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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

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  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 26 1.7%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 202 12.9%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 35 2.2%

  • Total voters
    1,564

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Mega Update

Update - 106 ~ The Pitcher (2)

Ab tak...

Uske haath bhi Divya ke badan ki mashoor jagaho ko khojne me nikal pade.

Par tabhi,

*Ding*

[Mission : Assassinate the Pitcher.
Rewards : 1) ???? points.
2) ??? Fame Points.
3) 1 Random scroll.

Time Limit : 2 days.
Mission Failure Penalty : 1) ??? Points deduction.
2) Mystic Touch will be removed.]

Aur Veer ke mann se bas yahi nikla,

'Ah!!! Shittttt!!! Here wo go again!!!!'


Ab aage...

Subah ke 6:48 ho rahe the. Divya ka ghar subah ki surya ki kirno me roshan ho raha tha.

Aur woh ek kaala satin ka wrap odhe chinta me ghar ke lawn me khadi hui thi.


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Mann ekdum vichlit tha uska. Kal jo kuch bhi hua, woh nahi hona chaahiye tha.

Sochte hue uska haath apne aap khud ke gulaabi hontho par chala gaya. Usse kal derr raat ka manzar yaad aaya,

Kese Veer uske honth choos raha tha. Aur woh khud kese uss se lipti hui thi. Ye jaante hue bhi ki woh ek shadi shuda aurat hai. Ab jese usse pachhtava ho raha tha. Par na jaane kyu, kal pata nahi Veer me aisa kya tha jo woh khud ko rok hi na paayi.

Veer ka harr sparsh usse madhosh kar raha tha. Ye kya ho gaya tha usse kal?

'Ye kya kar diya mene? Mein kese Veer ke saath? Ugh! Divya! Ye kya kar diya tumne? Shadi shuda aurat ho tum ek. Aur fir bhi tumne? Ek 21 saal ke ladke ke saath? Chhii!!! Lekin... Lekin kal... Just what was it? Mein aisa kese kar baithi?'

Woh soch hi rahi thi jab achanak hi,

"Ohhh!! Subah subah aap yaha!?"

Awaaz sunte hi Divya ka tann thitur utha. Jhatt se woh palti, dekha toh Veer pillar se tike hue haath baandh ke khada tha.

Uske badan pe sirf ek white shirt thi jiski saari buttons khuli hui thi. Aur uski sudol chaathi Divya ki aankho ke saamne thi.

Woh kasse hue six packs, aur shredded muscles. Divya ne dekhte hi apne gale me thook ka nivaala gatka.

*Dhak* *Dhak*

Uska dil zorro se dhadak raha tha.

Woh punaah palti aur ek lambi saas lete hue boli,

Divya : T-Tum yaha? Itni subah?


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Veer (smiles) : Ye mera sawaal tha. Kyuki mein toh roz hi subah exercise karne aata hu yaha. Aur mujhe itne dino me koi bhi subah nazar nahi aaya. Fir aaj...!?

Divya : W-Woh... Woh... Meri neend aaj jaldi khul gayi.

Baat toh sach thi. Divya ki neend jaldi khul gayi thi. Par kyu? Kyuki raat bhar usse sone me dikkat gayi. Raat bhar Veer ke saath woh chumban usse theek se sona na dii.

Divya ne keh toh diya. Par Veer ka koi jawaab nahi aaya. Kuch seconda aur guzar gaye. Khamoshi abhi bhi chhaayi hui thi.

'Hmm?'

Aur jaan'ne ke liye abhi Divya mudne hi waali thi ki tabhi ek haath uski patli kamar par peeche se aaya aur usse zorr se jakad liya,

"Aaaaahhhhhhhhh!!!!"

Woh hadbadaayi!

Veer ne usse kass ke apni baaho me bhara hua tha.

Divya : Veeeeerrrrrrrr???? Ye kya kar rahe ho? Paagal ho kya??? Ch-Chorro mujhe!!!

Apne naazuk haatho se woh Veer ke haath apni kamar pe se hataane ki koshish karne lagi. Lekin Veer toh Veer tha. Bhala uski pakad ko dheela karna, Divya ke bas ki baat kaha thi?

Woh toh sirf kasmasaati hui Veer ki baaho me uska virodh karti rahi, uska chehra sharm ke maare poora laal ho raha tha.

Ek baar fir, Mystic Touch trigger ho chuka tha.

Veer ne uski ye haalat dekh hassi udaayi. Hawa me udti chidiya kese uske panjo me aake phass chuki thi ab.

Uske mazboot haath, kisi zanzeer ki tarah Divya ke badan ko jakde hue the. Woh jitna hi bhaagne ki koshish karti, Veer ke haatho ki pakad utni hi uske jism par mazboot ho jaati.

Ek taaza phul ke samaan khushboo Divya ke badan se aa rahi thi, jo Veer ke dil-o-dimaag me halchal machaaye hue thi. Abhi abhi naha ke jo aayi thi Divya. Halke halke baal bhi uske geele the. Aur nahaane ke baad uska gora badan Surya-uday ki kirno me jo chamak raha tha, woh kisi bhi mard ko apna aapa khone par majboor karne ke liye kaafi tha.

Aaj usne jaldi naha liya tha.

"Ch-Chorro Veer....!" Uski patli sii awaaz Veer ke kaano me padi.

Veer : Well? Aap hi thi jo baar baar sher ke muh me apna haath de rahi thi. Kaha tha na mene uss raat? Don't get too close to me. Or you'll get burned. Look what you made me do now.

Woh hasste hue bola, uske haath Divya ki kamar ko zorr se jakad ke apni orr kheeche. Divya ki peeth poori tarah se Veer ki chaathi se jaa chipki. Yaha tak ki Veer ka hathiyaar bhi ab uski chuttado me dakhal dene laga tha.

Divya : Ahhh!!! Y-Youuuu!!!! Mene kab... Mene kab kuch kiya? Tumhi toh mere paas aaye na abhi? Haan? L-Leave me now!!! Iss se pehle ki koi hume dekh le. Ugh!!!

Veer muskuraate hue uske kaan ke paas jhuka aur bola,

Veer : Kal Miss Natalia ke saath dinner se aate waqt. Jab aap mere peeche chal rahi thi. Kaun tha woh jo apne hontho ko daato se daba ke meri orr dekh apne breasts ko masalne me laga hua tha haan?

Uske muh se woh sab sunte hi Divya ke chehre ka achanak hi rang udd gaya. Par sharm ab bhi barkaraar thi.

Divya : Ahhhhh!!!! T-Tumne kab...!?

Veer (smiles) : Mene kab dekha? Humph! Galti aapki, jo aapne bagal me lage sheesho par dhyaan nahi diya. Saari harqat aapki mein side me lage sheesho me dekh raha tha. You were thirsting for me. Right?

Divya (blushes) : Nnnnnngghhhh~ L-Leave me!!!

Uske gaal gulaabi ho chale aur virodh ke kaaran, uski gol matol gaand Veer ki jaangh aur uske lund par zorro se ghisne lagi, jiske chalte Veer ka mazaa duguna ho gaya.

Veer (smiles) : Let me teach you a few things.

Veer ne agle hi pal, Divya ki kamar pakad usse aur zorr se apni orr kheecha aur jhukte hue uss sugandhit badan ke lambe gore gale me apna muh de diya.

"Nnnnggghhhhhhhh!!!!!"

Ek tezz siski ki awaaz aayi. Divya ki aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi. Veer uske gale ko betahasha choomne laga. Uski geeli zubaan uss makhmali twacha par firti rahi.

Aisa lag raha tha jese ek vampire ek amla naari ka shikaar kar raha tha uske gale me apne nukile daant se gadaate hue. Divya ek bhed ki tarah prateet ho rahi thi jisse maano ek bhooke sher ke saamne fek diya gaya ho.

Divya : Dekho! Veer! M-Mujhe chorro... Kal jo kuch bhi hua hamare beech, usse mein nazar-andaaz kar dungi... L-Leave me right now!!!!

Badi himmat kar ke usne kuch shabd nikaale muh se. Seena zorro se upar neeche ho raha tha. Parantu, Veer toh aaj kisi aur hi mood me tha. Aaj jese uske andar ki aag bhi bhadak chuki thi.

