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Update - 104 ~ The Grand Concert​

Ab tak...

Akhir issi ke liye toh woh shopping karne bhi aaye the. Divya ne jo call card Suhana ko fek ke diya tha, uske sang ek flyer bhi tha.

Jo tha...

Aur akhir me jo card usne feka tha Suhana ke muh pe woh tha, ek invitation card.

Aur, Invitation tha...

Natalia Martin ka...

Ab aage...

Las Vegas...
Downtown...
Evening ~ 7:54 PM

*Screeeeeeeeeeeccccchhhhhh*

Car aake seedha ruki. Andar maujood the Veer aur Suhana jo abhi abhi Forum shops at Caesers se aa rahe the. Dono hi acche kapde pehne hue the.

*Thud*

Woh baahar nikle aur car ka darwaza band hua.

Veer : Kaha hai Miss Divya?

Suhana : Usne kaha tha ki woh entrance ke baahar ek club hai waha milegi. Dekho aas paas, koi club wagarah dikh raha hai kya?

Veer ne nazre ghumaayi toh paas hi usse ek club dikhaayi diya.

Veer : Call karna better hoga I guess.

Suhana : Hmm! Wait a minute!

Veer ki baat maan kar Suhana ne Divya ko call lagaaya aur baat karte hi unhe pata chala ki woh ussi club me thi, jaha Veer dekh raha tha.

Suhana : Andar hi hai woh waha uss waale club me. Let's go!

Dono hi bheetar ki orr chal diye. Lagbhag 8 baj rahe the aur club ke andar ka mahaul masti aur jagmagaati dj lights se bhara pada tha.



Thirakte log, loud speakers par bajte angrezi gaane, cocktails enjoy karte log, sofe par baithe VIPs aur adh nange kapdo me naachti ladkiya.


Veer aur Suhana unn logo ke beech se nikalne ke liye aage badhe tabhi itne me ek nashe me dhutt gori ladki Veer ki chhaathi se aake chipak gayi.

Apni patli kamar ko woh yu matkaate hue, apni nasheeli aankho se usse rijhaane lagi,

Veer ki nazre uss ladki ko upar se neeche tak scan kar rahi thi. Ladki khubsoorat toh thi. Par, Veer ke mann me ek hi baat nikli,

'I have zero interest in you, girl!'

[Hahahaha~]

Aur uski iss baat par Pari bhi hass uthi. Veer ko 36 kaam the. Yadi woh aisi aisi harr ek ladkiyo par girne laga toh woh kahi ka nahi reh paega. Aur wese bhi, Kaera, Sonia, Suhana, Ragini jaisi ladies ke muqaable iss ladki ki sundarta feeki maalum pad rahi thi.

Bas ek nazar daal usne apni nazre mod li, aur idhar Suhana ne jab ye sab dekha toh woh Veer ki kalaayi thaam usse kheech kar aage badh gayi,

Suhana : Tumhe mazza toh bada aa raha hoga, hai na?

Veer : Hmm? Kyu bhala?

Suhana : Saamne se ladki aake chipak rahi thi. Itne bhole kyu bann rahe ho?

Veer : Uski jagah agar koi aur aake chipakta toh shayad mazza aa jaata.

Jese hi usne ye kaha, Suhana chalte chalte achanak hi ruk gayi aur peeche palat ke uski aankho me dekhi.

Kehna kya chaah raha tha ye ladka? Kahi woh...!?

Kahi woh ye toh nahi kehna chaah raha tha ki uss ladki ki jagah Suhana khud hoti toh...!!

Dono ka ye eye contact 5 se 6 seconds ke liye bana raha. Na Veer ne kuch kaha aur na hi Suhana ne. Ek ajeeb sa atmosphere janm le raha tha unn dono ke beech.

Lekin, Suhana ne agle hi pal uss atmosphere ko bhang kar diya. Woh waapas mudi aur Veer ke haath ko thaam andar ki orr usse le jaane lagi.

Bina kuch kahe hi, unn dono ke beech kuch na kuch baatein toh zaroor ho chuki thi. Sirf ek dusre ke naino se. Jese Suhana parakhna chaah rahi thi ki kya Veer ka ishaara uski orr tha? Aur Veer ye dekhna chaah raha tha ki kya Suhana ne uski baato ko apne upar liya tha? Aur yadi liya tha toh woh kya karne wali thi? Parantu, naino ki kashmakash zyaada derr na chali. Dono hi ek rikt sthaan par aa kar atak chuke the.

Iss rikt sthaan ko bharne ke liye dono ko hi apne mann ki baatein saamne rakhne ki zaroorat thi. Jo dono hi nahi karne waale the.

Woh punaah aage badhe aur andar jese hi woh pohuche, woh ek naye hall me pravesh kar gaye.

Lights aur bhi dim thi yaha, ye ek prakaar se rest room ki tarah tha. Baahar ka shor yaha kam sunaayi de raha tha. Jagah jagah mirrors lage hue the jidhar anya ladkiya khadi hoke apna apna make-up theek karne me lagi hui thi.

Aur unhi me se ek jagah khadi hui thi,

Divya!!!

Veer : Woh rahi aapki dear friend.

Usne ishaara karte hue kaha. Suhana ne nazre daudaati hue dekha toh Divya waha khadi mirror me khud ko sawaar rahi thi.





Aur Veer jese hi aage badha, Divya ne mirror me se unn dono ko aate dekh liya.

Woh aaiyne me Veer ko ghoor rahi thi.



Suhana : Chale bhi ab?

Divya : Hmm! Kyu nahi!? Let's go!

Suhana : Toh isliye tumne mujhe yaha bulaaya tha haan?

Divya : Phone par bataya toh tha na mene.

Suhana : Tumne kaha tha ki ek client ne tumhe contact kiya hai. Tumne ye nahi bataaya tha ki woh client kaun tha. The fact that it turned out to be her... Ava!!!!

Divya : Ab usse Natalia kehke bulao Suhana. Celebrity se kam nahi hai ab woh. Iss ek saal me poori music industry par keher barsa ke rakh diya hai usne. Jidhar dekho bas ussi ke gaane chhaa rahe hai aaj kal.

Suhana ye sunn ek chinta me doob gayi.

Divya : Ab kya sochne lagi?

Suhana : I just don't get it. Last time mene usse bachpan me hi dekha tha. Sonu ke sang. Aur mujhe tab aisa kuch bhi yaad nahi tha ki woh singing me talented hai. Aur ab...

Divya : People change Divya. Usne mehnat toh kari hi hogi. Iss tarah ki awaaz aur itni fan following. Sirf paisa fekne se nahi mil jaati.

Suhana : ...

Veer : Umm! Hum chal rahe hai na?

Divya (smiles) : Of course!

Muskuraate hue woh Veer ke bagal se aayi aur teeno hi baahar ki orr nikalne lage,

Chalte chalte hi Divya dheere se Veer ke paas aayi aur,

Divya : Hey!!! Kaisi lag rahi hu mein?

Veer ne uss par upar se neeche nazar daali aur usse ye maan'na hi pada ki Divya ki personality bhale hi kaisi bhi thi, par aaj lag toh ekdum pataka rahi thi.

Veer : Good!

Divya (smiles) : Bas good? Am I not looking hot?

Veer : Ahem! You do actually...!

Veer ki honesty par woh usse muskuraate hue dekhi, ye muskaan sach me aisa laga jese ekdum sacchi thi.




'Is this the real you?' Veer ke mann me uski awaaz aayi.

Yaha se ravaana hote hi woh pohuch gaye downtown me, jaha Natalia ka music concert rakha gaya tha.

Baahar logo ki line toh aise lagi thi, prateet ho raha tha jese poora Vegas hi yaha utar aaya tha.

Veer : What the...!?

Divya : Dekh rahi ho craze Suhana? Ye wahi Ava hai jo Sonia ke saath bachpan me khelti thi. Fans dekh rahi ho uske? Hahaha~ I don't even remember last time mene kab itni bheed dekhi thi ek saath.

Suhana : Andar chalo warna aur dikkat hoegi hume.

Jese hi Veer andar jaane ke liye hua toh achanak hi uske peripheral vision me ek jaana maana shaks dikhaayi diya.

'Huhhhh!?? Zoeyyy??'

Suhana : Veer??? Kaha kho gaye?

Veer : Aap dono andar chaliye mein aata hu.

Suhana : Arre par...!?

Veer itna bol waha se uss bheed me alag disha me ghus gaya aur ek pal me hi tamaam janta ke beech kahi gaayab ho gaya.

Divya : Woh aa jaega. Let's go!

Suhana : Nahi!!! Usse aa jaane dete hai fir...

Divya : Accha baba! Ek kaam karte hai iss entrance ke andar toh chal dete hai? Yaha boht bheed ho rahi hai. Andar hum uska wait kar lenge.

Suhana ne haami bhari aur woh dono hi andar chali gayi. Woh Veer ko yu akela nahi chorrna chaahti thi.

Idhar Veer bhaari bharkam bheed me Zoey ko peeche peeche follow karte hue uske paas badi mushqil se pohucha aur usne peeche se hi Zoey ka haath thaam usse palta diya,

Veer : What are you doing here?

Zoey : Wha-!?

Wo palti aur Veer ko saamne dekh hairaan reh gayi.

Zoey : Veeeerrr!!!!!

Veer : Yeah! You here?

Zoey : Ahhh! I...

Uska sarr neeche jhuk gaya.

Veer : What happened?

Zoey : It's... I just came here to return the dress. There's a famous shop here. And when I was passing by... I got lost! Too many people... You know...

Apne kandhe uchkaate hue woh thoda uncomfortable way me boli,

Veer : Returning dress? Why so?

Zoey apni ek behad sundar sii dress ko return karne aayi thi. Jo ki yahi ek shop se lii gayi thi.

Zoey : Because I rented it... Ahahaha~

Woh sharminda hote hue boli. Baat saaf thi. Woh wese hi paiso ko lekar tangi me thi. Mansion me bhi usne apni kismat azmaana chaaha tha par uske haath kuch na laga. Ulta jaan aur gawa baithi thi woh.

Zoey ne ek dress yaha se rent par lii thi, ye soch ke ki fashion modeling ke photoshoot ke dauraan, uski ye photos bade bade magazine photographers tak shayad pohuch jaaye aur woh usse apne saath kaam karne ke liye bulaaye.

Par jesa usne socha tha wesa kuch na hua. Unn photographers ne Zoey ko kam se kam semi nude hone ka keh diya tha. Zoey unn chand ladkiyo me se ek thi jo nudity me apna haath nahi daalna chaahti thi. Aksar usse log taane maarte the ki model bann'ne ke sapne dekhna woh chorr de.

Jo ladki nudity accept nahi kar sakti woh kya khaak model banegi. Sach kaha jaaye toh fashion ki duniya me aisi nagnata ko normal hi maana jaata hai. Zoey ek aisi model bann'na chaahti thi jo bina nudity ke bhi, keval apni khubsoorti aur figure ke bal par poori fashion industry ko dominate kar ke rakh de.

Par afsos, hum jesa chaahte hai zaroori nahi ki wesa hi ho. Usse ek push ki zaroorat thi bas. Bas thoda paisa kharch karne ki zaroorat hi. Lekin dikkat bhi toh yahi thi. Uske paas paisa nahi tha.

Veer Zoey ka status jaanta tha. Aur usne ek baar me hi sab bhaanp liya tha.

Zoey : I... I must go now! I cannot miss my train. Otherwise I won't be able to afford any more tickets. Ahaha~

Wo firse nakli hassi dete hue hassi aur mudi,

Veer : Wait!!!

Zoey : Huh?

Veer ne usse rok liya. Peeche mud jab usne Veer ko dekha toh...

