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Waiting for next update....
Ek advise dheere dheere story padh warna baad me update ka wait karna padega 5 din me 1 maine 2 din me pura padh ke galti kiya uske baad se wait kr raha hoon
Fantastic update
Superb update maza agaya par kar kafi intezar k bad
Ye Divya bhi attitude dikhane se baaj nahi aati hai pata nahi kyon magar jab Veer ka attitude trigger karega to chupne ke liye Kona bhi nahi milega.
Khair bhale hi Veer kitna powerful aur ameer ho gaya ho magar wo apni roots aur apna past nahi bhoola isiliye usne jara bhi time nahi lagaya cheque Zoey ko dene mein kyonki usko pata hai ki jab saari dunia aapke khilaaf ho aur koi bina kisi swarth ke aapki madad karta hai to dil ko kitna sukun milta hai ye jaankar ki koi to hai jo apna humdard hai. Ab ye paise Zoey ke kitne kaam aate hai aur wo apni manjil ko paati hai yaa nahi ye to Werewolf bhai hi bata sakte hai.
Ab Ava ne Divya aur Suhana se kya baat Kari hai aur kyon milne ke liye bulaya hai ye to abhi bhi nahi pata chala magar kya wo kisi problem mein hai aur uske liye help chahti hai yaa wo fir se Sonia se apni dosti jodna chahti hai ye Werewolf bhai hi bata payenge. But overall a very interesting, full of emotions and kind of different update.
ye story aapne todd Lear ke book se liya hain kya
Yar ye USA ka trip kab khatm hoga?
Bahut badhiya update hai bhai...
Waiting for next update
Mast update bro
Ooh sorry Bhai uske bareme bhul gaya me..
Nice mast update bro
Bro just now completed reading the update
The lyrics was damn superb
I never expected to meet Zoey there and veer will help her that means she have a role up ahead.why suhana wanted to meet Natalia
Did she came all the way for this. Is this the help divya promised to her in return of helping in the case. And is something gonna happen with Natalia... With all these excited suspenses will be waiting for next update
Nice Update
Nice update
Awesome update
Superb Update Bro...
Waiting for Next
To aapne ek live concert bhi dikha diya aakhir abhi aur kya dekhne ko milega is story me kuch kah kya soch bhi nahi skte hai hum sb aur ava itni famous pop Star ban gayi hai. To jahir si baat hai usne such me bahut jyada mehnat ki hogi. Jo uske fans ke craze se saaf pata clta hai. Aur ab itna sub hua hai to jahir si baat hai ki personality change hona to banta hi hai. Aakhir wo bhi to in logo ko abhi nahi janti hai ache se.
Jaha tak Zoel ki baat hai veer ne bahut acha kiya uski help karke. Ab uske future Frnd's ki list me ek famous model bhi add ho jayegi. Aur koi Normal nahi world famous. Aur usne ye bhi acha kiya jo usne use ye kah diya ki wo use repay kar degi, isase use ye bhi feel nahi hoga ki veer us par Taras khaa raha hai.
Aur mujhe pakka yakin hai veer ki wo feeling bekar nahi thi. Jarur next enemy yaha concert me aaya hoga tabhi veer ko wo feeling aayi hai. Ab dekhte hai ye next enemy hai kon aur ye sb Ava se kaise connect hai. Kahi ye bhi koi pagal fan ka matter to nahi hai. Ya usase janane wala hi koi ho. Aur sath me ava veer ko dekh kr kya reaction deti hai mujhe iska bhi wait hai. Quki ye bhi apne veer ke females ki list me add hogi ye baat to confirm hai aur dekhte hai ab ava ke bare me aur kya kya pata chalta hai.
Aur veer ki wo line such me bahut hi sahi ti, suhana to such me shocked hi ho gayi thi bechari ye sun kar dekhte hai aage kya hota hai inke bich me bhi.
Overall excellent Update bhai.
Fantastic mind-blowing update
Toofan anne wala hai
Dil me ghantiya bajne wali hai
Aag lagegi aag "DONO TARAF"
Mast update bro
Good update
Lovely update
Fantastic update bhai..
Marvelous update Werewolf bhai....
Lekin bhai veer bapas India kab jayega...
Bahut hi umda update hai bhai maza aa gaya
Awesome update!
Are you referring to The Shed?
Awesome update.
Superb update... Par saale update poora to karta maar dunga main tujhe kisi din saale
Awesome Bro
Bhai gzb update tha 1 no ....
Bahut hee shandar update bhai.
aap ka lyrics writing aur pic collection ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaye wo bhut hi kam hai.
Once again thankyou for your hard work.
Nice update
Waiting for next update
Fantastic mind-blowing update
Raha nahi jata tadap hi esi hai
Zabardast update
What a lovely update....thanks..bro...
Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Werewolf bhai....
Nice and lovely update.....
Superb update
kuch hua tha kya yaha pe ?? jiske liye mod ko aana pada .
Super wonderful awesome update
Shaandaar lajawab update veer ne sahi kiya jo zoella ko cheque de diya dost hi dost ke kaam aata hai
Nice update
Dilchasp update
जबरदस्त भाई लाजवाब update bhai jann superree duperrere update
Fabulous mind blowing
Fantastic update
Natalia bhi veer par lattu hone vali he kya
or veer ke check karne par kya huaa tha
Nice update bro
nice update dear
Priority kisi chidiya ka naam hey saayad Veer ko pata nehi...
Aunty ladka bula legi.
Gyan of the day
Kaas Veer ke pass ek Teddy hota....
Wonderful Update..
Saayad yeh story ka budget kuch jyada hey....Last story mein hero ek hi baar foreign location pe jaa paya tha. Idhar to first Egypt, abhi USA, next aur kanha kanha jayega pata nehi........
Amazing update bhai
Great
Nice update bro
तीन अप्सराओं में उर्वशी और मेनका को तो देख ही लिया था और इस बार रम्भा का भी दर्शन हो गया । काईरा , सोनिया और नटालिया इन तीनों से कम थोड़ी न है !
ये भी सही है , खुबसूरत लड़कियां अपने समान खुबसूरत लड़कियों से ही दोस्ती करती हैं ।
वीर के तकदीर से यहां बहुतों मर्दों को जलन महसूस होने वाली है । वैसे नटालिया द्वारा गाया हुआ गीत जिसे आप ने खुद ही लिखा , थोड़ा इमोशनल एवं बहुत बहुत ज्यादा खुबसूरत था । आप के एक नए हुनर का पता चला हमें ।
वीर ने एक बार फिर " परहित सरिस धर्म नहिं भाई " सिद्धान्त को प्रतिपादित कर दिया । जोए को फाइनेंशियल मदद कर हमारा ही नहीं बल्कि पूरे देश का सर ऊंचा कर दिया । निस्वार्थ भाव से सेवा से बढ़कर कोई पुण्य नहीं ।
मैं एक चीज बराबर गौर कर रहा हूं । दिव्या मैडम की जब से कहानी में एंट्री हुई है तब से ऐसा एक अपडेट नहीं है जिसमें उनके खुबसूरत चेहरे का दीदार हमने न किया हो । उनकी खुबसूरत तस्वीरें दिखाने का राज क्या है ? कहीं कोई बवाल करके फरार तो नहीं होने वाली है ?
सुहाना मैडम के जीवन में सुहाना मौसम आने का समय आ गया है । पहली बार वीर ने कुछ कहा और पहली बार उन्होंने उस कहे पर गौर भी किया । बिना कहे और बिना सुने लम्बी जर्नी कैसे कटेगी !
बेहतरीन अपडेट था वेयरवोल्फ भाई ।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग एंड ब्रिलिएंट ।
Bahut sandaar update
Dekhate hai veer ka tour kitna
lamba chalta h
Jabardast update bhai
Awesome update bhai...Waiting for Next Update...
Nice part
Marvelous update .
Waisy wolf bhai ak BAAT TU bata daina ya phir hint dy dain k is sotry Mai bhi lead character ki ak Sy Ziyada wives hongi jaisy last wali Mai tha ?
