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Chall chal aave.... Makkhan ki tikiya gir gayi teri, dekh wahi...A great update.
The action scenes are really marvellous and worth to be reproduced on big screen.
Masterpiece banaega apun isse...The details kept in mind for writing this kind of update and related sound effects tell how great this story is going to be.
Of course! Update ke end me suspense na aaye? Aisa ho sakta hai?But this kind of cliffhangers at the end of the update (particularly for this update) is simply torture to the readers. (But I know that is the trademark of you!)
That was really a bad predictionMaybe Veer ko Pata chal gya hai ki Nightwalker kon hai .
Bad prediction :- Nolan
Update 101 101% Bahut achha tha .
कुछ को बोलो... कि भाई दो शब्द तो लिख दे रिव्यू मे...
तो जानते हो सालों का वो दो शब्द का रिव्यू कैसा होता है...
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अजीब एक गोटी वाले लवड़ापुरुष है सब के सब धोतरचोर ....
जलती भट्टी मे लगी तवा पे इन सभी दो शब्द बाले महान चुतियो की तशरीफ सेकनी चाहिए ।
Arre main koi expert thodi hu...
Aap fir sad hone lage. Kitni baar bola h mne aapko...
Leave it na... Just focus on us and your writing. Leave everything else aside...
Hmm!!! Suhana ne woh mazaak ke roop me kaha hai bhai. Jese hamaare circle me yadi koi boht dimaag waala vyakti hota hai toh ham nahi keh dete hai kabhi kabhi mazaak me ki iski khopdi khol ke bheja check karo. Ya fir, saala khaata kya hai ye? Toh suhana ne bhi ussi way me kaha hai ki Veer ka experiment karegi woh. Kyuki, Aatish koi akela banda nahi tha bro. Aur Slogan bhi akela nahi hai yaha. Toh Veer Aatish ko khatam kar chuka hai akele aur ab Slogan se bhid raha hai, ye baat apne aap me hi unbelievable hai.Idhar suhana alag apna dimaag lga rhi hai ki woh uspe experiments kregi aisa kyo sochti hai? Iska jawab dena werewolf Bhai. Qki fighting toh koi bhi sikh skta hai toh isme doubt wali baat kahan se agai. Kya usne pari ko sense kr liya hai.? Ek baat main kafi time se puchna chahta tha ke jab veer ka accident hua tha tbhi kaise pari uske andar agai usse pehle ya baad me bhi to askti thi. Kahin aisa to nhi ki veer ke Gale me jo locket tha uski maa ka diya hua usse hi pari ka koi relation ho? Shayad veer ki maa future janti Ho ke veer ke sath aisa kbhi Ho to pari veer ko bacha legi. Jawaab ka intzaar rhega Bhai
Lajwaab....Laajwaab....LaajwaabUpdate - 101 ~ Exposed (1)
[Note : Contains gore and blood elements.]
Ab tak...
Mike : Where is he?
Tommy : He told me he will look outside.
Mike : Let's go and check his room!
Woh sabhi Chester ke room me pohuche toh Chester ka room band tha. Matlab koi andar tha. Chester hi toh tha.
Unhone darwaaza peeta aur awaaz lagaayi.
Par...
Andar se koi awaaz na aayi!!!!
Ab aage...
"Cheeessssstttteeerrrrrrrr!!!!!!"
"Open the goddam door!!!!"
*Baaammmmm* *Baaammmmmm*
Darwaaze ko Veer, Mike aur Tommy baahar se peet rahe the. Par andar se abhi bhi koi jawaab nahi aaya.
"Shiiiittttt!!!"
Woh teeno door pe haath maarte rahe. Lekin koi halchal hone ki awaaz bhi nahi sunaayi dii unhe bheetar se.
Mike (bauhe sikodte hue) : Something is wrong.
Tommy : If the door is locked from the inside. Then it's obvious someone is inside. And who else could it be other than Chester?
Veer : Let's break it!
Tommy : Wh-Whaaaattttt??? Are you kidding me?
Veer : No! I'm not! Just help me out.
Bas yahi ek upaay bacha tha unke paas. Andar koi na koi toh maujood tha. Warna darwaza apne aap kese band ho sakta tha? Toh upaay yahi tha ki darwaaze ko hi tod diya jaaye.
Tommy ne Veer ko hairat-angez me dekha. Jese woh kisi bewakoof ko dekh raha tha. Itna bhaari door, bhala dhakka dene se kese toot sakta tha?
Mike : We don't have any other option. We can try at least. It's 3:30 already. Nightwalker's time has started. We should hurry up.
Wo ye nahi jaante the ki Veer ke paas kya tha. Isliye unhe ye darwaaza todna asambhav sa lag raha tha. Unhe nahi pata tha ki Veer ke akele me kitne logo ka bal tha.
Par wo sare aam akele darwaaza nahi tod sakta tha. Aisa karne se uss par kayi sawaal khade ho jaate. Ek aadh lene ki zaroorat thi usse. Aur isliye, Veer ne unn dono ko bhi dhakka dene kaha.
Mike ko lagega ki Veer aur Tommy ne zorr se dhakka diya hai. Tommy ko lagega ki Veer aur Mike ne zorr se dhakka diya hai. Par sach toh yahi hai ki...
Veer ke akele ke hi vaar se darwaaza khulna tha. Unki madad lena toh keval apni kaabiliyat ko chhupaane ka ek zariya tha.
Woh sabhi jese hi dhakka dene ke liye taiyaar hue,
*Ding*
[Beowulf's Blessings has been turned ON]
Apni aankho ki laali chhupaane ke liye Veer ne apni palke band kar lii.
Uske sang Mike, Tommy peeche run leke daude aur teeno ne saath milkar zorr se darwaaze par dhakka maara.
*Baaaaaammmmmmmmmmmm*
Kuch toh hua. Darwaaze ka ek hinge dheela pad gaya.
*Baaaaaaaaaammmmmmmmmm*
Iss baar darwaaze ka pehla hinge poori tarah se nikal gaya.
Aur,
*Baaaaaaammmmmmmmmmmmm*
*Baaaaaaaammmmmmmmmmmm*
4-5 aur dhakko me poora ka poora darwaaza hi hinge se ukhad gaya. All thanks to Beowulf's Blessings and Veer's stats.
*Dhadaaammmmmm*
Teeno hi kamre ke andar dhakka dene ke kaaran floor par gir pade. Unn sabki nazre sabse pehle bed par gayi.
Tommy : Ugghh!!! What the fuck? This motherfucker is sleeping here???
Tommy gusse me gurraaya. Itni chinta liye woh sabhi paagalo ki tarah usse pukaar rahe the aur woh tha ki yaha chenn se so raha tha? Himmat kese hui uski?
Chester araam se bed par dala hua tha. Ek kambal odhe. Baahar se uska sarr, perr aur haath hi dikhaayi pad rahe the kambal ke.
Tabhi Mike ki bauhe kass uthi, maathe par silvatein chha gayi. Shayad kuch...
Mike : I smell something...!?
Par iss se pehle ki woh apni baat poori rakh paata, Tommy gusse me uth ke apne dost ke upar se kambal hata diya,
Tommy : You fucker, get up this insta-- huhh???
*Flllllaaaaaaaapppppppp*
Kambal jese hi hata...
Saamne ka manzar dekh teeno ke badan thande pad gaye. Shareer ke raungte khade ho gaye. Dil ki dhadkan aisa laga jese pal bhar ke liye wahi ruk gayi. Ghutno me kamzori aa gayi,
Tommy ke andar jese aatma ne shareer ka tyaag kar diya. Woh toh dekhte hi bechaara ussi pal ladkhada ke behosh ho gaya. Wo peeche ludka,
Mike : Shiiitttt!!!
Aur idhar, Mike ne fauran aage badh usse apne haatho se pakad sambhaala. Aur usse side me deewaar se tikaaya. Usne sarr utha ke Veer ko dekha,
Mike : Veer! We must- huhhh???
Par jab usne Veer ko dekha toh bhaanpa ki Veer ko usne aise pehle kabhi nahi dekha tha. Veer khauf ke maare saamne nazre gadaaye hue tha. Uski aankho me ek chamak nami ke kaaran janm le chuki thi.
Achanak hi usse akbakayi aayi. Muh par ek haath rakh woh turant hi peeche muda aur deewaar par apna dusra haath tikaaye lambi lambi saansein lene laga.
*Badump* *Badump* *Badump*
Dil itni zorr se dhadak raha tha ki Veer ko khud dhadkano ki awaaz sunaayi de rahi thi.
Mike : V-Veeeerrr???
Veer : It's... It's okay!!! I'm fine! J-Just give me a second.
Mike : Alright! But make it quick. Only you and I can do this. Together!
Veer : Y-Yeaahhh!
[Maaaasttttteerrrrr~]
Aisa kese ho sakta tha ki Veer pareshani me ho aur Pari ko chinta na hoye? Beshaq! Veer ke iss ravaiyye par turant hi Pari uske mann me usse pukaarne lagi.
'It's okay Pari!!!'
[It's not... ]
Pari jaanti thi Veer kin halaato se guzar raha tha. Kyuki bed par...
Bed par Chester laita toh hua tha. Par...
Uska shareer...
Uska shareer do hisso me bata hua tha. Poori ki poori tarah se kata hua tha. Pait se uski atadiya baahar ko nikli hui thi aur poora bed neeche lahu luhaan ho chuka tha. Andhruni maas aur ango ko aankho ke saamne dekh acche se acche insaan ko ulti aa jaaye aur uske perr ladkhada jaaye. Koi hairat ki baat nahi thi.
