Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

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Update - 103 ~ A Day to Breathe Out​

Ab tak...

Suhana : You fuckiinngggg know something... Tell me what the fuck you are hiding? Huh? Bolo! Kya chhupa rahi ho mujhse?

Divya : Urgghh! Jaan'na hai tumhe? Fine then!!! Ye lo!!! Tumhe yaad hai na kis liye bulaaya tha mene tumhe? Ye lo fir...

Kehte hue usne ek card feka jo seedha Suhana ke muh pe land kiya,

Haatho me pakad jab usne uss card ko dekha toh woh hairaani ke maare hil ke reh gayi,

"Whaaaaaaattttttttttttt!!!????"

Ab aage...

Mumbai...
Purvi's Home...
Morning ~ 8:32 AM

*Klink*

"Ye lo beta, chai!"

Saucer plate par chai se bhara cup rakhte hue Purvi ne kaha.

Saamne sofe par baithi hui thi Tej, aur uske hi bagal se virajmaan thi, Bhavna.

Uss din ke baad se, Purvi ne dono Maa beti ko hotel se check out karwa ke apne ghar me thehra liya tha.

Purvi ke pati wahi Mumbai me hi sthit ek sarkaari school ke principal the. Unn dono ki ek santaan bhi hai. Ek beta, jiska naam Tushar hai. Tushar Veer se keval ek saal hi chota hai aur woh medical ki padhayi hetu AIIMS me Delhi me shift ho chuka hai.

Usne fir ek cup chai ka Bhavna ki saucer plate par rakha, aur fir tray me se ek cup apne liye uthaate hue wahi dining table ki ek chair par baith gayi.

Purvi : Kuch pata laga kya fir?

Uske iss sawaal se Bhavna hairat me uski orr dekhi. Ye kya puch rahi thi woh? Bagal me Tej baithi hui thi. Fir bhi aisa sawaal? Purvi ka sawaal Veer ki khoj ke liye tha. Aur usne Tej ke saamne hi ye prashn puch liya. Zaahir tha ki Bhavna usse ajeeb nazro se dekhe,

Purvi (baat sambhaalte hue) : Ahh! Mera matlab tha ki, kuch pata laga kya kaam ke baare me? Tumne kaha tha na ki kaam chorr ke yaha par aayi ho tum. Toh koi dikkat toh nahi yadi tum yaha kuch aur din ruk jao toh?

Bhavna : R-Right! Nahi! Filhaal aisi koi pareshaani nahi hai.

Purvi (nakli hassi lete hue) : Ahahaha~ Okay!

Bhavna (awkwardly) : Hmm!

*Silence*

Dono ka yeh nakli naatak khatam hua aur ek ajeeb sii shaanti phel gayi kamre me.

Unhe laga ki akhir kaar woh Tejal se baat chhupaane me qamyaab ho gayi par...

Tej : 2 points for your acting.

Purvi : Huhh???

Bhavna : ???

Woh dono usse stabdh nazro se dekhi,

Tej : I said two points for your acting. Ye naatak khatam kar dijiye Mom, Aur maasi aap bhi. Aap dono ki hi acting bilkul bhi nahi jach rahi hai.

*Shwwwwooooooppppp*

Usne chai ki chuski lete hue kaha,

Tej : By the way, Chai acchi hai.

Purvi : T-Tej beta!

Bhavna : Tej! Tum...

Tej (dono ko dekhte hue) : Hmm! Sab pata hai mujhe. Wahi baat jo aap mujhse itne saalo se chhipaate aa rahi thi. Sab jaanti hu mein. I know ki mera ek saga chota bhai bhi hai. Aur woh bhi issi sheher me.

*Silence*

Purvi ka toh pata nahi, par Bhavna ko zaroor 440 volt ka jhatka laga tha. Jis raaz ko woh barso se chhipaate aayi, woh uske bina pata lage hi khul chuka tha?

Purvi (frowns) : Bhavna...!

Bhavna ne ek lambi saas lii aur chai ka cup waapas table par rakh diya,

Bhavna : K-Kab? Kab pata chala tumhe ye?

Raaz par se ab parda chuki khul hi chuka tha toh usse bekaar me firse dhaakne ki koi zaroorat nahi thi. Isliye, Bhavna ne shaanti se sawaal kiya,

Tej : Last year!

Bhavna : ????

Tej : Jab aap aur mein Rajasthan me the. Site par...

Tej ki nazre neeche jhuki hui thi. Jese maano woh ateet ko yaad kar rahi thi. Woh lamha jab usse apne bhai ke astitv ke baare me pehli baar pata chala tha.

Bhavna : Rajasthan me? T-Tab kese!? Mein toh...

Tej : Survey ki ek raat... Jab aap apne camp me thi...

Bhavna : Huh!!!

Tej : Mein aapse baat karne ke liye aa rahi thi. Par, jab tak aapke camp tak pohuchi, mene dekha ki...

Bhavna : !!??

Tej : Aap ro rahi thi. Seene se aap ek bacche ke chote se kapde ko bheenche hue thi. Haatho me ek photograph thi aapke. Aur, Mujhe yaad hai aapke woh bol. "Mera baccha!" "Kesa hoga tu ab?" "Dekh! Teri Maa kese tadap rahi hai yaha." "Kya tujhe yaad nahi aa rahi apni Maa ki?" "Tujhe pata bhi hai tere bina kese jee rahi hu mein?" "Par mein majboor hu mere laal. Mein majboor hu."

Bhavna achambhav me Tej ki saari baatein sunn rahi thi. Usse yaad aaya ki usne sach me uss raat yahi vaakya bole the. Toh kya Tej ne woh sab sunn liya tha?

Par yaha Tej aur Bhavna dono hi nahi jaante the ki jab woh Rajasthan se waapsi kar rahe the. Uss raat hi...

Tej toh apni birth par so chuki thi. Uss raat hi Bhavna apne bete Veer se mili thi. Jiske baare me usse pata bhi nahi tha. Ye wahi pal tha, jab Veer Suhana aur Sonia ki mom ki anguthi waale chor ko pakadne train par sawaar hoke Rajasthan aaya tha. Aur jaipur ke station se baith ke woh Suman, Aabha aur Sonali ko Mumbai leke jaa raha tha jab,

Ek aurat dusre platform par alag train me baithe paani ki bottle ke liye request kar rahi thi. Ye Bhavna hi toh thi. Jo survey ke baad se apne ghar laut rahi thi.

Par na hi Tej aur na hi Bhavna ye baat jaanti thi ki unke raaste aapas me iss tarah bhi mil chuke hai.

Bhavna khamosh reh gayi. Kya kehti ab? Sab kuch toh saamne tha.

Purvi (sighs) : Ek na ek din toh ye hona hi tha. Balki mujhe toh khushi hai ki akhir kaar Tej beta tumhe iss baat ka pata chala. Warna tumhari ye Maa na jaane kab tak ye raaz chhipaati rehti.

Bhavna : Tej mein...

Woh kehne ke liye daayi orr mudi par apne saamne usne jo dekha woh dekh ke Bhavna dang reh gayi,

Tej ki aankho se aasu beh rahe the. Kab dekha tha usne apni nidar beti ko iss tarah naino se paani ki boonde bahaate hue? Shayad Bhavna ko yaad bhi na hoga ki akhiri baar usne kab Tej ko iss qadar rote dekha tha. Par aaj...

Aaj woh ro rahi thi. Woh jaanti thi ki uski beti Tej ko zara bhi pasand nahi tha ki koi usse rota hua dekhe. Aur aaj toh...

Woh na keval uske saamne, balki apni maasi Purvi ke bhi saamne ro rahi thi. Ye ishaara tha ki uski peeda kitni zyaada thi.

Tej : K-Kyu?? Kyu kiya aapne aisa?

Bhavna ki khud ki aankho se anayas hi aasu nikal pade.

Bhavna : Beta...!!!

Tej : Kuch puch rahi hu mein... *sniff* Huh? Boliye! Kyu kiya aapne aisa?

Purvi : Tej! Meri baat suno, mein bataati hu...

Par iske pehle ki Purvi apni baat poori rakh paati, Tej apni jagah se uthi aur,

Tej : WOH SIRF AAPKA BETA HI NAHI HAI!!!!! WOH MERA SAGA BHAI BHI HAI!!!!!

Woh itni zorr se chillaayi ki waha baithi Purvi bhi avak reh gayi.

Tej : Kya soch ke aapne mujhse ye sach chhupaaya tha??? Haaaaannn??? Tell meee!!!!! Aapki himmat kese hui mujhse mere hi bhai ka astistv chhupaane ki???? Boliyeeee!!!!

Bhavna ki aankho se aasuo ki dharaaye behna shuru ho chuki thi. Aur uska shareer kaanpne laga,

Purvi ne jese hi ye dekha woh agle hi pal aage badh Bhavna ko thaam ke uske bagal se baith gayi.

Purvi (frowns) : Tej! Meri baat suno...

Tej ne apni maa ki haalat jab dekhi toh usse bhi ye ehsaas hua ki woh kuch zyaada hi bol gayi thi. Agle hi shan woh waha se palti aur apne kamre me jaake,

*THUUUUUDDDDDD*

Usne zorr se darwaaza band kar liya,

Purvi : Teeeeeejjjj!!!!

Purvi ne usse pukaara par, Bhavna ne uska haath thaam liya.

Bhavna : Rehne do Purvi! Rehne do! Usse akela rehne do thodi derr! Mein hi ek acchi Maa na bann saki. Isme uss bechaari ka koi dosh nahi... *sniff* koi dosh nahi!!!

Purvi (frowns) : Bhavna....!!!

Idhar kamre ke andar Tej darwaaze se tike zorr zorr se ro rahi thi. Na jaane kab iske pehle woh iss tarah royi thi. Usse khud bhi yaad nahi tha.

Woh itni kamzor toh nahi thi. Fir kyu? Harr baar jab bhi baat uske bichhde bhai se sambandhit aati thi toh kyu woh iss tarah toot sii jaati thi? Itni kamzor pad jaati thi? Woh toh mili bhi nahi thi uss se theek se.