Aur agle hi pal,

Divya : Nnnnnnhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!

Veer ne Divya ki kaali dress ke andar se seedha haath daal uska ek doodh pakad kar baahar kar diya. Divya bhauchakki sii apni haalat ko dekhti rahi bas.

Veer ne jese hi dekha toh woh hairaan reh gaya. Andar koi bhi bra nahi thi Divya ke. Iska matlab...

Uska haath turant hi peeche unn do mulaayam chuttado ke beech me gaya aur jese hi usne waha chhua,

"Aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh!!!! Sssssssssss~"

Divya uchhal uthi.

'Shit!!!! She's naked inside!?'

[Mujhe ek kaam yaad aaya Master. Mein aati hu thodi derr me.]

*Ding*

[System has entered into the sleep mode.]

*Ding*

[Divya's favourability : 74]

Neeche se bhi Divya nagn haalat me thi. Iska matlab saaf tha. Woh sirf yahi kapda khud par daal ke apne haseen jism ko chhipaaye hue thi.

Veer ne usse zorr se ghumaaya aur iske pehle ki Divya kuch keh paati, uske honth Veer ke hontho ki giraft me jaa chuke the.

"Mmmmmmmmmmmm~"

Woh Divya ko aise man handle kar raha tha jese maano koi choti sii gudiya ho. Uski chuchhiyo ko haath me leke aatte ki tarah goonth raha tha Veer. Unhe naye naye akaar de raha tha.

Aur iss geeli deep kiss se dono hi ekdum garam ho chuke the. Aankho me nasha saaf dikh raha tha.

"Veeerrrr!!!! Jaane do... Jaane do... Dekho!!! Ye sab galat hai. Hum ye nahi kar sakte. We have already crossed a limit. W-We can't now... Mmmmphhhhhhhh~"

Veer ne usse chooma aur usse jhatt se goad me utha liya. Woh pal bhar me hi Divya ko utha ke Divya ke hi personal room me usse le gaya.

*Dhapppp*

Usne zorr se uske queen size bed par patka aur,

*Click*

Door knob andar se ghuma ke door lock kar diya.

Divya : N-Noooo!!!!

Bechaari Divya ki haalat kharab thi. Baal bikhre hue the, hontho par thook saja hua tha, par fir bhi aankho me khumaari thi, uttejna thi aur ek laalsa bhi.

Veer ke jism ko khud par mehsoos karne kii.

Ek javaan aurat aur ek uss se bhi javaan ladka. Dono ek dusre ko khaa jaane wali nazro se dekh rahe the. Dono jaante bhi the ki woh hawas ka shikaar ho rahe hai. Uske bawajood dono woh karna chaah rahe the.

Veer uske upar aaya aur Divya ki dress ki woh dori usne kheech ke khol dii. Aur ek hi jhatke me uske badan se usne woh dress alag kar dii.

Ufffff!!!

Veer ki aankho ke saamne Divya ka pehli baar poora nanga shareer saamne tha. Kya hi taraasha hua jism tha.

Divya ne koi virodh nahi kiya iss baar. Na hi badan ko dhaka aur na hi woh kuch boli.

Aur uske baad shuru hua dono ka thook se mel milaap. Yaani ki deep kissing. Bhooke jaanvaro ki tarah woh dono ek dusre ke muh ko khaane me jutt gaye.



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Kabhi Veer Divya ke hontho ko kaatata,


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Toh kabhi uske labo ke sang khelta.


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Kabhi woh uske doodh choosta toh kabhi badan ko choomta. Aur Divya bas nihaal sii hui jaa rahi thi. Na koi hosh na koi sharam ab.


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"Now! I'll devour you!!!"

Veer ne ahista se kaha. Lekin, Divya ke raungte khade ho gaye. Woh ab usse khaane aa raha tha.

Apna jogger neeche kar usne poora utaara, underwear me hi uska hathiyaar khatarnak prateet ho raha tha.

Aur jese hi underwear hataayi, jhatke ke sath uska lund uss se baahar aaya. Phati aankho se Divya kabhi uske lund ko dekhti toh kabhi usko..

Uski muniya toh pehle se hi rass chorr rahi thi. Iss se adhik foreplay ki koi zaroorat nahi thi.

Veer (smiles) : Siskiyaa kam lena. Warna woh jaag jaenge.

Aur itna bol, Veer ne apna lund Divya ki chut ki siraahne rakh diya.

Divya : Nnnggghh~

Pitcher gaya bhaad me. Veer aaj pehle iss pitch par batting ke liye utarne taiyyaar tha. Aaj toh woh harr shot boundary ke paar maarne waala tha.

Kuch derr tak dono ek dusre ki aankho me dekhte rahe, Veer apna lund liye uski chut ke daane par ghista raha. Jese usse tease kar raha tha. Harr guzarte pal Divya bechain hoti jaa rahi thi. Apna nichla honth daato me liye woh jese intezaar kar rahi thi.

Aur woh ghadi aa hi gayi,

Ek baar me Veer ka aadha lund sansana ke uski chut me ghuss gaya.

"Aaaaaaaaahhhhhhnnnnnnnnnnnnn~"

Khud ki siski ko usne apne haatho se muh ko dhaak ke roka.

"Fuck!!! This feels good! Damn! Mujhe nahi laga tha aap abhi bhi itni tight hogi. Uggghh!!!"

Divya ki santaan nahi thi. Zaahir tha ki ek aam aurat ke muqaable uski chut me abhi bhi tightness barkaraar thi. Nik ke saath sex usne kiya tha kayi baar. Par Nik ka lund bhala Veer ke lund se kese muqaabla kar sakta tha!?

100 ke upar ka appearance tha Veer ka. Zaahir hai kaafi changes uske pappu par bhi kiye the system ne. Uska lund Divya ki chut ko aur phela raha tha. Iske pehle usne itne size ka kabhi nahi liya tha.

Uske haath apne aap Veer ki peeth aur baal par mandraane lage.



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Bagal me stool par rakhi uski aur Nik ki shaadi ki photo frame ko dekh, usne apni siskiyaa roki aur haath aage badha kar photo frame ko gira ke dhak diya.

Taaki, ye drishya photo me maujood Nik bhi na dekh paaye. Sharmindagi!!!

Par uss se bhi zyaada anand. Jo Divya bharpoor utha rahi thi. Na jaane kabse ye frustration bhara hua tha usme. Sex ki behad zaroorat thhi usse. Aur Veer ne uski uttejna ki chingaari ko aag de dii thi.

"Aaahhhnnnn!!!! Mmmmmmm~ Y-Yessss!!!!! H-Haaannnnnnn!!!! Ohhhhhhh veeeerrrrrrrrr!!! Hnnnnnn hnnnn hnnn... Ohhh godddd!!! Ssssssssssss yesssss!!! Y-Yahiii nnnnghhhhh aise hiiiii.... Rrrrrgghhhhhh... "



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Aur kamre me Divya ki awaazein goonjti rahi. Suhana aur Nik apne apne kamre me so rahe the. Divya ne unka khayaal kar apni awaazein dabaayi.

Idhar Veer positions badal badal ke usse bhog raha tha. Kabhi woh usse utha ke chodta, toh kabhi deewar se bhida ke. Dhakke tabadtod itne the ki Divya ki chut me dard shuru ho chuka tha.

Aur jese hi Veer apni seema par pohucha,

"Ohhhh!!! Fuuuckkkkk!!!"

Divya : N-Nahhhhiiiiiii!!!! Veeer nahiiii!!!! Andar nahiiii!!!

Lekin boht derr ho chuki thi,

*Splllluuuurrrrtttttt*

Veer ne apna saara veerya divya ki chut me gira diya.

Divya : Nooooooooooo!!!!!!!!

Woh zorr se chillaayi, par uska badan khud jhatke pe jhatke maarta raha. Bechaari khud apna paani chorr chuki thi.

Kuch shan baad,

Divya poori tarah nangi bistar par pait ke bal laiti hui thi, toh wahi uski mulaayam gaand par Veer apna sarr rakh laita hua tha.

Uska haath jese hi Divya ki mulaayam gaand par gaya toh,

*Chataaaaaaakkkk*

Divya ne uske haath par zorr se chapet maar ke haath alag kar diya.