*Sccchllliiiiinnnnggggggg*
*Kllliiiiinnnngggggggg*
Veer ko Nightwalker ki woh haath me pakdi hasiya yaad aayi. Na jaane kese kaat ke alag kiya hoga usne Chester ko. Aari se lakdi ki tarah usne Chester ko kaata hoga. Soch ke hi Veer ke badan ke raungte khade ho gaye.
Par uss se bhi badi baat thi. Woh kuch aur thi. Veer ko woh manzar yaad aa gaya. Woh bhi toh kuch issi prakaar maara gaya tha na?
Golu!!!! Uski maut bhi behad dardnaak thi.
Aur ab Chester. Ye pehli baar tha jo Veer Nightwalker ke dwara bichhayi gayi laasho ko apni aankho ke saamne dekh raha tha. Koi insaan itni darindagi se kese maar sakta tha kisi ko? Veer ko jo baat sabse zyada darra rahi thi woh ye thi ki,
Nightwalker ne ek shan bhi nahi socha kisi ke badan ko do tukdo me kaatne se pehle. Seedha kaat daala. Jese insaan nahi, koi sabzi ho.
It was an absolute brutality.
Mike : Veeerrrr?
Mike ki punaah awaaz se wo apne hosh me aaya.
[Maaaasttteeerrrr~ don't worry. I'm with you!]
Pari ki baat sunn, aur apni himmat waapas baandh woh palta, Mike ko dekh usne haami bhari. Aur unn dono ne Tommy ko thaama. Veer aur Mike usse apne room ki orr le gaye. Chester ka room unhone wese hi chorr diya. Woh kuch bhi nahi kar sakte the iss maamle me.
Idhar Zoey aur Emma ne room khola aur Tommy ko behosh dekh woh dono tension me aa gayi. Jab Chester ki maut ki khabar unhe mili toh Emma toh poori tarah se ro padi.
Ek darr baith gaya usme. Ki jese ab woh nahi bachegi. Agla shikaar jese ab wahi hone waali thi.
Woh chillaane lagi, jese tese Veer aur Mike ne usse shaant kiya. Zoey khud andar tak hili hui thi. Par antatah woh chup thi.
Aur Mike gusse me. Ek detective tha woh. Chester ke room me ghuste hi jo dhaas usne hawa me soonghi...
Loha!!! Yaani iron. Jo hamaare khoon me maujood hota hai. Itne saal kaam karne ke baad Mike ko kaafi tajurba ho chuka tha. Khoon ki gandh vatavaran me jo faili hui thi, usne ek baar me pakad lii thi. Yaha tak ki Veer ko bhi pehle hi pata lag chuka tha.
Jese hi usne Beowulf activate kiya tha. Andar se khoon ki gandh usse pehle hi aa gayi thi.
Par ab jo ho chuka tha usse badla nahi jaa sakta tha. Unke beech se, ek aur shaks maara jaa chuka tha. Yadi aise hi chalta raha toh...
"Damn it! Damn it! Daammnmn ittt!!!"
*Baaaaaaammmmmm*
Mike ne gusse me aake deewaar par zorr se haath maara. Ek detective hoke, uski naak ke neeche se Nightwalker uske bando ko maar raha tha aur woh yaha haath par haath dhare baitha hua tha.
Veer aur woh ek dusre ke bagal se khade hue the uske hi room me. Tommy behosh haalat me bed par wall se tik ke baitha tha. Aur uske hi bagal se Emma aur Zoey jo ek dusre se chipki ek dusre ko sambhaalne ki koshish kar rahi thi. Zoey toh fir bhi theek thi, par Emma ka haal behaal tha.
Mike ne jeb se cigarette nikaali,
*Kliinkkk*
Lighter se cigarette jalaayi aur ek kash lagaaya aur cigarette ka packet Veer ki taraf aage badhaya,
Mike : You smoke?
Veer ne packet ko dekha aur ek cigarette usme se nikaali,
Veer : I can!
Detoxification ON thi. Veer ko koi tension nahi thi.
Lighter se cigarette jalaate hue wo dono khidki ki taraf pohuche, jiske sheeshe par baahar se baarish ki badi badi boonde pad rahi thi. Aur andar se cigarette ka dhua. Saath hi Bijli ki chamak sheeshe se hote hue kamre me aa rahi thi.
Unhone dono ladkiyo ko ye nahi bataya tha ki Chester kis tareeqe se marra tha. Ye maut alag thi. Isme sarr nahi kata tha. Balki poora ka poora pait hi cheer diya tha Nightwalker ne. Aisa rooh jhanjhor kar rakh dene waala kaam kiya tha.
Idhar Veer ne Mike ko bagal se dekha,
Veer : Chester got killed.
Mike (kash lagaate hue) : Yes!
Veer : What now?
Mike : We must find the killer. Before dawn. Otherwise we will all die here.
Veer : Senior Connor mentioned something in his video right? The cameras! We are being recorded.
Mike : Found 4 of them.
Veer : Huhhh??
Veer ne hairat me Mike ko dekha. Stabdh hona swabhavik tha. Connor ne mention kiya tha video me ki yaha par logo ki activities record kari jaati thi. Iska matlab kahi na kahi cameras lage hue the. Aur Mike ne seedhe seedhe hi Veer ko jawab de diya ki usne 4 cameras already dhundh liye the.
Veer : Where?
Mike : Found one on the ground floor, Second in my room, third one in the corridor, and fourth one...
Veer : ???
Mike : ... is right above our head. Between the fan.
Uske shabd sunn Veer ko ek jhatka laga. Ek camera upar pankhe ke beech me laga hua tha. Veer ne khud iss par gaur nahi kiya tha. Woh abhi dekhne hi wala tha upar ki,
Mike : D-Don't!!!! Don't look.
Mike ke kehne par usne sarr jhuka liya.
Veer : But Chester was killed when the room was locked from the inside.
Mike : Yes!
Veer : How is that even possible?
Mike : That's what I'm not getting.
Aisa kese ho sakta tha? Andar aane jaane ka raasta ek tha. Toh jab kamra andar se locked tha toh Chester marra kese bhala? Dono Veer aur Mike ka dimaag ghoom chuka tha.
Mike : Did you notice one more thing?
Veer : That he got killed during the search time?
Mike : Exactly!
Aur Chester ki hatya bhi kayi sawaal khade kar rahi thi. Banda search time me maara gaya. Akhir kaise????
Veer ne ek lambi aah chorri par tabhi uske mastishq se ek jhakjhor kar rakh dene waala vichaar hoke guzra. Jiske chalte uske haath se cigarette phisal kar neeche gir gayi.
Mike : ???
Veer : N-Noooo!
Mike : What?
Veer ne Mike ko dekha,
Veer : The voice!!!! The voice told us that search time will be allotted to us. But... But it never said that Nightwalker won't kill us during those hours.
Mike (jhepte hue) : That's... N-Nooo... But Nightwalker's time is different then how can he...!?
Veer : You forgot one thing!!
Mike : Huhhh?
Veer : It also said... If the Nightwalker saw you roaming, he will kill you.
Toh ye baat thi. Veer ki baat jab Mike ne suni toh woh andar se hil gaya. Veer ne ek raaz se parda utha diya tha.
Uss awaaz ne ye zaroor kaha tha ki search time diya jaega. Par awaaz ne aisa toh kahi nahi bola tha ki uss search ke dauraan Nightwalker kisi ko bhi nahi maarega? Ye toh Veer aur uski team ne apne aap assume kar liya tha ki iss time Nightwalker nahi maarega.
Awaaz ne toh sirf yahi bataya tha ki Nightwalker apne time par ghoomega. Par iska ye matlab nahi tha ki woh search ke time me maarega nahi. Beshaq, woh uss dauraan ghoomega nahi. Par uss dauraan chhipega bhi nahi.
Dusre shabdo me, Nightwalker ne unn sabhi ko chutiya banaaya tha. Apne shabdo ke istemaal se.
"Daaamnnn itttt!!!! This baastaardddd!!!!"
Aur Mike ka gussa aur bekaabu ho gaya. Ye toh laazmi tha.
Iska matlab saaf tha. Chester ne ghoomte waqt Nightwalker ko zaroor dekha hoga. Nateeja? Uski maut!!!
Par sawaal jo unhe sabse zyada pareshan kar raha tha woh tha room ka andar se band hona.
Veer : I'm going out.
Veer ne ek taq jawaab diya,
Mike : "WE" are going out Veer. YOU and ME. BOTH!!!
[Maaasteeerrr ~ Hum Mike ke saath nahi reh sakte. Hume Nightwalker se akele me bhidna hoga. Mission khatam hone ke liye bhi zyada samay nahi bacha hai.]
'I know Pari!!!'
Veer : We will go seperately. We both have our walkie talkie. If something happens, we can just call each other out.
Mike ne kuch shan tak Veer ko dekha aur fir haami bhari. Woh Veer ki baat se sehmat tha. Bhale hi ye tareeqa risky tha par yahi sahi approach thi.
Alag alag hone se Nightwalker ki talaash jaldi hone waali thi, aur Nightwalker akele aadmi ko dekh zaroor khud ko baahar nikaalne wala tha. Yahi sahi tareeqa tha.
Mike, Emma aur Zoey ko jata ke waha se baahar nikla,
Mike : You take left. I'll take the right.