Fantastic awesome update bhai keep posting
Superb update
veer ke liye Kavya or arohi ke man ke jajbat or unke Bich ki ye chuhal baji padh kr dil me gudgudi ho rhi hai bhaya, Kavya ka aise khule aam kabool nama Vahi arohi ka aise sarma kr veer ko stupid kahna, oye hoye hoye hoye... mere muh se to upma bhi nhi nikal rhi awesome bhai...
tej or bhavna ke Bich akhirkar veer ko lekar baat bahar to aai, yha tej ka aise apni ma pr gussa hona banta hai pr Dekhte hai bhavna kab apni safai pesh karti hai vahi tej ke pass veer ki photo bhi hai jo usne Pahle chori ke iljam me fsane ke liye khichi thi... yha ek bete or bhai ke bichde hone ka dard aapne bakhubi dikhaya hai Werewolf bhaya amazing...
Ye gaurav ne to acche se jla di suhana ki, suhana ki baat bhi thik hai yaar yha sach me gand ghisi ja rhi hai dushman ko pakadne or uske atank se pichha chudane me or in gaurav bhau ko apni Bibi ke sath veer ke hone me problem hai, kmaal karte ho gaurav bhau...
Shopkeeper to suhana ki farmaish Sunke hi bhauchakka ho gya tha Vo to veer ne ice-cream khila kr thoda thanda kiya varna pta chalta ki suhana ne shop owner ko hi punching bag bna diya hai...
Pari ne veer ki pratikriya dekh shopping Moll ki ek din khudka bhi Isse bda or accha hoga, motivation ke sath sath pari ka ek feature yah bhi sayad dobara samne aaya hai sticky karne vala jab veer ne angrej stachu ki jagah Bharat ke veer mahapurusho ki pratima lgane ka khayal jataya... Sayad yah feature pahli baar rajasthan me path tracker ko sticky karne ka suna tha raat ko anguthi vapas lete Samay...
Photo to by god Itni jyada satik or khubsurati ke sath situation ko analise karke upload ki hai ki kahna hi kya, bole to jhakkash mind blowing bhai...
Next target veer ko Lagta hai is music mahfil me hi Milne vala hai dekhte hai kya hota hai vha...
Superb bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab amazing awesome update
very nice update bro
Nice update...
I'm back...
Awesome updates
Aur issi ko Shastro Me Tilmilana bola gya hai
Didi ka comeback or
Wot
1 month se comment hi nahi dekha maine to
nice1
Awesome update bro
Behtareen update bro Maza agaya parh k love you
Mast update h bhai...
Dude ise kehte hai update, mind-blowing
Bahut bahut pasand aaya Divya madam ki tasveer. Lekin sirf Divya hi kyon ? Suhana kyun nahi ? Wo firangi ladki kyun nahi ? Ragini bhabhi kyun nahi ? Nidhi mam kyon nahi ? Baaki sabhi husn ki pariya kyon nahi ?
Divya madam ka picture bar bar aana hamare liye ek UPSC ka kathin sawal lekar aa gaya hai. Kuchh na kuchh to jarur baat hai.
Werewolf bro ! Aise nahi jane denge aapko. Bechari ka murder - Shuerder mat karwa dijiyega.
Super update
Accident hogaela tha to 2-3 din hospital me hi bita......Khair aao backchodi hall me aaj backchodi pelte baith ke sab Xabhi bhi hai hi
Take care bhai.
Bhai las vagas se mumbai tak jayega veer... Nd nice update.. Waiting for next update.. Keep on writing.. Jldi dena update bhai wait ni hota
Superb fantastic amazing mind blowing update bhai...
Veer ne Zoey ki madat karke apne liye agar future me Zoey famous ho jati he to in future Zoey se help le sakta h kyu ki Veer ne is dhukhad time me Zoey ki madat ki he jabki Veer khali ek bar usse mila tha isliye Zoey k dil me Veer k liye ek respect ban gaye h or Suhana ko Natalia ka yu itne saal bad milne bulana or apne event ka VIP pass send karna or phir dinner k liye bulana usko samaj nahi aa raha Natalia ne kyu bulaya he or wahi Veer ne Esa kya check me padh liye tha jab usne Natalia ko check kiya tha wo bhi ek raaz he jo agle update me open hoga ya uske bad I don't know but kuch khass hi hoga jise wo achambhav sa ho gaya tha or ab agge kya hote he wo dekhne h Natalia ne kyu inko bulaya or kya Juda h Natalia ka is house of killer arc se...
Nice update waiting for next
Fantastic update waiting for next update plz give it soon
Mast update Bhai
Super sexy and fantastic update bro just loving it and looking for great updates like this.
Same pinch bhai
Mind-blowing update bro
lovely update . natalia ke concert me pahuch hi gaye jaha veer ko zoey mili .aur zoey ko madad bhi kar di paise ki .zoey ek prideful ladki hai jo model banna chahti hai par apne vasulo se samjhauta nahi karna chahti .
veer uske baare me sab jaanta tha aur usne uska cheque zoey ko udhar ke roop me diya jisse dono ko koi problem nahi huyi .
natalia ko check kiya par uska status abhi kya hai ye pata nahi ,kaera aur sonia ke jitni hi talented aur khubsurat hai natalia ye khud veer ne bhi maan liya .check karte hi natalia ki najar veer par padi .
Fantastic update bro
Mind blowing update
Maine abhi update 104 read nhi kiya hai
Phle Rihanna ji ka Review read karunga phir apne werewolf bhai ka update read hoga
Nhi bro wo mai bs dekhna chata hu Rihanna kya notes krti hai or kya reviews deti hai
Uske baad aap ki update 104 read krunga tabhi to aapke updates read karne ka maza double hoga
Werewolf Teeno tigdi kab 1sath me dekhne milenge?
You are superb as always
Are Natalia to ava Nikli veer kaera ,Sonia se milna fir vegas me ava milna kya in teeno ke Beach me kuch hai Mistry
Superbb Updateee
Hmm.
Laga to tha hi ki bhavna ek bade pariwar se aati hongi. Warna suman jesi dasi na milti veer ko. Aur suman bhi bas wo locket dekh ke hi veer ki dasi bann gayi to pariwar ka naam jyada bada hoga.
Bahot khoob shaandaar update bhai
Veer n Zoey ki filhal madad kerdi yeh kehker ki future m jab uske paas paise ho tab lauta dena ab dekhna yeh ki aisa hoga ya nahi Zoey paisa lauta ti h ya nahi ya fir wahi kahawat Neki Kar Dariya m Daal
Baherhal yeh log Natalie k concert ko enjoy kerke ab uske saath bethe h dekhte h kia baate hoti h
Badhiya shaandaar lajawab update bhai
Zabardast update
Waise advise accha hn bro...but control Kahn hota hn....
Behad hi shanadar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.
Waiting brother
Awesome update bhai waiting for next update
Ab ..hilana hi tujhe tu story se jayda accha porn dekhle tera kaam bhi jaldi ho jayega....
Fantastic update
Waiting for next update
Waiting for next update bro
अद्भुत,
नतालिया, जो कि सोनिया और काएरा की बचपन की सहेली भी है... और एक क़यामत हुश्न की मलिका भी... बिल्कुल सोनिया और काएरा के जैसे ही ।
आपने वीर के सफ़र मे एक और कड़ी को जोड़ा... और जिस तरह आपने नतालिया की एंट्री कराई वो काबिले तारीफ़ थी । .
"सुहाना" मुझे इस औरत के मन मे कोई हवश नही दिखाई दी वीर के प्रती... मेरे कहने का तात्पर्य यह है की जिस तरह की अपेअरेंस वीर महोदय के पास है... उस हिसाब से अधिकांश लड़किया वीर के आगे खुद को ढीला कर देती है....