Divya : Udhar ke baare me sochna bhi mat.

Veer (smiles) : I was just testing the grounds.

Divya : Shut up! Aur suno ab meri baat.

Veer : ??

Divya : You idiot, tum ne andar kyu giraaya?? Mene tumhe mana kiya tha na. Tumhe pata bhi hai tumne kya kiya?

Veer (smiles) : Don't worry!! Kuch nahi hoga!

Divya : Kuch nahi hoga? Tum koi vidhaata nahi ho jo keh diya wahi hoga. Idiot!!! Iska risk pata bhi hai? Ohhh god!! Yadi mein pregnant ho gayi toh tumhe pata bhi hai kitni badi dikkat ho jaegi?

Veer : Nahi hoegi. Chill!!!

Divya : Y-Youuuu!!!! Dekh lena. Agar kuch hua na, toh mein poora blame tumpe daalne waali hu.

Veer : Believe me! Kuch nahi hoga.

Divya : T-Tummm! Tumse toh baat karna hi bekaar hai. Tum itne yakeen ke saath kese keh ho sakte ho haan? Yaha meri ye soch soch ke hi phati padi hai aur tum ho ki... Ek minute! Kahi... Kahi tumhare usme koi kuch gadbad toh nahi na...!?

Veer : Ek baar aur refill karu kya?

Divya : N-Nahiii!!! Aur nahi... Bilkul nahi...!!!

Veer (smiles) : Just trust me!

Divya : F-Fine then! Aur ek baat. Hamaare beech aaj kuch bhi nahi hua hai. Hum pehle ki hi tarah hai. Pretend karna ki tumhare aur mere beech kuch bhi aisa nahi chal raha. Ye first and the last time tha. Kisi ko bhi iss baat ki bhanak bhi nahi lagni chahiye. Khaas kar Nik aur Suhana ko. Otherwise dikkat ho jaegi. You get it?

Veer toh bas uske jism ko nihaarne me laga hua tha. Kya khoob badan tha sach me Divya ka. Ekdum chodne laayak.

Woh iss kaan se sunn uss kaan se Divya ki baate nikaal raha tha.

Usne jhatt se Divya ko paltaaya aur ek hi baar me uske rass bhare honth apne muh me bhar liye,

"Mmmmmmmphhhhhhhh~"

Divya bechaari badbadaati rahi par Veer toh usse seriously le hi nahi raha tha. Iss samay Divya ek aisi billi ke samaan prateet ho rahi thi jo gusse me zorr zorr se apne panje chala rahi thi par jese hi uske sarr ko Veer ne thap thapaaya yaani ki usse jakad ke chooma toh apne aap woh purr karne lagi.

Dono ek doosre se lipte nange laite ek dusre ko choomne me lage the. Jeebh se khel rahe the woh ki tabhi itne me,

"Divyyyyaaaaaaaa!!!!!"

Darwaaze ke baahar se Nik ki awaaz aayi. Subah ke 8:05 ho rahe the aur tab se hi Divya aur Veer chudaayi me lage hue the.

Awaaz sunte hi Divya ki sitti pitti gul ho gayi.

Divya : Fuuuuckkkkkk!! Jaldi... Jaldi... Neeche!!!

Hadbada ke woh uthi, usne wahi apni kaali dress fauran hi odh ke pehni aur Veer ko ishaara kiya.

Veer apne kapde lete hue seedha bed ke neeche ghus gaya aur idhar Divya ne darwaaza khol diya,

Nik : Hmm? You were still sleeping?

Divya : Y-Yeah! I woke up just now.

Nik : You look tired. You okay?

Divya (blushes) : I'm... I'm okay! Don't worry!

Nik : Okay! Today is the day. You think he can do the job?

Divya : Who? Ohhh you mean Fred? Y-Yess! He can do it.

Nik : Okay then! Let me remind you, Nolan will be asking you questions. You sure aren't hiding anything right? Otherwise, my reputation will go--

Divya : Don't worry! I'm not hiding anything.

Nik : Hahahaha~ That's like my good girl. Get freshen up. We can't be late today.

Kehte hue woh nikal gaya.

Divya keh rahi thi ki woh koi baat nahi chhipa rahi thi par Nik ko kya pata tha ki uski patni baat toh chorro, itna bada jeeta jaagta insaan apne bed ke neeche chhipaaye hue thi.

*Click*

Idhar Divya ne Nik ke jaate hi darwaza band kar ek raahat ki saans lii, aur neeche se Veer bhi nikal aaya.

Divya : Y-Youuuu!!! Baal baal bache hai hum. Jao yaha se. Jaldi!!!!

Veer ne apne kapde pehne, Divya ki nazre uske harr action pe tiki hui thi. Veer jaane ke liye hua par darwaaze tak aate hi, usne ek baar fir Divya ko deewaar se zorr se sataaya aur....

*Kiss*

Uske raseele hontho ko firse choosne laga. Divya bechari harr baar madhosh sii ho jaati thi. Khud-ba-khud uske haath Veer ke baalo par firne lagte the.

Aur ek antim lambi meethi aur thodi dirty kiss ke baad, Veer bas muskuraaya aur waha se nikal gaya. Aur nikalte hi,

*Ding*

[200 points have been rewarded.]

Idhar darwaaza band kar, uss se tik ke Divya khadi rahi. Apni dress khol usne apne nange badan ko ghoora, jisse abhi abhi ek naujavaan bhog ke gaya tha. Chut par haath ferrte hi uska badan kaanp utha. Ek aisi hi chudaayi ke liye taras rahi thi uski bur. Aur aaj usse woh mil gayi.

'I hope everything will be fine!'

Sochte hue woh firse washroom me ghus gayi.

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9:26 AM

Naashta ready tha. Aur dining table par baith Veer khaane me laga hua tha. Suhana usse serve kar rahi thi. Nik khaa chuka tha pehle hi aur woh TV pe news dekhne me laga tha.

Tabhi apne kamre se Divya baahar aayi. Aur Veer ke saamne waali chair par baith gayi.

Suhana : Good morning!

Divya : Morning!

Suhana ne usse bhi serve kiya aur Divya coffee ka mug liye naashte me jutt gayi. Woh Veer ko dekh hi nahi rahi thi. Toh wahi veer uski saari harqato pe dhyaan de raha tha.

Suhana ko bhi ajeeb laga. Roz toh kese chipak chipak ke Divya Veer se baate karti thi. Aaj kya hua fir? Huh? Kahi raat me kal kuch?

Ye dhyaan aate hi Suhana ki aankhein fel gayi.

Veer ki taraf woh fauran mudi,

Veer : ??? What?

Suhana (khuspusaate hue) : Kal raat... Tumhare aur Divya ke beech kahi kuch...!?

Veer : Bilkul nahi! Aapne aisa socha bhi kese?

Suhana : You aren't lying right?

Veer : Mein kabhi jhooth bolta hu?

Suhana : *smiles*

Woh andar kitchen me jaane ke liye hui par jaate jaate, palat ke Veer ko zaroor dekhi.



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Kitchen ki entrance par bhi khadi hoke woh Veer ko dekh rahi thi.


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Shayad usne Veer pe bharosa kar liya tha. Aur mann hi mann woh ye jaan ke khush thi ki Divya ke charms par Veer lattu nahi hua.

Par bechaari usko kya pata tha. Ki yaha Veer nahi, balki Divya khud uske charm ke aage lattu ho rakhi thi.

Yaha tak ki abhi uss se baithna bhi mushqil ho raha tha. Chut uski kulbula rahi thi. Dard bhi tha par ek aur ghamasaan chudaayi ke liye jese tadap rahi thi woh.

Kherr! Ye breakfast ka samay aise hi guzra. Department ke liye sabhi ravana ho gaye.

Din bhar toh Divya ka samay yahi samjhaane me nikal gaya ki usse teesre criminal ki jankaari kaha se mili.

Bahane bana bana ke usne jese tese Nolan ko manaaya. Aur shaam hote hi sabki nazre bade se projector par padd gayi.

Suhana, Divya, Veer aur Nik sabhi baithe hue the. Nolan aur Mike athwa baaki sadasya aage virajmaan the.

