aur jese hi usne gate khola...

Saamne Vivek, Sumitra aur Karunesh car se utar ke seedha uske saamne hi khade the.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!

Pichle 30 updates ki kasar is update me nikal di mtlb chudai hi chudai

 

[Werewolf]

Stupendous update Man...
The only word that comes to mind is - supercalifragilisticexpialidocious....

Google kar lo this is a legit word...

Damn!!! That's a fucking long word.

Bhai maza aa gaya..
Lekin final action sequence thoda chota tha yar...
Itne khatarnaak opponent se ladai mein kuch to super moves aur bante the..!

Uska reason simple hai man.
Nightwalker isn't physically that strong. Woh dimaag se khel raha tha. Thus the fight ended quickly.

Aur treasure ka kya??
Mansion me treasure - ek dum Indiana Jones wali vibe aa rahi thi mast par yar ju ne treasure wale part ko to khatam hi kar diya!!!

Mene kab kaha ki treasure nahi mila hai? Mene toh aisa likha hi nahi ki bina treasure ke Veer aur baaki sab laut aaye hai.

Veer Nightwalker ko baandh kar, dono haseenao ke saath mansion sahi se explore aur treasure hunt kar sakta tha...
Ladkiyan Dar ke maare us se chipki reheti..
veer ke thoda Kareeb aa jaati!!

That would have taken out the thrill. Since Nightwalker was already caught. Toh fir usne woh baat nahi reh jaati. Bas time pass hi hota woh fir.

Par you lost that opportunity for veer

Man! Veer ko dherro opportunities milengi. Ladkiyo ki kami thodi hai uske paas.

Mike’s character is really likeable..
Plz keep him as Veer’s sidekick for rest of the missions in this arc.
Aur Mike mein Veer ko ek true friend & associate bhi mil sakta hai for future that is not influenced by Suhana or Divya...

We'll see what happens with Mike.

End mein Veer ne Zoe or Emma ko to neeche bhej diya par Tommy to behosh tha uska kya??

Woh bhi aaya na bhai. Mene likha nahi hai. But it should be understandable.

Ending

Fight choti thi isliye aisa laga hoga bro.

मस्त सस्पेन्स चल रहा है- ये क्या है, वो क्या हुआ..
और अगली लाइन में - चलो बे हवाई जहाज़ आ गया, बैठो बे , घर कू चल रे सब!!
जैसे फुल्ल स्पीड ट्रेन झटके से रुकी को ऐसी ending लगी मुझे !!

Once Nightwalker was caught. There was nothing else to show. Veer aur baaki sab ne baaki ke bache hours me bas time pass hi kiya tha. That would have made the update boring if I kept that part.

Accha is Zoe a new applicant in Veer’s harem?? In dono ka mast scene ban sakta hai...

See! Assumptions jitne banaane hai banao man! Koi rok tok nahi hai. But kaun kaun rahega uske saath ye waqt hi bataega. Iss maamle me apun spoilers nahi dega.

Aur ek baat...
Mike chutia tha saala..
warning kyu di!
Seedha ghutne aur kandhe mein goli maarni thi!..
Nighwalker ise se Marne aa raha hai aur ye use uske Miranda Rights Bata raha hai!!

Take care bahi, have come to love your style...

Normal banda maar de but Mike still duty nibha raha tha. Aur toh aur Mike ne Nightwalker ko sach me kisi ko maarte hue nahi dekha man.
Woh 90% sure tha ki killer wahi hai. But imagine ki yadi Nightwalker ki jagah killer koi aur hota aur Mile ne usse goli maar dii hoti toh? Mike ki naukri probably khatre me aa jaati. That gun was for protection. Not for attacking... Thanks a lot btw! Keep supporting bro!

 

[Werewolf]

eh to sarwa ek Boom jesa apne Dimagwa mai phoot rha hai

Sayad veer ko ab bhi 100% comfarm nhi lag rha hai
es liye wo us Tommy par ek tukka maar kar comfarm kar raha hai yaa phir Tommy par nisaana laga kar tir khi or kisi ki gaand mai de maare

Agla update gaand phaad dega...