Veer : Alright!
Aur woh daayi corridor ki taraf chal diya.
Idhar Veer ne bhi Emma aur Zoey ko jab jataaya ki woh bhi jaa raha hai toh dono vyaakul ho uthi,
Emma : Nooooooooooooo~ You can't!!! He will kill you. He will...
Zoey : Th-That's right... You shouldn't go out there. It's dangerous. We all can just spend the night here in one room. Then we can leave tomorrow.
Veer : Do you really believe he will let us leave? Just like that?
Veer ke sawaal par Zoey ki bolti band ho gayi. Zoey ka kehna tha ki wo sabhi ek hi room me saari raat ruk jaaye aur subah hote hi woh nikal jaenge. Par... Par kya Nightwalker waqai unhe jaane dene waala tha?
Veer : I'm going.
Emma : Nooooooooooo~
Zoey : S-Stay safe... And...
Veer : ???
Zoey : You will come alive...
Veer (smiles) : I will!
Aur ek akhiri baar unn dono ko peeche mud ke dekh Veer waha se palta, Zoey ne room andar se lock kiya aur Veer corridor me aa gaya.
***
Ab aar ya paar ki ladaayi thi. Aankh micholi, aur lukan chhupaayi ka ye khel boht ho chuka tha. Ab seedha bhidant thi.
Ya toh Veer sahi salaamat nikalne wala tha ya fir Nightwalker.
Veer ke kadam badhne toh left corridor ki orr chahiye the, par wo right corridor me jaane laga,
[Huh? M-Master?? O-Ohhhhhhh!!!! I see~]
Pari bhi pal bhar ke liye confused reh gayi. Par Veer ke mann me usne jab jhaank ke dekha toh wo sab samajh gayi.
Nightwalker Veer se bhid chuka tha. Woh jaan gaya tha ki Veer ko yadi usne firse face kiya toh Veer seedhe ladaayi par utar aaega.
Toh aise me jab 2 insaan, Mike aur Veer akele akele mansion me ghoom rahe ho toh kis par pehle hamla karna theek rahega?
Jawaab saaf tha.
Mike!!!
Aur isliye,
Veer ne apni raftaar badhaayi, tezz kadmo ke saath wo Mike ka peecha karne laga.
Beshaq, uska anumaan ekdum sateek tha.
Mike upar ke floor se chhaan been kar jab basement ki orr badha. Basement me ghuste hi uski bauhe chinta me sikud gayi.
Zameen par pehle ke muqaable paani kuch zyaada hi tha. Mike ke talwe paani me doob chuke the.
Aur Veer theek uske peeche tha.
[Master~ Apne shoes utaar dijiye, paani me chalne se awaaz kam hogi aise me.]
'Alright!'
Shoes ko utaar Veer peeche peeche Mike ke chalta raha aur abhi kuch hi dur tak woh aaya hoga ki...
Saamne basement ke hallway me se andhere me halki roshni aayi, dhuaa uthne laga...
Aur dhue me se...
Ek daraavna mask nikal ke aaya... Fir ek haath dikhaayi diya... Jisme khoon se latpat hasiya thi...
Nightwalker!
Mike : So it's you!!!!
Mike ne apni kamar se ek handgun nikaali aur saamne Nightwalker ki orr aim kii,
Mike : Drop your act now. You have been charged under the violent commitments of brutal murders. Raise your hands, drop your weapon, and hand yourself over.
Ye tactic kaam nahi aane waali thi. Mike bhi ye jaanta tha. Aur wahi hua,
Nightwalker suddenly, bagal ke hallway me ghusa...
Mike : Shiiittttt!
Mike usse pakadne aage dauda,
*Chhappp* *Chhhappp* *Chhhhaapppp*
Paani me uske daudne ki awaaz basement me goonjne lagi,
Peeche se Veer bhi dabe paav liye aage badha.
Par jese hi Mike uss hallway me aaya, usse Nightwalker kahi nazar nahi aaya.
Mike : Fuckkk!!! Where did he go?
Woh gun ko dono haatho se pakad aage badhta raha. Ab neeche paani bhi khatam ho chuka tha. Iss area me sookha tha.
Aur abhi woh dhundh hi raha tha jab,
*Thud*
Achanak hi uske sarr par ek zorr ka phatka aake laga.
Mike ke muh se kuch bhi nahi nikal paaya aur woh behosh hoke wahi gir pada. Uske bagal se, Nightwalker apni hasiya liye khada tha.
Hasiya ko hawa me utha wo Mike ke shareer ko dekhne laga. Pehle kaun sa ang kaata jaaye? Mundi? Ya pait? Ya haath perr? Ya jeebh? Ya fir kaan?
Uska haath zorr se neeche aaya hi tha Mike ki mundi kaatne ke liye ki tabhi,
*Whoooooosssshhhh*
*Cllllllaaaaannnnggggggggg*
Haath par zorr se kuch aake laga aur uske haath se hasiya chhooth ke dur jaa giri.
Fauran hi usne mud ke aag baboola aankho se dekha...
Saamne Veer khada hua tha. Aur ussi ne ek bottle fek ke uske haath se hasiya girayi thi.
Veer bhaaga... Nightwalker ki taraf... Full speed me...
Hawkeye ne apna kaam kar diya tha. Ab baari thi...
*Ding*
[Beowulf's Blessings has been turned ON.]
Veer ko tezzi se apni orr aata dekh Nightwalker dusri disha me bhaaga. Woh waapas se uss area me aa gaye jidhar floor par paani maujood tha.
*Chhappp* *chhapp* *chhappp*
Basement me unke kadmo ki awaaz goonjne lagi.
"I'm gonna catch you bastard!! Iss baar tu kahi nahi bhaag paayega."
Veer gurraaya aur ekdum Nightwalker ke peeche pohuch usne haath aage badha ke pakda hi tha ki,
*Whoooooosssshhhh*
Nightwalker achanak palta, usne apna haath ulta kar Veer ke chehre par chalaaya. Aur idhar reflexes ke chalte Veer ne turant duck kar liya.
*Swoooossssssshhhhhh*
Dono aamne saamne the ab.
Aur bina kahe hi,
*Chhap* *chhhapppp* *chhhappp*
Unn dono ne daud ke ek dusre ki mutthi aapas me kassi, Nightwalker ne laat bhi uthaayi saathi hi, Veer ke pait par maarna chaaha par...
*Deflect*
Veer ne apne haath se uski laat deflect kar dii.
"One inch punch!!!!!"
Aur Veer ki fist Nightwalker ke apne pait par aake padi.
*Baaaaaaaammmmmmmmmm*
Kya hi impact tha. Hawa me uchhalte hue woh peeche ki orr jaa gira,
*Chhhapaaaakkkkkkk*
Paani me uske kapde geele ho chale.
[Nice one Master!!!]
Nightwalker ki aankhein ekdum gusse se laal ho chuki thi. Par eka-ek woh utha, aur wahi rakhe lakdi ke boxes par chadha. Uska haath peeche gaya aur usne kahi se ek wire kheech ke nikaala,
[Maaaasttteerrrr~ N-Noooo!!!! Jump on the box!!!!! Quick!!]
Aur woh wire Nightwalker ne seedha neeche paani se bhare floor par fek diya.
*Zaaapppppp* *zaappppp* *zapppp*
Bijli aur paani ka jab milan hota hai toh kya hota hai ye bataane ki zaroorat nahi thi.
Ek tezz current poore paani se bhare floor me fel gaya. Kya hi shaatir tha saala ye Nightwalker.
Par Pari ne Veer ko pehle hi sachet kar diya tha.
*Thud*
Back flip maar ke Veer khud ek box par chadh chuka tha.
"Youuu fuckkerrr!!!!" Veer zorr se chillaaya aur,
*Whoooooosssshhhh*
Usne Nightwalker ke paas maujood boxes ki orr chhalaang lagaayi.
*Baaammmmm*
Aur shuru ho gayi unki haathapaayi. Ek dusre ke kapde pakad, dono hi ek dusre ko current se bhare paani me fekne ki koshish kar rahe the.
Veer stats ke according zyada strong tha. Aur isliye,
Nightwalker Veer ko dhakel nahi paa raha tha. Veer ne usse dhakka dete hue box ki edge tak kiya aur,
Nightwalker : I WON'T FAIL... NEVER...
Veer : Heh~ So you can talk huh?
Nightwalker ne Veer ko apne sang uske kapde pakad kheecha toh Veer ne ek jhatke apne shareer se woh sweatshirt hi nikaal dii,
Aur...
*Chhhapaaaakkkkkkk*
"Aaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrgggghhhhhhhhh"
Poore basement me ek zordaar dard se bhari cheenkh goonj gayi. Nightwalker uss current se fele paani me dhapaak se jaa gira.
Current itna nahi tha ki uski maut ho jaaye par itna zaroor tha ki aadmi behosh ho jaaye.
Current lagne ke kuch hi seconds ke andar Veer ne wire kheech liya. Aur Nightwalker behosh udhar hi paani me dala raha.
[Phew~ We did it Master!]
Veer lambi lambi saasein lete hue khud ko durust karne laga. Uske gaal pe ek cut laga tha jis se halka khoon beh raha tha. Baaki aur koi kharoch nahi aayi thi usse.
Akhir kaar, Hatyaao ke iss khel ko virhaam lag chuka tha.
*Ding*
[Beowulf's Blessings has been turned OFF.]
*Ding*
[Mission : Capture The Nightwalker has been completed.]