परन्तु सुहाना के मन मे मैंने वीर के प्रती एक ज़िमेबारी और केयरिंग रवैया ही देखा है ( एकाध जगह छोड़ कर) ।
हाँ, भविष्य का मै कह नही सकता, हो सकता है सुहाना के वर्तमान रवैये और इतना केयरिंग होना इन दोनो को करीब ले आये ।
तब गौरब का क्या होगा, बेचारा चुतिया.... उफ्फ ।
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खैर, आगे बात करते है दिव्या मैडम के बारे मे ।
"दिव्या" एक ऐसी औरत जो हमेशा अपने दिमाग की सुनती है, तभी तो डिटेक्टिव है । भले ही ये औरत खुद को एक लस्टी महिला दिखाने की कोशिश करती है, अरे कोशिश क्या ये सच मे लस्टी औरत है भी तो एक बात और मुझे लगता है की वो कुछ न कुछ बड़ा राज़ भी अपने किरदार के साथ छुपाये बैठी हुई है ।
खैर, बितते वक़्त के साथ उसके राज़ भी हमे देखने को मिलेंगे ।
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वीर ने अपने इनाम के रकम को बिना ज्यादा सोचे जोय को दे दिया, ये इस बात को साबित करती है की वीर... परी जैसी अकल्पनीय शक्ती का एक सही हकदार है ।
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लेखक महोदय Werewolf आपने किरदारो के लिए जो उचित चेहरे खोजे और साथ ही साथ कहानी के हिसाब से आपने जो गाने के धुन लिखे वो काबिले तारीफ़ थे उसके लिए आपको मैं पुनः धन्यबाद करता हूँ ।
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अंत मे... पहले की ही तरह लाज़ाबाब अंश था ये ।
इंतज़ार रहेगा अगले अंश का ।
धन्यबाद
Lagta hai veer ko Ava achchi lagi.update mast hai.veer ki ma bhi uska Mumbai mein intejaar kar rahi hai.
updated bahut mast hai lekin kya Natalia main villain hai ya koi or baat ke liye plot taiyar ho raha hai...
Update
Next update kab ayega
Kya he motivation diya h apne
update?
Mind blowing update bhai
Waiting for next update
Mind blowing Fabolous alag hi level tha update ka aur es update kay tu kya hi kaho har bar ki tarh story ka craz barta hi jara h waiting for the next update keep posting
It's totally amazing update
Zabardast update
Outstanding update bhai maza aa gaya ab dekhte hai age kya hota hai.
Waiting for next update bhai
Suspense is going on…
Awesome update
Werewolf Bro update aaj aayega kya?
Nice update Werewolf bhai.
Jese jese kahani aage badh rahi he Vese hi naye character introduce ho rahe he. Ava naya character to nahi kyuki baate ho chuki he uski pehle bhi par ab wo ek celebrity he.
Veer aur suhana aa bhi gaye aur pub me enter bhi ho liye. Ab pub me mahol to alag hi rehta he. Veer ko dekh ke ek kya esi kayi ladkiya aati aur lipat jati agar ek ko bhi bhaav deta to. Par suhana se jese ye dekha nahi jaa raha. Aur baat bhi keh di veer ko sarcasm me par veer ke jawab se ab wo soch vichar me he.
Wahi divya bhi achhe se taiyar hoke aayi he. Aur veer se puch bhi rahi he jese uske liye hi taiyar hoke aayi ho. Veer ke liye hi hoga ye sajna.
An suhana ne asli baat kari he. Natalia ne samne se contact kara he divya ko. To koi kaam hoga usse. Ab kaam he ya kuch aur ye aage pata chalega. Ab ladies talk ko bich kese bole veer aur late bhi ho raha he. Suhana Divya ka ye chalta rahega aur aage bhi chalega jab dono Veer se close hona chahegi.
Ab yahi pe uski indirect najar padi he zoey pe. To bhaga uske piche. Zoey ko bhi jhatka laga hoga veer ko yaha dekhna. Zoey ne bhi apni halat bata di usko. Achha he jhuth nahi bolti wo. Aur model banna chahti he wo bhi nude semi nude shoot kiye bina. To uska rashta tough he kyuki chances kamm milenge usko aur uper se uski halat bhi kharab he paiso ko leke. Yahi pe veer jese uske liye guardian angel banke aaya he aur apna department se mila paisa usko de diya he. Veer ne kaam achha kiya he par zoey ese hi nahi legi na paise to isiliye ye baad me lautane ka keh diya Veer ne. Baad me bhi jab zoey lagayegi tab bhi wo nahi lega. Tab tak apna kuch naam to bana hi liya hoga usne.
Ab zoey successful hogi to Mumbai me aayegi uske ghar milne. Aur zoey ka koi interview hua jab wo ek model bann jayegi aur uss interview me usne Veer ka naam liya aur Veer ko uski life ka sabse important person kaha aur uske baad kaera wahi clip veer ko dikha ke bas sawal kare ki explain this veer ?? Tab halat tight hogi veer ki. Aur ye baat Nidhi tak gayi to taane alag milenge.
Khair wo sab baad ki baate he. Abhi to veer Ava ki khubsurti me hi khoya hua he. Ab esa nahi uske sundar ladkiya nahi dekhi par ye Ava kaera Sonia ke level ki he. Ek aur khaas baat ki ab Veer aur Pari puri tarah well sync ho gaye he. Pari veer ke vichar padh ke hi action le leti he aur speed kafi badh gayi he. Jisse veer kuch pal me hi aas paas ke mahol dekh sakta he ki kahi koi gadbad to nahi. Aur uper se Beowulf blessings ki skill jo daredevil ke jese veer ki instinct ko badha deti he.
Ab yaha veer ne usko check kiya to Ava ne turant usko dekha. Sawal uthte he ese scene padh ke. Aur ab shuru hua uska concert. Aur jo baate veer suhana ke bich hui wo bhi sawal khade karne ke liye kafi he. Ava pehle singing me interested nahi thi. Ho sakta he US aake usko sirf music se hi sukoon milta hoga. Ava ka pariwar me kuch problems hui hogi jisse Ava puri tarah se music ke sahare unn sab baato se deal kar payi ho. Hota he kuch Hobby jisse aapko sukoon mile.
Uske singing me ek dard he to uska past bhi kuch khaas nahi raha hoga. Parent's divorce?? Ab kya Hua he wo khud hi batayegi. Par kaera aur Sonia ke liye ek competitor aa rahi he ab.
Yaha suhana ka ego bhi hurt ho gaya jab wait karna pada. Veer uski ye side dekh ke ab khush hota he jabki pehle confusion rehta tha aur daya aati thi uss teady bear ki. Yaar Werewolf tumhari kahani me teady bear ke sath kabhi achha nahi hua. Neha ne bhi jala diya tha aur idhar suhana ghuse marti he. Lagta he sirf juhi sambhal ke rakhegi uska teady bear.
Ab asli baat hogi ki kyu bulaya? Kaam ke liye ya Ava apni saheliyo se wapis milna chahti he. Dekhte he.
Waiting for next update.
Aur ha save the teady bear .
Waiting
Waiting
UPdtae itna zabardast hota haii ki kya hi bataye.
3 din ka jo gap haii woh update ka uska wait jarna muskil hojata Haii
Waiting fir update bhai...kab aa raha haii update
Waiting for Update
Bro update de do bro
Waiting
bhai update kab ayega
Koi words hi na hai tariffo ke itne adbhut writer hai werewolf aur iss story ke to kya hi kehne
My werewolf bro...,
baadshah veer ko aur unke nirmata ko (aap ko) hum silent readers, active readers se lakh lakh guna chaahte hai
(to all my fellow readers - following things are only for entertainment purpose. There is nothing real & serious in them)
to maanneya lekakh mahodaya, aapko kuch ghatnaao se avgat karana tha...
baat ye hai ki iss weekend mera mumbai jaana hua tha wahan rickshaw me safar ke dauran chaurahe par kuch parche (leaflets) baate jaa rahe the..
ek parcha kismat se mujhe bhi mila aur jab maine usse padha to mere to hosh hi udd gaye..