Veer apni blazer ki jeb se kuch nikaal raha tha.
Usne ek kaagaz ka panna nikaala aur Zoey ke haath me thama diya.

[Ehhhh? M-Maasterrrr???]

Kuch pal toh Zoey idhar Veer ko hi dekhti rahi lekin jab usne neeche uss kaagaz par gaur kiya toh uski aankhein achambhav ke maare fel uthi,

Zoey : Wh-Whaaatttt??? N-Noooo!!! What are you doing?

Woh kaagaz koi aisa wesa kaagaz nahi tha. Cheque tha woh. Wahi cheque jo Veer ko reward ke roop me investigation department se mila tha. Nightwalker ko jo pakdaaya tha usne.

Kayi hazaaro dollars ka cheque tha woh. Aur ye reward Veer ka tha.

Veer : Have it!! You need it more than me.

Zoey : What?? No!!! I can't take this. Not at all!!!

Aur usne woh waapas usse thamaane ki koshish kari, par Veer na maana. Jab uski ek na chali toh woh Veer ki zidd ke aage haar hi gayi,

Zoey : B-But... No! I just can't...

Zoey ki apni ek pride thi. Yadi wo paise chaahti toh nudity me ghus kar na jaane kitne kama leti. Par usne aisa nahi kiya. Toh bhala woh Veer ke haath se ye paise free me kese le sakti thi? Iss baat ko Veer samajh chuka tha. Isliye,

Veer (smiles) : Then you can repay me. One day when you'll become a famous model. At that time think of me... You'll find me in Mumbai, India. I hope by that time, I would have made a name of myself.

Veer ne uski saari problem ek sentence me solve kar dii. Usne Zoey ko udhaar ke roop me ye paise diye. Beshaq, ab Zoey ki pride ko utna dhakka nahi laga tha. Uske zehen me bhi yahi baat thi ab ki woh udhaar le rahi thi. Na ki free me usse ye paise taras khaa ke diye jaa rahe the.

Aasuo ki komal komal boonde apne aap uski aankho se nikal padi, wo rote hue dhundhli aankho se apne haath me uss cheque ko dekh rahi thi.

Zoey : I'll remember this. I'll definitely repay you back some day. I promise...!

Par jab tak usne apni nazre upar kar Veer ko dekha, tab tak Veer palat ke dur jaa chuka tha. Usne bina mude hi apna haath hawa me uthaaya aur goodbye ka ishaara kar woh dobaara se uss bheed me kho gaya.

Zoey apni aankho se aasu poch ek antim baar Veer jis orr gaya uss disha me dekhi aur apni suitcase utha ke woh palat ke nikal gayi.

***

Idhar Veer jese hi kuch qadam hi aage badha tha jab,

*Ding*

[Zoey's favourability has been increased by 40.]

[Master! Pehle mein surprised thi. Par at the end, aapne ek sahi kaam kiya. She needed that cheque.]

'Pari! Kayi baar hume rishte bhi banaane padte hai.'

[Par Master agar future me Zoey aapka kiya hua ye favour bhul gayi aur kabhi bhi aapko repay nahi kiya toh?]

'Toh kya? Toh kuch nahi Pari! Woh kahavat toh suni hi hogi. Neki kar, dariya me daal.'

[Thats... Indeed! Master!]

Veer muskuraaya aur aage badh concert ke venue ki entrance me ghus gaya.

***

"Kaha reh gaye the tum???"

Ghuste hi usse bagal se Suhana ki awaaz sunaayi dii. Dono Divya aur woh uska hi intezaar kar rahi thi.

Veer (smiles) : Emergency!!!

Suhana : Kyaaaa?? Aur piyo dherr saara paani car me baithe baithe... Arre mall me bhi toh...

Divya : Enough!!!! Suhana! Hum pehle hi late hai. Let's go!

Divya usse kheech ke lete hue aage badhi, aur idhar Suhana peeche palat ke Veer ko apni aankhein sikodte hue dekhi jese kehna chaah rahi ho ki ye lecture woh baad me sunaaegi usse.

Veer andar hi andar mand mand muskuraaya. Kabhi kabhi ye Suhana ekdum bacchiyo jese behave karne lagti thi. Aisa lagta tha jese uski dusri personality maano baahar aa rahi ho.

Veer, Divya aur Suhana jese hi venue me enter kiye, woh andar ka nazaara dekh ke hi dang reh gaye.

Concert itna bhavya tha ki kehne ke liye shabd nahi the unke paas.




Dherr saari jagmagaati lights, aasmaan tak unki rays feli hui thi, smoke pipes se dhua uth raha tha, bhaari maatra me log thirak rahe the, saamne behad badi sii screen me Natalia dikhaayi de rahi thi jo stage ke beecho beech behad khubsoorat dress pehne khadi hui thi.

Shayad woh gaana shuru karne hi waali thi.

Veer aur baaki sab excited logo ke beech se apna raasta khojte hue aage badhe. Vip seats ki orr, jo sabse aage maujood thi. Woh late the. Warna unhe aise bheed ke beech me se nahi aana padta.

Par Veer unn logo ke beech se guzarte waqt...

*Ding*

Uski aankho me achanak pal bhar ke liye laali chhaayi. Aur usne aas paas idhar se udhar nazre firaate hue dekha. Uski aankhein baaj ki tarah logo ko scan karne lagi.

Woh ek pal bhi bekaar nahi jaane dena chaahta tha. Nightwalker ke mansion me hoke aane ke baad usne system ko aur efficiently aur fast use karna shuru kar diya tha. Woh jaanta tha ye kitna zaroori tha.

Suhana jo aage chal rahi thi woh achanak se peeche mudi, aur jese hi usne Veer ko dekha,

Veer ki aankhein waapas se normal ho chuki thi.

Suhana : Hmm? Is something wrong?

Veer : Nothing! Keep moving!

Suhana : Hmm!

Aur Suhana ke firse mudte hi,

*Ding*

Unn aankho me laali firse janm le uthi.

Sab kuch itni tezzi se hua ki Suhana ko pata bhi nahi chala ki Veer ne abhi abhi uske bagal se khade hoke Beowulf activate karke inn chand seconds me hi apne aas paas ka jayza bhi le liya tha. Ye sab kuch seconds me hua. Woh itna tezz ho chuka tha system use karne me. Pari bhi jese uski saari mann ki baate samajhti thi. Ek pal nahi laga usse Veer ke thoughts ko poora karne me.

Within seconds, Pari ne Beowulf activate kiya aur waapas se deactivate kar diya. Aur Suhana ke mudne ke baad firse activate kar diya. Veer aur Pari ke beech koi baat bhi nahi hui. Jese Pari ab apne Master ke liye aur fast aur efficient ho chuki thi. Sab kuch bina kahe hi ho gaya. Unhe aapas me baat karne ki zaroorat hi nahi padi.

Filhaal, Veer ko aas paas se aisa kuch bhi nahi sunaayi diya jo charcha ya chinta ka vishay bane aur na hi usse kuch aisa dikhayi diya. Jo ki ek raahat waali baat thi. Aur isliye usne Beowulf deactivate kar diya.

Woh jese tese uss bheed se nikal aage aaye. Ekdum aage. Saamne Lambe lambe white sofe rakhe hue the. Keval Vip logo ke liye. Aur kayi saare Vip pehle se hi waha baithe the. Woh Veer, Suhana aur Divya ko hi dekh rahe the.

Baahar do guards the jo VIP invitations check kar rahe the. Divya ne invitation card unn guards ko thamaaya aur guards ne unhe andar jaane de diya.

Divya apne sofe ke upar lage tag me apne naam ke paas pohuchi aur Veer aur Suhana ko ishara kar usne aage bulaaya.

Teeno uss sofe par baith gaye.

Aur udhar upar bade se stage par Guitarist, drummer aur anya musicians Natalia ke ird gird apni jagah par baithe instruments set karna shuru karne lage.

*Booooooooooommmm*

Stage ke saamne se fireworks upar hawa me ude, janta ka shor tatha hooting shuru hui,

Aur Veer ne jese hi nazdeek se A
Natalia ko dekha, woh wahi jamm ke reh gaya.

'Huhhh!!!'

[Okay! I admit. She's gorgeous!]

Aur Pari ne bhi apni haami bhar dii.

Natalia behad khubsoorat thi. Veer ne kabhi nahi socha tha ki usse Kaera aur Sonia jesi ke level ki koi ladki itni jaldi usse issi janm me dekhne ko mil jaegi.

*Badump*

Uska dil ek dhadkan jese phaand gaya.

Aur agle hi shan,

'Check!'

Veer ne Natalia ko check kiya. Lekin jese hi usne check kiya, Natalia ki aankhein turant hi Veer par tikk gayi. Woh stage se seedha usse ghoor rahi thi.

'Hhuhhh??? Whattt??'

Par fir Veer ne dhyaan diya, ki Natalia ne sirf usse hi nahi, Divya aur Suhana ko bhi dekha. Aur ek halki sii nod dii bas.

Uske baad usne fir gaana shuru kiya.

I know it's fading, going away from my hands,
It never was there, had fooled me till the end.
Feelings of mine.... Yet keepin' meeee aliiiiiiive!
Nobody wants to see the pain behiiiiiiinnnd...
Closed my heart, and now I'm on my miiiiinnd...
Slippin' away from my grip...
There goes my wish...
And, letting go I no longer need that vile paaaassstttttttt.... ​

Natalia ki awaaz poore venue me goonj uthi.



Janta ka shor umad utha.

Koi instruments nahi baje the. Sirf aur sirf uski awaaz hi thi. Aur jis tarah se usne ye gaaya tha. Uss awaaz ke peeche ek alag hi dard tha. Aur kya hi kamaal ki powerful voice thi. Par saath hi utni hi madhur.

Uski awaaz itni alag thi ki sunte hi Veer ke shareer ke raungte khade ho gaye. Uski aankhein apne aap band ho gayi. Aur sirf Veer hi nahi tha. Suhana aur Divya ka bhi yahi haal tha.

Suhana ye bhi jaan gayi thi ab ki kyu itni zyaada bheed thi Natalia ke liye. She was too good! Live stage par aise live gaana. Koi notes miss nahi ho rahe the. Harr ek high note ekdum sahi laga tha uska. Aur awaaz zara bhi nhi ladkhadaayi unn high notes ko lagaane me.

Kitni practice chaahiye hoti thi iske liye ye baat Suhana bhali bhaati jaanti thi. Akhir uski contact me bhi kayi bade singers the. Par Natalia ki aaj iss awaaz live sunn'ne ke baad jese woh saare singers ab pheeke maalum pad rahe the.

Ye gaana Natalia ne abhi release nahi kiya tha. Ye sirf aane waale gaane ki kuch panktiya thi jo usne concert shuru karne se pehle gaayi aur excitement ke chalte janta udhar utne me hi paagal ho uthi.

Such was her craze!!!

Uske baad fir music aayi, fir jaake thoda mahaul party jesa hua aur vibe bani.

Suhana : Ek ghante ke upar ho gaya hai. Hum kab tak yaha baithe rahenge?

Divya : Meri baat ho chuki hai uss se. Usne kaha tha ki... Concert ke baad hi dinner me hume uske saath join karna hai. Aur udhar hi wo saari baatein bataegi.

Suhana : Matlab poora concert bhar yaha baithna hoga?

Divya : What is it? Tumhe toh glad hona chahiye. Finall getting to witness Natalia. Fufufu~ Should I call Sonia? Batau usse uski bachpan ki friend ke concert me baithe hai humlog. Hmm?

Suhana (aankh dikhaate hue) : You better not!!!