[1000 Points have been rewarded.]
[500 Fame points have been rewarded.]
Points kam the. Waqai! Par Veer ka interest abhi kisi aur cheez me hi tha,
'Check!!'
*Ding*
Veer ne Nightwalker ko check kiya. Par kuch khaas na mila usse. Jo jaan'na tha woh toh nahi mila.
Nightwalker ko usne rassi dhundh poori tarah se baandh diya ki woh kahi bhi bhaag na paaye. Mike ko usne apni peeth par uthaaya.
Aur woh chal diya upar ki orr,
Usne ek kamre me Mike ko litaaya. Aur abhi woh Zoey aur Emma ko jataane hi jaa raha tha ki ab sab kuch surakshit hai ki woh Chester ke room ke baahar se punah guzra...
Neeche darwaaza pada hua tha wesi hi haalat me, aur andar Chester ki laash jo dekhi tak nahi jaa sakti thi. Woh sab wese ka wesa hi maujood tha.
'Hmm?'
Veer ne kuch akasmat hi notice kiya,
'Ye... Wait a minute... Pehle toh ye aisa nahi tha? Then why is it...'
Aur fir uski nazar kahi aur gayi...
'Huhhhhh???????'
[Maaasssttterrrrr!!!!!!!!!!]
Uske baad... Veer ke raungte aise khade hue ki woh ladkhada ke wahi zameen par gir pada.
Aise goosebumps toh usse Slogan se ladte time bhi nahi aaye the.
Yaha tak ki Pari ka dimaag bhi kaam karna band kar chuka tha. Woh khud jese sadme me jaa chuki thi. Aur maun reh gayi.
Veer ka toh jese astitv hi hil ke reh gaya tha.
'N-Noooooooo!!!! I-It can't be!!!!! H-How did he...!!????'
Woh dauda, Zoey aur Emma ki orr. Apne kamre ki taraf. Usne unn dono ko baahar nikaal neeche ground floor par jaane ko kaha.
Aur fir woh bhaag ke Zoey ke room me gaya. Jese woh kuch talaash raha ho...
Aur agle hi pal,
*Craaaaaaasssshhhhhhhhhhhh*
[This... Mastterrrrr!!!!!]
Pari jhep gayi.
'So I was right!!!!! That motherfucker...!!!!'
***
After few hours...
Mansion me ho raha ye maut ka nanga naach khatam ho chuka tha. Subaah ho chuki thi, baarish tham chuki thi aur aasmaan se baadal hatt chuke the. Aisa lag raha tha waqai buraai par acchai ki jeet hui thi.
Mike, Veer aur anya ko lene investigation department se copter aaya hua tha.
Woh sabhi usme baith waha se ravaana huye aur waapas pohuche.
Helicopter jese hi land kiya, Veer ko utarte hi dur khadi Suhana aur Divya nazar aayi.
Yaha tak ki Nik bhi khada tha.
Suhana achanak se daud ke bechaini me aage aayi. Pal bhar ke liye Veer bhi hairat me reh gaya.
Lekin achanak hi Suhana ko jese dhyaan aaya aur uske kadam dheere ho gaye. Woh Veer ke paas pohuchi, aur jo haath woh pehle uske gaalo par rakhne waali thi woh haath uske seene par jaake tik gaya.
Suhana : T-Tum theek toh ho na?
Veer (surprised) : Well! Hmm!
Suhana : Th-That's good!!!
Pehli baar Suhana ko iss qadar dekh Veer sach me dang tha. Aisa usne pehle kabhi nahi kiya tha. Fir aaj kyu?
Wahi Divya ko jhatka sabse bada tab laga tha jab usse ye khabar lagi thi ki Veer ne poora ka poora case solve kar daala hai.
Aur ab usse apni aankho ke saamne dekh wo duwidha me thi.
Ab toh aur 100 sawaal uske mann me uth chuke the. Filhaal unhe side me rakh woh aage badhi,
Aur usne muskuraate hue Veer ko welcome kiya,
Divya (smiles) : It's good to see you return.
Veer : ...
Divya : Department wants an explanation.
Veer : Alright!!!
Kuch derr baad...
Investigation department ke office me ek bade se room me woh maujood the.
Sab ke sab. Nolan se leke Mike, Zoey, Emma, Tommy... Sab! Sab udhar maujood the.
Aur saamne projector ke liye badi si screen lagi hui thi.
Veer ekdum saamne khada hua tha. Aur usne bolna shuru kiya,
Veer : I have decoded everything!!!
Tommy : Okay! Tell us!
Veer ne haami bhar seedhe ek picture dikhaayi projector ke jisse dekh waha baithe sabke maatho par silvatein confusion ke maare aa padi,
Tommy apni jagah se uth khada hua,
Tommy : Are you kidding me??? Is this a joke?
Par Veer ne usse koi jawaab na diya.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Moderation hua firse yaha par. Ye update 6k words ke upar jaana tha. Par mene isse do bhaag me vibhaajit kiya hai. Kyuki next part me mein do matter aur samaapt kar sakunga. Baaki, likes thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka guys.
Dhanyavaad!
Gutthi sulajh chuki hai poori. Next update read karenge toh hi pata lagega.आठ लोग में तीन मारे गए और बाकी सही सलामत वापस आ गए । मैंने सोचा था कि वीर को छोड़ कर लास्ट में जो एकाध लोग बचे होंगे उन्हीं में से कोई एक नाइट वाकर होगा । लेकिन यहां चार लोग हैं इसलिए परफेक्ट अंदाज लगाना मुश्किल ही होगा ।
इस अपडेट ने कई सवाल खड़े कर दिए हैं जिसे हमारे मित्र रीडर्स ने अपने रिव्यू में लिखा भी है ।
Zoey nahi Sanju bhai, woh emma thi. Zoey yoh jetski se aayi thi yaha. Island zyada duri par bhi nahi hai. It's under 40 kms from tha land. Isliye zoey jetski se asaani se aa gayi idhar. Jetski can travel 120 miles on average on one full tank of gas. Toh uske liye aana asaan tha. Emma ne koi clue nahi diya tha iss baare me.वीर और माइक को छोड़ कर सभी लोग बोट पर समंदर पार कर इस आइलैंड में आए थे और हमें यह भी पता है कि उनकी बोट उनके यहां पहुंचते ही गायब कर दी गई थी ।
सिवाय जोए नाम की फैशन मॉडल के । क्योंकि उन्होंने अपने साधन का नाम ही नहीं बताया था ।
Nightwalker ki saheli toh nahi woh?पुरे घटनाक्रम के दौरान जोए ही ऐसी इंसान थी जो बाकियों से ज्यादा रिलैक्स लगी । उनके ललाट पर पेशानी का बल तो था लेकिन चेहरे पर सुकुन भी था ।
वैसे तो चेस्टर का कत्ल जब हुआ था वो एम्मा के साथ एक कमरे में बंद थी । इसलिए वो नाइट वाकर नहीं हो सकती । यदि वो कुछ हो सकती है तो नाइट वाकर का साइलेंट पार्टनर ।
Agla update padhiyega!!!मगर यह समझ में नहीं आ रहा है कि यह सब क्या था ? लोगों को लालच देकर बुलाना और फिर इस तरह जघन्य तरीके से इनका खून करना... क्या हासिल होने वाला था ?
कोई भी कर्म बेवजह नहीं होता । इन सब चीजों के पीछे क्या वजह रहा होगा ?
There are no secret passages.मुझे लगता है मेंशन का हर कमरा किसी न किसी खुफिया रास्ते से भी जुड़ा हुआ था । और वो रास्ता उन दीवारों से जाता होगा जिन पर पेंटिंग्स टंगी हुई थी । चेस्टर की हत्या ऐसी ही किसी खुफिया रास्ते से जाकर कातिल ने की होगी ।
और यह भी श्योर है कि वो सारे बोट भी समंदर में डुबो दिए गए होंगे ।
यह सारा प्रपंच किसी एक व्यक्ति का नहीं हो सकता । कम से कम दो व्यक्ति तो जरूर होंगे !
Dhanyavaad Bhai!लग तो ऐसा ही रहा है कि वीर को असल माजरा समझ में आ गया है और इस खेल के सूत्रधार को भी ।
देखते हैं नेक्स्ट अपडेट में क्या खुलासा होता है !
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग एंड ब्रिलिएंट अपडेट वेयरवोल्फ भाई ।
Nice n awesome updateUpdate - 102 ~ Exposed (2)
Ab tak...
Veer : I have decoded everything!!!
Tommy : Okay! Tell us!
Veer ne haami bhar seedhe ek picture dikhaayi projector ke jisse dekh waha baithe sabke maatho par silvatein confusion ke maare aa padi,
Tommy apni jagah se uth khada hua,
Tommy : Are you kidding me??? Is this a joke?
Par Veer ne usse koi jawaab na diya.
Ab aage...
Investigation Department ~
Vegas ke iss department me, department ke Head Nolan, athwa waha kaam karne wale sabhi pramukh sadasya, sab ke sab waha maujood the aur apni apni jagah par baithe hue the. Beech me hi ek behad badi sii round table rakhi hui thi, jis par kuch files bikhri hui thi aur unke liye paani ki kuch personal bottles bhi rakhi hui thi.
Nik, Divya aur Suhana jo department ka hissa nahi the, woh bhi unhi sab ke beech baithe the. Aur keval yahi nahi, viraajmaan logo me hi Emma, Tommy aur Zoey bhi saath thi.