Parcha kuch aisa tha --
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yeh hai veer - photo sanlagn (attach) hai- yeh jawan kishore pichle kuch hafto se laapata hai
( photo upload nhi ho rahi wahi page no. 1 poster wali)
jis kisi bhai ya behen ko inka koi bhi suraag pata lage to kripya inn suutroon se sampark kare :-
kaera - 645353455
sonia - 57747647767
chalu cheez - (ye wahi veer ke chacha ka chota sapola beta. Sorry naam dimag se nikal gaya Kuch P se tha - dekhte hai kon bata pata hai) - 646799097
inaam- har din werewolf bhai dwara update har ghante me 10 update
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to bhai mai to shock ho gaya parcha me likhi appeal aur apni dono pariyo ke naam ke sath chalu cheez ke naam ko padhkar ..
fir mai sach jaanne nikla veer ke ghar ki taraf.. Oo bhaisahab jaise hi wahan pahuncha to pata laga wahan to saari ladies jwalamukhi ban kar fat rahi thi..
maine ye jaante hue bhi ki ye galat baat hai chupke se khidki ke pass khade hokar unki behes suni --
( maaf karna please name gadbad ho sakte hai, mai thehra mandabuddhi )
ragini ( veer ki bhabhi) aur veer ki hotel wali aunty ( shayad Renuka) dono YouTube par ek video chalati hai
Suman ( wahi jiski Favourability sabse jyada hai 100+ ) : Veer par bharosa rakho tum sab... wo hume najar andaaj nahi kar sakta hai
Sonali ( jo restaurant bus dekh rahi h) : maa video dekho bas aap
saari ladies screen par eyes jama leti hai aur video khtam hone k baad
Suman : sonali tu pagal ho gayi hai kya... itni si baat ka tamasha bana rahi hai
Suman ki bahu (abha ya asha shayad) : Maaji kya aapne dekha nahi veer ji waha kaam ke bahane se kaise naach gaana dekh rahe hai
Hotel chachi ki beti : bhabhi, mom wo world famous Natalia ke concert ki front seat par baitha tha.. wo seats bahut jyada expensive hoti hai
[ wahin sonali( veer ki h
food bus manager), & Ragini bhi jalibhuni hui thi ]
Ragini : aur to aur wo sonia ki behen suhana kaise uski thigh par haath fer rahi thi
Sonali : Veer ke pass jo aurat baithi thi wo bhi kaise veer ko ghoor rahi thi
(ji haan wo aurat Divya - wo hai hi flirty)
to bhai saari mahilayoon ne ghar sar par uthaya hua tha
[ koi vlogger concert ka video daal diya hoga jisme veer, suhana, divya bhi capture ho gye honge
wahin sonali ne ye video apne ek customer ke mobile par food serve karne ke dauran dekha tha
Ab veer ki appearance 100+ god level ki ho gyi hai to uski footage banna bhi laajmi hi hai]
ab mai kya hi kar sakta tha nikal aya road ki taraf aur apne kaam ki jagah ke liye nikal pada
raaste me pada kavya ka school ( arohi ki choti behen) wo khadi thi wahan
mujhe jana hi tha uske pass yaar apne veer ki behen thi
mai : kavya?? kya hua kiska wait kar rahi ho....?
usne ghura to mai hi bola
mai : areey chill mai hu Bol Bachchan.. veer ka dost hu
( kavya ko vishwas dilane maine ye bhi kaha)
hahaha mere dad ki jewellery shop hai wahi se veer ne arohi ke liye earrings liye the wo tumhare liye bhi le raha tha par usse apni choti si special behen ke liye koi special earrings hi naa dikhi hahaha
kavya bhi thoda relax ho gayi thi aur thoda sa jara sa trust bhi ban gaya tha
mai : sorry kavya, special earrings hum manufacture hi nahi kar paye
kavya : not so funny bhaiya though it's ok
Aur usne apni pyari si smile dedi
mai : wese tum yahan..?
kavya : wo arohi didi aa rahi hai unka hi wait kar rahi hu
mai : ohh ok .. acha laga
tumse milkar kavya mujhe kuch kaam niptane hai so..bye..
mai jane ko muda hi tha ki kavya boli
( na jaane kya dimaag ghumaya usne)
kavya : bhaiya veer bhaiya abhi college me hi hai kya ?
mai kavya ki hi nakal karte hue bola
mai : not so funny.. kavya itne bure jokes to veer bhi nahi kehta hahahaha wo to USA me hai na abhi
kavya ne kuch socha aur fir boli
Kavya : bhaiya aap free ho to coffee ho jaye arohi di bhi aa hi rahi honge
ab mai mana karta kya beshak haan kar di ( arohi se intro wahi school k bahar hi ho gaya tha )
At cafe :-
mai : to kab laut raha hai veer mera call to wo na uthata na khud lagata ( maine batti di )
.... veer ki absence me pranjal ( yaar wahi chalu cheez) bhi kafi udne lag gaya hai
arohi: tum.. pranjal ko kaise jaante ho. ?
mai : areey.... di mai veer ka dost hu to usse jalne waloon ka to pata hoga hi na
meri baat sun mujhe kavya aur arohi ke forehead par stress ki kuch lines dikhi
mai : kya baat hai tum dono pareshaan lag rahi ho kuch kara hai kya uss pranjal ne..?
kavya ek pal ko arohi ko dekhi fir arohi ki aankho ki sehmati pakar kehti hai
kavya : wo veer bhaiya USA gaye hue hai na to wo dadaji se bhi nahi mil paye..
mai : toh..
arohi : pranjal firse apne manipulations khelne laga hai.. Dad ne usko dinner hum sabke saath karne ko bola hai dada ji bhi maan gye the
arohi : prajal ab dada ji se kehta h ki veer ko property milne k baad wo ek baar bhi dada ji aur gharwalo se nahi mila, aap khud hi dekho kitna selfish hai veer
aur to aur US me concerts me front seat par paise uda raha hai
kavya : pranjal bhaiya ne puri family ko concert ki video bhi dikhayi thi jisme veer bhaiya capture ho gaye the..
maine notice kara ki kavya ke ye kehte hi dono beheno ke chehre murjha se gaye the
mai man hi man werewolf sir ka jai bol un dono se kaha
Mai : tum dono bhi.. itna tention kyu le rahi ho Veer sab sambhal lega waise bhi wo wapas aane hi wala hai mumbai so dont worry
dono meri baat sun khush ho gayi ki veer aane wala hai
kavya : aapki kab baat hui veer bhaiya se
mai : wo mera call uthata hi kahan hai
arohi mujhe ghuri to mai aage bola
mai : areey bhai veer waha basne nahi gaya.. Uski jaan to tum sab ho to wo to ayega hi na jaldi
aise hi mahool halka fulka kar hum kuch der aur baaton me lage rahe aur wo dono ghar ko nikal gayi
ab mene socha ki pet pooja bhi yahi karlu to maine kuch snacks ka order bhi de diya ( multipurpose cafe tha bhai )
mai socha ki sale ek video ne halchal macha di
tabhi kisine mere piche haath rakha
mai piche muda to man hi man apni kismat ko kosa
ji haan mere piche wahi chalu cheez pranjal khada tha
mai (man mai) : sala pura parivaar aaj hi milna tha ..
pranjal : kon hai be Tu meri behno ke sath yaha kya kar raha tha
mujhe wo parcha yaad aya to baatein banate hue me bola
mai : dushman ka dushman dost hota hai pranjal sir ( maine fir batti di )
pranjal ne apni bhohe(eyebrows) sikodi
maine kapti muskaan laate hue kaha
mai : vo kamaal ki concert video maine hi upload ki thi
pranjal ek pal to chaunka fir mere sath hi chair par baith gaya
Maine aise hi usko apni baaton me convince kar liya aur
apni pocket se wo leaflet nikal kar table par rakh diya
mai : kya double game khel rahe ho guru... Apne ghar par sach aur bahar search me sath
pranjal : beta contacts banane ke liye dusro ke contacts tode bhi jaate hai tum nahi samjhoge
mai : sir maan liya..... par ye to batao ki kaera aur sonia detective kyu bani padi hai
pranjal khisiyani hasi hasta hai aur kehta hai
pranjal : sab apne werewolf ji ki kripa hai
maine use prashn bhari najro se dekha to wo aage bola
pranjal: kaera aur sonia - ye dono khajane( treasure) jara mayoos hai hihihi
mai : saaf saaf bolo na guru
pranjal : jabse veer ka USA part story me aya hai un dono hasinaaon (kaera, sonia) ki shikayat hai ki lekhak sahab hume ignore kar rahe hai
un dono ke according :- maan liya ki nidhi veer ki teacher he unhe respect milni chahiye isliye wo USA episode me ayi thi
par hum hum kyu ignore kiya jaa rahe hai
pranjal : yahi haal dada ji ka bhi hai unko chinta hai ki bhudapa hai ek accident unke pote yani maine karwa hi diya he
wo chinta mai hai ki bujurg ko bhi ahmiyat milni chahiye
mai (man me) : sala, udhar ghar me bhi saari mahilayein issi baat se jal bhun rahi hongi
khair fir ek do aur baatein karke chalu cheez bhi chali gayi
mai uski peeth ko dekhte hue bola
mai : bc, jab isko teju di aur veer ki mom ka pata lagega to naa jane kya kya Chadyantra(conspiracy) rachega ye harami
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bas werewolf bhaisahab yahi kuch ghatith hua tha humare sath mumbai me
~ story sahi jaa rahi hai bole to perfect se bhi perfect ye sab bas manoranjan ke liye hi tha
Always waiting for new updates
Hunt : dekhte hai kon kon se readers above mentioned wrong character names ko correct bata sakte hai
JABARDUST MIND BLOWING EXCELLENT AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI
LAALACH KE CHAKKAR ME DO LOG GAYE EMMA ZOEY DAR CHUKI PURI TARAH EMMA KUCHH JYADA HI KI WOH BEHOSH HI HO GAYI. NIGHTWALKER HATH AATE AATE RAH GAYA.