Divya : Hahahaha~

Suhana beech me thi. Veer aur Divya uske bagal se baithe huye the aur apne aap hi uska haath Veer ki jaangh par anayaas hi chala gaya.

Veer par uska dhyaan nahi tha. Aisa lag raha tha jese woh kisi baat ko kekar chintit thi.

Veer : What's up?

Suhana : ????

Veer : Mene pucha kya hua? Kya soch rahi ho aap?

Suhana : Ahh! Wo mein...

Veer : Hmm?

Suhana : I just... Tum jaante ho ki Ava... I mean Natalia Sonu ki childhood friend rahi hai. Par uske jaane ke baad se hamaare aur uske beech contact jese khatam sa hi ho gaya hai. Aaj usse yaha aise dekh ke bas shocked hu thoda. I never saw her singing in the past...

Veer : Tab woh boht choti rahi hongi... Maybe India se jaane ke baad unhone apne passion ko follow kiya ho?

Suhana : Yeah!!! Maybe...

***

Samay guzra aur dekhte hi dekhte ye vishaal concert apne ant ke qareeb pohucha.

Dekhte hi dekhte saari janta apne apne ghar ke liye jaldbaazi me nikalne lagi. Concert behad hit tha. Par Veer aur dono sundariya waapas jaane ki bajaaye venue ke bagal waale gate se baahar gaye.

Udhar hi ek behad badi 5 star hotel thi. Aur uske hi campus me dherr saari bheed ikhatta hui padi thi.

Photographers se leke reporters toh wahi haatho me phone liye Natalia ke fans...

Natalia hotel se baahar nikal rahi thi. Uski kaali cham chamaati dress stairs par lathadte hue peeche peeche aa rahi thi.



Woh campus tak aayi toh uske chehre par flashes ki bauchhaar shuru ho gayi.




*Click* *Click* *Click*

Par woh seedha apni vanity van ki orr chali gayi.

Aur idhar bodyguards ne saari janta aur tamaam reporters athwa photographers ko wahi rok liya.

Natalia ne apne kapde change kiye aur ek top aur uske upar black jacket daal woh hotel me waapas chali gayi.

***

Idhar Veer ki toli andar jaane ka wait kar rahe the. Natalia ke bodyguards ne unhe baahar thehra ke rakha hua tha kyuki tab tak Natalia change karne me lagi hui thi.

Suhana : What the hell?? Sonu ki childhood friend hai woh. Aur dekho toh... Humko anjaan samajh ke wait karwa rahi hai. I just...

Divya : People change Suhana... People change...

Suhana : Just like you, right?

Divya : Ugghh!! Y-Youuuu...

Suhana : Hmph!!!

Veer bas muskuraa raha tha. Usse pata tha Suhana aisi situations me pakke se trigger ho jaati hai. Aur wahi hua. Suhana ka ego hurt hua tha. Kese nahi badbadaaegi woh?

Kuch derr ke intezaar ke baad hi unhe andar jaane ke kiye allowed kar diya gaya.

Aur jese hi woh andar pohuche...

Natalia wahi baithi hui thi. Ek table ke paas ek seat par. Dinner yahi hona tha.

Usne teeno ko aate hue dekha aur bas ek halki sii muskaan ke saath boli,

"Welcome!!! Have a seat!!!"


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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Some updates takes time. Remember this well. I had to make my own lyrics for that Natalia's song. Searching for accurate relevant images takes time as well. Toh likes thok ke jaane ka aur revos rakhne ka.
Dhanyavaad!

 

[Pankaj Tripathi_PT]

Update - 77 ~ Preparations!

[Harr baar thodi mega update dunga bhai! ]
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Ab tak...

[Do you want to see Slogan's past???]

Bina koi derr kiye Veer ne Yes ko select kar diya.

Aur ek ke baad ek, Slogan ki saari memories, uska past system ne sab dikha diya.

[It's been quite a bit time... Master!!!?]

Wahi dusri orr... Jungle ki road waale ilaake par. Jaha chootiyaa thi dusri side par ussi ke upri ilaake par...

Ek ladki khadi hui thi. Hawa me lehraate baal aur agle hi pal...

Wo andhere me wahi mudte hue lupt ho gayi.

Ab aage...

Akhir ant ho gaya. Uss shaks ka, jisne Veer ko itna pareshaan kar ke rakha tha, jo uski jaan ke peeche pada hua tha. Wo, ab iss duniya se chal basa.

Aur ye sab kisne kiya? Veer ne, khud ne.

Itni mashaqqat ke baad, akhir wo Slogan ko outsmart karne me safal ho hi gaya. Aur uss se uska peecha chooth saka. Kya hi baat thi. Slogan ki maut bilkul ussi tarah hui jis tarah uski beti ki hui thi. Dono hi ussi khaayi me jaa gire. Shayad ab wo afterlife me ek dusre ke saath honge!?

Idhar Veer ek udaasi me iss waqt apne kamre me laita hua tha.

Uska mann boht hi maayus tha. Slogan ko jungle me dhund ke usne uska ant toh kar diya tha. Par sawaal tha ki wo Slogan ko jungle me dhund kese paaya?

Simple sii baat thi. Jab Veer ne Slogan ko goli maari thi, toh Slogan ke haath se khoon behna shuru ho chuka tha. Fir jidhar jidhar wo bhaagte hue gaya. Khoon ki ek trail banaata gaya.

Bhale hi wo khoon andhere me na nazar aaye. Par vatavaaran me khoon ki gandh toh fel hi gayi thi. Khoon me iron ki maatra toh hoti hi hai. Aur uss gandh ko harr koi jaanta hai ki wo kesi rehti hai. Veer ke senses already 120% par the. Including his sense of smell. Bhala aisa kese ho sakta tha ki usse khoon ki gandh na aaye!?

Yahi kaaaran tha ki Veer ne badi hi asaani se Slogan ko locate kar liya tha. Beowulf's Blessings ke samay samaapt hone se pehle hi.

Uss raat Veer ne Beowulf's Blessings ka istemaal poore 35 minutes ke liye kiya tha. Chaahe wo Matthew se ladaayi ho, ya chaahe Slogan se. Sab kuch inhi 35 minutes ke andar hua tha.

Bhale hi usne iss baar thode control me fight kii thi. Par fir bhi, uske istemaal ke baad Veer poora exhausted ho chuka tha. Wo kaafi derr tak ussi khaayi ke paas laita raha. Jab Jassi aur uski team andar aayi tab jaa ke unn logo ne Veer ko uthaaya tha.

Thanks to Karan, jisne ye bata diya tha ki Veer akele andar gaya hua tha. Aur wo fir usse dhundne andar aa paaye.

Jassi aur baaki sabhi ne uss raat Veer ko ek alag hi nazariye se dekhna shuru kar diya tha. Kyu? After all, Veer ne Slogan jese vyakti ka ant kiya tha. Aur ye koi sadhaaran baat nahi thi. Uss raat hui unke beech conversation, Veer ko acche se yaad thi.

Jassi : Tum theek toh ho?

Jassi ne Veer ko uthaaya aur usse sahaara diya.

Veer : Hmm! Par mujhse chala nahi jaa raha hai. I don't know why... Shareer ki poori energy jese gaayab sii ho gayi hai.

Jassi : Don't worry! Mein tumhe carry kar lunga. Aur Slogan? Wo kaha hai?

Veer : I killed him.

Jassi : Huhhhh???

Raghu : K-Kyaaa??

Veer : I killed him! Aur... Wo uss khaayi me jaake gir gaya.

Jassi : T-Tumne usse maara? Tumne?

Veer : Hmm!

Jassi : Y-Ye...

Veer : What? You guys... Tum sab meri complaint toh nahi karne waale na police me? Haan?

Jassi : Ehhh?? Of course not!!! Balki, hum toh tumhaare shukrguzaar hai. No! Infact, yadi tumhara zikr hota bhi hai kisi investigation me toh hum tumhara naam aane hi nahi denge.

Veer (sighs) : Thanks!

Jassi : Tumhe rest ki zaroorat hai. Team! Waapas chalo! Yaha se nikalne ka time aa gaya.

Jassi ne Veer ko Karan ko thamaaya aur usse le jaane ke liye kaha.

Raghu : Kya baat hai? Tu kuch pareshaan lag raha hai?

Jassi : Huh? N-Nahi! Kuch nahi! Chal!

'Akhir wo kya tha??? I'm sure mene uchaayi par wo saaya dekha tha. Kya wo koi jaanvar tha? Samajh nahi aa raha.' Jassi apne mann ki gutthi mann me hi liye aage badha.

Aur kuch issi prakaar Veer apne ghar laut paaya tha. Sawaal toh kayi puche the Ragini ne uss se ghar me. Par Karan ne matter sambhaal liya tha. Usne na jaane kaha ki kahaani banaayi on the spot aur Veer ko sawaalo se bacha liya tha. Par fir bhi, kal baal baal bacha tha Veer Ragini ke haatho se. Warna pakda jaata. Usse yaad hai Karan ne kese almost uski gaand marwa hi dii thi.

Car se utarte hi, Karan usse sambhaal ke ghar ke andar laaya tha aur laate hi Ragini ke sawaal shuru ho chuke the.

Ragini : Veeeeerrr??? Kaha the tum? Kab se phone laga rahi hu. Aur time dekha hai? Raat ke 2 baj rahe hai Veer. Tumhe pata hai yaha sab kitni chinta me the? Ek phone toh kar dete Veer? Mein thodi tumhe mana kar deti. It's just... Ghabraahat hone lagti hai idhar. Aur aap mahashay??? Aap toh Karan ho na? Veer ke naye dost? Fir aap ne Veer ko kyu nahi samjhaaya? Aur ek minute? Aap kya kar rahe ho idhar? Veer toh akele ghar se nikla tha. Huh??

Karan : Ahahahaha~ Bhabhi jii! Darasal... Wo hua ye tha ki...

'Fucccckkkk!!! Kya hua tha?? Kya hua tha? Poora full scale attack hua tha. But I cannot tell her that. Fuckkkk! Kuch soch Karan!!!' Karan mann me khud se socha. Bahaana toh dena tha kuch na kuch.

Karan : Bhabhi jii! Mein hi Veer ko le gaya tha actually. Ahem! Mere friend ki party thi ek. Toh mene socha akele kya karunga? Toh mein Veer ko le gaya tha. Ahahaha~

Ragini : Kya? Par Veer toh keh ke gaya tha ki business related matter se jaa raha hai woh.

Karan (Veer ko dekhte hue) : Hein? Tum business ki baat karne nikle the?

Veer :

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Veer ne agle hi pal apni kohni Karan ki pasli me de maari.

Karan : Gwaakhhh!! Arre! Haha! Haan wo sahi hi toh keh raha tha Bhabhi jii! Darasal jis friend ki party me gaye the uski business me acchi pakad hai. Toh... Aisa...

Ragini : Accha! Ek minute! Veer? Tum aise Karan ka sahaara kyu le rahe ho? K-Kya hua Veer?

Aur wo aage badh ke aayi aur Veer ko Karan ke haatho se pakad apni orr kheechi.

Karan : Bhabhi jii! Aaj toh Veer ne kamaal hi kar diya. Party me thodi ladaayi ho gayi thi. Ek aadmi ek ladki ko pareshaan kar raha tha. Bas! Veer kood pade. Ladayi badh gayi. Aur do isne maare toh do usne maare. Isliye, Veer ki abhi ye haalat hai. Hahaha~

Ragini : V-Veeeerrr??? Kyu ladaayi me padte ho? Tum theek toh ho na? Kaha lagi tumhe batao?

Wo kehte hue Veer ko check karne lagi aur idhar Veer muskura ke Karan ko dekh raha tha. Jese kehna chaah raha ho ki saale kal mil, bataata hu tujhe.