Aur unn sab ke saamne projector ke paas khada hua tha...
Veer!!!
Jiski nazre waha baithi tamaam janta par tiki hui thi. Aur unki Veer par.
Nightwalker ke mansion ka poore chapter ko ek full stop lag chuka tha. Par House of the Killers ko nahi. Saath hi Nightwalker ka sach baahar aana baaki tha abhi. Aur issi ke liye Veer yaha tha. Usne na sirf Nightwalker ko pakda tha balki mansion aur Nightwalker se jude sabhi raaz bhi haasil kar liye the.
Ab samay tha, unn sabhi raazo ko ek-ek kar ke kholne ka aur logo ke saamne laane ka...
Divya kursi par baithe Veer par hi nigaahein gadaayi hui thi.
Toh wahi Suhana bhi Veer ko jigyasa bhari nazro se dekh rahi thi.
Aur fir Veer ne khamoshi todi,
Veer : I'm here to disclose all the secrets that I've found.
Nolan (nods) : Go on!
Veer : We all know what happened with us, right?
Mansion ki poori ghatna Mike ne apni zubaani me department ko suna dii thi. Sab ye jaan gaye the waha maut ka kesa nanga naach khela gaya tha. Kitni hi khatarnaak sthiti rahi hogi waha par.
Veer ke sawaal par sabhi ne waha sarr haan me hilaaya.
Par Tommy jo kaanp raha tha woh rote hue achanak hi khada hoke chillaane laga,
Tommy : Fucking hang that motherfucking bastard... *sniff* Aaarrrghhhhhh!!! I will kill him. He killed Chester, my buddy... *sniff* What will I say to his parents? *sniff* I'm screwed... *sniff*
Woh ekdum se bekaabu ho utha, uska emotional breakdown ho gaya achanak. Mike jo uske bagal se baitha tha usne Tommy ko pakad uski peeth par haath ferr usse shaant karaaya aur kuch seconds ke baad jab shaanti fir se chhaa gayi toh Veer ne punah apni baatein rakhi,
Veer : Chester was killed brutally.
Tommy : *sniff* *sniff*
Mike : But it's not possible to do a kill like that with just a mere sickle Veer.
Veer : He might have used some other weapon, Senior Mike.
Mike : That... I see. It's possible!
Nolan : Hmm! We will look into that later. Our team and forensic ones can take care of those things. You tell us what information you acheived about Nightwalker? How did Chester died when the room was locked from the inside? And how did you find the treasure?
Nolan ke sawaal se sabhi ki nazre ek baar fir Veer par tik gayi. Veer ne aisa namumkin kaam jo kar dikhaya tha. Usne ye bhi pata laga liya tha ki kese Chester room ke andar maara gaya tha, kaha aur kese usse treasure jo ki 10 million dollars ki worth ka tha woh mila, Nightwalker kyu aur kese inn kaamo ko anjaam de raha tha ye bhi. Aur na jaane kya kya usse maalum tha jiske liye shayad waha baithe log taiyaar bhi nahi the.
Nightwalker bhi pakda jaa chuka tha. Investigation department waale usse saath hi lekar aaye the. Aur ab woh police ki custody me tha. Uska asli chehra bhi saamne aa chuka tha jaha dikhne me woh bilkul hi ek normal insaan ki hi tarah tha. Koi bhi dekh ke ye nahi bata sakta tha ki woh itna bada khoonkhaar hatyaara tha. Shayad sahi kehte hai log,
Never judge a book by its cover.
Veer ne Nolan ko dekha aur pucha,
Veer : What do you want to know first?
Nolan : Tell me, how he got killed when the door was locked from the inside??
Veer ne ek lambi saans lii aur badi hi asaani se jawaab diya,
Veer : It's simple! Nightwalker came inside, killed Chester and went outside.
*Silence*
Log waha aise ho gaye jese unhe saanp soongh gaya. Kya kaha Veer ne abhi abhi? Nightwalker andar kamre me aaya, Chester ko maara, aur fir waapas nikal gaya? Huh? Mazaak chal raha tha kya? Veer pagla gaya tha kya? Woh sabhi Veer ko aise dekhne lage jese saamne khade kisi namoone ko dekh rahe ho.
Aur sabse pehle toh Tommy hi behka,
Tommy : No No No No!!! Let me tell you the truth. Chester was killed by a ghost guys. You know... Ghost can travel through the walls. Yup! That's it guys. This guy, Veer is just trolling everyone. Hahahaha~
Wo hassa aur akasmaat hi,
Tommy : YOU FUCKERRR!!! DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA WHAT THE HELL YOU ARE SPOUTING??? WE ARE HERE TO HEAR THE SECRET HOW THAT MOTHERFUCKER KILLED MY FRIEND, NOT TO HEAR YOU TALKING BULLSHIT. IF YOU SPEND ONE MORE SEC DOING THAT, I'M TELLING YOU, I'M GONNA BEAT THE SHIT OUTTA YOU... YOU... Ughhhh!!
Iss se pehle ki woh uth ke apna gussa Veer pe nikaal paata, Mike ne usse pakad waapas se seat par patak ke baitha diya.
Mike : Calm down! And behave properly, this ain't your home.
Sab Tommy ko ghoorne lage aur harr ek ki aankhein apne upar paa kar Tommy ko na chaahte hue bhi shaant hona pada.
Nolan : Explain properly!
Veer : It's just as I said. He came inside, killed Chester, and went outside.
Aur Nik jo wahi baitha hua tha usse jese mauka mil gaya, Veer ki sabke saamne dhone ka,
Nik : Hah~ Bullshit! How can someone just come inside without opening the door? There is only one way to enter the room. No one can enter that room without opening the door. Mike told us everything after all. Sir, He is just wasting our time. I bet he didn't find anything--
Nik Nolan ki taraf jhukte hue bola. Uski baat sahi bhi thi. Bina kamre ko khole andar jaaya hi nahi jaa sakta tha. Kyuki ek hi raasta tha bas andar jaane ka. Mike ne bataya tha sabhi ko ki kahi koi bhi secret passage nahi tha. Toh Chester ka yu marr jaana? Woh bhi Nightwalker ka andar aake maarna? Namumkin tha ye poori tarah se.
Par...
Veer : When did I say he didn't open the door?
Nik : Huhhh??
Nik hairaani me Veer ki orr dekha.
Veer : He opened the door, went inside, killed Chester, and came outside. Simple!
Ab toh waha baithi Divya ki bhi bauhe sikudne lagi thi confusion ke maare. Yaha tak ki Mike bhi thoda chintit nazar aa raha tha. Kahi Nolan Veer ko lataad na de.
Veer ka kehna tha ki Nightwalker ne darwaza khola, andar gaya aur Chester ko maar ke waapas baahar aa gaya.
Ye toh saraasar bakwaas thi.
Suhana bhi Veer ko dekh rahi thi. Kuch chinta me bhi thi woh...
Nik : Are you even listening to the shit you are saying?
Veer : I'm telling the truth.
Divya : V-Veer!? Don't stretch this too long. We really want to know. Just tell us.
Veer ne Divya ko dekha, jese maani wo usse tease kar raha tha. Fir usne Nolan ko dekha,
Veer : Ohhh! You wanna know!?
Nik bhi baithe hue jese Veer ko prashn bhari nigaaho se dekhne laga. Woh toh bas mauka dhundh raha tha ki kab Veer koi bachkaani harqat kare aur woh firse uski udaa sake.
'Ye nauseekhiya bhala kya hi raaz jaan paaya hoga?'
Nik apne mann me yahi soch raha tha.
Par idhar Veer inn sab bachkaani harqato se upar uth chuka tha.
'What I'm about to tell them, will blow their minds.'
Sochte hue usne apne haath ko dekha, uske badan ke ruye khade hue the.
[You're still getting goosebumps, Master! Sach me... Ye log taiyaar nahi hai. Aur ye Nightwalker toh sirf dusra hi killler tha Master! Kya ye log aane waali musibato ke liye taiyaar bhi hai ya nahi? I'm getting scared.]
'Don't know!'
Veer ne Nolan se ishaare me permission maangi toh Nolan ne sarr haami me bhara, aur uss se sweekriti milte hi, Veer ne apne bagal me kursi par baithe ek vyakti ko dekha jo laptop par kaam kar raha tha.
Veer ka ishara jese hi usse mila, usne gallery se ek image khol dii, jo saamne projector par ujaagar ho gayi.
Aur usse dekhte hi, sabhi ke maatho par rekhaaye sajj gayi.
Veer : This is the answer to your questions. And now I will unravel the truth.
Nolan : !!??
Mike : That's...!!!
Zoey / Emma : ...
Divya : This is.. What are you implying Veer?
Suhana : V-Veer...!!!
Tommy : Are you kidding me??? This is not a joke.
Par idhar, Tommy ko chorr sabhi serious the.
Veer : Everyone!!! There is a reason why those room numbers were not in order.
Nolan : What do you mean?
Veer : Those room numbers weren't just room numbers...
Uske itna kehte hi, sabse pehle Divya ne react kiya,
Divya : N-No!!! It's can't be... This...!!!
Woh apni seat tak se uth gayi. Uske shareer ke raungte khade ho chuke the. Kyuki saamne jo picture screen par maujood thi,
Wo thi...
Divya : T-They were....
Veer : YES! ATOMIC NUMBERS!!!!
*Booooooooooommmm*
Maano ek visfot hua waha baithe sabhi logo ke mastishq me.