Khud ke bhaar ko bed par patakte hue usne apna phone khola aur saamne screen par ek tasveer dekh, uske aasu aur zorr se behne lage,

'Kyuuu??? Aisa mere saath hi kyu hota hai??? And why it had to be you?? Do you have any idea that your Mom and big sis exists too?'

Siski bharte hue usne screen par komalta se haath ferra.

Screen par ek image maujood thi. Aur ye kisi aur ki nahi balki Veer ki hi thi.

Ye photo Tej ne apne phone se tab lii thi jab Egypt ke survey me Veer underground site me waha rakhe gupt samaan ko haath laga raha tha.

Ittefaaq se Tej ne usse tab dekh liya tha. Aur fauran hi usne apna phone nikaal ke ye photo click kar lii thi, ye soch ke ki baad me woh usse chori ke maamle me range haath pakad legi.

Par... Par ye photo dhari ki dhari reh gayi. Kyuki Veer ne uss samaan ko chhuune ke baad usse wese hi chorr diya tha. Usne kuch bhi nahi churaaya tha.

Lekin kisne socha tha ki Tej apni kheechi gayi iss tasveer ko aaj iss qadar apne seene se laga ke roegi? Usne khud bhi ye nahi socha tha kabhi.

'Vikram... Huh...!!?? Mein tumhe dhoondh ke rahungi. Chaahe kuch bhi ho jaaye.'

Woh khud se bol wahi laiti rahi. Na jaane kya chal raha tha uske mann me.

***

Idhar Mumbai me hi, Veer ke puraane ghar me Arohi aur Kavya apni baato me lagi hui thi.

Kavya bed par laiti ceiling ki orr apne dono haath felaaye apni shikaayate jata rahi thi, aur wahi Arohi Kavya ke college ka work kar rahi thi.

Kavya : Uggghhh!!! Agli baar ka competition mein hi jeetungi dekhna aap.

Arohi : Tum jeet jaati, agar woh Pragya participate nahi kari hoti toh.

Kavya : Wahi!!!! Hehehehe~ Par apne last year ke baad wo college toh leave kar hi dengi. Tab mein apne last year me finally first place le sakungi.

Arohi : Stupid! Abhi hi haraane ki koshish kyu nahi karti tum?

Kavya : Because she's better than me.

Arohi : Excuses...!

Kavya : Noooooo ~ Mene sach kaha. Lekin woh sab chorriye. Ye Veer bhaiya kab foreign se lautenge? Kuch bataaya kya aapko?

Arohi ne Kavya ke sawaal par sarr naa me hila diya,

Kavya : Uggghhhh!!! Ye Veer bhaiya bhi na. Harr baar bina bataaye lambi trips par nikal jaate hai. Hmph~ I hate him.

Arohi : Accha? Kuch din pehle woh kaun tha jo apne necklace ko baar baar dekh ke "I love you Veer bhaiya" chillaa raha tha? I guess koi toh tha. Hmm....!? Par kaun?

Kavya (blushes) : Ahhhh!!! W-Wo toh mein aise hi bas... Wait!!! Aap bhi toh... Aap bhi toh jaan boojh ke baar baar apne baalo ko kaan ke peeche karti ho na? Uss din bhi Kritika ke saamne jaan bujh ke aapne kiya tha taaki woh aapse aapki kaan ki baaliyo ke baare me puche. Jo ki usne pucha bhi tha. Weren't you showing off dii???

Arohi (blushes) : Wh-Whaatttt???

Woh achanak hi jhep sii gayi,

Arohi (blushes) : Wh-Whaaat rubbish!!!???

Kavya : Mujhse jhooth nahi bol sakti aap. Choti behan hu aapki. Sab pata hai mujhe. Mein toh atleast... Atleast... *blushes* openly sab kuch karti hu. Par aap toh... Sabse chhipte hue show off karti ho.

Arohi (blushes) : Y-Youuuu!!!! Jao nahi bana rahi mein tumhari ye drawing vrawing... Stupid!!!

Kavya : Kyaaaaaaa???? Ab aap... Ab aap uska gussa meri drawing par nikaalogi?

Arohi : It's your college work. Make it by your own.

Kavya : Par aap jaanti ho ki aapki drawing mujhse acchi hai.

Arohi : Haan toh ye abhi abhi kahe gaye shabdo ko bolne se pehle dhyaan me rakhna tha.

Kavya : Uggghhhhh!! Sorry na...!

Jab Arohi ne apni choti behan ki rondu shaqal dekhi toh ek lambi aah chorr woh waapas se uske kaam me lag gayi.

Arohi (sighs) : Fine!

Kavya : Ehehehehe~ I know! You are the best!

Arohi (khuspusaate hue) : Stupid....!

Kehte hue uska haath apne aap anayaas hi baalo ko kaan ke peeche karne ke liye chala gaya aur...

Uske kaan ki baaliya uski ungli se jaa takraayi. Jo sharm usne chhipa lii thi, agle hi shan gaalo ki wahi laali aur bhi badh gayi.

'Stupid...!'

Firse uske andar se awaaz aayi. Par iss baar keval mann me, aur kisi aur ke liye...

***

Las Vegas...
Forum shops at caesars...
Evening ~ 5:46 PM

Shaam ka samay ho raha tha. Mausam bhi haseen tha. Kul milaake ghoomne firrne ke liye ek perfect time.

Aur Aaj Veer aur Suhana wahi karne nikle the.

Itne dino se jo kuch bhi magazmaari unhone jheli thi, uss se baahar nikaalne ke liye ek breather lena zaroori tha.

Aur shopping se behtar aur kya hi ho sakta tha. Ek kaaran aur bhi tha shopping karne ka. Jo ki Divya ke dwaara dikhaaye gaye uss card me maujood tha.

Suhana aur Veer Divya ki ek dusri car leke khud hi yaha aaye hue the. Chuki investigation department me filhaal abhi koi kaam nahi tha unhe, aur saath hi teesre criminal ko lekar koi details nahi mil paayi thi, toh dono hi shoppi ke liye aa gaye.

Forum shops at caesars. Jo ki Vegas ki best jagah thi khareed-dari ke liye. Wese toh aur bhi behad acchi acchi jagah thi waha par ye sabse mashoor, aur ek must visit place thi.

Suhana hi gaadi chala rahi thi aur Veer baitha hua tha uske bagal se. Aur kuch hi derr me woh jagah ke saamne the.

Suhana : Hum pohuch gaye.

Veer : Hmm? Ohh! Ye jagah kaafi...




Veer ne dur se hi jagah ko dekhte hue kaha,

Suhana : Badi hai?

Veer : Hmm! Saath hi mehngi bhi lag rahi hai.

Suhana : Of course mehngi hai. Sabse mehngi hai ye shopping ke liye. One of the finest places to shop. Last time mein aayi thi toh kaafi kuch khareeda tha mene.

Veer : I see! Toh aap pehle yaha aa chuki hai?

Suhana : Of course! Now come! Be quick! Let's go!

Woh dono hi baahar nikle, aur entrance par pohuche.

Entrance dekhte hi Veer vismit sa hoke wahi sthir khada reh gaya.

Aur uske muh se apne aap hi nikal gaya,

"W-Woooowwww!!!"




Suhana (smiles) : Looks nice right?

Veer : It's actually amazing!

Suhana : Haha~ Let's go! Hamaare paas zyada waqt nahi hai. 8 baje tak hume waha bhi pohuchna hai.

Veer ne haami bhari. Aur woh dono andar chal diye. Andar brands ke showrooms aise maujood the jese chaupaati me alag alag khaane ke thele lage ho.




Aur brands bhi aise aise ki jinka sirf naam hi kaafi tha apni value bataane ke liye.

Gucci, H & M, versace, na jaane kya kya...

Aisi aisi brands maujood thi jo Veer apne desh me shayad hi kisi mall me mushqil se dekh paata tha.

Veer : This...

Suhana : Ye kuch bhi nahi hai. Aao andar chale.





Abhi woh aage badhe hi the ki usse wahi thehrna pada,

*Ring* *Ring*

Suhana ka phone baj utha.

Aur screen par naam tha,

Gaurav!!!!

Apni bauhe sikodte hue woh screen ko dekhi aur fir Veer ko,

Suhana : Umm?!! Give me a second okay?

Veer : Sure!!!

Aur idhar woh thoda distance lete hue aage aayi aur baat karne lagi,

Suhana : Hello??

Gaurav : Tum lauti nahi abhi tak? Aur kya baat hai? Itni busy ho gayi apni dost ke saath ki ek phone tak nahi kiya apne husband ko?

Bas! Ye jese akhiri shabd the jo Suhana abhi iss waqt sunn'na chaahti thi. Gaand ghis ghis ke kese woh log yaha kuch din survive kiye hai unn criminals ke beech me, ye baat keval wahi jaante the. Aur yaha uska pati ye soch raha tha ki woh yaha mazze kar rahi hai.

Pal bhar ke liye Suhana ke muh me gaali aayi thi. Lekin usne apne aap ko control kar liya,

Suhana : What do you mean? Mein yaha koi enjoy karne nahi aayi hu Gaurav! I'm here for work.

Gaurav : Accha? Haha! Arre bhai aisa kya work aa gaya?

Suhana (lambi saans chorrte hue) : Dekho! Mein abhi busy hu. Hum baad me baat karenge.

Gaurav : Busy? Bhala kis liye? Aisa kya ho raha hai waha? Aur zara apni friend Divya se toh baat karao. Kaafi samay se uss se baat nahi hui hai.

Suhana (mann me) : This... This idiot...

Suhana : Gaurav!!! Woh yaha nahi hai. Okay? Ab mein rakh rahi hu.

Gaurav : Nahi hai? Toh tum kaha ho?

Suhana : Mein shopping ke liye aayi hu.

Gaurav : Akele?

Suhana : Nahi! Veer hai saath me.

Gaurav : Veer? Kaun Veer?

Suhana : Huh? Mene tumhe bataya tha na? Veer! Sonu se jiski pehchaan hai? Uski car se jiska accident hua tha? Kuch yaad aaya?

Gaurav : Huh? Ohhhhh! Woh!!?? Haan!!! Ek minute!!! Toh tum uske saath waha kya kar rahi ho?