Veer ke right me Suhana thi aur left me Divya. Toh wahi Divya ke left me Nik.

Divya Veer se baate karne me hichkicha rahi thi aur Veer bas mazze le raha tha.

Aur tabhi, projector par live recording dikhaayi dene lagi.

Veer : Toh ye plan tha aapka? Hmm?

Divya : Haan!

Saamne screen par unhe ek behad hi badi sii hotel ka drishya dikhaayi de raha tha.

Ye Fred hi tha jo apni upar ki jeb me hidden camera lagaaye uss hotel me pravesh kiya tha.

Uska kaam tha bas hotel me ghus ke info lena ki akhir ho kya raha hai waha par. Kya Nat ne jo bataaya wesa hi kuch scene tha yaha? Ya fir kuch aur?

Aur fir dikhaayi diya ek manmohak drishya. Bhaari maatra me log apne apne chehre par masks lagaaye wine pee rahe the aur dheemi sii dhun par naach rahe the. Koi baat kar raha tha toh kahi badi sii dining par log toast kar rahe the. Kahi champagne ki bottles kholi jaa rahi thi toh kahi hassi mazaak chal raha tha.

Divya ki nazre saamne screen par gadi hui thi.



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Suhana : Filhaal toh kuch bhi aisa unusual nahi dikh raha.

Veer : Right!

Aur tabhi, Fred ki awaaz sunaayi dii.

Fred : Nothing doubtful here.

Divya : Keep checking!!!

Divya ne instruct kiya. Fred aur Divya dono hi ek dusre ki baate sunn paa rahe the. Department ke baaki log bhi Fred ko clearly sunn paa rahe the. Woh communication ke liye ek dusre se connected the.

Thoda aur check karne par bhi Fred ko aisa kuch bhi alag sa nahi laga. Ek normal party hi lag rahi thi usse jab,

Uske peeche khade kuch logo ne usse bulaaya,

Aadmi : Hey!!! Join us!!! Have a toast.

Fred ne unhe dekha aur dheere se khuspusaate hue pucha, "Should I go?"

Divya : You can, if you want. Maybe you'll get a new information there.

Fred : Alright! I'm going.

Aur Fred unhe haath dikhaate hue uss badi sii dining table ki orr chal diya.

Idhar department me sabhi nazre gadaaye baithe the.

Toh waha hotel me dining table par kuch aadmi toh kuch mahilaaye baithi hui thi. Sabhi ke chehro par decorative mask tha jo unke chehre ko chhupaaye hue tha.

Hi hello ke baad Fred bhi ek kursi pakad baith gaya aur baato hi baato me usse ek nayi jankaari haath lag gayi.

Yahi ki yeh party kal aur hone waali thi. Kisi dusri hotel me.

Veer : Agar iss third killer ka aim badi celebrities ko aim karna hai toh shayad inn masked logo me se bhi koi na koi celebrity bhi maujood hoga hi waha. Hai na?

Divya : Hmm! Nat hoshiyaar thi jo pehle hi sachet ho gayi. I don't know waha ab kis par aim lagane waala hai ye killer. Hume clue dhundna hai bas.

Suhana : Ahh! Woh dekho!!!

Suhana ke akasmat bolte hi sabki nigaahein fir screen par gadd gayi.

Fred ke bagal se ek aadmi baith tha. Usne Fred ko dekha aur uss se baat cheet shuru kii aur fir sabhi ki taraf dekh zorr se taali bajaate hue unka attention liya,

"Let's have a toast for our new friend Jack!!!"

Fred ka hi naam Jack tha. Ek fake naam jo usne unn sabhi ko bataya tha. Aur woh log khush hote hue Fred ko cheer up karne lage,

"Yaaaayyyyyy!!!!"

"It's party time Jack. Get drunk, and get laid."

"Hahahahahaha~"

"Hey lovely boi!!! C'mon let's have a toast."

Aakarshak mahilao ki nasheeli baatein sunn Fred bhi pighal gaya.

Fred : Ahaha~ Okay! Okay!!

Aur uske bagal waale vyakti ne wine ki ek bottle kholi, wine uske glass me daali aur fir wahi wine usne apne glass me bhari.

Glass ko muh se lagaate hue woh wine ka lutf lene laga aur usko aisa karte dekh Fred ke andar ka sankoch gaayab ho gaya.

Usne bhi fir wine bade hi chaav se pii. Domain Leroy ki ye bottle 20 dollar se 500 dollar tak bikti thi. One of the costliest wines in the world.

Fred ki toh jese kismat chamak gayi thi yaha aane ke baad. Aisi party aur aise mission agar usse roz roz karne ko mile toh woh toh free me bhi karne taiyaar tha.

"Hahahahaha~"

Hassi mazaak shuru hua aur mahaul ekdum enjoyment se bhar gaya.

Idhar department me sabhi prashn bhari nazro se sab dekh rahe the.

Behanchod ye kya chal raha tha? Ye toh party hi lag rahi thi normal ek. Kaha hai killer? Kaun hai killer? Crime kaha ho raha hai?

Aur unki shaq ki sui aake Divya par hi ruki. Sab usse dekhe...

Kahi Divya se koi galti toh nahi ho gayi? Yadi ye jhooth tha toh iske upar karyavaahi bhi ho sakti thi Divya par galat info share karne ke liye. Befaaltu me department ka waqt zaaya nahi kar sakte the aap.

Nik jo uske bagal me baitha tha woh Divya se duwidha me pucha,

Nik : You told us the right information correct?

Divya : Of course!!!

Nik : You aren't lying, right?

Divya : Youuu!!! What do you think I am? Am I retarded or what? Why would I do such a thing? I'm sure there's something wrong there.

Nik : But an hour has passed and nothing happened.

Divya : This...

Jiska darr tha wahi hua. Udhar kuch hua hi nahi. Fred bade araam se gaya, enjoy kiya aur waapas laut aaya.

Aur Divya ko ab buri tarah lataada jaa raha tha. Itna samay barbaad kiya unhone kiske liye? Ek anjaan chutiye ko party enjoy karte dekhne ke liye.

Woh sabhi ghar laut aaye. Divya apne kamre me chinta me doobi hui thi. Nik so raha tha aur Suhana apne pati se firse teekhe bol kehte hue phone pe baato me lagi thi.

Par Veer...

Veer ki aankhein ekdum pheli hui thi. He saw him. Mission mila tha usse, Assassinate The Pitcher.

Divya aur baaki sabhi ko ye nahi pata tha ki killer Pitcher ke naam se jaana jaata tha.

Sirf Veer ko ye baat pata thi. Kyuki mission ne usse bata diya tha.

Aur jab party me woh aadmi Fred ko wine de raha tha. Wahi tha Pitcher!!!

Pitcher usse kaha jaata hai jo bada sa jug jaisa rehta hai jisme aksar hum sharaab ya beer rakhte hai aur uss se logo ko serve karte hai.

Toh yadi uss aadmi ne Fred ko serve kiya matlab chances boht zyaada the ki...

Wahi pitcher tha.

***

Agli subah hui, aaj ka routine bhi kuch khaas samajh nahi aaya unke.

Jab shaam ho gayi toh dono Suhana aur Veer uske hi kamre me baithe hue the. Divya aur Nik department me the.

Suhana apne kapde teh kar ke rakh rahi thi aur Veer kisi soch me dooba hua tha.

Suhana : Bas boht ho gaya ab. Veer! Ab bas hum ek do din me hi nikal chalenge. Ab yaha aur ruki mein toh mera sarr phat jaega.

Veer : ....

Suhana : Veer?

Veer : Hmm?

Suhana : Kaha kho gaye?

Veer : Kuch nahi! Kahiye!

Suhana : Mene kaha ki bas ho gaya ab. Hum jald hi yaha se waapas India chal denge.

Veer : Ohh! Okay! No problem!

Suhana : Hmm? Excited nahi ho? Waapas ghar jaane ke liye? Idhar zyaada mann lag raha hai? Vegas pasand aa gaya kya? Ya fir...!? Koi aur...!? Huh!!!

Suhana ki double meaning baat sunn woh bas muskura diya.

Veer : Well!!! Both!

Suhana : Huh???