Karan Veer ki muskaan ko bhaanp liya aur forun hi usne waha se nikalne me hi bhalaayi samjhi.

Karan : M-Mein chalta hu. Bhabhi jii! Veer ka khayaal rakhna. Aaj kaafi mehnat kari hai usne. Ahahaha~ Goodbye Veer! Fir milte hai.

Aur bas, kal kuch iss tarah hi Veer ki raat guzri.

Aaj toh usne poore din araam kiya aur wo abhi bhi laita hi hua tha. Udaasi me.

[You are sad master!!!] Pari ki awaaz uske mann me gunji.

Pari!!! Jo uss raat sytem levelling ke tehet apni personality ek baar fir badal chuki thi. Veer kahi na kahi, iss Pari ko miss bhi kar raha tha toh wahi uss Pari ke jaane par thoda udaas bhi tha. Par maayusi ka keval yahi kaaran nahi tha. Kaaran tha...

[Swati!!! You are sad about her! Right?]

'Hmm! Pari!'

[This is how life is Master. Uss bechaari ka ant boht hi dardnaak hua. Kya galti thi uss bechaari ki? Still, she died a gruesome death. Ye kismat hoti hai Master. Fortune... Luck... Kab kiska kesa ho jaaye, koi nahi jaanta. That's the reason, you must strive to become strong.]

'Hmm~'

[You have such a kind heart Master!]

'Huh?'

[Aap baccho ke prati kitne sensitive ho. Ye mene dekh liya. Swati bhi ek bacchi hi thi uss waqt. You were seeing her as a kid. And seeing her in pain... You were so hurt. I could feel it.]

'I...'

[Juhi ke prati bhi aap kitne sensitive ho Master. You love her so much. I can see that. Baccho ke prati aapka lagaav alag hi dikhta hai master. Even though aapne ek aadmi ki jaan lii, still... Aap ne ab tak apni sanity nahi khoyi. You are still just like before. That's why I said, you have such a kind heart Master.]

'Mein... Th-Thank you Pari!'

[No! Thank you Master! I'm lucky to have you as my Master.]

'Hmm! Ab ye system ke changes samjhaogi mujhe?'

[Right away Master!]

'Go on then!'

[Master~ You got a random skill yesterday. Let me show you...]

*Ding*

[Skill 'Stock Master' has been rewarded.
Bio : Offers a 70% chance to succeed in sharemarket.]

'Holy fucccckkkkk!!!!' Veer jo ab tak laita hua tha wo jhatke se uth ke baith gaya. Baat hi kuch aisi thi.

'I needed this. Iske zariye... I can...'

[Still! It's not really that good Master. 30% chances hai ki paise doob bhi sakte hai.]

'Pari par 70% success chances bhi toh hai. Normally logo ke liye 50-50 chances rehte hai. Still, log paise lagaate hai na? But for me... It will be 70 - 30.]

[Hmm! Ye baat bhi hai master.]

'Aur kya changes hai? I saw ki, System layout bhi upgrade hua tha. What is it?'

[Bas, cheezo ke dikhaana ka tareeqa master. Just the layout has changed. Let me show you!]

*Ding*

[Name : Veer | Age : 21 |
Status : Student / Businessman

Stats :
Strength - 96/100 | Intelligence - 95/100
Agility - 65/100 | Endurance - 65/100
Appearance - 75/100

Skills :
Sex Protection | Intermediate Martial Arts Skill |
Hawkeye | Limbo | Basic Enemy Tracker |
Absolute Chef | Basic Driving | Stock Master.

System's Internal Features :
Check | Path Tracker | Past Illustration |
Quest Hunt | Slot | Translator | Alpha Trait

Favourabilities :
Suman : 126 (Slave) | Aabha : 90 (Slave)
Sonali : 65 (Familiar) | Ragini : 75 (Close mate)
Nidhi : 40 (Mate) | Shreya : 67 (Close mate)
Juhi : 90 (Best mate) | Suhana : 64 (Close mate)
Sonia : 71 (Close mate) | Kavya : 88 (Best mate)
Shweta : 10 (Familiar) | Bhumika : 38 (Familiar)
Kaera : 75 (Close mate) | Arohi : 70 (Close mate)

Cards :
Bone Reaper | Beowulf's Blessings

Points Remaining : 3300

System Level : Level 6
(600 EXP more to reach Level 7)]

[How is it Master? Layout change ho chuka hai. Do you like it?]

'Ahhh! I see! Waqai! It looks good now. Kaafi cheeze add hui hai. Compact design. Hmm~ I like it.'

[Thank you Master!!! I'm glad you liked it.]

'Pari!!!'

[Yes Master?]

'Points add kar do. Saare stats me. Make them full. All 100.'

[As you wish Master!]

*Ding*

[All stats have reached 100.]

[Remaining Points : 3092]

[Changes kal...]

''Kal subah dekhne ko milenge. I know. Thanks Pari!'

[It's my job Master. Par, appearance ko aapne ekdum se full kar liya hai. Tomorrow! Things will be interesting. Fufufu~]

Saari cheezo ko samajhne ke baad, Veer utha aur haath muh dho ke woh neeche aaya. Neeche aate hi usse alag hi mahaul nazar aaya.

Suman, Ragini, Aabha, Sonali sab zameen par chataayi bicchaaye hue baithi thi aur kuch bana rahi thi.

Veer : Hmm?

Ragini : V-Veer? Aao na! Uth gaye? Ab kesa lag raha hai?

Veer : I'm good Bhabhi!

Ragini (smiles) : Acchi baat hai. Dekho! Mein tumhaare liye gulaab jaamun, namkeen, aur saloni bana rahi hu. Tumhe tyohaar ke pakwaan pasand hai na?

Veer : Hmm?

Ragini : Aaj Holika dehen hai. Hum jaha rehte hai, yaha aas paas koi holika nahi baithi hai. Kya tum m-mujhe leke... Raat me... Holika dehen dekhne chaloge? Yahi main road side?

Wo ek aas liye usse dekhi, wahi side me baithi Suman bhi unn dono ko hi dekh rahi thi. Na jaane kya soch rahi thi.

Veer (smiles) : Kyu nahi Bhabhi? Sure!

Ragini (smiles) : Ahh!! Thank you Veer! Bas, ye taiyaariya kar lu, fir hum dinner kar ke raat me chalte hai. Okay?

Veer (smiles) : Alright!

***

Nidhi's Apartment...

Ragini ke ghar ki hi tarah, Nidhi ke flat me bhi chahal pehel machi hui thi. Aur iss chahal pehel ka kaaran kaun tha? Of course, nanhi Juhi! Uske alawa kaun ho sakta tha?

"Do na mammaaaa!!! Do do do... Candyyyy dooo!!!"

Wo Nidhi ke gown ko kheench kheench ke zidd kar rahi thi. Toh wahi sofe par baithi Shreya uski zidd pe muskuraa rahi thi. Apne Laptop me kaam me lagi hui thi woh.

Nidhi bada sa ek packet khol rahi thi aur Juhi ke liye candy nikaal rahi thi.

Nidhi : De rahi hai na mamma. Aur suno, roz bas ek hi milegi. Okay?

Juhi : Mmm~

Nidhi : Ye lo~

Juhi (perr patakte hue) : Ummm.... Khol ke...

Nidhi : Haa baba! Ye lo...

Juhi : Ehehe~

Aur wo jhatpat apne muh me candy daal bhaag gayi apne khilauno se khelne.

Nidhi (sighs) : Ye ladki bhi...

Shreya : Kal ka kya scene hai Dii?

Nidhi : Hmm? Kal ka kya?

Shreya : Kal holi hai. Kuch socha hai aapne?

Nidhi : Holi me kya Shreya? Harr saal ki tarah, thode pakwaan banaaye hai. Ghar jaa ke Mamma papa se mil aaungi. Bas! Aur kya?

Shreya : Bas? Really? Aur Juhi ka kya? Wo holi kese khelegi?

Nidhi : Society me Juhi ki umr ke bacche boht kam hai Shreya. Aur jo hai, unhe Juhi nahi jaanti. Kal usse bas gulaal lagwa laungi wahi baccho se. Aur kya?

Shreya : What??? Really dii? Yadi aap holi celebrate nahi kar rahi ho toh kam se kam bechari Juhi ko toh karne do.

Nidhi : Mein...

Shreya : Waqai aap bhi na. Aur uss duffer ka kya?

Nidhi : Huh?

Shreya (smiles) : Mera matlab wo... Veer ka kya?

Nidhi : I... Bhala mujhe kese pata hoga uske baare me?

Shreya : Huh? Kya aapki baat nahi hoti uss se? Haan? Aap hi ne toh bataaya tha na ki wo college aaya tha tests dene. Fir? Kya baat nahi hui.

Shreya ke sawaal par Nidhi ko wahi din yaad aa gaya. Wo din jab Veer ne uss se apne dil ki baat keh dii thi. 'I like you ma'am!!!'

Isse sunn ke Nidhi ke saare din itni mushqil se guzar rahe the ki harr thodi derr me usse Veer ke khayaal aane lagte the. Aur wo jese tese khud ko koss ke, samjha ke Veer ki chavvi apne mann se hata deti thi.

Nidhi : N-Nahi!! Meri baat nahi hui. Aur tumhara kya? Aaye din toh tum uske baare me puchti rehti thi. Kya hua? Kya tumhari baat nahi hui uss se?

Shreya (blushes) : Ahh! Wh-Whaaattt? M-Mein... N-No of course not!!! Mein toh k-kaafi samay se busy hu kaam me.

Nidhi : Toh bas fir. Hum dono ko hi nahi pata uske baare me.

Shreya : I... Hey dii!? Kyu na hum usse surprise de? Hahahaha~ Yes! Ye badhiya rahega. What do you say?

Nidhi : N-Nahi! K-Koi zaroorat nahi hai jaane ki. Wo waha apni family ke saath holi manaega. It will be a disturbance for them.

Shreya : Kya dii? Kesa disturbance? Hum toh ghar jese hai na? Aur uski bhabhi bhi toh kitna hume invite karti rehti hai. Veer yaha reh ke gaya hai kitne hafto tak. Toh ye koi bahaana nahi hua.

Nidhi : N-Noooo hum waha...

Wo kuch bolti ki andar se Juhi daudati bhaagti hui aake uski goad par chadh gayi.

Juhi : Maaaamuuu ke ghar... Maaamuuu ke ghar... Mein jaungi!!!! Mammmaa~ Maaasssiii!!!

Pata nahi kese, par apne maamu ka naam sunte hi Juhi ke kaan khade ho gaye aur wo jhatpat andar se bhaag ke aa gayi.

Shreya : Dekha!? Kam se kam ab Juhi ke liye toh chaliye. Uski bhi Holi kitni acchi guzar jaegi. Waha logo se milegi usse accha lagega. Ho sakta hai Kavya bhi aaye? Akhir Juhi aur uski boht banti hai. Ab toh chalenge na hum?

Juhi : Chalna hai... Chalna hai... Maamuuuu ke ghar... Chalna hai...

Nidhi firse mana karne hi waali thi. Par jab usne Juhi ki aankho me dekha aur ye abhaas kiya ki Juhi wese hi apne chote bhai, Dhruv se bichdi hui hai. Na usse koi khelne waala milta hai aur na koi saathi. Yadi problem uski Veer se hai toh isme bechari Juhi ki khushiya kyu daav pe lagaayi jaaye? Ye ek parent hone ka kartavya tha Nidhi ka ki wo Juhi ki khushiyo ka dhyaan rakhe.

Aur ye abhaas hote hi, uski nazre glaani se jhuk gayi.