Suhana : What? Aane se pehle bataya toh tha ki ek friend ke saath jaa rahi hu mein Vegas.

Gaurav : What the hell Suhana? Woh kaha se tumhara friend ban gaya? Aur tumne ye toh nahi bataya tha mujhe ki tum uske saath jaa rahi ho. Matlab tum jabse ek anjaan ladke ke saath....

Suhana : Gauraavvv!!!! Tumhe meri baate sunn'ne ke liye waqt rahe tab toh jaanoge na.

Gaurav : Tum...

Suhana : Tumhe bataane waali thi. Par tumhara toh dhyaan hi nahi tha meri baato par. Jab tumse kaha ki mein jaa rahi hu. Your response was ~ "Yeah yeah! Go!"

Gaurav : Woh isliye kyuki mein meeting me tha Suhana.

Suhana : I don't care Gaurav!!! I don't care!

Gaurav : Youuuu!!!!

Suhana : Aur ab tum free hue ho toh ab yaad aayi meri? Socha ki ab apni patni se do chaar baate toh kar lu uska dil behlaane ke liye,

Gaurav : Tum jaanti ho mein busy tha...

Suhana : Aur mein toh paagalo ki tarah yaha gaand ghis rahi hu na?

Gaurav Suhana ke muh se abhadr shabd sunte hi thoda jhep gaya. Aisa nahi tha ki woh pehli baar uske muh se gaali sunn raha tha. Par bas baat ye thi ki Suhana tabhi aisi bhaasha ka prayog karti thi jab woh behad hi gusse me hoti thi.

Gaurav : Suhana...!

Suhana : Gaurav!! Mein abhi bilkul bhi mood me nahi hu kuch bhi baat karne ke liye. I'm here to freshen up myself a bit. So leave me alone. Is that clear?

Gaurav : Suhana tum...

Par iss se pehle ki woh kuch keh paata,

*Call ends*

Phone cut ho chuka tha.

Mann me gaaliya liye Suhana peeche ko aayi. Usme dekha ki Veer ek statue ko nihaar raha tha.




Gussa shaant kar woh Veer ke paas gayi aur uss se chalne ke liye boli,

Veer : Ho gayi baat?

Suhana : Y-Yeah! Chalo!

Veer : Hmm? Sab theek toh hai na?

Uski sawaal par Suhana ne Veer ko shan bhar ke liye dekha aur fir haan me sarr hila diya.

Veer : Aisa laga ki aap pareshaan ho. So I just... You know...

Veer ka bas itna kehna hi tha ki,

Suhana : Arrrghhh!!! Fucking hell!!!!! What does he think of himself?????? Am I his servant or whaaaattttt???? That stupid idiotic rat.... Aaarrrghhhh!!!!!

Veer : E-Ehhhhh!!??

Uska ye roop dekh Veer ko PTSD sa mehsoos ho raha tha.

'Ohhh fuccckkkkk!!! Y-Ye inhe kya hua?'

[Seems like Suhana ki dusri personality trigger ho rahi hai Master!]

'F-Fuuuccckkkkkk!!! Wait!!! Woh aise kyu dekh rahi hai mujhe? Shittttt!!!! That's scary!!!!'

Suhana ajeeb sii muskaan liye Veer ka haath pakdi aur usse ghaseetate hue andar le gayi,

'Ohhhh fuuuucckkkkk!!!!'

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Woh jese hi ek shop me ghusi,

Uska gussa saatve aasmaan par tha.

Shop me maujood employee uske paas aaya aur vinamrata se pucha,

Employee : Yes! Ma'am! What can I do for you?

Suhana ne apni ek ungli peeche uss employee ki orr point kii,

Suhana : That!!!!

Toh peeche jab Employee ne dekha toh paaya ki ek bada sa teddy waha latka hua tha.

Employee : Ohhh that? Haha~ That will cost you for...

Suhana : Bring me that!!!!

Employee : Huh? O-Okay!!!

Woh employee waha se teddy nikaal ke uske paas laaya,

Employee : Ma'am! This is created by our finest of craftsmen. The quality of the fur is...

Suhana : How durable is this?

Employee : Huh???

Suhana : How much punches it can survive?

Employee : Wh-Whaaattttt???

'Ohhhhh fuccckkk!!!!! Fuck fuck fuck....!!!!'

Idhar Veer Suhana ke peeche khade hoke jab sab dekh raha tha toh bechaare ke shareer me raungte khade ho gaye the.

Suhana ki dusri personality baahar aa chuki thi. She was pissed. Definitely pissed.

Woh ek teddy maang rahi thi. Jaha employee usse ye samjha raha tha ki teddy ka fur acchi quality ka tha toh Suhana ko inn sab baato se matlab hi nahi tha.

Woh toh ye puch rahi thi ki ye teddy kitne ghoose seh sakta tha? Zara sochiye ki aap ki ek gift ki dukaan hai. Aur koi khubsoorat lady aapke paas aake aap se puche ki aapki shop ka teddy kitne ghoose le sakta hai? Toh aapka muh kesa hoga?

Kuch aise hi bhaav abhi uss employee ke chehre par the.

Par iske pehle ki woh kuch keh paata,

Veer : We're leaving!!! Thank you for your time!!!!

'Fuuuuckkkkk!!!!'

Veer ne Suhana ke haath ko thaama aur usse kheech ke baahar le aaya.

Usne usse ek bench par wahi baithaaya aur uska gussa shaant karne ke liye woh chal diya wahi par lagi ek ice cream ki badi sii shop me,

Par jese hi woh aage aaya, saamne ka nazaara dekh ke hi woh chaka chaundh reh gaya.




Kya khubsoorti thi iss jagah ki.

Yadi mall ho toh aisa...

[Ek din aapke paas iss se bhi accha mall hoga. A much bigger one!]

'Pari...!!!'

Kuch bhi ho jaaye, Pari kabhi bhi motivation dena band nahi karti thi.

Veer dekh raha tha unn jagaho ko,




Kya khoob tareeqe se statues ka istemaal kiya gaya tha.

'Hmmm? Wese idea bura nahi hai. Yadi inn statues me hamaare desh ke shurveero ki aakriti rahe toh?'

[That's a nice idea Master! Isse sticky note me add kijiye. Hum apna khud ka mall banaenge iss theme par. I'll support you... Always! ]

'Hahahaha~ We still have a long way to go. By the way mere points ka kya? Itne kam points Nightwalker ke mission ke liye kyu?'

[Mene bataya tha na master. Mission jitne acche tareeqe se poora hoga, points uss hisaab se milenge.]

'Toh mene iss baar kya galti kar dii?'

[3 people died.]

'Ohhhhhh!!!'

[Mil gaya answer?]

'Yup Anyways! Let's go!!!'

Usne ice cream khareedi, aur Suhana ke paas leke gaya. Aur waqai, Suhana ka gussa kuch hadd tak shaant ho chuka tha.

Suhana ne na keval khud dherr saari shoping kii balki Veer ke liye bhi usne kaafi kuch khareed ke usse dilwaaya.

Khaaskar ek accha sa suit, jisse Veer ne pehen ke wahi change kar liya tha. Aur usne khud bhi ek khubsoorat sii dress pehni hui thi.

Kyuki unhe yaha se ab jaana tha apni doosri manzil ki orr,

*Thud*

Car ka darwaaza band hua,

Suhana : Chale?

Veer : Hmm!!!

Aur woh dono hi waha se nikal gaye,

Downtown ki orr. Kyuki yahi unki manzil thi.

Akhir issi ke liye toh woh shopping karne bhi aaye the. Divya ne jo kal card Suhana ko fek ke diya tha, uske sang ek flyer bhi tha.

Jo tha...




Aur akhir me jo card usne feka tha Suhana ke muh pe woh tha, ek invitation card.

Aur, Invitation tha...




Natalia Martin ka...
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
This update was to tone down the gritty and intense situation, as the name suggests. Next update me aap jaante hi hai ki kis se mulaqaat hone waali hai hamaari. Toh like thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka guys.
Dhanyavaad!

 

[Werewolf]

Update faadu tha . Nightwalker bhi ke intelligent aur shaatir enemy tha . Bahut suspense aur problems ke baad Nightwalker bhi pakda gya . Mike ne bhi accha saath diya veer ka jo kabilya tariff hai . Nik ki fatke chaad ho chauki hai jal jal ke . Niharika dimaag lagane ki koshish kar rahi hai par kuch kar nahi paa rahi . Emma bhi ab India jayegi shayad aur waha dusre competitors Emma se jalege . Ab tak ye kissa khatam nahi hua hai . Abhi to shaam hai puri raat to baaki hai

bhai shaandaar update maja aa gya

Nice and lovely update....

Super duper mind blowing update. Eagerly waiting for next one.

Last kuch Updates ke questions ke answer to mil gaye. Lakin last me kuch questions aa bhi gaye.
Emma, may be ab wapas se story me na dikhe. Quki usko laga wo secratary ban kr maje karegi veer ke sath. Lakin apneveer ke life me all ready itne bhre pade hai ki wo bs uske sath thode time maje kar skta hai aur usase jyada kuch aur nahi. Aur wo soch rahi thi wo veer ka use kr le. Aur Zoey i hope wo wapas aayegi jaruar ab jaiseye nahi pata lakin mujhe lagata hai wo aayegi wapas veer ke paas.
Aur ye divya ne kon sa card feka. Aur aisa kya tha card me jisase pata lagega ki suhana ko yaha divya ne kyu bulaya tha.
Aur mujhe lagta hai ki kuch logo ko ye lagega ki isme itni badi kya baat ho gayi ki nightwalker ne dimak lagaya to itna kya dar gaye jyada ho gaya. Lakin wo ye chij sahi se feel nahi kar pa rahe hai ki jb ek low lavel ka member itna dimak laga raha hai to jo main honge is group ke wo kitna jyada dimak lagayenge. Aur mujhe jaha tak lagta hai last arc power aur strength par based tha lakin ye wala arc puri taraf intelligence aur dimak ke upar based hai. Abhi aage aur kitne jyada shock, trap, secret, aur na jane kya kya hme dekhne ko milega. Hum sayad imagine bhi sahi se nahi kar skte hai. Lakin apna veer bhi phle se bhut grow kar gaya hai. Lakin abhi bhi use ek bahut long way Complete karna hai. Bahut kuch abhi hona baki hai.
Bahut hi umda ek no. Update Werewolf bhai.
Keel rocking.