Bahut sare confusion reh gaya hai is update me nightwalker ka chehra ,Chester ka room ,Zoey ka room dekhte hai agle update me ...
Btw super fabulous mind blowing update...​

Thanks man!

To next part ki announcement b abi kr dete after all ye isi ka hi part h...seems greedy but kya kre updates hi aise hote h k rha ni jata..well we can't do anything.. It's all up to you bro... We can just wait but atleast announce to kr hi skte

Next update tonight. Thanks btw!

Awesome fantastic amazing mind blowing update bhai...

Ab Nightwalker pakda gaya he phir bhi Chester ki hatya kese hue ye ek bohot bada raaz he jo next update me pata chalega ki veer ko Esa kya dekha Chester k room me per mujhe jaha tak lagta he jese Mike ne bataya tha ki sab ke room me camera he so kuch to mechanism hoga usse attach jisse usne yato door open kiya hoga yato kuch or per wait a minute Mike ne Bola tha room me CAMERA he ek room me kahi laga he or ek fan ki center me laga he matlab room me 2 camera the har koye ek camera se pure room dekh sakta he per yaha to 2 camera the matlab kuch to baat he...

Ab ye sab to next update me hi pata chalega tab tak waiting for next update bhai...

Socho socho ki kese maara gaya chester. And there's no hidden mechanism in cameras. Woh normal cameras hai. Cctv ones.

I'm back!
Mene kaha tha raat ko review dungi. To ye lo... Pesh h mera review aapke saamne...

Sabse pehle to hats off!!! Ab aur kitni baar mujh se bulwaoge aap ye? Aap ek alag level pe jaate jaa rahe ho yaar... Don't raise the bar too high. Warna sabhi writers se mujhe iss level ki writing ki expectations hone lagengi... fir kya hoga mera???

Apun half assed kaam nahi karta. Real life me bhi apun perfectionist hai. Jitna best ho sake utna karne ki koshish karta hu.

Aapne kaha ki ye update 6k words k bhi upar ja raha tha. Par aapne isse divide kar dia do parts me. Ab aapne aisa kia h to obviously kuch soch samajh k hi kia hoga aapne... Aur main sure hu ki next update poora justify kar dega ki aapne aisa kyu kia. Aur daave k saath keh rahi hu ki next update sabhi k dimaag k taaro k saath khelne wala h...

Bilkul! Hila ke rakh dega next wala.

Aapne ye update wahi se continue kia jaha se left kia tha. You were talking about scene shifting. A change in scene shifting as you mentioned earlier to Xabhi And, you showed it right here in this update.
what a flex!!

Yooo~

Narration again... Top notch!!!
Splendidly put into action.

Humne dekha Chester k saath kya hua...

When I read this... I got goosebumps...
yadi aapne isse thoda sa aur describe kia hota to pakke se mujhe nauseating feeling aa jaati... Aur vomiting jesa mehsoos karti main... Shukriya

Tabhi toh update ki starting me upar hi add kar deta hu note ki gore aur bloody elements rahenge. Taaki readers pehle se hi prepared rahe.

Kitni khubsoorti se aapne Mike ko importance diya hai. Wo ek detective h... To uski analysis skills obviously high hogi... Tabhi to wo investigation field me job kar rha h... Usne easily 4 cameras search kar liye the... Aur Mike ka gussa hona ki Nightwalker uske saamne se hi uski team ko maarta ja rhaa tha... Ye sab dikhane ki zaroorat nahi thi. Par aapne dikhaya...

it shows that how much importance you are giving to each and every character. Sirf Veer ko hi aapne limelight me nahi rakha kyuki wo hero h... Yaha tak ki Mike ko gun k saath Nightwalker se interaction bhi karwaya apne... And then Veer ko limelight mili... What a beautiful way to do justice with the characters.

It was his duty as a detective.