Nidhi : Sorry beta! Sorry Shreya! Hum kal chalenge.

Juhi : Yaaaaaayyyyyy~

Shreya (smiles) : It's alright!!!

***

Kaera's Villa...

Meanwhile idhar Kaera apne villa me kal ke liye planning kar rahi thi. Julia, uski maid uske makhmal gore badan se kapde utaar rahi thi aur nighty pehnaane hi wali thi jab Kaera ne usse rok diya.

Kaera : No! Not this today! Just a t-shirt and leggings. That's it.

Julia : Are you really sure Miss?

Kaera : Yes!!!

Aur Julia usse fir wahi pehnaane lagi.

Kaera ko Slogan ki maut ke baare me pata lag chuka tha. Par uss se kaafi baatein chhipaayi gayi thi.

Jese ki wo ye nahi jaanti thi ki Slogan ka khaatma Veer ne kiya tha. Usse ye bhi nahi pata tha ki uske hi resort me uss din Steve ka sarr udd gaya tha.

Usse bas itna pata tha ki Steve ki car me firing hui thi. Par iss se pehle ki wo Steve ke shareer ko car se girta dekh paati, uske agal bagal security ne usse surround kar ke andar kar diya tha. Aur wo inn sabhi baato se anibhigya thi.

Par chuki, ab Slogan jaa chuka tha. Wo kaafi relaxed thi. Aur mann me uske planning chal rahi thi. Wo light mood me bed par baithi aur sochne lagi,




'Tomorrow! Hmm~ It's Holi! I never played this. I'll go and visit him. Only he can teach me about this.'

Kaera : Julia!

Julia : Yes miss?

Kaera : W-What is this feeling? Wh-When you don't want someone to get hurt. When you don't want to see that someone getting suffer. When... When you want that person always within your sight?

Julia (smiles) : It's Love Miss!!

Kaera : L-Love?? What is Love?

Julia (smiles) : Didn't you answer me just now?

Kaera : Huh?

Julia : When you don't want to see that person getting hurt and suffer. You want that person to be around you all the time. It's Love Miss! That means you love this person.

Kaera : I... I see!!

'I'll ask Veer. Tomorrow!!!'

***

Ragini's home...

"Hum nikal rahe hai Suman jii! Par aap sab bhi chalte toh accha hota."

Ragini ne apni sandals pehente hue kaha.

Laal saree me aaj wo itni kamaal lag rahi thi ki Veer ko badi mushqil jaa rahi thi. Wo nahi chaah raha tha ki apni hi bhabhi ko taade. Par wo lag hi itni sundar rahi thi ki na chaahte hue bhi uski nazre Ragini par chali jaa rahi thi.

Aur yaha Ragini uski harr nazar pakad le rahi thi. Wo aisa dikha rahi thi jese usse Veer ki nigaaho ke baare me kuch nahi pata. Wo toh balki jaan bujh ke khud ko dikhaana chaah rahi thi. Akhir uske sajne ke peeche ka maqsad hi toh yahi tha.

Wo Veer ke liye hi toh itna saji hui thi.

'Lipstick is fine... Ummm~ Nailpolish done. Baal side me hai, they are looking hot. Bindi done, kaajal done, make-up ka halka touch bhi ho gaya. Sleeveless saree bhi pehn lii. What else? Perfume bhi laga chuki hu. Jwellery bhi ho gayi. What else now? Everything is okay I guess.'

Uske mann me abhi yahi baatein chal rahi thi. Wo nahi chaahti thi ki Suman ya koi aur bhi uske sang aaye. Wo keval Veer ke saath akele jaana chaahti thi. Aur Suman jese uske mann ki baat samajh chuki thi. Usne forun hi keh diya ki wo sabhi ghar par rahenge.

Suman : Koi baat nahi! Aap jaaiye! Hum sab hai yaha. Phone me photo le aaiyega Ragini jii. Hum yahi dekh lenge.

Ragini (smiles) : Bilkul! Video bana laungi. Chale Veer?

Veer : Hmm~

Aur wo dono hi car me baithe aur nikal gaye.

Sonali (muh fulaate hue) : Mujhe jaane kyu nahi diya aapne? Ghar ki dekh rekh ke liye aap toh thi na Maa? Fir yaha hum teen teen jann ko rukne ki zaroorat?

Suman (smiles) : Zaroorat hai. Unhe...

Sonali : Hmm?

Suman (smiles) : Kuch nahi!!!

Raaste bhar Ragini aur Veer me zyaada baatein nahi hui. Baatein hui toh keval nazro se. Veer side-eye karke Ragini ko dekhta toh kabhi Ragini usse dekhti aur usse apni orr dekhta hua paati.

Wo jab jab Veer ko apni orr dekhta hua pakadti, uska mann aur khil uthata. Yaani ki Veer ko bhi usme interest tha. Aur Veer uske saundarya ke aage haar raha tha.

Jab dono hi holika dehen ke sthaan par pohuche toh wahi utar ke Ragini ne saari vidhi se holika ke chakkar lagaaye aur darshan kiye.

Kal holi ka tyohaar tha. Ye tyohaar uske divorce ke baad pehla tyohaar hone waala tha. Aur wo isme koi bhi kami nahi hone dena chaahti thi.

Waha khade log bas Ragini aur Veer ko hi dekhe jaa rahe the. Isliye jaldi se darshan kar Ragini aur Veer car me aake baith gaye. Aur car se hi baahar holika dehen ko dekhne lage.

Tabhi achanak Veer ki nazar Ragini ke gale par gayi,

Veer : Aapka... Mangalsutra...!?

Ragini : Ab jab pati ko hi dur kar diya. Toh kis baat ka mangalsutra Veer?

Veer : No I mean... Aapka gala khaali khaali lag raha tha isliye... I just...

Veer apni nazre ferra hi tha ki Ragini ne uska haath thama aur utha ke apne stano ke theek upar seene par rakhwa liya.

Veer : B-Bhabhi!!!???

Ragini (smiles) : Khaali lag raha hai? T-Toh... Tum kuch kyu nahi laate apni iss bhabhi ke liye? Haan? Anything will do.

Veer : I...

Veer iss sudden harqat se yadi andar tak hil ke nahi reh gaya tha toh ye kehna galat tha. Ragini ke iss action ki usse zara bhi umeed nahi thi. Uske seene par haath rakh wo Ragini ke dil ki dhadkan bakhubi mehsoos kar paa raha tha. Bas thoda sa hi faasla tha. Bas thoda sa... Thoda aur neeche yadi haath galti se bhi lag jaata toh Veer ko unn raseele aamo ka ehsaas mil jaata.

Ragini : Kaho!? Kya apni iss nakaar dii gayi Bhabhi ke liye laoge kuch!?

Veer : Aisa kyu keh rahi ho aap? Kisi ne nahi nakaara hai aapko.

Ragini (smiles) : Tumne bhi nahi na!? Kyuki kisi ek ne toh apne jeevan se nakaar ke phek diya mujhe.

Veer : Aap uss baare me mat sochiye Bhabhi! Hum sab aapke saath toh hai na!?

Ragini (smiles) : What about you!?

Veer : Of course! M-Mein bhi aapke saath hu.

Ragini (smiles) : Then that's all that matters. Fufu~♡

Aur agle hi pal wo aage badhi aur uske laal laal raseele honth Veer ke gaal par the.

*Chu~♡*

*Badump*

Pal bhar ke liye Veer ki jese saans hi atak gayi. Uske gaal par Ragini ke hontho ka thappa jo lag chuka tha. Wo laal lipstick poori tareeqe se uske gaal par honth ka nishaan bann ke chadh chuki thi. Kya Ragini ne issi iraade se aaj fiery red lipstick lagaayi thi. Who knows!?

***

Suhana's home...

*THUD*

Zorr se door band hone ki awaaz aayi aur Suhana apne business outfit me ghar ke andar aayi. Uska mood kuch boht hi kharaab lag raha tha.

'Damn itt!!!!! Ye badi deal haath se nikal gayi. All because of that bastard advisor. Yadi wo beech me taang nahi adaata. Toh sab kuch smoothly ho gaya hota.'

Mann me badbadaate hue wo apne kapde change kari. Aaj uska dimaag behad kharaab tha.

*Ring Ring*

'Huhhh? Sonu ka phone?'

Suhana : Bol Sonu!!!

Sonia : Diii! Kal holi hai.

Suhana : Haan toh?

Sonia : Dii! Kal... Kal mein Veer ke ghar jaaungi. To celebrate Holi. Are you coming?

Suhana : Mein dekh rahi hu tum kaafi close hote jaa rahi ho uske? Kya maajra kya hai Madam?

Sonia (blushes) : Ahhh??? Y-Ye kya bol rahi ho aap. I'm going to give my thanks... T-That's it.

Suhana : Tumhari tarah yadi koi ladki aise ladko ko thanks dene lagi na harr baar toh wo kuch hi dino baad bacche leke ghumegi.

Sonia (blushes) : W-Whaaat?? What are you even saying diii? It's... It's nothing like that. Stop it! Are you coming are not?

Suhana : No waaayyy! Mera mood abhi kharaab hai wese bhi. I'll talk to you later.

Sonia : Huhhhh? D-Diii!!!?

*Call ends*

Suhana ne bina Sonia ke baat sune hi phone cut kar diya. Aur apne anguthe ko daato tale dabaaye soch me pad gayi.

'That idiot... He actually killed him... I knew it... Kuch gadbad hai... He hasn't even returned my gun.'

Wo soch me thi jab achanak hi darwaaza khula aur ek suit pehne aadmi andar pravesh kiya.

"Ohh! Tum aa gayi? Kesi rahi deal?"

Gaurav!!! Suhana ka pati. Usne Suhana ko dekh pucha. Kyuki, Suhana uski hi company ki taraf se deal karne gayi thi.

Suhana : Deal failed. Sab kuch uss company ke advisor ke kaaran.

Gaurav : Whaaaaaaatttttt? Deal fail ho gayi? Kya karti ho Suhana? Itna chota sa kaam nahi hua? Kese tumne aaj..!? Sab tumhari galti hai. Mujhe ye deal nahi deni chahiye thi tumhe.

Suhana : Meri galti? Meri galti????? Excuse me!!!!! Meri koi galti nahi thi samjhe Gaurav??? Wo advisor pehle se hi planning kar ke aaya tha.

Gaurav : Still... Anyways! Jo hua so hua. Jao accha! Jaake mere liye aaj kuch special banao khaane ke liye.

Suhana : Whaaaattttt? Samay dekh rahe ho Gaurav??? 12 baj rahe hai raat ke. Poore time office me thi. Waha se mathapacchi kar ke itni late lauti hu. Yaha tak ki aaj holika dehen tha toh kahi gayi bhi nahi. Aur itni thakaan ke baad tum mujhse khaana maang rahe ho? Chef bhi hai hamaare ghar me. Do you know???

Gaurav : I know! Aur mein bhi koi park me ghum ke nahi aa raha hu Miss Suhana! Din bhar mehnat karta hu. Meri ek post hai. C.E.O ki. Unlike you... Tum ghar me khana nahi banaogi toh kaun banaega? Make me something good. Mein aata hu change kar ke.

Aur wo nikal gaya upar. Idhar Suhana ki mutthi kassi hui thi gusse ke maare. She had enough!!! Mann toh kar raha tha abhi ghar se bhaag jaaye. Din bhar ki bhaag daud ke baad ab wo khaana banaaye???

Wo gusse me kapde badli aur kitchen me gayi kuch banaane bemann se.

Usne agle hi pal Sonia ko call kiya,

Sonia : Hello?? Dii?

Suhana : Tum kal Veer ke yaha jaa rahi ho na?