Superb update

Nice update.

nice1

Mast update h bhai...

Nice one bro

Karan ne acha dimag lgaya kaera se uska phone leke woh smjh gya tha kaera ko kidnappers contact krenge. Mast fight thi Bhai maza agya Beowulf ne kamaal kr diya. Lekin ek panga bhi Ho gya helicopter ka nuksaan Ho gya ab iski bharpaai kon krega. Rocket launcher aise kaise koi bhi use kr skta hai uski authority milna mtlb slogan pahuncha hua chiz hai. Khairr ek achi baat ye hui ke veer zinda hai shayad healing power ke wajah se nhi to jis trh blood los hua tha kuch bhi kaha nahi ja skta tha. Ek gdbd bhi hua or woh ye ke slogan fir se bhagne me kaamyab Ho gya. Bechara kitna siddat se plan bnata hai lekin har baar ye veer naam ka balaa sare plan ki maa Behan kr deta hai. Veer ye thik nahi kr rha slogan ke sath kyo usko tdpa ke khoon jala rha hai ya to jldi se slogan ko Rip kr do. Ab dekhte hai slogan Kya krta hai. Veer Ho gya behos pari bechari chillati reh gai. Mast update tha Bhai fighting scene mast tha

Super update

Awesome Amazing Brilliant

Amazing update sir
Waiting for new update
Plz update soon sir

Ding superb suspencious update 103 mein kya hoga soch ke he darr lag raha hai

Ye veer kab return Indiaa Ayega?

Bahut badhiya update hai bhai..... Akhir kar nightwalker ka scene khatam ho geya......or jo suspence apne kholke rakh di wakai dil dehla dene baat hai.....or ab niharika ka kya haal karega veer dekhte hai
Or akhiri me suhana ko kis liye bulayi divya ne...or wo card me aisa kya hai jo India se suhana ko bulana padha
Waiting for next update

Superb Update Bro...
Waiting for Next

Nice update

superb update n story going on ... bas update thoda jaldi aa jaye to mazza aur bad jaye

Nice update bro

Aap ke prayas ko namaskar
Par jacha kam

Awesome update bhai...Waiting for Next Update Eagerly...

Veer has all the credentials of running a successful crime investigation agency.

fantastic update dear

Awesome update

Nice

Nice Update

Bhut hi behtrin update bro

Super update

I'm just speechless...
my mind is blown...

Fantastic mind-blowing update

Nice update bhaii bhit Awla Maza Aya gya par Kar ab new update Ka intazar ha

Zabardast Update Werewolf Bhai

Zabardast update

Fantastic update bhai

Awesome update

Zabardast update

Zabardast update

Super duper dhamakedar behtreen mind-blowing update bhai

Zabardast update

Super wonderful awesome update

Awesome, mind blowing, speechless,

NICE update

nice update .veer ne saare raaz khol hi diye sabke saamne aur sabko sadme me daal diya. nightwalker ne kaise metal pighlake darwaja khola aur steven ko maara ye sunke sabko shocked to hona hi tha .
gold zoey ke kamre me tha jo shatir nightwalker ne pighlake rakha tha flower pot me .
par gold to sirf veer ko hi milna chahiye tha ,aur police sirf kuch inaam ke naam pe degi .
veer ne bada dil dikhaya aur mike ka naam bhi suggest kiya inaam ke liye . mike khush aur nik ki gaand jal gayi .

emma ka secret bhi koi bada nahi nikla ,mujhe laga koi police se judi hogi wo par wo to boat chor nikli .
veer ki secretary banna chahti thi par veer ne mana kar diya .

niharika ki chalaki pehle hi pata chal chuki thi veer ko .hacker se veer ka mobile hack karna chahti thi par veer ne phone karke usko hi sadme me pahucha diya ..

ab dekhte hai house of killers ka agla karnama kya hai .aur kaunsa naam saamne aata hai .

Superb fantastic amazing mind blowing update bhai...

I can't believe that the secret behind the room number is belong to the great Russian Chemist Dmitri Ivanovich Mendeleev Periodic Table...

Is hisab se Nightwalker padha likha tha use tin ka melting point pata tha or gold ko bhi melt karke flower vase me hide karne was next level even m science ka student hu phir bhi room number se mujhe click nahi hua ki ye sab atomic number pe base honge kyu ki koye soch nahi sakta nah ki chemistry is tarah se koye story me use karega or jaha tak mujhe lagta he app bhi science k ek bohot ache student rehe honge isliye appne in element ka use bohot ache se update m kiye the kyu ki ye sab likhne k liye proper knowledge hona chahiye sabhi 118 elements ka or wo appko he so great...

Or ye last me suhana n yesa kya dekh liye us card m ki wo hairaan ho gaye sayad uske past se kuch Juda ho ya phir kuch or iske pata to next update m hi pata chalega so waiting for next exciting update bhai...

Atomic blaster update bro to finally veer ne raazo se parda utha diya sach me house of killers ke pehle part main hi itna jyada maza aaya to baki ke parts kya hi sahi honge

Sach me nightewalker ek darinda tha ek haiwaan jise logo ko dardnaak mout marne main sukoon milta haj but itwas intelligent not only killer but they are professional killer

To veer ko sabashi mili Nolan se but usne sara shrey nahi liya kiyu ki Mike bhi barabar ka haqdaar tha shayad hi koi aisa hoga jo sher ke muh main apni gaand dega

And gold ko bhi sahi mayno main perfectly hide kiya gaya or matlab sab ke room no atoms number the sach me werewolf bro aapne is wale update main kuch jyada hi sahi wqat diya hat's off you sir ji

And mene pichli baar hi kaha tha ki nik ki gaand jhalne ki khushbu mujhe yaha tak aarahi hai but uske ugle wale yani ki is wale update main divya ki fati gaand ki khushbu bhi ayegi ye nahi socha tha


Or ab ye divya ne kya pakda diya suhana ko lagta hai ye veer se gaand marwakehi manegi

Or niharika use kese bhul sakte hai use main ye kehna cahunga '' choti bacchi ho kya '' hahaha bro main to bolta hu is wale mention main niharika ko bhi lana cahiye tha fir wo nightewalker se bolti i hate man or apne nightewalker bhai uski chuchi ko kaat ke kehta I love women's brest hahaha

Baki must update tha bro maza aagya update padhke

Superb update.

sorry bro but your update is so slow

Nice update...

your update is great nice all update

Kitna bada plan tha yar kese kese logo ko wo Marta tha us sale ko v aise marna chahiye....nightwalker mil gaya Lakin house of the killer avi baki hai ....

Niharika ko badhia se chodega jab vapas ayega veer Sali San pati karti hai ......

Emma personal secretary banega veer ka dekhte hai kaise sab log use apnate hai .....​

Behtarin update bro
Kya aap English ka kam prayog karege kyuki bahut problem hoti hai samajhne me yaar
Kyu na unhe bolne do English aap hindi me hi likho to aapko bhi bar bar explanation nahi karna hoga thora bahut English to chalta hai
Ye meri raay thi baki tho jhakassss hai story bhai

Fantastic update.. Bhai..

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Werewolf bhai....
Nice and excellent update....

Wow aaj to bilkul maja aagya
One of the best updates
Awesome work bro

Behtreen update

Wow man, what a suspense, twist and reveal. Kya hi khatarnaak plan tha. Room number as atomic number, room number as and is gold. Nik bechare ne koshish to bahut ki magar ulta uski hi lag gayi aur apna hero, sabka hero ban gaya. Niharika bhi smart banne ki koshish kar rahi thi magar uski smartness ki bhi nikal gayi. Ab ye Divya ne kya bomb fod dala hai Suhana par. Ati uttam Werewolf bhai

Marvelous jabardast Shandar update bro

Awesome update bhai

Maza aa gaya bhai
Waiting for next update

Amazing update

Nice

Super fantastic update bro

Awesome updates

Awesome update bhai waiting for next update

Yehi Apka Andaaz Sab Se alag Hai Likhne ka Ek Suspense Se Parda Utha kr Dusra Suspense

Superb awsm update to gud Luvd it

Super update hai Bhai

Nice update bro

Brilliant and Excellent update bhai

Fantastic update waiting for next

bura insan wo hai jo dil me kisi ke liye buri soch rakhe.

From time to time there are people in our life who do not like us at all in the beginning.The way they introduce themselves varies greatly. But they are not wrong. wahi log waqt ke sath aapko pasand bhi aane lagte han.

Coming here, I started expressing my bad thoughts.I shouldn't have done it, but I did.
karna padta ha kabhi kabhi aisa bhi. har insan hamari zindagi me ek jaise andaz se dakhil nahi ho sakta. kuch galat likha tha maine. bohto ko bura bhi laga hoga. kya karun zamindar hon, padha likha hone ke sath sath kheton ka kaam bhi dekhna padta ha har tarha se junglee mind logon se bhi milna padta ha.

Sorry for that!!!!!!!!

but kuch galat bhi nahi tha.. mere first review me bohut kuch aisa tha. jo hidden tha. jise samjha nahi gaya..which no one could find.. agar bura bola tha.. to objection kaiyon ko hona chahiye tha.. lekin kisi ko utna ghussa nahi aaya. jitna aana chahiye tha.. sanki rajput Sir and asadjee both writers are great writers.. dono aapke jaise hi mahaan han. even har writer hi kamal ka insan hota ha.. brilliant minded, loving minded, supporting minded.. sabhi ko badhiya se intertain karte han.

i said, mera andaz badla hua tha. koi samjh nahi saka. matlab jo likha tha wo un readers ke liye bhi tha, jo koi bhi response nahi dete. bas main ye dekhna chahta mera bad reviews par response kaisa aata hai.. werewolf Sir aap nazar andaz kar gaye.. sanki rajput Sir ghusse me aa gaye.. asadjee Sir bhi nazar andaz kar gaye..