AUR CHESTER MARTE MARTE BACH , BACH GAYA YA MAR GAYA PATA NAHI
Update 105 has been posted.Last update me ek baat bahut badi hint thi...jaise veer ne check kiya...ava ki nazar seedhe uspe gayi...kya ava ka bhi veer ke jaisa koi Raaz hai...ya koi connection.
Superb update...mind blowing.
Fantastic superb updateUpdate - 105 ~ The Pitcher (1)Ab tak...
Kuch derr ke intezaar ke baad hi unhe andar jaane ke kiye allowed kar diya gaya.
Aur jese hi woh andar pohuche...
Natalia wahi baithi hui thi. Ek table ke paas ek seat par. Dinner yahi hona tha.
Usne teeno ko aate hue dekha aur bas ek halki sii muskaan ke saath boli,
"Welcome!!! Have a seat!!!"
Ab aage...
Golden Nugget Hotel & Casino,
Downtown, Las Vegas.
Night ~ 11:38 PM
Ye thi Downtown ki kaafi mashoor hotel me se ek, Golden Nugget Hotel.
Jidhar casinos ka bhi prabandh tha. Andar ka nazaara bhi ekdum khubsoorat tha. Hotel cheekh cheekh ke ye batlaa rahi thi ki kitna paisa laga hua tha usme.
Aur issi aalishaan hotel ke VIP area me, food court me baithi hui thi Natalia. Concert ke baad dinner ka plan tha jo ki usne Divya ke sang rakha hua tha. Downtown me hi uska concert hua tha. Aur udhar par hi ye hotel bhi maujood thi. Toh samay ki bachat aur nazdeeki ke liye Natalia ne apna reservation iss hotel me karwa liya tha.
Divya, Suhana aur Veer ko jab baahar se permission mili tab jaa kar woh andar VIP area me pravesh kiye.
Aur andar aate hi, Natalia ne unhe baithne ke liye kaha. Uski nazre saamne khade teeno log par gadi hui thi.
"Welcome! Have a seat!"
Ek halki muskaan ke saath woh boli. Par apni jagah se woh tass se mass nahi hui. Suhana ki bauhe upar chadh uthi Natalia ke iss ravaiyye ko dekh. Toh uska andaaza sahi tha matlab.
Natalia uss muqaam par aa chuki thi jaha ab woh Suhana aur baaki sab ke liye khade hokar unka swaagat bhi nahi karne waali thi.
'What changed you so much?' Mann me Suhana ne khud se sawaal kiya.
Parantu, usne kuch bola nahi. Teeno Natalia ke saamne maujood chairs par virajmaan ho gaye.
Divya : So? What's the matter?
Divya ne seedhe seedhe hi puch liya. Akhir aisi kya baat ho gayi thi jo itni badi star Natalia ne khud usse call kar ke usse bulaaya? Saaf tha ki kisi investigation se sambandhit hi kaam tha. Par kya?
Natalia : Let's have our dinner first. You guys must be starving too. Order anything you want.
Divya : Ohhh!
Natalia ne pehle dinner karne ka faisla liya. Aur waqai iss baat se Divya bhi sehmat thi. Concert me baithe baithe bhook toh unn sabhi ko lag aayi thi. Pehle pait pooja fir kaam dooja waali baat unhe sahi lagi.
Aur sabhi waha lazeez khaane par toot pade.
Natalia khaate samay kisi se baat nahi kar rahi thi. Uska poora dhyaan apne khaane par tha. Jis kaaran se Divya aur Suhana ne bhi apni bolti band kar lii. Wahi Veer pal pal apni nazre utha ke Natalia ko dekhta. Paas se toh aur bhi qayamat lag rahi thi woh. Natalia ne bas ek hi nazar daali thi Veer pe, uske baad se usne Veer ko nahi dekha jese maano woh usme ekdum uninterested thi.
Toh wahi Suhana bhi pal do pal Natalia ko chori chhipe dekhti, mann me uske dherr saare sawaal uth rahe the. Natalia uske saath aisa behave kyu kar rahi thi? Kahi aisa toh nahi ki woh usse bhul gayi ho? Suhana ek bhaari chinta me doobi hui thi.
Aur ant me akhir waali kursi par Divya ke maathe par bhi silvatein chhayi hui thi. Khaana toh woh kha rahi thi, par uska dhyaan khaane par kam aur Natalia ne usse kyu bulaaya uss par zyada tha.
Natalia aur Divya ek dusre ko jaante the. Natalia jaanti thi ki Divya Suhana ki dost hai aur ek private detective hai Vegas me. Balki, Sonia aur Kaera bhi ye baat jaanti thi. Yaha tak ki bachpan me hi woh sabhi Divya se mili chuki thi. Akhir Divya aur Suhana school, college se hi ek saath the.
Jab sabhi ka khaana peena ho gaya toh Divya se aur raha na gaya.
Apne baalo ke bun ko khol, usne hawa me apni kaali zulfe lehraayi aur kursi par adab ke saath baithate hue boli,
Divya : Dinner is done. What's the deal now?
Suhana : Right? Such a big celebrity Miss Natalia Martin. Why did you call us poor souls here?
Suhana ne ek taunt maara. Bhala hum jese gareeb logo ki kya zaroorat pad gayi inn maharani sahiba ko? Woh nakli muskaan ke saath Natalia ko chidhaane ke liye boli.
Natalia : Call me Nat!
Suhana : Ohhh! I thought 'Ava' would be much preferred by you!? Hmm?
Uske muh se 'Ava' shabd nikalte hi Natalia ke maathe par lakeerein chhaa gayi aur uski aankhein Suhana ko ghoor kar dekhne lagi.
Natalia : Nat! I prefer Nat!!! Your mood is off! Looks like you didn't enjoy my show.
Aur iss baar ek waar yaha se Natalia ne kiya. Uska kehna tha ki Suhana ne lagta hai uska show enjoy nahi kiya isliye kaafi bekaar mood me thi.
Suhana : Huh?
Iske pehle ki dono ke beech koi yuddh shuru hota...
Veer : Ahem...!
Veer ke beech me awaaz karte hi sabhi ki nazre uss par tik gayi. Aur Divya ko tabhi dhyaan aaya,
Woh Veer ke daayi orr baithi hui thi. Veer ke kandhe par haath rakh Natalia ko samjhaate hue woh boli,
Divya : Right! This is Veer. Veer! She's Natalia. Sonia's childhood friend.
Veer ne nod karte hue haath aage badhaaya toh Natalia ne bhi haath aage kar uska haath thaama aur handshake kiya.
Haath aapas me sparsh hote hi...
'Soft...!'
[Hehe~ ]
Natalia : Nice to meet you!
Veer : It's a pleasure!
Divya : Also... You know what?
Natalia : Hmm?
Divya (smiles) : He's a mutual friend of Sonia and Kaera.
*Silence*
Divya ki baat sunte hi Nat ki aankho me pal bhar ke liye jese ek chamak sii aayi. Usne Veer ko punaah ghoora aur ek halki muskaan uske hontho par sajj gayi.