Ab itne saare questions aa chuke h...
1) Nightwalker ka real face aur real name kya h?
2) What did Veer see in Chester's room?
3) Where's the real gold?
4) Why did Veer go to Zoey's room? Is there any gold in her room? If yes? Then how? How veer came to know about it?
5) Emma's secret which she's hiding.
6) Divya is hiding something? If yes then what?
7) What about those paintings?
8) Why Veer got more goosebumps here than facing Slogan earlier? Even Pari went silent.
9) What about those cameras?
10) Who's the next killer? How Nightwalker is related to Jim? And what happened to the app which Niharika installated in Veer's phone??? What did Veer show in the projector?

All your questions will be answered in the next update. It will clear out everything.

Ab main wo point out karna chahti hu jo cheeze mne notice ki... Ho sakta h main kuch cheeze miss kar jau par jitna notice kia utna likh rahi hu... And believe me, inn points ko kisi ne notice ni kia hoga...

1) Ye to notice kia hoga logo ne. The detailing... Ufff... Ye nahi bhi likhte aap to chalta. Par aap scene me poori tarah se ghuse hue the. Beowulf active hone k baad Veer ka appearance, specially uski eyes me change aata h... So to hide that, he closed his eyelids. Wowwwww!!!

Of course! Otherwise woh pakda jaata.

2) Wowww! Just woowww!!!
The Beauty of this sentence. Baahar se sheese par baarish ki boonde padna aur andar se dhua. That little imagination... Ufff... I visualised this when I read it

3) I bet ye kisi ne bhi nahi notice kia hoga...
Iss sentence me ek cheez hidden h... Update 100 me hum ne kya dekha tha? Jab veer aur Mike upar floor par jaa rahe hote h... Veer Mike se puchta h kis raaste me jana h aur mike answer karta h...
I always do the things right.
What a way to tell the answer...

aur iss update dekh lo aap sab firse...

Damnnnn!!! Yes! You are right! I put there. I thought no one will catch it. You surprised me...

Mike ne firse right me jana choose kia... Ufffff!!!
uska previous sentence justified ho gaya.... What a in- depth detailing... I'm mind blown already...

4) My brain cells are about to explode.
Pehle floor par paani tha.
Mike ko aap jaan boojh k paani se alag leke gaye so that if wo behosh hua to pani me rehne k karan jaldi uthega nahi...

True!

Uske baad aap Nightwalker ko waapas se pani wale area me laye to make him use the current in it...
I have no words left..

Yes! True again.

You wrote them in capitals on purpose. Because they were his first words. Kitne gusse me hoga woh... Kitni bhaari aur terrifying awaaz hogi uski...
wo dikhane k liye small letters kaha kaam aate... So you used capital ones.... Just Wooooowwww main abhi sirf inhe hi pick kar payi hu. Na jane aur kya kya hidden hoga previous updates me...

Of course! Small alphabets se uska aggression kese express ho sakta tha?

There are no mistakes... I'm saying it blatantly... Fucking ZERO MISTAKES....

Ye sab main raat me likhne wali thi... Par aapka reply aa gaya. Aur aap mujh se naraaz nahi ho... To main khushi k maare abhi likh di...

The story from 100th update is going on another level. Mujhe dar h kahi ye aage chal k logo k dimag se upar hi na nikal jaye... Aur ek baar... 100 k upar updates nikal gaye and there's not even a single mention pf the main villian... wo kesa hoga?? I'm getting chills just thinking about him....

Final villian? Don't even try to think about him. No one is ready for him right now.
Also, if you're thinking Kishor is the final villian...
Kishor is just a small tadpole in the pond in front of him. Hope that will explain you something.

I'm ending it here. Thank you Werewolf Sir for providing us this masterpiece... You are a gem...

Thanks a lot! You are giving me surprises one after another by your revos. The way you are catching the small details is just unbelievable. I seriously thought Mike taking right again wouldn't be noticed by anyone. But you took my by surprise. Amazing girl!!! Keep supporting!

 

[Abhi123]

Waiting for todays update eagerly.......

 

[Devil_deed]

Waiting bro it's been exciting so far

 

[Ashish120]

Waiting