Abhi woh Veer se sawaal puchne hi waali thi ki itne me,

*THUD*

Zorr se hall ka gate khola aur Divya bhaagte hue andar aayi,

Suhana : Huh?? Tum? Accha hua aa gayi. Mein ye bata rahi hu ki ab hum aur Veer bas jaane waale hai ek do din me.

Divya : N-Nahi!!! Meri baat suno, tum abhi nahi jaa sakte. Something huge happened!!

Suhana : What? Kya matlab nahi jaa sakte?

Divya (tezz saase lete hue) : Haan abhi nahi jaa sakte!!!

Suhana : Whaattt??? Divya tumhe pata bhi hai tum kya bol rahi ho? Itne din se dimaag pakk gaya hai mera yaha reh reh ke. Jab se aayi hui bas maut hi maut dekh rahi hu. Tumhe pata hai na mera haal? Fir kyu tum...

Divya (chillaate hue) : For fuck sake meri baat sunogi Suhana???

Suhana : !!!??

Divya ke zorr se chillaane par ek khamoshi chhaa gayi.

Uski aankho me nami thi. Jisse dekhte hi Suhana shaant ho gayi.



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Kuch baat thi. Kuch zaroor hua tha. Aur Divya fir ladkhadaati awaaz me boli,

"Fred is dead!!!"

*Booooooommmm*

Mann me jaise ek dhamaka hua unke. Veer apni jagah se ucchal ke khada ho gaya.

*Badump* *Badump*

Uska dil zorro se dhadakne laga,

Suhana : Kyaaaa????

Divya : Haan! F-Fred is dead. Tum dono jaldi... Jaldi gaadi me baitho. We have to go. NOWWW!!!!!

Gambheer situation ko dekhte hi...

*VRRRRROOOOOOMMMM*

Unhone ek pal bhi zaaya nahi kiya. Ye kaise ho gaya behanchod? Wph chutiya kal toh mazze kar raha tha. Fir achanak aaj kese marr gaya?

Divya ki car sarpat raaste me bhaag rahi thi aur sabhi ke chehre lar tension saaf jhalak rahi thi.

Veer : Ye sab kaise hua?

Divya : Nahi pata. Bas itna pata hai ki...

Woh ghabraate hue Veer ko dekhi,

Veer : Kya?

Divya : U-Uski... Uski maut bhi Charlotte ki tarah hui.

Sunte hi Veer aur Suhana ke badan me raungte khade ho gaye.

Suhana : I-Iska matlab....!!?

Divya : Yessss!!!! Poisoning!!!

Suhana : Par kaise???? Fred toh protection me tha na aaj. Department ne uske liye 3 din tak safety rakhi thi. Fir kaise?

Divya : That is why it's important. Body uske ghar par hi mili. Na woh baahar gaya aur na hi andar aaya.

Suhana : P-Par aisa kese ho sakta hai? It's not possible. Wait!!! K-Kahi... Kahi woh wine me toh nahi kuch...!?

Divya : Mene bhi yahi socha tha. Par...

Suhana : Par kya? Definitely wine me hi kuch gadbad thi.

Divya : Pehli baat, wine packed thi. Aur... Aur humne screen me dekha tha ki jo wine Fred ko serve kiya wahi... Usne bhi wahi wine pee thi.

Woh dono hi aapas me joojh rahi thi jab,

"Glass!!!"

Veer ke muh se nikla. Aur Veer ke bol sunte hi Divya ki aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi. Bechari ki reedh ki haddi tak ek sihran daud gayi. Usne hairat-angez me Veer ko dekha.

Yadi wine me poison nahi tha. Toh aisa ho sakta tha ki glass par poison laga ho.

Divya : Y-Ye... Iske baare me toh mene socha hi nahi tha. Good job veer. Certainly! Ye possible hai. Well done!!!

Suhana : Ye sab kya chal raha hai. I just want to go back. Can't deal with this anymor.

*Screeeeeeccccchhhh*

Gaadi department ke saamne aake zorr se ruki aur,

*THUD* *THUD*

Divya samet sabhi car se utarte hi furti me department me pravesh kiye. Maamla boht gambheer tha. Kal tak jo department Divya ko dosh de raha tha unn sabke aaj muh band ho chuke the.

Na keval Divya ki info sahi thi balki, Divya ki team ka banda bhi maara gaya tha iss info ko paane ke liye. Unke muh par taale lage hue the. Divya beshaq bhayankar gusse me thi.

Fred ke sang 4-5 baar woh kaam kar chuki thi. Aur ab woh Bhagwan ko pyaara ho chuka tha.

*Tuck* *Tuck* *Tuck*

Tezz gati me apni heels pehne chalte hue woh department me ghusi jaha mahaul behad serious maalum pad raha tha. Idhar se udhar log jaldbaazi me bhaag rahe the.

Police bhi involved ho chuki thi ab aur maamla Sheriff tak bhi pohuch gaya tha.

Veer ke andar aate hi Nik ki nazar uss par padi aur woh Veer ko wahi baithe bulaaya,

"Come here Veer! We need to talk!!!"

Divya ne dekha toh paaya ki khud sheriff aaya hua tha.

Divya : Sh-Sheriff???? Shittt!!!

Suhana : Kya hua? Why... Why is he here?

Divya : Matter bada hai Suhana. Much bigger than you can imagine. Veer!?

Veer : Right! Mein hoke aata hu.

Suhana : W-Waaaiiittt!! T-Tumhe kyu bula rahe hai woh?

Usne peeche se Veer ki kalaayi pakadte hue pucha.

Veer (smiles) : Ye toh jaa ke hi pata lagega.

Suhana : Par... Par...

Suhana ko andar se kuch theek nahi lag raha tha. Lekin Veer ne apne haath uss se churraaye aur andar ek cabin ki orr chal diya.

*Click*

Darwaaza band hua aur kareeb aadhe ghante tak koi bhi baahar nahi aaya.

***

Aaddhe ghante ke baad...

Veer jese hi baahar aaya, waha maujood poori ki poori investigation team ki nazar uss par theher gayi.

"Kya kaha Sheriff ne?"

Divya ne Veer ko baahar aata dekh uss se pucha.

Veer : Yahi ki mein jaunga.

Suhana (ghabraate hue) : Jaunga se tumhara kya matlab hai?

Veer : Next hotel me. Fred ki tarah spy ban kar.

Suhana (chillaate hue) : Whattt???? You can't-- !!!

Wo apni chair se achanak se uth ke khadi ho gayi aur usne aage badh Veer ka raasta rok liya.

Suhana : You cannot--!!! Divyaaaa!!!

Divya : R-Right! Ye khatre se khaali nahi.

Suhana (screams) : Tumhe kese bhej sakte hai woh? Fuck them off! Dekhti hu kiski himmat ho rahi hai tumhe bhejne ki. Divya tum Nik se kyu nahi kehti?? Go and fucking talk to him.

Divya : Veer! Nik ne kya kaha andar?

Veer : Well! Meri tareefe kii zaroorat se zyada. Jiske chalte Sheriff ne mujhe bheja hai. Par saath hi police and detectives ki team bhi jaegi jo hotel ke baahar rahegi. In case I need them.

[Hmph~ Master! Mujhe uss Nik par boht zyada gussa aa raha hai. Aaarrghhhh~ I'm so pissed.]

'Usse hum baad me dekh lenge Pari. But ye ladke log mujhse itna kyu chidhte hai?'

[Kyuki woh aapki tarah kabhi bann hi nahi sakte Maaassttteerrrr~]

Suhana : Dekha tumne? Fir se Nik ki kaaristaani hai ye. Ek number ka chutiya husband dhundha hai tumne. Madarchod kahi ka... Kaha hai woh...!??

Divya : S-Suhana...!!

Veer aashcharya me Suhana ko dekh raha tha. Par ho na ho, Suhana ke muh se Nik ke liye aisi gaali sunke usse andar hi andar aanand zaroor aaya tha.

[Dang!!! She's so bold. Hahaha~]

Divya : Suhana! Sheriff ne kaha hai. Mein khud Veer ko bhejna nahi chaahti... Veer! Tum apna naam waapas lelo. Kehdo ki tum vaapas India jaa rahe ho. Iss case se tumhara koi matlab nahi hai. Mein sambhaal lungi sab. Mein aur jokhim me nahi daal sakti tumhe. Suhana is right!!!