Veer : Umm... About concert. The way you started...
Natalia (smiles) : Hindi aati hai mujhe! Hum Hindi me baat kar sakte hai. Just because I'm half white doesn't mean I have forgotten my native language. In fact, I prefer Hindi more than English.
Veer : Ah!! I see!
Veer ye nahi bhul sakta tha. Thodi derr pehle hi usne Nat ko check kiya tha. Concert ke dauraan. Tab usne dekha tha...
*Ding*
[Name : Ava Martin
Stage/Alias Name : Natalia Martin
Age : 26
Status : Singer/ Businesswoman/ Celebrity
Bio : Ava Martin! Jayesh aur Grace Martin ki eklauti beti. Aur Sonia, Kaera ki childhood friend. Pita hindustani the. Par dedh saal pehle hi unka dehaant ho gaya. Grace Martin head injury ke chalte coma me hai. Maa ke prati Ava ka sabse zyaada jhukaav raha hai. Aur isliye woh apna naam apni maa ke surname ke saath poora karti hai. Unhi ke liye woh gaati hai, Grace hi uska sab kuch hai ab. Pita ki maut ke baad usne singing ki duniya me qadam rakha. Aur dedh saal me hi usne khud ka label 'Blue' records khada kar liya hai.
Favourability : 7
Relationship : Strangers.]
Veer ye jaanta tha ki Ava ka janm India me hi hua tha. Yadi woh bachpan me India me thi aur uske pita India me hi kaam karte the toh zaahir hai ki woh India me hi paida hui thi. Ek anumaan toh laga hi sakte the.
Shayad yahi ek kaaran tha jo usse Hindi, English dono hi badi acche se aati thi.
Veer taajub tha ye jaan ke ki baahar jaane ke bawajood, Ava apni native language bhooli nahi thi.
Veer : Toh... Aapke show ki starting ke kuch pal... Jab aapne bina kisi instruments ke woh chand panktiya gaayi thi. Khaas kar antim panktiya... And letting go, I no longer need that vile past. Jis tarah aapne dheere dheere shabdo ko uthaa ke high notes par pohchaaya. Woh mera sabse favourite part tha.
Veer ne dil se muskuraate hue kaha. Nat ne usse jab iss tarah dekha toh woh jese kuch kehna hi bhool gayi. Shan bhar ke liye Veer ko dekhi aur fir usne giggle karte hue Veer par se nazre ferr lii,
Nat (giggles) : Ohkay! Thank you...!
Idhar Suhana aur Divya kabhi Nat ko dekhti toh kabhi Veer ko. Unhe aisa mehsoos ho raha tha jese woh faaltu me yaha baithi hui thi. Haan bhai. Aapas me hi mauj kar lo. Hum toh jese chutiye hai yaha. Kuch aise hi thoughts unke mann me aa rahe the.
Nat : You have a keen perception!
Veer : No! Not as much as yours.
Nat (stares) : Ohh! *smiles*
Par tabhi...
Veer : Fuuucccckkkkkkk!!!!
Nat : ??
Veer ko jaangh me ek halka dard mehsoos hua. Usne nazre neeche kar dekha toh uski baayi jaangh par... Suhana chikoti kaat rahi thi.
'Huh?'
Suhana usse table ki neeche se zorr se chimti kaatne me lagi hui thi aur uski aankhein? Uski aankhein jese Veer ko khaa jaane waali nazro se dekh rahi thi.
Boht flirting soojh rahi hai haan? Ye le ab!
Mann me yahi soch rahi thi woh.
'Shiiitttt!'
Divya : Ahem!!! So? Introductions ho gaye! Kya ab hum jaan sakte hai? Kya matter hai?
Divya ne main topic ko firse uthaaya. Uske bagal se Veer aur Suhana khuspusaate hue ek dusre se jhagad rahe the par Divya ne Nat ki orr focus rakhna chaaha.
Nat : Right!
Ek haami bhar Nat ne apne aas paas baithe staff ko waha se baahar jaane ka ishaara kiya. Aur ab waha par keval wahi 4 log maujood the.
Ek lambi saans lete hue Nat ne unn teeno ko dekha aur fir boli,
Nat : I need your help!
Divya : Hmm? Woh toh main samajh gayi thi jab tumne call kiya tha. Say openly.
Nat (fir ek lambi saas lete hue) : I'm being threatened.
Veer : Huh?
Divya : Kya?
Suhana : ....!!!?
Nat : Yes!!! I'm being threatened.
Kehte hue usne ek card table par haatho se sarkaate hue aage kar diya.
Divya ne usse thaamte hue padha,
Divya : Hmm? You are being invited to the Royal Klink? Toh isme bura kya hai? Ye toh invitation hai.
Nat : Invitation hai. Par maut ka.
Veer : Kya matlab?
Nat : Matlab ye ki... Look! You guys must have heard about Charlotte?
Divya : Charlotte? Wait! Ye toh wahi emerging pop singer hai na? Jiski abhi recent me death ho gayi? Suicide kar liya tha usne?
Nat : Yes and no!
Suhana : What do you mean?
Nat : Charlotte aur mein contact me the. Wo ek emerging singer zaroor thi. And a very promising one at that. Par usne suicide nahi kiya tha. Jitna mein usse jaanti hu. Woh aisa kabhi kar hi nahi sakti. Never! Usne khud mujhe message kiya tha ki woh ek new album release karne wali hai. Par uske pehle hi woh...
Divya : So you are suggesting ki ye ek murder hai? Ek conspiracy?
Nat : Yes!!!
Suhana : How? Tum itni yakeen ke saath kese keh sakti ho? Mene article padha tha newspaper me Charlotte ka. Investigation hui thi uski suicide ko lekar. Lekin forensic reports me saaf saaf saamne aaya tha ki usne poison leke suicide kiya hai. Toxins se hi uski maut hui hai.
Nat : Aisa bhi toh ho sakta hai ki kisi ne usse poison diya ho? Woh kabhi aisa nahi kar sakti. I believe ki police ne uske case ko death by suicide ka naam deke band kar diya hai.
Veer taajub me sab kuch dekh sunn raha tha. Hairaan woh isliye tha ki Suhana ko inn sab baato ki bhi khabar thi. Flight ke dauraan toh woh magazine padhne me lagi hui thi. Ye sab padhne ka samay kab mila usse?
Toh wahi woh Nat ki baato se bhi achambhav me tha. Shayad maamla gambheer aur boht hi uljha hua tha.
Divya : Woh sab chorro. Ava... I mean Nat! Mujhe ye batao ki ye invitation tumhe kese mila aur tum ye kyu keh rahi ho ki ye maut ka invitation hai? Kya matlab hai tumhara iss baat se?
Nat : It's just as it sounds. Do you want to know why?
Divya : ???
Nat : Kyuki death ke pehle... Charlotte ko bhi ye invitation aaya tha.
Suhana : Huh? How did you kn--!?
Nat : Because she showed me a photo. Usse bhi same invitation aaya tha.
Suhana : So what? Iss se ye prove nahi hota ki Charlotte ki maut se iska koi connection hai. Right?
Suhana ki baat par Nat ek mazaakiya muskaan me usse dekhte hue sarr hilaayi jese maano Suhana ki investigation skills ki khilli udaa rahi ho.
Suhana : Wh-Whaaatttt? Y-You think mein bakwaas kar rahi hu? Huhhh? I can read gestures well okay? Are you mocking me? Huhh?
Iss se pehle ki woh aur bhadakti, achanak hi usse apni daayi jaangh par ek haath ka sparsh hua.
'????'
Dekha toh paaya ki Veer ka haath tha. Jese woh console kar raha tha usse shaant rehne ke liye. Hairaani ki baat ye thi ki ye tareeqa kaam bhi kar gaya. Suhana ekdum shaant ho gayi. Kahi na kahi, usse ye ehsaas accha lag raha tha. Veer ka usse aise support karna. Woh khush thi ki Nat jesi khubsoorat ladki ko dekhne ke baad bhi Veer ne apni team nahi badli thi. Woh abhi bhi uski team me tha. Nahi toh aksar aise mauke par ladke palti maar ke sundar ladkiyo ki chaatne lag jaate hai.