Mike ka muh khula ka khula reh gaya toh wahi Nolan hairat angez me wahi jamm ke reh gaya. Par ye toh abhi kuch nahi tha.
Tommy : Whattt? What the fuck are you talking abo--
Lekin uski baat ko Veer ne beech me hi kaat diya, jab uski nazar seedhe Zoey par gayi,
Veer : What was Chester's room number?
Zoey (jhepte hue) : H-Huh!! That... It... It was 50.
Aur Zoey ke muh se itna nikalte hi Veer ne screen par doosri slide pesh kar dii.
Divya ne kuch baat pakad lii thi. Par usse abhi aur jhatka lagna baaki tha.
Tommy : But... But... What does that have to do with Chester getting killed?
Thik hai ki Veer ne ye raaz khol diya tha ki woh room numbers atomic numbers the par Chester ka marrna iss sab se kese mel khaa raha tha bhala?
Aur iss sawaal ka uttar bhi Veer ne agli slide dikha ke de diya.
Jese hi unhone woh dekha, waha baithe sab ke andar ke taar hil ke reh gaye. Divya ki toh rooh hi kaanp gayi.
Tommy, Zoey aur Emma sab hakke bakke hoke bas screen dekh rahe the. Woh kuch kehne laayak hi nahi bache the.
Screen par likha tha~
Nolan : That... That means...
Veer : Yes!!!! He melted it.
*Booooooooooommmm*
Ek aur visfot hua unke dimaag ke andar.
Mike : B-But how....!???
Veer : Tin! Melting point of tin is approx 232° C. He melted it by using gas burner. The ones which we use in campings.
Veer ki baat sunn unke poore jism me raungte khade ho gaye. Reedh ki haddi tak ek sihran daud gayi.
Nightwalker ne darwaaze ke ek metal bar ki boundary ko gas burner ke saamne ek nozzle laga ke pighlaaya...
Aur pighalte hi, usne uss bar ko kheech ke baahar nikaala. Andar haath daal ke usne kamre ki chatakni ko khola...
*Click*
Aur woh Chester ke room me hathiyaar leke ghusa.
*Slaaaaaaaaashhhhhhhhhh*
*Hhhhaaacccckkkkkkkkkkkk*
Chester ko kaatata raha jab tak woh do tukdo me na batt gaya. Aas paas bikhra khoon pocha,
Kambal se uske shareer ko dhaka, aur baahar aaya.
Waapas se haath daal ke andar se kundi band kii aur gas burner se dobaara uss metal bar ko pighla ke weld kar diya.
*Booooooooooommmm*
Ek aur zordaar jhatka unko laga jab Veer ke muh se ye sab vistaar me suna. Aisa lag raha tha jese unhone bhoot dekh liya tha koi apni aankho ke saamne.
Jese bilkul maatam sa chhaa gaya tha. Koi awaaz nahi nikal rahi thi unke muh se. Aankhein bhay ke maare feli hui thi, shareer khauf aur darr ke maare kaanp raha tha. Aur honth aapas me kasse hue the. Ekdum band.
Ab unhe iss baat ka andaaza laga tha ki woh kitne bade criminals ke saath deal kar rahe the. Aur ye House of Killers koi choti moti gang ka hissa nahi thi. Ab jaake iss baat se woh dhang se avgat hue the.
Divya ladkhada ke apni seat par gir padi. Darr ke maare uski aankhein phel chuki thi.
Jitne bhi room numbers the. Metals me Tin ho tha waha jiska melting point sabse kam tha. Aur gas can burner se usse melt karna koi bhaari kaam nahi tha.
Chester ki maut tabhi tay ho gayi thi. Jis waqt usne room number 50 chuna tha.
He died there only.
Veer ne jab Nightwalker ko baandhne ke baad check kiya tha toh,
*Ding*
[Name : Noah White.]
Alias Name : Nightwalker.
Age : 34
Bio : Noah White aka Nightwalker is a member of the House of the Killers. He likes paintings. He takes drugs from Jim, exchanges them with the expensive wines and beers. He has a fetish to kill people and see their blood coming out. Has killed his own family members, and others with a total count of 93 people. His mansion's key cards sells for only 8 people twice in a row per month. He was a technician and a welder before.
Favourability : -45
Relationship : Enemies.]
Jab Veer ne ye padha tha tab usne inn details par kuch khaas dhyaan nahi diya tha. Waha se nikalte waqt usse khaali gas burners ke cans bhi dikhe the. Par usne dhyaan nahi diya tha.
Aur woh Mike ko apni peeth par laad ke upar le gaya tha.
Parantu Mike ko ek kamre me litaane ke baad jab woh Chester ke kamre se guzar raha tha. Toh neeche pade hue darwaaze par jese hi uski nazar gayi,
'Check'
*Ding*
[A metal door with a welded metal bar.]
'Huh? Ye pehle toh nahi tha!'
Jab Veer ne apne kamre ke darwaaze ko check kiya tha tab to description me likh ke aaya tha,
[A metal door.]
Aur ab...
Lekin tabhi...!
'Huhhh???'
Veer ke mann me Nightwalker ka bio ek baar punaah saamne aaya.
'He was a Technician and a Welder before.'
Welder... Welder... Metal door with Welded Metal bar ....
'This...!!!!'
Aur isliye... Veer ke badan me ruye khade hue the. Usse itne zyaada goosebumps aaye the.
Woh ladkhada ke gir gaya tha wahi. Jis shaatir dimaag se Nightwalker ne Chester ko maara tha. Veer ke soch ke hi raungte khade ho gaye the.
'Ek second... Technician...! Huh??'
Aur tabhi usse Nightwalker ke saath ladaayi ka scene yaad aaya. Kese Nightwalker ne current ki taaro ka istemal uss par kia tha.
'N-Noooo!!!'
Now, everything was making sense.
'So he was planning this all.'
Veer apni saari baato ko bata ke jab shaant hua toh waha par logo ke chehre dekhne laayak the. Woh sab besudh se baithe Veer ko dekh rahe the. Keval unki saaso ki hi awaaz aa rahi thi.
Mike : But where's the treasure???
Veer ne Mike ke sawaal ka jawaab nahi diya. Balki usne Zoey ko dekha aur pucha,
Veer : And your room number was...
Zoey : M-My... Mine was... 79... Huh??
Bolne ke baad uski nazre turant hi uss periodic table par gayi. Aur jese hi usne dekha...
Uska badan thitur utha. Kaanpte hue usne apne haath se seene par apne top ko kass ke bheench liya.
Kyuki agli slide me saamne tha...
Zoey (kaapte hue) : Th-This....
79, Atomic number of Gold!!! Yaani sona... Zoey ke room me tha? Jis room me woh itni derr tak thi ussi room me 10 million dollars ka sona chhipa hua tha!???
Veer ko jab pata chala tha ki Nightwalker me aise Chester ko maara tha toh woh fauran hi Zoey ke kamre ki orr bhaaga tha.
Yadi Chester ka room door Tin se bana tha toh fir, Zoey ke room ka darwaaza toh..
79!!!! Gold se bana hona chahiye tha.
Apne room se teeno logo ko neeche bhej woh Zoey ki room ki orr bhaaga,
Aur...
'Check'
*Ding*
[A Metal door.]
Par koi fayda nahi. Veer ne scratch kar upar ki parat hataani chaahi. Kahi aisa toh nahi iss swarn par koi coating chadhi hui thi? Par koi fayda nahi. Ye metal door sone ka nahi tha.
Ek antim baar search karne ke liye woh room me gaya.
Aur ghuste hi jese hi usne saamne dekha...
*Ding*
'No... So I was right!!!!!!'
"Veer??? Veeeerrr???"
Veer apne hosh me firse aaya jab Mike ne usse pukaara.
Mike : The treasure?
Veer ne Mike ko dekha, Aur eka-ek,
Usne taali bajaayi,
Tabhi, Darwaza khula, aur do ladke kisi bhaari sii cheez ko pakad ke lekar aaye aur table par rakh diye. Poori cheez ek laal kapde se dhaki hui thi.
Nolan : Don't tell me....
*Flaaaaaaaappppppppp*
Veer ne ek baar me uss par se woh laal kapda hata diya tha. Aur unke saamne tha...
Poora sone ka bana hua flower vase. Uski chamakti roshni unki aankho me pad iss baat ka saboot de rahi thi ki woh ekdum asli aur ucchh koti ka sona tha.
Zoey apni jagah se bhauchakii hoke khadi ho gayi,
Zoey : But this wasn't there before...
Divya : Veer!! Don't you fucking tell me...
Veer (smiles) : Oh yes indeed...
Divya : *gulps*
Veer (grins) : He melted it!!!
*Booooooooooommmm*
Aur iss akhiri visfot ke saath Veer ne sab kuch unke saamne khol ke rakh diya.
Nightwalker ne sone ke biscuits bhi pighla ke usse vase ke andar bhar diya tha.
Kisne kaha tha ki Golden bars sirf solid state me hi maujood thi Mansion me? Woh apne liquified state me bhi toh ho sakti thi?
Aur yahi tha raaz. Issi kaaran se uss pighle hue sone ne flower vase ka aakaar le liya tha. Nightwalker ne jaan boojh ke uske upar fir mitti daali, aur fir ek do phool bhi laga diye the.