Someone said ignore those, Who gave bad review...


But!!!

imran... noori mere pehle do revos baare tum kya kehti ho
noori... malik saab mai.. mai bhala kya kahungi
imran... kehna padega noori, baat tere malik saab ki izzat par ban aai ha
noori... aisi baat nahi ha malik saab, koi aapki baat par ghusse me kese a sakta ha
imran... to batao noori mene wo revos kyun sahi se nahi diye
noori... pehla hi review achha ho, zaruri nahi malik saab
imran... aage bolo noori
noori... malik saab aap ne Werewolf Sir ko sahi bhi kaha aur galat bhi
imran... to
noori... malik saab aapke aisa kehne se bohut se payare payare readers ne aap ki is baat par apne revos nahi diye. aap ke revos par aitraz nahi uthaya
imran... ruk kyun gayi, aage bolo
noori... yahan sab manoranjan ke liye aate han, lekin malik saab yahan is thread par sab mil gaye hn to sb ek han. sab ko chahiye jo revos achhe den, unhe sarahen.. jo revos achha na den.. unse kahen, bhai hum bhi yahi han, revos dene ka ye andaz sahi nahi ha.
imran... noori baat to tum theek kar rahi ho.
noori... shukriya malik saab
imran... aur batao noori
noori... aapne kitna kaha malik saab, zayada revos hone se update late ho jayegi. is baat par bhi kisi ne aapke review par apne khayalat ka izhaar nahi kiya.
imran... ye baat to ha noori
noori... malik saab ek saal se aap bina account ke hi Xforum par achhi achhi si kahaniyan padh rahe han. aap ke jese aur bhi bohut se payale payale padhne wale bhi bina account ke, account bana ke silent readers ban kar kahaniyan padh rahe han.
imran... to isse kya
noori... itni achhi story kisi ko bhi aaj tak nahi mili, fir bhi dekhen na malik saab abhi tak kitne kam payare payare readers ne revos dene par khud ko tayyar kiya hai
imran... haan bohut kam readers han
noori... unko khayal karna chahiye malik saab. abb dekhen na malik saab ab ki baar ka aaya update kitna kitna achha tha, kitna payara tha. kitna maza aaya na mujhe aapse sunkar malik saab.
imran... haan maza to bohut aaya noori..
noori... *sniff* *sniff*
imran... ?????
noori... Sanki Rajput Sir
imran... ?????
noori... asadjee Sir
imran... ?????
noori... *sniff* malik saab *sniff* aap kitne achhe han *sniff*
imran... ?????
noori... Sanki Rajput Sir aapse naraz ho gaye han
imran... nahi aisa nahi noori.. koi bhi mahaan insan kisi dusre se itni jaldi naraz nahi hota.
noori... *sniff* *sniff*
imran... achha achha ro mat.. ab batao mene Sanki Rajput Sir aur asadjee Sir ke baare me aisa kyun likha tha.
noori... malik saab *sniff* aap *sniff* aapke likhne ka matlab bhi wahi tha *sniff* jo Werewolf Sir ko leke aapne likha tha. Werewolf Sir ke thread par Rihanna mem saab, Sanki Rajput Sir,asadjee Sir aur kuch dusre payare payare reviews dene walun ki waja se ronaq lagi hui ha.. aap kese unhe galat keh sakte han
imran.... ?????
noori.... Sanki Rajput Sir ke jese revos dene ke baad hi to sabne achhe achhe se payare payare se revos dene shuru kiye han.
imran.... noori hamara revos bohut lamba ho gaya ha
noori.... jab tak Sanki Rajput Sir aapko maaf nahi karenge, mujhe chain nahi aayega malik saab
imran.... achha ek baat ro reh hi gai noori
noori.... kaunsi malik saab
imran.... wo jo mene 2nd review diya tha.. wo gande wala
noori.... hehehehehe wooooooooo waaaalaa..
imran.... han noori
noori.... malik saab ye thread incest ha. adult review galat kese hua. aur fir kisi ne us reviews par bhi apna khayal zahir nahi kiya
imran.... sivaye
noori.... Sanki Rajput aur asadjee Sir ne

Sorry Werewolf ... Sorry Sanki Rajput Sir... Sorry asadjee Sir..

Awesome update bro

Update koi Khas nhi hai but phir bhi mujhe es Update mai sabse badi baat Divya ki lag rahi hai

mai suru se bolta aarha hu Ye Divya kuch naa kuch chupa rahi hai or koi na koi game veer ke saath khel rahi hai

Ab Veer Divya ko bhaw wala tapa tap tapa tap dega tb Divya ke Raaj se parda uthega......

Aesa meri soch hai sayad ye aage chal kar glt bhi ho sakta hai or shi bhi......

Chalo snacks ki dukaan ke comments par werewolf ka reply to milta

Awesome update

Awesome update and again one more suspense??

Waiting next anxiously….

This is a update, what a update bro fan ho gaya tera to, hero hero hai pr use uski okat dikha di and to be very honest story hero centric jada hone lagi thi ye bohot jaruri tha that is what i think, ab to bas age kya hoga ye dekhne layak hoga kese atish ki gand todi jayegi kese veer is sadme se bahar nikal payega or nikal payega bhi ya nahi.

Awesome update bro

waiting for update bro

Phir se adhoora update bhai yeh saraasar na insaafi hein, update toh out of mind tha.
i want mega update...!
Keep Writing.....!

Noah White ( Night Walker) ki gutthi sulajh gayi lock ko pighla ker ander gaya Chester ko mara room saaf kia or baher aaker room lock kia fir weld ker fir se waisa ker dia it a bawal sirf apni satisfaction ke liye insan ko marne se satisfaction milega sahi tha bhai
Or gold ko chupane ka dimag k uske dimag ko salami deni chahiye
Idher Mumbai m Niharika Veer ka mobile hack kerwane m lagi huwi thi jo huwa nahi balki Veer n phone kerke or ziada gaand faad di Niharika madam ki
Suhana or Divya kyon lad rahi h billiyon ki tarah or kon sa card feka h Divya n suhane muh per jise dekh ker hil k reh gayi
Baherhal dekhte h aage kia hota h
Shaandaar lajawab update bhai

L

Lajwab update bhai

Nice update Bhai

Nyc update bhai last mein kuch confusion mein chod gaye ...nyc update

Superb update Bhai

Waiting

Ye sahi kaha ap nay........ 1 banda time laga kar update likhy or ham log 2 mint ma read kar kay baten karty hain werewolf bhai ap bas un logun ko dekhen jo ap ko itna pasand karty hain

Superb update ! ..
Waiting for next one!!

Awesome mind-blowing fantastic update bro..... Esy hi jari rakho dost

Lajawab update
Waiting for next update

Vegas ke investigation department se scene suru hote hi hame saari janta ko dikhaya jaata hai boleto waha sab the Head Nolan se lekr waha kaam karne wale sabhi pramukh sadasya, sab ke sab waha maujood the aur apni apni jagah par baithe hue the yaha tk ki divya, Suhana,aur mansion me gaye hue victims jo bach gaye the wo bhi maujood the jiske biche round si table pr file bikhre hue dikhaya gaya par sorry hamne to imagine kiya but but ye imagination bhi kisi bade meeting ka scene jaisa pratit hua just kahu to ek meeting hall aur usme baithe sabhi sadasya aur akela khada sakhs jo iss meeting ko held kr raha tha just epic i say ju logo ke baare me n pata mughe......

Aur waha projector ke saamne khada tha veer akhir ussiko to iss raaz se parda jo uthana tha sorry par iisse uthana nhi jalana khaenge kyunki ju ne raaz to khol diye lekin phir last me ye suspence de daala ki parde jalaye kisne.....matlab chain se to rahne hi n do hamare mind ko Khair choro ju ko gaaliya to n de sakta par meethe wachan jarur sunaunga apne andazz me mere last paragraph me......

Bhale hi mansion ke kaand ka chapter veer ne close kr diya par abhi ye raaz to khulna hi tha jo sirf veer ko hi pata tha akhir ussi ne to Noah White urff NIGHTWALKER ko pakda aur waha uss mansion ke guthi ke saath saath treasure bhi dhund nikala just iconic scene is this for those audience that sit in meeting but but but idhar divya ki nazare to veer pe hi tiki thi akhir tike bhi kyun n veer ne kiya hi aisa kaam tha

Tab veer ne chuppi todi uss mahol me aur bolna suru kiya ki hame to pata hi hai ki hamare saath kya hua aur iss sab ki guthi mai aaj yaha suljjhane wala hu.....

Wahi jo Mike tha ussne to saari vardaat suna daali thi department walo ko jo sun ke to unko to itna pata chal hi gaya ki ye koi asaan nhi tha ye abhi tk sabse khatarnaak case jo unhone handle kiya tha but sorry ye to veer ne kiya but I just say that unhe realise to ho hi gaya tha ki waha maut ka nanga naach hua tha

Wahi Tommy jo abhi bhi kaanp raha tha wo gusse me aakr chilate hue khada hua aur apni bhadaas nikalne laga NIGHTWALKER par,pr Mike ne usse shant krwaya lekin uska bhi gussa hona lajmi tha akhir Chester uska dost jo tha akhir wo uski family ko kya jawab deta lekin ye bhi sahi hai ki Chester to bekaar me hi maara gaya tha bechare ne kiya hi socha tha but usse maut mili wo bhi kamre ke ander ghus kr maara tha NIGHTWALKER ne usse it's so disgusting I say...... NIGHTWALKER ne unnsabke saath apne words ke unn chalave me hi aisa fasa diya tha ki wo kuch sahi judge n kar paaye unhone to apne se hi n jaane kya kya points bana liya......