Suhana : Mene pehle hi kaha tha. Apne uss gaandu Nik ko samjhao warna kisi din mere haatho bachega nahi woh. Mein bata rahi hu tumhe.... Mein uski...

Woh aur do chaar gandi gaaliya deti usse ki uss se pehle hi ek haath uske gaal par aake tham gaya.

Suhana : !!!???

Veer (smiles) : Don't worry! I'll be fine!!

Suhana (screams) : Whaaatttt??? Bilkul bhi nahi! Mein tumhe yaha apni zimmedaari par leke aayi hu. I cannot let this happen. Veer!! Paagal mat bano!!! Jao andar jao aur muh pe bol ke aao, bhaad me jao. Come! We're leaving right now.

Ek baar fir woh uska haath pakad kheech ke le jaane ke liye hui par tabhi, woh jhatke ke saath waapas mud gayi. Veer wahi khada tha. Kese jaa sakta tha woh? Mission jo mila tha.

Veer (smiles) : Hey~

Suhana : T-Tum....!

Veer (smiles) : Look at me!

Suhana : *glances*

Veer : Trust me!! I'll be fine!! Aur aap jaan'na chaahti ho na? How I finished Aatish and Slogan? Well, Aapke paas ek aur mauka hai ab. You can investigate me later. Haha~

Veer ne uska mann halka karne ke liye kaha par Suhana ek nahi sunn'na chaahti thi.

Suhana : Tumhe iss waqt mazaak soojh raha hai Veer? Are you insane?

Veer : Toh kya karu fir? Chillaau ki 'Hey bhagwaan! Mujhe kuch ho na jaaye. Mujhe bacha lo!' hmm?

Suhana (sobs) : T-Tum... Uggghhhh~ tum... Tumhe appreciate karna aata hi nahi hai Veer. Fuck you!!! Aur mein yaha faaltu me... I hate you!!

Aur wo Veer se tang aate hue perr patakte hue waha se nikal gayi. Par aankho me aasu bhi the. Ek toh woh uski jaan bachaane ki koshish kar rahi thi aur yaha ye Veer tha ki... Kheejte hue woh waha se badbadaate hue nikal gayi. Mann me ye sochte hue, 'Jab khud musibat me waha hoga tab yaad aaegi meri baat usse.'

Bhale hi Suhana Veer se chidhte hue waha se nikli, par uske mann me abhi bhi chinta thi boht. Akhir woh aisa kya kare ki Veer ko waha jaane se rok le. Wo Veer ki identity disclose nahi kar sakti thi. Pehli baat toh usne Divya ko vaada diya tha. Dusri baat aisa karne se Veer expose ho jaata aur uske khilaaf karyavaahi bhi ho sakti thi. Yadi aisa hota toh Veer ke chalte woh bhi lapete me aa jaati aur fir uski bhi chhaan been hoti, aur aise me... Uska ateet saamne aa jaata.

'Ohhh no!!! Ab kya karu?? Ye kis musibat me phass gayi mein?'

Ek prakaar se wo Veer ko maut ke ghaat hi utaar rahe the.

***

Night ~ 11:36 PM

"You ready?"

Driver seat par baithe Mike ne pucha. Uske bagal se Veer baitha hua tha.

Bas haan me sarr hilaate hue Veer car se utar gaya.

*Thud*

Mike : Don't drink anything there. Fred died because of the toxins. Something is wrong there. You can do it champ!!

Veer : *smiles*

Mike (smiles) : Just like we did the last time.

Veer : Sure! Thanks!

Mike : Go now! Make sure camera is recording everything.

Veer : Yep!

Mike : We'll be here only. If anything happens just speed dial us. We'll barge in...

Veer ne haami bhari aur chal diya woh.

Upar se neeche tak woh ek stud lag raha tha. Kaala coat, kaala pant, safed shirt aur kaali bowtie. Ye ek party thi toh party ki tarah hi dress up karna zaroori tha.

[Lets go Master!!!]

'Yeahhh!'

[I'll be on guard as well.]

'Hmm!'

Aur Veer andar daakhil ho gaya. Andar aate hi usse doosre floor par bhej diya gaya.

Luckily, jo Nat ne invitation diya tha woh idhar bhi chal gaya. Uss invitation ki time limit 2 din ki thi. Yadi pehle din celebrity nahi aa paati hai kisi reason se toh dusre din unhe aane ka mauka mile isliye do din ki limit thi.

Pehle din toh Fred maara gaya. Aaj akhiri aur dusra din tha. Yaani ki raat thi. Aur ab ussi invitation ke saath Veer ab iss hotel me tha.

Upar second floor par aate hi jese hi woh entrance se andar aaya. Andar ka nazaara saakshaat aankho ke saamne dekh uske hosh udd gaye.



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Jagah jagah thirakte log, sabhi ke chehro par masks the. Aur ek scary aur creepy vibe de rahe the log usse.

Veer wahi kuch derr khada raha. Uski aankhein baaj ki tarah logo ko ghoor rahi thi. Mask uske chehre par bhi tha.

Gaane ki dhun par log naach rahe the.


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Veer ab Beowulf activate kar sakta tha. Aur usne wahi kiya,

*Ding*

[Beowulf's Blessings has been turned ON.]

Uski laalam laal aankhein unn logo ke beech se scan karte hue apna target dhundne me vyast ho gayi.

Uss bheed me se hote hue woh aage badha, apna coat nikaal usne ek haath me peeche pakad ke taang liya. Aur mask ke andar se uski aankhein apne kaam me lag gayi,

*Music*



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Par usse nahi pata tha ki issi bheed me kya kuch ho raha tha. Waiter badi sii plate ek haath me pakad ke wine ke glasses laaya, lekin...

Plate neeche karte hi, jis vyakti ne glass uthaaya, plate me glass ke hi bagal se ek photograph rakha hua tha.

Uss vyakti ne photograph uthaaya aur bade hi dheere se sarr hila ke waiter ko nod kiya.

Photo dekhte hi usne woh photo haath ki safaayi se apne bagal waale vyakti ko pass kar di. Usne bhi dekhi aur fir usne apne peeche waale vyakti ko pass kii...

Woh ek photo idhar se udhar pass ho rahi thi aur itni safaayi se pass ho rahi thi ki kisi ko kuch pata nahi chal raha tha.

Akhiri vyakti jiske paas photo aake ruki, usne dekha toh woh haan me sarr hilaaya.

Aur usne woh photo apne jeb me rakh lii. Aur Woh photo thi...

Veer kii!!!!

Ye sab kuch upar waali balcony me ho raha tha. Veer neeche sabko scan kiya par usse kuch bhi unusual na mila.

Aur tabhi,

*Clap* *Clap*

Upar ki balcony se ek vyakti nikal ke taaliya bajaate hue aaya,

"Let's have a toast. Everyone!! Come and have a seat."

Uski baat par kuch chuninda log aake neeche ki dining table par baithne lage.

Veer ne jaise hi usse dekha usse pata lag gaya tha. Ye wahi vyakti tha jisne Fred ko wine serve kii thi.

'Check!!!'

*Ding*

[Name : David Robinson.
Alias Name : Pitcher.
Age : 41
Bio : Third member of the House of the killers. Iss shaks ki koi family nahi hai. Ye ek heavy drinker hai. He does some secret practice. Nightwalker se wines leta hai. Ab wines ki supply badal dii gayi hai. Sundar celebrities ko maarna iski fetish hai. Kayi saari hastiyo se juda hua hai. Runs a dark web entertainment community.

Favourability : -40
Relationship : Enemies.]

Aur woh padhte hi,

'Shittttt!!!!!'

[Masterrr!!!!]

'Pari!!! So, it was him!!! Secret practice? Iska kya matlab hua? Kahi kaala jaadu toh nahi karta ye?'

[I don't know master. Secret practice!? Shayad dark web se related toh nahi?]

'Kuch baat toh hai.'

Veer usse ghoor ke dur se dekh hi raha tha jab uske kaano me awaaz aayi,

"You there my friend! Looks like you are interested. Why don't you join us?"

Saamne khade ussi David aka Pitcher ne Veer se kaha.