Par Veer alag tha.
Woh bagal se Veer ke chehre ko nihaarne lagi.
Aur idhar Veer ki nigaahein tiki zaroor Nat par thi par andar hi andar woh mann me,
'Pari!!!'
[Got it!]
*Ding*
[Basic Enemy Tracker is in use...]
[Tracking...]
*Ding*
[No enemies were found.]
'Hmmm!!! I see!'
Divya : Abhi bhi dots ko connect karne me mujhe problem ho rahi hai. Tum kehna kya chaahti ho?
Nat : What I mean to say is... Charlotte ko ye invitation aaya tha. She took a photo of it and then sent me. Lekin uske next din hi uski death ho gayi. Police searched for the details. But end me ek suicide case bana ke usse end kar diya. Ab same invitation mujhe aaya hai.
Divya : Toh tumhara matlab hai ki ye ek death trap hai?
Nat : Exactly!!!!
Suhana : Bakwaas! Hmph~ I'm sorry to say. But tumhari baato ka koi sense nahi bann raha hai.
Divya (frowns) : Kya tum iss Royal Klink ke baare me aur bata sakti ho kuch?
Nat : Mene jaan'ne ki koshish kii. I have some connections too. Par mujhe bas ek hi detail mil paayi hai.
Divya : I'm all ears. Fill me up!
Nat : Ek tarah ki party hoti hai. Usse hi Royal Klink ka naam diya gaya hai. You know? Wine glasses ko aapas me cheers karte hue... That kind of party... Log masks pehente hai idhar. Apni identity hide karne ke liye. That's it. Bas itna hi mujhe pata hai.
Divya : Hmm!!! Wine party... Royal... Huh!???? Wait!!!! Kya kaha tumne??
Nat : ???
Divya : Wine party???
Divya achanak hi hadbadaate hue Veer ko dekhi. Aur beshaq, Veer ki aankhein bhi hairaani ke maare feli hui thi.
Divya : V-Veeerrrr!!!!! Kya tum bhi wahi soch rahe ho jo mein soch rahi hu?
Veer (nods) : The thir-
Divya : Yessssssss!!!! The third one!!!! The third one!!!! Veeeerrrrr!!!!
Suhana : Huh? Ye tum dono...!?
Divya : Third criminal Suhana!!!! Third fucking criminal....!!! Jim, Nightwalker and now this.... Fuckkkk!!!
Suhana : Ahhh!!!?
Divya ne jese kuch bhaanp liya tha. Aur uska andaaza galat nahi tha. Kyuki Veer ne bhi ye bhaanp liya tha.
Wine!!! Royal!!! Inn do shabdo se hi Veer ko ek andaaza lag gaya tha.
Nightwalker kya karta tha? Drugs bech ke mehngi mehngi wines ka business. Aur woh wines woh kisi aur jagah bhejta tha.
Mehngi wines... Aur ab ye Royal Klink...
Kuch na kuch connection toh zaroor tha. Shayad paheli ki do dots ka yahi judaav tha.
Lekin tabhi,
Divya : No no no no noooooo!!! Noooooo!!!!
Divya sarr hilaate hue tension me aa gayi.
Nat : What is it?
Divya : Agar aisa hai toh... Shitttt!!!! Iska matlab ye seedha house of the killers se juda hua hai.
Nat : Wha-!? House of the killers?
Divya : Haan!!! Damn ittt!!! Fir ab ye ek probate case nahi raha. Nat!! Hum pehle se hi ek boht badi gang of serial killers ke peeche investigation me lage hue hai. Aur jis hisaab se tumne details dii hai. I'm pretty sure ye house of the killers ka koi third member hi hai. What do you think Veer?
Veer (nods) : Hmm! I agree! Nightwalker wines kisi ko sell karta tha. Not to mention ki unme sabse mehngi se mehngi wines maujood thi. Aur royal klink ke naam se toh yahi maalum pad raha hai ki... Third member idhar se ho sakta hai.
Divya : That's right!!!! Nat! Ab ye case private nahi raha. Public ho chuka hai. So, you'll have to co-operate wi--
Nat : Not at all!!!!
Divya : Huh?
Nat : Mujhe apna naam criminal cases me nahi laana hai. That's the whole reason why I called you. Warna mein cops ko hi inform nahi kar deti seedha? I called you so thag you could deal with it in private.
Divya : B-But... This matter is huge Nat... Aise me...
Nat : I can give you a hefty amount!
Nat ne ek taq jawaab diya. Amount shabd sunte hi Divya bhi chup reh gayi.
Divya : How much?
Nat : An amount which won't disappoint you!
*Silence*
Aur ek minute tak bas sannaata saa chha gaya.
Nat : Just don't involve my name in any of it. That's the only condition. So? Deal or not?
Suhana Divya ko hi ghoor ke dekh rahi thi. Idhar Divya ne ek lambi saans lii aur boli,
Divya : Done then! It's a deal!!!
Aur usne itna bola hi tha ki...
"You Bitcccchhhhhhhh!!!!"
Suhana zorr se bagal se chillaayi,
Divya : Wh-What???
Suhana : Fayda dikha nahi ki...
Divya : Shut up Suhana! Hmph! Dekho toh kaun bol raha hai? Khud toh harr samay profit hote hi apni gaa-- I mean... Apni jebo me thoos leti ho paise. Aur ab mujhe keh rahi ho? Hmph!
Suhana : Y-Youuuu!!!! Kya kaha tumne?? M-Mein iss tarah kisi ke kehne par...
Divya : What? Ab mirchi lag gayi haan?
Suhana : Fuck off bitchhhh!!!
Divya : Ohh shut the fuck up...!!!
Inn dono ki behas jese hi shuru hui toh Veer dono ke beech baithe jese chakki me gehu ki tarah pis raha tha. Usne ek lambi aah chorri,
'Pari!!!'
*Ding*
[Intimidating Presence has been equipped.]
Aur ye equip hote hi,
Veer : THAT'S ENOUGH!!!!!!!
Veer ne zorr se buland awaaz me kaha.
*Silence*
Ek ghanghor khamoshi chhaa gayi. Dono Suhana aur Divya sann hoke reh gayi. Intimidating Presence! Jesa naam wesa kaam. Veer ki Presence aisi ho gayi thi jese maano woh sabhi ek Raja ke saamne baithe ho.
Aankho me tej, baithne ka dhang, uske chehre ke bhaav, buland awaaz aur uska aura.
Sab jese unhe hairat me daal diya. Uska courage, wisdom, willpower, aur confidence sab 200% badh chuka tha.
Suhana : I... I...
Suhana ke muh se kuch nikal hi na paaya. Woh ekdum bakri ki tarah seedhi bann ke baith gayi.
Veer : Agar sab kuch ho gaya hai toh hume ab chalna chahiye.
Divya : R-Right!!!
Divya bhi thodi sehmi hui haan me gardan hilaayi aur Nat se deal final kar woh sabhi waha se uth ke baahar ke liye jaane lage.
Nat khud hairat me sab kuch dekh rahi thi. Ye hua kya tha abhi abhi?
Kherr! Jo bhi tha, bada hi vichitr tha.
Teeno hotel ke baahar aa chuke the. Aur Suhana Divya dono hi Veer ko chori chhipe dekh rahi thi baar baar.
Unhe andar se aisa mehsoos ho raha tha jese Veer me achanak hi koi naya shaks ghus aaya tha. Jese koi ek Raja ka... Ya ej badhshah ka... Ek supreme king ki personality jese...
Par harr fayde ke saath saath uske nuksaan bhi the.
Intimidating Presence Off nahi ho sakta tha. Ek baar lagaya toh iska effect poore samay rehta tha. Aur saath hi ab Veer 24 ghante ke liye Beowulf's Blessings equip nahi kar sakta tha. Ye ek duwidha zaroor thi.
Veer : What now?
Divya : R-Right!!! Nat ne invitation card mujhe diya hai. Address diya hua hai yaha. Mujhe abhi hi ek kaam karna padega.
Suhana : Ab kya??
Divya : Kisi se milne jaana hai. You can leave if you want. Take my car.