Sonia : Umm.. haan! yeah!!

Suhana : Count me in!!!!

Sonia : Ehhhh?
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
I told you guys ki update 77 will be interesting. But see, yahi pe moderation ho gaya. Aur iss update me mene left over questions ke answers diye. Ab, sabhi Veer ke ghar par jaa rahi hai. Meanwhile Veer inn sab se anibhigya hai.


Like thokne ka and revos rakhne ka.
Dhanyavaad!

veer ke sare stats 100 ho gye ab agle din iska result dekhne ko milega specially appearance ke 100 ho jane se handsomeness or badh jayega tb females Kya reaction deti dekhna dilchasp hoga. System level 6 ke hone se stock master skill reward ke taur pr mila hai jisse veer sharemarket specialist ho jayega 70% chances honge success hone ke, ragini veer ke sath akele time Chahti hai holika dehan ke bahane dono ne acha samay bitaya ragini ne veer ko gale ke liye lane ko boli hai bechara veer pr Kya beet rhi hogi smjh skta Hu jb uska hath pakad kr seene pr rkhi thi khairr dekhte hai veer Kya lata hai gale ke liye mangalshutra ya kuch OR, Nidhi nd group arhi hai holi pe veer ko surprise dene dusri trf sonia or suhana bhi arhi hai. Kaera bhi arhi hai pyar ka confirmation krne ke liye iss baat se anjan veer ke uske liye toofan arha hai holi pe kaise handle krega itni Sari gapiyon ko ek sath agr arohi agai to pakka bomb fatega arohi ko to writer sahab bhul hi gye hai. Suhana Ke pati ka entry Ho gya hai shayad suhana bhi pati ke gusse ke wajah se sonia ke sath veer se milne ja rhi hai or ye shayad veer ke liye acha sanket nahi lag rhe suhana Ka pati bada businessman hai veer se suhana ka nazdikiyan usko raas nahi ayegi. Hmesha ki trh mast update

 

[Sniper aunty ka]

veer ke sare stats 100 ho gye ab agle din iska result dekhne ko milega specially appearance ke 100 ho jane se handsomeness or badh jayega tb females Kya reaction deti dekhna dilchasp hoga. System level 6 ke hone se stock master skill reward ke taur pr mila hai jisse veer sharemarket specialist ho jayega 70% chances honge success hone ke, ragini veer ke sath akele time Chahti hai holika dehan ke bahane dono ne acha samay bitaya ragini ne veer ko gale ke liye lane ko boli hai bechara veer pr Kya beet rhi hogi smjh skta Hu jb uska hath pakad kr seene pr rkhi thi khairr dekhte hai veer Kya lata hai gale ke liye mangalshutra ya kuch OR, Nidhi nd group arhi hai holi pe veer ko surprise dene dusri trf sonia or suhana bhi arhi hai. Kaera bhi arhi hai pyar ka confirmation krne ke liye iss baat se anjan veer ke uske liye toofan arha hai holi pe kaise handle krega itni Sari gapiyon ko ek sath agr arohi agai to pakka bomb fatega arohi ko to writer sahab bhul hi gye hai. Suhana Ke pati ka entry Ho gya hai shayad suhana bhi pati ke gusse ke wajah se sonia ke sath veer se milne ja rhi hai or ye shayad veer ke liye acha sanket nahi lag rhe suhana Ka pati bada businessman hai veer se suhana ka nazdikiyan usko raas nahi ayegi. Hmesha ki trh mast update

Ek advise dheere dheere story padh warna baad me update ka wait karna padega 5 din me 1 maine 2 din me pura padh ke galti kiya uske baad se wait kr raha hoon

 

[Pankaj Tripathi_PT]

Ek advise dheere dheere story padh warna baad me update ka wait karna padega 5 din me 1 maine 2 din me pura padh ke galti kiya uske baad se wait kr raha hoon

hahahaha isliye daily ek hi update padhta hu. Thank you dheer -2 pdhne me maza bhi hai

 

[Werewolf]

mast update

Superb update

awesone update

Nice update...

Fantastic mind-blowing update &
Happy anniversary to story

Amazing update

Fantastic update.. Bhai..,

Awesome update bro

Superb update bro

Nice update sir
Waiting for the next update
plz update soon

Abe isme romance incest aur chudai kaha h? Kya sirf novel likh raha h?

Shandar

Superb Update Bro...
Waiting for Next

Am I the only one who don't like like Nidhi & Juhi?
I mean, everytime, Nidhi is like she knows everything about world. College attend krne ko toh aise bolti h jaise koi Veer ko attendance dekh k usko Buisness Proposal dega. She's the dumbest character in this story. She doesn't deserve Veer. He's above and out of her league. I don't want something to happen between these two.

Speaking about Juhi, mujhe ye bohot jyada irritating lagti h. Jab dekho maamu... Maamu...
I want something really bad to happen to Juhi.

According to me, miss Kaera would be the perfect girl for Veer. (They would make a perfect couple)

Anyways, it's just my personal opinion.
Loving the updates werewolf bhai

Derr raat tak jaag k ye update read kia h...
aur jao... Maaf kia aapko...
aap bhi kya yaad rakhoge...

update acha hai .. ek request hai agar week main 3 update ho jaye .. ye dil maange more

Nice update dear

Aakhir Bhavna ne Tez se Veer ka raj kyon chupaya tha, Tez ab badi ho chuki hai to wo Bhavna aur uski mazboori ko samajh sakti thi?

Kavya aur Aarohi dono hi Veer ko dilo Jaan se chahte hai magar as a brother or as a lover ye to yaa ye dono jaanti hai yaa phir Werewolf bro.

Ye Suhana aur Gaurav ki banti nahi hai aur Suhana split personality ka shikaar ho rahi hai to wo Gaurav ko chod kyon nahi deti hai, kya mazboori hai jo usko Gaurav ko bardast karna pad raha hai?

Ab ye Natalia Martin kon hai aur iska iss case se kya connection hai aur Divya ke paas iss Musical Night ka VIP invitation kyon hai aur Divya inke saath kyon nahi hai agar iss invitation ka case se koi relationship hai to?

Superb and full of emotions update, lagta hai agle update mein kuch bada dhamaka hone waala hai phir se.

Waiting waiting waiting
Tic tic 1
Tic tic 2
........ Ye counting mere liye hai naa ki writer ke liye waise bhi aajkal time sahi nahi chal raha hai to kar bhala to ho bura waali kahavat sach ho rahi hai mere saath.

Bhai bhot mzye ka hy kafi arsy sy parh rha hu pr comment ni awesome hy. Agar bura naa lgytu Bs thori si zyada lambi or jaldi update dye diya kren wait ni hota. Thank you

Nice update...

Amazing update waiting for

Nice update

Awesome

nice1

Jabardast update bhai

Such a nice update Werewolf bhai. Maja aa gaya read karke.
Yaha tej ne purvi aur Bhawana ke samne aakhir raj khol hi diya ki wo apne bhai ke bare me janti hai. Aur uska uske liye itna lagaw ye show krta hai wo such me uski bahut jyada care karti hai. Lakin ye bhi uske liye bahut bada shocking hoga jb use pata lagega ki veer ke sath aakhir kya kya hua tha. Wo to tab pure family walo se specially paranjal se nafrat kregi. Apne baap nd all se bhi. Aur jab Bhawana ko pata chlega tab wo kya is baat ko Handel kar bhi payegi pata nahi.
Dekhte hai kab tak wo apne maa se naraj rahti hai. Yaha suhana ki 2nd personality trigger ho gayi. Lakin veer ne bahut ache se use sambhal liya i thing veer hi suhana ko is problem se nikat dila sakta hai. Aur ye log jaha bhi is Nataliya Martin se milne ja rahi hai. Inke dressing sence se itna to pata hai ki ye koi bahut badi hasti hai. Ab dekhte hai inka waha jane ka moto kya hai. Lakin ek baat to saaf hai waha apni suhana, veer ke aur bhi jyada close aa jayegi. Kuch na kuch to jarur hoga suhana ke sath waha par. Aur yaha arohi aur Kavya ek dusre ko hi tease kar rahi hai. Aur dono ko veer ki yaad aa rahi hai. Ab jo bhi hai lakin itna to fix hai ki veer ke bare me uski maa ko jaldi hi pata lagne wala hai. Aur sayad ye bhi hme pata chl jaye ki usne veer ko yaha akela kyu choda. Dekhte hai ab aage kya kya hota hai.

nice update .bhavna ko lagta tha ki tej kuch nahi jaanti par usko pata chal gaya tha rajasthan me hi ke uska ek bhai bhi hai .wo bhi apne bhai se miilna chahti hai .
par wo veer ko apna bhai kyu bol rahi thi . usko kaise pata chala ki veer hi uska bhai hai .
arohi aur kavya ek dusre ko chhed rahe the veer ki gifts ko lekar .majedar tha wo scene .

suhana aur veer shopping karne gaye kyunki unko invitation aaya hai natalia ka .aur shayad waha agla target ho .
pari hamesha veer ko motivate karte rehti hai .
nightwalker ko maarne par points kam mile iska reason bhi bata diya pari ne kyuki waha 3 log maare gaye the .

suhana apne pati se baat ki aur uski dusri personality bahar aane lagi thi ,isliye gussa nikalne ke liye teddy kharid rahi thi .

Apun ko bhi angrezi katayi pasand nahi. मी मराठी आहे अणि मी फक्त मराठीतच समीक्षा देईन।

Awesome update bhai...Waiting for Next Update Eagerly...

Nice update

Awesome update

Nice behtarin mast awesome update bro

Super updates

Awesome update bhai keep posting

Nice Update

Nyc update bhai ji

Kch zyada ni chorr di ? Utna phenko jitna lapet sko

Super wonderful awesome update

Zabardast update

Nice update

Happy 75 th Independence day

Nice update bro

बेहतरीन अपडेट

Fabulous update Bhai

Hmm to akhir kaar tej ne apni gusse ki limit ko cross karhi diya bechari jesa ki werewolf bhai aapne bataya ki tej ek nidar or brave girl hai but mera manna hai ki jo brave log hote hai jo bahar se sakht hote hai sabse jyada emotional wohi hote hai but show nahi karpate

Or bhavna bechari uski bhi galti nahi hai jis tarah se tej ne bataya or jo bhavna ke sabd the us hisab se sirf bhavna hi samaj sakti hai ki wo kese apne kaleje ke tukde ko apne se dur rakhe huye hai

Now turn tu suhana bechari pati bhi hai to sirf naam ka or veer jisse uska koi rista nahi hai uske liye usne itni shopping kardi
Wese isme to koi favor nahi haina????

Gaurav is bhosdi wale ko apni biwi ki kadar nahi hai jab dekho bas kaam kaam kaam abe chutiye kaaam karke paisa isi liye to kamate hai ki biwi bacho or Family ke sath acchi jindgi jee sake karke sirf paisa hi kamana agar aapko apni Family se dur karde to wo paisa kis kaam ka main to bolta hu us inshaan se garib koi nahi hai jiske pass paisa ho par Family naho

Wese next update main maza ayega kyu ki nataliya martinez ka show hoga moj to hogi hi

Wese wolfi bro kafi deen hogyee veer ka sex scenes nahi aaya

Baki must update tha bro maza aagya yaar family emotions dekhke

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Werewolf bhai....
Nice and beautiful update.....

Nice update bro

Gaurav jal raha hai Veer se . Usne hi apni patni se zyada duriya bana li hai . Teju bhi ab Veer se jald milegi . Ya to is party me koi new enemy milega ya fir Kaera milegi . Story me Incest bhi ab dhime dhime dahad maar raha hai . Nice update

Nice update bhai waiting for next update

Nice update dear

Super Awesome update Werewolf bhai.....