Pahla point ju ne clear kiya ki wo kkisi aur weapons se maara gaya tha chester and ju ne mere review me bhi ye bata diya tha Khair ab aate agle sawalo pr jo Nolan ne pucha
1) NIGHTWALKER ke baare me jo information mili tumhe wo kaha se mili ??
2) Chester room ke ander maara kaise gaya ?? (Literally ye judge krte krte hamari umar nikal jaati par ham iske jawab n dhund paate but you riduculous I say......ju khel gaye ham readers ke saath Khair kya kahu ab mai ju hi to karta dharta ho )
3) tumhe treasures kaha aur kaise mila ??( jo ki sab jaana chahte hai ki treasures tha bhi yaa nhi but ju ne treasure hi yaha patak diya )

Unn sabki nazre ek baar veer par fir tikk gayi jo saaf bayan kr rahi thi ki wo saare sawalo ke jawab jaanne kke liye bohot betaab hai akhir unhe to ye bhi nhi pata hoga akhir jo veer janta hai wo unn logo ke sehat par kya asar daalega

Lekin ek baat kahna padega ki jo NIGHTWALKER tha kaho to ek normal person hi itna khular killer ho sakta koi believe nhi kr sakta tha uski sakal se lekin ju ne kaha bhi isme "NEVER JUDGE A BOOK BY IT'S COVER"

Khair ab aate apan log Nolan ke pahle sawal pe ho usne batane ko kaha veer ke puchne pr jo tha chester room ke ander kaise mara gaya ??.....sach kahu to apan to ekdum sunn pad gaya tha Nolan ke iss sawal ke sabse pahle puchne I just out of mind matlab boleto apan ke dimag me aise aise khyalaat ubhar aarhe the ki kya batau.....mai to jaise ye padh kr to 5-6 minute aise hi baitha sa rah gaya tha jab mughe relise hua to apan ko apne pe hi weird si feeling aane lagi thi but mai ek hi baat bolunga you are gem man you are gem....... Rihanna sahi kahti and mai iss baat ko aaj agajj krta hua bhai ki your are the gem of Xforum !!

Aur jab veer ne jawaab diya badi hi asaani se wo bhi ki "wo ander aaya maara aur chala gaya"matlab ekdum sannata chaa gaya waha matlab aabhi ko saanp sungh gaya waha ka choro apan ka to mind hi divert sa hone laga ki ye bola kya veer ne..... literally mera mind bahenchod sari ghtnaye hi ghumane laga mere dimag me iss arc ki, I just out of my mind.......bc mere dimag bhi bol raha hoga be ki ab mai n rukunga be aisa haal ju ne kr diya

Khair waha sabko to veer koi namoona hi lagne laga matlab literally mazak chal raha tha kya ??

Aur tab khade hue apne Tommy bechare to bolne lage ki chester ko ghost ne maara hai ajii lauda mera yaha bhuto ka party chal raha hai kya bahenchod iski maa ka....Khair lekin fir wo hassne laga bahenchod paagal to n hogaya but fir hame smjh aaya ki ye to epic dramatic bol raela......usssne veer ko ektrah se khuli Dhamaki to nhi bolenge lekin yaha usko bol sakte askamat nikle hue lafz jo ussne dhamkiyon me paryog kar daale jo gusse ka bhi prabhavv tha usspar akhir uska dost jo mara tha aur yaha veer aisi bahki baat kr raha tha khair tumne to pahle hhi likh diya tha ki usse pahle chester *behka* " aur yaha ju ne pahle hi indicate kr diya tha

Jab Tommy ko Mike ne shaant kra diya tab Nolan ne bola ki "explain properly" par yaha to veer ko mastii sugh rahi thi lekin wo unke saath koi mastii yaa firki nhi le raha tha wo iss liyee nhi batana chahh raha tha jaldi ki kahi ye sab sun ke to u ke dimag ki maa n chud jaaye sorry ek trah se kaho to veer to abhi bhi goosebumps me hi tha usse aaj tk itna shock kabhi laga hi nhi tha literally kaho to uske abhi bhi roangte khade the khair jab veer ne wahi baat dubara dohrayi to apne gandu nik ko to jaise mauka mil gaya veer ki insult aur bejjati krne ka aur usne kiya bhi, uss gandu ne kya kya example me bakk diye and atlast usne bet laga ke bol diya literally mughe itni hassi aayi n usspar ki sach bolu to meri hassi chutt gayii thi padhte huye......

Par idhar nik bhi ektrah se sahi hi tha apne tark par akhir kaise koi ander jaa sakta tha akhir gate andr se band jo tha aur koi secret passage boleto rasta bhi nhi tha phir kaise......

Aur yaha veer ne tab bola ki maine kab kaha ussne door nhi khola jisse sun ke to nik hairaan sa rah gaya boleto uske sabdo ki gaand maar li veer ke sabdo ne.....tab veer ne phir jo bola usse sun to waha sabki dai chudd gayi literally veer agar really me sahi baat bata deta sidhe n to ye to pakka thha ki waha 4-5 behosh jarur ho jaate issliye veer ne itna ghumaya baat ko yaa boleto unn logo ne khud ghuma liya ......ab divya bhi confused so ho gayi thi wahi suhana pareshan hogayi thi veer ko lekr aur apne mike sahab to iss chinta me aagaye ki kahi veer lataad boleto lathgodhan wala haal n ho jaye bc hassi chutt gayi ye line padh ke

Jab divya ne bola ki veer isse jayada mt badhao tab kya hi tease kiya veer ne usko apne eye contact se gajab literally ju ne yaha bhi tease wala scene embed kr diya Khair tab veer ne Nolan ki traf dekha jiska chehra hi mark bana hua tha

Veer to yahi soch raha tha ki inhe mai kyaa batau ye sab to inke out of mind hai......Khair veer ruyee abhi bhi khade the still goosebumps me hi tha literally itna Sadma to usse slogan se ladne pe bhi laga tha

Veer ne Nolan se permission lete hue ek pic saamne indicate krwayi jisse dekh sabhi ke chehro pr gaandu wale mark ban gaye literally mazak chal raha hai kya ye aur ye baat apne Tommy buaa ne bol hi diya lekin usse chor kr sabke thobde serious ho gaye the akhir ho bhi kyun pic hi aisi chis ki thi jiske baare ham reader log soch tk nhi sakte the aur ye apna Werewolf khel gawa hamni ke saathe kono baat n apnaa time aayega.......aur tabhi divya bhi kuch smjh gayi aur uske to ruyee bhi khade ho gaye the mere khyaal se jhante sulagne ke jagah wo bhi khade ho gaye honge ahemm ahemm haa to ladies log ye line mat padhna haa to mai kaha tha boleto divya smjh gayi thi aur veer ne bola ki ye ATOMIC NUMBERS hai....... bettichod yee hua blast boleto wisphot unnsabke dimag ki gaand maar di iss nuclear blast bc unke to pakka raungtey nhi bc gaand tk ke baal khade ho gaye honge literally veer ka wo haal hogaya tha to ye sab to chutiye sorry hutiye ke prajati hai inki to dai hi chudd jayegi aur hua bhi wahi aur apne Tommy ne bolna chaha to uski to gaand maar di veer sabdo ne aur tab ussne pata chala Zoey se chester ka room no. Jo tha 50 boleto atomic no ke hisaab se Tin aur uski hoti hai melting point 231.85 degree literally ye dekhte hi to unke bacho khichi jo kasar baaki tha unke sarir me wo bhi puri ho gayi literally Unki to kya hi kahu jaise ju ne likha ki ridd ki haddi tk sihran daud padi.......jara socho kaise ussne uss metal door ke uss tin se bane side bar ko pighlaya aur phir haath ander daal kr khol kr ghusa chester ko marta raha jabtak uske do tukde n hogaye aur phir usse bistar pr leta diya sab saaf waaf kr ke baahar aaya aur kundi laga di aur phir melding kr ke wapas chala gaya...... boleto ye tha kya, yaar literally mere raungtey to nhi khade hue par ek sihran jarur daud gayi sarir me ki literally aisa kiya tha ussne.......sach me NIGHTWALKER blood lust ke liye pagal tha wo lusty creature tha ek ye kah sakte ho haa usse pashyco mai n kahunga lekin ek trah se kkah bhi sakte ho but pshycopathic to Khair choro itna deep nhi Jaana meko and main chis ye ki jab veer ne usse check kiya tha tab ju ne iss liye information nhi di thi ab smjh gaya nhi to ham smjh hi jaate Khair ju khel gaye hamare saath - NIGHTWALKER ki trah......

Khair veer se wistar me sunnke ki NIGHTWALKER ne ye sab kaise kiya hoga unki to haalat hi khraab ho gayi....... unnsabki to kya hi batau literally jo khauf aur dar se jyada unke ander goosebumps aye honge n wo soch ke hi unhe khauf se guzarna pad raha hoga unhone aisa socha bhi nhi hoga ki ek killer aisa bhi kuch krega, Khair apna NIGHTWALKER to melder aur technician bhi nikal pada aur abhi mere ek aur baat clear bhi ho gayi ki kyun NIGHTWALKER ne veer ko pani side lekr aaya tha pichle fight scene me boleto NIGHTWALKER ka last fighting scene me

Waha to jaise maaatam chaa gaya tha.....divya to chair pr gir gayi wo khauf me thi aur dar uss khauf ko chir raha tha bechari !!

Khair ab unhe avgat ho gaya tha ki house of killers koi mamuli gang nhi hai ye alag. hi level hai bauaa log alag aur ye story ka writter bhi iconic level ki wor badh chuka hai

Aur jab NIGHTWALKER ko veer ne check kiya tha to kya samne aaya ussne apne family tk ko n chora to ye mamuli log kya chis the literally ab mai bolunga he is dammmmmnnnn bloody wape Pshycopathic lekin jo aur bhi killers honge unki to kya hi kahu abhi se hi soch kr scenes ubhar lad rahe hai lekin literally bloody gore's scenes ko dekhne,padhne, imagine krne ka ek alag hi maza hai aur saamne dekho to kya hi kahu

Aur jab ne puri wakhiyat batayi ki veer ne kya kya dekha notice kiya boleto jab ussne puri baat batayi to unki to gaand ke gurde bhi fast gaye bc ab smjh aaraha hoga ki ye to sirf trailer tha abhi to house of killers ka aana baaki hai

Tab Mike ne treasure ke baare me pucha tab veer ne Zoey se uska room no. Pucha jo tha 79 boleto Au gold to simple ab jab ye baat saamne aayi to Zoey ka to badan hi thithur gaya literally ju ne jitne bhi words yaa kaho lafz paryog kiye wo alag hi imagination me baitha rahi thi hame !!