Saath hi usne jaan boojh ke darwaaze ko gold se nahi banwaaya tha. Woh bewakoof nahi tha. Yadi woh aisa karta aur Veer ki tarah kli ye andaza laga leta ki bars darwaze me hai toh woh sabhi tob yu hi khazana chura lete.
Aur isliye usne golden bars ko iss tarah chhupaaya. Kisi ka shaq jaana hi nahi tha flower vase pe kyuki itne bade golden bars flower vase ke muh ke andar kese ghuste bhala?
Par kya yahi kehna tab waajib hota jab sona pighla hua ho? Shayad nahi!?
Mike : But what about those paintings???
Veer : Those were just a deception Senior Mike.
Mike : A-Ahhh!!!
Emma : What about our boats???
Veer : Isn't it obvious? He hid them!!!
Emma : That's...
Nolan : There were cameras too...
Veer : Yes!!! Whoever were watching us, they have probably been alerted. So oir next Target is them only.
*Clap* *Clap* *Clap*
Agle hi pal, Nolan ne taaliyaa bajaani shuru kar dii,
Nolan : Incredible!! In all my years of duty, I've never seen a young man like you unraveling mystery like this. You have brought us pride and respect. You will get reward for this gentleman. The findings... You'll get some Percentage of this treasure.
Veer (smiles) : Not just me. Senior Mile helped me a lot too. He should be equally rewarded.
Mike : Ahhh!! V-Veer... There's no need to--
Nolan : A wise gentleman! I like it. Okay then. I'll hand over both of your names.
Itna bol Nolan waha se nikal gaya aur Veer aur Mike dono ke liye hi tareefo ke pul baandhe jaane lage.
Veer ek dil ka saccha insaan tha. Usse kiske saath kesa behave karna hai ye bakhoobi aata tha. Usse reward ke roop me dhan raashi milne waali thi. Toh usne Mike ka naam bhi aage kar diya.
Aur kyu na kare? Jab koi nahi tha uske saath Island par jaane ke liye, tab bina kisi swaarth ke Mike ne apna naam aage badhaaya tha.
Toh jab inaam batt raha ho toh Mike ka naam toh usme aana hi tha. Idhar Mike hi nahi, sabhi ke mann me Veer ke prati izzat kaafi badh gayi.
Par aise bhi log the jo ekdum hi jal bhun gaye the iss baat pe... Aur unhi me se ek tha hamaara bandar...
Nik!!!
Woh toh daant peese Veer aur Mike ko ghoor raha tha. Aisi gaand jal rahi thi uski ki chunune kaat rahe the usse pichwade me...
Kherr! Ant bhala toh sab bhala.
Ye discussion samaapt hua, mritak logo ke mata pita ko inform kar diya gaya tha, unke liye toh maatam bann gaya tha.
Zoey bina kuch kahe hi waha se nikal chuki thi. Shayad ye sab hazam karna uske liye kuch zyaada hi tha. Usse apne mann ko sambhaalne ke liye waqt chahiye tha.
Wahi Emma Veer ke paas aayi aur uss se sirf itna boli,
"Meet me tonight here only. Outside the department @ 8:30."
Aur woh chali gayi.
***
Time ~ 8:17 PM
Raatri ka samay ho chuka tha. Aur koi bhi abhi Ghar nahi gaya tha. Veer, Suhana, Divya Nik sab yahi maujood the department me aur baaki ki chhaan been me lage hue the.
Mike ke sang Veer baahar aaya aur raaste par dono tehelne lage. Itna sab kuch aaj unhone jaana tha. Na jaane aage kya hone wala tha unke saath.
Mike ne cigarette ka dabba jeb se nikaala aur Veer ki orr badhaaya,
Toh Veer ne muskuraate hue dabbe se ek cigarette nikaal lii.
*Click*
Lighter jala ke Mike ne Veer ki cigarette ko aanch dii aur fir usne apni jalaayi,
Ek kash hawa me chorrte hue fir woh bola,
Mike : It was outstanding Veer! You did a splendid job.
Veer : You are being too humble.
Mike : No! You are being too modest.
Veer : Haha~ That's you over-praising me.
Mike : I'm just telling the truth.
Veer (smiles) : Alright! I'll take that...
Mike : Yes! After all you disclosed everything...
Veer : Disclose huh!!
Mike : Hmmm?
Veer tabhi achanak aage badhne laga, Mike ko wahi akela chorr ke,
Mike : Where are you heading to?
Veer ne bina peeche mude hi jawaab diya,
"To disclose someone else's secret."
Mike : Huh?!?
Mike ki samajh nahi aaya ki Veer aur kiske raaz kholne ki baat kar raha tha bhala?
Fir bhi, woh Veer ko akela chorr usse uski privacy dete hue, apni cigarette phek andar department me chala gaya.
***
Mumbai...
Night ~ 8:29 PM
Ek aurat stylish sii saree pehne idhar se udhar ho rahi thi. Gusse me bhi thi woh aur thodi vyakul bhi.
Saamne ki seat par ek naujavaan ladka baitha hua tha jo computer ke keyboard par apne haath fatafat chalaaye jaa raha tha.
Tabhi peeche se uss aurat ki awaaz aayi,
"Hua????"
"Try kar raha hu madam. Ye sahi toh hai na?"
"Bilkul!! Sab sahi hai. Tum bas apna kaam furti me karo."
Aur jii haa, ye koi aur nahi...
Mardo se nafrat karne waali, Niharika hi thi.
Aur uske saamne seat par baitha woh ladka tha, ek hacker!!!
Jo Veer ke phone ko hack karne ki koshish kar raha tha.
Niharika : Kuch hua?
Ladka : Try kar raha hu madam. Yadi log in credentials sahi hai toh other devices se log in karna possible hai. Cloud and all... You know...
Niharika : Okay! Jaldi karo...
Uski bechaini badhti hi jaa rahi thi. Par saath hi uske andar jeetne ka ek junoon bhi tha. Yadi woh Veer ke phone se woh video le leti hai toh fir toh woh Veer se apne talwe chatwa sakti thi. Soch kar hi uska excitement aur badh raha tha.
Usne key logger install kiya tha Veer ke phone me. Ek tarah ka aisa app jo aapki keys ko record karta tha. Yaani aapke haath mobile ke keyboard par kitni baar kaha kaha chal rahe hai, kaun sa shabd zyaada use ho raha hai, otp, ya pin wagarah daalte samay kaun se numbers ko dabaaya jaa raha hai. Inn sab ka record rakhta tha.
Beshaq! Ek khatarnak app tha ye...
Niharika ke mann hi mann me laddu phoot rahe the jab achanak hi,
*Ring* *Ring*
Uska phone baja,
'Huh?'
Aur usne screen dekhi apne phone ki...
Par jese hi usne screen par nazre gadaayi, uski rooh kaanp gayi. Screen par likha tha~
Incoming call
Bastard....
Issi naam se usne Veer ka number save kiya hua tha.
Aur wo padhte hi... Uski sitti pitti gul ho gayi.
'Th-This bastard!!! Why now???'
Kaapte hue usne phone pick kiya,
Niharika : H-Hello...!?
Veer : So my slave is getting naughty huh?
Niharika : Wh-Whaaattt?
Veer : Ho gaya hack?
Niharika (jhepte hue) : Huhhhhh!!!!
Veer : Tumhe kya lagta hai? Tum mujhse zyada smart ho? Yadi hoti toh meri slave na hoti... Kya hua? Bolti band ho gayi kya?
Niharika : ....
Veer : Confused ho? Ki kese mujhe pata chala? My dear slave!!! Jis din tumne mere phone key logger install kiya tha na, uss din hi mujhe pata chal gaya tha. Aur jis data se tum hack karne ki koshish kar rahi ho.... It's fake...
Niharika : W-Wo...wo... Wo...
Agle hi shan, Veer ki awaaz achanak hi ekdum buland aur itni intimidating ho gayi,
Veer : Don't play with fire! Waha aaunga toh bhaag nahi paogi....
*Thud*
Sunte hi Niharika ke haath se uska phone chhutak ke gira aur woh dagmaga ke bistar par gir padi. Poora chehra uska paseene se bheeg gaya darr ke chalte...
Aur tabhi, saamne baithe hue ladke ne kaha,
Ladka : Madam! Data sach me sahi hai na?
Bechaara ladka. Niharika ye sunte hi itni aag baboola ho gayi, uska gussa saatve aasmaan par pohuch gaya aur woh zorr se chillaayi,
Niharika : Nikal jaao!!! Nikal jao yaha se!!!
Ladka : H-Huhh?? Madam?
Niharika : Nikalte ho ya nahi??? You bastard!!!
Iss se pehle ki Niharika usse kuch utha ke phek ke maarti, woh bechaara ladka gaand phati ke maare bhaag gaya waha se.
'Tch!!!! Worthless men!!!!'
Mardo ko gaali bak, Woh wahi padi padi apni saasein durust karne lagi. Veer ke shabd uske mann me goonjte rahe...
***
Las Vegas
Investigation Department
Time : 8:38 PM
Idhar Veer ne jese hi Niharika se baat kar phone kaata, bagal se usse ek jaana maana shaks aata hua nazar aaya,
Emma!!!
8:30 ka milne ka bola tha usne. Luckily, Veer baahar hi tha.
Emma : It's good that you're here.
Veer : So? What's the matter?
Emma : I wanted to tell you something.
Veer : Finally opening up huh?
Emma : Y-Yeaahhh!!
Veer : !!!?
Emma : Actually... Actually, I went there illegally. I... I stole a yacht from a rich person. That's why I didn't tell you giys earlier.