Superb fantastic mind blowing update bhai...

Akhir kar bhavna ko pata chal gaya k uski beti tej ko uske chote bhai k bare m pata he per jis tarike se apne start kiya tha mujhe laga purvi ajj bata degi kyu bhavna ko veer ko chod ke jana pada tha per app he hi great apne purvi ko bolne ka moka hi nahi diya or ye suhana Gaurav ka kya haal kar deti h bichara kuch time to samaj nahi ata ki Gaurav suhana ka husband h ki bacha jo usse is tarah se daat deti he suhana or last me ye Natalia Martin kon he or yeto invitation he wo bhi VIP matlab kuch to attach he isse lagbhag next dushman per wo jo dusara card tha usme kya h jisko dekh k suhana chok gaye thi...

Wonderful update bro

Good Update

Tej apne bhai bhai se milne ke liye kitni betab hai bohot hi emotional
Veer Mumbai vapis kab aa raha hai wolf bro

Lazwaab update

Zabardast update

Bht Shandar Werewolf bhai..... Esy hi jari rakhiye mast mast updates ko

Fantastic update
Waiting for next update

Lovely update

कोई भी भाषा यदि आपको अच्छे से आती है, तो वो आपको सरल ही लगेगी बजाज दूसरी भाषा के और जैसे ही आप दूसरी भाषा को अपनी भाषा से तुलना करेंगे, तो आपको अपनी भाषा ही अच्छी लगेगी।

आपकी बात सही है।

हिंदी में मात्रा की गलती होती हैं, वो इसलिए की शुद्ध हिंदी आजकल बहुत कम लोग जानते है। हिंदी भी देवनागरी की बजाय रोमन लिपि में लिखी जानी लगी जिसे हम हिंग्लिश कहते है, इसलिए हिंदी में मात्रा की गलती होने लगी है।

Nice update bro

Awesome Bro

Awesome updates

Superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb update sabko cover kardhiya ek update me.....for your writing skills take a bow

Next criminal ki jankari yahi music night me mile sayad

imran...... madri zuban, qoumi zuban ke baare me tum kya kehti ho.. Werewolf sir aur kai dusre bhaiyon ne apne apne khayalat ka izhaar kiya ha, tum kuch kehna chahugi.

noori...... ji malik saab. kehna to main kuch chahti hon, lekin zayada baat na karte hue mai kuch zaruri baat kehna chahti hon.

imran..... kahu noori, kya kehna chahti ho?

noori...... zamana bada badal gaya ha malik saab, mere bapu ghar me bataya karte the, keh jab dada ji ka zamna tha to har kisi se apni madri zuban me bola karte the. ek dusre se baat karte hue, sunte hue bohat maza aaya karta tha unko. lekin abb unki umar ke sab unka sath chhod gaye han to koi unke sath madri zuban me baat karne wala nahi raha. bapu bhi ab baat karte han malik saab to punjabi bolte hue kabhi kabhi ek do lafz urdu ke to kabhi kabhi do char lafz english ke sath mila lete han.
imran...... haan yahi haal ha har taraf madri zuban ka.

noori....... malik saab koi anpadh ha to wo bhi do char english ke lafz dhund kar madri zuban ka kachra kar deta ha. ab to mujhe bhi ek muddat ho gai hai khalis punjabi zuban kisi se sune hue.. kitni meethi hoti ha na malik saab apni madri zuban.

imran...... haan noori jaise puri halat hamari punjabi ki ha aise hi urdu ki bhi ha..

noori....... aaj kal ki nasal to khud ko sabse badh maanti han. kuch karna aaye ya na aaye, english lazmi aani chahiye.. bhale hi hamari madri zuban ki value kam ho jaaye, bhale hi hamari qoumi zuban ki value kam ho jaaye... jin goron ko 200 saal rote rahen han hamare bade.. abb dekh malik saab kaise aaj kal ki nasal ke ladke ladkiyan unhi goron ki zuban seekh kar khud ko apne hi hum watno se badhkar dardante han..

imran...... badi sharam ki baat ha noori ye to

noori....... ji malik saab,bohut sharam ki baat hai. english bhi ek zuban hi ha malik saab, seekhna achi baat hai, international zuban ha, to iski zarurat har jaga padhti ha.. na naukri milti ha aur na hi mere jaise koi chokri. hehehe ...

imran...... noori tum baat ko badlo mat.

noori....... malik saab main to bas ek hi baat bolti hon.. kuch bhi seekho, kuch bhi karo.. lekin madri zuban aur apni qoumi zuban par uboor lazmi hasil hona chahiye.. isi se hamari shaan badhti ha, hamare mulk ka hamari qoum ka naam roshan hota ha... english bol kar apni shakhsiyat me nikhaar laana achhi baat ha. lekin apni madri zuban ki, apni qoumi zuban ki value kam nahi karni chahiye..

imran...... ye wali baat tumne sahi kahi ha noori.

noori....... par kya fayda malik saab.. jaise hum pachpan se lekar aaj tak apne badon ki baaton ko ek kaan se sunkar dudre kaan se nikal diya karte the. aise hi aaj kal bhi kitne kabil tareen asaatza sikhane me lage hue, samjhane me lage hue han. sirf talba hazraat ko kamane ki baaten nahi batate.. sar utha kar chalne ki baaten bhi sikhate han.. apne des ka naam roshan karne ki baaten sikhate han. lekin amal jo to jaise is dunya se uth hi chuka ha.. abb meri baaton par bhi koi kaan nahi dhare ga.. do char likes mil jaayega. mere bhaiya ki story jitni bhi achhi ho malik saab. par wo madri aur qoumi zuban se badhkar nahi ho sakti...

abb bhi agar zayata chup chap padhne wale khamosh rahe, ya apne khayalat ka izhaar karne wale khul kar apne khayalat ka izhaar na sake to sach me hi aaj mujhe bohut afsos hoga malik saab.. bohut afsos..........

अपडेट छोटा लेकिन बहुत बढ़िया था ।
सुहाना का टैडी बियर प्रेम समझ में आया । अपना हसबैंड समझकर लातों मुक्कों से उसपर अपना प्रेम बरसाती है । जरूर प्रेम विवाह किया होगा इन्होंने ।
वीर को बिल्कुल ही डरने की जरूरत नहीं होनी चाहिए । वो उसका हसबैंड थोड़ी न है जो बिन बादल उसपर बरस जायेगी !
मानता हूं कि उसने बड़े बड़े ही तीर चला रखा हो लेकिन , सुंदरियों के आगे तो सिद्ध मुनि भी अपना सिर झुका देते हैं । वो तो फिर भी एक आम इंसान है ।

दिव्या मैडम ने सुहाना को नटालिया मार्टिन का शो देखने के लिए आमंत्रित किया था । जरूर इंग्लिश रैपर सिंगर होगी ! ये महजबीना लाख बढ़िया गाती हों पर भई , अपने तो कुछ भी पल्ले पड़ने वाला है नहीं इसलिए मैं चाहता हूं कि लियोन भाई इनकी गीत का आनन्द उठाएं और मुझे उस गीत का अर्थ बताएं !

मुझे डाउट है , हसबैंड से बेरूखी सुहाना को वीर की बाहों में न जा पहुंचा दे ! और वो भी इसी कंसर्ट में ।

उधर भावना के साथ साथ तेजस्विनी भी वीर की असलियत से परिचित हो चुकी है । और वीर तो पहले से उन्हें पहचानता है ही । बस , ढंग से उन्हें अभी जानना बाकी है ।
लगता है इनकी मिलन की बेला भी अब नजदीक आ पहुंची है । एक दूसरे को ठीक से जानने और समझने का समय अब चंद फासलों पर ही है ।

लेकिन मिशन लास वेगास अभी भी पुरा नही हुआ है । अभी भी असल खिलाड़ी इनके पहुंच से दूर है । देखते हैं आगे क्या रिजल्ट आता है !

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट वेयरवोल्फ भाई ।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग एंड ब्रिलिएंट ।

Shandar update bro

Mast update h bhai...

Ye america wali hai na nataliya? Usi ki baat ho rhi hai na?

Are bhai three best friends of childhood kera,sonia.natalia

Super update hai Bhai

Congratulations on 1900 Pages!

Sale no to Kaera aur Sonia ko pataliya tha. Sayad abhi Natalia ki baari.

Congratulations for completing 1900 pages

Shaandaar update

एकच नंबर भाऊ एकदम फाडू होता, पण बाहुला थोडक्यात वाचला भाऊ.

For completed 1900 pages on your story thread.....

"Natalia Martin" hmm !! khair mai ye last line update ke padh kuch suna suna sa laga jaise suhana ke hi muh se suna ho sayad but haa may be ki wo singer hai to she is friend of suhana or sonia and ye name delhi me........ khair mai wapas utne update piche n jana chahta, and haa review mai aaram se time milne par deta Werewolf bhaya !!

Badhiya shaandaar update bhai
Tej ko bahot pehle se pata chal gaya tha apne bhai k baare m jo ladki kabhi royi nahi woh apne bhai k baare jaan ker itna ro rahi h hona bhi chahiye kyonki saamne hote hiwe bhi nahi pehachan payi iska or ziada dukh
Idher kavya or Arohi bhi apne bhai ko miss ker rahi h
Uder aaj suhana ka teddy per ek baar or apna gussa nikalte huwe dekhne ko milta lekin Veer n waha se hata ker gusse ko shant kerwa dia
ab dekhte yeh musical party m sirf music hi hoga ya fir koyi kaand
Bahot khoob shaandaar update bhai lajawab

Congratulations on 1900 Pages

for completing 1900 pages
on your thread brother

Bhai kush bate mere samaj me nehi aa raha hei,Suhana ek high profile business women hei,mana uski relation detective agency se ho sakti hei,Divya se achhi dosti bhi ho sakti hei,lekin Suhana ne directy Divya ke team ke sath action me part lena ,woh bhi Veer ke sath,ye thora samaj m nehi aa raha hei?

Tez ko malum pad gaya Hai veer kai bare me dekhte hai kaise wo dhund ti hai or wo to apni Maa se b gussa Hai....

Kavya arohi veer ko yad kr rahe hain....
Dekhte hai agle update mai kya hota hai ....​

Why is Veer is capturing criminals,who are not related to him anyway? Why Suhana is involving Veer in life-threatening condition? I understand previously Suhana helped Veer,so Veer is obliged to her.Phirbhi Veer ko itna jyada khatre me kiu dal raha hei Suhana ne? Woh bhi Lasvegas me?

Intresting update bro, pata nhi kyu muje esa lag rha hai jese ek system keara ke andr bhi hai agar esa to koi muje mat batana story spoil mt krna please

Awesome update bro

Bro jabrdast tha hum aapke sath hai

Congratulations for 1900 pages bro

Nice update

nice part

Nice update

Bhai Kia bat hai apki story ki speechless mind-blowing 357 din me 1904 pages or 103 update record bana diy bhaiiya jiii Garda uraaa diy

I enjoy thoroughly the relation between Veer and Juhi, which is very very cute and very pure.
I also enjoy nokjhok between Veer and Nidhi.