Aur tab veer ke taali bajate hi jo chis saamne aayi wo thi flower vase jo puri trah se ander se bhari hui thi gold se jo uss NIGHTWALKER ne golden bars ko pighla kr isme daal diye the aur uppar se mitti aur phir kuch flowers literally I just say tha he is dammmmmnnnn genius in his business......

Aur wo paintings to sirf deception the and second one boats wo kahha gaye to unhe to NIGHTWALKER ne chuppa diya tha literally ussne sab plan kr rakha tha

Khair Nolan ne veer ki bohot taarife ki aur usse treasure ka kuch Percentage bhi de diya aur veer ne Mike ko bhi aage kr diya treasure ke percentage me jo lajmi thi aakhir wo bina kuch soche uske saath jo gaya tha

Aur ye to confirm ho gaya ki jo bhi department ko target kr raha tha wo ab satark ho gaya tha to ab wo kuch time tk to koi halchalnhi krenge matlab the end of this arc but twist is in last baby......

Akhiri baat aur ye confirm krwa diya ju ne ki har kamre ke no. Jo bhi tha usme alag alag elements ki khoobiya thi yaa kaho to surprise hi maan lo bhale wo surprise tumhe maut de yaa kuch aur and room no. Ko leke pari ne pahle hi ye baat jahir ki thi par wo puri trah se smjh n saki thi haa ye jarur smjh gayi thi ki room no. se related kuch to ajjib hai aur wo nikla bhi

Khair aage badhte apan log.......

Veer ki bohot hi waah-wahi hui aakhir ussne akele jo ye sab kiya

Aur idhar Emma ne jaate hue usse 8:30 me milne ko bola department ke baahar mai smjh gaya tha wo apna raaz kholegi jo ussne waha chupaya aur hua bhi wahi ussne yacht chori kiya tha kisi rich person se Khair lekin ussne veer se uska assistant banne ki bola to veer ne Nolan ki secretary ko dekhte hue kuch aur hi bola

Khair yaha Niharika ne hack krwane ki koshish krwayi veer ka phone but veer to uske bohot uppar se bhi uppar ki chis tha wo khel gaya aur jhaar diya ache se Niharika ko aur Niharika ne uss hacker ko jhaar kr bhaga diya

Aur idhar jab veer ander aaya department ke to ussne suhana ko divya pe chilate hue paya ki wo kya chupa rahi hai bata de aur jisse tang aakar akhir kar divya ne ek card feka jo suhana ke muh par land hua plane ki trah shuuuuuuuuuu nhi be Khair choro aur jab uss card ko jab ussne dekha to wo shock me chilaayiii

"Whaaaaaattttttttt ??"

Khair ab mai nhi jaanta ye kya tha par itna to pata hai ki jiss liye divya ne bulaya tha suhana ko usse related hi kuch hai par kis chis ka card hai ye n pata haa ye jarur pata hai ki ye card NIGHTWALKER. Se related aur uss mansion se related nhi hai ye kisi aur chis ka hi card hai jo envelope ke size ka hoga I think koi n dekhte hai aage ke update me !!

And this is the end of this arc I think but don't so I mean house of killers dubara jarur aayenge hi agar ye end hai to !!

Aur ab aate ju kke writting aur shocking aur apan logo ko suspence me chor e ki to wo lajavaab tha.....ab mai kitni baar Hatt's off bolu ju ko mai to thsk gaya but mai yahi kahunga ki ju ek gem ho and I really really say and it's apply on you man you are insane in this.... Rihanna is right you are really a gem


Take care........
spelling mistakes hui hongi jaldbaaji me to unko mind mt Krna Werewolf bhaya

Nice mast update bro

Nice exposure

https://xforum.live/members/werewolf.3608/ yrr bro enlogo ko jara story mai notes kese karte hai or kese read karte hai jara dhayaan do yrr

Jabardasttt Updateee

This was brutal

Lajwaab....Laajwaab....Laajwaab

Nice n awesome update

Jis tarah aap kahani mein ek dum Suraj ki garmi ki tarah hot hot heroine laate jaa rahe ho aur theek usi tarah Veer ke attitude aur personality mein coolness laate jaa rahe ho usse hi pata chalta hai ki aap Suraj aur Chand ke beech mein kahin basar karte ho.

Fantastic zabardast update

Bhai hosake to thoda sex scene bhi laoo plot me

Next Update kab tak aayega bhai ji
Intejar nahi hota hai

Waiting for next update bro

मेंशन के प्रत्येक कमरे का नम्बर प्लेट टिन से बना हुआ था और वो नेम प्लेट ठीक दरवाजे के लाॅक के डायरेक्शन में था । नाईट वाकर ने नेम प्लेट को गैस के द्वारा पिघलाया और अंदर अपना हाथ डालकर लाॅक को आनलाॅक किया और कमरे में प्रवेश किया । चूंकि टिन का मेल्टिंग प्वाइंट बहुत ही कम होता है अतः इसमें ज्यादा समय भी नहीं लगना था ।

काफी अच्छा दिमाग लगाया आपने वेयरवोल्फ भाई । एक ऐसा यूनिक चीज जिसे आसानी से सोचा ही नहीं जा सकता है ।

दूसरा खुलासा गोल्ड का था । नाईट वाकर ने उसे पिघलाकर लिक्विड में तब्दील किया और उसे एक फूलदान में रखकर उसपर मिट्टी और कुछ छोटे पौधे लगाकर लोगों को भ्रमित कर दिया ।

यह भी अच्छा खासा सस्पेंस बनाया आपने ।
मुझे यह अपडेट वास्तव में जबरदस्त लगा ।

लेकिन मिस्ट्री अभी भी पुरी तरह से हल नहीं हुआ है । Noah White अर्थार्त नाईट वाकर इस पुरे खेल का सिर्फ एक खिलाड़ी था । इस खेल का रचयिता और अन्य खिलाड़ियों पर से अभी भी पर्दा नहीं हटा है । और सबसे अहम बात कि इस सब के पीछे असल मकसद क्या था ?
परी ने सही कहा - " नाईट वाकर सिर्फ दूसरा किलर था... क्या ये लोग आने वाले मुसीबत के लिए तैयार हैं भी या नहीं "

साफ संकेत है कि खतरा अभी टला नहीं है और खेल अभी बाकी है ।
एम्मा मैडम का व्यवहार मुझे कुछ खास समझ नहीं आया । चोरी की बोट से आइलैंड पहुंचना और फिर अचानक से वीर के अंडर काम करने की ख्वाहिश जताना.... कुछ अजीब सा लगा मुझे ।

मुझे लगता है वीर को एम्मा पर नजर रखने के साथ साथ जिम नामक उस व्यक्ति का पता भी लगाना चाहिए जो नाईट वाकर का पार्टनर था ।
वैसे तो मुझे नोलन सर के आफिस में टाॅमी और निक का विहैवियर भी काफी अजीबोगरीब लगा । टाॅमी को जहां इस चीज के लिए वीर का शुक्रगुजार करना चाहिए कि वो जिंदा सही सलामत वापस आ गया और उसके दोस्त का क़ातिल पकड़ा गया वहीं वो वीर पर अपनी खुन्नस निकालने लगा था । ऐसा कोई भी व्यक्ति नहीं करता ।

यह खेल अभी खत्म नहीं हुआ है , इसका अंदाजा दिव्या के दिए गए उस लिफाफे से होता है जो उसने सुहाना को दिया । मुझे तो ऐसा ही लग रहा है । यह कार्ड उसी खेल का हिस्सा है ।

बेहद ही शानदार अपडेट था वेयरवोल्फ भाई ।
और हां , आप के थ्रीड की सभी कन्याओं को रक्षाबंधन की हार्दिक बधाई ।

आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग एंड जगमग जगमग अपडेट ।

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Bohot hi badiya update bhai jann superree duperrere update
Fabulous outstanding performance

Veer ne to full khatrnak tariksese case solved kr Liya hey

Bro veer jab Mumbai aaye to vo apni senior pragya se mile thoda surprising krte h veer ke liye Mumbai mai

Awesome update Werewolf bhai.
Totally unexpected tha ye sab. Veer yaha sabke samne khada sabke mooh dekh raha he. Aur sab veer ke explanation ki raah dekh rahe he wahi ek chutiya Nik mann me khush ho raha he ki Veer se kya hi hoga ??? Ab uski biwi hi batayegi usko ki veer se kya kya Hua ??
Ab ese paheliyo me veer baate karega to Tommy jese gussa honge hi. Par divya suhana ke mann me inn sabse jyada sawal he veer ke liye. Suhana to kafi samay se dekhti aa rahi he aur mauka dekhke le jayegi experiment lab me.
Aur jese aapne kaha tha ki koi guess nahi kar sakega wo sahi sabit hua. Ye guess Karna next to impossible tha. Periodic table ke sahare sara khel tha. Room numbers se atomic numbers ka pata chal gaya veer ko. Zoey ke room me jake confirm ho gaya uska shaq. Tin se leke gold tak sabke atomic numbers use kiye he Nightwalker ne.
Nightwalker pehle welder tha to ye sab uske liye koi nayi baat nahi. Aur veer ko bhi ye pata lag hi gaya thanks to his intelligence. Gold mil gaya par kuch logo ko jaan se hath dhona pada.
Nolan khush he veer ke case solve karne par aur reward bhi milega aur usme Mike ko bhi haq banta he. Nik ki jali hui he aur divya, suhana apne vicharo me.
Wahi Mumbai me niharika bematlab sab mehnat kar rahi he kyuki veer sab pehle se janta he uske plan ke bare me. Ab niharika buri fasi he ye sab karke. Ab wapis niharika ko uske room me saja milegi. Wapis Mumbai jake niharika se milega tab majha aayega.
Emma ne jo milne ka bola tha usse to saaf he ki wo Veer ke sath kaam Karna chahti he. Veer ne professional secretary ka bola aur Emma wo sunn ke nikal li. Ab aage aayegi to achha he aur ye zoey bhi dikhegi shayad aage. Wahi Veer wapis gaya to suhana aur Divya aapas me apni baato me lagi hui he. Aur ab divya batayegi kyu bulaya he usne suhana ko yaha. Konsa card ho sakta he ?? Ek aur killer .
Wahi tej, bhavna aur purvi ka bhi scene de do taki bhavna apne bete ke bare me janne ke liye kahi se to shuruwat kare.
Aarohi aur kavya bhi miss kar rahi hogi veer ko. Aur aarohi baar baar hath lagayegi uss baaliyan ko jo veer ne di thi usko.
Waiting for next update.

please yaar next update bro

Waiting for next update bro

Werewolf bhai next update kab tak aayega?