Veer : Ohhhh! That's it?
Emma : Y-Yeah!
Sharmindagi ke maare Emma ne sarr jhuka liya. Baat zara sii thi. Par shayad Emma ke liye badi thi.
Usne ek ameer vyakti ki yacht churaayi thi mansion me aane ke liye. Aur isliye wo ye kisi ko batana nahi chahti thi.
Emma (blushes) : Can I... Can I come with you?
Veer : Huh? I'm not from here. I'm from India.
Emma : Wh-Whaaaattt???
Veer (smiles) : Yes!
Emma : O-Okkaaayy!! So you don't need any assistant? What work you do there?
Veer : I have a business.
Emma : Then how about a assistant? I... I can work for you ...
Veer kuch kehta tabhi usne dekha ki Department se Nolan baahar nikal apni car me baith raha hai. Saath hi ek khubsoorat mahil uske liye darwaaza bhi khol rahi thi. Jo ki uske secretary thi.
Veer : Man! I do need a professional secretary though.
Veer ki nigaaho ko follow kar Emma ne uss orr dekha.
Emma : A professional secretary huh!? I think it's time to leave then...
Veer : Hmm? Ohhh!
Emma bina kuch kahe Veer ko bas kuch palo ke liye dekhi aur waha se palat ke woh nikal gayi.
Idhar Veer uske jaate hi department me jab andar aaya... Toh Suhana aur Divya aapas me behas kar rahi thi,
Suhana : You fuckiinngggg know something... Tell me what the fuck you are hiding? Huh? Bolo! Kya chhupa rahi ho mujhse?
Divya : Urgghh! Jaan'na hai tumhe? Fine then!!! Ye lo!!! Tumhe yaad hai na kis liye bulaaya tha mene tumhe? Ye lo fir...
Kehte hue usne ek card feka jo seedha Suhana ke muh pe land kiya,
Haatho me pakad jab usne uss card ko dekha toh woh hairaani ke maare hil ke reh gayi,
"Whaaaaaaattttttttttttt!!!????"
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
This update consists of more than 4.8k words. This took a lot of my time. Toh like thokne ka dil se aur revos rakhne ka.
Dhanyavaad!
Rihanna bata do kaha se snacks leti ho...जे हुयी न कोनो बात, अब कल रात की तैयारी आज से ही करने जा रिया है अपन...
दारू तो है अपन के पास...
बस स्नैक्स कहा से लाऊँ यही पता न चल रहा है
कोई बता दो की कहा से लाऊँ स्नैक्स..?
Ye kya tha man!?oohhh yahan to bohut se bhashan mere liye maujud han.. MY GOD ..
"malik saab.. malik saab"
"chup kar saali noori mujhe reviews padhne de"
"malik saab main mar jaaungi.. bouht dard ho raha hai mujhe.. holi holi paao"
"noori kameeni tu chup nahi karegi kyaaa.. Werewolf bhai ke thread par mela laga hua ha.. aur tu hai keh chup hi nahi kar rahi.. aram se le mera lauda"
sorry sorry sab se sorry.. wo kya hai naa keh saali noori raat ko aane wali thi.. nahi aayi to lund ka maal na nikal paane ki waja se kuch zayada hi bol gaya.. ek baar ise chod lun .. lund ka maal nikal kar fresh ho lun.. fir sukun se review dunga.. main pagal thodi na hon SIR jo kisi writer ko bura bhala bulonga..
wo to mera lund tha jo mujhe kuch sahi se sochne nahi de raha tha.. abb aapke sath juda hon to kuch achha bhi likhunga naa..
uska jawab diya hai ussne kal raat ko hi check kro 2-3 page piche jaakrYe kya tha man!?
Dhanyavaad bhai!Bahot khoob shaandaar update bhai
Chester ko bhi beech se 2 tukodo m bant dia night Walker n lekin kaise jab ki aane jaane k lie sirf ek darwaza tha
Baherhal Night Walker pakda gaya case solve kia Veer n lekin swal yeh ki jab Veer n Chester k room fir se dekha tow waha aisa kia jisse Veer tow Veer Pari ki bhi halat kharab ho gayi
Baherhal dekhte h Veer kia batata h h kaise kia usne itna bada case solve
Besabri se intizar rehega aapke agle update ka bhai
Bahot lajawab update bhai
Waapas se shaan se baith gaya hai bhai.bhai pehle badshah chehra dikhate hue shaan se baitha tha.. abb chehra kyun chhupa rakha hai usne ???????
Hm! Koi bhi hoga toh duwidha me aa jaega. Upar se Sonia hai bhi khubsoorat. Aur saamne se maafi maang rahi hai. Gaadi woh khud chala bhi nahi rahi thi. Driver chala raha tha. Toh maaf kar dena hi sahi tha. Veer ne wahi kiya...Hypothetical situation us takkr ki wajah se uski waha pohochi jaha aaj vo hai or vo ladki uske liye usse mafi mang rahi, ispr to use emotions bhi smj nahi aa rhe honge ki vo react kese kare or to or vo ladki bhi itni hot, I can't even think that how i would react. (Sorry for bad English )
Ohhh!! Haan ho gaya hoga bhai. Maybe shayad mene ye update proofread na kiya ho. Aise hi post kar diya ho. Tabhi aisa dikh raha hoga.Bhai story is going on a amazing track but mene ek bohot choti si galti pata nahi shayad use galti kahenge bhi ya nahi pr me apko bata chahta tha ki aap kai jagah pr "yadi" word ka use kr rahe hai kai scene ese bhi hai jaha kafi high figh log baith kr bate kr rahe rahe hai English me bate chal rahi hai apne waha bhi "yadi" word ko use kiya hai jo ki muje lgta hai ki thoda sa ajib hai mtlb ki aap waha "agar" sabd ko bhi use kr skte hai hr scene me apne "yadi" hi use kiya hai bas yehi muje sahi nahi laga baki sab mast hai or bro bura mat manna me bas suggestion de rha tha aap kafi acha likh rahe ho
Accha? Zara vistaar me samjhaane ka man.Werewolf bro Chaad se thode se bade hai aur Suraj se thode se chote baaki sab log samajhdaar hain to andza laga hi sakte hain.
Thanks brother!super fantastic mind-blowing update Bhai. Kaera ka rona sign hai ke woh veer ke pyar me pad gai kyo na pade 3-3 bar Uski jaan ko bachaya Toh emotions toh ayenge hi. Dusri trf ragini ka bhi wahi haal-E-dil hai jisko suman smjh chuki hai bss ragini ko smjhna baki hai. Ek anaar pta nahi kitne bimar hone wali hai. Kaera ka baap to kameeno Ka sardar lg rha hai neech insaan sala jisne uski beti ko bachaya usko marne ki soch rha hai swarthi sala Aise baap ko vridha ashram me bhej do toh koi paap nahi. Suhana nd jassi ki Team ne puri jaan lga di lekin veer nahi mila thodi der bhi lga diya inlogo ne pahunchne me Divya ki baaton se suhana ka sharmana veer ko lekar Kya suhana bhi veer ke trf attract hai. Veer ka pari ko lekar itna possessive hona lazmi hai itna wqt se sath rhna ldna jhgdna adat lag gai hai veer ko pari ki, Lat si lag gai hai. Pari bhi veer ke liye utna hi fikrmand hai veer ka kuch na bolna pari se bardasht na hua bhot Care krti hai. ND me finally veer ko legendary Card mil gya 1600 point invest krke jisse ek trh se veer super human Ho gya hai. Ab bss veer ke karamaat ko dekhna hai Kya hota hai agey
Sabko hi wahi mast lagti hai.Ye aapne ekdum sahi kia Sir...
ab easily navigate kar sakte h ...
Aur ye kya Aapne dp badal lii??? Ye wali bhi acchi h... Par par par...
mujhe to wahi purani wali mast lagti h..
Wahi toh lagi hui hai.
Koi na man! Chill! Jaan ke khushi hui ki dasvi ke launde bhi story padh rahe hai.And sorry bro I am continuously reading your story and I wrote nothing for you .
And here what you called it silent reader that's I am.
Actually I wanna review your update but I can't bcz lack of time I don't have that much time to create new account on xf and then review your story bcz I am in 10th board and I'm 15 I do 3 classes just in one year my father is really very much strict about my studies
Man! Har kisi ko dusre ki life apni se behtar lagti hai. Jiske paas cycle hai, woh bike waale se jalta hai. Jisle paas bike hai woh car waale se jalta hai. Ye toh hona hi hai. Strive to become a successful person. Grind karo. Mehnat karo. You'll achieve what you want. Thanks for coming here and sharing your feelings. Yadi samay mile to beech beech me aate rehna.My father set a routine for me to do such things that was useless in their eyes.
That's why I can't I have half hour to use mobile.
Literally I was bored with my life
And your story is entertain me when I think my life cringe.
I don't know what is xf my friend told me about it and then I found your story
Thank you so much bro
For entertaining me and all of us
Ohhh.. ahh I waste 10 min to write this
Now I feel free bcz i share my feelings with all of them who are reading this story
Thanks bro!Super awsm update brother
Stories bht read kri h bro but aisa mja kisi me ni mila really good brother to gud.
eagerly waiting for next update plz do cont asap and Takecare
Ohhhh!! Ab kal check karega apun. 1854 se replies dene hai. Unke kal aaenge...uska jawab diya hai ussne kal raat ko hi check kro 2-3 page piche jaakr