Veer ne haami bhari aur aage chal diya,

[Noooo masssteeerrr!!!! Ye trap hai. Don't goooo!!!!]

Par Veer na maana,

"Nahhhhiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!"

Idhar department me baithi Suhana bhi bechain ho uthi jesi hi usne screen pe dekha ki Veer Fred ki tarah dining table par jaa raha tha.

Suhana (ghabraate hue) : Y-Ye kya kar raha hai wohhhh??? Divyaaaaa!!!!!

Divya ki bauhe sikudi hui thi. Woh khud duwidha aur chinta me thi.

Divya : Shhhh!!! J-Just watch!!!

***

Veer ahista se baitha. Ek nazar usne agal bagal daali. Kuch khaas nazar nahi aaya. Hi hello ho chuki thi.

"Hey handsome!!! Come and join us. Ehehe~"

"Ohhh!!! I can tell you are a hot young lad!!! Let's have a toast. Mmmmm~"

"Let's welcome our new friend, Veer!!!!"

Ye sab kuch pehle jesa hi ho raha tha. Jese Fred ke saath hua tha.

Aur, tabhi David ne Veer ko glaas pakdaaya.

Glass haath me lete hi,

'Check!'

*Ding*

[A normal wine glass.]

[So, it's not poisoned huh?]

Pitcher ne fir wine ki ek bottle kholi, aur glass bharne laga.

Uski aankhein Veer ko ajeeb nigaaho se ghoor rahi thi.

Pitcher : For our new friend, Veer. Hehehehe~ Cheers!!!!!! Everyone!!!

"Chhheeeerrrsss!!!"

Veer ne bhi glass upar utha ke unke saamne nod kiya aur fir usne glass apne hontho se lagaaya.

"Paagal kahi ka... Bewakoof!!!! Stupidd!!!! This bastaardddd!!!!!! Idiot!!!! Itna samjhaaya mene... Buddhu kahi ka... Aaaarrghhhhh!!!"

Aur Suhana idhar screen me Veer ko aise dekhte hi poori tarah se bechain ho uthi.

Andar se itni ghabraayi hui thi woh ki uske muh se gaaliya nikal rahi thi Veer ke liye.

Aur baad me toh uski saanse hi atak gayi jab usne Veer ko gat gat karke wine ko peete hue dekha.

Suhana (shocked) : Ahhhhh!!!!

Divya (shocked) : H-He actually...!!!!

Samay guzra aur kahi kuch gadbad samajh nahi aayi. Jab Achanak hi,

Veer : I have to use the washroom. I'll be right back.

Kehte hue Veer utha aur bhaagte hue washroom me jaane laga.

Suhana : K-Kyaaa hua? Kya hua usse?

Divya : Washroom!!!

Suhana : Nahi! Woh bhaag kyu raha hai? K-Kuch hua toh nahi na?

Aur tabhi,

*Thud*

Veer zorr se washroom ka darwaaza khol andar ghusa.

Divya ne forun mic pe bolna shuru kiya,

Divya : Veeeerrr!!! Veer!!! What's wrong??? Can you hear me?

Lekin tabhi,

*Gwaaaakhhhhhhhhh*

Suhana : Aaaahhhhhhhhhh!!!!

Veer ke muh se khoon ki ulti nikli, uski saasein itni badh gayi ki department me sabhi ko sunaaayi de rahi thi. Aur woh agle hi pal,

Ladkhada ke gir pada. Aur uska camera zameen par focused tha jidhar uske muh se nikla khoon pada hua tha.

"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!"

Department me Suhana zorr se chillaate hue apni seat se gir gayi. Uska badan kaanp raha tha.

Aur idhar Nolan ne agle hi pal,

Nolan : Team!!!! Go barge inside...!!!

Divya ne jese hi woh dekha, toh woh cheeteh ki tarah bhaagte hue waha se nikli,

Uski aankho me aasu the. Mann me na jaane kya kya badbadaa rahi thi.

Car me ghuste hi usse aisa mehsoos hua jaise usne kuch kho diya tha. Aisa lag raha tha jese uske dil me koi sui chubho raha tha. Peeda!!!

Jaise woh himmat hi haar chuki thi.


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'N-Nooooo!!!!'

Accelerator par perr rakh usne ek jhatke me gaadi aage bhaga dii,

*VRRRRROOOOOOMMMM*

Abhi abhi...

Ye kya ho gaya tha?
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
I know ye late hai. But kal raat mere sarr me kaafi dard tha. Typing band karni padi thi raat me hi. Din me araam se fresh hoke fir baaki ka update complete kiya hai. You can already tell how much time I've given on this one. Toh like thok ke jaane ka guys, aur revos rakhne ka.

Dhanyavaad! ✨
 

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Very nice. Ragini emotionally veer ko usse izhar-e-ishq kr chuki hai. Nidhi ke liye acha lag rha hai. veer or nidhi ke darmiyan jo anchahe deewar thi tootti ja rhi hai. Niharika ko sudharna itna asan nhi hai bachpan ke chhote dimag me baitha hua woh nfrt aise aise hi nhi khtm hone wale. Suman ne bhi apne dil ki baat keh Di hai. Pranjal or rajat ki jodi Kya gul khilayegi ye to ane wala wqt hi btaeyga. Pranjal ko uske baap krunesh ki Shay prapt hai.

Very nice. Ye update kavya Madam ke naam rha. Jhumke laya tha kavya ke liye MIL arohi ko gya. Veer asmanjas me hai ki woh kisse pyar krta hai Teen ke naam liye usne jo ki teeno hi khas hai uske liye system ke according woh alfa male hai jo sbki surksha chahta hai khush dekhna chahta hai. Suhana kyo paresan Ho gai divya ki help wali baat se aisi Kya baat ho gai divya ke sath jo uske pas wqt ki kami hai.
Dhanyavaad bhai!
So first mission, mission Divya complete and with flying colours. Saara attitude rakkha rah gaya Divya ka aur ab wo bhi list mein add ho gayi.

Now it's time for Mr Pitcher. "He does some secret practice." Looks like Pitcher has knowledge of chemicals and he knows which compound converts as toxic agent after reaching into the body. That's how without consuming poison, people get poisoned. What an idea Sirji if really is the idea behind this, it's my thought.
Interesting! But meko bataane ka kaun sa compound mix hoke poison banaata hai. :hinthint:
Now point is Fred was fine when he was out from party but Veer started vomiting which means either chemical agents were different for Fred and Veer or Veer's system is in alert mode so as soon toxic chemical reactions were started in the body, system took precautionary measures and start cleaning system by vomiting toxic agents along with impacted blood.
System me alert mode bhi hai? :?: Ye mene kab likha? :?:
If that is what it is than its mind blasting concept and very smart and clever writing. Superb Werewolf bro. :applause:
Thanks a lot bro! ✨
Keep supporting! ✨
Hmm to pehle aate hai divya par to aakhir divya ko bhi jiski jarurat thi wo aakhir mil hi gaya or veer ne kya hi sahi se bajaya hai sach me maza aagya or nik ke aajane se dono baal baal bach gaye

To Fred ke sath bhi wahi huva jo pehli pop singer ke sath huva tha lekin samaj nahi aaraha ki huva to huva kese

Or veer ne bhi josh main aake ye kaam to le liya par pehli baar aisa huva ki system ke hote huye veer chakma kha gaya or veer ne to glass or wine dono hi check kiya to usme poison nahi tha to aakhir veer ko khoon ki ultiya kyu huyi
Kaafi kuch scenes agle update me dekhne ko milenge jo isme nahi mile. Aur unhi scenes me raaz chhipe hai.
Or lagta hai ye pitcher sach me koi kala jadugar hai or sale ki fetish to dekho par ye logo ko aisi death kyu de raha hai mujhe to laga tha ye wala nightwalker se bhi bhayanak mout marta hoga but ye to kuch alag hi chudampatti macha raha hai
Mere khyaal se ye bhi kuch kam nahi hai. Zaroori nahi ki gandi maut dene wala villian hi bhaiyankar ho. Pitcher ka case toh aur hi darraane waala hai. Aapko pata bhi nahi hai ki aap marrne jaa rahe ho. Aap toh party ka soch ke chal diye. Par tabhi aapki maut aa gayi. Pata hi nahi chal paaya ki kese aayi, kisne maara aapko aur pehle hi nikal liye. Ye case aur khatarnak uai hai mere according. Nightwalker ke case me toh kam se kam pata tha ki woh maarega aur buri tarah maarega. Par yaha...!!!
Khair ab aane wala update or bhi intresting hogya hai kyu ki pehli baar veer jhase main aagya hai ab dekhna ye hai ki veer khud ko kese is setuation se bahar nikalta hai or system isme uski kese madad karta hai