Suhana : Fine then!!! Main jaa rahi hu ghar. Mujhe wese hi neend aa rahi hai. It was too tiring for me. I'm leaving...!
Divya : Hmm! Ye lo keys! Veer!! Come with me! Hume ek jagaha aur chalna hai.
Suhana : K-Kyaaa??? V-Veer?? Veer ko kyu? Kaha jaa rahi ho tum.
Divya : Kya hua? Mene kaha na ek kaam hai. Usse abhi hi karna hai.
Suhana : Haan! P-Par Veer ko kyu...!?
Divya : Arre? Veer rahega saath me toh accha rahega na. Wese bhi... A young hot woman... Strolling alone in Las Vegas... Yadi mujhe kuch ho gaya toh? Haan? Kaun jawaab daar rahega?
Suhana : Y-Youuuu!!!! Bitch...!!!!
Divya : Hmph! Go away now bitch! Nik bhi department se laut hi raha hoga. Ghar par koi rehna chahiye darwaza kholne ke liye. C'mon! Let's go veer!
Kehte hue Divya apni gaand matkaate hue mud ke chali gayi. Aur idhar Suhana apna muh fula ke usse bas gusse me dekhti reh gayi.
Jab usne Veer ko dekha toh bas uske nazdeek aayi aur uske kaano me dheere se boli,
"Don't let her eat you up!!!"
Aur bas, itna bol woh Divya ki car leke waha se ravaana ho gayi.
Veer muskuraate hue waha se mud Divya ke paas aaya aur dono cab kar kisi jagah chal diye.
Veer : So?
Divya : Kya?
Veer : Aapne Miss Natalia ki deal accept kar lii hai. Toh ab Investigation department se inn baato ko kese chhipaogi aap?
Divya : Mujhe karna kya hai? I can say anything! Keh dungi ki mujhe third criminal ke baare me pata lag gaya hai. Aur mene action bhi lena shuru kar diya hai.
Veer : Agar woh puche kese aur kaha se pata laga toh?
Divya : Keh dungi ki mujhe kisi ne bataaya tha. Gawaahi dene ke liye mere paas boht se log hai. Tum aur Suhana bhi toh ho unme se. Haha~
Veer : You...!!
Divya : Ab tum bhi uss nakchidi Suhana ki tarah bitch bolne waale the kya mujhe?
Veer : No!!! I was just... Surprised a bit.
Divya (smiles) : Mujhe bas department me itna hi batana hai ki third criminal ki khabar mil chuki hai. Detectives investigation me lag jayenge. Mere paas unhe ghumaane ke liye kayi tareeqe hai. At the same time, hum Natalia ki problem bhi solve kar denge. Mujhe mera fayda bhi ho jayega. Department ki taraf se fir alag paisa. That's what we call hitting two birds with one stone.
Veer uski harr baat sunn bas muskura raha tha. Toh aise inn mohtarma ne itna bada ghar banaaya tha. Waqai! Dimaag toh tha Divya me boht.
*Screeeeeeccccchhhh*
Gaadi ruki, aur dono Veer aur Divya baahar nikle.
Ek bar tha ye. Koi zyaada bada nahi tha. Lejin slot machines ek ke baad ek lagi hui thi. Aur kuch log abhi bhi lottery nikaalne me lage hue the.
Divya : Tum yaha mera intezar karo. Mein abhi aati hu.
Veer : You sure you don't want me in there?
Divya (winks) : I do want you inside! Hahaha~
Veer ko cherrte hue woh andar chali gayi. Double meaning jokes tob koi Divya se karwa le.
Andar jaate hi Divya ki nazar ek ladke par padi. Kareeb 28-29 ki umr ka prateet ho raha tha.
Divya uske sameep gayi aur usne uske kandhe par thap thapaate hue usse uthaaya. Shayad thodi beer pee rakhi thi usne.
Woh ladka utha aur Divya ko saamne dekh woh muskuraaya,
"Ohhh!!! Look who's here? Hahahaha!!! M-My dear Divi!!! Hehehe~"
Divya : Don't fuck with me Fred!!! I have a job for you! Are you interested or not?
Fred : Interested? Of course!! O-Of course I'm interested! Heh~
Usne Divya ko upar se neeche taulti hui nazro se dekha. Divya ki bauhe sikudi, par woh boli kuch nahi.
Uske baad Divya ne poori baatein bataayi aur pucha,
Divya : Now tell me? Can you do it?
Fred : How much Divi? Hehehe~ You know I charge a lot!!!
Divya : Much better than the last time. Now say?
Fred (surprised) : Ohhhh!!! Alright! You got me! Hehe~
Divya : Good!
Abhi wo palatne hi waali thi ki tabhi Fred ne uske gore gore kandhe par apne haath rakh diye.
Divya : What are you doiiinnnggg????
Fred : Heh~ Let's have some fun baby!
Divya : YOU FUCKER!!!! GET AWAY YOU BASTARD!!!! *kicks*
Fred : Arrghh!
Aur ek taang Fred ke perr par maar woh waha se palat ke baahar nikal aayi.
Divya : Fucking Moron... Bastard...!!! Dickhead...!!! Hmph!!!
Woh badbadaate hue baahar nikli toh Veer usse sawaliya nazro se dekha,
Veer : Kya hua?
Divya : Umm... N-Nothing!
Dono tahalte hue cab ka wait karne lage. Aur chalte chalte hi,
Divya achanak hi apni peeth Veer ke aage kar khadi hui,
Divya : Can you... Can you fix this?
Uski gori makhmali peeth Veer ke saamne thi. Woh apne gale me pehni hui chain ko fix karne ki baat kar rahi thi.
Veer ne apne haath aage badhaaye. Par jese hi uske haath Divya ki peeth se sparsh hue,
*Ding*
[Mystic Touch had been triggered.]
'Ehhh!?'
"Nnnnhhhhhhhggghhhh!!!!"
Ek loud moan Divya ke muh se nikli.
"Ahhhh!!!!" Ekdum bhauchakii sii hote hue usne apne muh par dono haath rakh apni awaaz roki. Par Veer ne sab kuch sunn liya tha.
'Ohhh!!! Fuckkk!!! Mystic touch? Iss samay? Fuuuckkkk!!! Why now?'
[Enjoy! Hahaha~]
Iss baar Divya ke gaal surkh laal ho rakhe the. Upar se Veer ne Intimidating Presence bhi equip kar rakha tha.
Woh Veer se alag hone ke liye palti, par usse dhakelte samay jese hi uska haath Veer ke seene par pada...
"Nnnnghhhhhh!!!!!"
Seene ki garmaahat usse madhosh kar baithi. Uska haath Veer ke seene se alag hi na hua.
Divya : What's... What's happening to me?
Uski aankhein ekdum nasheeli ho rakhi thi. Aur woh jhukte jhukte Veer ke chehre ke qareeb aati jaa rahi thi.
Divya : N-Nooo! I... I can't... I can't let this happen... V-Veeeerrr!!!
Woh uske gaal se lag gayi.
Aur agle hi pal,
"Mmmmmphhhhhhhhh!!!!!!?!!"
Divya ke gulaabi raseele honth Veer ke hontho se jaa lage. Labo ka labo se sparsh hote hi Divya ka poora jism thitur utha.
Veer ne bhi fir ek pal na gawaaya, uski patli kamar ko apne haatho me jakad usne Divya ko poori tarah se apni baaho me jakad liya.
*Slurp* *slllurrrrppppp*
"Mmmmmmm~ Nnnnghhhh!!!! Aaaaaahhhhhhh!!! Ssssssss~"
Aur dono iss meethe aur thode geele chumban me kho gaye. Haath me jab Divya jesi maal aa rahi ho toh Veer kese peeche reh sakta tha?
Uske haath bhi Divya ke badan ki mashoor jagaho ko khojne me nikal pade.
Par tabhi,
*Ding*
[Mission : Assassinate the Pitcher.
Rewards : 1) ???? points.
2) ??? Fame Points.
3) 1 Random scroll.
Time Limit : 2 days.
Mission Failure Penalty : 1) ??? Points deduction.
2) Mystic Touch will be removed.]
Aur Veer ke mann se bas yahi nikla,
'Ah!!! Shittttt!!! Here wo go again!!!!'
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