Congratulations for 1900

Fantastic update bro

Nice update

waiting for update bro

आपकी कहानी के १९०० पृष्ठ पूर्ण होने की बधाई हो ।

Great update Werewolf bhai.
Update ki shuruwat hu Mumbai se hui he. Yaha purvi ke ghar ruke hue he maa beti. Purvi ko dhyaan hi na raha ki Tej wahi pe he Aur sawal kar diya Veer ke bare me. Par dono ko laga ki baat ko sambhal legi tej ko ullu banake. Par ulta tej ne hi jhatka de diya dono ko. Purvi to shuru se yahi chahti thi ki bhavna tej ko bata de veer ke bare me. Ab samne aa gayi baat to wo ek tarah se khush he kyuki ab jo bhi wo aur bhavna kare unko tej se chhupane ki jarurat nahi he. Par yaha Tejal ke vichar bhi sahi he. Kya soch ke uski maa ne esa kiya ? Kya sirf bhavna ka hi haq tha veer pe ? Tejal tab choti thi par usse Veer ke bare me baat bhi chupayi aur isse jyada dukh pahucha he Tej ko. Ab wo kese apne aap ko control kare jab ussi city me uska bhai ho jiske bare me wo jyada kuch nahi janti. Kamre me bandh wo Veer ki hi photo dekh rahi he balki wo apne bhai ka naam bhi nahi janti uske mann me wahi naam he "Vikram". Par usse nahi pata ki wo apni maa ke bare me pata lagane ke liye hi waha Egypt aaya tha. Wahi bhavna bhi ab guilty feel karegi ki usne Tejal se kyu chupayi sab baate. Aur yahi pe shayad wo tej ko sab bata de jo bhi ateet me hua. Veer ke samne ye baate baad me hi aayegi. Par ab samay he aage ke bare me vichar karne ka. Veer to abhi he nahi yaha pe.
Aur wo station pe milne wali baat yaha achhe se connect kari he aapne. Bhavna bhi apne kaam se gayi thi Rajasthan aur wahi Veer se pani ki bottle ke liye request kari. Jab veer samne hoga aur ye baat wo kahega tab bhavna kese sambhal payegi ? Wo to yahi sochegi na ki apne bachhe tak ko na pehchan saki wo. Wo scene emotional hone wala he. Aur ye tejal possessive lag rahi he Veer ke prati. Jab janegi ki veer ke sath bachpan se leke ab tak kya kya Hua tab aur jyada possessive hogi wo.
Ho sakta he bhavna manorath ji ke pariwar me se kisi se baat kare ?? Bado se to nahi par Aarohi se to baat kar hi sakti he ya purvi kisi tarah unse Veer ke bare me puch sakti he. Kavya ke bare me janti nahi hogi bhavna shayad. Dekhte he bhavna kya karti he aage.
Aarohi aur kavya apne ghar me samay bita rahi he. Aarohi jaha kaam me vyast he wahi kavya apni baato me. Aarohi kavya ke maje le rahi he to kavya kese piche rahe. Kavya ne bhi aarohi ke badle behaviour ko samne rakh diya ki wo kese baar baar veer ki di hui baaliyan touch karti he. Aur ye hota bhi he jab aapka koi khaas aapko gift de to baar baar vichar wahi pe jate he aapke. Yahi aarohi ke sath ho raha he aur uper se veer ke liye dil me jo vichar aate he usko usse Aarohi ke gaal aur laal ho jate he. Baar baar wo apne gift ke bare me baate Karna chahti he par samne se kese kahe isiliye kisi ke samne apne baaliyan dikhao aur jab wo puche to vistaar se sab baate batao. Ye he aarohi ke vichar taki wo baar baar uss ehsaas ko feel kar sake.
Kavya bhi kam nahi he isme par wo direct pyaar dikhati he. Jese Veer se kiss kiya tha. Wo samne se hi karegi sab. Majha aayega kyuki ye do behne Anshu-Vanshu jesi hi he.
Wahi Suhana aur Veer ek din ghumne firne ke liye nikal aaye he. Ab pura hectic schedule se khud ke liye time nikalna bhi to jaruri he. Aur videsh aaye ho to ghumne firna to banta hi he. Suhana shopping ke liye aayi he wahi veer iss bade mall ko ji dekh raha he. Pari ese moments pe motivation dena nahi bhulti. Suhana apne pati gaurav se baat kar rahi he aur inn baato se suhana gussa ho chuki he. Jab gaurav ko sawal puchne chahiye tab wo bas "haa ! Go" keh ke baat khatam kar raha he aur ab suhana ke day off me usko disturb kar raha he. Sach me suhana ki life bhi easy nahi he. Aur ab ye sara gussa Teddy bear pe utrega. Par Veer sath he to ice cream khila ke shant kara diya. Ye personality jese ek choti bachhi jesi he jo Teddy bear pe gussa nikalti he aur ice cream khake shant ho jati he. Par ab Khud ke aur Veer ke liye kapde leke wo nikal liye jaha ka invitation mila he unn ko.
Dekhte he kya hoga aage.
Wahi kaera kaha he aaj kal ?? Wo kab aayegi ?
Nidhi ke uper khatra aa sakta he rajat, pranjal ke roop me. Ho sakta he rajat aur pranjal Nidhi-Veer ko leke kuch galat rumours faila de aur Nidhi ke apartment ki ek lady ne Veer Nidhi ko close dekha he. Ye baat Nidhi ke khilaf jaa sakti he agar rajat pranjal ne vesa kiya to.
Now ab Veer wapis jayega to lagta he Nidhi ke liye bhi kuch special leke jayega.
Waiting for next update.

Shi bole bhaiwa

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बाकी सब जैसन रिव्यु देने को सोचे थे, पर ससुरा पता नाही का बकचोदी हो गया । वैसे हमरा तरफ बाला रिव्यु तो बाकीये है ...

त...उ बाला रिव्यु कल देंगे अभी के लिए सदी का सबसे महांतम और हर उँगली का प्यारा रिव्यु ....



Nice1

Nice update

Super update

Shandar update

Bla bla bla bla.....

Awesome Updateee. Maza aagaya padhke.

Shaandaar....Jabardast....Zindabad

Awesome updates brother, waiting for your next update

Waiting for next super duper update.

Zabardast fantastic update

Nice update Bhai

Waiting for next update

Zabardast Update Bade Bhai

Veer ka ab tej se milana jaruri hai.suhana aaj party'enjoy karegi.phir use ek aur criminal ko pakarNa hai.

Are bhaya Ye sui nhi suja hai Jisse anaj ki bori sili jati hai, sui chubho tb bhi chalega pr Yadi Ye chubhoya to sach me logo ki fat hi jani hai...

Update bro

Just Started reading your story. 10 Updates read kar chuka hu. Your narration for the story is Just fantastic . Love the story.

Werewolf Bro...Please give next update...

Waiting for next update

Waiting for next update

Bahut badhiya update hai bhai
Waiting for next update

Update bhai

Update..

Bhai ye xforum. Live tv ke browser se open nahi ho raha kaise kare? Any suggestion?

Werewolf update kab tak aayega

Apun TU bas ak special SEX arc mangta bhaya

Waiting for next update

Bro 104 update aayega ki nhi

update kab tak ayaga

Update kab aayega

Nice update

Sorry Bhai 7 August ko hua tha

Ok

Update do na bhai

Such a beautiful n amazing update

Story itni achhi hai ki pura time iski update ka ho wait karta rahne ka man hota hai sirf ek hi dikkat hai, Sorry agar bura lage to writer comments ke itne bade jawab deta hai ki aur sabko jawab deta hai to last 100 page me 2 hi update hue aur baki sirf bakwas baate ki...

Waiting for next update

Kya bhai ab to dhire dhire update weekly ho gaya he. Yani mahine me sirf 4 update

Wse to socha tha aj ka update ane ke baad hi review du but fir socha choro pta ni aya ga bhi ya nhi or kis time aya ga. Kisse pta so abhi hi is farz se nijat hasil kr lete hain.

So after teen bando ke marne ke baad akhir kaar Veer ne the so called KNIGHTWALKER ko pakad hi liya.

But its a close one. Agr hmare VEER bhaiya girte. To ek achi story se humme hath dhone padte.Swooossh bach gye.

Wse system ne sahi hi kaha hai. Itne ache se nhi kar paya Veer mission coz with Beowolf blessing fir bhi ek close fight. And ek do baar to Veer ke hath se nikal gya. What a shame.

Waise kia is Island ka mastermind yehi KNIGHTWALKER hi tha ya just ek hired banda tha HOUSE OF KILLERS ka.

Wasie Update 102 kuch zyada dramatic nhi hogya. Literally Starpl*s ke serials wali feeling arhi thi. Lag hi nhi rha tha ke hmare Wolf bhaiya likh rhe hain ya Ekta Kapoor.

Mean choti choti baato oe Police and detective agency ka shock ajeeb sa laga. I think kafi bade bade kaam kiye honge itne vast carrier mein. To ek welder hone pe shock.

Haan wo periodic table wali baat thoda hat ke thi. Baki to as it koi shocking moment tha nhi.

Waise wo welding ka session kia time consuming nhi tha. pehle cut karna fir jake marna and fir welding. or kisi ka notice bhi na karna. kia paint nhi ukhra jo nazar nhi padi. Haan maybe paint kardiya ho.

Waise ye Nik kuch zyada hi uchal rha hai koi ni set hojye ga ye bhi. Or ye Tommy bhaiya ko to dekho bsdiwale ko ek to bacha ke laye hain oper se iska RR. Wah bhai.

Zoey chali gyi. Let's see wapas ati hai ya nahi. Na bhi ayi to kia frk padta hai. Koi kami thodi hai apne bhai ke pass.

Emma emma emma itna asan nhi hai Veer ko pighlana. Not a easy thing.

103 update. Ye Mummy Bhavna ka alag mellow drama shuru hai. Ro ro ke Jani ke samandar bhar degi kisi din.

OOhhh Mtlb Tej ko sbkuch coincidentally pata chala hai. Kia baat hai. But na batane ki kia wja hoskti hai. Maybe is wja se ke out of control na hojye Tej softest reason to yehi bnta hmare chote dimag mein yehi askta ab jaise technical dimag thodi hai.

Chalo koi nhi sme hojye ga sb sort out.

SSbse best cheez in past ke kuch updates ki AROHI and KAVYA chat aboit Veer. Kitni sweet hain dono. Chingari to lg chuki hai dekhte hain is chingari ko hawa kb milti hai. Or is Chirag ko loo milti bhi hai ya nhi. Who kniws?

Waise Suhana jaisi ladki Gaurav jaise ke sath reh kaise rhi hai. Jaise khurafati ladki hai lagta to nhi adust karne wali hai. But acha hai Veer je jldi close aye gi. Or maybe shuruwat hobhi chuk ho. Coz ab care karne lagi hai.

Ab Veer Niharika ke is chote se cheap shot se haar jata to downfall hota story ka. Fir kahe ka system.

BBut itna asan thodi hai.
Lets se house of killer ka next killer koun hai or kaha tak jaye gi.

Wse trolling zyada to nhi hogyi na. Chalo koi nhi kabhi kabhi teekha bhi khana chahiye

Waiting

Waiting

Waiting

Werewolf bhai next update kab tak aayega?

Kuc be bollo jabardast...........

Waiting bhai

Sahi khaha bhai apne janmashtmi me pura din fast karna hota he raat me 12'o clock ko family ke sath pooja bhi karni hoti he or us pooja k liye sabhi teyaari karni padti he we can understand bhai app apna time leke pooja ho jane k bad update dijiye...

Update 104 has been posted.

 

[Werewolf]

Index has been updated.
Update 103 ke baad ke saare comments ke replies dene baaki hai. Unhe mein kal tak reply dunga. Job me ek naye bade project par kaam mila hai, jiske chalte mein pichle last 5-6 days se behad busy hu. Deadline ke pehle hume kaafi kaam karne hote hai. Toh updates late hote hai toh saiyyam banaye rakha kariye. Aise updates likhne me mujhe kaafi samay dena padta hai.

 

[bantoo]

Fantastic update

 

[Bawak123]

Superb update maza agaya par kar kafi intezar k bad