Eska matlab 1 month se jyada man lo

Best story i have ever read on any of the forums

Waiting for next update bro

Waiting for update

I'm back wolf janii update 35 par gaya tha jab lota TU story ak dam BAWAAL bani padi hai or yaqeen Mano 6 dino main 35 Sy agy story completely read kr lii maza agaya par ak sad point bhi dekha Jahan pehly update 2 din baad ata tha ab 3 din baad ata hai par koii na manage kr Liya Maine bas story likhty jao aap .par ak swaal hai ye HOUSE OF KILLER arc last arc hai ya isky baad bhi koi bawaal machy ga story Mai?

peace .

Wowww bro it’s awesome hmmm it’s great I don’t what I say I don’t words to explain you are such a great writer. Hands up for you bro keep writing bro and give us next update as soon as possible to reveal this suspense that why Veer is here and for what ????

Firstly, Jim The Slippery & now The Nightwalker aka Noah White... Veer has been the driving force behind tackling both the criminals... GIU ho ya fir Divya/Nik ki personal agency, dono vibhag jo karya karne mein asafal rahe, Veer ne apne bal par wo kar dikhaya... Jim, Divya ne kaha hi tha ki wo pehle bhi kayi baar unke changul se nikal chuka hai to wahin Nightwalker ne seedhe taur par Connor ko maar kar, agency ko hi challenge kar diya tha... But now, as Veer has done the unprecedented, his stakes are going to rise by leaps & bounds... Divya, Nik, Nolan & Suhana of course, sab par in donon ghatnao ka impact padne waala hai ya kahun ki pad chuka hai...

Nightwalker ek psycho ya kahun ki ek maniac tha, uske description se hi ye baat saaf ho jaati hai... He killed a total of 93 people, including his own family members... I guess, aage chalkar pata chale ki kya khaas wajah thi ki “House Of Killers” ke owner/boss ne Jim aur Nightwalker ko chuna... What's the particular criteria that's followed in the selection of criminals to participate in the mass butchering..? I think ki Nightwalker ka ruthless hona ek kaaran ho sakta hai is cheez ka, and about Jim, maybe his escaping skills (taking into note, Jim ki aukaat is sangathan mein ek choohe jitni hi thi)...

There were two major twists in the Mansion's turmoil... Firstly, the room numbers, they were quite suspicious and now Veer has revealed what they actually meant... Them being atomic numbers actually was a good twist, Nightwalker ke dimaag ki kabiliyat darshane ke liye ek achha tareeka saabit hua ye... Secondly, the treasure, Veer found that too... Nightwalker ke description se pata chal gaya tha ki wo pehle ek technician/welder tha... Aise mein uska gold bars ko pighla kar ek vase mein chhupa dena, ek aur taraf ishara karta hai... Agar is gang ka doosra hi criminal itna chaalak/brainy hai, then what's in the way of Veer in coming updates...

The secret of Chester's death was revealed simultaneously too... Firstly, room mein jaate waqt Chester ne koyi gas inhale ki thi, I guess it was something that cause unconsciousness... Kyonki jo kuchh Veer ne bataya, how NW got into Chester's room, itna time laga tha agar use andar jaane mein, utne waqt mein kuchh na kuchh to Chester bhi karta hi khud ko bachane ke liye... Secondly, room mein haatha paayi ya fir kisi bhi prakar ki struggle ke koyi marks the nahin, simply it points towards the fact that Chester was unconscious when he got killed...

Khair, Paintings ka koyi role tha nahi in murders mein, it was a simple deception & nothing else... Beharhal, is poore ghatnakram se ek sawaal paida hota hai, wasn't there ay support for Nightwalker on the Island? Jo boats wahaan se gaayab huyi, obviously ek aadmi ka to kaam hoga nahi ye, means wahaan aur bhi logon ko maujoodgi thi... Ab sawaal ye hai ki kya wo log boats lekar wahaan se nikal gaye the? Agar haan, tab to theek hai, par agar kuchh log wahin Island par hi maujood the aur CCTV Cameras se Nightwalker ki thukayi wo dekh chuke the.. then what was the reason that they didn't come to finish off Veer & others..? What I can think of is that NW's senior (considering ki NW second in command to nahi hoga main boss ke baad), wo vyakti shayad Veer se khud deal karna chahta ho, saari footage dekhne ke baad...

Btw. Nightwalker & Jim too, ab “House Of Killers” waale is maamle ko seriously lena shuru kar denge... Daniel, Connor & others (those who died before Veer's arrival in Vegas), ye sabhi log un criminals ka ek aasan shikaar ban gaye the, these people were not a big problem for the criminals but now Veer has risen as a massive threat to their plans... After watching all the stuff via CCTVs, they're going to take Veer very seriously... GIU aur Nik ki agency ki jagah ab shayad unka prime target Veer hi hoga... I think wo log Veer ko bhi Nik & Party ka hi saathi assume karenge...

Veer ke in heroics ka alag - alag prabhav pada hai sab par... Firstly, Nolan is highly impressed by all this, aur isiliye usne Veer ka naam prize ke liye recommend karne ki baat bhi uthayi... All these people, might be beneficial for Veer in his journey of becoming a “Baadshah"... Maybe abhi ke liye Nolan & others like him, don't seem to be relevant after this arc, but maybe in future they can come good, when Veer might need someone like them...

Coming to Mike, I'm assuming that he's going to India alongside Veer... All the things between the two, firstly Mike's gesture to come with Veer & then Veer passing forward Mike's name in front of Nolan... Mike is trustworthy too, and his abilities are not hidden, being a member of the detective agency for a considerable amount of time renders him with a good amount of courage & experience to handle himself & even other's in a vulnerable situation... So, he might be the right hand man that the future King - Veer might require...

Coming to Suhana, she has been connected to Veer for a good amount of time now... Elimination of Aatish, has already been a huge favour on her from Veer's side... On top of that, Veer never retaliated on Suhana burdening him with favours, which actually had no existence... Divya ke saath pichhle update mein jo baatein huyi thi Suhana ki, Veer ke baare mein, aur fir jab Veer waapis lauta, tab Suhana ka uske nazdeek aakar uski khairiyat puchhna... Just a couple of more things, and Suhana will fall for him... I guess, I know those two things too ... Gaurav & the guy Suhana murdered in the past, those two problems of her, if Veer finds a solution, he'll never be able to get over the reward he'll get!

Divya par bhi Veer ke is bahaduri bhare kaarya ka asar to hua hi hoga... Veer ke baare mein jo kuchh usne Suhana se suna tha, uske baad Jim ke samay jaise Veer ne use bachaya, especially his gesture of providing first - aid to her... All of that, got Divya's favourability to a position from where it'll never drop... Par uske baad, Divya ke hi Pati ne Veer ko maut ke munh mein dhakel diya but to her surprise, Veer not only came back alive but also brought the criminal on his knees... Guilt + Surprise, another rise in favourability? And a drop in favourability of her's towards her own husband...

Rahi baat us Nik naamak praani ki, to mujhe ab bhi lagta hai ki kisi na kisi tareeke se he's associated with the “House Of Killers”... On top of that, there's a possibility that Divya, in future, might be a member of Veer's Harem... So, let's not talk about Nik now, kyonki aage chalkar uske liye shayad zyada kuchh achha hone nahi waala hai...

Emma is suspicious too! Island par wo kaise pahunchi ye to pata chal gaya hai but still she's hiding something... Not only Emma but also Tommy, the way this puppy was behaving while Veer was unfolding all the secrets, clearly points towards the fact that this guy is also hiding something... Zoey ke baare mein abhi kuchh kehna sahi nahi hoga, but I think she can be the “professional secretary ” Veer was thinking about!

In the end, Suhana's reaction on something which Divya put in front of her... The next update might bring another revelation alongside it... Beharhal, I think ki jo agla criminal hoga, maybe Suhana knows him/her? Aur usi ke kaaran, Suhana yahaan aane ko raazi ho gayi thi? Let's see Veer iske baare mein kya pata laga paata hai...

Both the updates were quite enthralling... The way you carried along the suspense throughout the Mansion Part was really good! The rooms & their numbers, the doors, the treasure, Veer & Nightwalker's face-off & then Veer revealing everything in front of everyone... All the parts were presented in the best way possible, and both the updates were really fun to read...

Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Raksha bandhan pr special episode me bhai behan ko to milwa dete

Waiting bhaisab

english naam hai to confusion ho gaya . chester hi hai naam par steven likh diya

Aap kya , khud angrez log bhi confused ho jaye.. esiliye to main English me review nahi deta... totally confused language ... main to soch raha hu ki abb se bhojpuri ya bangla me hi review dunga..... third class language hai English..beda gark kar diya hai hindustan ka.... Leon bru , main aap ke saath hu.

Isko bolte kahke ke lena

Khi se jalne ke buu aa rhi hai

Waiting for nxt update

Ok bhai intejar hai... Bhai 3 din ko jagah 4 din ho heye

Waiting for next update

Waiting for the next update

Superb update
Agle update ka intezar rahega

Waiting for next update bhai

Waiting WOLF bro

Waiting bro

Bai bohot din bad ap ki story pirse par paya. ....this is the best story of the xforhum......
Bai bohot bariya.....

Waiting bro....for next wonderful update....

Bara rochak aur jaandar update hai bhai.veer ne nightwaker ko joker bana diya.

Kahani ka 1 saal pure hone par hardik abhinandan

Bhai update kitni dr aayega

Mere ko bhi lagta hai aane wala hai Aaj update
koi mahapurush bola tha

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