Or wolfi bro thanks megha update keliye aapne bhale hi time liya but update uske according diya hai it's worth it

Dhasu update bro wait for the next one like this
Dhanyavaad bhaaya! Keep supporting! ✨
 

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बहुत ही शानदार लाजवाब अपडेट भाई
वीर ने दिव्या की मार ली नीक कों पता भी नहीं चला
मजा आ गया भाई
फ्रेड मारा गया किसी को कुछ समझ नहीं आया की कैसे मर गया

मुझे तो लगता हैं भाई
गड़बड़ ना वाइन में हैं नाहि ग्लास में हैं भाई
Accha! Toh kisme gadbadi hai fir? :think:
तीसरी चीज भी हैं टोस्ट मुझे इसी में गड़बड़ी लग रही हैं
Arre bhai! :redface: Toast ka matlab idhar khaane waala toast nahi bhai. Jab wine ke glasses ko sab hawa me uthaate hai na, ki kis ke liye aaj ye pee rahe hai. Kiski khushi ke liye, usse toast karna kehte hai bhai. :redface: Woh apna Parle toast nahi bhaaya.
वीर को खुन की उल्टी बायोवोल्फ एक्टिव होने से हूई हैं
क्यूंकि भेड़िया हों या कुत्ता जब जहरीला कुछ खा लेता हैं तो वोमिट करके जहर बाहर निकाल देता हैं भाई
Nahi bhaaya! Beowulf poison se nahi bachaata. :noo:
बहुत ही शानदार
Dhanyavaad bhai!
Detoxification ki bhi ek limit hogi bhai or uska process bhi Sayad slow ho ya ye bhi kah sakte hai ki jyada pila di gyi or kam detox hui Utne Samay me...
Ek reason ye bhi ho sakta hai ki jb jyada poison sarir me ho gya to use bahar nikalne ke liye vomit karne ka tarika hi sahi lga... Kyo kya kahte ho Werewolf bhaya
:slap: Mein toh kabse yahi keh raha hu ki Detoxification sirf cigarette aur alcohol ke nuksaan se bachaati hai. Par ju ho ki... :hit:
 

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I have no more words to say now. 😶 Words khatam ho jaa rahe h mere paas ab Sir...
Mne socha tha update 100 hi ab tak sabse kamaal ka h... Aur ab aapne ye de diya.
You are dropping bombs one after another. And each bomb is getting more lethal... 😶
:thanks:
The first scene with Divya. :blush1: Okay... Ahemm ahemmm... It was very sensual. I was not expecting anything like that. Socha tha Divya ke saath smooch ho gayi h ek. Ab kuch updates k baad hi kuch dekhne ko milega. I was wrong. Right from the get go you showed us such a turned on scene. :blush1: Ahemm... Iske baare me zyada baat nhi...
:Troll:
The morning scene with Suhana. The pics you have used again. I'm telling you, your pic game is insane. :shocking: Aisa lagta h jese yahi characters h real me. Suhana aur Divya ki images to itni perfectly dimaag me baith gayi h... Ab lagta h pics me wahi dono ye characters h. Agar unki koi aur photos mujhe kahi dikhengi na to mere muh se yahi niklega... Arre suhana... Arre divya 🤣🤣
Waah! :laugh:
Suhana was cute. :blush1: Jis tarah se usne Veer se pucha... She was doubtful about it. Kahi Veer raat me kuch karke toh nahi aaya? :roflol: Also Nik got cuckolded. 🤣🤣 Also the Wordplay you used. 🤣🤣
Jhooth bolna hi pada Veer ko.
The presence of mind here to connect a villian's name with an erotic scene. :applause: :applause:Jab mne ye padha tha meri hasi nikal gayi thi... 🤣🤣🤣
Ohh you noticed. :laughing:
The way you use, sound effects is just amazing. Like swoosh, whoosh, thud, click... Ye sab scenes ko aur realistic feel dete h... We can hear the sounds in our mind whenever we read it. Truly awesome!!! :wooow:
Arre bas bas... Itni tareef? :shy:
Fred was like the scapegoat. Bechara enjoyment me hi tapak gaya. :shy: but kuch kar k gaya atleast... Ye proof ho gaya ki Divya ki baat sach thi aur next hotel k baare me bhi information mil gayi
True indeed! He was a scapegoat. :rip:
  • But then he died in the same way as Charlotte. Jab Divya ne car me kaha tha na ki wo Charlotte k jaise mara... I got chills. 🥶
  • Fir vahi hua... Ab to Pari aur Suhana k jese mujhe bhi Nik k upar bohut gussa aa raha h .... :mad1: Nik ka Nickelodeon bana dungi main agar saamne aaya toh... Wait... What a dialogue I have delivered... 🤣🤣🤣 Isse aap use bhi kar sakte ho uski insult k liye. 🤣🤣 Nik ka Nickelodeon. Imagine Suhana saying this on his face. 🤣🤣 Itna accha dialogue de dia. Thank you kehne ki zaroorat nhi mujhe. Main to hu hi khaas... :makeup:
Waah! :laughing: Nik ka Nickelodeon. Kaafi innovative. But I'll go with Nik ka nick-a-lodia :crazy2:
Veer toh wese bhi jaata hi... Mission tha uska. But damn Suhana... :what1: Ye ladki toh ekdum bomb h...🤣🤣 Muh pe bol dia yaar Divya ko tumhara husband ek number ka chutiya h... 🤣🤣 I laughed so hard. Kya hi gaaliya di h usne... Aur iss baar toh kamaal hi ho gaya. Divya ne palat k kuch bola bhi nahi. She agreed ki uska husband chutiya h... This is massive development. 🤣🤣 But damn... Damn damn... Suhana is getting into my favourites list. :awoo: Already Arohi k saath ab wo meri favourite ho chuki h... Her boldness is on another level. Aur uska care karte hue dikhana... Wowwwww... This part always makes me read more and more about her being defensive for Veer. She was giving an elder sisterly vibes there. Too lovable!!! :angel1:
True indeed! You can already tell that I've focused on her character on this trip. :smarty:
The end scene. Just woooowwwww... Hotel k scenes party scenes jese aapne show kiye h na .... Commendable!!! :applause: veer k saath bhi vahi hua h... Fred jese... We got to see the glass. It wasn't poisoned. But what about the wine? Kon si secret practice ki baat ho rahi thi yaha? Ye Fred mara kese? Veer ko vomitting kyu hui blood ki? And why the hell veer drunk that wine? Mike ne kaha bhi tha kuch bhi mat peena... Then too... Suhana bechari... She almost collapsed right there... I can feel her emotions. Wo apni responsibility pe leke gayi h veer ko. She cannot let happen anything bad to veer.
Thanks a lot! ✨ Exactly! Suhana ke upar Veer ki responsibility hai. Veer ko kuch bhi hone nahi de sakti woh.
This update was on whole another level. Mujhe toh half an hour se bhi zyada time lag gaya ise padhne me.... :what1:
you are too good. :bow: Plus 5 million views and 2000 pages k liye congratulations Sir. I'm assuming this story will go above 200 updates. Since we haven't even heard anything about main villian yet. It's giving me goosebumps already. Who's this main villian? Abhi se itna sab kuch ho raha h... You were right! We aren't ready for him I think. 🥶 Aise hi updates dete rahiye Sir. You are our precision gem. :love: :blush1:
Keep entertaining us. :dance2:
Thanks a lot for such a detailed review my friend. :thank_you: Aise hi bani rahiyo. Keep supporting! ✨
Sir!! I am not able to upload images or gifs. It says I'm forbidden to use that website. What to do? :sadwavey:
Ye hua toh upload 👇
 
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